Legion World
This is the topic to talk about comics you've read before and are either re-reading or want to re-read whenever you get the chance! (Not the place to discuss the LSH Archives and other LSH-related projects on that forum.)

I've always got a few re-read projects on my mind, and there's one that I've completed and another that's currently in-progress.

The completed one was very easy, as it was only two issues: Superman: Whatever Happened to the Man of Tomorrow? I suspect many people here have read it some point. This was the classic tale Alan Moore wrote and Curt Swan drew that artfully closed the book on the Pre-Crisis Superman.

I remembered this one extremely fondly, but I found that the story didn't quite live up to my remembrance of it. It's not that it was now a bad comic, but it doesn't really compare favorably to Moore's best works. Hell, his take on the Silver Age Superman mythos on Supreme was so much more memorable and a wonder to behold. I know, of course, that he had a lot more pages to work with on Supreme. But I also think that the additional years away from the era benefited Moore with more time for him to reflect on the era and to remember more of what made it so great.

I think the biggest thing that made this particular story work not as well for me was the realization that it was so violent. Many of the characters were killed off with brutality and almost as an afterthought. Knowing Moore, I'm sure much of this was done symbolically to pass the baton to the darker era comics were transitioning to. I would have preferred he'd not done so, though, and just kept everything in the spirit of the era he was ending. I think Luthor and Jimmy particularly got short shrift. Luthor was primarily Brainiac's thrall, and Jimmy played second fiddle to Lana, who got a much bigger moment.

There was one scene that remains absolutely spectacular--the appearance of the Legion with Supergirl. Moore hit ALL the right notes there, ending with the great scene of Superman breaking down after they left. Kara's death was such a raw nerve for him (and the readers in proxy), and seeing her younger and unaware of her tragic future was so heartbreaking. The subtle nod toward Invisible Kid's fate was awesome as well. I'd rate this as one of the best Superman and Legion scenes I've ever read!

Lots of other nice touches like the LSV appearing, the way Clark's identity was exposed and the happily ever after, among others. It was still a very worthwhile re-read for me, but just not as awesomely spectacular as I'd remembered it. That's a big risk any time you decide to re-read something you loved...that the reality may not live up to the memory, in this case not quite.

The current re-read is the 12-issue maxiseries Avengers Forever. I'm five issues in. I'll refrain from saying much at this point, but it's pretty enjoyable so far. I've been eyeing this for a re-read for so long because I've missed old-style Avengers comics so much. I knew this was a compact way of experiencing some of that again.



So what have you re-read/are you re-reading/want to re-read soon? Tell us some of the whys and experiences involved! And feel free to discuss the stories and series that other people bring up!
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 07/13/13 07:49 PM
Here are some of the others that are on my re-read radar:

-Y: The Last Man

-Daredevil: Man Without Fear
(mini by Miller & Romita, Jr.)

-DnA's Legion run

-the last year of Ennis & Dillon's Hellblazer run (I read most of it last year but stopped after I realized I was somehow missing an issue--I've since obtained it)

-Kree/Skull War

-Thomas/Adams X-Men run

-all of Astro City to date


...and probably many more I'm forgetting! smile
Posted By: Power Boy Re: Re-Reads - 07/13/13 08:06 PM
I've reread this one (and the [original] Nail by Alan Davis) several times, and probably will again soon.

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Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 07/13/13 08:14 PM
So I guess it holds up on multiple reads? I've only read the Golden Age once. I liked it but wasn't overly impressed. I suppose you could say I didn't see why there was all of that acclaim? My reading of it was many years after it came out. Maybe that has something to do with it?
Posted By: Invisible Brainiac Re: Re-Reads - 07/13/13 08:17 PM
Crisis on Infinite Earths, for me. Say what you will about the continuity problems, but as a stand-alone story it rocks. Only complaint is the scenes thrown in that lead to stories in other books, which have little impact on the main narrative - but then most crossovers have that.

Big plus point is, it includes the first appearances of Doctor Light (Kimiyo) and Kole, two of my all-time favorite comic book characters ever!
Posted By: Invisible Brainiac Re: Re-Reads - 07/13/13 08:20 PM
Originally Posted by Paladin
So I guess it holds up on multiple reads? I've only read the Golden Age once. I liked it but wasn't overly impressed. I suppose you could say I didn't see why there was all of that acclaim? My reading of it was many years after it came out. Maybe that has something to do with it?


I'm with you on this one, Lardy. Golden Age was a solid story which explored how many of our "top" heroes would have dealt with being in a world which had less need of them, but... I don't know. There's just something that keeps it as a good, and not great, story for me. Maybe it's that the original thesis wasn't explored that completely - the old heroes moved on and gave way to a new generation. So the individual heroes had to change, but society as a whole just went through a cycle.

Cooke's the New Frontier, on the other hand...
Posted By: Power Boy Re: Re-Reads - 07/13/13 10:17 PM
I actually re read the Golden Age at least a couple times before I really got into! I really enjoy the atmosphere created around the characters and their mid life lives. I think the original thesis was that these people were past their prime, and what to do when being a super hero ends. none of them were meant to come back to fight in tights ... yet they had to for one more time until a new generation sparked.

(Lardy I am surprised you didn't take to it)

the New Frontier on the other hand I didn't find that interesting ... except for the agro Wonder Woman .. the first couple issues were compelling but then it turned into a short hand for an alien invasion.


One other thing is, I kind of wish I could come to SAGA as I did Y the Last Man (which i've read twice) after it is finished and read the whole thing straight through. same with Morning Glories.

I will have to remember to do so!

I also reread Superboy's Legion and Legion of the Damned.



I'm not that into CoiE really ... I was at the time ... but reading it all together ... I'm not sure ... I think it suffers from the long time scale.

it goes from "AHHHHHHH" in issue #1 to "AHHHHHHHHHH" in issue 9,10, etc.

hmmm

I liked to reread the old Avenger's Master of Evil story lien where they take over the mansion, an understated horror.

Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 07/13/13 10:29 PM
Originally Posted by Power Boy


(Lardy I am surprised you didn't take to it)



Like I tried to get across, I didn't come anywhere CLOSE to hating it, but I definitely didn't see it as an instant classic. I might, however, consider a future re-read of my TP at some point.

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the New Frontier on the other hand I didn't find that interesting ... except for the agro Wonder Woman .. the first couple issues were compelling but then it turned into a short hand for an alien invasion.


Gawd, I lived New Frontier!!! If DC had restarted with this blueprint, rather than the crappy New 52, I would've loved it--if they's done it right, that is. BIG if!


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I'm not that into CoiE really ... I was at the time ... but reading it all together ... I'm not sure ... I think it suffers from the long time scale.

it goes from "AHHHHHHH" in issue #1 to "AHHHHHHHHHH" in issue 9,10, etc.


It's been a while since my last CoIE re-read. I want to say I re-read it around the time Infinite Crisis was released? shrug I think I still loved it, iirc. Not sure if the same would be true if I re-read it today. Hard to say.

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I liked to reread the old Avenger's Master of Evil story lien where they take over the mansion, an understated horror.


Roger Stern's run and that whole era of East Coast/West Coast Avengers is something I've thought about re-reading recently. Seems like there have been some callbacks here and there lately that have tweaked the germ of an inkling to give it another look. Who knows? Maybe it's in the cards.
Posted By: Power Boy Re: Re-Reads - 07/13/13 11:02 PM
That Sal Buscema art was masterful!


I bet I could go back to Powers and/or Preacher ... after a while but I just read them really so I will let them sit.

Same with Hellblazer ... the wounds are still raw ... but that trenchcoat storyline was too perfect!


Posted By: Power Boy Re: Re-Reads - 07/13/13 11:03 PM
I was going to say I should take a look at the Byrne era West Coast Avengers ... with the reboot of Vision and the old Human Torch and Mephisto stealing Wanda's babies and Wanda visiting crazy town.

It is probably better than I remember, also back then I could only get about 2 out of 3 or every other of the issues.
Posted By: Power Boy Re: Re-Reads - 07/13/13 11:06 PM
I enjoyed Avengers Forever quite a lot ... it recalled the time of Stern and Buscema for me ... I hadn't read an Avengers in ages but I picked it up at a Borders or Barnes and Noble book store on vacation while visiting Mr. Peebz family ... and I was really pleasantly surprised.
Posted By: Power Boy Re: Re-Reads - 07/13/13 11:06 PM
Songbird made a fan ... I will say no more ... my lips are sealed.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 07/14/13 12:33 AM
Originally Posted by Power Boy
I bet I could go back to Powers and/or Preacher ... after a while but I just read them really so I will let them sit.

Same with Hellblazer ... the wounds are still raw ... but that trenchcoat storyline was too perfect!


Preacher was my major re-read project last summer. I'm sure you remember me talking about that in the preacher thread. It didn't disappoint at all. The only thing that was different from expectations was that all the then-groundbreaking, then-taboo content seems kinda "ho-hum" by the standards we have in our adult content comics these days. B honestly, with that stuff being no longer as shocking, it only enhances the core of the story which is all about its fascinating central three characters--some of the best-written in comics history!

Ennis's Hellblazer run is a great proto-Preacher work. He revisits many of the themes in Preacher that he started on Hellblazer. Also, he and Dillon began to work out that great synergy there that paid such awesome dividends later. The big difference from Preacher is how rich Constantine's London world is under Ennis' pen. I'll probably finish that run soon-ish.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 07/14/13 12:39 AM
Originally Posted by Power Boy
I was going to say I should take a look at the Byrne era West Coast Avengers ... with the reboot of Vision and the old Human Torch and Mephisto stealing Wanda's babies and Wanda visiting crazy town.

It is probably better than I remember, also back then I could only get about 2 out of 3 or every other of the issues.


Byrne's run on Avengers West Coast (as it was renamed when he came aboard) was shaping up to be a classic, until it just ubruptly...ended...before he finished the 'Dark Scarlet Witch' arc. I'm sure it's been explained somewhere, somewhen as to the whys and wherefores of Byrne's exit, but I always felt we got a softer ending to that storyline as completed by Roy Thomas (iirc) than we would've gotten with Byrne. In any case Brian Bendis owes a lot to Byrne for the source material that spawned years of story for his New Avengers run.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 07/14/13 12:51 AM
Originally Posted by Power Boy
I enjoyed Avengers Forever quite a lot ... it recalled the time of Stern and Buscema for me ... I hadn't read an Avengers in ages but I picked it up at a Borders or Barnes and Noble book store on vacation while visiting Mr. Peebz family ... and I was really pleasantly surprised.


Well, Stern co-plotted most of it with Busiek, so I'm sure that's no coincidence! smile

Originally Posted by Power Boy
Songbird made a fan ... I will say no more ... my lips are sealed.


Songbird is a GREAT character! As I read this, I find myself regretting terribly that she and Genis didn't pan out as future Avengers as Busiek set them up to be. I think Genis is dead or something, and Melissa has been on-and-off associated with the T-Bolts in some manner or another. You guys will have to set me straight on those two.

I WILL say that the huge responsibility for Genis' ruination lies on the pen of Peter David. His Genis-gone-mad/evil arc was pretty much TERRIBLE! Genis should have blossomed into a premier character based on the great launch pad of Avengers Forever, but PAD just dragged him through the mud and made him as unlikeable as humanly possible. I'd name it as PAD's one glaring, abject failure off the top of my head.
Posted By: Power Boy Re: Re-Reads - 07/14/13 11:02 PM
I didn't read much of Genis' Captain Marvel series but what I did read seemed to read like a Moondragon and Phyla Vell comic with Genis being weirdly abstract and MIA and threatening.

and now we have Marvel Boy ... which I like about the same as Genis but a bit less.

Yeah, it was a shame Melissa got shipped of to the T Bolts when she basically just was starting to blossom as a hero instead of a villain.

I thought the interplay of characters on Avengers Forever was spectacular ... who thought a cast with [edit: temporarily censored for reasons to be revealed!], Goliath (Hank) and Yellow Jacket (Hank) and the Wasp would be such a killer interaction! It is because the story made them distinct by focusing on their different personalities. and it even worked with Captain America's situation during this time was interesting.

Posted By: Power Boy Re: Re-Reads - 07/14/13 11:03 PM
and Genis grew so much in Avengers Forever ... placing him at the jumping off point for being a great Avengers ... and then .. tanget!
Posted By: Power Boy Re: Re-Reads - 07/14/13 11:14 PM
Wikipedia says:

"Finally, in a fight with Zemo, Genis is defeated. Zemo traps Genis in a moment in time. He then uses a combination of Blackout's Darkforce powers and the moonstones to separate Genis into individual pieces, trapping them in separate, far-off parts of the Darkforce Dimension so that they cannot be reunited.[14]"

So he seems ... not only dead ... but difficult to resurrect for the next writer.
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 07/15/13 12:01 AM
Tons I need to reread. Soon as I have time (bwahahahaha)

Chief omong them is Sandman Mystery Theater. Great book.

Others include Reread of Age of Apocalypse (the original event, which I loved,) Starman, and the continuing Ultraverse review/documentation project I have to get back to.
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 07/15/13 12:02 AM
Originally Posted by Power Boy
I enjoyed Avengers Forever quite a lot ... it recalled the time of Stern and Buscema for me ... I hadn't read an Avengers in ages but I picked it up at a Borders or Barnes and Noble book store on vacation while visiting Mr. Peebz family ... and I was really pleasantly surprised.


Avengers Forever is a great dense read.

Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 07/15/13 12:02 AM
Add the Earth X Trilogy to things I need to reread soon.
Posted By: Power Boy Re: Re-Reads - 07/15/13 12:08 AM
Now you have me itching to reread Kate Spencer's Manhunter! and the Jack Knight Starman series!

all at once would be great!
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 07/15/13 12:30 AM
Originally Posted by Dev - Em

Chief among them is Sandman Mystery Theater. Great book.


D'Oh! That's one of the ones I forgot to list! Such a great, great series! (Can you believe that a certain Desmonius hasn't ever read this, iirc?!? confused )

Plus, there's another great, but shorter lived, Vertigo series that Seagle also wrote--House of Secrets-that I'm itching to re-read. Such an overlooked gem!

Originally Posted by Dev - Em
...Starman...


Originally Posted by Power Boy
...and the Jack Knight Starman series!

all at once would be great!


I started that re-read a few years back when I purchased the first Omnibus. I loved the HELL out of re-reading that one but got sidetracked when I couldn't get the second Omnibus immediately. (At the time, I'd lost track as to the whereabouts of my individual issues.) Gotta get that one going again soon. Definitely, another I forgot to list earlier.
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 07/15/13 12:50 AM
Originally Posted by Paladin
Originally Posted by Dev - Em

Chief among them is Sandman Mystery Theater. Great book.


D'Oh! That's one of the ones I forgot to list! Such a great, great series! (Can you believe that a certain Desmonius hasn't ever read this, iirc?!? confused )

Plus, there's another great, but shorter lived, Vertigo series that Seagle also wrote--House of Secrets-that I'm itching to re-read. Such an overlooked gem!


To quote the Minions "Wuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut?" He needs to get out there and find this asap. So many layers to the storytelling and Guy Davis art at its best.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 07/15/13 01:57 AM
Yeah, right? smile

I take it you never read House of Secrets, Dev?
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 07/15/13 02:05 AM
I think UI got the first arc and lost interest or something. Either that or it got purged due to finances. I'll look for it at some cons in the future though.

One of the coolest commissions I have is a GA Sandman from Guy at a convention years ago. Guy is a really nice guy and always willing to talk.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 07/15/13 02:56 AM
Originally Posted by Dev - Em
I think I got the first arc and lost interest or something. Either that or it got purged due to finances. I'll look for it at some cons in the future though.


You might have dropped it because it seemed so formulaic at first. But as the mythologies build and the characters start to shine, it just sings! Teddy Kristiansen's art can be jarring at first, but it was really ahead of its time. Seagle and he are frequent collaborators, including their biggest success Superman: It's a Bird. I've actually never read that one, but I will some day.

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One of the coolest commissions I have is a GA Sandman from Guy at a convention years ago. Guy is a really nice guy and always willing to talk.


Like Kristiansen, it took me a couple of arcs to warm up to Guy Davis' style on SMT. I grew to absolutely LOVE Davis' stuff, too.
Posted By: Cobalt Kid Re: Re-Reads - 07/15/13 05:41 PM
Great idea for a thread, and one I hope to use when the opportunity presents itself. A few random follow ups:

- Lardy, I agree about "Whatever Happened to..." in all ways. It really doesn't hold up in comparison to Moore's other work, especially Supreme. And a lot of that is the ultra violence. I do love that Legion sequence though.

- I really love the Golden Age and have reread it multiple times. It's what I'd consider Robinson's seminal work, and its a great character piece and period piece with an awesome villain twist.

- New Frontier is the best thing DC has done in 30 years. Few things even come close.

- looking forward to thoughts on Avengers Forever, which I LOVED when it was coming out.

- CoIE is actually spectacular. I reread it not long ago for like the 30th time. It stands out as a masters degree course on story telling, pacing , characterization, artwork and every other element that makes comics good. Forget about the consequences. As a story, it's phenomenal.

- PAD's CM started out so good and then dragged like all of PAD's mid-90's / late 90's comics. And like Lardy says, that 'mad-god' story ruined the character forever. He was trying to compete with Joe Q and Bill Jemas in the uber-ridiculous completion they had. He won it and it wasn't his fault but the end result is Genis is gone.

- I've reread Preacher and Sandman so often that I basically know it all by heart at this point.

- still need to check out S:MT! Especially since Matt Wagner is my boy now more than ever. Same goes for House of Secrets. Eventually for both.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 07/15/13 05:54 PM
Oddly enough, just this year, House of Secrets got its own Omnibus! As overlooked as I've always thought it was, this is very heartening.

Still no love (read: collections) for Mark Millar and Phil Hester's excellent run on Swamp Thing, which I've definitely gotta re-read sometime, as well.
Posted By: Invisible Brainiac Re: Re-Reads - 07/15/13 06:21 PM
I still don't get why Songbird isn't an Avenger yet! They've had pretty much everyone else join up. Songbird was great in Avengers Forever and I believe the present-day one is deserving of a spot.

The New Frontier did turn into an alien invasion, but it still holds up well IMO. The sheer spirit driving the characters and the story was joyous.

Preacher's strength, for me, is that it still manages to keep its core cast "good" despite all the sh*t that happened to them.
Posted By: Cobalt Kid Re: Re-Reads - 07/15/13 06:32 PM
The reason I think Songbird hasn't been an Avenger is because once that happens, its basically over for the Thunderbolts. She's basically the glue that holds that series together. It wasn't always the case, but that's how it was recently before I dropped the title. And of course the real reason is because all the writers who had an interest in doing that are long gone.

I'm thinking of doing a possible Astro City reread to gear up for the new relaunch. I've forgotten so much of the series over the years.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 07/15/13 06:40 PM
Well, one of the great things about Astro City is that you don't have to do re-reads for the purpose of not being lost when the latest series is released. Every story or arc is self-contained and enjoyable in and of itself. I mean, it's definitely enhanced if you get every reference and appearance, but not at all necessary for enjoyment.

But you knew that. wink

In any case an AC re-read is ALWAYS worth it! I might do a mini-re-read of it from Local Heroes-on at some point. So many great shorter stories in that mini and the one-shots that followed before, during and after Dark Age! nod

Posted By: Cobalt Kid Re: Re-Reads - 07/15/13 07:34 PM
Originally Posted by Paladin


But you knew that. wink

Of course! But well worth saying anyway. wink

But for sheer excitement purposes, I'm dying to read those initial 18 or so issues again after all this time. I remember exactly where I was when I first saw the Old Soldier...and then wondered about him repeatedly for 15 years.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 07/15/13 08:15 PM
I actually feel so bad for you regarding Sandman Mystery Theatre because I know it's one of those things you would fall so completely in LOVE with! Knowing your love for noir, pulp and period pieces, I just don't understand why you haven't made this happen!!! shrug
Posted By: Cobalt Kid Re: Re-Reads - 07/15/13 08:46 PM
I just need the time! Maybe when I finish my current book ("People's History of the United States" by Howard Zinn), I'll dive in. I know--it sounds like its right up my alley!
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 07/15/13 08:49 PM
Plus, Matt Wagner is writer/co-writer for most of its run! And even afterward, Seagle doesn't miss a beat by himself when Wagner leaves!
Posted By: Power Boy Re: Re-Reads - 07/15/13 11:36 PM
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
The reason I think Songbird hasn't been an Avenger is because once that happens, its basically over for the Thunderbolts. She's basically the glue that holds that series together. It wasn't always the case, but that's how it was recently before I dropped the title. And of course the real reason is because all the writers who had an interest in doing that are long gone.



Yeah, now that you say that, I think so too.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 07/18/13 05:38 PM
Having completed the re-read of Avengers Forever a few days ago, I have to admit that it suffers a little from this experience from how I remember it. It's still a very good story, but it's flaws are revealed.

I think the single biggest, most glaring thing about it is that the main purpose of it is so obviously to ret-con/revise a lot of Avengers history. Admittedly, there were a LOT of inconsistencies and contradictions over the then-40+ years of continuity. Forever usually shows you these things and then explains them. One example is how could the Vision be made from the body from the original Human Torch when the Torch had recently returned to action?

The answer to this, and all of the other fixes Busiek provides in this series, lies in various time manipulations of Kang and Immortus, primarily the latter. You see, Immortus from the beginning of his career as such (he's actually Kang at a later stage of his life) has had as his primary purpose to keep mankind from expanding their reach far into the stars. It seems that in many timelines, humans have become a ruthless conquering force throughout space. And the Avengers and their adventures play a key role in making this possible. Immortus admires the Avengers, so instead of simply destroying them, he tries to manipulate their destiny in ways that will inhibit mankind.

So a LOT of the narrative is spent showing flashbacks and how these served Immortus' goals. It also showed how these often backfired. The result is that much of Forever is basically continuity porn. If you love this kind of thing, then this is for you. if no...well, there's an awful lot of it! I happen to love it generally, but even I was a little bored of it at times.

It's also a little jarring, with modern sensibilities, how heavy the narration is. Now, it's almost nonexistent. Here, it is SUPER-HEAVY! And not just for the continuity porn, which is necessary, but also for the other here-and-now sequences. You know this from the get-go when Kurt narrates a future invasion by a ruthless Avengers army to set up the kind of thing Immortus is driven to prevent. The prose is fairly purple and a little over the top, here and throughout.

One benefit, though, is that there's plenty to read, so you really feel like you get your money's worth. I'd say each issue of Forever takes me more than twice as long to read as the average comic published these days does. Many modern singles and trades just don't feel worth the money because of the expediency of the read. No danger here of that!

All that said, there's plenty to love about this series. As already mentioned, we have a great mix of main characters. And in issue 11, we even get an explanation as to why this mix was needed to accomplish the goal at hand. Plus, Kang and Immortus are at the very top of the list of Avengers villains, and we get a grand, epic story worthy of their involvement. In an interesting twist, they aren't even the primary antagonists!

And we do get a lot more insight into Kang and Immortus. Kang (and by extension, Immortus) even gets a whole issue to himself where he examines his history and struggles with his destiny to become Immortus. Just when it looks like that future is Kang's inevitability, he finds a strong reason to turn his back on it again, which plays a key role in Forver's resolution. In fact the Kang/Immortus thing ends up being resolved once and for all in the end.

I think my favorite part is when the Avengers team is split into three groups and explore three eras. This comprises approximately the middle of the story. the attention to ret-conning here is minimal, and the vibes in the three adventures are very different from each other.

The ending to theories is also very widescreen in its scope. So many great cameos from different eras and various throwaway stories. And overall, very satisfying. The only caveat being the somewhat nebulous element of the so-called "destiny force" which was never sufficiently explained. It wasn't necessarily crucial to the narrative's unfolding, but it was there and a little confusing.

All in all, I'd be reluctant to recommend Forever to someone I want to introduce to the Avengers. I'd have to think they'd find it overly confusing and not all that entertaining. But for a fan of classic Avengers, this one is definitely worth visiting...and re-visiting.

I'd be extremely curious as to what any of you who expressed interest in re-reading Forever might think after you eventually do your own re-read.

Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 07/18/13 05:38 PM
In fact it would be great if we could all agree do a particular non-Legion re-read simultaneously at some point! nod
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 07/22/13 12:08 AM
My current re-read is the final year of Garth Ennis'/Steve Dillon's great run (from where I left off last year when I had to replace the missing issue) on Hellblazer! I'm finding the shorter re-reads to be more appealing this year as the time investment is lighter. I'll probably do Miller/J.R. Jr.'s Man Without Fear mini next.
Posted By: Cobalt Kid Re: Re-Reads - 07/22/13 01:03 AM
I remember loving Man Without Fear when it came out. If I can find it, I'd love to reread. But that might be kind of tough as it'd be in a random box of Marvel miniseries.

No one can read this and not love JR Jr!
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 07/22/13 01:38 AM
^ except maybe...Fanfic Lass? She's not a fan of the Jr.!
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 07/22/13 01:53 AM
I wonder how you guys feel about the Avengers Forever re-review on the previous page. Does it make you feel more or less likely to want to re-read it? How does it ring true (or false) to your memory of it?
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 07/22/13 02:45 AM
Loved Man without fear. That was the Miller penned mini correct? If so, I need to find mine. I think I have it signed by the main creative team.

Regarding Avengers Forever, your review actually makes me want to read it again sooner than I probably would have wanted to. Love the fact that it is so dense with information. I loved it the first few times I read through it...and do not see that changing any time soon.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 07/22/13 02:58 AM
Originally Posted by Dev - Em
Loved Man without fear. That was the Miller penned mini correct? If so, I need to find mine. I think I have it signed by the main creative team.


Yeah, it's basically DD's origin retold with Miller at his best. Romita Jr. does the art. Only drawback is the foil covers. Not as badly done as some of them, but I can't help but feel that the covers would have been so much better without them.

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Regarding Avengers Forever, your review actually makes me want to read it again sooner than I probably would have wanted to. Love the fact that it is so dense with information. I loved it the first few times I read through it...and do not see that changing any time soon.


This was only my second read of Forever. I forgot somehow to mention how wonderful Carlos Pacheco's art is in that series. Truly some phenomenal work, up there with some of the best Avengers art ever! It's too bad Pacheco has never had an extensive run on an Avengers ongoing (or on anything, really).
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 07/22/13 04:13 AM
Yeah, Carlos rocks pretty much everything he does.

You have me wanting to find it now...maybe this week anyway.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 07/22/13 04:16 AM
I'd be thrilled to read your thoughts! nod I remember when we were doing that back-and-forth on Ennis' war comics....
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 07/23/13 01:22 AM
We need to find that and finish those.
Posted By: Invisible Brainiac Re: Re-Reads - 07/23/13 04:39 AM
Originally Posted by Paladin
Having completed the re-read of Avengers Forever a few days ago, I have to admit that it suffers a little from this experience from how I remember it. It's still a very good story, but it's flaws are revealed.

*snip*

All in all, I'd be reluctant to recommend Forever to someone I want to introduce to the Avengers. I'd have to think they'd find it overly confusing and not all that entertaining. But for a fan of classic Avengers, this one is definitely worth visiting...and re-visiting.

I'd be extremely curious as to what any of you who expressed interest in re-reading Forever might think after you eventually do your own re-read.



Lardy, I agree with your assessment. I remember very little of what I read because of all the text and prose. I do remember understanding the story well enough even with my limited knowledge of the Avengers, but there was just so much going on that not too much stuck in my mind.

I tried re-reading it, and couldn't really get past the first issue. Instead, I turned to my BWahaha JLI comics. Specifically, some of the Annuals and JL Quarterly issues - I preferred the stand-alone tales to the "main" series because there were quite a lot of background subplots going on in the main series.
Posted By: Invisible Brainiac Re: Re-Reads - 07/23/13 04:43 AM
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
Great idea for a thread, and one I hope to use when the opportunity presents itself. A few random follow ups:

- New Frontier is the best thing DC has done in 30 years. Few things even come close.

- CoIE is actually spectacular. I reread it not long ago for like the 30th time. It stands out as a masters degree course on story telling, pacing , characterization, artwork and every other element that makes comics good. Forget about the consequences. As a story, it's phenomenal.



You took the words right out of my mouth.

COIE was one of the inspirations for me when I was writing my parts in LOTO. My "Weber's World War" scenes owed a lot to the scenes in COIE where Wolfman and Perez had dozens (if not hundreds) of heroes and villains duking it out vs. each other and the shadow demons! It's amazing how big of an impact a character can make with just a short scene showing him or her kicking ass!
Posted By: Power Boy Re: Re-Reads - 07/23/13 05:39 AM
Originally Posted by Paladin
In fact it would be great if we could all agree do a particular non-Legion re-read simultaneously at some point! nod


Avengers Forever would have been a great one! laugh

... hmmm we had some good times reviewing an Avengers run that Fanfic Lass really liked. Dev and I read them and commented with FL's comments. was fun. It was the Harras and Epting era.

I've been wanting to pick up and read this one:

http://www.amazon.com/Thor-Ragnarok...=22R8JBUEKW9D2&coliid=I30ERO7WKCSLEW

but it might be too wacky.
Posted By: Power Boy Re: Re-Reads - 07/23/13 05:50 AM
Dave Cockrum's 2nd X-Men run .. that weird extended space opera may be a hidden gem ... maybe.
Posted By: Set Re: Re-Reads - 07/23/13 10:04 AM
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
The reason I think Songbird hasn't been an Avenger is because once that happens, its basically over for the Thunderbolts. She's basically the glue that holds that series together.


I was just thinking this very thing. Any iteration of the Thunderbolts without her has floundered, it seems, and turned into a kind of subpar Marvel attempt at making a Secret Six comic, without a third of the characterization or appeal.

Which makes it all the more mind-boggling that this character was taken from 'Screaming Mimi,' and turned into the glue for *anything,* ever.

Were I to make a top 10 list of crappy villains for Scourge to pump full of bullets and leave in a unmarked mass grave behind the Bar With No Name, Screaming Mimi would have been on the list twice.

And yet, a writer with more vision than I picked her up, dusted her off and re-imagined her into an amazing character. So what do I know? smile

(Ditto the Fixer, Beetle, Power Man and Moonstone, kind of dull one-note characters, picked up and re-made into Techno, Mach V, Atlas and Meteorite, of which, Moonstone has also really made out like a bandit, going on to become one of Marvel's go-to bad girls, now that Emma Frost is more or less a 'hero.')

.

Anywho, my thoughts on a re-read, colored obviously by the limited comic runs that I actually own;

Peter David's noir-esque Madrox mini
The first 12 or 24 issues of Alpha Flight
The first 12 or 24 issues of the Thunderbolts (original run)
Joss Whedon's run on the Astonishing X-Men
The Avengers Academy run
Avengers Forever (which I'd have to dig out of storage...)

Posted By: Cobalt Kid Re: Re-Reads - 07/23/13 08:29 PM
Regarding Avengers Forever, to echo one of Lardy’s comments, Carlos Pacheo kills it in that series. That’s the series that made me sit up and take notice of him. In terms of whether I’d enjoy it as much now knowing it was providing a lot of quick fixes to some awful and ill-conceived ideas in the then-recent history of the Avengers…I guess I don’t know. I’m actually curious if I’ll like it or not.

Originally Posted by Power Boy


... hmmm we had some good times reviewing an Avengers run that Fanfic Lass really liked. Dev and I read them and commented with FL's comments. was fun. It was the Harras and Epting era.

I've been wanting to pick up and read this one:

http://www.amazon.com/Thor-Ragnarok...=22R8JBUEKW9D2&coliid=I30ERO7WKCSLEW

but it might be too wacky.


If you read it, gear up for some far-out craziness! That is a really solid storyline, and probably Thomas’ best. It stands out for introducing a ton of Norse Gods to the series for the very first time, such as Herod, Hodur and *all* of the Norse Goddesses. If you really want to get whacky, though, you need to read the immediate 20 or so issues that build up to Thor #300. Those have to be one of the most complex, continuity-pornographic series of stories EVER in comics. It’s a storyline that I actually like. But I know more about Marvel Comics Thor than probably any single human being that ever lived or will live, even *I* get a little overwhelmed by it.

Originally Posted by Set
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
The reason I think Songbird hasn't been an Avenger is because once that happens, its basically over for the Thunderbolts. She's basically the glue that holds that series together.


I was just thinking this very thing. Any iteration of the Thunderbolts without her has floundered, it seems, and turned into a kind of subpar Marvel attempt at making a Secret Six comic, without a third of the characterization or appeal.

Which makes it all the more mind-boggling that this character was taken from 'Screaming Mimi,' and turned into the glue for *anything,* ever.

Were I to make a top 10 list of crappy villains for Scourge to pump full of bullets and leave in a unmarked mass grave behind the Bar With No Name, Screaming Mimi would have been on the list twice.

And yet, a writer with more vision than I picked her up, dusted her off and re-imagined her into an amazing character. So what do I know? smile

(Ditto the Fixer, Beetle, Power Man and Moonstone, kind of dull one-note characters, picked up and re-made into Techno, Mach V, Atlas and Meteorite, of which, Moonstone has also really made out like a bandit, going on to become one of Marvel's go-to bad girls, now that Emma Frost is more or less a 'hero.')




lol on Screaming Mimi appearing on your list twice!

Songbird really symbolizes just what a fantastic thing Busiek did with Thunderbolts, doesn’t she? The others, as you say, are all fantastic characters, but at least some of them had *some* prior bits to build on. (Though Busiek still was masterful in what he did with each). With Songbird, Busiek really just went all out.

I wouldn’t mind reading Thunderbolts #1-25 myself. I can actually remember exactly where I was when I read #1 (my parents dining room table, just after school), the issue where Techno saves Zemo and the Thunderbolts break into two groups (at the beach with my parents) and the issue where Moonstone kills that alien (in my room, getting “away” from my then little siblings). It was such an important series to me as a kid.
Posted By: Set Re: Re-Reads - 07/23/13 08:50 PM
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
lol on Screaming Mimi appearing on your list twice!

Songbird really symbolizes just what a fantastic thing Busiek did with Thunderbolts, doesn’t she? The others, as you say, are all fantastic characters, but at least some of them had *some* prior bits to build on. (Though Busiek still was masterful in what he did with each). With Songbird, Busiek really just went all out.


He's really good, IMO, at taking characters that people haven't been taking seriously, and making them shine.

He introduced Hawkeye, Hercules and the Angel at various points in the Thunderbolts, and each of them was presented as a serious competent hero (and, in Hercules case, a force to be feared!).

Even with characters like Moonstone, he threw in some humor, to humanize a character who can be profoundly unlikable. (Like the scene where she's trying to convince Zemo not to do something terrible, but isn't feeling it, and goes off to have Jolt explain to her the moral argument she needs to be making. I loved that. "Is there any power those moonstones don't give you?" "The ability to make moral decisions, apparently.")

Old comic book questions like 'Why hasn't Reed Richards cured cancer?' which tend to get ignored in other titles, he just breezes by, with the tacit acknowledgement that Fixer/Techno just does crime for the fun of it, and lives quite comfortably off of all of his patents. What another title might casually ignore, super-scientist crooks robbing banks, instead of retiring bazillionaires with the patenting of their freeze ray or whatever, he addresses right to its face, saving your limited supply of suspension of disbelief for concepts like glowing pink 'hard sound wings.' smile

Bagley's art was also awesome, which really helped for me, 'cause I'm such an art snob. smile


Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 07/23/13 09:50 PM
I would encourage any of you to sign up for Formspring just so you can ask Busiek any question you want to! I've recently asked him questions about Beast and Genis. Look here to see all the fan questions he's answered so far!
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 07/24/13 02:22 AM
Another one I have wanted to get to recently is the Suicide Squad. Always enjoy it when I read through it.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 07/24/13 02:28 AM
^ That's a good one, Dev! I'd have to figure out which box(es) those are in in the attic. *sigh* That's an ongoing problem with most of the series that predate my living in this house.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 07/24/13 03:57 AM
I just completed my re-read of Ennis & Dillon's final year of Hellblazer, plus the Heartland special they did three years later that is a sequel to one of their Hellblazer issues (also entitled "Heartland") that focused on one of their supporting characters for Constantine, Kit Ryan. Kit was Constantine's love interest during their run, and Ennis used the spotlight issue and the later special to develop her background.

Part of this was some fascinating insight into what it was like to live day-to-day through the turmoil in Ireland. Unlike some of his other works that touch the subject, Ennis shows this from the viewpoint of non-combatants. Simple things like the sight of armed U.K. military transports patrolling the streets of Belfast being an ordinary fact of life, barely noticed. Garth has a gift for getting this thing across, as many of you know very well.

(As y'all can tell, I liked the "Heartland" bits a LOT! Makes me wish Ennis did an ongoing series out of it.)

As for the Hellblazer stories proper, Garth and Steve really went out in style! 72-75: "Damnation's Flame" had Constantine visit New York to kind of shake the cobwebs loose after a long depression-fueled bender. Unfortunately, a bad fellow named Papa Midnite finds out he's there and seizes the opportunity to get some revenge on John for crossing him in the past. John ends up lost in a nightmarish dreamtime version of America and encounters some "ghosts" of America's past and present, including JFK and American Indians. It's a pretty interesting, surreal adventure that, of course, gives garth a chance to do some scathing commentary on America and her dream.

76 and 77 are two great one-shots. The first has John meet up with the ghost of his dead friend Brendan, who happened to be with Kit when John first met her. There's some awkwardness about John dating Brendan's woman after he died, but it's mostly one of Garth's trademark "bar talk" stories, complete with a couple of flashbacks of John's history with Brendan. The second focuses on John's main supporting character Chas and what it is like to have a bloke like Constantine for a friend. Especially amusing is Chas's presence at an exorcism John performs. Since we see it from Chas's perspective, we never find out how John got out of a messy situation that was so dire that there's a funeral for Consatntine--which Constantine crashes! lol

We end with 78-83: "Rake at the Gates of Hell", the conclusion of the run. This storyline wraps of the overarching story that Garth set up at the beginning of his run with "Dangerous Habits". See, Constantine had contracted fatal lung cancer (Guess how? wink ) and made a literal deal with the devil, in this case the First of the Fallen, to save his life. Constantine being Constantine, he found a way to cheat the devil and get out of his part of the bargain. Well, the devil didn't take this well and finally figures out a way to cheat the cheat and reclaim his prize in this ultimate arc.

But "Rake" is hardly a six-issue battle with the devil. Garth uses the story to do some housekeeping and put some of his other subplots to bed. Among these is a big racial conflict at the center of the story that Garth had been building for awhile, revolving around an incident with a young black man whom Constantine knows that mushrooms out of control. In a way it serves as a metaphor for the devil coming to London. And as usual, Ennis has a lot to say on the subject. Plus, we see many of Constantine's friends pay the price for their association with him. And once again, Constantine prevails by being the sneaky bastard he is!

As many of the contributors of this thread are big fans of Preacher, I heartily recommend Ennis' entire run on Hellblazer. It's not as perfect as Preacher, but you can see Garth grow into a great writer as the run progresses. If nothing else, do yourself a favor and read "Dangerous Habits". It's an outstanding beginning to the run. The only downside is that Dillon (and the great Glenn Fabry on covers) comes along later, and Will Simpson's art isn't near that standard.

The run is an essential part of Ennis's bibliography, so if you're a fan and haven't read--or re-read--his run on this book, you're missing out, mate!
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 07/24/13 05:48 AM
Originally Posted by Power Boy
Dave Cockrum's 2nd X-Men run .. that weird extended space opera may be a hidden gem ... maybe.


I've thought about Claremont-era X-Men re-reads off and on since I read my Masterworks collecting GS 1 & 94-100 a few months ago. What I eventually want to do is re-read from 100 to about 200 in the not-too-distant future. The main hindrance is that I have a gap between 100 and the DPS that I originally filled with the Classic X-Men floppy reprint series. I really want to read those stories as originally presented, without the new deleted scenes that that series added. Turns out successive Masterworks are fairly expensive, even the softcovers, so it may be awhile. Plus, my originals are up in the attic among a multitude of long boxes. So that re-read is a ways off.

Why stop at 200, you ask? Well, I'm of the opinion that Claremont's run is mostly pretty terrible after that point (a turn that started even earlier around Secret Wars) and wasn't helped by the incessant cross-overing. That's when the X-product started being diluted with spin-off after spin-off, something that's gotten much worse, obviously, ever since. When Jim Lee came aboard there was a creative infusion that at least sent Claremont out with a bang.
Posted By: Cobalt Kid Re: Re-Reads - 07/25/13 02:51 PM
About two years ago, I did a complete reread of the Claremont X-Men from start to finish, and even kept going all the way up to the wedding of Jean & Scott. I even got out the New Mutants, X-Factor and X-Force issues and read all the crossovers.

And you know what? It was awesome. Far better than I even remember. The initial Cockrum issues are mind-blowing. The Byrne issues are exactly what everyone has always said: pure and utter genius. The second Cockrum issues stumble at first and then have a series of awesome stories. And to my shock…I actually loved the X-Men stories that followed. I loved Paul Smith and JR Jr. And I even loved the Silvestri issues—when I was prepared to dislike them. The Mutant Massacre holds up *really well*, and so does even Fall of the Mutants. The Australia issues do drag, but they include the awesome first Genosha story, and when read at a large clip, they go by really fast. And then after the Siege Perilous, IMO, the series stays A+ quality right on through to the launch of X-Men #1. *And*, from there, even post Claremont, the energy and fun of the adjectiveless X-Men title—plus killer artwork—makes it a total blast.

I know you’re a bit biased Lardy, but I think you might actually enjoy some of those post Secret Wars II issues that I know killed the series for you. (And I’m recalling a conversation we had on this way back in 2000 or 2001 on the DCMB’s.

I wish I had reviewed the X-Men and Thor runs when I reread them a few years ago like I did with Iron Man in that thread, as I went through and read every issue and considered all the things that I might have missed the first time(s) around.
Posted By: Cobalt Kid Re: Re-Reads - 07/25/13 02:56 PM
Also, Suicide Squad is a real good one. The first two issues are a contender for best opening first issues of a series EVER.

Lardy, you’re reviewing of Ennis and Dillon’s Hellblazer has suddenly moved these issues to the front of the pile for me to read!! They sound awesome! And as a diehard Ennis fan, I must read them. Are they collected in easily accessible trades, do you know? My Hellblazer reading is very spotty at best, and I’ve only ever read Azzerello’s run.
Posted By: Brain-Fall-Out Boy Re: Re-Reads - 07/25/13 05:19 PM
I can't second New Frontier or Sandman Mystery Theatre highly enough. My first published letter was in a late issue of SMT providing a love letter to the Wagner era.

I feel weird recommending this in a thread with so much better material in it, but... I think every Legion fan should try the late 60s/70s version of the Guardians of the Galaxy. Other versions have their charms, but something about that early version evokes a similar feel in me to the LSH. Admittedly, that may be in part because I discovered them around the same time.

I recently reread Grant Morrison's Animal Man and Doom Patrol runs. I still think those are amongst the best things he's ever done, and I'm a GM fan. Certainly, nothing he's done since has their emotional power. He became a very cerebral writer after this. Admittedly, DP drags a bit in the last third, but it delivers at the end.

Originally Posted by Paladin
One example is how could the Vision be made from the body from the original Human Torch when the Torch had recently returned to action?


Forgive me for being a little pedantic, but I think you misunderstood what Busiek was doing in that portion of the story. John Byrne actually revealed in his late 80s (early 90s?) run that Human Torch and Vision were separate entities. His logic was "Human Torch was an android. Vision is a synthezoid. How can one be a redesign of the other?"

I personally liked this, not least because it opened the door for the Human Torch to return, which you mentioned. A lot of fans were attached enough to the old view that they hated it, though. Apparently Kurt Busiek was one of them, leading to the fix you refer to in Avengers Forever.

Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
CoIE is actually spectacular.


Every time I've tried to reread CoIE as an adult, I have always come to the same assessment: everything you've said captures my feelings about the first 7 issues. Then I feel the book drags for a few issues, then pulls it back together for a decent finish, but even that still doesn't compare to issue 7 for emotional climax.

Now, I haven't read it in several years, so my opinion may change. I'm currently doing a reread of bronze age books that will climax (eventually) with CoIE. Do you think you can present an interpretation to give me a better appreciation for the back half, or do you think this is probably just an agree-to-disagree thing?

ETA:
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
About two years ago, I did a complete reread of the Claremont X-Men from start to finish.... And you know what? It was awesome. Far better than I even remember.


I started reading the book during the second Cockrum era (#147. I can still picture the cover perfectly...) I read the book constantly for over 100 issues, and sporadically for many, many years after. Despite how long I kept reading the book, I felt like it just got further and further off track after the mutant massacre.

But reading Sean Howe's excellent History of Marvel Comics has given me a different viewpoint. I still don't really care for the actual writing on many of those stories, but I absolutely give credit to Claremont for one thing. He continued to treat the book as a labor of his personal vision instead of as a franchise that needs to be protected and kept in proper shape to be exploited as IP. It was the last major Marvel book to keep the feeling of wild experimentation that marked the 70s environment that launched it. And even if I felt the experiments were largely unsuccessful, I have to salute that spirit.
Posted By: Cobalt Kid Re: Re-Reads - 07/25/13 06:17 PM
Originally Posted by Dave Doty

Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
CoIE is actually spectacular.


Every time I've tried to reread CoIE as an adult, I have always come to the same assessment: everything you've said captures my feelings about the first 7 issues. Then I feel the book drags for a few issues, then pulls it back together for a decent finish, but even that still doesn't compare to issue 7 for emotional climax.

Now, I haven't read it in several years, so my opinion may change. I'm currently doing a reread of bronze age books that will climax (eventually) with CoIE. Do you think you can present an interpretation to give me a better appreciation for the back half, or do you think this is probably just an agree-to-disagree thing?


I’ve given this a little thought, and let’s see if I can express what I’m thinking. I agree that the first 7 issues really is what nails what makes this series so great, and sets a standard for not only the rest of the series, but all superhero comics of that era. Like we’re both saying, it comes down to pacing, story structure, dialogue, maximum characterization in minimal panel space, usage of an over-abundance of characters, ability to use continuity as a set-up and then allow the characters to react organically, etc.

From there, however, Wolfman and Perez are faced with an interesting issue: what to do to get the series to 12 issues long? Clearly the story isn’t over yet, there’s a lot of time to get to 12 issues, and this came out during an era (following Camelot 3000) that 12 issue series were kind of the benchmark. So what they do, and I think quite successfully, is a few things.

First, in #8, they advance the plot much more slowly, while focusing on the subplot of the Flash and giving him the send-off he deserves. I actually really love this issue and think the Flash’s end is incredibly dramatic. It’s not as heartfelt as the Supergirl death, but it captures something else: the totally science-fiction-ness and grandiose nature of Flash adventures, specifically in the form that Schwartz, Broome, Kanigher and Infantino first presented the character in. The way he dies, which is incredibly heroic, just fits the Flash. And in this issue, it also advances Wally West as another major person the reader can link to emotionally (while at the same time, backing away on a few others).

From there, Marv and George turn the focus on another “mini-story” / subplot to keep things moving along, which is namely the villains all rising up to conquer the multiple Earths. It keeps the series moving, wraps up a few subplots (Luthor / Braininac, Psimon, etc.) and also answers the question “what are all the villains doing?” since by now this was clearly a DC series that was using all of its various heroes, so therefore one must assume they would use all their villains. Marv and George therefore take all the tools they used in the first 7 issues of the series on the heroes, and try to apply it to the villains in 1-2 issues. I think they succeed, and the reason is that while the villains get good play, the heroes get equally as much. It allows for a lot of intermixing that had never been seen before, such as the Atom (in full on Sword of the Atom gear) freeing Billy Batson and the other kids so the Marvels can join the fray.

From there, the last three issues are especially unusual in their pacing: you get the big Spectre showdown versus the Anti-Monitor, resulting in loss (which can be really blamed on the villains failure to hold up their end); then #11 introducing the post-Crisis DCU for the first time as the heroes struggle to understand just like the readers are; and then #12, the big finale. Going back to #10, I can see what Marv is trying to accomplish: he clearly had in his mind how the heroes would finish off the A-M in #12 but needed to address why certain others aren’t involved: the magic-users (especially the Spectre), the other time heroes (key among them the Legion), the villains and a whole bunch more. While he is able to give the magic-users something to do here, this issue also kind of takes a lot of these characters off the board, so the story can begin shrinking again to a more manageable finale. If there is any single issue in CoIE that *almost* goes off the rails, its #10, though its still loaded with great moments, including how the massive group of heroes is able to even confront the A-M in the first place.

#11 hits next, and it brings with it a tone that no other issue of CoIE has. At first this can be jarring, but what Marv is doing now is introducing the concept of the combined Earths, combined history and a single Earth DCU. Superman and Batman provide great POV’s for the readers, since as being DC’s biggest icons, they essentially will hold our hands as we get used to this strange new reality. It’s interesting that the heroes remember the multiple Earths in this issue though later that wouldn’t be the case. It’s necessary here though for narrative reasons. This issue leaves the reader with an uneasy feeling because (A) it’s a whole new world and (B) there’s still so much unfinished business. And that second aspect rolls us right into #12.

As you say, you enjoyed the finale yourself. I personally love this issue and think its nothing short of brilliant. First there is the big attack on the A-M by a smaller group that allows Marv and George to really strut their stuff by showcasing strategy, powers, action, etc. Then there is the pure sense of panic on Earth, complete with deaths of heroes we know are being removed from the board (E2 Robin, E2 Green Arrow, etc.). There’s also the small roles others play like the aforementioned magic-users. And throughout it all, Marv makes sure to keep the story down to Earth by linking readers to specific characters like Kid Flash (and I admit I cry every time I read the final pages), Superman and Superman & Lois of Earth-2. Marv succeeds in a double-victory: first by the heroes combined and then next by Superman of Earth-2, who is really “the one who started it all” dying to save the DCU. There’s nothing more symbolic about the company pre-Crisis no longer being the same company post-Crisis.

I think these issues all present something individually appealing and are successful in that. But as you say, there is something that changes pacing-wise and tone-wise from the first 7 issues to these next five, and even more, it then changes each issue all the way to the end (with #12 being much like the first 7). I think they succeed every time, though it can get noticeable around the #9-10 range.

I am interested in your thoughts. What’s been missing from these crossovers ever since Crisis is the small scenes that now often get skipped over. When Wally West rejoining the Titans is in question, Cyborg asks Speedy what he decided and Speedy responds with “chalk one up for the good guys!”. We see Dr. Light meeting the heroes for the first time, some initial confusion, and Superman arriving to broker a quick peace. The interaction between Hawk & Dove and Red Star lasts just three panels…and in those three panels they get more characterization each than they had in the prior 15 years. Marv doesn’t just introduce Tomahawk for the sake of it—he takes the time to give you two panels that get to the heart of the character. It’s amazing!
Posted By: Brain-Fall-Out Boy Re: Re-Reads - 07/25/13 06:33 PM
Thanks for the interesting and compelling analysis. I'll have to reread the series in light of your comments. I'm tempted to do so now, but that would probably take away the impact when I reread it in a couple of years as the cap to my bronze age revisitation. Something else else to look forward to!
Posted By: Cobalt Kid Re: Re-Reads - 07/25/13 07:43 PM
I'll look forward to it too! And please share the other pieces of your Bronze Age revisit! I'm definitely curious as to what you're reading and how you're finding it. The run-up to Crisis always felt like one of the very best eras in superhero comics ever, perhaps the only other time that has reached Golden Age or Silver Age heights.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 07/26/13 03:28 AM
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
I know you’re a bit biased Lardy, but I think you might actually enjoy some of those post Secret Wars II issues that I know killed the series for you. (And I’m recalling a conversation we had on this way back in 2000 or 2001 on the DCMB’s.


I remember those conversations as well, Cobie. I also remember you basically agreeing with me at the time.

I've reflected on this more and more, and I think it comes down to 2 things:

1) The breaking up of the classic core line-up that had been more or less intact (albeit with the welcome additions of Kitty and Rogue along the way) for well over 100 issues. To me, the chemistry never recovered from so many of those characters being moved to other books. In my mind it was the perfect X-Men line-up, and the only time the chemistry ever felt close again to me was when Joss Whedon wrote Astonishing.

2) The dilution of the overall product with spin-offs that have only gotten more and more bloated ever since. New Mutants was okay because it was basically all new characters. X-Factor and Excalibur pushed it way further. No longer could I read about all of my favorite mutants in one book! I had been so spoiled for so long, and those spin-offs were just the beginning. And we know how incredibly bloated it is these days.

I lasted a long time with what had been my favorite comic, buying it out of sheer stubbornness and huge loyalty. I think I finally laid my X-fandom to rest somewhere around X-Men #300. I know I bought that foil-covered monstrosity, but I don't know if I bought 301. I know in adjectiveless, it was a few issues after Jean and Scott got married that I dropped it.

I probably WILL re-read beyond #200, someday, when I finally do that massive re-read. But I'll let you know it, Cobie, if I disagree with your assessment! tease
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 07/26/13 03:52 AM
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
Lardy, you’re reviewing of Ennis and Dillon’s Hellblazer has suddenly moved these issues to the front of the pile for me to read!! They sound awesome! And as a diehard Ennis fan, I must read them. Are they collected in easily accessible trades, do you know? My Hellblazer reading is very spotty at best, and I’ve only ever read Azzerello’s run.


It's collected in trades under the following titles:

Dangerous Habits
Bloodlines
Fear and Loathing
Tainted Love
Damnation's Flame
Rake at the Gates of Hell


From Fear and Loathing-on, every issue is collected. Bloodlines collects several individual and multi-part issues between the first and third trades, but not every Ennis issue is in trade form. As a result, I have NOT read every single Ennis Hellblazer story. I have all the individual issues that are represented in those last four trades but relied on the first two for the earlier issues.

Also, I think Bloodlines is out of print. I managed to find it on eBay a few years ago for a reasonable price, though it took some looking. I think, though, that if you get 'Habits' and then 'Fear and Loathing'-on, you'll be in good shape.
Posted By: Invisible Brainiac Re: Re-Reads - 07/26/13 04:10 AM
^ awesome analysis on COIE, Cobie! Almost sounds like you were there when the plotting was being done wink
Posted By: Brain-Fall-Out Boy Re: Re-Reads - 07/26/13 05:36 AM
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
And please share the other pieces of your Bronze Age revisit! I'm definitely curious as to what you're reading and how you're finding it. The run-up to Crisis always felt like one of the very best eras in superhero comics ever, perhaps the only other time that has reached Golden Age or Silver Age heights.


At this point, it's really a Bronze Age Batman visit. I was going to read all of the BA Superman and Batman books, leading up to the books I grew up on. I found that Batman was instantly the character I remembered, but the post-Weisinger Superman line was disjointed, directionless, and not much like what I remember from the late 70s. I decided to drop it and just read Batman, and add Superman back in down the line. The Superman in the Bronze Age podcast convinced me to start with Man or Superman? The 4-part epic that ran through Superman 296-299. I haven't reached that point yet.

Then, I decided that as I get closer to my childhood, I was going to start adding in some other favorites, mainly team books because those were my favs. JLA when Gerry Conway took over, LSH when Levitz began his first run. JSA with it's All-Star revival. Firestorm. Outsiders, the Roy Thomas Earth 2 titles, probably more will continue to creep in. The Omega Men series is one thing I've never read before I'm going to cycle in.

So far, I can't say much except that I find the BA Batman titles really excellent. I'm currently to the point that they start reintroducing the recurrent villains they'd been avoiding, I can't say I'm enjoying those as much, but I know eventually they'll reintegrate the villains into this take on Batman successfully.

This is a prequel project to my recently complete reread of late 80s/early 90s DC. Despite my strong love of my BA childhood, I feel that the immediately post-Crisis era was a high water mark, with all sorts of insane experiments, genre-bending, and indie influence flooded the line. Then Vertigo took most of the weirdness with it, and Image and Death-and-Return 90s imitations squashed the rest.

Alongside that older project, I read the entire Silver Age Marvel superhero line. I was going to continue into the BA, but decided I needed a break from that.
Posted By: Set Re: Re-Reads - 07/26/13 05:41 AM
Originally Posted by Dave Doty
Firestorm. Outsiders, the Roy Thomas Earth 2 titles, probably more will continue to creep in. The Omega Men series is one thing I've never read before I'm going to cycle in.


The Outsiders had some fun stuff going on. I'm a big fan of Alan Davis, and some of Mike Barr's 'throwaway' teams, like the Masters of Disaster and Force of July and the New Olympians, were just fascinating to younger me!

The story 'Sympathy for the Fuhrer' was pretty daring, for the day.


Posted By: Brain-Fall-Out Boy Re: Re-Reads - 07/26/13 06:02 AM
How did I not mention The New Teen Titans? I can remember the day I saw issue 1 on the rack as clear as day, over 30 years later. Up to that point, I just bought the comics that looked good to me randomly. I probably read more comics than most, but was still just a regular comic-reading kid. The moment I saw that comic on the rack, I was a COLLECTOR who had to get each issue. Within six months, I probably had close to a dozen books I bought religiously.

I know that run is a favorite of pretty much everyone who was reading back then, but for me it literally changed forever the way I interacted with the hobby.
Posted By: Set Re: Re-Reads - 07/26/13 04:18 PM
The Wolfman/Perez Titans was probably also the first title I seriously tried to collect (since that was the day of grabbing stuff off of spinner racks at the supermarket, and you pretty much got whatever was there, at least in Armpit-of-Nowhere-Oklahoma).

I'd grab random stuff, generally team books or Marvel Team-Ups, but yeah, the Titans pretty much hit the ground running right when I was at the age to take comics seriously (and, yanno, was old enough to have odd jobs and shiny quarters to spend on such luxuries).

Posted By: Blacula Re: Re-Reads - 07/26/13 05:48 PM
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
Originally Posted by Dave Doty

Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
CoIE is actually spectacular.


Every time I've tried to reread CoIE as an adult, I have always come to the same assessment: everything you've said captures my feelings about the first 7 issues. Then I feel the book drags for a few issues, then pulls it back together for a decent finish, but even that still doesn't compare to issue 7 for emotional climax.

Now, I haven't read it in several years, so my opinion may change. I'm currently doing a reread of bronze age books that will climax (eventually) with CoIE. Do you think you can present an interpretation to give me a better appreciation for the back half, or do you think this is probably just an agree-to-disagree thing?


I’ve given this a little thought, and let’s see if I can express what I’m thinking. I agree that the first 7 issues really is what nails what makes this series so great, and sets a standard for not only the rest of the series, but all superhero comics of that era. Like we’re both saying, it comes down to pacing, story structure, dialogue, maximum characterization in minimal panel space, usage of an over-abundance of characters, ability to use continuity as a set-up and then allow the characters to react organically, etc.

From there, however, Wolfman and Perez are faced with an interesting issue: what to do to get the series to 12 issues long? Clearly the story isn’t over yet, there’s a lot of time to get to 12 issues, and this came out during an era (following Camelot 3000) that 12 issue series were kind of the benchmark. So what they do, and I think quite successfully, is a few things.

First, in #8, they advance the plot much more slowly, while focusing on the subplot of the Flash and giving him the send-off he deserves. I actually really love this issue and think the Flash’s end is incredibly dramatic. It’s not as heartfelt as the Supergirl death, but it captures something else: the totally science-fiction-ness and grandiose nature of Flash adventures, specifically in the form that Schwartz, Broome, Kanigher and Infantino first presented the character in. The way he dies, which is incredibly heroic, just fits the Flash. And in this issue, it also advances Wally West as another major person the reader can link to emotionally (while at the same time, backing away on a few others).

From there, Marv and George turn the focus on another “mini-story” / subplot to keep things moving along, which is namely the villains all rising up to conquer the multiple Earths. It keeps the series moving, wraps up a few subplots (Luthor / Braininac, Psimon, etc.) and also answers the question “what are all the villains doing?” since by now this was clearly a DC series that was using all of its various heroes, so therefore one must assume they would use all their villains. Marv and George therefore take all the tools they used in the first 7 issues of the series on the heroes, and try to apply it to the villains in 1-2 issues. I think they succeed, and the reason is that while the villains get good play, the heroes get equally as much. It allows for a lot of intermixing that had never been seen before, such as the Atom (in full on Sword of the Atom gear) freeing Billy Batson and the other kids so the Marvels can join the fray.

From there, the last three issues are especially unusual in their pacing: you get the big Spectre showdown versus the Anti-Monitor, resulting in loss (which can be really blamed on the villains failure to hold up their end); then #11 introducing the post-Crisis DCU for the first time as the heroes struggle to understand just like the readers are; and then #12, the big finale. Going back to #10, I can see what Marv is trying to accomplish: he clearly had in his mind how the heroes would finish off the A-M in #12 but needed to address why certain others aren’t involved: the magic-users (especially the Spectre), the other time heroes (key among them the Legion), the villains and a whole bunch more. While he is able to give the magic-users something to do here, this issue also kind of takes a lot of these characters off the board, so the story can begin shrinking again to a more manageable finale. If there is any single issue in CoIE that *almost* goes off the rails, its #10, though its still loaded with great moments, including how the massive group of heroes is able to even confront the A-M in the first place.

#11 hits next, and it brings with it a tone that no other issue of CoIE has. At first this can be jarring, but what Marv is doing now is introducing the concept of the combined Earths, combined history and a single Earth DCU. Superman and Batman provide great POV’s for the readers, since as being DC’s biggest icons, they essentially will hold our hands as we get used to this strange new reality. It’s interesting that the heroes remember the multiple Earths in this issue though later that wouldn’t be the case. It’s necessary here though for narrative reasons. This issue leaves the reader with an uneasy feeling because (A) it’s a whole new world and (B) there’s still so much unfinished business. And that second aspect rolls us right into #12.

As you say, you enjoyed the finale yourself. I personally love this issue and think its nothing short of brilliant. First there is the big attack on the A-M by a smaller group that allows Marv and George to really strut their stuff by showcasing strategy, powers, action, etc. Then there is the pure sense of panic on Earth, complete with deaths of heroes we know are being removed from the board (E2 Robin, E2 Green Arrow, etc.). There’s also the small roles others play like the aforementioned magic-users. And throughout it all, Marv makes sure to keep the story down to Earth by linking readers to specific characters like Kid Flash (and I admit I cry every time I read the final pages), Superman and Superman & Lois of Earth-2. Marv succeeds in a double-victory: first by the heroes combined and then next by Superman of Earth-2, who is really “the one who started it all” dying to save the DCU. There’s nothing more symbolic about the company pre-Crisis no longer being the same company post-Crisis.

I think these issues all present something individually appealing and are successful in that. But as you say, there is something that changes pacing-wise and tone-wise from the first 7 issues to these next five, and even more, it then changes each issue all the way to the end (with #12 being much like the first 7). I think they succeed every time, though it can get noticeable around the #9-10 range.

I am interested in your thoughts. What’s been missing from these crossovers ever since Crisis is the small scenes that now often get skipped over. When Wally West rejoining the Titans is in question, Cyborg asks Speedy what he decided and Speedy responds with “chalk one up for the good guys!”. We see Dr. Light meeting the heroes for the first time, some initial confusion, and Superman arriving to broker a quick peace. The interaction between Hawk & Dove and Red Star lasts just three panels…and in those three panels they get more characterization each than they had in the prior 15 years. Marv doesn’t just introduce Tomahawk for the sake of it—he takes the time to give you two panels that get to the heart of the character. It’s amazing!


I completely agree with everything in this post! I think the plotting and pacing in CoIE is criminally underrated. This is a completely over-used metaphor but I think "roller-coaster ride" is a really fitting description of this series. There are really easily identifiable highs and lows and fasts and slows and swerves and spins to the story.

And I totally agree about the way Marv and George are able to give us just enough about each and every character that appears in the series (even if it's just for a panel or two) so that we come away feeling like this is a story and a world populated by real, endangered characters; rather than the interchangeable and often unidentifiable background fodder that have populated so many of the later Crises.
Posted By: Blockade Boy Re: Re-Reads - 07/26/13 07:29 PM
COIE: is that the one with the big worm and the singing? I get all these crises mixed up. I think it was full of in-jokes (for want of a better description) most of which went over my head. I'd probably never get it without annotations. Not sure it's worth the trouble unless it actually has some pertinence to what I'm reading in my books today?
Posted By: Cobalt Kid Re: Re-Reads - 07/26/13 08:01 PM
BB, I think you're thinking of Final Crisis, which came out a few years ago (2009 I think?). We're talking about Crisis on Infinite Earths, which came out in 1985-86.

You're read on Final Crisis is pretty accurate. A ton of in-jokes and meta-commentary that takes a lot of effort and insider-knowledge on the reader's part to enjoy.
Posted By: Invisible Brainiac Re: Re-Reads - 07/27/13 05:16 AM
I hated Final Crisis. I could never understand what was going on.

And as Cobie and Blacula described, COIE was one of the last crossovers that actually put some thought into the characters they introduced. I loved how they gave us just enough background to know who was who and what powers they had!

Compare to Final Crisis, in which most heroes were interchangeable and the splash pages were meaningless because you couldn't tell who was who without a scorecard - in COIE at least you had characters interact with one another, call each other by name, and actually work together!
Posted By: Blacula Re: Re-Reads - 07/27/13 07:00 AM
I am a big fan of Grant Morrison's 21st century DCU work but I completely agree that Final Crisis was a huge let-down. It has some good moments like most stories do but they were lost in a sea of mess that had one of the most ridiculously stupid endings ever.

And don't get me started on how terribly Morrison treated his side-characters compared to the way Wolfman did. Many blog-posts have been devoted to Wonder Woman's troubling usage here. And just look at the different ways the two creators treated their book's victims - in CoIE, Wolfman gave every single casualty, no matter how minor, their last little moment of heroism or attention - think Nighthawk's final struggle, Kole protecting Robin and Huntress, Dove saving the children, Lori Lemaris swooping in with her gun, the Crime Syndicate's whole amazing opening, and so on; and compare them to that one crappy panel showing Count Vertigo, Mr Bones, Negative Woman, etc. lying dead on the ground with no build-up and no follow-up. Or Martian Manhunter's similar one panel death.

Of course, another big difference is that Marv Wolfman had Paul Levitz as an editor at the time; while Grant Morrison's editor was a didiotic Manchurian Candidate sent by Marvel to destroy DC from within.
Posted By: the Hermit Re: Re-Reads - 07/27/13 11:08 AM
Originally Posted by Blacula
...while Grant Morrison's editor was a didiotic Manchurian Candidate sent by Marvel to destroy DC from within.


...and it's working, too.
Posted By: Blockade Boy Re: Re-Reads - 07/27/13 12:37 PM
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
BB, I think you're thinking of Final Crisis, which came out a few years ago (2009 I think?). We're talking about Crisis on Infinite Earths, which came out in 1985-86.

You're read on Final Crisis is pretty accurate. A ton of in-jokes and meta-commentary that takes a lot of effort and insider-knowledge on the reader's part to enjoy.
Oh Yeah! I loved "COIE." I knew just enough about the various characters to follow and the heroes were real. Of course, I cheered a bit more when a Legionnaire was in the spotlight.

"Final" Crisis. I hope so. It gets a bit better with each read but I think I'll look up some annotations if I ever decide it's relevant. Round about that time, DC was throwing event after event spread over so many books, that's when I dropped most everything DC I was reading. I figured, if they can't tell me the story in a book a month = not interested. COIE seemed to find a better balance. The 12 books were all very coherent as I recall.
Posted By: Blacula Re: Re-Reads - 07/27/13 05:21 PM
CoIE did crossover into pretty much every book in the DC line but the main maxi itself was almost completely self-contained so that you didn't need to read anything else but it.

The only two small side story lines that I remember being annoyed by because they seemed to be set up in the main book but then continued on in another were 1) whatever happened to Blue Devil after he disappeared off the JLA satellite in issue #8, and 2) whatever Dr Fate did with Amethyst after they disappeared in #11 or so.

Unlike Final Crisis where if you didn't read Superman Beyond then you would have been completely bewildered.
Posted By: Invisible Brainiac Re: Re-Reads - 07/27/13 06:17 PM
I can barely remember anything that happened in Final Crisis because I didn't understand much of it. I can barely remember any "wow" moments for any of the characters in it either!

I agree with you Blacula, got bothered by the Blue Devil and Amethyst side stories too. There was another with Firehawk and Wonder Girl venturing into the "warp zone" (issue 8 I think); but among these three only the Amethyst one was left hanging. Firehawk, Donna and Blue Devil all showed up alive and well in later issues so we know they were alright.

Oh, and the JLA Detroit's Steel was also teleported away by Warp to parts unknown - that was another hanging plotline. I have no idea where Steel ended up.

Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 07/28/13 04:57 AM
Steels story continued in Justice League of America #245

http://www.comics.org/issue/900745/
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 07/28/13 04:58 AM
Actually all the stories you mentioned were touched on in various comics at the time.
Posted By: Brain-Fall-Out Boy Re: Re-Reads - 07/28/13 05:17 AM
Originally Posted by Dev - Em
Actually all the stories you mentioned were touched on in various comics at the time.


I think they were talking about how well CoIE resolved its own stories internally, without having to read outside books. I may be wrong about that, I was just an observer for that part of the conversation.
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 07/28/13 05:21 AM
Wasn't 100% sure...

I know Ibby said he didn't know where Steel ended up, which is why I referenced the JLA comic. Then I reread his full comment, and didn't really know if he had read, or knew of the resolutions to the plotlines he referenced.
Posted By: Blacula Re: Re-Reads - 07/28/13 05:56 AM
Originally Posted by Dave Doty
Originally Posted by Dev - Em
Actually all the stories you mentioned were touched on in various comics at the time.


I think they were talking about how well CoIE resolved its own stories internally, without having to read outside books. I may be wrong about that, I was just an observer for that part of the conversation.


This is correct, although IB seemed not to know where Steel's story ended up so I'm sure Dev's post was helpful on that front. And it's always a pleasure to see some nice old Luke McDonnell art (an artist that I appreciate a lot more now than I did when I was younger).
Posted By: Invisible Brainiac Re: Re-Reads - 07/30/13 04:14 PM
Thanks for the info, Dev smile

I really didn't know where Steel ended up, although since I knew he eventually died in the pages of JLA I knew he was okay. What irked me about that was there was no blurb saying "follow Steel into the pages of so-and-so comic".

And as with Blacula, I was also mildly annoyed at how COIE didn't reveal what had happened to Amethyst.

Posted By: Invisible Brainiac Re: Re-Reads - 07/30/13 04:23 PM
Throwing out another good reread. JLA/Titans: The Technis Imperative.

Here's another mini-series that juggles dozens of characters, but manages to give everyone something to do and some good bits of characterization. Joto and Minion are probably the only Titans who has not one line of dialogue; each scene reveals a little something about the characters involved; we get mini-profiles for all the Titans past and present including real names, powers and Titans team joined; and the story itself provides all the background information that is essential to understand the plot. Even deceased Titans get mini-profiles when "Cyberion" sends out drones to seek help!

The story itself is exciting. We're hit right away with a great threat that "swallows" the Moon and drives the JLA from the Watchtower! All the bases are covered; the JLA's emotional connection to the Titans is explored; the various emergencies wrought by the Moon's gravity explain why more heroes do not get involved in the cataclysm; and the 118-page story certainly takes much more than 15 minutes to read.

When I finished this story, I had a good sense of who each and every single featured Titan was (even obscure ones like Flamebird or Azrael).
Posted By: Invisible Brainiac Re: Re-Reads - 07/30/13 04:26 PM
Originally Posted by Blockade Boy
Oh Yeah! I loved "COIE." I knew just enough about the various characters to follow and the heroes were real. Of course, I cheered a bit more when a Legionnaire was in the spotlight.


Wolfman's love and passion really shone in COIE. I heard that he and George Perez took care to research each and every character they featured, and it showed. All the Legionnaires (whether spotlighted heavily like Wildfire, Dawnstar or Blok, or just featured in a page or two like Phantom Girl or Colossal Boy) was written very well.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 08/17/13 12:48 AM
Forgot to check in that I went ahead and re-read the Miller/JRJr. Daredevil: The Man Without Far mini about two weeks ago. This one may have fallen slightly short of my memory of it, but it was still quite awesome. I especially enjoyed the extended looks at Matt's childhood and his early relationship with Elektra.

The Romita Jr. art was really terrific. I especially enjoyed his depiction of wild-haired young Matt and young, devil-may-care Elektra. DD is just one of those characters that brings out the best in Romita...and obviously Miller as well. This even despite the fact that Matt never appears in either of his familiar costumes until the very last page.

What struck me is how grim the subject matter could be at times. I mean, even beyond the brutal death of Jack Murdock, the main threat turns out to be a child-trafficking ring. And Matt basically commits manslaughter or even first-degree murder several times as he learns the ropes and pursues vengeance. There's one particular death that occurs in his earliest rampage that haunts him thru the rest of the story.

At times, these elements seemed more suitable to other non-superhero works of Miller and not so much to DD's world, especially if this is supposed to serve as the character's definitive origin. They almost define this story as out of continuity. Otherwise, why wouldn't at least the one particular death never be mentioned again? So that took me out of the story slightly, probably more than it did when I first read this since I didn't recall it beforehand.

But, hey, every retelling/expansion of an existing origin features retcons, right? Certainly, Elektra's prior relationship with Matt was a retcon itself, for example. So it doesn't ruin the story, but it feels out of place. I wouldn't mind at all if DD's current writer would reference this story at some point and put it firmly in continuity. There's one character who Frank and Romita created here that would be an especially good one to revisit...
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 08/17/13 12:53 AM
And as far as re-reads go, they're currently on hold (except for the ongoing LSH Archives project, of course) as I juggle reading Lone Wolf & Cub Omnibuses and wading through my three-month backlog of "new" comics. It won't be too long, I think, 'til my next re-read. Currently debating between House of Secrets or Sandman Mystery Theatre. If the latter, I might do 1-3 arcs at a time instead of a straight read-through. then again, it could be another project entirely! Been getting that Uncanny X-men itch lately....
Posted By: the Hermit Re: Re-Reads - 08/19/13 09:56 PM
I've been on an 80s kick lately, re-reading stuff like Nexus, Dreadstar, Twisted Tales, Eclipse Monthly, Sable, Mars, Sabre, Whisper, the Badger, Byrne's FF run, American Flagg, Zot!, Tales of Terror, the nicely colored collections of Wrightson's and Brunner's Warren work...the point being that IMO even the weakest books from Pacific, Eclipse and First (and a few others) blows just about everything being published today out of the water, with a few notable exceptions like Saga and Fables.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 08/20/13 05:56 AM
Herm, I'm sorry to say that I missed out on those classic, pioneering indies (and others) that comprise most of your list. I certainly hope to get to many of them eventually. At least, I have a Sable TPB waiting for me to dive in when the time's right....
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 08/22/13 12:35 AM
One re-read I did recently was a run which Lardy and Peebs mentioned earlier in this thread, the Roger Stern/John Buscema Avengers.

That run is second only to the Bob Harras/Steve Epting Avengers as my favorite Avengers run. After the scattershot ugliness of Jim Shooter's second Avengers run, Stern took the Avengers back to basics without coming on like a nostalgia merchant, and with a respect for everything that had come before, good or bad. The first half of Stern's nearly 60 issue run found him still gaining a foothold, and hamstrung by Al Milgrom's terrible artwork. Stern found his Avengers voice on the arc that culminated the long-running subplot about the Vision losing the plot and endangering the world while trying to save it; that arc was adequately drawn by Bob Hall, who also drew Stern's excellent 4-issue West Coast Avengers mini-series.

Then came John Buscema, who had been away from superheroes for several years and was now returning to the book on which he had first made his name. Even though Buscema professed to "hate" superheroes, I've always been of the opinion that he exaggerated that "hate" to wind people up and that he secretly enjoyed the challenge of drawing a team book.

This was, starting with issue 255, when the Avengers came alive like they hadn't been since the mid-1970s. Stern wrote sharp, exciting stories that took familiar Avengers tropes (space opera, Kang, the Masters of Evil) and found fresh new angles. Buscema illustrated beautifully throughout, particularly on what turned out to be Stern's last arc, where the Avengers clash with the Olympian Gods.

Something else else about Stern that, for some reason, he never seems to get enough credit for, is that he was the first Avengers writer since Steve Englehart who knew how to write female characters. Janet Van Dyne, Jennifer Walters, and Stern's own creation Monica Rambeau all shined. Stern also created the awesome female villain Nebula, and the morally ambiguous Rita De Mara, the second Yellowjacket.

It was only a 29-issue run (30 counting the fill-in issue by Bob Harras and Bob Hall in which Jarvis reflects on his time with the Avengers as he convalesces after having been tortured during the Masters of Evil arc), but I'm grateful we got even that relatively small number of issues out of such a great creative team as Roger Stern and John Buscema.
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 08/22/13 02:51 AM
Still filling in that era of my Avengers collection.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 08/22/13 02:57 AM
It's the era of the Avengers that I grew up on, so it has a special place in my heart. It's hard to beat the years that Stern wrote Avengers and Englehart wrote WCA in my recollection. You are correct that Stern/Buscema/Palmer was the highlight of stern's time on the main title. Indeed, a re-read of these will definitely be in order at some point in the future.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 08/22/13 04:54 AM
Going back to the Claremont X-Men re-read, I bought softcover editions of Uncanny X-Men Masterworks Vols. 2 & 3 to complement HC Volume 1 that I re-read earlier this year or late last year. I know I have few if any individual issues contained in those three collections. I need to find out how much of Volume 4 (which highlights the Proteus saga) and forward I own in floppies before figuring out whether I'll be buying further volumes. I've always used one of the first TPBs known to Marvel, encompassing the Dark Phoenix saga, as the stopgap which delineates where my individual run is uninterrupted, so we'll see if that's how I roll.

In any case I doubt I'll re-read the whole Claremont run in one massive, uninterrupted project. I'll probably figure out a way to split it up into chunks. Maybe 101-138 first? Or end it with Byrne at 143? (Keep in mind that I won't be re-reading GS 1 and 94-100 since that Masterwork wasn't read long ago at all.)
Posted By: Cobalt Kid Re: Re-Reads - 08/22/13 01:10 PM
Lardy, I recommend you read them by era of artist. That's a nice way to dilineate and also see how each artist still backed some fantastic stories.

Fanfie, you know I love that era just like you, but I want to also pipe in and express my very high opinion of the Stern Avengers run, especially with Big John. Just fantastic stuff on all levels, and with a consistent feel of breaking new ground.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 08/22/13 11:45 PM
Lardy, I'm very interested to find out how that era of Avengers holds up for you, so I hope your re-read will be soon; and please remember to include Stern's WCA mini-series, which is essential.

Cobie, well said. I've always felt Stern's Avengers run is comparable to Paul Levitz's second tenure on the LSH. Both highlights of the 1980s.

And I'll second Cobie's recommendation to split up the Claremont X-Men era into each particular artist's sub-era, but with one caveat: Dave Cockrum left both times with the stories unfinished, so you might want to read the resolutions drawn by Byrne and Smith, respectively, before you take a break.
Posted By: Cobalt Kid Re: Re-Reads - 08/23/13 02:16 PM
When I reread the Byrne issues, one of the things I noticed was just how much of an impact Byrne had on the artists that followed him at the very end of the decade and the early 90's. Paramount among them, was Todd McFarlane. One of McFarlane's signature artistic poses, with the hands outstretched as if casting a spell, is taken directly from Byrne, and you can see that several times in his X-Men work. (McFarlane was also highly influenced by another major early 80's artist, Frank Miller).

With that in mind, I found myself looking at the later Paul Smith era and thinking "where have I seen this before?" And I finally made the connection: Rob Liefield, hands-down, stole 70% of his poses and work from Paul Smith. Smith does a fantastic job and is highly underrated IMO; several of his issues have a minimalist effect that was fresh in the mid-80's, yet over-used in the 90's. And that statement reflects what I mean: Smith broke some new ground, highly influenced the pre-teen Rob Liefield, and then Liefield went on to draw directly from Smith (and at times, outright copy him).

This just goes to show how by Byrne's run, X-Men had already become the premiere super hero comic book in the industry.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 08/24/13 02:53 AM
Another re-read I've considered is the earliest Eastman/Laird Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles stories collected in a TPB that my then-girlfriend/now-wife bought for me and sent in a care package while I was away at college. It collects 1-11 and the micro-series spotlighting each character. It's an awesome collection that is still probably the best thing ever done with the characters to date and is highly recommended. It's definitely in the cards at some point in the near-future.
Posted By: Cobalt Kid Re: Re-Reads - 08/25/13 05:40 PM
I'd love to give those issues a strait "read". I've never read any TMNT ever.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 08/25/13 08:08 PM
I'm about to embark on a re-read of Tom Veitch & Cam Kennedy's "Star Wars: Dark Empire" and "Star Wars: Dark Empire II." I haven't read these for years, and all I remember offhand is that there's a really cool scene where Boba Fett (my favorite Star Wars character by far) turns out not to have died in "Return of the Jedi," and that I liked it better than anything else I've read or watched of the Star Wars franchise.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 08/26/13 12:36 AM
I burned right through the first "Star Wars: Dark Empire" in record time, partly because I'm a fast reader, and partly because of some of the weaker aspects of the comic.

Originally published in the early 90s, it was way ahead of its time in both good and bad ways.

First, the bad: Cam Kennedy's art has too many big panels and splash pages, and it lacks flow and clarity; a major reason for this is the coloring, also by Kennedy, which tries too hard to be moody and atmospheric but ends up just looking murky and washed-out.

Now, the good: Tom Veitch's script is superlative! He has all the characters' voices down pat, he brings back Boba Fett, and introduces some good new characters (old friends of Han's.) And Leia and Luke are both awesome here, as the latter is forced by circumstance to get too close to the dark side, and the former is the one who must ultimately rescue him from it. Veitch really gets the concept of the Force, and explores it in ways that the movies never did. The result is a work that, despite its flaws, is a rich and rewarding experience.

Now I just hope the sequel is even half as good.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 08/26/13 02:40 AM
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
I'd love to give those issues a strait "read". I've never read any TMNT ever.


If you ever do, THOSE are the issues to read! I've sampled various TMNT that weren't done by both Eastman & Laird and was always unimpressed. But issues 1-11 and the micro-series? Awesome stuff!!! nod
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 08/27/13 12:12 AM
This is going to be a very short review, because "Star Wars: Dark Empire II" is so dense, so rich, so awe-inspiring, that it defies description.

Still better writing than art, though. But what writing!

And I just found out there's a third installment, "Star Wars: Empire's End," which I hope to read for the first time very soon.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 08/27/13 02:12 AM
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
I burned right through the first "Star Wars: Dark Empire" in record time, partly because I'm a fast reader, and partly because of some of the weaker aspects of the comic.

Originally published in the early 90s, it was way ahead of its time in both good and bad ways.

First, the bad: Cam Kennedy's art has too many big panels and splash pages, and it lacks flow and clarity; a major reason for this is the coloring, also by Kennedy, which tries too hard to be moody and atmospheric but ends up just looking murky and washed-out.

Now, the good: Tom Veitch's script is superlative! He has all the characters' voices down pat, he brings back Boba Fett, and introduces some good new characters (old friends of Han's.) And Leia and Luke are both awesome here, as the latter is forced by circumstance to get too close to the dark side, and the former is the one who must ultimately rescue him from it. Veitch really gets the concept of the Force, and explores it in ways that the movies never did. The result is a work that, despite its flaws, is a rich and rewarding experience.

Now I just hope the sequel is even half as good.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
This is going to be a very short review, because "Star Wars: Dark Empire II" is so dense, so rich, so awe-inspiring, that it defies description.

Still better writing than art, though. But what writing!

And I just found out there's a third installment, "Star Wars: Empire's End," which I hope to read for the first time very soon.


I'm a big fan of the "Dark Empire" stories. I know I've re-read the original once or twice. Not sure if I read the sequels multiple times or not. But it was a really great story, and it (and Timothy Zahn's Heir to the Empire novel, as well) was largely responsible for bringing Star Wars back after it was all but dead. It was, iirc, the first Star Wars comic book published in America after Marvel's ongoing series was cancelled several years prior.

Dark Empire and Zahn's novel had to, quite simply, be great to revive active interest in the franchise, and they WERE! Suddenly, the Expanded Universe was born and grew red-hot in both comics and book stores. I honestly don't think the re-releases, prequels, the new cartoons and the push to make even more episodes would have happened without the Expanded universe revival. So Star Wars fans owe Tom Veitch and Cam Kennedy quite a debt (even if the prequel and re-release debates will probably rage for all time)!

As for my reminiscences of the series themselves, I'd cite 2 criticisms: 1) It seemed a little dry and humorless and a little excessively narrated. 2) Kennedy's art was a little too moody and staid for what is a bombastic, colorful saga at its heart.

But the plot was solid, and the art, while inappropriate in some ways, told the story effectively.

These works are a VERY significant milestone for Star Wars fans and ones I feel even casual fans could appreciate.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 08/27/13 05:37 PM
Thanks for reminding me of the Zahn prose novel, Lardy. I started it years ago, but couldn't get into it. Now I think I'll give it another chance.

I haven't read anything else by Tom Veitch. According to the biography at the end of the trade, his other works include "The Nazz", "My Name is Chaos", "Clash," "The Light and Darkness War," "Tales of the Jedi," and co-authoring "Dark Lords of the Sith" with Kevin J. Anderson. Anyone here read any of those?

IIRC, Veitch also had a brief run on "Animal Man," which I haven't read either.

In case anyone's wondering, I'm generally not a fan of his younger, more famous brother, Rick. But it does make a good segue for the announcement that my next re-read will be Alan Moore's "Swamp Thing" run.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 08/29/13 08:11 PM
My re-read of Alan Moore's Swamp Thing run has begun. I will be reviewing it in blocks of three, four, or five issues each.

Saga of the Swamp Thing #20-24

Alan Moore's first arc gets the run off to a roaring start, as Swamp Thing gets a new, more believeable origin and an awesome re-design by artists Steve Bissette (pencils) & John Totleben (inks.) While Swamp Thing is waxing existential upon learning the truth about himself -- that he is a plant who believed it was a man -- his best friend Abby Arcane is fretting about him as her marriage to Matt Cable disintegrates. And emerging from the shadows to create chaos is this arc villain, Jason Woodrue aka the Floronic Man, a man who was transformed into a human/plant hybrid and who, through Swamp Thing's unwitting assistance, suffers a psychotic breakdown and infects the Green (the world consciousness of the plants) with all-too-human feelings of bloodlust and revenge. Even the JLA find themselves helpless to prevent the villain's rampage, and it's up to Swamp Thing to save the day.

Moore does an astonishing job of establishing this previously minor villain as a credible threat. Early on in the arc, he arranges for Swamp Thing to find out the truth about himself and for the loathsome General Sunderland to be trapped in a building with an enraged Swamp Thing (I'll come back to this later.) His sneering contempt for his fellow humans gives way to murderous hatred after his breakdown, which Moore & Bissette portray in the most visceral way, Woodrue ripping off his artificial human flesh and his clothes as he starts to go mad. What's even more disturbing than the imagery is the readers' realization that Woodrue could be a stand-in for every misanthropic, anti-social misfit who ever went over the edge, something which the creative team underlines with the story's tragicomic resolution, in which a desperately repentant Woodrue tries unsuccessfully to pass for human again, only to be led away by Superman & Green Lantern to Arkham Asylum. Unlike Swamp Thing, the Floronic Man has no real place in this world.

The scenes with the JLA are worth singling out, especially knowing that Bissette was initially opposed to the super-heroes' appearance. Yes, this is primarily a horror comic, but Moore integrates the JLA so seamlessly into the elaborate framework, that it takes super-heroes to a new level, something which Moore would go on to elaborate on further.

Back to the Swamp Thing/Sunderland confrontation -- nothing is made of the fact that Sunderland dies, and that it's not entirely clear whether or not Swamp Thing is responsible. It looks to me like Swamp Thing picks him up and smothers him against his chest until he dies. True, Swamp Thing is enraged and irrational at that moment, but it's unsettling for the protagonist to kill, even when the victim is someone as hateful as Sunderland.

That aside, this is a great story, and it's only the beginning!
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 08/30/13 02:42 AM
Ahhhhh! Moore's Swamp Thing! That was one of my big re-reads/reads (I'd never read the whole thing before) of the last year or two. I started reviewing them here. I burned through the first four or five volumes and then left the last two to savor at a later date. I finally finished it off this past June during my vacation. What a great, satisfying run! nod

I'm about ready for the next re-read. Probably holding off on the X-Men project for another month or two, after I get up the nerve to look in the attic for my stash. I might give in and read most of the way thru the Byrne run before then, though. If I buy Masterworks 4 before checking my stash, I'll have immediate access thru the Dark Phoenix saga.

Meanwhile, I'm debating between beginning my re-read of Sandman Mystery Theatre (probably by doing 2-3 four-issue arcs at a time) or beginning a Gotham Central re-read/read. The latter is attractive because I never read the last approximately 8 issues of GC as it concluded during a year I was in comics purgatory after going thru my original CBS closing and then some bad experiences with online subscriptions. I have them all, though. SMT is tempting, so I can use it to harass and taunt Cobie with reviews of the greatest book he's never read! grin

Hmmm....I think my decision is made! nod
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 08/30/13 02:57 AM
Oh, goody. Lardy reviews of Swamp Thing. I'll check them out right now!

I take it your next re-read is going to be SMT, then? I hope so, because I've been intrigued by it ever since Greg Burgas reviewed it in his Comics You Should Own feature from Comics Should Be Good.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 08/30/13 03:08 AM
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
I take it your next re-read is going to be SMT, then? I hope so, because I've been intrigued by it ever since Greg Burgas reviewed it in his Comics You Should Own feature from Comics Should Be Good.
Fickles, SMT is easily a top-ten all-time series for yours truly! Don't get me wrong--if gritty and noir is an automatic turn-off, it's possible that you won't like it. However, it's not all dark. Watching the awesome relationship between Wesley Dodds and Dian Belmonte from its inception is easily half of the appeal of this great series. It's just so real and absolutely captivating! I'll try to be as descriptive as possible, and if you like what you are hearing, maybe they have it at that great library that you've mentioned in the past! nod
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 08/30/13 03:10 AM
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Oh, goody. Lardy reviews of Swamp Thing. I'll check them out right now!


I don't know if I reviewed past Vol. 2, but browse through the thread (and past those New 52-related comments!) and check 'em out!
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 08/30/13 03:18 AM
Originally Posted by Paladin
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
I take it your next re-read is going to be SMT, then? I hope so, because I've been intrigued by it ever since Greg Burgas reviewed it in his Comics You Should Own feature from Comics Should Be Good.
Fickles, SMT is easily a top-ten all-time series for yours truly! Don't get me wrong--if gritty and noir is an automatic turn-off, it's possible that you won't like it. However, it's not all dark. Watching the awesome relationship between Wesley Dodds and Dian Belmonte from its inception is easily half of the appeal of this great series. It's just so real and absolutely captivating! I'll try to be as descriptive as possible, and if you like what you are hearing, maybe they have it at that great library that you've mentioned in the past! nod


Gritty and noir is not a turn off to me as long as it's in the right context, and the context of a series set during the era which originally gave us film noir seems perfect to me.

I appreciate that you're going to make your reviews as descriptive as possible. I'm very much looking forward to them.
Posted By: Dave Hackett Re: Re-Reads - 08/30/13 12:49 PM
I re-read the entire Moore Swamp Thing run a few years back and it was a real delight. It aged extremely well and there's so much to take away from it. His Abby may still be my favourite character in comics.

I was also stunned to realise that one of my favourite issues (#59) was written by Bissette not Moore. Re-reading years later from the perspective of a father it was all the more of a tear-jerker.
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 08/30/13 11:09 PM
Originally Posted by Paladin
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
I take it your next re-read is going to be SMT, then? I hope so, because I've been intrigued by it ever since Greg Burgas reviewed it in his Comics You Should Own feature from Comics Should Be Good.
Fickles, SMT is easily a top-ten all-time series for yours truly! Don't get me wrong--if gritty and noir is an automatic turn-off, it's possible that you won't like it. However, it's not all dark. Watching the awesome relationship between Wesley Dodds and Dian Belmonte from its inception is easily half of the appeal of this great series. It's just so real and absolutely captivating! I'll try to be as descriptive as possible, and if you like what you are hearing, maybe they have it at that great library that you've mentioned in the past! nod


If you are doing SMT...let me know and I will grab my wun from the folks and join you. We can do the dual review thing again if you want.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 08/30/13 11:57 PM
Originally Posted by Dave Hackett
I re-read the entire Moore Swamp Thing run a few years back and it was a real delight. It aged extremely well and there's so much to take away from it. His Abby may still be my favourite character in comics.

I was also stunned to realise that one of my favourite issues (#59) was written by Bissette not Moore. Re-reading years later from the perspective of a father it was all the more of a tear-jerker.


I love that issue, too. It's one of the one's I most look forward to re-reading.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 08/31/13 02:45 AM
Originally Posted by Dev - Em
If you are doing SMT...let me know and I will grab my wun from the folks and join you. We can do the dual review thing again if you want.


Definitely doing it, Dev--in fact I read the first arc last night! blush So if you want in, ya better hurry! nod

Re-read Review Preview: It was AWESOME!!! love
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 08/31/13 03:36 AM
Will grab the box tomorrow. God, I love that series.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 08/31/13 07:55 PM
I read the second arc, "The Face", last night. I might put he brakes on it for the moment to let you catch up. Maybe I'll start some Gotham Central or read a few from the "new" pile in the meantime.

Plus, with the Clemson game on tonight, I'm unlikely to get anything read this evening... smile
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 09/01/13 12:22 AM
Saga of the Swamp Thing #25-27

Moore's second arc, with heavy co-plotting contributions from Bissette & Totleben, is a horror tale of a more down-to-earth variety than the first arc, as Abby gets a job working with autistic children, including one orphan, Paul, whose parents were killed by a fear-eating, shape-shifting hell-beast, the Monkey King, which they accidentally invoked while fooling with a Ouija Board. Investigating this supernatural disturbance is Jason Blood, a.k.a. Etrigan the Demon, who ends up clashing with Swamp Thing over the best way to deal with the problem. In the end, it's up to Paul to confront the Monkey King.

As I said before, this is a more down-to-earth story than the previous one, grounded in an amazing versimilitude achieved by the creative team. Everything and everyone is convincing, from the small Lousiana town setting, to Abby's charges and co-workers, to the all-too-easy-to-relate-to horrors which the Monkey King awakens in the characters. Abby's personal horror turns out to be her evil uncle Anton Arcane, Swamp Thing's arch-nemesis, which, along with a warning from Etrigan and a dying Matt's mysterious possession, foreshadows the disturbing developments to come in the next arc.

One last thing worth mentioning is the portrayal of Etrigan the Demon. Although not wholly original (the portrayal borrows somewhat from an issue of DC Comics Presents written by Len Wein and drawn by Joe Kubert) it is stunning. Bissette & Totleben's visualization of Etrigan is as definitive as their visualization of Swamp Thing (though the creative team does have the class to dedicate the story to Etrigan's creator, Jack Kirby.) And Moore excels at both the dialogue by Etrigan's supercilious human avatar, Jason Blood, and the rhythmic couplets spoken by Etrigan himself; Moore even gives us a glimpse at Blood/Etrigan's tortured dual existence.

Another triumphant arc, then, and the creative team (now joined by new Swamp Thing editor Karen Berger, who replaced Len Wein, who put the creative team together and edited the first arc) is just getting warmed up.
Posted By: Dave Hackett Re: Re-Reads - 09/02/13 01:23 PM
Some of my favourite issues. Steve Bissette keeps teasing that he'll release his "behind the scenes" notes on this arc and the one following, as I guess a lot of the plot was a work of collaboration (though he's quick to say he takes nothing from Moore's scripting, just that a lot of the ideas were equally attributable to Totleben and himself).

I loved the Demon and Kamara in this, but in many ways it was also the beginning of the end for the character as no one after was able to follow Moore's lead on the Blood/Etrigan character. The Wagner mini-series was just OK, and Grant after that took it in a different direction entirely, but man I'd have loved to see a continuation of what the ST team started.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 09/02/13 03:05 PM
Thanks for chiming in again, Dave, and I hope you'll continue to do so throughout my ST re-read.

Yeah, Bissette's blog is great, one of the best on the whole web.
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 09/02/13 06:36 PM
Originally Posted by Paladin
I read the second arc, "The Face", last night. I might put he brakes on it for the moment to let you catch up. Maybe I'll start some Gotham Central or read a few from the "new" pile in the meantime.

Plus, with the Clemson game on tonight, I'm unlikely to get anything read this evening... smile


Going to the parents today. going to grab them and start reading tonight.
Posted By: Dave Hackett Re: Re-Reads - 09/02/13 10:26 PM
Just to add, the other most memorable part of the Monkey King arc in Swamp Thing, was the horrifying sequence in Elysium Lawns when Kamara draws out the kids' fears including the smothered baby brother and Jessica's: "Mommy needn't know". I was ten when I first read that and it was the most terrifying thing I had ever come across. I had loved horror comics before this, but always at a gimmicky level and this was my first taste of what scary and uncomfortable felt like. It's amazing the things they were able to explore, even before the code was dropped from the book.

I mentioned before how much I loved Abby and this arc was a huge part of that. The scene where she stands up to the creepy drunk Matt was also something I'd never seen in a comic at that age. She wasn't a side-lined helpless damsel in distress, she kicked ass and stood up to the horrific. Sure she was scared, how could she not be, but there was a fierceness of strength to her character I hadn't seen, especially in a non-powered supporting character. Though the argument is certainly there that she's as much a protagonist of Moore's run as Alec is.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 09/02/13 10:31 PM
Very well said, Dave.

If Swamp Thing was the heart of the book, Abby was the soul of the book.
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 09/03/13 02:21 AM
Got em. Also grabbed Starman and Squadron Supreme. They were all in the same box for some reason...so, why not.

Lardy...you want to start a different thread for this thing?
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/03/13 02:29 AM
Originally Posted by Dev - Em


Lardy...you want to start a different thread for this thing?


Hmmmm....no, I think it's fine to do it here. This thread is a focus on re-reads, so it's fair game. Unless you thing it would be better in the "Vertigo Title Review" thread? Opening a new thread for SMT might encourage closet or unknown fans to participate, but it might just as well be nothing but a back-and-forth between you and me. I don't want a whole new thread just for that.

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Got em. Also grabbed Starman and Squadron Supreme. They were all in the same box for some reason...so, why not.


Not much of a mystery there....looks like you grabbed the "S" box! nod
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/04/13 04:16 AM
Damn! I just finished "The Brute" and then realized I'm missing #13, the first part of "The Vamp"! frown I often find I've misplaced a random issue in long runs, as I did with Preacher and Hellblazer last year. Hate doing it, but I guess I'll start with "The Vamp" part 2. SUX!
Posted By: Dave Hackett Re: Re-Reads - 09/04/13 03:18 PM
Here's a quick synopses of "Vamp" for you to get up to speed on, Paladin:

"Two fraternity pledges go to a sleazy bar looking for strippers to entertain their college friends. They have problems with transportation, Biker gangs, and worst of all, the staff of the bar, all of whom seem to be vampires, with Grace Jones playing the head vampire."
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 09/05/13 11:22 PM
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Sandman Mystery Theatre # 1 - 4

"The Tarantula"

How to go about this without really spoiling anything...

First off, Matt Wagner is, and always has been a great story teller that seems to excel at period pieces. He weaves a great tale here. There's mystery, suspense, and some brutality. This is gas mask wearing Wesley Dodds. No bright colors or hero costumes here...just trench coats and gas masks.

We are introduced to our main characters. Wesley Dodds, Humphries (Wesleys butler), Lawrence and Dian Belmont (father and daughter), as well as several other characters that will play a role as the series continues.

Wagner does not cheat with the mystery. Everything unfolds in a fair manner, following accepted rules of such things...no last second Captain Atoms showing up as the villain of the piece.

Guy Davis, who has a ery unique style handles the art chores here. His is a style that I love. The characters are not super models...they look like real people. Some are attractive, some are not. There is weight to the figures he draws that tells you that these are people like you or I. Not a bunch of 6-pack characters (main and otherwise) running around.

The Sandman is still learning here. Wesley is not perfect and mishandles some situations. Gets himself into situations that most writers would not let their character get into.

Dian proves herself to be more than just the "girlfriend," or "damsel in distress."
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 09/06/13 01:14 AM
As far as story line...The Tarantula begins kidnapping young women, making no ransom demands. It's up to The Sandman to figure out what is going on before another young woman dies.
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 09/06/13 01:22 AM
One more thing...I feel like Colombo here.

The covers. They are phenomenal. In the same vein of Dave McKean and his Sandman covers, Gavin Wilson uses photos, art and other mediums to spectacular effect.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 09/06/13 10:22 PM
Saga of the Swamp Thing #28-31 & Saga of the Swamp Thing Annual #2

Alan Moore goes into overdrive with his best arc yet. Swamp Thing finally puts the ghost of Alec Holland to rest (literally), then must battle Arcane, who has possessed Matt and is using Matt's reality-warping powers for evil ends. Arcane has also used Matt's body to commit incest with Abby, and it is to Moore's (and Karen Berger's) credit that it doesn't feel exploitive in the least, and that the worst is left to the imagination (what a difference 30 years makes, huh? Shame on modern DC.) After this vile deed, Arcane and his army of undead psychos kill Abby and send her soul to hell. Once Swamp Thing has confronted Arcane and purged Arcane's soul from Matt's body back to hell, a dying Matt heals Abby's body, but does not have enough strength to rescue her soul. And so Swamp Thing himself must journey into the realms beyond the mortal sphere, where, with the guidance of Deadman and the Phantom Stranger, and after an encounter with the Spectre, he re-teams with Etrigan the Demon to rescue Abby's soul. Heady, heavy stuff, yet executed by Moore with a self-assurance that's simply amazing.

The art, to a degree, can't quite keep up with Moore, for this is where Bissette and, to a lesser extent, Totleben, began falling seriously behind on deadlines. And so we get Shawn McManus drawing the first installment, adequately but nowhere near as good as his next Swamp Thing issue, "Pog", which I'll review in my next block of issues; then Bissette & Totleben return for a stunning job; but then Bissette and soon-to-be-frequent-guest inker Alfredo Alcala are thrown together in a match which will pay off in the long run, but looks rushed here; then Rick Veitch, who had helped Bissette on some of the earlier issues, does full pencils with Totleben inking, and while Veitch acquits himself admirably, he's just not as good as Bissette; finally, Bissette & Totleben draw the journey to hell and back, and do their usual outstanding work.

To give Bissette & Totleben extra time to work on what might be their very best issue, #34, issues #32 and #33 will be fill-ins, and unexpectedly delightful ones at that. I'll get to all of them next week.
Posted By: Cobalt Kid Re: Re-Reads - 09/06/13 11:25 PM
Caught up on this thread and love seeing the reviews all around. I'm terribly too busy in real life to join in on the rereading but I'm definitely enjoying reading the reviews.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 09/06/13 11:36 PM
Thanks, Cobie. And you'll be pleased to know that once I'm done Swamp Thing, I'm going to re-read a run I know you love: the first 26 issues of Peter David's Aquaman.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 09/14/13 07:49 PM
Saga of the Swamp Thing #32-34

As mentioned at the end of my last post, issues #32-33 are both fill-ins to keep the book on schedule. But what surprisingly wonderful fill-ins they are!

You don't need to be a fan of Walt Kelly's classic swamp-based comic strip "Pogo", to understand the story in issue #32, "Pog", but if you are (and I've been one for over a quarter-century, since an older cousin gave me a book of "Pogo" reprints) it just makes the story all the more of a treat. The analogs of the Pogo characters are wandering aliens who escaped from a world corrupted by one race which set itself up as superior. They think they've finally found in Earth a world to call their new home, until Swamp Thing's guidance and a tragic encounter with swamp wildlife proves otherwise. Moore does an astonishing job of replicating Walt Kelly's elaborate wordplay in the aliens' dialect, and the whole thing adds up to a charming little fable, beautifully drawn by Shawn McManus.

Issue #33 takes the most cynical form of fill-in -- a reprint bookended by a few pages of new material -- and comes up not only with a way to actually make it work, but also a way to expand the Swamp Thing mythos, as Abby discovers that there have been a whole line of plant elementals throughout time immemorial. I don't know whether the hosts of DC's horror anthologies "House of Mystery" and "House of Secrets" had already been established as being the biblical Cain and Abel before this story, but either way, Moore scores yet another bullseye. Also worth mentioning is the artistic contribution of Ron Randall to the framing sequences, whom I've always considered underrated (loved his art on JLE, even if I didn't always care for the stories.)

Which brings us, finally, to issue #34, "The Rites of Spring", in my opinion the peak of Moore's Swamp Thing run. Oh, it stayed good throughout, and was often great after #34, but this quiet tale of Abby & Swamp Thing finally admitting that they love each other, and consummating their relationship by having Abby eat Swamp Thing's fruit, resulting in her consicousness intertwining with his, is one of the most beautiful comics ever published, a milestone in the history of the artform. Moore's sensitive writing and Bissette & Totleben's stunning art, which combine to bring the psychedelic sensibilities of the underground comics the creators were raised on into the mainstream, are some of the best contributions these creators have made to comic books. And IIRC, Bissette has said that "The Rites of Spring" was the last issue of Swamp Thing that was a complete pleasure for him to work on, before problems in his personal and professional lives began souring his experience of working in mainstream comics.

So where did they go from here? Well, Bissette & Totleben stayed with Moore on Swamp Thing off-and-on through issue #50, the climax of the epic "American Gothic" saga which makes up the middle section of Moore's run. I actually regard issues #35-50 as being the weakest of Moore's run, but the standards set were so high that there is still plenty to enjoy in these issues, and we'll get into them in my next few posts.
Posted By: .. Re: Re-Reads - 09/14/13 11:02 PM
Time for a shameful comicbook confession....

I've never read Moore's run on Swamp Thing.
I have it, but like everything else, its sitting in the backlog of things to do.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/15/13 12:45 AM
"Rites of Spring" is definitely a landmark story. It's amazing how erotic it is without being even slightly pornographic. Just an amazing piece of art.

"Pog" was so heartbreaking! Such a beautiful story...and so sad. Shawn McManus is such a great artist whose work I wish we saw more of. He's an artist that took a while to grow on me, but I really grew to love it. His run on Dr. Fate with DeMatteis was one of the best showcases for his work.

I know that Alan Moore's Swamp Thing is something I'll re-read again and again. If I hadn't already completed that re-read recently, I would soooo be doing it with you, Fickles!
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/15/13 12:54 AM
Originally Posted by Viridis Lament
Time for a shameful comicbook confession....

I've never read Moore's run on Swamp Thing.
I have it, but like everything else, its sitting in the backlog of things to do.


Don't feel bad, Virdie--that was me for a long time. I must say, though, if you have it, WHAT THE #$%& ARE YA WAITING FOR?!?!? mad

grin

(I think the biggest thing in comics I've never read is the original Galactus/Silver Surfer story from Fantastic Four #48-50...and for that matter most of the classic Lee/Kirby FF. But at least I can say I don't have them on hand! nod )
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 09/15/13 01:15 AM
Originally Posted by Paladin
"Rites of Spring" is definitely a landmark story. It's amazing how erotic it is without being even slightly pornographic. Just an amazing piece of art.

"Pog" was so heartbreaking! Such a beautiful story...and so sad. Shawn McManus is such a great artist whose work I wish we saw more of. He's an artist that took a while to grow on me, but I really grew to love it. His run on Dr. Fate with DeMatteis was one of the best showcases for his work.

I know that Alan Moore's Swamp Thing is something I'll re-read again and again. If I hadn't already completed that re-read recently, I would soooo be doing it with you, Fickles!


It's okay, Lardy. Maybe a couple years down the road we can re-read it together?

McManus definitely had a unique style. I wish DeMatteis' Dr. Fate had been collected, because even though I'm not usually a fan of his, that's another run that I've been intrigued by since Greg Burgas did a length essay on it.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/15/13 01:42 AM
Originally Posted by Dev - Em
Sandman Mystery Theatre # 1 - 4

"The Tarantula"

How to go about this without really spoiling anything...

First off, Matt Wagner is, and always has been a great story teller that seems to excel at period pieces. He weaves a great tale here. There's mystery, suspense, and some brutality. This is gas mask wearing Wesley Dodds. No bright colors or hero costumes here...just trench coats and gas masks.

We are introduced to our main characters. Wesley Dodds, Humphries (Wesleys butler), Lawrence and Dian Belmont (father and daughter), as well as several other characters that will play a role as the series continues.

Wagner does not cheat with the mystery. Everything unfolds in a fair manner, following accepted rules of such things...no last second Captain Atoms showing up as the villain of the piece.

Guy Davis, who has a ery unique style handles the art chores here. His is a style that I love. The characters are not super models...they look like real people. Some are attractive, some are not. There is weight to the figures he draws that tells you that these are people like you or I. Not a bunch of 6-pack characters (main and otherwise) running around.

The Sandman is still learning here. Wesley is not perfect and mishandles some situations. Gets himself into situations that most writers would not let their character get into.

Dian proves herself to be more than just the "girlfriend," or "damsel in distress."


I loved re-reading "The Tarantula"! In fact, I think I enjoyed it a lot more than I probably did the first time. SMT was a curiosity for me when I originally tried it. I think I was drawn in by the title and my thinking there was a connection to Neil Gaiman's Sandman (there was, but it was small and not spelled out for a while), which I was just starting to get into around that time. Instead, I got a book set in the '30s and starring a JSA character that I wasn't particularly fond of. Plus, unlike the other Vertigo titles, there wasn't more than a vague supernatural aspect to it. I think SMT was the first hard-boiled, nourish , "pulp"-style book I'd ever picked up on an ongoing basis. It would be my first in a style of books I would come to dearly love over time. (I'm fairly sure I picked up SMT before my first Miller "Sin City" book.)

"The Tarantula" introduces the core cast of characters and opens things up with a violent mystery. A series of women are being kidnapped, tortured, maimed and finally killed. All except for the first one, who happens to be the friend of the female lead Dian Belmont, a socialite looking for her lot in the world. Dian is not content to fall into her expected gender role of the time but doesn't know quite what to do. Her friend's kidnapping begins to point her in the direction of finding herself, a direction which leads her toward both the Golden Age Sandman and his alter ego Wesley Dodds.

One thing amazing about this story is that though it has violence, the violence is understated and mostly left to the imagination. It doesn't eroticize the violence done to the women in the story. vertigo is kind of known for excessive violence, but here it's mostly the suggestion of same thru the horrified reactions of others and leaving most of the gory details to the imagination.

Despite the title, I've found that the "mystery" isn't really the center of what the draw of the stories is. Through the three arcs I've re-read so far, it's either pretty easy to figure out who's behind the crimes or there's no real mystery to solve at all beyond the "why" as opposed to the "who". "The Tarantula" gives you four suspects, all in the same damaged nuclear family. You see pretty early that there are two of them involved, and it's not hard at all to figure out which two. But what you slowly have unravel is the "mystery" of what has happened to this family and why two of them are murdering women to gain a advantage over the other half of the family. The answers are truly disturbing.

The art by Guy Davis was so unusual at the time that it took me a while to warm up to it. His manner of drawing Wesley as particularly nerdy and unheroic, even a little pudgy. But I grew to love it! Everyone looks so human, and I swear Guy just draws you into the period with the detail of his lines. Reading the second and third arcs afterwards, I saw how substandard they're work was compared to his. Guy would go on to draw, iirc, two out of every three arcs after the third one and cement himself as the definitive SMT artist. His work is just so perfect for nailing this pulpy atmosphere. Looking back, I think it was Guy who was a cornerstone for helping me start to appreciate artists who weren't "clean".

And I can't say enough about Matt Wagner's (and later Steven Seagle's) character work on this series! Wesley, Dian and so many others under his skillful scripts just came ALIVE for me, and I could see that fire re-igniting as I re-immersed myself in the world. It's the characters, more than anything, that made SMT make my list of the ten best comic series I listed here a few years ago. Among them is Lt. Burke, who is such a bastard but such a guilty pleasure to read. We barely see much of Burke in this arc, but there's MUCH more to come! nod grin

In the early lettercols the editor states that Wagner's focus will be on hate crimes, and this is very much true in the onset of this series. It's a great way to learn a lot more about the time period and to give these stories that extra emotional investment that draws you into the stories and then punches you in the gut!
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 09/15/13 02:07 AM
Well, I'm intrigued so far. I've long been a casual fan of Wesley and Dian in the sense that even though I haven't read a lot of stories with them, I love the IDEA of them as both an ahead-of-their-time couple and as two individuals who didn't quite fit into the society of their times. I do have a feeling that Davis' art might turn out to be an obstacle, though.

Thanks, Lardy and Dev. Looking forward to the next reviews.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/15/13 02:20 AM
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
I do have a feeling that Davis' art might turn out to be an obstacle, though.


Fickles, I'm curious: Have you ever encountered an artist whose style you either didn't immediately like or even hated but then grew on you to such a degree that you, in fact, came to absolutely LOVE it? That's happened to me quite often. When I think of your past artistic appraisals, I have the overall impression that if you dislike the style from the outset that your opinion doesn't change. Is that fair...or am I actually very wrong?
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 09/15/13 02:27 AM
Good question, Lardy. The first artists I thought of off the top of my head were Sal Buscema and Gil Kane. Both had problems drawing attractive people, but both had a punchiness and flow to their storytelling that I didn't appreciate until much later. They also had considerable strengths in their styles of drawing I learned in time to appreciate -- Sal with monsters, Kane with anatomical articulation.
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 09/15/13 02:32 AM
I agree with Lardy that the mystery aspect of this mystery mans cases is not really the main thrust of the stories. They are pretty east for the reader to figure out. As, we are given to information that the Sandman is not.

Arc Two is named "The Face," As noted by my esteemed colleague above, the art takes a massive nosedive here. Watkiss is just not up to the task of following Guy Davis. The art in its best instances here is sub-standard for the most part...and at worst, painful to look at. I'm really not being over-reactive at all...I think in it's own way, it's worse than Liefeld for me.

The story centers around a brewing war between two Chinese gangs. Someone is trying to start a war...but who? How does Jimmy, one of Dians od boyfriends fit into the whole puzzle? The answer isn't too hard to figure out, but there is a lot of subtext about racial relations and bigotry going on throughout the story.

Wesley and Dian take steps here in their relationship. Both are out of place in their society in their own way...and a good fit for each other.

The narrative srwitches from Wesley to Dian for this arc, and it's refreshing to listen to her thoughts as the story progresses. Thoughts about her father, Wesley, Jimmy and the situation they are all drawn into.

This is a case of the story carrying the art. It's a feat for a story to be engaging enough to let me get pass the shortcomings of the art...but Wagner pulls it off.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/15/13 02:52 AM
Originally Posted by Dev - Em
Arc Two is named "The Face," As noted by my esteemed colleague above, the art takes a massive nosedive here. Watkiss is just not up to the task of following Guy Davis. The art in its best instances here is sub-standard for the most part...and at worst, painful to look at. I'm really not being over-reactive at all...I think in it's own way, it's worse than Liefeld for me.


I'll disagree with the extremity of Dev's assessment of Watkiss's work on "The Face". I don't feel Watkiss is a bad artist at all, but he's a let-down from Guy Davis' work. Watkiss brings more of a classic pulp feel in his story. By "classic pulp", I mean his heroes are more idealized and square-jawed and his Asian characters have more of that stereotypical look to them. By the latter part of that statement, I don't mean that he goes so far as in deep caricature to make his Asians buck-toothed and what-not, but he does evoke a little of the "yellow peril" type in broad strokes. This is intentional, I'm sure, to make this tale feel somewhat more like they were depicted during this era in which the pulps really boomed with Asians as a common threat in them. It's all tasteful, except for the first part of the arc when the coloring is entirely too yellow, a mistake which the editor says in a subsequent letter column was unintentional and was fixed in chapter two-on.

And Watkiss takes the flawed Wesley Dodds and Dian Belmont designed by Guy Davis and jarringly transforms them practically into Cary Grant and Rita Hayworth by comparison. That's really my biggest gripe with the art in this arc. It also isn't immersive in the era as Guy's work. So while not terrible as Dev characterizes it, I'd say it's disappointing. Watkiss has done better things since, including a notable issue or more on Gaiman's Sandman.

I thought the art on "The Brute" was even more of a step down, though it had its moments....

Posted By: Thriftshop Debutante Re: Re-Reads - 09/15/13 03:01 AM
OK, not a reread, but here's what I said about SMT awhile ago:

I didn't care much for it. I don't think the art suited it, although I enjoyed the hell out of Baker Street. I expected, and wanted, something closer to the covers. Also, I'm fine with silent panels, but in several cases I could not figure out what was going on -- although that was more the case for the non-Davis arc, IIRC.
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 09/15/13 03:17 AM
There is a panel with Wesley doing the "Walking up the wall" thing from Batman...it is extremely out of proportion to me. Faces are warped, and I get the effort he made with the Chinese characters, but there were panels scattered all over that just seemed sonky to me.

Maybe I am being a bit hard on him, but it was so jarring to me, even on this re-read. Gonna crack open the next arc tomorrow and see what that looks like.

Looking forward to seeing Guy again to be sure.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/15/13 03:18 AM
Originally Posted by Thriftshop Debutante
OK, not a reread, but here's what I said about SMT awhile ago:

I didn't care much for it. I don't think the art suited it, although I enjoyed the hell out of Baker Street. I expected, and wanted, something closer to the covers. Also, I'm fine with silent panels, but in several cases I could not figure out what was going on -- although that was more the case for the non-Davis arc, IIRC.


That's a fair criticism, Deb. As much as I heap praise on it, I'll freely admit SMT isn't necessarily for everyone. Also, as good as I felt it was from the outset, SMT got even better after Steven Seagle came aboard as co-writer and still excelled and continued building after Wagner left the series altogether. I'll be intrigued to see whether my re-read confirms this assessment. I paused after the third arc because I'm missing part 1 of the fourth (where Seagle comes aboard). Having satisfied myself that I can't find that issue, I anticipate starting with part 2 of "The Vamp" as early as this evening, loathe as I am to have it incomplete.

I'd be curious as to whether you have any more "terrifyingly on-topic" comments to share about SMT, Deb! nod
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 09/15/13 08:27 PM
Arc 4 of Sandman Mystery Theatre is "The Brute"

Wow. This arc hits on a lot of topics. Boxing (sanctioned and unsanctioned.) Homelessness, child abuse, attempted rape and rape. The rape that is not shown is horrific in nature.

The mystery of the Brutes identity is not really a secret, and is pretty easy to figure out. The reasons for the Brutes situation is.

This arc is hard to read at times, but worth it in the end. You want for one of the characters to rise above his situation and get out...to no avail. Events force him down a road that leads to destruction and death.

Wesley and Dian move their relationship forward again throughout the story amongst everything happening to them. Both again proving to be ahead of their contemporaries in their thoughts and actions.

While Sketchy at points, I found the art to be above the last arc. I still miss Guy Davis on the art chores at this point. I guess Lardy and I look at certain artistic flairs differently...which is the joy of art itself. The one complaint I do have is that Wes and Dian are "different" looking from both the previous arcs. I get that each artist brings different things to the table, but a little more consistency between the artists as to the appearance of the main characters over the first 12 issues would have been appreciated. Ah well...at least Guy Davis is back next arc, as well as the addition of Steven Seagle to help Matt Wagner out.

Also wanted to mention that I have most (if not all) of the first issues of each arc signed by Wagner, Davis (when he was the artist) and Seagle. It was great to be able to meet each of these guys over the years and talk with them about the book.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/15/13 10:42 PM
I think my earlier post referring to R.G. Taylor's art in "The Brute" as inferior may have been a little harsh. I do personally like Watkiss's work better than Taylor's, but the latter did a pretty solid job, all things considered. But we both agree that neither holds a candle to Guy Davis. (I read "The Vamp" last night, and he--and the story--only get better!)

"The Brute" contains one of the most horrifying moments I've ever read in comics. It's a moment that Dev refers to above very obliquely. All we see is the aftermath, but it's just an incredibly painful and searing moment. And reading it as a father now, it is only more painful than it was reading it years before my first child is born. I don't know if there's ever been a moment depicted in comics that has ever affected me more.

The moment in question is very powerful but not done in poor taste. It's the suggestion, the aftermath, the affect on the helpless child victim and the powerlessness and despair that her father feels when he realizes what has happened. The child's attempt to understand what has happened to her is beyond heartbreaking.

It's not a sequence that is easy at all to read, but I think it is a sequence in comics or other mediums that is needed in a way that I can't easily explain. It may be a moment that someone reading the series for the first time might just cause them to put the book down forever. It's just that devastating. But I feel it was an important moment for comics as a medium, even if you never hear it mentioned.

"The Brute" is a story centered around child abuse and the terrible effects of it. It's also about parenting and the tremendous, incalculable responsibility that comes with it. And it's also about choices.

Damn fine arc.
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 09/15/13 11:08 PM
I have not reread this book in a few years, and I remember starting this arc not remembering where it went. As I read the first issue, I was hoping that it wasn't what I thought I remembered.

When they met the homeless guy, my mind hoped that it would be different than I remembered. That the ending was different than hat I remembered.

Looking back, I think that this arc helped cement my pure unadulterated venom that I have for people that abuse children. I had always been very adamant of my opinion of child abusers...but this really cemented it.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/16/13 01:18 AM
I was pretty sure that "The Brute" was where this moment came before I started reading it. Like you, I hoped I was wrong, even as I was reading. Even as we met the young lady and even as we met the eventual offender, who seemed like such an affable character leading up to the moment. Such a powerful punch to the gut and one that stays with you after you put it down.

Pondering comparable moments, I think what happens to Abby Arcane in Alan Moore's Swamp Thing run (ironically enough, considering Fickles' current re-read project) at the hands of her vile uncle Anton in Matt Cable's body I the closest thing I can think of. But this is definitely even worse and turns the stomach even more.
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 09/16/13 01:26 AM
Ah...Guy Davis returns. Steven Seagle pops in to help Matt Wagner write. The results...phenomenal. Sure, any artist could be doing his/her thing here, but there's something about Guy's artwork for me on SMT that just clicks.

