Re: Sun Boy's Hot Date!
Invisible Brainiac
6 hours ago
yay, more!
nice seeing (some of) the Cavalry again. pluberries, a nice touch!
a new invention from Evolvo Lad, amazing! this is gonna "level up" your team for sure! does it only work point-to-point? that is, they can only teleport to another porting unit? seems so, but still very useful!
Loving the solution - really love the idea of superheroes doing more humanitarian work!
ooh, sad fate for Iceland, but oh well. I can see the human race letting poor Iceland get to such a state
I love how Sizzle is both self-aware, and not really caring at how "raw" she is! Love it, love it!
also love how you've woven in Sizzle's world's beliefs, and her own journey, and her own self-awareness of that journey!
and indeed, how different she is from most of Dirk's dates... hah!
oh and Derek Morgna, interested to see where you take this!
ah and here we go right away! Sun Killer! did he appear in the comics?
ooh yeah, thanks for realistically portraying trauma. Poor Laurel... but good of her to be professional and focused enough to use her noodle in this situation!
good old Sizzle for talking sense into Dirk! (props to Vi for trying too)
oooph at Derek's thoughts about Dirk. bit of overbearing dad there, though also, not entirely unfair considering Dirk's playboy image
loving T-Lad's powers!! really useful for hostage situations!
nice save by Sizzle! although yikes...
nice pep talk by Vi - mix of tough love and encouragement! and good on Laurel for working through it!
the Emerald Emperor! wow!
nice installment, raz, some awesome developments too!