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Fanfic Lady
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I've started making shorter posts, dividing the "issues" into thirds or fourths, so that the pages load more easily.

Feel free to comment here either while the "issue" is in progress, or upon its completion, whichever you prefer.

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More, more, more! I still can't get over the pacing!

I knew it was Gigi, but the way you wrote Shvaughn realizing it was very impactful even though I knew.

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Thanks, IB.

Glad you like the pacing. I admit it's a reaction to the slow pacing of most modern comics.

I'm also glad the hospital scene worked for you, as I wasn't completely confident in it.

But what do the rest of you who are reading these stories think? Let's please see some comments from other people.

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You really capture the Legionnaires personalities well, from Dawny's treatment of Drake, Brainy and Rond at the Time Institute, Shady's passions, Brek's desperation to prove himself to Vi's funny cattiness. Dev-Ems poisoning was a clever way of tying in the established history to your story too. Maxine G'odd was great too, I'm looking forward to seeing what you have planned to do with her and her enforcers. Once again it feel's as if you are building up to a high octane climax.

More, more, more!

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Thank you, Harbi.

Unfortunately, the LSH Alternate Timeline is on hiatus while I get the Justice League off the ground. But thanks to your kind words, it may be coming back sooner than I originally thought.

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