"The Vamp"

Probably the most straightforward mystery for the reader. I don't think I had any problem figuring out who the Vamp was, even the first time around. The question is...why? Who is helping her kill these Frat boys? The answer is not that wurprising, and can give one a bit of sympathy for the Vamp and why she is doing what she is doing. It's a fine line, but it is there.

A couple other things...Detective Burke returns in force with this arc. I do not remember him showing up in the last two arcs at all...although I may have just not recognized him. shrug Anyway, here's a character thatdoes not like the Sandman doing his vigilante thing, so much so that he seems like he would arrest him after he saves his life during the climax of the story. Glad he is back, as he gives a nice counter balance to the vigilante/police co-operation that seems to go on in a lot of comics. Sure there have been other cops that don't appreciate the vigilante hero, but Burke is a fun character to not like.

Dian continues to prove herself Wes' equal. She investigates the Vamp case while Wes and the police conduct their own investigations. Wes seems to stay one step ahead of the police, but Dian seems to be on his heels even more so than her father and the police.

Also, Dian seems to be getting closer to figuring out what Was does in his "spare" time. At least they hook up in a fashion and cement their moving towards being a couple.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/16/13 02:14 AM
"The Vamp", I think, is the best arc to this point. And that's saying something since I had to start with Part 2 on this re-read! Starting there, I didn't feel lost. The story seemed to fill me in on what I really needed to know to that point. I'm sure part of this was that, on some level, I remembered the broad strokes of the story from my original read, but I still feel it did the job.

As I remembered, everything seems to pop that much more with the arrival of Seagle as co-writer. I'm reluctant to give him too much of the credit, but regardless, the clarity, the purpose and the story beats just seem to flow together even better wit this arc.

Doesn't hurt at all that Guy Davis is finally back and better than ever! And with his return, the coloring just seems to also go up a notch and make Guy's art stand out all the better. The color is still appropriately subdued for the story but is slightly brighter...just enough to draw you in a little bit more to all of the detail in Guy's work.

And, Dev, Burke never really went away in the intervening arcs. He certainly wasn't drawn as well and distinctively as under Guy's pencil, but his appearances in "Face" and "Brute" started the running gag of Burke being gassed by the Sandman and igniting Burke's hatred of the vigilante in the process.

Burke really shines here, even as he does some things that show what a bastard he can be. Here, we see Burke do real detective work that, for once, gets him a step ahead of Wesley's investigation in the final part.

Burke is a filthy machismo type with more than a little misogyny in his makeup, some of which comes through here as he's faced with a female antagonist. But he's a character you both love to hate and hate to love, and he's every bit as much a breakout character as Dian in a different way. I suspect it's Seagle's arrival that really underlines the expansion of Burke's role in the series.

But there's a lot going on in this story and the multiple themes it explores. Appropriately, they're all female-centric: feminism, misogyny, lesbianism and generally the steep climb women had (and still do, to an extent) toward equality. I don't think the script throws any of this in your face but lets you draw your own conclusions. It helps that Dian is once again the narrator in this arc, and her foibles, struggles and observations not only advance the themes but continue the character's personal journey of discovery.

It's such a superior arc and one that really begins to help set the stage for the series' identity over the rest of its run. It helps immensely that Guy Davis is here on two-thirds (I believe)of the arcs from this point-on. And Seagle really becomes integral to the series until the end as well. From here on out, SMT becomes a well-oiled machine that never ceases to amaze, touch and surprise you all the way until the (lamented) end.
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 09/16/13 02:44 AM
One thing I forgot to mention is the fact that Wesley is still shown as being fallible. He isn't perfect and gets hurt because of it. This is a nice change from reading stories that the heroes either never get hurt, or get beaten to a pulp. He makes a mistake, but does not get taken out of the story. He gets through it, in pain. Even into the next arc (which I started) he is still dealing with the effects of what happened.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/16/13 04:03 AM
Yep. I remembered that this had happened to Wesley at some point but couldn't remember exactly where. I'm assuming/hoping he got more medical attention off-panel than what we saw!
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/16/13 04:16 AM
Originally Posted by Paladin
It helps immensely that Guy Davis is here on two-thirds (I believe) of the arcs from this point-on.


Well, I'm pleasantly surprised! A quick look at the upcoming issues to see when the next guest-artist fills in shows that Guy Davis will draw every issue thru #32. That's 20 straight issues/5 arcs with him at the drawing board (though one of the arcs lists him only on "layouts" with Vince Locke doing the heavy-lifting)!

[Montgomery Burns]EX-cellent![/Montgomery Burns]
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/16/13 04:34 AM
Originally Posted by Paladin
Originally Posted by Paladin
It helps immensely that Guy Davis is here on two-thirds (I believe) of the arcs from this point-on.


Well, I'm pleasantly surprised! A quick look at the upcoming issues to see when the next guest-artist fills in shows that Guy Davis will draw every issue thru #32. That's 20 straight issues/5 arcs with him at the drawing board (though one of the arcs lists him only on "layouts" with Vince Locke doing the heavy-lifting)!


Looking over the series, my initial thought about Guy doing 2 out of every 3 arcs is essentially correct. The arc with Locke is unusual for him staying on to do layouts. Otherwise he has a guest artist spelling him for that third arc regularly. (He breaks with this to draw the final ten issues, the final arc of which is 2 issues--the only story in the series to break the 4-part structure.) Some good guests to come, though, including Michael Lark eventually!

Also, Matt Wagner stays aboard as co-writer MUCH longer than I remembered--all the way up to issue 56, leaving just 14 issues without his participation!

I'm curious, Dev, as to when you intend to read the Annual and Sandman Midnight Theatre, the "crossover" with Gaiman's Morpheus. I figure with both I'll read them around the time they were published, basically fitting them in between whatever was the latest arc they were published during and the next arc, unless there's some more perfect place they fit in the timeline. Hard to remember if there was.

I might even read Midnight after the final issue and see if it works as a kind of "coda" to SMT in a way. Depends on if the chronologies of the respective one-shots are loose or specific.

Thoughts on this matter, Dev?
Posted By: Thriftshop Debutante Re: Re-Reads - 09/16/13 04:50 AM
Originally Posted by Paladin
I'd be curious as to whether you have any more "terrifyingly on-topic" comments to share about SMT, Deb! nod


I read 5 or 6 of the trades 3 years ago and I remember (possibly) 2 things:

1. The exact thing in "The Brute" that you and Dev discuss

2. A man is looking for somebody's current address. A woman calls a utility company and does a "did my husband call with our new address" con. Was that Wesley and Dian in SMT?

Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/16/13 04:56 AM
Don't remember the second thing offhand, Deb. Maybe Dev does? If not, we'll let you know if that's from SMT. Does sound vaguely familiar...

Deb, care to share your thoughts on that moment from "The Brute". Did you think it was well-done, overly crude or something else?
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 09/16/13 05:04 AM
Looked up the chronology project layout of issues...cause that's how I roll. wink

They have the series and those issues broken down as:

1 - 12,
Annual 1,
13 - 36,
Sandman Midnight Theatre,
37 - 70

Not sure how hard and fast the positioning of those two are though.

There are also the 2 Vertigo Winters Edgeissues that have Wesley stories as well. Not sure, but I think that I have these...still in storage somewhere.

So, I guess we can do the Annual at any point now. Seems like next is as good a place as any. Also wanted to mention that I will be putting my own postscript arc from Starmnan when we finish this exercise. Seems fitting, as I think James Robinson handled Wesley very well at the time.

...and regarding the phone call thing TD mentions. It does sound like something that happened here, probably a bit later in the series, once they are kinda working together more on cases. It seems to me that this is exactly the sort of thing Dian would do to Wes eve before he could react.
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 09/16/13 05:07 AM
As an aside, I remember vividly talking to Guy about the four part structure to the series and how I thought it would be cool to have it broken up once in a while. anywhere from 2 - 6 issue arcs. he said they were looking into doing just that. It was later in the run, so I think that they ran out of time before they could do any more than just the one 2 issue arc.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/16/13 05:13 AM
Originally Posted by Dev - Em
Looked up the chronology project layout of issues...cause that's how I roll. wink

They have the series and those issues broken down as:

1 - 12,
Annual 1,
13 - 36,
Sandman Midnight Theatre,
37 - 70

Not sure how hard and fast the positioning of those two are though.


That's interesting since, looking at the new releases on the back page, the Annual had yet to be released, as of the beginning of "The Scorpion" (began with #17). All I remember is that the annual was standalone and featured several artists--and, oh yeah, it was AWESOME!

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There are also the 2 Vertigo Winters Edgeissues that have Wesley stories as well. Not sure, but I think that I have these...still in storage somewhere.


Don't remember those stories at all. May not even have them. frown

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Also wanted to mention that I will be putting my own postscript arc from Starmnan when we finish this exercise. Seems fitting, as I think James Robinson handled Wesley very well at the time.


Hm? Was that the arc that tied into "The Mist" and the obvious connection with Robinson's use of the character in Starman? Or do you mean something else? I was also thinking of the initial arc of JSA....
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/16/13 05:16 AM
I'm sure most of you will notice I edited the title to reflect what we're now discussing, something I plan to continue in order to draw more folks in. I think this is the solution to the earlier thought about whether or not spin-off threads would be necessary.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/16/13 05:21 AM
Originally Posted by Dev - Em
As an aside, I remember vividly talking to Guy about the four part structure to the series and how I thought it would be cool to have it broken up once in a while. anywhere from 2 - 6 issue arcs. he said they were looking into doing just that. It was later in the run, so I think that they ran out of time before they could do any more than just the one 2 issue arc.


This brings up a caveat that I've had with some of the arcs to this point. Some of the conclusions have felt a little too rushed and crammed with much that maybe a little of the quieter moments were left out. I would've liked to see what happened with some of the other sorority sisters in the aftermath of "The Vamp" for instance. We'll see if they perfect the four act structure more as they go further. I suspect they will, but it can expose the problems of sticking with such a rigid structure.
Posted By: Thriftshop Debutante Re: Re-Reads - 09/16/13 05:55 AM
Originally Posted by Paladin
Deb, care to share your thoughts on that moment from "The Brute". Did you think it was well-done, overly crude or something else?


I think I was surprised that they actually did it -- had a crime committed (off camera) against a child, no nick-of-time save. A child we "know". Within the story's timeline, not a flashback. I'm a little fuzzy on the end of the story, but I don't remember any miracle -- in fact, I think things continued downhill. (No need for recap.)
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/16/13 06:02 AM
No, no miracles. It was all fairly Shakespearean in the end, actually. But there was a glimmer of hope left.
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 09/16/13 11:06 AM
It's in issues 20 - 23 of Starman, and I think it was the "pseudo crossover" with SMT around the same time as the Mist storyline.

The opening JSA arc would be good as well.
Posted By: Dave Hackett Re: Re-Reads - 09/16/13 01:22 PM
Sorry, Fanfic Lady, I've been completely jammed up lately and haven't been able to comment on the Swamp Thing stuff (and there's a lot I want to say). Hopefully work eased up soon and I can get back to it.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 09/16/13 11:54 PM
That's okay, Dave, when it's meant to happen it'll happen.
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 09/17/13 03:11 AM
Okay, grabbed some other SMT related things. Found my Sandman Midnight special. Also found Winters Edge #1...don't have the secnd one. Gonna have to find that one day. Also grabbed the first arc form JSA.

Also came across the Vertigo Jonah Hax minis. Landsdale and Truman. Those are next on the agenda after SMT.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/17/13 04:39 AM
I'm gonna finish "The Scorpion" tonight but might not start the next arc 'til the end of the week. On the Archives re-read thread, I promised a "Universo Project" re-read to compare to the great similar Universo 2-parter Jim Shooter wrote in Adventure 359-360. That, plus a busy work week, will occupy my time, most likely. Hope you don't get TOO far ahead, Dev!
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 09/17/13 04:49 AM
I have to finish The Scorpion as well...probably tomorrow. Maybe I'll hit up something else I have laying around for a change of pace.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 09/19/13 10:32 PM
Heads up:

Our regularly scheduled Swamp Thing review will be delayed a week so we may bring you a re-read of the Universo Project in the Legion of Super Heroes forum.
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 09/20/13 02:32 AM
Gonna talk about "The Scorpion", issues 17 - 20 of Sandman Mystery Theatre.

This one gives oyu a few choices for the Scorpion before letting you in, by way of actions of the characters, to who the Scorpion is. Another solid story as rich executives of an oil company are being killed by a man with a poisoned bullwhip. Wesley is drawn in as a potential investor, and gets in a bit over his head.

The Scorpion has a reason for why he is killing these men, and while misguided in his anger, one can see how his loss led him to this task.

Dian proves further to being Wesleys equal in sleuthing. Burke starts to question her appearing at crime scenes, and she gets just about all the evidence she needs to leap to the conclusion of her boyfriends alter ego.

Guy Davis mashes it up better than ever here. Wagner and Seagle are clicking into high gear as the subplots start moving forward at a breakneck pace.

CAnnot wait for the next arc.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/21/13 04:24 AM
I LOVED "The Scorpion"!!! Really, this arc and the previous one ("The Vamp") just solidified the overall tone and feel that Misters Wagner, Seagle & Davis were going for. Especially, having Davis for 8 consecutive issues was HUGE for establishing this itself. (Davis would do layouts with Vince Locke on full pencils on the next arc before Davis settles fully into his two arcs ON, one arc OFF pattern.) Davis just injects so much character and period setting into the book that the artists in "Face" and "Brute" couldn't approach.

Again, the "mystery" in the title is a bit of a misnomer. Though in a way, "The Scorpion" has some mystery as to the identity of the killer, there are really only two viable suspects, and one of those is a clear red-herring and is mostly there for exactly that purpose.

The title character is out for revenge against some corporate types for reasons that unfold as the story does. He has a bit of a flair for the dramatic, wearing a mask, some of the trappings of a cowboy get-up and kills using a whip coated with scorpion venom. The venom kills within a minute or so.

One thing really great in an understated way about SMT is seeing these crimes investigated without the modern "CSI" trappings. You feel like the police and Wesley are doing real detective work and having to go to greater lengths to discover the hows and whys of the crimes. And a lot of times, they simply have to proceed on their gut instincts. Here, Wesley, Burke and Dian all shine in this regard.

One exciting moment comes when the Scorpion goes after Wesley in Wesley's own home, not because he's after the Sandman but because he wants to make Wesley pay for his part in the vendetta. It's an exciting sequence with a very real sense of danger for Wesley.

So if SMT is still about hate crimes at its heart, then the one explored here is the hate between different classes in society. that's at the core of the Scorpion's vendetta here, and we see it illustrated on both sides of the coin in a very skillful manner.

But if I haven't made it clear so far, SMT is NOT without a good dose of humor! A lot of that comes through the repugnant but hysterical Lt. Burke. Whether it's from the repeated moments of him falling to the Sandman's sleeping gas or his hard-nosed, over-the-top assessments of other people or even his bigotry--it's repugnant but humorously expressed, such as when he witnesses gay sexuality while on a stake-out.

Wesley and Dian have their funny moments as well. I thought there was a particularly amusing encounter between Wesley as the Sandman and the coroner he approached for info on the case. Wesley seemed genuinely offended when the coroner asked if he based his look on pulps like the one the coroner had lying around in the office. Great, great sequence! Another good one was when Wes tries to cover up the source of his illness when Dian visits.

So Wes and Dian spend very little time together this arc due to circumstances, but there thoughts are often of each other. Their relationship evolving is one of the paramount joys of one of the best comics series ever published!
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 09/21/13 05:09 AM
Just a note, I have read both the "Dr. Death" arc and the Annual. Will comment on both this weekend.

Added: I plan on commenting on all the "chapters" in the annual, and their respective artists.
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 09/22/13 08:38 PM
Sandman Mystery Theatre Annual #1

Written by Matt Wagner; Steven T. Seagle, with art by a bunch of really talented artists.

We are presented here with a story of a mugger in Central Park. The Sandman and the police are after him. Who gets to him first, and what is his motivation.

Chapter 1: The Eyewitness

The opening has art by Guy Davis, the main regular artist on the main series. This story obviously takes place before the current stories in Sandman Mystery Theatre. It is published toward the end on The Scorpion arc, and there is no way that this happens after that arc. But, I digress.

Wesley and Dian are taking a stroll in Central Park. They sit and commence with some smooching, during which, Wesley sees a crime happen. It concerns him because he has had no dreams regarding this criminal. Which is part of the main arcs of the series.

Chapter 2: The Butler

Art here is provided by David Lloyd of V for Vendetta fame. He gives us a very fine interpretation of the characters, as I base everything off of Guy Davis and his view of The Sandmans world.

This chapter focuses on Humphries, Wesleys butler and confidant of all things Sandman, It recounts how he came to be in Wesleys service, as well as providing some history of his life before. It’s a very nice little piece that gives him a lot more depth as a character. Always has been a good character in the series, if a little lacking in serious characterization…the kind that Alfred has had due to decades of publication.

Chapter 3: The Stakeout

John Bolton handles the art chores here. It’s an all too brief view into his interiors comics work. I would love to see him have handled a full arc. He captures the feel very nicely.

Three pages of Sandman moving around Central Park and some of the random people he encounters there.

Chapter 4: The Body

The art by Stefano Gaudiano is very good here. I’ve never heard of him before or after this…that I can remember. Also very good at capturing the noir feel.

This chapter seems out of place in a way. It’s about a body buried in Central Park. I cannot mentally connect the point of this with the main story. Maybe I am just missing something.


Chapter 5: The Cop

George Pratt gives us art here that is very reminiscent to me of Golden Age comics. Kind of an odd style, and I cannot think of any other comics that I have seen his art in to tell if this is his normal style or not. It seems a jarring transition seeing as who does the art on the next chapter.

This chapter details a beat cops encounter with a photographer and The Sandman while on his rounds through Central Park.

Chapter 6: The D. A.

Alex Ross gives us a look at Dians father. Black and White painted artwork by Alex Ross is something I wish we could see more of. This is beautiful to look at. I know not everyone likes his style (some due to his use of live models. The only thing I don’t really like here is his use of shadows on Wesley. I can understand it on the level of not wanting to give them an actor/model look, since Ross tends to like to base his images off of real people.

We follow Larry Belmont as he goes through his day. From lunch from a vendor, and seeing Dian and Wesley…to meeting with Burke and then the Sandman in his office. We get some more information here, which seemed to be somewhat lacking from some of the other chapters. Not that that makes those selections bad…just not as pertinent to the main narrative.

Chapter 7: The Mugger

Peter Snejbjerg gives us two pages of Dian walking through the Park after seeing a show with a friend. Unknown to her, she is being stalked by the mugger. Nothing really happens here, and the tension feels a little forced since we know nothing can really happen to her.

Chapter 8: The Bystanders

Dean Ormston is another name I have never been familiar with. He is a nice transition, as was Snejbjerg back into the noir feel of Guy Davis. Especially from the photo realism on Alex Ross.

The police set up a sting here to catch the mugger. We see that not everything may be as we though…

Chapter 9: The Solution

Guy Davis returns to finish the story off, and it takes a turn that I remember not seeing coming. It explains Wesleys lack of dreams regarding this criminal. How he deals with the situation (after running a little sting that is very similar to what the police did the chapter before. And extremely funny to see Humphries involved here in his role) is not at all expected. It is a nice finish that gives hope to the pre war America that Wagner and Seagle are giving us with in the main book. The criminals in the main book are different than the one presented to us here. It’s a nice change, in my opinion.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/23/13 04:44 AM
I enjoyed the Annual as a change of pace. On the downside the story seemed padded for what it was at its core--the pursuit of a mugger in Central Park. I guess in those days it was a novelty while it seems pretty common nowadays. The resolution was kind of an interesting twist, but overall, this was pretty lightweight compared to the 4-part sagas we got on a regular basis. Also missed was the forward development of Dian and Wesley's relationship. But an Annual should be standalone, so it succeeded in that, for sure.

And of course, we got a showcase for a number of prominent artists, each of whom I recognized from other works, unlike Dev. I'd say that, overall, each and every one of them nailed their bits and kept them consistent with the world of SMT as established by Guy Davis, albeit with their own stylistic interpretations. Particularly, I wouldn't have minded at all seeing more work in this vein from Lloyd, Snejbjerg and Ross. Of these, Alex Ross turned in one of the most visually striking few pages I've ever seen him do! There's just something about Alex's Ross's art as depicted her in black & white (the rest of the Annual was in color, as is the SMT series ongoing) that's just absolutely perfect and evocative of the feel and flair of the best of B&W cinema. It really brings out the drama inherent in his model-inspired artwork in a way that his usual bright color palette might actually lose in translation. I sure wish we could see more of this from Alex Ross! nod

But my favorite thing about the Annual was the insight into Humphries, Wesley's butler. to this point, he had been little more than decoration in Wesley's household, though not without the occasional humorous bit and of course his tacit complicity in Wesley's after-dark activities. Here, his part of the story is entirely from Humphries' point of view. We learn how he discovered Wesley's secret and in the process exactly what kind of character he is. (Funnily enough, I read this right between "The Scorpion" and "Dr. Death", and it seemed immediately that Humphries got a little more face time in those stories--especially a humorous scene with Dian when she charges in to the house, intent on seducing Wesley.) This story makes me hope his role is expanded somewhat in the remainder of the series. I've obviously read SMT before, but to say I have perfect recall would be a HUGE fallacy!

So a good story and a nice break from the pattern of continuous 4-parters but not something that would convince you that the 4-part format is inferior.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/26/13 03:51 AM
So I've read the next three arcs, already: "Dr. Death", "Night of the Butcher" & "The Hourman". I'll comment first about "Dr. Death" (SMT 21-24):

This one may actually be the first honest-to-gosh mystery of the series to date! We have three pretty strong suspects in this one, and re-reading it, I actually came to the wrong conclusion!

In this case a series of washed-up older people are being killed by a deadly prescription they are given. Turns out, it's chemicals on the prescription itself interacting with the consumption of alcohol that's killing them. Meanwhile, Wes and Dian are on the outs as she deals with the truth about his dual life and both struggle with being apart.

The "hate crime" of this arc is obviously ageism. As usual, Wagner and Seagle explore it in a number of thoughtful ways. Beyond the murders, we also see it explored through various characters and interactions and particularly through Dian's cousin's torrid relationship with an older man.

The art is by Vince Locke over layouts by regular artist Guy Davis. Locke obviously maintains Davis's feel to a degree because of Davis' presence, so the characters are pretty recognizable and somewhat consistent. But Locke's style is a lot more scratchy and incomplete than what Davis regularly puts out so masterfully. So one is definitely left still missing Davis' work, even with his influence still present. It is, however, preferable to the other two artists who had done arcs to this point, in my opinion.

The problem I had with the story (which lead to my fingering the incorrect perp) was a clue that I either mis-read or was deliberately mislead by the writers. It came down to us knowing that the writer of the deadly prescriptions was left-handed. I'd have to double-check, but it seemed clearly shown that the eventually-revealed perpetrator was right-handed. If I read the story correctly, that inconsistency was never explained. He may very well have been ambidextrous, but that was never explained for this particular character. And if he was really actually more of a quack, as later revealed, then how did he have the know-how to concoct the fairly complex method of murder he used?

So the solution to the mystery irks me a bit and makes me feel like I missed something. But there was still a lot to enjoy and recommend about this arc, especially the continuing development of Wes and Dian's story.
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 09/26/13 04:12 AM
I have read "Dr. Death" as well.

The left/right hand thing bugged me as well, because it takes the suspicion off of the true murderer. That may have been the case. Now I want to go back and check for the stuff about that. I believe the coroner says the thing about the left handedness of the killer...and Wes agrees...iirc.

Totally agree about the art. Not quite Guy, but his obvious influence was there. Helps that Vince is a hell of a nice guy as well.

The Wes/Dian story is great and believable...if not a little seemingly forced...as we all know from the "future history" of the DCU has them together. Well done though.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/26/13 04:23 AM
Originally Posted by Dev - Em
The Wes/Dian story is great and believable...if not a little seemingly forced...as we all know from the "future history" of the DCU has them together. Well done though.


Really? Where was that revealed before the opening JSA arc, which was published years after this SMT story arc? Did Starman show they remained together when SMT wasn't even half over?
Posted By: Sarcasm Kid Re: Re-Reads - 09/26/13 04:35 AM
This is one of my many reasons why I won't buy Earth-2 even though it has Nicola Scott artwork. NO MORE DIAN BELMONT. She was amazing and I can only shudder at what the hacks responsible for Earth-2's writing might do with her like they did with Wesley.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/28/13 01:23 AM
Fickles, I hope you will resume your Moore Swamp Thing capsules soon.... nod
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 09/28/13 01:27 AM
I will definitely do a post on issues #35-39 this weekend. I couldn't do it last weekend because the Universo Project re-read took up my reading time.
Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 09/28/13 02:30 AM
Originally Posted by Thriftshop Debutante


2. A man is looking for somebody's current address. A woman calls a utility company and does a "did my husband call with our new address" con. Was that Wesley and Dian in SMT?



This scene happened during the "Hourman" arc of the SMT series. Wes is looking for an address and going over all the possible ways to get it, and Dian just picks up the phone and gets it.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/28/13 02:36 AM
"Night of the Butcher" (SMT 25-28)

This one was a big change of pace from every arc that came before as we venture somewhat into all-out horror territory. Here, we have a series of victims dismembered and cannibalized by a mysterious assailant. All of which leads to a suspenseful, grisly ending straight out of an '80s horror movie.

Beyond the search for the assailant, the story centers tightly on Lt. Burke as he and the Sandman keep running into each other as they track down the same leads. Burke learns of a bug Wes/Sandman planted in his office early in the series and flies into a rage. At one point Burke gets the drop on the Sandman and takes out his rage, hatred and frustration over the vigilante in a violent manner that's almost the other's undoing if not for some timely intervention. We also get our first brief peek at Burke's personal life here, adding another layer to his complex character.

But other than the conflict, we get to see how Burke works and how he's actually a very instinctive and gifted cop. He actually gets to the assailant before the Sandman this time but is unprepared for the Butcher's deadly brutality. The Sandman arrives, but it's a very close call for both.

Wes and Dian open the arc at a low ebb with their estrangement over Dan's discovery of his double life. Much of Wes's narration this arc centers around the emptiness he feels without her. To underline this, we don't have nearly as many scenes with Dian. This really helps us feel what Wes is feeling as we miss her, too. But near the end, we see that things are getting better.

This arc is unique to this point for its turn away from hate crimes and its pure horror inspiration. As such, it's a little out of place but far from a poor arc. The focus on the rivalry and methods of Burke and the Sandman distinguishes arc as does Guy Davis's ability to adapt his style to bring home the horror elements.

Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/28/13 02:40 AM
Originally Posted by Dev - Em
Originally Posted by Thriftshop Debutante


2. A man is looking for somebody's current address. A woman calls a utility company and does a "did my husband call with our new address" con. Was that Wesley and Dian in SMT?



This scene happened during the "Hourman" arc of the SMT series. Wes is looking for an address and going over all the possible ways to get it, and Dian just picks up the phone and gets it.


I thought of that as well as soon as I read that scene earlier this week but forgot to post! You either read pretty deep into the series or got some scattered arcs, Deb.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 09/28/13 02:46 AM
Night of the Butcher sounds pretty hardcore, although I usually love 80s horror movies.

I really appreciate the detail that you guys go into in your reviews.

At this point, I'm on the fence about getting into SMT. My main stumbling block would probably be the character of Burke. I know he's just a fictional character, but I have...issues with the Real Life Burkes of the world.

Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 09/28/13 02:59 AM
Originally Posted by Paladin
"Night of the Butcher" (SMT 25-28)



Whuuuuut?

Oh wait...I somehow skipped this and went on to the next two arcs. Will get through this one this weekend. D'oh!
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/28/13 03:03 AM
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Night of the Butcher sounds pretty hardcore, although I usually love 80s horror movies.

I really appreciate the detail that you guys go into in your reviews.

At this point, I'm on the fence about getting into SMT. My main stumbling block would probably be the character of Burke. I know he's just a fictional character, but I have...issues with the Real Life Burkes of the world.



"Night of the Butcher" is hardcore in its own way, but it's still a lot more restrained than your average Avatar Comics. Yeah, there's a whole room full of dismembered parts at the end, and it's sickening, as it should be. But the attacks are not even as graphic as most of the violence shown in Preacher. There are "cutaways" that leave some things to the imagination, but you later see the body.

Lt. Burke.....he's a fascinating character. I like that Wagner and Seagle weren't afraid to show what a terribly flawed character he was. Racist, misogynist, homophobic--you name it, he had that negative attribute. Meanwhile, he was also very good at his job. That said, he acted deplorably to some young black kids a couple of arcs down ("The Python") to get to the killer of that arc. I think it's a lot more realistic to confront these traits and that reality of the time with a character like that. It was a different time, and people often didn't bother to hide their attitudes when there was no social stigma for it. There are still plenty of "Burkes" out there in the here and now, but it's nice we've made some progress since then.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 09/28/13 03:10 AM
Very good points, Lardy, especially about the progress that's been made since then. I think what really threw me was finding out that there's a scene where Burke beats up on Wesley. I don't know if I could handle reading that.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/28/13 03:16 AM
Yeah, Burke literally kicks him when he's down. I like how another character intervenes on Sandman's/Wes's behalf, though. Burke....has lots of issues. I can see, though, how a cop would become aggressive toward a vigilante in this situation. Especially very soon after learning he had been bugging his office for who knows how long. Of course, earlier in the series, Burke shot at the Sandman on sight without provocation. (He missed.)
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 09/28/13 03:21 AM
Originally Posted by Paladin
Of course, earlier in the series, Burke shot at the Sandman on sight without provocation. (He missed.)


Hmmm...there's an impotence joke there for sure. wink grin
Posted By: thoth lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/28/13 01:36 PM
Originally Posted by Paladin
[quote=Fanfic Lady]Racist, misogynist, homophobic--you name it, he had that negative attribute. Meanwhile, he was also very good at his job.


In part I think a lot of his frustration stems from being naturally good at his job, coupled with the focus he gives it.

He has nothing else in his life. He's either lost or driven away everything. This is coupled with his anger at the corruption, incompetence and laziness of his own department. A working structure he knows he will never get up the ladder in, due to his drive for results rather than who he knows and what his background is.

Then there is the reaction to the horror he sees in every day of his job. He does this every single day. He doesn't just get into it when he has a dream. He isn't compelled to do it through any supernatural entity. You can only imagine the cases he gets that the Sandman doesn'thave a dream about. Or what he saw before the gas masked interloper cam onto the scene.

Thinking back, you see glimpses of what he can be like through a relationship he has early in the series (that doesn't go well for reasons beyond his control) and certainly late on when a former colleague returns to the department.

Posted By: Dev-Em Re: Re-Reads - 09/28/13 06:02 PM
Originally Posted by Paladin
"Night of the Butcher" (SMT 25-28)

This one was a big change of pace from every arc that came before as we venture somewhat into all-out horror territory. Here, we have a series of victims dismembered and cannibalized by a mysterious assailant. All of which leads to a suspenseful, grisly ending straight out of an '80s horror movie.

Beyond the search for the assailant, the story centers tightly on Lt. Burke as he and the Sandman keep running into each other as they track down the same leads. Burke learns of a bug Wes/Sandman planted in his office early in the series and flies into a rage. At one point Burke gets the drop on the Sandman and takes out his rage, hatred and frustration over the vigilante in a violent manner that's almost the other's undoing if not for some timely intervention. We also get our first brief peek at Burke's personal life here, adding another layer to his complex character.

But other than the conflict, we get to see how Burke works and how he's actually a very instinctive and gifted cop. He actually gets to the assailant before the Sandman this time but is unprepared for the Butcher's deadly brutality. The Sandman arrives, but it's a very close call for both.

Wes and Dian open the arc at a low ebb with their estrangement over Dan's discovery of his double life. Much of Wes's narration this arc centers around the emptiness he feels without her. To underline this, we don't have nearly as many scenes with Dian. This really helps us feel what Wes is feeling as we miss her, too. But near the end, we see that things are getting better.

This arc is unique to this point for its turn away from hate crimes and its pure horror inspiration. As such, it's a little out of place but far from a poor arc. The focus on the rivalry and methods of Burke and the Sandman distinguishes arc as does Guy Davis's ability to adapt his style to bring home the horror elements.



Lardy sums this arc up nicely. It is a huge change od pace, also in the fact that it never shows you the "Butcher" until the reveal. Outside of shadows during the crimes. Every other arc so far (Annual notwithstanding) has given you glimpses of the criminal in their non-criminal element. Obviously, the Butcher had no other element, as is proven by the discovery at the end.

It is nice to see Dian seemingly have a bit of a change of heart about her feelings towards Wesleys alternate lifestyle.

Another nice thing was a shout out to Dr. McNider after Burke kicks the hell out of Wesley.

Regarding Burke, it is nice to see a ever so slight glimpse into his life outside the police force. He's even downright happy when he shows up for work the next day. As an aside, the calling the officer named Francis Francine reminded me of Dr. Cox from Scrubs...
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 09/28/13 10:15 PM
Swamp Thing #35-39

After barely surviving an encounter with the radioactive drifter Nukeface (a surprisingly one-dimensional villain IMO; he seems to me to be a caricature of all the worst things about the creative team's parents' generation), Swamp Thing must use his power to grow himself a new body. This is where the notorious John Constantine enters the picture, promising information about who and what Swamp Thing really is. The catch: Swamp Thing has to help defuse a bunch of supernatural hot spots flaring up across America. Of course, there's even more to it than that, as we will discover in upcoming issues.

And so begins "American Gothic", the creative team's attempt to give familiar horror tropes a fresh spin. I've always felt this long storyline to be only a qualified success, and the first installment, the amphibious vampires 2-parter, did not change my mind upon re-reading. The only non-recurring character I felt any sympathy for was the boy who went to try to rescue his vampirized friend. The vampires, leftovers from the run on Swamp Thing immediately preceding Moore's, are not particuarly interesting villains, although the arists do give their appearances a visceral kick.

Despite all my criticisms, I still think these are better-than-average comics. I just feel that the issues immediately preceding #35-50 and those immediately following it all prove that Moore and company are capable of so much more.

Artistically, the book continues to be consistently excellent, despite the need for guest pencillers -- Rick Veitch in #37 and the underrated Stan Woch in #38.

Next weekend: werewolves and zombies and psychos and ghosts and...more cosmic fruit. Be here.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 09/29/13 04:17 AM
I thought the vampires in stagnant water idea was suitably creepy. I liked how the idea combined vampire and sea creature tropes in an interesting and visceral way. That said, it was much better the first time I read it and lost something on the re-read.

I personally thought the Nukeface story was a practical tour-de-force both times I read it. It's not exactly among the absolute crème of his run, but it's extremely close. I mean, this is all some of Moore's best work, so even the second tier stories of this run are better than 95% of all other comics out there, imo.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 09/29/13 04:01 PM
Re: the Nukeface story, I do think it has moments that absolutely sear themselves into one's mind for sure. I just wish that Nukeface was better developed as a character. I think Moore and his artists/co-plotters allowed their anger towards their parents' generation to overwhelm their better artistic judgement. Nukeface IMO doesn't have the three-dimensionality of Woodrue or the iconic status of Arcane. I think he's just a Generation Gap straw man.

Having said all that, I think the things Steve Bissette says in his introduction to the third volume of the Swamp Thing collection about the real-life events that inspired Nukeface are absolutely bone-chilling, and more essential reading than the story itself.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 10/05/13 10:29 PM
Swamp Thing 40-45

This is a mixed bag of issues, even though they're all beautifully drawn and have definite moments of effective horror. The werewolf story walks a fine line between humanist compassion and misogynous condescension, but thanks to the creative team (and their female editor) it always stays on the right side of that line (Steve Bissette himself, though, has always insisted, as the son of grocer, that the steak knife display in the supermarket with the blades pointing outward was completely unrealistic, and he only drew it that way under orders from Berger and Moore.) The zombie 2-parter just doesn't work for me, mainly because the featured characters are all shallow caricatures (and, in the case of The Black Actor With a Chip on His Shoulder and a Cocaine Habit, an offensive one.) The serial killer story is, to me, the low point of American Gothic, and was obviously written before Moore had done much research on serial killers the way he did for From Hell. On the other hand, the story about the house haunted by the ghosts of gun victims is both highly effective and, sadly, timelier than ever.

Within this desert of horror lies the oasis that is Swamp Thing #43, the issue which introduces Chester. I normally sneer at hippies, but Chester is an exception, and a testament to Moore's talent for characterization. This issue is even better than I remembered, a beautiful parable about the best and worst of humanity and the best and worst of life itself, and moves up to become one of my favorites of this run.

Next week, the interesting but deeply flawed resolution to American Gothic, as Constantine takes center stage and Swamp Thing learns the truth about himself. Be here.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 10/12/13 05:37 PM
Swamp Thing 46-50

This review will consist of random thoughts, given that these five issues are always an overwhelming experience to read.

- John Totleben's penciller/inker showcase, issue #48, the confrontation in the caves with the Brujeria, may well be the artistic high point of the entire run. Nothing against Steve Bissette, whom I adore, but Totleben was the better draftsman.

- The subplot with Abby being spied on and then persecuted for loving Swamp Thing is much more emotionally affecting than the straight-ahead horror/adventure sequences IMO. Bissette recokns that the creative team was experiencing various levels of burnout with horror by this point.

- The climactic giant-sized issue #50 has some rough edges artistically, understandably so. Among other things, Steve Dayton loses a considerable amount of beard between #49 and #50. How did he find time to shave amdist all the supernatural madness? lol

- Despite their flaws, these issues contain plenty of great DCU character moments guaranteed to delight any fanchild.

- More than anything, it occurs to me that this would-be apocalyptic epic was an unconscious dry run for Moore's later, far better apocalyptic epic, Promethea.

Next week: Love drives Swamp Thing to acts of grandiosity and their inevitable consequences. Be here.
Posted By: Dave Hackett Re: Re-Reads - 10/14/13 01:17 AM
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Saga of the Swamp Thing #28-31 & Saga of the Swamp Thing Annual #2


"Love & Death" (as the arc was called after the fact), continues to fascinate me. Every one of Moore's major works involves sexual assault of some kind or another, and arguably it all starts here. That's not to say it's a misogynistic bent of his, but it's definitely a subject he has a lot to say about and has explored a number of ways. It's interesting how the team pull this off, as Abby's rape is done for the "horror" aspect of it, but just because it's told so well do the team get a pass? On the one hand (bear with me here), at the basest level it's really similar to Identity Crisis: Beloved female character is sexually abused to make us hate the villain that much more. Is it simply a matter of how execution? I think there's more to it.

I remember a few years ago a friend challenged me to re-think a lot of David Lynch's work in terms of a supposed undercurrent of misogyny that ran through it. That's a topic for elsewhere, but one thing I did find was that "Blue Velvet", a film I greatly admired, I ended up re-evaluating based on the fact that the horror Isabella Rosellini's character is put through didn't have enough of a narrative or thematic justification. Yes the scenes were brilliantly filmed (in a sickening way), but in the end the film itself didn't "earn" those scenes through either enough redemption or at least a mature reflection.

Which brings us back to "Love and Death", and why I think at some level it does earn these scenes and that is through the strength of Abby's character. I've said before she's one of my favourite comic characters, but this arc, and everything that follows really shows this. Despite all the harrowing ordeals she's put through, her character grows stronger and flourishes as the series goes on. Yes, there's still an element of Alec having to come to her rescue, but there are equal opportunities for her to aquit herself just fine, and on a character level she shines brilliantly.

Now on to less heady stuff: The Annual still makes me giddy. All of the characters: Deadman, the Stranger, The Spectre and Etrigan are just pitch perfect. I loved the interplay they all have, and the scene where the Spectre opens his eyes is still breathtaking. It was a fun a satisfying conclusion to such a dark story.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads - 10/14/13 11:15 PM
I think a lot of it has to do with context, too. Even before Moore, Swamp Thing was a darker, more "adult" book. Although the DCU was mixed in, there was always a respectful distance towards the "kiddie" aspects of the DCU (at least there was when Moore was writing; I think the mixture went off the rails when Rick Veitch took over the writing, but that's a whole other discussion.) Whereas Identity Crisis awkwardly shoehorned "adult" themes directly into the world of bright-colored "kiddie" characters, something which I found completely inappropriate.
Swamp Thing #51-55

After the somewhat awkward metaphysics of the issues immediately preceding it, this arc is straightforward, emotionally true, and utterly heartbreaking. It begins with Abby's perscution and flight to Gotham City, reaches a crescendo with Swamp Thing's invasion of Gotham City and his transformation of the city into a Garden of Eden (issue #53, beautifully pencilled and inked by John Totleben), takes a tragic turn with the apparent death of Swamp Thing at the hands of the same cloak-and-dagger bastards who nearly killed him at the beginning of Moore's run, soars again with Abby's courageous rescue of Liz Tremayne from the twisted excuse for a life she had established with survivalist bastard Dennis Barclay (thus picking up a thread going back to Moore's first issue), and ends with Abby in mourning, yet newly strengthed and determined to move on with her life.

Especially worth noting is the further use of DCU elements, particuarly Lex Luthor as the villains' technical consultant, and, of course, the presence of the Batman! These issues came out at the same time as Fr*nk M*ll*r's D*rk Kn*ght R*t*rns, and can thus be seen as the last hurrah of the un-campy yet unambigusouly heroic Batman who had been established in the early 70s. For many Bat-fans, things have never been the same.

As for the new art team of Rick Veitch (pencils) & Alfredo Alcala (inks), my opinion would be best put as a combination of two flavors I don't like into one I do like. Veitch without a good inker tended, despite the occassional inventive layout, to look awkward, lumpy, and just plain ugly; Alcala grossly overwhelmed every penciller he ever inked (most egregiously John Buscema in the black-and-white barbarian magazines of the 70s) but he undeniably makes Veitch pleasing to the eye.

Next weekend: Swamp Thing lives! Be here.
Swamp Thing #56-59

In these issues, the book takes a sharp turn from horror to science fiction, only to come back down to Earth for an absolutely wonderful sui generis story guest-written by Steve Bissette.

First up, the blue planet issue where Swamp Thing, after projecting his consciousness to outer space when he was dying on Earth, finds himself all alone and creates a simulation of his old environment out of the planet's plant life. Poignant and ultimately disturbing in what it reveals of the layers that Moore continues to find to Swamp Thing's personality.

The next two issues take place on Rann and guest-star Adam Strange and Alanna. The Adam Strange classics were before my time, and when I got into comics in the 90s Adam was going through a particularly bad patch, so the back issues of this story were what made me fall in love with Adam and Alanna. Of special note is the way Moore amazingly works out the Rannian language.

Finally, we come to what can only be described as an awkward and tragic but ultimately loving daughter/father reunion between Abby and the Patchwork Man. Who knew at the time that Bissette would turn out to be an even better writer than he was an artist?

Next week: the end of Moore's Swamp Thing run. Be here.
Sorry folks. My working 70ish hours a week the last few weeks and getting sicker than a dog this week have totally derailed my SMT stuff. Back to it soon though...gonna have to reread the last few arcs I read though, cause I never wrote down my thoughts on them.
I postponed the SMT re-read after I read issue 40. The main reason is that I was getting a little too far behind on my "new" comics pile. Yeah, I'm usually about 2 months behind (and prefer it that way), but almost 4 months was a little much. I especially was concerned about various new series I had picked up and not knowing whether they were good enough to continue buying.

I'm almost right where I want to be. Then, I'll polish off the rest of SMT.

Fickles, I've also been meaning to comment on something that you and Dave talked about above regarding something particularly disturbing that happened to Abby, but I feel I need to at least skim the story in question again to make sure my remembrance of it is accurate. I also hope to chime in on some of your other Swamp Thing thoughts, too.

BTW, more and more, I think my next post-SMT re-read project will be the Claremont X-Men, probably in approximately 30-to-40 issue chunks. Something else else more traditionally super-heroey sounds just about what the doctor ordered. Might start it near the end of the year or January. I'd LOVE if some of you can join me! nod
Thanks, Lardy. I look forward to your Swamp Thing comments.

I had my own re-read planned for January, of Peter David's Aquaman, but I could postpone that and re-read Claremont's X-Men with you instead. It would be so much fun.
Swamp Thing #60-64

The bizarrely experimental issue #60, drawn by John Totleben using all the multi-media techniques available at the time and continuing Moore's exploration of rape (this time the victim is Swamp Thing himself, and the perpetrator a sentient bio-mechanical planetoid capable of reproducing) is followed by the clever but lightweight #61, in which Swamp Thing visits a planet of anthropomorphic sentient plants, including Medphyl of the Green Lantern Corps.

Then we get Swamp Thing's encounter with Metron and Darkseid in #62, which in my opinion is the best thing Rick Veitch has ever written and drawn, and makes me wonder what might have been if DC hadn't alienated him and he had pitched a full-fledged New Gods ongoing (though I believe the Mark Evanier New Gods was still being published at the time.)

And finally, we come to Swamp Thing's return to Earth in #63-64, where he kills the D.D.I. men who nearly killed him, and settles in the swamp with Abby. I've never understood exactly why he had to kill them. Yes, they were bastards, but they were still sentient beings. Anyhow, #64 is quite notable artwise, for it features inside art by all three artists who had been the regular Swamp Thing penciler up to then -- Veitch, Bissette, and Tom Yeates -- and features an absolutely beautiful John Totleben cover of Swamp Thing and Abby walking arm-in-arm into the sunset.

So ends the glorious Alan Moore run of Swamp Thing, and in retrospect the book should have ended then, too. If it had been published in modern times, it probably would have. I'm not a fan of the Rick Veitch era, and though I haven't read the Doug Wheeler, Nancy Collins, or Mark Millar eras, I have read issue summaries of them at the Swamp Thing Roots web resource (I'm not sure if it still exists) and was not impressed. I haven't read any of the Swamp Thing revivals, either, and haven't heard much good about any of them. I just don't see the point, when Moore gave us such a perfect ending.

Moving forward, it appears that my next re-read will be Claremont's X-Men, in tandem with Lardy (and hopefully at least a couple other Legion Worlders as well) in January. Until then, we'll keep talking about Swamp Thing and SMT for a while, and if any of you want to share other re-reads, please do.
Searching for additional Alan Moore stories in the wake of my Swamp Thing re-read and my first-time read of the second Alan Moore Supreme trade, I decided to re-read my library's trade of "Judgement Day", Moore's attempt to do for Rob Liefeld's entire universe what he had done for Supreme. This was only the second time I had ever read it, the first being several years ago when I previously borrowed it from the library. I couldn't remember much about it, and unfortunately, this re-read revealed exactly why: it's not memorable, indeed it's one of Moore's weakest works. In his late 90s/early 00s stories, Moore always walked a fine line between awakening the readers to the sense of wonder of old-school comic styles and simply being a nostalgic old fogey who can't fully appreciate the way comics have evolved. And with "Judgement Day", he falls on the wrong side of that line, giving most of Liefeld's creations short shrift (even though a lot of them, such as Masada, have great potential) while bringing in way too many one-note analogs of yesterday's heroes. The sheer volume of characters is just one of the things that makes the relatively brief story uninvolving. Then there's...

...the killer turning out to be Sentinel, an industrious black hero and the founder of Youngblood, which raises all sorts of queasy racial issues.


It could be argued that Liefeld's universe didn't deserve any better, but even though I don't like Liefeld as a person, I believe some of his creations did, and still have, potential. Which leaves "Judgement Day" as a real missed opportunity.
For shits and giggles, I grabbed the first 300 issues of Uncanny X-Men to read alongside Lardy when he does his reread.

Now, I just reread these circa 2010, so my perspective will be different as I have a fresh feel for them. And for me, it was almost entirely positive--even the issues I never cared much for in the past--so in a way I'll be trying to see if I really do like the Leonardi, Silvestri and Lee issues in the same way I loved the first 100 issues of All-New, All-Different.
Yay Cobie! And then there were three...X-Men re-readers! grin
Coolness! We should talk about how this will take shape, such as how much we'll read at a time, etc. I'm stoked! nod

Hmmmm....I wonder if anyone else will join in..... <glares at Dev>
I'd say if its 3 or 4 of us, we keep it a bit more informal than the Legion rereading thread in that we continually check in to see where everyone is so no one is left behind, but on the other hand, if the situation calls for it, reading a few issues together is encouraged. For example, the second Magneto story is about three issues long and is awesome, and might be something we all want to read at once.

Does that make sense? For me, the real fun will be doing it alongside you guys so I'm in for whatever.

I also think it should have its own thread.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Thanks, Lardy. I look forward to your Swamp Thing comments.

I had my own re-read planned for January, of Peter David's Aquaman, but I could postpone that and re-read Claremont's X-Men with you instead. It would be so much fun.


When you get to it...I could dive into Aquaman as well.
I might try and keep up with some of the X-Men action. Not full time, but as I can. Depends on work schedule in the new year.
I don't see why the X-Men re-read would need its own thread when we've already got this all-purpose re-read thread.

Personally, I think we should read it in blocks of about 30 issues at a time, maybe taking short breaks.

And, Dev, I'll keep you posted on the PAD Aquaman re-read.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
I don't see why the X-Men re-read would need its own thread when we've already got this all-purpose re-read thread.

Personally, I think we should read it in blocks of about 30 issues at a time, maybe taking short breaks.


I agree on both counts. Any particular reason you think it needs its own thread, Cobie? And I think reading it in blocks will keep us (especially me) from getting burned out.

No real reason at all, so I gladly acquiesce!

As for blocks, I'm cool with it. Maybe we can specify each block as we go...
I calculate the first block will end just before The Dark Phoenix Saga, so that'll give us something to look forward to during the first break.

And, BTW, I think we should start with Giant Size X-Men #1, even though Claremont only did a bit of uncredited plotting on it, just for completeness' sake.
Def agree on the starting point. Especially to comment on how undeveloped and raw they all are at first.
So I’ve gone ahead and begun rereading the legendary run of All-New, All-Different X-Men. I have to say its going way slower than I would have thought. I’ve just been crazy busy, as I’ve been for some time now. But I figured I’d so a little tease and review the issues before Chris Claremont officially came on as sole “writer”.

I’m not sure how we want to do this, but the way I envisioned it was I would do read a run off issues that fit together and then review a bunch at a time. Does that make sense?

Disclaimer: I love all of the All-New X-Men. Each one of them is a personal favorite, and that basically stays the same for the first 100 issues. I intend to bask in that love throughout this project. I also tend to love just about every single issue from now to #200, so get ready for that love fest mentality to be ongoing.

I may, for shits and giggles, write an essay on the creation of the All-New, All-Different team. Would anyone mind if I posted that here? It will probably be totally over-worded and self-serving but the people in this thread are the ones who usually appreciate those kind of posts.

Giant Sized X-Men #1
Giant-Sized X-Men #1 is one of the great post-Silver Age issues in comic book history; it’s held in really high esteem and with good reason, considering it kicked off one of the top comic book franchises to dominate comic books thereafter. It also helps that it’s a really excellent issue that is better than most of its counterparts in the 1970’s.

What sets it apart, first and foremost, is that it is a tour de force of Dave Cockrum’s incredible art style. Fresh off of his Legion stint, Cockrum was just rocking and rolling. He could do it all: great costumes, great dramatic interaction, great action, sexy cast and a general sense of adventure and fun. Every element shines through here and its likely because Cockrum had plenty of time to work on this issue and get it done. It’s this fresh new art style, which was at the forefront of a movement in the mid-70’s, that made the series start to catch fire.

The man who came up with the concept of All-New, Len Wein, is no slouch either. Len’s involvement in making the X-Men great is not quite as monumental as Chris Claremont or Cockrum or Byrne, but he still should get credit where credit is due. He is the one who took the idea of an X-Men revival and twisted it around so that it would mirror the Blackhawks in being an international assemblage only now applicable to superheroes. That in and of itself is a moment of genius and helped add a huge layer to the X-Men in that they always remain united as mutants despite (and perhaps encouraged by) their immense diversity in nationalities. It’s a great analogue when replacing the word “mutants” with “human beings”. Len was one of the great scripters of the 70’s too which is shown time and time again; this line when Professor X recruits Storm is what I consider one of the most beautiful bits of dialogue in X-Men history: “You have land, Ororo—and people who adore you. I offer you a world—and people who may fear you, hate you—but people who need you nonetheless. The world I offer is not beautiful. But it is real. Far more real than the fantasy you’re living now.” That line almost makes me tear up. The fact that Storm choose to join the X-Men is an act that in and of itself feels incredibly heroic.

With great art and great writing enhances every page, the story is further enhanced by the pacing and structure itself. It opens with each new X-Man getting an introduction as they are recruited, and in every seen you get an immense amount of characterization (except perhaps with Banshee, though he was already established in the MU). It then moves to finding out the mystery behind why they were recruited in the first place and an awesome introduction of Cyclops. From there, we get the mission on Krakatoa and then the twist on what Krakatoa really is. Each section of the story works well and accomplishes what its supposed to.

And then, of course, is the characters themselves, which define the X-Men. It’s really Claremont and his later compatriots who would take the “method acting” approach to extremes which created some of the most robust personalities ever in comics. But even with this first story each one of the X-Men, including Prof X & Cyclops, show incredible depth. It’s enhanced by the constant bickering and tension between them. This was always something Marvel could proudly proclaim it had done from Fantastic Four #1 onwards. But with the A-N, A-D X-Men, it was even more extreme and even more exciting. Between the abrasive personalities of Sunfire, Wolverine, Thunderbird and even Cyclops to the hang-ups that Storm and Nightcrawler have, and the wry humor of Banshee and naivette of Colossus, there is just so much to work with.

When putting down Giant-Sized #1, it’s clear the potential here is almost unlimited. You can’t help but want to know more.

X-Men #94 – 95
Following the formation of the new team, there was supposed to be a Giant-Sized X-Men #2 to follow in the next quarter. However, the era of Giant-Sized comics was coming to an end after Marvel declared what was originally a success in 1974 was now a failure in 1975. They were replaced with reprints and instead Marvel chose to resurrect the recently cancelled X-Men story, spreading out the next story over two issues at a bi-monthly pace (which was better for Dave Cockrum). There was also the problem of Len Wein having overreached himself in a major way, and the continuing chaos at Marvel editorially. Just like he would pull a fast exit on his run on Iron Man in a few months, Len had to bow out, as he took over Amazing Spider-Man had a brief interlude as Editor-in-Chief. This allowed for Chris Claremont to step in as scripter for this two-parter and eventually become full time writer. Though, it should be clear, this was done Marvel style, so this was really Dave Cockrum’s story; Len just helped out plot wise and Claremont supplied the dialogue. Len’s contribution is clearly the inclusion of Count Nefaria and the Ani-Men who he liked to use.

This story is unique for the above and a few other things, the most notable being the shocking death of Thunderbird. Never knowing how long this series might last, they decided to not wait and get right to the death of a member—and what a shocker it was! It helped set the pace for the X-Men, that anything could happen…and usually did. By 1975, heroes had died many times in comics but Thunderbird’s death is unique in that it never was reversed and had a continued and lasting effect on the series. Thunderbird dies in such a way that Professor X, Cyclops and Banshee—really the three mentor-type characters—are each left reeling in their own way, setting the stage for their own self-doubt and mourning.

The threat within the story itself mirrors the first X-Men’s battle against Magneto in X-Men #1 in the Silver Age, and that is a nice nod to the past. While it’s exciting, the real meat of the story though is again how the characters interact and what’s going on when they are not facing a threat. We see the original X-Men, sans Cyclops, exit the issue. Claremont would not be done with Jean (and even Havok and Polaris) but clearly Len & Dave were at the time. Sunfire also cuts out in a way that is totally true to his three prior appearances in Iron Man, Sub-Mariner and X-Men which showed his characteristic abrasiveness. The willingness to have him leave the series on such a sour note is another way this series is different than the others; it’s clear there *has* to be another story in which the X-Men meet him again and now I’m left anxious to read it.

This story also reaffirms a few of the things that were central to the X-Men prior, such as the Danger Room & training sessions. The groundwork is laid for ongoing tensions between Cyclops and the others and the sense that the X-Men do not gell well as a team. This last one is a common trope in superhero team comics but it’s never done better than these early issues of the X-Men that show them first unable to work together, then becoming a team , then utilizing advanced strategies, and then Cyclops admitting that having a team of 5 individuals first who can coordinate as a team may be superior to five cogs in one machine as the original X-Men were.

X-Men #96
Chris Claremont officially begins as writer with #96, joining Cockrum as the two start gelling together. With Claremont comes a great deal of the things he is most famous for, right from the beginning, which further serves to give the book its own identity, rather than being just another superhero team comic, of which Marvel had far more than they needed. First and foremost is the subplot with the Sentinnals which will culminate in #100 – 101, as Claremont smartly choose to highlight the core concept of mutants and the X-Men being hunted by the people they are always saving. This factor is reinstilled into the series and becomes the central theme hereafter.

Claremont also brings in the X-Men’s first non-mutant cast member, which was something he liked to do, with Moira MacTaggert. Though she’s introduced as the housekeeper when we first see her, by issue’s end she’s wielding a machine gun. There’s obviously more to her than meets the eye.

We get hints at Storm’s past in Cairo and fear of enclosed space and hints of Wolverine’s inability to overcome his feral nature. Already, the characters are gaining that extra bit of back story and depth. There’s so much we don’t know about them still, and it’s incredible how Claremont took his time in providing us the back story. All the while, their personalities become so crystal clear, you feel like you know them more than many characters that had been around for decades.

The N’Gari demon itself is a bit generic, though Cockrum’s artwork renders it to be pretty gruesome and breath taking at the same time. I wonder if that was Dave’s idea, or Claremont’s? It seems like Dave simply drew up the monster and they created a backstory to use it, though I’m curious. It sets the stage for the awesome second N’Gari story with Kitty Pryde 45 or so issues later.

With Claremont & Cockrum securely the creative team, the series is about to explode towards its first story arc and then onwards to the second with some good smaller ones in between. I'll wait until everyone else is ready to start rereading, but am hopeful this teaser will get everyone more excited!
^ Well, THAT was disappointing! shrug

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Wow you can post? My above review is epic but didn't go through. It's saved at work though, and I can post on Monday. I spent like 30 min on it!
Evidently I can post too.
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
Wow you can post? My above review is epic but didn't go through. It's saved at work though, and I can post on Monday. I spent like 30 min on it!


What did you review? Did you jump the gun on X-Men?!?!
I was lucky to get Essential X-Men volumes from my local library a few years ago. The stories hold up pretty well, though his perchance for being relevant means some of it is dated. He might have influenced my writing a bit, as I try to be relevant.
I jumped the gun only in a teaser way. I read the issues before Wein is fully gone. smile

It was a ploy to amp you all up. Yet I was foiled.
Originally Posted by Emily Sivana
I was lucky to get Essential X-Men volumes from my local library a few years ago. The stories hold up pretty well, though his perchance for being relevant means some of it is dated. He might have influenced my writing a bit, as I try to be relevant.


Are those volumes still accessible to you? If so, would you consider joining the re-read?
Yes, those volumes should still be there (they hardly ever give away/resell their books). It would definitely have to be after the holidays though, I still have shopping to do.
So I’ve gone ahead and begun rereading the legendary run of All-New, All-Different X-Men. I have to say its going way slower than I would have thought. I’ve just been crazy busy, as I’ve been for some time now. But I figured I’d so a little tease and review the issues before Chris Claremont officially came on as sole “writer”.

I’m not sure how we want to do this, but the way I envisioned it was I would do read a run off issues that fit together and then review a bunch at a time. Does that make sense?

Disclaimer: I love all of the All-New X-Men. Each one of them is a personal favorite, and that basically stays the same for the first 100 issues. I intend to bask in that love throughout this project. I also tend to love just about every single issue from now to #200, so get ready for that love fest mentality to be ongoing.

I may, for shits and giggles, write an essay on the creation of the All-New, All-Different team. Would anyone mind if I posted that here? It will probably be totally over-worded and self-serving but the people in this thread are the ones who usually appreciate those kind of posts.

Giant Sized X-Men #1
Giant-Sized X-Men #1 is one of the great post-Silver Age issues in comic book history; it’s held in really high esteem and with good reason, considering it kicked off one of the top comic book franchises to dominate comic books thereafter. It also helps that it’s a really excellent issue that is better than most of its counterparts in the 1970’s.

What sets it apart, first and foremost, is that it is a tour de force of Dave Cockrum’s incredible art style. Fresh off of his Legion stint, Cockrum was just rocking and rolling. He could do it all: great costumes, great dramatic interaction, great action, sexy cast and a general sense of adventure and fun. Every element shines through here and its likely because Cockrum had plenty of time to work on this issue and get it done. It’s this fresh new art style, which was at the forefront of a movement in the mid-70’s, that made the series start to catch fire.

The man who came up with the concept of All-New, Len Wein, is no slouch either. Len’s involvement in making the X-Men great is not quite as monumental as Chris Claremont or Cockrum or Byrne, but he still should get credit where credit is due. He is the one who took the idea of an X-Men revival and twisted it around so that it would mirror the Blackhawks in being an international assemblage only now applicable to superheroes. That in and of itself is a moment of genius and helped add a huge layer to the X-Men in that they always remain united as mutants despite (and perhaps encouraged by) their immense diversity in nationalities. It’s a great analogue when replacing the word “mutants” with “human beings”. Len was one of the great scripters of the 70’s too which is shown time and time again; this line when Professor X recruits Storm is what I consider one of the most beautiful bits of dialogue in X-Men history: “You have land, Ororo—and people who adore you. I offer you a world—and people who may fear you, hate you—but people who need you nonetheless. The world I offer is not beautiful. But it is real. Far more real than the fantasy you’re living now.” That line almost makes me tear up. The fact that Storm choose to join the X-Men is an act that in and of itself feels incredibly heroic.

With great art and great writing enhances every page, the story is further enhanced by the pacing and structure itself. It opens with each new X-Man getting an introduction as they are recruited, and in every seen you get an immense amount of characterization (except perhaps with Banshee, though he was already established in the MU). It then moves to finding out the mystery behind why they were recruited in the first place and an awesome introduction of Cyclops. From there, we get the mission on Krakatoa and then the twist on what Krakatoa really is. Each section of the story works well and accomplishes what its supposed to.

And then, of course, is the characters themselves, which define the X-Men. It’s really Claremont and his later compatriots who would take the “method acting” approach to extremes which created some of the most robust personalities ever in comics. But even with this first story each one of the X-Men, including Prof X & Cyclops, show incredible depth. It’s enhanced by the constant bickering and tension between them. This was always something Marvel could proudly proclaim it had done from Fantastic Four #1 onwards. But with the A-N, A-D X-Men, it was even more extreme and even more exciting. Between the abrasive personalities of Sunfire, Wolverine, Thunderbird and even Cyclops to the hang-ups that Storm and Nightcrawler have, and the wry humor of Banshee and naivette of Colossus, there is just so much to work with.

When putting down Giant-Sized #1, it’s clear the potential here is almost unlimited. You can’t help but want to know more.

X-Men #94 – 95
Following the formation of the new team, there was supposed to be a Giant-Sized X-Men #2 to follow in the next quarter. However, the era of Giant-Sized comics was coming to an end after Marvel declared what was originally a success in 1974 was now a failure in 1975. They were replaced with reprints and instead Marvel chose to resurrect the recently cancelled X-Men story, spreading out the next story over two issues at a bi-monthly pace (which was better for Dave Cockrum). There was also the problem of Len Wein having overreached himself in a major way, and the continuing chaos at Marvel editorially. Just like he would pull a fast exit on his run on Iron Man in a few months, Len had to bow out, as he took over Amazing Spider-Man had a brief interlude as Editor-in-Chief. This allowed for Chris Claremont to step in as scripter for this two-parter and eventually become full time writer. Though, it should be clear, this was done Marvel style, so this was really Dave Cockrum’s story; Len just helped out plot wise and Claremont supplied the dialogue. Len’s contribution is clearly the inclusion of Count Nefaria and the Ani-Men who he liked to use.

This story is unique for the above and a few other things, the most notable being the shocking death of Thunderbird. Never knowing how long this series might last, they decided to not wait and get right to the death of a member—and what a shocker it was! It helped set the pace for the X-Men, that anything could happen…and usually did. By 1975, heroes had died many times in comics but Thunderbird’s death is unique in that it never was reversed and had a continued and lasting effect on the series. Thunderbird dies in such a way that Professor X, Cyclops and Banshee—really the three mentor-type characters—are each left reeling in their own way, setting the stage for their own self-doubt and mourning.

The threat within the story itself mirrors the first X-Men’s battle against Magneto in X-Men #1 in the Silver Age, and that is a nice nod to the past. While it’s exciting, the real meat of the story though is again how the characters interact and what’s going on when they are not facing a threat. We see the original X-Men, sans Cyclops, exit the issue. Claremont would not be done with Jean (and even Havok and Polaris) but clearly Len & Dave were at the time. Sunfire also cuts out in a way that is totally true to his three prior appearances in Iron Man, Sub-Mariner and X-Men which showed his characteristic abrasiveness. The willingness to have him leave the series on such a sour note is another way this series is different than the others; it’s clear there *has* to be another story in which the X-Men meet him again and now I’m left anxious to read it.

This story also reaffirms a few of the things that were central to the X-Men prior, such as the Danger Room & training sessions. The groundwork is laid for ongoing tensions between Cyclops and the others and the sense that the X-Men do not gell well as a team. This last one is a common trope in superhero team comics but it’s never done better than these early issues of the X-Men that show them first unable to work together, then becoming a team , then utilizing advanced strategies, and then Cyclops admitting that having a team of 5 individuals first who can coordinate as a team may be superior to five cogs in one machine as the original X-Men were.

X-Men #96
Chris Claremont officially begins as writer with #96, joining Cockrum as the two start gelling together. With Claremont comes a great deal of the things he is most famous for, right from the beginning, which further serves to give the book its own identity, rather than being just another superhero team comic, of which Marvel had far more than they needed. First and foremost is the subplot with the Sentinnals which will culminate in #100 – 101, as Claremont smartly choose to highlight the core concept of mutants and the X-Men being hunted by the people they are always saving. This factor is reinstilled into the series and becomes the central theme hereafter.

Claremont also brings in the X-Men’s first non-mutant cast member, which was something he liked to do, with Moira MacTaggert. Though she’s introduced as the housekeeper when we first see her, by issue’s end she’s wielding a machine gun. There’s obviously more to her than meets the eye.

We get hints at Storm’s past in Cairo and fear of enclosed space and hints of Wolverine’s inability to overcome his feral nature. Already, the characters are gaining that extra bit of back story and depth. There’s so much we don’t know about them still, and it’s incredible how Claremont took his time in providing us the back story. All the while, their personalities become so crystal clear, you feel like you know them more than many characters that had been around for decades.

The N’Gari demon itself is a bit generic, though Cockrum’s artwork renders it to be pretty gruesome and breath taking at the same time. I wonder if that was Dave’s idea, or Claremont’s? It seems like Dave simply drew up the monster and they created a backstory to use it, though I’m curious. It sets the stage for the awesome second N’Gari story with Kitty Pryde 45 or so issues later.

With Claremont & Cockrum securely the creative team, the series is about to explode towards its first story arc and then onwards to the second with some good smaller ones in between. I'll wait until everyone else is ready to start rereading, but am hopeful this teaser will get everyone more excited!
Originally Posted by Emily Sivana
Yes, those volumes should still be there (they hardly ever give away/resell their books). It would definitely have to be after the holidays though, I still have shopping to do.
It will be after the holidays so please do!
Emily, as Cobie said, it is after the holidays. Welcome aboard.

Cobie, great review. You have indeed gotten me even more excited about the re-read than I already was.
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid


Disclaimer: I love all of the All-New X-Men. Each one of them is a personal favorite, and that basically stays the same for the first 100 issues. I intend to bask in that love throughout this project. I also tend to love just about every single issue from now to #200, so get ready for that love fest mentality to be ongoing.


No worries! I anticipated this being a lovefest--in my case at least thru the point where "the band is broken up" or shortly before. If I had any doubts how it would all hold up, those were assuaged by my re-read of GS1 thru issue 100 earlier this year/late last year. I loved the hell outta them! It, along with the "Iron Man: Demon in a Bottle" read and FF Visionaries w/John Byrne, just made me more nostalgic for the great comics of the '70s and '80s and for that general method of storytelling that has been done away with in modern comics.
Okay.....so my full participation in this X-Men re-read may be in jeopardy. I attempted to seek out my run from the attic today, and it appears to be missing. The search wasn't exhaustive, but I don't think the box I'm looking for is up there. I think there's a possibility it's been stolen. There've been a number of contractors up there over the years for A/C and other work, many of whom have commented on the volume of comics up there. My fear is one of them may have known what to look for and took some when the opportunity presented itself. I could be wrong, but it's a strong possibility.

I do have those three Masterworks volumes I mentioned earlier, plus a trade of the Phoenix saga. Beyond that, I may be sunk. frown
I hope you find them! That's always the biggest fear as a collector.
Lardy, my heart sank when I read your post. I'm so sorry to learn that your X-Men floppies appear to have gone missing. And if they have, and if the reason is the one that you fear, then my opinion of humanity will sink even lower, if that's possible.

If worst comes to worst, at least you'll be able to join us for the early part of the re-read.

GOOD NEWS!!!! This was bothering me SO bad that I did a truly exhaustive search and found the box I was looking for!!! Turns out I had transplanted them from a longbox to another cheaper type of box I used the last time I did a huge attic transfer around the time we were doing my younger son's room, which had been our "junk room" previously!

Sorry for the angst by proxy I caused! blush

A quick survey shows I have some holes around the Proteus saga as I suspected. I may have to buy another Masterwork volume to be complete. That's certainly MUCH better than replacing most of my collection due to some phantom thief's actions! lol
Huge relief! I know that must have been bothering the shit out of you!
Whew! that's good news Paladin.
Definitely a relief! I feel pretty stupid now for jumping to that conclusion and possibly causing Fickles to lose her faith in humanity. frown

Meanwhile, I've decided to set the tone for the upcoming re-read project by re-reading my reprints of the great Roy Thomas/Neal Adams run that closed out the original line-up's run on the book before it went into reprints prior to GS #1. It seems like a perfect warm-up as Claremont revisits many elements therein very early in his run, including the Sentinels, Sauron, the Savage Land and Magneto. Clearly, what Adams and Thomas did influenced Claremont's first couple of years heavily. (Anyone who's never read those issues should do so whenever they get the chance! nod )
Lardy, I'm overjoyed that you found your X-Men floppies. And I'm sorry for being such a drama queen and saying I was losing my faith in humanity.

I also echo your recommendation of the Thomas/Adams X-Men run -- Claremont's favorite X-Men run other than his own, BTW.

So now that it's the new year, when are we going to officially start the re-read? How about this weekend?
Well, Cobie already started.... tongue

I figure we can start anytime. I haven't gotten the feeling that we'll be structuring this very tightly. So if we're all in the same general range, it should work out.

I plan to read GS #1 possibly as soon as tonight, after I finish the latest Darwyn Cooke Parker GN.

The Adams/Thomas X-Men run was an absolute HOOT to re-read! The similarity in tone, content and style to the earliest Claremont issues is undeniable. Also, the pre-furred Beast has always been a favorite of mine, and he really shines during that run.
Originally Posted by Paladin
I figure we can start anytime. I haven't gotten the feeling that we'll be structuring this very tightly. So if we're all in the same general range, it should work out.

I plan to read GS #1 possibly as soon as tonight, after I finish the latest Darwyn Cooke Parker GN.


Sounds good to me. Weekends are best for me, so I'll chime in either this Saturday night or Sunday morning.
How far do you think we will get during this time period? Is there any chance we will get to the New Mutants? I read a bunch of those comics in a box my father had in the garage. Illyana is one of my favorite characters.
Em, I anticipate that we'll eventually get to the era in which the NM originates. I don't know if we'll expand into spin-offs, though. shrug
So I've already read GS 1 and X-Men 94. The eagle-eyed among you will see that a certain cameo in GS 1 inspired a spin-off thread in the LSH forum!

I don't really know what to say or add about GS 1. I've read it so many times over the years that I really didn't have any revelations this time (other than the cameo, which I think was my first notice).

It does strike me, however, that Krakoa itself was a concept that bore more exploring as depicted. There've been some minor subsequent revisitations (including a Brubaker retcon I didn't care for), but its fate left little room for further exploration. It was clearly created as a significant threat for the new team to form to defeat, but it could have been something more, for sure.

I'll talk about 94 and 95 after I read the conclusion. Perhaps, I'll add some more thoughts about GS 1 as well....
I have to say I was very underwhelmed with the idea of Krakoa. It's a throwback to Timely/Marvel monster comics of the '50s.
Giant-Sized X-Men #1 and X-Men #94-95

Although I could nitpick over the dubious science and the plotting weaknesses in these issues, the sheer raw energy of both the writing and, especially, Cockrum's art allows them to transcend those flaws in that uniquely Bronze Age way.

What's most interesting to me in re-reading these issues is how different some of the characters are from the way they will turn out over subsequent issues. First, there's Storm, who, IIRC, Wein intended to turn out to actually be a goddess. She's always been a character I've had very mixed feelings about the way Claremont developed her in the long run -- I'll get into the specifics as they come up. Then there's Wolverine, who Wein intended to be barely out of adolescence; I would much have preferred that, and for Banshee to be the seen-it-all older guy. Not that I agree with all of Wein's original plans -- Nightcrawler was supposed to be bitter and tormented, until Cockrum adopted him as his own good-humored swashbuckling alter ego; of that I heartily approve.

I guess the reason I'm talking more about what could have been than what is is because these issues, fun as they are, barely scratch the surface when all is said and done.
It's definitely interesting to see these characters in their earliest appearances and contrast this to how we know they will develop over time under Claremont's pen. You can see where they might have gone anywhere else because there is very little defined about their personalities in GS 1 with not much added in 94 and 95 to develop them more deeply....with one exception: Thunderbird.

It's fitting that Thunderbird gets the most development, such as it is, of the newcomers in those opening three issues since these would prove to be his only appearances ever. We see him assert his individuality consistently and his reluctance to be a follower. His persistence in calling Cyke "One-Eye", even at the latter's insistence to cease and desist, is the most obvious example of course.

So we see his bullheadedness, his temper and his simultaneous pride and shame in his heritage in a series of throwaway lines and incidents until we are led to 95's shocking ending, which is arguably one of the most unusual deaths of a comic book hero to this day. Thunderbird pursues Count Nefaria as the villain is making his getaway in a fighter jet. He refuses to dismount from the jet and continues tearing at it, basically causing it to explode and ensuring his own death.

The times I've read this story in the past, this sequence and John Proudstar's decision-making at the end have baffled me. I've waffled between chalking it up to the creators manufacturing the situation to suit the ends of having a shocking early death occur in the line-up or basically reading it as the character having a death wish .

But this time I read every scene Thunderbird figured into very carefully and have finally, I think, come to the interpretation that was desired. Proudstar's actions are borne of his desire to act as he felt a true Apache warrior should--to relentlessly pursue the enemy and vanquish him and not let him get away to do harm in the future. It's all there to be gleaned from his first scenes in GS 1 onward. Yes, the goal was clearly to shock the readers with the death of a member of this new batch of X-Men, but the foundation for the particular manner of his death was pretty solid.

Yes, the storytelling could have been subtler and less stereotypical in the characterization, but the seeds were planted from the beginning. It's nice, though, that we didn't have a character or caption encapsulate the reason he died in a simple, pat way. The reader is allowed to digest the senseless, sudden death without being told exactly how to feel. That shows respect for the reader and heralds this book as something that will be special and groundbreaking in the years to come.

In this day and age of continual temporary comic book deaths, this one is especially rare as it is one of the few that has (so far, knock on wood) been allowed to stand. Yes, a brother will be introduced in a few years, but the tragedy and senselessness of this second adventure of the new X-Men will be undiminished.

One caveat with the execution of this shocker, though: If you're really trying to sell that any of these new X-Men might be the one to die, then why have Thunderbird's face glaringly missing from the cover box showing all the stars of the book? If I'm a kid buying this off the shelf and the blurb professes that one of the X-Men will die, I'm easily betting on the one guy whose face isn't in the box, right? DUH! Play fair with your reader and leave some doubt, 'kay?

Another thing--and this isn't inherent in the story itself but in later events--if you're going to have a significant dramatic death like this and make it stand, couldn't you have the bad guy he died pursuing not survive the explosion either? To me, Nefaria's not any kind of indispensable villain in Marvel annals, so this could've been his swan song as well. I suppose his continued survival adds even more pathos to Thunderbird's tragedy, but I thought it would've been more fitting to retire Nefaria with Proudstar.

A lot of 'what ifs' still. What if Proudstar hadn't been killed off and became as iconic and well-developed as his fellow members of the Uncanny cast? What if they'd decided to kill off one of the others instead?

I've heard before that Claremont wanted to kill Wolverine off early on--though I don't think he meant instead of Thunderbird, but later? Anyone know if Claremont ever had a certain point in mind or if it was just his desire at some early point before he started liking the character? Can you imagine an alternate history without Logan as a Marvel superstar? While we would have missed out on some undeniably iconic and great stories, we would have been spared the characters eventual over-saturation and consequential dilution!

So that's my Thunderbird post. R.I.P. John Proudstar: I salute what you were and what you might have been! Tomorrow, a few more thoughts on these stories before I move on to the next few......
Great post, Lardy. A fitting tribute to John Proudstar.

I agree with you that Nefaria should have stayed dead. It's no secret that I think Jim Shooter's Nefaria Avengers story, and Shooter's Avengers run overall, are way overrated.

I think the most likely place for Wolverine to have died would have been the first battle against the Imperial Guard. Tellingly, John Byrne came aboard right after this and adopted Wolverine as his pet character. For whatever reason, Claremont may have given Wolverine a stay of execution which then never happened because Byrne, for better or worse, turned Wolverine into a fan-favorite. Myself, I think Wolverine was pretty cool during the Claremont/Byrne era, but when he got all pseudo-philosophical and his backstory got all convoluted, and the overexposure happened, I grew to dislike him intensely.
Originally Posted by Paladin

In this day and age of continual temporary comic book deaths, this one is especially rare as it is one of the few that has (so far, knock on wood) been allowed to stand. Yes, a brother will be introduced in a few years, but the tragedy and senselessness of this second adventure of the new X-Men will be undiminished.

One caveat with the execution of this shocker, though: If you're really trying to sell that any


Thunderbird has been blessed with a quiet afterlife. He was killed before he could develop fans to complain (and he debutted before respect threads on the Internet). The brother plot device used in New Mutants was obvious, but it saved a resurrection for the sake of maintaining a copyright. James grew from a virtual clone into his own character. That is ultimately John's legacy.

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A lot of 'what ifs' still. What if Proudstar hadn't been killed off and became as iconic and well-developed as his fellow members of the Uncanny cast? What if they'd decided to kill off one of the others instead?


If one of Claremont's more recent X-Men books is any indication, John might have become super-powerful. He wrote a mini-series a few years back about dead X-characters. The Thunderbird might have been a cosmic entity instead of the Phoenix.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
I think the most likely place for Wolverine to have died would have been the first battle against the Imperial Guard. Tellingly, John Byrne came aboard right after this and adopted Wolverine as his pet character. For whatever reason, Claremont may have given Wolverine a stay of execution which then never happened because Byrne, for better or worse, turned Wolverine into a fan-favorite. Myself, I think Wolverine was pretty cool during the Claremont/Byrne era, but when he got all pseudo-philosophical and his backstory got all convoluted, and the overexposure happened, I grew to dislike him intensely.


There's no doubt in my mind that Marvel's milked the character dry. I've come to really loathe the character because of his overexposure. His presence in all those Avengers and X-Men books is completely ridiculous. Wolvie should never have been made an Avenger, period.

On the other hand, it's good to re-read these stories where the character was fresh, relevant and would shine in the years to come. It'll be interesting to see how that will line up with my current feelings about him.

Originally Posted by Emily Sivana

Thunderbird has been blessed with a quiet afterlife. He was killed before he could develop fans to complain (and he debutted before respect threads on the Internet). The brother plot device used in New Mutants was obvious, but it saved a resurrection for the sake of maintaining a copyright. James grew from a virtual clone into his own character. That is ultimately John's legacy.


Unfortunately, nothing I've read with James Proudstar in it has impressed me. From his use in New Mutants/X-Force to his starring role in some of the Brubaker issues, James comes off as little more than a Wolverine wannabe. Admittedly, I haven't read most of the character's appearances, but I haven't seen anything to show that he lives up to the potential I saw in his older brother.
My recollection of the early Wolverine is of a nasty little psychopath with a hair-trigger temper who threatens to attack even his own team mates. Angel was absolutely right to quit.

I don't remember anything memorable about James Proudstar. That would have been his early New Mutants appearances, a cameo here and there in cross overs as part of some ridiculous, secret violent X-Men team.
One problem I have with the line-up culling as depicted in 94 is that it was so clearly creator-dictated. There is no real justification as presented for the originals to leave. Particularly, it makes no sense for Jean to leave Scott. I can see that with what we know of Scott that it makes sense for him to stay, though.

It's particularly unfortunate for Havoc and Polaris/Lorna, who only really joined at the time of the X-Men's cancellation. It just doesn't make sense at all for them to leave. Basically, this decision relegates them to scattered guest appearances for well over a decade. All of the originals find homes in the interim when the franchise really blows up in the late '80s, but not these two.

But, yeah, Sunfire leaving makes perfect sense. I'm not really sure why he changed his mind and came after the others in GS 1, actually. Shiro's always been an abrasive character from what I've seen. Still, as much sense as it makes, you got to wonder why he was included in the first place and what might have been had he stayed and been developed under Claremont's pen.

On an odd note, though, I couldn't help but notice how awkwardly Cockrum drew the furry Beast in his cameo appearances on the splash of GS 1 and when he contacted the X-Men in 94. He just didn't look right. I wonder if he'll have more opportunities to draw furry hank in his run and whether the depiction will improve.

For that matter, why were the Avengers couldn't "handle" the Nefaria situation right then. Was the threat of nuclear Armageddon below their notice?!? A more in-depth reasoning might have been nice under the circumstances. Otherwise, why mention the Avengers at all?

I noticed that Claremont had Logan say "bub" right away in 94. I have to assume that was Claremont's doing as he didn't say it in in GS1. Dunno offhand if it was use in the Hulk appearance, but I'm thinking not. No mention yet of him having any powers beyond his claws, really. Not sure how much was established in Hulk. But no appearances yet without his mask on.

Nightcrawler does a blind teleport into the mountain with no angst. Clearly, Claremont hasn't yet decided on the limits to Kurt's power. With no visual confirmation of the innards, this would later be a risky 'port that could cause him to materialize in solid space.

Colossus is "Peter" in all of his appearances so far, not "Piotr". He also seems to have a bit of an early crush on Ororo. IIRC, this is pursued slightly further before settling into more of a brother/sister dynamic.

94-95 was just a really great story, one the likes of which we just don't see any more. A great, memorable way for the new X-Men to kick off their epic, classic run!
I don't have my X-Men collection available, but I've been enjoying the comments. I'll pipe in with thoughts and memories as I can.

Thank you, Cobie, for that insightful summation of the first few issues. I wasn't aware of all the behind-the-scenes events as Marvel that resulted in Wein withdrawing and Claremont taking over, etc. I enjoy learning this kind of stuff.

I recall reading--in the original Marvel Comics Index series, I believe--that Claremont contributed to GS X-Men # 1, though he is uncredited. Anyone know for sure, and if so, what he did? Dialogue? Plot? Lunch errands?

My first exposure to the new X-Men was issue # 95. I didn't get to read reprints of GS 1 and 94 until years later. The opening scene--of the new X-Men falling to their deaths--really caught my eye. A similar scene occurred in an earlier X-Men issue, and it was fun watching the heroes save themselves and each other. Same here. We learn Nightcrawler can't teleport while in motion (a limitation later writers would ignore) and must be carried by someone who flies. Colossus just dives right into the ground and is standing in the crater, waving, as the others land. Personality clashes abound even while they are falling! What a wonderful way of introducing the characters.

I remember little else about the story, other than Thunderbird's death. This was quite a shocker at the time because it could so easily have been avoided. Sean and Charles begged him to jump off the plane, but he refused. His pride was his undoing. The shocked reactions of the others--particularly Charles, who was telepathic communication with Proudstar when he died--really made this comic book death stand out.

I loved Sean Cassidy as the older guy who'd seen it all. As the series developed, he was someone for Charles to talk to--he even called Xavier by his first name instead of Professor--and the issue in which the X-Men visited Sean's castle in Ireland remains a fond memory. In 95, Sean is clearly in shock as he returns to the others following Thunderbird's death. At the age of 12, I was unused to super-heroes acting so real in the face of death. Most just shrugged it off like Clint Eastwood. At first, I thought Banshee was kind of weak for reacting that way. Time and real life have shown me differently.

As for Wolvie, my first stand-out memory of him is how he hacks away at the N'Gari demon in 96 and then immediately regrets losing control. He says something like, "Ten years of practice . . . ten years of praying . . . and I hacked away at him like he was nothing--and I enjoyed it!" A very complex character so far.

At a time when I should have been outgrowing comics--or so my parents expected--the All-New, All-Different X-Men gave me a reason to continue!



I'll say one thing, Huey--you have a DAMN good memory! nod Particularly that Wolvie quote--it's practically verbatim!

These are good insights, and I appreciate the contributions of such as yourself, Thothkins and Em, even if you can't re-read along with us. It's clearly an era that many have fond memories of. I anticipate this being one of the more lively re-read projects.

How long did you follow the X-Men, Huey?
Claremont did take the blonde girl in GS X-Men #1 and developed her into a complex (and to me somewhat convoluted) character. That at least shows he was aware of what was going on in the title. I think he might have been disappointed at the gender ratio he was handed, as most of the characters he introduced were female.

Since you mentioned the N'Garai, where exactly are they from? I know that Cthlon created them a long time ago in the Marvel Universe, but am unsure as to whether or not they live in Limbo. They are everywhere in the Marvel Heroes online game so I want to know.
Em, here's their Wikipedia article. It shows they had a LOT more than the two appearances I was aware of! nod
Originally Posted by Paladin
I'll say one thing, Huey--you have a DAMN good memory! nod Particularly that Wolvie quote--it's practically verbatim!


Thanks! It's amazing what you can remember--and how selective memory can be.

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How long did you follow the X-Men, Huey?


I thought X-Men was the greatest thing in comics, and, by extension, on the planet, until shortly after # 150. Then changes in artists, story lines that went nowhere, and endless spin-offs diluted the franchise. I hung on until # 191--I remember that as the breaking point (the Kulan Gath storyline?). Though I checked back a few times after--including the anniversary issues, 193 and 200--the series had become a shadow of its former self.
Yeah, I hung in a lot longer than you did, but the dilution of the franchise into increasing spin-offs started the slow, lingering death of the X-Men for me.
Meanwhile, issue 96, featuring the N'Garai's first appearance, is less impressive for the rather generic, out of nowhere antagonist than it is for the world and character building that Claremont injects in and around the threat. Certainly, the teases with Lang and the looming Sentinel threat are more intriguing than the immediate action.

But as Huey points out, Wolverine gets some significant moments. In addition to the confrontation with Kierrok and that revealing piece of dialogue, earlier in the same story, he nearly kills Kurt for mocking him during a routine Danger Room exercise. Oddly enough, Logan's actions are barely reprimanded at all. Odder still, later in the same issue, Wolvie's rampage against Kierrok is fueled by Kierrok zapping Nightcrawler. Wolvie declares Nightcrawler's "Wolverine's buddy" as he charges in hacking and slashing.

It's a bit of seemingly uneven writing. But maybe Claremont was already painting the depths of Wolverine's conflicted nature. If so, you can certainly see why Logan needed the help that Xavier and the X-Men could provide.

But you also get the intro of Moira MacTaggart, as a housekeeper of all things (but with plenty of hints that there's more to her), the immediate attraction between her and Sean (more on his side) and some of the first deep characterization of Storm as her claustrophobia is hinted at.

And Michael Rossi....I could swear he appears later as a recurring supporting character (one of the two who gets turned into an indian during the NM "Demon Bear" saga?), but I'm probably confusing him with someone else as his survival seems unlikely here.

Another very good issue, but more for all the great foundations being laid for the future (including the classic Kitty Pryde solo Christmas story nearly 50 issues hence that revisits the N'Garai) more than for the big battle advertised on the cover.
In addition to Wolverine's comment, my other standout memory of X-Men 96 is the beginning, with Cyclops wandering in the woods, anguished over Thunderbird's death. (Proudstar's face is even "carved" into a rock!) I was still fairly new to the Marvel universe, so the continuity from one issue to the next was still novel to me. Even more unusual was that the opening scene had nothing to do with a super-villain or saving the world, but with one character's private grief.

In some ways, Marvel went overboard with this type of pathos as every character from Spider-Man to Thor had reason to feel sorry for himself. But for Cyclops, the team leader, the grief of losing a member seemed genuine.

Villains like the N'Gari and Eric the Red (in the next issue) didn't matter all that much. The interactions between these diverse and complex personalities who, nevertheless, became a family was what made the X-Men so appealing.
He Who, Claremont's contribution to GSXM #1 was to help Wein figure out a way for the X-Men to defeat Krakoa.
Thanks, Fanfie. Is this from an interview somewhere?
Lardy, Michael Rossi wasn't the one who got race-changed by Claremont in New Mutants -- that was Tom Corsi.
You're welcome, He Who. It was from an interview Claremont did sometime in the 80s. There were several interviews with X-Men creators printed into a volume called The X-Men Companion...at least I think that's the title. There may have also been a second volume.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Lardy, Michael Rossi wasn't the one who got race-changed by Claremont in New Mutants -- that was Tom Corsi.


I see how I got confused. There's a certain similarity to their names. Michael Rossi, Tom Corsi, Tom Fatsi..... blush
Tom Fatsi was race changed?!?
lol Good one, guys.
Posted By: Set Re: Re-Reads (Coming soon: Claremont's X-Men!) - 01/05/14 10:52 PM
Tom Corsi, Sharon Friedlander, and various other humans interacting with the X-folk, or even working at the mansion, like Moira McTaggart and Stevie Hunter, are something I miss from that generation, as it seemed that Xavier was actually trying to 'live the dream' of mutants and humans co-existing. I later years, humans working alongside the mutants, or even dating them (like Amanda Sefton, Trish Tilby, Candy Southern or Charlotte Jones) tended to get ditched in favor of yet more mutants.

Like the inclusion of 'NPCs' like R.J. Brande, Chief Zendrak, Dr. Gym'll, etc. in the Legion, or Alicia Masters, Wyatt Wingfoot, etc. in Fantastic Four, I think the inclusion of people who aren't members of the various teams or super-groups makes for a much stronger setting, and gives a better sense of what (and who) the heroes are fighting for than having them interacting with people who are never seen again.

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These earlier issues were sometimes hit or miss for me. I remember one with leprechauns haunting Sean Cassidy's ancestral castle that made me cringe...

Originally Posted by Set
Tom Corsi, Sharon Friedlander, and various other humans interacting with the X-folk, or even working at the mansion, like Moira McTaggart and Stevie Hunter, are something I miss from that generation, as it seemed that Xavier was actually trying to 'live the dream' of mutants and humans co-existing. I later years, humans working alongside the mutants, or even dating them (like Amanda Sefton, Trish Tilby, Candy Southern or Charlotte Jones) tended to get ditched in favor of yet more mutants.


Very good point, Set. Post-Claremont, things really got a lot more insular in that manner. I miss characters like that who weren't the stars of the show but who played interesting roles that added a lot of texture to the stories.
A few thoughts as I catch up:

Per the last two posts, I can’t agree more. I really miss the regular humans interacting with the X-Men, which only made the series all the more special. That is greatly missed these days not just in X-Men but in other series as well. This was something swept away during the early 90’s which has never really returned.

Lardy, love your thoughts on Thunderbird on the prior page. A really nice analysis and after reading it, I think you pretty much nailed it! Thunderbird was an X-Men character I just didn’t even know about for the first few years I read the series, so he holds a mystique for me in that regard. I love the cover of #96 because we get to see him front & center!

Regarding Count Nefaria, he returned early in the Layton / Michelinnie Iron Man run, correct? I believe in the story that broke up Madame Masque and Tony after they’d been together for some time. Layton was basically “Shooter’s man” at Marvel all those years, and often did jobs that were directly following Shooter’s orders. So Shooter certainly would have played a part.

For Wolverine, I’ve just spent months rereading interviews by the creators and from what I’ve gleaned it wasn’t Chris or John that saved Wolverine, it was actually Cockrum! Cockrum was the one who convinced Claremont that there was more to Wolverine than the initial set-up Len Wein created (or stole, according to an article on Bleeding Cool that I’m inclined to believe). Cockrum gave Logan a bit more humanity and just made him all around more odd, which made Claremont like him more. When Byrne came on, seeing a fellow Canadian, he adopted him as one of his favorites and then the rest was history.

For me personally, I love Wolverine so much from Giant-Sized #1 through the first 100 issues of A-N, A-D that I don’t care what came next. He is so well done all the way through that its easy to see why fans went apeshit for him. Sure, he later came to dominate the MU. But oh well. So do a lot of other heroes in Marvel and DC. That’s the name of the game for corporate driven, soulless, evil comic books. I don’t think Wolverine is a bad character and I feel there is *still* a lot of good stories for him.

Lardy, you are right that Wolvie first says “Bub” in #94, written by Claremont.

Regarding Michael Rossi, since I also used to get him confused with other characters: he was introduced in #96 as a military intelligence officer, and like so many other “NPCs”, Claremont really liked him. So much so that he made him a major supporting character for Carol Danvers in Ms. Marvel when he started writing that series (which would not relatively shortly). He also eventually made him a love interest for her. Once that got cancelled and she was torpedoed by Shooter, Layton & company, Claremont not only brought her in the X-Men as a way to salvage one of his favorites, he also eventually brought along Rossi too. Rossi appears in the story where Wolverine and Carol infiltrate the Pentagon only to find Mystique and Rogue already there, leading to a brouhaha. Later, Rossi would continually appear—usually related to spy games / military intelligence ops, or in stories that focused on the Carol Danvers / Rogue problems. You may have already dropped the book by that point, but Rossi played a very good role in Rogue dealing with having Carol’s memories…by holding Rogue’s feet to the fire and not forgiving her for what she did to Carol.

Tom Corsi was a cop who became friendly with the New Mutants and eventually became the security guard of the school. Like Set mentioned, he was turned into a Native American during the demon bear saga with Sharon Friedlander. Later, after the Mutant Massacre (in which he has a fast but awesome scene guarding the mansion with Rogue) he went to Muir Island with the injured X-Men and Morlocks. He then played a part defending the island from the Reavers in the “no team” era (which IMO held up pretty well!).
And a few more reviews. (I had notes for these after I read them, but alas, I must have deleted the notes).

X-Men #97
Claremont & Cockrum begin the first lingering subplot villain with #97 by introducing Eric the Red, which will in time kick off the gloriously cosmic side of the early A-N,A-D X-Men. It’s worth noting that Claremont uses a character from the Thomas / Adams run again, as he’s clearing using that as inspiration for this new era. While Eric plays a role in the story, the focus is really more on Havok and Polaris (who is finally given that name) as they come to blows with the X-Men. This includes some really nice Scott versus Alex sequences, which is really the first time we’ve gotten a chance to see that since Alex had been truly established!

In fact, this issue serves—like #96—as a nice bridge to the full-on Claremont era. Here, Chris focuses on addressing a few outstanding things, such as making sure Jean Grey is back in the cast, and letting us know where Alex and Lorna have been. He gives Alex and Lorna a pretty great (IMO) life off-panel, where they are both doctoral students in the cool setting of Rio Diablo. By now, the Champions was underway and Beast was more and more established as an Avenger, so this addresses a lingering question. He also doesn’t resolve the issue of their working for Eric the Red, and in a way allows for continued interest in what were really the two most obscure mutant heroes.

Bringing back Jean to the series was a smart move on Claremont’s part for a whole plethora of reasons, which we’ll see. Yet what’s interesting is she’s never quite “one of the X-Men” hereafter. At first, she’s not even really on the roster until after her resurrection (and recovery); then she plays such a large part in the Shi’ar Saga that she’s pretty distanced from the others. From there, she eventually will be separated from the X-Men for a long, long time, and only when they are finally reunited, do we get the Hellfire Saga which leads into the Dark Phoenix Saga. If you’re going to have a mega-powerful cast member, this is pretty much how you have to do it. While that may be frustrating for some, for me it makes Jean all the more interesting from here on out.

Worth noting: it was Cockrum who wanted to set the issue at JFK as he thought the massive amount of damage would seem ridiculous in a funny way. Now compare that to the recent Superman film, with all the damage in that movie (which basically made me take it as serious as the Howard the Duck movie).

X-Men #98 – halfway through #101
It’s with his first Sentinels story that Claremont really makes the series his own, and he and Cockrum deliver an incredible story from start to finish. I closed this off at “halfway through #101” since like so many mixed up Marvel comics of the 60’s and 70’s, they have an awkward transition in one issue that closes one story and starts the next. It’s a marketing tool through and through, invented by Stan Lee and Jack Kirby. I find it amusing because you NEVER see that anymore.

This story really has just about everything. In addition to seeing the X-Men continually interact, which is something HWW rightly pointed out as the single greatest aspect of this era of X-Men and worth the price of admission alone, we also get a pretty terrific plot line. We have Stephen Lang, Michael Rossi, Dr. Peter Corbeau and others, with everyone having their own motivations and reasons for doing what they do. This building sense of competing actors helps advance the plot every step of the way.

Meanwhile, so much happens with the X-Men themselves that you’re just wrapped right up in it. You have Professor Xavier getting to be involved more than usual; Cyclops conflicting with the whole rest of the team; Jean Grey in action; hints of Storm’s claustrophobia again; hints of Wolverine’s rage; and so on and so on. The very first hints of Wolverine having a thing for Jean are dropped, and the brief subplot of a Storm & Colossus romance is played up as well.

On top of all of this, the story opens up in #98 with a terrific Christmas setting in NYC that allows for maximum characterization that is built on thereafter; this includes Cockrum having an all-around fun time with cameo after cameo in the background (never caught Julie Schwartz until this read). We even get the very quick introduction of Amanda Sefton, a character I’ve always loved.

There are more firsts as well: Wolverine revealed without a mask; later revealed that the claws are not part of his costume. Xavier’s incredible government clearance meaning there is more to his intelligence ties that ever thought. The first mention of Colossus’ brother Mikhail, the tragic cosmonaut. Nightcrawler using the image of Errol Flynn, which was another way Cockrum showcased his idea of who Kurt is. And best of all: in #100 we get for the very first time, the Fastball Special! Each character, from Nightcrawler to Banshee to Colossus, etc., get a chance to show some facet of their personality that we previously didn’t know about or was only hinted at.

With this story, Claremont also returned the series to its most central theme—and the theme that would now make the X-Men rise in popularity to surpass all others—the idea of being an outcast because you’re different. Thus far, this was only briefly hinted at in Giant-Sized #1 but then relatively skimmed over. With the Sentinels it becomes front and center again and will stay that way. That is really the case for any Sentinels story which is why they sometimes seem so one-note. The way you get around that? With #100 you replace the Sentinels with robot versions of the original X-Men which allows you to naturally continue the plot but address the ultimate question hanging out there since the end of Giant-Sized: what would happen if the originals battled the all-new, all different?

AND…to top it all off…the ending is nothing short of superb!! Where today there would be a 1-panel due ex machina to get the heroes back on-planet, with the X-Men ever victory has to be earned and thus they are face great peril as they try to get back to Earth. It’s up to Jean, ready to make the ultimate sacrifice—even willing to knock out Cyclops to do it. And then she does it! And from there…the Phoenix rises in her place! As depicted by Cocrkum it is incredibly dramatic and yet so incredibly grandiose. And while the Phoenix is only vaguely hinted at, you know that something is not quite right here.

Honestly, how can anyone not love this story? If I was told that there would never be stories like this in comics anymore and that the era had passed, I think that would be enough for me to quit reading them all together. These are the stories that made people love superheroes and comic books in general.
Also, hope no one feels rushed by my posting the next round of reviews. I do plan on taking it slow, and plan on not reading / reviewing the next story arc until I get everyone else's thoughts. I'm more interested in going at a nice leisurely pace.

And Lardy, FYI, I'm also rereading the first 6 trades of Scalped, and then will at long last read the final three trades of Scalped. I just started this morning, as this will be what I'm reading on the train everyday in January.
I'm not too far behind ya on this re-read project. I've read thru 99 so far and hope to read another 2 issues tonight to complete this arc. I figure we can read at whatever pace works for us individually but trying not to read too fast. That way we aren't too terribly far ahead of the others and our thoughts on it are as fresh as possible. In any case, I'm pretty sure GS 1 thru 95 at least are put to bed, and the time was right to move to the batch you covered. Fickles may only be reading on the weekends (if I'm correct), so keep that in mind until/unless she says differently.

Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
And Lardy, FYI, I'm also rereading the first 6 trades of Scalped, and then will at long last read the final three trades of Scalped. I just started this morning, as this will be what I'm reading on the train everyday in January.


FINALLY! nod I thought you'd NEVER frickin' get to it!!! mad

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Lardy, I've decided to re-read one issue every weekday, and post about all five of them on weekends. So by this weekend, I'll be up to #100.
Cool! I'm likely to read 100 and possibly 101 this evening!
A Newsarama reviewer gave the first issue an 8 out of 10 in a very enthusiastic write-up. Find the review toward the bottom of this article.

^ Oops! Posted to wrong thread! blush
Let me know if you need any commentary on Russian/Soviet history and culture in terms of Colossus. I studied it for fun when I was a teenager; and I do blame the "Anastasia" movie for my interest in Russian stuff. What I don't know, I can ask of others.
X-Men 97

This one's really notable especially for the extensive tease of the upcoming Shi'ar storyline as we are treated to a beautiful montage showcasing Cockrum's unusual striking designs for the starships involved in the conflict. All of this through Professor X's "dreams" that cause him to feel as if he's losing his mind. And of course the sequence ends with a tease of a character who will become very important to Xavier.

All of this, to me, is perhaps Cockrum's biggest contribution to the All-New, All Different mythos beyond his hand in he creation of the iconic new members. The Shi'ar and the Starjammers have Cockrum's stamp all over them, and they are as much his legacy as Colossus, Nightcrawler and Storm. It's a pleasure to be experiencing this contribution from the beginning again.

The main story that follows is a little more humdrum, though. We're left with a mystery that won't be resolved for a while, leaving Havok and Polaris hanging (which is a state they will be in for many years, one way or another).

At first, the memory was foggy, and I thought this situation somehow dovetailed into the Sentinels story that continues to build here and is to immediately follow. But Havok, Polaris and Eric the Red are missing from that particular milieu. Honestly, I can't even remember who Eric the Red really is (or what his deal is since I'm not sure if his identity is important) since I haven't read the follow-up story since I first read it in the Classic X-Men reprint series in the '80s. While I'm tempted to just look it up in Wikipedia, I'll be content to wait for that info to appear organically in this re-read.

That was a nice costume Cockrum designed for Polaris, though! Too bad it wasn't used all that much, though.
Yeah, Cockrum was wonderful at the space opera stuff. And it was great seeing him stretch his wings without the space limitations he had to deal with in most of the Legion stories he did.

The Polaris/Havok/Eric the Red loose end was annoying to me. Loose ends that took forever to get resolved were always one of Claremont's biggest flaws as a writer, even at this early stage.

And I, personally, prefer the Steranko Polaris costume to the Cockrum one, which is weird because I generally love Cockrum's costumes.
I like the original green costume, too, funny enough! They're two costumes that should've gotten more use! Lorna should have stayed in the green, and the Cockrum costume would've been great for a mystical character--it would've been nice for Clea actually....
Ooh, Clea would have looked great in that costume!
X-Men 98

This issue has a lot of things I tend to like in an X-Men comic: the team hanging out in civilian clothes (or holograms) doing regular things like hanging out around Rockefeller Center around Christmas, battles with the Sentinels which almost never lack in spectacle and drama, the inclusion of interesting NPCs like Peter Corbeau and Amanda Sefton (I wondered if that was her, Cobie, before you said something--but shouldn't Kurt have recognized her?) and some interesting interaction between the teammates (especially Logan and Jean and the ripped dress and Kurt and Peter flirting with the ladies).

As Cobie mentions, we finally see Logan sans mask for the first time. His look simultaneously softens and hardens over the years, but there's your blueprint for one of the most iconic characters in comics. Re-reading these issues, I never thought back to how the claws were briefly thought to be accessories, rather than a part of him. This issue builds his mystique further with these additions. There is still much to learn about his powers an physiology in upcoming issues and beyond. I also like how Lang's beating of Jean is what sets Logan off. It'll be interesting to see more of the Logan-Jean dynamic in stories to come.

It's also nice to see how big a part Banshee plays in these early stories before he's written out before too long. I find myself reading his scenes a lot and savoring them. I can't say that Sean is one of my favorites or that he's really an essential X-Man, but he is kind of a "comfort food" character in the mythos. I'll definitely enjoy him while he's still around as a regular.
X-Men 99

One thing I forgot to mention in the above review is that 98 was the first cover in the new X-Men run to feature Cockrum as the artist (or primary artist). This was news to me as I'd always assumed he drew them beginning with GS 1. But Gil Kane had done most of the covers (including GS 1) to this point with Rich Buckler and Sal Buscema doing 96 and 97. But what a GREAT cover run Cockrum has going once he starts! Feast your eyes on these gorgeous covers to 98 and 99:

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I know, right? nod (sorry for the inexplicable size discrepancy shrug )

Of these two, 99 is my favorite. It's just such a cool image with the colors, figures and everything just working really well.

I love how the X-Men don't have some pre-existing method of space travel and need Corbeau to get them aboard a space shuttle under the guise of astronauts to access SHIELD's orbital platform. It's a little melodramatically presented, but showing more of Storm's claustrophobia and Colossus' extreme anxiety about what happened to his brother come into play is good character development on Claremont's part.

You've gotta wonder, though, why the supposed mutant-killing Sentinels rescue Banshee, Jean and Logan while they're floating in space. I found the same problem in portions of the Thomas/Adams story during their run on the original team. I think a throwaway line somewhere shows that Lang wants to study them before killing them, but this is a recurring problem in Sentinel stories until Claremont and Byrne cut out all the BS and make them terrifyingly efficient killers in Days of Future Past.

Stephen Lang is somewhat disappointing in his hand-wringing one-dimensional villainy. I missed the Trasks in comparison. I was wondering about Larry Trask specifically and a line about both Trasks being dead. Then, I learned that Larry was killed between the old X-Men's cancellation and the formation of the new X-Men in a story that appeared in the Avengers in the interim that I've never read. Larry Trask being a mutant was an interesting twist, and I would've like to have seen that make it to Claremont's story.

Storm's ability to control "the cosmic storm" was an eyebrow raiser, for sure. I wonder if that was ever revisited because it feels like a one-off best forgotten. Peter's continued infatuation with her is still an interesting thing to see knowing it doesn't go anywhere.

Seeing Cyke losing it and severely bruising Lang's face is interesting. We're sure going to see him face some extreme emotions during Claremont's run with him......
X-Men 100

So this big, but not extra-sized anniversary issue teases what would happen if the original X-Men fought the A-N, A-D X-Men. Emphasis on teases because the originals turn out to be not what they appear to be. I'm not sure we ever really get this exchange unless something like it shows up when the originals form X-Factor. Even then, it would never be this exact classic line-up that replaced them versus the originals. It's good, I suppose, that the obvious cliché was avoided, but it's a little disappointing, nevertheless. I suppose this is a nice enough approximation.

But one thing we DO get in this exchange is a beautiful Cockrum double-page spread that I lingered on for quite some time, just as I have during prior re-reads of this issue. It's just a well-constructed image, packed to the gills with action and detail. There've been many great ones over the years, and I'd rank this among the best. I especially appreciate that all the details are sharp and in-focus and that all of the characters are rendered so spot-on. (Plus, you gotta love Wolvie getting a snowball in the face! lol ) If I had a Cockrum portfolio, this spread would be the centerpiece!

I love Cockrum's rendering of Jean Grey here, both in her Marvel Girl outfit as the fake and especially those climactic pages setting up a cliffhanger. (Can you BELIEVE Masterworks Vol. 1 ended with issue 100?!?) In that panel where she knows what she has to do to save them all, Cockrum NAILS her grim determination! Love how she puts Cyke down before he can intervene, then how she barks at Wolvie before getting tearful with Storm. Just hands-down perfect execution by Cockrum.

As Cobie, noted, we get the first fastball special this issue. We also see Wolverine using his enhanced senses to ferret out what's up with their opponents, a possible first reference to his animal-like senses or at least the first that jumped out to me in this run. In his inimitable fashion, he creates a momentary shock to make it look like he's gone over the edge.

Seriously, why end this volume of Masterworks on such a cliffhanger? Oh well, ending it with 101 would have left the Black Tom/Juggernaut story hanging, too! grin Claremont and his peers definitely didn't write for the trade! (Of course, there was no "trade" program to speak of back then.... wink )
Lardy, Cobie, enjoying your reviews very much. I'll be adding my own 2 cents later this weekend.
X-Men 101

First things first: That cover!

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Absolutely iconic!

Look now at how Marvel recolored it in a painterly fashion for the Masterworks edition I'm using for this batch of stories:

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Beautiful, isn't it? I love how Marvel has done those covers for their more recent Masterworks printings!

So the Phoenix rises from the ashes! And we see enough of her to know there's something different about Jean Grey. But, frustratingly, we get little more than a tease here, showing how Claremont is already laying the seeds of an amazing epic that will not end for 36 issues and nearly 4 years real time.

Jean passes out moments after her 'rebirth', and her teammates hold a vigil. Wolverine brings flowers but quickly discards them when he realizes everyone is there.

But my favorite moment of the issue is when Scott breaks down in tears, overcome by emotion and relief when he learns Jean will live. It's so refreshing to see a Cyclops who is human, in love and capable of showing a softer side. Marvel has just destroyed his character over the last decade. To me, this is the real Scott Summers, and the one who populates today's Marvel universe is a pale shadow. And that moment where Kurt witnesses it and respects his leader's privacy is touching.

It's weird to read the end of 100 and the beginning of 101 knowing how various Marvel creators will eventually get together and use something that "happened" between those panels to explain how the woman who rises from the bay wasn't really Jean Grey and that the "real" one actually still lies underneath healing in a cocoon. It's actually hard for me. As a teenager in high school, I thought it was wrong even then. How do you undo one of the most iconically perfect comics stories ever made? Worse, it would be among the first instances in a trend that's just become laughable in the last decade so that to kill off characters is nothing more than a sales gimmick and their return simply inevitable.

I begrudgingly admit that the ret-con was borderline ingenious, but it taints the purity, brilliance and wonder of the great stories to follow. And the longterm implications to the way the Big Two basically put Intellectual Property above meaningful and lasting stories is heart-breaking. I'm trying to re-read these stories for the great part of comics history they are, but there remains a pang deep down for what's been lost in the decades since.

<steps down from soapbox>

So the remainder of the issue transitions to a new storyline, one hinted at in prior issues that stems from Banshee's backstory. We're introduced to Black Tom, who is Claremont's first significant villain creation, who is paired with classic X-villain Juggernaut. Tom and Juggy will be associated with each other for a while to come and make a pretty entertaining duo.

But once again, it's another opportunity for the X-Men to spend their downtime together. Kurt and Peter even seem to be competing for Ororo's attention! Love Wolverine going all Texas-style including the bolo tie! Banshee dressing down! Peter with a too-short tie! Ororo in a kimono! And Kurt once again favoring a certain hologram!

Just tons of personal touches to go around that will come to characterize what we love about Claremont's classic run. What's next.....the X-Men playing a baseball game? wink

They just don't make comics quite like this one anymore! Ironically, "X-Men 101" is like a class in what made this run of X-Men work so well!
X-Men 96-100

Firstly, Cockrum is ON FIRE in these issues! I think that, with a couple of exceptions (X-Men 107 and the Futurians graphic novel), he would never be quite this good again.

We meet Moira, who I always loved.

We see Wolverine's real face, and I, for one, wish it had been young and handsome instead of old and weathered. As I said before, I much preferred the idea of Sean as the older member with a past.

I agree with Lardy that Lang was a one-dimensional pantomime villain, but even so, he's such a bastard that I wish we'd had more panels of Cyclops beating him up.

Speaking of more panels, it's worth noting that the friendship between Jean (who is awesome in these issues and will get more so in subsequent ones) and Storm is more of a case of "tell" than "show", because comics were in their 17-page phase.

The humanoid Sentinels were a great concept that doesn't quite come off. How the hell do you give a robot psionic powers? And if they could somehow replicate Jean's powers, why not Xavier's? One of the few (maybe the only) of Claremont's worthwhile post-1991 contributions to X-canon was a variation on this concept, Karima Shapandar, although in my opinion it was Mike Carey who refined the character into something viable.

Overall, Claremont is, at this stage, showing himself to be a natural talent whose style arrived fully formed. Sadly, because of the praise heaped upon him, he would never quite master certain writerly disciplines, and his flaws would become more prominent several years down the line. For now, though, the X-Men is still pure pleasure.
Some great comic reading memories breathed into life by the X-Men rereading posts...

...I remember how much I loved Storm, Colossus and Nightcrawler from their introduction, though that love hasn't necessarily stood the test of time for all of them.

...I remember how disappointed I was that most of the original X-Men left right after the Krakoa rescue. Particularly Havok and Polaris, who got storyline crap for decades after this. I did like that eventually, we found out about their doctoral studies, but in subsequent years, it's almost laughable that the only X-men with advanced academic study (other than Beast, I suppose) are kept far away from the two mutant schools presently in story. Par for their course

... I was greatly intrigued by Count Nefaria's Ani-men, or at least by one of them... the intriguing Dragonfly. Why she hasn't been used since is beyond me. One of my comic book lapses in knowledge is that it was decades before I connected Count Nefaria with Madame Masque. I'd love to see her appear with a mix of new/old Ani-men, perhaps with a shades-of-grey motivation.

... I have a bit of Native American blood in my family, so I was disappointed that the American Indian was the one that died- though it has been more than a little bit crucial in the long story of the mutants.

... The original X-men leaving kept me from fully embracing the comics as they were released way back when. It wasn't until the great scene of Scott Summers and Jean Grey's date near Rockefeller Plaza at Christmas time (due to Cockrum's art, mostly) that I gave in and really liked the ongoing title again.

...I love the insight about Claremont using elements of the Roy Thomas/Neal Adams issues as background to build upon. The Wein/Claremont stories are largely spoken about as breaking into new ground, mainly because of all the new characters, but the recent past really was evoked.

...I loved Krakoa, though! I think it's a perfect comic book kind of antagonist- fun and imaginatiave, though hardly realistic. I'm kind of in love with the fact that the 'descendant of Krakoa' is now an X-man, or at least a student.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
The humanoid Sentinels were a great concept that doesn't quite come off.


Yeah, they were pretty underwhelming. Why Lang thought they could kill the X-Men is beyond me. shrug

Obviously, it was done to deliver a fight that fans probably wanted to see. Plus, Cockrum got to give us that great 2-page spread I mentioned. We also got his take on classic Beast and another look at his sensational take on the Marvel Girl costume. Smaller, more human Sentinels would eventually make a comeback. but there was, and still is, potential in the concept as shown here that has never been delivered.

Oh well....at least we can be thankful that the eventual explanation for Jean's resurrection wasn't that Phoenix was the X-Sentinel! grin nod

Mystery Lad, thanks for adding some thoughts! Everyone has an open invitation to join the re-read and/or chime in as often as you like! nod
Oddly enough, btw, I was trying to figure out where I posted a previous review I did of Masterworks Vol. 1, which reprints GS 1 thru X-Men 100) on LW (prior to the creation of this thread, to see what I said about it, but I couldn't find it anywhere! I don't know which thread I posted it in, but I could SWEAR I did a write-up on it! Am I imagining this, or does anyone else remember reading it? I recall praising the 2-page spread from 100 in said review as well, for example. confused
Re: X-Men 100. My standout memory is Wolverine's proclamation: "I've met the enemy, bub--and it ain't us!" (or words to that effect).

During this time, it was indeed Wolvie who stood out as the most interesting, most complex, and most unpredictable character. He had just skewered Marvel Girl! (Or so we think it's Marvel Girl until we turn the page.) Even though he's just told us his sense of smell has given him a clue to his antagonist's true identity, there was still that moment of doubt, reflected in the astonished faces of the other New X-Men ("Wolverine . . . what have you done?" one of them says, to which Wolvie's line above is a rejoinder). Is this guy even a hero?

But, yes, as we turn the page we see that he is indeed a hero who took the chance no one else dared because of their feelings for the original X-team. Their love and/or admiration for their predecessors held them back, but not Wolvie. He had to overcome his own developing feelings for Jean to see the X-Sentinel version for what it truly was--and he was willing to risk being branded a psycho to save the day.

For awhile, Wolvie was my favorite character--and the scene in 101 of him pitching the flowers in the trash clinched it (he wasn't quite ready to reveal his human, caring side to the team)--but he was soon supplanted by Kurt, who was a much more fun character, who didn't dwell in angst over his mutant appearance, and who, besides, spoke German! (In 101, upon seeing Cassidy Keep, Kurt exclaims "Unglaublich!" ("Unbelievable!"), which I had to look up. I've always appreciated it that the editor didn't deem it necessary to translate German or Russian words in footnotes, like most editors would. The untranslated words added to the realism and respected readers' intelligence to figure out the context.)

It seems that what I remember most about these early issues are scenes of character development and snatches of dialogue. In previous posts, Cockrum has been justly praised for his contributions, but Claremont deserves an equal amount of credit. He infused the New X-Men with memorable personalities and dialogue that made you feel you knew these people and wanted to be them in spite of their strangeness. That takes some skill as a writer.

I enjoy reading about how you guys felt when you first read these issues and how that has changed over the years. It's as fun as reading them!

Following something Lardy said, in referencing the fact that hereafter the Jean we we're seeing is later retconned to not really being Jean: I just can't read it that way. To me, the Jean in 101-138 is the real Jean, as the then writers intended. That's partly why retcons can never really be 100% successful, when the source material is so effective as it is.
I imagine it will be very hard to read the sequence of Jean's supposed death in Antarctica, circa # 114, and Scott's denial and coming to terms with it, and think that it's not the "real" Jean. That retcon, I believe, was one of the worst developments Marvel ever foisted upon its characters and fans. As a fan, I felt betrayed.
I agree. nod
I agree, too.

Backtracking for a moment to the humanoid Sentinels thing, I want to reiterate that I think Mike Carey really made the concept work and that his six-year run on X-Men/X-Men Legacy was the best since Claremont. Despite inconsistent art, I highly recommend it.
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
Following something Lardy said, in referencing the fact that hereafter the Jean we we're seeing is later retconned to not really being Jean: I just can't read it that way. To me, the Jean in 101-138 is the real Jean, as the then writers intended. That's partly why retcons can never really be 100% successful, when the source material is so effective as it is.


To be clear, I'm not reading it that way, either. It's hard, however, not to read the shuttle crash and not remember what was ret-conned in. But I'll always read these stories as actually being about Jean Grey as intended. It's a shame that Marvel wants us not to do so with what they did.
By the way, shouldn't somebody update the title of this thread? I've almost missed it recently, thinking Swamp Thing and Sandman Mystery Theater referred to a different thread.
I changed it a while ago. I'm showing it as changed on the thread list, but each post has the old header. Are you guys seeing the old title on the list?
I'm also seeing the old title on the Active Topics list.
I see it with the old title when inside the thread. Outside of this thread, it appears with Claremont's X-Men in the name.
I'm seeing it the same as Emily.
X-Men 102

For a middle chapter and one that is essentially an extended fight sequence, this issue is fairly loaded with some nice tidbits:

---Jean Grey is roommates with Misty Knight! Seeing this made me have the germ of a memory of this fact. I'm curious, though, to see how much more this will be explored, if at all. Was Claremont writing Iron Fist at the time? If so, did Jean make any appearances of significance there? How did they meet? The mind boggles with the potential! I'm curious to see if any of it made it to the printed page....

---Jean's brief appearance here features a creepy moment that shows that all may not be right with her. (If I were Misty, I would've bugged out on their shared pad after that! nod )

---Lilandra's face is more clearly seen.

---The elves (or whatever) that Huey lamented a while back appear, ironically to rescue our favorite fuzzy elf.

---Colossus's passion for Ororo manifests again! Seriously, I wonder why Claremont eventually dropped this potential pairing. Was it more about the characters dictating that it wouldn't work (which could very well be the case) or could it have been Marvel editorial interfering and objecting to an interracial pairing? Not saying they did, but black heroes were still a novelty and interracial relationships a bit controversial.....so? hmmm

---The now-familiar details of Ororo's childhood and causes for her phobia are revealed. Over the years, we will see even more filled in and find more details about what is shown here and more not hinted at.

So in a fairly light issue, it seems the time to bring up some more Cockrum love, this time focusing on his design of Storm. Under Cockrum's pencil, Ororo is such an exotic and unique character in her appearance. I think a lot of it comes down to her eyes. Their largeness and shape in and around them gives her such an almost alien, otherworldly look. The irises are elongated and somewhat catlike. Her eyebrows and the rounded face accentuate her unusual look. And, of course, there's the distinctive white hair to accent everything.

I love that Cockrum made her look so unique and memorable. Maybe that vaguely alien look is a holdover from when he had planned to use the same basic character for the Legion? I'm not sure if his ideas for that version of the character were revealed, but I'm certainly curious.

I think Byrne will do a good job preserving that otherness about her, but over the years, Cockrum's design for her has been diluted and somewhat homogenized. In any case it's a pleasure to rediscover her creator's pure vision of the character as she came to be published during this re-read.
Also about 102 that I forgot....

---Peter and Juggy's tussle makes me fondly flash-forward to their epic bar fight during JRJr's run as artist many years from then!

