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Thanks, Danny. And a special thank you to Scott! You can edit my work anytime!
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You're probably right, Fats, that it would work just as well postboot. I chose to do it as a preboot though, partly because that era is near and dear to my heart, but also because it takes place shortly before SUPERBOY # 203, wherein Lyle dies. I thought it added poignance to the story by placing it there.
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It does add poignance, *sniff* *sniff* **sob** and it fits in nicely with him falling in love with Myla. So he died happy, I hope. Anyways, I'm just glad to see him back - and I could envision him having the same self-recriminations now as in your story.
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very good HWW, as has been said it has the right feel of the era, most impressive!
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Don't know how I missed this one before but it's great! As Danny said, it does feel like it "fits".
Great job, HWW. I hope there are other Tales to come.
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