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Tempest
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WOW!

I just opened the thread today and I read it through, what a great story, I do hope there is more to come.

Makes me want to write.

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Thanks, Tempest, it's been a long time in the making! Check out the dates on the individual posts! I hope to finally finish really soon with two or three more chapters. Then I'll be on to part two!

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Well, I for one am looking forward to it. It is really good.

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[ December 06, 2005, 12:14 AM: Message edited by: Formerly:KGZ, HPV and etc. ]

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Awesome Dazzle Lass, Terry!

Can't wait for more Lardy!

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Wow! You drew Dazzle Lass, Tempest! Gosh, I'll just HAVE to finish the story sometime this decade, now! [Wink]

Honestly, I do hope to post more sometime soon. I just write so........damn...........slow!

Thanks for the pic!

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Anthony just read all this in one sitting.

WOW! Great story telling. [Yes] And it makes me want a hell of a lot more, so get yer finger out and start typing you hear. [Big Grin]

It almost make me want to start writing again.

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Thanks, Darden. The story turned out even more tense than I first imagined it would be. I wasn't quite sure how to end the Mordra backstory, then the whole idea about the knives came to me. I wasn't sure I should go there at first. It certainly was an exceptionally dark place to take things. In the end I decided the story really needed that extra punch to it.

Even now I'm hoping that it wasn't too over the top. I appreciate your vote of confidence. I hope when others read it, it'll click for them as well.

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quote:
Originally posted by Faraway Lad:

It almost make me want to start writing again.

I sincerely hope you get past the "almost"! I've certainly enjoyed your stuff in the past!

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That was the perfect cliffhanger, Lard Lad, I do hope you get around to the second part as soon as time allows it.

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Thanks, Tempest. I appreciate the support and intend to start part two really soon!

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[ December 06, 2005, 12:15 AM: Message edited by: Formerly:KGZ, HPV and etc. ]

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