---Kurt's ability to blend into shadows is referenced for the first time here and quite weirdly and dramatically as part of his body is in shadow after he's knocked unconscious. I don't know that the power is ever illustrated in this partial manner ever again. I guess we'll see.

---It's nice to see Storm emerge from her fugue at the end of the issue and stand up to Juggernaut. I like how the cliché is avoided in that her turnaround doesn't make a difference. It doesn't lessen her moment of bravery any less, in my opinion.


Originally Posted by He Who Wanders
By the way, shouldn't somebody update the title of this thread? I've almost missed it recently, thinking Swamp Thing and Sandman Mystery Theater referred to a different thread.


BTW, the issue causing the old title to show up under Active topics, etc. has been fixed. The problem's in the replies since the change still showing as replies to the old title, so I edited my last post in the title part to reflect the new discussion! One of the foibles of this board.....

If the next poster could hit the "reply" button first instead of simply posting in the box at the bottom, it should fix things moving forward.
X-Men (2nd half of) #101 - #103
Following the Sentinels story, Claremont & Cockrum give a nice change of pace by taking only the new X-Men to Ireland where three things can take place: a further understanding of Banshee’s history; the reintroduction of the classic X-Men foe the Juggernaut; and a chance to see the new X-Men without Cyclops or Prof. X. And once again, Claremont and Cockrum deliver in spades.

What sets this one apart is that there is a clear sense of fun here. Claremont has stated that a lot of that comes from Dave—the elves were purely his idea and he was consciously trying to showcase the action as being adventuresome and wonderfully chaotic. I think its effective, especially in light of the very serious death / resurrection of Jean Grey at the start of #101, and the heavy themes of the prior story arc.

I like that we get more information on Banshee and that’s its pretty straight-forward. Thus far we have mysteries into the pasts of Wolverine, Storm, Colossus and Nightcrawler, not to mention implied “things we never knew before” about Professor X. It’s nice to a character whose history we have a good sense of. This mirrors the fact that Banshee is basically the most stable of all the X-Men now, including Cyclops. Between this story and the following Magneto story, he essentially assumes the role as deputy leader / second-in-command (with Magneto even paying him a lot of respect vocally). Lardy mentioned how nice it is to read these stories with Sean and I’ll echo that. He really adds a nice element to the earlier stories. We’ll also later see him take on the role of being Wolverine’s friend (when others aren’t quite on board), a bit of an older brother to Storm, and the one Cyclops can lean on. Naturally, when any character has this role, they ultimately have to be removed so the others are left without that crutch of support—so its pretty great to see it all play out.

The other X-Man to really get some spotlight is Storm. Ororo already was shaping up to be one of Marvel’s most interesting characters with her look and powers alone, but her backstory really clinches it. African Goddess, and before that Master Thief (one of my favorite aspects of her that is so commonly forgotten) and before that a brief history in NYC. And of course, her claustrophobia, which is a trademark of her character. She’s just so fascinating! One of the great tragedies of Marvel is their mismanagement of Storm post-Claremont, as no one really has ever seemed to know what to do with her. But here I can forget all that and sit back and enjoy as each story showcases her more and more.

The Juggernaut was already considered one of the X-Men’s classic villains, and Claremont continues his re-establishment of classic X-foes in the all-new, all-different world. He does something great here: he establishes his long time partnership with Black Tom Cassidy, who is the brains of the outfit. That small change makes so many future Juggy stories so much more interesting by providing better motivation for what they do. Claremont obviously liked villain partnerships, and saw it as a way to enhance a pre-existing character; the other big example is when he takes the easily forgettable Silver Samurai and ups the ante by giving him a partner with Viper. Juggy isn’t too prolific for a while after but ultimately he’ll return many times during Claremont’s middle and later years.

As always, there is also just the tits-deep plethora of things happening in the story beyond all that. The aforementioned elves silliness is one, and there’s also Nightcrawler’s shadow powers, which are never quite developed once Dave leaves, though occasionally used when a writer needed them. The Eric the Red plot is advanced, Wolverine and Colossus appear to be at each other’s throats most of the time, and Professor X’s subplot continues. Wolverine’s name is revealed to be Logan for the first time. And Misty Knight is shown to be Jean Grey’s roommate. To answer Lardy’s comment, Claremont was indeed writing Iron Fist at this time, with none other than John Byrne! On the side, Claremont and Byrne were developing the Daughters of the Dragon in Deadly Hands of Kung-Fu, and then would add them into the ongoing Iron Fist comic. I do believe Jean is referenced / seen a few times around now as being Misty’s roommate. And of course, there is a major X-Men appearance that chronologically takes place right after X-Men #108 in Byrne’s last (or second to last) issue of Iron Fist.

One other thing I liked was Banshee hurling Black Tom to his death in self-defense. That is the realism the X-Men brought to the table that few other comics were doing, though it had been tested a few times already in the 70’s (Big John Buscema wasn’t shy about Thor killing his foes as early as 1971). Naturally this would be exploited until it was loathsome in the next 25 years, but at that moment it was very surprising.

X-Men #104
With the new X-Men still detached from the Prof / Jean / Cyke, we get another story in which Claremont reintroduces an X-foe to the all-new, all-different universe, and this time it’s the most major one of them all, Magneto. And in that, Claremont takes the first step in taking a standard, albeit well-rounded, super-villain and making him so much more. Basically, what Claremont does in this issue is try to brush off all the shabby Magneto stories that took place since the X-Men went on hiatus (in Inhumans, Avengers, Defenders…the last one especially) and restoring the X-Men’s greatest foe to being someone who deserved that moniker. He quickly restored him physically—and with what a grand entrance on that splash page!--and then by issue’s end he restored him in the sense that he actually defeats the new X-Men! It’s a very sharp decision, and one that was not easily made in those days. A clear victory by the villain? Surprising, effective and very daring.

It also sets the stage for the long transformation Magneto will undergo. First his victory; later the “draw”; and ultimately, his defeat…which in turn sets him down a different path to possible redemption. All the while, Claremont gives Magento perhaps the best back story of any Marvel “villain”. He’s definitely a candidate for single most interesting character during the entire run.

The other major accomplishment of this issue was taking the walk-on “housekeeper” and turning her into the Moira MacTaggert we all know and love. We quickly learn she’s so much more in the form of a brilliant scientist with a complex backstory that involves Professor X. Even better, the concept of Muir Island is established, which provides yet another awesome location for the X-Men to continually revisit (another of Claremont’s strengths).

For a single story issue, #104 also is chock full of supporting characters, as Claremont continues to establish the mutant universe in the MU. Madrox, the first mutant he ever created in a recent Fantastic Four giant-sized, is brought into the series as an assistant to Moira, which is the role he’ll play for over 10 years. For me, that only makes him more interesting and I wonder if readers were requesting more from him?

The X-Men had been bickering pretty regularly since their introduction but you get the sense that they are started to coalesce as a team…with some exceptions. The big one is the Cyclops / Wolverine tension and it stands out as everyone else seems to be coming together while the rift between them seems to get louder. It’s one of the key characteristics that set Wolverine apart in these early days, and legend has it that it led to letter after letter of fans writing in to get rid of him. That relationship between Cyke and Logan works especially well with a team of only about 6 heroes. It has often been duplicated but its never been quite as successful.

The issue ends in an incredibly insane way as well, with page after page of big things and lingering subplots. I found that especially odd. You get:
…the Ani-Man known as Dragonfly appears to escape…but to where? Does anyone know? I have no idea! Iron Fist?
…Magneto triumphant! Shocking!
…the first hints of Proteus dropped waaaaaaaaay in advance of that story. Personally, I love this dangling subplots. This one is like 23 issues in advance!
…The first Starjammers!
…the first “real” Lilandra appearance!
…round two with Eric the Red and at last Polaris & Havok again!

These issues, leading into the first Shi’ar story, are the issues that I think really start to move the A-N, A-D X-Men towards being the mutants we all know and love by establishing a lot of the important characteristics of them individually and as a group, while also shedding some of the initial plot points / elements that weren’t quite essential to moving forward.
Lardy, your comment on Ororo's look reminded me of a plot point towards the end of Claremont's run (after you stopped collecting) where Storm dies, is reborn and then is a little girl, and later is restored. At some point she is analyzed by a physician and they comment that she is the perfect merger of all the planet's races into one person, referencing her eyes as being Asian.

This plot point was never followed up on again as far as I know.
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
X-Men (2nd half of) #101 - #103

I like that we get more information on Banshee and that’s its pretty straight-forward. Thus far we have mysteries into the pasts of Wolverine, Storm, Colossus and Nightcrawler, not to mention implied “things we never knew before” about Professor X. It’s nice to a character whose history we have a good sense of. This mirrors the fact that Banshee is basically the most stable of all the X-Men now, including Cyclops. Between this story and the following Magneto story, he essentially assumes the role as deputy leader / second-in-command (with Magneto even paying him a lot of respect vocally). Lardy mentioned how nice it is to read these stories with Sean and I’ll echo that. He really adds a nice element to the earlier stories. We’ll also later see him take on the role of being Wolverine’s friend (when others aren’t quite on board), a bit of an older brother to Storm, and the one Cyclops can lean on. Naturally, when any character has this role, they ultimately have to be removed so the others are left without that crutch of support—so its pretty great to see it all play out.



I had forgotten how important Sean was in the early days of the New X-Men, but your analysis is spot on. It's really a shame they wrote him out when they did. The X-Men had a stable lineup during those days, and they felt like family. As with any family, when one member leaves it's never the same. The X-Men transitioned into something else with Sean's departure--whether for better or worse remains to be seen.

I'd also forgotten about the elves and Nightcrawler's ability to blend into shadows. Now that I think about it, that image of him lying half invisible in the shadows was quite eerie--another reason why this book was so special: It was full of surprises.
^ I think I kinda nailed it in one of my reviews on the previous page when I summed up Banshee's character as "comfort food".

You're welcome! grin
I can't find your review just now, Lardy, though I know I read it previously. However, I'm not sure "comfort food" describes Sean's role on the team. "Comfort food" suggests something easy, soft, something to fall back on when you've had a stressful day. Sean was much more than that. He was someone who could call Xavier by his first name, who was experienced enough to be second in command of the team, and someone who had a varied yet straightforward past (as Cobie suggests): He was from Ireland, had a castle there, loved country music, and had once been a super-villain. Sean Cassidy had been around the block a time or two. He was the elder statesman of the team, but an active participant, unlike Xavier.

Comfort food? More like someone whose age and experience validated the X-Men's ongoing mission, much like Beast (Kelsey Grammar) served in the third film.



I dunno, Huey. With an excess of angst, edginess, personality conflicts and growing pains going on with the others, I think the analogy is at least somewhat valid for Sean. Sean was the grown-up, the dad, in a group of embattled young adults (yeah, Logan's not "young", but his problems mirror those of the young). He was the stable, kind, cool-headed member in an unstable group for the other members, and the readers by extension, to rely upon. Yes, it's an oversimplification and one that's not meant to say that's all there is to the character, but I think there's something it.
Here's the comment I made, which was actually in regard to 98. That's why it was hard to find. Sorry! blush

Originally Posted by Paladin
It's also nice to see how big a part Banshee plays in these early stories before he's written out before too long. I find myself reading his scenes a lot and savoring them. I can't say that Sean is one of my favorites or that he's really an essential X-Man, but he is kind of a "comfort food" character in the mythos. I'll definitely enjoy him while he's still around as a regular.
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
Lardy, your comment on Ororo's look reminded me of a plot point towards the end of Claremont's run (after you stopped collecting) where Storm dies, is reborn and then is a little girl, and later is restored. At some point she is analyzed by a physician and they comment that she is the perfect merger of all the planet's races into one person, referencing her eyes as being Asian.

This plot point was never followed up on again as far as I know.


Hm. To me, it sounds like something best left forgotten. I'm perfectly fine with Ororo looking the way she does just because it's how she looks, personally! (Flashes back to Bill Mantlo's awful 'secret origin' of Northstar and Aurora... puke )
^Agreed. I never read the story in question, but it sounds like something I wouldn't enjoy. Some writers take things too literally.
Originally Posted by Paladin
Yes, it's an oversimplification and one that's not meant to say that's all there is to the character, but I think there's something it.


When you put it that way, it makes more sense to me.
BTW, it occurred to me--and is something easily missed--that the "Council of the Chosen" in the Sentinels story is later revealed / retconned to actually be the Hellfire Club. I believe this is shown in an issue of X-Men Classic in the back story. The Hellfire Club's active participation in developing Sentinels inspires Sebastian Shaw to make alliances and perform the coup necessary to take over the Hellfire Club and form the Inner Circle with Emma Frost, etc. It also explains Shaw's existing Government contracts which we later see.

You don't need to know any of that to enjoy the awesomeness of #98-101 but I enjoy how Claremont continually tied all of his stories together which in turn provided ongoing forward momentum in the series.
Originally Posted by Paladin
(Flashes back to Bill Mantlo's awful 'secret origin' of Northstar and Aurora... puke )


Asgardian Fairies... shake
Ah, is that the Sebastian Shaw link to the Sentinels. I had wondered.
X-Men 101-105

These are all very good issues. I like the battle against Juggernaut and Black Tom Cassidy (the latter, as Lardy said, was Claremont's first really inspired original villain). Not crazy about Storm's origin, though...I would have preferred something more fanciful; plus, sometimes Storm seems rather unworldly for someone who was forced to grow up as fast as she was. And while the outcome of Sean and Tom's one-on-one battle is very effective, I wish Claremont had dealt more with the effects it should have had on Sean (who, in an earlier issue, declared himself to be against taking a life). There's too much going on for a mere 17 pages an issue.

Around 104-105, Cockrum looks to me like he's burning out (after a fill-in in 106, he'll rally himself for a spectacular farewell in 107), but Claremont's really picking up steam. The battle against Magneto is breathtaking and shows that Claremont had a special understanding of Magneto from the start. Even more breathtaking is the Phoenix's battle against Firelord, an inspired choice of opponent.

Finally, it's worth noting that Claremont rescued his creation Madrox from oblivion (he first appeared in a rather uninspired Giant-Size Fantastic Four story) by making him Moira's assistant. Otherwise, Peter David would never have been able to do all the wonderful things he did with Madrox.
X-Men 103

This was a really action-packed issue that allows each of the X-Men to shine. I especially absolutely loved the bit where Nightcrawler posed as Professor X to buy his pals some time to recover. Loved how Tom and Juggy are momentarily dumbfounded by an apparent mobile and leaping Xavier. Though the ruse doesn't get him too far, it says a lot about Kurt's daring swashbuckler core more than anything we'd seen of him so far. His Errol Flynn disguise hinted at it, but here, we really see it in action.

Meanwhile, there's the thing with the 'leprechauns' that I don't think we ever see revisited. One could argue that this is probably for the best, but I was left with some curiosity and more than a few questions. Were they truly the leprechauns of legend? Or were they a little more down-to-earth? And what was their connection to Cassidy Keep and especially its caretaker? It seems like there was story there, one I'd wager that Cockrum would like to have told.

I like that the new X-Men defeated Black Tom and Juggernaut before Cyclops and Professor X arrive as last issue heavily implied would be the case. We would be spared yet another helmet removal/Xavier mindblast defeat of the Juggernaut. Though their defeat of Juggy isn't definitive, the X-Men prove to be worthy adversaries.

X-Men 104

But the X-Men still have a long way to go as they prove no match for Magneto, even with Cyke finally arriving. This group has proven particularly badly matched against ol' buckethead, given the nature of Colossus' power and of Wolverine's claws (eventually, shown to be his entire skeleton).

Just as Nightcrawler got a particularly good moment to shine last issue, I thought Banshee looked great against Magneto here. Again, it was a very brief sequence, but Banshee proves to be the only one among the newbies to give the big bad any kind of a problem. In fact Magneto pretty much cheats, using an application of his powers I'll bet we've never seen before, to take Sean down.

I don't know if I'd qualify it as a complete victory for Magneto the way Cobie does, though. Cyke took him out of the fight for a moment, and the X-Men had to leave to save their mentor. Maggie seems pretty impressed, though!

I love how Cockrum drew Magneto, though, especially that full-page splash where he's revealed! The pencil work and the heavy inks by Grainger are really striking and memorable for such a big moment. Cockrum will have another chance to draw Magneto in issue 150, a story I've always loved and look forward to finally experiencing again.

Claremont's characterization of Maggie, though, barely foreshadows the great work Claremont will do with him. Here he's little more than your standard villainous megalomaniac. I'm curious to read his next appearance in a few short issues to see if there's any progression at all or if that will all have to wait for the storyline that culminates in 150.

Kind of an amusing episode with the hovercraft rental guy. Maybe it's as simple as his knowing their track record (already) with trashing vehicles? Didn't take long for them to prove him right, if so! lol Presumably he gets reimbursed..... shrug

Finally, this issue reminds me of two more (in addition to the Avengers stories that featured Magneto and the Sentinels) X-Men-related stories I've never read that appeared in the interim of the X-Men's cancellation and relaunch: the FF annual that introduced Madrox and the Defenders story that reduced Magneto to a child. Of course, Cobie and Fickles seem to think that I didn't miss much, judging from their references....



X-Men 105

So Lilandra finally arrives, the whole Eric the Red storyline comes to a head....and Phoenix takes on Firelord, former herald of friggin' Galactus! The latter is an effective means to showcase the souped-up version of Jean Grey and highlight that she is just as surprised as everyone else by what she can do. All of the others get squashed, but Jean more than holds her own. This clearly illustrates why Jean and the others will have to be separated for a long, else their adventures will become unentertaining routs with her in tow!

Lilandra and the Shi'ar race is another signature design of Cockrum's. Not terribly exotic for aliens but very memorable and just iconically Cockrum in style. There's a thru-line to the design of some of his creations that is just unmistakably his. It's harder to define than, say, the Kirby dots, et al, but it's there. I wonder if anyone else can distill what it is that recurs in his character and costume designs?

Hm. The Eric the Red reveal was pretty underwhelming. I guess that's why I couldn't remember who he really was...because there was nothing to remember! This must have been maddening to those who'd been following the book on its contemporary bi-monthly schedule. It seemed to me that somewhat of a mystery surrounding his identity was being set up, especially given Cyke's reference to having been Eric the Red himself in a prior adventure. (We'll see if we get an explanation for that particular coincidence.)

There's also a bit of a disconnect between the cliffhanger of Eric, Polaris and Havok lurking outside of Jean's apartment poised for attack last issue and the encounter Eric describes where he tricks Firelord into taking Alex and Lorna out to prove the X-men's hostility. With those sequences taken into account, either Alex and Lorna regrouped with Eric and waited for Firelord to attack but never themselves intervened when Eric did, or an extremely complex sequence of events happened between issues. Or maybe there was a No-Prize awarded? wink

I wonder, whenever Havok and Polaris reappear, if we'll get any kind of explanation for what happened next with them? shrug If not, it'll be kind of a disappointment, given the length of time they spent under thrall.
Rumor has it another comic book forum that Claremont wasn't allowed to show Jean beating Thor, so he used Firelord instead. I want to note that these issues are still relevant to comics being published today. The Phoenix stuff was the basis of Avengers vs. X-Men. It is also the premise behind the New X-Men/Guardians of the Galaxy crossover.
Oh, no doubt they're still relevant. Marvel built an empire off Claremont, Cockrum and Byrne's creations during this era and going forward.
As I'm reading the reviews, I realize I have no memory of X-Men 103-105 . . . not even the Magneto issue, which everyone appears to have loved!

I do remember being underwhelmed by the reveal of Eric the Red's identity. He was set up to be a major villain back in 97; however, events happened at such a rapid pace there was little time to be concerned. By the time of the Shi'ar issues, things really got to rocking.
X-Men 106

A very odd issue in the midst of a classic run. Yes, it's obviously a fill-in issue, either one hastily done to meet a deadline or, more likely, an inventory story that was filed in the editor's drawer and brought out when Cockrum needed more lead time on his next issue. Even so, Cockrum provided the framing sequence to make it fit (though rather awkwardly) into the cliffhanger for last issue.

The main reason I think it was an inventory story is from my main criticism of the story: we basically just got the same concept of Original vs. All-New X-Men in issue 100! Sure, they're not identical, but both deliver the same basic premise of our heroes facing dopplegangers of the originals. In 100 they're X-Sentinels, and 106 they're basically projections generated by the evil side of Prof X's psyche.

At least there are some minor differences. This time, the originals are dressed in their black and yellow costumes, whereas we saw their costumes as seen in the years prior to their cancellation, plus Prof X, Havok and Polaris duplicates in 100.

If I'm reading the credits correctly, this assumed inventory part of the story was actually written solo by Bill Mantlo. This would make sense as it would make little sense for Claremont to write two such similar stories, especially when this one takes place prior to 100 in continuity as captions and references specifically point out. I know it's a terrible nitpick, but the OCD part of me is thinking, "well why didn't someone cry 'not again' in 100 if something like this already happened or why didn't they suspected duplicates sooner?!?" Yeah, I know. I know. smile

But, yeah, if this story had been used at a time less close to the other's publication, it wouldn't have grated so badly because it was otherwise pretty decent. If nothing else, it's significant for introducing the idea of an evil side of Prof X, which would be revisited in the X-Men/Micronauts mini, and in the popular Onslaught epic (though I've never read that one).

The artist Bob Brown does a decent, if not particularly definitive, job of portraying all of the characters. The only glaring thing was that Cyke's visor looks entirely too big. His style is reminiscent of Dick Giordano's with a thicker line to it. I don't know if Brown did much comics work as I don't recall his name on anything I've read. It's worth noting, however, that Marvel Wiki mentions this issue was published posthumously for Brown as he had recently passed.
Bob Brown was a veteran comics artist whose career stretched back to the '40s. For me, he is best remembered as the artist of The Avengers in during the Swordsman/Mantis era.
X-Men #105
With X-Men #105, the Cockrum era really starts to take off and gains momentum story-wise, though art-wise there is definitely the odd sensation that all wasn’t totally kosher in the series. Mainly, you can tell Cockrum was feeling under the gun to reach his deadline, which is made more obvious by the disruptive fill-in the following issue. Yet, within, the story remains very sharp in places, showing hints of the grandeur to come. This “odd sensation” is seen in a few ways: first, the quick writing out of Havok and Polaris which feels odd since it appeared they had a much bigger role to play. We wouldn’t even see what happened to them other than an off-comment in one panel in #109 that explains they went to Muir Island; it would only be later in Marvel Team-Up that Claremont & Byrne tied this loose end up (by again referencing their beloved Thomas / Adams run in doing a Living Sphinx story). They wouldn’t show back up in X-Men until the Proteus saga. Also, I get the feeling that starting the issue in media res was done because Cockrum was feeling under the gun to meet his deadline; there’s really no reason for it, especially after the start of the Magneto issue and its an odd place to start.

As things are about to go more cosmic, Cockrum & Claremont bring in Firelord to get the ball rolling. In the 1970’s, Firelord was actually quite a popular character and his presence is a nice way to get readers of other series to check out the X-Men. Firelord was created almost single handedly by Gerry Conway in Thor’s series, and is an obvious prototype for his later creation, Firestorm. He’s really the second great herald of Galactus, and he had a whole series of stories in Thor by Conway and others. He works well here since he’s such a mega-powerful character that he immediately shows readers just how powerful Phoenix really is. This issue really starts the build-up of Jean as Phoenix in that regard, and its fun to watch.

In fact, I like how Claremont choose to combine the stories of Lilandra, the Phoenix and Eric the Red all into one, giving the sense that “all roads lead here”. This was surely the plan all along, but seeing it come together works wonderfully. That build-up in plot mirrors the grandiose scope of Phoenix & Firelord.

It’s also nice that just as Jean is becoming incredibly cosmic, her parents start to play an important role in the series, giving her another anchor back to Earth. The Greys actually appear quite a bit over the years—especially in relation to other X-Men’s non-powered family members.

One scene I really like is the Shi’ar coming to Earth and then turning around right when they realize Earth has fended off Galactus four times in the recent past. It’s a wonderful nod to Marvel’s past history and it shows the reader that the Shi’ar have a very real and proper place in it which we just haven’t seen. Again, this is a classic way to use continuity as an advantage without dwelling on it.

X-Men #106
And suddenly just as things are about to explode, we get a fill-in. This is a classic Bill Mantlo inventory issue, which he did numerous times for Marvel. Legend has it there are several that have still never seen the light of day. Mantlo, for the longest time in the 70’s, was the utility writer for Marvel that helped keep things afloat. He was actually a great writer, which would later be seen. His best inventory issue, IMO, is Iron Man #78, which is the be-all, end-all story about Tony Stark’s decision to stop being a weapon’s manufacturer (a critical aspect in the evolution of the character over time). I highly recommend everyone read that issue someday.

X-Men #106, however, is only okay. Like Lardy says, it’s obvious this was written well before it was published, and its not helped by the fact that we just had the old X-Men versus the new X-Men in #100. We also see the idea of “evil Professor X”, which I don’t like at all. We’ll later see this exploited again and again until it reaches and then exceeds its full potential.

Artist Bob Brown did the art, as HWW mentions. Claremont gives a very nice memorial to him in the lettercol, as he had passed away in between the creation of the issue and its publication.

Claremont is able to provide a nice wrap around for the issue which, in typical fashion, addresses a multitude of things: it resolves Firelord’s lingering status in the story; and it again gives heavy hints of the Moira / Charles past, as we get more and more insight into the character of Moira MacTaggart.
X-Men #107 – 108
The culmination of the Shi’Ar Saga explodes—at long last, as proclaimed by the letters pages—in #107 – 108 and it is the most magnificent thing to happen in the X-Men so far. Here, we see a level of grandeur achieved in few other places at Marvel since the end of the Silver Age, and the introduction of fantastic new character / idea after another. After spending the last few issues reestablishing classic X-Men elements, Dave makes sure his final issue introduces all the characters he’s been saving up, while Chris ensures each one is unique and special.

Of course, what’s most noteworthy about this story is the transition from Dave Cockrum to John Byrne (and Terry Austen). In an interview I read with Claremont once, he said he liked that the transition occurred mid-story, as if the torch was purposely being passed with great confidence. Cockrum would do that again with Paul Smith in the wonderful first Brood Saga. Although Cockrum had been a little rocky in #105, he absolutely delivers in a major way in #107 which is simply stunning from start to finish. A whole slew of characters, a wonderfully complex plot and an epic scope in far space make this issue stand out among all the others thus far. And thus, as the series was slowly being pushed to a monthly series, Dave makes his exit. There aren’t really words that can express how important he was to comics in general for what he accomplished on these initial X-Men issues, so I won’t try to; but I can’t help but echo others to say its nothing short of magnificent. Cockrum, of course, would return for a second run (which I never quite liked as much as the first though it was still enjoyable).

Which then leads into #108, which I’m pleased to say I own with two signatures: John Byrne and Terry Austen. Not a bad piece for the collection. In this issue alone, Byrne and Austen show why they are a contender for the greatest art team ever in comic books. The artwork is explosive—full of energy and dynamic from start to finish. Byrne is obviously not afraid to be creative in his panel layouts and action sequences. And his linework is just generally really attractive and nice to look at; he’s almost like the quintessential superhero artist. Austen’s inks, of course, play a major part, as he adds various touches that either soften things up, or add in moody shadow work, or just allow Byrne to shine through. Already with their first issue, I felt like “yes…this is the X-Men.”

The story itself benefits from Cockrum’s introduction of The Shi’ar Empire; the Imperial Guard; the Starjammers; the M’Kann Crystal and its guardians; D’Ken; the monster D’Ken feeds people to…whew!! It’s non-stop, especially when you consider the Imperial Guard and Starjammers is like 30 characters! Cockrum’s sense of design is ever present as each one just looks so dammed cool, too. We’ve spoken at length of the Imperial Guard on Legion World for like 15 years so its hard to get into all that again, other than to say the concept in general is nothing short of awesome. I remember the first time I realized that if the Guard was an obvious nod to the Legion…than Gladiator is actually a Superman analogue! It hadn’t occurred to me at first and that just made Gladiator all the more awesome in my mind.

The Starjammers too are an awesome addition to the X-Men mythos. Totally alien looking in a Cockrum way, they each have their own respective personalities which is vintage Claremont. And between Ch’od’s witty banter, Raza’s badass-ness and Hepzibah’s odd quirks, they can’t help but mesmerize your interest. Naturally, Corsair emerges as the lead and this is made by the awesome decision to make him Cyclop’s father. Even more awesome is that this bit of knowledge is held back from Scott for so long—the subplot goes on for YEARS! To me, that is one of the best subplots of the X-Men, and its made all the more interesting by the fact that Jean and Ororo both know about it. By the end of the story, you can’t help but immediately want to see the Starjammers again ASAP.

As always, it’s the character beats that make the entire story so amazing. In short order we get: Wolverine’s rage, temporary new costume which obviously inspires the later one and then being put in his place; Nightcrawler teleporting with two people for the first time and then later his secret fear of the other X-Men turning on him because of how he looks; Banshee taking down the Guardian using his wits; Raza vengefully throwing D’Ken into the crystal; Ororo’s support of Jean as we at last get to see the two being best friends; and just so much more.

For the first time, we also see that Cyclops’ power acts like the reverse of others, in which he has to actively turn it off. This adds a major new element to him, and explains his seriousness and aloofness. It’s such a small, yet critical part of who Cyclops is and what makes him so full of depth.

The real star, of course, is Phoenix, as Claremont showcases something unique to the Marvel U, and Byrne provides incredible and epic depictions of how she saves the universe. The entire sequence of how she saves them is incredibly abstract and difficult to relate to, yet Claremont constantly shows Jean winning the day by putting in terms that are as down to Earth as possible: “don’t panic”; “be strong”; “believe in yourself”. We get to understand the human part of Jean while she’s doing things as Phoenix that are mind-blowing. This is why it works and why she was such a hit as Phoenix. The ending is one that has been duplicated many times but it works very well here.

Byrne also shows his penchant for acknowledging the rest of the Marvel U in a series of panels. Despite all the bad things you read about him, it’s clear that in 1977 he knew the MU and DCU better than most and truly loved those characters. I also am glad to see Peter Corbeau back again in this story, as he remains an important part of the X-verse for so long.

Lilandra emerges with the heroes back on Earth, which I didn’t remember. This is good as thus far we are told about her connection to Charles but we haven’t really seen anything to make us believe it. I know she isn’t a character I love like many others, but eventually enough solid writing is done to make me believe they love each other.

I also like the throwback of Lilandra becoming aware of Charles via his defeating the Z’noxx. It feels as if it totally ties together the new X-Men with the old X-Men’s final run making it all feel seamless. From here on, there is no longer any “all-new, all-different”; rather, these are simply The X-Men.

All in all, two great artists showcasing what they have in a goodbye and a debut, with a writer that is firing on all cylinders.
X-Men #109
With #109, we see the full extent John Byrne’s impact hit the X-Men and all the positives that go with it. Fresh off his incredible debut, we get a nice “in between” issue that focuses purely on character bits, subplots and a small little story that will eventually blossom into a larger story. And much of that comes from Byrne.

It’s easy to forget that Marvel up until the 1990’s had an entirely different writing process than other companies past or present. The “Marvel style” saw the penciler actually plotting the issue with the writer eventually scripting the panels—all of this done after presumably a plotting discussion beforehand. That really makes Claremont a co-plotter / scripter, and Byrne a co-plotter / penciler. Byrne is notoriously a heavy influence in the actual plotting, and Claremont himself has acknowledged that many of the quiet, “downtime” moments during the run were Byrne’s idea. Claremont would take what Byrne laid out and deliver in spades—as evidenced by this issue—and he eventually incorporated this into his own method of writing, so that he would insist other artists do the same.

Thus, we get an issue that spends the entire first half (and more) tying up loose ends and focusing entirely on character. Byrne spends so much time showing the downtime, that it allows Claremont to add in elements he had only hinted at and also tie up loose ends. Byrne introduces the concept of Ororo’s attic, which hereafter becomes a major recurring element of her character; he also keeps the tradition of her preferring to be naked alive and well. Jean’s parents continue to play an important role as they—like Scott and the readers—get used to her new status. Jean and Ororo’s common knowledge of Scott & Corsair’s real history is hit on; Alex and Lorna’s status is quickly tied up; in one panel Claremont resolves the controversy of Colossus’ parents that was raging in the letters pages by establishing they exist; and later, the weird Colossus / Storm implied romance is discarded completely allowing for a wonderful sibling type friendship to develop.

Where the two really meet, and showcase their synchronicity, is the scene with Cyclops and Nightcrawler. This scene is, thus far, the single best sequence of the era. Byrne provides the set-up and Claremont knocks it out of the park; here, Kurt tries to lighten the mood around Scott who lashes out and Kurt gives him some tough medicine in an attempt to get him to stop feeling sorry for himself. In this sequence, they are able to show both Nightcrawler and Cyclops as fully realized characters while at the same time hit on the most important theme of the entire franchise. And it is done in such a way that clearly any two X-Men could have a similar scene that showcases both characters with deeper implications for the series at large.

In general, the issue is a big success. Claremont is at his best as a wordsmith without being overly burdensome, while Byrne’s art is terrific. Austen’s inks are brilliant, and the coloring is wonderful throughout. In fact, the coloring of this team, which includes Phoenix and Banshee with their wonderful green / gold, just works wonderfully with the rest of the team’s blues, yellows and reds.

The second half of the issue gets to what Byrne really wanted to do: focus on Wolverine in an attempt to take a much loathed character (though Cockrum and Claremont clearly loved him) and make him a fan-favorite, since after all they’re both Canadian. And even more, open up the initial plotline on Alpha Flight by introducing Weapon Alpha, who is eventually Vindicator. This is incredibly well done and establishes Logan’s love of nature as well as his penchant for not killing innocent animals while he “hunts”; it also shows Wolverine feeling as if he’s judged and a loner in the group. He says he doesn’t care what Ororo or any of them think—when all I can see is that he does. Thus begins the rehabilitation of Wolverine into fan favorite.

Weapon Alpha is a good villain too because he’s clever and smart. When shit goes sideways, he gets the hell out of there. The hints of a larger Alpha Flight threat make you interested in the follow-up, and the hints of a long history with Logan make him all the more interesting. The X-Men is good at providing a one-off story that is quick & easy, but sets up a much bigger story down the road.

It’s noteworthy that Byrne clearly was THE major influence on the entire wave of Image artists in the late 80’s (followed closely by Frank Miller). Todd McFarlane, particularly, has an art style that is very similar to Byrne’s at times, as inked by Austen.

Aside…
FYI, between #108 and 109, there is a side bar into Iron Fist #15 which takes place right as the X-Men arrive home (though probably between panels in #109 somewhere). It’s the first major appearance of the X-Men in another series and appropriately enough its by none other than Claremont and Byrne. Not to mention Dave Cockrum doing the cover, and even having a cameo with his wife Patty. In the story, we see Misty and Jean’s role as roommates used as a way to create a misunderstanding. Wolverine is actually in the Imperial Guardsman Fang’s costume still on the cover.

This is actual the last Iron Fist issue. Claremont & Byrne were also doing Marvel Team-Up along with X-Men at the time, and thus, they spill the issue into MTU #63-64 to tie up their plotlines. From there, they set up Iron Fist, Misty and Colleen to join Luke Cage in his title that very month (#48, Dec 1977) starting a story that ends with #50, as the series becomes Power Man and Iron Fist. And what many people forget is that Claremont and Byrne also did those issues as well. As you can see, they loved Iron Fist and the Daughters. The reason they gave up Iron Fist in the first place, of course, is so that they could focus on making X-Men monthly in a few issues.

BTW, the issue of Iron Fist prior to the X-Men guest appearance is, #14, the first appearance of Sabertooth.

I love, love, love that Iron Fist X-Men appearance. Storm getting the potato salad to the face was a classic scene, and I'm always surprised to remember that it wasn't actually in an X-Men comic!

X-Men 107

I will preface this review by saying that I think this issue is, hands down, the very best story thus far in the All-New, All-Different era. (I've gotten thru #110 in this re-read project, so you can put me down for it being the best of the first 18 stories, including GS 1.) To me, that's saying something because there's not been a real stinking dud in the batch...well, maybe 106 was close, but it was a fill-in. shrug

Where to start? Well, how about that beautiful splash page? Masterworks Vol. 2 actually uses the image, without lettering and blown up to fill the entire page without borders, on the page opposite the contents page for this edition. I can't blame Marvel for that choice at all because, to me, this image is Cockrum's best team group shot of his great initial X-Men run! (That awesome 2-page splash of X-Men vs. X-Men in 100 was his best action splash, imo.) As Fickles implied in an earlier post, this was an immediate sign that Cockrum was saving his best for last!

Turn the page and there's another awesome 2-page expertly-drafted splash with the X-Men to the far left, the Imperial Guard filling up the right side and spilling into the X-Men's space on the left and the M'Krann crystal dominating the middle background with D'Ken, Lilandra, Eric the Red and some intriguing supporting critters to their flanks. What a way to set up a fight and a big, cosmic story!

I found it amusing that Cyke tries for, like, a panel to talk and reason with the Guard but then immediately fires the first shot! And he kinda randomly takes out the Mentor character before we can really get an idea of what the character can do and exactly how much of a Brainiac 5 homage he is! lol

Actually, I kind of like how we don't get any explanation/introduction to many of the characters, unlike the trend of the time. There were just so many characters that Claremont just lets the action speak for itself. I mean, there's plenty of dialogue where you can infer a lot about their names and powers but no introductory captions or hammy expository dialogue like, "I am ______, and I shall now use my power of _____ to destroy you!" It's just balls-to-the-wall action, and the reader is taken for a wild ride. Maybe you don't learn who all of these characters are and exactly what they can do, but you find you're surprisingly okay with that!

My favorite bits in the fight belong to Nightcrawler. More than any of the others, he uses his wits and everything at his disposal against the Hobgoblin. Using his image inducer was a stroke of genius. I also loved how he found his opponent's power "wunderbar" and laments that he couldn't explore a friendship with such a fantastic opponent.

Then, he effects that spectacular rescue of Lilandra. Appropriately, Kurt comes off very Errol Flynn-like here, rescuing the damsel in distress. We see him pull off his first 2-person 'port here and see it take its toll. He'd eventually get better at this, but it's nice to see that his power is far from deus ex machine here.

I also enjoyed Wolverine throwing Oracle into Star-bolt to take them both out. It's a refreshing change from how we normally see male heroes fight a female foe....and very Wolverine!

Lilandra finally catches her breath long enough to fill us all in on the basics of her story and what kind of threat our heroes are facing. As I feared, though, no real explanation as to why Eric the red used an identity that Cyclops himself one used. I guess it's not important and can be chalked up to the research the character did as he plotted his course of action. I suppose he used the costume to confuse Cyclops and make it harder to realize the nature of the threat. But it still harkens my general disappointment that there was no splashy reveal behind the mystery.

Wolvie actually looks pretty cool in Fang's costume! One wonders though, how Logan took him out in such a way that the costume is left pristine without any claw marks! And I guess Wolverine just left him nekkid out there somewhere... smile

And just as the X-Men are starting to wear down against the sheer numbers of their opponents, enter another great group of Cockrum creations: THE STARJAMMERS! More than even the Imperial Guard, I think the Starjammers represent just pure Cockrum imagination and flair at their core. I think, had he wanted to or had gotten the greenlight, Cockrum could have ran with an ongoing Starjammers series and turned it into his quintessential concept that would showcase everything he would ever want to accomplish in his career. I think Cockrum was Nightcrawler and the Starjammers in his heart of hearts and just shined when he told stories centering around those characters. He would have more opportunities with those characters in the future, but I wish there could've been even more. It's simply the kind of thing he was born to do, imo.

It's well-documented on this site how the IG was a love letter/homage to the Legion. I won't make all of those comparisons, but it was lovely to spot them again and think, "Ah! That's _____!" over and over again. There were even a few that I wasn't so sure about as far as their Legion relevance and didn't even remember, like Astra for example.

Overall, just a great "kitchen sink" ending to Cockrum's run that left me in awe and wanting for more. And as good as next issue's conclusion is and how Byrne remains one of my all-time favorites, I'm left with a great appreciation of what Cockrum did for the foundation of this classic run. When I was a lot younger, I used to think Cockrum was pretty *meh* compared to Byrne, but I know better and am much wiser in my old age. I will savor this chance I had to rediscover what a great storyteller and creative force Cockrum was and look forward to his eventual return to the book after Byrne leaves his unforgettable stamp.
X-Men 108

I've loved me some John Byrne art for a long, long time. In fact his was the first style that I ever recognized over time and the first creator who I began to follow from project to project simply because he was doing it. So his arrival here on the book that made him a star is a very significant milestone in comics and for me.

And it's an auspicious debut. It had to be at least somewhat daunting for him for his very first issue to be the conclusion to a multi-part epic and following a run in which an artist revived a concept and made it so distinctively his own. But Byrne's talent was undeniable from the beginning, so if anyone could follow a master like Dave Cockrum, it's lucky for the fans that his successor would turn out to be another master himself.

That said, Byrne still had a daunting task this issue, even beyond following in Cockrum's shadow. The heart of that task is that the climax of this epic is just so metaphysical for a comic book! How does one begin to depict such a high concept as the Phoenix, with the support of her team, preventing a neutron galaxy from emerging and destroying and replacing our own? Honestly, I don't know if Cockrum or any of his or Byrne's contemporaries (or, for that matter, if even any modern artists, complete with an arsenal of coloring technology light years ahead of the time) could have depicted such a concept and the process described that prevented it. I think Byrne did the best he could with what he had, but I just don't know if this scenario translates all that well to the comic book medium, the limited 2-D visual beast that it is. It was a brave, mind-blowing choice of a threat, and not one that I'd ever suggest re-writing after the fact, but it's undoubtedly one that doesn't translate incredibly well here.

But what choosing such an epic, mind-blowing threat does succeed in is establishing what a cosmic, ultra-powerful bad-ass our girl Jean Grey has become practically overnight! I suppose that's why the creative team decided to go so devastatingly high-concept with what the X-Men faced here. I mean, what better way to established that Phoenix is so much more than just Marvel Girl souped up, right? Mission accomplished in that regard! nod

Otherwise, Byrne just does a great job in both maintaining the look of Cockrum's designs and concepts while also adding his own flair. I think the biggest thing that stands out here as even, dare I say, an improvement over Cockrum is how Byrne draws Wolverine without his mask. I think Byrne immediately makes Logan his own here and adds a lot of attitude and spunk to Logan's established features. He literally only draws Logan's face in three panels in this issue, but I already see the Logan I grew up with and loved here for the first time. This is not to belittle Cockrum's design and efforts on the character at all; he provided an awesome blueprint. I just think Byrne adds so much dimension and expression to his features right off the bat that takes the character to another level. In those panels I can immediately see all the great adventures to come for the character in a way that Cockrum only hinted at. No disrespect intended! shake

So a great start for a legendary artist stepping into the shoes of another legendary artist, albeit one saddled with a concept nearly impossible to depict in his debut. It's a short list, I'd wager, of two artists passing the baton so smoothly and with such a legendary pedigree left behind for the ages as Cockrum to Byrne did!

X-Men 109

And so we have Byrne's second issue, and it feels like the book is taking kind of a different direction already. From what I'm seeing, it's an excellent evolution from the foundation that's already been expertly laid by Cockrum. What feels most different is the extended look at the X-Men during their downtime. We'd gotten pages here or there in previous, but this one is almost completely dedicated to getting to know these guys better, something that would become a staple of Claremont's run in the years to come. It's a perfect palette cleanser after the virtually non-stop thrill-ride that the book had been on from issue 98 and the beginning of the Sentinels saga. If Byrne is indeed responsible for this, as Cobie says, then we fans owe him a lot; for ultimately, it's the kind of character development we see here that really endures us to the long, classic run more than anything else, I believe.

I thought it was interesting that after having shown the X-Men arrive at the end of last issue, Claremont and Byrne decide to flashback to some events preceding their arrival and fill in some important blanks. The bits explaining Lilandra's status were some what extraneous, as they basically dramatize what she explained at the end of last issue in her dialogue, but I suppose they serve the purpose of either reminding the reader of what's up with her or filling in any new or lapsed readers of such.

The most important bit of the flashback is the explanation for why Cyke hasn't been filled in on Corsair being his dad. These stories reminded me that readers had been clued into the truth about Corsair from the beginning. I incorrectly thought the readers found out when Scott did. Honestly, though, this secret being kept from Scott seems unnecessarily soap opera-y. I just don't see why the woman who loves Scott would ever keep such a monumental secret from him, promise or not. It's a plot device, plain and simple, and the explanation is feeble at best. But as I've heard said often, "Comic books are soap operas, and soap operas are comic books." I'll chalk this up to being another example of at least half of that statement being true. smile

Though we saw her topless in Kenya when Prof X recruited her in GS 1, I believe the scene in Ororo's attic apartment is the first in a long series of similar scenes showcasing nekkid Ororo watering her plants and generally being a nudist in her spare time. Here, we see Byrne strategically placing wafts of hair to keep this book safe for all ages. In the future it will entail a mixture of hair, wind and rain to preserve her modesty. How could teenage Lardy NOT have gotten into a book where a hot lady unwinds by frequently taking her clothes off, I ask you? love

Lots of other great character bits, all of which were outlined by Cobie, so I won't repeat all of that here. But I will say Wolverine's take on hunting without harming the animal has always been a nice bit to his character. A good counterpoint and about face from what the reader would expect from such a character.

I also think that Byrne's drawing of Storm and Ororo (along with Sean and Moira) on their outing in their bathing suits was really well-done and sexy. Flipping through the story, I was expecting some development of Peter's crush on Storm in that scene, but there really is no sexual tension there. I mean, you can read into it that maybe Peter's playing it cool and trying to be casual with her, but you expect at least a stray thought bubble from him, especially considering how smoking HOT she looks in that bathing suit! If Cobie's assessment is correct and the two have already moved into their more familiar brother/sister dynamic, it's interesting that there's no on-panel resolution to the ongoing subplot. Maybe I'm not far offbase thinking someone in editorial pooh-poohed it for being a little too taboo for the time? hmmm

Finally, Byrne makes an immediate impact by introducing James MacDonald Hudson and planting the seeds for one of his great creations, Alpha Flight. There's a lot there already and much evidence for what is later built upon, including establishing that Logan and James were friends. It's a quick battle, one so short that it almost seems like something obligatory to make the issue fit what readers expect in a comic book after what was mostly a talky series of pages. But given all the great character moments and the significance that this weapon Alpha has in the future of the Marvel Universe, this was simply an outstanding issue! I'd put it in second place (behind 107) among all the adventures of the All-New X-men thus far in the re-read.

Aside: I'm bummed to never have read Iron Fist 15. I kinda wish the Masterworks people had included it, as the DC Archives people probably would have for the Legion if it was a significant enough appearance. frown

X-Men 110

And Masterworks Vol. 2 comes to an end with a story illustrated by veteran artist Tony DeZuniga. As he is best known for his western comics, particularly for being the creator of Jonah Hex, it seems odd to see his work adorning the pages of an X-Men comic. But like many artists of the time, he probably was used to diversity of subject material and was available to pinch hit when needed (much like Bob Brown of 4 issues ago, I'd wager).

DeZuniga is the first to illustrate another of what would become an X-Men tradition: the baseball game. I'm not sure how many instances of this appeared during Claremont's long run (I'm guessing not nearly as many as most would think), but it's cool to see the very first one. And, as I recall with the later ones, the X-Men never seem able to keep their powers out of the game at hand. But apparently Peter can knock the ball much, much higher than a normal man can, even when not armored up?!? I'll chalk it up to jean exaggerating for comical effect, but it does somewhat challenge my conventional thought that he's completely normal in his regular form if I think about it too much... confused tongue

So here we have Warhawk as our obligatory threat. He's kind of an anomaly reading this as I can't recall whether he ever appeared again. I will assume he will somewhere at some point, but I honestly don't know. Of more pressing concern is just who hired him to test the X-Men. I honestly can't remember, but given how we've already begun to see evidence of Claremont's trademark long game plotting, the mind races with possibilities. For some reason, I'm thinking Hellfire Club, but I'm probably wrong. That's assuming this one doesn't dangle unresolved forever.

Another thing of note is the reference to Moira leaving. It isn't said exactly why she is or where she's going, but one has to assume she's returning to Muir Isle (which wasn't named in its first appearance, iirc) now that Charles is no longer ill. Lilandra is also conspicuous by her absence. This could have been an opportunity to develop her a little more in a casual setting.

Otherwise, there's not much to stand out in this issue. The plot is overall pretty generic and it feels like a placeholder while Byrne gets an issue off. DeZuniga's art is competent, but I like the darker, more stylized art he's known for. It's clear here that he's trying to tone it down to fit this genre and the book's style a little better. So kind of a "B" issue in the run and an easily skippable one if one is inclined to (just as 106 was) but not without its charms and some small significance in the form of the baseball game.
X-Men 106-110

This block of issues is like a sandwich where the bread is stale but the filling is exquisite.

My attitude about fill-ins has always been, if that's what it takes for the regular creators to do their best work, then so be it. And that's just what Claremont & Cockrum do in #107, a superb issue wherein, to paraphrase Lardy's perfect metaphor, they throw in everything but the kitchen sink.

I love the Imperial Guard and the Starjammers. I've written fanfics with all those characters in the past, and I hope to return to them one day. The one thing I don't love about this issue is Wolverine in Fang's costume. I've always adored the bright yellow spandex, I think it's an ideal counterpoint to Wolverine's machismo, and I'll be sorry to see it disappear towards the end of the Claremont/Byrne run and not come back til the early 90s.

Byrne does a thoroughly professional and respectable job in his conclusion to the cosmic saga in #108, but it's in #109 that he first shows how good he really is for the X-Men (I haven't read Iron Fist #15). And not just the much-discussed character scenes. The panel of James MacDonald Hudson bursting out of the ground to Wolverine's shock is one of my favorites of all time. The battle is worth noting for its sense of real danger and emotion (Hudson being in over his head, and Sean's rage at Moira's accidental injury.)

After such a great issue, #110 was almost doomed to be a letdown, and it is. I don't think even Byrne could have saved this story. In answer to Lardy's question, I don't think Warhawk was ever seen again and I don't think we learned whose orders he was following, although if anyone at Legion World knows for sure, it's Cobie.
Lardy sums up #110 quite nicely so there isn't much to add. I'll say Tony DeZuniga does a nice job stepping in with some beautiful art; but by now in hungry for more Byrne / Austen and can't quite forget that during the issue. Of course, the whole reason for the fill in was to give Byrne a little extra time to get ahead of schedule to take the title monthly (all the while doing Marvel Team Up and finishing his Iron Fist run). One thing DeZuniga does is draw attractive women--that Jean! Wow!

Love seeing the first X-Men baseball game, a tradition I dearly love. The tempo has been set for steady characterization by now so we get more Wolvie pining for Jean, Moira's exit to a more proper status quo and even more hints to Proteus, the ongoing framework for Banshee to make his eventual exit (which to be fair was laid down in X-Men #94) and other nice bits.

Warhawk is pretty run of the mill. Claremont would perfect the same motif with a better enemy in the form of Arcade, whose flare for the dramatic and bloodthirsty nature make him so much more interesting.

FYI, one can see the paid circulation is up from 100,000 ave about 12 issues earlier to 125,000 ave. The title is still below the radar but picking up steam. The latest issue was 130,000, so we can see the series is steadily climbing with great momentum.

On Warhawk
Like so many other characters that weave in and out of the X-Men's world, Warhawk is part of a larger Chris Claremont tapestry. Claremont loved using the same characters again and again, even though many only ever appeared a few times or even once in X-Men. Warhawk was created by Claremont as an Iron Fist villain when Fist was still in Marvel Premiere in 1975 or 1976. Claremont used him again during his brief run on Black Goliath in #2-3, which incidentally are two comics I finally bought (along with the rest of the brief run) a year or so ago at a small convention though I haven't read them yet. He next appears here, in X-Men, and from here battles Iron Fist once more after the hero has joined Luke Cage as a co-star. At that point Byrne had already moved on, and it may have been Claremonts final Iron Fist story (or close). Warhawk appeared one more time in the post Claremont years during the era Marvel was milking anything X-related, in a Maverick backup by a then Liefeld-cloned Mark Texiera.

And yes, Fanfie is right--it is indeed the Hellfire Club who hired Warhawk. I believe that is actually confirmed by Shaw in the coming issues.

You can see Iron Fist was an important comic to X-Men in the early days, as was Marvel Team-Up. Later, it would be Ms. Marvel, Spider-Woman and Dazzler. Claremont liked to bring in characters he invested in earlier; Tigra is another one of these, as he worked on her solo adventures pre-Avengers.
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
And yes, Fanfie is right--it is indeed the Hellfire Club who hired Warhawk.


*ahem*

Originally Posted by Paladin
Of more pressing concern is just who hired him to test the X-Men. I honestly can't remember, but given how we've already begun to see evidence of Claremont's trademark long game plotting, the mind races with possibilities. For some reason, I'm thinking Hellfire Club, but I'm probably wrong.


So, yeah, actually it was Lardy.... wink

But I think you hit the nail on the head about what makes the recent fill-in art by DeZuniga and Brown so disappointing: When the regular artists were Cockrum and Byrne, it's tough NOT to be let down!
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
The one thing I don't love about this issue is Wolverine in Fang's costume. I've always adored the bright yellow spandex, I think it's an ideal counterpoint to Wolverine's machismo, and I'll be sorry to see it disappear towards the end of the Claremont/Byrne run and not come back til the early 90s.


We'll agree to disagree there. I miss Wolvie's brown and tan costume and disapproved when they brought back the yellow and blue. It may be simply because that's what he was wearing when I discovered him.
I like the both but I've been pining for the brown and tan one for a long time now.

Btw, I see we forgot to mention a pretty major X-appearance which took place around #101. Nightcrawler had a major 2 part guest stint in Amazing Spider-Man in a story they also featured the Punisher, and in an era when ASM had very few guest stars. By Len Wein and Ross Andru, it's a fantastic story and the first time I ever "met" Kurt or any of the all-new X-Men. He comes across awesome in ever way from personality to powers to look to all else that makes him so special. I guess this is probably the earliest major guest shot for any of them.
Really?!?! What issues did Kurt guest in? Don't recall that at all! confused
I believe it's ASM #161-162. It's the third Punisher story (in Spidey at least).
Hm. I looked it up, and you remember correctly. Can't recall if I've ever read this one before, either in the originals or in a Marvel Tales reprint. I'll be sure to check when I go thru the attic more this summer.....
It's interesting, though, that the ASM appearance occurred before the X-Men's popularity took off. Of course, Wein being the writer explains it.
Originally Posted by Paladin
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
The one thing I don't love about this issue is Wolverine in Fang's costume. I've always adored the bright yellow spandex, I think it's an ideal counterpoint to Wolverine's machismo, and I'll be sorry to see it disappear towards the end of the Claremont/Byrne run and not come back til the early 90s.


We'll agree to disagree there. I miss Wolvie's brown and tan costume and disapproved when they brought back the yellow and blue. It may be simply because that's what he was wearing when I discovered him.


Good point, Lardy. When I myself discovered him, it was through a combination of the immediate post-Claremont aftermath and the original Dark Phoenix Saga trade, so it makes sense that I'd favor the yellow.

And, Cobie, thanks for setting the record straight on Warhawk and for the reminder about Nightcrawler's guest appearance in ASM. I'll have to re-read that soon. If you all will forgive the tangent, I think it's amazing (no pun intended) how consistent the quality of ASM was for its first 200 issues.
Now that we know Warhawk had appeared prior to the issue, I find myself slightly stunned that there were neither references by the character to having faced Power Man (for example) accompanied perhaps by a quick flashback panel or even an editorial caption referencing prior appearances that was common practice for the times and used in many other instances throughout this re-read already. It doesn't hurt my enjoyment or anything, but I'm still kinda shocked! nod
That reminds me of how shocked I was that Mystique first appeared in Ms. Marvel!

Oh, and we forgot another major X-appearance: their guest shot in MTU Annual #1! Their first major appearance outside of the main series, it was also right around #101. And unfortunately, I've never read it!
^ Interesting! And a Spidey comic that Cobalt Kid doesn't HAVE?!?! ElasticLad

Here's the cover and description of the issue, courtesy of mycomicshop.com:

"The Lords of Light and Darkness!" Guest-starring Spider-Man and the X-Men. Plot by Chris Claremont, Bill Mantlo, and Bonnie Wilford. Script by Bill Mantlo. Art by Sal Buscema (breakdowns) and Mike Esposito (finishes). Cover by Dave Cockrum. Something else else has gone terribly wrong at a top secret government installation in the Nevada desert! Meanwhile in the same vicinity, the World Conference on Man-Made Mutation is taking place onboard a 747 airplane! The Daily Bugle sends a photographer, Peter Parker, to cover the airborne conference; and Professor Xavier and his students are also present to keep an eye on the proceedings! But when a group of robots attacks the plane in mid-air, the Amazing Spider-Man meets the New X-Men for the first time! After safely landing the plane, the heroes discover the source of the problem: an underground "nest" teeming with deadly radiation! However, unbeknownst to the web-slinger and the X-Men, eight mystically-powered beings are waiting down below...and they want the power of Phoenix! Can your friendly neighborhood Spider-Man and the Uncanny X-men beat the Lords of Light and Darkness? And prevent a global meltdown? X-men lineup: Banshee, Colossus, Cyclops, Nightcrawler, Phoenix, Storm, and Wolverine. (Notes: The wall-crawler's southwestern adventure continues in Marvel Team-Up 53. This issue was the first appearance of the New X-Men outside their own title. This story was reprinted in Marvel Tales 235 and 236.) 48 pages Cover price $0.50.

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I'm not sure whether I have that or (more likely) have read it in a Marvel Tales reprint. It doesn't ring a bell.... hmmm
Oh, I forgot to ask you about this last week:

Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
in one panel Claremont resolves the controversy of Colossus&#146; parents that was raging in the letters pages by establishing they exist


This was a controversy?!? I mean they were right there in GS 1! Can you explain what this was about for those of us who don't have the original issues to look at the lettercols?
Originally Posted by Paladin
Oh, I forgot to ask you about this last week:

Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
in one panel Claremont resolves the controversy of Colossus&#146; parents that was raging in the letters pages by establishing they exist


This was a controversy?!? I mean they were right there in GS 1! Can you explain what this was about for those of us who don't have the original issues to look at the lettercols?


So in Giant Sized #1, we see Colossus' parents first hand. Then somewhere during the Sentinels story (I think) there is mention that Colossus' parents were dead. So in the letter's pages from like #100 onwards, fans are writing in demanding to know which one is true. It actually becomes a bit of a joke with the editor playing coy and simply saying 'maybe one day we'll find out!'. So it was good to see Claremont address that at last in #109.

Originally Posted by Paladin
^ Interesting! And a Spidey comic that Cobalt Kid doesn't HAVE?!?! ElasticLad
I'm honestly not sure if we have it or not...I have to check! Marvel Team-Up was a comic my father never cared about one way or another, so I spent the last 15 years tracking down most of the issues. I believe I've got them all but for the life of me don't remember if we have any of the annuals. I've definitely never read the story. There are a lot of MTU issues I've never read, particularly most of them after #100. Even though it starred Spidey, it never really felt like a Spidey series to me for some reason, probably because not much ever happened with his supporting cast. The one great exception was the Wrath Saga with Iron Man which made Jean DeWolf such an awesome character.

However, this reminded me--and I unfortunately confirmed it--that we definitely DON'T have the first two all-new X-Men Annuals! Those are issues we don't have and I've never read. I always seem to forget about them (as does my Dad) and we just never look for them. Hmph. I need to figure out how to read those when we get to them!

Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
And, Cobie, thanks for setting the record straight on Warhawk and for the reminder about Nightcrawler's guest appearance in ASM. I'll have to re-read that soon. If you all will forgive the tangent, I think it's amazing (no pun intended) how consistent the quality of ASM was for its first 200 issues.


Fanfie, you know I'm in total agreement there! Sometimes I think I should rewrite my review of Spidey's history (and finish it) in the All-Spidey thread, as the way I wrote it in 2003/4 doesn't have as much depth as I'd like (specifically on the creators) and I was going simply by memory alone at the time instead of looking at any actual issues.

I would say the first #300 issues of Spider-Man are consistently fantastic with the small exception of the gap between Woflman and Stern which had a few stinkers (mainly courtesy of Denny O'Neil) and the poor decision of Peter and MJ getting married. Even the first 25 or so of McFarlane's issues with David Michellinie were great until it became more about Todd's art than anything else. ASM was Marvel's flagship series and they basically always delivered.
X-Men 111

So this issue begins a kind of trilogy, as the first issue ends with the return of Magneto. It starts off, though, with the feel of a fun, kooky standalone as our X-Men are inexplicably turned into the denizens of a circus sideshow.

Our eyes and ears for unraveling this mystery is none other than Hank McCoy, the Beast. The Beast is the lone original X-Man not to appear in any of the relaunch stories, other than a few brief cameos and as a doppleganger in 100 and 106. But here we have the bonafide original in all of his blue furry Avenger-y glory.

He is portrayed fittingly here as kind of a gumshoe trying to get to the bottom of a mystery, trenchcoat and all. It's not all that easy for him to crack because he's never met these new X-Men and can't be totally sure it's them. Finally, he runs into the two people he does know, Jean and Scott, and confirms that something's wrong. (Though his moment of doubt with the vampy Jean is pretty comical!) Things go downhill quickly for him from there, though.

I like that it's Wolverine who breaks free first. And I wonder if the scene in which he helps Jean break through would be rendered in modern comics. It was a little shocking to see him slap her to snap her out it. I personally thought it was a good scene in that it was clear that Logan took no pleasure in it.

With Jean freed, the others quickly follow suit and the defeat of Mesmero, the obscure mutant hypnotizer behind their situation, is imminent. But then, shockingly, enter MAGNETO!

Byrne gets a chance to render the X-Men's archfoe in a beautiful full-page shot to end the issue. In fact the story is fairly mediocre, but the quality of his art elevates the content significantly. Again, I'm particularly fond of his Wolverine, and the extended looks of the character, both in and out of costume, do nothing but reaffirm that fondness. One thing to note is how Logan's arm hair disappears when he's in costume. Byrne has said that Marvel editorial dictated that particular strange differentiation for a while, something that frustrated him a good bit.

So, anyway, this issue was mostly notable for being a lead-in to the next Magneto story and, by extension, the next batch of the X-Men's continuing road from one adventure to another. It's not particularly memorable or terribly good, but it's a nice diversion and would lead to another series of great stories. The sideshow versions of the characters rendered by Byrne were pretty fun, though!
X-Men 112-113

Of personal note is the fact that 112 is the earliest individual issue of this long Claremont run that I own. My personal unbroken run on the book begins with 137 and continues until some time after 300, but I did make an effort to acquire some older issues for a while, especially when I was in my teens, to attempt to complete the run. So I have a few, scattered, mostly beat-up back issues in this era. It was the original trade collecting the Dark Phoenix saga and the "Classic X-Men" reprint series that eventually sated my desire to own the whole run because it was only ever my desire to read all of their adventures.

So here, we get the second battle with Magneto, one that is not abbreviated like the one back in 104. We immediately get a demonstration of how awesome his power can be in the simplest way possible: by discovering that the trailer that they are all in is miles above ground. Even the part where he lowers Mesmero to the ground is kind of awesome in its own way.

Even cooler, though, is when we end up at Maggie's new base--inside of a volcano! Now, how "classic villain"-esque is a volcano base, eh? The shot of the structure itself underneath is just classic Byrne. It's one thing Byrne brings to the table that distinguishes him from Cockrum: his knack for rendering imaginative and futuristic-looking tech. Again, that's not meant to put down Cockrum at all--I loved Cockrum's alien bug ship designs for example--but it's hard not to see Byrne's particular stamp on structures like Magneto's base and, soon, Garrok's fortress in the Savage Land. It's just one of those things that help Byrne put his own stamp on the book.

From there, we get the obligatory fight scene. As Scott observes, the X-Men attack as individuals, instead of as a team, and it dooms them against such a powerful foe. I like, though, that there are moments when they almost have him. Storm's fear of killing him causes her not to press her advantage; Phoenix surprises him with her massive power upgrade until it suddenly cuts out on her; Wolverine nearly tags him while he's distracted by Jean. But in the end, Magneto prevails, and he's got a particularly wicked fate in store for them. I especially love that close-up on Maggie's face to end 112 on that cliffhanger.

113 opens with Magneto wreaking havoc with no one to oppose him. The narration explains that these raids are the source of all of that high technology we're seeing him use. Meanwhile, Prof X and Lilandra are still on vacation. Chuck's sensing something's wrong with his X-Men, but apparently the happy couple are too busy cavorting to turn on a TV and see all the Magneto coverage we've just seen. That may have provided him with a clue! smile

So the X-Men are as helpless as babes and being cared for by the creepy robot 'Nanny'. Long before I ever read this issue, I remember reading a scene (probably circa 150) where Storm encounters Nanny's remains and visibly shudders at the memory of her. I remember being curious about the original story referenced, but never got to read it myself until Classic X-Men series reached that point some years later. It was nice to eventually complete the circle.

This leads to Storm's lockpicking skills being shown for the first time. I like that it didn't come completely out of the blue because there was a reference to her life as a thief during her origin sequence in 102. Even better, Claremont wouldn't forget the skill either and would bring it into play in many future instances. I also like that the first attempt doesn't immediately succeed, and the failure takes an emotional, very human toll on her.

Off-panel, she succeeds in freeing them all, and when Magneto returns, they finally fight against him as a team and with a solid plan. But before they can defeat him, something crucial gets smashed, and the volcano is able to assert it's destructive power. Magneto gets away, and it looks like only Jean and Hank survive....or so they would think, even as the other X-Men will think for a while that those two perished. And Jean and the X-Men would be separated for a good while because of this.

In my mind this battle with Magneto solidifies Byrne's place as Cockrum's rightful heir. And there are many great stories to come!
This was a great couple of issues. I remember how creepy Nanny was, and how well the art sold the frustration that (particularly) Wolverine and Storm were experiencing. Claremont & Byrne also, IIRC, did some good work portraying Cyclops as the 'grown-up' of the group, pulling things together and getting the best out of everyone (and yet also being flexible enough to adjust his plans on the fly for when Jean did her own thing, or Logan didn't play well with others).

The end, with Beast narrating how impressive it was that Jean just basically blasted her way through a mountain to get them to safety, was cool, as was the bit where he estimates that he won't make it more than a mile or two, and then collapses within a hundred yards... (IIRC, it's been decades since I read any of this stuff!)

Great stuff, and particularly cool how aspects of the characters that have nothing to do with their mutant powers (such as Ororo's lockpicking skills, Scott's leadership, Hank's brains and Logan's determination) end up helping them carry the day.

These aren't just a collection of super-powers, they are becoming fully realized characters, and that's pretty awesome, particularly in that it didn't subtract from the action or adventure or super-powered whizbang of it all.

Characterization happened *during* the action, and was married to the storyline organically, it didn't require a 'time out issue' where everyone sat around a table talking.

Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid


So in Giant Sized #1, we see Colossus' parents first hand. Then somewhere during the Sentinels story (I think) there is mention that Colossus' parents were dead. So in the letter's pages from like #100 onwards, fans are writing in demanding to know which one is true. It actually becomes a bit of a joke with the editor playing coy and simply saying 'maybe one day we'll find out!'. So it was good to see Claremont address that at last in #109.


Interesting. I don't remember coming across that reference to his parents being dead during the re-read. I either missed it or forgot it somehow or maybe they actually edited it out in the Masterworks... hmmm

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However, this reminded me--and I unfortunately confirmed it--that we definitely DON'T have the first two all-new X-Men Annuals! Those are issues we don't have and I've never read. I always seem to forget about them (as does my Dad) and we just never look for them. Hmph. I need to figure out how to read those when we get to them!


I definitely have, and have read, all the Claremont-era annuals. Annual #3 (featuring Avengers foe Arkon) is up soon chronologically and is reprinted in the next volume of Masterworks. (The first 2 annuals were original-era X-Men and both only reprinted previous material.) I'll fit in some comments about that Arkon story when I get to it.
Originally Posted by Set
(IIRC, it's been decades since I read any of this stuff!)


You have a GREAT memory, Set! nod

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Characterization happened *during* the action, and was married to the storyline organically, it didn't require a 'time out issue' where everyone sat around a table talking.


Ab-so-LUTE-ly!!! Modern writers writing in the Bendis style could learn a LOT from Claremont and what he did with Cockrum and Byrne! That's one of the delights of this re-read: re-experiencing old school storytelling and really feeling like you get so much more bang for your buck in every issue!
Originally Posted by Paladin
Originally Posted by Set
(IIRC, it's been decades since I read any of this stuff!)


You have a GREAT memory, Set! nod


I think it's that so much of this run was so memorable.

The savage land stuff? The upcoming hellfire club bits? So many small parts that went on to become big points. (Wolverine slashes up some dudes, and they get cyborged up and are showing up *ten years later*.) Could anyone have imagined that Sebastian Shaws emotionless serving girl Tessa would go on to become Sage? That Emma Frost would become an actual X-Man, and effectively take over Jean Grey's role? It's amazing to me how much the modern day X-Men are still being defined / effected by stuff that was first introduced during this run, and how many of the classic moments from this run have been re-used in other media.

(Such as the scene where Jean shows Mastermind the universe, expanding his consciousness and breaks his tiny brain, later recycled in sci-fi shows like Andromeda *and* Star Trek: Next Generation *and* Babylon 5. Too much light makes the baby go blind, indeed!)

It wasn't just the X-Men 'though. Marvel was really on top of it's game in these years, IMO.

In talking about Warhawk, it got me thinking more about the various series Claremont was also writing at Marvel during the early years of his X-Men run, and how they had countless characters that tied into the X-verse or later did so. There really is a grand tapestry to Claremont’s work that had all kinds of people coming in and out of the X-Men’s lives. To a lesser extent, the same goes for Byrne and Cockrum, who often were Claremont’s collaborators elsewhere too. If no one minds, I’ll delve right into it…

DISCLAIMER - as I was writing this post it got incredibly lengthy; I thought about putting it in another thread so not derail out discussion but I feel as if both Lardy and Fanfie would appreciate keeping it all in one place.

PART 1
In his very first story he was given full credit in, Claremont had Stilt Man battle Daredevil and the Black Widow in Daredevil #102. He would regularly return to both the Stilt Man and the Black Widow thereafter.

It’s worth noting that early in his career, Claremont had a few go-rounds with Dracula in Vampires Unleashed and Giant-Sized Dracula. He also wrote Satana in Haunt of Horror (and possibly in Vampires Unleashed—I’ve never known which character he wrote there). Later, Dracula would play a role in X-Men where he inevitably has a thing for Storm (like so many other strong leading antagonists). He would also return to Satana fairly regularly outside of X-Men, including her battle with the Son of Satan in Marvel Spotlight #24. These early Satana stories feature a lot of demons that are probably a prototype for his later ideas with the N’Gari.

As mentioned, Claremont also created Madrox the Multiple Man in Giant-Sized Fantastic Four #4, which is really the best thing about that story. He would have been another long-forgotten throwaway character if Claremont wasn’t determined to keep him relevant, as he did so many others that eventually became really great parts of the MU.

Claremont also wrote several war stories early in his career on War is Hell, where he used the pre-existing throwaway character John Kowalski. Later, he’d move Kowalski into his run on Man-Thing where John played a big role.

Tigra was another female lead character that Claremont had an obvious affinity for, beginning with his writing her early solo adventures with Marvel Chillers #4 (after Tony Isabella transformed the former “Cat” sans costume, which went to Hellcat, into Tigra in Marvel Chillers #3). Interestingly, one of John Byrne’s earliest assignments was a Tigra story in Marvel Chillers #6 (though not with Chris—he only was there for #3). Tigra, of course, showed up in the X-Men later on, one of the many Marvel female superheroes Claremont tried to keep relevant like Ms. Marvel and Spider-Woman.

As mentioned, Claremont had Warhawk show up for a second appearance in Black Goliath #2 when he began a very brief run on that title even though it was doomed to cancellation almost from the beginning. Claremont clearly had an affinity for Bill Foster, as well as Hank Pym and Janet Van Dyne, as did John Byrne, since they would continue to appear in their stories, even if it wasn’t the X-Men that had those appearances. Also showing up in Black Goliath was the Stilt Man and the Centurion, a character Claremont would reuse in Ms. Marvel. Claremont would also introduced Regina Clayborne, almost as a walk-on, and then a few months later John Byrne would pick up the obscure character and use her in a Champions story, once again showing how in sync Claremont, Byrne and Cockrum were.

Claremont’s first ongoing assignment, of course, was Iron Fist. He no doubt loved the character, and the Daughters of the Dragon as well. Beginning in Marvel Premiere #23, he took over the series and introduced the aforementioned Warhawk. Colleen Wing was already a major cast member of the series (as was her father), and Claremont took an immediate liking to her. Misty Knight had previously appeared briefly in one issue, but it was Claremont (and then John Byrne) who turned her into the wonderful character she is today, as well as cemented both her partnership with Colleen and romance with Danny. Claremont also used Angar the Screamer, a character he would return to many times (which leads to me believe he may have had an behind the scenes role in Angar’s creation in Daredevil #100-101, especially since his first real scripting job was Daredevil #102). One other character introduced was Lt. Rafael Scarfe, Misty’s former partner, who would occasionally appear in Iron Fist and Marvel Team Up under Claremont’s pen.

Around the same time Claremont came on as writer of X-Men, he was joined by John Byrne on Iron Fist, which soon spun out into its own monthly series, and it was here that the Daughters of the Dragon became who they are today. I’ve never read this whole run but I’ve heard it’s quite excellent. Eventually as we all know, Jean became Misty’s roommate and appeared a few times (with Scott) leading to the eventual big appearance of the X-Men in Iron Fist #15. They also co-created a character that would much later become a major X-character, Sabertooth. Interestingly enough, Sabertooth was for the longest time a second rate Power Man / Iron Fist villain before the Mutant Massacre made him a star.

Along with the main series, Claremont also did a few stories in Deadly Hands of Kung-Fu that featured Iron Fist and / or the Daughters of the Dragon. The stories centered on a woman named Jade who was being hunted by Dhasha Khan, an agent of the N’Gari. I’ve never read these stories but its interesting that Claremont continued to expand the N’Gari’s role in the MU here (of all places). These issues also feature Bill Mantlo’s awesome White Tiger and his equally cool creation the Jack of Hearts. After a brief interlude, he returned again to Deadly Hands to feature the Daughters of the Dragon in their own story without Danny in #32-33 (which is where they are first given the moniker, Daughters of the Dragon). These are the final issues of the series, so I bet Claremont would have loved to keep doing more Daughters stories. He eventually would do a few more in random places such as a few years later in the random Bizarre Adventures #25, which had the Daughters of the Dragon not only as lead characters but on the cover alongside the Black Widow.

Claremont’s first foray into the world of Luke Cage took place in his first Annual, in which Claremont took the obscure character of Moses Magnum and his dangling plotlines from Gerry Conway’s Giant-Sized Spider-Man #4 and resolved them. Claremont would take a liking to Magnum after he established his Japan connections here and of course reuse him in X-Men.

Another series Claremont delved into early in his career (right after X-Men got going) was Captain Britain for Marvel UK, which he helped co-create with Herb Trimpe. Captain Britain and his world would be something Claremont returned to again and again, and of course be a big part of the extended x-universe. Though he's on issues #1-11 or so, it's not quite as much as one thinks considering it was a weekly magazine and each issue's story was only the size of a backup, with most the magazine being filled with other Marvel reprints. One thing Claremont does is establish Betsy Braddock, his twin sister, and Jamie Braddock, their older brother, early on though neither is similar to what they would become in the 80's when Claremont came back to them. Since it was weekly, Claremont only was on the series for like 3 months before moving on.

Chris Claremont’s third ongoing assignment with major staying power, while also doing X-Men and Iron Fist, was Ms. Marvel. Coming on with #3, he took what was amounting to be a pretty mediocre and forgettable character and tried making her a major player at Marvel. All these decades later he’s probably quite happy that it finally happened though not without a lot of pain in between. In Ms. Marvel, Claremont introduced a whole host of X-related characters: early on he used the Silver Age character Grotesk, who was famous for being the one to “kill” Professor X (when it was really the Changling) and thankfully had Grotesk die so that random character was removed from the board; he also had Peter Corbeau guest star and then revealed a large back story where Michael Rossi was once Carol’s mentor and lover. Deathbird appears in the same Michael Rossi issue, and later comes back another time or two to tussle with Carol, thereby tying her directly into the Shi’ar / Starjammers / X-Men universe. It’s interesting that Deathbird appears at least twice in Ms. Marvel before she ever shows up in X-Men, as she’s relatively important to the Shi’ar mythology. Of course, the real major first appearance is Mystique, who first battles Carol in all her glory, highlighted her abilities as a mistress of espionage, as well as her interest in military intelligence and the Pentagon. As mentioned before, Centurion (from Black Goliath) shows up for a few issues as something is actually done with that previously walk-on character; those issues contain guest appearances by Yellowjacket and the Wasp as well. Eventually Dave Cockrum comes on board to try to help the series gain some sales momentum, giving Carol a new costume, but by now the end is in sight and won’t last as the series is soon cancelled. It’s worth noting too that Claremont scripted Defenders #57, which seems random until you realize it was so he could have Ms. Marvel guest star in an attempt to highlight her at Marvel.

Of course, as we all know, Ms. Marvel showed up in Avengers soon after and joined the team, which was coincidently in the middle of a brief run by John Byrne (perhaps encouraged by Claremont?). However, once Byrne moved on, the Avengers team put Carol through one of the worst and grossest storylines ever for any super heroine in which she was essentially raped but in a way that creators and characters thought could be laughed at. In a legendary move that basically all fans know, Claremont was beside himself furious and came to Carol’s rescue by doing Avengers Annual #10, in which he tried to save Carol anyway possible and remove her from the Avengers, and add her into the then highly popular X-Men. In doing so, he used the Brotherhood of Evil Mutants and introduced Rogue, and stripped Carol of her powers (only to later turn her into Binary, which was likely his plan all along). Carol was surprisingly with the X-Men as a supporting cast member for a long time—something like 25 issues even if she didn’t appear in every one. But I’m getting pretty ahead of myself…
PART 2
Claremont and Byrne’s Iron Fist was getting all kinds of recognition, and the two of them liked one another quite a bit, so the partnership hit the next big phase, as the Iron Fist title was coming close to its end. The series other than X-Men that really put them on the map was Marvel Team-Up, which is what they moved on to next. Byrne, being amazingly prolific, was able to do two series at once and even 2.5 series (2 monthly and 1 bimonthly). So after doing a brief stint on the Avengers and another one on the Champions, he settled in to do MTU and Iron Fist monthly with X-Men bi-monthly, and then eventually X-Men went monthly as Iron Fist moved on, with Byrne doing various other series every month so that it was MTU, X-Men and a random fill-in. The man was on fire in those days!

Marvel Team-Up during this era is basically jammed packed with Claremont and Byrne’s favorite characters. It starts with MTU Annual #1, which features the X-Men by Claremont; meanwhile in the main series, Byrne came on first, joining then writer Bill Mantlo for three issues before finishing up his Iron Fist run. Meanwhile, Claremont joins the next issue (#57) with Sal Buscema, and in his first outing he used the Black Widow and an obscure Daredevil one-off villain called the Silver Samurai—beginning his long association with the character, as Claremont turned him into a formidable villain. After his buddy pinch hits for #58, Byrne comes on full time with #59 as another legendary Claremont / Byrne run begins. First they use their favorites, Yellowjacket and the Wasp with Lt. Rafe (Misty’s former partner) as an ongoing guest star; then of course Ms. Marvel as Claremont tried to put her in the public eye; then Iron Fist & the Daughters of the Dragon (which I’ll get to below); then Captain Britain—Claremont’s next pet project at Marvel that he’ll push hard over the next decade; in that same story we also are introduced to Arcade and Miss Locke, who will be longtime X-enemies; then Tigra who I mentioned above as a Claremont favorite (this being her first appearance since her series was cancelled, thus setting her up as a potential Avenger a year or so later); Kraven the Hunter, who both Claremont and Byrne like to use; Man-Thing, who was yet another character Claremont has a long association with; and of course Jennifer Kale, whom I deliriously love; battling Man-Thing and Spidey is D’Spayre, who Claremont introduces and will continually use, usually in Man-Thing stories; Havok and the Living Pharaoh, as Claremont and Byrne at last tie up the loose end of what Havok and Polaris were up to during the Shi’ar story. This leads into a story with Thor, but its obviously a nod to the Thomas / Adams run which both creators dearly loved.

Following the Havok story, both creators leave for a time, though Claremont is quickly back to do a Saturday Night Live episode which also features the Silver Samurai—and in perhaps the oddest bit of Marvel U continuity there is, SS gains a teleporting ring from John Belushi…which actually stays in continuity! Byrne comes back for a story with Luke Cage, and then the next issue he’s out and Claremont and Terry Austen are back for a Dr. Strange story—another character Claremont loved to use. As Claremont and Cockrum were really pushing Ms. Marvel, new look and all, they had her return to MTU, as the Dr. Strange stories continues. The whole team reunites again as Claremont / Byrne / Austen figure out a way for Spidey to team up with Red Sonja. Claremont finishes up the Dr. Strange story with Satana who is basically the last character left that Claremont previously wrote that could be featured. Black Widow returns after that, as well as Silver Samurai and Boomerang (who Claremont used against Iron Fist in the past), and also Viper—as Claremont now establishes the Silver Samuari / Viper partnership which he’d continually use against the X-Men and New Mutants. Previously, Viper was a very good, albeit one-off, obscure Captain America foe; it’s this story and her subsequent partnership that saves her from obscurity and makes her into the formidable foe she is today. Shang-Chi also shows up for this story, as does Nick Fury and a whole host of SHIELD agents. Claremont then uses the Guardians of the Galaxy, the Invisible Woman (with Yellowjacket and the Wasp guest starring) and then the Hulk, in the second MTU annual which introduces an oft-used Claremont character, Russian General Alexei Vazhin, who is a military intelligence man with deep connections to Xavier, Rossi and others. Vazhin had previously appeared only as a robot in X-Men when they first met Arcade. From there, Chris finally gets to feature a solo X-character, which is none other than Nightcrawler! Reteaming Nighty with Spidey from their ASM appearance, it’s another fantastic story that features the third appearance of Arcade and Miss Locke, as well as Amanda Sefton and other X-related stuff. By now the X-Men series was cooking full steam so this was likely well received. Claremont moves on afterwards, though not without returning to the series for its 100th issue anniversary where he presents the team-up of Spider-Man, Marvel’s #1 franchise and the X-Men, which was now on the rise as a rival #1 in the post Dark Phoenix Saga era, plus the Fantastic Four, who was cooking under Byrne by now. In this story, Claremont introduces yet another young mutant, this time Karma; and this time, it’s a very excellent story with awesome Frank Miller artwork (pairing him with Claremont for the first time). #100 also features a back-up story by Claremont & Byrne teaming Storm with the Black Panther, establishing that they two once knew each other and perhaps fell in love, long ago. This is a fantastic little story, though it sets up the unfortunate sham marriage of T’Challa and Ororo decades later.

During their long run on MTU, the X-Men went monthly with Byrne at the helm and that’s when the series exploding, making both Byrne and Claremont’s careers. They also worked together to keep Iron Fist relevant for a time, as Iron Fist’s title came to an end: first, they moved him into a two-part story in Marvel team-up that tied up one of the major loose ends (the Steel Serpent) and featured Misty & Colleen, retroactively establishing a random cameo in MTU #1 was actually Misty for no apparent reason. Meanwhile, Claremont had taken over Power Man with #47, so Claremont had Byrne join him as they came up with the idea to move Iron Fist to that title beginning in #48 which ties up the long-running Bushmaster subplot from Iron Fist’s title. Colleen and Misty along with Lt. Rafe and Danny Rand’s attorney Jeryn Hogarth clear out Luke’s supporting cast (save Claire Temple, who was Bill Foster’s ex-wife) as the series becomes Power Man & Iron Fist. #50 incidentally has Dave Cockrum inking John Byrne’s pencils. Byrne leaves after #50 to focus on MTU and X-Men, while Claremont is joined by Mike Zeck for some phenomenal artwork as Chris begins a brief Cage run (though Zeck sadly stuck around only for a short time). In short order he takes obscure walk-on character Blake Tower, the District Attorney and gives him a fairly regular role starting a long running series of guest appearances for Tower in the MU’s “street level” characters series for the next few decades. Eventually though, Claremont had to move on, saying goodbye to Danny Rand after writing him throughout four different ongoing series.

It’s worth noting that Claremont, Byrne and Austen all teamed up to do a 51 page Star-Lord story in Marvel Preview #11 that I’ve never read but my comic book shop guy told me is a contender for their best story ever. Claremont did a few other Star Lord stories too which I don’t know much about.

Claremont did a fill-in Captain America story with occasional collaborator Sal Buscema in Cap #237 that co-stars his usual favorite Avengers (Beast, Ms. Marvel, Wasp) that really focuses on a flashback to WWII. The major reason for the story is to visit the idea of Concentration Camps, which is what makes the issue relevant. Clearly, he had more to say on the topic, as he soon after would fill-in Magneto’s backstory in a big way by tying it to WWII and the Holocaust.

As his runs on Power Man & Iron Fist, Ms. Marvel and Marvel Team-Up all begin to end one after another, Claremont soon finds another ongoing series to go along with X-Men in the form of Dr. Strange, sandwiched between the great Steve Englehart and Roger Stern runs like Jim Starlin and Ralph Macchio before him. Claremont’s major contribution was to give Strange an alternative love interest to Clea in the form of Madeline St. Germaine. He also utilized a few of his recurring characters such as D’Spayre showing up in his first outing and then the N’Garai soon after. BTW, that makes two additional N’Garai appearances between X-Men #96 and #142 (the Kitty Pryde Christmas issue). Claremont soon moved on though and Roger Stern began his legendary run with Marshall Rogers. Claremont would feature a lot of Dr. Strange themes in his stories featuring Magik and Limbo; he would also feature some of Dr. Strange’s characters directly, such as in Thor Annual #9. Which, coincidently, started his usage of Asgardian characters, who would eventually start popping up in the X-titles regularly (though that was likely more do to editor / later writer of New Mutants Weezie since hubby Walt was writing Thor at the time).

During his Dr. Strange run, he had Man-Thing and the-always-welcome-in-my-bed Jennifer Kale show up in #41, which turned into a crossover with Man-Thing’s series, which Claremont then took over, so he was back to three ongoing series along with Dr. Strange and X-Men. Even a title like Man-Thing is chalk-full of Claremont characters, though one of the best is new to the series in the form of Barbie Bannister, an excellent if now forgotten supporting cast member (as was Sheriff John Daltry). Eventually Claremont brings in the extremely obscure star of the old War is Hell comic, John Kowalski, my beloved Jennifer Kale and then in the big series finale Margali Szardos and Amanda Sefton, who play a big role in a non-X comic that many don’t know about. Man-Thing, of course, plays a big part in the Cyclops issue after he quit the X-Men following Dark Phoenix, as does regular Claremont villain D’Spayre.

Claremont also revisited one of his pet characters, Captain Britain, following the entrance of the character into the MU proper in MTU. In Marvel Tales, of all places, he presented an origin story for Capt as a back-up over a few issues at 5 pages an issue. He'd again move on, only to return to the character later. Btw, Captain Britain has one of the most convoluted publishing histories of any character ever--in typical British fashion. He goes from series to series throughout the late 70's and early 80's, eventually ending up with Alan Davis on art, who gives him his better known revised costume (and makes a name for himself doing the strip). Davis is then joined by up and comer Alan Moore whose brilliance shines through like always; they co-create a few concepts that play into the X-Men later on when Claremont gets interested in it again such as Roma. Even Mad Jim Jaspers' has a big cameo in the trial of Magneto (or his (616 version at least).

With his Dr. Strange and Man-Thing runs coming to an end, the last great non-X series Claremont settled into for a significant run was Spider-Woman. It follows a familiar script: strong female character with sliding sales that gets a spike in quality, as Claremont infuses the series with familiar guests, supporting cast and villains that make it part of a larger whole. And of course, the other part: sales never recover, the series is cancelled and the heroine subsequently is depowered and written into limbo...only for Claremont to save her by roping her into the X-universe where he reigned supreme and had carte blanche. He also brought with her her cast of Lindsey McCabe and David Ishima (who he created). Showing up first is none other than Angar the Screamer. Up next, we get Black Tom & Juggernaut plus the X-Men as Claremont introduces Siryn, who is revealed to be none other than Banshee's daughter! This leads into Jessica and Siryn showing up in X-Men with Dazzler in toe in the story that introduces Caliban. From there we get General Nguyen Ngoc Coy (had to look that up) who is none other than Karma's father, and he'd continue to show up and plague Spider-Woman for the remainder of the run, something I'm sure most people don't know or remember. Naturally Viper and Silver Samurai make an appearance in a story that also touches on WWII concentration camps as Claremont moves ever closer to exploring that in Magneto's past. This story also opens up the subplot of Viper possibly being Jessica's mother. Bill Foster stops by and then Claremont moves on as his X-editor Ann Nocenti takes a turn at writing...choosing to have none other than Tigra stop by, which definitely had to happen after a conversation with Chris.

As the X-Men began to soar in popularity in the post-Byrne years, they would appear randomly in places and usually Claremont was the one writing their stories, such as Bizarre Adventures #27 which featured a flashback Phoenix story (after her death, which made this the big draw). The issue also featured a Nightcrawler story by Dave Cockrum and an Iceman story by George Perez. When Marvel Fanfare launched, it regularly featured both Spider-Man and the X-Men, including a Spidey story by Claremont fearing Sauron and the Savage Land Mutates with help from Dave Cockrum, Paul Smith and Terry Austen in various places. Eventually Angel and the X-Men were roped in as the story introduced Zaladine. Claremont did a Dr. Strange story next.

By now though, circa 1982-83, the X-Men's ascendency has reached a fever pitch and Marvel wanted more X-projects. Claremont wasn't ready to share the series so he began dedicating his time to basically just X series. The more narrower focus brought in some nice triumphs too early on: the first Wolverine miniseries with Frank Miller; the New Mutants; God Loves, Man Kills; the X-Men / Teen Titans crossover; Magik featuring Storm & Illyiana; X-Men and Micronauts; the Wolverine and Kitty Pryde miniseries; X-Men / Alpha Flight; the back-ups in Classic X-Men; and so on and so on.

When Claremont became exclusively devoted to all things X it didn't make the franchise any less extensive or connected, but it eventually lost something by not being tied into the larger tapestry that was his corner of MU beyond all things X. It was definitely part of the growing sense that it wasn't as accessible and a little unwieldy. Of course, that all comes much later down the road.

But for those early years, it's quite an eclectic mix of series that all weave together.

PS - And that doesn't take into account all the efforts Byrne made on his own: the many series he weaved Angel and Iceman through, the Shi'Ar in Fantastic Four, Alpha Flight and Wolverine's ongoing connection.
Informative and very welcome stuff, Cobie! I was aware of Claremont's having worked on most of those titles (with the possible exception of Man Thing), but it was nice to see you break down some of the commonalities and recurring favorite characters that I wasn't aware of. Sadly, I've read virtually none of this. I've read most of his Marvel Team-Up run and a little bit of his Spider Woman but pretty much nothing else. I'd particularly like to read his Iron Fist/DotD stuff. Makes me wish they'd do some Claremont non-X-Men Omnibuses....

I must say that this re-read is so unbelievably awesome that it makes me wish they still made comics like this! Sadly, many of the books currently on my pull list can't even hope to compare. I mean, really, Cobie--I know you are loving the Marvel Now X-Men books, but are they really even half as good as the stuff we've been reading, even to the 110s?
You'll get no argument from me. You and Set nailed it above on how the action sequences would allow for major doses of characterization, and how that's just one example of a larger trend of making every issue count back then-- every issue has action, drama, humor and forward momentum. These days, when you get one of those things, you usually don't get the rest.

So much has been lost somehow. The bang for your buck is just incomparable.

And the ability to create a story that is appealing to anyone ages 5 to 95 is lost too. You can read X-Men #108 no matter how old you and love it.
X-Men 114-116

And we have a Savage Land trilogy to follow up the Magneto almost-trilogy!

114 and 116 are the next 2 earliest floppies I own (after 112), and they are also in very poor condition. 114 actually had the letters (and hyphen) in "X-Men" on the cover with a smaller version of each within the logo in red ink. *sigh* I was really desperate for cheap back issues back then! grin

It's noteworthy that 114 debuts "The Uncanny..." on the cover, formally replacing "The All-New, All-Different" once and for all after the last two issues dropped it to advertise the book's new monthly status. "Uncanny" had been used on the title page within for pretty much the entire run, but here, it's now front and center for the duration.

This new Savage Land trilogy is the final major touchstone to the Thomas/Adams run that Claremont, Cockrum and Byrne obviously admired and paid homage to. This arc transitions the title formally to where it blazes its own path from that point. Many old villains and concepts will be used again, but it feels like this run becomes its own thing more than ever after this last homage. The villain reveal at the end really stamps the callback.

Nice scenes with Phoenix and beast getting rescued and Jean grieving over Scott. I especially like how time is taken for Beast and Lilandra to acquaint with each other later, even as Jean and Prof X share a poignant silent panel of grief.

Meanwhile, the bulk of the issue is spent with the presumed-dead X-Men as they have managed to escape the volcano and end up in the Savage Land. Lots of nice scenes with Byrne drawing them all scantily clad in shredded costumes and some in native clothing. Banshee fares particularly well here, fairly ripped in a Ka-Zar-type get-up. And of course another opportunity for Byrne to draw a sexy Storm in bikini and cloak. Nice establishing moments like Wolverine killing the pterosaur and a moment with Scott showing him strangely unaffected by Jean's supposed death. Of the latter, I'm curious to see how Scott gets from this point to the heights of love I remember him and Jean experiencing around the Dark Phoenix Saga.

Weird how most of the X-Men now have unshredded costumes! I guess we can chalk it up to the unstable molecules?!?

And so we end the issue with the reveal of the Thomas/Adams creation Sauron who has powered up by draining an unsuspecting Ororo. That's where 115 picks up as Wolverine fails to heed Scott's warning and falls under Sauron's thrall. Absolutely GORGEOUS 2-page spread of Wolverine charging Sauron as the other X-Men look on. But the X-Men make fairly quick work of Sauron after a quick skirmish. Seems our Petey has returned just in time from getting a little somethin'-somethin' (much later revealed to have borne him a child) to overload their foe with the energy produced by his transformation into steel.

This leads to the larger threat as Ka-Zar (for what is a Savage land story without Ka-Zar?) himself enters the fray. Seems a rogue sun god named Garokk is marking out some turf in the SL for himself. Surprisingly, Scott refuses to help, citing Magneto as the larger looming threat. Petey says goodbye to his jungle fling, and the X-Men depart---only their escape is cut off by inclement weather as Antarctica seeks to reclaim the SL because of Garokk's machinations. CLIFFHANGER!

Incidentally, this issue apparently tied in in some way with Ka-Zar #20 somehow. Did Claremont write that, too, Cobie? In any case I wonder if Zaladane and Garokk appeared in Ka-Zar as well

116 opens with the X-Men now forced to help, and we get another instance of Byrne's gift for illustrating awesome high-tech fortresses in another great 2-page spread. In short order all but three X-Men are captured. I like that not all are captured (avoiding a cliché in the process), leaving us more time with Storm, Nightcrawler and Wolverine, who remain free and must go to the rescue.

Wolverine has 2 contrary moments on successive pages that help define the contradictions in the character. On one page he tames Zabu and communicates with him, to Kurt's astonishment. On the next he apparently kills his first human in the run to date, to Kurt's and Ororo's horror. On the next page he kills a small dinosaur and obliquely references, perhaps for the first time, his healing factor. Now, most of his attributes have now been referenced with the exception of his entire skeleton being adamantium-laced, not just his claws (though I think there was a quick hint in this trilogy about that as well).

So we end with a quick but awesome battle, highlighted by a burning red-hot Colossus, a determined, pursuing Cyclops and Ororo trying and failing to save their enemy. In the latter case, Wolverine, like Banshee in 114, shows tremendous insight and compassion for her by recognizing that she needs her space to deal with her failure to save Garokk. In hindsight, Wolverine really shows a lot of different sides in this trilogy!

And so the X-Men leave amidst a raging tempest, but not before we have my favorite bit, Nightcrawler marveling at the bond between Zabu and Logan with a quick "Phantastisch!" that quickly showcases the wonder and lightness at the character's core.

Awesome trio of stories! Just one of many examples of why I've always been fond of adventures set in the Savage Land. Those stories rarely disappoint!
I’ve fallen a bit behind, but hopefully I can catch up early next week. These are some of my favorite issues to come so I can’t wait to get into them.

Very nice thought, Lardy, on the Savage Land being the last story to harken back to the Thomas / Adams run that the creators obviously loved before truly being off and running to blaze their own trail. You’re absolutely right. The Thomas / Adams run—just as much as the original Kirby / Lee run—gave the all-new creators a foundation which they could work from in these early days. The fact that it coincides with the re-usage of the “Uncanny” designation is serendipitious, as the series hereafter clearly sees itself as the heir to all things X that came before.

I don’t think Ka-Zar had a series around this time, so the Ka-Zar #20 must be referring to his second series in the mid-70’s. (His first was only a three issue reprint series in the late Silver Age when he was oddly enough featured in Astonishing Tales). I haven’t read those issues, though I know Claremont didn’t do any of them. Doug Moench was the writer who is best known to do a run on that series. #20 was the final issue of the series so there is a good chance that was the last time Ka-Zar had actually appeared in the MU after being fairly prominent throughout the entire 70’s, so perhaps that is why this issue referenced that one, as it was the first time Ka-Zar was in comic book limbo. The series itself is best remembered as being the series where Ka-Zar and Shanna finally hook up, and for having Klaw as a continuing villain throughout much of it. I don’t think Sauron, Garokk or other characters in the X-Men run had any appearances.

I also second your love of stories set in the Savage Land. In general, there’s just been so many great ones in X-Men, Avengers, the team-up titles, and even places like Spider-Man, which had a fantastic one in the 70’s.
X-Men #111-115

Not much I can add to what's already been said about these excellent issues. I think Magneto's revenge on the X-Men is deliciously sadistic. One thing I don't understand is how the X-Men got free if Storm dropped her lockpick. Did she have a spare lockpick or something? And despite my antipathy for Kazar (I just don't generally care for Tarzan or any of his clones) I agree that the Savage Land seems to bring out the best in creators.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
One thing I don't understand is how the X-Men got free if Storm dropped her lockpick. Did she have a spare lockpick or something?


It looked to me like the art depicted more than one lockpick concealed in her tiara-thingy, and Nanny put it back on Storm. Presumably, Storm started from scratch and eventually succeeded. If Bendis had written this, he'd probably have devoted an entire issue to each attempt! lol
I believe there is one lock pick in each part of the tiara.
Yeah, I always keep at least two in MY tiara! grin
It's where you keep your tiara that worries me...
He's also learned to keep spare handcuff keys taped to the back of the headboard on his bed, but that's for a different sort of emergency.

Okay, was able to catch up a little over the weekend and even today as we have yet another snow day here in the northeast (with just a bit more than that *rough* two inches of snow the south had last week ;)).

X-Men #111-113
#111 kicks off series of what I’d consider to be the best X-Men issues in its history, which is pretty much the uninterrupted Byrne run where every creator was firing on all cylinders. It’s hard to even discuss the Mesmero / Magneto issues without just focusing entirely on the pure beauty that is the artwork; Byrne and Austen are so in sync and so incredible—I’m at a loss on how to praise them!

It’s not just the gorgeous line-up either. Hell, it isn’t even the incredible panel layouts too, which are classic Marvel in the sense of ever present action and forward momentum. It’s the color contrast of costumes, blue fur, hair color, etc. It’s the contrast between some scenes being in the day time and some at night; the wonderful shadow play for both. It’s the constant cool locations of a circus, a volcano, a high tech base, the frozen mountains, the savage land, and so on and so on. It’s just so creative in every way…all the time. Today’s comics suffer from talking head syndrome. This is so light years ahead of that its hilarious; not only is that problem resolved on page 1 every issue, the creators make sure they resolve 20 other problems in addition to that.

It’s worth mentioning too that the covers of #111 and #113 in particular are just gorgeous to behold.

Anyway, on to the story—and there isn’t much too add that hasn’t already been said so I’ll just say I agree with all of that. It’s such a treat to have the Beast show and have an adventure with the X-Men, and this issue doesn’t disappoint. Claremont clearly loves and knows the character, while Byrne draws perhaps the single best version of him in his whole history. It’s amazing that the Beast had really only *just* joined the Avengers when Giant Sized X-Men #1 was released; but because of the bi-monthly schedule, by 1979 the Beast had become a quintessential Avenger—perhaps moreso than any other since the Vision. Meanwhile, the X-Men hadn’t had all that many adventures due to their schedule since that time.

While Magneto is clearly the major star here, it’s also another nice callback to Adams / Thomas by having Mesmero. Mesmero is somewhat forgettable except that Adams (or was it Steranko?—I’ll have to check) designed one of the best looking costumes ever for him, with the classic Spider-Man villain purple / green combo. It’s also nice that while he isn’t much of a threat facing the X-Men one on one, the creators very smartly turn the story into the wonderful circus mystery that is just interesting from panel 1 to the end.

Anyway, onwards to Magneto. This battle, unlike the last, ends in pretty much a stalemate, and it benefits from the X-Men first getting their heads handed to them for trying to win without teamwork, and then shows them take on Magneto as a team—but with a clear focus on strategy every step of the way that takes the tension all the way to maximum. The subtly in characterization during fight scenes is so well done: Colossus puts his life at risk by changing back to human form during the collision with Kurt to save his friend; Storm considers killing Magneto but doesn’t and he uses that hesitation against her; just one scene after another like that.

Magneto’s personality isn’t quite at where it’ll be later, which really starts with the story in #148-150, but it’s getting there. It’s clear he’s highly intelligence, incredibly powerful, and has a real bone to pick with the world. As Fanfie says, the punishment he gives the X-Men is incredibly inventive and deliciously sadistic for a comic book.

Also, it’s probably my single favorite super-villain lair in comic book history. The only way to get in or out is via a magnetically shielded bubble through a volcano? BRILLAINT.

Magneto was still suffering a bit from being too overly used in other series since his last appearance, just like all the other great Silver Age villains in the 1970’s. (See the Mandarin, the Red Skull and of course, Dr. Doom). He had appeared in Super Villain Team-Up and then the Champions (but in the one issue not by John Byrne at this time, unfortunately). Soon, Claremont would gain immense implied power at Marvel though, and any usage of an X-character would require his blessing.

My favorite scene is when Storm tries to pick the locks to free them, and the tremendous struggle it is to do so. And ultimately, she fails. But she tries again (off-panel) and ultimately succeeds. I love when they later recall this scene over a decade later in the X-Tinction Agenda.

Also, it’s just nice in general to see the X-Men fighting a battle with Phoenix included. There are so few of these from the time Jean becomes Phoenix to her death. Basically Firelord / Shi’Ar, this one, Proteus and then the final Hellfire Club / Death, which can’t really count.

This story is also notable for how it cleverly intersects with Marvel Team-Up and the Avengers during the Korvac Saga. Spider-Man and Havok are in trouble in MTU, so they ask Beast for help, which sets Beast on the path to this story; therefore, Thor goes looking for what happened to Beast and ultimately helps out Spidey and Havok. This explains why Beast and Thor are nowhere to be found for large portions of the Korvac Saga. This was when continuity was awesome and used to enhance the story, something that probably will be lost for all time.
Uncanny X-Men #114-116
Following the Magneto story, we get the aforementioned Savage Land tale with Ka-Zar, Sauron and Garokk, and once again what makes the story is the lush, incredible artwork on every single page, and the immense, multi-layered characterization Claremont & company give consistently.

Having read thousands of stories where characters react to other characters deaths, I’m amazed at how fresh and interesting Claremont makes the reactions of the various X-Men. And how well done the story is, as two different groups believe the other to be dead. All of that, plus the monthly piles of characterization in general serve to make the X-Men continually more realistic and infinitely more interesting.

And considering how much characterization is going on—which includes a lot of them looking out for each other here as they continue to coalesce more as a family and team—it’s amazing how dense the plot is! The Fall People, Sauron, Ka-Zar & Zabu, Garokk, Zaladine, the danger to the Savage Land…again, a pretty well thought out, complex plot! And the best part is that once it’s explained, it’s not hammered home again and again but rather they move and actually do something about it.

Like Lardy, I love the scenes with Zabu and Wolverine, which is one of the first scenes that really made me like Wolverine. He continues to shine here as he has every issue Byrne has been on the series, but we’re now starting to see his human side. We’re also seeing him friendly with his fellow X-Men (save Cyclops), as he looks out for Storm and jokes around with Colossus. I like how Banshee stuck up for him too, continuing his role as being an older brother type character to them all, but particularly Storm & Wolverine.

It’s amazing to me that the three panels Nereel is in with Colossus laid the groundwork for the awesome subplot of his son in the Savage Land…which *still* has never properly been followed up on.

We’ve spoken about how the Savage Land brings out the best in a lot of characters and franchises, and I’d add that is probably my favorite Savage Land story of them all, with the only possible contenders being the original Ka-Zar story in X-Men #8 (which is absolutely incredible to behold) and the Spider-Man / Gog story in ASM #103-104.

BTW, I checked out of curiosity: Garokk, Zaladine, Tongah and the Fall People all originally appear in Astonishing Tales #3-6 at the start of the 70’s. I’ve never read the stories, but I know they’re by Gerry Conway and then brand-new-on-the-scene Barry Windsor Smith. Claremont was a big fan of Smith’s work so perhaps he drew particular inspiration from that story to include them all in X-Men (and forever after tie them all into the X-Men mythos moreso than Ka-Zar’s).
Also, Lardy mentions a lot of ways that the series matures during these 2 three-parters, such as the final nod to the Thomas / Adams run, and the return of "Uncanny" instead of "All-New, All-Different". Another big one: it goes monthly! That too adds a bit more weight to the series going forward in terms of being taken seriously and gaining momentum.
Originally Posted by Paladin
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
One thing I don't understand is how the X-Men got free if Storm dropped her lockpick. Did she have a spare lockpick or something?


It looked to me like the art depicted more than one lockpick concealed in her tiara-thingy, and Nanny put it back on Storm. Presumably, Storm started from scratch and eventually succeeded. If Bendis had written this, he'd probably have devoted an entire issue to each attempt! lol


I just double checked, and you're right. Thanks, Lardy.

And I agree with you about Bendis. nod I gave up on his X-Men after a few issues because it started off great, but nothing much was happening after that.
Getting a little ahead before I slow down again...

Uncanny X-Men #117

X-Men #117 is another standout issue and for a variety of reasons other than the now consistent high quality writing and art. At first it feels as if it totally comes out of left field in that it disrupts the standard “happening in real time” narrative, but when you consider how much backstory has been implied and revealed for every single character thus far, it isn’t all that much of an evolution of what’s come before.

I personally love these issues, where Claremont & company delve into the untold past of the various X-characters, which enriches the franchise so much. This is one of the stand out issues that does this in comic book history, as is the later story featuring Magneto, Charles and Gabriel Haller, which establishes Magneto’s excellent backstory. These types of issues are so standard in today’s comic world that its easier to forget how cutting edge this was at the time, to devote an entire issue to an untold tale. It was groundbreaking and a clear influence on all that came after. Later, Claremont would really explore this in the back-ups of Classic X-Men, and Byrne himself would have fun connecting the dots during the reprint era with the (unfortunately) short lived X-Men: the Hidden Years.

The other truly standout piece of this story is that is the turning point / defining moment for the usage in telepathy in comics. I don’t think that can be stated enough, and its easily something people forget. This issue changed EVERYTHING. All telepathy in comics—a power that is one of the most rampant in superhero stories—is done in such a way that it can be traced here. The way Claremont & Byrne showcase the power and how it use, by also creating an entire visual element to it, is pretty ground-breaking. Following this issue, it’s no wonder Claremont fell in love with the power; and there’s no doubt he did as he had a string of telepaths or telepath related individuals make their way through the series: the White Queen, Rachel Summers, Psylocke, Karma, Mirage, the Shadow King (again), and so on and so on. Telepathy in general is as essential to the X-Men as anything. Of course, DC’s two big telepaths, Saturn Girl and Martian Manhunter, had been around well before this issue but even they never had their telepathy truly explored in this manner. Saturn Girl’s powers were used in only the most prototypical ways all the way until around now, and it would only be later in her career, where a firm X-influence was present, that we’d see it explored.

I also love the villain of Amahl Farouk, who is so different from the typical supervillain and yet so menacing. There is definitely a nod there to Sydney Greenstreet’s Signor Ferrari in Casablanca, right down to the nightclub in an Arab setting. It’s no wonder Claremont eventually brought him back as the formidable Shadow King, as I suspect fans asked about Farouk continually for years after this story.

I love the way Byrne shows Xavier beating Farouk as well: at different tables, they struggle and then Xavier is victorious as Farouk simply falls face forward in death. As the others rush over, Xavier simply exits the café. Those panels show a master artist at work.

Also love the young Storm pickpocket sequence. Every single Storm panel is so great in this era that its hard not to sigh audibly when one considers how later creators have simply “not gotten” one of Marvel’s greatest female characters.

Meanwhile, the Professor and Jean moving on is well done. Things get quite serious at this point as both teams think the other is dead! The Prof actually heads into space, leaving behind Earth!

Oh, and I also like the Japanese Captain Hama. He is a typical Claremont “walk-on” character: barely seen yet chalk-full of depth so that you start to suspect there is a larger story to be told about him…even though we never see him again.
Uncanny X-Men #118-119
After the brief interlude we’re back to the X-Men who continue their long journey home (but long in the best way, since it’s so good I don’t want it to end). The parade of fantastic settings continues as they make their way to Japan, and we get so many good things in this story its hard to keep track. First and foremost, I love that at long last we get to see Sunfire again, after his rude and abrupt exit in #94. It’s a long overdue meeting, and I’m glad that at the end here, there is a sense of mutual respect between Sunfire and the X-Men. In a way, resolving that dangling conflict mirrors the X-Men’s continual move towards a true family unit, which is another important part of this story.

The plot itself is nicely done. Moses Magnum is a very random villain, but he’s cool in that he’s different from everything the X-Men have faced so far. I kind of wish we saw more of him after this. As mentioned previously, Claremont took a random Gerry Conway throwaway villain (in which 70’s Marvel had very many) from Giant-Sized Spider-Man #4 and used him in Giant-Sized Power Man #1. Here, the threat he poses is substantial, and it works well because the X-Men are protecting someone / something they really have nothing invested in, namely Japan. It’s easy to have the X-Men constantly protecting other mutants, so its good to continually mix up their reasons for doing things and having other motivations.

There’s just a lot to like about this issue. The opening sequence with Japan on fire is a masterful choice because its so out of left field—Byrne & Claremont know how to make it eerie, exciting and colorful, and all in a way you almost never see done. We see Nightcrawler has been pushing himself, and can now teleport even farther than before. That mirrors the team as a whole, as we learn they’ve been practicing for 6 weeks on the boat to get better. They give Magnum’s goons in #118 a good thrashing and its refreshing to see them so proficient in battle.

Their gradual growing into being a team is mirrored by their growing into a family, which is highlighted by the nice surprise party they throw for Banshee when he gets back home. You get the sense that they have truly come to care about each other (and specifically these 6). Storm calls Colossus “little brother” for the first time, playing up that nice dynamic.

Wolverine continues to grow, as he does every issue since Byrne joined. We learn he knows Japanese, and later we get to see Mariko for the first time as he’s love struck. Mariko is my favorite of all of Wolverine’s romantic interests, and I enjoy the way she is so drastically different from him. BTW, I thought Mariko was the highlight of the last Wolverine movie.

Misty & Colleen are present again, which will lead into Scott’s brief romance with Colleen. Claremont & Byrne obviously love these characters—you can feel it whenever they show up.

The story ends with Banshee’s injury which will eventually lead to his leaving the X-Men. What’s kind of funny is it’ll take another 10 issues for Banshee to actually exit the series; plus he’s been talking about leaving since right after he joined up, so in a way, Banshee’s been on the verge of leaving the team for half a decade in real time. I do like how he has a heroic moment leading to his injury, and just in general his usage here. There’s an underlying, quiet respect the X-Men all have for him, and later during the post-Mutant Massacre era, Wolverine and Storm are quick to show that again.

The issue ends with the All-New X-Men’s second Christmas together. It’s worth noting that Claremont was always highly aware of the seasonal timeline in the X-Men series. He was very smart to show the series aging at a pretty regular pace so that a Christmas story happened only every 3-4 years, as the X-Men aged accordingly. It’s incredibly subtle and it’s a shame it was lost once he left the series.

Meanwhile we see Jean join the Muir Island crew of Moira, Madrox, Havok and Polaris. I always loved this aspect about this brief era, as it felt like there is another X-Men team on Muir Island. It’s a nice touch, and shows the X-Men’s world to be extensive beyond the actual roster. Claremont always used this to great effect, so that you had the sense that even though we hadn’t seen various X-characters in awhile, they were off doing things. Alas, this is another lost art in superhero comics.

These issues also refer to the X-Men winning the Eagle Award for best series and best team for the first time. They’d be doing so again in the next year. Terry Austen, meanwhile, picked up Best Inker. It’s clear by now, there was a sense that something was happening in X-Men. The bulletins page refers to the series regularly and the letters pages are filled with incredible praise. The series was taking off in a major way and moving to the forefront of the comic book industry as one of its premiere series. About 10 issues into Byrne’s run with Claremont, and there was a magic there. And the best is yet to come…


I like the Muir island bits, because they could mine that stuff for plot info, years later. Young Scottish werewolf needs introducing / backstory? She must have spent time with Moira! Madrox needs scientific knowledge? He *was* her lab assistant for some time!

Moira, always human, never powered up, was also, IMO, a vital element of Chuck's 'dream' of little mutants and little humans using the same water fountains. Instead of, as in later years, the 'you're with us or against us' mentality, which led to there being no more non-mutants working at the estate, or teaching the students, or dating various X-peeps, and the addition of villainous mutants to the X-roster (since whether you were good person or not mattered less than if you have the right genes), there seemed to be a real effort to include humans and human *allies* (and friends and family and lovers) in the mix.

Even when a non-mutant was added to the team, such as Longshot, there was often a backhanded attempt to say 'oh, he's a mutant among his people,' as if having a non-mutant X-man was some sort of code violation or something. (Even today, in a world with a team of 'Unity Avengers' that's half mutants, there aren't a bunch of non-mutants being added to X-teams...)

I miss plenty of other things from this era, but I do feel like this is the only time period where there was even an *attempt* at showing Xavier's much-talked-about 'dream' in application. The human element (pun intended). Moira McTaggart. Candy Southern. Tom Corso. Stevie Hunter.

^ 100% Agreement.

Can't agree enough with everything you just said, especially how Moira was the quintessential example of that. It's such a simple concept yet X-creators for the last 15+ years can't seem to grasp how important it is to have regular humans interacting consistently with the mutants.

This is part of the bigger problem we've talked about here in the past, which is writers tendency to have superheroes only date other superheroes--a problem particularly with super-teams. It doesn't make sense and its so limiting in story. The X-Men had: Moira, Lilandra, Amanda, Betsy, Mariko, Vera, Candy, Charlotte, etc.
Uncanny X-Men #117

I'm not a huge fan of "Psi War" and haven't been since I first read it many years ago. It's not that I hate it or anything; I think it's at least somewhat that I'm probably not the biggest Professor X fan. I don't hate or dislike his character. I just find him less interesting when the spotlight is on him and not in his role as the X-Men's mentor. That said, I do like that this story (and the other one Cobie mentions with Magneto in the 160s) exists and that it attempts to humanize him with some much-needed backstory, but even so, he's clearly the least interesting character in the book's cast by a longshot in my opinion.

So I found myself mostly enjoying the story by admiring Byrne's layouts and his storytelling talent. I particularly enjoyed that full page where Xavier's head is kind of superimposed over flashbacks of his life before, during and after his life with Moira. Byrne really does his best to sell me a story that I otherwise have a very passing interest in. Everything from his depiction of Storm as a child to the staging of Xavier vs. Farouk (both in and out of the astral plane) to the body language of the extras in the bar shows that even at this early stage of his career, Byrne was already an expert cartoonist.

Beyond the disinterest in Xavier, I also wasn't terribly captivated by the psychic battle. It was actually very brief, and Xavier's victory doesn't feel all that earned, as it comes practically from nowhere. But Cobie has a point that the trope of astral/psychic battles seems to owe a lot to what Claremont and Byrne tralblazed here. But again, I've never been terribly captivated by the trope over the years, so that significance doesn't add much to the story for me.

As an aside, when I realized this story was coming up, I couldn't shake the feeling that it had come a lot earlier in the chronology than I'd remembered. After wracking my brains, I finally remembered how I'd first read it. I got into the X-Men originally in the early 170s of Uncanny. And around that time, I purchased a paperback book that reprinted GS 1 in it. When I say "paperback", I literally mean something with the size and appearance of a typical paperback prose novel. Only, within it, it reprinted "Second Genesis" in black and white and not as some kind of prose novelization. I remember that instead of reprinting a whole page of the comic on each page, it had only one or two panels per page. So it was kind of a cut-up version of the comic, though I don't think it omitted any part of the story. For the format, I guess it made sense, though, since a full comics page would be very hard to read on a much smaller page the size of a paperback.

Anyhow, that was the way I originally read GS 1. And behind "Second Genesis", it had "Psi War" as a backup story (in the same 1 or 2 panels format). As much as tween-me loved the lead story, he wasn't crazy about the backup, which started out showing the characters interesting to me lost at sea in what sounded like cool circumstances, I got a boring origin story of the bald leader-guy! Really?!? But because of when I read this, I associated it with having been published somewhat closer to the 170s era.

I wish I had that paperback still. I can kind of visualize the cover, and it was not the same as GS 1's. I think it was an original cover actually. I have no idea how I would search down that particular item online to show it to you guys. And incidentally, it was in the same format that I originally owned and read the second Superman/Spider-man crossover (the one that put them against Dr. Doom and the Parasite)!

So hopefully, fair or not, you can see why I have somewhat of an aversion to "Psi War"! smile
Fuck! I found it listed! Here's the cover:

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^ I see the cover was by Cockrum! Finally, he got to draw a cover to GS 1! nod
You're disinterest in the issue aside, that's a cool story, Lardy! It's always interesting to hear about the various oddball formats comics have found themselves reprinted in over the decades. Amazing how one finds it's way to you and leaves an impression. (As a kid I had this oddball Doc Savage reprint pocket sized book of pulp stories from the 30's that I have no idea where it came from).

I can see how a kid just getting into the X-Men would find this story boring. Without Byrne and Austen, it could easily have been a disaster. I only ever read these stories from start to finish in a row, so I see it as an essential part of the era.

I agree that Prof X can be the least interesting cast member though. X-writers really need to figure out how to use him and then do so with a less is more approach. It's obvious many have struggled with him by the sheer amount of times he's been written out of the cast.
You honestly never know what kind of memories reading old comics will unlock! For example, having read this paperback after getting into the X-Men in the 170s, I wondered whatever happened to Thunderbird, Sunfire and Banshee! This info wasn't readily available in pre-internet and even pre-Official Marvel Universe Handbook days! grin
I think one issue with Professor X as a character is that his telepathy has been shown as just 'talking with his mind' at one point, and then able to stun / mindshout the entire team into unconsciousness from miles away, or even *at global range,* at other times.

Which kind of begs the question, why does he even need a team of mutants, if he can just think anyone in the world to death (or unconsciousness, or into confessing and going to jail willingly), from the comfort of his living room?

There was a sort of 'author saving throw' attempted where Magneto 'altered the magnetic field of the planet' to vastly reduce Chuck's range, but that just went in the direction of making *Magneto* crazy powerful, in addition to Chuck being crazy powerful. (Ditto with the Shadow King later being used as the excuse for why telepaths could no longer access the astral plane and zip around invisibly and incorporeally spying on people all over the planet with yet another free superpower.)

Telepathy, by itself, the power to speak to other people with your mind, and hear their replies, is a decent power, but over the years, Chuck (Jean, etc.) have expanded to be able to;

1) probe minds, sometimes even painfully
2) trick people's senses (to make them not see something, or to see them wearing different clothes)
3) teach people new skills (like entire languages) overnight, or even instantly
4) psychically blast people or 'psi scream' at them to cause them pain, disorientation, unconsciousness, amnesia back outs or even death
5) usurp / override control of someone's nervous system, or even, in extreme cases, their autonomic systems (causing someone's heart to stop, for instance)
6) rearranging / inserting / deleting memories
7) suggesting / compelling courses of action, perhaps even to be triggered later, including stuff that people can't normally do on a whim, like instantly fall asleep
8) changing emotions (making someone fall in love with someone, or giving someone a phobia, or suppressing anxiety)
9) tapping into someone's senses, and seeing what they are seeing
10) astral projection (free clairvoyance!)
11) linking multiple non-telepaths so that they can all talk telepathically
12) forging a permanent telepathic mindlink with a non-telepath
13) total photographic recall (which Jean claims at one point is something that *all* telepaths have)
14) potentially global range
15) set up psychic shields to prevent other telepaths from reading / attacking their own minds
16) set up psychic shields *on others* to protect them from other telepaths
17) blocking pain

That's a ton of crap, to strap onto what is technically 'one super-power.' And, despite all that, added over *decades* to telepaths like Chuck, it often seems that telepathy, by itself, is not considered 'enough' of a super-power, and telepaths need to also be telekinetic, or also be a ninja, or also be able to turn into diamond, to be taken seriously as X-peeps.

