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Very nice beginning. I'm interested to see more of the differences between what we knew and what you have here.
If I may say, this one feels different somehow...it's a bit above what I've read from you before, but I cannot put a finger on why. It just feels smoother or something. I hope that makes sense.
From: Turn around... | Registered: Jul 2003
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What you said makes perfect sense, because this is the first thing I've written in ages where I was completely invested in it, giving it my all. I take it from your comment that it shows.
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Now this is what the new so-called Earth 2 title should be like! Maybe if some bigwig at DC reads this, they'll hire you, Fanfie!
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From: The Pyngwyn Colonies of Planet Hyustyn | Registered: Aug 2005
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quote:Originally posted by Rockhopper Lad: Now this is what the new so-called Earth 2 title should be like! Maybe if some bigwig at DC reads this, they'll hire you, Fanfie!
Awwww, thank you, Rocky. That means a lot to me, especially coming from someone who loves the Infinitors as much as I do.
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quote:Originally posted by Fanfic Lady:
BTW, Dev, I know you're a fan of the 90s-00s Starman series, so I'm curious what your initial reaction was to...
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It was a LOL moment. Very nice touch...
Oh, good. That's the reaction I was hoping for. I had been concerned that hardcore Starman fans might think I was trying to wind them up.
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Care to share those ideas in a PM, Dev? They might turn out to be better than what I had in mind. And, of course, I'll be sure to give you credit.