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Blaze
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That would deprive the LWers of a good story that's why I told you to post. I'm sure they enjoyed reading it as much as I did. [Big Grin]
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Invisible Brainiac
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You're making me blush [Smile] Thank you! I had fun writing it, especially cause you're in it.

(hey, we'd better stop this or people will think you're just my alt id!)

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Set
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A scene left on the cutting room floor from a fanfic I'll probably never finish;

"What about the Terror Twins?" Mai Li asked, running down the list of Winathian extra-legals who might contribute to their enterprise.

"Even by Legion of Super-Villain standards, they were considered too unstable and unreliable." Mekt said with a grunt, recalling some of the people that the LSV didn't think 'too unstable.'

"Well, yeah, the rest of the UP thinks you're crazy," Mai Li says with a rueful grin, before she thinks better of it.

The room grows quiet as she feels the small hairs rise on her arms with the sudden increase in static electricity. She is afraid to look at Mekt, to gauge his reaction, regretting her overly familiar tone. This was no simple man, to joke with, but an unpredictable elemental force of nature, capable of leveling a city, or killing one incautious girl, if his temper is roused.

As quickly as it rose, the static levels descend, and she can feel the energy dissipating away, as if a storm had come into being, and passed, without wind or rain or any other visible sign of its presence.

Mekt emits a strange sort of half-laugh, breaking the tension. "The United Planets thinks I'm crazy? The United Planets can bite me."

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Wow, Set... That's one heck of a teaser! I like it!

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My Whee Fem
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Exnihil, you cutie, you better not leave me hanging...

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Exnihil
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Nag, nag, nag... just like a dame, am I right, fell...AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!

I was just kidding, My!

Put down that sword!


Whew... that was close.

So yeah, apologies, I'm been going through some real-life stuff for a couple months that has kept me out of the creative mood, but give me another week or so and I think we'll be getting back in that Klordny saddle.


Heh.


Yeah, we will... high five, fella....AAAAAAAHHHHHHH!

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Exnihil
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OK, for anybody that noticed "The Long Klordny" bumped up, just a note:

Since it's been a while, I figured I should have a clean break point to start in again. I decided to pull the last couple of posts (the beginning of Part II) just to slightly rework them before continuing on. More to follow very soon.


PS: Killer stuff in LotO!

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Emily Sivana
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I like the interactions between Exnihil and Emily. We should really write something together involving this giant love dodecahedron we are creating in our stories.

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Thank you, Ex [Big Grin]

I read through your summary. Whoa that is some good stuff... I'll be reading in full your actual posts soon, I hope!

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Exnihil
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Thanks, Ibby. That exercise was as much for myself as for any potentials readers - to get myself back in the swing after a couple months of not writing much. Hope you dig the real story. I'm having a blast with it.


And Em, yeah - the Ex and Emily scenes are some of my absolute favorite bits to write. I love the dynamic between the full of himself Ex and the uber-serious Emily who just continually calls him out on his BS. I don't think the two would ever really get together romantically, but yeah, there is definitely a sort of tension there.

If anything, it reminds me a lot of the Bruce Willis/Cybill Shephard dynamic from the early part of Moonlighting.

In a nutshell:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T7Xeh1zDgLU

In fact... I think at some point, I need to totally rip off that exact scene. [Wink]

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Set
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Tempus Fugitive is a clever play on words, Harby, love it!
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Thanks Set, it made me laugh when I thought of it. It's going to be different to everything that's gone before in the Dream Boy series so let me know if you are enjoying it.

And more importantly, are you going to post some more of your fabulous writing soon?

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"Tempus Fugitive" the final part of the Adventures of Dream Boy series, set in the Three-Boot Universe. Read it only in the Bits o' Legionnaire Business Forum.

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Ohmygod! Miss Harbi I'm like loving your Dreamy Boy stories.

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Thanks sweetheart, more Dreamy Boyo coming soon, hope you enjoy it.

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Yah, I am really getting into the Dream Boy stories as well! [Smile]

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