There seemed to be an inevitable evolution with Chuck (and Jean), that the more powerful they got, the more *scary* they got, and the more inevitable their decline into moral grey-ness, or even nigh-villainy (whether it was as overt as eating planets, or as Batman-esque as 'the Xavier Protocols'). By ramping Chuck up, even as incrementally as it happened, he seemed to become 'unusable' as a character, more like a world-affecting villain, than a scrappy underdog hero. It's hard to be the hero, snatching a momentous victory from the jaws of overwhelming adversity, when your tagline is 'the most powerful mind on the planet.'

That's the sort of tagline villains should have. Not the mutant Gandhi.

Uncanny X-Men 116-120

After a more than satisfying wrap-up to the Savage Land story, we have "Psi War". My opinion of it is closer to Cobie's than to Lardy's. I personally love Professor X, even though writers have done horrible things to him over the years, as Set eloquently hinted at in his post (I'm surprised he didn't mention Onslaught or Deadly Genesis, though). When Charles is well written (and, as Cobie said and I concur, less is more with Charles) he's like an imperfect yet likable father figure. As an aside, I think the only redeeming quality of the failed TV cartoon pilot "Pryde of the X-Men" is the great voice actor John Stephenson's performance as Charles Xavier (Stephenson has been everybody from Mr. Slate on The Flinstones to Kup and Thundercracker on Transformers.)

Then comes the Japan arc, which I just love, especially the scenes where Wolverine shows his gentlemanly side to Mariko. Moses Magnum was very well used here, so much so that Kurt Busiek shamelessly rehashed this story during his Avengers run (this from a guy who claims he "didn't want to make the Avengers like the X-Men". Ha.) The only faults I find with it are Ricardo Villamonte's weak guest-inking on one of the issues (he's not bad for a journeyman, but he can't fill the shoes of Terry Austin in his prime) and Banshee's burnout of his powers, which leads to him eventually leaving the team.

Finally, there's the first half of the two-parter which re-introduces James Hudson and introduces Alpha Flight. I'll cover that excellent story in more detail next weekend, after I read the second half.
Uncanny X-Men #120-121

The journey halfway across the world continues as the X-Men reach the last stop off on their way home in Canada, in a story that John Byrne was obviously itching to tell. Like every other stop on the journey, this one is another absolutely fantastic story that continues the X-Men’s gradual coming together as a superhero & family unit while introducing another major element to the X-verse and MU in general.

Alpha Flight must be the first order of discussion first and foremost, and they are quite awesome to behold in these earliest appearances. I love how the brief introduction of Vindicator in #109 planted the seeds for a larger story-arc here, as well as the third story arc to come post-Dark Phoenix in which the Logan subplot is tied up, so Alpha Flight can proceed from there on their own. That’s good, patient story-telling for a long-running periodical. Alpha Flight is really the creation of John Byrne, though the aiding and abetting of Claremont and Austen really put the finishing touches on them. We get just enough information about each one of them—appearance, powers, personal lives, personality—that you’re left wanting more. Personally, my favorites have always been Snowbird and Shaman based on this story; meanwhile, I’ve always hated Northstar because of the way he sucker-shots Storm at the end of the story which just enraged me when I was younger and continues to do so on rereads.

This issue also continues the evolution of Wolverine as the X-Men clearly stick up for him here and consider him a one of their own, and that has an obvious effect on Logan in future issues as he becomes even more immersed in the team. Claremont and Byrne do a wonderful job at showing a gradual shift from #109 all the way to the Proteus Saga in how the 6 main X-Men gradually coalesce into something much more than what they were.

As usual, the story is jam-packed with little things that are great to see: the mutual respect with Sunfire as they part Japan; Logan’s farewell to Mariko showing his softer side; the walk-on female pilots that are barely there but so likable; Storm sticking up for Banshee when he’s ambushed by Vindicator and going full badass in response; Nightcrawler planting a kiss on Aurora mid-fight.

The fun cat & mouse games of Alpha Flight and the X-Men in #120 which is then offset by the full-on battle royale in #121. As usual, each issue’s montage is different enough from the previous ones that the plot & action elements are as interesting as everything else that’s happening. The way the blizzard forces them to Calgary and then how it goes out of control in the following issue is also really well done. Again, it’s something you don’t see much anymore—a twist on the entire battle that makes it so much more unique than superteam A versus superteam B.

Cyclops and Colleen Wing get cozy here. This romance is all too brief and coincides with Jean’s seduction by Jason Wyngarde (though that doesn’t really take off until Proteus) so I’ve never been too thrown off by it. But I suspect readers buying these stories off the racks must have screaming “WTF?!”. I love Claremont’s willingness to mess with the Jean & Scott relationship from day one.

#121 ranks among my favorite covers ever. As I spoke about here in Tell your story..., this was one of the white whales of collecting all of the major Marvel series.
Uncanny X-Men #118-119

As Fickles points out, there's a BIG difference between the art in 118 and 119, and that is the absence of Terry Austin on inks in the first part. Even though Byrne is credited as the artist in part one, much of it is barely recognizable in his style. Either guest inker Ric Villamonte's style overpowers Byrne's pencils, or, as I suspect, Byrne's pencils were more like layouts this issue. I mostly see the difference in the faces. Only in a few places does Wolverine, Colossus, etc. look like how Byrne would draw them Storm, though, looks surprisingly consistent. I was glad, though, to see Byrne and Austin back to full glory for 119!

In keeping with the ongoing discussion of normal humans interacting with the X-Men, I enjoyed the reference made to the X-Men having "...made a lot of friends among the crew..." of the Jinguichi Maru. Though I doubt they ever reappear, it's just a nice touch and makes the X-Men seem so much more down-to-earth than they would seem to be later.

And re-reading this story, I was surprised to see Mariko first appears here. I'd honestly forgotten that! Again, my first encounter with her was in the great story in 172-173 (among the first I ever bought) and then the original Wolverine series (as a back issue). I only ever read 118-119 eventually as reprints, so it's understandable. I'm curious to discover how much she'll either appear or be referenced in the long interim between these stories and his limited series. I suspect it won't be much, if at all. But the pair come off very sweet, almost more like you'd expect Peter to fall for someone than you'd expect the grizzled, seen-it-all Logan to. I like it!

I'm even more curious to see if Wolvie's crush on Jean will be downplayed from here on out. It would make him look like kind of a jerk if he falls right back into pining for Jean (once he learns she's alive) after apparently losing his heart to Mariko.

I also like how the dialogue brings across that the X-Men continued to train during their weeks on the ship. This results in Nightcrawler's more refined teleporting ability and helps explain their continued gelling as a team and as comrades and friends. It's brave for Claremont and Byrne to let some of this development happen off-camera, and it totally works for me. It's anti-decompression, a lost art in the modern era. Though you don't see every second of development, it works well because you can see the dynamic changing in a way that still feels earned.

Something else else no one's mentioned yet in regard to these issues is the mini-arc Colossus is going through. Claremont writes him with self-esteem issues, questioning his worth to the team. He has two great moments in these issues. In 118 it's the moment where after being knocked for a loop by a Mandroid, he ends up having that awesome moment where he reaches up from the hole he's been knocked into and grabs the getaway van! Then, in 119 he gets similarly schooled by Moses Magnum but recovers in time to trash some Mandroids that had the jump on Cyke. Then, we see him at the end missing his family and correctly pointing out that he's the only member of the current line-up that actually has one to miss.

I think it's in the most recent batches of issues that we begin to see Peter's characterization really start to emerge. Ironically, the physically toughest X-Men is the most sensitive and naïve among them. Until Kitty comes along, he's also the youngest. In time we'll see his interest in art. I guess he's the most angst-y among them, too, but I don't feel it's ever overplayed. It's really nice to see the nascence of his character traits here. Even nicer that it doesn't really contradict what we've seen from Peter before but is still new. We'll have another significant moment with him in the Alpha Flight 2-parter immediately following.

As Cobie says, we have the beginning (or perhaps the middle?) of the long farewell to Banshee here. Claremont and Byrne give him the big heroic moment. I mean, what bigger moment than saving Japan to effectively end your career as a superhero for a very long time? I like, though, that the choice to kill him off wasn't made. Even better that Sean wasn't immediately written out. These X-Men were a family, so it's good that Banshee wasn't immediately discarded, as was and is common in so many team books. I'm really gonna miss my "comfort food" when he's eventually gone.... frown

Lovely Christmas scene, especially the way Sean thought he was being ditched. Loved Ororo kissing Kurt--and his reaction! Plus, Shiro is in attendance--yay!

So I'm left with Moses Magnum and Sunfire. Moses, for all of his 'blaxploitation' vibe was actually written as a credible foe for the X-Men. He very nearly beat them and posed as or more of a credible threat than any other big foes they've faced thus far. Well done, Byrne and Claremont! And, as Cobie says, a great tie-up to Sunfire and the way he left the X-Men. Shiro owes them for saving Japan; he couldn't have done it without them. It's good to see him recognize that (though that's actually in 120--whoops! blush ) After this, I think Claremont doesn't ever really use Sunfire again. Kind of a shame, but he's got lots of other characters to play with over time.....

I must say, though, that it's hilarious that Claremont brought back the hovercraft guy from 104 for that climactic scene in the manner he did. I remember posting that I kind of felt sorry for the guy in that issue. But to see him try to blow up Moira's lab--?!?! And, then.....! lol
Uncanny X-Men 120-121

Funny, as Cobie alludes to, these issues were also kind of a sacred cow to me back in the day. At the same time I was getting into the X-Men in the 170s, I loved and got into Byrne's Alpha Flight series around the same time. As such, I coveted AF's first appearance. But as a young collector, the price tag of $20 apiece for these back issues at the time was just too steep. So as TPBs were virtually non-existent in those days, I never got to read this story (and most of the pre-Dark Phoenix Saga stories) until many years later when the Classic X-Men reprint series was created.

Reading it again, it's a pretty scintillating debut. I just love seeing those characters again, as I originally found them (though minus Marrina and Puck, who were later introduced to start the new series). They are all in their original--and best--costumes and far-removed from all the terrible deconstruction Bill Mantlo later wrought upon them, something I don't think they've ever recovered from. (To be fair, though, Byrne did a lot of damage himself from the get-go of that series by immediately disbanding Department H--causing a kind of hard-to-define status quo--not to mention all the carnage he wreaked. Mantlo just took it too damn far.)

I've always loved how the costumes play off of each other with a subtle unified fringe motif that plays off Vindicator's maple leaf design. And I've always thought Byrne's Sasquatch design was just so inherently fun. And so many elements that Byrne would later develop were there from the start. Mac mentions Heather, whom we would later meet and would become so integral to the team and their backstory with Logan is alluded to and would later be told in full. We immediately learn about all of the Alphans' civilian jobs and identities . Aurora's split personality disorder is not hinted at, but with hindsight you can see the germs of it.

But at the same time, all of Byrne's ideas for this team do not in any way overwhelm the X-Men themselves. The genius of it is that the story doesn't feel like it was written as a backdoor pilot to a future AF series. (It actually wasn't. I remember reading Byrne interviews where he didn't plan on doing the book and actually had problems making them interesting to him.) It's still their book, and they all get plenty of development and big moments.

As I alluded to in my review of the previous 2 issues, we get another interesting Colossus moment. He gets jittery and thinks Northstar's up to something and actually starts the big fight as everyone's trying to reason with one another! Among all of them, it's Peter who's least assured of his role as a superhero. He has issues with his own self-worth and is prone to both making rash mistakes and second-guessing himself when he fails. The Alphans' reaction makes it clear they were up to no treachery, so it really makes Peter's decision look bad.

I'm curious to see how Peter's character will be developed and what the milestones might be. I know that by the time I first met him in the 170s, he was still sensitive and that Kitty was the aggressor in their early romance. He was more of an assured hero by then, though. I wonder how significant his big moment in the Proteus Saga will play out in his overall arc for one thing. Something else else else to look forward to!

I kinda love how the story ended, with Wolverine apparently surrendering but somehow giving AF the slip. I was expecting some kind of detailed explanation for how he pulled that off but was unexpectedly delighted by how we didn't get any! LOVE it! lol Man, but Wolverine used to be such a fun character!
oh yeah, 120 was full of suspense ... as the Alpha Flight took down the X-Men

121 is when Storm showed off her stuff and wiped out a blizzard cause by Shaman's ineptitude.

and Northstar took out Storm from behind in a d^&* move ... and Cyclops lost his cool and Wolvie showed his maturity.

Northstar probably was up to something Peter!

I think Byrne might have had one of those moments of genius when you do something under the gun or under pressure and it just works so much better when you have to go with your gut than if you over think it.

I only vaguely remember that fight, but I vaguely recall Sasquatch getting the drop on Wolverine, and smacking him around like the Hulk and Loki in the Avengers movie. Fun stuff (and this was long before I had grown tired of Wolverine).

I remember reading that Byrne said he'd just designed Alpha Flight for this particular encounter, and that, had he intended to ever use them again, he would have made several different choices, including not dedicating two slots on a team to twins with the same look and powers.

Originally Posted by Set
I only vaguely remember that fight, but I vaguely recall Sasquatch getting the drop on Wolverine, and smacking him around like the Hulk and Loki in the Avengers movie. Fun stuff (and this was long before I had grown tired of Wolverine).


Yep, Sasquatch got the drop on him and slammed him against a couple of walls to knock him out! I hadn't thought of the Hulk/Loki similarity, but it's not far off! lol

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I remember reading that Byrne said he'd just designed Alpha Flight for this particular encounter, and that, had he intended to ever use them again, he would have made several different choices, including not dedicating two slots on a team to twins with the same look and powers.


I'll disagree with Byrne there. I think having twins on the seem team with complimentary powers and costumes was inspired. In a way Jeanne-Paul and Jean-Marie were like the new Garth and Ayla, only the Beaubiers, being on a smaller team, tended to work in action together a lot more.
Uncanny X-Men 122

A great kind of "cool-down" story dedicated to the X-Men finally being back home and trying to pick up where they left off after about a year's worth of stories set elsewhere. It's pretty funny how my speculating in the prior two reviews about Colossus's subplot and Mariko reappearing were both big parts of this issue and paid off so soon.

Claremont and Byrne begin with showing Colossus under tremendous pressure during a Danger Room test that is simply designed to test his strength but ends up testing his recent insecurities. Cyke is ready to throw in the towel for Peter, but Logan believes in him and gambles that Peter will prevail if Logan puts himself in the midst of the danger. Peter proves him right and both come through looking better.

It remains to be seen whether this scenario resolves Peter's insecurities (which were said here to be borne of his feeling useless during the last fight with Magneto) once and for all, but I suppose we'll have to wait and see. I remember that Peter has an unfortunate moment coming up in the following Arcade 2-parter, so I can see that causing him some more angst.

BTW, Peter's actual Russian name of "Piotr" is finally given in this issue. I believe this is the first time.

I was pretty damned surprised to see Mariko Yashida reappearing already, especially after wondering how much she'd be seen or referenced between this point and the Wolverine mini that would feature her years from then chronologically. In fact I expected to turn the page and see that Logan had mistaken someone else for her, but it turns out that it's indeed Mariko suddenly in NYC! Looking forward to seeing where this goes!

And wow...more Cyke + Colleen Wing--AND he ends up receiving the keys to her place! WHOA! I wonder if Claremont and Byrne were thinking of going further with this relationship at that point than it actually would? The Dark Phoenix Saga wouldn't have been nearly as emotional and effective without the love story of Scott and Jean at its center. I wonder if Claremont and Byrne realized this first or if editorial stepped in and made the (correct) call? Or maybe Claremont and Byrne were simply teasing the readers with this new romantic direction knowing full well it was just an interlude all along? In any case this is one of those kinds of "what if" scenarios that would one day inspire fans to write their fics when the internet is later born!

Storm's journey to Harlem to rediscover her roots....and not liking what she finds. It's kind of cliché, I suppose, and certainly not the most flattering way to portray a part of NYC, but it's an effective sequence and highly illustrative of the "you can't go home again" trope. Plus, it builds on the ground broken in the Spider-Man and Green Lantern/Green Arrow drug issues to portray some ugly truths about drug abuse in American society. I also like that it's not preachy and that the scenario is delivered very matter-of-factly. I especially like Storm's observation and lament of the youth of these junkies.

However, Misty Knight's appearance reminds me of a problem I had with her also being involved in the Japan adventure: How could there have been no discussion between her and the X-Men about the subject of Jean Grey's apparent death? Misty obviously knows Jean is alive as they'd met in the airport prior to Misty going to Japan and Jean to Greece. The still-grieving X-Men were bound to say something to Jean's (former?) roommate, and Misty would have set them straight. I get that Jean never told Misty that the X-Men were supposedly dead, but someone, Ororo at least, would have spoken to Misty about their mutual friend at some point. They even shared a plane ride home for cripe's sake!!!

Oh well....end rant, I suppose.

So Jason Wyngarde finally makes his first appearance to begin a crucial subplot. And, surprisingly, all the information you need to know about his true identity is right there in silhouette form. Oh, I suppose the character may not have been too well-known at that point, having not appeared in several years. Plus, many fans reading at the time were probably not into the original X-Men in the first place. But if you know who he is, it's a pretty open and shut mystery from the get-go.

Finally, the next story with Arcade is lead into. Again, I was surprised, this time that the ones paying Arcade to kill the X-Men were none other than Juggernaut and Black Tom Cassidy. Both of their survivals from the last skirmish are confirmed, and rather than take the X-Men on gain, they decide to hire Arcade to do their dirty work! A little cowardly a revenge for a couple of roughnecks (though Juggy doesn't like it at all), but kind of refreshing nonetheless.

Onward!

Lardy, a lot of very good commentary!

Funny you should mention Peter’s arc as its in my notes as something to talk about when I get to reviewing a few issues I’ve read ahead on. I had meant to mention it earlier but it slipped by. You do a great summing it up and hitting on all the important beats, such as how it lingered in the background and began to emerge more and more with a culmination with his starting the big rumble with Alpha Flight, and then with his excellent scene with Wolverine in #122. Without jumping the gun and discussing too far ahead, I’ll add that your instincts are right, as this subplot really reaches its true conclusion with the Proteus story and the way that Peter acts as the hero landing the coup de gras in the big battle, in a way subtly showing him emerging as a true, confident hero.

And when I saw the hovercraft guy and what happened to him, I couldn’t help but laugh and think of you! I never realized before he was one and the same with the guy from the first trip to Muir Island. The fact that he’s a jerk and then gets murdered is funny in an LMB way. It’s something we’d do in a story.

Like you, I really like the idea of the Japanese ship they were on for six weeks. Considering it had an important mission where they had to remain incommunicado, I have to say: there MUST be an untold tale there! I want Claremont, Byrne and Austen to reteam and present us a story with the all-new team taking place in the Pacific Ocean.

With Alpha Flight, the legend goes that following their introduction, fans were outright clamoring for more. They return of course (well, only 3 of them) one more time in X-Men, and then they show up in various places like Marvel Two in One and Clash of the Champions. But after declining it a few times, Byrne was told by Marvel that if he didn’t do an Alpha Flight series they’d do one without him so then he felt obliged to be the one launching it. And you know, I’ve never read those issues? It’s so easy to forget what a force of nature Byrne was in the 80’s. Most things he touched just turned to gold.
Uncanny X-Men #122

There isn’t too much to add to Lardy’s comments as he does a great job summarizing the high points of this issue. I love that this is such a laid back, character-only focus issue after so many big stories preceeding it. This kind of mirrors #109 with its approach on character and subplots but taken to a more natural extreme. And I love it.

The Colossus / Wolverine scene is fantastic and provides both characters with a nice moment. Previously, it wouldn’t be a stretch to sometimes read into the two of them having a little tension since they occassoinally would be butting heads. I kind of feel that hereafter, this fully establishes their friendship.

I love seeing the X-Men doing stuff like fixing the blackbird and maintaining the mansion. Basically just doing things other than training in the danger room or being on missions.

Lardy mentions Jason Wyngarde’s first appearance and the blatant revelation of who he was…if you were in the know. And Lardy correctly points out most fans probably were not in the know back then.

Storm in the junkie house is a legendary scene and it continues to hold up really well. I just thought it was suberbly done, including Ororo’s horror at what she sees and then further horror when the junkies turn on her. Thankfully, I missed the 70’s and 80’s when America’s cities really took a turn towards the terrible. But I’m told that this was basically how a lot of New York City was back then. That’s definitely not the case anymore, after several Mayors cleaned it up (some of them quite forcefully). We also get to see Luke Cage stop by. IMO, John Byrne draws the best Cage out of everyone; he looks very leading man-ish: heroic, handsome, insightful.

My reaction to Colleen giving Cyke a key was the same as Lardy’s. It’s amazing how serious that got! I always wondered why Claremont didn’t follow up on that after Jean’s death, especially after Lee Forester exited the picture. He must have had Madeline already in mind. But it seems natural that Scott and Colleen would meet back up.

Lastly, I also love that Black Tom & Juggy hire Arcade to kill the X-Men. It’s such a cowardly move that it fits Black Tom so well. He’s a clever bastard, that one.
Uncanny X-Men #123 - 124

We get the first glimmers of Marvel entering the 1980's, and looking more polished on its covers with the top corner faces being drawn by Byrne instead of Cockrum here. Soon the logos and other cover trappings would be changing and looking more sleak and modern.

These issues are, like most the others, pretty fantastic, as they introduce Arcade to the X-Men. I see Arcade as a true X-Men foe though he started out in MTU and has battled many others. I also find him highly enjoyable, though I would add this: an Arcade appearance depends almost entirely on the artist. If the artist is great, and they're into it, they'll produce sequences that are fun and full of adventure, with oddball things s/he wants to draw, and with elaborate, fun death traps. Byrne does all of this and it works out brilliantly. Meanwhile, Claremont doesn't hold back in showcasing Arcade as an over the top murder-crazed maniac who delights in fun. The case in point is his introduction: abducting Scott and Colleen with the garbage truck! Brillaint!

We also get the continued focus on the expanded supporting cast: Colleen, Mariko, Amanda and her roommate Betsy. This may be the last time we see Betsy, as she gets phased out while Amanda becomes more prominent.

The opening with Spider-Man is surprising at first though it makes sense given his being Arcade's first MU foe. His trying to call the X-Men to warn them is an odd, yet fun sequence. You have to wonder though why they didn't have him show up in the end to tie it back together? I wonder if its ever mentioned again in MTU or elsewhere?

The elaborate death traps are fantastic, as mentioned before. We also get Peter's continued story of homesickness and self-doubt as Colonial Alexi Vahzin is introduced and Peter is brainwashed into the Proletarian. So we're not quite done yet, though as mentioned that story is coming closer to its conclusion. Peter being so full of angst and trying to find his place makes him more appealing and helped make him a character I identified with originally and liked as one of my favorites.

Col Vahzin at first appears as if he may be a random John Byrne pastiche of the "Russian Nick Fury" given his eye patch. Naturally, Claremont would not let such an interesting throwaway character be thrown away: he'd establish he really did exist and bring him back again and again over the decades. I believe he next appears in MTU and then a random Hulk issue and finally settles in to recurring appearances in various X-stories in the late 80's.

We also see Cyke use his advanced spatial geometry skills for the first time which is awesome to see. I love this aspect of the character that remains quite prevalent throughout Claremont's run but appears to have been lost over the years by lesser writers and artists. The X-Men stand out because of these unique skill sets they develop, which in turn complement their powers.

By now, fans must have been losing their minds having to wait for the reunion with Jean and the Professor. But that will all kick into high gear at long last momentarily...
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
And when I saw the hovercraft guy and what happened to him, I couldn&#146;t help but laugh and think of you! I never realized before he was one and the same with the guy from the first trip to Muir Island. The fact that he&#146;s a jerk and then gets murdered is funny in an LMB way. It&#146;s something we&#146;d do in a story.


We TOTALLY would! lol

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Like you, I really like the idea of the Japanese ship they were on for six weeks. Considering it had an important mission where they had to remain incommunicado, I have to say: there MUST be an untold tale there! I want Claremont, Byrne and Austen to reteam and present us a story with the all-new team taking place in the Pacific Ocean.


I know, right? I was totally expecting their secret mission to lead into a story somehow! Reminds me of the story that happened between the panels in Paris in issue 200 that I don't think was ever told.....

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With Alpha Flight, the legend goes that following their introduction, fans were outright clamoring for more. They return of course (well, only 3 of them) one more time in X-Men, and then they show up in various places like Marvel Two in One and Clash of the Champions. But after declining it a few times, Byrne was told by Marvel that if he didn&#146;t do an Alpha Flight series they&#146;d do one without him so then he felt obliged to be the one launching it. And you know, I&#146;ve never read those issues? It&#146;s so easy to forget what a force of nature Byrne was in the 80&#146;s. Most things he touched just turned to gold.


ElasticLad You've never read Byrne's run on Alpha Flight?!?! faint
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
My reaction to Colleen giving Cyke a key was the same as Lardy&#146;s. It&#146;s amazing how serious that got!


What he's trying to says is: This means that Scott Summers and Colleen Wing TOTALLY did it!!! nod lol
Uncanny X-Men 123-124

It's interesting that Cobie mentions that Byrne's headshots replaced Cockrum's around this time. It reminds me to finally mention that, to this point, Byrne has drawn very few of the covers, leaving most of them to Cockrum. Ironically, Cockrum didn't draw many of the covers during his own run. I find it actually disappointing that Byrne didn't do most of these, not even the ones with Alpha Flight in them. Byrne is obviously a great cover artist, so it's a shame he didn't cover a good portion of his early run of one of his seminal works. (123, btw, features Terry Austin by himself on the cover.)

Y'know, reading Spidey's appearance here and remembering Claremont's MTU stories fondly, I think it's kind of a shame that Claremont didn't do more of a run on Spider-man. He definitely has a feel for how to write the character and could have been legendary there, as well, if given the chance.

The scenes of the X-Men being captured are all interesting and well done. And we get to see the tail end of Logan meeting up with Mariko before he's captured off-panel. I wish we could've seen more of their dinner together!

This was really just a fun story that gives all of the X-Men moments to shine and highlight their characters. In a way it's like an extended Danger Room scenario.

The big exception was the unique tactic Arcade used on Colossus to turn him against the others. Not very much is shown of how this was done; we just have to take it as a matter of fact. It's kind of a Bronze Age shortcut, but it's well set up by the recent character development Peter's gotten.

Interesting to see Banshee captured along with the rest of them. I think one of the biggest points Claremont and Byrne were trying to make with his inclusion is that Sean's power loss wasn't improving any time soon. Many readers were probably expecting his power to return here and help him save himself. To his credit, he's able to hang in there long enough before Logan steps in to save him. But this should've shown readers that Banshee's retirement is inevitable.

I liked two scenes the most towards the end: the one where Cyke resuscitates Storm from drowning and the one where Storm and Cyke talk Peter down from his brainwashed state. The latter just nails down that these X-Men are a family. Peter, who misses his real family so much, is roused by the realization that he has another family as well. It's a pretty touching moment.

Overall, a fun 2-parter that's nicely self-contained before all of the heavy stuff that is to come.
nod Pretty much!

Well, it's basically implied the Hellfire Club is all about sex anyway, so there's no doubt Jean got it on with Jason. Hell, I wonder if she had an orgy with the rest of them.

As for Alpha Flight, I don't think I've ever read a single issue of it! We own like the first 120 or something. Eventually it got so bad that my dad cancelled it in the early 90's. But we hung in there for a long time.
I'm surprised because you seemed pretty in to the Pak/Van Lente launch a few years ago. Since that was as much about reviving the original Byrne characters as anything, I thought you must have been into the original series. I would definitely recommend the first 28 Byrne-created issues! nod
Since we’re on a little bit of a roll here, I’ll post one more and then take a break to let Fanfie eventually catch up. But as I had a little time last night, I went ahead and read the entire Proteus story since once you begin it, it is so damn good that you MUST read the whole thing.

Uncanny X-Men 125 – 128: the Proteus Saga

As I state above, the Proteus Saga isn’t just good: it’s plain fantastic. This is a GREAT story! Everything that came before had been pretty damn excellent now Claremont & Byrne & Austen take things to a whole new level. In fact, I would say that the only reason people don’t go bananas about the Proteus Saga is that what follows immediately after is the Hellfire Club and the Dark Phoenix Saga, which is even better! But just because the greatest X-Men story of them all is to follow shouldn’t take away from how excellent this story is.

What we have is a four part story where each individual issue serves a unique purpose from an action / montage perspective, all the while bringing together an overarching plot that is chalk full of character. You have an antagonist in Proteus whose super-powers are incredibly abstract and powerful, yet he’s kept close to reality by having an excellent, human backstory with Moira and Joe McTaggert. So we get the best of both worlds and the creators pull them both off perfectly: the action is uber-intense and the story is human and compelling.

Moira’s secret is at last revealed and she comes off very well here. At times she’s in distress and at other times she’s the master of her own destiny. Most importantly, she’s a complex character that is multi-layered and runs the full gamut of emotions in the story. I also think the clear implication was that Joe raped Moira—in a classic case of spousal rape—to produce the baby. That’s how I read it. It makes things much more heavy.

Jean also is paramount to the story in a variety of ways as readers get reacquainted with her. In the letter’s page in #124, the editor proclaims “new readers who have been wondering all the fuss is about: get ready to meet the Phoenix!”. Clearly they were building to this. Yet, while worries of Jean’s powers and Jean kicking ass are paramount to the story, the reunion leaves the readers feeling a bit uncomfortable. There is no beautiful reunion with Scott and that must have been jarring. But I think in the long run it makes what is to come in Dark Phoenix, including their really romantic and beautiful moment on mesa, so much more powerful. Jean’s seduction by Wyngarde is in full effect throughout and its incredible how scary it is—the sequence where they hunt down “the greatest game” and Jean joyfully prepares to kill the poor man is horrifying. It’s well done, and never once detracts from the main plot. These are some bold choices by Claremont and Byrne, by forgoing the easy soap opera reunion and keeping things complex.

The extended cast is a lot of fun as well. While the X-Men never once lose its leading men status, we get to see Havok, Polaris, Moira and to a lesser extent Madrox play a part. With Jean back, it feels awesome to see so many mutants running around together.

Once again, even without powers, Banshee shines in every scene he’s in. His exit doesn’t really come until the next issue, but it’s clear by the happy ending that he “must” exit the team; it just makes total sense from every storytelling perspective. But it isn’t overly said or melancholy, it just fits.

To me, even beyond the up front Proteus plot, this story is really about being the culmination of the 6 main X-Men coalescing as both a family unit and a fighting squad. This has been happening ever since the second battle with Magneto (and truly since Giant Sized #1), but it all comes together here. With Sean’s exit, that only underscores things, as they no longer need his ongoing dose of maturity and status as a peacekeeper. Cyclops is clearly the leader here, and a damn good one. The sequence with he and Wolverine brings together one of the final elements needed to get to this point: Cyke shows a clear concern over Logan, and Logan admits in front of everyone that he was wrong about Scott, who now has his respect, friendship and promise to fall in line. That is the single best scene of the entire story—including Storm and Nightcrawler sticking up for Logan.

Colossus also plays a big part in this, and it ties into the subplot Lardy brought up so nicely: here, he at long last emerges as the one to save the day, and he does so with style. There is a clear confidence at play here, from his defeat of Proteus to his holding Moira tightly to let her mourn her child. He feels very much like a leading man full of heroism and quiet empathy. His evolution to this point mirrors the growing resolution between Logan and Scott.

Cyclops says that the new X-Men will never be like the originals, who functioned as a well oil machine and then adds “maybe that’s not even a desirable goal anymore”. And in a nutshell, Claremont defines what the All-New X-Men are about. They are not the originals and more a collection of intense individuals, but nonetheless, they are no less a team—or a family—than the original 5.

It’s noteworthy that both Jean and Professor X stand outside this, though. When Professor X returns, there will be a definite tension and he will have a hard time understanding that. In fact, whenever both Cyclops and Professor X are both part of the X-Men hereafter, it will always feel awkward. Because Cyclops doesn’t need the Prof anymore. Professor X is best served now by training younger mutants like Kitty (whose appearance provides the Professor a reason to stay in the series) and then the New Mutants.

Even on top of all of this, which is heady stuff, there is still a ton of other things going on. We get a great interlude with Magneto that at first feels out of left field but shows that Magneto is quietly becoming a part of the recurring cast even if he’s not always on-panel. His scene showcases him once again as a complex, multi-layered man. We also see his wife Magda for the first time. It’s amazing that this scene won’t be followed up on for 20 issues, at which point he’ll truly evolve beyond the trappings of a comic book super-villain (and change how comic book villains in general are perceived). We also learn Wolverine had an adamantium skeleton; until now we just knew he had unbreakable bones. Each story continues to give us little tidbits of Logan’s mysterious and interesting past. There is also the heavy theme of taking a life, especially in the sequence where Moira prepares to kill her son but Cyclops stops her. Personally, I agree with Moira. Ultimately in the long term, so would Claremont. I think he had no easy answers himself at this point but eventually, the X-Men’s experiences would cause him to make up his mind.

Until this point there had been a lot of fantastic stories; now we had a masterpiece. What’s amazing is it only gets even better from here.

Uncanny X-Men Annual 3

Being that Cobie's never read this one, I'm going to keep it pretty much spoiler-free, aside from some small details.

First of all, this annual is very much a standalone tale and doesn't expand any on the ongoing plotlines of the home book. There's a caption that explains that the story takes place between 124 & 125, but there're no allusions to the adventure in Murderworld or anything. The only other X-Men-specific editor's note, other than the (unnecessary) one explaining when the story took place, is one noting which issue Banshee lost his powers. There are other editor's notes for the flashback sequences to previous stories featuring the story's antagonist. (More on him in a bit.)

I like very much that this annual is so self-contained. In my opinion an annual should ideally either be a self-contained done-in-one or the culmination/grand finale of a great storyline begun in the home comic. This is clearly the former and works as a great primer for the X-uninitiated to learn more about this strange cult hit. The extended Danger Room sequence Claremont opens with is just a dandy way to learn about these characters' powers and how their particular dynamic.

Claremont stated in his intro to this edition of Marvel Masterworks that a big reason for his choice of antagonist for this story was to maybe coax some Avengers fans over to try his title. (It's funny, in hindsight, to be reminded of the X-Men's relative lesser level of success to the latter.) So Claremont chose to use 2 or 3-time Avenger foe Arkon in this tale. Arkon returns to Earth from his home dimension seeking Thor for mysterious reasons. In a kind of hilarious encounter with Jarvis, Arkon learns Thor isn't available. But it seems there's a Plan B which leads him to the X-Mansion.

Very notable about this annual is that the penciller was none other than the great George Perez! I mean, how spoiled are we X-Fans? Cockrum, Byrne and now George frickin' Perez?!?! In the intro, Claremont stated that this was his one and only collaboration with Perez. Perez's pencils (inked by Terry Austin!) are quite beautiful and as detailed as you'd expect. However, I prefer his work from New Teen Titans-on, as I feel his style became more unique, distinctive and pointed than it was here and on his early FF and Avengers runs. But it's still great and a real treat to see. He nails all of the X-Men for sure. I can't help but think, though, that his Arkon would have been more memorable in his later style. (Memory flash: Arkon appeared during his much later Avengers run w/Busiek! Must compare and contrast later!)

So in the end, we have a very nice story, if not a particularly essential or terribly memorable one. It's also pretty distinctive from any produced during the new X-Men's run to this point. Though it's somewhat more cosmic, it doesn't feel like a re-do of, say, the Shi'ar epic. There are elements that remind slightly of that story and the recent Savage Land adventure, but it's unique enough to impress.

Interestingly enough, there will be a sequel encounter with Arkon in Annual 5!
MUTHERF$%^!

I'VE NEVER READ THIS!!!!!! how? why? where? ... I missed ... what?

... hold on ... I might have to have a nervous break down .... ala james Wyngarde ... see you in a few hundred issues.

George Perez and Terry Austin!

Before I post my next review, I thought I'd ask when we should take our first break? At the end of Proteus? At the end of Dark Phoenix? At the end of the Claremont/Byrne era? The last of those options seems the most attractive to me personally.

Uncanny X-Men 121-128 and Annual 3

Yes, I read past my usual five issues a week, because as Cobie said, once you start reading the Proteus Saga, you just can't stop.

But first, Alpha Flight. This is a terrfic story, and these are wonderful characters with great potential, and here's my own two cents on their first solo series: I loved the first issue, which was relatively light-hearted, but thought it went all downhill in the second issue when Marrina disembowels Puck. For a guy who claims that comics should be fun, Byrne can get oppressively dark a lot of the time.

Except for the annual, which I'll get to shortly, I'm not the biggest fan of the issues sandwiched between Alpha Flight and Proteus. 122 has its moments, but the ghetto sequence, despite an enjoyable cameo from Misty Knight and Luke Cage, falls short for me. It's one of those moments I mentioned earlier, when Storm seems awfully naive to me, considering she grew up fast on the streets of Cairo. Then again, many people who are forced to grow up fast do retain an inner child's longing for the times before they had to grow up fast. As for Arcade, I thought he worked great in MTU, but I don't think he's quite the caliber of villain for the X-Men in its prime, and Colossus' brainwashing into the Proletarian seems rushed and a bit "on the nose".

The annual, though, is wonderful. Perez and Austin mesh beautifully, and Arkon is always a favorite of mine.

And, finally, Proteus. Just when it looked like Claremont and Byrne were faltering, we get their best story yet. Far beyond the easter eggs of Colossus' great climactic moment, of seeing Havok, Polaris, and Madrox in action, and of a de-powered Banshee more than rising to the challenge, we get some backstory for Moira (and it's sad to think that, where Claremont & Byrne say a lot with a few well-written lines and some effective facial expressions, a modern creative team would probably do a gratuitously graphic flashback to the unpleasant events of the past.) Proteus, as irredeemably horrible as he is, is also a genuinely tragic character who never had a chance. Claremont & Byrne raise some very tough questions, but without being at all heavy-handed about it.

Regarding the Magneto scene, I wonder sometimes if Claremont & Byrne might have meant to pick up on that thread while they were still together, but couldn't come to a compromise of their differing views on the character -- after all, Byrne was one of the prime architects behind Magneto's return to villainy in the early 90s.

I also want to mention something that I've kept forgetting to say: the X-Men editor from the Magneto saga through the early part of Dark Phoenix is Roger Stern, and though he has always said that he didn't enjoy being an editor, he was sure good at it.
Fanfie, great comments! I also prefer waiting until the last Claremont / Byrne story before we take our first break. The quality is so high at this point post-Proteus, I'm super excited to read the rest.

Good point about Roger Stern as well--it's important that he was editor during this era, since he was indeed damn good at it. It's clear that Stern is the kind of person who pours every bit of effort into everything he does.

The X-Men, for the most part, were always been blessed with great editors. After Stern came Weezie and Ann Nocenti, and both left a strong mark on the series.

It's actually right around the start of Dark Phoenix that Stern and Byrne extended their business relationship to a partnership with their brief run on Captain America, which is what got Roger started as one of Marvel's go-to writers. It's actually quite good, btw, especially the issue that follows up on Steve Ditko's "Just a Guy Named Joe" from the silver age.

You guys who we're collecting off the racks in the coming years were so spoiled by Marvel: Claremont & company X-Men, Byrne FF, Stern Spider-Man and Avengers, Frank Miller Daredevil, and then soon Simonson Thor, DeMatteis / Zeck Cap and Layton / Michellenie on Iron Man for round 2. Not to mention so many other great things. Truly the last "great age" of superhero comics.
Thanks, Cobie.

Yeah, Stern and Byrne make a great creative team. Their JLA: That Was Then This Is Now from a few years ago is one of the few recent things from DC that I've enjoyed.

While I love the mutant books under Ann Nocenti's editorship, I'm actually rather ambivalent about Weezie Simonson's stint as mutant books editor -- I think she indulged Claremont's darker sensibilities too much; Nocenti seemed to have a better sense of where to draw the line. I'll get into all of that in more depth once the re-read reaches those eras.
I agree that we should read thru 143, the end of Claremont/Byrne, before taking our first break. I hope, though, that the break won't be very long! nod

Uncanny X-Men 125-128

Lots of good points about the Proteus Saga, many of which mirror or enhance my own, but I'd like to highlight a few things:

I was stunned and transfixed by Wolverine's show of weakness in the face of Proteus' attack. I had totally forgotten about this! I found it very remarkable and further indicative of why I used to love the character. There's a lot unsaid (and un-narrated) as to why Logan reacted the way he did, but it really speaks volumes about his character. He'd come to rely so strongly on his senses and his self awareness that having those things taken away from him and subverted would truly bring a character like him, who had pretty much nothing else, to a dark place. I liked seeing Wolverine vulnerable and genuinely freaked out. He's really become a caricature of himself over the decades, all machismo and stoicism. It's nice to be reminded of how three-dimensional and fully realized the character used to be.

Proteus's powers really come off ill-defined and vague. I know much the same can be said of similarly extremely powerful villains, but trying to understand his powers took me out of the story at times. Apparently, for example, he could create living creatures (bees) that apparently continued existing from then on, he could turn the horizontal to the vertical and could manipulate matter fluidly. But he was limited by his burning out bodies and was vulnerable to metal. Why couldn't he manipulate his own body to stave off burning out or use his powers in any number of ways to travel without having to steal cars? And how could he affect Wolverine who had an adamantium skeleton? I dunno. It's a glaring weakness to the story, but all the great drama and interaction between the characters made it fairly easy to overlook. But age clearly brought more questions to the story than young adult-me ever had.

I, too, inferred what must have happened between Joe and Moira MacTaggert and how that produced Proteus. I'll echo the observances of how tastefully and not heavy-handed this was handled. Modern comics would, no doubt, "go there". But here it was all between the lines, and I miss that more subtle approach. Part of me would have preferred some sort of catharsis between mother and son (and even between Moira and Joe) before the end, but, as in life, there is often no cathartic closure. (I know this from personal experience.) But at least Moira has Sean for comfort.

So despite some flaws, this is a great highlight of a great era in comics, with even greater heights to come very soon. And, more and more, I miss narrative captions and thought bubbles soooooo much!
143 it is, then. I hope the break won't be long, either.

Good point about Wolverine's vulnerability, Lardy. What also made an impression on me was how Cyclops snapped him out of it, finally gaining his respect. So many good character scenes in this story.
I actually also really hope it isn't a long break. Honestly, I could go with no break at all. I'm having a ton of fun as the series picks up steam.

Some great points Lardy about the Wolvie / Cyke moment. I mentioned in my post, I also liked how Nightcrawler and Storm immediately sprang to Wolverine's defense as well. Meanwhile, Jean quietly supported Scott and understood what he was doing. It's a fantastic scene for Logan, and an equally good scene for Scott, yet also an all around good scene for everyone else. That's what happens when you have a creative team in total control of the characters who understand them implicitly.

You're main point is well taken, too. Wolverine (and so many others, even Batman a lot of the time) has become a parody of himself. He once was multi-layered and could show a broad spectrum of emotion and character. It's so enjoyable to read *that* Wolverine again.
Uncanny X-Men #129 - 131
As so we begin the march to Dark Phoenix! The issues #129 - 137 all really encompass that larger storyline, which is a kind of Hellfire Club shift into Dark Phoenix story, but I usually like to break it up into three parts: the introductory Hellfire / Dazzler / Kitty story 3-parter, then the 3-part Hellfire Club proper story and then finally the Dark Phoenix story itself. So that's how I'll review them.

That being said, when one considers the steady march from 129 to the final panel of Dark Phoenix, it's amazing at how well the story steadily progresses and every step of the way the tension gets ramped up more and more. The Hellfire Club is introduced as a highly dangerous organization; later we are shown that full blast rather than being told that. And then finally when you think things couldn't get any more disbursing or dangerous--tragedy really strikes. It's totally compelling and even after reading this many times before (as recently as 2 years ago), I found myself totally wrapped up in it all again.

This first part is all about transitions as we get a few major changes: Sean officially exits for good, as does Moira, Alex and Lorna. Jamie is offered a spot on the team and declines, which is one of those things I always found fascinating. From there, we get a reunion with Professor X, and that's where things get interesting. At first he's caring and emotional, but soon after (as I hinted in my last review) the reunion isn't quite so rosy. He wants to go back to the old style of training and that simply won't work with the fully matured and changed team that emerged from the Proteus Saga. The clash with Logan is especially well done, and then he lashes out at Scott far too harshly. I can't help but get angry at Professor X here which is of course the point. While Jean and Scott are the clear stars from here on out, Professor X plays an odd yet realistic roll in his relationships with both characters throughout Dark Phoenix as he also struggles with how much things have changed between them all.

We see Jean & Scott reconcile with Scott explaining his grief. The real romantic moment is in the next 3 part arc, but I find this scene to also be romantic and compelling. Their romance is not an easy one and that makes it realistic. Yet as complex as it is, it's clear these two characters do love each other deeply and that love will firmly plant the X-Men on relatable ground throughout all the cosmic tragedy to come.

The Hellfire Club is introduced here but they remain somewhat ominous throughout the opening arc. The exception is Emma Frost who is introduced firmly and what stands out beyond the repeated usage of telepathy is how damn *sexy* she is. Both Claremont and Byrne would famously sex things up in many series they worked on so its hard to tell where this is coming from (and probably from both). Everyone knows the Hellfire Club is inspired by the Avengers television show and one episode in particular, but it’s the way Claremont and Byrne use them here--sexiness and all--that ends up influencing the entire next 30 years of comic book villains (and just about everyone else).

What's scary is there are really clubs like this. I just ate lunch in the Princeton Club in NYC on Monday. Only Princeton and Columbia grads and their guests can eat there. Talk all around the club was basically the same: conservative viewpoints on how to fix the world.

While the Hellfire Club is front and center, for me the best part of this entire story is the introduction of Dazzler and Kitty Pryde. Who am I kidding? It's really Kitty that does it. Kitty Pryde: one of the most fantastic new characters of the entire 1980's, and she shines from the very first panel she appears in. When I first discovered her at age 17 or so, I couldn't help but fall in love with her. Only later did I find out it was a case of "yeah, you and every one else". The letter's pages basically go bananas over Kitty from her very first appearance onwards and Claremont comments immediately that John and he are thrilled she's a hit and she'll be showing back up ASAP. But how could you not fall in love with Kitty? She's the ultimate POV-character, she's a little naïve and generally good, and most importantly she's intelligent, courageous and clever. Her parents are divorcing which causes you to immediately empathize with her, and she's just discovering her powers, allowing for the old adage of "discovering powers" being a metaphor for "discovering sexuality" work to its full advantage. She's a fully formed fantastic character from day one, and I immediately want to know everything that ever happens to her hereafter.

BTW, the way she's dressed reminds me of the movie Dazed and Confused, which also takes place in 1979.

We also get Dazzler too, although her introduction is nowhere near as great as Kitty's. Dazzler is interesting but she's never been my favorite character--I think I like the idea of Dazzler more than the character herself and would never buy anything for her alone, as it would have to have a killer creative team and hook to go with it. It doesn't help that by 1979 disco is already dead and totally uncool, and then in addition to that she never really seemed to *want* to be a superhero all that much. Still it's amazing she had a series for as long as she did.

I love that Kitty and Ororo are fast friends, as their relationship to me is one of the best parts of the X-Men in the post Dark Phoenix era. In the scene where that is developing, I love how in the background Logan is looking a Hustler in the middle of the day and showing it off to a shocked Colossus. It's one of the funniest moments of the entire era.

Nightcrawler also has a huge moment in this arc even though it’s a little underplayed: he ditches the image inducer! That's huge for him, and a major step in the X-Men, as the series continues to move back towards the idea of mutants being a hated minority. We also see, subsequently, that Kitty is scared of him which is tragic. But as time goes on in the early post-DP issues, we'll see her getting over that, which is of course the point. It's all incredibly well done.

As the first part comes to an end we get a great action sequence with the X-Men victorious, and then Dazzler and Kitty exit stage left, while the story continues. Meanwhile, Jason has continued to seduce Jean, which has taken a turn towards the even more sinister and scary. Jean's assault on Emma shows something has gone terribly wrong, and even more alarming, she uses her powers on Kitty's dad.

Just three issues and so much to love...and the real story has yet to even begin!
You know, if everybody hopes the break will be short, is one even necessary? I mentioned the possibility of one upfront, hoping to prevent the burn-out that occurred with the Legion Archives project. But so far, everyone (and admittedly, it's a smaller group of participants here) seems to be dialed in.

I'm up for continuing without a break. Cobie is, also. What about you, Fickles? If you're game, we can soldier on further. (But if you really want the break, please don't feel like you're under pressure to conform. Speak/post freely. nod )
I'm totally in favor of soldiering on without a break. And, of course, if anyone eventually reaches a point where they want to stop for a while, that's fine with me, too.
Alright--it's settled! We keep our asses movin'! grin nod
Uncanny X-Men 129-131

As Cobie says, a really excellent mini-arc within what would become the larger "Dark Phoenix" saga. I think Cobie nailed all of the salient points, but I'll go a step further....

I think that this is where the new X-men under Claremont really comes into its own once and for all. This is not to imply that the run prior to these issues is anything less than classic, but here, in these issues, is where it starts paving new ground.

I mentioned in earlier reviews that there were frequent love letters to the Thomas/Adams run through the Savage Land arc. Well, looking back at everything from issue 94-on, Claremont, Cockrum and Byrne repeatedly reused familiar threats that had been seen before. In fact, very few original antagonists were created. The major foes the X-Men faced were Nefaria, the Sentinels, the Juggernaut, Magneto, Sauron, Garokk, Moses Magnum, Arkon and Arcade--all of whom had previously appeared. Sprinkled in there were some new characters like the N'Garai, Black Tom and Farouk, but only Black Tom appeared in more than one issue and was partnered with Juggernaut. It is notable, however, that the Imperial Guard and Alpha Flight were original and debuted in the run. These were antagonists for the X-Men, but they were not really villains.

And of course, there was Proteus, which in hindsight was a harbinger that Claremont and Byrne were ready to blaze their own path. It was a good start, but in the end he was a one-off threat (the poor decision to bring him back by later creative teams notwithstanding) and one simply designed to tell a particular story. But he was different than what had come before and portended more than just great storytelling with familiar threats.

Enter: the Hellfire Club! Counting among their number 2 major characters to the longterm mythos in Emma Frost and Sebastian Shaw, Claremont and Byrne finally added a formidable new enemy to the rogues gallery that was different from anything the franchise (and Marvel in the big picture) had produced prior to their introduction. This is the new X-Men breaking free of their forebears once and for all and the comic exceeding and defying expectations! This is where legends truly began to be made and what made the X-Men the biggest selling franchise in comics.

Yep, Claremont and Byrne used Mastermind, a pre-existing character, into the group. However, this was practically an obscure, little-seen character who was used in an ingeniously effective manner. Plus, Wyngarde would only be a part of the Hellfire Club for a handful of issues and was never a full member of the Inner Circle. As crucial as he was to their introduction, the Hellfire Club had such legs that he wasn't missed in later stories.

Aside from their first big new villain, we are also introduced to a young lady who would become the first new member to join since GS 1: Kitty Pryde! In hindsight it's unbelievable how patient Claremont and company were to hold back and focus on developing the new cast for so many years without adding new members. Outside of the Fantastic Four, can you think of any super team to not add new members over such a long period of time?

To me, introducing Kitty (eventually the first new X-Man since the relaunch) in the same issue that the Hellfire Club (the first major new villains since the relaunch) is just so huge that it can't be overstated. I'll go out and say that 129 is the most important issue of the run to date since GS 1. In some ways it's just as important as 137...and arguably may be even more important. Debate amongst ya-selves! grin

Aside: Interestingly, the Masterworks volume that ends with 131 includes a character design by Byrne of Kitty Pryde. The notes Byrne writes make it read as a pitch from him to Claremont. If I'm reading this right, then Byrne created her character and convinced Claremont to bring her into the book. He draws her in the black and yellow version of the original X-Men costume that she would sport for some time. But his notes also contain Byrne's idea for her as being part of a younger 2nd team, rather than a proper X-Man. Too bad they never used that idea, eh? wink
Uncanny X-Men #129-131

And so Claremont & Byrne's magnum opus finally takes off. I agree with Lardy that Kitty Pryde's importance cannot be overestimated and I agree with Cobie that she's impossible not to love. I should mention that, as Kitty evolved, Claremont says he drew more and more inspiration from Louise Simonson's daughter, who was about Kitty's age at the time. And that's crucial about Kitty -- she comes across as a real 13 and a half year old girl, full of the same enthusiasms and insecurities that every girl has gone through at that age. Kitty was the most relatable character to fangirls like me since the pre-retcon Patsy Walker.

Then there's Emma Frost. I must confess I had forgotten what a vicious sadist she is in her earliest appearance. She's certainly come a long way since then...kinda sorta.

And, finally, Dazzler. Meaning no disrespect to her many fans here on Legion World, I have to admit that I can't stand her. In her first appearance she comes off as a self-centered poser, a whitebread girl trying to be funky and failing (she uses a Jimmy J.J. Walker catchphrase, for crying out loud.) In her own series , I thought she was really whiny, in Beauty and the Beast even Ann Nocenti couldn't make her sympathetic to me, and when she joined the X-Men she became more annoying than ever. I think the only reason she lasted so long is that she was always seen by Jim Shooter as a potential gold mine -- it can't be a coincidence that she faded into the background after Shooter was fired.

I should also mention that, in between Roger Stern and Louise Simonson's editing stints on X-Men, there was a brief stint by Jim Salicrup -- the same guy who edited Avengers during some of that book's most shameful moments (the rape of Ms. Marvel, Yellowjacket's violent outburst towards the Wasp, Moondragon's rape of Thor); the same guy whose ineptitude caused Stern & Byrne to walk off Captain America after less than ten issues; the same guy who turned Spider-Man into a Todd McFarlane vanity project; and, finally, the same guy who may or may not have been responsible for Jean Grey killing herself. I'll get to that last point in more detail when we get to the issues in question.
You know, I know all of those things about Salicrup but I've never had someone lay them all out like that before. Certainly sounds like he was one of those notorious editors that Marvel and DC always have that does more damage than good when he takes over a series. Really unfortunate. Luckily he didn't do too much damage with X-Men.

Lardy, I agree about this is where the creators really begin paving new ground for the series after doing a little of that with Proteus. Great point.

And I never knew that about Kitty basically being a fully-formed idea that Byrne was pitching to Claremont. It's exactly the kind of impact Byrne was making in Marvel at this time in general that has always been referred to by other creators, editors and colleagues. Once Claremont took her on, it's clear he developed a fast understanding and love of the character.
And we might as well keep things moving…

Uncanny X-Men #132-135

The next three issues bring the X-Men into the Hellfire Club proper storyline in which we get to see the full villainy and vicsciousness of the Hellfire Club in all of its glory. And boy do we ever—each of the three issues are jam-packed and I immediately can’t wait to see more of the Hellfire Club, which I suspect was similarly felt by fans reading it off the racks. That must be because for comic book superheroes, the Hellfire Club is simply a whole different animal than anything else superheroes has fought before. It’s been oft-copied since by various creators and companies (to where almost every franchise has its own version these days) but it was incredibly ground-breaking at the time. We’ve touched on a lot of the elements, but its worth again stating how powerful the personality of Sebastian Shaw is, and how interesting Harry Leland and Donald Pierce are as well, especially Leland revealing his powers are the same as Star Boy (the only other person I can remember who shares those powers) and Pierce is a cyborg. The last bit with Pierce is further interesting when he reveals he’s a mutant hating bigot, which will set him apart and allow for him to have a much more interesting future than just another Hellfire Club member.

Jason Wyngarde—and I almost wrote Mastermind, but like Lardy says, he’s much more than that now—is equally as interesting. His total dominance of Jean is infuriating but he always remains a very human enemy. He immediately begins considering how to usurp Shaw, and that ultimately leads to the undoing of the entire plot.

But backing up a bit, what makes the story work, as previously stated, is that while Jean is tranformed into the Black Queen and ultimately at the end of this “arc” into Dark Phoenix, the story is grounded in the romance between Scott and Jean. Despite Jason’s seduction, this story contains the single most romantic moment Scott and Jean ever had up until this point in their history, atop of the Mesa in New Mexico. When she holds back Scott’s eye beams telekinetcially so she can look into his eyes, it underscores how well she truly knows him, by hitting on a point that the readers know about Scott, which is the tragedy he’s always been burdened with. It’s a beautiful moment.

Which makes her seduction all the more infuriating and then makes me cheer for Wyngarde to get his comeuppance all the more when it happens. Byrne does a great job showing Wyngarde’s decent into madness by focusing closely on his eyes.

This story is also one of the single most important in regards to the rise of Wolverine in the eyes of fandom. The final panel of Wolverine in the sewers is legendary (and was awaesomely spoofed in Atomic Robo a few years ago), and his subsequent brutal ass-kicking of the Hellfire guards as he carves them into pieces is enthralling. Again—this hadn’t been done before much in comics. This moment pretty much made Wolverine the star he became, and we’d get numerous other bits to try and recapture this magic (many of which would also succeed, like Wolverine’s issue in the Brood Saga). One of my favorite moments is when Cyclops asks Wolverine “Where’s Leland?” and he simply replies “Don’t ask”. It’s classic Wolverine before it became classic (and before it became so copied it was no longer effectual).

Byrne’s love of the original X-Men shines through again by including the Angel and Beast as much as he can. I can’t help but feel this is always his influence, which is exempflied by how often he had Angel and Iceman show up all over the Marvel Universe. We also see Candy Southern, who had been around for over a decade, show up. What’s notable is she is SMOKING HOT. I mean, WHOA! It’s cool they were an item so long in comics without anything screwing that up…until she was casually killed off in the early issues of X-Factor.

Candy’s hottness is just one of many ‘sexy’ things going on in this story line. Jean’s gown is obviously a later inspriation for Marc Silvestri’s Goblin Queen costume for Madelyne Prior, which may have just single handedly turend me from a boy into a man when I was 11 years old.

Beyond all the up front plot elements there’s always so much else going on. We get the introduction of Senator Robert Kelly, a very important character to come, and also set the stages for anti-mutant hysteria becoming highly important to the series again with the X-Men trashing the Hellfire Club party. All the various members shine in the big battle with the Hellfire Club but despite the X-Men winning, the real damage is done and the march to Dark Phoenix explodes.

Again, hard to say great things here that haven’t been said already. It’s a masterpiece of a story and this is a meaty part of it.
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
You know, I know all of those things about Salicrup but I've never had someone lay them all out like that before. Certainly sounds like he was one of those notorious editors that Marvel and DC always have that does more damage than good when he takes over a series. Really unfortunate. Luckily he didn't do too much damage with X-Men.


I'm not so sure he didn't do major damage to the X-Men. As much as I love this saga, I have major issues with some things about it, and, after doing a lot of research, I think Salicrup is squarely to blame. I can't really go further without spoiling events that happen in the next three issues, so I guess I'll wait til we get to them.

Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
And I never knew that about Kitty basically being a fully-formed idea that Byrne was pitching to Claremont. It's exactly the kind of impact Byrne was making in Marvel at this time in general that has always been referred to by other creators, editors and colleagues. Once Claremont took her on, it's clear he developed a fast understanding and love of the character.


In the short-term, yes. In the long term, she might have been as damaged by Claremont as Storm and Psylocke eventually were, if she hadn't been moved over to Excalibur. Again, I'm getting way too far ahead of myself, but I felt it worth mentioning.
Uncanny X-Men 132-134

(Based on your last review, Cobie, I think this may have been the range you read as well....and not thru 135 as stated.)

And so we get to the second third of the larger Dark Phoenix Saga storyline in which the X-Men take a proactive stance and decide to infiltrate the Hellfire Club mansion during one of its big soirees, rather than be sitting ducks for the HF's next attack. I like the idea for this, especially doing so immediately on the heels of the previous trilogy of issues and their being attacked. Of course, things go sideways very quickly as they are discovered immediately and Wyngarde unleashes the Black Queen as his trump card.

Nostalgia abounded for me in the opening chapter with two bygone elements that came with the return of Angel: the aforementioned Candy Southern and his Arizona home, the Aerie. Just further evidence of how the X-Men were much less insular back in the day. I particularly recall Candy still being with Warren and the Aerie being Defenders HQ during the "New Defenders" era that closed out the long-running Defenders title, which featured Angel, Beast and Ice Man as its nucleus.

But I especially enjoyed how that remote location allowed for that great scene between Scott and Jean on the butte in the middle of nowhere and for the flashback to it that we see in the following issue. I remember being a teenager and thinking it was a very intimate scene and still feel about the same way. I like how it's so sexy without being at all gratuitous. As such, it's easily more memorable than 99% of such scenes that show and tell more since then. We know that Jean and Scott totally had sex up there, but it's only ever implied. I like, though, that in the flashback scene where the establishment of the psychic rapport is shown, Scott and Jean are only shown from around the shoulders up, and there's not a thread of clothing evident from what little we see. And what she did to temporarily cure Scott's eyes was just an amazing moment. I've forgotten or half-remembered a lot of things from the era, but those scenes on the butte, I'll never forget.

As Cobie mentions, the scenes that showcase Wolverine are simply iconic. So much of what Claremont and Byrne were doing with the character were so groundbreaking. What's more impressive to me is that after all these years and all the jadedness toward the character I've built up since, I still find these scenes awesome and love how they reminded me of what used to be so special about the character. It also doesn't hurt at all that I think Byrne draws one of the very best Wolverines that any artist has ever depicted! The mannerisms, that sly, devilish smile and so much more--honestly, I can think of few others who do a better job, if any. Byrne's Wolverine and how much I'm enamored of it are some of the genuine surprises for me to rediscover in this re-read so far. No lie! I'm already starting to miss Byrne knowing there are very few stories left (but what GREAT stories still remain!).....

When Wolverine was apparently shot, I fully expected him to rise and reference his healing factor, but he was apparently really fearful of being killed by the blast and managed to dodge it. Given what we later learned of his healing factor, it's a safe bet that Claremont hadn't yet conceived of the ability at least to the extent that we came to know it. Wolverine's life being endangered by gunfire seems laughable these days. I kind of miss his more vulnerable days (as more than a gimmick, at least, as is the case with what I've heard of him recently losing his healing factor).

Jean as the Black Queen is pretty vicious! At no point not more so than when she abuses Storm, whom she visualizes as a slave.

This reminds me of the artistic choice in 134 on the second page where Byrne shows Peter, Scott, Ororo and Kurt in the same poses in three successive panels as they actually are, then as they normally look and finally as Jean sees them in her delusion. I love little touches like that. Byrne did something similar in the aftermath of the battle in Chicago when he segues from the finished battle to their regrouping at Kitty's house. I meant to mention that for after I read it, but Byrne delighted me again and reminded me of it. Here, though, it's a close shot, when it was a wide shot in the previous example, so Byrne isn't merely repeating himself.

One thing I'd forgotten was that Emma Frost was absent/missing/presumed dead during this portion of the arc. Apparently, even Shaw and the others hadn't been informed of her survival at this point. But her absence allows for us to see more of Shaw, Leland and Pierce. It's interesting that the Inner Circle's one non-mutant member is terribly bigoted toward mutants.

I suppose it would have been interesting to see how/if the X-Men would have prevailed if Jean hadn't overcome Wyngarde's brainwashing. This coincided with Wolverine's arrival, so we'll never know if Wolverine's rescue would have been successful. Presumably, he would've been outmatched, especially if Jean remained under the influence.

So a series of dominoes falls as Wyngarde goes too far, attempting to kill Scott on the psychic plane. In her rage she takes revenge on Wyngarde and loosens her self-imposed restraints on her power. And we are left with an ominous cliffhanger. Jean is suddenly in red and suddenly turns on her fellow X-Men as they flee the scene of the Hellfire Club....and Dark Phoenix is born! To be continued, indeed!


^ You are indeed correct sir, I meant 132-134, so that must have been a typo.

Fanfie, I'm interested in your comments regarding Kitty as we move forward. I think I can kind of see where you're going with it. In a way, Nightcrawler and Shadowcat moving to Excalibur was the best thing that could happen in terms of preserving "the innate fun" of both characters since the main X-titles--like so much else in comic books in the late 80's--grew increasingly dark for all involved.

Lardy, great comment on Byrne's artistic choices with the panel structures. When I reread, I noticed both instances too and was blown away by them, so when you mentioned them I immediately knew what you were talking about. It all just reminds me of what a major influence Byrne was. He's certainly a contender for single most important and best creator of the entire 1980's. Perhaps far down the road we can reread his Fantastic Four run too.

And I also have to echo your comments on Wolverine. Reading the Wolverine that made people love him is just so damn enjoyable. All of that nonsense is still so far off, and its nice to just sit back and watch a truly great character continue to grow.
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
Lardy, great comment on Byrne's artistic choices with the panel structures. When I reread, I noticed both instances too and was blown away by them, so when you mentioned them I immediately knew what you were talking about. It all just reminds me of what a major influence Byrne was. He's certainly a contender for single most important and best creator of the entire 1980's.


Oh, he most definitely is! Hard to argue with all the significant things he did that decade.

How do you feel about his depiction of Wolverine? Do you feel similarly to me or are there a lot of artists above Byrne with Wolverine in your mind?
Lardy, I know exactly what you mean about how much those iconic Wolverine scenes still resonate no matter how much resistance a reader has built up towards the character.

Cobie, the more I think about it, Claremont didn't do too much damage to Kitty in the pages of Uncanny X-Men itself; his worst offenses, I feel, are actually in the Kitty Pryde & Wolverine mini-series, where she cuts off her hair and temporarily goes all ninja. Thank God none of that lasted. Other female characters are another story, and I'll get to that in due time.

I can't really think of anything else to add to what you guys have said about 132-134, so I'll just wait til you've both caught up on the next three issues, then I'll open the floodgates, so to speak, because I have a lot to say about those issues.
I'm hard pressed to find any artist who draws a better Wolverine either. So I think I'm in agreement!

It's amazing how obvious his influence is on the Image artists who came later. McFarlane's Wolverine is basically Byrne's but slightly more stylized. Others are directly influenced but without Byrne's mechanics and basic understanding of anatomy.

Other artists did great Wolverines too: specifically Cockrum (especially on the covers), Paul Smith, Frank Miller and a few others. But none are quite as iconic as Byrne, who has the right conbo of visceral meets superhero.

I know you like the brown and tan costume like me too, so we'll soon get to briefly see Byrne draw Wolvie in that, probably my favorite artist / costume combo for him.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
I can't really think of anything else to add to what you guys have said about 132-134, so I'll just wait til you've both caught up on the next three issues, then I'll open the floodgates, so to speak, because I have a lot to say about those issues.


Fickles, if you've already gotten to them, feel free to post your thoughts. Just because we tend to go Cobie-Lardy-Fickles in the review order doesn't mean that you can't post first! It's not set in stone or anything..... shake
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
I'm hard pressed to find any artist who draws a better Wolverine either. So I think I'm in agreement!

It's amazing how obvious his influence is on the Image artists who came later. McFarlane's Wolverine is basically Byrne's but slightly more stylized. Others are directly influenced but without Byrne's mechanics and basic understanding of anatomy.

Other artists did great Wolverines too: specifically Cockrum (especially on the covers), Paul Smith, Frank Miller and a few others. But none are quite as iconic as Byrne, who has the right conbo of visceral meets superhero.

I know you like the brown and tan costume like me too, so we'll soon get to briefly see Byrne draw Wolvie in that, probably my favorite artist / costume combo for him.


It's funny.....before this re-read, I never thought of Byrne's Wolverine as potentially THE iconic version of the character, but I certainly am leaning that way, now! nod

Cockrum did a good job on Logan, but I tend to associate him more with the characters he created...and especially Storm and Nightcrawler. I'm particularly looking forward to seeing Paul Smith's version for the first time in many years when we get to it.

I just think Byrne injects Logan with so much character and brings across the attitude in his expressions. I remember Byrne's brief run on Wolverine's solo book fondly, as well.
Thanks, Lardy. Yes, as with the Proteus arc, once I started the Dark Phoenix arc I couldn't stop.

The Dark Phoenix Saga is a magnificently executed story, but it's a troubling one, because in the end, what it basically says is, women cannot handle power. And it would have had the same message whether or not it had the original ending, with the Shi'ar draining all of Jean's powers.

I believe there was a way of doing the story without having to resort to killing or de-powering Jean. If, say, she trespassed into Shi'ar territory and threatened to consume the star/destroy the planet/destroy the battlecruiser, but didn't actually go through with it because her better nature won out in the end, we still would've had a grand epic, and it would have planted seeds for lots of further stories down the line.

Instead, what actually happened, as far as I can gather (and anyone is free to correct me) is that Byrne drew Phoenix consuming the star et cetera, which wasn't in Claremont's script, and Salicrup, who if he'd been an editor worth his salt would have realized that this was pushing the envelope too far, failed to stop the comic from going to press as it was, resulting in Shooter delivering the edict that Phoenix must die for committing mass murder.

If I may digress for a moment, I think that's a little rich coming from Shooter, who, in a story he wrote himself in Avengers, sent the mass-murderer Korvac to his death, but with the bullshit caveat "His intentions were noble." There's a sexist double standard at work there -- Shooter's saying that men can wield near-omnipotent power responsibly, while women will just use it to commit destruction.

And to think it all began with Claremont and Cockrum simply wanting to turn Jean into the X-Men's female equivalent of the Avengers' Thor. We'll never know what might have been... sigh

Having said all that, there's still a lot to enjoy about the final three issues of the Dark Phoenix Saga, especially the climactic battle against the Imperial Guard, expertly choreographed by Claremont & Byrne, but the aftertaste feels off to me.

That's my two cents. What does everyone else have to say?
The Dark Phoenix Saga is one of those cases where I can't turn off the part of my brain that 'knows' that this isn't Jean (since, retroactively, it's just the Phoenix Force pretending to be Jean), making the it all feel kind of hollow, from the X-Men being willing to fight to the death to defend her (unaware that she's asleep at the bottom of a bay on Earth), to her 'sacrifice' at the end. I'd love to be able to shut off the part of my brain that knows all this, and enjoy the story for what it was, back when this was 'really Jean.'

The 'women can't handle power' thing didn't strike me, back in the day, although the increasing portrayal of Storm losing control of her powers when she got angry or frustrated or her phobia triggered or she got a mohawk seemed to be heading in that direction as well, at this time. (Still, on a team with Cyclops, who has been since his introduction, the poster boy for 'can't control his power,' it seemed less sexist.)

But, over the years, it seemed like many female characters with significant power, such as Snowbird, Moondragon and the Scarlet Witch, were increasingly portrayed as out of control or morally ambiguous or just flat out villainous, at times (occasionally accompanied with power upgrades, leading to the 'women can't handle power' sense), while male characters who had similar awesome power levels, such as Thor, tended to get a pass. Whether or not it was a gender-issue, when it happened to Jean, it quickly became one, with even Jean-lite girl Rachel Summers getting smacked down for misuing her powers, while Jean-lite boy Nate Summers managed to avoid getting stabbed in the heart by that bastion of moral rectitude, Wolverine, for abusing his powers. Byrne, in particular, seems to fall for this trope a lot. I like his writing, generally, but he's earned his bad reputation for his portrayal of women, with even lesser powered characters like Aurora suffering from self-control issues.

Somewhat oddly, I never managed to find a copy of 137 back in the day (I was still getting my comics off a spinner rack in a local drugstore and pretty much at the mercy of whatever was there at the time), so the only version of that tale I'd ever read was the version where Jean lived, for at least a decade, before finding a copy of 137 (after she'd already been resurrected for X-Factor!) and finally getting to read the story where she died!

Loved the new Imperial Guardsmen, who weren't Legion riffs, and I'd perversely love to see them get 'counter-riffed' and for versions of Manta, Hussar, Warstar and Earthquake to show up in a Legion title as one-shot foes or something.

Loved the use of the Blue Area of the Moon, particularly along with the use of other fantastic places in the Marvel Universe, like the Savage Land. Had this run continued another hundred issues with the same creative team, I'm sure we would have visited Atlantis, or the underground realms of the Mole Man, or the Negative Zone!

I think many people my age would be shocked most by two facts of this era: that Rogue and Emma Frost were villains. Sure, it is talked about in the comics, but Rogue got great press from the cartoons. We don't have a memory of her has villain (even X-Men: Evolution painted her as a victim when she hanged out with the Brotherhood).

If I hadn't found old New Mutants comics I would not be aware of the extent of Emma's villainy. Some recent writers have been toying with Emma's morality, but it is difficult to see her going the villainous route again. She's too popular for Marvel to let go of, but I understand the recent shift back towards Jean Grey. Emma really doesn't fit the Disney image.
I'll give my own review of the last third of Dark Phoenix first up front, and then dovetail into responses to everyone else's comments...

Uncanny X-Men #135 - 137
On the heels of the magnificent 6 issue build-up before it, the final three issues of the Dark Phoenix Saga culminate in a glory of high quality creativity. To me, this remains comic books at its finest, and one of the highest points Marvel ever achieved after the Silver Age. So that should pretty much sum up from the beginning where I stand.

The change of Jean from Phoenix to the Black Queen to Dark Phoenix is not sudden by any means, yet it still feels like an alarming and tense turn of events. The ending of the story is classic and legendary, with good reason. But the final three issues are so much more than just "Jean is Dark Phoenix" and then "Jean dies". There is a lot of meat from start to finish and all of that is what actually makes this a masterpiece.

The series reaches cosmic heights again here, but there's a difference between this story and #107-108. In *that* story, we truly did see the most grandiose and cosmic peak of the X-Universe we'd ever seen. Here, we get close, but what makes this story work so well is that here we see the X-Men totally anchored by their humanity back to Earth. There is an underlying theme of friendship and more importantly love that makes it more tragic and more beautiful.

That is played up during the confrontation(s) with Dark Phoenix very well, as each hero struggles to beat her. We see Wolverine hesitate which goes against everything we've seen from him so far in yet another great moment. Jean's parents playing such a critical role is another stroke of genius, as those scenes are heartbreaking and as human as it gets--surely everyone can relate to a similar family situation where "powers of the Phoenix" are replaced by something more common or mundane? Of course, it's really when Scott confronts Jean on Earth that the human element is amplified to the max.

Once again Byrne (and Austen) really take this story to new heights. Byrne's touches are obvious in places: he loves to show the rest of the Marvel Universe reacting to events so we get one panel cameos of Spider-Man, Dr. Strange, etc. Peter Corbeau also shows up--usually an indication something BIG is going down--but I have a feeling that came more from Claremont, Cobeua's longtime champion. The inclusion of Angel and Beast is assuredly from Byrne. Claremont gives Angel a bit of a self-confidence problem so he has something to overcome but I think that’s more indicative of Claremont never really having a handle on the character (and as we'll see, I'm positive Angel joining the X-Men shortly is all Byrne's idea). The double-splash page in #137 is one of the best splashes we've seen ever in X-Men comics.

Claremont too shines in a big way. His words end the story perfectly: " jean grey could have lived to become a god. But it was more important to her to for ...a human."

The genocide committed by Jean, whether character assassination or not, is pretty damn epic. Byrne delivers in a style reminsicent of Kirby that few others could deliver. The race, btw, looks like the alien from Avengers #4. Has that ever been confirmed? Surely Byrne must have done that on purpose.

Bringing the Shi'Ar into the story is a stroke of genius as well, as things have now reached a cosmic fever pitch and we get a free for all of the Imperiel Guard versus the X-Men. For action lovers and lovers of stories with a plethora of characers, this really is a culmination of the last 8 issues. It also shows a united X-Men--new and old--trying to save one of their own against force that dwarves them in size and power. I also thought the Kree and Skrull bit was a fantastic little addition.

That being said, the real meat of the final issue, #137, is the first half in which the X-Men all individually prepare for what's to come. It's powerful stuff and creates a foreboding mood that is more like a noir film than anything else. It's that sensibility that leads into the heart-breaking ending where Jean actually does indeed become Phoenix again. You can see the X-Men's hearts break just as mine sunk deep into my stomach. Colossus, further endearing himself to me, can't kill her; Cyclops is barely hanging on; and finally, Jean ends things herself. Noir, the darkest and most human of all story types meets high concept space opera. I think it meshes perfectly.

There are a lot of other things to notice too in this story. Professor X plays yet again a bit of an oddball role that is hard to define. When he interrupts Scott's talking down Jean in #136 you can't help but want to scream at him in frustration. His complex relationships with Scott and Jean are always present, and that is a bonus for the series IMO. Prof X adds an element that most series don't quite have, even when he's at his most frustrating from a reader's perspective.

I also love the covers. Jean smashes the logo in #135 and then remains smashed in #136. Too bad the ugly bicycle add thingy is on the top part of #137's cover.

#137 is a double-sized finale, which is the first time in comic book history a comic book publisher did that at no extra cost. That's pretty ground-breaking! The next time? The finale to the Great Darkness Saga.

Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Thanks, Lardy. Yes, as with the Proteus arc, once I started the Dark Phoenix arc I couldn't stop.

The Dark Phoenix Saga is a magnificently executed story, but it's a troubling one, because in the end, what it basically says is, women cannot handle power. And it would have had the same message whether or not it had the original ending, with the Shi'ar draining all of Jean's powers.

I believe there was a way of doing the story without having to resort to killing or de-powering Jean. If, say, she trespassed into Shi'ar territory and threatened to consume the star/destroy the planet/destroy the battlecruiser, but didn't actually go through with it because her better nature won out in the end, we still would've had a grand epic, and it would have planted seeds for lots of further stories down the line.

Instead, what actually happened, as far as I can gather (and anyone is free to correct me) is that Byrne drew Phoenix consuming the star et cetera, which wasn't in Claremont's script, and Salicrup, who if he'd been an editor worth his salt would have realized that this was pushing the envelope too far, failed to stop the comic from going to press as it was, resulting in Shooter delivering the edict that Phoenix must die for committing mass murder.

If I may digress for a moment, I think that's a little rich coming from Shooter, who, in a story he wrote himself in Avengers, sent the mass-murderer Korvac to his death, but with the bullshit caveat "His intentions were noble." There's a sexist double standard at work there -- Shooter's saying that men can wield near-omnipotent power responsibly, while women will just use it to commit destruction.

And to think it all began with Claremont and Cockrum simply wanting to turn Jean into the X-Men's female equivalent of the Avengers' Thor. We'll never know what might have been... sigh

Having said all that, there's still a lot to enjoy about the final three issues of the Dark Phoenix Saga, especially the climactic battle against the Imperial Guard, expertly choreographed by Claremont & Byrne, but the aftertaste feels off to me.

That's my two cents. What does everyone else have to say?


Now, getting to Fanfie's comments and my own on the death of Jean. It's a multi-layered response to what we know about how the story was made, really. To me, Shooter did indeed make the right call: killing Jean was the best way to end the story as it was the most powerful, and it also followed what happened with the genocide to its noirish conclusion. That being said, Fanfie rightly points out that Shooter is a hypocrite--and he certainly is here. He's one of the more notorious cases of "do as I say, not as I do" editor / writers, who never held himself to the same standards as everyone else.

I do think Jean dying was the right decision given all that had happened. I think resurrecting her in X-Factor / Fantastic Four / whatever was a pretty terrible call, and began a long steady decline of comic books in general, not just Marvel, where nothing mattered anymore.

But again, Fanfie has a very good point. Strong female heroines quite frankly got the raw end of the stick in comics for a long time, and it’s a shame this happened to Jean, yet it never happened to her male counterparts. The Silver Surfrer, Captain Marvel, and others are prime examples of highly powerful male characters. There is, of course, Thor, but the original idea of making an "X-Men version of Thor" never seemed to work even as far back as #101-108.

Claremont, in my mind, loved his strong female characters and always tried his best to show them off as powerful, leading figures. But whether he succeeded is hard to say. Storm is one of Marvel's best, but she was depowered for years; this isn't something I think was too bad, but it lasted far too long and had a negative effect. Claremont tried to salvage Ms. Marvel, his #1 "Marvel leading lady" but the damage had been done and even after she was Binary, there didn't seem to be anyone all too interested in doing anything with her. Rachel Summers was clearly Claremont's way to work on the aspects of the Phoenix he found interesting. He obvoiusly never intended to take her in the direction of "Jean as Phoenix" but because of what had already been done to Jean, her never-ending self-destruction felt at times like throwing gas on the fire.

All this said, I still think Jean dying was the right call given what was drawn in the issues leading up to #137, so I'm not too disheartened by it (unlike so many other things).

Originally Posted by Set
The Dark Phoenix Saga is one of those cases where I can't turn off the part of my brain that 'knows' that this isn't Jean (since, retroactively, it's just the Phoenix Force pretending to be Jean), making the it all feel kind of hollow, from the X-Men being willing to fight to the death to defend her (unaware that she's asleep at the bottom of a bay on Earth), to her 'sacrifice' at the end. I'd love to be able to shut off the part of my brain that knows all this, and enjoy the story for what it was, back when this was 'really Jean.'

The 'women can't handle power' thing didn't strike me, back in the day, although the increasing portrayal of Storm losing control of her powers when she got angry or frustrated or her phobia triggered or she got a mohawk seemed to be heading in that direction as well, at this time. (Still, on a team with Cyclops, who has been since his introduction, the poster boy for 'can't control his power,' it seemed less sexist.)

But, over the years, it seemed like many female characters with significant power, such as Snowbird, Moondragon and the Scarlet Witch, were increasingly portrayed as out of control or morally ambiguous or just flat out villainous, at times (occasionally accompanied with power upgrades, leading to the 'women can't handle power' sense), while male characters who had similar awesome power levels, such as Thor, tended to get a pass. Whether or not it was a gender-issue, when it happened to Jean, it quickly became one, with even Jean-lite girl Rachel Summers getting smacked down for misuing her powers, while Jean-lite boy Nate Summers managed to avoid getting stabbed in the heart by that bastion of moral rectitude, Wolverine, for abusing his powers. Byrne, in particular, seems to fall for this trope a lot. I like his writing, generally, but he's earned his bad reputation for his portrayal of women, with even lesser powered characters like Aurora suffering from self-control issues.

Somewhat oddly, I never managed to find a copy of 137 back in the day (I was still getting my comics off a spinner rack in a local drugstore and pretty much at the mercy of whatever was there at the time), so the only version of that tale I'd ever read was the version where Jean lived, for at least a decade, before finding a copy of 137 (after she'd already been resurrected for X-Factor!) and finally getting to read the story where she died!

Loved the new Imperial Guardsmen, who weren't Legion riffs, and I'd perversely love to see them get 'counter-riffed' and for versions of Manta, Hussar, Warstar and Earthquake to show up in a Legion title as one-shot foes or something.

Loved the use of the Blue Area of the Moon, particularly along with the use of other fantastic places in the Marvel Universe, like the Savage Land. Had this run continued another hundred issues with the same creative team, I'm sure we would have visited Atlantis, or the underground realms of the Mole Man, or the Negative Zone!



First, let me spend a moment imaginging if Byrne had stayed on for another hundred issues and the adventures in all those places that would have happened, plus the Microverse, the gangster Skrull universe, World War II, etc. You're so right!

Back to your first comment Set, I hear what you're saying. I don't have that, actually: to me, in these issues, this is Jean. This is NOT the Phoenix entity. That retcon, I can't wrap my head around. (Ironically since all of these issues were published when I was a baby or a toddler).

I've always found the first five or six issues of X-Factor so bad that I don't really register them into the history of the X-Men. Instead, I see them as a series of terrible mistakes that Weezie, Claremont and others spent the next several years fixing via several crossovers and more complicating storylines.

Lastly, the difference between Rachel and Nate Grey was the time they were written. Rachel Summers debuted in a time when powerful characters were seen as scary and constantly being questioned by the creators and readers. Nate Grey came a decade later when it seemed that the more uber-powerful you were, the "cooler" you were. I think it would have been an awesome story if Nate Grey went batshit crazy and Cable & others had to shut him down permanently. That could have been the Dark Phoenix redux the big 2 have been trying to achieve forever.

Originally Posted by Emily Sivana
I think many people my age would be shocked most by two facts of this era: that Rogue and Emma Frost were villains. Sure, it is talked about in the comics, but Rogue got great press from the cartoons. We don't have a memory of her has villain (even X-Men: Evolution painted her as a victim when she hanged out with the Brotherhood).

If I hadn't found old New Mutants comics I would not be aware of the extent of Emma's villainy. Some recent writers have been toying with Emma's morality, but it is difficult to see her going the villainous route again. She's too popular for Marvel to let go of, but I understand the recent shift back towards Jean Grey. Emma really doesn't fit the Disney image.


I think Rogue wasn't really a villain long enough for people to think of her that way in the collective memory of fandom. I certainly don't. I think it’s a cool element, but like Hawkeye or the Scarlet Witch & Quicksilver, it happened relatively quickly in a small number of years.

I still see Emma Frost as neutral at best, and an excellent choice to go full blown antagonist again. But most of her career was spent somewhere in the grey area; probably only her very first two appearances had her as a full blown villain. Once Magneto began to change in X-Men #150, most of the X-Men's villains became more complex. The Hellfire Club, while always "bad guys", usually had understandable motivations.
Uncanny X-Men #138

To close out of the Dark Phoenix Saga, we get #138 which is the funeral of Jean Grey though its essentially a "all that has come before" issue which allows John Byrne to enjoy himself recapping the entirety of the X-Men's history, featuring every single character that had appeared thus far.

The cover to #138 is pretty dynamic: "EXIT CYCLOPS!". It's one of my brother's all time favorite covers so its always stuck out to me. My comic book guy mentioned that when it came out, he thought that was it--Cyclops was gone permanently from the team. It must have felt that way at the time. It's not until the Man-Thing story in a half year that we realize he'll still be part of the cast.

The "summary of all that came before" issues were popular in the early 1980's, especially at Marvel. Marv Wolfman did one in Amazing Spider-Man that sticks out in my mind. The Avengers "changing of the guard" issues also kind of had this. As I kid, I would love them and go bananas over them. As an adult, I don't love them so much as there isn't all that much there. Still, they hold some sentimental value. This one works really because of Byrne and Austen's beautiful artwork.

The book ends of the story are where this issue really shines. The opening splash is devastatingly beautiful and ominous. I love that Jean's dad asks how he's holding up; though incredibly subtle, Jean's dad has endeared himself to me over the last few issues. Lilandra's gift to the Grey's is nice but it's always felt out of place that the one responsible for their daughter's death gives them a gift. Still, this plot point will have big story repercussions years later with Rachel.

What makes this issue work is the ending is pretty fantastic. After Scott announces his farewell, it all comes down to the last page, in the middle panel. The panel is solemn yet strangely uplifting. Scott is alone and sad; but he's engaged in the world because of Jean. Whereas he was previously cold and distant, unable to express his feelings because he was afraid of what might happen, now he's feeling things and alive. And he'll continue to try to be.

(FYI, Lardy, you can see a lot of my inspiration for how Cobie was portrayed over the years stems from Scott during this era).

Following Scott's exit, the final panels show the arrival of Kitty at the school. This ending is uplifting and important: life goes on. Along with the bad comes good in unexpected places. It's almost as if Claremont and Byrne knew they had put the fans through the ringer, and they owed us one.

And the X-Men are never the same.
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
First, let me spend a moment imagining if Byrne had stayed on for another hundred issues and the adventures in all those places that would have happened, plus the Microverse, the gangster Skrull universe, World War II, etc. You're so right!


It could have been glorious. Byrne and Claremont, warts and all, seemed some of the few writers of the day who *celebrated* all of the wild and whacky stuff available to him in the Marvel universe. Instead of hiding from it, or trying to ghetto-ize whatever title(s) they were currently working on into their own little compartment, they were like a kid in a candy store, wanting to stuff everything in their mouths all at once, and yet *still* were able to add to the already crazy full Marvel Universe such enduring characters as Sebastian Shaw or Emma Frost.

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Back to your first comment Set, I hear what you're saying. I don't have that, actually: to me, in these issues, this is Jean. This is NOT the Phoenix entity. That retcon, I can't wrap my head around. (Ironically since all of these issues were published when I was a baby or a toddler).


I was graduating high school around this time, so it *should* be the case that this *is* Jean, and the, IMO, mishandled resurrection nonsense in X-Factor, years later, was just some Elseworlds Alternate Universe Fanfic that I can dismiss, but, sadly, my brain does not always cooperate with me on such notions. smile

I go back and read that issue, and I think some combination of 'wow, they had a lot of thought balloons and stuff back then!' and 'aw, poor Colossus, having a moral quandary in his underwear about some bag of energy pretending to be Jean.'

Cobie, I personally think that Phoenix-as-female-Thor could have worked -- the concept never had a chance, because Cockrum left so soon after Jean became Phoenix, and Claremont & Byrne took her over to the dark side. Gradually, yes, but definitively. I do agree with you on the early issues of X-Factor, which are the low point of Bob Layton's career for sure.

Emily, I think that Rogue and Emma Frost were both quite nasty in their earliest appearances, but Rogue had the excuse of just being a misguided kid, so I can accept her as a heroine far easier than with Emma.
Uncanny X-Men 135-137

Lots of interesting insights into the Dark Phoenix Saga above--and lots of food for thought! So...where to begin?

Hm. I think I'll start for a moment with memory vs. reality. How does a story that I loved and discovered many, many years ago measure up? What surprised me and what held firm?

I think, for one thing, that it was surprising to see just how short of a time Dark Phoenix existed under that guise. Essentially, we got two full issues and a few panels in the issue before and the issue after. This is a testament to how compressed comic book storytelling was then. It's truly remarkable that the story can leave such a lasting impression when Jean's time as a bad guy was so very short. I mean, if you include her time as the Black Queen, it's a little bit longer, but no one calls it the "Black Queen Saga", right?

But I'd say, as a more sophisticated reader at 44 than the 14-15 year-old kid who read it the first time, that it probably could have used another issue or two for maximum effect. I mean, there's a lot left on the table and some beats that could have been explored. Basically, the story goes: Phoenix turns on the X-Men, heads out into open space and destroys an inhabited planet and a Shi'ar ship, returns to Earth to be defeated and de-powered by the X-Men, endures trial by combat for her crimes with the X-men by her side and finally kills herself to end her own threat. I think, for example, that we got from the initial fight with the X-Men to her destroying all those lives a little two quickly. It feels like there should have been some escalation in between, whether an ensuing fight with the Avengers or her causing some destruction on Earth or some combination or any other smaller scale mayhem. Instead, it's like we went from riding a bicycle to piloting the Millennium Falcon, y'know? We're barely processing that Jean is evil when we immediately see her commit the worst possible atrocity! From a pure storytelling perspective, it would make more sense to see an escalation.

But, that said, you can also see what Claremont and Byrne were doing and justify it. I mean, when the Dark Phoenix is finally unleashed, they don't pussyfoot around, right? Her full power unleashed, she just goes for it and immediately loses complete control in the worst way. And it is shocking the way it was presented, without a doubt.

But one benefit more of an escalation would have undeniably had was that we would have gotten to see more of Jean as Dark Phoenix. I think it was needed for us to connect with the story even more and to help define the character better. There's no mistaking that this iteration of Jean Grey was very enigmatic. Was she a woman who couldn't handle ultimate power or a victim of possession by a cosmic entity? Most of her long arc beginning with issue #101 points to the former, but there is also plenty of narration and dialogue in the final three issues that speak to the latter. Which was it? The eventual ret-con that brought her back is technically neither, but it is closer to the second explanation because it and the ret-con render Jean essentially blameless.

Going in, I remembered it as essentially absolute power corrupting her absolutely, but there are definitely references to the "Phoenix entity" in these original stories. These references unfortunately left the door wide open for the two to be revealed as two separate beings.....and for the separation to be taken a step further, eventually revealing that the "real" Jean was still under Jamaica Bay.

But if the story was actually forever left alone, I might be doing this re-read and trying to discern whether the tragedy of this storyline was that Jean couldn't control her power and sacrificed herself for the good of humanity or that she'd been possessed by a malevolent entity that could only be stopped by killing herself. It's a fine difference, I suppose, but it's a meaningful one to me. I feel that I prefer the first interpretation, the one I always believed, but there's some internal story waffling that disappoints and makes it hard to ignore the later ret-con as I had hoped to do.

Does all this make it a bad story? No, not at all. There are some unforgettable scenes that still hold up and make this remain a classic. For me, it's the emotional moments: Jean, confronting her family, Scott's psychic proposal after Jean's apparent cure, the process the other X-Men went through figuring out if they could support Jean, Jean's final moment with Scott. And a trio of great, dramatic fight scenes--the two between Jean and the X-Men and the climactic Imperial Guard duel--remind you that this is still a superhero comic book and a very well-crafted one.

But I don't know that it's quite the gold standard anymore that I once held it up as. And that saddens me a little.
Phoenix: The Untold Story

My Marvel Masterwork edition included this original draft of 137 and the commentary from Salicrup, Shooter, Claremont, Byrne, Austin and Jones. I still own this in the floppy somewhere, but I haven't read it in a very long time. I decide to read it flipping to every panel compared to the handy actually-published 137 handy earlier in the volume.

One thing I was very surprised to find that the last 5 or 6 pages are not the only difference between the two. The dialogue and captions throughout vary dramatically in close to half the panels. Claremont used the new ending as an opportunity to reframe the story toward the more tragic outcome. One huge example of the reworking is those scenes of all the individual X-Men weighing their options privately in the morning before their impending battle with the Imperial Guard. Originally, these were mostly opportunities for the X-Men to comment on their backstories or plotlines--Logan wondered if he'd ever see Mariko again, Peter thinking about his brother Mikhail, Angel realizing he'd missed being in action, Storm missing Kenya to name a few. In the final version, their thoughts are almost exclusively for Jean, and we get great subtext like Kurt's musing about the Holocaust. Basically, all of the additions inform the new ending much better than if only the ending had been changed. Heck, in the original version, even Scott's thoughts were more about how he's changed from being an orphan to the leader of the X-Men than about the direness of the situation they're facing!

Another big change in the final version was how the Beast objects to the lack of any trial for Jean and of justice overall in the situation. Here, he and Angel are offered a chance to back out (as they aren't currently X-Men), but they decline. In that scene where Hank is bathing, he laments not taking the opportunity to leave as a chance to bring in the Avengers instead of the great food for thought he provided with his unique viewpoint about how Jean should be judged.

It's interesting how Claremont made all of these changes with the same art. He makes it work pretty well, but Byrne would have dramatized these moments to give them the proper weight had he known what the scenes would eventually depict. (Obviously, there was no time for that. The creator commentary explains they had maybe three days to change everything.) I doubt he would have chosen showing most of the characters in whimsical situations for such hefty existential and moral contemplations.

The only art change before those last few pages is one panel, the one where Cyke offers a hand to Angel for he and Beast helping them out. In the original, he offers a hand to Gladiator instead, both wishing each other an honorable battle.

There's no mistaking that the final version of 137 is superior to what was originally intended. It's a much more powerful ending with a better build-up than what would have been published. It definitely feels like all the pomp and circumstance amounted to very little with Lilandra simply wanting to remove Jean's powers after all of that effort. The roundtable included with the creators show, however, that Shooter didn't tell anyone they had to kill Jean, only that he wanted them to come up with a different ending that didn't let her off so easily. Claremont, in fact, says that it was none other than Roger Stern who suggested killing her off!

The discussion goes on to give a rough idea of where Jean's storyline would have gone. There was always a plan with Claremont and Byrne to have 150 feature Magneto. However, the general idea was that Magneto would have taken Jean and use her against the X-Men. He would have found some way to restore her powers and would tempt her with restoring them. This would be after she struggled to come to grips with what she had done as Dark Phoenix but would be tempted because she'd essentially been stripped of all of her abilities, making her akin to a cripple. She would ultimately reject this and choose to live out her days as a normal human. She and Scott would marry, retire as heroes and basically live happily ever after.

It's like seeing an alternate version of a great movie you loved. In this case, the final version was superior.
Lardy, even if Shooter didn't actually tell them to kill Jean, I've heard an alternate behind-the-scenes report (I can't remember if it was Byrne or Claremont, or where it was published) that Shooter suggested a Promethean punishment where she was tortured by cosmic forces for all eternity. Given the misogyny that Shooter has shown in his own writing, that's not surprising to me.

The idea that Stern was the one who came up with the idea to kill Jean is very disturbing to me, given that he wrote the female Avengers so well.

The point that the seeds had already been sown for the retcon five or six years down the line is a good one, and well taken. But I'm surprised at the lack of comments about my alternate idea, where she almost commits genocide but doesn't, or about my point that Phoenix-as-female-Thor could have worked given the proper opportunity and development.
Uncanny X-Men #138 and Annual #4

A beautiful issue which more than transcends its "summary of all that came before" status. Claremont's stroke of genius was to have it be narrated by Scott, giving us a very revealing look behind the stoic shell. This issue is one of the main reasons why Scott used to be so attractive -- the strong, silent type whom lots of fangirls (and lots of fanboys) wanted to bring out of his shell the way Jean managed to.

Byrne shines, too, managing to cram lots of visual easter eggs for the hardcore X-fans into only 17 pages. And Austin matches Byrne every step of the way.

On the other side of the spectrum is the highly disappointing Annual #4, which exists mainly to give us a partial origin of Nightcrawler and to show that Claremont writes a pretty good Dr. Strange. Unfortunately, Kurt's origin is truncated to a few panels near the end, and Claremont and artists John Romita Jr. & Bob McLeod spend way too much time on a series of tediously repetetive supernatural battles, which are too pristinely and too unimaginatively rendered. I know I'm generally very harsh on Junior, but in this case it's because he went on, almost a decade later, to portray hellish realms and the supernatural brilliantly during Ann Nocenti's Daredevil run. Then there's the creepiness of the revelation that Amanda is Kurt's adoptive sister, and the bittersweet final hurrah for my beloved original Wolverine costume, which won't be seen again until the early 1990s. In my opinion, the X-Men annuals from 4 all the way through 8 are nothing special, and wouldn't scale the heights of the Claremont/Perez/Austin annual until the Art Adams-drawn Asgardian Wars tie-in in annual 9 (I don't rate the Dracula annual, because I hate that Rachel Van Helsing becomes Dracula's victim.)
I've also never read (don't own) Annual #4. I was really curious about it since it's an important story for Amanda, but I can't say I'm overly anxious to try now! Overly tedious magic battles are one of my pet peeves in magic based superhero stories.

Great commentary on Scott in #138, Fanfie. He was such a strong character and this issue hits all the beats that show that.

I'll comment a little more on Dark Phoenix when I'm not posting from my phone...
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid

Great commentary on Scott in #138, Fanfie. He was such a strong character and this issue hits all the beats that show that.


Thanks, Cobie. Scott was my first real superhero crush because one of the first superhero stories I read was the original Dark Phoenix Saga trade with the Sienkiewicz cover. I'm appalled at the way that Scott is periodically ruined by creators, be it Bob Layton in the mid-1980s, Grant Morrison in the early 2000s, or the committee which, over the last couple of years, has pretty much taken Scott past the point of no return.
That's probably my single biggest problem with the way Marvel handles the X-Men in general. There are no shortage of other things, but the handling of Scott by one creator after another who blatantly don't understand him yet feel the need to destroy him to further their stories is infuriating.
Well said. That's one of the reasons I'm enjoying this re-read so much, for the reminders of how awesome and sexy Scott is when he's written right. I'm looking forward to his solo showcase in 144.
It's in this run that we see Xavier come back and flip out on Wolverine threatening him with 'demerits' if he doesn't play well, and it's *Scott* who tries to explain that this is not how you lead someone like Wolverine, and Xavier then snaps that the problem is that maybe he shouldn't have put Scott in charge in the first place.

It's kind of amazing how well Scott comes off compared to Xavier (who, at this point, is well before Onslaught / Xavier Protocols and closer to 'St. Xavier who can do no wrong').

And yet, these days, Scott has a reputation for having a stick up his butt and being some sort of tin-plated tyrant. It's completely bizarre.

When I was younger, Scott, especially compared to Logan, was always my favorite. He played well with others, had friends, had respect, and always, always, always had the hottest girl in the room, ever since he was a gangly teenager! If there was an in-group, he was not only 'in' it, he was *in charge* of it.

Logan, by comparison, behaved like an awkward schoolboy around Mariko, which was kind of awesome to see, and yet gave the impression that he was, underneath it all, shy and uncertain in that area, which, as a teenager, was not the sort of role model I was looking for. I wanted to be like the confident guy with the hot redhead on his arm, not the anger-management-issues short hairy guy who started stuttering when a pretty girl entered the room.

So yeah, probably not for the same reasons as Fanfie, I totally dug Scott. smile

Cheers, Set. cheers
Lots of good comments. I've noticed too that I still feel like I did when I first read these issues when I was about 19 or so, which is that I just admire Scott in a huge way. Even now, at an age where I'm older than the character himself, I still feel that way. Claremont and Byrne (and others during this long era) just present him as being an admirable man who knows he isn't perfect but strives to be the best he can be.

The same can be said for most of the others in their own way. Ororo and Kurt are two others that are both very strong and very vulnerable in different times. They are wholly unique--there is no other character like either in fiction. Neither has been trampled on as badly as Scott over the years but most writers don't know what to do with then because they are interchangeable and easily plugged into some hair-brained plot.

Loving all this Cyke love. I also can't wait for #144. I'm also a big fan of Lee Forester.
Lee Forrester was awesome...until she started dating Magneto. But even at her worst, I still liked her a lot more than Madelyne Pryor.

Oh, dear. I'm getting way ahead of myself again. blush
Back in that day, I found Cyclops far more interesting than he had been before 'All-New X-Men.'

And the new characters, I found Nightcrawler, Colossus and Storm crazy cool, personality-wise (and with powers! How many weather controllers were there? How many teleporters on teams? These days, half the teams have a pet teleporter which they use as a neighborhood bicycle, and otherwise ignore, like Manifold). Wolverine was useful, as a narrative device, because every leader needs someone to challenge that leadership (and therefore demonstrate leadership!), or else it's terribly boring and feels 'unearned.'

Thunderbird came and went so fast that he was a bug on the windscreen.

Banshee was the one that puzzled me. It seemed like they really didn't know what to do with him, and when they did focus on him (Super-awful haunted leprechaun-infested Cassidy Keep? Oy.) it turned into an LSD trip...

I feel like they really struck gold with Colossus, Nightcrawler and Storm (and, since he's literal gold, Wolverine), but kind of floundered around with Banshee.

It goes back to something I said earlier in this thread: in my opinion, Banshee should have been the older guy who's seen it all, while Wolverine should have been younger. Instead, we ended up with two older guys in the team. Ah, well, at least Banshee exited the team in a classy way.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Lardy, even if Shooter didn't actually tell them to kill Jean, I've heard an alternate behind-the-scenes report (I can't remember if it was Byrne or Claremont, or where it was published) that Shooter suggested a Promethean punishment where she was tortured by cosmic forces for all eternity. Given the misogyny that Shooter has shown in his own writing, that's not surprising to me.


It's certainly possible that he offered that suggestion. However, the roundtable seemed pretty open and candid and that possibility for her as an alternate fate wasn't mentioned.

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The idea that Stern was the one who came up with the idea to kill Jean is very disturbing to me, given that he wrote the female Avengers so well.


I don't think that just because Stern suggested Jean's fate shouldn't cast aspersions on his character. It's clear that your views are colored by what you feel was misogynistic treatment of Jean, but that doesn't mean Stern or anyone else had misogynistic leanings. I know Shooter gets that rep for what he did to Carol Danvers and to Janet Van Dyne. He may very well deserve that rep, especially for Carol. But some people found, and still find, the portrayal of spousal abuse with Hank and Jan to have been a brave and topical story to portray in a comic in its time. But Stern's overall record shows he believes in writing strong women, I feel.

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But I'm surprised at the lack of comments about my alternate idea, where she almost commits genocide but doesn't, or about my point that Phoenix-as-female-Thor could have worked given the proper opportunity and development.


You know, despite their stated original intent, Phoenix definitely comes off as something to be feared, even in her first appearance. I mean, there's more than one way to interpret her transformation in that issue, but her first words, "Hear me, X-Men! No longer am I the woman you knew! I am FIRE! And life incarnate! Now and forever----I AM PHOENIX!", can certainly come off as ominous. It certainly seems to portend the events as we know them to happen more than just the X-Men having their most powerful member to date.

I mean, there are a lot of "what ifs", but I find it hard to backtrack before 137 and wonder if she'd stopped herself from destroying the D'Bari or if she'd "only" destroyed a sun in an uninhabited system. I'm not trying to undermine your point of view, but it seems such a moot point compared to what exactly the nature of the Dark Phoenix was and lamenting how the story itself was undermined when Marvel brought her back.

I suppose one could argue that the resurrection undid any perceived misogyny about women with ultimate power and the feeling that they would have to die by effectively absolving her of any culpability whatsoever and undoing her self-inflicted suicide. Yay feminism?

I'm sorry. This isn't meant as an attack on you, Fickles. It isn't really about misogyny or feminism either. It's ultimately about my frustrations with Marvel and DC and how they manage to repeatedly undo their own great stories for the sake of maintaining their precious IP.
Lardy, I think the reason the Promethean punishment wasn't mentioned by the roundtable was because everyone involved either knew they'd risk their jobs by making Shooter look bad, or, in Shooter's own case, he was covering his ass; in addition to his reputation as a misogynist, he also has a reputation as someone who plays fast and loose with the facts.

Stern is probably not a misogynist, I agree, but it is dishearteaning to me that he saw no better option than her death.

Regarding your final point, I dislike the retcon-slash-resurrection as much as you do, and for the same reasons as the ones you've given. I do wish Jean hadn't died in the first place, but given that she did, I'd rather she have stayed dead in the core Marvel Universe reality. I don't think bringing her back proved anything positive or was beneficial in any way. Having said that, I am interested in exploring how things might have turned out if she hadn't been killed at all, which is why I started that alternate timeline thread in the Bits forum.
Uncanny X-Men 138

You know, this story certainly had its moments, but it could have been much better than the "story so far" clip show that it actually was. Framed around Jean's funeral, it was an excuse for Claremont and Byrne to take a breather and not actually have to create much.

I'm sure it didn't help that this probably wasn't what they had in mind for 138 following up on their original ending to 137. Or maybe it was pretty much? The Masterworks addition includes the drawn first page to what the issue was going to be. Byrne depicts Jean serenely kneeling beside a pond and dipping her fingers into it as Scott smiles in the background, holding her slippers. Maybe as he presides over her recovery, he reflects on the X-Men's history but with a more upbeat bent? Hard to say.

I suppose what I would have really wanted here was Scott reminiscing squarely on his and Jean's life together. I know the narration gives it that bent, but why not depict just the definitive events between them, plus some moments we'd never seen before? I think this is exactly what Claremont would have done later in his run when he had even more clout and confidence in his storytelling ability, but as is, a story called "Elegy" doesn't really serve its titular purpose very well.

But there are some moments worth seeing here. I particularly liked seeing Scott and Mr. Grey attempt to console one another. I also applauded how Scott refused to go back into his shell and cast away everything Jean had taught him about living life. He needed to leave the X-Men for a while, but it wasn't to shut himself off from living. And Kitty's arrival at the end is just so beautifully symbolic of death and rebirth, of life going on. Knowing what's ahead for the X-men with her as a member and for her as a character, it's easy to feel uplifted at the end. Honestly, I would have rather seen a whole issue of the X-Men dealing with Jean's death, punctuated with these moments, than the clip show we got.

All of these thoughts you had about Cyclops were pretty much right on. Once upon a time, he was a great, passionate and compassionate character and a great hero to be admired. I miss that character. Looking back (or ahead), I think it all fell apart for him when Marvel decided to bring Jean back and have him leave his wife and son in response. All of the ret-conning, time-warping of Nathan/Cable and villain-izing of Madelyne Pryor couldn't undo that damage. From there, it just snowballed over the decades to the point he's at now.

I'll enjoy, though, continuing this re-read and seeing again what a great, admirable hero he used to be.


Bizarre Adventures 27 (Phoenix story)

This Marvel Masterworks did buyers like me a nice favor and includes this rare story that was published in the short-lived Bizarre Adventures magazine. I never owned this and indeed never knew it existed before I saw its inclusion in Uncanny X-Men Masterworks Volume 5. So this was a bit of a treat.

Note: The same Bizarre Adventures included solo Iceman and Nightcrawler stories, but those weren't included in the Masterworks. Both of those were written by Jo Duffy (the latter co-written with Bob Layton)with art by George Perez on the Iceman story and Dave Cockrum on the Nightcrawler story. Both sound like stories I wish had been reprinted here and that I might track down some day.

But the story at hand focuses on Sarah Grey visiting her sister's grave and reminiscing about how an outing with her sister turned into a shared adventure as both fall captive to the Atlantean villain Attuma.

John Buscema is the artist on the story, which is, appropriately, written by Claremont. Buscema's art, presented her in black and white as it was in the magazine, is really beautiful. It has kind of an ethereal, airbrushed quality to its appearance and isn't merely an uncolored strip. I like how this works for the story as a flashback to a deceased character. His work is very beautiful here and a visual treat. However, his Jean doesn't really bring the character's definitive look in my opinion. Without color and seeing her occasionally in costume, you'd never know it was Jean. I'd recognize Byrne's Jean anywhere, for example.

The story itself is pretty unusual and has somewhat of an uncomfortable vibe. You see, Attuma's intent here is to make Jean and Sarah his "wives". So essentially, the intent here is for the villain to rape our leads and produce powerful offspring. This is what Attuma states. Presumably, since Sarah is not powered, she's to be just a bonus sex slave. In fact when Jean is able to get free and attack Attuma and his cronies, he states that he will put Jean's head on a stake so that she may witness Attuma and Sarah consummate their marriage. Yeah, pretty dark, but the intent of the magazine was to tell stories without the Comics Code. It's a little hard to get that uncomfortable out of my head as I read the story, but it certainly helps that none of those acts actually happens in the story.

So casting the darker edge of the story, it's a tale of a "normal" sister dealing with her sister being something she can't relate to and even fears. As subtext, that's a larger truth that many of us can relate to as a theme, even if we can't relate to super powers. And it's a pretty interesting idea to feature a character in Sarah that we've really only seen in passing before. She experiences and is a frightened participant in a high stakes scenario that her sister has encountered many of before.

And we get to see Jean save her sister in a way that hints at the extent of her power that we came to see before her story was over. And Sarah gets to save her right back. But Sarah is left in fear that maybe her children will be mutants who face the kind of dangers that Jean constantly deals with. Then, Jean wipes Sarah's memory of the adventure to soothe her sister's troubled mind, recalling what Jean did to Kitty's dad and perhaps not showing good judgment in exercising the ability.

But when Jean died, Sarah reveals that the memory block also lifted. She finds that she is less fearful for her children in the wake of her sister's heroic sacrifice.

I could have done without the sex slave implications, but overall I'd say this is a much better "elegy" to the character of Jean Grey in its own way than issue 138 was supposed to be.

Uncanny X-Men #139-140

The main thrust of these issues is the tying up of the Alpha Flight loose end, which leads to Wolverine and Nightcrawler going to Canada and unexpectedly teaming up with half of Alpha Flight against Wendigo.

But, in my opinion, the best scenes in these issues are the subplot about Ororo and Kitty's blossoming surrogate mother/daughter relationship, and Ororo's jealousy towards Kitty's friendly dance teacher, Stevie Hunter. Wonderfully executed by Claremont & Byrne, this is a reaffirmation of their talents for quiet little interpersonal moments.

The main story doesn't come off quite as well, I think. While it is pretty cool that the creators chose to tie up a second loose end regarding Wolverine's very first appearance, in the pages of the Hulk's solo book, and while the battle against the Wendigo is well done and there are good character bits, it all feels a bit routine to me. Also, when Snowbird turns savage and has to be talked down by Wolverine, it's already starting to feel rather cliched. It's also kind of a shame that we only see half of Alpha Flight, while the other half are off guest-starring in an issue of Machine Man which I haven't read. Perhaps the Canadian government's dissolving of Alpha Flight at the end was Claremont & Byrne's way of protecting these characters from other creators who wouldn't understand them quite as well. Alpha Flight, as far as I know, didn't show up again until the first issue of their own Byrne-driven series, nearly three years later. As I said before in this thread, I loved the first issue of Alpha Flight, but felt it was all downhill from there (though I think Fabian Nicieza was getting the book on track before he was removed from it after just a little over one year.)
Uncanny X-Men #139-140

In the post Dark Phoenix era, we have John Byrne winding down his run with Claremont as he gears up for his big Fantastic Four masterpiece but not before getting in a few more excellent stories. I actually like this little story quite a bit and its for the same things that Fanfie praises, which are the personal moments that focus purely on character and the relationships between the various X-Men. Meanwhile, while the Wendigo story is somewhat routine, it looks amazingly lush and beautiful as done by Byrne, Austen and Wein--full of action, dynamism and color.

The opening sequence is one of those "classic X-Men sequences" that helped make danger room scenes so classic. We see the "new" X-Men after Cyclops has left with Angel rejoining and Kitty Pryde now on the team. The change in the roster came at the exact best time possible: in the Proteus Saga, right before things went tits up in Dark Phoenix, the X-Men had coalesced into a formidable unit. Now, with Angel being rusty and not knowing his teammates, and Kitty being brand new, the team is forced to figure out a way to mesh together again. It also provides a further reason for Professor X to be there. This evolution is further shown by Storm assuming the role of leader (which we see more of in the next story arc) and Wolverine changing his costume.

The main story, featuring half of Alpha Flight and Wendigo, is something the fans were going nuts to see. Not only did they want more Alpha Flght, they wanted (for whatever reason, since it wouldn't be on my "must see list") Wolverline versus Wendigo Round 2. So the creators give it to them, and tie up the loose end of Wolverine's status in Canada. That is an appropriate subplot to resolve since there is a clear "everything is different now" feel to the series in the wake of Jean's death, and the series is moving on to other things. What I love about this whole sequence is the way Logan and Nightcrawler interact with each other and with Vindicator, Snowbird and Shaman. As mentioned before, Shaman and Snowbird are my two favorites in Alpha Flight and this story is basically why. We also get to see Wolverine joking around with Heather Hudson, which comes off as genuine and playful--adding a nice element to Logan's already complex personality. At stories end, Wolverine clarifies his views on killing, perhaps to silence the letters page once and for all about his being a murderer.

I like the Wolverine talking down Snowbird scene because of the way it mirrors the earlier Scott / Jean scene in Dark Phoenix. More importantly, Wolverine acknowledges the similarity himself in story--suggesting that seeing Scott do that with Jean changed something within him; now he's recognizing some of the ways Scott was right about things that perhaps he missed before. It’s a sublte way to show how Wolverine has been changed by Dark Phoenix, and also shows his growth by what he’s learned from Scott.

The best scene in the entire 2-parter, IMO, is the end of #139 with Nightcrawler looking at the sunset. This is one of my favorite scenes in X-Men history. It is incredibly heartfelt and is something anyone who has ever lost someone can relate to. Claremont deserves the credit for this, as he must have seen the beautiful sunset that Byrne had drawn and then found the perfect words to express Nightcrawler’s grief. For me, Nightcrawler has perhaps the best three scenes out of the entire run of #100-200. One was the conversation with Scott in #109; now this one; and my absolute favorite one is still to come.

The others all get nice character moments here in their own way. Storm and Colossus exhibit some gallows humor in the opening sequence which is totally out of character for them. Yet that is incredibly realistic and humanizes them so much. Humor is the best coping mechanism people can utilize when they’re sad or scared or don’t know how to feel. Later, we see a nice scene where Peter is removing a tree stump and he talks of his love of Mother Nature and farming, which is really an offshoot of his homesickness subplot but in a way to get away from the possibilitiy of his leaving. This sense of creating things will eventually evolve into his creating art, a part of his characer I love.

Like Fanfie, the Kitty / Ororo scenes are among my favorites here. They are chalk full of character from start to finish. Both characters are endearing and interesting, and the chemistry they share is like wildfire—from here on out, the Kitty / Storm relationship remains a high point of the series. And just as storm was showcasing some gallows humor earlier, she’s now showcasing some feelings of jealously, which again serve to make her more human. The scene is helped by Stevie Hunter being such an interesting, complex character. Kitty refers to her backstory offhandidly but is shows she’s another complex, multi-layered character.

Kitty is revealed to be a genius, making me fall even more in love with her. I like that she has an extra curicular activity in dancing—its’ something more teen heroes should have. Yet another great addition to Kitty’s story.

Meanwhile, as a clear example of all his few appearances as an X-Man during this era, Angel comes off as a bit of an enigma. Claremont clearly didn’t have a feel for the character; he’s not unlikable, but there isn’t really anything there to be excited about other than his awesome depiction by the art team. Other than his being rusty, we get the clear sense that he and Logan don’t like each other, and that is one facet that I like quite a bit. That is bound to happen with any group, and the two mutually disliking one another serves the franchise well in the long run, setting up some great scenes down the road, one in particular in the X-Tinction Agenda crossover. They’re much like Scott and Logan, except without Warren ever earning Logan’s respect as a leader, because the situation never demanded it.

After the epic Proteus Saga and the epic Dark Phoenix Saga, this story is a nice change of pace by focusing entirely on character. Although Byrne was winding down his run, it also set up the next phase of the X-Men nicely.
Meanwhile, as is shown by other posts, the X-Men were making appearances in various other places as well around now.

As I said, I don't have and have never read Annual #4. I've always sought after it because of how important it is for Amanda Sefton, whom I like quite a bit. But also because I'm curious about how Kurt's girlfriend is revealed to be his step-sister. Say whaaaat? Not the best plot twist.

All I've ever known about the Bizarre Adventures story is that it exists, so its great to hear your review, Lardy! It actually sounds like an interesting story since we get to see Jean's sister and Jean have an adventure together. As many know, Jean's sister was once considered as a replacement for Jean in X-Factor when Claremont learned about what Byrne, Layton and others were going to do. It's a shame some idiot writer eventually killed her.

Also during this time was Marvel Team-Up #100, which is a great Fantastic Four / Spider-Man / X-Men story that introduces Karma. It's by Claremont, Byrne and Austen and is pretty damn fantastic. I can't remember if it came a little later or around now.
Uncanny X-Men #141-142

John Byrne clearly has one more epic story in him before he departs, as Claremont and he present yet another legendary story in X-Men lore (and comic book lore) with Days of Future Past. It’s amazing how revered this story has become over the decades. When I was first getting into the X-Men in the early 90’s (during the era the cartoon did a version of it too), it was already spoken about in hushed tones as a masterpiece. Now, after Marvel has milked the concept of alternative dystopia futures for 30 years, it’s basically like the Old Testament.

Forgetting all the band stories to come over the decades, its easy to see why people went apeshit bananas. The story if yet another fantastic epic from start to finish, and is loaded with so many things that its almost overwhelming. On top of high quality art and masterful penmanship, the plot / montage of what’s actually happening is just incredible.

In the post Dark Phoenix era, the X-Men would again re-focus on mutants, the dangers mutants face, bigotry and fear. These elements were the most important part of the first 15 issues or so of the series but they occasionally slid into the background. Hereafter, with this story, they become paramount once again; the series remains permanently focused on mutants as a metaphor.

The “Future” we see is so chalk-full of easter eggs that you can’t help but list them in your head as you’re reading: Magneto as a wheelchair bound X-Man; Franklin; Kitty & Peter together; etc. And then of course Rachel. It’s never said in this story but its obvious that Rachel is Scott and Jean’s daughter (to me at least). I’ve become a fan of Rachel over the years though it took a little prodding along by some thankfully good stories.

Better than the actual future is that we get a timeline of how it got to that point. You know the series was a critical and sales hit by how much Marvel milked all these things in the 80’s. We get “1984: Do you know what your children are?”. That is so brilliant a phrase that Marvel used it as an add in 1984 in their comics. The Mutant Control Act of 1988 suddenly became like a ticking timebomb weighing down on the series as the decade slowly progressed. (Of course, it’s amazing that the future takes place in 2013.) This story, and the possible future ahead, lent a very serious weight on the series moving forward.

The future X-Men come off as interesting characters but I’m not really a fan of “possible future” stories or even “alternative reality” stories in general. There are just too many bad stories I’ve read that have those. One thing for sure is Wolverine has yet another fantastic sequence where he’s “the man”; but even better, the scene where the Sentinel kills him is iconic. That death is harsh and happens quickly, possibly to show “he isn’t that much THE MAN”.

Beyond the future, we also get a fantastic story in the present, as the new Brotherhood of Evil Mutants is introduced. They are all interesting in their own way, though Mystique clearly steals the show. She is one of the best characters in the entire X-Men franchise, and this is shown right from the beginning. The Raven Darkholme identity and her Pentagon connections make her more dangerous than anyone but the reader knows and further sets up future plots. We even get the Nightcrawler connection hints from the onset, though that plot point remains dangling for longer than the average age of most X-fans.

BTW, I also like the Blob because he’s such an asshole. He’s just clearly a big piece of shit. Sometimes that’s needed in a villain!

Senator Kelly is more fully introduced as the larger political and governmental problems come into focus. These problems, which are not so easily solved, also give Professor X another thing to do in the series.

The X-Men themselves all come across well. After the character / plot focus in the prior story and the first half of this one, #142 presents a real slugfest that allows each member to shine. Storm comes across as a very capable leader, even if she’s a little unused to it. Kitty, while not really involved in the slugfest, has an excellent scene in the beginning of the entire story, so she also gets some nice screen time.

The ending of the story is also great as it’s complex: the X-Men are victorious yet the future X-Men all die. Destiny predicts things might also be terrible for mutants if Senator Kelly lives, and then we see subsequently see Kelly & Shaw and the start of Project Wideawake, which will linger over series for years to come. And then, in the final panel, we get the by now infamous Henry Peter Gyrich–probably the most hated man in comics—who transitions from the Avengers series to the X-Men series. That must have been a shock for readers of Avengers, which by now I believe Byrne was drawing too for a brief run, after Gyrich was essentially phased out.
Cobie, you've definitely given me some food for thought about the second Alpha Flight appearance, although I still wish we'd gotten the whole team.

I'll comment on Days of Future Past later this week, after I finally re-read it.

IIRC, Marvel Team-Up 100 was drawn not by John Byrne but by Frank Miller. I usually don't like him, but I could tolerate him in this story, maybe because Claremont's script was so good.
Cobie, I got the impression earlier that you meant to respond to my posts on 135-137 & Phoenix: The Untold Story that began here (and continued in the following post) but didn't at the time because you didn't want to do so on your phone. If I'm correct, I'm reminding you before we get to far removed from Dark Phoenix.
Fanfie, you're so right about Frank Miller, which I forgot about. And funny enough, I think I mentioned it earlier in this thread. He does a really great job in the story too--it's still in his very early Marvel style that he had on Daredevil.

