Topic: Critic's Corner (post here about any fanart or fanfic)
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There's not a word yet, for old friends who've just met.
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Updated my website to include short fics, Once a Legionnaire and Ghost & Dreams.
Further exciting news flashes as events warrant!
I'm really itching to get back to another BITS related short fic, but I haven't picked my BITS characters to play with yet. Curse Boy and Song Girl have promise, but I'm really interested in finding a way to make Omni Boy work...
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Hi, I'm new here, so, I thought I would post this in this topic instead of making a new one. It's an Matter-Eater Lad fic, cartoonwise, and it uses that Vital Information sketch from All That. Something that was a spur of the moment thing, but turned into something ongoing. Enjoy. Honest criticism appreciated.
cleome46
or you can do the confusion 'til your head falls off
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Hey, old-time fic posters, a little help here, please:
If a fic contains the following:
Real swear words (not "sprock," and the like) Teenagers drinking Occasional vague allusions to sex, but no actual sex-- straight or gay
Is it okay to post it here, or is a fake cut to another site more appropriate ?
I wanted to know what the custom is hereabouts before I start posting anything. Sunday night FOX cartoons are about 10,000 times more graphic than anything I've written, content-wise, but I'm trying to be polite here. (Don't worry. That won't last. )
Thanks.
-------------------- Hey, Kids! My "Cranky and Kitschy" collage art is now viewable on flickr. Drop by and tell me that I sent you.
From: Vanity, OR | Registered: Dec 2008
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Writers, I just want to thank you for posting your work here at Bits. I personally don't often have the time I wish I did to read everything, but I'm sure many people are reading your work. Don't get discouraged if you don't get a lot of responses. It doesn't mean you're terrible. As a fan artist, I've posted countless pieces of art that never get a comment.
cleome, thank you for checking in on the content of your stories. I would not consider any of the subjects you've asked about to be unacceptable.
cleome46
or you can do the confusion 'til your head falls off
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Ah, thanks, Sketch. I'll get to it soon.
Of course, if people can die from too much emo and too many run-on sentences... Eh, I'll just post a warning first. Emo and run-ons have only me *me* stronger.
-------------------- Hey, Kids! My "Cranky and Kitschy" collage art is now viewable on flickr. Drop by and tell me that I sent you.
From: Vanity, OR | Registered: Dec 2008
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Eryk Davis Ester
Created from the Cosmic Legends of the Universe!
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Yay! We've kind of got a vaguely coherent plot in the tag team tale!
From: Liberty City | Registered: Jul 2003
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I know! Its pretty groovy so far! One of the best starts we've had in years!
From: If you don't want my peaches, honey... | Registered: Sep 2003
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BTW, Eryk, was the title "Is Abin OK?" supposed to have the double meaning when you created it?
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From: The Underbelly of Society | Registered: Jul 2003
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Eryk Davis Ester
Created from the Cosmic Legends of the Universe!
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Yep! Eventually there'll be a scene where the double meaning causes all sorts of Abbot-and-Costello-esque confusion!
The title originates with a post by Actor Lad in the mods forum. Noticing the double meaning, I responded with a joke about an unreavealed tale featuring Turns-You-Into-a-State Kid, and the idea for the tag team was born!
From: Liberty City | Registered: Jul 2003
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I even thought of a cool twist further tying it all together! But I'll keep that on the downlow to discourage editorializing for now.
From: If you don't want my peaches, honey... | Registered: Sep 2003
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We may need some editorializing Cobie, the time line split was all I could come up with after I realized that Far and I had posted wildly differing versions of the same scene (Lardy, both EDE's, and Pagan Lass leaving the cell after Lardy agreed to wear clothing for now, anyway).
We also have two different versions of the JSMBP appearing because I couldn't resist using Cloned Green Pig again... so I guess what I'm saying is... HELP!
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With a Power Ring...
From: Westerly Rhode Island | Registered: Aug 2003
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Honestly, Chuck, I don't think those two posts threw things all that far off. In a way, I thought they both kind of fit.
The larger problem currently appears to be a lack of interest by the scribes involved. For me, it comes down to all the real-life holiday madness! Maybe we can agree to revisit this after the holidays and complete it? It would be a shame to have such a rip-roaring adventure fade out with no ending, I say!
So maybe we can resume after New Year's, perhaps with a patented EDE recap (hint-hint)? What say you all?
-------------------- "Suck it, depressos!"--M. Lash
From: The Underbelly of Society | Registered: Jul 2003
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Hopefully we can keep this one going because I have a fun idea to tie my entire 32nd Century adventure into the stories of the modern era and one or two other earlier scenes!
But I can't post after myself--that's the equivalent of incest in tag team posting...frowned on by almost every culture in the galaxy!
From: If you don't want my peaches, honey... | Registered: Sep 2003
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quote:Originally posted by Sarcasm Kid: Hi, I'm new here, so, I thought I would post this in this topic instead of making a new one. It's an Matter-Eater Lad fic, cartoonwise, and it uses that Vital Information sketch from All That. Something that was a spur of the moment thing, but turned into something ongoing. Enjoy. Honest criticism appreciated.
Hi! Thanks for contributing! I'm going to consolidate all of your topics into one. Both for an easier reading experience and to perhaps facilitate more discussions.
From: San Diego, CA | Registered: Jul 2003
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