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You really capture the Legionnaires personalities well, from Dawny's treatment of Drake, Brainy and Rond at the Time Institute, Shady's passions, Brek's desperation to prove himself to Vi's funny cattiness. Dev-Ems poisoning was a clever way of tying in the established history to your story too. Maxine G'odd was great too, I'm looking forward to seeing what you have planned to do with her and her enforcers. Once again it feel's as if you are building up to a high octane climax.
More, more, more!
-------------------- "Tempus Fugitive" the final part of the Adventures of Dream Boy series, set in the Three-Boot Universe. Read it only in the Bits o' Legionnaire Business Forum.
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Unfortunately, the LSH Alternate Timeline is on hiatus while I get the Justice League off the ground. But thanks to your kind words, it may be coming back sooner than I originally thought.