Lardy, I posted a few further thoughts on Fanfie's thread in Bits yesterday, but I'll go a little further: essentially, I think you're absolutely right. I've never read the untold story but your description is fascinating. I can easily see how the earlier scenes might have been lighter with more whimsical thoughts; I think changing those thoughts to reflect the more serious ending to come was definitely the right decision, as it lent the entire issue some gravity from start to finish.

As is usually the case in life, what really matters is the finished product. That is the final message you're saying. So its always fascinating to see some editing and changing going on. With a monkey wrench thrown into the process, Byrne and Claremont had to make some hard decisions fast. It reminds me of the brilliant decisions made by TMK when edicts came from up on high. Sometimes when you're under the gun and don't have time to second guess yourself, you're at your most inspired.

I have to say I'm surprised the story doesn't quite hold up for you though as it once did. A lot of that certainly is about you as a person--you read the story when you were younger and it holds a certain place in your heart. I have many stories like that myself. I read it when I was 19 years old and probably had already read 10,000 comic books or something. So I still think its a masterpiece.

Our discussion around Dark Phoenix alone has made the entire reread worth doing. It says a lot that a story published in 1980 (a year before I was born, by the way) has us this enthralled.
#141-142

As bad as things are in the world of the 21st century X-Men, there’s even worse over the horizon. The last survivors of the group launch a desperate mission. But it’s not launched to save themselves. Even on the edge of extinction. Even after the untold daily horrors they have suffered. The X-Men seek to prevent global devastation and save everyone, including their persecutors.

They selflessly plan, knowing that they will cease to exist if they succeed or will certainly be killed if they fail.

It doesn’t get much more heroic than the X-Men in issues 141 and 142.

I’m always impressed at the way Claremont holds back in his telling of the story. There’s no introductory wall of text providing the back story. There’s no huge opening battle between the Marvel heroes and the Sentinels. There’s a worn out woman picking her way through the wreckage of a city, where she is accosted by the thugs left behind when everyone else left.
Within those three opening pages, readers know that this is New York, that Kate Pryde (only recently introduced as a 13/14 year old) is the worn out captive of the Sentinels, that there is a mission and that Logan is free.

The changes of this world are shown in heart rending clarity by simply following Pryde back to the internment camp. In the trams, that are horse drawn due to America’s isolation, we see clothing marked depending on genes. We see the angry, hateful faces of the other passengers. And we see the seated, pointing child, singling the standing Pryde out, a clear sign that future generations may be even worse.

Claremont is not showing us a dark mirror of our world as Pryde walks towards the camp gates and towards the “intentionally humiliating” security examination that awaits.
In the run down streets we have seen economic collapse and loss of individual freedoms. On the trams we have seen discrimination and persecution. Through the camp gates, passing the graveyard, we see the loss of hope and the systematic elimination of anyone who does not follow the robotic drum beat of this society.

But putting the comic down and looking out at the world. There’s not a country without a past or present littered with such incidents and atrocities. There’s not a country where it can be guaranteed that such things could not easily happen again. There’s no added darkness in this mirror.

All of this before large scale, high tension fight scenes across two times against deadly foes with the fate of humanities future far from guaranteed.
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
Lardy, I posted a few further thoughts on Fanfie's thread in Bits yesterday, but I'll go a little further: essentially, I think you're absolutely right. I've never read the untold story but your description is fascinating. I can easily see how the earlier scenes might have been lighter with more whimsical thoughts; I think changing those thoughts to reflect the more serious ending to come was definitely the right decision, as it lent the entire issue some gravity from start to finish.

As is usually the case in life, what really matters is the finished product. That is the final message you're saying. So its always fascinating to see some editing and changing going on. With a monkey wrench thrown into the process, Byrne and Claremont had to make some hard decisions fast. It reminds me of the brilliant decisions made by TMK when edicts came from up on high. Sometimes when you're under the gun and don't have time to second guess yourself, you're at your most inspired.

I have to say I'm surprised the story doesn't quite hold up for you though as it once did. A lot of that certainly is about you as a person--you read the story when you were younger and it holds a certain place in your heart. I have many stories like that myself. I read it when I was 19 years old and probably had already read 10,000 comic books or something. So I still think its a masterpiece.

Our discussion around Dark Phoenix alone has made the entire reread worth doing. It says a lot that a story published in 1980 (a year before I was born, by the way) has us this enthralled.


I guess that the biggest response I was looking from you (and from Fickles and any other interested parties) is: What do you think is the true nature of/explanation for Jean's existence as Phoenix/Dark Phoenix as presented by Claremont and Byrne in these original stories?

To me, it's a debate well worth having. Was she Jean unlocking her power to its ultimate potential and not being able to handle it? Was she a victim possessed/influenced by a cosmic entity and therefore not responsible (or at least mostly not responsible) for her actions? Or was she never Jean in the first place (as Marvel ultimately decided)? Or was there something other theory that's workable based on the original material?

Again, the major reason it didn't quite live up for me on the re-read is because I'd always believed the first explanation because that's how I remembered it. It was disappointing to see references to a "Phoenix entity" in the original story and to see how Claremont and Byrne in fact sowed the seeds for what I always felt previously was a bastardization of a classic. Basically, it was a much better ret-con because of those references, and I hate that it is.

All other quibbles I have with the story pale in comparison, even the things I wished had happened, such as more "screen time" for Dark Phoenix and thinking there should have been more escalation before she destroyed D'Bari.

So Cobie, I ask you and everyone else before we get too far removed--what do y'all think?
Uncanny X-Men Annual 4

While it's not a particularly remarkable story (and I concur with Fickles that most of Claremont's X-Men Annuals are pretty *meh* overall), I wouldn't say by any stretch that this one's terrible or a hard skip.

For one thing, I do like John Jr.'s artwork here. it's interesting to see his older style again, which is more of a classic style and reminiscent of his dad's work. And while it is correct that the later Jr. would definitely have made this vision of Hell more macabre and generally weirder than what we got here, it's still rendered competently and with some flair. The overall vision is more of desolation than of horror, and I can see how that can be thematically effective. Plus, well, this was a Code-approved book at a time when the Comics Code still had some weight.

I certainly would have preferred more than a cursory look into Nightcrawler's background, but we do get some good tidbits, particularly the tragedy involving Kurt's stepbrother. It seemed there was more to this story and Kurt's life with Margali and Amanda that could have been fascinating to read about. I don't know if we ever learned a whole lot more to my recollection.

For the record, I don't find Kurt's romantic relationship with his stepsister to be creepy, for whatever reason. I can certainly see how it would be, but there are certainly precedents in fiction over various media.

It succeeds, as Annual 3 did, in doing one of the things that I think annuals should do: tell an engaging, self-contained story. (The other option being to tell the climax of a big storyline.) It's not essential reading, but it's worth a look.


Uncanny X-Men 139-140

You know, the big eye-opener of re-reading this story was being reminded of Angel's brief tenure among our merry band of mutants during Cyclops's absence. I had completely forgotten he'd ever been a member during this era! Even to the point that his floating head was included among the other familiar faces in the corner box! I guess you can easily argue that his stay was brief and not exactly filled with huge moments for him, but it's pretty funny I'd forgotten, considering I really had kind of an affinity for the character during my teens. So, to know I'd forgotten about this.......well, old dude feels OLD! laugh

Otherwise, not a lot stands out from this story, other than things that have already mentioned, like the bits with Ororo, Kitty and Stevie Hunter. For the most part, it was *just* par for the course, "par" meaning that Claremont and Byrne delivered another two issues of solid storytelling that makes most of today's comics look like total dreck in comparison!

As always, it's an absolute pleasure to see Byrne draw Alpha Flight, albeit only three members. Other than the explanation of the other three appearing in Machine Man, I'd wager that Sasquatch was kept out to make Wendigo much more of a threat. But I sure would have loved to see ol' Walter Langkowski tussle with such a similar analogue! (I'm sure they probably did later at some point, but probably not with Byrne drawing it. frown ) But no one draws any Alphan like Byrne, imo, so it's nice to see Mac, Shaman and Snowbird, at least. And of course, we get Heather for the first time as a bonus, plus more details of Logan's past with her and Mac.

Speaking of Logan, we finally get him in the costume Byrne designed for him. (I love the non-explanation when Nightcrawler asks! "Why not?" indeed! lol ) It occurs so late in Byrne's run that we, unfortunately, won't get to see Byrne draw him in it much. But I personally prefer it as the more subdued colors seem to suit the character better. After this re-read, however, the gap between my preferences has narrowed a good bit. I'd still choose the Byrne redesign, but I now "like" the yellow/blue/black where I used to hate it.

The new costume is significant in that it's the only new costume that Byrne designed for any of the leads during his tenure. He really didn't even tweak any of the other costumes (not counting the Dark Phoenix change for what I see as an obvious reason). I respect that a lot because it showed Byrne respected and recognized the greatness of Cockrum's designs. The one costume Byrne did change was not a Cockrum-created character. Though Cockrum's Wolverine was itself an improvement/tweak on what Herb Trimpe did in creating the character, it means something to me that Byrne left Cockrum's designs alone. I mean, what hot artist these days doesn't do numerous costume changes on a team book just to put his stamp on the book and the characters. Byrne's restraint on this during his run was classy, and the one change he made served the character well, imo.

I think it's interesting that the cliffhanger with the Blob (who interestingly, isn't referred to by anything but his real name in the teaser) just scratches the surface of the awesome epic that it leads into. No indication as to who will lead the new Brotherhood or just what a cutting edge and significant story we are about to behold! Can't wait!
I like Wolvie's brown costume too, so much that I hated the yellow one ... I was introduced to the brown first ... I could actually see someone besides Logan wearing the garish costume ... like Daken but not Logan's personality.

I think 'Ro needed a new costume before she went all the way the other direction to punk Storm, she need a transition look even though Byrne drew her beautifully.

Nightcrawlers and Colossuses costumes were timeless. (if a bit impracticle with those shoulder wings)


I totally agree that Byrne and Claremont pack in the story! it is the subtelty, the looks on the characters faces during the quiet panels that tell the behind the scenes stories.

They don't beat you over the head with a 2 by 4 that has rusty nails sticking out of it.
Originally Posted by Paladin
I guess that the biggest response I was looking from you (and from Fickles and any other interested parties) is: What do you think is the true nature of/explanation for Jean's existence as Phoenix/Dark Phoenix as presented by Claremont and Byrne in these original stories?

To me, it's a debate well worth having. Was she Jean unlocking her power to its ultimate potential and not being able to handle it? Was she a victim possessed/influenced by a cosmic entity and therefore not responsible (or at least mostly not responsible) for her actions? Or was she never Jean in the first place (as Marvel ultimately decided)? Or was there something other theory that's workable based on the original material?

Again, the major reason it didn't quite live up for me on the re-read is because I'd always believed the first explanation because that's how I remembered it. It was disappointing to see references to a "Phoenix entity" in the original story and to see how Claremont and Byrne in fact sowed the seeds for what I always felt previously was a bastardization of a classic. Basically, it was a much better ret-con because of those references, and I hate that it is.

All other quibbles I have with the story pale in comparison, even the things I wished had happened, such as more "screen time" for Dark Phoenix and thinking there should have been more escalation before she destroyed D'Bari.

So Cobie, I ask you and everyone else before we get too far removed--what do y'all think?


Well...to be perfectly honest, I either missed or "bleeped out" the references to a Phoenix entity in previous reads, but if we do give them validity, I think would leave us with the same scenario as Green Lantern: Rebirth several years ago. If someone commits mass murder while possessed by an evil (in the case of Parallax) or amoral (in the case of Phoenix) cosmic entity, does that absolve them? I say "yes" in both cases, but I'll admit it's a shaky "yes" which is heavily influenced by my affection for both Hal Jordan and Jean Grey, and I choose to ignore the naysayers even as I concede that their arguments do have some value. Then, too, "Emerald Twilight" was a humongous turd, while "The Dark Phoenix Saga" was superbly executed.
Originally Posted by Paladin
For the most part, it was *just* par for the course, "par" meaning that Claremont and Byrne delivered another two issues of solid storytelling that makes most of today's comics look like total dreck in comparison!


nod
I always thought, and always will think that Jean didn't die, but her great omega level potential reached out to the cosmic entity Phoenix, they then became some sort of hybrid ... as the expression of the Phoenix reflected itself as Jean or in Jean ways but soon ate her all up and took over.

I actually think the Dark expression and corruption of the Phoenix (not only the corruption of Jean Grey) was due to Mastermind messing with them.

I don't think she or the Phoenix or the mixture they were would necessarily have gone mad without Mastermind.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Originally Posted by Paladin
For the most part, it was *just* par for the course, "par" meaning that Claremont and Byrne delivered another two issues of solid storytelling that makes most of today's comics look like total dreck in comparison!


nod


It really wasn't just the "Dark Phoenix Saga" issues but the years (?) leading up to the saga. To a certain (lesser) extent the Raven Trigon story as well! Her face changed slowly over time!

ahhh so good. wink
This thread appears to have stalled. What happened? Lardy wanted to discuss the Dark Phoenix Saga a bit longer, Peebs and I obliged, and then...crickets. Are you guys okay?
I've honestly been just so busy with work that I haven't had a chance to post. I have a reply to Lardy in my head, and I've read the next two issues, so I just need a little time when I'm on a PC (usually at work).

I don't like to post long responses from my phone as they did to get screwed up (and I hate typing with two thumbs).

I'd say please keep going guys. No need to wait for me or anyone. I'll be responding when I get a moment. Work has just been nonstop go-go- go for the last few days and I'm mentally frazzled when I get home.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
This thread appears to have stalled. What happened? Lardy wanted to discuss the Dark Phoenix Saga a bit longer, Peebs and I obliged, and then...crickets. Are you guys okay?


I've read 141-142 but just haven't had the time to write a post about it because, like Cobie, I've been a bit swamped. I see you haven't written up those issues either, Fickles. No reason to put that off on my account if you're ready for it. I certainly didn't mean to hold everything else up because of my desire to further explore the DPS. I certainly never meant to bog things down.

All that said, I'm beginning to rethink my stance on taking a break. I'm not burned out, exactly, but I've found myself wanting to read other stuff lately--from my ever-growing stack of "new" comics to a random bird I just got up my butt to read (not re-read) the original Celestial Madonna Saga. Someone posting artwork from it on the Dave Cockrum Art Appreciation FB page set me off and reminded me that I had had the trade for about a decade and had never read it. In a way, this X-Men re-read has sent me into a '70s nostalgia frenzy!

In any case I'm not now dead-set on taking a break, but I thought I'd throw it out there in case anyone else has had second thoughts.....
Originally Posted by Paladin


I guess that the biggest response I was looking from you (and from Fickles and any other interested parties) is: What do you think is the true nature of/explanation for Jean's existence as Phoenix/Dark Phoenix as presented by Claremont and Byrne in these original stories?

To me, it's a debate well worth having. Was she Jean unlocking her power to its ultimate potential and not being able to handle it? Was she a victim possessed/influenced by a cosmic entity and therefore not responsible (or at least mostly not responsible) for her actions? Or was she never Jean in the first place (as Marvel ultimately decided)? Or was there something other theory that's workable based on the original material?

Again, the major reason it didn't quite live up for me on the re-read is because I'd always believed the first explanation because that's how I remembered it. It was disappointing to see references to a "Phoenix entity" in the original story and to see how Claremont and Byrne in fact sowed the seeds for what I always felt previously was a bastardization of a classic. Basically, it was a much better ret-con because of those references, and I hate that it is.

All other quibbles I have with the story pale in comparison, even the things I wished had happened, such as more "screen time" for Dark Phoenix and thinking there should have been more escalation before she destroyed D'Bari.

So Cobie, I ask you and everyone else before we get too far removed--what do y'all think?


For me, the way I’ve always read this before I even knew about retcons and such, was that the Phoenix was a distinct separate entity that possessed Jean. However, rather than “the Phoenix acting as Jean”, I interpreted it as “Jean acting on her own after being corrupted by the Phoenix”. Therefore, it was still Jean who was thinking Jean-thoughts and doing Jean-things; but it was a Jean who had been turned towards this path against her will.

The basis for this, I’m sure, comes from the Lord of the Rings, which I’ve loved since I was about 11 years old and read many times, and Dungeons & Dragons, which had similar malevolent entities that could do this like the Hand of Venca. That probably served as the basis for my looking the story in this way.

As you say, from the very get-go, the Phoenix is treated as a very distinct entity. In the Dark Phoenix Saga, specifically when she battles the X-Men on Earth and in those final moments where the entity regains power in #137, there feels like a clear distinction between “normal Jean” and “Phoenix Jean”.

Yet, to say that the Jean of issues #101-137 is a totally different person / thing just is *too* far-fetched to me. That doesn’t quite ring true either.

For me, these issues feature Jean Grey, as corrupted by the Phoenix. But she’s still Jean. She would never have murdered all those beings if she had never been possessed by Phoenix, yes. But the Phoenix didn’t control her every move—rather, it influenced a darkness within her which allowed her own “dark side” to control her ever move.

The lack of a cut & dry explanation makes it more complex. Is Jean responsible? One might argue no, because like Hal Jordan she was possessed. But a case could be made—and I’m not the one to make it as I don’t really believe it—that she still should be somewhat guilty since she did these things and there was something terrible inside her that was unleashed.
I read ahead to two more issues, which I want to get in. This includes Byrne’s final issue in the run and the Cyclops spotlight fill-in before Dave Cockrum begins his second run on the series.

Uncanny X-Men #143

#143 is a small, one-off story yet it is no less a classic than the Dark Phoenix Saga, Days of Future Past or the Proteus Saga. It is one the quintessential issues of the entire Byrne / Claremont run and continues to stand out all these decades later as an example of excellence. That there should tell you how I feel about the issue, but being the wordy sunovabitch I am, I’ll go on.

The newest X-Man, Kitty Pryde is featured in a solo story here, with the story focusing almost entirely on her from start to finish (at least 97% of the issue). And if readers weren’t already in love with Kitty by now, they would leave this issue feeling that way. We get the classic “baptism of fire” for the rookie who is up against a much greater threat story, but this one is probably the gold standard in comics. With powers that are not the most aggressive and with no experience, Kitty is forced to use her wits to beat the N’Garai creature and in doing so shows a ton of ingenuity and courage. Every single panel reflects this, showcasing the deepest depths of her character and IMO, presents a clear case on what it means to be a hero (super or otherwise). With thought bubbles providing the play by play—making me long for them even more—Kitty battles her own fear, self-doubt and anxiety, overcoming it all one panel at a time.

It’s brilliant. And it’s made even more brilliant by this issue being basically a tour de force of plotting and montage. With only one character front & center with a personality-less monster, Claremont and Byrne take time to flex their plot muscles by providing wonderful pacing, plot structure and panel layouts. The end result is non-stop action, tension and cleverness every step of the way.

The opening sequence of time passing from the first battle with the N’Garai in #96 to now is just pure layout brilliance by Byrne.

The plot structure of having Prof X teaching Kitty how to do the ignition procedure on the Blackbird and then it coming back to save her in the end is just scripting brilliant by Claremont.

What a wonderful way to end Byrne’s run.

The issue also has a few other nice moments. The X-Men flying in Kitty’s parents to visit is a very nice touch. The first hints of the Peter / Kitty romance are shown in a fashion that makes you crave more. Cyclops has a quick scene that clues the reader into his not truly being gone from the cast, and it also introduces a favorite of mine, Lee Forrester. Always aware of the seasons in X-Men, Claremont showcases the 3rd New X-Men Christmas.

It’s amazing that by now, there was a steady build-up of animosity between Byrne and Claremont. Ego, I’m sure, had a lot to do with it. Byrne was simply ready to take on full duties of writing and penciling where he controlled the writing completely, including the scripts. There are various instances on the internet which show Byrne drawing something and then Claremont changing the dialogue so it wasn’t what Byrne intended. He’s said it wasn’t any one thing, or even #137 (which wasn’t Claremont’s fault) that did it, just a build-up over time. That’s too bad, but in reality, all good things must come to an end. It’s the fact that they ended which helps solidify how special they are.

And this was pretty damn special. It’s hard to find 10 other series in comics history on par with Byrne & Claremont on X-Men, IMO. Both creators would continue to do some pretty amazing things: Byrne would go on to his incredible Fantastic Four run, which I believe is the only other truly great run on that title besides Kirby & Lee. And Claremont had a LOT more great stories in him with the X-Men which he would showcase for many years to come.

It’s amazing this run was only about 3 years worth of stories, as it had such an immense impact. It was awesome to reread them again.
Uncanny X-Men #144

Between Byrne’s final issue and the start of Cockrum’s second run we get a fill-in issue in #144 which puts the spotlight on the missing Cyclops. This is clearly a fill-in story, and the lack of Byrne art can be a little jarring. Yet, for a fill-in, I think its actually quite good and deserving of some nice praise.

What we get is a great character piece for Scott Summers, which helps redefine him and reintroduce him to the cast in the post-Dark Phoenix era. He is shown to be the multi-layered character he’s grown into, and he gets to showcase all of his skills and heroism here.

The artwork is by Brent Anderson, who does a good job. Brent would be important to the X-Men in small ways over the years, but his biggest contribution of course is “God Loves, Man Kills”, which is a truly brilliant X-Men story.

In a bit of irony, Brent’s longtime partner on Astro City, Kurt Busiek, had a letter printed in the prior issue. Within the letter, he declares he’s quitting reading the X-Men in light of Dark Phoenix because things had grown too dark and depressing. IMO, he doesn’t come off looking too good. As the years went on, he matured a bit in his approach. Though I wonder how he feels now. (Wasn’t he somehow involved in resurrecting Jean? Bah! If so, I demand we hold his trial on Legion World).

The story involves Man-Thing and D’Spayre, two Claremont favorites as I pointed out earlier in the thread. I like Man-Thing but I can only take the character in small doses and with a greater story behind him. This story works though because these characters are secondary to the focus on Scott. Rather than spend pages and pages on non-sensical magic battles, we instead get an awesome focus on Scott’s past: his child hood sequence falling out of the plane and the beautiful moment on the mesa with Jean being the two big ones.

My girl Lee Forrester is showcased as well. The issue does a pretty good job introducing her but I can’t quite remember why I love her so much (it’s not here). I really like her being a fishing boat Captain, drinking entire pots of coffee, and going grabbing beer with the guys. There’s something very attractive about her.

Meanwhile, the X-Men are also seen back at home. In one scene Kitty gets upset when Nightcrawler and Wolverline tease her a bit. I actually found this scene kind of hilarious! It reminded me of the ball-breaking my fellow hockey players would give each other, or even my siblings. Of course, Kitty doesn’t find it all that funny at the moment. Over time, that would change.

One thing I didn’t like was the way Prof X asks Angel for money. This has always been annoying to me. Up until now, Angel has lingered in the background, and this is the only real subplot he’s gotten so far. It’s as if Claremont couldn’t think of anything else so he focused on the fact that Warren is wealthy—as if, that’s all he’s good for. I’ve never cared for those kind of plots.

The statement of Ownership shows that the paid circulation around this time was about 200,000, which is about double where it was at #100. That means it’s now emerged as one of the bigger sellers in comics though not quite on the high level of Spider-Man and the Hulk in the 70’s, which were upwards to about 300,000. Still, one could assume its been a steady climb throughout the celebrated Byrne run which won numerous awards. Hereafter, sales will continue to explode for a long, steady while.

In regards to taking a break, I'm up for either way. I don't mind continuing at all.

For some reason I've hit a sudden wave of feeling "meh" about a lot of comics I'm collecting lately, so it's been nice to reread some older stuff. That tells me I need to trim my list down again.

For me personally, my next big reread project might be Fantastic Four #1-101. Possibly followed up by the Byrne run. Then maybe I'll give Walt Simonson's run a real chance for those of you who told me years ago to do so...
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid

Uncanny X-Men #143

The plot structure of having Prof X teaching Kitty how to do the ignition procedure on the Blackbird and then it coming back to save her in the end is just scripting brilliant by Claremont.


Did anyone else look at that charred outline and wonder "is that really the creature?"
I'm actually in favor of taking a break after #144, because I've always felt that #145-167 are a bit of a slog, and they might be more enjoyable if we come into them fresh.

Lardy, I'm overjoyed that you're going to read The Celestial Madonna Saga for the first time. Could you please post a review of it in the All-Avengers Thread?

Cobie, I'm glad your considering giving Walt Simonson's FF a real chance. It's my personal second favorite FF run after Lee & Kirby's.

My own next re-read will definitely be the first 26 issues of Peter David's Aquaman.
I was thinking after 150, personally. It seems like such a natural cut-off. So....?

And I'll likely have a few words about the Celestial Madonna story to share, Le Fique! nod
If we do take a break, I actually like #144 better. I'd rather read Cockrum's whole run at once.

And yeah, it'll be awesome to see your thoughts on Celestial Madonna!
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
Originally Posted by Paladin


I guess that the biggest response I was looking from you (and from Fickles and any other interested parties) is: What do you think is the true nature of/explanation for Jean's existence as Phoenix/Dark Phoenix as presented by Claremont and Byrne in these original stories?

To me, it's a debate well worth having. Was she Jean unlocking her power to its ultimate potential and not being able to handle it? Was she a victim possessed/influenced by a cosmic entity and therefore not responsible (or at least mostly not responsible) for her actions? Or was she never Jean in the first place (as Marvel ultimately decided)? Or was there something other theory that's workable based on the original material?

Again, the major reason it didn't quite live up for me on the re-read is because I'd always believed the first explanation because that's how I remembered it. It was disappointing to see references to a "Phoenix entity" in the original story and to see how Claremont and Byrne in fact sowed the seeds for what I always felt previously was a bastardization of a classic. Basically, it was a much better ret-con because of those references, and I hate that it is.

All other quibbles I have with the story pale in comparison, even the things I wished had happened, such as more "screen time" for Dark Phoenix and thinking there should have been more escalation before she destroyed D'Bari.

So Cobie, I ask you and everyone else before we get too far removed--what do y'all think?


For me, the way I&#146;ve always read this before I even knew about retcons and such, was that the Phoenix was a distinct separate entity that possessed Jean. However, rather than &#147;the Phoenix acting as Jean&#148;, I interpreted it as &#147;Jean acting on her own after being corrupted by the Phoenix&#148;. Therefore, it was still Jean who was thinking Jean-thoughts and doing Jean-things; but it was a Jean who had been turned towards this path against her will.

The basis for this, I&#146;m sure, comes from the Lord of the Rings, which I&#146;ve loved since I was about 11 years old and read many times, and Dungeons & Dragons, which had similar malevolent entities that could do this like the Hand of Venca. That probably served as the basis for my looking the story in this way.

As you say, from the very get-go, the Phoenix is treated as a very distinct entity. In the Dark Phoenix Saga, specifically when she battles the X-Men on Earth and in those final moments where the entity regains power in #137, there feels like a clear distinction between &#147;normal Jean&#148; and &#147;Phoenix Jean&#148;.

Yet, to say that the Jean of issues #101-137 is a totally different person / thing just is *too* far-fetched to me. That doesn&#146;t quite ring true either.

For me, these issues feature Jean Grey, as corrupted by the Phoenix. But she&#146;s still Jean. She would never have murdered all those beings if she had never been possessed by Phoenix, yes. But the Phoenix didn&#146;t control her every move&#151;rather, it influenced a darkness within her which allowed her own &#147;dark side&#148; to control her ever move.

The lack of a cut & dry explanation makes it more complex. Is Jean responsible? One might argue no, because like Hal Jordan she was possessed. But a case could be made&#151;and I&#146;m not the one to make it as I don&#146;t really believe it&#151;that she still should be somewhat guilty since she did these things and there was something terrible inside her that was unleashed.


I can see your point of view. To me, it lessens the impact of the story somewhat, especially as the idea of a foreign entity being involved was introduced so late in the narrative, and it was underexplored once it was. It seems to support my thought that the DPS should have been at least a bit longer than it actually was. Basically, what exactly happened to Jean to get her this way could have been clarified so that we could then understand why Jean had to sacrifice her life.

I guess prior to 135-137, the only evidence that Phoenix was something other than Jean was her general "other"-ness immediately after she arose from Jamaica Bay and (this is more of a stretch) the references to her actually dying in the shuttle craft and being reborn as something else. Most of the "hard" evidence (from, say, Chuck and Moira) attributed the change to her latent talents reaching their fullest potential, so I'd say the needle mostly pointed to Phoenix being Jean, and only Jean, until the "Phoenix entity" references came up during the DPS in such a low-key way as to imply the storytelling had always pointed toward that explanation.

I should point out that John Byrne pointed this disparity out in some of his comments in the roundtable that accompanied Phoenix: The Untold Story and how he wondered where the "entity" bits came from and how that explanation pretty much acquitted her of all guilt. Claremont didn't really give an answer to that at all and seemed to side-step it. (Recall that this roundtable was printed 2 years or more before jean was actually brought back.)
You definitely make a strong case. I'd add if there was no entity at all, it would have made for a more tragic and possibly stronger story.

Byrne's comments surprise me as they show he was definitely willing to go there. Claremont , however, wasn't prepared to commit to the total damnation of Jean. That's ironic considering Claremont pushed for Jean to stay dead and Byrne was part of her resurrection.

As is, I think it's still a high point in superhero comics. It's amazing how much we've gone backwards since then-- as if we're in the Dark Ages where so much knowledge has been lost, yet a rennassiance could be right around the corner.
Originally Posted by Paladin
And I'll likely have a few words about the Celestial Madonna story to share, Le Fique! nod


Merci beaucoup, Monsieur Lardy! It'll be so nice to have the All-Avengers thread discussing a classic instead of the bore-fest that is the current Avengers.
Uncanny X-Men #141-144

Although comics would eventually get unpleasantly dark and dreary over the decade and a half which followed "Days of Future Past", that story still holds up beautifully. There's just so much to love: the starkly bleak flash-forwards contrasted with the ominous yet still hopeful present day, the introduction of Mystique and Destiny, the beginning of the odd-couple partnership of the effete Pyro and the thuggish Blob, and, most of all, Rachel, a favorite of mine since I was introduced to her in the early 90s during Alan Davis' triumphant writer/artist run on Excalibur.

I'm not quite as enamored of 143 as Cobie is, because as much as I love Kitty and as awesome as she comes off here, this has always felt to me more like a vignette stretched out to a full issue. IIRC, the story came about mainly because Byrne had based Kitty's appearance on what he imagined Sigourney Weaver to have looked like at 14, and Claremont being the "Alien" fan that he is, well...

So ends the glorious Claremont/Byrne X-Men era. I personally don't think either of them came close to equaling their accomplishments together on their own. I particularly find Byrne's writer/artist work to be extremely overrated, while Claremont had his ups and downs until he became a self-parody somewhere around 1987-88.

144 gets the post-Byrne era off to a very promising start, with Scott coming off great in his battle against D'yspare and the introduction of the salty, sassy, sexy Lee Forrester, a character I'd much rather Scott have stayed with than Madeline Pryor (or Jean Grey, for that matter.) While Claremont's superheroines would become more problematic in the years to come, he never lost his ability to write wonderful non-superpowered women like Lee. I think Brent Anderson's art is excellent, and wish he'd become the regular artist instead of Dave Cockrum returning for a largely underwhelming second run.

Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
In a bit of irony, Brent’s longtime partner on Astro City, Kurt Busiek, had a letter printed in the prior issue. Within the letter, he declares he’s quitting reading the X-Men in light of Dark Phoenix because things had grown too dark and depressing. IMO, he doesn’t come off looking too good. As the years went on, he matured a bit in his approach. Though I wonder how he feels now. (Wasn’t he somehow involved in resurrecting Jean? Bah! If so, I demand we hold his trial on Legion World).


Yeah! Seconded! No offense to Lardy and other Busiek fans, but he really does need to go to trial for his role in resurrecting Jean, and also for the Operation Galactic Storm-was-influenced-by-Immortus retcon.
I love Rachel, and that the transplant in the story was Kitty. I think it was key to the mood of the story.

I kind of gloss over the battle with the Brotherhood of Evil Mutants. The real exciting part for me is the future mystery.

Plus the fight scenes in the future was so dead on ... they even over shadow the great fight scenes in the present. IMO.
Originally Posted by Power Boy
Plus the fight scenes in the future was so dead on ... they even over shadow the great fight scenes in the present. IMO


I agree. The deaths of the future Wolverine and Storm are still shocking even today.
Lardy, I wanted to ask a favor. I'm going to start my Peter David Aquaman re-read this weekend. Sometime this week, could you please edit the title of this thread to reflect that? Thanks.
Done!

Note: the editing of your previous thread is only to ensure that subsequent replies would reflect the new title! nod
Excellent! Thank you, Lardy.

Since I'll only be reading the first 26 issues, I'll probably just do two or three issues a week.

Although there is one of the later issues that I'm very fond of, so I might throw it in as a bonus...
I grabbed the same issues this week from my parents. Plabnn on starting a reread as well. I also have the Time and Tide mini that I started rereading yesterday.
That's great. Welcome aboard. And I'm hoping that even more Legion Worlders will join in, since this is a DC-centric forum (old-school DC, that is, not DCFU.)
Okay, here we go. And, like I said in the post above, I hope that, with Aquaman being a DC character, more people than usual will chime in (and if you don't like this version of Aquaman, that's no reason not to tell us why you don't like it. Of such things are lively discussions made. Just as long as we keep it civil, of course.)

Aquaman #1 (August 1994)

Aquaman has been brooding and having nightmares after reading the Atlantis Chronicles and discovering his true origin, as told in the Time & Tide mini-series, which I'm not re-reading because I personally consider it a fun but inessential read. However, I'm assuming that since Dev's re-reading it, he'll post a review of it.)

Aqualad shows up and tells Aquaman in no uncertain terms to snap out of it. They fight, they make up, they go on a mission to investigate the disappearance of an American nuclear submarine. At the sub's wreckage, they encounter the super-villain Charybdis , who injures Aqualad and leaves him to die and kidnaps Aquaman. To be continued.

First of all, this is the only version of Aquaman I've ever liked. It may even be argued that Peter David's Aquaman is Aquaman-for-People-Who-Don't-Like-Aquaman. Aqualad could be speaking for a lot of readers when he says to Aquaman, "Lighten up, for crying out loud! I am so sick of the brooding and the depressed bit and the whole melancholy ex-king schtick! Like you're the only person on the planet who's ever had problems! It's getting boring!"

PAD's solution? To give us a more proactive and aggressive Aquaman...with long hair and beard. And a harpoon hand which he'll acquire in a subsequent issue. This whole makeover was very much of its time (the early-mid 90s), but even though I hated what had been done to Superman, Batman, and Green Lantern, I had no problem with anything they did to Aquaman.

Of course, it didn't hurt either that PAD's a darn good writer. The dialogue's snappy and witty, the story beats are right on target, the action sequences are vivid, and, in general, everything...excuse the pun...flows. All in all, a very promising start to what should have been a run comparable to PAD's 12-year run on the Hulk, but which was prematurely...another pun coming...sunk.
I don't remember reading the individual issues anymore, but I actually really liked the harpoon hand and the more gruff Aquaman. I agree it was very 90's but I think in this case it worked. I agree that it was probably only good writers that made it work...Morrison used him really well in JLA too!
I remember reading the issue where he got his hook hand and just shaking my head. Very forced I thought. I don't recall if the rest of it seemed that way too. I think that was about it for me on this run, unless I got the issues really, really cheaply at some other point. I'll see if anything jogs my memory.

I'm not sure I was that taken with the art. If it was standard '90s stuff probably not.
Raz, Thoth, thank you both for posting here.

I agree with Raz that it all comes down to the quality of the writing. I have a strong feeling that, 20 years from now, Geoff Johns' take on Aquaman (now THAT one was forced) will actually seem more dated that Peter David's.

I didn't mention the art because, quite simply, I believe it to be merely functional for the most part, although it does improve somewhat when they change inkers a couple of issues later.
Aquaman: Time and Tide #1 - 4

This mini series preceeded Peter Davids Aquaman series and allowed him to set (reset?) a few things before diving into the main series. (see what I did there...I'll try to avoid any more watery type puns. Okay, that's probably not true, but oinly when I think their worth it.)

As Fickles said, this is a fun little mini...but does not really do too much.It recaps some "firsts" for Arthur (or Artoor). His first time being referred to as a hero...meeting the Flash, fighting Trickster and being given the key to a city. That didn't turn out to well.

His true heritage is revealed, ans as this is a follow up to the totally awesome Atlantis Chronicles (which Peter David also wrote) there is a lot of little references and nods to that. Arthurs destiny and all that. His mental stableness based on his past is questioned, at least by Arthur himself.

He remembers his first love (Kako), and her near death experience because of him. It was only years later that he discovered who had brutalized her so badly. There was other things that he did not know about Kao yet...but would eventually find out.

His life being raised by the Dolphins, who were his family. His love for one, and discovery that he was different.

Orm (Ocean Master), his half brother, plays an important role throughout his life...even if Arthur is unaware of it until later. The scene of Ocean Master coming to Atlantis to declare hinself King of the Ocean is great and showcases the attitude of Arthur quite well. He gives Orm that "title" and suggests that he goes about visiting his entire Kingdom. There is more to it than that, but you need to read the entire exchange to appreciate it all. The follow up attack by Ocean Master allows Mera to shine through (sorry Geoff, Peter made her a badass long before you thought you had to.)

Over all, a very fun series. It's a bridge between the Atlantis Chronicles and the monthly. Well worth the read, but not essential...because Peter David is a good enough writer to give you what you need to follow along. It's kinda like watching an episode of Arrested Development in the second season. You can follow along, understand the plot and get the jokes...it's just a tad more rewarding if you have seen the episodes (issues) that have come before, because then you get a few more of the subtle winks and nods that you wouldn't have otherwise.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady


Aquaman #1 (August 1994)

Aquaman has been brooding and having nightmares after reading the Atlantis Chronicles and discovering his true origin, as told in the Time & Tide mini-series, which I'm not re-reading because I personally consider it a fun but inessential read. However, I'm assuming that since Dev's re-reading it, he'll post a review of it.)


Sure did. I agree on the fun but inconsequelntial thing for the most part. As seen above.

Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Aqualad shows up and tells Aquaman in no uncertain terms to snap out of it. They fight, they make up, they go on a mission to investigate the disappearance of an American nuclear submarine. At the sub's wreckage, they encounter the super-villain Charybdis , who injures Aqualad and leaves him to die and kidnaps Aquaman. To be continued.


Nice quick recap. I liked the bit with the two guys at the beginning, although it does point to one little tiny issue I have with Peter David. I can usually tell when he wrote something based on his pop culutre references peppered throughout his books. Not saying that's always a bad thing, as I was reading this as it happened so I get the references without loooking at the page quizically and having to "google" it to figure it out, but I could see them as being a little distracting to someone much younger. Just a thought I've had over the years reading his stuff.

Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
First of all, this is the only version of Aquaman I've ever liked. It may even be argued that Peter David's Aquaman is Aquaman-for-People-Who-Don't-Like-Aquaman. Aqualad could be speaking for a lot of readers when he says to Aquaman, "Lighten up, for crying out loud! I am so sick of the brooding and the depressed bit and the whole melancholy ex-king schtick! Like you're the only person on the planet who's ever had problems! It's getting boring!"


Kinda in the same boat here. HAving not read a lot of his original run, I cannot say if I would like it or not, but his attitude (see JLA in the 80's) kinda annoyed me.Petter David had a differnt take on him, and it was one that worked for me as well.

Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
PAD's solution? To give us a more proactive and aggressive Aquaman...with long hair and beard. And a harpoon hand which he'll acquire in a subsequent issue. This whole makeover was very much of its time (the early-mid 90s), but even though I hated what had been done to Superman, Batman, and Green Lantern, I had no problem with anything they did to Aquaman.


I like the reveal of the long hair and beard here. Hidden in the opening pages, but shown when Garth finds him. The late developments never bothered me and while they may have been a tad forced and cliched (a ocean hero with a hook hand?), it seemed much more plausable than what they were doing with their other characters at the time.

Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Of course, it didn't hurt either that PAD's a darn good writer. The dialogue's snappy and witty, the story beats are right on target, the action sequences are vivid, and, in general, everything...excuse the pun...flows. All in all, a very promising start to what should have been a run comparable to PAD's 12-year run on the Hulk, but which was prematurely...another pun coming...sunk.


I did like the yessir bit between Arthur and Garth. Peter David has an uncanny ability to find voices for characters...although quite a few of them tend to be on the sarcastic side...hmmm, write what you know maybe? Having met the man a few times over the years, he does have a wicked sense of humor and is up to verbal pun sparring with the fans...all in good fun. He's also a hell of a nice guy.
I was thinking this was going to be the Aquaman mini where he had the blue 'underwater camo' costume and ended up defeating a magically-empowered Orm with the power of luurve. smile

(Which may sound like I'm mocking it, but it was actually a kind of cool story, with Orm feeding off of Aquaman's anger, and only being able to be beaten by Orin letting go of it, making his victory less about getting angry and punching stuff until it falls over and more about winning the day through defeating his own demons.)
I really liked the blue costume. More exactly, I really liked that cover with the blue costume. It was also used in the ads. I guess it wasn't terribly popular, and I guess it didn't look to good away from that artist or out of water.
I actually have that mini with me as well, giving it to a friend (Suddenly Seymour from here) as he is a huge Aquaman fan and cannot find his copies.

Maybe a reread is in order before it goes to its new home..
I haven't read the blue costume mini-series, and, quite honestly, I have no interest in it. I do, however, know a bit of trivia about it: the original artist was supposed to be Alan Davis, and it was he who designed that costume. I forget the exact reason someone else ended up drawing it instead of Davis.

Review of issue 2 coming tonight.
I want to reread it now with that in mind. Wonder if the story would have been different if he had drawn it.

Will read issue 2 as well for tonight.
Aquaman 2 (September 1994)

Charybdis' power turns out to be leeching other meta-humans' powers, and he's been feeding off Dolphin (up til now a little-seen DC aquatic character, although she did appear in CoIE) for a long time. Now he wants Aquaman's powers, specifically what he assumes is the ability to control sea life. Turns out Aquaman doesn't control sea life, but rather it respects him enough to obey him. This doesn't sit well with Charybdis, who is also a madman and a misogynist to boot, and who is richly deserving of his fate to be shot by Dolphin and to end up as piranha chow.

Garth, meanwhile, has been saved from death by someone he assumes is Tula, the late Aquagirl, come back to life, and with the help of two dolphins and a whale, he breaks into Charybdis' headquarters with the intention of rescuing Aquaman.

There's a hilarious full-page splash of Garth posing with an oh-so-90s big gun, only for his shot to go wild and destroy the headquarters.

And, oh yeah, before Charybdis dies, he immerses Aquaman's hand in the same piranha-infested waters he'll fall into shortly. This traumatizes Aquaman, which is a cue for the next issue, which is numbered not 3 but 0, being a post-Zero Hour jumping-on point for new readers.

I was going to wait until next weekend to review issue zero, but I'm having such a good time I just might do it sooner.
When we last left our heroes, Aquaman was captured by Charybdis and shown that he had also captured the heroine Dolphin. Aquakad had been left for dead for the sharks.

We are introduced to Charybdis’ love Scylla in the opening scenes. Her fate and her role are something that I had forgotten over the years since I last read this. A little unexpected again this time around.

Aquaman eventually gets rid of Charybdis, but not without help from Dolphin and Aqulad…who himself had seen visions of Aquagirl (who died in the original Crisis,) or was it something more than a vision?

Page ten in particular is one of the reasons I love Peter David. The whole page is dedicated to Aqualad trying to get some Dolphins to help him rescue Aqualad. Here, I find his pop culture (albeit an older reference to the television show Lassie) to be perfectly used. Love the frustration Garth has…and in turn the frustration the Dolphins have…trying to communicate.

The ending sets up the next major change in Aquamans appearance…one that I did not really mind, since I guess I never had much attachment to the character overall.

The scene with Scylla is quite shocking, but it has a point and it doesn't feel gratuitous or exploitative, another sign that the writing is good.

Say, Dev, I forgot to ask before, any chance of Seymour stopping by to post in this thread?
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady


There's a hilarious full-page splash of Garth posing with an oh-so-90s big gun, only for his shot to go wild and destroy the headquarters.



Loved that his shot went wild and ended up destroying the headquarters. Also loved his full stop to greet Dolphin.

I did get the sense here that Peter David was doing the Flash Family thing early by introducing another underwater hero in Dolphin. Not a bad thing, but it sure seemed that all of a characters friends all of a sudden starting hanging around.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
The scene with Scylla is quite shocking, but it has a point and it doesn't feel gratuitous or exploitative, another sign that the writing is good.

Say, Dev, I forgot to ask before, any chance of Seymour stopping by to post in this thread?


I'll let him know about it.
Originally Posted by Dev-Em
I did get the sense here that Peter David was doing the Flash Family thing early by introducing another underwater hero in Dolphin. Not a bad thing, but it sure seemed that all of a characters friends all of a sudden starting hanging around.


Well, I think it does makes sense in the long run, with all the underwater heroes against the alien invaders, but that's more than 20 issues from where we are right now.
Originally Posted by Dev - Em
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
The scene with Scylla is quite shocking, but it has a point and it doesn't feel gratuitous or exploitative, another sign that the writing is good.

Say, Dev, I forgot to ask before, any chance of Seymour stopping by to post in this thread?


I'll let him know about it.


Thank you. It would be great if he did.
Aquaman 0 (October 1994)

Zero Hour is here, while other heroes are being aged into dust or rebooted out of existence, Aquaman carries on. This continues from last issue where Aqualad reopened his injuries and Aquaman lost a hand.

Dolphin takes them bacjk to Atlantis with the help of some Dolphins. Once there, the Dolphins refuse to take them to the city and Dolphin takes them herself.

Once there, we are treated to several hallucinations/visions that Aquaman has...while the fish start congregating around him and eventually take him to the Aquacave.

Meanwhile...Aqualad complains as he is put back together until Dolphin goes by. They then travel around and he shows her the sites and admires her "large tracts of land" (I can forgive a MP Holy Grail reference any day of my life.)

They end up following the fish vortex to the Aquacave where Aquaman shows off his new accessory. The Hook hand...a symbol that he feels shows his dual heritage of the sea and land.

Honestly, not much really happens in this issue other than it sets the status for the series. I guess that's what Zero Hour was about...resetting everything for what's to come.

I do like that the change to his costume/appearance kind of happens over a few issues. He looses his hand here, but is still in the Orange and Green.
Mmm. Dolphin. That DC Who's Who entry picture of her probably kickstarted many a puberty.

I didn't know men in diving gear were that popular.
Originally Posted by thothkins
I didn't know men in diving gear were that popular.


Dude, check out those bold vertical stripes! Hawt!

The fish now what I'm talking about, they are all about dude-in-diving-gear and totally ignoring what's her name!

I'll post my thoughts on Aquaman zero tomorrow, but in the meantime, I've gone off on a slight re-reading tangent, influenced by Emily Sivana's post in the Comic Book Stories You Remember thread, where she praised the Riot At Xavier's arc from Grant Morrison's X-Men run. So I've been re-reading Morrison's run from the beginning (thank you, local library). Right now, I'm up to the issue where Cassandra Nova is finally defeated. Some of it is much better than I remember, especially the issues drawn by Frank Quitely (the silent issue is a creative tour-de-force), but some of it is still just as cringe-inducing as I remember -- the whole John Sublime/U-Men thing still comes across to me as thinly veiled transphobia (yes, Morrison is gay-friendly, but gay-friendly does not necessarily mean trans-friendly). Anyhow, I'll definitely read up to Riot At Xavier's, and see what I think of it now. Whether or not I proceed further from there is still in flux.
I've read 3 and 4 as well. Will post those tomorrow probably.
Great. I'll most likely have gotten to those by tomorrow as well.
I'm enjoying your reviews, guys. I know by the shark / GL story, the series has emerged as one of my very favorites at the time.
Originally Posted by Set
Mmm. Dolphin. That DC Who's Who entry picture of her probably kickstarted many a puberty.



Dave Stevens art...faboo.
I am honored that you are rereading "Riot at Xavier's". I have read the story so many times I can picture the panels in my head. It's reach is more relevant than ever as some characters created in the Morrison era have pivotal roles in today's X-Men comics. And at least one of them involved in ways he never could imagined.
Quentin IMO is the single greatest contribution Morrison made to Marvel. "Riot..." is a killer story, and Morrison is able to do what he sometimes does, by making character trump plot in a way that makes you think and feel a lot of different emotions.
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
I'm enjoying your reviews, guys. I know by the shark / GL story, the series has emerged as one of my very favorites at the time.


Thank you, Cobie. For me, it's as early as the Superboy issue where it really gets good.

Originally Posted by Emily Sivana
I am honored that you are rereading "Riot at Xavier's". I have read the story so many times I can picture the panels in my head. It's reach is more relevant than ever as some characters created in the Morrison era have pivotal roles in today's X-Men comics. And at least one of them involved in ways he never could imagined.


It's my pleasure, Emily. One of my favorite things about these forums is how our posts help each other to reconsider things about pop culture that we tend to take for granted.

Aquaman 0 (October 1994)

This issue is about reaffirming PAD's new direction for Aquaman, throwing out the tired old tropes like Mera and Black Manta, and embracing fresh concepts like Aquaman's father, the long-lived wizard Atlan, underwater myths like Nuliajuk, and, of course, the delightful Dolphin. The nightmare sequences are powerful because the horror imagery has relevance to the story and to the direction of the book, they're not just there to shock us into numbness. That's something that DC forgot about ten years ago. Similarly, the cover might seem like a 90s cliche, all gritted teeth and badass pose, but when you stir in the pain and frustration that Aquaman is going through in the stories, it makes perfect sense.

Aquaman 3 (November 1994)

"HEY, PUNK! IMPRESSED YET?"

With those words, Aquaman establishes himself as a force to be reckoned with and leaves the issue's guest-star, Connor "Superboy" Kent, with egg on his face (and a lot of water, too.) That is one of my all-time favorite scenes in a superhero comic.

And the rest of the issue is great, too -- Vulko's skepticism about Aquaman's harpoon hand probably standing in for a lot of stick-in-the-mud Aquaman fans who want the tried and true; Connor's delicious arrogance shows what a great handle PAD already had on the character years before Young Justice; and an excellent cliffhanger.

Aquaman 4 (December 1994)

By PAD's own admission, Lobo was a character he despised, but he reluctantly used him in this issue, because back then, a Lobo appearance guaranteed a sales spike. What I find amazing, as someone who tends to run hot and cold with Lobo, is how amazingly well PAD writes him here, despite his misgivings.

But it's not all fighting and fragging. Dr. Shinobi, the Japanese scientist who sympathizes with the plight of dolphins, is a wonderful character, and I almost wish he hadn't died, even though his death scene and his underwater funeral with the dolphins are beautifully done by PAD.

Meanwhile, the confrontation with Admiral Strom, the guy who set up Aquaman and Aqualad to be captured by Charybdis, leads to more questions than answers, and unlike in modern comics, they will be answered in a timely and satisfying fashion.

On Morrison's X-Men:
I've read it a couple of times. The first few issues against Cassandra Nova were excellent, as you could see Morrison had really got under the skin of the characters.

It was the little things. The Professor uses different tones with each of his X-Men. He can order Scott, but not Jean; Jean and Beast yakking away; The cool new upgrades; Logan "smoking"; Evolution and the purpose of the group; "Slim"; the cool art.
Originally Posted by thothkins
On Morrison's X-Men:
I've read it a couple of times. The first few issues against Cassandra Nova were excellent, as you could see Morrison had really got under the skin of the characters.

It was the little things. The Professor uses different tones with each of his X-Men. He can order Scott, but not Jean; Jean and Beast yakking away; The cool new upgrades; Logan "smoking"; Evolution and the purpose of the group; "Slim"; the cool art.


I agree that there were a lot of nice little touches, but I think the run self-destructed near the end with the "Xorn is Magneto" thing. I've heard defenses of that move along the lines of, "Morrison was using meta-commentary to admit that, in the end, all his efforts were for naught and Marvel would go back to the status quo." True enough, but shouldn't that have motivated Morrison to do something cosmic and universe-shattering, regardless of whether it would last? Xorn had great potential before the reveal, and deserved better than to just end up being a disposable mask.
I take it for granted that the majority of Morrison's stuff will fall away sharply at the end. If it gets that far.

I agree that the Xorn reveal wasn't particularly enjoyable. His Fantomas rip off continues to annoy too.
Fanfic Lady:

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By PAD's own admission, Lobo was a character he despised, but he reluctantly used him in this issue, because back then, a Lobo appearance guaranteed a sales spike. What I find amazing, as someone who tends to run hot and cold with Lobo, is how amazingly well PAD writes him here, despite his misgivings.


He also did a good job with "Li'l Lobo" in Young Justice.

Did Lobo ever guest in PAD's Supergirl?
Thanks for posting here, CMK.

Originally Posted by Chaim Mattis Keller
He also did a good job with "Li'l Lobo" in Young Justice.


Agreed. Just about everything about his Young Justice run was outstanding. It's criminal that only the first few issues were collected (and even that trade is long out-of-print.)

Originally Posted by Chaim Mattis Keller
Did Lobo ever guest in PAD's Supergirl?


No, because by the late 90s Lobo was yesterday's anti-hero. But I think it would have been great if he'd guested in PAD's Supergirl. Imagine Lobo running amok in Leesburg!


Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady


Aquaman 3 (November 1994)

"HEY, PUNK! IMPRESSED YET?"

With those words, Aquaman establishes himself as a force to be reckoned with and leaves the issue's guest-star, Connor "Superboy" Kent, with egg on his face (and a lot of water, too.) That is one of my all-time favorite scenes in a superhero comic.

And the rest of the issue is great, too -- Vulko's skepticism about Aquaman's harpoon hand probably standing in for a lot of stick-in-the-mud Aquaman fans who want the tried and true; Connor's delicious arrogance shows what a great handle PAD already had on the character years before Young Justice; and an excellent cliffhanger.


The tidal wave scene is awesome and is something that should be thought about if they ever make an Aquaman movie. Very powerful scene that shows how influential Aquaman can be at controlling the sea itself (with a little help from his friends.

Superboy is suitably cocky here...and I do like the fact that even after being totally taken to school, he came back for more from out aquatic trio.

The dpl[hin scene hints at who's to come, without it getting in the way of this story.


Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady

Aquaman 4 (December 1994)

By PAD's own admission, Lobo was a character he despised, but he reluctantly used him in this issue, because back then, a Lobo appearance guaranteed a sales spike. What I find amazing, as someone who tends to run hot and cold with Lobo, is how amazingly well PAD writes him here, despite his misgivings.

But it's not all fighting and fragging. Dr. Shinobi, the Japanese scientist who sympathizes with the plight of dolphins, is a wonderful character, and I almost wish he hadn't died, even though his death scene and his underwater funeral with the dolphins are beautifully done by PAD.

Meanwhile, the confrontation with Admiral Strom, the guy who set up Aquaman and Aqualad to be captured by Charybdis, leads to more questions than answers, and unlike in modern comics, they will be answered in a timely and satisfying fashion.



"Aw, Frag. Now I gotta be civil."

How many heroes have (or would really try to) talk Lobo down in two pages and very few punches thrown? He's also not portrayed out of character. The Dolphins made this one easy. This is a Lobo that I like to see...one that is there in a relatively small dose, and moves the plot along. Kind of like a lot of his appearances in L.E.G.I.O.N.

I loved the scene when Porm informs Aquaman that the two leg that owns the place is in trouble...because their kind always knows. The way the dolphins took to Dr. Shinobi was very touching and the ending (his ending) was very well done.

I also loved the bit with the sharks and the net...and the fact that he knew they would eventually figure it out. Just in time for lunch. This does bring up an interesting thing though. Aquaman just leaves the man to his fate...which kind of goes against the "hero" code. I have no issue with it, and obviously neither does Peter David here. Just an observation about how this is a different Aquaman. It's not a bloodthirsty killing (well maybe it probably was considering what was about to happen) but he left him to a "jury of his peers," predators all.

I have to admit that I remember this in broad strokes, so a lot of what I am reading feels very fresh to me.
Originally Posted by Dev-Em
The tidal wave scene is awesome and is something that should be thought about if they ever make an Aquaman movie. Very powerful scene that shows how influential Aquaman can be at controlling the sea itself (with a little help from his friends


Very well said.


Originally Posted by Dev-Em
How many heroes have (or would really try to) talk Lobo down in two pages and very few punches thrown? He's also not portrayed out of character. The Dolphins made this one easy. This is a Lobo that I like to see...one that is there in a relatively small dose, and moves the plot along. Kind of like a lot of his appearances in L.E.G.I.O.N.


Again, well said. I do like some of the Lobo solo stuff (somehow, ya just gotta love a story titled "The Fragnificent Seven") but I generally prefer him in small doses.


Originally Posted by Dev-Em
I also loved the bit with the sharks and the net...and the fact that he knew they would eventually figure it out. Just in time for lunch. This does bring up an interesting thing though. Aquaman just leaves the man to his fate...which kind of goes against the "hero" code. I have no issue with it, and obviously neither does Peter David here. Just an observation about how this is a different Aquaman. It's not a bloodthirsty killing (well maybe it probably was considering what was about to happen) but he left him to a "jury of his peers," predators all.


My reading of the scene is pretty much the same as yours. It also echoes a similar scene in Grant Morrison's "Animal Man". There's always a fine line between justice and vengeance. I don't think either Aquaman or Animal Man crossed it (although I do think Animal Man crossed the line later on in Morrison's run, but that was all undone by the happy ending anyway, so no worries.)

I had thought was of Animal Man as well. I agree with you on them not crossing that line. They left the people to their fates. There was always that ever so slim chance that they could have gotten out of it. We know the fate of the Aquaman character, and I remember the fate of the Animal character well.

Funny enough, Dolphin herself was part of both stories.


Dolphin is a real six-degrees character, isn't she? I wish DC would bring her back (but not in the DCFU).
For Emily Sivana, my re-read review of Riot At Xavier's:

In the context of Morrison's entire X-Men run, Riot At Xavier's now stands revealed to me as the turning point. It is, I think, simultaneously the very best and very worst of what Morrison has to offer, and, with Frank Quitely permanently departing the X-Men after this arc, the rest of the run tended towards the worst.

But more than anything, it is clearly, at least to those like me who know a bit of Morrison's personal life (thanks to what he shared in non-fiction book Supergods) drawn largely from personal experience. Like Quentin Quire, Morrison was a hyperintelligent but maladjusted adolescent who had a confrontational and sometimes violent attitude towards authority figures. For me, this story is Morrison holding up a funhouse mirror to his own teenage years and to the ultimate self-defeating failure of the punk ethos espoused by his generation. Quentin ends up with a fate worse than death (perhaps a fate Morrison imagined for himself in his darkest hour), his vast potential held indefinitely in check by a hi-tech suspended animation device representing the repressive elements of the status quo which the X-Men ultimately defend despite their best intentions to change it in a peaceful fashion. Morrison offers no easy answers to the hard questions he raises, but I don't think he should be expected to.

Another theme of this story, and in my opinion a less well-executed one, is the mainstream's ignorant and callous appropriation of alternative culture. When out-and-proud mutant fashion designer Jumbo Carnation dies of a drug overdose at the exact moment he is being victimized by mutant haters, Quentin and his gang appropriate Jumbo's fashions into a gang uniform, showing how much they're missing the point. Similarly, the Beast runs with the public assumption that he's gay (a rumor spread by his journalist ex-girlfriend after a remark he made) in a callous and self-centered way, which, unfortunately for Beast fans, and I am one, makes him look like a complete jerk. This is a failure on Morrison's part, insensitively hijacking a well-rounded established character just to prove a rather muddled point.

Then there's Xorn, the peacedick who turns violent and kills the U-Men who are threatening him and his students. This could have made for interesting developments later in the run, with the consequences of Xorn's actions forcing him onto a hero's journey towards redemption and true enlightment. Instead, he turns out later in the run to be Magneto in disguise. What a waste.

But, ultimately, the most problematic aspects of this story are on the sidelines, and, at its core, Riot At Xavier's is, in my opinion, a provocative and fascinating story.



Thank you for posting your re-read. I think this resonated with me well as a teen growing up in a Post-Columbine world. There were kids like Quentin who go down the wrong path despite all advantages handed to him. There are kids trying to make the best of things (the kid with the charisma or Mercury) and get through school. And of course there were people like the Cuckoos who were insanely popular no matter what, and in they end they were more the objects of envy rather than hatred. What girl wouldn't want to be blonde and beautiful?

Quentin Quire becomes a revolutionary to gain one of their attention's, but really there is little appeal in him for teen girls. Even his intelligence and the things he does with it is considered expected for telepaths by hard-working students like Bling!. I have a feeling Marvel is going to keep him a teenager forever, but if they ever age him they would be best to pair him with someone like Lyra.

What did you think of the Emma-Scott-Jean love triangle, Fanfic Lady? I think part of the reason I remember "Riot at Xavier's" is because of Emma's dialogue.
I greatly enjoyed most of Emma's dialogue. Morrison obviously had a lot of fun writing her dialogue. I didn't care for her comment about Madame DeFarge having hair on the back of her hands, but I chalk it up to jealousy and insecurity rather than intolerance.

As far as the Emma-Scott-Jean love triangle, I have to say that I feel Morrison completely misunderstood Scott, who is admittedly a very difficult character to write, moreso since the mid-80s when he ran out on his wife and newborn after he found out Jean was alive. Jean should never have been resurrected in my opinion, so I have no emotional attachment to her portrayals of the past 30 or so years. Emma easily came off best of the three, although in the aftermath she was kind of overexposed in the Marvel Universe for a long time, which predisposed me to dislike her for quite some time. I can appreciate her evolution better now and I like her much more than I used to, although the recent re-read of her earliest appearances proved hard to reconcile with that very same evolution, because she was so vicious back then. I'm not a fan of how she's currently being portrayed by Brian Bendis, although I haven't read an issue of Bendis' X-Men for a long time, but I doubt she's being portrayed any more accurately.
Aquaman 5-8 (Jsnuary 1995-April 1995)

This excellent four-parter finds Aquaman setting off on a quest to find his father, Atlan, while Aqualad goes off on a quest of his own for the girl he thinks is Tula. The story introduces Aquaman's illegitimate teenage son, Koryak (one of my favorite bad boys of the DCU), transforms Koryak's meek mother into Corona, a vengeful fire elemental, and features guest villainy from none other than Jack Kirby's Fourth World creations, the Deep Six (this was intended by PAD as a deliberate tribute to Kirby, who had died a few months earlier, but, unfortunately, an editorial oversight resulted in the lack of a creator's credit for Kirby -- the editors printed an apology in the letter column of a later issue). Lots of thrills, chills, and laughs -- big laughs! In fact, I think issue 5 is one of the funniest comics ever published! But it is bittersweet to read this in retrospect, knowing now that Corona became a dangling unresolved subplot, and Koryak was largely ignored by later writers before being killed off along with most of the other Atlanteans during the buildup to Infinite Crisis. Such are the ways of mainstream comics. But at least we have these twenty-six wonderful issues to treasure, and we're only a fraction of the way through them.
The Deep Six are just a perfect group to end up facing off against Aquaman!

Yes, and PAD wrote them very well. It was also a clever way of getting Fourth World fans who might not be Aquaman fans to check out the Aquaman comic. Hopefully that will continue to happen in the future. Though no issues of this run have been collected, they're nice and cheap to acquire as floppies.
Aquaman 9 (June 1995)

While getting a replacement hook at S.T.A.R. Labs, Aquaman is attacked by the mercenary Deadline (a Z-list villain who had previously appeared in the Will Payton Starman series), whom by the end of the issue readers will discover was hired by Poseidonis' current monarch, King Thesily. Meanwhile, Koryak ingratiates himself with the Poseidonians through an act of heroism, and Garth washes up on a shore unconscious, to be found by...somebody.

A good issue. PAD doesn't do anything new or wonderful with Deadline, but his tuff-guy posturing is amusing enough. And King Thesily is easy for me to hate, what with his name being so similar to that of a Sandman character I despise.

Aquaman 10 (July 1995)

Aquaman clashes momentarily with Green Lantern Kyle Rayner over a shark scare near a beach community. In the end, both come away respecting each other. Meanwhile, the mysterious quakes striking Poseidonis are getting worse, and King Thesily is crushed by falling debris just as he's attempting to assassinate Koryak, who leaves Thesily to die.

Yet another nice bit of DCU synergy. If Kyle had always been this well-written, I would have been more accepting of him (actually, I'd have accepted him from the beginning if Hal Jordan had simply quit the Green Lantern Corps, as Gerard Jones originally intended, but that's a whole other discussion.)

Aquaman 11 (August 1995)

Koryak manipulates his way to the throne of Poseidonis and leads a mass exodus even as Aquaman discovers something interesting about the hill that's been emerging under the city with each successive quake. In the abandoned city, Aquaman and Dolphin totally do it, only for Mera to walk in on them.

The plot thickens, and Koryak is, like I said before, one of my favorite bad boys of the DCU.

Aquaman 12 (September 1995)

Dolphin and Mera have a catfight. Dolphin wins. After some witty banter, Mera goes nutso and runs away. Aquaman and Dolphin follow her down an abyss, and then things get really weird.

I've never liked Mera. I'm not sure why, I just don't (although I do know that DC's Mary Sue-ing/Mera Sue-ing of her in recent years hasn't helped my disposition). PAD doesn't seem particularly fond of her either, which suits me just fine.

This is the opening chapter of the most confusing, and arguably weakest, arc of PAD's Aquaman run. It all somehow ties in with a villain from the previous Aquaman run named Thanatos. Some flashback and/or footnotes would have helped.

Still, the catfight and the banter alone make this yet another worthwhile issue.
I won't be posting Aquaman reviews this weekend, because I'm too busy working on fanfics. Hopefully next weekend.
Gonna shoot to catch up this next week. Way behind.
Aquaman 13-14 (October 1995-November 1995)

Mera, Thanatos, and some annoying kid who may be either Aquaman's or Thanatos' turn out to inhabit some kind of purgatory ruled by demons who return people to life if they prove that they're evil. So Thanatos, who looks like Orin (and even wears the blue suit) ends up in our dimension, impersonates Aquaman for a while, making a threatening broadcast and scaring the surface world. Then he's killed by Major Disaster, whose powers have been amped up by Neron as part of the Underworld Unleashed event. I think PAD writes MD better than anyone before or since, and the ending is very clever, but, Jeez Louise, this story is confusing.
Aquaman 15 (December 1995)

Aquaman's father, Atlan, sends him and Dolphin back to their home dimension. Mera has to stay behind because her kid ages prematurely if he's outside the Others' purgatory. The object rising underneath Poseidonis turns out to be the alien ship that crash-landed on Earth millenia ago. An evil alien, Tiamat, emerges from it and battles Aquaman, but the ship has already chosen to bond with Aquaman. Meanwhile, the exiles witness the rebirth of Aquaman's evil ancestor, Kordax.

Back on form, PAD delivers an excellent issue with a couple Easter eggs for people who have read the excellent mini-series The Atlantis Chronicles (also written by PAD.)
Aquaman 16 (January 1996)

A group of Justice Leaguers (Wonder Woman, Martian Manhunter, Fire, Icemaiden, Guy Gardner, Obsidian) respond belatedly to the recent developments in Poseidonis. Aquaman rebuffs them, perhaps a little too forcefully (though Diana gets her licks in), and then, once they're gone, he explains to Dolphin what he plans to do: unite all the cities of Atlantis against the coming invasion from the aliens who spawned the Atlanteans.

A nice ensemble piece. Even Guy Gardner is tolerable, proving once again what a good writer PAD can be.
Aquaman 17-18 (February-March 1996)

The city of Hy-Brasil allies itself with Aquaman, but only after its people commit regicide. Meanwhile, Dolphin's past is partially revealed, Atlan and Garth make preparations for the battles ahead, and Admiral Strom, who turns out to be a pawn of the alien invaders, goes to warn Ocean Master that Aquaman is coming.

And so PAD's grand Aquaman epic begins its final movement toward the crescendo. It only gets better and better from here.
Before I post my next review, I have a heads-up for anyone who likes Peter David's writing, but especially Lardy and Cobie: I've enjoyed my Aquaman re-read -- which is ending next weekend -- so much, that I plan for my next re-reads to be PAD's other two long DC runs, Supergirl and Young Justice. Now, I was thinking of doing Young Justice first so that Lardy can have plenty of time to finish his Avengers read, and then I thought we could all re-read Supergirl together. What do you think?

Aquaman 19-21 (April 1996-June 1996)

The next city on Aquaman's list, the Hidden Land in the Himalayas, turns out to be ruled by none other than his nemesis and half-brother, Ocean Master, who was empowered by Neron during Underworld Unleashed and is suffering the consequences of a deal with the devil. Aquaman and Dolphin are rescued by Garth, now a fully confident wizard after being trained for three years in another dimension by Atlan, but the Hidden Land is destroyed. Meanwhile, Atlan dodges a long-range attack by Koryak, then confronts Koryak's band of exiles, who are under Koryak's control. And Aquaman has better luck with the city of Thierna Na Oge, a mystically-oriented matriarchy. Just in time, too, because the aliens make a preliminary strike, which our heroes repel. But there's more where that came from.

This is just awesome stuff, equal parts sizzling action and scintillating characterizations. And we haven't even gotten to the part where Aquaman assembles all the underwater heroes. Until next weekend...
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Before I post my next review, I have a heads-up for anyone who likes Peter David's writing, but especially Lardy and Cobie: I've enjoyed my Aquaman re-read -- which is ending next weekend -- so much, that I plan for my next re-reads to be PAD's other two long DC runs, Supergirl and Young Justice. Now, I was thinking of doing Young Justice first so that Lardy can have plenty of time to finish his Avengers read, and then I thought we could all re-read Supergirl together. What do you think?


I'm not opposed to that. However, it might be difficult for me to track down amongst my fairly disorganized collection. Won't help that it's VERY hot up in the attic (where lots of my comics are) for me during the summer down here. I was also thinking I would next continue the X-Men re-read at some point after the Avengers thing. So I'd guess that it won't be a go for me if it occurs any time before...the winter?

BTW, probably the biggest PAD re-read I'd like to do, accounting for my own level of interest, some day is his Hulk.

Also, I'm enjoying your Aquaman rundown. I haven't commented, though, because the memory's proving pretty fuzzy for me beyond the broad strokes. I remember, though, that I liked the book a lot until very near the end of his run. (I also thought Dan Jurgens was doing well on the book when it was cancelled.)
Both of those runs are at my parents, so it will take some doing to get them. (Which is why I didn't concurrently read Aquaman or the Englehart Avengers, two runs which I love and would love to reread with you guys, but I just don't have the chance to do so). So chalk me up for a "if I can make it happen, I will". Regardless, I'd love to read a review of your own rereads of both series, especially Young Justice.

Currently, other than what I'm buying now, all I really have access to are the entire runs of the Legion and X-Men at my own house.

BTW, I plan on building my comic book room--to mirror my Dad's own one--sometime in the next 2-3 years. At that point, I'll have all the comics easily available. But alas, I have so many other projects to do first, starting with the ever-expensive and no fun having to get a new roof next year.
Lardy, Cobie, thank you both for your feedback. I would LOVE to do a re-read of PAD's Hulk run, but I think I'll do Young Justice and Supergirl first because I'm in an old-school DCU state of mind right now. So maybe the Hulk can be our winter re-read. And I'm also more than happy to re-start the X-Men re-read once we're done with the Avengers.

Lardy, glad you're enjoying the Aquaman reviews. I actually considered doing PAD's whole run, but eventually I decided that even though there's some excellent issues after #25, it just doesn't have the focus that the previous issues did. I'll elaborate on that this weekend when I post my final Aquaman review.

Cobie, best of luck with the long-term comic book room project. It'll be a lot of effort, but well worth it.
Aquaman 22 (July 1996)

The next city on Aquaman's list is Basilia, also known as the floating city. The aliens are already attempting to take Basilia by force. Aquaman takes on the aliens almost single-handed, and is only saved by his father Atlan's timely intervention. Meanwhile, Kordax and his mind-slaves invade Tritonis. And back in Basilia, Aquaman and his allies take control and expel the aliens by launching the city into the air and then turning it upside down. While Aquaman and Atlan have a heart-to-heart talk, one of the highest-ranking aliens is claiming to the President of the United States that they come in peace and have the means of ushering in a Golden Age for Earth.

Aquaman 23 (August 1996)

Aquaman and his allies arrive at Tritonis too late to stop the carnage. After Garth defeats Koryak one-on-one, Aquaman and Kordax go at it, but appear too evenly matched. Kordax and his forces retreat strategically. Later, the aliens are holding a press conference as Aquaman gathers more allies: Arion, the Sea Devils, Power Girl (who, remember, at this point was supposed to be Arion's great-grandaughter), and Tsunami and her daughter Deep Blue.

Aquaman 24 (September 1996)

All-out action as Aquaman and his troops battle the alien armada, while the aliens' leader sweet-talks the citizens of Earth. Tiamat returns, kills her pawn, Admiral Strom, and intimidates Kordax into invading Washington, D.C., where Aquaman and the aliens' leader are beginning a private conference.

Aquaman 25 (October 1996)

A series of final reckonings: Basilia is destroyed by the aliens, but Aquaman's allies survive thanks to Tsunami; Garth and Koryak have a rematch where Garth wins again; Aquaman and Kordax, who had programmed Dolphin to kill Aquaman, have a rematch, too, which ends with Dolphin turning against Kordax, who chooses to kill himself rather than surrender; and teamwork expels Tiamat from this dimension. And, at last, Aquaman and the aliens have their conference, where Aquaman tricks them into revealing to the whole world that their plans for a Golden Age include nothing less than a preliminary apocalypse. Unruffled, the aliens depart, confident that humans will do their work for them and they'll come back to pick up the pieces. A qualified victory for Aquaman, then, and he knows it.

I made the plot summaries extra detailed this time to better illustrate how beautifully all of PAD's plot strands come together. He had already done this many times before in earlier works, and there was no reason not to believe that he would continue to do the same on Aquaman for many years.

Unfortunately, PAD has said that from this point on, he started getting mixed messages from editorial, which resulted in the Aquaman stories getting shorter, simpler, less substantial, and generally less satisfying to readers and writer alike. For 21 more issues, the book (pun alert) treaded water and seemed unsure of where exactly it was heading. Finally, after a truncated conclusion to Aquaman's conflict with the sea god Triton, PAD moved on...to Young Justice, which I'll be re-reading next.

I'm not sure yet if I'll start the Young Justice re-read next weekend or the weekend after that. So, Lardy, if you could be so kind as to change the subtitle of this thread to "Coming Soon: PAD's Young Justice"? Thank you in advance.
Lardy, I'm sorry to nag, but I see you haven't changed this thread's subtitle yet, and I'm beginning the Young Justice re-read on Monday evening. Could you please change it to "Now discussing: PAD's Young Justice" sometime this weekend?
Done! Sorry, 'twas an oversight on my part. Forgiveness? frown

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Thank you. Forgiven and forgotten. hug
Young Justice 1 (Sep. '98)

First, some context: in the late 90s, the Big Two were backing away from the angry in-your-face approach of the recent past. Grim and gritty was out, bright and shiny was in. Unfortunately, while this gave us some good comics, it also gave us a lot of vapid, retrograde mediocrities, particularly over at Marvel. Over at DC, after a long gestation process of mini-series and one-shots from writers other than PAD, we got the Young Justice ongoing. The Teen Titans had grown up and been relaunched at the same time as The Titans, so now it was time for a focus on the new generation of young superheroes. JLA Junior didn't have the right ring to it (as the banner atop this issue makes clear), so instead we got Young Justice. And that was perfectly fine.

We open with PAD in full meta-commentary mode, as Robin, Superboy, and Impulse each have nightmares reflecting the more controversial aspects of PAD's runs on Aquaman, Supergirl, and Marvel's Hulk. Our heroes wake up screaming in the original Justice League headquarters, the cave in Happy Harbor. When Robin asks if the others had bad dreams, Kon and Bart lie.

Tim's reply:

"You guys are lucky. I had this bizarre nightmare. It was as if I'd lost control of my life. I was turning into someone unrecognizable. Grim, gritty, depressing...as if some maniacal power was doing terrible things to me just to satisfy some demented whim."

Bart: "Sure. Whatever" (Thought bubble symbolizing "screwball") Look, I was all for forming this club, but this is boring. We need some...action.

Cue a bizarre occurrence at a nearby archaeological dig headed by one Professor Nina Dowd, who touches a relic resembling a common wheel and causes an explosion.

Back at the cave, Bart is running wild with a can of spray paint, writing "Hanson Bites" on the apparently inert body of Red Tornado (remember Hanson?) and then using same body as a surfboard.

Turns out Red Tornado still has a spark in him, and he tries to help the boys put things in perspective with a discourse on Freudian psychology. In a nutshell: Bart is Id, Superboy is Ego, Robin is Superego. Kon being Kon, he gets all pissy because he doesn't get to be Superego.

Tim: "Oh, this is idiotic. You're the Red Tornado, aren't you? What are you doing here?"

Reddy: "I had withdrawn from humanity because I had, in fact, lost my humanity. I had believed that, without my humanity, there was little or no purpose to my continuing to exist. However, in the last few minutes, I have begun to believe that perhaps...just perhaps...there is some small aspect of human feeling left to me."

Kon: "Why?"

Reddy: "Because I find that you three annoy the hell out of me. I feel an urge to smack you...particularly Impulse. For that, I am indebted. Thank you."

Tim: "You're...uh...you're welcome, I guess."

Before things can get even more awkward, Bart notifies the others about the disaster at the dig site. As the four of them take off, Tim asks Reddy, "How do you know all that stuff about us?" Reddy replies, "I have detailed files on over 1500 super beings that I'm constantly updating. I have NINETEEN on Hawkman alone."

(The above joke at the expense of Hawkman continuity might be my favorite joke in the whole issue.)

At the dig site, two special agents, Fite (the black guy), and Maad (the Asian guy), are telling rubberneckers in no uncertain terms to back off. Even the DEO suits are scared of Fite & Maad. But Bart whizzes by them anyway, and approaches a cocoon that's formed at the spot where the explosion was. Tim and Kon argue with Fite and Maad, and Fite spells it out for them: "We're from the All-Purpose Enforcement Squad. Multi-national cooperative task force. We have more clearance than God."

Bart tries to vibrate into the cocoon, causing it to explode and reveal...well...

"Foolish males! Once I was mere Nina Dowd...but NO MORE! Now I am...MIGHTY ENDOWED!"

(Yeah, groan if you want to. I still find it funnier than anything from JLI.)

Before Mighty Endowed can carry out her threat, she discovers that, unlike the various Image universes, the laws of physics do apply to women's breasts in the DCU, and gravity brings her down.

Tim: "Gentlemen, with all due respect, this might be something more up our alley. Why don't you authorize us to go down and check this out for you, firsthand."

Ace Atchison, CDTV reporter: "Yeah, you can trust them. They're the Teen Titans."

Kon: "No, we're not."

Ace: "Oh, right. They're the Young Justice League of America."

Bart: "No, we're young, but just us."

Ace: "Oh, okay, Young Justice."

Bart: "No, young, just us!"

Ace: "Right, Young Justice!"

Bart: "Fine. Whatever."

Fite: "All right, gentlemen. Check it out. See what's what."

Maad: "Fite! Are you crazy?"

Reddy: "No. He is merely assuming that if there is danger...it is preferable to send in the youngsters as convenient cannon fodder."

Bart: "Sounds like a plan."

Kon: "Siiiigh."

Tim (looking at the wheel): "Hmmm...Superboy, you think you can manage to...?"

Kon: "Pull it out? Not a problem. All I have to do is touch it and my tactile telekinesis can..."

Bart: "Man, will you stop blabbering about your stupid power? You act like you're filling in someone whose just met you! Enough already!"

After some more arguing, Kon unearths what turns out to be a high-tech motorcycle with lots of passenger space. Kinda Fourth World-y, even...

Tim: "I wonder why first contact with it transformed that ordinary woman into...that?"

Kon: "Booby trap?"

Tim bangs his head on the cycle in response to Kon's pun, and accidentally sets off the cycle, which takes off into the sky with the three young heroes inside it.

Narrator: "Meantime, as they rapidly approach the Ionosphere, with the Super-Cycle ignoring both Robin's guidance and Superboy's you-know-what, we find our team finally united in ONE thing..."

Tim and Kon: "ARRRRHHHH!!!"

Narrator: "...pure, undiluted panic..."

Bart: "Keeewwwll!"

Narrator: "...for the most part."

A great first issue that leaves the reader wanting more of this sparkling mixture of action, humor, and teen craziness. Sadly, Mighty Endowed would never appear again, except in some "deleted scenes" taking place at A.P.E.S. headquarters, where Fite & Maad refer to her capture as...wait for it..."A routine bust." Maybe DC thought the whole thing was too naughty for a comic aimed primarily at kids. Whatever the reason, there is still plenty to enjoy in the issues ahead. And in issue #4, which, if my plan to review an issue a day works, I should get to by Friday, Wonder Girl and Arrowette finally show up.
PAD tidbit: he originally named Fite and Maad "Nuck and Futz", just to see if he could sneak it through DC. He did. Being incredibly amused but not wanting to get his editor in trouble, he volunteeringly revealed the pun on the word "fuck" and then agreed to change it, having has "Fite and Maad" as a backup all along.
LOL lol

Great story, Cobie. Thanks.
I liked Young Justice right from the start, but I really started to love it with #4. I only ever read these issues as they came off the rack, but they hold a special place in my heart. They came out right when I was finishing up high school, and then going to college (and in fact I think they announced its cancellation my senior year). It was never my favorite series during those years but it was one I just consistently expected to be awesome--and was never let down.

I'm really looking forward to these reviews!

It's easy to forget that both Superboy and Impulse were immensely popular at this point with their own high-selling solo series. So PAD was taking three of DC's "babies" with a lot at stake. Not to mention, basically no one was allowed to touch Robin from his creation ten years or so earlier. IMO, his contribution went a long way at maturing and advancing both Superboy and Impulse in a major way, even more so than their own solo series (which were doing that but at a much slower pace); and for Robin, he made him fit into the DCU seamlessly and in a hugely positive way.
Thanks for the vote of confidence, Cobie, and for providing some extra context.

The next review will be posted after dinner.
Loved Young Justice. Other comics seemed to be getting a bit overwrought at the time, and I was so in the mood for some lighter fare, which this completely delivered, along with some serious adult storylines. (Harm and Secret? Harsh!)

Well said, Set. I think part of the brilliance of Young Justice was its seamless blend of light and shade.

Young Justice 2 (Oct. '98)

In which Young Justice saves a strange Middle Eastern country ruled by Shiek Ali Ben Styn from a four-armed Apokaliptan monster named Rip Roar, who had stolen the Super-Cycle from New Genesis thousands of years ago. Ultimately, the Super-Cycle sides with Robin, and Rip Roar self-combusts.

This issue is mezzo-quality PAD, fun but ultimately unmemorable, without any moments as good as the first issue. The next two, including YJ One Million, are no great shakes either, although since I'm going for the full PAD YJ experience, I will be reviewing them over the next couple of nights.

Ah, but then, the girls show up...
Quite possibly my only quibble with Young Justice is that Superboy and Impulse were super-dynamic occasionally over-the-top characters, with Tim serving as the 'straight man' to their less-than-serious nature. That seemed a deliberate kind of balance. (Id, ego and super-ego, indeed!)

The girls ended up feeling like an afterthought, at times (even if Secret was actually pretty integral to their first team up!), and lacked the same irreverent humor (or ended up moving into Tim's 'straight man' role, standing around and disapproving of the immature hijinks that I was kind of buying the book to read). PAD seemed to write them as a little bit too 'adult for the room,' if that makes any sense.

Part of that impression might have been that I was familiar with Tim, Kon and Bart from previous appearances, while Cassie and Cissie felt more like new characters (which I know they weren't, but they hadn't appeared nearly as much as the boys, up until their Young Justice appearances).

That's not a dig on PAD, obviously. It certainly wasn't his fault that there were a trio of super-boys who had managed to carry their own books for a time and the only super-girls he could find waiting around for a team in the DCU were one-shot characters.

I suppose at least a part of my issue is that I'm pretty territorial about Donna Troy. I can handle their being three or more Robins, or a new Superboy, or yet another Flash, without feeling like these new characters are detracting from Dick, young Clark or Wally (all of whom, at that point, had evolved into adult roles anyway). But Cassie kind of bugged me, because Donna never really got to grow up into Darkstar or Troi, for any length of time. (Again, that's totally not anything to do with PAD or his choices!)

I'd love to be able to go back in time and whisper in PAD's ear about character ideas like Miss Martian or Artemis or Kalduran / Aqualad from the Young Justice cartoon.

I couldn't disagree more regarding the girls feeling like an afterthought. They were IMO the best-written teenage girls in superhero comics. And Cassie was my favorite.

I'd elaborate, but that would make my future reviews redundant, so, Set, do please keep chiming in as I get further into the run.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
I couldn't disagree more regarding the girls feeling like an afterthought. They were IMO the best-written teenage girls in superhero comics. And Cassie was my favorite.

I'd elaborate, but that would make my future reviews redundant, so, Set, do please keep chiming in as I get further into the run.


I would have to re-read, but it would be interesting to see if PAD followed his 'Id, Ego, Super-Ego' formula with the girls as well. I could see Cissie as Super-Ego or Ego, and Cassie as Ego or Id. I'm less clear on Empress or Secret. None of them were nearly as much 'Id Kid' as Impulse, obviously, although later teen heroines like Cyclone and Misfit could fit that.

Perhaps PAD went on to a more four or five element 'scheme', like assigning characters into phlegmatic / sanguine / melancholy / choleric roles, and I just don't remember that like I remember his Id, Ego, Super-Ego setup for the three boys.


I know I haven't been posting reviews, and I apologize to everybody for that. It looks like I was too optimistic about being able to review one issue per day. It doesn't help that the last couple days at work have been rough.

Looks like I'll be posting the reviews mostly on weekends, although if I happen to have the energy for it on a random weekday, I'll post.
Just as a heads-up...I honestly don't know when I'm going to resume the Young Justice/Supergirl re-reads. Unfortunately, my first attempt coincided with some very unpleasant events in Real Life, and I still haven't put enough distance between those events and myself to be able to approach those particular comics again.

I am, however, still confident that we'll be doing a PAD Hulk re-read this winter. Lardy and I talked about it a bit in the All Avengers Thread recently.

Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: Marvels) - 09/22/14 01:15 AM
I know this is in Fickles' re-read queue also, so I'm temporarily changing the title of the thread to indicate that Busiek and Ross' Marvels will be discussed shortly. I've already completed my re-read of it over the past few days and will post some of my thoughts on it as she starts chiming in.

Anyone who has these books, feels like giving them another look and wants to join in the discussion, feel free! nod
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: Marvels) - 09/22/14 01:42 AM
Excellent. Thank you, Lardy.

I'm hoping the Marvels trade will arrive by tomorrow.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: Marvels) - 09/23/14 12:52 AM
The Marvels trade didn't arrive yet, but a couple items I had ordered earlier than that one did, so I'm 99% certain it'll arrive tomorrow.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: Marvels) - 09/24/14 11:18 PM
I'm so sorry, Lardy, but the Marvels trade STILL hasn't arrived! I pray it'll come in tomorrow.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: Marvels) - 09/25/14 12:25 AM
No hurry, Le Ficque! Ees cule! nod
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: Marvels) - 09/25/14 12:34 AM
Merci, Monsieur Lardy.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: Marvels) - 09/25/14 12:40 AM
I should TOTALLY be "Monsieur Lardy" in a future evolution of my character! wink
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: Marvels) - 09/25/14 12:44 AM
That's a great idea!

"Lock up the patisserie! Monsieur Lardy is coming!"
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: Marvels) - 09/25/14 12:49 AM
Monsieur Lardy would do the worst, cheesiest French accent ever! grin
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: Marvels) - 09/25/14 12:59 AM
Even cheesier than Jacques Foccart?

Oh, yeah, I went there. grin
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: Marvels) - 09/25/14 01:03 AM
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Even cheesier than Jacques Foccart?

Oh, yeah, I went there. grin


faint
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: Marvels) - 09/25/14 01:07 AM
Nah, ol' Cupcake-Head's grown on me over the years.

Kinda sorta.

Maybe not as much as I thought. grin
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: Marvels) - 10/03/14 02:42 AM
I just finished re-reading Marvels.

I think the best-written issue by far is the first one, covering the Golden Age heroes. That one is up there with the best of Astro City.

The second issue is, in my opinion, the weakest one, and it betrays just how the concept of the X-Men doesn't really work when they share a universe with the likes of the Thing.

I feel it kind of spins its wheels from that point on, until the wonderful scenes in the fourth issue with Phil meeting Gwen Stacy before she dies. The scene of her basking in the fantastic spectacle of the Sub-Mariner's invasion is magical. And her death is a perfectly understandable catalyst for Phil's complete disillusionment with the Marvels.

And I found I had completely forgotten about the ironic ending with a grade-school-age Danny Ketch! Of course, it's also unintentionally amusing because Danny Ketch is pretty much a footnote in the Marvel Universe mythology these days.

In addition, I keep going back to something Sean Howe wrote in his very good book "Marvel Comics: The Untold Story":

"In this version of late-twentieth century America, there was no mention of the Cuban Missile Crisis, no plague of race riots, no campus protesters of the Vietnam War -- even though the Marvel Comics of the 1960s and early 1970s had tackled political and social issues quite explicitly. Here, the great trials of the modern world were the appearance of the Sentinels (as seen in the X-Men in 1965) and the subsequent anti-mutant riots, and the arrival of Galactus (as seen in the Fantastic Four in 1966). You could choose to dismiss [Marvels] as hermetic escapism, a history devoid of reality -- or you could admire the way it took the inherent sociopolitical metaphors always present in the comic books and fit them all together into one digestible package."

I guess that's my main problem with Marvels -- it's TOO digestible. There's a lack of ambiguity, this from the publishing company that made superheroes ambiguous in the first place!

If point-of-view protagonist Phil Sheldon is looked at as the stand-in for the embittered, out-of-time fan-child that so many fanboys and fangirls end up turning into, then the story just comes off like so many sour grapes; if we look at Phil as simply one opinionated individual from a particular generation, it works slightly better. But in the end, it just seems like a dry run for themes that Busiek would work out much better in Astro City.

As for Alex Ross' art, there are still a few images that have retained their power to awe. I'm thinking of the double-page spread of the Golden Age heroes skydiving, or the Galactus sequence. But with 20 years hindsight, Marvels seems to me like just another of a particular sub-genre of superhero comics, one that has evolved and surpassed this touchstone in the decades since.
Posted By: Cobalt Kid Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: Marvels) - 10/03/14 03:05 AM
I think it's a fair assessment that this sub-genre of superhero comic has in the years since been refined and surpassed. Much of that is by Busiek himself as this was clearly a prototype of what he would do on AC. I think it stands out because it was one of the first to do it, and not ironically or as parody, and to try to give it both charm and weight.

I recall it very fondly, but it's been years since I read it. It's the first TPB I ever bought, about 1-2 years after it came out (and the only one for a long time).

Your comments about Howe's quotes are well taken and I agree. There is no doubt that something has been lost by those stories not firmly being rooted in the 60's. Readers who don't understand that lose part (and not a little one) about what makes those series what they are. Race, "crisis on campus", viet nam, etc, hung a heavy shadow over the MU.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: Marvels) - 10/03/14 03:21 AM
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
I think it's a fair assessment that this sub-genre of superhero comic has in the years since been refined and surpassed. Much of that is by Busiek himself as this was clearly a prototype of what he would do on AC. I think it stands out because it was one of the first to do it, and not ironically or as parody, and to try to give it both charm and weight.


Cobie, this makes me think of something else I've kept coming back to, and not just to do with Marvels: Just how much weight can the superhero concept bear? Is it better to move it closer to reality, with all the ugliness that brings with it, or is it better to simply embrace its inherent absurdity and fly off into the stratosphere of the imagination? I don't think there will be a consensus on that issue in our lifetime. At least we get some good stories out people searching for the answer.
Posted By: Cobalt Kid Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: Marvels) - 10/03/14 03:28 PM
Well, I think you're right there will never be a consensus and I also feel there is no real answer.

I think the superhero genre--like all genres--is a bit of a "forced" method of compartmentalizing fiction. Therefore, it is not really beholden to any type of criteria in terms of tone, subject matter or other things. I think the key is as you move closer to either extreme--bearing as much weight as possible or being too absurd--you start to get to a point where it is harder and harder for the stories to actually be very good. You'll find more creators missing the mark and stories unable to provide anything relevant and insightful. Yet, among that muck there will always be creators who can create works of magic and pieces of genius. One only need look at Alan Moore or many others to see that.

For me personally, I will always need a variety. I collect so many comics and read so much fiction that the most important qualifying characteristic for a series is "what makes this stand out from the rest?" If I'm reading a few different series that are inherently absurd and a few more that are very serious, with most of the rest falling somewhere along the spectrum, that would ideal for me. Too much of one thing makes it dull and cumbersome.

The same applies, of course, for all other things, not just tone. Character v. plot, genre (returning to that again), narrative structure, length of story, etc. I need variety or I lose interest.

The superhero concept can certainly bear as much weight as a writer can put on it. But do we really want to read that? 98% of the time, I say NO, and I mean it firmly. But every so often someone gets it right and does something magically. (And then everyone copies that, but usually misses the point and copies the wrong elements).

Likewise, I love reading some Silver Age Wonder Woman or Metal Men, or reading Jack Cole Plastic Man, or even something modern in that vein by Kyle Baker or another genius. But I need it modest doses.
Posted By: Cobalt Kid Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: Marvels) - 10/03/14 03:34 PM
Also, I think certain characters and franchises have their own spectrum on how far it can go.

When Superman, for instance, starts dealing with rape or child slavery, the whole thing falls apart. 99.99% of the time it won't work. I leave 0.01% open because there is a chance some genius can tell one good story that does work, but that will be an exception.

Likewise, Batman as a science-fiction adventurer traveling through time and fighting aliens isn't really true to the character. Those stories in the 50's are fun--and I know, as the last few years my father and I have been hunting them down and buying them--but the truth is when you read them all in a row, it really gets too silly to stay engaged.

When a comic book character / series / franchise is created, it's not just the character being created. That's the easy part. It has to be so much more: what is the point of the character? What do they represent? What story elements--plot, tone, conflict--are part of that character's life?

There's a reason when Spider-Man fights aliens, it usually stinks. But when he fights gangsters it fits. It has nothing to do with his powers and nothing to do with being a loner. It's because it's part the very fiber of the concept: he's a representative of you, the part of you that can overcome your worst problems and insecurities, and therefore, is battling an enemy that you know in your every day life with the window dressings of a comic book villain (but never to the point where its unrecognizable).
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: Marvels) - 10/03/14 03:55 PM
Oddly enough, just yesterday, a retrospective article on Marvels with Busiek and Ross interviews.

Kind of strange, considering there was an article about Harras/Epting's Avengers just as that discussion was starting! We are being watched! eek

I'll add some thoughts about Marvels sometime this weekend. nod
Posted By: thoth lad Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: Marvels) - 10/03/14 06:05 PM
Originally Posted by Paladin
We are being watched! eek


If only someone would listen. wink
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: Marvels) - 10/03/14 11:02 PM
Cobie, I agree 100% percent with the insights in your last couple of posts and I appreciate you sharing them.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: Marvels) - 10/04/14 11:15 PM
Like I said, I re-read Marvels a little over a week ago. It was my first-ever re-read of the series and the first time I'd ever read issue 4 because my old CBS got shorted that issue and never got it in. I got it a few years later as a back issue, intended to re-read it all together at some point but just never did until now.

First, as cover gimmicks of the '90s go, the acetate covers on the first printings work really well. I don't know if I really "got" this back in the day, but I can see how this recalls how magazines in libraries always had (and presumably still have?) similar covers to keep the magazines from falling apart under repeated reads. Even better, if you consider that Alex Ross' paintings are evocative of Norman Rockwell's style and that Rockwell's work graced magazines like Life back in the day. Add in the journalistic point of view, and this makes the cover gimmick one of the more inspired and logical of a bygone era.

Like Fickles, though, I often felt myself thinking that the story itself was less special than all of Busiek's greatest Astro City tales. this is good for Busiek, I'd say, because no artist would want his first hit to be considered the best thing he'd ever done. There is probably a portion of fandom that thinks just that, however, either because they haven't read any AC or because there a part of the dimwitted contingent who can only appreciate Big Two superhero stories.

But Marvels works really well in telling a story about what it might be like to be a civilian at the dawn of superheroes, something which had never been attempted before on anything resembling this scale. What would it be like to witness a synthetic man on fire? What if there was a prince from an underwater realm who alternately wanted to save the world and conquer it? Through the eye(s) and lens of photojournalist Phil Sheldon, we get a pretty fair and somewhat realistic look at how people might have reacted.

In Ross' case I think Marvels IS the work of his career. Some may argue between Marvels and Kingdom Come, but I think Marvels just suits his talents perfectly. The photorealism, the spectacle of it all and the iconography and presentation of the moments he captures along with the brighter, more Rockwellian feel are all just tailor-made for what Ross does best.

Of course, Ross doesn't have a huge body of work on interiors beyond Marvels and Kingdom Come. He's clearly made his bones on covers, having become one of the go-to guys in the industry for them. To his credit, he has remained involved with Astro City from the beginning, contributing all of the covers and the bulk of the character designs.

Ross's vision of iconic moments and characters are just transcendent on many occasions. All of those Galactus scenes, for example, are absolute money and really caught my eye in a big way when I first read the issue. This is still my first and only exposure to the original Galactus trilogy (though I finally have the FF Masterworks containing it but haven't yet read it), and it's not a bad primer for a first impression. I always thought it's the show stopper of the series, and I still do.

Some other great visuals, though, like seeing Giant Man from below, how the repetition of the Cyclops image helps sell the mutant hysteria and how the other-worldly look of the GA Torch sells the novelty and terror of the masses. And Ross, of course, uses models for all or most of his characters, so all of them look distinct, though in some cases the choices seem a little off (Johnny Storm comes to mind for some reason). And at certain points I could swear that the model for Sheldon was none other than Paul Levitz. I seriously doubt this, though, because Marvel wouldn't have let that pass muster, and it looks more like Paul does now and not how he did 20 years ago. Plus, it's only in a handful of panels that I thought there was a resemblance.

I like how Phil comes across as an enthusiastic but flawed witness to the biggest events of the Golden and Silver Ages. Though he is in awe of the spectacles he witnesses, he has all-too human reactions at times. He pushes away his fiancee when it seemed the world was becoming too overwhelming and dangerous. When caught in a wave of mob mentality, he finds himself throwing a brick at the X-Men. Phil falls shy of being a Mary Sue, and the story benefits from it. The use of the little mutant girl was pretty affecting and helps sell the hysteria and the humanity within it very well. (She reappears in Eye of the Camera, but I'm missing part of that.)

As mentioned, I read number 4 for the first time. At first blush, I was taken aback a little by how much of a downer ending it was. I know, I know....kinda hard to avoid when the issue centers around the fate of Gwen Stacy. And, of course, the larger metaphor is the end of the innocent Silver Age that her death has come to symbolize. In that context there is no other way that the series could have ended, but it certainly is a bit jarring. Seeing how it affects Phil and basically ends his career is certainly not a happy ending, even with the attempt to "happily ever after" things a bit at the end.

It's great, though, to have an extended look at Gwen before her death. The majority of her run among the living as an active supporting cast member of Spider-Man's comprises the biggest hole in my Amazing Spider-man reading. I've read very little of ASM between approximately issue 50 thru 120. So Gwen and her pop are mostly ciphers to me, remarkable mostly for their deaths and the longterm impacts they've had on Peter. So here, it's great to get a sense of her, even if it doesn't exactly contradict the Mary Sue version of her in my mind. That scene Fickles mentions where she basks in the wonder that the Atlantean army has wrought is definitely another standout moment. And it tells, for the longtime Spidey fans who wondered, exactly what Gwen was doing leading up to her fateful kidnapping and murder by Norman Osborn, when we never saw her conscious, much less have even a word of dialogue. It's nice to know that there was some wonder in her last days.

I guess, looking back on this review, it does come off as rather glowingly positive, given my earlier qualification in comparison to Astro City. It's certainly a really good work that is monumental for the new perspective it gave to the Marvel universe. I'd say it's a work that needed to happen for a Big Two universe, and we were lucky that Busiek and Ross were the ones to do so. It's also important for giving Busiek the perfect platform to get himself noticed and to enable him to take the storytelling approach he debuted here and develop and exceed it on his own creator-owned book.

Marvels remains a worthwhile read and one any fan of Marvel's concepts and history should make a point to read at their earliest convenience.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: Marvels) - 10/04/14 11:28 PM
Lardy, I highly recommend ASM 51-120. Very underappreciated, in my opinion.

Originally Posted by Paladin
As mentioned, I read number 4 for the first time. At first blush, I was taken aback a little by how much of a downer ending it was. I know, I know....kinda hard to avoid when the issue centers around the fate of Gwen Stacy. And, of course, the larger metaphor is the end of the innocent Silver Age that her death has come to symbolize. In that context there is no other way that the series could have ended, but it certainly is a bit jarring. Seeing how it affects Phil and basically ends his career is certainly not a happy ending, even with the attempt to "happily ever after" things a bit at the end.


Yeah, and, like I said before, dragging in a grade-school-age Danny Ketch just makes the ending even weaker. I wonder if that might have been editorially mandated? I also wonder, though, how else it could have ended...hmmm. hmmm
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: Marvels) - 10/04/14 11:33 PM
I think that interview I linked earlier puts the "blame" on Kurt. In his defense it *was* a really hot book at the time, and there was every reason to believe the character would have staying power. shrug
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: Marvels) - 10/04/14 11:35 PM
Ah, okay. I admit I didn't read it. Busiek and Ross can both kind of get on my nerves when they're interviewed. I prefer to let their work speak for them.

You make a good point, though, Lardy. Who'd have thought 20 years ago that Danny Ketch would end up such a footnote?
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: Marvels) - 10/04/14 11:42 PM
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Lardy, I highly recommend ASM 51-120. Very underappreciated, in my opinion.


It's not my fault! shake I experienced Silver Age Spidey thru reprints in Marvel Tales. Unfortunately, Marvel stopped reprinting the run in the book after issue 50. They switched to a digest for a while, but it was hard to find and didn't last long. Tales then switched to showing Spidey's mutant-related team-ups from MTU and what-not for a while. frown
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: Marvels) - 10/04/14 11:49 PM
There's always the Essentials volumes.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: Marvels) - 10/04/14 11:55 PM
True. I love me some color, though, so I'll eventually likely get Masterworks. I've had it in the first two volumes forever, so I'll eventually complete it.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: Marvels) - 10/04/14 11:58 PM
Cool.

As great as the Steve Ditko and John Romita Senior issues are, I think the Gil Kane ones get unfairly overlooked. Especially when Romita was inking Kane. That was a magical combination.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: Marvels) - 10/13/14 12:31 AM
Lardy, I have a new re-read project in the works, so whenever you get a chance, could you please change this thread's subtitle to "Coming Soon: Kevin Smith's Green Arrow"?
Your wish is my command, dahling!
Thank you, kind sir.
KEVIN SMITH'S GREEN ARROW

Kevin Smith was a geek voice in the mainstream years and years before geek culture was co-opted by the mainstream. I don't see eye-to-eye with him on everything (he thinks Alanis Morrissette is God, I think she's Satan) but his sincere commitment to geek culture can't be denied.

So it is with another Kevin Smith milestone: the first Gen-X writer from outside comics to come into the comics industry, and by far the best, in my opinion, with his 15-issue Green Arrow run as his magnum opus.

I love Ollie Queen, but the way he's generally been potrayed from about 1987 on really grates with me. That's why these 15 issues are an oasis of goodness in a generally rotten three decades.

Green Arrow Vol. 2 #1

A masterful opener, letting us into the thoughts of Roy Harper (Ollie's ex-protege), Dinah Lance (Ollie's ex-lover), and Connor Hawke (Ollie's illegitimate son, and for a few years, his successor as Green Arrow) on the complicated, and long-deceased, man known as Oliver Queen. It's nice that Smith respects all past Green Arrow continuity, even the bits which make hardcore Ollie fans uncomfortable. Smith clearly loves Ollie and loves those closest to Ollie as well, capturing their individual voices perfectly.

We then move to Star City, Ollie's former haunts from before Mike Grell moved him to Seattle. Late at night, a couple of young thugs try to rob an old man, and they're stopped by...Ollie Queen?? Great cliffhanger.

Green Arrow Vol. 2 #2

Here we're introduced to Mia Dearden, an underaged prostitute hired to service a disgustingly corrupt (in more senses than one) Star City politician, the kind of guy that Ollie Queen would disparagingly call a "fat cat."

Did someone mention Ollie Queen?

Why, here he is, righteous as ever, and back in the old threads , complete with the Robin Hood hat. He saves Mia from the politician, and leaves him trussed up for the police.

Later, Mia's pimp tries to kill her, for fear that the incident with the politician might bring the police down on him. She turns the tables on him, knocks him out, and metaphorically castrates him by cutting off one of his fingers. Then she runs away.

Meanwhile, Ollie turns out to have gained himself a benefactor in Stanley Dover, the old man whose life he saved. Stanley is also rich, and, apparently, gay.

Ollie's main priority at the moment is tracking down a serial killer known as the Star City Slayer, who preys exclusively on underage victims. In a bizarre final page, the Slayer, his identity hidden from the readers' view, feeds the blood of his latest victim to what appears to be an honest-to-goodness monster he is holding captive.

Smith's dialogue continues to be excellent, and it's clearer than ever that he really "gets" Ollie.

Even knowing what's coming later in this 10-part storyarc, I'm still enjoying it immensely, lack of surprises or not (and I'd ask Legion Worlders to please try not to spoil anything prematurely).

Green Arrow Vol. 2 #3

In which Ollie discovers that he's literally out of time, and Mia takes Ollie up on his offer to join the Star City Youth Center, where Ollie helps out, and which was reopened thanks to Stanley's generosity. Mia fits right in, and she's given asylum by Stanley, who brings her and the readers (partially) up to speed on what's happened since Ollie came back to life. We end with Ollie getting some unexpected help busting some hi-tech drug dealers led by super-villain Black Manta, courtesy of Manta's nemesis, Aquaman.

Having established herself as a tough cookie last issue, Mia quickly establishes herself in this issue as very likeable and a natural foil for Ollie, a remarkable achievement for a character created completely from scratch by Smith.
I think it started out well, but became a bit of a mess towards the end. I'll reserve chiming in more until we're further along.
Looking forward to that, Dave.

Without spoiling too much, I'll admit I'm not crazy about the resolution to the Star City Slayer arc, but I think the five remaining Smith issues that followed are pure gold.
Green Arrow Vol. 2 #4

This issue starts off with a great scene of Mia explaining why the Power Puff Girls (by any other name) are so much better than the old cartoons for girls. From there, we get a good action sequence at the Star City wharf followed by some good banter between Ollie and Aquaman, before the two are whisked off to the JLA Watchtower, where Ollie gradually suffers a meltdown when it becomes clear just how far out of time he really is. Batman, who is portrayed by Smith much better than the way anyone else was portraying him by this point, knocks out Ollie and takes him away to the Batcave to run some tests.

Meanwhile, we start getting the sense that Stanley may not be the upstanding citizen he presents himself as.

And Dinah finds out from Oracle that Ollie is alive.

Another good issue, except for Ollie's reaction to Kyle -- "First the black guy, then the redneck, and now a toddler! For the love of Pete, those little blue men give out rings like prizes in a crackerjack box." It's a cheap joke, and it sounds wrong coming from Ollie, one of the least likely characters to say anything even remotely racist.
This issue didn't really work completely for me and is where it started to unravel a bit. The Watchtower scene was awkward and painfully written. Ollie comes off as a caricature of his past appearances, and his patronising interactions with the League fell flat ("Cute as a button"). Add to that, the whole JLA also comes off as morons so Batman can look smart, since it's made really obvious that Ollie's not "current".

On the plus side, there is some fun and snappy dialogue, which is to be expected from Smith, and it redeems a lot of the book's faults, but if I recall, that balance won't hold for much longer.
Originally Posted by Dave Hackett
The Watchtower scene was awkward and painfully written. Ollie comes off as a caricature of his past appearances, and his patronising interactions with the League fell flat ("Cute as a button").


Given some of the things that will be revealed in the next three issues, I'd say the whole point of that sequence was to be awkward and uncomfortable and for Ollie to come off badly.

And I don't think they were being stupid, I think they were confused and indecisive. Batman simply stated what was going through their minds and did what they knew had to be done.
Green Arrow Vol. 2 #5

In which, after Batman's tests prove inconclusive, Ollie and Batman team up and head for Star City and the old, dilapidated Queen estate, where they're ambushed by Etrigan the Demon. Meanwhile, Mia meets Roy and Dinah.

Spoiler's not well-written here, and Phil Hester draws her looking too much like Mia.

On the other hand, some of the banter between Ollie and Batman is priceless. Love the "prep schools" exchange.

And as someone who hated the Grell-era costume, I was very pleased when Ollie made fun of it.
I will still be reviewing the remaining 10 Kevin Smith issues of Green Arrow sometime within the next few weeks. I've just had a lot of stuff going on lately.

Lardy, are we still going to do the PAD Hulk re-read right after the Holidays?
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Lardy, are we still going to do the PAD Hulk re-read right after the Holidays?


I haven't had time to locate my Hulks yet, so it's difficult to commit as yet.
Okay. Just thought I'd ask before the holidays got under way.

Please keep me posted. It would be wonderful if we could do it.
Update: if you've seen my recent posts in other threads, you already know that I've spontaneously embarked on a major Alan Davis re-read (I'm keeping my thoughts on that work in the All-Alan Davis thread) and that I have a Top Secret fanfic project I just started.

Point being, I don't think I'm going to get around to finishing my Green Arrow reviews for this thread. Sorry to everyone who was following them.

Sorry, also, for failing to follow through on two Re-Reads in a row.

But I'm still planning my PAD Hulk Re-Read for January. And nothing is going to stop me from following through on that one -- I love that run so much!

And, Lardy, just a reminder to please keep me posted on whether or not you'll be able to join me. And if you, or any other Legion Worlder who is a fan of that run, aren't able to join me, I hope you all will at least chime in with your memories of PAD's Hulk.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk!) - 12/09/14 11:55 PM
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady

And, Lardy, just a reminder to please keep me posted on whether or not you'll be able to join me. And if you, or any other Legion Worlder who is a fan of that run, aren't able to join me, I hope you all will at least chime in with your memories of PAD's Hulk.


At this point, probably not because of the material not being handy. Even if it was, there's a lot of material vying for my attention right now, so such a massive project would seem impractical at this time.

I look forward to reading your comments, though, and expect to chime in as you go.

Also, changed thread title to reflect the upcoming project.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk!) - 12/09/14 11:58 PM
Okay, Lardy. I certainly understand. I'm glad you'll at least be chiming in with your PAD Hulk memories.

And thanks for changing the thread title.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk!) - 12/31/14 11:09 PM
PRELUDE TO THE PETER DAVID HULK RE-READ

In early 1987, the Incredible Hulk was in danger of cancellation. After writer/artist John Byrne quit the Hulk, and Marvel altogether, after only six issues and one annual, the Hulk's reins were handed to writer/artist Al Milgrom, who spend the next year dragging the book and its lead characters through the mud. The one bright spot was issue #328, a trippy, hallucinatory fill-in issue written by Peter David, whose excellent run on Spectacular Spider-Man had been cut short by company politics. According to PAD, Milgrom was on his way out, and Hulk editor Bob Harras was so desperate to find a replacement that Harras overlooked the Spidey mess and offered the Hulk to PAD. As it happened, PAD had never been a fan of the Hulk, and sales were so bad, he expected to last six months at the most. Little did he know...

Here's the situation that PAD inherited when he took over the Hulk:

- The Hulk and Bruce Banner were separated during the brief Byrne era. Banner and Betty Ross finally got married, but Banner started to die without the Hulk, so they were re-integrated, but a pseudo-scientific glitch caused Banner to become the thuggish grey Hulk from the earliest Hulk stories, while the Hulk's off-and-on sidekick, Rick Jones, became the new dumb green Hulk.

- The Hulkbusters, introduced during Byrne's run, were a group of specialists put together for the express purpose of hunting down and capturing the Hulk.

- The perpetual human thorn in the Hulk's side, Betty's father General "Thunderbolt" Ross, merged with an old Hulk rogue, Zzaxx, and ended up dead.

- Doc Samson was possessed by an icky creature who was exterminated in Milgrom's last issue, which was also the first issue pencilled by Todd McFarlane, who, after his flashy work on Infinity Inc, was being forced by Marvel to re-learn the basics of storytelling.

Got all that? Good. See you tomorrow with my review of Incredible Hulk #331, PAD's first issue as the ongoing writer.
Posted By: Kappa Kid Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk!) - 01/01/15 12:53 AM
I've never really read that much Hulk stuff beyond a few scattered issues of PAD's run so I'll be sure to follow your reading marathon, Fanfie. nod
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk!) - 01/01/15 02:53 AM
Thanks, Indy. Welcome aboard.
Posted By: thoth lad Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk!) - 01/01/15 11:47 AM
Thanks for the Previously in Hulk post Fickles.

Like Ibby, I've never been a Hulk reader, so that was a big help.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk!) - 01/01/15 01:05 PM
You're very welcome, Thoth. Welcome aboard.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 01/01/15 01:52 PM
Incredible Hulk #331 (May 1987)

SYNOPSIS: The Hulkbusters have a disastrous confrontation with the Rick Jones Green Hulk; Bruce Banner decides that desperate times call for desperate measures, so he deliberately transforms himself into the thuggish Grey Hulk, not realizing until it's too late that the Hulk was subconsciously influencing him to take this action; the Grey Hulk is approached by Sam Sterns, formerly the Hulk's arch-foe, the Leader (who earlier in the issue stole the dead body of General Thunderbolt Ross) who has a plan to rid the world of both Bruce Banner and Rick Jones permanently.

REVIEW: There's a LOT going on this issue, all of it good, even the brief scene at the police station with Betty's first husband, the Latin stereotype Ramon, a character whom I assume comes from some late-period Bill Mantlo issue I haven't read (if I'm wrong, feel free to correct me.) Yes, PAD is tying together ALL 25 years of the Hulk continuity, and doing so seamlessly and accessibly.

The Hulkbusters finally start to get some substantial characterization -- the dangerously obsessive LaRoquette, the gung-ho Saunders, and the more sensible Martel and Hideko.

McFarlane's art is still a work in progress, but even at this point he's already good with the action sequences.

All in all, a triumphant arrival for PAD.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 01/01/15 02:30 PM
Incredible Hulk #332 (June 1987)

SYNOPSIS: The Hulkbusters' SHIELD liaison, Clay Quartermain, secretly authorizes the now-over-the-edge LaRoquette to take a tank and go hunting for Rick Jones. When Doc Samson finds out, he stops LaRoquette by force, allowing Rick to escape. Then, the Grey Hulk lures the Green Hulk into a trap set by himself and Sam Sterns, wherein a hastily assembled device siphons the Gamma radiation out of Rick and into Sterns, who once again becomes the Leader. The device then shorts out and explodes.

REVIEW: Whereas PAD's first issue was action-driven, this one is character-driven, delving into the psychology of not only the Hulk, but also those he affects. As Doc Samson points out, what is happening to LaRoquette is exactly what happened to Thunderbolt Ross before him: an all-consuming obsession with destroying the Hulk which ultimately turns them into something just as monstrous.

It does strain credibility a bit that the Grey Hulk and Sterns could assemble such a device in so little time, even with the caveat that PAD adds. But I don't think it strains it to the breaking point. And it is, after all, a superhero comic book.
Posted By: thoth lad Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 01/01/15 02:59 PM
For a book he didn't like and with little hope for a future on it, PAD certainly doesn't sit back if he's pulling together 25 years of the title together.

It's interesting that you can pretty much drop into a book decades apart and still see much the same cast. Once that formula is in place, it doesn't often stray far. For me, the Leader, Jones and the Ross' are the key identifiers in a Hulk comic. Could PAD be looking to bring back those foundations?

I'm also looking forward to seeing if the Hulk Busters actually get to bust a Hulk. While it would kill the book, they've never struck me as being terribly successful, considering how much the Hulk is at large.

Enjoying the capsule reviews, Fickles.
Posted By: thoth lad Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 01/01/15 03:00 PM
Oh, I forgot. Did the Leader come after Green Lantern's Hector Hammond in the large head department?
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 01/01/15 04:08 PM
Thanks for the kind words, Thoth. Glad you're enjoying.

It was PAD's idea to bring back the Leader (whose new mutation leaves with with a head that looks less like a cucumber and more like broccoli), but it was Byrne who brought Betty and Rick back into the book.

And, yes, Hector Hammond came before the Leader.
Posted By: thoth lad Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 01/01/15 04:23 PM
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
the Leader (whose new mutation leaves with with a head that looks less like a cucumber and more like broccoli),


I think we'll find that the key success of this run will hinge on PAD knowing when to Brocolli when others would have cucumbered. smile

Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
And, yes, Hector Hammond came before the Leader.


A Marvel spokesman stated that the cucumbered headed, wheelchair bound leader of a band of societal outcasts is a complete coincidence. smile
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 01/01/15 04:30 PM
Thoth, LOL rotflmao

Personally, I think both broccoli and cucumbers are equally vile. I prefer spinach or lettuce.
Posted By: thoth lad Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 01/01/15 04:55 PM
Lettuce remember that spinach is the super power property of Popeye.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 01/01/15 04:57 PM
And spinach is green. Coincidence? hmmm
Posted By: thoth lad Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 01/01/15 05:03 PM
Olive Oyl: Which testing range did ya say this Spinach came from Popeye?
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 01/01/15 05:06 PM
LOL lol
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk!) - 01/01/15 05:11 PM
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
PRELUDE TO THE PETER DAVID HULK RE-READ

In early 1987, the Incredible Hulk was in danger of cancellation. After writer/artist John Byrne quit the Hulk, and Marvel altogether, after only six issues and one annual, the Hulk's reins were handed to writer/artist Al Milgrom, who spend the next year dragging the book and its lead characters through the mud. The one bright spot was issue #328, a trippy, hallucinatory fill-in issue written by Peter David, whose excellent run on Spectacular Spider-Man had been cut short by company politics. According to PAD, Milgrom was on his way out, and Hulk editor Bob Harras was so desperate to find a replacement that Harras overlooked the Spidey mess and offered the Hulk to PAD. As it happened, PAD had never been a fan of the Hulk, and sales were so bad, he expected to last six months at the most. Little did he know...

Here's the situation that PAD inherited when he took over the Hulk:

- The Hulk and Bruce Banner were separated during the brief Byrne era. Banner and Betty Ross finally got married, but Banner started to die without the Hulk, so they were re-integrated, but a pseudo-scientific glitch caused Banner to become the thuggish grey Hulk from the earliest Hulk stories, while the Hulk's off-and-on sidekick, Rick Jones, became the new dumb green Hulk.

- The Hulkbusters, introduced during Byrne's run, were a group of specialists put together for the express purpose of hunting down and capturing the Hulk.

- The perpetual human thorn in the Hulk's side, Betty's father General "Thunderbolt" Ross, merged with an old Hulk rogue, Zzaxx, and ended up dead.

- Doc Samson was possessed by an icky creature who was exterminated in Milgrom's last issue, which was also the first issue pencilled by Todd McFarlane, who, after his flashy work on Infinity Inc, was being forced by Marvel to re-learn the basics of storytelling.

Got all that? Good. See you tomorrow with my review of Incredible Hulk #331, PAD's first issue as the ongoing writer.


This proves my old memory is faulty. I'd thought that PAD immediately followed Byrne. I feel bad about that because I should have known that a plot point as (putting it kindly) ill-advised as the Rick Jones Hulk wouldn't have come from him, not even at this early point in his career. I mean, RJ Hulk looks ridiculous with his poofy sorta-mullet and his toned-down physique! lol

That said, PAD did a great job making lemons out of lemonade. As Le Ficque describes it, it's clear he didn't miss a pitch and just knocked it out of the park! While quickly writing out the RJ Hulk, he had him serve a greater purpose by bringing back the Leader better than ever and immediately putting the wheels in motion to bring back Thunderbolt Ross. (As thoth says, he's an essential cast member.) And then there's all the greatness to come with the Gray Hulk.... drool

I picked up the Hulk for the first time when Byrne took over. For the longest, I'd follow him to any book he went on as he was, and remains to some degree in a historical context, my favorite artist/writer. I'm glad I jumped on when I did and especially that I kept on reading after Byrne left, even through the mediocre-at-best Milgrom run. PAD builds on all of that so well, seamlessly, I'd say. And, of course, if PAD's run on the Hulk isn't the very best on the character ever (and one of the best by any writer, imo), I'd be interested to see evidence to the contrary.

In my mind Hulk was a book with very limited character development before PAD just totally reinvented how to handle the character. Before him, what was the highlight? The Jarella stories? Honestly, I'd be surprised if the book ever approached the quality of PAD's run, before or after his long, great run.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk!) - 01/01/15 05:26 PM
Originally Posted by Paladin
This proves my old memory is faulty. I'd thought that PAD immediately followed Byrne. I feel bad about that because I should have known that a plot point as (putting it kindly) ill-advised as the Rick Jones Hulk wouldn't have come from him, not even at this early point in his career. I mean, RJ Hulk looks ridiculous with his poofy sorta-mullet and his toned-down physique! lol

That said, PAD did a great job making lemons out of lemonade. As Le Ficque describes it, it's clear he didn't miss a pitch and just knocked it out of the park! While quickly writing out the RJ Hulk, he had him serve a greater purpose by bringing back the Leader better than ever and immediately putting the wheels in motion to bring back Thunderbolt Ross. (As thoth says, he's an essential cast member.) And then there's all the greatness to come with the Gray Hulk.... drool

I picked up the Hulk for the first time when Byrne took over. For the longest, I'd follow him to any book he went on as he was, and remains to some degree in a historical context, my favorite artist/writer. I'm glad I jumped on when I did and especially that I kept on reading after Byrne left, even through the mediocre-at-best Milgrom run. PAD builds on all of that so well, seamlessly, I'd say. And, of course, if PAD's run on the Hulk isn't the very best on the character ever (and one of the best by any writer, imo), I'd be interested to see evidence to the contrary.

