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Topic: LARDLAD: LMBP Onevision: "Turning Point, part 1: Then"
Tempest
Enchantress
posted October 18, 2005 02:48 AM
WOW! I just opened the thread today and I read it through, what a great story, I do hope there is more to come. Makes me want to write. -------------------- And to show I bear no ill will, I, too, shall bestow a gift...
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Lard Lad
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posted October 18, 2005 09:56 PM
Thanks, Tempest, it's been a long time in the making! Check out the dates on the individual posts! I hope to finally finish really soon with two or three more chapters. Then I'll be on to part two! -------------------- "Suck it, depressos!"--M. Lash
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Tempest
Enchantress
posted October 18, 2005 10:33 PM
Well, I for one am looking forward to it. It is really good. -------------------- And to show I bear no ill will, I, too, shall bestow a gift...
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Tempest
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posted October 24, 2005 07:45 PM
[ December 06, 2005, 12:14 AM: Message edited by: Formerly:KGZ, HPV and etc. ] -------------------- And to show I bear no ill will, I, too, shall bestow a gift...
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Cobalt Kid
BOHICA
posted October 24, 2005 09:16 PM
Awesome Dazzle Lass, Terry! Can't wait for more Lardy!
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Lard Lad
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posted November 01, 2005 09:28 PM
Wow! You drew Dazzle Lass, Tempest! Gosh, I'll just HAVE to finish the story sometime this decade, now! Honestly, I do hope to post more sometime soon. I just write so........damn...........slow! Thanks for the pic! -------------------- "Suck it, depressos!"--M. Lash
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Faraway Lad
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posted November 08, 2005 01:14 AM
Anthony just read all this in one sitting. WOW! Great story telling. And it makes me want a hell of a lot more, so get yer finger out and start typing you hear. It almost make me want to start writing again. -------------------- Faithfull
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Lard Lad
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posted November 08, 2005 09:28 PM
Thanks, Darden. The story turned out even more tense than I first imagined it would be. I wasn't quite sure how to end the Mordra backstory, then the whole idea about the knives came to me. I wasn't sure I should go there at first. It certainly was an exceptionally dark place to take things. In the end I decided the story really needed that extra punch to it. Even now I'm hoping that it wasn't too over the top. I appreciate your vote of confidence. I hope when others read it, it'll click for them as well. -------------------- "Suck it, depressos!"--M. Lash
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Lard Lad
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posted November 08, 2005 09:30 PM
quote: Originally posted by Faraway Lad: It almost make me want to start writing again. I sincerely hope you get past the "almost"! I've certainly enjoyed your stuff in the past! -------------------- "Suck it, depressos!"--M. Lash
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Tempest
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posted November 10, 2005 01:01 AM
That was the perfect cliffhanger, Lard Lad, I do hope you get around to the second part as soon as time allows it. -------------------- And to show I bear no ill will, I, too, shall bestow a gift...
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Lard Lad
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posted November 10, 2005 07:47 PM
Thanks, Tempest. I appreciate the support and intend to start part two really soon! -------------------- "Suck it, depressos!"--M. Lash
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Tempest
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posted November 11, 2005 02:07 AM
[ December 06, 2005, 12:15 AM: Message edited by: Formerly:KGZ, HPV and etc. ] -------------------- And to show I bear no ill will, I, too, shall bestow a gift...
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