In my mind Hulk was a book with very limited character development before PAD just totally reinvented how to handle the character. Before him, what was the highlight? The Jarella stories? Honestly, I'd be surprised if the book ever approached the quality of PAD's run, before or after his long, great run.


Very well said, Lardy. And if I may be so bold, I'd say that PAD's reinvention of the Hulk would be just as well-regarded as Alan Moore's reinvention of Swamp Thing, if only PAD had had a top-caliber artist from the get-go. Even though McFarlane had improved a lot by the time he left, his style was a bit too weird, and I think Jeff Purves was just phoning it most of the time. It took Dale Keown's artistry to take the Hulk to a Moore/Bissette level.

As for pre-PAD Hulk, I think Steve Englehart (who could do no wrong in the early 70s), Len Wein (who genuinely loved the dumb green Hulk), and Roger Stern (who could do no wrong in the late 70s/early 80s) all had respectable Hulk runs; Byrne, too, even though he left so quickly (although I think the best Byrne Hulk issue was the Sal Buscema-drawn Annual 14). But all of those runs pale in comparison to PAD's, in my opinion.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk!) - 01/01/15 05:52 PM
It's hard for me to compare anyone or anything to Moore's best. He's probably the best writer ever to script a comic. There's just a sheer artistry to his work that transcends the medium.

PAD, at his best, is an outstanding writer with a knack particularly for reinventing tired characters and concepts, giving his cast real humanity for the audience to care what happens to them and injecting humor in a way that feels natural. I'd say he's a rung or two behind Moore, but then again, most writers are. (PAD's a terrific novelist as well, btw. I've read a number of his books, and they are great reads!)

But I honestly don't think anyone would dispute his Hulk run as being the best on the character and among the best on any ongoing comic. I think it's clearly PAD's personal best, as well. This is despite the fact that I feel it tailed off considerably toward the end, to the point where i actually dropped the book for a while just before the end.

Englehart wrote the Hulk, too?!?! The man could clearly do NO wrong!!! Everything I've read of his so far from the '70s proves your point. Just a week ago I completed reading the first half of his run on Doc Strange... drool
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk!) - 01/01/15 06:03 PM
Originally Posted by Paladin
It's hard for me to compare anyone or anything to Moore's best. He's probably the best writer ever to script a comic. There's just a sheer artistry to his work that transcends the medium.

PAD, at his best, is an outstanding writer with a knack particularly for reinventing tired characters and concepts, giving his cast real humanity for the audience to care what happens to them and injecting humor in a way that feels natural. I'd say he's a rung or two behind Moore, but then again, most writers are.


Agreed 100%.

Originally Posted by Paladin
(PAD's a terrific novelist as well, btw. I've read a number of his books, and they are great reads!)


I've been catching up with PAD's prose these last couple years. I particularly love the Star Trek: New Frontier series.

Originally Posted by Paladin
But I honestly don't think anyone would dispute his Hulk run as being the best on the character and among the best on any ongoing comic. I think it's clearly PAD's personal best, as well. This is despite the fact that I feel it tailed off considerably toward the end, to the point where i actually dropped the book for a while just before the end.


Yeah. Blasted mid-90s Marvel editorial restructuring. mad

I'm gonna see it through to the bitter end, though, because I think it did start to get back on its feet when Adam Kubert came on board.

Originally Posted by Paladin
Englehart wrote the Hulk, too?!?! The man could clearly do NO wrong!!! Everything I've read of his so far from the '70s proves your point. Just a week ago I completed reading the first half of his run on Doc Strange... drool


Unfortunately, Englehart only wrote the Hulk for a little less than a year; Marvel's then-EiC, Roy Thomas, fired him off the Hulk for reasons which remain unclear.

LOVE Englehart's Dr. Strange, BTW, and I wish he'd been able to complete the time-travel arc.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk!) - 01/02/15 01:09 AM
Incredible Hulk #333 (July 1987)

SYNOPSIS: On the run, the Hulk unwittingly helps a small-town battered wife get revenge on her husband, who is also the sheriff. Meanwhile, Rick returns to Gamma Base, and Betty reunites with Ramon.

REVIEW: This one's main story is somewhat reminiscent of the old Hulk TV show, with the added twist of PAD's dark, cynical view of humanity which often breaks through his trademark humor. At the end, the wife accidentally shoots her abusive husband dead, and the townspeople have already given into the mob mentality. The thuggish Grey Hulk takes this as proof that he's right to regard humanity with contempt. Nobody wins. In the hands of a lesser writer than PAD, this would just be a downer of a story. In PAD's hands, it works.

Incredible Hulk #334 (August 1987)

SYNOPSIS: Bruce tries to reconcile with Betty, only to transform into the Hulk at the worst possible time. The Hulk also confronts a Gamma-irradiated zombie named Half-Life, who turns out, like the Hulk, to have been affected by a Gamma-bomb test.

REVIEW: Yep, after 25 years, it's finally confirmed that the United States government kept on manufacturing, testing, and, eventually stock-piling, Gamma-bombs. Clever PAD, no loose end gets by him. Also lots of great character bits, and the horror-movie-flavored tragicomedy of Half-Life.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk!) - 01/03/15 04:00 PM
Incredible Hulk #335 (September 1987)

SYNOPSIS: A supernatural serial killer manifests itself in our reality through the corrupted soul of a socially inept, horror-movie obsessed young man with a dead-end job at a gas station. The Hulk reluctantly dispenses his own brand of rough justice.

REVIEW: A disappointing fill-in where, unusually for PAD, the story is too confusing to engage, while guest artist John Ridgway, who has also done estimable work on titles like Hellblazer, seems to have been editorially micro-managed to no one's satisfaction.

Incredible Hulk #336 (October 1987)

SYNOPSIS: Quartermain is under pressure from the SHIELD council, who have decided that Banner is expendable. Meanwhile, the Hulk's wandering have taken him to Sparta, Illionis, where a citizen mistakes him for a mutant and reports him to X-Factor. Cyclops, Marvel Girl, and Iceman fly to the Midwest to confront the Hulk, and though they are surprised by his unreconstructed viciousness, they manage to subdue him. X-Factor then reluctantly agrees to bring him to Gamma Base.

REVIEW: A return to form, at least on the writing front, because McFarlane's art still has some awkward moments. PAD has been a fan of the original X-Men from the very beginning, back in the days when it was Marvel's worst-selling title, so it's easy to tell that he's having a great time writing Scott, Jean, and Bobby. There's also a cameo by their protege, Skids, whom I've always liked. Some great dialogue, especially this bon mot from the Hulk: "You still think I'm that cuddly monster who loved baked beans and puppy dogs. He's DEAD, Cyclops! I'M here now!"

Incredible Hulk #337 (November 1987)

SYNOPSIS: When X-Factor delivers Hulk to Gamma Base, the result is a free-for-all, climaxing with a rogue Quartermain's deliberate destruction of the base. Bruce, Rick, X-Factor, Hideko, and Martel escape the carnage with Quartermain, while Doc Samson barely survives to declare, "What a waste." Meanwhile, Betty, who was accidentally injured when Bruce transformed into the Hulk in her presence, leaves the hospital with Ramon.

REVIEW: A transitional issue, with the destruction of Gamma Base and Hideko and Martel's dignified exit from the book; Doc Samson won't be seen again for quite a while, which is a bit of a shame because PAD writes him so well. This is also the first issue to credit Tom DeFalco as Editor-in-Chief, something I thought I'd note because I think DeFalco gets a bad rap. Sure, he made some mistakes, but that's impossible for an EiC not to do, and his 1987-1994 tenure is my personal Golden Age of Marvel, with PAD's Hulk as the crown jewel.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk!) - 01/03/15 07:38 PM
Incredible Hulk #338 (December 1987)

SYNOPSIS: Bruce, Rick, and Quartermain's search for the bombs and for Betty hits a snag when a deadly alien empath named Mercy senses that Bruce wants to die, and won't let anything get in her way. The Hulk appears to destroy her, but she reappears elsewhere at the end. Meanwhile, the Leader telepathically influences a politician.

REVIEW: Another largely psychological, character-driven piece adding layers of depth and complexity to both Banner and the Hulk. Also a darkly funny cameo by Batman's butler, Alfred (of course, to prevent copyright infringement, it's not outright stated.)

Incredible Hulk #339 (January 1988)

SYNOPSIS: PAD ties up a loose end from his Spidey run about a pyrokinetic grade-school-age boy who accidentally killed his abusive father and was taken into SHIELD custody. When Bruce, Rick, and Quartermain alight at a SHIELD safehouse, it happens to be the one where the kid is. Much madness ensues. Meanwhile, Betty sneaks out of hers and Ramon's hotel room, and the Leader influences a U.S. Army General.

REVIEW: This is a couple of firsts for PAD: The first time he intertwines a book he's writing with a plot thread from another book he's written, and the first time he overtly references Incredible Hulk #312, Bill Mantlo's next-to-last issue, in which we discover that Bruce's father was abusive to both him and his mother (rumors abound that Mantlo and the Hulk's then-editor, Carl Potts, ripped off a never-published Hulk story that Barry Windsor-Smith had in the planning stages at that time. Mantlo, sadly, has been in a coma going on a quarter-century, and cannot confirm or deny.) This will pay considerable creative dividends down the road.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 01/05/15 12:19 AM
Incredible Hulk #340 (February 1988)

SYNOPSIS: While a solitary Betty ponders her situation, the Hulk confronts Wolverine, who has just landed in Dallas with the rest of the X-Men. Quartermain and Rick break up the fight with help from a Great Big SHIELD Gun, and Hulk and Wolverine return to their separate pursuits. And the Leader finds out the location of the Gamma bombs.

REVIEW: This issue was the turning point, sales-wise, for the book. How could it fail, what with a Hulk/Wolverine battle and a cameo by the X-Men? Plus McFarlane finally learning how to properly combine dynamics with coherent storytelling, and doing his own inking to boot? Although, according to PAD, retailers ordered lots more copies of this issue, but then cut back to previous numbers; even so, enough readers who had been previously ignoring the Hulk stayed aboard so that sales gradually climbed to acceptable levels.

I love the way PAD writes Wolverine, with all the pseudo-philosophical, pseudo-Zen B.S. falling away in the presence of the Hulk, proving that Wolverine remains, at his core, a kill-happy nutcase. Whether you love or hate Wolverine, it works! He also writes the other X-Men well -- Dazzler's quip, "If we die in Dallas, maybe it'll be a dream and we'll come back to life in somebody's shower," almost makes me actually like her. Almost.
Posted By: thoth lad Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 01/05/15 12:44 AM
The X-Men in Dallas. Wasn't that where ...quickly nips to a Wiki page and...oh, I was reading the X-Men then.

It (The X-Men one) was a poor, cobbled together story. At the time I hadn't known what Claremont's run was supposed to be.

I remember the cover to this Hulk issue. Not so much because of the Wolverine appearance (actually, it's a decent cover even as it grabs in X-readers), but because I think it was getting some positive press. Or maybe it was that the price of Mcfarlane back issues went through the roof later on...
Posted By: Kappa Kid Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 01/05/15 12:48 AM
I love the Outback X-Men era. That's when I got into the team! nod laugh
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 01/05/15 01:15 AM
Sorry, Indy, but I agree with Thoth on this one. I think Claremont was already bad by the time of the Dallas story, and that it only got worse from there.

Conversely, I think that the Dallas story's coda, the Excalibur: The Sword Is Drawn special was a masterpiece, and that it should have been Claremont's final word on mutants.
Posted By: Kappa Kid Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 01/05/15 01:33 AM
I felt like Claremont was really experimenting and trying something new with the team during this era and wasn't play it safe, making for some interesting stories. My fanboy love of Havok might make me biased towards this era though. wink
Posted By: thoth lad Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 01/06/15 08:29 PM
I have to say, I did continue reading it into the 250s. Silvestri's art probably added a lot to it. However, the Brood story and particularly the Genoshan one stand out.

Of course, none of those issues had the Hulk in them that I recall
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 01/06/15 11:33 PM
Many issues from now (390-392 to be exact), the Hulk will cross over with X-Factor. PAD was writing both books at the time.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 01/12/15 12:31 AM
Incredible Hulk #341 (March 1988)

SYNOPSIS: The Hulk, Rick, and Quartermain stop at the farm owned by Quartermain's brother, a computer whiz whom they want to help them break into government files and learn the location of the Gamma bombs. Quartermain's brother only agrees on the condition that the Hulk protect him and his family from the Man-Bull, who is on the loose in the vicinity. Meanwhile, the Leader telepathically enthralls LaRoquette and Saunders.

REVIEW: The Hulk sees his old, dull-witted, savage, grammar-deficient self in the Man-Bull, and he doesn't like it one bit. By the end, he almost pities the Man-Bull, declaring that the mob of farmers would be more merciful in killing the weeping, self-pitying Man-Bull than in letting him live. Though the issue moves the subplots along, it feels a bit redundant of things we've seen done better in previous PAD Hulk issues. It is, however, the first use of the Hulk's one-fingered knockout punch, an amusing device PAD will use again in the future.

Incredible Hulk #342 (April 1988)

SYNOPSIS: Half-Life returns, now working for the Leader. While Quartermain's brother breaks into government files, the Hulk cleverly defeats Half-Life by making him see that he can never be normal again, causing him to suicidally self-combust. Meanwhile, the Leader's androids retrieve Betty, LaRoquette, and Saunders, and the Leader discovers that Betty is pregnant with Banner/Hulk's child.

REVIEW: The Leader amusingly shows us how he's a cut above the other super-villains by RECORDING his lengthy explanation of his master plan to the Hulk, instead of waiting until they're face-to-face. Otherwise, this issue, much like the previous one, feels like it's spinning its wheels, delaying the big finish a little too long. But the big finish (coming up in 345) is well worth the wait.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 01/12/15 12:53 AM
Incredible Hulk #343 (May 1988)

SYNOPSIS: The Leader allows Betty to escape, but sends his androids in pursuit, the better to delay the Hulk and company, while he sends LaRoquette and Saunders -- whom he has transformed into his new goons, Rock & Redeemer -- to steal one of the gamma bombs.

REVIEW: An improvement over the last couple issues. The backstories given to LaRoquette and Saunders are interesting, while McFarlane does a good job with the Hulk-versus-androids action sequence.

Incredible Hulk #344 (June 1988)

SYNOPSIS: While the Hulk and Betty (as opposed to Bruce and Betty) have their very first heart-to-heart conversation, Rock & Redeemer steal a gamma bomb, leaving much death and destruction in their wake.

REVIEW: PAD is the rare comic book writer who is equally great at both action and characterization, but while the villains' attack on a military base is thrilling, it's the brilliantly written conversation between the Hulk and Betty that is the true heart and soul of the issue. For the first time in her existence, Betty starts to become a fully-rounded character, while the Hulk continues to show more and more shades of grey (no pun intended) as the line between Hulk and Bruce blurs more and more. Also worth mentioning is the one-panel cameo by the Troyjans, an alien race who won't debut for many, many issues, proof that, unlike some writers, PAD almost always gives a payoff to what appear to be random loose ends.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 01/19/15 02:07 AM
Incredible Hulk #345 (July 1988)

SYNOPSIS: In a dreary small town in Arizona, various people -- a troubled priest, an embittered lawyer, a spunky teenage couple, and a morose encyclopedia salesman -- go about their drab lives, never suspecting that the Leader has planted the Gamma Bomb in an abandoned factory. The Hulk deliberately strands his companions in the desert and goes into the factory alone, where he has a confrontation with Rock & Redeemer in which Rock accidentally kills Redeemer and nearly kills the Hulk as well. The Leader comes and retrieves his stooges via teleportation tech, leaving the Hulk to try to dismantle the bomb. Then the Leader surrounds the town with a force field...and detonates the bomb way ahead of the countdown.

REVIEW: Simply awesome. And what a cliffhanger. I'll bet that in those pre-death-as-cheap-stunt days, readers might have thought that the Hulk really did die in the explosion. Of course he didn't...although he doesn't appear at all in the next issue. And things only get weirder from there...but I'm getting ahead of myself. See you all next weekend with the review of the issue-length epilogue, followed by a startling new status quo.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 01/28/15 12:34 AM
Incredible Hulk #346 (August 1988)

SYNOPSIS: After dealing with the repercussions of the Gamma bomb explosion and the resultant media coverage, Rick and Betty mourn the Hulk and prepare to move on with their lives.

REVIEW: An whole issue that's an extended epilogue to a long storyline is a dubious proposal, unless the writer is as good with characterization and dialogue as PAD is. This issue also marks the end of both McFarlane's artistic stint on the Hulk (he only did layouts here, with Erik Larsen doing pencils) as well as Harras's editing stint on the Hulk. The new editor would be Bobbie Chase, who would edit all of the remaining 121 issues (!) of PAD's run, and who PAD has credited with allowing him to stretch his wings and experiment fruitfully with the Hulk. Unfortunately, the next phase of PAD's run would be mostly drawn by Jeff Purves, a sword & sorcery fan ill-suited to the more down-to-earth direction the book took over the next couple years. So I'm going to try to get through the following twenty or so issues as quickly as possible, because I think the real meat of the run is when Dale Keown replaced Purves and took PAD's already excellent scripts from the atmosphere to the stratosphere.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 02/04/15 01:48 AM
Incredible Hulk 347-350 (September-December 1988)

Three months after the Gamma Bomb explosion, we learn that the Hulk is alive and well, no longer reverting to Bruce Banner, and working as "Mr. Fixit", the chief enforcer for Las Vegas crimelord Michael Berengetti. He also has a new girlfriend, Marlo Chandler, an aerobics instructor who is overjoyed to finally have met a man who is not intimidated by her Amazonian six-foot-plus frame. In these issues, we're treated to punch-ups with the Absorbing Man, Warzone (a group of cyborgs who take the Weekend Warrior ethos to extremes), and the Thing.

Points to PAD for willing to go offbeat, but in re-reading these issues years later, after superhero comics' Dark Night of the Soul, and after reading PAD's magnum opus "Fallen Angel", I get the impression that he had originally wanted to go in a direction that was less Damon Runyon and more film noir (PAD kind of confirmed this when he revealed that Marlo was originally supposed to be a prostitute and that his first choice of city for the Hulk to relocate to was Chicago.) The whole thing just feels a little too sanitized, a little too Comics Code friendly.

It doesn't help that 349 and 350 are crossovers with Web of Spider-Man #44 and Fantastic Four #320, so they're hard to read without having those issues handy, or that McFarlane's replacement, Jeff Purves, has a sketchy line and a sense of layout that ranges from confusing to flat.

In the end, though, these are comics written by PAD in his late-80s/early-to-mid-90s prime, so they're still a cut above the rest, and starting with the next issue, things get much more interesting as we finally learn how the Hulk survived the explosion and how come he's not reverting to Bruce Banner.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 02/07/15 10:53 PM
Incredible Hulk #351-359 (January-September 1989)

Turns out the Hulk was teleported by a sorcerer named Gorsham to the microscopic world where his late lover, Jarella, came from, and that in the years since he was last there, a religious movement has been fashioned around the legends of the Hulk. Unfortunately, the leader of that movement, the Inquisitor, is a sadistic, torture-loving bastard, and Gorsham wants to use the Hulk to unseat the Inquisitor. They succeed, only for the Hulk to find out that Gorsham coveted the Inquisitor's power, and used the Hulk as a means to an end. As soon as the Hulk served his purpose, he was teleported against his will back to the normal world. This two-part flashback is possibly the high point of the Las Vegas era (PAD says it was the only time that Purves enjoyed working on the book, though the art isn't that much better to my eyes). PAD manages to get in some pointed, if veiled, jabs at organized religion which were quite daring for late 80s Marvel. At the end of #352, Gorsham's spell fades away completely, and the Hulk starts turning back into Bruce Banner during the daytime, which, of course, complicates the Hulk's current mob enforcer gig, as well as his relationship with Marlo. This is all amusing and engaging, but it's not quite top-tier PAD, not even when he brings back Glorian and the Shaper of Worlds, characters introduced in the Bronze Age during the Len Wein era, to tell a story in which Glorian (who has the power to make people's dreams come true) unknowingly forfeits his soul to the devil in exchange for trying to redeem the Hulk. The Hulk reluctantly saves Glorian's soul, more out of spite for the devil than anything, but earns the enmity of the devil (this was originally supposed to be the seed of a future storyarc called the Hell on Earth War, which PAD didn't get to write until the final year of his second run on X-Factor.)

I'm not going to review issue #360, because PAD didn't write it. As it happens, it was written by one of my sometime favorite writers, Bob Harras, but it was produced under the worst kind of circumstances: Marvel's PTB nixed a storyarc PAD planned involving Betty's pregnancy (he wanted her to have the baby), and PAD got so angry he almost quit the book. Although he stayed, he refused to write Betty's miscarriage on principal, so it fell to Harras to play guest writer. Ironically enough, the Hulk was eventually revealed to have fathered children many years (and many editorial reshufflings) later. Don't you love the comics industry? Makes me glad I was never able to break into it.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 02/14/15 09:14 PM
Incredible Hulk #361-368 (October 1989-April 1990)

PAD spends the first three issues of this block wrapping up loose ends from the Las Vegas era, while setting up the 4-part arc "Countdown", in which a lot of good stuff happens: Doc Samson and the Abomination return, as does the Leader with his Riot Squad, and PAD makes a new addition to the Hulk's rogues gallery: the Leader's brother, Madman, who deliberately exposed himself to Gamma radiation (shades of the Hulk TV show), giving himself super-powers while also worsening his fragile sense of self. There's also a fight between the gray Hulk and She-Thing, with hilariously un-PC quips from the Hulk that only PAD could pull off, and a barroom conversation between the Hulk and a temporarily de-powered Ben Grimm. The only bad thing about Countdown is that Jeff Purves draws the first three installments, and difference between Purves and the young and hungry Dale Keown on the final installment is night and day. Keown's style evokes Alan Davis, as well as his biggest conscious influences, John Byrne and Berni Wrightson, but it is uniquely Keown -- unlike other Gen-X superhero artists, his over-muscled musclemen have a real verisimilitude and suppleness to them. And, unlike previous artists PAD had worked with, Keown was a longtime, hardcore Hulk fan, and it showed from the start. Issue 368 has an interesting story -- the Hulk stows away on a freight train and encounters the erudite Mr. Hyde, who points out some uncomfortable truths before attacking the Hulk -- but is let down by the art; Sam Kieth & Kelley Jones do a murky, confusing job that only hints and what impressive stylists both would become a few years later. Next issue marks the official beginning of the PAD/Keown era of the Hulk, possibly the best the book has ever been. Stay tuned.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 02/28/15 04:25 PM
I'll cover the beginning of the PAD/Keown era next weekend, but today, having found a large window of free time, I'll be conducting a spur-of-the-moment experiment: trying to re-read all 80 issues of PAD's Supergirl run in seven hours or less. Wish me luck!
Posted By: thoth lad Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 02/28/15 04:29 PM
Super Luck Fickles wink
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 02/28/15 11:37 PM
Well, the seven hours ticked by, and I only made it to issue 30.

Guess I know what I'll be doing for the rest of the night! lol

So far, it's been even better than I remembered. It says a lot of profound and spiritual things without being pretentious or heavy-handed. Like Ostrander's Spectre run, it's neither a "pure" DCU book, nor is it in a Vertigo-esque vein. It's truly sui generis.
Posted By: thoth lad Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 03/01/15 12:33 AM
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Well, the seven hours ticked by, and I only made it to issue 30.

Guess I know what I'll be doing for the rest of the night! lol


Looking for the Kryptonite that sapped your Super-Reading powers!
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 04/27/15 09:59 PM
Incredible Hulk #369 (May 1990)

PLOT: Having found out where Betty is, Bruce has been travelling there. What appears to be an abandoned home in South Carolina turns out to have been badly damaged by a recent hurricane. After initial suspicions, the residents welcome him. Unfortunately, the remaining members of Freedom Force, the government-controlled mutant goon squad, have been sent to capture the Hulk. Much destruction ensues, and the couple who showed Bruce hospitality nearly lose their son in the chaos.

REVIEW: An understated gem of an issue. Kudos to PAD for portraying white Christian American Southerners as sympathetic human beings rather than caricatures. And while there's plenty of patented PAD jokery (Hulk to Pyro: "What does the FF stand for, French Fry?"), the general mood is melancholic. Such is PAD's command of characterization that even a cipher like Crimson Commando comes alive, agonizing over why he's doing what he's doing at his age. And the Hulk's rescue of the boy shows that even an anti-hero can be a genuine hero.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 04/27/15 10:44 PM
Chronologically, the next issue is Incredible Hulk Annual 16, but I'm going to skip most of the PAD Hulk Annuals, as the ones from 1990 through 1992 were all part of "mini-events" across four annuals each, and don't work at all as stand-alone issues.

Incredible Hulk #370-371 (June-July 1990)

And speaking of intrusive "mini-events", this 2-parter has some witty banter among the Hulk, Namor, and Dr. Strange, but it suffers from being mostly setup for a "mini-event" that won't happen until the 1992 Annuals! So to call it anti-climactic would be an understatement. Ah, but it's ALSO setup for the return of the savage Green Hulk next issue! Stay tuned.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 04/27/15 11:06 PM
Incredible Hulk #372 (August 1990)

The first thing we see is Keown's stunning cover, paying partial homage to the iconic split-screen meme of the late 70s/early 80s Hulk TV show, but with the Grey Hulk's face side-by-side with Banner's, and the Green Hulk literally bursting through the center of the page.

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After three years of seemingly ignoring readers' demands to bring back the dumb Green Hulk, PAD finally gives them what they've been asking for -- but, as always with PAD in his prime, it has a clever twist to it.

Over the past several issues, PAD has had subplots simmering on the back burners -- a mysterious figure in a high-tech car hunting down the Hulk, Doc Samson on his own Hulk-quest, and most importantly, a big ugly scar suddenly showing up on the Hulk's back while Banner and the Grey Hulk have been waging war with each other in the Hulk's mind.

Well, guess who wants in on the action: yep, the dumb Green Hulk.

And when Banner thinks that his last chance at rekindling his relationship with Betty is going to slip through his fingers, sheer desperation causes the dumb Green Hulk to literally burst through Banner's skin, in gorgeous full-color Keown imagery that is every bit as visceral as the cover, if not more.

Bad timing for the mystery stalker (whose code name, we learn, is Prometheus), because his weapons were designed to capture the smaller, less powerful Grey Hulk, so, needless to say, he fails in his mission and retreats.

And the Hulk reverts to Banner just as it looks like Betty's leaving on the train, only for it to turn out that Betty's intuition had convinced her to stay behind.

Cue a well-earned half-page panel of Bruce and Betty embracing.

A masterful issue all around.
Posted By: Kappa Kid Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 05/26/15 01:35 PM
Fanfie, I've been meaning to purchase some issues of this run and wanted to know if there were any weak spots in David's tenure. It's a long run that has a very solid reputation, but is there anything I should avoid?
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 05/26/15 06:49 PM
Stalgie, first of all I'm glad your curiosity has been piqued and thanks for approaching me with your question about this run.

I'm not sure whether the 8 volumes of Hulk Visionaries: Peter David are still in print, but I doubt you'd have any trouble finding used copies at reasonable prices. These will take you from the beginning of the run through issue 396. As I said earlier in this thread, the Las Vegas era is lacking art-wise and the stories seem a little tame in hindsight, but it's still essential.

And this autumn, Marvel will finally be collecting some more of the run in the Ghosts of the Past trade which will cover issues 397-406. Those are also essential.

407-426 are essential as well. After that, depending on how you've liked it so far, you can choose to either press forward like I'm currently doing, or jump ahead to 454 for PAD's final year on the Hulk, where the book started finding its second wind before PAD was fired for not wanting to make the Hulk dumb and savage (don't you just love the comic book industry?) The last PAD issue is 467.

Hope that helps.
Posted By: Kappa Kid Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 05/26/15 06:52 PM
Thanks! smile
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 05/26/15 06:56 PM
You're very welcome. grin
Posted By: Kappa Kid Re: Re-Reads (Now discussing: PAD's Hulk) - 06/18/15 12:30 AM
I just found a bunch of the PAD issues (20 total) at my local used bookstore for a steal of $25 bucks for all of them so I'll be able to hopefully chime in on some of the reviews now. grin
That's excellent news, Stalgie. I look forward to your comments. I've kept meaning to resume the reviews but was going back and forth in my head as to whether it was worth continuing such a humongous re-read, because there hadn't been any feedback since the Hulk/Wolverine issue. Now I have a reason to continue. Thanks, Stalgie.
Posted By: Kappa Kid Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 06/18/15 01:14 AM
I can't say I'll be able to comment on every issue, but I have a solid number of the issues from 372-394 so I'll share my thoughts when you get to an issue I have.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 06/18/15 01:17 AM
A lot of the best moments are in those issues. That $25 package was a real find and a real bargain!

I'll try to resume the reviews this weekend.
Posted By: thoth lad Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 06/18/15 07:30 PM
And just because there's no feedback ('cause I've never read 'em, or know much about the Hulk really.) doesn't mean I don't read every post fickles. smile


Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 06/18/15 07:51 PM
Awwww...thanks, Thoth.

Since I had some unexpected free time today, I'll have some reviews ready to post in just a little while.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 06/18/15 08:20 PM
Incredible Hulk 373 (September 1990)

The cover shows the reunited Betty and Hulk laughing it up, but that scene doesn't come until the very end of the issue. On the way there, the reader gets an abundance of good things: a Hulk/Doc Samson battle, a cameo by Rick Jones (much more of him to come in subsequent issues), and a wonderfully characterized Mother Superior of a nunnery who is never demeaned by PAD, even though a lot of the funniest moments involve her. And for those keeping track, Banner is back to transforming into the grey Hulk at night, having safely locked away the green Hulk...maybe. And Banner is getting a lot more assertive and proactive in human form. Hmmm...

Incredible Hulk 374-375 (October-November 1990)

Although it's great that PAD brings back Rick Jones and writes him wonderfully, this tongue-in-cheek Skrull riff on Invasion of the Body Snatchers feels rather pedestrian by Hulk standards. Not that some of the jokes don't click (my favorite is at the expense of the dreadful 1989 Marvel event Atlantis Attacks), or that the ending, where we find out that Rick's now living in Vegas and has a new girlfriend, is not a brilliant setup for the next issue.

Incredible Hulk 376 (December 1990)

Absolutely brilliant! When Betty and Bruce and Rick arrive at Rick's apartment in Vegas, all seems well until Rick's girlfriend arrives and she turns out to be...Marlo Chandler! Who recognizes Bruce! And Bruce recognizes her! And she wants to know what's become of Joe Fixit! The resultant four-way argument leads to Banner completely losing control, in a way that was never seen before in the pages of this comic: Banner, the grey Hulk, and the green Hulk's battle within Banner's psyche actually manifests itself in Banner's body, resulting in some of the trippiest transformations ever seen, all brilliantly visualized by Dale Keown and punctuated by PAD's consitently on-target verbal jokes. Finally, Bruce asserts himself like never before by telling the two monsters in his head that "Banner is the strongest one there is!" Where do we go from here? Well, let's let the newly arrived Doc Samson show us the way...TO BE CONTINUED
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 06/22/15 07:02 PM
Incredible Hulk 377 (January 1991)

A powerful trip through the tormented psyche of Dr. Robert Bruce Banner, wherein he confronts his childhood traumas at the hands of his abusive father (whom he visualizes as the creature from the Alien movies) and literally pulls together the three core personalities that have been fighting for domination -- Banner, the green Hulk, and the grey Hulk -- into one integrated Hulk. Not nearly as trite as it sounds, thanks to PAD's wit and his talent for shades of grey (no pun intended). The key exchange is this one, between Doc Samson, who is supervising the process, and the reformed villain the Ringmaster, who is using his super-hypnotic abilities for good instead of evil:

RINGMASTER: "You're going unconscionably fast, you know. Most Multiple Personality Disorder cases take months, even years, of therapy.

DOC SAMSON: "Most MPDs aren't capable of destroying a small country! We've run out of time AND options!"

The above quotes are worth keeping in mind during the events which transpire over the next 50 or so issues.

I would be remiss in not mentioning the beginnings of a sisterly bond between sheltered Betty and street-wise Marlo (one of the first realistic female friendships in a superhero comic) or Keown's superb artwork throughout, with him excelling at both the quiet scenes and the horrific mind-trip. I would easily put this issue on a par with the best scenes spotlighting Crazy Jane during Grant Morrison's Doom Patrol run.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 06/22/15 11:10 PM
Incredible Hulk 378 (February 1991)

The Dreaded Dealine Doom rears its head, resulting in the next PAD/Keown issue getting sandwiched between two fill-ins. This one, co-written by PAD with Kurt Busiek, is an alternately sentimental and silly Christmas issue spotlighting old-school Hulk rogue the Rhino. PAD usually stays on the right side of snobbery when dealing with dubious villains, but here he can't keep himself from looking down his nose on the Rhino. A misfire.

Incredible Hulk 379 (March 1991)

The "miracle cure" was no such thing, no matter how much the new Hulk deludes himself that it was. Doc Samson recognizes this right away, but before he can do more work on the Hulk, he is sidelined thanks to members of the Pantheon, a self-styled do-gooder organization that wants to recruit the Hulk, by force if necessary. When the Hulk resists, a fight breaks out, and the Hulk pretends to be knocked unconscious and taken by the Pantheon, in order to minimize the collateral damage. PAD and Keown are firing on all cylinders by this point. And whenever it all threatens to become a bit much, there are Betty, Rick, and Marlo to keep the book grounded.

Incredible Hulk 380 (April 1991)

As much as I love PAD, I'm not blind to his weak points, and one of his biggest weaknesses is the tendency to periodically write Very Special Issues about Big Real-Life Problems. Here, we get a spotlight on Doc Samson (something I'd normally love) as he deals with a convicted female vigilante-style killer named Crazy Eight, who is going to the electric chair as a result of Samson's testimony. Heavy-handed and on-the-nose.

Incredible Hulk 381 (May 1991)

In which the Hulk and his kidnappers arrive at The Mount, the Pantheon's vast headquarters, and we get to know the whole gang, including their enigmatic leader-slash-father, the immortal (?) Agamemnon, allegedly born of a relationship between god and mortal. Meanwhile, Marlo forces Betty to face some hard truths about herself and her life so far.

Incredible Hulk 382 (June 1991)

The Hulk, despite being put off by the back-biting and squabbling among the Pantheon members, finally accepts their offer to join them. But Delphi, the Pantheon precognitive, has a disturbing vision of the Hulk laughing heartily during a violent rampage, superbly rendered by Keown. And so officially begins the Hulk's "Pantheon Era", which will last through issue 426 and be consistently superlative through issue 400 (minus 389, a fill-in not written by PAD), then rarely less than good through 426. But once again, it's Betty and Marlo who steal the show as they become roommates and cement their sisterly bond with a drunken all-night laugh-a-thon as Betty recounts her crazy life to Marlo.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 06/22/15 11:22 PM
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
But once again, it's Betty and Marlo who steal the show as they become roommates and cement their sisterly bond with a drunken all-night laugh-a-thon as Betty recounts her crazy life to Marlo.


That must be the one where Betty admits, "I was once the Harpy." lol
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 06/22/15 11:24 PM
Yep. nod

Which leads to the joke about Betty needing "lots of backless dresses." LOL lol
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 06/23/15 01:30 AM
Classic! Often, I think that PAD at the height of his Hulk run is pretty much the best PAD has ever been.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 06/23/15 02:38 AM
I agree. How ironic that he did his best work writing a character he had grown up hating, huh?
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 06/23/15 03:06 AM
Very much so! It just goes to show that a writer can make lemonade out of lemons if they use enough imagination and have the talent to back it up. nod What he left behind is and probably always will be the best the Hulk feature has ever been. I think few would dispute that.

And my assessment of his work on the Hulk being his best stands even considering that I feel PAD is easily a top five Spider-Man writer.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 06/23/15 09:40 PM
I agree about PAD's Spider-Man work. We have former Spider-Man editor Christopher Priest to thank for taking a chance on PAD back when people from the Marvel Sales Department were rarely allowed to cross over into becoming Marvel creators.
Posted By: Cobalt Kid Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 06/24/15 08:37 PM
I'm also a fan of PAD's Spider-Man work in a big way (though I hate to always have to bring up that I hated his Friendly Neighborhood Spider-Man series, which wasn't really his fault).

I also strongly agree that PAD's Hulk was *the* seminal run in the franchise's entire long history, and also probably the seminal run in PAD's long history, which includes several other magnificent stories and runs on titles. Something else else click and magic happened. It's almost impossible to plan such magic, but it's incredible to witness.
Posted By: rickshaw1 Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 06/26/15 07:42 PM
PAD actually got me to READ Hulk. Never did before that. Tried some of it after PAD. Just wasn't as good.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 06/26/15 07:53 PM
Originally Posted by rickshaw1
Tried some of it after PAD. Just wasn't as good.


Agreed. Trying to continue Hulk after PAD left was, in my opinion akin to trying to continue Swamp Thing after Alan Moore left. Of course, I'm aware that the reality is that corporate IPs exist to get milked for all they're worth, and besides, the Hulk has a higher profile than Swamp Thing.

PAD did, of course, return to the Hulk for 11 issues which I thought were actually quite promising, but Marvel in the mid-2000s was micro-managing their most popular properties, so it's understandable why he left so soon. At least we got a nice long run of X-Factor out of it.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 06/26/15 08:05 PM
It was really PAD's use of the gray Hulk that grabbed me. I'd never seen the Hulk portrayed as anything other than the classic "Hulk SMASH!" version. Yes, he was inspired by the Hulk's earliest appearances--in fact, as early as those early Avengers issues, the classic behavior and speech patterns weren't yet established, and he was more like the gray Hulk without being gray. I was impressed and refreshed by the attitude and higher intelligence than what had grated on me as a kid. That hooked me, and PAD kept me when classic Hulk was re-introed and shared the spotlight with gray. And THEN there was integrated Hulk! He just never let things get stale until Heroes Reborn seemed to take the wind out of his sails.

It's a good thing I stuck with things back then. I came aboard Hulk strictly because John Byrne took over. I stuck around when he abruptly left and endured the rough issues in between to get to the greatness that awaited!
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 06/26/15 08:11 PM
Very well said, Lardy.

Having grown up in a place where Marvel Comics were not readily available, my first issue of Hulk was actually 400! I won't quite yet get into the details of why I think it was a bittersweet turning point for the book, but I sure did enjoy the remaining two years of the Pantheon Era. I don't think it was Heroes Reborn so much as the general incompetence at Marvel from 1995 to 1997 that took the wind out of PAD's sails. To be fair, the book was recovering at the time that he was fired. PAD has also said that if he hadn't been fired, he was already planning to leave after 500.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 06/26/15 08:25 PM
Well, considering his run ended well before that mark, it's safe to say there was a lot of story he never got to tell.

Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady

PAD did, of course, return to the Hulk for 11 issues which I thought were actually quite promising, but Marvel in the mid-2000s was micro-managing their most popular properties, so it's understandable why he left so soon. At least we got a nice long run of X-Factor out of it.


That sounds familiar. Where did this run take place? Some time after that Bruce Jones thing, I think? What are some of the broad strokes of what PAD did in the brief return?
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 06/26/15 09:04 PM
It was immediately after the Bruce Jones fustercluck. PAD only managed two story-arcs and one stand-alone issue. The controversial first arc, "Tempus Fugit", was a softboot of sorts which negated the Jones run. It took place on a mysterious island where nothing was what it seemed and things could change from moment to moment. It was also beautifully drawn by Lee Weeks & Tom Palmer.

The stand-alone, drawn by Jae Lee, was a lovely mood piece couched in the murder mystery genre.

The second arc, "Terra Incognita", was part of the House of M event and took place in a re-arranged universe where mutants ruled over humans, with the Hulk carving out his own niche in Australia. It ran concurrently with the Amazing Fantasy storyarc which introduced the female Scorpion, Carmilla Black, and her evil scientist mother, Monica Rapaccini, both of whom also appeared in "Terra Incognita".

In PAD's final issue, the epilogue to "Terra Incognita", the universe is back to what passes for normal, and it is hinted that Carmilla might be Banner's daughter.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 06/26/15 09:11 PM
Hm. Yeah, a little research shows that Greg Pak's Planet Hulk arc began almost immediately after PAD left. Never read PH, but it certainly seemed to bring about a new era of popularity for the Hulk which lasted a good while going into that Red Hulk stuff and such. I've personally never read any of it, though.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 06/26/15 10:21 PM
I didn't read any of that, either. Marvel during the mid-late 2000s was a cultural desert, and PAD's X-Factor, for all its ups and down, was an oasis.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 06/29/15 11:51 PM
Incredible Hulk 383-385

These three issues are far, far better than Marvel Universe Event tie-ins have any right to be (especially when the event is one that I despise as much as the Infinity Gauntlet.)

The core of the first two issues is a beautifully done Phantom of the Opera riff featuring the Abomination and Nadia, a Russian actress performing in the United States who turns out to have been Emil Blonsky's wife before he turned into the Abomination. PAD turns the Hulk's de-powered status (shrunken to fun-size by Thanos) to the story's advantage, eschewing a Hulk/Abomination battle (which he'd already given us during the Countdown arc) in favor of the Hulk...talking to the Abomination, pretending to be the voice of God (PAD acknowledges the debt to the movie "Real Genius", without actually naming the movie) and convincing the Abomination to set Nadia free. Keown matches PAD every step of the way, pushing his Berni Wrightson influence to the fore yet coming up with lovely, ornate atmospherics which are very much his own.

The third issue finds the Hulk and the Pantheon caught in the chaotic backwash of Thanos having deleted half the population of the planet Earth, and trying in vain to quell the resultant riots. It goes without saying that the status quo is restored at the end. Either way, we find PAD here at his darkest and most cynical, with the Hulk spelling it out at the end:

"If what I faced was some sort of mutant that siphoned off dark feelings and violence, then, yes, we won. On the other hand, if what I faced was drawn from the hearts and minds of humans, waiting to be unleashed again...then no. At best...we call this a draw."

Interestingly, PAD went on to deal with the same theme during his Supergirl run, in the issues tying into the Final Night event, featuring Gorilla Grodd as the villain influencing the panicked populace of Lessburg to embrace what he regards as their true, savage selves.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 08/24/15 09:19 PM
Incredible Hulk 386-388, 390-392

(389 was not written by PAD)

This block of issues finds PAD dealing with heavy issues which were very current in the early 1990s, from the familiar "Would you kill a child if you knew he was destined to become the next Hitler?" conundrum (386-387), to the stigma faced by those who are HIV positive, in this case the Hulk's old friend Jim Wilson (388), to the seemingly never-ending tensions between America and the Middle East (390-392, guest starring X-Factor). Sabra guest stars in the first of these stories, as it takes place in Israel, and I have to say, she's better-written by PAD than I remember her being, especially towards the end. The Jim Wilson story features an effective (and very deadly) new villain, Speedfreek, but ultimately it is one of many well-intentioned (and some not-so-well-intentioned) comic book stories from that time dealing with what are known today as LGBT issues, but which do not hold up very well in hindsight. PAD has been LGBT-friendly his entire adult life, so his sincerity is unquestionable, but the story bears all the earmarks of heavy compromising with Marvel's higher-ups. The Middle East story is by far the best of these, albeit more for the pleasure of seeing Keown draw the members of X-Factor than anything else. In the end, these stories are basically the early 1990s equivalents of the early 1970s Green Lantern/Green Arrow stories by Denny O'Neil and Neal Adams -- written with conviction and drawn impeccably, yet curiously unsatisfying. Luckily, PAD would spend the next several issues with the emphasis on entertaining rather than soap-boxing.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 08/25/15 08:12 PM
Incredible Hulk 393

We're now at the 30th Anniversary of the first Hulk comic book, and the celebration is a great one. Every anniversary issue should be this high in quality.

In the lead story, the Hulk and Rick Jones and the Pantheon kidnap Igor Drenkov, the Russian spy who, years ago, while working undercover in America as Banner's assistant, deliberately failed to stop the countdown to the orignal Gamma Bomb test (back in Incredible Hulk #1), and thus is arguably the person most responsible for the Hulk's creation. The Hulk and company put him through a "Mission: Impossible" style mind-trip to see whether he would do the same thing again. He does. Oh, and the People's Protectorate crash the party, just in time for Igor to go completely around the bend when he can't figure out whether the repercussions of his actions were for the better or for the worse. PAD is in peak form here, and so is Keown. Plenty of thrills, chills, and of course, laughs (and one major unresolved plot thread, regarding the true nature of one of the members of the Protectorate, which would dangle for almost 20 years before she was revealed, by different creators, to be a Dire Wraith.)

The pinups, by artists including the likes of Herb Trimpe, Gil Kane, Sal Buscema, Marie Severin, Walter Simonson, and Jim Starlin, are mostly good, and the Trimpe-drawn backup story, about a career criminal whose plans keep getting undone by different incarnations of the Hulk, is fun. But the best bonus feature is a history of the Hulk told from Doc Samson's point of view.

If there was one PAD Hulk issue I'd recommend to see whether or not this run is your cup of tea, it would be this one.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 08/26/15 07:28 PM
Incredible Hulk 394-396

The first of these issues introduces Trauma, a warrior from an alien race which was first glimpsed way back when McFarlane was still pencilling the Hulk, and also makes it clearer than ever that the Pantheon are not like other people. Guest pencils are provided by Andrew Wildman, a name familiar to fans of the original Transformers comic book -- they're a bit too 90s, but acceptable.

The next two issues find Keown returning for a really fun little story guest starring the Punisher. Yes, you read that right. An actual good story guest starring the Punisher, who was, at the time, as ubiquitous as Wolverine. In it, the Hulk returns to Las Vegas to avenge the murder of Michael Berengetti, his boss during the Mr. Fixit era of PAD's Hulk run. All in all, a nice little palate cleanser before the epic "Ghosts of the Past" 5-parter, which will dramatically upend the Hulk's status quo.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 10/27/15 09:22 PM
Heads-up: I'm going to post reviews of Hulk #397-401 sometime this week, and then take an indefinite break from the PAD Hulk re-read. Gods be willing, I will pick up where I leave off sometime in the new year.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 10/30/15 12:43 AM
Incredible Hulk 397-401

Living up their potential at last thanks to PAD's imaginative writing and Dale Keown's dynamic, dramatic art, the colorful group of Hulk rogues known as the U-Foes (think an evil Fantastic Four who INTENTIONALLY exposed themselves to cosmic rays) more than earn the double-page splash that they're given in 397. The U-Foes turn out to have been hired by the Leader to invade the Pantheon's headquarters and soften up the do-gooders in preparation for the grand entrance of the Leader himself and his elite guard, the Riot Squad. The first Hulk/Riot Squad battle, during the "Countdown" arc, had the misfortune of being drawn by Jeff Purves. The second Hulk/Riot Squad battle, seen in 398, is drawn by Keown, and it makes all the difference in the world. At the end, the fight is stopped by Pantheon leader Agamemnon, who informs the warring parties that he and the Leader have reached an "accord", much to the Hulk's chagrin. Meanwhile, a subplot which had been simmering during the last few issues reaches full boil in 397-398: a woman claiming to be Rick Jones's biological mother turns out to be a murderous psychopath who imprisons Rick in her basement and fatally stabs Marlo Chandler; Betty Banner knocks her out and frees Rick, but it's too late to save Marlo.

Or is it?

After confronting the smartest and most powerful members of the Marvel Universe, asking them to bring Marlo back to life, and coming up empty, Rick Jones is at his wits end when who should approach him with a proposal than the Leader! And he even has proof that he can bring the dead back to life -- the armored Riot Squad goon known as Redeemer is none other than General Thunderbolt Ross!

While all of the above is going on, the Hulk is off sulking until the Pantheon approaches Betty to talk some sense into her husband. Once this is done, Agamemnon informs the Hulk that he has deliberately set up the Leader for the Hulk to smash his mass-murdering nemesis once and for all.

Although the international terrorist organization Hydra is somewhat awkwardly shoehorned in as a plot device, this is still an immensely satisfying story-arc thanks to the characters' vivid emotional lives underpinning the story. The civilized facade that the Hulk has been sporting since 379 falls away completely at the climax, when the precognitive vision of the Hulk laughing during a rampage, as seen in 382, comes frighteningly true. Rick's desperation, the Leader's arrogance, and Agamemnon's cold calculation all come together brilliantly by the heartbreaking end.

But wait, there's more. In the epilogue, PAD sets up the Hulk's new status quo when Agamemnon tells the Hulk that he plans to take a hiatus from leading the Pantheon and go wander the world for a while, leaving the Hulk in his place to lead!

Artistically, 399-401 suffer from Keown's abrupt departure (poached by Image), with mostly adequate but sometimes jarringly ugly art by Jan Duursema in 399, the first half of 400, and 401, and Chris Bachalo in the second half of 400. But the sense that 400 is the grandiose climax of the plot threads that PAD has been weaving in and out of the book for the past 70 issues, is still immensely satisfying.

And I think this is as good a place as any to temporarily end the PAD Hulk re-read. Gods be willing, I'll be able to review the remaining 67 issues sometime next year. My thanks to Lardy and Thoth and anyone else who has been following my reviews.
Posted By: thoth lad Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 10/30/15 01:18 PM
Sorry to see these on hiatus. I hope you can come back to them.

I was shuffling through some comics the other day, and came across Planetary. They have a Fantastic Four knock off. They deliberately set themselves up to receive cosmic powers and are villainous. So possibly inspired by the U-Foes origin.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 10/30/15 01:26 PM
Thank you, Thoth.

You may be right about Planetary's evil FF being inspired by the U-Foes. The latter, sad to say, have never again been as awesome as they were in that Hulk arc. Last I saw of them, they were background characters in Bendis' Avengers stories. I'd like to see a Thunderbolts-esque scenario where they actually replace the unavailable FF.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 10/30/15 06:55 PM
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
And I think this is as good a place as any to temporarily end the PAD Hulk re-read. Gods be willing, I'll be able to review the remaining 67 issues sometime next year. My thanks to Lardy and Thoth and anyone else who has been following my reviews.


It's been a pleasure. I'm sorry that I couldn't read along with you, but my Hulk collection is difficult to access these days. I also wish my memory of the run was a little sharper, so I could comment more. I would love for Marvel to give the run the Omnibus treatment for many reasons.
Posted By: Fanfic Lady Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 11/03/15 11:42 PM
No worries, Lardy. There's a Hulk Epic Collection trade that came out last month, picking up where the last Hulk Visionaries: Peter David trade left off, so hopefully the cream of the run will be completely available in trades soon.

And I still haven't decided what my next re-read is going to be.
I've finally decided on my next re-read:

It's another PAD opus, albeit a much shorter one -- the first 26 issues of the IDW "Fallen Angel" series.

If I had the collections of the DC "Fallen Angel", I'd certainly include them, but they've been hard to come by. Besides, I came aboard the "Fallen Angel" train in "real time" shortly after the IDW launch.

Lardy, could you please update the thread's subtitle? Thank you in advance.

I know that series had a lot of fans here at Legion World, and I hope you will chime in with your memories and/or by reading along with me.
Slight change in plans:

Shortly after reading the first five IDW issues of Fallen Angel -- which hold up beautifully, BTW -- I found myself going in a different direction. What started out as research for a fanfic project has turned into a full-blown re-read of one of the most neglected eras of Marvel's Fantastic Four -- the period that starts with Jack Kirby's abrupt departure in 1970 and ends with John Byrne taking over the book as writer/artist in 1981.

This is a much-maligned era, and while its reputation is not entirely unjustified, it's not entirely deserved, either.

It does get off to an undeniably shaky start, with Kirby exiting shortly after kicking off a new storyline (issues 102-104) which pits the FF against the double threat of Magneto and Namor the Sub-Mariner. You have to feel sorry for poor John Romita Senior, drafted by editor/scripter Stan Lee at the last second for a job that played against most of his greatest skills. To add insult to injury, the story is an all-out dud, with both Magneto and Namor -- two of Marvel's greatest anti-heroes -- coming off badly. The two-parter which follows, also drawn by Romita and featuring forgettable one-shot villains, is equally blah.

Things pick up a bit when John Buscema comes aboard as the new full-time FF penciller. Even though Big John is my favorite comic book artist, I'd always been dismissive of his FF work, because while he was more dynamic than Romita, the two artists had the common flaw of being craftsmen rather than innovators, and the FF always works best with a rawer, more innovative approach to the visuals.

That said, Big John's earliest FF work is much better than I remember it being, and Joe Sinnott's inking, which I'd always felt was better suited for bold stylists like Kirby than delicate illustrators like Big John, is also much more suitable than I remembered.

Even so, the first Lee/Buscema arc (107-113, with 108 consisting mostly of pages Kirby had worked on before he quit) is very 1970s in a bad way -- overlong and by-the-numbers, with yet another variation on the Thing being "cured" (this time, he can switch back and forth from human to monster) which as always goes disastrously wrong (he becomes dangerously unstable); this segues into yet another fight against the Hulk, who appears to kill the Thing, but, naturally, the status quo is restored at the end.

The next arc (113-116) is much better, and the secret ingredient is the great Archie Goodwin, who takes over the writing from Stan Lee in mid-story, but does it with a seamlessness we'd expect from a talent such as Goodwin's. The Overmind is a credible threat, the Invisible Girl takes her first steps toward becoming more than just the team's token female, the surprise alliance with Doctor Doom is well-done, and even the deus ex machina ending is ultimately forgivable.

So there is gold amid the muck after all, and I'll be searching for more gold for the foreseeable future (unless, of course, the book gets so bad that I get sick of it and stop, but I'm trying to stay optimistic.)

P.S. Lardy, could you please alter the thread's sub-title to read "Post-Kirby/Pre-Byrne FF"? Thanks in advance.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
P.S. Lardy, could you please alter the thread's sub-title to read "Post-Kirby/Pre-Byrne FF"? Thanks in advance.


[grumble]Slave driver![/grumble]

wink

LOL

rotflmao

Thanks again, Lardy.
This is definitely an excellent and under-discussed era / topic of one of comicdom's franchise titles. Traditionally, I've held it in a very negative light, and when compared to Kirby and Byrne that is amplified. Yet, all that being said, there's still some good and at times even great over the course of this 100+ issue run.

I know both Romita and Buscema lamented being given duties on the title and have spoken at length about it over the years since. So I can forgive their hearts not being in it. Both are still icons though and I suspect both showcase their skills in places. I'm especially curious about Sinnott inking Buscema. I read these issues over 20 years ago when I was a tween so my impressions on the art are very vague. But a recent Thor reread about 8 or so years ago reminded me that Buscema's artwork was astoundingly good at times during that run--so when I remember it being okay it was very good and when I remember it being good it was great!

I can hardly remember the Archie Goodwin story but again my recent Iron Man reread proved that anytime Archie touched a Marvel comic it was almost always pure gold. I'm fascinated to see how that translates to thr FF.

Keep these coming Fanfie!
Thank you for chiming in Cobie. Looking forward to more of your thoughts about this era of the FF.

Archie Goodwin only stuck around long enough to plot and script a two-parter in 117-118, but it's splendid IMO. Crystal and Lockjaw are tricked into drinking Diablo's mind-control potion, and Crystal ends up posing as a Mayan goddess in a fictional Central American country which Diablo wants to conquer. The Latin stereotypes are forgivable in the context of the times (and, thankfully, Crystal does NOT don body makeup the way Claremont had the Nova Romans do a decade later, in New Mutants), and Big John really shines here, as though the superiority of Goodwin's writing inspired him to put in 100% effort. It helps, too, that 118 is inked not by Sinnott but by Jim Mooney, who was more sympathetic with Big John's style.

After a socially-conscious (*cough* ham-fisted *cough*) fill-in script by Roy Thomas guest-starring the Black Panther, 120-125 give us Stan Lee's final word on the FF, and the results are not good. An initially promising new cosmic villain, Gabriel the Air-Walker, turns out to be a disposable plot device so that Lee can essentially re-hash the Galactus Trilogy. And then, bizarrely, we get a trite two-parter about not judging a book by its cover, featuring an aquatic creature from the tail end of Kirby's run.

There's nowhere to go from there but up, yet Roy Thomas stumbles out of the gate with his opening three-parter in 126-128. I give him points for bringing back the obscure Silver Age Iron Man villainess Kala, Queen of the Netherworld, but neither she, nor the Mole Man, nor Tyrannus make much of an impression here.

Roy finds his second wind with 129, where he introduces Thundra; I've always found her an underrated character, though I'm sure a lot of that has to do with my introduction to her being in the middle of my beloved Harras/Epting Avengers run. But having finally read her first appearance, I have to say she arrived fairly close to fully formed -- it's a good potboiler with Thundra as the mysterious new member of the Frightful Four. For good measure, her predecessor, Medusa, also joins in the fray. Big John appears to have enjoyed drawing 129-130 more than the last few issues.

Running parallel to the F4 vs F4 plot is the Human Torch's voyage to the Inhumans' Great Refuge, where he hopes to rekindle his relationship with Crystal, only to find her growing closer all the time to ex-Avenger Quicksilver. The revolt of the Alpha Primitives led by the gigantic Omega is decent enough plot fodder. By the time the two storylines intersect and resolve in 132, Medusa has taken the Invisible Girl's place in the FF, and the Torch acquires his short-lived red costume (because Roy wanted him to look more like Roy's beloved Golden Age Human Torch.) While the story as a whole is satisfying, it's hard not to feel that Reed and Johnny are both absolute jerks, something I've felt very frequently about them throughout their existence.

Also worth noting: 130-131 have gorgeous Steranko covers and Ross Andru does a decent guest-penciling job in 131.
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
I can hardly remember the Archie Goodwin story but again my recent Iron Man reread proved that anytime Archie touched a Marvel comic it was almost always pure gold.


Did Archie do a lot of Iron Man? I know he had a long run on Marvel's original Star Wars series (running from issues 11-50 with some fill-ins), and it was really excellent, imo, as I can affirm from my recent SW Omnibus reading. Largely, though, it seems like he didn't have many extended runs as a writer.
By Archie's own admission, he tended to flit from one book to another (and, for a while, from one publisher to another.) His Iron Man run was, IIRC, the first 28 issues of the solo book which IM graduated to in 1968. IMO, Archie's Iron Man scripts are excellent, but they had the double misfortune of being mostly pencilled by George Tuska with totally inappropriate inks by Johnny Craig (who did do some great work on the EC horror books of the 1950s). The run actually started with Craig on pencils and Tuska on inks, but that looked so bad that Stan Lee switched them almost immediately.
Yeah, he never spent a lot of time anywhere, but Iron Man was probably the longest he was ever in any one spot at Marvel during the late Silver Age / early Bronze Age.

I personally loved his Iron Man run and by the end of it was a full-blown fan of Tuska and Craig. I thought their art paired with Archie's stories worked nicely. Of course it helps that Archie wrote a plethora of really terrific tales.

In the Iron Man thread I reviewed them all. Starting right here I start to review the Archie issues. (Note though that I reviewed each one after I read it, so there isn't really an aggregate opinion).

I'm not surprised to hear his FF story is terrific. The man was a master storyteller and knew how to craft plot & character perfectly--and usually without entire runs of issues to build off of.
Thanks for the Iron Man reviews link, Cobie. I'll dive right in! Yippee!

Goodwin was so talented that even his script for the first issue of the event bookend "Armageddon 2001" was outstanding. I really wish he'd scripted the second issue...but only with the original ending. It may be sentimental foolishness speaking, since A2001 was my introduction to the DCU, but I really wish they would print an A2001 Omnibus, with the original ending restored. I'd buy it even if I had to go hungry for a week, that's how much I love that event.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Thank you for chiming in Cobie. Looking forward to more of your thoughts about this era of the FF.

Archie Goodwin only stuck around long enough to plot and script a two-parter in 117-118, but it's splendid IMO. Crystal and Lockjaw are tricked into drinking Diablo's mind-control potion, and Crystal ends up posing as a Mayan goddess in a fictional Central American country which Diablo wants to conquer. The Latin stereotypes are forgivable in the context of the times (and, thankfully, Crystal does NOT don body makeup the way Claremont had the Nova Romans do a decade later, in New Mutants), and Big John really shines here, as though the superiority of Goodwin's writing inspired him to put in 100% effort. It helps, too, that 118 is inked not by Sinnott but by Jim Mooney, who was more sympathetic with Big John's style.

After a socially-conscious (*cough* ham-fisted *cough*) fill-in script by Roy Thomas guest-starring the Black Panther, 120-125 give us Stan Lee's final word on the FF, and the results are not good. An initially promising new cosmic villain, Gabriel the Air-Walker, turns out to be a disposable plot device so that Lee can essentially re-hash the Galactus Trilogy. And then, bizarrely, we get a trite two-parter about not judging a book by its cover, featuring an aquatic creature from the tail end of Kirby's run.

There's nowhere to go from there but up, yet Roy Thomas stumbles out of the gate with his opening three-parter in 126-128. I give him points for bringing back the obscure Silver Age Iron Man villainess Kala, Queen of the Netherworld, but neither she, nor the Mole Man, nor Tyrannus make much of an impression here.

Roy finds his second wind with 129, where he introduces Thundra; I've always found her an underrated character, though I'm sure a lot of that has to do with my introduction to her being in the middle of my beloved Harras/Epting Avengers run. But having finally read her first appearance, I have to say she arrived fairly close to fully formed -- it's a good potboiler with Thundra as the mysterious new member of the Frightful Four. For good measure, her predecessor, Medusa, also joins in the fray. Big John appears to have enjoyed drawing 129-130 more than the last few issues.

Running parallel to the F4 vs F4 plot is the Human Torch's voyage to the Inhumans' Great Refuge, where he hopes to rekindle his relationship with Crystal, only to find her growing closer all the time to ex-Avenger Quicksilver. The revolt of the Alpha Primitives led by the gigantic Omega is decent enough plot fodder. By the time the two storylines intersect and resolve in 132, Medusa has taken the Invisible Girl's place in the FF, and the Torch acquires his short-lived red costume (because Roy wanted him to look more like Roy's beloved Golden Age Human Torch.) While the story as a whole is satisfying, it's hard not to feel that Reed and Johnny are both absolute jerks, something I've felt very frequently about them throughout their existence.

Also worth noting: 130-131 have gorgeous Steranko covers and Ross Andru does a decent guest-penciling job in 131.


Further thoughts:

I always loathed Stan's final FF story and felt it was representative of how little he had to do with the series when it was good. The same could be said for his somewhat lackluster final Spider-Man story with the spider-slayers. That view might not totally be fair because by 1972 or so Stan was occupied with other things, but I still can't help but feel that way.

#126-128 is a classic Roy Thomas mediocre story: usually inspired by a desire to dredge up some part of continuity he thinks only he remembers, it carries with it a lot of novelty that one can't help feel some appeal for. But for the most part it trips all over itself as Roy gets caught up in doing things besides telling a story. Which isn't to say all of Roy's stories are like that. Often times he could be pretty great. But just as often he could be pretty mediocre.

I do agree about Thundra though. I always liked her and feel she is a nice, fully realized character that shines in her appearances from the start. I especially like her when she interacts with the FF (and the Thing in particular).

While I never truly liked the Crystal / Quicksilver relationship, I did like the drama it caused for Johnny & Crystal. More than that, I loved the inter-company drama it caused for Marvel during this era. Between Crystal & Quicksilver and Starlin's Thanos, the Avengers, FF, Defenders and a whole host of titles seemed to be interacting with one another pretty regularly and it was cool to see. (Especially when Steve Englehart was at the helm).

I agree Johnny comes off as a jerk but it doesn't seem too far-fetched for him to be such. Reed, however, acts totally out of character and Roy takes him down a dark path here that numerous other writers will pursue. I hate when Reed is written as a prick, and think he basically acts that way throughout all of Roy's run. It makes all the Reed scenes and Sue scenes totally annoying for me and takes the joy right out of those stories.

Honestly, if Marvel was truly starting to doubt the appeal of the married with children Reed & Sue in 1972 or whatever, they should have moved them towards retirement right there and then. Kirby was gone and already multitudes of Marvel fans were turning their back on the FF (my father and uncle included). If there was ever a time to say "fuck it, let's use this as an opportunity", they could have decided to make the team the Thing, the Torch, Crystal and Thundra, with the Thing being able to turn back and forth between human and monster, as Reed's final gift.

I don't think that's too unbelievable for the Marvel of 1967 BTW. For the Marvel of 1972 though, unfortunately it was. But I've really digressed.
Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
I always loathed Stan's final FF story and felt it was representative of how little he had to do with the series when it was good. The same could be said for his somewhat lackluster final Spider-Man story with the spider-slayers. That view might not totally be fair because by 1972 or so Stan was occupied with other things, but I still can't help but feel that way.


I can see where you're coming from, Cobie, but I've always chosen to look at the Stan/Jack relationship the way it has been described by Jack's friend and one-time assistant Mark Evanier: For the first few years it was a genuine collaboration, and then they had a falling-out over the Silver Surfer because they couldn't agree on how he should have been characterized as a solo character; that was why Jack stopped contributing new characters and the final two years or so of Jack's work for Marvel were comparatively lackluster. I've never believed the Stan-bashers who claim he contributed nothing, because, rather controversially, I am of the opinion that Jack's "one-man-band" work of the 1970s really needed both a firm outside editor and an articulate outside scripter. I do completely agree that Stan's early 1970s writing was generally weak -- although that racial tension storyline he did with John Romita Senior in Captain America was quite powerful IMO (he isn't credited on the final installment, though) -- and that burnout and a busy schedule were mainly to blame.

Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid
Honestly, if Marvel was truly starting to doubt the appeal of the married with children Reed & Sue in 1972 or whatever, they should have moved them towards retirement right there and then. Kirby was gone and already multitudes of Marvel fans were turning their back on the FF (my father and uncle included). If there was ever a time to say "fuck it, let's use this as an opportunity", they could have decided to make the team the Thing, the Torch, Crystal and Thundra, with the Thing being able to turn back and forth between human and monster, as Reed's final gift.

I don't think that's too unbelievable for the Marvel of 1967 BTW. For the Marvel of 1972 though, unfortunately it was.


Well said, Cobie. And it's a pity that by the time they finally tried doing the FF without Reed & Sue, in the late 1980s, it was so badly done.
Speaking of re-reads, there's a blog I frequent that is about to embark on a massive Marvel re-read, and I thought some of you might possibly be interested in joining in the fun:

http://www.comicbookherald.com/last...b-reading-the-entire-marvel-u-in-a-year/

My ID at this blog is RJA.
*Dusting and clearing cobwebs*

*Cough, cough*

Wow, this thread hasn't been active at all so far this year!

Long story short, the Pre-Byrne FF ran out of steam not long after I stopped posting about it, and I had to drop out of the re-read at that blog early on for personal reasons. They're up to the mid-1970s now, and I feel it's too late for me to catch up.

So I was wondering if anyone would be interested in doing a re-read of some old favourites? Lardy, I noticed in your Pile of Trades thread that you've got the Byrne FF Omnibus. It so happens I've been thinking of borrowing the Byrne FF Visionaries trades from the library and re-evaluating that run. Would you like to do a Byrne FF re-read together, Lardy? I don't mind waiting til it's the ideal time for you.
I'd be up for that, as long as we don't have to read really big chunks at a time and maybe not be committed to reading the whole run straight-thru in the project--don't wanna get 'Byrned Out', so to speak! wink

love me some Byrne FF!
Yay!

Thanks, Lardy!

And I totally agree on the conditions you set. "Byrned Out," LOL

Just let me know a few days in advance whenever you're ready to start, so I can order the library copies of the trades.
As you know, I'm a big Byrne fan, probably the most unabashed on these boards, so I guess I've been saving those Byrne Omnibuses for a special occasion! Shall we shoot for about April 20th to begin? hmmm

And Cobie or anyone else reading this is welcome to join in/comment/kibitz, as well! nod
Topic Title = Changed!

BTW, Ficques, I'm really happy/surprised that you chose to revisit this run, especially since I know that you hold Simonson's (admittedly awesome) FF run above all others! nod
April 20th sounds perfect!

Thanks, Lardy!

This is so exciting!

The reasons I've decided to revisit Byrne's FF run are partly because of something Cobie once said: That the reason he prefers Byrne FF to Simonson FF is that, in his opinion, Byrne captured the "feel" or the "essence" of the main characters better than Simonson did; and partly because most of what I managed to read of the post-Kirby, pre-Byrne FF was so underwhelming, that maybe I had sold Byrne short on what he was able to achieve.
I think, for me, it's that FF is (arguably) Byrne's seminal work, while it's hard for me to think of anything other than Thor as Simonson's. That may be unfair to both creators, but I think it's common thought on the matter.

I also think Byrne really worked the central dynamics of the team extremely well (even after the Thing left) while telling awesome stories, while Simonson told awesome stories but wasn't as on-point with the dynamic. That's not an insult. It's just a B+/A- compared to an A+ in that regard, something most non-Lee/Kirby creators have managed only a "C" in the best cases, imo, before or since.

Plus, there's sustainability. Byrne's much longer run vs. Simonson's substantial but still much shorter run.
Fair enough on all counts.

Simonson's FF is, in my opinion, what Morrison's JLA aspired, but ultimately failed, to be. Characterization did take a backseat in both cases, but I think Simonson did a far better job than Morrison of compensating with spectacle; and I think even if Morrison had had a better artist than Howard Porter (whose pre-JLA work on The Ray and Underworld Unleashed ran rings around his later work IMO), he still wouldn't have managed the oomph that comes so naturally to Simonson.
Man, I love Simonson. In fact, thinking about it my Pile has featured more among its pages of certain artists than any other: Grell, Byrne, Perez and Simonson. All undeniably classic artists and easily among my all-time favorites. In fact, I just obtained Walt's Star Slammers collection today to add to the Pile! nod
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady

Simonson's FF is, in my opinion, what Morrison's JLA aspired, but ultimately failed, to be. Characterization did take a backseat in both cases, but I think Simonson did a far better job than Morrison of compensating with spectacle; and I think even if Morrison had had a better artist than Howard Porter (whose pre-JLA work on The Ray and Underworld Unleashed ran rings around his later work IMO), he still wouldn't have managed the oomph that comes so naturally to Simonson.


And, as I said, Walt still did pretty damned well with the dynamics and characterization. My memories of his run are somewhat dim, but I remember it always felt like an FF comic, so that's a high compliment, considering the dreck that has characterized most runs before since and between Byrne and Simonson. Plus, Walt's issue 352 (I think that's the one, looking at the cover online) may be the best single issue of the FF ever!
FF 352 is absolutely amazing, I agree. Certainly the greatest Reed vs Doom battle of all time.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
FF 352 is absolutely amazing, I agree. Certainly the greatest Reed vs Doom battle of all time.


Most definitely! I was pissed when I heard that it later got ret-conned out... mad (Don't know who did the ret-conning or how it was done.)

Also, re: Byrne, I wish he'd not left mid-storyline and had played out whatever plans he'd had (though I do think the final storyline was pretty nifty and was completed well by Stern and Ordway). I seriously doubt he'd planned to leave before FF 300. But I can't blame him for doing so for the opportunity to redefine Superman. Plus, something like landing the cover of Time Magazine was pretty much unheard-of for any comic I can think of up 'til that time.

He always said FF's the one book he'd go back to. I get that Byrne's not a particularly pleasant man, but Quesada should have given him and the fans a chance to see if we could go home again, especially given all the other creative failures on the book. I'd rather have seen that than so many so-called dream reunions we've seen with other creators and characters instead.
Re: Byrne on Superman, as I recall, one of the most enjoyable issues of Byrne's FF run is the one with Gladiator, which is basically a dry run for his work on Superman. When Gladiator got an entry in OHOTMU, it was quite appropriately penciled by Curt Swan.

Re: Byrne returning to FF, if Peter David and Fabian Nicieza can make returns-of-sorts to their defining Marvel works, I don't see why Byrne couldn't. I'm sure that the Marvel brain trust knows damn well that whenever they get around to bringing back the FF, it has to be done with fanfare.
Byrne's all but retired now, so I doubt it. I think all he's doing now are some Star Trek stories for IDW in which he's only using TOS stills to create new stories. I'm sure he could be lured out of retirement to do at least a one-shot, but while Quesada's in charge, I think it'll never happen. Quesada cancelled Byrne's last excellent Big 2 series (X-Men: The Hidden Years) just because he doesn't care for him (all behind a convenient excuse about it being different from the rest of the mutant line).
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Re: Byrne on Superman, as I recall, one of the most enjoyable issues of Byrne's FF run is the one with Gladiator, which is basically a dry run for his work on Superman. When Gladiator got an entry in OHOTMU, it was quite appropriately penciled by Curt Swan.


Yeah, it was obviously a dream project for him, even without the fame and fortune he got from it. I feel he admired Swan as well. The two did Superman: The Earth Stealers together.

I know a lot of people here hate Byrne for the damage his Superman revisions did to the LSH, but he did do a lot of nice work rebuilding and reimagining the Superman mythos. The work itself was very good and lead to even better things to come working from the foundation he left.

I had little interest in Pre Crisis Superman, but picked up around two years worth of post Crisis. I enjoyed them, and I'd be surprised if I didn't enjoy them now.

Since then, I've gone on to enjoy a number of much earlier Superman stories. But I don't think in consecutive issues, the way I did with Byrne.

Alpha Flight was another favourite, greedily bought in back issue stalls whenever I saw them.
Alpha Flight was my first-ever exposure to Byrne, so it will always remain a personal fave. Some X-men cameos on issue 1 hooked a friend, he showed me and the rest was history! love
Originally Posted by thoth lad
I had little interest in Pre Crisis Superman, but picked up around two years worth of post Crisis.


I'm actually the opposite. I love pre-Crisis Supes and LOATHE the majority of changes Byrne made to the franchise, especially the reversal of the Kal/Clark dynamic, but that's a discussion for another thread. smile
Originally Posted by Kappa Kid
Originally Posted by thoth lad
I had little interest in Pre Crisis Superman, but picked up around two years worth of post Crisis.


I'm actually the opposite. I love pre-Crisis Supes and LOATHE the majority of changes Byrne made to the franchise, especially the reversal of the Kal/Clark dynamic, but that's a discussion for another thread. smile


To each their own. I'm fully aware that Byrne's Superman revisions have a large share of detractors. Especially here among Legion fans.
Hey, Fick--will we start the re-read with issue 232...the official start of his run? Or will we be backtracking to his previous work with the FF, mostly with other writers, like the Omnibus does?
I would favour starting with #232. There's some nice stuff before it (Marvel Two-In-One #50 is particularly delightful), but it's mostly of academic interest.

I should mention that there was a late-1970s FF run of about two dozen issues, written first by Len Wein and then by Marv Wolfman, and drawn first by George Perez and then John Byrne, that's not bad at all, in my opinion (IIRC, the numbers are roughly #185-#213.) Of course, the eye-candy factor is a considerable one; it was nice seeing both Perez and Byrne inked by Joe Sinnott before he went into his self-admitted "just knocking out those inks" phase that lasted most of the 1980s. To be fair, he did do some nice work after he went into semi-retirement.
Yeah, the Omnibus includes 2-in-1 50, Team-Up 61-62 and FF 209-218 & 220-21. It's perfectly fair to leave those out of the project proper since they are not completely part of his official run and overall vision. I'll probably read those prior to the start date, though, and maybe offer a review as a sort of prelude.
That sounds great. A re-reads project of this magnitude deserves a prelude. nod
Just ten more days til the Byrne FF re-read begins. Yay!

Lardy, I was wondering, how do you want to pace this re-read? Like maybe an average of two or three issues a week? That seems to me the perfect balance. What do you think?
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Just ten more days til the Byrne FF re-read begins. Yay!

Lardy, I was wondering, how do you want to pace this re-read? Like maybe an average of two or three issues a week? That seems to me the perfect balance. What do you think?


That sounds reasonable. Maybe start with two a week and see how it goes?
Two a week it is.

This is so exciting.
John Byrne's FF Run: The Prequel

I own both of the Byrne FF Omnibuses. The first includes Marvel Team-Up 61-62, Marvel Two-In-One 50 and Fantastic Four 209-218 and 220-221. These books comprise Byrne's FF work before his run as writer/artist begins in FF 232. (Much of this material is reprinted in the Fantastic Four Visionaries: John Byrne Volume 0 TPB, but not 209-214.) Since I hadn't broached reading either Omnibus prior to this re-read project, I really didn't want to skip the first 250-odd pages, so I went ahead and read them over the last few days.

This was a great warm-up for me because it got me geared up just as Byrne probably did by using these stories to rev up for his on legendary run. (I mean, I doubt he knew he'd get the opportunity to write and draw the book on an ongoing basis a year after 221, but I'm sure this experience didn't hurt.) Most of the material is Byrne drawing other people's scripts: Claremont's on MTU and Wolfman and Mantlo on the bulk of the FF issues. But Byrne did write the 2-in-One issue and FF 220-221.

The Team-Up 2-parter is entertaining but shallow as is typical for the generally standalone book. But Byrne gets to draw both the Torch and the Super-Skrull, the latter being the antagonist for the whole story. I read this, at least the second part featuring Ms. Marvel, some time when I was a kid. I remember vividly the Skrulls stretchy arms, one Thing-rocky and the other Torch-burny, seeking our webhead in the bowels of a cruise chip and finding that particularly creepy. So there was some unexpected nostalgia in re-discovering that story. Not a huge classic but always nice to reminisce.

The 2-in-1 story was kind of nifty as modern Ben Grimm goes back in Doom's time machine in an effort to cure himself of his affliction. I've always loved how Byrne draws Ben Grimm, so this was a treat. The ending fell a little flat, though, so not a big feather in Byrne's early writing cap.

The best part, imo, of these "prequel" issues was Byrne's participation in a massive storyline of Marv Wolfman's on the main book. Byrne actually joined Wolfman in the middle of an 11-part epic involving the Sphinz, Galactus, the Nova Corps, a particularly treacherous Skrull and even H.E.R.B.I.E. the robot in his in-continuity translation from the ill-remembered cartoon. The Omnibus does a good job of summarizing the storyline thus far in a text piece, and then Byrne jumps in and immediately gets to get in on some fun cosmic action that already shows he's up to the task. I won't summarize it, but it's not often you see the Big G in hand-to-hand combat! Plus, Byrne's intro and design of Terrax the Tamer gives him an immediate chance to add to the FF's universe. Excellent stuff, not to mention cool floating pyramids!

215-218 allow Byrne to tell shorter tales with Wolfman and Mantlo. First, there's an entertaining 2-parter that involves Blastaar and new (presumably one-shot) character the Futurist. Again, another opportunity for Byrne to draw a classic FF villain, though the Futurist isn't all that memorable. The latter, at least, has a little Star Trek-type concept in him that suits the FF. 217 wraps up the H.E.R.B.I.E. subplot that had been building since Byrne came aboard and ends both somewhat poignantly and as somewhat of an eff-you to the little robot and the forgettable cartoon that spawned him. 218 gives us a crossover with Spider-Man and an opportunity for Byrne to draw classic FF foes the Frightful Four.

Finally, we have 220-221 which afford Byrne his first credit as writer and artist on the FF book. This is a very good outing that showcases each of the Four very well and gives them both a scientific mystery and some new aliens behind it. This foreshadows his upcoming run very well, as it feels a story very FF-appropriate and especially as it gives Sue a big role in resolving the conflict. Byrne is one of only a few writers, imo, who truly gets the FF character and story dynamic and can also support it with artwork that captures their essence so well. Here, we already see that he can deliver all of this before his real run has even truly begun.

Now that I've had the appetizer, only two more days 'til the first 2 bites of the large, delectable main course!!! love nod
Thanks for the prelude review, Lardy.

I've always been fond of Marv Wolfman's big outer space FF epic -- Byrne & Sinnott make it look absolutely gorgeous (and the Keith Pollard/Joe Sinnott art in the opening chapters is equally excellent IMO.) The whole arc is collected in a separate trade, titled "Fantastic Four: In Search of Galactus." I haven't read 214-221, but I know they're collected in FF Visionaries: JB volume Zero, so I'll check them out sometime.

I also think it's worth mentioning that in between 221 and 232, there was a brief run by the Moon Knight team of Doug Moench and Bill Sienkiwicz. I've never read it, but I've heard nothing positive about it. They certainly seem a strange choice for a FF creative team, although Moench did write some solid issues of Captain Mar-Vell's solo book. Point being that, despite some good work in the late 1970s, FF was by all accounts not in a good place at the time just before Byrne took over as writer/artist.

Fantastic Four #232

I hadn't read this issue for more than 20 years, as my memories of it were that it was an underwhelming start to Byrne's run. With 20/20 hindsight, however, Byrne's plan becomes clear: To bring the characters, and the book along with it, down to Earth, and re-establish why we're supposed to care for them. That may sound harsh, but while I've always loved Ben, I've had problems with various writers' interpretations of Sue, Reed, and Johnny. And after re-reading this issue, I have to say, he succeeds in making them all relatable and sympathetic. Sue is no cringing, cringe-worthy damsel here, she's quick-thinking, strong, and self-reliant. Johnny is surprisingly gentlemanly and vulnerable as he tries to patch things up with his on-again/off-again girlfriend, Frankie Ray. And Reed is resourceful and super-smart as always, but without coming off like an unfeeling, paternalistic jerk as he often did in the past. Ben is...Ben, but one particularly nice touch of Byrne's is that he introduces this tough-but-tender man-monster by showing him leaving a movie theatre with his girlfriend, Alicia Masters, and wiping away tears with a handkerchief. The film which moved Ben so much? "The Elephant Man."

The villain of the piece is Diablo the alchemist, a character whom Lee & Kirby would readily admit was not their best creation. Here, Byrne does nothing particularly exciting or innovative with him, but his plan is reasonably cunning and clever -- to pit the FF against avatars of the Four Elements, each one representing a particular threat to the powers of each FF member.

What almost ruins the story, and shows up Byrne as a relatively unseasoned writer, is the way he drags in another Marvel hero at the very last second, in a perfunctory fashion, to help save the day. But that's only on the last page, so despite that letdown, the story is entertaining overall.

One more quibble: Sue's hairdresser is a mincing, cowardly gay stereotype who runs away from danger, leaving Sue to fend for herself completely. His ditzy female assistant is equally cowardly and caricatured.

Artistically, Byrne is in fine form with the layouts and pencils, but it's clear that he was inking himself for the first time in years. Compared the pristine finishes of the best Byrne inkers of the past, such as Terry Austin and Pablo Marcos, it's rather jarring in its rough edges. OTOH, it fits the gritty (but not grim) feel that Byrne appears to have been going for, putting in the effort to make New York City as much a character in the book as the FF themselves.

A promising start, then, and its flaws are mostly forgivable. And the best is yet to come.
I really enjoyed Byrne's official first issue, 232, a lot. Entitled, "Back to Basics," the story achieves its mission statement by pretty much showing you what the book's concept and characters are and neatly wrapping up as a done-in-one. (I swear to God that this would be at least a five-issue arc in this day and age!)

Byrne introduces us to each of the four title characters separately. In each scenario, we get a brief glimpse into what they are like when not saving the world before promptly tossing each into the deep end against some individually dire threats. Even so, it's not a textbook, say, Len Wein scenario, where each of them end up at the same point of danger. The Thing needs the most immediate outside help, and the other three mostly get some traction by themselves, especially Sue and Reed.

Cleverly, Byrne has the Four find each other, so that he can then show that this is indeed a team that works together well. With Reed's guidance, they defeat three of the creatures. But again, belying formula, Byrne shows Johnny figuring out how to defeat the fire elemental on his own. If this was someone's first FF story, I'd imagine this was a perfect story to acclimate themselves to the characters and concepts.

And beyond being a technically good story, it was FUN! I smiled a lot while reading it because practically no one wants to tell a fun, self-contained, good old-fashioned superhero story anymore. While I wouldn't want all of Byrne's FF stories to be one-offs (and clearly they're not!), it's clear the man already knew how to so, even though his scripting cerdits had been very few at this point.

And the art! Byrne is comfort food to me, and I mean that in the best way possible. Even at this point, the man could draw and tell a story clearly and with some panache! If I open a Byrne book, I already know that I'm going to like the images he presents and will never have to worry about his visual storytelling falling short, especially in this, his prime. His Reed and Ben are already iconic this issue, and his Sue will be coming along soon. His Johnny is always solid, but we'll see if it ever gets as distinctive as the other three.

The caveats Fickles mentions are valid. Diablo is not all that memorable a villain. But I do love that quick scene that shows he's running things from an apartment building and rails at his snooping neighbor. Nice bit of humor! The hairdresser and Doc Strange cameos didn't bother me as much. Lots of civilians, gay or not, would shy away from such a threat, and I suppose Byrne needed a one-page resolution that Strange could be used to tie up. On the plus side, I enjoyed the civilian who risked her life to save Ben.

Overall, a wonderful start to Byrne's magnificent run on "The World's Greatest Comics Magazine". And the best is, indeed, yet to come!
Originally Posted by Paladin
(I swear to God that this would be at least a five-issue arc in this day and age!)


LOL So true. And if it had been written by Hickman, it would have taken ten issues!

Originally Posted by Paladin
If this was someone's first FF story, I'd imagine this was a perfect story to acclimate themselves to the characters and concepts.


Agreed. I imagine that both Byrne and Marvel's then-EiC Jim Shooter made a deliberate effort to produce an issue that would be a good jumping-on point. For all that could be said about Shooter (and I've said a lot of it myself in the past,) he was always conscious of the need to hook first-time or lapsed readers.

Originally Posted by Paladin
And beyond being a technically good story, it was FUN! I smiled a lot while reading it because practically no one wants to tell a fun, self-contained, good old-fashioned superhero story anymore.


This really is refreshing in the wait-for-the-trade times we live in. And besides, no one ever said that a trade has to have one single five-or-six-issue story.

Originally Posted by Paladin
Lots of civilians, gay or not, would shy away from such a threat.


True, but I think that in the context of the early 1980s, which was not only a less enlightened time, but also one in which reactionary views were on the rise, it's more than a little bothersome.

Originally Posted by Paladin
On the plus side, I enjoyed the civilian who risked her life to save Ben.


Yes. Me, too. I'm glad you mentioned that. Points to Byrne for making Ben's rescuer a woman.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady

Originally Posted by Paladin
Lots of civilians, gay or not, would shy away from such a threat.


True, but I think that in the context of the early 1980s, which was not only a less enlightened time, but also one in which reactionary views were on the rise, it's more than a little bothersome.


Then again, there's some bias on our part in assuming the hairdresser must be gay. That's a bit of stereotyping by the reader. Not all male hairdressers are gay, I'd assume.

In any case I can give Byrne a pass. He intended for Northstar to be gay all along but couldn't do more than drop small hints because of editorial interference.Eventually, Northstar would become the most prominent gay superhero in comics.

Originally Posted by Paladin
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady

Originally Posted by Paladin
Lots of civilians, gay or not, would shy away from such a threat.


True, but I think that in the context of the early 1980s, which was not only a less enlightened time, but also one in which reactionary views were on the rise, it's more than a little bothersome.


Then again, there's some bias on our part in assuming the hairdresser must be gay. That's a bit of stereotyping by the reader. Not all male hairdressers are gay, I'd assume.

In any case I can give Byrne a pass. He intended for Northstar to be gay all along but couldn't do more than drop small hints because of editorial interference.Eventually, Northstar would become the most prominent gay superhero in comics.



Both are valid points well taken.

Which reminds me, Northstar has certainly come a long way since that heavy-handed coming-out issue of Alpha Flight a quarter-century ago. Marvel was such a hodge-podge back in the early 90s, lots of good stuff but also lots of dropped balls.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Which reminds me, Northstar has certainly come a long way since that heavy-handed coming-out issue of Alpha Flight a quarter-century ago. Marvel was such a hodge-podge back in the early 90s, lots of good stuff but also lots of dropped balls.


Definitely!

Also, back to the story at hand, I forgot to mention how Byrne immediately starts expanding what Sue can do with her powers. It shows that he is determined to give Sue her due from the get-go, and I like that he doesn't take his time doing so. Similarly, in his first FF scripts in 220-221, it is Sue who really saves the day. This is not at all the simpering Sue I read about in those Lee/Kirby stories circa issue 50!
Yeah, Byrne really made Sue come alive in his early issues.

IIRC, though, Byrne's interpretation of Sue does get weirder and rather unsettling during the Malice arc, but I'm getting way ahead of myself, because that's some forty issues from now.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Yeah, Byrne really made Sue come alive in his early issues.

IIRC, though, Byrne's interpretation of Sue does get weirder and rather unsettling during the Malice arc, but I'm getting way ahead of myself, because that's some forty issues from now.


Yeah, not to get too ahead of ourselves, but I think the major point of that arc was to show how powerful she really is and how much she deserves her place on the team for that reason in addition to others already obvious. She's clearly not the weak link after you read it, if there was any doubt before. It's unsettling, but she's being controlled. So it's not just some random "Sue's gone bad" story.
Fantastic Four #233

I've turned this strange little story over and over in my head for hours, and still can't think of much to say about it.

The story is a spotlight on Johnny, in which a condemned young man's final request is that Johnny (whom he hardly knew, except as a target for his bullying in high school) prove he was innocent of the crime which sent him to the electric chair. Rather disappointingly, considering the down-to-earth feel of the opening portion of this story, the killing turns out to have been a hit engineered by cybernetic crimelord Hammerhead (heretofore a Spider-Man villain.) That said, the story is almost saved by the twist ending in which, at the innocent delinquent's funeral, Johnny confronts the delinquents mother, and learns from her that she knew about his criminal career all along, and that Johnny is a true hero, the kind of boy a mother could be proud of. Points to Byrne for continuing to make Johnny easier to like with every issue.
"Mission for a Dead Man" was an unusual choice to be the second story in Byrne's run. Unusual, I think, because he chooses almost immediately to tell a solo tale of one of the Four, in this case Johnny. In my mind this would have fit in better later on in his run as a change in pace after he got his feet wet a little more with more stories featuring the whole crew.

One possibility for this choice was that maybe Byrne didn't consider this the start of his tenure since he'd already gotten his feet wet with the 12 issues he'd already done, albeit mostly with other writers. Another theory I tend to gravitate toward is that this might have been an inventory story he'd already done previously that might have been placed here to give him more lead time. The mostly standalone nature of the story leads me to believe that. Or maybe, Byrne had a story he wanted to tell and said, "hell with it!"

In any case it was not a bad story at all. The Torch gets the spotlight and shows some presumably rarely-seen sides of his character in that he gets to play detective and show some small amount of emotional vulnerability. I think it would have worked better if the solution to the mystery was a bit more mundane then bringing in Hammerhead of all things, but there were some good bits.

The story trope of exonerating a man on death row is turned on its head a bit with said man having already been put to death before the hero becomes involved and with him having also been guilty of crimes just as bad or worse. I like the connection to Johnny's childhood and how someone so heroic was once bullied by the same man whose last request he tries to fulfill.

Byrne's art is satisfying throughout. I especially like the early scene with Ben hellbent after Johnny pulls another thoughtless prank on him while Reed and Sue try to intervene. (The prank itself, as described, is amusingly meta and unintentionally foreshadows the job that will eventually lure Byrne away after a long run.) The fact that the priest delivering the final request is witness to this spectacle reminds me of how real-life family arguments tend to spill out even in the presence of outsiders. This one is particularly edgy and shows how sensitive Ben can be to his condition, even to the point of potentially killing Johnny in his rage if not stopped.

Another couple of sequences that were strikingly rendered by Byrne were the two black & white flashbacks to the murder Johnny is investigating. They were more than just B/W; they were starkly inked in a manner I found beautiful and haunting at the same time. Even after having established himself as a superstar on X-Men, he still shows experimentation and growth in his storytelling. In my opinion he shines even brighter illustrating his own stories in the coming years.

So, yeah, an odd choice for what I think of as his sophomore story and not a thorough home run, but this is a modern master who can still wow you with his craft in unexpected moments. And the best is definitely still to come because he's just getting warmed up!
Originally Posted by Paladin
Another theory I tend to gravitate toward is that this might have been an inventory story he'd already done previously that might have been placed here to give him more lead time. The mostly standalone nature of the story leads me to believe that.


I think you could be onto something here, Lardy. It may have been done in between that earlier FF 2-parter that Byrne wrote and drew and Byrne becoming the permanent FF writer/artist with 232, as a sort of "test" to see what he had in him as a writer.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
That said, the story is almost saved by the twist ending in which, at the innocent delinquent's funeral, Johnny confronts the delinquents mother, and learns from her that she knew about his criminal career all along, and that Johnny is a true hero, the kind of boy a mother could be proud of.


That was a nice touch. It gave the story some added pathos that I liked. It also gave Johnny a reward for doing the right thing, even if it was not for the purpose he set out to accomplish.

Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Originally Posted by Paladin
Another theory I tend to gravitate toward is that this might have been an inventory story he'd already done previously that might have been placed here to give him more lead time. The mostly standalone nature of the story leads me to believe that.


I think you could be onto something here, Lardy. It may have been done in between that earlier FF 2-parter that Byrne wrote and drew and Byrne becoming the permanent FF writer/artist with 232, as a sort of "test" to see what he had in him as a writer.


Possibly. I doubt there would ever be any way to confirm it as writers and editors tend to forget the thinking for some of the major decisions over time, let alone minor ones like this.
Originally Posted by Paladin
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
That said, the story is almost saved by the twist ending in which, at the innocent delinquent's funeral, Johnny confronts the delinquents mother, and learns from her that she knew about his criminal career all along, and that Johnny is a true hero, the kind of boy a mother could be proud of.


That was a nice touch. It gave the story some added pathos that I liked. It also gave Johnny a reward for doing the right thing, even if it was not for the purpose he set out to accomplish.


Yes, I think even at this early stage, and even with all the flaws in the story, Byrne is showing flashes of his full potential as a writer.

And in re-reading my post, I realize now I should have said "the framed delinquent" instead of "the innocent delinquent." He was certainly no innocent.
Fick, are we doing another story today? I don't want to step on your toes in case you want to keep going first.... hmmm
Thanks for being so courteous, Lardy, but I'm okay with either one of us going first. This being a busy week, I may not even manage to have my reviews ready until Friday, so go right ahead.
FF #234, entitled "The Man with the Power!", is an interesting third effort in Byrne's run, though one that's difficult to thoroughly recommend.

The titular person is Skip, a very ordinary family man who just happens to have rather extraordinary abilities, ones that he is actually unaware he possesses. Skip can make things happen just by wanting them to happen. We witness several small instances where a household chore is done in a blink and a traffic jam avoided, among other small accomplishments. Byrne gives us a flashback that shows how Skip got his power. When Skips boss sends him to New York, Skip finds himself involved in their latest adventure.

What's especially odd about this story is how it's both about Skip and NOT about Skip. Skip has only mild interaction with the FF, and the huge cosmic threat that surfaces is not caused or directly impacted by him. In effect Skip is there to be a huge deus ex machina to clean up behind the threat so that New York and many of the major cities of Earth aren't left in shambles at the end. In fact, the FF never become aware of Skip's power, and the story leads into next issue's clash with the being behind all of the devastation with Skip's role (and his power) ended at the conclusion.

So the story comes off rather odd, and I have mixed feelings about it. The idea for Skip itself is actually very much in fitting with the FF's overall concept, but the execution feels disjointed and kind of pointless in the end.

The story reminded me a bit of an episode of the cartoon series Spider-Man and his Amazing Friends called "The Fantastic Mr. Frump" about a homeless man who receives a similar ability to alter reality but is fully aware of it. In that story, the other threat is Doctor Doom, but both play into our protagonists' worries.

What is not disputable for me here was Byrne's artwork. I love those opening pages where Byrne focuses on Skip's life. It shows Byrne has as much skill illustrating mundane sequences as he does, well, fantastic ones. I love, for example, the designs on Skip's bedroom carpet, bedspread, and even his pajamas. A lot of other artists would have skimped on the details of such a setting, but I think those are some of the best pages in the issue. And for my money, Byrne's rubble is at least as good as Perez's! nod If there's anything to criticize, I'd say his shots of the larger ruins of the cityscape aren't all that impressive, but he makes up for it with a shot of the Thing holding a bridge together and especially on the last page reveal of the being threatening the Earth.

I'm not going to call the story a bust. It certainly is entertaining. But it is kind of an odd duck and a tough nut to crack when you wonder what Byrne's larger intent was with Skip, if not just the deus ex machina. It certainly does have its moments.
Fantastic Four #234

Good call on the Spider-Man & His Amazing Friends episode, Lardy. I remember that one more than some of the others, because it was written by my heroine Christy Marx.

I think it's also worth pondering that at the time this story was published in the early 1980s, it had become very trendy for comic book creators in both the mainstream and the indie sectors to do homages to Will Eisner's "The Spirit."

"The Man With the Power" is Byrne's entry in the Eisner homage sweepstakes, but unlike Eisner, who combined the mundane and the fantastical with a sharply ironic viewpoint, Byrne is a little too reverent to the conventions of super-hero storytelling for this little experiment to be a success, in my opinion.

Here I also must admit that I have never been a fan of the whole "omnipotent wimp" trope which was popular at Marvel at the time. Jim Shooter seemed to be particularly enamored of this trope, as witness those excruciating stories with the Molecule Man in Avengers, Secret Wars, and Secret Wars II. This makes me wonder if maybe Byrne did this story on a dare from Shooter (at this point, they were thick as thieves, though their relationship would deteriorate as the decade wore on,) and maybe Byrne's heart wasn't completely in it.

Whatever the truth behind this story is, "The Man With the Power" falls flat for me. The nicest thing I can say is that it sets the stage for the confrontation in the next issue with Ego the Living Planet, the first balls-to-the-wall cosmic slugfest of Byrne's FF run.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Good call on the Spider-Man & His Amazing Friends episode, Lardy. I remember that one more than some of the others, because it was written by my heroine Christy Marx.


I remember liking it originally but eventually getting tired of it because THEY RE-RAN THAT EPISODE ABOUT A BILLION TIMES!!!! scream

Seriously, at some point, they kept airing S&HAF for a year or two it seems without producing ANY new episodes!!! mad

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I think it's also worth pondering that at the time this story was published in the early 1980s, it had become very trendy for comic book creators in both the mainstream and the indie sectors to do homages to Will Eisner's "The Spirit."

"The Man With the Power" is Byrne's entry in the Eisner homage sweepstakes, but unlike Eisner, who combined the mundane and the fantastical with a sharply ironic viewpoint, Byrne is a little too reverent to the conventions of super-hero storytelling for this little experiment to be a success, in my opinion.


I must confess that I saw no obvious Spirit connection in the story. The main trope of that strip that I know from my limited experience with it is the whole titles worked into the backgrounds thing. Could you go into more detail with this comparison for my curiosity? confused

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Here I also must admit that I have never been a fan of the whole "omnipotent wimp" trope which was popular at Marvel at the time. Jim Shooter seemed to be particularly enamored of this trope, as witness those excruciating stories with the Molecule Man in Avengers, Secret Wars, and Secret Wars II. This makes me wonder if maybe Byrne did this story on a dare from Shooter (at this point, they were thick as thieves, though their relationship would deteriorate as the decade wore on,) and maybe Byrne's heart wasn't completely in it.

Whatever the truth behind this story is, "The Man With the Power" falls flat for me. The nicest thing I can say is that it sets the stage for the confrontation in the next issue with Ego the Living Planet, the first balls-to-the-wall cosmic slugfest of Byrne's FF run.


I doubt Byrne produced this story under Shooter's direction or suggestion. Whatever their relationship at the time, I'd be surprised if Shooter's hand was that firm on reigning Byrne at the time. I suppose it's possible, though, as Byrne was still a neophyte writer.

I still think that Byrne had a purpose with the story that just doesn't come across as well thematically as he intended. I've seen many writers with a lot more experience produce stories a lot less interesting, but I feel I can chalk this one up to some growing pains for him as a writer. it's just missing one or two plot connections to make it resonate better. Maybe Skip finally realizes he had this great power and lost it just when he really needs it to save a loved one? Maybe the FF return from their battle with ego, and Reed is mystified as to how everything got fixed? It just needs something to make it feel like Skip was more than a deus ex machina to make it more satisfying.
Re: SM&HAF, you're absolutely right, Lardy, network cartoons on Saturday mornings in the 80s tended to be too heavy on the reruns. Syndicated cartoons in the 80s tended to have the opposite problem -- with their 65-episode quota (so that there could be new episodes on weekday afternoons 5 days a week for 13 weeks), there were too many episodes that were pure filler and should have been rejected at the first-draft script stage. But that's a whole other discussion.

Re: Spirit comparisons, I would imagine that Eisner would have had Skip sacrifice his life to save the universe, but everyone else would assume he died of natural causes. I know it's a bummer of a scenario, but it's closer to a real dramatic arc, and Eisner's stories often had downbeat endings like that (in one of his most famous ones, a regular guy discovers he can fly, only to be shot down.)

I like this scenario you came up with:

Originally Posted by Paladin
Maybe Skip finally realizes he had this great power and lost it just when he really needs it to save a loved one?


That one, too, would have given the story a clear arc.
Fantastic Four #235 ("Four Against Ego!") is, as Fick describes it, "the first balls-to-the-wall cosmic slugfest of Byrne's FF run". Indeed it is, as the FF face none other than Ego, the Living Planet in just Byrne's fourth issue in his long run.

The issue could technically be viewed as the conclusion of a 2-parter as the FF dealt with his threat to Earth last issue and ended with them discovering Ego as the source of all of the destruction. I don't feel it's a true 2-parter, though, especially as the first issue was mostly about Skip, who has no presence this issue (or presumably, ever again). It's another thing that makes the previous issue a bit of an odd duck.

But taken on its own, this is definitely Byrne getting more than just his feet wet with the cosmic side of the FF, as he jumps right into the deep end. This one evokes the best that Lee/Kirby ever offered as he takes a creation of theirs that originally appeared during their Thor run and has him/it face the Fantastic Four, which feels like a very natural switch to make and an inspired choice for Byrne.

The story is brilliant in that Byrne makes it both big and small in its focus. While the threat they are facing is huge, Byrne lets all four heroes shine and play a role. This is especially so of one Ben Grimm, who is alone after his fellows have to drop out one-by-one. Only he can endure the fiery depths of Ego to deliver what they've bet on being the solution to defeating Ego and saving Earth by doing so.

Byrne's art is up to the challenge as he sufficiently sells the alien terrain of Ego in several definitive shots. Much of the backgrounds are of Ego's interior which suitably evokes the interior of the human body in such films as "Fantastic Voyage". In some moments these backgrounds seem a little too generic, but he more than makes up for his stunning depictions of the title characters. I found myself especially enamored of his Ben Grimm in this story. The heavy inks between the cracks of Ben's rocky hide are just so deep and defining that I'm reminded of why I've always found Byrne's rendering of the Thing so iconic. In my mind it exceeds Kirby and is way above any other third person's depiction.

I must digress a moment to extol the virtues of the first-rate printing of these Fantastic Four Omnibuses that reprint Byrne's great run. They really do his work absolute justice and make it look as great as it deserves to look. In stories like this Ego tale, this fact is really perfectly underlined. I honestly can't recommend Marvel Omnibuses highly enough, especially to see runs you love the most displayed with optimum production vales. They are truly a steal for cover price, and many can easily be found for significantly less.

We also get an acceleration of the Frankie Ray subplot as something is teased, however vaguely, to suggest there is more to this character than meets the eye. Longtime FF fans know how this plays out, but it's a pleasure no less to anticipate it again.

An excellent fourth effort, and by then, any potential naysayers of his ability to write and draw the FF and be considered a worthy successor to Lee and Kirby just had to have been given reason to at least pause with this story.
Sorry I've been so slow to post a reply to your review, Lardy. I had a splitting headache yesterday that's only completely gone away recently today. Will do my best to post my review of 235 either tonight or tomorrow.
Fantastic Four #235

This is the first issue of this re-read which I found wholly satisfying, Byrne finally proving he's got what it takes to simultaneously update and upgrade a book which, a few bright spots aside, had been like a dog chasing its tale for the previous decade. FF 235 has all the grandiose cosmic spectacle of Lee & Kirby at their finest, with none of the icky sexism and paternalism that makes the Silver Age FF seem dated. All four members are equals and all four are given their chance to shine by Byrne.

Originally Posted by Paladin
This one evokes the best that Lee/Kirby ever offered as he takes a creation of theirs that originally appeared during their Thor run and has him/it face the Fantastic Four, which feels like a very natural switch to make and an inspired choice for Byrne.


Agreed. Instead of having the FF fight an old enemy of theirs for the tenth time, Byrne slyly borrows a Silver Age Thor villain cut from the same distinctive Lee & Kirby cloth.

Originally Posted by Paladin
The story is brilliant in that Byrne makes it both big and small in its focus. While the threat they are facing is huge, Byrne lets all four heroes shine and play a role. This is especially so of one Ben Grimm, who is alone after his fellows have to drop out one-by-one. Only he can endure the fiery depths of Ego to deliver what they've bet on being the solution to defeating Ego and saving Earth by doing so.


Again, agreed. Too many writers either recycle Ben's anger and angst from the Silver Age, or they make him too much of a big orange teddy bear. Byrne gets the balance just right, and it's a winning touch that the creator proclaims Ben worthy of mentioning in the same breath as the astronauts who had The Right Stuff.

Originally Posted by Paladin
I must digress a moment to extol the virtues of the first-rate printing of these Fantastic Four Omnibuses that reprint Byrne's great run. They really do his work absolute justice and make it look as great as it deserves to look. In stories like this Ego tale, this fact is really perfectly underlined. I honestly can't recommend Marvel Omnibuses highly enough, especially to see runs you love the most displayed with optimum production vales. They are truly a steal for cover price, and many can easily be found for significantly less.


And yet again, agreed. The Marvel Omnibuses are worth every penny. I got the New Warriors one for my birthday a year ago, and I've been savoring it since.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
FF 235 has all the grandiose cosmic spectacle of Lee & Kirby at their finest, with none of the icky sexism and paternalism that makes the Silver Age FF seem dated. All four members are equals and all four are given their chance to shine by Byrne.


I know! I was so severely disappointed by how Sue was treated as a character when I finally read the Masterworks with the first Galactus saga in it that I don't know if I'll ever dive deeper into the Lee/Kirby FF run. It was shocking, especially as Silver Age Spidey and what I've read of the S.A. Avengers never seemed to have that degree of sexism in their stories. While they weren't exactly ultra-modern feminist manifestos, they never gave me pause like those FF issues did. shake
Originally Posted by Paladin
I was so severely disappointed by how Sue was treated as a character when I finally read the Masterworks with the first Galactus saga in it that I don't know if I'll ever dive deeper into the Lee/Kirby FF run.


Unfortunately, that aspect of the Lee & Kirby FF never went away, so I think it's best you concentrate on other comics.

Come to think of it, did you ever get around to reading that Masterworks volume of Lee & Kirby's Thor? If so, did you find it better than their FF?
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady

Come to think of it, did you ever get around to reading that Masterworks volume of Lee & Kirby's Thor? If so, did you find it better than their FF?


I haven't read it yet--it's actually the second Omnibus, not a Masterworks, btw. I do have higher hopes for it because of some things you've said, so it's only a matter of the mood hitting when it hits.
Ah, okay.

And BTW, I expect I'll be posting reviews of FF 236 & 237 tomorrow.
Fantastic Four 236-237

I find these two issues to be a study in contrasts. 236, the 20th Anniversary special, is simply wonderful. So wonderful I don't want to spoil it for people who haven't read it. What I will say is that Byrne really makes a quantum leap as a writer here, doing in-depth characterization the likes of which has never been previously seen in FF, uses the well-chosen villains perfectly, and constructs an elaborate, clever, and ultimately heartbreaking story in which both the FF and the readers see what might have been, what could not have been, and what was. 237, on the other hand, I found very disappointing. If the previous issue transcended the book's template as set by Lee & Kirby, this issue recalls nothing so much as the later Lee & Kirby issues, after Kirby started keeping his best ideas to himself and Lee's dialogue lost a lot of its wit and snap. To paraphrase the story's title, the eyes don't have it, as it were, and its no surprise to me that the aliens introduced in this issue were, to my knowledge, never seen again. Also, we see a none-too-subtle hint of the re-emergence of little Franklin's powers, which has always been one of my pet peeves with the FF and makes me wish Byrne hadn't gone there. OTOH, maybe this is leading to something really awesome that I'm just not remembering since I haven't re-read these issues for such a long time.

FF #236, "Terror in a Tiny Town", was an excellent, super-sized, done-in-one tale that was probably the stand-out in the first trade I first read it in (FF Visionaries: John Byrne Vol. 1) a few years ago. I know this because, as we entered this re-read, it was the main early story I recalled in the most detail among that initial batch containing 232-240. In fact, I thought it might have been a multi-part story in my flawed memory. But, no, it's a 40-pager of a masterpiece that comprised the bulk of this issue, which is itself billed as commemorative of the FF's 20th anniversary. (Also included in the Omnibus is a surprisingly forgettable Lee/Kirby story that is both a re-telling of FF #5 and an adaptation of an episode of the FF cartoon--which means, yep, no Human Torch and features HERBIE the robot instead. Yeah... shake )

It's a rip-roaring mystery/adventure tale that features 2 of the FF's most classic foes which, as Fick says, manages to give a peek at what might have been in what is easily his best script to date in the small body of work he'd put out at the time. We've seen many stories before and since about characters are tricked into thinking they are living out idyllic, alternate versions of their lives, but this is easily one of the best ones of that ilk. This is because the characters really drive the scenario, especially Ben, for whom this life is of the most benefit among the four for what should be obvious reasons. So Ben and Alicia get a big spotlight here and really shine with their particular pathos, and this plays really well with the motives of one of the villains.

Reed, Sue and Johnny all get their moments as well. Johnny, mostly in the opening pages as Reed and Sue emerge stronger and stronger as the story goes on while Johnny mostly fades until the mystery is resolved and the action picks up. There's a lot of subtle work with the couple that I admire here because it makes Reed and Sue seem like a real team of spouses in a way that I doubt they were ever portrayed in the past.

Byrne is certainly masterful in his artwork throughout. I've always pretty much felt he was his own best inker, and there's nothing here to dissuade me of that. My favorite shot in the whole, great story is just one single panel of Sue having a fitful sleep in bed. I'm sure the colorist deserves some credit there as well, but I love the grainier inks used there to portray a scene in darkness. Just an example of some versatility that the better artists of the time displayed while modern artists take shortcuts and hide behind their colorists. Even beyond that panel, I was mesmerised by the details Byrne put into woodwork, clothing and furniture and carpeting patterns. It's all so lush and deep in ways that make most modern comic artwork seem flat and featureless.

Like Fickles, I'm reluctant to divulge specific spoilers. If there's one drawback to reading this story a second time, it's that the fun of the discovery wasn't there as much. Oh, I could admire all of the superb craftsmanship, but I knew that ___ and ___ were behind everything and that they did it using _______ and all that. So because of the nature of this particular story, I'll let the now-32-year spoilers remain...unspoiled...on the off-chance that anyone reading may have the opportunity to discover it for the first time.

I will say that I particularly like the unusual (and rare!) comeuppance(s) that the bigger of the two bads gets. Plus, to me, there's an unresolved plot thread that Byrne could have tied up by a wider shot near the end. It's probably just me being nit-picky, but I would have liked to have seen some *small* remnants of the story one last time... (Trying to be vague here, but I hope you get my drift, Fick! hmmm )

Overall, I would say that this would be the standalone story I'd recommend to anyone who'd like to sample Byrne's FF and see if they want to try more. It encapsulates everything that you need to know about the FF and how Byrne was simply born to write and draw the book! love
FF #237, "The Eyes Have It", is definitely Byrne's weakest issue to this point. Like the previous issue, it takes a well-worn trope--this time that of a powerful innocent being exploited by opportunistic bad guys--but unlike the successful use of the false reality trope of the previous issue, he fails to make this one memorable in its execution.

In his defense I think Byrne's primary purpose this issue was to give Reed and Sue a light adventure in which his real purpose is to further develop their chemistry as Marvel's premier power couple, as I observed he was doing last issue. In that, I think he succeeds, but it is at the expense of some goofy and forgettable aliens that we'll never see again.

The only cool think about the main alien's power is some pretty cool visuals that Byrne comes up with to show the disorientation she causes. It's a fun effect that is best when it shows Reed's body all mixed up through a cascading spiral. This is on full display on the book's cover, which is fairly striking:

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In other news, we get the interesting repercussions involving last issues main villain and that the effects of that story on Ben and Alicia aren't forgotten. As Fick mentions, we get a brief reminder that Franklin has powers, though that didn't particularly bother me. (I did kinda like how Reed and Sue left him in the care of an officer while they pursued the threat--kind of a nice touch.) Byrne definitely misses the mark with the Johnny/Frankie subplot as it comes of unintentionally, I think, hilarious. (I mean, it looks like she strips nekkid for him, and he's floored because he's never seen boobs before! Or that he HAS, but, what, her boobs aren't boobs or something?!? lol Peaking ahead to the full reveal next issue, the reaction and set-up seem kind of like--HUH?!? shrug )

So, yeah, definitely the runt in the litter to this point, but we know there will be a lot more winners then stinkers in the long haul! nod
Looks like we pretty much see...if you'll forgive the pun...eye-to-eye on both those issues, Lardy. smile

Not sure what you mean about the unresolved plot thread, though. Could you please elaborate in a spoiler box?

And I'd like to ask you a favor. Would it be okay if I posted three short reviews this week instead of two? I wasn't terribly pleased with any of those issues, and I'd like to get to the Galactus/Terrax story faster.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady

And I'd like to ask you a favor. Would it be okay if I posted three short reviews this week instead of two? I wasn't terribly pleased with any of those issues, and I'd like to get to the Galactus/Terrax story faster.


Sure, that's fine.

Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady

Not sure what you mean about the unresolved plot thread, though. Could you please elaborate in a spoiler box?


Okay, I guess it's only somewhat unresolved in my mind, but
I think a shot of the miniature synth-clones (or whatever) of the Four lying lifeless on the floor would have been a nice extra touch. I suppose it would have seemed like a bit of a downer of a panel, but to me it seemed a natural thing to show. Also, without that shot, it would seem to leave open the possibility that they were still around, albeit without the consciousnesses of the Four inside of them.


It's not a deal-breaker by any means, but the story seems a fraction incomplete without the shot in my mind.
Thanks, Lardy.

I hadn't thought about that particular loose end, but now that you mention it, yes, if Byrne had taken care of that, the story would have been perfect.
Fantastic Four 238-240

The first two of these issues are nucking futs, and not in a good way IMO. Frankie Raye's origin is convoluted and creepy, and she doesn't react believably to the memories she recovers. Changing the Thing's appearance into the less simian, more reptilian version of the earliest Lee & Kirby stories comes off to me as pointless fanwank, as does bringing Ben's much-mythologized Aunt Petunia into the book. And the child abuse angle of 239 is just appalling to me -- Reed loses a lot of credibility in my eyes for defending the abuser; and Byrne also neglects to show us the exact event that has the abuser claiming he's changed his ways...show, don't tell, Byrne; finally, the ending is the worst part, because unless I misread it, it seems to me that the abuse will go on and more innocent people will die pointlessly from the child's repressed rage.

240 is an issue that I had good memories of, inasmuch as it has an indisputably gorgeous cover and it features the birth of Crystal & Quicksilver's daughter, Luna. But except for some beautiful inner art, I found it upon re-reading to be a dud. Again, Byrne tells instead of showing the things that the Inhumans have been going through, and Frankie proves to see things in black and white, which makes her less sympathetic in my eyes.
FF 238, featuring the stories "The Lady Is Made for Burning" & "The More Things Change", I found fairly entertaining, especially because Byrne is comfortable enough now to have an entire issue feature no threat for our heroes to battle. Instead, we get a payoff in the form of an origin for the mysterious Frankie Raye and the latest episode in Reed's struggle to cure Ben.

The latter story is a good one to have for the purpose of showing Reed's continuing efforts to reverse Ben's condition. What appeals less is the result, which purports to be both "permanent" in Ben's reversion to an older form and the supposed last word on Ben's search to be normal. In hindsight this is pretty ridiculous. Ben will be his familiar rocky self within about a year of stories, and there are many more developments in his quest for normalcy in the decades to come, including some during Byrne's time left on the book. So it's false advertising, though the story in and of itself is well-done. (Gotta wonder if there is any explanation to come for the glitch in the experiment. Reed is still pondering it the next issue, so it leads me to believe there's an interesting reason. We'll see if that materializes.)

I clearly like the first story more than Fick. I wasn't in love with it, but I especially liked Byrne giving Frankie a connection to the original Human Torch. I feel he created her to give the original Torch a living legacy beyond the Vision. (Of course, Byrne had bigger things planned for her beyond that as we will soon learn soon in what will be his first big epic storyline.)

In a way, though, Frankie kind of comes off as another take on Jean Grey/Phoenix in the early going. There are hints of her having potentially greater power than Johnny and of her also having a dark side. Those, plus the red hair, certainly have at least superficial echoes of Jean. Hell, even the machine Reed used to analyze Frankie reminds me of the Shi'ar equipment used on Jean. He didn't exactly go there, but I wonder if Byrne at least wanted to make readers wonder about that, especially those who followed him from the X-Men. (There's even a direct reference to Jean in 240 when Attilan lands on the Blue Area of the moon.)

FF 239, "Wendy's Friends", seems like a story in which Byrne had a really good core story idea but just lacked the necessary storytelling skill at that point to pull it off. Like Fick says, Byrne simple tells us too much here instead of showing us. We never really quite understand how the spirits scare people to death. I don't think we even properly got to see our heroes overcome their own fears. We see Ben face some shadowy creatures, but we don't get the impression that they represent some primal fear of his.

Basically, Byrne takes too many shortcuts here. He could have let the story breathe better into a two-parter and, I think, had a more effective and creepy story told that was worthy of his idea. I'm a fan of the great done-in-ones of the Bronze Age, but this one needed a little decompression to be effective. In the end this one is another clunker, along with 237.

I did, however, kind of get a kick out of Aunt Petunia and how she defied expectations. If I'm not mistaken, Byrne doesn't use her anymore. If so, it's a shame because I found her memorable.
FF 240, "Exodus", is Byrne taking his first crack at another Lee/Kirby creation central to the FF lore, the Inhumans. And in this first crack, Byrne really attempts to swing for the fences by making two big changes to their lore: the relocation of Attilan to the moon and the birth of Quicksilver and Crystal's daughter (her name's not given this issue).

The biggest flaw in the story is, as Fick states above, another case of telling instead of showing. In this instance we are told of a great, definitive battle that we learn of entirely through dialogue and some brief flashbacks. it's an odd choice because it's defined as such a monumental event (literally because Maximus apparently redeemed himself so much in the battle that a monument is left to him at Attilan's now former site). His choice to show just the coda to an apparent larger story seems to show it was the only part he was interested to tell. It almost seems like his larger intention was to write the Inhumans out for the time being. That's doubtful because you'd want to take them much further out of the picture than the moon if that was the case. If he wanted to tell the story of moving Attilan, Byrne could have just stuck to the pollution sickness as the driving force without all of the off-camera events.

Still, I think the story works overall as an FF story because of larger idea of the FF coming to the aid of a large problem with a proportionately large solution that offers some sheer spectacle. this is another FF story that doesn't feature a villain but a problem that only Reed and friends can solve. It's feel-food and fun and is just the kind of story you wouldn't find in any other team book.

So Byrne got some things very right this issue and showed that he knows the FF is not your ordinary super-team, but he still shows some growing pains as a writer. If a flashback to an untold story seems that significant, maybe it should be given the room to be properly told.
Originally Posted by Paladin
In a way, though, Frankie kind of comes off as another take on Jean Grey/Phoenix in the early going. There are hints of her having potentially greater power than Johnny and of her also having a dark side. Those, plus the red hair, certainly have at least superficial echoes of Jean. Hell, even the machine Reed used to analyze Frankie reminds me of the Shi'ar equipment used on Jean. He didn't exactly go there, but I wonder if Byrne at least wanted to make readers wonder about that, especially those who followed him from the X-Men. (There's even a direct reference to Jean in 240 when Attilan lands on the Blue Area of the moon.)


I think you may be onto something here, Lardy, and, without spoiling what lies ahead, I wonder if he had some grand plan for her that he would have completed had he not left Marvel abruptly in the mid-1980s.
Fantastic Four 241

This one definitely has echoes of 60s and 70s sci-fi television shows, as a seemingly intact outpost of Ancient Rome is found deep in Africa, on the border of the Black Panther's kingdom of Wakanda. S.H.I.E.L.D. detects an energy surge in that location by chance (there's a nice bit about how the exodus of the Inhumans last issue was partly responsible for the detection) and asks the FF to investigate. This is a good use of the FF's connection to T'Challa (he first appeared in a Lee & Kirby FF storyline), and Byrne writes the Black Panther very well, emphasizing his cunning and his self-achieved powers. That is why it's more than a little strange that Byrne's plot takes an odd turn halfway through, and T'Challa has no part in the defeat of the villain, Flavius (I wonder if the plot was altered at the last minute?) And while it is nice that Sue is the one to single-handedly defeat the villain, overall the story feels arbitrary and half-baked to me. A mixed beg of an issue, then. (BTW, I wonder if this story inspired Claremont a few years later to create Nova Roma during his New Mutants run.)

Fantastic Four 242

This is more like it. Byrne brings back Terrax, a rebellious former herald of Galactus co-created less than three years earlier by Byrne and Marv Wolfman (though who deserves more of the credit has been a matter of contention) to wreak havoc on Earth and literally kidnap the entire island of Manhattan (in a fashion very similar to the Inhumans' exodus a couple of issues earlier, but I think that's forgivable.) There are wonderful guest appearances by Thor and Iron Man, doing damage control at the environs of Manhattan, and nice cameos by Spider-Man and Daredevil. And the cliffhanger promises much more cosmic goodness to come.
Fantastic Four 243-244

Act Two of Byrne's Galactus 3-parter more than delivers the requisite thrills and chills. Byrne draws a great Galactus, and the scene where he puts Terrax in his place is a classic. The battle against Galactus, who now intends to eat the Earth because he is too weak to travel to another planet, is spectacular, with the FF joined by the Avengers and Dr. Strange, and it ends with Galactus actually felled and fading away!

Act Three begins with a bereft Johnny showing up at Frankie's apartment, to be greeted by her roommate, Julie. Reed and Sue quickly follow. Cue a flashback to the point where the last issue left off, with Reed insisting over Iron Man's objections that Galactus's life must be saved. Thor's considerable power and Iron Man's tech wizardry combine to give Galactus the adrenaline shot to end them all. But Galactus STILL intends to consume our planet, claiming that the uninhabited planets that Reed has found for him are too far away for him to reach in his weak state!

And here's where the story falls apart for me. Frankie offers herself to Galactus as his new herald, reminding him of how Norrin Radd became the Silver Surfer in exchange for Galactus sparing his home planet. But Frankie shows a callousness which I find appalling -- when it's pointed out that she will be party to the destruction of inhabited worlds, she cold-bloodedly shrugs, "What's a few less bug-eyed monsters?" Galactus finds this appealing, because Frankie is not likely to have guilt pangs and turn against him, the way the Surfer did when Galactus first came to Earth.

It's hard for me to feel bad for Johnny, because Frankie's attitude is so off-putting. When she does become the new herald and flies away, all I could think of was, "Good riddance to a genocidal monster." Now, perhaps Byrne might have had her regain at least some of her humanity if he'd stayed with the FF longer, but we'll never know.

And there's another elephant in the room -- Galactus had said he was too weak to travel far. So how does gaining a new herald solve everything? Unless, of course, she finds an inhabited world that is close enough for Galactus to reach. Which I take to mean that it's okay if another world perishes, as long as Good Ol' Terra Firma is still around.

Either way, Byrne seems to be reaching for a profound moral ambiguity, but in the end, it proves out of his reach, at least for this reader.
FF 241, "Render Unto Caesar", had Byrne give the team a team-appropriate mission. When they are exploring and solving mysteries, they are very much in their element. In this case they are investigating an unknown energy source in Africa that happens to be in the proximity od their old friend the Black Panther's nation of Wakanda.

Unfortunately, the Panther and Wakanda seem far from crucial to the story as neither really play a key role. It's almost like Byrne wanted to check them off a list of Lee/Kirby character appearances but just kind of plugged them into a fairly generic "lost civilization" story which seems superficially inspired by the then-recent advent of Indiana Jones as one of the characters even references him. (The story itself is not ripping Raiders of the Lost Ark off, but Byrne seems inspired by it.)

In the end it's a decent story and, again, one appropriate for an FF story. But it's not very satisfying in its kind of quick resolution and its quick explanation for the events. Plus, the Panther and his country are barely window dressing for what I hoped would have been more of a showcase for them.

FF 242, "Terrax Untamed", on the other hand, was much more on the mark. With the story's return of Galactus' latest herald, Byrne gets back to the type of FF story that he seems most comfortable with to this point, that of the big cosmic, widescreen kind of threat. In this one Terrax appears to be out for simple revenge against the FF for beating him in his previous appearance until a twist at the end reveals a larger motive.

It's just after Christmas and New year's in the Big Apple, and Byrne opens with some downtime scenes with Reed, Sue and Franklin, Ben and Alicia and Johnny and Frankie all doing fairly normal activities with an FF twist, particularly as some roughnecks choose the wrong guy to pick on in one Ben Grimm. (Let's just say, they hadn't a snowball's chance...)

Enter Terrax to interrupt their revelries, culminating in a big-time showcase of his powers. He uproots the entire island of Manhattan--and brings it one hundred miles into space! Along the way, we get varying degrees of fun cameos from Thor, Iron Man, Daredevil and Spider-Man. And it climaxes with Terrax revealing his true goal...to get the FF to destroy Galactus, whose ship arrives on the last page and with whom Terrax has had a falling-out with. Needless to say...we have a cliffhanger, here!

All in all, very well-executed on Byrne's part. Well-illustrated and pretty suspensefully-told. It's particularly effective that we don't know exactly what's happening with Manhattan until the end, and that shock is followed by the other one involving Galactus. It's a classic double-whammy of an ending that I couldn't imagine anyone reading it wouldn't be anxious to buy the next installment.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Byrne brings back Terrax, a rebellious former herald of Galactus co-created less than three years earlier by Byrne and Marv Wolfman (though who deserves more of the credit has been a matter of contention)...


That's a matter of contention? Between Byrne and Wolfman, I assume? Seems odd. Terrax isn't exactly insignificant but is not exactly a top-tier villain either.

Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
to wreak havoc on Earth and literally kidnap the entire island of Manhattan (in a fashion very similar to the Inhumans' exodus a couple of issues earlier, but I think that's forgivable.)


Oddly enough, I didn't connect the two events for being overly similar! I guess you can chalk it up to the differences in context, the former being a benign act and the latter a huge threat. But if you think about what Byrne eventually does to the Baxter Building, you can argue it's something a a Byrne fallback!

Well, Terrax was pretty awesome in his two battles against the New Warriors (ahhhh, how I love the first 25 issues of Nicieza's New Warriors...)

Re: Byrne and the Baxter Building, good point well taken.
FF #'s 243 ("Shall Earth Endure?") & 244 ("Beginnings and Endings") finish off Byrne's first story of more than two parts in what I felt was a very satisfying manner. 242 left us with the double-cliffhanger of Manhattan in great peril with the whole area and its inhabitants held hostage in outer space by Terrax, only to have Galactus himself show up with Terrax demanding the FF to destroy the planet-devourer or sacrifice the entire island.

We pick up almost immediately from that ending but not before Byrne features Frankie Raye in a scene with Sue that foreshadows Frankie's larger involvement in this story along with a quick scene at Avengers Mansion to show that Manhattan's other heroes are also affected.

It's great table-setting by Byrne as the three males FFers (Sue is playing a vital role using her powers at the Baxter Building) infiltrate Galactus' ship to find some way to both save Manhattan and defy Terrax. One of my favorite touches in this scene is how Galactus shows a respect for the FF in the encounter that rings true with their mutual history. Galactus normally treats intruders as fleas unworthy of his attention, but I like how Byrne has this not be the case in this instance. It's a mutual respect that the two parties would have earned from their past encounters, and Byrne pays that off with the conclusion of the story.

Galactus quickly (and believably because of his power level) takes down Terrax and restores Manhattan. However, Galactus is so depleted that he feels he must consume Earth to save himself. This leads to an epic brawl without precedent involving Galactus fighting both the FF and the Avengers (with Spidey and DD as witnesses, feeling they're over-matched in this scenario) and then Doctor Strange. It's unusual but justified by Galactus' energies being at an incredibly low ebb because of Terrax leaving him without someone to find suitable planets and then the energy expended to pursue the rogue herald. Normally, the Big G would wipe the floor with our heroes, but the circumstances lead to them taking him out instead.

It's a big, crowd-pleaser of an episode and ends with a cliff-hanger few would expect: Should our heroes save Galactus?

244 answers that question by telling what happened afterwards in flashback. We find Johnny incredibly hurt and upset by whatever happened next, with hints that Frankie Raye factored in hugely, as he arrives at Frankie's apartment exhausted and collapsing in the presence of Frankie's roommate. She calls for help and Reed and Sue fill both her and us in on what happened after Galactus was at our heroes' mercy.

From there, things pick up with Galactus still collapsed and our heroes debating his fate. Reed steps up and asserts that it is their duty to preserve all sentient life. Iron Man steps up as the lone dissenter, but everyone else falls in with Reed.

I have to stop and admire this sequence because it is a wonderful reminder of what was still a more innocent age in comics superhero adventures. Nowadays, it's really hard to imagine writers would take this scenario and go this way with it. Comics are so bloodthirsty now that you just know the characters (and writers) would go for the kill. (I mean, remember Bendis having the Avengers and X-Men debate killing Wanda after House of M?) In THIS scenario, however, I'd be hard-pressed to vote to save Galactus, considering his continuing and massive threat to Earth.

But I love how, seemingly against common sense, our heroes do choose to save his life and how Byrne shows that it is ultimately the right thing to do as he pays off that mutual respect that I noted in the previous issue. You get the feeling that Galactus is genuinely touched and would perhaps rather be destroyed by our heroes than consume their planets after their selfless act.

But before either scenario can play out, Frankie arrives and offers to be Galactus's new herald and to find a suitable world for him. Galactus accepts this option and conveys his gratitude to the FF both by renewing his vow to spare Earth and acknowledging that they may be the closest things to friends that a being like him has.

I really loved this whole story arc and how it played out with some fairly sophisticated ideas about morality. I also appreciated that Byrne portrayed Frankie not as a self-sacrificing Norrin Radd but as someone who had more selfish motives. Frankie was a woman going through the motions of mundane existence and wanted more to do with her powers than to just be a part of the superhuman rat race. She saw an opportunity to do something extraordinary with her life and see and do things few humans ever would.

Unfortunately, Johnny was completely smitten with her and is devastated. Basically, Johnny, we learned that "she's just not that into you." You were head-over-heels; she was on the look-out for something better. It's a microcosm for a lot of real relationships, just on a more mythical scale, and Byrne set this up well prior to this story with subtle looks at her character in issues leading up to this trilogy. I don't see this as an indictment on Frankie or of women in general but kind of a more realistic take on certain relationships and how that might play out in superhero melodrama.

Earlier, I thought that maybe Byrne was playing with our expectations regarding some similarities between Frankie and Jean Grey. I'm not certain that that was what he was doing, but it's interesting how differently the stories played out. Jean was a noble character corrupted by great power until she made a sacrifice to stop herself from going to far. Frankie was of less extraordinary character but somewhat more believable and recognizable who ultimately made a self-serving choice. The first may have made for a better or more memorable story, but the second is a reflection of things we've seen more often in real life.

Anyhow, I thought it was a great story on many levels. If there was anything of a letdown, I suppose I was a little surprised that Frankie wasn't given her familiar nomenclature of "Nova", even by this story's conclusion. I suppose we will when she reappears. At this point, I would rank this trilogy as Byrne's best story at this point in his run, topping even the Ego story and the great epic in 236. Excellent stuff!
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
And here's where the story falls apart for me. Frankie offers herself to Galactus as his new herald, reminding him of how Norrin Radd became the Silver Surfer in exchange for Galactus sparing his home planet. But Frankie shows a callousness which I find appalling -- when it's pointed out that she will be party to the destruction of inhabited worlds, she cold-bloodedly shrugs, "What's a few less bug-eyed monsters?" Galactus finds this appealing, because Frankie is not likely to have guilt pangs and turn against him, the way the Surfer did when Galactus first came to Earth.


Hm. I'm curious to think what you think of my take on Frankie in the above review. I didn't get super-deep into her callousness because I think Byrne set that up some in some of her scenes in previous issues. I can see her being callous and lacking some moral fiber because of her unusual upbringing.

Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
It's hard for me to feel bad for Johnny, because Frankie's attitude is so off-putting. When she does become the new herald and flies away, all I could think of was, "Good riddance to a genocidal monster." Now, perhaps Byrne might have had her regain at least some of her humanity if he'd stayed with the FF longer, but we'll never know.


I can feel bad for Johnny. He's had pretty shitty luck with love, and this is one of those times he fell really hard. Just because she wasn't terribly sympathetic doesn't mean I couldn't feel for him. Like I said, there have been too many romances in real life where someone uses the other and flees when something better comes along. Love can be blind sometimes. In a way Johnny lost Frankie to a guy she felt had more to offer her.

Originally Posted by fanfic Lady
And there's another elephant in the room -- Galactus had said he was too weak to travel far. So how does gaining a new herald solve everything? Unless, of course, she finds an inhabited world that is close enough for Galactus to reach. Which I take to mean that it's okay if another world perishes, as long as Good Ol' Terra Firma is still around.


Yeah, that's a bit of a plot hole. I think we are to presume that a herald can somehow help him reach the destination with their abilities, probably one of the uninhabited worlds Reed mentions. But, yeah, the larger question of letting Galactus live when he will eventually annihilate more inhabited worlds is why I wouldn't have been so fast to spare Galactus despite my admiration for the heroes' course of action.

Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Either way, Byrne seems to be reaching for a profound moral ambiguity, but in the end, it proves out of his reach, at least for this reader.


I think you know that I felt differently about Byrne's level of success with the moral implications and, of course, with Frankie. I'll be curious to see if my review sparks any new thoughts on those matters. But one point that Byrne makes thru the characters is that Galactus himself is not evil and only acts according to what his nature demands, like a cosmic shark or something. Frankie's not evil either, just opportunistic. Most of us would have moral objections to doing the job she's taking on, but she's not serving an entity that is inherently bad.
Originally Posted by Paladin
One of my favorite touches in this scene is how Galactus shows a respect for the FF in the encounter that rings true with their mutual history. Galactus normally treats intruders as fleas unworthy of his attention, but I like how Byrne has this not be the case in this instance. It's a mutual respect that the two parties would have earned from their past encounters, and Byrne pays that off with the conclusion of the story.


Thanks for mentioning that, Lardy. Byrne has been reliably good for nice little touches like that throughout the run so far.

Originally Posted by Paladin
From there, things pick up with Galactus still collapsed and our heroes debating his fate. Reed steps up and asserts that it is their duty to preserve all sentient life. Iron Man steps up as the lone dissenter, but everyone else falls in with Reed.

I have to stop and admire this sequence because it is a wonderful reminder of what was still a more innocent age in comics superhero adventures. Nowadays, it's really hard to imagine writers would take this scenario and go this way with it. Comics are so bloodthirsty now that you just know the characters (and writers) would go for the kill. (I mean, remember Bendis having the Avengers and X-Men debate killing Wanda after House of M?) In THIS scenario, however, I'd be hard-pressed to vote to save Galactus, considering his continuing and massive threat to Earth.

But I love how, seemingly against common sense, our heroes do choose to save his life and how Byrne shows that it is ultimately the right thing to do as he pays off that mutual respect that I noted in the previous issue. You get the feeling that Galactus is genuinely touched and would perhaps rather be destroyed by our heroes than consume their planets after their selfless act.


Yeah, I think I'd probably be a dissenter, too. On the other hand, I think if we look at Galactus as a force of nature in the universal food chain, he does start to seem essential to the continued well-being of the universe. The back-to-nature stereotypes are portrayed as perceiving nature as being far more gentle than it actually is.

Originally Posted by Paladin
Galactus accepts this option and conveys his gratitude to the FF both by renewing his vow to spare Earth and acknowledging that they may be the closest things to friends that a being like him has.


Here I think Byrne made a mistake common to writers who are still honing their craft -- he spelled out something that was better left implied. I just don't see Galactus dropping his aloof façade that completely. But that's just me.

And I'll get into the whole Frankie Raye thing in my next post.
Re: Frankie -- I can appreciate and respect the points you make, Lardy. And I do feel now that I was a bit harsh in saying that I couldn't feel for Johnny. But Frankie's "What's a few less bug-eyed aliens?" remark really bothered me a lot. It's one thing for one partner in a relationship to be less in love than the other, and to break off the relationship for a more lucrative opportunity. It's quite another when one of the partners proves to have beliefs that fly in the face of all sentient decency. Its real world equivalent would have been Frankie saying something virulently racist. So my feelings towards Frankie are basically, "Vaya con Dios, ignorante estupida", and that Johnny, for all his jerkiness and immaturity in the past, deserves better than her.

So I guess what it comes down to is that I might have been more forgiving of Frankie if not for the bug-eyed aliens remark.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Re: Frankie -- I can appreciate and respect the points you make, Lardy. And I do feel now that I was a bit harsh in saying that I couldn't feel for Johnny. But Frankie's "What's a few less bug-eyed aliens?" remark really bothered me a lot. It's one thing for one partner in a relationship to be less in love than the other, and to break off the relationship for a more lucrative opportunity. It's quite another when one of the partners proves to have beliefs that fly in the face of all sentient decency. Its real world equivalent would have been Frankie saying something virulently racist. So my feelings towards Frankie are basically, "Vaya con Dios, ignorante estupida", and that Johnny, for all his jerkiness and immaturity in the past, deserves better than her.

So I guess what it comes down to is that I might have been more forgiving of Frankie if not for the bug-eyed aliens remark.


Point taken as intended, Ficque. I would imagine, however, that this would be the point of view of most Average Joes/Joans, especially if it's a choice between us or them for complete annihilation. Certainly, people can be fickle (natch) about when we do or do not care about foreign tragedies and conflicts.

In any case I'm not defending Frankie and her ambivalence about sentient life. In fact, it's a little refreshing to see Byrne tell her story without making her some sacrificing paragon. Writers go to that well all-too often, and it can become disaffecting when retold ad nauseum. I do think Frankie did care about whether Earth lived or died, but it was also an opportunistic move to give her the leverage she wanted. And it was telling that she completely ignored Johnny after getting what she wanted to the point that she even was either oblivious or unconcerned when he put himself in danger trying to pursue her.

This is one of those sets of issues that is not truly a "re-read" for me as I'd never had the opportunity to experience them off the stands or as back-issues or in collected editions before. I'd always had an idealized version of this story in my head thinking it was much more straightforward and by-the-numbers than it actually was, especially the details of Frankie's so-called sacrifice. I was both stunned and pleased to see the actual story was much more layered and much less cliched than what I always assumed it had been. I'm really pleased with how Byrne's still-neophyte but quickly maturing writing skills have come in a fairly short period.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Originally Posted by Paladin
But I love how, seemingly against common sense, our heroes do choose to save his life and how Byrne shows that it is ultimately the right thing to do as he pays off that mutual respect that I noted in the previous issue. You get the feeling that Galactus is genuinely touched and would perhaps rather be destroyed by our heroes than consume their planets after their selfless act.


Yeah, I think I'd probably be a dissenter, too. On the other hand, I think if we look at Galactus as a force of nature in the universal food chain, he does start to seem essential to the continued well-being of the universe. The back-to-nature stereotypes are portrayed as perceiving nature as being far more gentle than it actually is.


I think that aspect of Galactus' larger role being important to the cosmos is explored later, either by Byrne or later writers. (Maybe in Reed's upcoming trial?) Either way, it's nice to know that Reed's actions her will have repercussions.

Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Originally Posted by Paladin
Galactus accepts this option and conveys his gratitude to the FF both by renewing his vow to spare Earth and acknowledging that they may be the closest things to friends that a being like him has.


Here I think Byrne made a mistake common to writers who are still honing their craft -- he spelled out something that was better left implied. I just don't see Galactus dropping his aloof façade that completely. But that's just me.


I think it's clear in my review that I didn't mind it at all, though I can see the argument against it. It's a unique moment and one we haven't seen and won't often see from Galactus before or since. I think it works because the story features Galactus at his lowest and most vulnerable point, so his trademark aloofness being compromised works. And let's not forget that Doctor Strange made him experience the horrors he's wrought in the previous issue.

In any case I'm curious how this three-part story ranks for you among those in Byrne's run to that point. I said it was the best yet, but I'm wondering if your concerns would put it behind the other highlights.
Lardy, I have a favor to ask. I've been feeling a bit unfocused of late due to things going on in Real Life (no need to worry, it's not a life-or-death thing) so I don't know when I'll be able to continue the discussion on 242-244 or when I'll be able to review 245-246. Could you please review 245-246 at your convenience, and I'll catch up when I feel up to it?
Certainly. I'd fallen behind myself because my life's been busy. But I will continue. I will, however, require you to reply to some of the points in my previous post eventually. nod grin
Thanks, Lardy.

And, yes, I absolutely will continue our discussion about Galactus, Frankie, etc. That is my top posting priority in the next few days.
Originally Posted by Paladin
Point taken as intended, Ficque. I would imagine, however, that this would be the point of view of most Average Joes/Joans, especially if it's a choice between us or them for complete annihilation. Certainly, people can be fickle (natch) about when we do or do not care about foreign tragedies and conflicts.


I like the pun. nod

And I agree that humanity generally tends to look out for number one. Perhaps I was bothered to the extent that I was because of Byrne/Frankie's choice of words. Whether or not Byrne intended it, she came across to me as a rabid xenophobe.

Originally Posted by Paladin
I think that aspect of Galactus' larger role being important to the cosmos is explored later, either by Byrne or later writers. (Maybe in Reed's upcoming trial?) Either way, it's nice to know that Reed's actions her will have repercussions.


It will definitely be interesting to see if what we've been discussing does turn out to be part of the defense's argument in the Trial of Galactus arc.

Originally Posted by Paladin
I think it's clear in my review that I didn't mind it at all, though I can see the argument against it. It's a unique moment and one we haven't seen and won't often see from Galactus before or since. I think it works because the story features Galactus at his lowest and most vulnerable point, so his trademark aloofness being compromised works. And let's not forget that Doctor Strange made him experience the horrors he's wrought in the previous issue.


Fair enough, and this is certainly not the only instance of Marvel making Galactus look less awesome than he's supposed to be. Using him as one of a random group of villains in the original Secret Wars is a far greater offense than anything in Byrne's story. And don't get me started on Hickman having Franklin Richards playing around with Galactus and the Celestials like they were toys...

Originally Posted by Paladin
In any case I'm curious how this three-part story ranks for you among those in Byrne's run to that point. I said it was the best yet, but I'm wondering if your concerns would put it behind the other highlights.


I'd rank it third best of the ones we've re-read so far, with Ego second best and the 20th Anniversary special at the top.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
And I agree that humanity generally tends to look out for number one. Perhaps I was bothered to the extent that I was because of Byrne/Frankie's choice of words. Whether or not Byrne intended it, she came across to me as a rabid xenophobe.


I'm certainly not invalidating your take on her. At face value it's a very understandable read. I interpreted it a different way--perhaps reading deeper meaning into it than it deserves--but that's how it resonates with me.

Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Originally Posted by Paladin
I think that aspect of Galactus' larger role being important to the cosmos is explored later, either by Byrne or later writers. (Maybe in Reed's upcoming trial?) Either way, it's nice to know that Reed's actions her will have repercussions.


It will definitely be interesting to see if what we've been discussing does turn out to be part of the defense's argument in the Trial of Galactus arc.


As I've implied, the memory is definitely fuzzy on the early part of this run, especially before Shulkie comes aboard which is when I started buying it off the stands. I filled in a lot of back issues in Byrne's run, but there were gaps. Plus, the immediacy of the current issues probably stuck in the memory better.

Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Fair enough, and this is certainly not the only instance of Marvel making Galactus look less awesome than he's supposed to be. Using him as one of a random group of villains in the original Secret Wars is a far greater offense than anything in Byrne's story. And don't get me started on Hickman having Franklin Richards playing around with Galactus and the Celestials like they were toys...


I don't think I read that Hickman tale. Definitely too far. I think Byrne handled it just right under the conditions he set up. It shouldn't be abused. shake

Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Originally Posted by Paladin
In any case I'm curious how this three-part story ranks for you among those in Byrne's run to that point. I said it was the best yet, but I'm wondering if your concerns would put it behind the other highlights.


I'd rank it third best of the ones we've re-read so far, with Ego second best and the 20th Anniversary special at the top.


At least we agree on the Top Three, if not the exact order. nod I'd put 20th anniversay 2nd and Ego third.
Originally Posted by Paladin
I don't think I read that Hickman tale. Definitely too far. I think Byrne handled it just right under the conditions he set up. It shouldn't be abused. shake


How true, how true. sigh

On a more positive note, I think one of the best portrayals of Galactus from the not-too-distant past was in the first Annihilation event.

Originally Posted by Paladin
At least we agree on the Top Three, if not the exact order. nod I'd put 20th anniversay 2nd and Ego third.


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FF#245, "Childhood's End", picks up on a cliffhanger from last issue as Franklin's powers flared up as he had a meltdown caused by being frustrated with a Rubik's Cube. The casualty was his robotic nanny, who strongly resembled the also-doomed HERBIE from a couple of years previous.

This issue does not pick up from that cliffhanger directly, but instead begins with Sue taping an interview with a Barbara Walters stand-in, which we saw her going to last issue just before Franklin's meltdown. Byrne, I think, uses the interview and the interviewer's biases to address readers' criticisms of Sue up to this point in her character's existence. Everything from her being the group's weak link to her role as the damsel in distress to her dalliances with Prince Namor are discussed.

Byrne accomplishes a few things with the interview. He shows that Sue has definitely had her moments, even when we know she was often poorly written and shown as weak. He shows thru Sue's assertiveness in the interview, that she is not the timid, meek housewife many think her to be. And, most of all, Byrne uses the piece to show that, looking ahead, he has every intention of showing the strength in the character without ignoring or discarding what we already know about her.

So in a way, the sequence is a very meta device for Byrne. Me, I could already see him moving Sue forward and out of the shadows in his still fairly nascient run, but I like the spotlight on her and Byrne's mission to show she is every bit an equal in the FF. Byrne is having Sue talk directly to us, really, but thru the trappings of the interview, I don't think he's beating us over the head with his point.

From there, the story segues into a threat at the Baxter Building which is still under repair. It's being menaced by a man with long blonde hair and beard who seems very confused but has already defeated Reed, Ben and Johnny. Sue arrives and is forced to play cat-and-mouse with the superiorly-powered foe. Soon, Sue realizes that the man is none other than Franklin, whose outburst of power has aged him and left his memory in disarray.

Sue gets thru to Franklin and helps him remember who he is. Franklin decides on his own to self-impose mental blocks on his powerful mind, When he does so, he reverts back to his previous child body and mind but not before an attempt of his to cure Ben reverts Ben back to his familiar rocky state.

It's an interesting idea for a story and one that I think Byrne used to address Franklin's powers for the foreseeable future. Franklin had been manifesting his powers for years since he was born. I think Byrne wanted to explore some of the ideas that may have been percolating in the minds of fans and other creators but with the ultimate goal that Franklin would have the opportunity to be just a kid for a while. I think it's a noble idea to put the Franklin rabbit back in the hat for awhile and counter expectations in the process.

Was it a great story? No, not really. For one thing, it makes the Thing's reversion earlier in Byrne's run seem fairly pointless. Plus, adult Franklin was just kind of weird and creepy. But I liked the ideas Byrne had with Sue and Franklin and how he set them up for how he was going to utilize the characters here. Plus, the art was really tight and classic Byrne, and the cover featuring Sue alone was one of Byrne's best to date, imo. So I'll rate it squarely "good, but not great" and mostly admire it for how Byrne shows us he's got Sue's back and that Franklin will neither be the book's deus ex machina nor its Dark Phoenix.
Next up is a Dr. Doom 2-parter that appeared in FF 246-7: "Too Many Dooms"/"This Land is Mine!" The story finally picks up the loose plot thread left over from the instant-classic FF 236, the aftermath of which left Doom catatonic and basically a prisoner of the FF in the Baxter Building. After dedicating some subplot time here and there in the interim to remind us he's still there and that some thought has been put into what to do with him, the FF finally deliver the in-stasis villain to the Latverian Embassy. But something is afoot as another Doom is waiting at the embassy with nefarious intent. Meanwhile, another Doom has visited the site of FF 236's tiny adventure and confronted the Puppet Master, retrieving the tiny puppet Doom from Liddleville. It turns out, the catatonic Doom is the real deal, and the others are Doombots. The Doombots restore the true Doom by extracting his consciousness from the Liddleville puppet.

So the whole thing is, of course, a trap for the FF. Each is separated and simultaneously confronted by different Doombots. In the end they are Doom's captives under the effects of an inhibitor ray with Doom hinting he needs them for something. Turns out, that something is to help him take back Latveria, which the footnotes say they helped liberate from him back in FF 200. It seems Doom's usurper has done more harm to Latveria and its citizens than Doom ever did.

246 is fairly humdrum and by-the-numbers in execution, overall, but I think 247 more than makes up for it.

247 has our heroes and Doom in Latveria, where we left them, as the FF try to reconcile the idea of helping Doom take back his power there. Through the next several pages, they get more and more proof that the current ruler Zorba has driven the country into the ground and has terribly mistreated and subjugated the citizens. The FF's skepticism is slowly worn down, and they ultimately throw in with Doom to save the Latverian lives that are endangered by Zorba's robotic forces going after Doom and the FF with no regard to innocent lives. While they battle the robots, Doom tracks down Zorba and takes him down permanently. The FF then depart under an uneasy detante with Doom.

Again, while 246 was a fairly standard tale of heroes falling into a trap and under the villain's thrall, 247 pays it off with a more unusual story. Not only do you have the FF in an uneasy alliance with their archfoe, Byrne shows us that maybe Doom isn't all bad, at least in terms of his ability to lead a peaceful, prosperous country. No, Byrne doesn't give Doom a break as far as his being a dictator demanding absolute obedience, but we also see that there are worse leaders than Doom. Doom, at least, kept his people well provided for and afforded a peaceful existence. Zorba did none of that and also held no regard for their lives. Worst of all, the FF helped put Zorba in power.

I liked how this story provided a different way of looking at Doom. While not depriving him of his villainy, we see that he was certainly a more beneficent ruler than we gave him credit for. Not that anyone is endorsing that kind of rule, but it gives him some sense of nobility that he may not have had [previously.

Also, Byrne's art is much more intricate and dense in part two. He seems to revel in the Baltic architecture and settings while also drawing detailed fights and damage and even making the locals look interesting. he also gives us our first look at young Kristoff, who will figure into the Doom milieu later in the run.

Overall, a good story with a much better conclusion than the start.
Great reviews as always, Lardy. I can't really think of much to add except that Doom had always had some shades of gray, but Byrne took him to the next level and is to be commended for that. Byrne is also to be commended for trying and succeeding at making Sue a credible character despite the continuity baggage.

Can't say much either about FF #248, at least not enough to give it a full-fledged review. I think it's Byrne's second consecutive dud to feature the Inhumans, and the only nice touch is that Crystal & Quicksilver finally give their baby girl a name: Luna. In fairness the story might have worked better as a 2-parter, giving Byrne more room to play around with what is reality and what is not, as well as making the source of the nightmarish illusions a more substantial presence.

Ah, but next, we have one of my favorites, the Gladiator 2-parter!
Any thoughts about 245, Ficque? My initial thought was that you probably wouldn't/didn't like it because of your distaste for the Franklin subplot. However, I was wondering if you might actually have liked how it was resolved as far as Byrne putting the rabbit back in the hat and letting Franklin continue to be a kid.
Lardy, I did like the way Byrne resolved the business about Franklin's powers. I just wish it had been left at that. Which makes me question why Byrne should have broached the topic in the first place. That said, Byrne certainly is not to blame for the way that the writers who followed him unleashed Franklin's powers again.
I think maybe Byrne addressed the topic because the writers previous to his run had used Franklin's powers. I'm fairly sure they did.
That's true, they did (most egregiously Gerry Conway in the mid-70s crossover between Conway's FF and Steve Engelhart's Avengers), but before Byrne addressed the topic, it had, IIRC, lain dormant for the last several years. And I think it should have stayed that way.
Actually, in the more recent run directly preceding Byrne's return, a synopsis from the Omnibus of the intervening issues states, in part, "...Franklin Richards' emerging powers saved his family from the menace of the Brain Parasites." So Moench and Sienkiewicz clearly went there. Seems to me, Byrne found a good way to both address and resolve the matter, rather than just ignore it.
Ah, okay. Thanks, Lardy. Another good reason to not read the Moench/Sienkiewicz FF run. But, yes, I agree Byrne did make lemonade out of that particular lemon of a subplot.

I disagree, Fanfic. The Moench/Sienkiewicz run was a step up from some of the drivel that we had been given in preceding years. I'm not saying it was great or anything, but I didn't think it sucked.
That's all well and good, but I haven't read it and I still don't intend to.
Originally Posted by lancesrealm

I disagree, Fanfic. The Moench/Sienkiewicz run was a step up from some of the drivel that we had been given in preceding years. I'm not saying it was great or anything, but I didn't think it sucked.


I can't really say much about it, not having read a lick of it, but historically speaking: a) it was a very short run of only 10 issues, and b) it's never really referenced much in later stories or in historical articles. Neither of these necessarily speak to a lack of quality but would seem to in terms of lack of significance.

Looking thru synopses of the issue, the only thing that even pops up in my memory is its use of the Ebon Seeker, and that's probably from some OHotMU references I vaguely recall.

Of course, everyone is entitled to differing views. If you'd like to share some specific memories of the run, Lance, please do.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady

Can't say much either about FF #248, at least not enough to give it a full-fledged review. I think it's Byrne's second consecutive dud to feature the Inhumans, and the only nice touch is that Crystal & Quicksilver finally give their baby girl a name: Luna. In fairness the story might have worked better as a 2-parter, giving Byrne more room to play around with what is reality and what is not, as well as making the source of the nightmarish illusions a more substantial presence.


I'll share something with you: I'm not a big Inhumans fan at all. In fact, I can't think of any of the Big Two's kind of super-powered/offset cultures that I'm really crazy about--whether it be the Inhumans, the Eternals, the New Gods or whatever equivalent groups may apply. this is not to say there aren't some great characters within those groups, but generally speaking, stories set within those cultures tend to leave me cold.

I think a lot of this comes from their generally being portrayed as overly formal and difficult to relate to. Generally, they speak in very purple prose, as well. It's like there's this stereotype that all such groups must conform to to the point where there's not a lot that differentiates them. They're almost interchangeable on a certain level. And they generally bore me to tears.



All that said, FF 248, "Nightmare" was only barely an Inhumans story. Yeah, they were there, and their situation on the Moon was a big part of the goings-on, but it was more of an increasingly incredible set of circumstances that lead to fairly unsatisfying resolution. It reminded me a bit of that earlier Byrne issue leading into the Ego adventure in which a catastrophic set of events unfolds that could change the world as we know it, but the reset button is effectively pushed at the end of the story. That's not exactly what this one pulls, but it uses another well-trodden trope to show us that things were not exactly as they seemed. And the entity/device behind it is not exactly well-defined at the end.

It was very well-illustrated by Byrne, and the storytelling device he used wasn't exactly a travesty. (If you look at the title, that basically tells you the solution, albeit not the artificial influence.) It's the same basic device many writers have used before and sense to explore characters' fears and doomsday scenarios. But like most of those, it's pretty forgettable.

I don't have much to say about the Moench/Sienkiewicz run, but I do have a little.

The stories, by and large, were nothing extraordinary. The brain chiggers story was good, as was the "Shogun warriors" story. The artwork was very good throughout these.

The most memorable thing for me was that the stories were far superior to the stories that immediately preceded this run. Marv Wolfman wrote some truly dreadful FF stories. I remember the awful Quasimodo/Iron Man story, as well as the story about the kid who dreamed demonic images of the FF, or something like that. I suppose I have fond memories of the M/S run just because it signified the FF going uphill, rather than remaining stuck at the bottom of the barrel.

I can think of several times in the FF's history where the stories were worse than these. Having said that, Lardy is absolutely correct in saying nothing here really had any long-term impact. They were fun reads when I was 14, though.

Originally Posted by Paladin
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady

Can't say much either about FF #248, at least not enough to give it a full-fledged review. I think it's Byrne's second consecutive dud to feature the Inhumans, and the only nice touch is that Crystal & Quicksilver finally give their baby girl a name: Luna. In fairness the story might have worked better as a 2-parter, giving Byrne more room to play around with what is reality and what is not, as well as making the source of the nightmarish illusions a more substantial presence.


I'll share something with you: I'm not a big Inhumans fan at all. In fact, I can't think of any of the Big Two's kind of super-powered/offset cultures that I'm really crazy about--whether it be the Inhumans, the Eternals, the New Gods or whatever equivalent groups may apply. this is not to say there aren't some great characters within those groups, but generally speaking, stories set within those cultures tend to leave me cold.

I think a lot of this comes from their generally being portrayed as overly formal and difficult to relate to. Generally, they speak in very purple prose, as well. It's like there's this stereotype that all such groups must conform to to the point where there's not a lot that differentiates them. They're almost interchangeable on a certain level. And they generally bore me to tears.





Funnily enough, Lardy, some of the things that you find off-putting about the Inhumans, Eternals, and New Gods are the same reasons I love them! Specifically, the formal airs and the purple prose -- I think it gives them a gravitas I find lacking in some of the more colloquial, down-to-earth teams.

In the late 80s, Ann Nocenti wrote what I thought was a very good OGN focusing on the Inhumans. I feel it succeeded in demystifying the Inhumans and exposing their failings as sentient beings, while still maintaining the gravitas.

Unfortunately, it was drawn by Bret Blevins.

But I still think it's worth reading. It was finally reprinted last year in the "Inhumans: By Right of Birth" trade.
Originally Posted by lancesrealm


The most memorable thing for me was that the stories were far superior to the stories that immediately preceded this run. Marv Wolfman wrote some truly dreadful FF stories. I remember the awful Quasimodo/Iron Man story, as well as the story about the kid who dreamed demonic images of the FF, or something like that. I suppose I have fond memories of the M/S run just because it signified the FF going uphill, rather than remaining stuck at the bottom of the barrel.




I haven't read any of Marv's FF run other than the last year's worth with Byrne. Those issues seemed pretty good, though Byrne's art probably elevated the scripts considerably. It's certainly interesting that you view the Moench/Sienkiewicz run as a big step in the right direction
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady


Funnily enough, Lardy, some of the things that you find off-putting about the Inhumans, Eternals, and New Gods are the same reasons I love them! Specifically, the formal airs and the purple prose -- I think it gives them a gravitas I find lacking in some of the more colloquial, down-to-earth teams.

In the late 80s, Ann Nocenti wrote what I thought was a very good OGN focusing on the Inhumans. I feel it succeeded in demystifying the Inhumans and exposing their failings as sentient beings, while still maintaining the gravitas.

Unfortunately, it was drawn by Bret Blevins.

But I still think it's worth reading. It was finally reprinted last year in the "Inhumans: By Right of Birth" trade.


Probably the only Inhumans story I kinda got into was that Marvel Knights series by Paul Jenkins and Jae Lee. The themes were pretty innovative for the property, but I think the biggest draw was Jae Lee's stunning and dramatic art. I think it's probably the best project that either Jenkins or Lee have ever done, but it still didn't make me a long-term fan of the Inhumans.
My only problem with the Paul Jenkins/Jae Lee mini-series is that Crystal was hardly in it at all. I seem to remember that as being the first sign of the apparent Anti-Crystal embargo at Marvel which is now going into its third decade.

And before anyone says anything, yes, I know that Crystal is currently headlining one of the books in the Inhumans franchise, but she has a different look and a different attitude, both of which I find off-putting. As far as I'm concerned, if it's not an organic evolution of the Crystal I know and love, then I'm not reading it.
Crystal often seems to fall by the wayside in the context of her fellow Inhumans. She seems more interesting away from them with the Avengers or the FF.

To a lesser extent, this also seems true of Medusa. It always seems like she loves Black Bolt just because she does. Just one reason why it's hard for me to get into the royal family. shrug
Good points well taken, Lardy. But I do think that there is a writer out there who could make Crystal work within the context of the Inhumans and, better yet, playing up the sisterly dynamics between her and Medusa, sort of like a loose superhero version of the prose novel "The Mists of Avalon," which I started reading on Harbi's recommendation.
Fantastic Four 249-250

After a year-and-a-half of exploring various moods and styles and themes with extremely mixed results, Byrne finally delivers a FF story that is pure, unpretentious, comic book-y fun.

It's clear from the get-go that Byrne is having a ball -- just look at that cover, where Byrne makes it abundantly clear that, underneath the purple skin and Mohawk hairstyle, Gladiator really IS Marvel's version of Byrne's beloved Superman. Hyperion who?

Gladiator, for the laypersons, was introduced by Chris Claremont & Dave Cockrum in Uncanny X-Men, in what turned out to be Cockrum's last issue of his first X-Men run. He was the leader of the alien Shi'ar race's goon squad, the Imperial Guard, all of whom suspiciously resembled members of the team that had been Cockrum's previous gig, the Legion of Superheroes. It was all done in a spirit of playfulness, and judging by an interview I read with Cockrum, he doesn't seem to have been sure at the time whether Gladiator was supposed to be Superboy or Mon-El or a hybrid of the two. But when Byrne replaced Cockrum on Uncanny X-Men, and he and Claremont brought back the Imperial Guard for the climax of the Dark Phoenix Saga, there was no doubt whatsoever that Byrne saw Gladiator as Super-MAN! Who just happened to be Byrne's favorite superhero.

So I'm guessing that Byrne figured that as long as he was working on his favorite Marvel superheroes, the Fantastic Four, he might as well bring in the closest thing Marvel had to his favorite DC superhero. Especially considering he had an anniversary issue of FF, 250 to be exact, coming up.

And THEN, just to sweeten the pot, Byrne throws in the X-Men (or is it really them?), Spider-Man, and Captain America, delivering a rock-'em, sock-'em romp that is a joy to read.

This story's pleasures are entirely superficial, but there's nothing at all wrong with that. I even find it easier than usual to forgive the dubious physics and science (not that I've ever cared that much about such things in a superhero comic book, unless it's so ridiculous that it's an insult to the intelligence of someone who barely understands basic science.)
Lardy, would you prefer that I waited until you catch up before I review FF 251-252, or should I go ahead? Either way is OK with me.
D'Oh! I read those a few days ago but forgot to review! I'll try to do mine tonight or tomorrow. But if you really want to, you can go ahead.
It's all right. I don't mind waiting. One of the things I've been enjoying the most about this particular re-read is the flexible, leisurely pace.
Yeah. Not to besmirch the Legion Re-read threads, but the rigid structure with no allowance for breaks is something I get burned out on over time.
(Sorry for the wait, Dahling! love )

Going into reading the two-parter that appeared in FF 249-250 ("Man and Super-Man"/"X-Factor"), I thought that this might be a story to challenge my top three faves in this re-read, based upon my fond memories of said story I originally read as a teenager. Turns out, though, that adult-me is not nearly as impressed, so the top three stand as ranked.

Don't get me wrong: there is nothing terribly wrong with this story. It's both action-packed and well-rendered. But it's also overblown. It's basically a 2-issue slugfest in which the second issue happens to also be double-sized. It also comes off as a blatant attempt to drum up some extra sales for the book with what appears to be an X-Men cross-over. To add insult to injury, the X-Men who appear are not actually those characters at all.

Though fighting is obviously an aspect of the FF's adventures, they are also about more than that. Mysteries to be solved. Worlds to explore. Wonder, amazement and spectacle. Discovery. Family. Though there is an element of mystery to this tale, it is basically a simple story that could have been told in any standard superhero book, and the mystery isn't even well-explained in the end.

I think the title of the first issue, "Man and Super-Man", gives away Byrne's impetus for creating this tale: exploring these Marvel characters taking on a stand-in for Superman. It may not have crossed my mind if not for the title, but looking ahead to his later work on DC's flagship character, it's easy to see that Byrne may have been jonesing to work on big blue at that point already. Gladiator was created as a Kryptonian-type analogy for the Imperial Guard (itself a LSH analogy), so it's easy to see Byrne using him.

Also: look at these two covers:

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Byrne homaging Byrne with the analogies spelled out, right?

So apparently Supes would wipe the floor clean with the FF, according to Byrne. I'd like to think Reed could figure out a way to at least make the FF look more respectable, but he's probably right.

Anyway, what amounts to 2.5 issues of the FF battling what is essentially a good guy (with a few Skrulls put into the mix) seems a bit much. Plus, I don't think Byrne puts much juice into the plot. 1) There's some buildup about the nature of Gladiator's powers, but Reed doesn't explain them very well beyond there being a psionic element to them. It wouldn't bother me if there hadn't been such an emphasis on the mystery throughout. I, for one, love it when Reed gives us detailed explanations for things; it's part of his charm. 2) Gladiator's confrontation with the FF was caused by his being "dazed and confused" in the aftermath of his initial Skrull confrontation. Good enough for a one-off story but very much a waste of 2.5 issues!

It certainly had some entertainment value, especially in getting to see Byrne render some of the X-characters he'd left behind in a prior classic run as well as always welcome guest appearances by Spider-man and Captain America. But it doesn't hold a candle to Byrne's best FF stories already behind him and still ahead in his run.
^Wow! I never noticed that Byrne featured the best possible Legion stand-ins for the FF in that Superman cover! lol
BTW, Ficque, I avoided reading your review until after I'd done mine to kind of make mine as fresh as possible. While you note that the "story's pleasures are entirely superficial", you're review is overall much more positive than mine comes across. I know that mine may seem harsh, but it is primarily under the lens of what makes a good or great FF story that I view it. i think it would have been great as a one-off, but the sheer number of pages devoted to it seems like overkill.

I'm curious, though, as to whether this one enters your personal top three of the run to this point.
Originally Posted by Paladin
(Sorry for the wait, Dahling! love )


Awwww...that's very sweet of you, Lardy. Thank you. love

But no worries, because, like we were both saying a few posts ago, this is a very leisurely and flexible re-read.

I did want to tell you that I'm very busy ATM, having taken on a couple of side projects in addition to my novel, so I'm not sure when I'll be able to make a considered reply to your recent posts. Hopefully sooner rather than later.

In the meantime, though, I do have a moment right now to quickly answer the question in your most recent post:

As much as I enjoyed the Gladiator story, I wouldn't put it in my Top Three, mainly because of its lack of substance. All my favorite Byrne FF stories have both style and substance.
Originally Posted by Paladin
^Wow! I never noticed that Byrne featured the best possible Legion stand-ins for the FF in that Superman cover! lol


I had never noticed it before, either. That is so awesome! Clever Byrne.

Thanks for pointing it out, Lardy.
Originally Posted by Paladin
BTW, Ficque, I avoided reading your review until after I'd done mine to kind of make mine as fresh as possible. While you note that the "story's pleasures are entirely superficial", you're review is overall much more positive than mine comes across. I know that mine may seem harsh, but it is primarily under the lens of what makes a good or great FF story that I view it. i think it would have been great as a one-off, but the sheer number of pages devoted to it seems like overkill.


I don't think your review is excessively harsh, Lardy. I think it's critical but fair and well-thought-out. And I agree with you that it should have been a one-off, with everything squeezed into issue 250. That would have kicked ass.

In a way, the Gladiator vs FF story reminds me a bit of the Simonson FF, though it's not nearly as satisfying as Simonson's best issues, including the one where Simonson himself used Gladiator. IMO, Simonson always emphasized cosmic spectacle over characterization, but there were always lively ideas percolating under the shiny surface (with the possible exception of the Spidey/Hulk/Ghost Rider/Wolverine arc, by far the weakest story in the otherwise outstanding Simonson FF run.) Byrne's Gladiator vs FF story is simply infectious fun, and I certainly respect that you found it somewhat less infectious than I did.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
I don't think your review is excessively harsh, Lardy. I think it's critical but fair and well-thought-out. And I agree with you that it should have been a one-off, with everything squeezed into issue 250. That would have kicked ass.


Oh, definitely! nod

I think one of the better parts of the story is the subtext I mentioned, most of it unintended at the time by Byrne. He definitely intended to use Gladiator as a Superman analogy, but he couldn't have known then that he would go on to relaunch Superman a few years later and define him for around 10-15 years. He'd already worked on X-Men, was currently producing a lengthy, soon-to-be classic run on FF and would afterwards do the Superman relaunch. So this one 2-parter, ironically, incorporated elements of all three runs that probably now define his career more than any other works of his! Weird, huh? hmmm

Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
IMO, Simonson always emphasized cosmic spectacle over characterization, but there were always lively ideas percolating under the shiny surface (with the possible exception of the Spidey/Hulk/Ghost Rider/Wolverine arc, by far the weakest story in the otherwise outstanding Simonson FF run.)


That's a good analogy comparing similar, more frivolous points in Byrne's and Simonson's runs. I liked, though, that there was a broader point behind Simonson's story in which he attempted to show us that a what the fans might want (a new FF all-star line-up comprised of characters from top-selling books) isn't really the FF at all. Unfortunately, I think many fans missed the point and ate it up. But it was fun for what it was, and Art Adams was a genuine delight on guest pencils.
Well, I'm just about ready to resume the Byrne FF Re-Read, but first there's a couple items of business I need to take care of. The first is my belated reply to Lardy's last post:

Originally Posted by Paladin
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
IMO, Simonson always emphasized cosmic spectacle over characterization, but there were always lively ideas percolating under the shiny surface (with the possible exception of the Spidey/Hulk/Ghost Rider/Wolverine arc, by far the weakest story in the otherwise outstanding Simonson FF run.)


That's a good analogy comparing similar, more frivolous points in Byrne's and Simonson's runs. I liked, though, that there was a broader point behind Simonson's story in which he attempted to show us that a what the fans might want (a new FF all-star line-up comprised of characters from top-selling books) isn't really the FF at all. Unfortunately, I think many fans missed the point and ate it up. But it was fun for what it was, and Art Adams was a genuine delight on guest pencils.


Agreed 100%. It was positively dripping with smart meta-commentary, and I think Simonson completely outdid himself with the meta-text in what proved to be his final FF arc, the one with the time-space continuum being run as a heartless corporate bureaucracy by identical clones of Marvel's top continuity cop at the time, Mark Gruenwald. I'm assuming Gruenwald was in on the joke, as he was then-EiC Tom DeFalco's second-in-command, but it still must have stung on some level. The point Simonson seemed to be making, IMO, is that too much adherence to continuity is counter-productive to creativity.

The second item of business is to explain that, while I've been MIA from this thread, it's been due to Byrne-relevant reasons. Very much so, as it involves not only another work of Byrne's from during his 80s peak, but also one that Byrne more or less cut from whole cloth. I'm talking about Alpha Flight, eh?

For some reason, the planets have aligned in such a way recently that I've been doing a major re-evaluation of a large chunk of the Byrne oeuvre. And Alpha Flight was long past due for me to approach with a fresh perspective. Until recently, my position on Byrne's Alpha Flight was that the relatively light-hearted first issue was great, but it was all downhill after the second issue, where Byrne pulled a jarring shift in tone with the scene where Marrina disembowels Puck. This was followed by a lot of horror-movie-styled mystical/conspiracy stuff that I just could not wrap my head around on my first read of it, many years ago.

This recent re-read was done with a much more open mind on my part. I had finally come around to being willing to accept Byrne's weird and creepy Alpha Flight run on its own terms! And when read with that attitude, it's actually quite good! I now believe that Byrne did some of the most dynamic and powerful art of his career on Alpha Flight. And the stories weren't half-bad either. The characters weren't that deep, but they were really cool to look at, and there was a lot of potential in the characters that was eventually explored by the more talented of Byrne's successors (James Hudnall from 67 to 86, Fabian Nicieza from 87 to 101, and...uh...that's about it. But that's still almost three consecutive years of solid stories.)

Such an impression did this Alpha Flight re-read make me, that it inspired me to take a break from my stalled novel-for-adults project and get back into fan fiction (temporarily) with my first Alpha Flight fic ever! Details and a link are in the "My Non-Legion, Non-DCU Fanfic Projects" thread in the Bits forum.

Okay. Done. Coming this weekend, reviews of FF #251-252, the beginning of Byrne's Negative Zone Saga!!

(And thanks for your patience, Lardy. You rock.)
Gawd, I loved me some Alpha Flight! Byrne's run and my love for the characters he instilled captivated me so much as a teenager that I stuck with the book thru the lower 100s, including Mantlo's too-long, depressing run that basically did all it could to tear down what Byrne did. Yes, Byrne's run had a large share of darkness, but Mantlo clearly took those elements what he felt must have made the book successful. So he reveled in it.

At that age, I was fiercely devoted to books and favorite characters, so I stuck with it, even when there were very few bright spots. What he did with Roger Bochs/Box was especially unforgivable. Here you had what should have been a breakthrough character, a rare parapalegic action hero, and you make him utterly pathetic and kill him off. Not a good message.

You're right that there was a resurgence with Hudnall and Nicieza, and it was good for a while and restored some of what Mantlo had torn down. But I feel that the damage had indeed been done regardless and that Alpha Flight has never recovered because of it.

Originally Posted by Fanfic lady
(And thanks for your patience, Lardy. You rock.)


Aw..... blush
Very well said, Lardy. And I think Hudnall and Nicieza's work is all the more accomplished considering what an utter dog's breakfast the Mantlo run was. Furthermore, Mantlo not only sent negative, ignorant messages about disabled people, but also LGBT people. Byrne had intended for Jean-Paul to be revealed as gay at some point, but then-EiC Shooter kept a lid on it and it was still unrevealed after Byrne left. Mantlo intended to have Jean-Paul die of AIDS, which would have been even more offensive than what he did with Roger. And then there's the Mantlo thing about Walter's consciousness taking over Narya's dead body and becoming a woman. Those scenes are some of the most cringe-inducing in the original AF series' long run, because it's obvious that neither Mantlo nor anyone in editorial at the time understood either the psychology of the transgendered, or made the slightest effort to bring plausibility and humanism to the concept of a heterosexual man suddenly finding himself living against his will as a woman. (Vague digression: Blake Edwards' early 90s movie "Switch" actually did a half-decent job with that premise, IMO. Certainly, it was one of the few entertainments of that time to deal with LGBT themes in a way that wasn't completely embarrassing.)

Rant over. I'll just reiterate, thank the Gods for Hudnall and Nicieza (and Danny Fingeroth, who edited the best AF issues by both writers.)
I'll admit I was a bit young to process the implications of "Wanda" Langkowski's story. Even now, my recollection of all the handling isn't very sharp. But I was glad at the time to see Sasquatch not dead anymore, though it being at the expense of Snowbird was a bummer. I clearly recall, however, all of Roger's beats, and it still pisses me off even more than it did back then.

I remember being extremely disappointed in what Mantlo did with the twins' origin (though I'm glad Jean-Paul didn't die of AIDS) and especially Puck's backstory. Mantlo showing that Puck wasn't always a dwarf cheapened that groundbreaking character almost as much as the sickening Roger Bochs shit.

I wish Byrne had stayed for a longer run or that maybe someone like Roger Stern had taken over for him, so that all those plot threads Byrne left could have been better tied up. But it's pretty well-known that Byrne was never overly fond of working on the book and was glad to leave. I'm glad, though, that the body of work itself doesn't reflect his apathy for the material. He still put excellent effort into it that will be remembered fondly by his fans and even by many of his detractors.
Thanks for mentioning Puck. I fully agree with you, and I don't know how that additional offense on Mantlo's part slipped my mind, especially considering that Puck's my favorite male Alpha Flight member. Maybe because Nicieza did a good job of undoing what Mantlo had done to Puck?

Agreed, too, that even if the "Asgardian Elf" origin for the Beaubier twins was another embarrassment from the Mantlo era, at least it ensured Jean-Paul's survival. And that one was especially easy to undo, since lies are pretty much Loki's specialty.

Regarding Byrne's apathy for his Alpha Flight run, it is really something how, with a lot of creators, what is considered in hindsight to be among their finest works were just paycheck jobs to the creators themselves. I guess it's a testament to Byrne's high standards at that time. And I think credit should also go to Denny O'Neil, who edited Byrne's entire AF run and has said that he enjoyed doing it, adding that he became especially fond of Puck and Heather.
Ficque, will we be resuming soon? I must admit that I'm missing these!
Most definitely, Lardy. I'm so sorry for the delay. I promise you I'll have posted a review of #251-252 before I go to bed tonight.
Fantastic Four #251-252

After a year-and-half of aperitifs (some of them quite tasty), Byrne unleashes his first FF epic. The first issue is pretty much an extended prologue, but no less effective for that, and it shows just how character-driven this book has become with Byrne at the helm. We begin with Reed unveiling to Ben the latest, state-of-the-art, foolproof (or so Reed thinks) mode of transportation into the Negative Zone, followed by Ben going for a stroll and clearing up a gridlock as only he can, Johnny auditing an acting class attended by his evil ex-girlfriend's former roommate, Julie, who in turn introduces him to her friend Sharon, who falls for him at first sight. Then some sensitively executed scenes between Susan & Franklin, and Ben & Alicia. Emotional farewells are the prelude the spectacular launch of Reed's new module, with the other three FF members accompanying him, and a shocker of an ending, where we see that the Baxter Building has been invaded by none other than Annihilus, scourge of the Negative Zone! In all, a very satisfying issue, proving once again Byrne's mastery of understatement.

I find issue #252 a bit more problematic, but I don't think Byrne is entirely to blame for what I perceive as its faults. This issue has an experimental format, where every page (plus the front cover) is laid out sideways. This should have led to some really jaw-droppingly powerful art, but Byrne seems to be holding back, playing it safe, and I wonder how much that has to do with then-EiC Jim Shooter's tendency at the time to have Marvel artists compose their pages as rigidly and downright stiffly as possible. I think that if Byrne wasn't going to be allowed to run wild with expansive European-style layouts, then there was no point in this format experiment in the first place. Now, most of the art's faults could be forgiven if the script delivered the goods, but instead, Byrne gives us a warmed-over 60s & 70s sci-fi TV plot about the FF's well-intentioned explorations leading to death, destruction, and disaster. The only moments the issue really comes alive for me is the brief subplot scene of Annihilus running amok inside the Baxter Building, terrorizing poor Franklin and making the kid a prisoner, as he has already done with Alicia. An underwhelming start to the Negative Zone Saga proper, then (in my opinion.)

Apropos of very little, I hope Lardy will indulge a little quirk of mine, my tendency to "hear" voices from cartoons I grew up with while reading comic book dialogue. I've always thought that Annihilus should "sound" like the late, great voice actor Chris Latta doing his Starscream/Cobra Commander voice. Does anyone agree? If not, what does Annihilus's "voice" sound like to you?
It's exciting to start Byrne's longest epic on the book to date, especially knowing that I've never read the bulk of it. I was a regular Avengers reader at the time, so I know I read that one, but I've definitely not read the early parts and may or may not have followed the story from the Avengers issue.

I'm also excited because the storyline features the FF doing what I feel makes them different from any generic super team: exploration. Issue 251 ("Into the Negative Zone") sets this up beautifully with a fairly quiet story that serves as a prologue to the adventure. I love that they're not going for any particular purpose other than to see what's out there. Lots of nice little character vignettes dot the issue, including Reed having to act as landlord. And then there are several pages simply devoted to showing their ship launch and transition into the Zone. But we're left with a dire danger at home as Annihilus has used the FF's launch to crossed over to Earth, putting Alicia, Franklin and everyone else in peril.

Beautiful work by Byrne on what some may deem a "boring" transition issue, but it stands as one of my favorite individual issues to this point in the run.

Issue 252, "Cityscape", immediately has the FF run into their first stop in the Zone. As Fick mentions, the issue is drawn "widescreen" style and has to be read sideways. I'm not sure what the purpose was, other than an opportunity for Byrne to experiment artistically. I've seen countless times that he obviously has a passion for sci-fi stories and settings, so maybe he felt this could allow him to show things from literally a different angle and show readers this was a different kind of story. If so, I'm surprised he didn't just do the entirety of the Negative Zone exploration storyline like that to kind of highlight the strangeness of the realm. But he didn't, so it's kind of a curiosity.

While I'll agree with Fick that the presentation isn't exactly executed in a revolutionary, eye-popping manner (whether due to Shooter's interference or not), I do think it's pretty attractive and, at times, presents layouts that are different enough to merit the change. I think it would have worked better in a completely self-contained story or as the climactic part of a large story. Used in this manner, it just seems odd and a bit of a stunt overall.

As for the story itself, again, I know Byrne has a soft spot for Twilight Zone-style sci-fi, and this is another example of it, just as he had done recently in 239 ("Wendy's Friends"), 241 ("Render Unto Caesar!") and 248 ("Nightmare!") to varying degrees. Like those, this one's also a little half-baked. In this case the basic lesson and solution are pretty simple and easy to figure out. This one is better than those three, in my opinion, so he is learning something about telling that kind of story. But it's still just this on the other side of being excellent.

I think what it needed was more development with Taiya and Tannar. Maybe something as little as him continuing to stand for her as she was being taken off for sacrifice instead of showing resignation after he had shown solidarity with her earlier.

But even more, in those opening pages as I was trying to guess what her reason for being shunned, my guesses as to what the reason was was more interesting than what was eventually revealed. My working theory was that Taiya might have been found unable to bear children. If that was the cultural bias, it would have made her mate Tannar's continued devotion to her especially poignant.

But instead, we learn that a "Bride of Ootah" is an apparent sacrificial offering, not unlike that of virgins to volcanoes in South American tribes of yore. No information as to how the brides are chosen or why they are shunned. So, yeah, it's a little empty and not as good as the story was playing out in my head.

But we get a lot of inspired art from Byrne, sometimes enhanced by the unusual format. And I like that Johnny and Ben look up to Sue as de facto leader when Reed is out of action. It's also okay to me that she doesn't exactly knock it out of the park with her decision-making in that role because she did the best with the info she had at hand. Plus, it's not all that easy to control Ben and Johnny when they've worked up a head of steam. In any case it wasn't an easy problem to solve with the entity's eventual complete encroachment of the planet endangering the tribe.

And Byrne continue to tease the danger back home as Annihilus threatens little Franklin. I like that Franklin shows a little bit of spunk beyond just childlike terror. And it will be interesting to see how the story on earth progresses.

Overall, a great first issue and a somewhat problematic second issue to kick off Byrne's biggest storyline to date. Whatever my feelings on 252, which are not all negative, I admire Byrne's artistry and his spot-on characterizations of the Four. In a way this is the Byrne epic I've been waiting for in that it highlights their most essential purpose, so I'm very excited to read the rest of it!
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Apropos of very little, I hope Lardy will indulge a little quirk of mine, my tendency to "hear" voices from cartoons I grew up with while reading comic book dialogue. I've always thought that Annihilus should "sound" like the late, great voice actor Chris Latta doing his Starscream/Cobra Commander voice. Does anyone agree? If not, what does Annihilus's "voice" sound like to you?


Hm. In light of some of the roles Annihilus has played in recent big cosmic storylines like Annihilation, I tend to see him portrayed with a voice with less of a comic overtone like Starscream and Cobra Commander. Maybe something more deep and foreboding like, I think, Super Friends Super Powers-era Darkseid, maybe? (If I'm remembering the voice correctly?)
Originally Posted by Paladin
I'm also excited because the storyline features the FF doing what I feel makes them different from any generic super team: exploration. Issue 251 ("Into the Negative Zone") sets this up beautifully with a fairly quiet story that serves as a prologue to the adventure. I love that they're not going for any particular purpose other than to see what's out there.


Very well said, Lardy. I believe it was Mark Waid who coined the term "Imaginauts." Even though I think Waid's FF run failed in the long run, it did start with a lot of promise. Eh, like everything else that went wrong with Marvel during the first half of the 2000s, I blame Bill Jemas.

Originally Posted by Paladin
Beautiful work by Byrne on what some may deem a "boring" transition issue, but it stands as one of my favorite individual issues to this point in the run.


Agreed 100%.

Originally Posted by Paladin
As Fick mentions, the issue is drawn "widescreen" style and has to be read sideways. I'm not sure what the purpose was, other than an opportunity for Byrne to experiment artistically. I've seen countless times that he obviously has a passion for sci-fi stories and settings, so maybe he felt this could allow him to show things from literally a different angle and show readers this was a different kind of story. If so, I'm surprised he didn't just do the entirety of the Negative Zone exploration storyline like that to kind of highlight the strangeness of the realm. But he didn't, so it's kind of a curiosity.

While I'll agree with Fick that the presentation isn't exactly executed in a revolutionary, eye-popping manner (whether due to Shooter's interference or not), I do think it's pretty attractive and, at times, presents layouts that are different enough to merit the change. I think it would have worked better in a completely self-contained story or as the climactic part of a large story. Used in this manner, it just seems odd and a bit of a stunt overall.


Good point about how the whole storyline could have been in the experimental sideways format. That would certainly make this issue more than a novelty of qualified success.


Originally Posted by Paladin
As for the story itself, again, I know Byrne has a soft spot for Twilight Zone-style sci-fi, and this is another example of it, just as he had done recently in 239 ("Wendy's Friends"), 241 ("Render Unto Caesar!") and 248 ("Nightmare!") to varying degrees. Like those, this one's also a little half-baked. In this case the basic lesson and solution are pretty simple and easy to figure out. This one is better than those three, in my opinion, so he is learning something about telling that kind of story. But it's still just this on the other side of being excellent.


Again, agreed 100%.
Originally Posted by Paladin
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Apropos of very little, I hope Lardy will indulge a little quirk of mine, my tendency to "hear" voices from cartoons I grew up with while reading comic book dialogue. I've always thought that Annihilus should "sound" like the late, great voice actor Chris Latta doing his Starscream/Cobra Commander voice. Does anyone agree? If not, what does Annihilus's "voice" sound like to you?


Hm. In light of some of the roles Annihilus has played in recent big cosmic storylines like Annihilation, I tend to see him portrayed with a voice with less of a comic overtone like Starscream and Cobra Commander. Maybe something more deep and foreboding like, I think, Super Friends Super Powers-era Darkseid, maybe? (If I'm remembering the voice correctly?)


Funnily enough, the Super Friends/Super Powers animated Darkseid voice (which, BTW, was done by Frank Welker during the same years he was playing Megatron on Transformers and Dr. Claw on Inspector Gadget) has always seemed to me like the perfect fit not for Annihilus, but for the Kree Supreme Intelligence. I guess I feel that since Annihilus is basically a very large and very dangerous insect, he should have a very shrill voice, as Real Life insects tend to do.
Lardy, I'm 99.99 percent sure that I'll have more Byrne FF reviews posted here before I go to bed tonight.

And I hope you don't mind if I once again review three issues (253-255) at once, because the cliffhanger to 254 is such a downer. This would also have the benefit of our next reviews being of the Avengers 233/FF 256 cross-over, which I remember as being pretty awesome!
That's fine. I'll read them soon.
Great! Thank you, Lardy.
Fantastic Four 253-255

And so we reach what might be called "Act Two" of the Negative Zone Saga. In the traditional three-act dramatic structure, the first act is mostly set-up, the third act is the climax and resolution, with the second act in between being often the most difficult for a writer to pull of 100% successfully. I wouldn't say that Byrne's Act Two rates as more than a qualified success, but that's still better than what a lot of other comic book writers (some of whom were more seasoned as writers than Byrne) were managing at the time.

The first third (issue 253,) is arguably the most creatively accomplished of the Byrne FF's adventures in the Negative Zone. Byrne the artist is in top form, producing stunning cosmic panoramas and starships with strikingly cavernous interiors, along with an interestingly-designed race of bulky green aliens on a pilgrimage (or are they really?) And Byrne the writer, while still bound to familiar science-fiction tropes from 60s and 70s TV shows, gives us an engaging story with plot twists that feel organic and an ending that is genuinely affecting. There is also a brief subplot tangent which doesn't come off quite as well as the rest of the issue -- the first panel of the sequence, with Julie and Sharon in their apartment and Julie unsure if her makeover is really her, is fine, but when Julie calls the Baxter Buiding...Annihilus answers the phone, and tells Julie that Johnny's not there, before crushing the phone receiver with his bare hand. That, in my opinion, is just silly. Wouldn't it have been more effective and dramatic if Annihilus had not answered the phone, but rather smashed it without answering it? Either way, the villain's subsequent soliloquy comes across to me as cliché and tedious.

The last two words in the paragraph above also, sadly, apply to most of the content of the 2-parter in issues 254-255. The opening scenes with the FF adopting garb that recalls nothing so much as Middle Eastern human-wear is cringeworthy (if it had happened in a 60s or even an early 70s comic, I could have forgiven it, but in an early 80s context, such appropriations of non-American cultures feel unacceptable.) The villain, Mantracora, is by this time a familiar Byrne type -- the slimy invertebrate creature hiding behind a vertebrate, humanoid façade, and it comes across to me as nothing less than self-cannibalization on the creator's part. Ironically, the tangent scene in 254 is a vast improvement over the one in the previous issue -- Annihilus talks to himself a lot less, and instead finally gets on with putting his evil plan into motion. Outside the Baxter Building, two unsuspecting super-heroines -- gal pals and Avengers teammates She-Hulk and Wasp -- banter charmingly before having an unexpected encounter with the effects of the villain's unfolding scheme; this scene also sets up the upcoming cross-over with the Avengers, whose book was being written at the time by Byrne's good friend Roger Stern.

But before we get there, we have to deal with the melodramatic and tedious outcome of the FF's clash with Mantracora, which stretches on for most of issue 255, alleviated only by the opening pages set without and within the Baxter Building. Daredevil's appearance doesn't seem to me to have much point other than proving that Byrne can draw any of the vintage superheroes beautifully, but the confrontation between Alicia Masters and Annihilus is genuinely scary and disturbing, and it also places the FF's actions over the years in a troubling perspective -- in a nutshell, are the FF oppressive missionaries and plunderers, or ambassadors of goodwill towards all foreign civilizations across the universe? This is potentially meaty stuff, and I can't remember at the moment if Byrne explores it further during his FF run or not, but I hope for the former. In the meantime, the issue at hand finally redeems itself with a stunning final page which pays homage to peak-era Lee/Kirby FF while cleverly avoiding an empty rehash of the past, and setting readers up for the double-whammy climax, coming up simultaneously in the aforementioned crossover of Avengers 233 with FF 256!!
Fick really covers the bases very well in her above analysis of FF 253-255 so well that I think my commentary may be a little bit shorter than usual. Or maybe it'll be as long? We'll see!

FF 253, "Quest", kicks off our next stop in the FF's exploration of the Negative Zone. This one feels like Byrne's most successful venture yet into the kind of Twilight Zone/Star Trek one-offs he's been telling. Yet it still has one flaw keeping it from perfection. Unless I'm just super-dense, it's not completely clear in the art what is so unsuitable about the new world the aliens have found. The full page, mostly-silent introduction to this world makes it seem like its strangeness of lush flora and fauna are just too much for them to comprehend. The subsequent dialogue spells out that its atmosphere is incompatible and poisonous for this species which has evolved too far from its original state to tolerate a non-artificial atmosphere. I can accept this, but the art should have shown more of a physical diffculty and less of what looked like revulsion or simply fear.

In the end it's mostly a quibble for what is, all in all, a very affecting issue, but that was my reaction and it comes from my holding Byrne to a high artistic standard.

It's also an interesting and, I think, an overall good choice that the FF come off somewhat as background characters in their own book. This is the Kestorians' story, and I admire the choice.

254, "The Minds of Mantracora", features 2 bits that make it very notable for me:

1) She-Hulk, along with the Wasp, makes a guest appearance. This is huge for me because it is a preview, intentionally or not (probably not), of her future membership in the FF. Seeing the FF's status quo changed with Shulky as a member, was what drew young me to start picking up FF! I wasn't particularly a fan of hers at the time, but I was intrigued enough to see what was up. As it happened, I did become a huge fan of her over the time of her membership and have always liked how he wrote and drew her ever since. So this is a nice appetizer of good things to come later in the run.

2) Reed and Sue, not so subtly get busy in this issue (though a stray comment of Sue's that she was glad Reed could "afford a few minutes with your wife" kind of casts aspersions on his performance... lol ). It's pretty important because it sets up future developments. Plus, it's nice to see that Reed and Sue have a relatable marriage and not just some sterile Ward and June Cleaver thing. I think Byrne worked harder to do that than most writers did.

FF 255, "Trapped!", concludes both the Mantracora story and the exploratory part of the Negative Zone storyline. Fick mentions that this 2-parter didn't have all that much going for it, and she's correct. However, I did like the idea of having Reed's disembodied intellect taking over the ship and saving the day. I especially like the undertone of Sue's fear of Reed possibly not being restored to his body. It's not stated, but this situation is the literal extension of how Reed's intellectual abilities sometimes seem to cut him off from his humanity. It's basically the realization of all her fears. And in the cliffhanger, there's a stop-gap but one not completely resolved, and you can see her fear lingering. I'd say that that one subtle touch redeems the otherwise uninspired Mantrcora story.

Maybe I'm wrong for doing so, but I enjoy cameos that Byrne does, like the extended one with Daredevil this issue. I like seeing him have a chance to draw other characters in that we don't ordinarily get to see him depict much. Plus, New York has an ASS-load of super-heroes running around, so why not?

So the Negative Zone exploration is a mixed bag, but the Annihilus subplot sure looks to be building to a memorable finale. Can't wait to read it!

P.S. Guess it wasn't such a short write-up, after all! grin
Thanks for the kind words, Lardy.

Before Byrne and Stern, She-Hulk had been an obnoxious caricature. Both creators, in their respective books, FF and Avengers, helped her get in touch with her sense of humor and helped her learn to not only accept herself, but to revel in the super-powers and the Amazonian-to-the-extreme physique which made her different to most women. It was a remarkable turnaround, once again proving that there are no bad characters, just bad writing.

Lardy's comments about Reed & Susan's seemingly newfound sex drives made me laugh. I mean, they had to have...done it...at least once before to conceive Franklin, but now I have these images of them which I feel I have to put in a spoiler box to keep this thread work-safe and family-friendly:

I'm picturing Reed masturbating so often and so hard that his penis gets completely over-stretched and distorted, and it won't return to its natural shape. And Susan turning invisible so she can pleasure herself without worrying about someone walking in on her. And Reed with an enormous collection of super-porn. eek What happens if little Franklin accidentally stumbles on one of Daddy's "personal" videos and gets curious? Will they then have to take him to a super-therapist to deal with the super-trauma? Will it be Doc Samson? Or even Moonstone? hmmm


(I've got such a sick mind.) blush

And, yes, I do agree that Byrne was the first FF writer to change Reed and Susan from starchy nuclear-couple caricatures into people who were sympathetic and relatable despite their super-powers.

Finally, I can't wait to read the concluding crossover, either. Who knows, I might even take no more than one week to post my next review. lol
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Who knows, I might even take no more than one week to post my next review. lol


Famous last words... blush

Lardy, I'm so sorry I've fallen behind *again*, but as I'm sure you've noticed from my other posts in the last few days, I'm kind of on a roll with the fics. But I *promise* that once the Gobots one is posted on Monday, will get to what I need to do for this thread.
That's fine. I personally haven't read the next 2 stories yet. I MAY go ahead and read them after I finish up Essential PPSSM Vol 1 and the latter portion of my Clone Saga TPB very soon. If so, I might post my review before yours if that's okay.
Perfectly OK, Lardy, but it was very sweet of you to ask first.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady


(I've got such a sick mind.) blush



With Reed's power-set, it's NOT a stretch ( wink ) to think of sexual, er, applications of said power, right? blush

And who's to say that Sue wouldn't indulge her voyeuristic side with such powers? Especially when Reed's all busy inventin' and ain't givin' mama enough attention, right? nod
Originally Posted by Paladin
With Reed's power-set, it's NOT a stretch ( wink ) to think of sexual, er, applications of said power, right? blush


I wonder what happens whenever the zipper on Reed's trousers...malfunctions? lol

Originally Posted by Paladin
And who's to say that Sue wouldn't indulge her voyeuristic side with such powers? Especially when Reed's all busy inventin' and ain't givin' mama enough attention, right? nod


I just had another filthy Sue scenario pass through my mind (Warning: not work-safe nor family-friendly):

Reed walks in on her while she's dancin' with herself, looks at the deceptively empty bed, then sees a glob of gooie appear *out of nowhere* and splatter all over the bed, and his eyes pop out like a Tex Avery cartoon wolf. Then Sue becomes visible and says, "Well, what the hell else did you expect me to do, Mister Good-Old-Fashioned Loverboy?"


lol
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And the multi-part Negative Zone/Annihilus reaches what I think is a rousing conclusion in Avengers 233 and FF 256! Both share the same title, "The Annihilation Gambit", and rather than being a traditional 2-parter, each book tells essentially 2 sides of the same story. Avengers 233 details the Avengers' efforts (seeded by their cameos in recent FF issues) to penetrate the mysterious barrier expanding outward with the Baxter Building as its locus. FF 256 shows the FF still in the Zone trying to figure out what has destroyed their ability to return home. Obviously, Annihilus turns out to be behind both phenomena, and it takes the efforts of both groups, separately, to defeat him.

One benefit of having a prolific artist like Byrne involved is that he contributes artwork to both books. In the Avengers half, he's credited on breakdowns with Joe Sinnott providing finishes. The FF half definitely looks richer, fuller and more gorgeous, but it's definitely beneficial to have him on the Avengers issue. there are moments there where his style still shines thru. But given a choice, I'm glad the FF half gets his full attention because all of the vistas, moments and effects of that half of the story really demand the full-Byrne treatment. And I think he pretty much knocks it out of the park!

The Avengers story is weaker than the FF, but it is still very entertaining. Good friends Roger Stern and Byrne get to collaborate on a story that shows the Avengers going thru a trial and error process of trying to figure out how to stop the barrier and penetrate it. And it feels like an Avengers story and one that can be enjoyed on its own without reading the FF half. I mean, yeah, this one needs the other half more than the FF half needs it because the latter informs the former, but it is both enjoyable on its own and not without consequence for the Avengers.

FF 256 just feels incredibly like what an FF story should be and sees the group act as a unit in the way that is unique to them. In a real way this one's the Reed Richards Show, but the rest of the unit is there to back him up in such a way that he couldn't accomplish the goal at all without them. They all need each other and complement each other, and this is very evident here.

There are two subplots intertwined in the story, one unnecessary and the other effective. The former is a one-page aside with Johnny's would-be love interests, Jule and Sharon. This one feels like filler and just kind of reminds us that they exist. I suppose it's a decent man-on-the-street/plug for Avengers 233 and a bit of set-up for the second, better subplot, but the overall effect is undeniably filler.

The latter is a stunning 2-pager setting up the return of Frankie Raye and Galactus that teases his next meal as the Skrull Throneworld! Now THAT's a subplot worth setting up, even if you could argue it distracts from the issue's proceedings a bit. But that doesn't prevent Byrne delivering a whopper of a conclusion to the threat of Annihilus, punctuated with some terrific artwork and some choice use of black and white.

Plus--something I love from these issues--they both end with the exact same last 2 pages of dialogue and captions. BUT Byrne doesn't simply recycle the images, he produces alternate takes that showcase the point of view of whoever's book we're reading. We get alternate angles that present different takes! Who in the modern era of comics would ever go thru that extra effort? No one! Love it! Some would decry reading the same words twice, but it's literally the point where the two stories merge, so it really works. And the extra effort to re-present the scene is much appreciated.

So when all is said and done (even with an epilogue to come resolving Franklin's condition), I've decided to update my Byrne/FF story ranking with the conclusion of this Negative Zone/Annihilus saga. Though it's not without its flaws, I think this long-form story just hits the nail on the head with its defining how the FF should be done. Everything I want to see from the Fantastic Four is here: from the characterizations to the dynamic that makes it go, to the far-out ideas, to the sense of exploration, to science fiction being more at its heart than super-heroing, to the large scope, to the just the x-factors of the perfect art and the choice of villain, to the sense of the creator taking chances and not looking back--this has got to be the new number one on my list of the run to this point!

Which takes us to....

1) Negative Zone/Annihilus Saga (FF 251-256, Avengers 233)
2) Terrax/Nova/Galactus (FF 242-244)
3) 20th Anniversary/Liddleville (FF 236)
4) FF vs. Ego (FF 235)
Thanks for re-activating the re-read, Lardy. I'm sure you're aware of my writing travails this week, and how they derailed and delayed a lot of my planned posts (though I left the gory details for a different community, one composed entirely of fanfic writers). Luckily, that's all behind me now, and this re-read is near the top of my catch-up list.

Your review of the double-whammy Negative Zone Saga conclusion is excellent as usual. I'll do my best to at least write one that's equally fine. I agree that FF 256 is a more-than-fitting conclusion to this multi-parter, and look forward to elaborating. And being the Avengers fanatic that I am, I'll probably provide some extra details about Avengers 233.

Stay tuned...
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady

Your review of the double-whammy Negative Zone Saga conclusion is excellent as usual. I'll do my best to at least write one that's equally fine. I agree that FF 256 is a more-than-fitting conclusion to this multi-parter, and look forward to elaborating. And being the Avengers fanatic that I am, I'll probably provide some extra details about Avengers 233.

Stay tuned...


Looking forward to it! nod

BTW, I had so much to say about this story that I forgot something: I'm a big fan of the costume change that Byrne makes for the FF in this finale! It's a subtle change involving coloring only, but I think the switch from blue to dark blue and from black to white is wonderful. It keeps the basic costumes intact but, imo, makes them more striking and distinctive. After first experiencing Byrne's color scheme, I always thought the old blue and black was very drab in comparison. Love it!
Fantastic Four 256 & Avengers 233

It took me quite awhile to settle on a different kind of review format fitting for such a special, different kind of tale, until I finally hit on the idea of Lardy's review and my review inter-twining with each other, just as Byrne's and Stern's installments of the same story do here.

Originally Posted by Paladin
And the multi-part Negative Zone/Annihilus reaches what I think is a rousing conclusion in Avengers 233 and FF 256! Both share the same title, "The Annihilation Gambit", and rather than being a traditional 2-parter, each book tells essentially 2 sides of the same story.


This, IMO, was a far more successful experiment in form that the sideways issue of FF. What I think is one of the coolest things about Byrne & Stern's accomplishment is that the issues can be read in so many different ways -- as separate from each other, as linear narratives, as non-linear narratives looping in an out of each other...nicely done!

Originally Posted by Paladin
One benefit of having a prolific artist like Byrne involved is that he contributes artwork to both books. In the Avengers half, he's credited on breakdowns with Joe Sinnott providing finishes. The FF half definitely looks richer, fuller and more gorgeous, but it's definitely beneficial to have him on the Avengers issue. there are moments there where his style still shines thru. But given a choice, I'm glad the FF half gets his full attention because all of the vistas, moments and effects of that half of the story really demand the full-Byrne treatment. And I think he pretty much knocks it out of the park!


Agreed. The darker elements of this story, along with the grit of the NYC street settings for a large part of the story, necessitate a grainier, more textured approach to inking, such as Byrne's. And Sinnott...I mean, the guy was already a living legend to Marvel fandom at that point, but by his own admission, he was phoning it in most of the time during the 80s; after he went into semi-retirement in the early 90s, his sporadic work during that decade was a much better showcase for his talent. And just to make it clear that I'm not "throwing the old man under the bus", there are come-and-go glimmers of his real talent throughout Avengers 233. She-Hulk in particular looks lovely in all of her panels -- and just look at the subtlety of facial expression that Sinnott achieves with Jennifer in Page 8, Panel 3 ("Hmmm...I've never had anyone fall for me like this before"), and Page 19, Panel 1 ("You mean, just like that, the wall is...gone!") Sinnott also does a nice job on the entirety of Page 5, where we see Captain America in civvies, and an always-welcome cameo by Bernie Rosenthal (who, let's recall, was created by Stern & Byrne during their all-too-short run as the creative team on Cap's solo book.)

Originally Posted by Paladin
The Avengers story is weaker than the FF, but it is still very entertaining. Good friends Roger Stern and Byrne get to collaborate on a story that shows the Avengers going thru a trial and error process of trying to figure out how to stop the barrier and penetrate it. And it feels like an Avengers story and one that can be enjoyed on its own without reading the FF half. I mean, yeah, this one needs the other half more than the FF half needs it because the latter informs the former, but it is both enjoyable on its own and not without consequence for the Avengers.


Yes, indeed. I've actually re-read this issue more times in recent years than the FF issue, partly because, several years ago, I foolishly gave away all of my Byrne FF issues and trades (including an original edition of the Trial of Galactus trade that I bought brand-new at a now-defunct chain bookstore back in the early 90s -- the paper stock that Marvel used in their trades back then was exceptional, and I'd imagine that a copy of that trade in better-than-average condition would fetch a fortune these days.) Also partly because the first half of Stern's Avengers run (the half before John Buscema & Tom Palmer joined Stern) is, for the most part, not exactly a feast for the eyes, so to see Byrne drawing an Avengers issues, and a well-written one at that, is a treat, no matter how erratic Sinnott's inking is. And partly because this was right around the time that the Avengers book, under Stern's and editor Mark Gruenwald's guidance, was pulling itself out of the muck that Jim Shooter & Jim Salicrup had dragged it through during the 210s and most of the 220s. This was the beginning of Jennifer coming alive, and her friendship with Janet solidifying, and Stern's creation Monica Rambeau/Captain Marvel II getting some well-deserved promotion not long after her 1982 debut in an Amazing Spider-Man Annual; in other words, the estrogen was flowing strong and true through the team's veins in a way unseen since Steve Engelhart was writing the book in the mid-1970s.


Originally Posted by Paladin
FF 256 just feels incredibly like what an FF story should be and sees the group act as a unit in the way that is unique to them. In a real way this one's the Reed Richards Show, but the rest of the unit is there to back him up in such a way that he couldn't accomplish the goal at all without them. They all need each other and complement each other, and this is very evident here.

There are two subplots intertwined in the story, one unnecessary and the other effective. The former is a one-page aside with Johnny's would-be love interests, Jule and Sharon. This one feels like filler and just kind of reminds us that they exist. I suppose it's a decent man-on-the-street/plug for Avengers 233 and a bit of set-up for the second, better subplot, but the overall effect is undeniably filler.

The latter is a stunning 2-pager setting up the return of Frankie Raye and Galactus that teases his next meal as the Skrull Throneworld! Now THAT's a subplot worth setting up, even if you could argue it distracts from the issue's proceedings a bit. But that doesn't prevent Byrne delivering a whopper of a conclusion to the threat of Annihilus, punctuated with some terrific artwork and some choice use of black and white.

Plus--something I love from these issues--they both end with the exact same last 2 pages of dialogue and captions. BUT Byrne doesn't simply recycle the images, he produces alternate takes that showcase the point of view of whoever's book we're reading. We get alternate angles that present different takes! Who in the modern era of comics would ever go thru that extra effort? No one! Love it! Some would decry reading the same words twice, but it's literally the point where the two stories merge, so it really works. And the extra effort to re-present the scene is much appreciated.


Again, agreed all around. Byrne's industrious efforts over the past two dozen issues, to make the FF feel current and state-of-the-art while also reminding us of everything that was good about the book during its first creative peak circa 1965-1967, reach full fruition at last in this issue. It was trial-and-error for quite a while, but in the long run, it paid off a thousandfold!!

Originally Posted by Paladin
So when all is said and done (even with an epilogue to come resolving Franklin's condition), I've decided to update my Byrne/FF story ranking with the conclusion of this Negative Zone/Annihilus saga. Though it's not without its flaws, I think this long-form story just hits the nail on the head with its defining how the FF should be done. Everything I want to see from the Fantastic Four is here: from the characterizations to the dynamic that makes it go, to the far-out ideas, to the sense of exploration, to science fiction being more at its heart than super-heroing, to the large scope, to the just the x-factors of the perfect art and the choice of villain, to the sense of the creator taking chances and not looking back--this has got to be the new number one on my list of the run to this point!

Which takes us to....

1) Negative Zone/Annihilus Saga (FF 251-256, Avengers 233)
2) Terrax/Nova/Galactus (FF 242-244)
3) 20th Anniversary/Liddleville (FF 236)
4) FF vs. Ego (FF 235)


And, naturally, I'll update my list as well:

1) 20th Anniversary/Liddleville (FF 236)
2) Negative Zone/Annihilus Saga (FF 251-256, Avengers 233)
3) Gladiator/Man and Super-Man (FF 249-250)
4) FF vs. Ego (FF 235)
5) Terrax/Nova/Galactus (FF 242-244)
What do you think of the costume change, Fick? Like I said above, I think they're aesthetically more pleasing than the black and blue. The white, particularly, seems to suit the brighter, more optimistic nature of the team in general.

I'm pleased to see this Negative Zone saga ranks high on your list. I wasn't sure if it would because we both found flaws in the exploration issues.

I tend to put the more cosmic stories of this one and the Terrax, etc. story above the excellent Liddleville story because I'm such a sucker for them. I've learned over the years that it's actually very hard to get cosmic stories right. When I consider that and how well the FF is suited for stories above the terrestrial, those stories, executed well by masters like Byrne, stand out and earn special appreciation.
Originally Posted by Paladin
What do you think of the costume change, Fick? Like I said above, I think they're aesthetically more pleasing than the black and blue. The white, particularly, seems to suit the brighter, more optimistic nature of the team in general.


That's a perfect way to put it. I also like it better because it's less tied to the old, outdated ways of comic book coloring, where the blue was the default color to avoid the flatness of a mass of pure black.

Originally Posted by Paladin
I'm pleased to see this Negative Zone saga ranks high on your list. I wasn't sure if it would because we both found flaws in the exploration issues.


The FF/Avengers crossover climax, or to use the borrowed phrase I applied to it, the "Double-Whammy", more than excused the hit-and-miss quality of the exploration issues for me, I'm happy to say.

Originally Posted by Paladin
I tend to put the more cosmic stories of this one and the Terrax, etc. story above the excellent Liddleville story because I'm such a sucker for them. I've learned over the years that it's actually very hard to get cosmic stories right. When I consider that and how well the FF is suited for stories above the terrestrial, those stories, executed well by masters like Byrne, stand out and earn special appreciation.


Good point well taken. I suppose I'm just very hard to please when it comes to cosmic stories, very nitpicky and hyper-critical. One false note can wreck the entire delicate balance in my view. To give an example you've already alluded to, the Terrax/Nova/Galactus storyline, Byrne putting words into Frankie Raye's mouth that could be construed as xenophobia soured the whole thing for me. I ended up feeling that the Earth, and Johnny, were ultimately better off for losing her.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Originally Posted by Paladin
I tend to put the more cosmic stories of this one and the Terrax, etc. story above the excellent Liddleville story because I'm such a sucker for them. I've learned over the years that it's actually very hard to get cosmic stories right. When I consider that and how well the FF is suited for stories above the terrestrial, those stories, executed well by masters like Byrne, stand out and earn special appreciation.


Good point well taken. I suppose I'm just very hard to please when it comes to cosmic stories, very nitpicky and hyper-critical. One false note can wreck the entire delicate balance in my view. To give an example you've already alluded to, the Terrax/Nova/Galactus storyline, Byrne putting words into Frankie Raye's mouth that could be construed as xenophobia soured the whole thing for me. I ended up feeling that the Earth, and Johnny, were ultimately better off for losing her.


The more I think about it, I think that was more or less Byrne's intent with Frankie. He set her up as something between the conscientious Silver Surfer and the evil Terrax. She pretty much lacks empathy and wants to see what's out there. In a way she's presented as arguably the best candidate for the job of Herald we'd seen to that point.
Yeah, I suppose. It occurs to me that perhaps the reason I find Frankie/Nova such a frustrating character is that, to my knowledge, she lacked a full character arc (which I still think Byrne had planned for her, but he left FF and, for a few years, Marvel itself, before he got around to it.)

Frankie starts out as an alluring mystery girl (I forget which of the pre-Byrne writers created her), and an atypical challenge for Horndog-Casanova Johnny. So far, so good.

Byrne takes over the FF, and before long, we finally learn her secret -- Frankie is She-Torch, the adopted daughter of the scientist who created the android Torch. We discussed those issues a while ago, and IIRC, my response was that her origin, as well as her own reaction to learning it, were lame, creepy, and implausible even by superhero standards.

Frankie joins the FF. Uh...OK. They sure take her in on a leap of faith -- understandable with Johnny, but not the rest of the team IMO.

Frankie quickly becomes dissatisfied and disillusioned with being part of the FF, as it becomes clearer with every panel she appears in that she's not a nice person, much less considerate of others or looking out for anyone but herself.

Finally...Galactus comes to Earth, upon which Frankie demonstrates that her callousness is even worse than it seemed, bordering on xenophobia. She appeals to Galactus's worst aspects, and gets her wish to become his new herald.

So...where does she go from there, if readers are expected to have some kind of emotional investment in her, be it positive or negative? I'll admit I haven't read all the appearances she made in the Silver Surfer's 80s-90s solo book, but of the ones I have, she seemed to settle into becoming a bland cosmic cipher, devoid of any character evolution (and, to add insult to injury, she had an annoying habit of calling the Surfer "Silverado.") By the time she died in the pages of the Surfer's book, it was being written by Ron Marz, a writer I despised even before he displayed a horrible attitude towards any readers who even slightly criticized his Green Lantern stories. So I don't know how she died, or if she'd shown any kind of evolution before she died. But I doubt it would be worth my while to find out for certain.

Point being, I'll concede she might have worked for me in the long run if her dubious attitudes had ever been addressed, and if we had seen that she may still have possessed some glimmers of humanity within her -- either by Byrne or by other writers. File her under Missed Opportunities, then?
Those are very fair points. It certainly didn't help that subsequent writers lacked interest in really developing her story. Certainly Byrne had an interest in her, as she starred in his unfinished "Last Galactus Story".

It's just one of those "what ifs" fans will never know the answers to if Byrne had either not been lured away before whatever point he would otherwise have left or if Quesada's hate-on for Byrne had made a potential FF return (something Byrne had often said he was very much open to) impossible.
Thanks, Lardy.

I have to admit, I've actually never read the portion of Byrne's "The Last Galactus Story" that did get published.

I forget, was it being serialized in "Epic Illustrated?"

Could you please summarize it, at least providing the gist?

Regarding Byrne vs Quesada, I don't think "Mighty Joe" really has much influence anymore at Marvel on what gets green-lighted or not. Oh, sure, they gave him a fancy new job title, and probably a raise, but I suspect it was really a sidelining disguised as a promotion. After all, Joey's big, filthy mouth was never going to fit in with Marvel's new public image as Disney's Family-Friendly Fanboy Subsidiary. Axel Alonso, for all that he appears to be one sneaky, calculating little sh*t, does know how to play the diplomat in public. And that's actually what fuels my little ember of hope that Alonso and Byrne might actually be able to negotiate a return to the FF. That said, there is, as my friend Matt pointed out to me not long ago, one quite possible obstacle, and that's Tom Brevoort, who is rumored to hate Byrne even more than JQ does. I'm not sure just how much juice TB actually has ATM, and, unlike JQ, he does usually know when to dial it down (which I think explains TB's sporadic blurting of tasteless and stupid remarks -- keep a lid on a pot too long, and you know what happens.)
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Thanks, Lardy.

I have to admit, I've actually never read the portion of Byrne's "The Last Galactus Story" that did get published.

I forget, was it being serialized in "Epic Illustrated?"

Could you please summarize it, at least providing the gist?


No can do because I've never read it! HOWEVER--it IS collected in the Vol. 2 FF/Byrne Omnibus which I DO own, so I will read it re-read project.

From what I understand, 9 of 10 parts of the serial were published in Epic Illustrated. Epic was cancelled just before its completion, and part 10 was never produced. Byrne has gone on record as to how he planned to end it, though.

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Regarding Byrne vs Quesada, I don't think "Mighty Joe" really has much influence anymore at Marvel on what gets green-lighted or not. Oh, sure, they gave him a fancy new job title, and probably a raise, but I suspect it was really a sidelining disguised as a promotion. After all, Joey's big, filthy mouth was never going to fit in with Marvel's new public image as Disney's Family-Friendly Fanboy Subsidiary. Axel Alonso, for all that he appears to be one sneaky, calculating little sh*t, does know how to play the diplomat in public. And that's actually what fuels my little ember of hope that Alonso and Byrne might actually be able to negotiate a return to the FF. That said, there is, as my friend Matt pointed out to me not long ago, one quite possible obstacle, and that's Tom Brevoort, who is rumored to hate Byrne even more than JQ does. I'm not sure just how much juice TB actually has ATM, and, unlike JQ, he does usually know when to dial it down (which I think explains TB's sporadic blurting of tasteless and stupid remarks -- keep a lid on a pot too long, and you know what happens.)


If you're right about this not being an obstacle anymore, I think it probably still is too late for Byrne to return. All he's doing these days are those Star Trek fumettis in the years since he had a string of good-to-great minis at IDW. I don't know if he's made an official statement, but I feel he has little interest in drawing anymore and is effectively retired.
Retired?

Poo.

frown

OTOH, if he's doing fumetti and he's got lots of free time, maybe he can join Legion World!! nod

BWAH-HA-HA-HA-HA! I knew I wouldn't be able to post that without cracking up. lol

I mean, I'm sure most of us would be respectful, but even a few of our more well-adjusted posters carry a grudge about The Death of Superboy, and how it arguably wrecked the Legion. But IMHO, Byrne is not to blame. If anyone's a villain there, it's Mike Carlin. (:waves: Hi, Mikey. Enjoying the way you're demoted one more notch with every DC executive shuffle?)

Please humor me, Lardy. Some days I can handle minor disappoints more graciously than others. sigh

And I look forward to your review of "The Last Galactus Story."

(Also, Lardy, I know you're a Gym'll's mod, so if you think my little pot-shot at Mike Carlin is inappropriate, feel free to delete it.)
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady

OTOH, if he's doing fumetti and he's got lots of free time, maybe he can join Legion World!! nod


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(Also, Lardy, I know you're a Gym'll's mod, so if you think my little pot-shot at Mike Carlin is inappropriate, feel free to delete it.)


I'll allow it. wink
Thanks, Lardy. smile

It's karma in action.

Karma for Carlin.

lol

grin
Lardy, I was wondering something. My Byrne FF Visionaries trade places FF #257 in between issue #2 of the Thing's solo book (written, but not drawn by, Byrne) and FF Annual #12 (written and drawn by Byrne.) Should be cover either of those in this thread? I'm asking because 257-262 are arguably the pinnacle of the Byrne era (along with FF 256/Avengers 233, of course), and I think cover those stories would break up the flow.

But whatever you prefer to do is OK with me, either way.
That's how they're placed in my Omnibus, as well. I was thinking we would cover Thing 2, FF 257 & Annual 12 in the next segment, but we could do Thing and the Annual instead and place 257 in the next one--?
Originally Posted by Paladin
That's how they're placed in my Omnibus, as well. I was thinking we would cover Thing 2, FF 257 & Annual 12 in the next segment, but we could do Thing and the Annual instead and place 257 in the next one--?


Perfect solution, Lardy. Thanks.

Quite apropos, I think, that you went through a phase of using Captain Marvel (the Fawcett/DC original) as your avatar. You just used the wisdom of Solomon right there.
Um, since I presented two options, was my wisdom in doing all three books in the next round or leaving 257 out for the one after it? confused Uh, I know I'm wise, so this is a test--uh, for YOU! (Yeah, that's the ticket! tease )
LOL

Leaving 257 out for the one after it showed the Wisdom of Solomon. Then it'll be 257-262 straight thru -- all killer, no filler. nod

Sorry about the confusion.
We interrupt your regularly-scheduled FF issues to present 2 standalone books between issues 256 and 257, both of which are worth your time!

First up is "For Beauty Passed Away" from Thing 2! (And if we also reviewed Thing 1, we might have the makings of a Dr. Seuss tale! wink ) The Thing had just been awarded his first solo ongoing book, initially written by John Byrne, and issue 2 serves as a kind of epilogue or (perhaps more aptly) a coda to the Negative Zone Saga. The biggest connection to said saga is that we open with Ben visiting the hospital and getting confirmation that Franklin and Alicia will be okay.

But that's far from the impetus of the story. What we get is a fairly rare look into Ben's life pre-Thing as Ben gets a mysterious letter from a former girlfriend, prompting a flashback to Ben and Reed's college days. We see how Ben gets dumped by a girl he is head-over-heels for because she has ambitions to be something much bigger than just someone's wife, in this case the pursuit of a career in Hollywood.

But now, out of the blue, she wants to meet up with him, and Ben is feeling vulnerable because he is now a "monster" and doesn't know if he can face someone he used to care so much about the way he is now. In a twist, it turns out his old flame has suffered a stroke and sees herself as a kind of monster, as well. She feels she has this in common with him and seeks his advice on how he lives with his disfiguration.

I wouldn't call it a "great" story on the whole, but it is a really good one, especially because there's a real maturity and frankness to the storytelling. There's not any of the comic book histrionics that typified comics of the time and the Thing in particular. He and Alicia have a real, grown-up conversation about what he is feeling and feel more like a real couple in those panels than they ever have, in my opinion. And Byrne leaves the meat of Ben and old flame Alynn's conversation to our imagination. Based on what we've seen of Ben this issue, we just know he says the right things and comforts Alynn in her time of need, even if he himself may still feel torn apart inside over his own circumstances.

Another reason for the story's inclusion is that Byrne inks Thing regular penciller Ron Wilson and adds to the story his own artistic flair. Wilson was a long-running artistic portrayer of Ben Grimm thru most of Marvel Two-In-One and all of this first solo Thing series' 36 issues. While it's undeniable that Wilson was an important artist for Ben Grimm, his style has never really grabbed me at all. But it does look great here with Byrne's inks, and together they portray the story in a way that conveys the emotion and mood of the story very effectively. It's a human story and they bring that feel very well. I'm especially fond of their pre-Thing Ben Grimm we learn more about in the flashback.

I'm really glad that Marvel included this story in Byrne's Omnibus and his Visionaries series. It could easily have been left off, as it contains no really essential story information to his run. But it's a surprisingly mature and frank exploration of a beloved character and one that is, in hindsight, well-timed in Byrne's overall run, considering what will soon be happening with Ben's role in the FF.


Next up is FF Annual 17, "Legacy". I've pointed out before how at different parts of Byrne's run, he has told scattered FF tales that show a desire of his to tell weird sci-fi mysteries that might belong in a TV show like the Twilight Zone or in some of the old sci-fi pulp magazines or any of the above-two's assorted and sordid kin. This one is the latest in the series and, in my opinion, Byrne's most successful attempt at such to date!

It doesn't hurt at all that Byrne now has the larger format of an Annual to tell this type of tale at the pace it needs to breathe. To illustrate this, the story follows minor supporting character Sharon Selleck for a full 17 pages before the FF enter the action. Those 17 pages are akin, in their own way, to that first sequence in Hitchcock's classic "Psycho", in which we follow Janet Leigh's character through all of her travails (and ultimately her famously brutal, untimely end) before the story switches gears. Sharon fares better than Janet's character, but there's that sense of impending suspense and dread allowed to breathe that makes both openings effective and grounds the rest of the story.

Another thing that distinguishes this entry from its predecessors is how it turns out that the root cause is something based out of FF history, rather than just some chance encounter. The idea itself is brilliant: what if those Skrulls the FF encountered in just their second issue that the FF left living as supposedly harmless cows had not only produced "milk" but said milk had been consumed by humans?

(Now, the Skrull "cows" had long sense been re-Skrulled and played a part in the classic Kree/Skrull War Avengers story, but the premise here is the damage from their "milk" had already been done during their time as cows.)

It's a very novel idea that Byrne came up with, including some help from Jim Salicrup, Tom DeFalco and Al Milgrom, if I'm reading the intent of the "special thanks" portion of the credits correctly. Regardless, the execution is all Byrne's with him credited for full art. His use of minor bit player Sharon is excellent. She is inquisitive and intelligent, not just an idle victim. In the liberal (regrettably now-extinct) use of thought bubbles, we see her puzzle through everything with us, and we really begin to fear for her as the walls begin to close around her. In the end she almost gets out on her own, but the threat is just too big for any normal person.

Segue to the FF. In her quick-thinking efforts to get help, Sharon has made two phone calls which together alert the FF that this is a situation they really need to look into. Deducing quickly the nature of the threat (something I can forgive because Reed is and should be portrayed as a hugely next-level thinker) given the information at hand, the FF come into town at first covertly to both confirm their suspicions and find Sharon. Once they've done both (and given us a nice summary of the FF events that caused the situation), the FF spring into action and use the preparations Reed made thru his deductions to save the day.

But like any good horror/sci-fi yarn should, we get a one-panel stinger that shows the threat may not only not be over but could get a lot worse! Perfect ending! Even if (Maybe--? Can't recall! confused ) there's never a follow-up story, the ending is just the icing on the cake for a story that plays with some horror and sci-fi tropes!

Byrne's art is really awesome here. He subtly changes his style to match the tone he's trying to pull off here. Those first 17 pages, especially, feature slightly heavier inking to emphasize the creepiness and suspense of the situation. When the story shifts to the FF, the art shifts subtly, too. And when the two worlds merge, we get a mixture of both.

For the story to work, Byrne especially does a good job with Sharon. She's kind of a sexy horror movie protagonist, but she's also not idealized. She's not particularly well-endowed, and her hair is kind of a mess. Plus, she wears glasses. I think this works well and makes me like her much more than I did in her few previous appearances. All things considered, this is impressive work considering my (and presumably the rest of the book's audiences') prior ambivalence to her. If we didn't want her to survive, the story wouldn't be as good.

So, yes, a very good story and, I feel, the best of Byrne's attempts thus far to emulate the sci-fi mystery sub-genre that he clearly had an affection for. I like that he chose his first FF Annual to tell this smaller story and that his craft as writer/artist had come so far to make it so memorable. In fact, I think this calls for an (unexpected!) update to my overall list of the Best Byrne FF stories to this point in the run:

1) Negative Zone/Annihilus Saga (FF 251-256, Avengers 233)
2) Terrax/Nova/Galactus (FF 242-244)
3) 20th Anniversary/Liddleville (FF 236)
4) "Legacy" (FF Annual 17)
5) FF vs. Ego (FF 235)

How about that! This calls for a celebration! Maybe some cookies and mil----uh, nevermind..... wink
Wonderful reviews as always, Lardy.

I've got the 3rd Byrne FF Visionaries trade right next to me as I'm typing this, so I'll post my own very soon.

BTW, my reading of the "Special Thanks" to Salicrup, DeFalco, and Milgrom is that it was a very polite way of acknowledging that the FF comic had passed through three different editors while Byrne was working on that story.

And you'll never guess who ended up as the regular FF editor once the musical chairs had stopped:

Mike Carlin. lol
Originally Posted by Paladin
So, yes, a very good story and, I feel, the best of Byrne's attempts thus far to emulate the sci-fi mystery sub-genre that he clearly had an affection for. I like that he chose his first FF Annual to tell this smaller story and that his craft as writer/artist had come so far to make it so memorable. In fact, I think this calls for an (unexpected!) update to my overall list of the Best Byrne FF stories to this point in the run:

1) Negative Zone/Annihilus Saga (FF 251-256, Avengers 233)
2) Terrax/Nova/Galactus (FF 242-244)
3) 20th Anniversary/Liddleville (FF 236)
4) "Legacy" (FF Annual 17)
5) FF vs. Ego (FF 235)


Funny thing was, I went into reading Annual 17 not knowing if I would like it, even though I read it as a teenager. The thing was, I was a teenager not used to unconventional superhero tales like "Legacy". Plus, I seem to recall that I was fighting a stomach bug when I first read it. So I kind of associated the story with vomit and diarrhea! puke (This is kind of funny because Sharon is implied to be physically ill during the story in the same way!) So coming into reading it again all these years later, I really wasn't sure I would like it and did not, in fact, expect it to make an appearance in my running Top Stories list at all.

But here I am, an adult currently not experiencing stomach illness and who, I feel, has developed much more sophisticated tastes in the interim--and as I'm writing the review, I realize this story VERY much deserves to be on my running "best of" list for this re-read!

I was and am pleasantly surprised!!! nod

Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Wonderful reviews as always, Lardy.


Aw, shucks.... blush
Hey, Lardy,

I feel I owe you the courtesy of explaining why I've stalled yet again with the Byrne FF re-read.

I imagine you, and others, have already noticed my relative paucity of postings these past several days. But I'm happy to say it's all good news. In a nutshell, the Legion Retroboot Continuation has grown and evolved -- at a rate so fast, I was barely able to hang on at first -- into a whole Mini-Multiverse I've called "DC Universes: The 7 Worlds of Wonder"!! So I've been spending almost every minute of my free time working on all this good stuff, and my only regret is that my Byrne FF Visionaries trade ended up getting buried underneath a bunch of DC trades which I've been using for 7Wow references.

I have to digress for a minute, to reiterate that I was very pleased to see you chime in to comment on the (now-nearly-completed) Legion Retroboot Continuation, and to now add that I greatly hope you'll do the same for 7Wow (which will have a Who's Who companion thread, and a Chronology & Fanfic Vignettes companion thread.) If anything, what I think this...uh...Tower of Fan Fiction, I guess it could be called...has really evolved into, now that I've been able to get some perspective on it, is not at all unlike your beloved Astro City, only with 7 universes instead of 1, and using (mostly) actual DC characters instead of analogs.

Back on topic, I've come to the conclusion that it might be best to see the Byrne FF re-read through all the way to the end of the Trial of Reed Richards issue, and then go on a hiatus, which will hopefully not be too long...at least until I've gotten the 7WoW threads up and running, and completed the first arc of the Legion Retroboot Continuation (and, like I alluded to earlier in this post, there's only one installment of it left to finish writing and posting.)

So...our last issue before the hiatus would be...I can't recall the exact number ATM, but I think it's right around 262. That would make it a nice even 30 monthly issues, plus the Annuals and spin-offs and stuff. In all, I'd say a satisfactory Phase One. Hope this is all OK with you, Lardy, and please don't hesitate to share with me any reservations you might have.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
So...our last issue before the hiatus would be...I can't recall the exact number ATM, but I think it's right around 262. That would make it a nice even 30 monthly issues, plus the Annuals and spin-offs and stuff. In all, I'd say a satisfactory Phase One. Hope this is all OK with you, Lardy, and please don't hesitate to share with me any reservations you might have.


It is issue 262. The hiatus would be okay with me, thought I hope it won't be super-long. I also hope you'll be forthcoming soon with your write-up of Thing 2 and Annual 17, so we can proceed toward the conclusion of "Phase One"! nod
I will be posting the reviews of Thing #2 and FF Annual #17 very soon, because it just so happens that, within the past 24 hours, I've reached the point where I have to step back for at least a couple days and allow my creative batteries to recharge.r

And, no, the hiatus won't be long at all. Just enough time for me to wrap up the first arc of the Retroboot Continuation, and then get the two companion threads up and running (it goes without saying that the companion threads are going to be works-in-progress for many months to come, but like I said, I'd like to at least "lay the foundation," so to speak.

Thanks, Lardy.
The Thing 2

If I may be so indulged, I'd like to preface this review by providing some context -- specifically, my creative life over the past 2 or 3 weeks:

For most of my free time over the past 2 or 3 weeks, I've had my nose to the grindstone (OK, who am I kidding, my fingertips to the keyboard-- ye Gods, it's like that Monty Python sketch about the son of a writer who rebels against his hard-working dad by becoming a miner. Sheesh!!) And it's been mostly at the service of creating (either in outline or story form) big, cosmic, dark, DCU epics, many of them re-imaginings of some truly tasteless and/or just plain awful scripts from 2003 to 2009. To put it more plainly:

"Just imagine...ALAN GRANT reimagining crap-tastic GEOFF JOHNS "event" stories from the 2000s!!" lol

Not surprisingly, I've found myself on the verge of burnout a couple times in the process, and what always cures it for me is to step back for a day or two and read and/or write stuff that is 180 degrees from the creative project at hand.

All of the above is a roundabout way of saying that the timing couldn't have been better for me to read a tender, character-driven done-in-one story like the one in Thing 2. It's a tonic in the truest sense. (A tonic for the trouper? The Super Trouper?? Y'know, as in the classic 70s song by ABBA?? I'll stop. blush)

Byrne's script is quite possibly my favorite from this re-read so far. It's extremely insightful of the human condition, saying a lot about such worthy themes as: choosing your ambitions over what's true to your heart, the foolish choices of youth, the shallowness and transience of fame & fortune, guilt over an old lover trying to get back in contact, fear of a current lover getting jealous...I could probably fill a whole thread analyzing this little gem of a story. Kudos to Byrne for pulling off what is at the very least a minor miracle within the superhero genre. I think even non-Marvel readers might enjoy this one!!

And art-wise, I was far more impressed with Ron Wilson than I had expected to be. I'm only familiar with his 70s work, so I guess he'd improved a lot by 1983, and/or Ben Grimm was a character who meant a lot to Wilson. It's never been easy for any artist to find the means of expressing emotional nuances using Ben's default gravel-face and block-body. But find them Wilson does, and he deserves a lot of credit for that. And I don't really know quite how to explain this, but I found that I enjoyed Byrne inks over someone else's pencils better than over his own pencils, and, in hindsight, I think it's a pity that Byrne didn't take on this artistic challenge more often, as it certainly seemed to have a good effect on his own pencils at the time!!

In summary, a wonderful, low-key, melancholy vignette, of the kind most superhero writers only DREAM of creating!! Also a good reminder that, for all the ups and downs of re-reading Byrne's approximately 5-year FF run, or really, the ups and downs of just about ANY superhero comic run that passes the 4-year mark, it's stories like this that make it all worthwhile and give a welcome, renewing boost to the morale of this particular re-reader.

My review of FF Annual 17 will be ready for posting within the next 48 hours. And, Lardy, I've been projecting ahead -- with the upcoming holidays and everything, I figure we'll probably wrap up before the hiatus right around the end of the year. So how would it work for you if we resumed the re-read in March 2017?
Fantastic Four Annual 17

Sorry to say, Lardy, that I didn't like this story nearly as much as The Thing 2.

I do agree with you that Byrne does an effective job with the mystery and suspense aspects of the early sequences, first by immediately establishing that something's a little bit "off" in this remote neck of the woods where Sharon's car has broken down, and then by building up the tension until it's almost a relief when we cut to the comforting familiarity of the FF at the Baxter Building.

But there are two things that take me out of the story -- one is that Sharon Selleck does not particularly engage me as a protagonist. In her previous appearances, she'd come across to me as a cipher, little more than a foil for her roommate Julie D'Angelo/Julie Angel's quirkiness, and there's nothing in this story that changed my mind about Sharon. In fact, as I was typing this paragraph, it occurred to me that I'd rather have seen either the (IMHO) much more interesting & likeable Julie in Sharon's place, or better yet, Julie & Sharon on the road together, both getting entrapped by the sinister townspeople. The second problem is that I found Byrne's art here very disappointing, especially compared to his mostly stellar showings in the last several issues of the ongoing which precede Annual 17; I found too many "Default Byrne" poses and facial expressions here, and the inking is...well, a bit of a misfire to my eyes. As you observed in your review, Lardy, Byrne's inking goes from dark and rough to clean and smooth once the story shifts from Sharon's imperilment to the Fantastic Four themselves. This is, in theory, a perfectly viable use of the creative possibilities unique to sequential art -- Peter Milligan & Duncan Fergedo's wonderful Vertigo mini-series "Enigma" used it to superlative effect!! Where I think Byrne errs is by making the stylistic shift too abrupt, leaving his story too neatly divided between the "rough portion" and the "smooth portion", whereas Fergedo made it so gradual and so subtle that it was barely noticeable to me until I was thoroughly engrossed by, and many pages deep into, the "Enigma" story.

I'll admit that I found the revelation of the plot's relation to an obscure loose end from early FF continuity to be clever and well-executed (certainly better-executed than when Grant Morrison & Mark Millar basically ripped off Byrne's premise, using red meat instead of dairy, with far less effective and more tasteless results, in their justifiably forgotten mid-90s Marvel mini-series "Skrull Kill Krew.") Also, I agree with you that the stinger at the very end of the issue is masterfully done. And finally, I think that Byrne knows the FF themselves so well by this point that the foursome come alive with nice character moments no matter what kind of story Byrne puts them in.

In the end, I suppose that last paragraph might seem like damning with faint praise. That's certainly not my intention, yet I simply cannot deny that the two things that a story like this hinges on -- a strongly defined protagonist and art that does not call attention to itself -- were lacking in my opinion, while your review makes it clear that your opinion is just about 180 degrees from mine, and you felt they were both very much present in the story. And there's nothing at all wrong with disagreeing, but I did feel a bit worried about coming off too harsh in trying to explain why I feel the way I do about this story, considering how much you clearly like it. No hard feelings, I hope?
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
And there's nothing at all wrong with disagreeing, but I did feel a bit worried about coming off too harsh in trying to explain why I feel the way I do about this story, considering how much you clearly like it. No hard feelings, I hope?


Sorry, Fick--you're dead to me, now. scream

Just kidding! lol Nah, there's nothing wrong with disagreeing every now and then. Frankly, I'm surprised we've agreed as much during this re-read as we have, so far, seeing as how you don't like a lot of comics I've liked over the years. And it wasn't exactly a scathing review here, exactly. Do you feel, though, that this is Byrne's best effort, thus far, telling these kinds of Twilight-Zoney stories in his FF run? Or do you think there was a better one in the string?
LOL lol

I wasn't fooled for a nano-second. smile

Big hug. hug

And I agree, it has been a very pleasant re-read in the way that we've been on the same page so far about pretty much all the most salient themes.

Regarding Byrne's recurring Twilight Zone homages in this run, I'm 99% certain that I would consider FF Annual 17 be the best-written up to this point. To be totally sure, I'll have to go back and read my reviews of all the previous TZ homages.
A quick heads-up, Lardy.

FF 257 is set in stone to be re-read before I go to sleep tonight. Review to come tomorrow.
4 days later...

(...better late than never, right?) wink

Fantastic Four #257

Continuing to mine the rich creative vein he hit recently with the awesome conclusion to the Negative Zone Saga, Byrne boldly returns to the loose end of Galactus and his desperate search for sustenance, now with new herald Nova searching -- in the ruthless, relentless fashion I'd expect from the former Frankie Raye -- for a planet teeming with organic life...and, again very much in keeping with her character as established, Nova has zeroed in on...the Skrull Empire's Throneworld!!

But before we see whether Byrne really "goes there" and has Galactus and Nova commit genocide on what might be the Marvel Universe's first established alien race (?), as well as the co-villains of the flawed yet memorable Avengers epic "The Kree-Skrull War"...Byrne slyly reminds us beforehand that Galactus and Nova are not completely monstrous.

The opening sequence showcasing Galactus, in particular, comes off as particularly poignant and loaded with gravitas -- extra kudos to Byrne for bringing in the MU's incarnation of Death, as first seen in Jim Starlin's Bronze Age cosmic spectacles, establishing her as Galactus's sister, and making her more than just a flat, if visceral, icon by having her interrupt Galactus's soliloquy (compelling as it is) and conversing with him.

Nova's own thought balloons as she moves in for the attack upon the Skrull's defensive armada hint at possibilities which will sadly be left unexplored before Byrne's untimely departure about 35 to 40 issues from this one. Having her actually lusting for Galactus seems a bit on-the-nose at first, but when one consider the potential inherent in perhaps Nova evolving into Galactus's equal and becoming his bride...I find it undeniably intriguing.

And then the issue reaches what I consider a masterful crescendo when the Skrulls...who, remember, started out as a throwaway race of evil little green people, and who gained scope, if not depth, in subsequent appearances over the course of 2 decades...are seen as frightened, vulnerable, even borderline sympathetic!! I particularly treasure the darkest-hour verbal exchange between Empress R'klll and Princess Anelle, both finally given full-bodied and engaging personalities with shades of gray by Byrne -- the close-up panel (Page 9, upper right-hand) of the two is especially memorable, the archetypal picture saying a thousand words...and the words Byrne has them speak are the icing on the cake.

The next three pages have some of the best cosmic imagery ever to flow from Byrne's fingers to the blank pages before him. Galactus's devastation of the Skrull Throneworld has all the gradeur, horror, and visceral widescreen power that it calls for.

Cut to the planet Earth.

Having fed us readers our fill of thrills & chills and action & adventure, Byrne goes for the heart for the majority of the remaining pages of this issue. The sequence of Johnny running into Julie & Sharon while apartment-hunting is delightful, the scenes involving Susan, Reed, and Ben finding the best of both worlds for a fleeting moment is heartwarming and deserving of a tear to the eye in its honest understatement. And the last scene, in which Reed begins work on repairing the Vision, only for...SOMETHING...to apparently kidnap him in a violent fashion, wraps things up with an awesome cliffhanger!!

Looking back with 20/20 hindsight, and lining this up with Byrne's then-concurrent work at Marvel as either writer/artist or writer -- Alpha Flight, the Thing's solo book -- he was very much soaring to what might be the highest peak of his career next to his previous plateau as the pencil artist & co-plotter of Uncanny X-Men. I certainly feel ATM like I could kick myself for giving away my aforementioned copy of the vintage "FF: The Trial of Galactus" trade many years ago, when I was going through a phase of "Byrne-is-overrated-and-he-seems-like-a-jerk." Ahhh, the foolishness of youth... sigh But I now thank the Gods that Marvel has continued to keep Byrne's FF in print. It really is something to be treasured.
Jeez Louise, I haven't posted a FF re-read review here for 3 weeks!!

Sorry, Lardy. blush

Will do so this weekend.

I also still have to review Superwoman #4, although at least in that thread I left the gist of my (very pleasantly surprised & positive) opinion right away.
Hi everyone, I hope the reread is going well. I was wondering what your plans were (if any) for holiday reading?

I kind want to read some Will Eisner because it's Christmastime. I remembered reading some of The Spirit's Christmas stories and they were good.
Originally Posted by Emily Sivana
Hi everyone, I hope the reread is going well. I was wondering what your plans were (if any) for holiday reading?

I kind want to read some Will Eisner because it's Christmastime. I remembered reading some of The Spirit's Christmas stories and they were good.


Back in the 80s, when Mike W. Barr was writing "Batman & the Outsiders" (later simply "The Outsiders"), he made a point of doing a Christmas story every year. I think I'll read each one of those in chronological order.
I'd actually read Fantastic Four 257, "Fragments", about 2 months ago right after Thing 2 and before reading Annual 17. This was before we had decided to review the other two first. So I wrote up a review of those and sat on my thoughts for 257 for a while, a "while" became longer as my life went thru a bit of a busy spell and made it hard to concentrate for a companion review to Fick's version which eventually appeared. I decided not to read hers before finally doing this one so that mine wouldn't be just a response to hers. I especially wanted this particular issue to be reviewed this way because I thought it was just that extraordinary!

Particularly, the Galactus half of 257 was simply amazing! In a move that may have been unprecedented at the time, Byrne spends over half of the books page count telling a Galactus story outside the context of a battle with the FF or any of the other Marvel heroes. The result, I think, is amazing.

I think the first thing that inspired awe in me for simply the brilliance of the idea was Byrne having Galactus converse with none other than Death herself! The revelation that these two cosmic entities have a familiarity, even a relationship, is both awesome and ingenious because it makes you think "of course!" In a way, just as a relative might give someone encouragement as one is feeling low, Death reminds a morally-conflicted Galactus that what he does serves a greater purpose. This emboldens Galactus and gives him the resolve he needs to continue his singularly devastating work.

His story then transitions to Nova leading him to his next target, none other than the Skrull Throne-world! Byrne shows us the Skrulls reacting and attempting to resist over a few pages, but their resistance is ultimately futile. Then, perhaps for the very first time (?), we finally see Galactus do what Galactus does and to an inhabited planet that is significant to the Marvel universe. It happens quickly, and those panels of Galactus sinking into the planet are particularly chilling. I feel that Byrne did with his pencils and the standard colors and effects of his era what today's artists would rely on computer coloring and special effects to convey and still not do be half as effective as what Byrne did in these pages. Simply awesome!

(If I have any caveat with the depiction of what Galactus does, it's that it seemingly contradicts the longer process that seemed to be entailed when Galactus attempted to consume Earth in his Lee/Kirby debut. To that, I tend to think Byrne simply shows us a condensed version of the act.)

The rest of the story is a relatively quiet one for the FF as they try to return to normalcy after the events of the great Negative Zone story. The most significant detail is that Sue is now pregnant with her and Reed's second child, who was conceived while they were in the Negative Zone. And her and Reed will attempt to raise both children in a normal neighborhood while remaining with the FF. But we are left with a cliffhanger (which the "next issue" box proclaims will NOT be addressed next issue) as Reed vanishes while checking in on the ailing Vision at Avengers Mansion.

Overall, this issue is a real feather in Byrne's cap for his run as it nears its midpoint. The Galactus pages alone are instant classics in my mind. They just show that Byrne was not only already a masterful artist but that his skills and confidence as a writer had definitely grown to match. Having Galactus converse with Death was innovative, exciting and wonderfully executed. But then to show Galactus finally doing what he's known for and to a significant race in the Marvel Universe makes those 12 pages possibly the most important and defining moments for the character since his debut. Honestly, the FF pages in the issue can't help but feel anti-climactic in their wake, but this is still altogether one of the best single issues in Byrne's run to date!
Originally Posted by Paladin
the Galactus half of 257 was simply amazing! In a move that may have been unprecedented at the time, Byrne spends over half of the books page count telling a Galactus story outside the context of a battle with the FF or any of the other Marvel heroes. The result, I think, is amazing.

I think the first thing that inspired awe in me for simply the brilliance of the idea was Byrne having Galactus converse with none other than Death herself! The revelation that these two cosmic entities have a familiarity, even a relationship, is both awesome and ingenious because it makes you think "of course!" In a way, just as a relative might give someone encouragement as one is feeling low, Death reminds a morally-conflicted Galactus that what he does serves a greater purpose. This emboldens Galactus and gives him the resolve he needs to continue his singularly devastating work.


Beautifully put, Lardy. And I think it's a pity that no other Marvel creators that I'm aware chose to explore this relationship further, or, for that matter, to portray Death as anything other than her default role as a silent cipher (albeit a visually striking one.)

Originally Posted by Paladin
His story then transitions to Nova leading him to his next target, none other than the Skrull Throne-world! Byrne shows us the Skrulls reacting and attempting to resist over a few pages, but their resistance is ultimately futile. Then, perhaps for the very first time (?), we finally see Galactus do what Galactus does and to an inhabited planet that is significant to the Marvel universe. It happens quickly, and those panels of Galactus sinking into the planet are particularly chilling. I feel that Byrne did with his pencils and the standard colors and effects of his era what today's artists would rely on computer coloring and special effects to convey and still not do be half as effective as what Byrne did in these pages. Simply awesome!

(If I have any caveat with the depiction of what Galactus does, it's that it seemingly contradicts the longer process that seemed to be entailed when Galactus attempted to consume Earth in his Lee/Kirby debut. To that, I tend to think Byrne simply shows us a condensed version of the act.)


Agreed to the max!!

Originally Posted by Paladin
Overall, this issue is a real feather in Byrne's cap for his run as it nears its midpoint. The Galactus pages alone are instant classics in my mind. They just show that Byrne was not only already a masterful artist but that his skills and confidence as a writer had definitely grown to match. Having Galactus converse with Death was innovative, exciting and wonderfully executed. But then to show Galactus finally doing what he's known for and to a significant race in the Marvel Universe makes those 12 pages possibly the most important and defining moments for the character since his debut.


The only subsequent Galactus portrayal that even comes close to equaling this one in my estimation, is when he guest-starred in Excalibur #61, written & drawn by Alan Davis, and was attacked by Phoenix (Rachel Summers), with dire consequences. Much as I love almost every issue from Davis's writer/artist Excalibur run, that one remains the standout to me.

Originally Posted by Paladin
Honestly, the FF pages in the issue can't help but feel anti-climactic in their wake, but this is still altogether one of the best single issues in Byrne's run to date!


I admit I might be wrong, but it sounds to me like I may have liked the FF sequences a little better than you did. I give Byrne credit for not trying to top the first portion of the issue, and instead doing a near-180 degree turn, quite unconventional for an early-mid 80s Marvel comic, as most of their comics at the time tended to be very traditionally structured.

Either way, I'm very happy that both of us loved this issue overall. nod
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady
Originally Posted by Emily Sivana
Hi everyone, I hope the reread is going well. I was wondering what your plans were (if any) for holiday reading?

I kind want to read some Will Eisner because it's Christmastime. I remembered reading some of The Spirit's Christmas stories and they were good.


Back in the 80s, when Mike W. Barr was writing "Batman & the Outsiders" (later simply "The Outsiders"), he made a point of doing a Christmas story every year. I think I'll read each one of those in chronological order.


Since making that post, I've read all three of them (turns out I don't own the fourth and last Outsiders Christmas story, as I still have a few gaps to fill in with the Baxter issues.)

And while I was always have nostalgic rose-colored visions of, and a huge sentimental spot in my heart for, the original Outsiders/BATO (particularly the first two dozen or so newsstand issues) I now find that reading these three issues, each one published a year after the one before, testifies to the gradual decline of the series during its relatively short run.

BATO #8: The first, and, easily, the best of the bunch. If anything, the Outsiders had quickly stumbled after getting off to a great start with the 16-page preview in The Brave & the Bold #200, followed by the opening 2-part arc about the formation of the team. This issue is where Barr and editor Len Wein found their second wind, which would carry the series for about another year-and-a-half of consistent goodness.

The story guest-stars the Phantom Stranger, a favorite of both Barr (who went on to write one of the quartet of possible PS origins in one of the best issues of "Secret Origins"), and Wein (who'd written some of the better PS solo stories, and made him an honorary Justice Leaguer during his mostly excellent run as JLA writer.) If anything, the story often threatens to turn Batman & his team into guest-stars in their own book, especially when the villain reveals himself. But Barr has always had a flair for refreshingly understated character interactions, and while the A-plot is solid enough, and the happy ending feels to me more well-earned than forced, it's the warm, affectionate character touches -- Halo's amnesiac melancholy leading to her making a terrible faux pas with her adopted-mother figure, Katana; Metamorpho trying to reach his sweetheart Sapphire Stagg by telephone, only to have her father, Simon, intercept the call, leaving Rex heartbroken; Geo-Force finding that the long-distance phone lines connecting the U.S. to his homeland of Markovia are down at the worst possible time -- that really make not only this issue, but personify everything that was best about this series.

Hmmm...these reviews are taking longer than I thought, and I have a chatroom appointment in less than half-an-hour. I'll have to finish my Re-Reads posts within the next couple days.

Sorry, Lardy and Emily.
And I never got around to reviewing the other Christmas issues of Outsiders. Sigh. sigh

BUT...I am at work right now on my review-slash-overview of FF #258-262, plus Alpha Flight #4, and will have it all ready to post within the next hour.
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady

BUT...I am at work right now on my review-slash-overview of FF #258-262, plus Alpha Flight #4, and will have it all ready to post within the next hour.



I had read the Doom issue a month or two ago before the re-read hit its current lull. I read the rest of the story tonight. I decided to skip AF #4 for two reasons: 1) I will be purchasing the John Byrne/Alpha Flight Omnibus this week, and that story's obviously included. 2) Though the story picks up on 260's Sub-Mariner intro and cliffhanger, the story itself is very much an AF story and only peripherally a FF story.
Originally Posted by Paladin

I had read the Doom issue a month or two ago before the re-read hit its current lull. I read the rest of the story tonight. I decided to skip AF #4 for two reasons: 1) I will be purchasing the John Byrne/Alpha Flight Omnibus this week, and that story's obviously included. 2) Though the story picks up on 260's Sub-Mariner intro and cliffhanger, the story itself is very much an AF story and only peripherally a FF story.


Then it's clearly a blessing in disguise that I ended up nodding off last night instead of getting to my computer, so that I didn't end up spoiling AF #4 for you (quick digression -- I am VERY looking forward to discussing AF with you as you work your way through the AF Omnibus. nod )

Now, then...

FF #257-262

I already reviewed 257 in full several posts ago, so I've chosen to just say here that it gets this story-arc off to a spectacular start, with as much heart & soul as grandeur & scope.

258 is a Doctor Doom solo spotlight issue in which the FF don't appear, and while Byrne does an effective job of showing the many facets of Doom (even getting in a pointed meta-jab at ex-collaborator Claremont's portrayal of Doom in one of his less-impressive X-Men stories) and setting up the big battle to come next issue between the FF and a re-animated Tyros/Terrax...it's well, it's hard for me not to read the scenes with Doom's adopted son and heir, Kristoff, without thinking of the utter mess that this character's subplot turned into after Byrne left FF before he could resolve it (to Simonson's credit, I think he did as good a job of wrapping it up quickly and cleanly during his FF run.) Overall, though, a solid issue.

259-260, though they both boast typically well-drawn action sequences from Byrne of the promised battle, really comes up short plot-wise IMHO. I mean, even Doom himself admits that his decision to intervene in the battle, and ending up with his body destroyed and his consciousness in another man's body, is a "stupid" decision.

And 261-262, despite rose-colored memories of being awed by both art & story back when I was a less-jaded, less-analytical 18-year-old, suffers to my mind from the same problem as the Doom/Tyros issues -- incredible set-up (261 is, overall, an excellent issue on its own), Byrne once again throws a wrench into his own story mechanics! This time, it comes in the form of Byrne writing himself into his own story. Now, Stan & Jack did this more than once back in the Silver Age, but when Byrne does it, the impression I get is one of gross self-indulgence that is so gratuitous it takes me out of the story. Which is a pity, as Byrne's art may very well be the very best of his entire FF run, with all the alien lifeforms and outer-space vistas, and cosmic goodness. After having turned over the whole thing in my head since last night, all I could come up with for what might have been the point of Byrne's unintentional self-sabotage is that he merely thought it would be amusing. In my view, this kind of third-rate meta-stuff does not mix with the serious cosmic-existential explorations.

And so, what I had thought would be the perfect high to begin our Byrne FF Re-Read hiatus on, turns out instead to be wonky and off-key, at least in my opinion.

When we resume the re-read, most likely sometime this coming month of May, we'll see whether Byrne gets back on track with the second half of his FF run.

To try to wrap things up on a positive note, I will say that, for all the ups & downs of this run's first half, Byrne does deserve full credit for re-inventing the FF to suit a time very different than the one the FF originated in, and that his FF stories generally hold up much better than Stan & Jack's. And Byrne did it with respect and reverence for the originators, without coming across as the kind of sterile, soft-edged, bloodless nostalgia that often results from creators attempting this sort of soft-boot approach.

AND, in addition to that, I'm happy to say that I will be extending my reappraisal of Byrne's oeuvre by diving into his late-90s take on Kirby's DC creations, in the appropriately titled series "Jack Kirby's Fourth World", which I will actually be reading for THE FIRST TIME EV-AH!

Finally, here is my revised list of Top 5 Byrne FF stories as of issue 262:

1) Negative Zone/Annihilus Saga (FF 251-256, Avengers 233)
2) 20th Anniversary/Liddleville (FF 236)
3) Gladiator/Man and Super-Man (FF 249-250)
4) FF vs. Ego (FF 235)
5) Galactus/Doom/Trial of RR (FF 257-262)

Note that, despite the creative blunders I noted above, the arc taking place in 257-262 still juuuust edges the Galactus/Nova/Terrax story off the list, and I have also reconsidered the placement of the Top 2, feeling that even though the Liddleville issue wins out in terms of warmth and full-blooded characterization, the Negative Zone Saga is really what the FF are all about, and I think it's far less seriously flawed than the Trial of Reed Richards/Trial of Galactus arc.

OK, Lardy, the floor's all yours now.

(And thanks again for being so patient with me.) blush
I'll add my thoughts probably tomorrow night....
Great. Something else else to look forward to. nod
Like Fick, I did a review of FF 257 a few posts ago. It was a glowing review of what has certainly been one of the very best single issues of Byrne's run on the book. But issue 257 is undeniably the start of another ambitious arc that continues thru issue 262 which effectively comprises the middle of Byrne's run as writer/artist on the book.

It's an interesting arc which brings a few plotlines to a head: the ongoing Dr. Doom story, the return of Terrax/Tyros and the recent developments with Galactus and his new herald.

Issue 258, "Interlude", picks up the Doom and Terrax plots in what at the time was probably a first, an entirely Doom-focused issue of the FF. As promised in the teaser for it in 257, there are no appearances by the FF at all. To me, even by Byrne's standards, it's an exceptionally well-rendered issue. Exhibit A is the gourgeous double-splash rendering of the city of Doomstadt as Doom's subjects repair damages left in the wake of the usurper Sorba's overthrow. I think Byrne was genuinely excited about the issue and its subject, based on the exceptional art. Ultimately, the story's function is to set up the next two issues (in addition to the Kristoff subplot that will bear fruit a little later on), so it's not as insightful into Doom as it could have been--but there are some nice moments. Certainly, a worthwhile issue.

Issues 259-260, "Choices" & "When Titans Clash!", feature the culmination of Doom's plot utilizing Terrax. Having learned how to cosmically re-empower the former Herald in 258, Doom sics Terrax on the FF, who are minus the still-missing Reed Richards. (In fact, no one knows he's even missing yet.) It's a fairly standard high-stakes clash involving a character (Terrax) that Byrne seems fond of using, probably because he co-created Terrax during his proto-run on the book with Marv Wolfman.

Byrne uses the two issues to bring in two FF mainstay guests that he had yet to use to this point in his run, the Silver Surfer and Namor. The Surfer plays a crucial role in the battle, while Namor serves to bring Sue into a cross-over with Byrne's other then-concurrent ongoing book, Alpha Flight. Byrne renders both of them in ways that are very consistent with Kirby's original designs. I think, though, that Byrne's Namor is particularly memorable. (I suspect Byrne enjoys the character as Byrne would later launch a Namor ongoing.)

The most interesting subplot in the issues is Sue setting up the family's new secret identities and home in a suburb in Connecticut. I can't remember how long this lasted before it was discarded (probably within Byrne's own run), but it feels like Byrne intended to stick with it for longer than it actually lasted.

My favorite moments in these 2 issues occur when Sue is briefly detained in Doom's ship. It shows how much stronger a character Byrne has made her as she stands up to Doom when the old Silver Age Sue might have cowered and waited for rescue. She speaks to Doom with authority, and you believe her when she threatens, "Do I have to come after you? Do I have to take this whole ship apart to find you?" I love how she derides his manhood for constantly hiding behind his Doombots, as well.

Another great moment occurs when Doom realizes Reed isn't going to show up. His ego just can't let the other three die unless Reed is there to witness it, so he attempts to intervene and prevent Terrax from following thru. It's just classic Doom in a way that shows Byrne knows the character very well, though it's flawed in that Doom would have been better prepared.

The 2-parter ends with apparent finality for both Doom and Terrax. Doom's armor is fused by a vengeful Terrax and left helpless, and he is later apparently killed during Surfer and Terrax's epic battle. And Terrax himself is apparently obliterated when his artificial empowerment backfires as Doom had predicted.

I remember hearing about this supposed "death of Dr. Doom" when it happened. Being in my tender and unjaded early teens, I thought this was it for the classic villain. And THEN he shows up unscathed in Secret Wars a few months later.... :rolleyes:

So ultimately, it's a big, spectacle-filled battle with some dramatic moments, but in the end, not all that consequential. I think even Terrax eventually returned. shrug

Finally, the arc ends in issues 261 and 262 ("The Search for/Trial of Reed Richards"), as the FF finally discover what happened to read and how to find him with some help from the Surfer and Uatu the Watcher. In what I think is an excellent story progression, Reed's saving Galactus back in FF 244 coupled with Galactus subsequently reaping the Skrull homeworld has landed Reed in hot water. We and the FF learn that a consortium of the survivors of worlds Galactus, represented by Shi'ar Majestrix Lilandra, are holding Reed responsible for not letting Glactus die. They want to execute Reed outright, but the Watcher convinces them that Reed deserves a fair trial.

It's a dramatic and brilliant idea by Byrne that comes up just a bit shy in its execution. As Fick mentions, the conceit of Byrne writing himself into the story really detracts from what he's trying to do. While the set-up is consistent with the established MU cheat that Marvel Comics exists in its own fictional universe and that the heroes share their adventures with the creators to be chronicled in their books, it seems too big a moment for that kind of meta appearance.

I don't know if this was all Byrne's idea. You see, this issue was published during Marvel's infamous "Assistant Editors' Month", which was generally characterized by most of that month's books having goofy, gimmicky stories. The Avengers isse had tham as guests on Late Night with David Letterman. Fred Hembeck drew Spectacular Spider-Man. Aunt May and Franklin Richards faced Galactus in Marvel Team-Up. So maybe Byrne wouldn't have been in the story if it hadn't fallen within that month? I'm not totally sure, but the scenes with Byrne and his editor seem like they might be evidence for it.

Anyhow, it is what it is. I'd have preferred Byrne not have been in the story because it took me out of it to a degree, but it didn't exactly ruin it.

All in all, the trial did a pretty decent job of exploring the moral ambiguities of whether or not Reed should have let Galactus die while broaching the idea that Galactus serves a larger purpose doing what he does. As you might expect, neither has a definitive answer stated plainly, but Reed is aquitted and those present receive some clarity thru the intervention of Eternity. Together with some great cosmic spectacle, a memorable appearance by Odin (Byrne's rendition is stunning and powerful) and some inspired Byrne designs, it mostly overcomes Byrne's self indulgence.

Overall, a very fine arc and one worthy of a ranking on my big board:

1) Negative Zone/Annihilus Saga (FF 251-256, Avengers 233)
2) Galactus/Doom/Trial of Reed Richards (FF 257-262)
3) 20th Anniversary/Liddleville (FF 236)
4) Terrax/Nova/Galactus (FF 242-244)
5) "Legacy" (FF Annual 17)
6) FF vs. Ego (FF 235)

I had previously ranked 242-244 higher than 236. Upon further reflection, I decided to move it below that issue. But, flaws and all, I had to rank 257-262 second on my board. I mean, 257 was one of the best individual issues of the run. 258 was a Doom solo issue. 259-260 featured an epic fight with some great Sue moments. And 261-262 was such a brilliant idea with one regrettable story choice. I really like what Byrne had done with Galactus and bringing some ambiguity to his story. Yes, I know he was never just a villain, but Byrne found ways to make him both more frightening while also being pitiable than what we had seen before. Brilliant, memorable stuff even with the caveats.
Originally Posted by Paladin
Issue 258, "Interlude", picks up the Doom and Terrax plots in what at the time was probably a first, an entirely Doom-focused issue of the FF. As promised in the teaser for it in 257, there are no appearances by the FF at all. To me, even by Byrne's standards, it's an exceptionally well-rendered issue. Exhibit A is the gourgeous double-splash rendering of the city of Doomstadt as Doom's subjects repair damages left in the wake of the usurper Sorba's overthrow. I think Byrne was genuinely excited about the issue and its subject, based on the exceptional art. Ultimately, the story's function is to set up the next two issues (in addition to the Kristoff subplot that will bear fruit a little later on), so it's not as insightful into Doom as it could have been--but there are some nice moments. Certainly, a worthwhile issue.


Agreed 100%, especially about the Doomstadt panorama.

Originally Posted by Paladin
Another great moment occurs when Doom realizes Reed isn't going to show up. His ego just can't let the other three die unless Reed is there to witness it, so he attempts to intervene and prevent Terrax from following thru. It's just classic Doom in a way that shows Byrne knows the character very well, though it's flawed in that Doom would have been better prepared.


I get the impression you are more forgiving of said flaw than I am. It felt to me like Byrne had written himself into a corner with this plot thread, with Doom's plan so foolproof that Byrne forced himself to turn the villain stupid (as I noted in my review, those were Doom's own words to describe his hasty change of plans after it had screwed everything up for him.)

This has all gotten me wondering, have there ever been any What If stories where Doom actually wins? The potential for a memorably dark tale, yet one with at least some heart, seems awesome to me.

Originally Posted by Paladin
I think even Terrax eventually returned. shrug


Well, yes, but it was during the Fabian Nicieza/Mark Bagley era of New Warriors, so IMHO Terrax's return made for a couple of very worthwhile stories.

Originally Posted by Paladin
As Fick mentions, the conceit of Byrne writing himself into the story really detracts from what he's trying to do. While the set-up is consistent with the established MU cheat that Marvel Comics exists in its own fictional universe and that the heroes share their adventures with the creators to be chronicled in their books, it seems too big a moment for that kind of meta appearance.

I don't know if this was all Byrne's idea. You see, this issue was published during Marvel's infamous "Assistant Editors' Month", which was generally characterized by most of that month's books having goofy, gimmicky stories. The Avengers isse had tham as guests on Late Night with David Letterman. Fred Hembeck drew Spectacular Spider-Man. Aunt May and Franklin Richards faced Galactus in Marvel Team-Up. So maybe Byrne wouldn't have been in the story if it hadn't fallen within that month? I'm not totally sure, but the scenes with Byrne and his editor seem like they might be evidence for it.


I think that's a good point, but there's one thing that makes me doubt that Byrne and/or Marvel-Editorial deliberately contrived a goofy element to bring the issue in line with Assistant Editors Month -- namely, that month's issue of Thor (339 or 340, I can't remember for sure ATM), which was surprisingly and bold and different while still being awesome rather than goofy (it's the one where Odin gives Beta Ray Bill his own hammer, and powers equal to Thor's.)

Originally Posted by Paladin
Overall, a very fine arc and one worthy of a ranking on my big board:

1) Negative Zone/Annihilus Saga (FF 251-256, Avengers 233)
2) Galactus/Doom/Trial of Reed Richards (FF 257-262)
3) 20th Anniversary/Liddleville (FF 236)
4) Terrax/Nova/Galactus (FF 242-244)
5) "Legacy" (FF Annual 17)
6) FF vs. Ego (FF 235)

I had previously ranked 242-244 higher than 236. Upon further reflection, I decided to move it below that issue. But, flaws and all, I had to rank 257-262 second on my board. I mean, 257 was one of the best individual issues of the run. 258 was a Doom solo issue. 259-260 featured an epic fight with some great Sue moments. And 261-262 was such a brilliant idea with one regrettable story choice. I really like what Byrne had done with Galactus and bringing some ambiguity to his story. Yes, I know he was never just a villain, but Byrne found ways to make him both more frightening while also being pitiable than what we had seen before. Brilliant, memorable stuff even with the caveats.


When you put it that way...perhaps I was a little too critical in a knee-jerk way. I'll see how I feel the next time I re-read that arc.

So, Lardy, are you planning to post your thoughts on the Alpha Flight Omnibus in this same thread during our hiatus from FF? (I hope, I hope...)
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady

So, Lardy, are you planning to post your thoughts on the Alpha Flight Omnibus in this same thread during our hiatus from FF? (I hope, I hope...)


Not necessarily. Though I'm buying it this week, specifically because it's on sale for half off, that doesn't mean I'll read it very soon. I'm pretty whimsical with my reading, part of the perk of having so many books in my Pile. It might count against it being read soon that I've read a lot of Byrne FF over the past few months and will resume doing so when the re-read resumes. But then again, I might just say, "why not?", and get on with it! Who knows? hmmm
I'm starting a new major reading project of Bronze Age Marvel. In order to avoid the project creep that derails most of my big projects, I'm limiting it to books that I have never read significant runs of. So far, I'm including: Luke Cage and Iron Fist both before and after they merged, Englehart's Dr. Strange, Master of Kung-Fu, Gerber's Man-Thing, Starlin's Warlock and Captain Marvel. Also, since I never finished Englehart's Captain America, I am adding it in from the point I left off. That should get me through to the mid-70s, and I'll consider adding other books case-by-case basis as it moves along. So far I've read the first couple of issues of both Hero for Hire and Dr. Strange, although I'm not to the Englehart bit yet. Thoroughly enjoyable but not fantastic BA stuff, but it's really just the groundwork for the stuff I'm looking forward to.
Some great stuff there, BF.

The Englehart/Brunner Dr. Strange is my favorite run on the good doctor.

The Doug Moench/Paul Gulacy MoKF is awesome. When Gulacy leaves after 50, it takes about 25-30 issues until Gene Day comes aboard, first inking Mike Zeck and then doing the whole art himself. If not for Moench's clashing with Jim Shooter, he & Day might have scaled the same heights as the Gulacy era, but even so, it's rarely less than good.

I consider Starlin's Mar-Vell vs Thanos epic to be the most satisfying thing he ever did.

The Jo Duffy/Kerry Gammill run on Power Man & Iron Fist is not only one of my favorite things Marvel did during the late 70s/early 80s, it's also, quite honestly, the only time I've ever liked either character.
Hey all, long time no type. I decided I can't let WoW eat ALL of my online life, so I figured I would head back here to make a post. I've started another major re-read that will probably supplant my BA Marvel for a bit, although I hope eventually they will co-exist.

It occurred to me that I missed an opportunity last year to do a 30-year anniversary real-time reread of post-Crisis DC. So I've decided to spend the rest of this year zipping through what I've missed already, so that starting in January 2018 I can read each week's books on a 30 year delay. The slower pace will hopefully make it easier to keep up with, make room for some lesser things I wouldn't normally reread (or read for the first time), and give me a little nostalgia boost as it gives me a greater sense of being at a certain point in the narrative of the DCU, reliving it along with the characters. Once I start getting caught up, I hope to work my BA Marvel stuff back into the mix. I started with Green Lantern Corps #201, I believe the first "clean relaunch" of a book. I decided to ignore any books that were a continuation of the pre-Crisis runs. Even things like Levitz's LSH, that had a long and successful post-Crisis tail.

Fortunately for the purpose of this project, Marvel was in a bit of a slump 30 years ago as the Shooter era imploded. Ignoring long-time runs I'm not going to follow, the only new things at this point I'm really interested in re/reading are PAD's Hulk and Englehart's Silver Surfer. They are young enough that I was able to catch up easily, and two days ago (30th anniversary of new comics days is falling on Fridays right now) I was able to read the latest issues of both in perfect sync.

Naturally the whole point of this is that it will take years, and it may well be too ambitious to succeed, although the fact that I haven't set an eye on an endpoint goal makes "successful completion" a bit of a nebulous concept. I'll see how it goes.
Green Lantern 201. Back when having so many Lanterns on Earth seemed like an unwieldy novelty. Obviously Johns must have been a huge fan.
My Bronze Age reread went off the rails again, so I decided to rework it from first principles. The point was to read things on a 40 year to the week delay in anticipation of my 40th anniversary as a superhero comics reader next year, but I always got bogged down trying to binge the parts of runs that came out more than 40 years ago. I decided to just give up on that, and I am going to just start reading on schedule, accepting that I'm missing the parts of runs that came before. The most continuity-heavy books, like X-Men, I'm pretty conversant with anyway.

Also, I decided on a different approach that eliminates the need to decide which books get included and which don't. Since I'm using Mike's Amazing World to assemble my list, and the search results include covers, I'm going to treat that like the newsstand rack, and each week I will just decide which books I want to read. Some may get picked every time they show up, others only occasionally. In addition to making it even more of an homage to my childhood, it lets me adjust on the fly to how much time/energy I have any given week, and hopefully when I have a slow or non-reading week, instead of feeling intimidated by backlog, it will be easier to just let it go and skip some comics.

If anyone's curious, the books I picked for this "week" (the new week will actually start tomorrow) are:

Avengers #167 (Perez! Original recipe GotG!)
Black Panther #7 (Kirby!)
The Champions #17
The Defenders #55 (Aw, my foot dragging cost me the Scorpio Saga and Giffen)
The Man Called Nova #17 (Yellow Claw, yikes)
Superman Family #187

And the books that came out 40 years ago tomorrow: (actually, for some reason books shipped twice a week back then, so some of these won't have anniversaries until a few days from now.)

Marvel Team-Up #65 (Captain Britain)
Adventure Comics #455 (Superboy returns to Adventure)
Captain Marvel #54 (Nitro - the man who killed Captain Marvel, eventually)
Fantastic Four #190 (Clip Show/exposition issue)
Green Lantern/Green Arrow #100
Brave and the Bold #139 (Hawkman)
Secret Society of Super-Villains #12
I think the time is right for me to resume and conclude my re-read of Byrne's FF run. I've been itching for some Byrne lately, and it doesn't feel right to revisit She-Hulk, Alpha Flight or Wonder Woman while leaving the FF unfinished.

So sometime in March, I will pick up with FF 263 and continue thru the end around 295. If Fick or anyone else wants to do so as well, that will be great. If not, well, I'm less likely to give the detailed reviews I wrote for the earlier issues. But we'll see.

Looking forward to seeing how these stories stack up to my memories of them!
Lardy, since I was visiting LW anyway, I just thought I'd reconfirm what I told you on FB -- I'm definitely in for the continuation of the Byrne FF re-read.

So brace yourselves for more NSFW, non-kid friendly jokes about Reed and Susan, Legion Worlders! wink

Always in spoiler boxes with warnings, of course. angel
Byrne had some neat 'done in one' stories, like the one where he (after decades of her just being a name that Ben shouted) introduced us to 'Aunt Petunia,' who turned out to be a young woman and not the 'Aunt May' that I had pictured in my head.
Yep, Set--we reviewed and commented on that story somewhere earlier in this very thread!
And...it begins again!

FANTASTIC FOUR #263-264

I'm happy to say I quite enjoyed the 2-part story in these issues! I did find that the only thing I remembered about it since the last time I read it was the cover to 264, which is not only one of my favorite FF covers of all time, but also my favorite of the many homages to the cover of FF v.1 #1 by various artists over the decades.

https://goo.gl/images/6dsavn

But that just made this re-read all the sweeter, not just rediscovering the pleasures in the clever twists and turns of Byrne's scripts, but also the sheer magnificence of Byrne in his pictorial prime -- the car race gone horribly wrong is both spectacular and blood-curdling, and there is just no escaping the irony that the real villain turns out to be an utterly ruthless and amoral media mogul who pursues his lust for power at any cost. If anything, it anticipates Grant Morrison's & Cameron Stewart's underrated (and, sadly, still only 2/3 completed) "Seaguy" by 2 whole decades! Good show, Byrne! More bittersweet is the use of Disneyesque iconography, given that Marvel ended up being bought by Disney. sigh

This story is mainly a showcase for Ben, which is fine by me, as he's always been my favorite FF member. The Reed and Susan subplot about them assimilating into the suburbs while Susan begins experiencing difficulties with her second pregnancy is...well...more interesting for what might have come of it than what actually came of it before Byrne walked away from this series. Without spoiling any of the things I remember which lie ahead in future issues, I'll just say that Reed using his elastic powers to re-shape his own face is profoundly disturbing to me, for reasons that even I don't quite understand. This could have led to an exploration of Reed's shadow-self, but I don't recall it ever happening during Byrne's FF tenure. A real wasted opportunity, in my humble opinion.

Still, I took away a lot more positive than negative from these two issues, and I think overall it's a nice way to get the re-reading rolling again.
Reading FF 263 & 264 was like returning to your favorite comfort food after going without for way too long. While the story they comprise won't challenge the big list of the best Byrne FF stories from the beginning of this re-read, the craft Byrne shows therein in what is one of the less important small stories within his run is still commendable.

As Ann mentions, this 3 -parter is Thing-centric. I think this is an especially good choice because this is the last story in Byrne's run in which Ben is still a member of the FF. Starting in the next issue, the FF will have what I feel is its best-ever replacement member. And while I look forward to experiencing once again Byrne begin to mold this formerly C-list character into an A-lister, it's still sad to know that we are about to say goodbye to Byrne's excellent take on Ben Grimm (as a regular) as his run on the book transitions to its second half.

The story idea is pretty standard: rich, delusional man has a tremendously flawed plan to "save" the world that our heroes have to stop. There are some twists to the idea, including some that Ann alludes to, but that's essentially the story. 263 sets all this up with a bit of mystery set up by Johnny's apparent death in a car crash. By the end of that issue, we learn the crash was a ruse in order for the rich guy to use Johnny's powers to alter the earth's crust. Ben doesn't buy it, and he plays detective and tracks Johnny to the guy's private island. Turns out, the efforts to use Johnny's powers to terra-form bring these actions to the attention of...the Mole Man!

264's part two is the really fun pay-off to the story that makes it really memorable for me. Basically, Mole Man teams up with Ben and the Torch to foil the really destructive plan. And this issue has three very memorable moments within it for me: one is a fantastic splash page, another is a (probably unintentionally) hilarious moment and the third is one that made me cheer.

The splash I love is the opening splash of the issue. It's a headshot of the Mole Man himself that I thought was exceptionally well-rendered. While I'm sure most people would never think they'd want such a shot of what is, let's face it, not an attractive character, I think it's a great example of Byrne's artistry. The lines on that splash are just perfect in their expressiveness and attention to detail. Once again, Byrne makes a classic FF character his own!

The moment that made me giggle so much that I had to explain it to my wife occurs over the next few pages after the splash. The Thing, having fallen into the Mole Man's clutches at the end of 263, is being carried of by the moloids. Mole Man is telling his minions to be careful not to drop their captive, lest he fall prematurely into the lava. They bring him to an execution slab while Mole Man tells the helpless Ben how the terra-forming plot has ruined his underworld domain since the FF last saw him. While Ben tries to explain that the FF didn't cause his woes, we see the moloids up on higher ground preparing to roll a huge boulder into a groove which will roll down and smash Ben into the lava! I don't think it was meant to be funny by Byrne, but I enjoyed the absurdity of a death trap meant to painfully slam our hero into lava when they could have just dumped him over the bridge moments earlier! Ben manages to talk his way out of the trap, but I love that comics could still be absurd back in the Bronze Age in their innocence and earnestness. Comics are rarely this fun anymore without having to try super-hard!

The big cheer-worthy moment comes when the Mole Man's huge green monster from FF 1 makes a triumphant reappearance and has a big hero moment to smash thru the bad guy's impenetrable big door. Yes, the monster's arrival is spoiled by the issues FF 1 cover homage, but the moment is still great fun!

The only let-down to the story is that it turns out that the action really has little bearing on the outcome. The resolution makes it clear that the danger to Earth was never as great as it appeared to be. So what we have is a fun, very entertaining romp but mostly a throwaway kind of adventure. In hindsight, the latest in Byrne's "Twilight Zone"-style series of FF tales but one with considerable entertainment value compared to most of the others of its ilk. All in all, I'll definitely take it!

It should be mentioned that Reed and Sue do appear and serve entirely as subplots without connection to Ben and Johnny's story. We catch up with their suburban living situation, see Reed check up on the Vision and investigate readings that will end up bringing the FF into the Secret Wars portal while we see that something's up with Sue's pregnancy. While I can see how Ann finds Reed's method of disguise unnerving, I'm always glad to see Byrne expand on the FF's abilities in ways we may not have seen before.

So, while this won't make "the list", I am beyond pleased to finally be continuing one of the all-time best runs by the artist who has always been my personal favorite! Bring on the rest!!!!
Originally Posted by Paladin
Reading FF 263 & 264 was like returning to your favorite comfort food after going without for way too long.


Beautifully put, Lardy.


Originally Posted by Paladin
As Ann mentions, this 3 -parter is Thing-centric. I think this is an especially good choice because this is the last story in Byrne's run in which Ben is still a member of the FF. Starting in the next issue, the FF will have what I feel is its best-ever replacement member. And while I look forward to experiencing once again Byrne begin to mold this formerly C-list character into an A-lister, it's still sad to know that we are about to say goodbye to Byrne's excellent take on Ben Grimm (as a regular) as his run on the book transitions to its second half.


A fitting send-off to one of Marvel's greatest icons.


Originally Posted by Paladin
The moment that made me giggle so much that I had to explain it to my wife occurs over the next few pages after the splash. The Thing, having fallen into the Mole Man's clutches at the end of 263, is being carried of by the moloids. Mole Man is telling his minions to be careful not to drop their captive, lest he fall prematurely into the lava. They bring him to an execution slab while Mole Man tells the helpless Ben how the terra-forming plot has ruined his underworld domain since the FF last saw him. While Ben tries to explain that the FF didn't cause his woes, we see the moloids up on higher ground preparing to roll a huge boulder into a groove which will roll down and smash Ben into the lava! I don't think it was meant to be funny by Byrne, but I enjoyed the absurdity of a death trap meant to painfully slam our hero into lava when they could have just dumped him over the bridge moments earlier! Ben manages to talk his way out of the trap, but I love that comics could still be absurd back in the Bronze Age in their innocence and earnestness. Comics are rarely this fun anymore without having to try super-hard!


Yes, that sequence is wonderfully unself-conscious in its over-the-top absurdity. It's not trying to be ironic. It's not trying to be clever. It's just trying to entertain the reader and give her or him their money's worth. Oh, if only superhero comics could be that unpretentious again! And, of course, there have been a few over the years that have been just that. I only wish it was more than just a few.


Originally Posted by Paladin
In hindsight, the latest in Byrne's "Twilight Zone"-style series of FF tales but one with considerable entertainment value compared to most of the others of its ilk. All in all, I'll definitely take it!


Agreed 100%.


Originally Posted by Paladin
So, while this won't make "the list", I am beyond pleased to finally be continuing one of the all-time best runs by the artist who has always been my personal favorite! Bring on the rest!!!!


My sentiments exactly.
I forgot to mention that the story includes a significant time jump between 262 and 263 to advance Sue's pregnancy. This was a fairly unheard of move for superhero books at the time as the passage of time typically goes very slowly. So it certainly bears noting.
Now that you mention it, that is a rather odd thing, expediting the subplot about Susan's pregnancy. I recall the outcome (in the next several issues currently awaiting us) as being heartbreakingly powerful, but a bit more buildup would have at least made more dramatic sense. I wonder if editorial pressured Byrne to speed it up?
I don't know. If the outcome was always to be what it was, then it makes sense not to string along readers for too long emotionally before getting to it. If it wasn't always going to be the case, I could see editorial pushing the timeline to get past it as well.

I haven't heard many anecdotes about editorial interference during Byrne's FF run, and I suppose you must not have either. It's quite possible that there was some significant activity of that nature because it IS well-documented that Byrne was no fan of Jim Shooter's. I haven't, though, heard of many specific clashes, aside from Shooter's interference in the Jean Grey outcome.

I do have to wonder about this specific instance, though, especially as Byrne was making a point to move the Richards' out to the suburbs. Though this was as much for Franklin's sake as for the baby's, it seems like Byrne was genuinely looking to expand the Richards family. But I don't know why Shooter or any other editor would object to this since it wouldn't really fundamentally change the title and the dynamic of the characters since they were already married and had one child.

As I read a little bit ahead and see the influence of Shooter's Secret Wars come into play, it made me think about how many of the changes wrought in the aftermath of that story were driven by Shooter and how many were driven by collaboration with all of the series' current writers. I have to think that Byrne must have been pretty much on board for them because of all the wonders he would work with She-Hulk on the FF and beyond and because he continued as writer on the Thing's book thoughout most of that character's Secret Wars spin-off adventure. But you never know...unless there's some interviews and stuff that relates to his time on the FF.
All good points, Lardy.

I'd say Secret Wars, or rather its lamentable sequel SWII (no less deplorable despite its inevitability,) is at the crux of where not only Byrne's FF is headed at the point we've reached, but also the whole Marvel Universe. For better and for worse. But I'll wait til we reach 1985 to elaborate.

What I will say right now is that, according to Sean Howe's excellent book about Marvel, Shooter was, even as early as the first Secret Wars, becoming increasingly heavy-headed in his editorial methods, until by the time he was "let go" three years later, there was a lot more madness than method. I do know for certain that part of the reason Mike Zeck has done little or no interior art since Secret Wars is because Shooter put such heavy demands on him during the making of that story, leaving Zeck burned out and exhausted.

Byrne himself, in an interview circa 1998, had what I consider one of his best insights into why things went sour at Marvel during the final phase of Shooter's tenure. Words to the effect of, "If only Shooter and Dick Giordano had switched places around 1983, that would have been great for both Marvel and DC. Because Marvel had gotten its house in order to a point where they no longer needed a martinet like Shooter but rather a fatherly teddy-bear figure like Giordano, whereas DC under Giordano went off the rails (the messy aftermath of Crisis, et cetera,) in a way that Shooter would never have allowed to happen."
The Thing #10

Earlier in this re-read, I enthusiastically praised "The Thing" #2, beautifully written & inked by John Byrne and penciled with surprising sensitivity by the all-too-easily-dismissed Ron Wilson. Well, now we have another issue written by JB and penciled by RW that is relevant enough to the goings-on in "Fantastic Four" that it has been included in the various collections of the Byrne FF run. I wish I could say it's as good as issue 2, but it's not. I don't blame Byrne or Wilson -- I put the blame squarely on inker Hilary Barta, whom I have seen other finishing jobs by in a few other 80s comics...but none quite as bad as this. Somehow, though, the great expressiveness that Wilson manages to bring to our favorite granite-faced monster-man, Benjamin J. Grimm, does shine through the awful inks here and there. And thank the Gods for that, because this story depends on Ben's adorably ugly face for it to work even halfway!

Basically, Ben has reached a point in his tempestuous life where he feels that, for a variety of perfectly sensible reasons, it's just not going to work out long-term between him and Alicia Masters. As he tries to tell her this during a walk in Central Park, the couple is harassed by obnoxious grade-school kids...which only deepens Ben's convictions that he's doing what's right for both him and Alicia. Relocating in a huff to the Baxter Building, the Thing bares his heart to his longtime lover, and for emphasis, he flashes back to the never-before-chronicled immediate aftermath of the familiar FF origin scene. Byrne and Wilson really drive home just how painful Ben's very existence following his transformation has been!

It could be argued, with some validity that Alicia is far too passive throughout, but before she even gets a chance to put in her 2 cents, Ben gets called by Reed to speed over back to Central Park with him and Johnny. It seems there's some kind of energy manifestation that is literally out of this world! Of course, us longtime Marvel face-fronters know where this is going -- to Battleworld and the Secret Wars maxi-series, while Susan, who is experiencing several complications with her 2nd pregnancy, is left behind with Alicia and little Franklin. One gigantic cosmic zap later, and the menfolk are gone. Temporarily? Forever? We shall find out in FF #265.
I read the next 6 issues in the Omnibus (including Thing 10 and the next FF Annual) last month after completing the Mole Man 2-parter. I thought about posting two 3-issue reviews, but I didn't want to rush Fick. So seeing as how she came back with the above review, I'll just write a few words about....

Thing 10 was a thoughtful interlude in which Ben contemplates moving on from his relationship with Alicia. It does work as a nice companion piece to the similarly introspective and retrospective Thing 2, though I also like the former tale better. I, too, had issues with the art. I'll trust Fick's assessment of the blame to Hilary Barta as I'm not overly familiar with Ron Wilson's work. I do have to wonder a bit, though, because some characters look terribly off, as with Reed and Sue having weirdly high foreheads. And Alicia looks really off throughout the whole story. In fact, in the last panel of page two she inexplicably has a blank, mouth-open expression that makes her look strangely like a blow-up sex doll! I'm not even kidding! But at least Ben himself looks great in the issue.

The timing is interesting as we know in hindsight (and Byrne, of course, knew then) that Ben is about to go on a solo journey spinning out of Secret Wars that will take him out of the FF line-up for about three years. Ben himself didn't know about what was about to happen to him, but the timing is such that his seeking closure with Alicia would turn out to be fortuitous. It doesn't come out of nowhere, though. Byrne has been seeding Ben's turning point with her for a while, dating back to their adventure in Liddleville very early on in Byrne's run. So it works that he is broaching the subject here because it has been set up, but the finality is interrupted by Reed and Johnny pulling Ben off into what will be a pretty fateful adventure and a prolonged one for Ben. So enough is said for both lovers to know a change is coming, but the resolution is left hanging. In the meantime we will see one of the pair move on to another relationship and the other having their feelings hurt when it is discovered. Basically, one takes this as the end and moves on, and the other feels the need to reconnect after the time apart. It's an interesting and brave move by Byrne in breaking up a longterm FF relationship, one that will be undone by future creative teams with an absurd ret-con.

So in my opinion this series of six issues that begin with thing 10 and end with FF Annual 18 (with the notable exception of "A Small Loss" in FF 267) is largely lightweight and inessential in the Byrne run, but certainly not bereft of entertainment value. I feel that the run really resumes in earnest with FF 269!
Lardy, thank you for being so patient and accommodating. I'm currently working my way through those same few issues, plus the Annual, that you mentioned at the end of your review, and so far I concur. Once I finish the Annual, I'll post one big block review of them, so we can get to 269 faster!

I'd be interested to hear your thoughts on the flashback sequence in Thing 10 -- I thought that was actually the best scene.

RE: Ron Wilson, he was one of the first African-American artists to draw famous superheroes, alongside Billy Graham (who drew the majority of the great -- and recently collected for the first time -- Bronze Age Black Panther solo epic "Panther's Rage") and Keith Pollard (EVERY SINGLE model sheet from the 1991 edition of OHOTMU, as well as the co-creator of Felicia Hardy while he was the semi-regular Amazing Spider-Man artist during the Marv Wolfman era; he also drew THREE Bronze Age Marvel anniversary issues -- Fantastic Four 200, Amazing Spider-Man 200, and Thor 300!)

Wilson drew ALL 33 ISSUES of Ben's 80s solo book, and drew Ben's original team-up book Marvel Two-In-One for two long stints which combine into an approximate total of 55 out of the 100 issues of the book's complete run! In the latter, he notably drew most of the issues immediately following the classic Project Pegasus Saga arc until the book's cancellation. So obviously he's quite a fan of Aunt Petunia's favorite nephew!

He also drew all 13 issues the Star Comics' version of "He-Man and the Masters of the Universe." 80s works in which he had far more creative input are the Wolfpack limited series and the Super Boxers graphic novel.

Overall, I think of Wilson as a reliable, meat-and-potatoes superhero artist. What distinguishes him, though, is how expressive he made Ben. And let's face it, Ben is not an easy character to even draw competently, let alone distinctively!
Originally Posted by Ann Hebistand
Lardy, thank you for being so patient and accommodating. I'm currently working my way through those same few issues, plus the Annual, that you mentioned at the end of your review, and so far I concur. Once I finish the Annual, I'll post one big block review of them, so we can get to 269 faster!


Sounds good! nod

Originally Posted by Fick
I'd be interested to hear your thoughts on the flashback sequence in Thing 10 -- I thought that was actually the best scene.


It didn't do a whole lot for me. I think this is mostly because I'm not an old school FF fan. Specifically, I still haven't read much of the classic Lee/Kirby run because I've found what I've sampled...unsatisfying. I've said it before, but I find the treatment of Sue deplorable in what I've read. Not just her portrayal, but the way the male characters treat her, especially Reed. I may very well buy and read the complete early FF at some point, but it's just not a priority. So showing us a new scene of what happened after their origin scene didn't appeal to my nostalgia because it just doesn't exist for that era. Yes, it shows Ben's isolation was there from the beginning, but it's not exactly a revelation.

I hope you can understand my reaction there. I don't mean for it to put a shadow on your own.

Originally Posted by Fick
RE: Ron Wilson, he was one of the first African-American artists to draw famous superheroes, alongside Billy Graham (who drew the majority of the great -- and recently collected for the first time -- Bronze Age Black Panther solo epic "Panther's Rage") and Keith Pollard (EVERY SINGLE model sheet from the 1991 edition of OHOTMU, as well as the co-creator of Felicia Hardy while he was the semi-regular Amazing Spider-Man artist during the Marv Wolfman era; he also drew THREE Bronze Age Marvel anniversary issues -- Fantastic Four 200, Amazing Spider-Man 200, and Thor 300!)

Wilson drew ALL 33 ISSUES of Ben's 80s solo book, and drew Ben's original team-up book Marvel Two-In-One for two long stints which combine into an approximate total of 55 out of the 100 issues of the book's complete run! In the latter, he notably drew most of the issues immediately following the classic Project Pegasus Saga arc until the book's cancellation. So obviously he's quite a fan of Aunt Petunia's favorite nephew!

He also drew all 13 issues the Star Comics' version of "He-Man and the Masters of the Universe." 80s works in which he had far more creative input are the Wolfpack limited series and the Super Boxers graphic novel.

Overall, I think of Wilson as a reliable, meat-and-potatoes superhero artist. What distinguishes him, though, is how expressive he made Ben. And let's face it, Ben is not an easy character to even draw competently, let alone distinctively!


I'm certainly aware of Ron Wilson and have seen his work here and there over my long fandom, but he hasn't figured heavily in stuff I've read over same. I read very little Marvel 2-in-1 and a handful of Thing issues back in the day. Looking at his wikipedia entry, it looks like it was mostly fill-in work beyond those two books. I also see the Marvel Graphic Novel Super Boxers was something he did. As a kid, I was fascinated by MGN's and might even have bought that one if I could have afforded it. I Googled some images from that tonight, and it looks pretty impressive visually.

In any case I've got the Serpent Crown HC from 2-in-1. Looks like he did some of the art in that. Unfortunately, the Project pegasus HC I own (as you mentioned) features no Wilson credits and neither does the Liberty Legion one I want to get soon. At least there's another Thing issue featured very soon in the Omnibus.

But, yeah, he draws a great, expressive Benjamin J. Grimm!
Regarding the flashback, Lardy, I'm certainly not offended by your reaction. If anything, I dislike the early FF as much as, or even more than, you. I just thought it was cool the way that Byrne fleshed out what was, in the original Kirby/Lee telling, a flat, sketchy scene that ended all too quickly (trust me, you've missed nothing by not reading it.) I was also impressed with the way that Byrne showed us, in an understated and non-preachy way, how casual intolerance is taken for granted by its perpetrators, and how deeply it emotionally lacerates its targets.
Ah, yes. Nothing wrong with putting a little message in there. I like that it's not preachy but effective.
Lardy, I think I need to get away from superhero comics for at least a couple of months.

Sorry about this. It's really a whole bunch of things coming together at once in my life.

But I hope you'll still at least post the short reviews of whatever issues of Byrne's FF you re-read in the next several weeks.

I'll do my best to catch up when I come back.

hug love
Well, I'll admit I'm disappointed, but it is what it is. I think what I'll do is finish this trade stack I've just picked out of the Pile and started. It'll probably take a month or so. After that, I'll probably pick up where i left off in the FF Omnibus and read all the way thru. I doubt that I'll post issue-to-issue reviews as I read unless I hear that you've picked it back up. I'm both eager to read the remaining material and ready to clear the plate for the Byrne Wonder Woman, She-Hulk and Alpha Flight collections that wait patiently in the Pile but feel wrong to advance to when another Byrne gem is unfinished.

If we never continue together with this, it was definitely fun while it lasted! nod :hug;
Lardy, good news. I've borrowed F4 Visionaries Volumes 5, 6, 7, 8 from the library and plan to burn through 'em during these next few weeks.

That review I promised a while ago of that bunch of "meh" issues -- 265-268 and Annual 18 -- will be posted in the next 24 hours, and I'll even throw in 269, the first installment of the Warlord arc, to give the re-read some extra momentum.

As always, thanks for your patience.

love
Well, that is very fortuitous! I just finished the big trade stack yesterday and had the FF next on my agenda! grin
Yay!

It's cosmic synchronicity!

FANTASTIC FOUR #265-269, ANNUAL 18

Here we have one of the most gut-wrenching, heart-breaking moments in the long and eventful life of Susan Storm-Richards, the miscarriage of her second child, despite the best efforts from Reed Richards and other brilliant Marvel Universe scientists. And yet, upon returning to it in this re-read, it feels somehow...muted. But I don't think Byrne is to blame for that -- rather tellingly, there is a tangible mixture of intrusions (Secret Wars) and outright padding (the whole Trapster sequence, which feels like one of those end-of-the-night SNL sketches that almost always falls flat) which a now-seasoned creator like Byrne could never have possibly done deliberately.

I believe we are witnessing the beginning of Marvel's slow but steady descent into what I consider one of its darkest ages -- 1985 to 1987, or the tempestuous 3rd Act of the Jim Shooter Era, where, according to many disgruntled creators and editors, he allegedly went from Visionary to Tunnel-Visioned, from Firm But Fair Authoritarian to Tyrant Of Shakespearean Proportions. Now, granted, Marvel was also in the process of changing owners from a dime-a-dozen corporation to a clueless C-List movie studio (rumor has it one of the studio heads assumed that Marvel published Superman!) So I would imagine that Shooter found himself under 100 times more stress than earlier in his EiC tenure. Did he always deal with it well? Probably not, but in any show business environment, there are dozens of sides (if not more) to every story.

At this point, though, it's not all bad. New team-muscle She-Hulk hits the ground running thanks to Byrne (who has said he fell in love with Jen while collaborating with Roger Stern on the F4/Avengers crossover we reviewed a while back.) Jen has a special personal meaning to me, as I imagine she has to a lot of other women who suddenly found themselves to have grown half-a-foot taller during Junior High School, as if all the other trials and tribulations of adolescence weren't bad enough. As portrayed by Byrne & Stern, Jen blossomed into a good-humored extrovert who had come to embrace and love her bigness and her unusualness. Way ahead of her time, our Jen was.

In addition, 269 introduces a powerful new alien villain, Terminus, and begins an action-and-spectacle-packed 2-parter that is, if not as memorable as the Negative Zone Saga/Avengers Crossover, then at least as good as the Ego the Living Planet story from early in Byrne's run. It's also notable for Byrne bringing back the F4's gentle giant Native American ally, Wyatt Wingfoot, and having She-Hulk fall for him at first sight.

Finally, the less said about Annual 18 (which Byrne scripted over Mark Gruenwald's plot) the better. Mark Bright's pencil art is reliably solid, although the inking by Mike Gustovich isn't the best fit. But I have come to feel very little patience for comic book issues that exist only for the sake of absurdly nit-picking continuity fixes. Annual 18 is one of them.
FF 265 is kind of a filler issue with 2 shorter stories, one with the Trapster vs. the Baxter Building and the other catching up with Sue and some Avengers characters that were left out of Secret Wars as they await news of the missing.

The Trapster story is cute and shows the Building is definitely no defenseless without its famous occupants. I like how Byrne draws ol' Paste Pot Pete in his updated costume. For a lower tier villain, he lasts longer than expected against the defenses.

By the end of the second story, the FF returns with She-Hulk in tow, replacing our Ben, who has decided to stay behind. It ends with Sue suffering a mysterious physical ailment again. Not a lot happening otherwise, but I espcially enjoyed seeing Byrne draw Mockingbird. She just looks perfect here.

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FF 266 is a fill-in issue itself with Sue's medical issues serving as bookends to a flashback to a previously-unseen adventure.This flashback features pencils by Kerry Gammil with Byrne on inks. The villain, Karisma, is ultimately pretty silly as her power over men is caused by her use of special make-up, but the fight between Sue and a mind-controlled Ben is actually pretty intense! Ben is relentless and unrestrained, and it's interesting seeing Sue pushed to her limits against him. Gammil's pencils were a treat for me, as I would really enjoy his later work on Superman, after Byrne leaves.

One touch I like from Byrne in the present-day bookends is how he introduces Reed's colleagues as themselves without referencing their more famous alter-egos. It's not important that they are also Hulk, Sasquatch and Morbius the Living Vampire (who at the time was cured, and the captions don't mention this. I think the next issue finally references the Hulk, but the other two are kept relatively anonymous.

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This leads to 267, which features Reed seeking the aid of a final expert, Dr. Otto Octavius, in a last-ditch effort to help Sue and their baby. It's actually one of the more nuanced depictions of Doc Ock I can recall, actually. Ock agrees to help but snaps when he sees a billboard of Spider-Man, leading to Reed and Ock having quite a tussle. In the end Reed reasons with him and gets him to help again. But they arrive to late, and in an effective last panel, it's revealed that Sue lost the baby.

I was a little disappointed here because my faulty memory had recalled that Ock got there in time but wasn't able to save the child. But it was a pretty effective story as it was. The Octavius characterization and especially the sad outcome were unusual and pretty brave for comics at the time.

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Issue 268 features the immediate aftermath of the Richards' loss and deals with both Ock and having Banner's other self have a quick cameo. Reed's handling of both was a very strong moment for him. Then, She'Hulk gets the nickel tour of the Baxter Building from Johnny, only to have it interrupted by the titular "Masque of Doom". When Doom apparently died a few issues prior, all that was left was his mask. We learn here that the FF took it with them and housed it in their trophy room. Then, the mask actually attacks Jenn and Johnny (and later Reed) and puts up quite the fight before reed stops it. The whole purpose seems to be to tease the possibility of either Doom returning or of someone taking up his mantle.

The puzzling thing to me here was that the characters don't mention Doom's participation in the same Secret Wars they'd just returned from. They act as if nothing had happened with Doom since his "death". I assume this is to sort of avoid spoilers and keep SW's twists a surprise, but anyone could have easily seen that Doom was in it. Plus, I don't think the explanation for Doom's participation despite his "death" was ever given until well after the event was over any way--and not in the event itself. I guess this was just Byrne's way of making his storylines work out the way he'd intended and not letting Shooter's story torpedo how he wanted to handle it.

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Finally, FF Annual 18 features the wedding of Black Bolt and Medusa and only a plot credit for Byrne. It's pretty forgettable overall, so I won't really waste space on it.

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I'll address the Terminus 2-parter next!
Originally Posted by Paladin
FF 266 is a fill-in issue itself with Sue's medical issues serving as bookends to a flashback to a previously-unseen adventure.This flashback features pencils by Kerry Gammil with Byrne on inks. The villain, Karisma, is ultimately pretty silly as her power over men is caused by her use of special make-up, but the fight between Sue and a mind-controlled Ben is actually pretty intense! Ben is relentless and unrestrained, and it's interesting seeing Sue pushed to her limits against him. Gammil's pencils were a treat for me, as I would really enjoy his later work on Superman, after Byrne leaves.


Thanks, Lardy, for mentioning Kerry Gammill's guest penciling of most of the pages in this issue. Like you, I have greatly enjoyed some of his other work; much as I like his Superman work, though, it's his Power Man & Iron Fist work from the beginning of the 80s (which I read as back issues in the 90s) that really cemented my admiration and affection for Gammill's style (I actually have a short but sweet interview with him, published circa 1982, which I might quote from in the near future in the Who Are Your Favorite Artists thread.)
FF 269 & 270 feature the introduction of what appeared to be a major new villain. I suppose you could argue that he turned out to be somewhat just that for a few years, but history probably says otherwise. In fact, you can argue that Byrne himself was somewhat on the fence about Terminus.

I think it starts with the fact that only two of the FF, Reed and Jennifer (with guest supporting player Wyatt Wingfoot), are present for the conflict. While this is set up in-story by the fact that it starts off as an investigation into a strange phenomenon and with the fact that Sue is sidelined recovering from her miscarriage, any FF story that features a partial FF line-up can be construed more as a side adventure, just as Johnny and Ben's adventure several issues ago can be.

Another big sign is that though part 1 ends on a pretty massive cliffhanger, part 2 begins with 9 pages of subplots before picking the main story back up. Now, I'm not implying these were not important subplots because they were: Byrne spends time showing what looks to be love blooming between Johnny and Alicia and shows Sue dealing with both her grief over her lost child and her fears about her role in the FF. To me, it's clear that Byrne has more interest in these points and is keeping us entertained with the Terminus side-show.

None of this is really bad. Terminus is kind of like a different take on Galactus as presented here. Less out for cosmic purposes than out for personal gain . And Byrne gives us some pretty great visuals to show the power at Terminus' disposal. In the end, though, Terminus is taken out pretty quickly with a little mulligan Reed was working on pre-threat last issue that you just knew was setting something up. Byrne himself didn't return to Terminus before his run was over, so I don't know if what was done with the character (including a certain twist) was something he intended.

Overall, an entertaining arc, but maybe one that was more of a side story than it may first appear. Two big takeaways: 1) Byrne's work with Sue and setting her up for a significant status quo change shortly. The scenes here with her anger, grief and frustration show a very clear transition from Old Sue to New Sue. We've seen a new Sue under Byrne already that is in stark contrast to the meek, subservient Sue of the Lee/Kirby era, but here we see her (and Byrne) acknowledge what she was in the past and that she's not going to be that girl anymore. 2) The return of Wyatt Wingfoot. I haven't really read any of Wyatt's old adventures with the FF, but he is a welcome addition to the cast and a cool love interest for Jenn.
Update: I have, as intended, burned through all four of the remaining F4 Visionaries Byrne volumes. That's the good news. The not-so-good-news is that they're all due in a couple days, and I've already passed the renewal limit. So I'll get down as many thoughts as I can in the form of an outline, and take it from there. As always, Lardy, thanks for your patience. We're in the home stretch now! And still 3 weeks until the Pichelli/Slott F4 relaunch!
Lardy,

After giving this a lot of thought, I think it would be best if you reviewed the remaining FF stories at your own pace, and in as much as or as little detail as you prefer depending on each story. I'll chime in accordingly, using a combination of memory and the notes I took.

Is that okay with you?
So I found myself losing some steam with this re-read and have paused it for the time being. I probably would have kept up if Fick were posting, but I found myself laboring a bit because Byrne stops inking himself with issue 274. I've found that Byrne is definitely my favorite inker of Byrne, and I've found the inks by the likes of Al Gordon, Jerry Ordway and Joe Sinnott unsatisfying. It's still recognizable Byrne art, but I found it distracting after the top-tier quality of the art I'd gotten used to throughout his tenure. I'll probably resume and finish before too long, but for the time being, I've been on hold in the middle of the Malice/Psycho Man/Microverse saga for a couple of months now.
Originally Posted by Paladin
So I found myself losing some steam with this re-read and have paused it for the time being. I probably would have kept up if Fick were posting, but I found myself laboring a bit because Byrne stops inking himself with issue 274. I've found that Byrne is definitely my favorite inker of Byrne, and I've found the inks by the likes of Al Gordon, Jerry Ordway and Joe Sinnott unsatisfying. It's still recognizable Byrne art, but I found it distracting after the top-tier quality of the art I'd gotten used to throughout his tenure. I'll probably resume and finish before too long, but for the time being, I've been on hold in the middle of the Malice/Psycho Man/Microverse saga for a couple of months now.


Yeah, I have to admit that I, too, found the Malice/Psycho Man/Microverse issues a bit too much to chew on. To paraphrase Lardy's observation, for the art to suddenly get so antiseptic-looking, so hard to distinguish from the rest of the Shooter-Era "Marvel House Style," is jarring and off-putting. Add to that the intensity of the horror elements, the harshness of the violence, and the questionable portrayal of Susan and Reed with what might be interpreted as Byrne's dubious sexual politics, and I can see now why I just couldn't wrap my head around it enough to produce a coherent review.

I do want to briefly touch on the character of Terminus -- I think that, as anti-climactic as the battle between him and the F4 may have seemed at first glance, it did do a beautiful job of setting up his surprise reappearance in Avengers 257 (by Stern, John Buscema, and Palmer) and his shocking rampage through the Savage Land (257 is, without exaggeration, one of my personal favorite Avengers issues of all time.) Given that Byrne and Stern are good friends, I have a strong feeling that it was all pre-planned.
Lardy, I'm just about done piecing together an essay with my thoughts on the final leg of Byrne's FF. It's going to focus mainly on the last several issues: The Secret Wars II tie-ins, the Blastaar/Annihilus 2-parter, the time travel story, and the unfinished story that Byrne's friend Roger Stern completed with Jerry Ordway.

Stay tuned.

And as always, thanks for being patient. I was looking over some of our earlier Byrne FF discussions, and I was amazed to see how long ago we began this re-read. But now we'll finally finish what we started!
Originally Posted by Ann Hebistand
Lardy, I'm just about done piecing together an essay with my thoughts on the final leg of Byrne's FF. It's going to focus mainly on the last several issues: The Secret Wars II tie-ins, the Blastaar/Annihilus 2-parter, the time travel story, and the unfinished story that Byrne's friend Roger Stern completed with Jerry Ordway.

Stay tuned.

And as always, thanks for being patient. I was looking over some of our earlier Byrne FF discussions, and I was amazed to see how long ago we began this re-read. But now we'll finally finish what we started!


I haven't forgotten about this, Lardy. As ever, I apologize. blush

But I am bound and determined to post my final thoughts on the Byrne FF era before New Year's Day!
John Byrne's Fantastic Four: Final Thoughts

As is often the case, I should have realized a long time ago that if I was so resistant to getting into the nuts and bolts of the actual stories in the latter portion of Byrne's long F4 run, then there was no point in forcing myself.

So, in brief: The Secret Wars II tie-ins are just a convoluted way of setting in stone the new status quo for Doctor Doom (it ain't pretty,) while the Blastaar/Annihilus 2-parter feels like Byrne wanted it to be a back-to-basics epic F4 cosmic romp, only for it to be truncated into something so basic as to be utterly forgettable. The time travel story and the "cult of the F4" story which Byrne left unfinished both have interesting ideas behind them but end up copping out with formulaic resolutions.

And that's it for Byrne's 5-year F4 run!

Out not with a bang, but with a whimper, indeed! As Ben Grimm would grumble, "SHEESH!"

I do remember reading a Byrne interview years ago where he said that, even without his open warfare against Jim Shooter, the final stretch (PUN, sorry) of his F4 run would have still found him tired and rudderless. Apparently, there were talks of having Byrne continue to write F4, but with someone else drawing it (one contender was said to be John Romita Jr, whose style on Uncanny X-Men was just starting to get weird and craggy around that time; I'll be charitable and say that, even as a detractor of JR's strange artistic evolution (Daredevil excepted,) I find the idea intriguing.)

Point being, the F4 had become like a once-great TV show that was starting to creak and crack at its foundations, with Byrne as the longtime showrunner who was feeling the pressure to deliver, while at the same time pining for greener pastures (i.e. Superman.)

That said, I'm very glad to have done this particular Re-Read, not just because there were a lot of wonderful discussions with Lardy, but because it helped me realize that my entire concept of the F4 is based around Byrne's interpretation of them, not Stan & Jack's, nor even Walter Simonson's. Yes, much as I still adore Good Ol' Walt's grandiosely spectacular take on F4, it's Byrne who got me to care for Susan, Reed, and Johnny as *people.* And given how badly dated the Silver Age F4 seems to me, how a variety of talented creators have taken on the daunting F4 legacy only to come up short (Waid & Ringo, to give but one example,) and how utterly loathsome I find Jonathan Hickman's White-Bread-American-Nuclear-Family-Uber-Alles F4...well, that says a lot in favor of Byrne!

Were it not for Byrne, the F4 would remain little more than a disturbing curio from the Post-Elvis/Pre-Beatles years, IMO a particularly awful flashpoint in world history (the Cold War raging as the American Dream curdles and the remaining believers in The Dream dig their heels in to resist any sort of questioning.) I may not have always agreed with where Byrne took the characters, but because he obviously had great affection for them, it helped me to meet them halfway and, as hokey and cliché as it might sound, build a bridge between a point of view very different from my own. No small achievement there.

And finally, my ranking of the most notable Byrne F4/Thing stories:

1. Negative Zone Saga/Avengers crossover

2. Liddleville

3. Man and Super-Man

4. Ben's Old Flame

5. Ego

6. Evil Crypto-Disney Theme Park

7. Trial of Reed Richards

8. Galactus/Nova/Terrax

9. Dr. Doom

10. Terminus
Prelims: Before anything, I regret to announce the Avengers Silver Age/Bronze Age Re-Read in the All Avengers Thread is now officially on indefinite hiatus -- so that we may bring you:

ANN HEBIFICK'S PERSONAL GOLDEN AGE OF MARVEL RE-READ

1992-1993, that is.

Heh. It all evolved from this recent idea I had to redefine the Ages of Comics from 1984 on -- The Gilded Age (1984-1993), The Tinfoil Age (1994-2003), and The A__hole Age (2004-2015.) Not sure yet what to call the age we're currently soaking in. shrug

Anyhow, I've never made any secret of my love for Marvel's big hair/big guns/gaudy palette/in-your-face-dynamics era. So I figure there's no way I'd drag my feet on a Re-Read of some of the high points of that era.

Understand, this was when I first got into superheroes (inspired by 1991's Marvel 50th Anniversary coffee table book, curated by the late Les Daniels.) I still have a lot of the copies of comics I bought fresh off the racks at Waldenbooks (cue "What is this Waldenbooks you speak of?" from the younger Legion Worlders. wink ) So, yes, there is great sentimental value here, but I also genuinely believe this is an era which has never completely deserved its overall negative status within fandom. Yes, it brought us lots of awful Wolverine/Punisher/Thanos/Venom stories. But it was that load of crapola which subsidized the GOOD stuff! nod

Put it this way: the first three comics I'm going to review (all cover-dated August 1992) are Ghost Rider #28, Spirits of Vengeance #1, and...Quasar #37.

There you have it.

Lardy, if you'd please do the honors of updated the thread title? Thanks.
Hey, all,

Just a heads-up that my Personal Golden Age of Marvel Re-Read is still gonna happen.

I had to put it on the back burner for a while after I got inspired to go back to fan fic writing.

Coming soon (maybe even today) are the already-promised reviews of Quasar #37, Ghost Rider #28, and Spirits of Vengeance #1.
No worries. Thanks for letting us know. Do what you enjoy.
I think this is a good time to bring to a close the most recent re-read of John Byrne's FF run before Ann really begins her new project.

Basically, after doing a recent much-needed catch-up on my "new" pile of floppies, I finally found the urge to finish off my John Byrne FF Omnibus Vol. 2 and, thus, finish my re-read project that had begun quite a while ago with Ann as co-contributor.

To provide some context, the re-read had stalled out after Ann and I separately lost some enthusiasm for it. She got burned out and more interested in doing other things, and I started drifting when Byrne's pencils started loosening up and he was no longer inking himself.

This time around, I picked up after issue 285, starting with a 2-part crossover between the FF and Avengers Annuals and continuing with 286 thru the conclusion of the run in 295. (294-5 featured only Byrne plots, concluding a 3-parter he's begun with 293, with Roger Stern and Jerry Ordway respectively providing writing and art.) The Omnibus then included the never-completed Last Galactus story from Epic Illustrated, a What If? that Byrne produced following an FF that never got their powers and a few humorous FF-related work he'd done for Marvel Age and others.

I found this last bit of Byrne's run quite enjoyable overall, to the point where I felt it ended pretty strongly. His pencils were tightening up, his inkers weren't getting in the way and his stories featured a return to some of his more imaginative and creative peaks. On my Master List of the best Byrne stories of his classic run, in fact, I will add one multi-parter from this bloc to the list, as well as 2 more from this She-Hulk era I'd read prior to this round.

To me the highlights of this era with She-Hulk in place of Ben Grimm are:

FF 271-273: The Nathaniel Richards Saga

Not coincidentally, these were the last 3 issues that Byrne provided full art on (aside from maybe an issue here or there) before he started using inkers. It starts with a delightfully-retro flashback of Reed with Sue and Ben having an adventure set before they had powers and facing a giant monster very emblematic of pre-Marvel Universe Marvel books. It leads into a mystery as to whatever happened to Reed's father and a satisfying romp with nice modern and retro sci-fi touches. If there's any disappointment, it's that we don't get to get to know Nathaniel a little more as Byrne doesn't revisit him for the rest of his run. But it is a delightful story that gives Reed some depth and some roots.

FF 280-284: The Malice/Psycho Man Saga

These issues may be controversial in some ways among fans, but I really admire what Byrne did with Susan Storm in these issues. Byrne had been building Sue up as a force to be reckoned with for some time before this point and had her put thru her paces on several levels. the goal was to define her as something much more than the meek, subserviant girl that she had unfortunately been portrayed as by Lee and Kirby with not much done with her in the interim to distance her from that portrayal. Well, here, Sue transitions from the Invisible Girl to the Invisible Woman, once and for all! Byrne starts this story in dramatic fashion by showing her take out the rest of the FF rather easily, while under the influence of Psycho Man's new Hatemonger, as Malice. He pushes the envelope a little by having her wear a costume with dominatrix motifs. I think that's a big part of the controversy, really--the costume. But I think if you show that she's not only powerful but also sexy--and not just the FF's maternal figure--it goes a long way to changing perceptions about her. And it was only a very temporary look--though a later creative team would double-down on the sexy a little too much.

To clarify, I don't think it's necessary for all characters with "Girl" in their name to transition to "Woman" or something like that, but I think it was for Sue. It was a reminder that she's not the Lee/Kirby Sue anymore, and in her case that was very important!

After she breaks the mind control, Sue is hellbent for vengeance, and the FF pursue the Psycho Man to the Microverse. There, the FF and Sue are put thru their paces and get involved in a local revolution with a culture they's encountered before. And Sue gets her (offscreen) vengeance. It's a powerful moment and is probably itself controversial, as heroes are always supposed to turn the other cheek. But I like that she is allowed some retribution, something that further shows this isn't the Lee-Kirby Sue. And, hell, Psycho Man deserved it!

Overall, an excellent and meaningful story that caps off Byrne's ongoing effort to redefine Sue.

FF 289-292: Negative Zone II/Time Shift

Byrne's final arc as writer/artist has a fun callback to the Negative Zone that also brings Nick Fury along for the ride. The destruction of the Baxter Building has had the consequence of opening the portal to the Negative Zone. The FF go to investigate, and Reed gets sucked in. Sue, Johnny, Jennifer and Fury follow and find Blastaar has eyes on invading Earth. Unfortunately, Annihilus has also survived his previous brush with death and a big melee ensues. Reed ends up missing/presumed dead stopping Annihilus, while the rest of the good guys return to Earth, which is seemingly caught in a time shift between present day and 1936. It's a fun final full adventure which gives the group a chance to act without Reed and gives Fury a chance to...kill Hitler before he starts WW2? There is, of course, a twist...one that I'm not in love with, but it still stands as a very good story and one that is a good last one to fully feature Byrne. I think he draws a great Fury, and it's really good to see Sue lead the team and continue moving her forward. This new Sue, who fully believes she just lost her husband, powers thru nonetheless with her team in the midst of an apparent crisis. The old Sue would have been a quivering mess. Good stuff!

Those are the highlights. I'll return with some comments about some of the other stories, and then--display my final Top Ten Stories from Byrne's Legendary FF Run!!!
So the last story I reviewed before the last post in this thread was the Terminus 2 parter in 269-70. My above post references 271-273, so I'll do some snapshot comments on stories from 274-295 with the exceptions of 280-284 & 289-292, reviewed above.

The "Monster Mash" 2-parter from Thing 19 & FF 274 was pretty pointless. Basically, Byrne interrupts the flow of the book to conclude a 2-parter from Thing's book that doesn't involve the FF. The FF get a few establishing pages in the beginning of 274, but it's a Thing adventure through-and-through. I'd guess that Byrne wanted to draw Ben again and wrap up that Thing story a little quicker. Other than seeing what Ben's been up to, it's pointeless.

FF 275 is a big spotlight issue on She-Hulk that is amusing and fun. What will Jen do when she is photographed sunbathing topless on top of the Baxter Building? She goes after the sleazy publisher, that's what! It's an unconventional story that sets the tone somewhat for Byrne's later solo stories of her when he later does her graphic novel and her new ongoing. Al Gordon's inks hurt some key panels and scenes, but it was a lighthearted adventure that helps her character shine after some kind of underwhelming roles for her to that point since joining the book.

FF 276-277 have Reed and Sue in their new suburban cross paths with a witch who has been sicced on the couple by a neighbor who mistakes Reed and Sue for demons. The witch brings Mephisto into the conflict, and Franklin is in particular danger. 277 has Byrne return to the split-story format to bring Ben back to Earth but still determined to not be one of the FF. (It doesn't help that he finds out about Johnny and Alicia.) Franklin figures heavily in the Mephisto resolution, but I'm not terribly fond of the kinds of danger Byrne depicts him being in.

FF278-279 is a memorable story in which Doom's ward young Kristoff takes up the mantle of Doom thru a contingency plan of Doom's, involving the boy being brainwashed into literally being Doom's replacement. Kristoff stops the brainwashing while downloading one of Doom's earliest schemes involving highjacking the entire Baxter Building and decides to give it another try. Kristoff succeeds in sending the entire Baxter Building into orbit with all of the FF plus Franklin and Alicia inside, and 278 ends with the building exploding! It's quite the cliffhanger that is resolved by the FF using some of their legendary teamwork to survive an unsurvivable scenario in 279. The FF waste no time going to Latveria and they confront and defeat Kristoff. But the damage is done, and the Baxter Building is done for...at least for a few years.

FF 285 "Hero" is a standalone issue that nonetheless ties into Secret Wars II. It tells the contoversial story of a young Human Torch fan who lights himself on fire like his hero. It was a brave choice in many ways and addresses concers that lead to Johnny being left out of the original FF cartoon, but the handling is clumsy. Even disregarding the Beyonder being shoe-horned in, I'm not sure that the message for Johnny, that the boy's love of the Torch gave him the only joy in his sad life, really hits the mark. It's a way to let Johnny down easy, and though I know he's not at fault, it just feels like a convenient way to let Johnny move on from his feelings of guilt.

FF Annual 19/Avengers Annual 14 tell two sides of the same story from the FF's and the Avengers' viewpoints. There's a point where both stories merge, and we see how both teams arrive there. Byrne provides pencils for the FF side and breakdowns for the Avengers side. Using Roger Stern as his writing collaborator, the story is pretty entertaining and provides what would seem to be a huge status quo shift for the Skrulls. Overall, this was pretty entertaining.

FF 286 "Like a Phoenix" features the full return of Jean Grey after a mysterious cocoon is discovered in Avengers 263. I've never been in love with the ret-con that this issue uses to bring her back, mainly because I love the original Dark Phoenix Saga so much. But I will admit that it works, and a recent re-read of said saga leaves some room for this outcome by referring to the Phoenix as a separate entity. The story is well-done as an FF story also, giving Reed a lot of room to shine and Sue as well. The Omnibus includes the original pages that were changed before publication. Jim Shooter changed the published version with some pages featuring new dialogue by Chris Claremont and new art by Jackson Guice. While the published pages paint the Phoenix as a seemingly benevolent entity trying to save Jean, Byrne's version show it as malevolent and violating Jean's soul. Both versions show its absorption of Jean's personality being its ultimate saving grace, but Byrne's shows Jean making damn sure the entity is infused with her being to hold it in check. I like the unpublished version better because it makes Jean come off more heroic.

FF 287-288 feature the return of the real Doctor Doom.It's an overall effective story that is marred by another Secret Wars II tie-in, this time the continuity patch explaining how Doom was in the first Secret Wars when his body had just been incinerated, The overall effect is restoring Doom, but it was a better story before the continuity patch took over.

FF 293-295 consist of the final arc of Byrne's run. He writes and draws 293 (though not the cover) while Stern and Jerry Ordway conclude it under Byrne's plot. It's a really decent story that begins with the investigation of an expanding opaque forcefield which reveals to house a town in which thousands of years have passed. It happens to be Reed's home town and the cause is an old acquaintance of his who was trying to save the town from presumed nuclear armageddon. It's a very cool FF sci-fi set-up that Stern and Ordway finish admirably, but it is hard to rank in "the list" without Byrne's work throughout. It was nonetheless considered for inclusion by me at one point.

The Last Galactus Story is the last major entry in the Omnibus. It's quite an artistic wonder, beautifully drawn and colored with something like a water color palette. But it's ponderous and dull at some points, and of course, lacks an ending that was never created nor published due to Epic Illustrated's sudden cancellation.

So with every story at least addressed now, it is now time to consider my Top Ten..... hmmm
So, without further ado, this is my final...

Top Ten Best Stories in John Byrne's Legendary FF Run

1) Negative Zone/Annihilus Saga (FF 251-256, Avengers 233)
2) Galactus/Doom/Trial of Reed Richards (FF 257-262)
3) 20th Anniversary/Liddleville (FF 236)
4) The Malice/Psycho Man Saga (FF 280-284)
5) Terrax/Nova/Galactus (FF 242-244)
6) "Legacy" (FF Annual 17)
7) FF vs. Ego (FF 234-235)
8) "A Small Loss" (FF 267)
9) Negative Zone II/Time Shift (FF 289-292)
10) The Nathaniel Richards Saga (FF 271-273)


So there you go! I had 9 stories singled out and locked in. I was pretty sure "A Small Loss" would be the tenth, and it landed higher than anticipated as I considered it. When I originally mentioned that story, it kind of got short shrift because it was surrounded by some mediocre stories. But this one was always a gem. Beyond its heartbreaking outcome, the portrayal of Doc Ock was extraordinary. It was a different kind of FF story with some conventional trappings but with a lot of heart, so I felt it stood out and filled the Top Ten list out very well.

Some honorable mentions include the Kristoff 2-parter (FF 278-279), the full return of Doom (FF 287-288), Man and Super-Man (FF 249-250), "The Naked Truth" (FF 275), Terminus (FF 269-270), the Central City paradox (FF 293-295), Diablo (FF 232) and Doom and the FF invade Latveria (FF 246-247).

That's a lotta goodness, folks! Can't recommend this run enough for a read or a re-read! Just look at my list vs. Ann's list: some agreement and some divergences, but all good! Excellent, excellent classic run!
I decided I wanted something with an old school feel to accompany my Superman project, and I decided to reread the MC2 universe. I was a big fan of Spider-Girl in her early years, though I drifted off somewhere in the middle. I've always wanted to go back and read the whole thing, so this seems like a good opportunity. Initially, I've decided to try to read all the associated books, although I'm finding A-Next and J2 a bit of a slog. Since they are short, I'm going to try to stick it out. At least this project has a clear end point, Spider-Girl: The End. Once they bring her back in Spiver-Verse and start slaughtering the cast, I have no real interest.

I'm going into it already having decided that if juggling two projects at once becomes too much, I'm dropping this in favor of the post-Crisis Superman.
Lardy, thank you for bringing full closure to the Byrne FF Re-Read. I've copied and pasted (and added issue numbers to) my Top 10 list so that people can more easily compare it to yours.

Sorry again there were so many stops and starts. Your patience and loyalty and gentle pushing when needed are all greatly appreciated. You're a great re-reading partner, and a great friend. hug

Originally Posted by Paladin
That's a lotta goodness, folks! Can't recommend this run enough for a read or a re-read! Just look at my list vs. Ann's list: some agreement and some divergences, but all good! Excellent, excellent classic run!


Top 10 Lists For The John Byrne 80s Fantastic Four Run

LARDY/PALADIN

1) Negative Zone/Annihilus Saga (FF 251-256, Avengers 233)
2) Galactus/Doom/Trial of Reed Richards (FF 257-262)
3) 20th Anniversary/Liddleville (FF 236)
4) The Malice/Psycho Man Saga (FF 280-284)
5) Terrax/Nova/Galactus (FF 242-244)
6) "Legacy" (FF Annual 17)
7) FF vs. Ego (FF 234-235)
8) "A Small Loss" (FF 267)
9) Negative Zone II/Time Shift (FF 289-292)
10) The Nathaniel Richards Saga (FF 271-273)

ANNFIE/FANFIE

1. Negative Zone Saga/Avengers crossover (FF 251-256/Avengers 233)

2. Liddleville (FF 236)

3. Man and Super-Man (FF 249-250)

4. Ben's Old Flame (The Thing 2)

5. Ego (FF 234-235)

6. Evil Crypto-Disney Theme Park (FF 263-264)

7. Trial of Reed Richards (FF 260-262)

8. Galactus/Nova/Terrax (FF 242-244)

9. Dr. Doom (FF 257-259)

10. Terminus (FF 269-270)
I have read some of these and also thought they were terrific.

Trial of Reed Richards - excellent. I have this as a TPB collecting Byrne's various Galactus stories along with his commentary explaining how he was tasked with restoring Galactus to greatness so he did that over quite a while with the Trial being the culmination.

Terrax/Nova/Galactus - great. In the same TPB.

Liddleville - read a long time ago, vaguely remember, have to find it again, mainly remember a little Sue seeing Doom's face (of all things to remember).

Terminus - again remembering from a long time back, this seemed average to me, formulaic, still a reread could well change my mind.

You have certainly piqued my interest and I will (at some point) go back and read this series. Thanks to both of you.
Originally Posted by stile86


You have certainly piqued my interest and I will (at some point) go back and read this series. Thanks to both of you.




You are very welcome, stile!

Beyond the pleasure of revisiting some old favorites and of interacting with Ann about them, I always hope to inspire others to experience these stories for themselves. So this is a high compliment indeed!!!

(BTW, I think the JBFF Omnibuses are a huge bargain, especially when you can often get them at steep discounts! nod )
Originally Posted by Paladin


LARDY/PALADIN

1) Negative Zone/Annihilus Saga (FF 251-256, Avengers 233)
2) Galactus/Doom/Trial of Reed Richards (FF 257-262)
3) 20th Anniversary/Liddleville (FF 236)
4) The Malice/Psycho Man Saga (FF 280-284)
5) Terrax/Nova/Galactus (FF 242-244)
6) "Legacy" (FF Annual 17)
7) FF vs. Ego (FF 234-235)
8) "A Small Loss" (FF 267)
9) Negative Zone II/Time Shift (FF 289-292)
10) The Nathaniel Richards Saga (FF 271-273)

ANNFIE/FANFIE

1. Negative Zone Saga/Avengers crossover (FF 251-256/Avengers 233)

2. Liddleville (FF 236)

3. Man and Super-Man (FF 249-250)

4. Ben's Old Flame (The Thing 2)

5. Ego (FF 234-235)

6. Evil Crypto-Disney Theme Park (FF 263-264)

7. Trial of Reed Richards (FF 260-262)

8. Galactus/Nova/Terrax (FF 242-244)

9. Dr. Doom (FF 257-259)

10. Terminus (FF 269-270)


Analyzing our respective lists, it sticks out to me that only one of the She-Hulk era stories made your list, while in mine the split is 60/40. I'd be curious as to your thoughts about some of them, particularly the Malice/Psycho Man and maybe "A Small Loss" and the Nathaniel Richards story. I think that maybe you hated the Malice stuff but wonder what you thought about my reasons for why it is so important and, imo, well done.
Stile, you're very welcome. Happy reading.

Lardy, here are my original thoughts on various aspects of the Jen-era FF, including some of the stories you singled out:

Originally Posted by Ann Hebistand

Here we have one of the most gut-wrenching, heart-breaking moments in the long and eventful life of Susan Storm-Richards, the miscarriage of her second child, despite the best efforts from Reed Richards and other brilliant Marvel Universe scientists. And yet, upon returning to it in this re-read, it feels somehow...muted. But I don't think Byrne is to blame for that -- rather tellingly, there is a tangible mixture of intrusions (Secret Wars) and outright padding (the whole Trapster sequence, which feels like one of those end-of-the-night SNL sketches that almost always falls flat) which a now-seasoned creator like Byrne could never have possibly done deliberately.

I believe we are witnessing the beginning of Marvel's slow but steady descent into what I consider one of its darkest ages -- 1985 to 1987, or the tempestuous 3rd Act of the Jim Shooter Era, where, according to many disgruntled creators and editors, he allegedly went from Visionary to Tunnel-Visioned, from Firm But Fair Authoritarian to Tyrant Of Shakespearean Proportions. Now, granted, Marvel was also in the process of changing owners from a dime-a-dozen corporation to a clueless C-List movie studio (rumor has it one of the studio heads assumed that Marvel published Superman!) So I would imagine that Shooter found himself under 100 times more stress than earlier in his EiC tenure. Did he always deal with it well? Probably not, but in any show business environment, there are dozens of sides (if not more) to every story.

At this point, though, it's not all bad. New team-muscle She-Hulk hits the ground running thanks to Byrne (who has said he fell in love with Jen while collaborating with Roger Stern on the F4/Avengers crossover we reviewed a while back.) Jen has a special personal meaning to me, as I imagine she has to a lot of other women who suddenly found themselves to have grown half-a-foot taller during Junior High School, as if all the other trials and tribulations of adolescence weren't bad enough. As portrayed by Byrne & Stern, Jen blossomed into a good-humored extrovert who had come to embrace and love her bigness and her unusualness. Way ahead of her time, our Jen was.


Originally Posted by Ann Hebistand
I have to admit that I...found the Malice/Psycho Man/Microverse issues a bit too much to chew on...The intensity of the horror elements, the harshness of the violence, and the questionable portrayal of Susan and Reed with what might be interpreted as Byrne's dubious sexual politics, and I can see now why I just couldn't wrap my head around it enough to produce a coherent review.


I stand by my opinion of "A Small Loss," but your thoughts on the Nathaniel Richards Trilogy (which I now find I didn't mention at all previously) and the Malice/Psycho Man storyline provided me some food for thought.

I'm kinda put off by the basic idea that Reed's father was even more of a genius and even more of an imaginaut. The whole concept of the FF works best for me when the four founding members are the first of their kind -- ordinary yet extraordinary. Plus, it all felt pretty by-the-numbers to me personally, full of those same 60s-70s TV tropes that I had noted in many of Byrne's earlier FF stories.

And I think Byrne just went a bit over the top with the horror imagery and the level of violence in the Malice arc. I could accept such elements in, say, Byrne's "Alpha Flight" or "Next Men," but in FF they feel squicky to me, not a million miles from the era of DC where Johns/DiDio poured on the gore and the sadism and the cheap scares. Of course, Byrne's story is far more artful than any of the schlock-fests of that DC era. But the FF are as much a touchstone of my childhood (albeit thanks to their awful-in-hindsight DePatie-Freleng TV series) as various vintage aspects of the DCU. So it just doesn't feel quite right to me, the proverbial square peg in a round hole, I guess.
It's interesting, btw, that you separate 257-259 from 260-262, while I combine them. To me, there were enough narrative threads throughout to include them all.

Originally Posted by Ann Hebistand

I'm kinda put off by the basic idea that Reed's father was even more of a genius and even more of an imaginaut. The whole concept of the FF works best for me when the four founding members are the first of their kind -- ordinary yet extraordinary. Plus, it all felt pretty by-the-numbers to me personally, full of those same 60s-70s TV tropes that I had noted in many of Byrne's earlier FF stories.


I didn't like it as much when I originally read it but was struck more by it this time. I think the human element that kicks it off with Reed not being able to remember his father's eyes helps. Then, there's the old school sci-fi with the cowboys riding robot steeds and the despot running things. It felt like an original Trek series with the big addition to the FF mythos as a payoff. I guess it just tickled the right spot like the Gladiator fight does with you.

Originally Posted by Fick
And I think Byrne just went a bit over the top with the horror imagery and the level of violence in the Malice arc. I could accept such elements in, say, Byrne's "Alpha Flight" or "Next Men," but in FF they feel squicky to me, not a million miles from the era of DC where Johns/DiDio poured on the gore and the sadism and the cheap scares. Of course, Byrne's story is far more artful than any of the schlock-fests of that DC era. But the FF are as much a touchstone of my childhood (albeit thanks to their awful-in-hindsight DePatie-Freleng TV series) as various vintage aspects of the DCU. So it just doesn't feel quite right to me, the proverbial square peg in a round hole, I guess.


I think the main thing I wonder about from your perspective is not so much the violence and horror elements of those issues, but what he does with Sue Storm throughout. Here's what I said:

Originally Posted by Paladin
FF 280-284: The Malice/Psycho Man Saga

These issues may be controversial in some ways among fans, but I really admire what Byrne did with Susan Storm in these issues. Byrne had been building Sue up as a force to be reckoned with for some time before this point and had her put thru her paces on several levels. the goal was to define her as something much more than the meek, subserviant girl that she had unfortunately been portrayed as by Lee and Kirby with not much done with her in the interim to distance her from that portrayal. Well, here, Sue transitions from the Invisible Girl to the Invisible Woman, once and for all! Byrne starts this story in dramatic fashion by showing her take out the rest of the FF rather easily, while under the influence of Psycho Man's new Hatemonger, as Malice. He pushes the envelope a little by having her wear a costume with dominatrix motifs. I think that's a big part of the controversy, really--the costume. But I think if you show that she's not only powerful but also sexy--and not just the FF's maternal figure--it goes a long way to changing perceptions about her. And it was only a very temporary look--though a later creative team would double-down on the sexy a little too much.

To clarify, I don't think it's necessary for all characters with "Girl" in their name to transition to "Woman" or something like that, but I think it was for Sue. It was a reminder that she's not the Lee/Kirby Sue anymore, and in her case that was very important!

After she breaks the mind control, Sue is hellbent for vengeance, and the FF pursue the Psycho Man to the Microverse. There, the FF and Sue are put thru their paces and get involved in a local revolution with a culture they's encountered before. And Sue gets her (offscreen) vengeance. It's a powerful moment and is probably itself controversial, as heroes are always supposed to turn the other cheek. But I like that she is allowed some retribution, something that further shows this isn't the Lee-Kirby Sue. And, hell, Psycho Man deserved it!

Overall, an excellent and meaningful story that caps off Byrne's ongoing effort to redefine Sue.


Note that every comment I made about that story revolves around Sue and how that story pays off Byrne's work with her. I haven't said it outright yet, but I now know that Sue is my favorite character during Byrne's entire run on the book. But I'm curious what you think about my thoughts about her usage in this saga.
Okay. If I make a supreme effort to be completely objective about the Malice/Psycho Man storyline, and table all my personal hang-ups which I've already noted...then, yes, it is a well-told, well-crafted story about surviving abuse and trauma, facing one's own shadow side, and confronting the source of the wrongs done. If I'd been in a less-stressed, more clear-headed frame of mind when I re-read it, I might have responded more favorably.

That said, I still wonder if such excess on Byrne's part was really necessary. Isn't it possible Susan could have become fully empowered thorough a less brutal form of adversity?

Re: The comparison of your positive reaction to the Nathaniel story to my positive reaction to Gladiator, fair enough. As you put it so well, each respective story ticked off the right boxes for each respective reader.

Re: Separating the Doom/Terrax issues from the Reed/Galactus issues, I just felt that the latter bunch, for all my objections to the trial's goofy metafictional ending, was so much more satisfying than the former. If I recall correctly, I noted in my review of the climactic Doom issue that I thought Byrne wrote himself into a corner and had to resort to one of my least favorite tropes: Having the villain suddenly turn stupid so that his plan is undone.
I think it was kind of necessary to show where Sue had come as a character and just how strong she was by putting her through her paces like that. I think most people who know Sue from what Stan and Jack created would have expected her to fold under far less adversity. Here, Byrne said, "nuh-uh!' definitively. Not only was Sue now a powerhouse who could arguably be the most formidable of the group, she was also so much stronger inside than she'd ever been credit for. She's smart, brave and, yes, even sexy! This arc does all that for her, even as it builds on all of the work Byrne had put into her up until that point.

Man, I love me some Byrne-era Susan!!!
Lardy, I think that puts the whole Byrne FF Re-Read in a nutshell.

There's a little bit of something for everybody. If one person doesn't much care for one story, there's another story that's more to their taste.

That this all came largely from the talent of one single industrious creator makes it all the more impressive.

In the end, this lengthy run is indisputably one of the highlights of Marvel in the 80s.

And I had a great time discussing it with you. Thank you, my good friend.

We must do another re-read together soon.

nod
And now that I finally resolved a particularly knotty plot point about my current Bits fic and added a new chapter, there's nothing to get in the way of me finishing my first 90s Marvel Re-Read review.

Expect it tonight at the latest.

Originally Posted by Ann Hebistand
Expect it tonight at the latest.


Sorry.

blush

I know it's gonna happen someday...
Originally Posted by Ann Hebistand

Originally Posted by Ann Hebistand
Expect it tonight at the latest.


Sorry.

blush

I know it's gonna happen someday...


There's no other way to say this -- I've had to admit to myself that it's obvious that my heart's just not into any kind of Marvel re-read. Plus I'm still participating in the Legion Re-Read and the Superman Re-Read, and I really want to see the new fic through to its conclusion.

On the other hand, the year's not even half over yet. Maybe a bunch of us could do a re-read in a few months. Anyone been following the Flash By Mark Waid trades? I think Volume 6 is about to come out. My library's already got the first five, and will most likely add that one and all the rest to follow.
Posted By: Ann Hebistand Re: Re-Reads (Coming Soon: PAD's Hulk) - 08/12/19 06:00 PM
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady on October 30, 2015
Incredible Hulk 397-401

Living up their potential at last thanks to PAD's imaginative writing and Dale Keown's dynamic, dramatic art, the colorful group of Hulk rogues known as the U-Foes (think an evil Fantastic Four who INTENTIONALLY exposed themselves to cosmic rays) more than earn the double-page splash that they're given in 397. The U-Foes turn out to have been hired by the Leader to invade the Pantheon's headquarters and soften up the do-gooders in preparation for the grand entrance of the Leader himself and his elite guard, the Riot Squad. The first Hulk/Riot Squad battle, during the "Countdown" arc, had the misfortune of being drawn by Jeff Purves. The second Hulk/Riot Squad battle, seen in 398, is drawn by Keown, and it makes all the difference in the world. At the end, the fight is stopped by Pantheon leader Agamemnon, who informs the warring parties that he and the Leader have reached an "accord", much to the Hulk's chagrin. Meanwhile, a subplot which had been simmering during the last few issues reaches full boil in 397-398: a woman claiming to be Rick Jones's biological mother turns out to be a murderous psychopath who imprisons Rick in her basement and fatally stabs Marlo Chandler; Betty Banner knocks her out and frees Rick, but it's too late to save Marlo.

Or is it?

After confronting the smartest and most powerful members of the Marvel Universe, asking them to bring Marlo back to life, and coming up empty, Rick Jones is at his wits end when who should approach him with a proposal than the Leader! And he even has proof that he can bring the dead back to life -- the armored Riot Squad goon known as Redeemer is none other than General Thunderbolt Ross!

While all of the above is going on, the Hulk is off sulking until the Pantheon approaches Betty to talk some sense into her husband. Once this is done, Agamemnon informs the Hulk that he has deliberately set up the Leader for the Hulk to smash his mass-murdering nemesis once and for all.

Although the international terrorist organization Hydra is somewhat awkwardly shoehorned in as a plot device, this is still an immensely satisfying story-arc thanks to the characters' vivid emotional lives underpinning the story. The civilized facade that the Hulk has been sporting since 379 falls away completely at the climax, when the precognitive vision of the Hulk laughing during a rampage, as seen in 382, comes frighteningly true. Rick's desperation, the Leader's arrogance, and Agamemnon's cold calculation all come together brilliantly by the heartbreaking end.

But wait, there's more. In the epilogue, PAD sets up the Hulk's new status quo when Agamemnon tells the Hulk that he plans to take a hiatus from leading the Pantheon and go wander the world for a while, leaving the Hulk in his place to lead!

Artistically, 399-401 suffer from Keown's abrupt departure (poached by Image), with mostly adequate but sometimes jarringly ugly art by Jan Duursema in 399, the first half of 400, and 401, and Chris Bachalo in the second half of 400. But the sense that 400 is the grandiose climax of the plot threads that PAD has been weaving in and out of the book for the past 70 issues, is still immensely satisfying.

And I think this is as good a place as any to temporarily end the PAD Hulk re-read. Gods be willing, I'll be able to review the remaining 67 issues sometime next year. My thanks to Lardy and Thoth and anyone else who has been following my reviews.


For "sometime next year," substitute "almost four years." But better late than never.

I'm going to make my best effort to cover the second half of the Hulk's Pantheon Era -- with Peter David still at the helm and Gary Frank as the default penciler -- in a timely fashion without big gaps between blocks of issues. Including the epilogue, that comprises issues 402 to 426.

Incredible Hulk 402

One more issue to go before Gary Frank & Cam Smith arrive, and guest artists Jan Duursema & Mark Farmer (the latter having been the default inker for a large part of the Dale Keown Hulk Era) do a bland yet adequate job. PAD's script, on the other hand, is far better than adequate, with Banner's new responsibilities as deputy leader of the Pantheon causing a great deal of internal friction, especially between Banner and Achilles, whose invulnerability is weakened in the presence of gamma radiation, and who is not a nice guy even without the Hulk around (he also feels he should be deputy leader instead of Banner.) Already simmering subplots -- involving Betty, Rick, Marlo, and Doc Samson -- continue to chug forward engagingly. We also get a well-done battle in an exotic locale (the Amazon jungle) against a well-chosen heavy-hitter villain, and a solid shocker of a next-to-last page where we see who this villain is working for:

they are, irrespectively, Juggernaut and Red Skull.

This is actually a re-re-read: The Proteus Saga from the Claremont/Byrne era of Uncanny X-Men.

Still as great as ever, and I still rate it as the peak of that creative team's collaborations. And the whipped cream and cherry on top is the way that I remember it being one of the high points of this thread UXM re-read a few years ago. Good times!

Originally Posted by Cobalt Kid


Uncanny X-Men 125 &#150; 128: the Proteus Saga

As I state above, the Proteus Saga isn&#146;t just good: it&#146;s plain fantastic. This is a GREAT story! Everything that came before had been pretty damn excellent now Claremont & Byrne & Austen take things to a whole new level. In fact, I would say that the only reason people don&#146;t go bananas about the Proteus Saga is that what follows immediately after is the Hellfire Club and the Dark Phoenix Saga, which is even better! But just because the greatest X-Men story of them all is to follow shouldn&#146;t take away from how excellent this story is.

What we have is a four part story where each individual issue serves a unique purpose from an action / montage perspective, all the while bringing together an overarching plot that is chalk full of character. You have an antagonist in Proteus whose super-powers are incredibly abstract and powerful, yet he&#146;s kept close to reality by having an excellent, human backstory with Moira and Joe McTaggert. So we get the best of both worlds and the creators pull them both off perfectly: the action is uber-intense and the story is human and compelling.

Moira&#146;s secret is at last revealed and she comes off very well here. At times she&#146;s in distress and at other times she&#146;s the master of her own destiny. Most importantly, she&#146;s a complex character that is multi-layered and runs the full gamut of emotions in the story. I also think the clear implication was that Joe raped Moira&#151;in a classic case of spousal rape&#151;to produce the baby. That&#146;s how I read it. It makes things much more heavy.

Jean also is paramount to the story in a variety of ways as readers get reacquainted with her. In the letter&#146;s page in #124, the editor proclaims &#147;new readers who have been wondering all the fuss is about: get ready to meet the Phoenix!&#148;. Clearly they were building to this. Yet, while worries of Jean&#146;s powers and Jean kicking ass are paramount to the story, the reunion leaves the readers feeling a bit uncomfortable. There is no beautiful reunion with Scott and that must have been jarring. But I think in the long run it makes what is to come in Dark Phoenix, including their really romantic and beautiful moment on mesa, so much more powerful. Jean&#146;s seduction by Wyngarde is in full effect throughout and its incredible how scary it is&#151;the sequence where they hunt down &#147;the greatest game&#148; and Jean joyfully prepares to kill the poor man is horrifying. It&#146;s well done, and never once detracts from the main plot. These are some bold choices by Claremont and Byrne, by forgoing the easy soap opera reunion and keeping things complex.

The extended cast is a lot of fun as well. While the X-Men never once lose its leading men status, we get to see Havok, Polaris, Moira and to a lesser extent Madrox play a part. With Jean back, it feels awesome to see so many mutants running around together.

Once again, even without powers, Banshee shines in every scene he&#146;s in. His exit doesn&#146;t really come until the next issue, but it&#146;s clear by the happy ending that he &#147;must&#148; exit the team; it just makes total sense from every storytelling perspective. But it isn&#146;t overly said or melancholy, it just fits.

To me, even beyond the up front Proteus plot, this story is really about being the culmination of the 6 main X-Men coalescing as both a family unit and a fighting squad. This has been happening ever since the second battle with Magneto (and truly since Giant Sized #1), but it all comes together here. With Sean&#146;s exit, that only underscores things, as they no longer need his ongoing dose of maturity and status as a peacekeeper. Cyclops is clearly the leader here, and a damn good one. The sequence with he and Wolverine brings together one of the final elements needed to get to this point: Cyke shows a clear concern over Logan, and Logan admits in front of everyone that he was wrong about Scott, who now has his respect, friendship and promise to fall in line. That is the single best scene of the entire story&#151;including Storm and Nightcrawler sticking up for Logan.

Colossus also plays a big part in this, and it ties into the subplot Lardy brought up so nicely: here, he at long last emerges as the one to save the day, and he does so with style. There is a clear confidence at play here, from his defeat of Proteus to his holding Moira tightly to let her mourn her child. He feels very much like a leading man full of heroism and quiet empathy. His evolution to this point mirrors the growing resolution between Logan and Scott.

Cyclops says that the new X-Men will never be like the originals, who functioned as a well oil machine and then adds &#147;maybe that&#146;s not even a desirable goal anymore&#148;. And in a nutshell, Claremont defines what the All-New X-Men are about. They are not the originals and more a collection of intense individuals, but nonetheless, they are no less a team&#151;or a family&#151;than the original 5.

It&#146;s noteworthy that both Jean and Professor X stand outside this, though. When Professor X returns, there will be a definite tension and he will have a hard time understanding that. In fact, whenever both Cyclops and Professor X are both part of the X-Men hereafter, it will always feel awkward. Because Cyclops doesn&#146;t need the Prof anymore. Professor X is best served now by training younger mutants like Kitty (whose appearance provides the Professor a reason to stay in the series) and then the New Mutants.

Even on top of all of this, which is heady stuff, there is still a ton of other things going on. We get a great interlude with Magneto that at first feels out of left field but shows that Magneto is quietly becoming a part of the recurring cast even if he&#146;s not always on-panel. His scene showcases him once again as a complex, multi-layered man. We also see his wife Magda for the first time. It&#146;s amazing that this scene won&#146;t be followed up on for 20 issues, at which point he&#146;ll truly evolve beyond the trappings of a comic book super-villain (and change how comic book villains in general are perceived). We also learn Wolverine had an adamantium skeleton; until now we just knew he had unbreakable bones. Each story continues to give us little tidbits of Logan&#146;s mysterious and interesting past. There is also the heavy theme of taking a life, especially in the sequence where Moira prepares to kill her son but Cyclops stops her. Personally, I agree with Moira. Ultimately in the long term, so would Claremont. I think he had no easy answers himself at this point but eventually, the X-Men&#146;s experiences would cause him to make up his mind.

Until this point there had been a lot of fantastic stories; now we had a masterpiece. What&#146;s amazing is it only gets even better from here.



Originally Posted by Annfie
Proteus. Just when it looked like Claremont and Byrne were faltering, we get their best story yet. Far beyond the easter eggs of Colossus' great climactic moment, of seeing Havok, Polaris, and Madrox in action, and of a de-powered Banshee more than rising to the challenge, we get some backstory for Moira (and it's sad to think that, where Claremont & Byrne say a lot with a few well-written lines and some effective facial expressions, a modern creative team would probably do a gratuitously graphic flashback to the unpleasant events of the past.) Proteus, as irredeemably horrible as he is, is also a genuinely tragic character who never had a chance. Claremont & Byrne raise some very tough questions, but without being at all heavy-handed about it.

Regarding the Magneto scene, I wonder sometimes if Claremont & Byrne might have meant to pick up on that thread while they were still together, but couldn't come to a compromise of their differing views on the character -- after all, Byrne was one of the prime architects behind Magneto's return to villainy in the early 90s.

I also want to mention something that I've kept forgetting to say: the X-Men editor from the Magneto saga through the early part of Dark Phoenix is Roger Stern, and though he has always said that he didn't enjoy being an editor, he was sure good at it.


Originally Posted by Paladin


Uncanny X-Men 125-128

Lots of good points about the Proteus Saga, many of which mirror or enhance my own, but I'd like to highlight a few things:

I was stunned and transfixed by Wolverine's show of weakness in the face of Proteus' attack. I had totally forgotten about this! I found it very remarkable and further indicative of why I used to love the character. There's a lot unsaid (and un-narrated) as to why Logan reacted the way he did, but it really speaks volumes about his character. He'd come to rely so strongly on his senses and his self awareness that having those things taken away from him and subverted would truly bring a character like him, who had pretty much nothing else, to a dark place. I liked seeing Wolverine vulnerable and genuinely freaked out. He's really become a caricature of himself over the decades, all machismo and stoicism. It's nice to be reminded of how three-dimensional and fully realized the character used to be.

Proteus's powers really come off ill-defined and vague. I know much the same can be said of similarly extremely powerful villains, but trying to understand his powers took me out of the story at times. Apparently, for example, he could create living creatures (bees) that apparently continued existing from then on, he could turn the horizontal to the vertical and could manipulate matter fluidly. But he was limited by his burning out bodies and was vulnerable to metal. Why couldn't he manipulate his own body to stave off burning out or use his powers in any number of ways to travel without having to steal cars? And how could he affect Wolverine who had an adamantium skeleton? I dunno. It's a glaring weakness to the story, but all the great drama and interaction between the characters made it fairly easy to overlook. But age clearly brought more questions to the story than young adult-me ever had.

I, too, inferred what must have happened between Joe and Moira MacTaggert and how that produced Proteus. I'll echo the observances of how tastefully and not heavy-handed this was handled. Modern comics would, no doubt, "go there". But here it was all between the lines, and I miss that more subtle approach. Part of me would have preferred some sort of catharsis between mother and son (and even between Moira and Joe) before the end, but, as in life, there is often no cathartic closure. (I know this from personal experience.) But at least Moira has Sean for comfort.

So despite some flaws, this is a great highlight of a great era in comics, with even greater heights to come very soon. And, more and more, I miss narrative captions and thought bubbles soooooo much!



Originally Posted by Annfie
Good point about Wolverine's vulnerability, Lardy. What also made an impression on me was how Cyclops snapped him out of it, finally gaining his respect. So many good character scenes in this story.
PRELUDE TO THE GREAT ROY THOMAS DCU GOLDEN AGE/LEGACY RE-READ

A bit of behind-the-scenes context, plus some brief thoughts on Roy Thomas's 60s/70s Marvel work:

To hear Roy Thomas tell it, his last several years at Marvel in the 1970s were not happy ones. Having begun the decade being railroaded into replacing Stan Lee as EiC, by the middle of the 70s he had voluntarily quit as EiC, his first marriage had ended, and almost all his enthusiasm for the Marvel Universe had been tainted by a bitterness unbecoming a creator still only in his thirties. Conan remained his bread-and-butter gig throughout the rest of the 70s, although he did manage to re-light his MU spark somewhat on two projects: "What If?" and "The Invaders."

The Invaders was, indisputably, a dry run for what Roy would accomplish at DC in the 80s. An elaboration and expansion on the World War II adventures of Captain America, Sub-Mariner, Human Torch, and various and sundry super-allies, Invaders had more heart and soul than anything Thomas had written since his Avengers/X-Men purple patch of the late 60s.

Unfortunately, Invaders stumbled right out of the gate, due largely to the unfortunate choice of Frank Robbins as the title's default artist -- Robbins, like many industry veterans, was still hale and hearty, but his style was out of time...WAY out of time. It wouldn't have looked out of place on a second-or-third-string Golden Age superhero comic, but in the 70s of Paul Gulacy and Tom Sutton and Barry Smith et al, it was downright quaint! And the efforts by Thomas to get Robbins to merge his style with the Marvel House Style only made it uglier to look at. What was really tragic was that Invaders also coincided with a new maturity in Roy's writing, the slapdash plotting and cheesy (if guilty-pleasure yummy) dialogue of his Silver Age work having given way to vast improvements in storytelling and characterization. It would take many years, and writers such as Roger Stern, Ed Brubaker, and Christos Gage to finally unearth the full potential of the characters and ideas Roy had introduced in The Invaders.

So it was that, by the end of the 70s, Invaders stumbled towards its final issue with Roy on autopilot and his friend Don Glut (later to become a successful TV animation writer whose credits include my beloved Transformers TOS) doing most of the actual writing. Even Roy's Conan, for its part, couldn't help but tread water after the ill-conceived death of Conan's greatest love, Belit (even if it had been preordained by the Robert E. Howard source material.)

And, finally, Roy was also at the end of his rope in his always-contentious relationship with Jim Shooter, then only 2 years into his controversial EiC stint and already stepping on many creators' toes. As the 80s dawned, Roy's 15-year tenure at Marvel came to its sad but inevitable end.

Happily for Roy, DC was finding its second wind after hitting rock-bottom with the "1978 Implosion", and was warmly welcomed into the fold. Working initially with Dick Giordano and later with the ever-underappreciated Len Wein, Roy began to assemble his first DCU long-term project, one which hearkened back to his earliest love as a comics fan -- because although Roy had read and enjoyed just about every superhero comic of the Golden Age (an exaggeration, but not by much,) it was DC's Golden Age output, and particularly the Justice Society of America -- comics' very first superhero team -- which held the most special place in his heart.

A dream come true for Roy, then. And a pleasure to come soon, for readers both familiar and unfamiliar with his previous work.

COMING UP LATER TODAY: "All Star Squadron" issues 1 through 3.
"All-Star Squadron #1" (Cover Date September 1981)

NOTE: I don't have the 16-page prologue-slash-preview of this opening story-arc, but you can read Rick's excellent review of it here:

http://www.legionworld.net/forums/ubbthreads.php?ubb=showflat&Number=507029

And that's actually a good place to start with this review, because one of the best things about this first issue is that you *don't* need to have read the preview, or have *any* knowledge of DCU continuity, to understand what's going on here. In brief: The story begins on Earth-Two NYC, the night of December 6, 1941, just a few hours before the date that would live in infamy for the Japanese attack on Pearl Harbor. With the JSA reeling from super-villain attacks earlier that evening on different small groups of its members. So Hawkman is understandably feeling a bit edgy when he spots an intruder at the team's otherwise empty headquarters. Said intruder turns out to be the Pre-Crisis Plastic Man, a far less obnoxious (albeit somewhat bland) iteration of Jack Cole's wild Golden Age creation than the Big Guns JLA version from the 90s/00s. Plas is actually working for the U.S. gov't, so once they both explain recent developments to each other, they fly off to Washington DC...only to be ambushed by yet another villain, the King Bee and his heavily armed drones! HM and Plas put up a good counter-attack, but still end up unconscious on Terra Firma. In DC at the White House, Harry Hopkins, a top member of President Franklin D. Roosevelt's cabinet, is fretting about the JSA being no-shows.

Now we arrive at my favorite part of the issue: While riding his winged steed Victory, Sir Justin, The Shining Knight of Ancient Camelot, recently freed from suspended animation to once again fight the good fight, happens upon an uncharted island in the Pacific Ocean, where he meets a feisty scientist named Danette Reilly, who is investigating the island and specifically the simmering volcano at its center. Before long, they discover that the island is an artificial construct created by a mad scientist from the not-too-distant-future named Per Degaton. AND he's got some deadly associates guarding his sanctum: Solomon Grundy, the swamp-borne super-strong brute; Professor Zodiak, a chemistry whiz; Sky Pirate, whose name sums up both him and his modus operandi; and Wotan, a sorceror who has rather presumptuously named himself after a Teutonic God!

A brief digression: Danette and Sir Justin are my *favorite* characters from "All-Star Squadron," and I fervently wish that they, rather than Johnny Quick and Liberty Belle (more about whom shortly,) had been the indisputable stars of this series. Justin's speech patterns, similar to Marvel's mythical characters, but without the "thees" and "thous," make my heart melt. And Danette, who was named after Roy Thomas's second wife, Danette Cuoto, is sassy, tough, and sexy.

Next the tone of the story shifts from superhero melodrama to gritty tragedy, as the sun rises on Pearl Harbor only for the Japanese Navy to launch their sneak attack. Casualties mount up quickly, and they may or may not include Danette's brother, Rod, who is also secretly the costumed crimefighter Firebrand. Roy and artists Rich Buckler & Jerry Ordway don't flinch from the stark horror of the carnage, but they're not gratuitously graphic about it, either. But I still imagine this must have been quite shocking for grade-school comic book readers back in the day.

Response in Washington DC is swift and decisive, and, fortunately, two JSA members -- Dr. Mid-Nite and the Atom -- do happen to be in town, albeit none the wiser to the evil deeds at hands...until now. On their mad dash to the White House, they unexpectedly pick up fellow costumed ones Liberty Belle (tough and icy,) Johnny Quick (cocky and chatty,) and Robotman. Synchronicity is at work when Hawkman and Plastic Man finally arrive, much the worse for wear.

These seven crimefighters are immediately deputized by FDR himself to lead the All-Star Squadron, a super-powered task force to serve as America's first defense against its enemies. Their first mission will take them to the West Coast, to deal with the repercussions of the attack on Pearl Harbor.

Overall, this issue is just plain good comics. Roy's writing is as energetic as his early Marvel work, but with a much better command of technique. Rich Buckler's pencil art shows that, when he was fully committed to something, whether if was his own creation Deathlok in the 70s, or Peter David's brief but significant Spider-Man run later in the 80s, his work was solid as a rock. If the ink art by future star Jerry Ordway (who was only 23 or 24 at the time) seems a bit muddy in spots, that's because of a production screw-up at DC, whereiin some of Buckler's pages were sent to the wrong destination and Ordway had to make do with vellum over photocopies!

I only have a few minor quibbles: Roy's dialogue may not be as cheesy as it was in his early Marvel work, but it now has a rather dry and stilted feel to it. And while the amount of exposition is forgivable early on in this run, it gets much more tedious in the years to come. Finally, I am usually not one to begrudge a creator their sentimental favorites, but having Hawkman sport the version of the headgear with the open beak and the tongue stick out was IMHO a *terrible* idea. He just looks so *stupid* to me.

Even so, this is a spectacular start to an often brilliant series.
Ooh, good stuff!

Danette Reilly is darn close to my favorite of all All-Star Squadron-era characters! (Along with other less-popular folk like Amazing Man and Air Wave.) Otherwise, what a strange lineup! But some great out of the box choices (I like how it was decided to focus on the characters who weren't the classic Justice League equivalents (the Earth 2 Green Lantern, Flash, etc.), like Hourman and Plastic Man and Johnny Quick and Steel and Tarantula. I wish they'd lasted longer and been a little less uneven, at times, but 67 issues isn't a terrible run by any stretch! (I even liked the potential, if not always the execution, of the kind of dire Young All-Stars that followed, and that was much briefer, IIRC...)

I wonder if a modern day descendant of Danette Reilly could show up. There's not a ton of fire-users in the DCU. There's Fire (Beatiz) and that's about all I can think of, for the moment. Hotspot seems tp be gone and forgotten.
It's worth mentioning that Roy's original plan was to use Wildfire from Quality Comics, but was prohibited from doing so by the existence of a Wildfire in the Legion.

As much as I like the female Wildfire, I have to agree that Danette's creation was a fortunate byproduct of that stupid editorial interference.

And as I've pointed out before, Roy's tendency was to pick forgotten Golden Age characters who had been surprisingly successful when you look back at their original runs. Johnny Quick, Robotman, the Shining Knight, and Liberty Belle all actually had longer Golden Age runs than quite a few JSAers.
Originally Posted by Set
Ooh, good stuff!

Danette Reilly is darn close to my favorite of all All-Star Squadron-era characters! (Along with other less-popular folk like Amazing Man and Air Wave.) Otherwise, what a strange lineup! But some great out of the box choices (I like how it was decided to focus on the characters who weren't the classic Justice League equivalents (the Earth 2 Green Lantern, Flash, etc.), like Hourman and Plastic Man and Johnny Quick and Steel and Tarantula. I wish they'd lasted longer and been a little less uneven, at times, but 67 issues isn't a terrible run by any stretch! (I even liked the potential, if not always the execution, of the kind of dire Young All-Stars that followed, and that was much briefer, IIRC...)

I wonder if a modern day descendant of Danette Reilly could show up. There's not a ton of fire-users in the DCU. There's Fire (Beatiz) and that's about all I can think of, for the moment. Hotspot seems tp be gone and forgotten.



Thanks, Set.

Good to know that Danette is somebody else's favorite as well.

The rum nature of the lineup would be somewhat compensated for by its fluidity, and by the generous (sometimes over-generous) use of guest stars.

And, yeah, if the series had at least gotten to an nice, round 100 issues, that would've been great.

If it had actually gone on even longer and we'd have gotten to the end of the war, that would've been even greater.
Originally Posted by Eryk Davis Ester
It's worth mentioning that Roy's original plan was to use Wildfire from Quality Comics, but was prohibited from doing so by the existence of a Wildfire in the Legion.

As much as I like the female Wildfire, I have to agree that Danette's creation was a fortunate byproduct of that stupid editorial interference.


I agree 100 percent, EDE! nod

Originally Posted by Eryk Davis Ester
And as I've pointed out before, Roy's tendency was to pick forgotten Golden Age characters who had been surprisingly successful when you look back at their original runs. Johnny Quick, Robotman, the Shining Knight, and Liberty Belle all actually had longer Golden Age runs than quite a few JSAers.


Roy was the first superhero connoisseur turned professional creator!
All-Star Squadron #2 (October 1981)

For the most part, this issue is simply a second helping of the exact same goodness that Roy and Company served up in the first one. Certainly nothing to complain about. That said, there are three things about this issue which I feel are worth addressing:

- Joe Kubert's cover, a typically dynamic scene of the heroines and heroes disassembling an enemy plane in mid-flight. Kubert was not only one of the greatest comic book artists of all time, and a personal favorite of mine. He was also, in every sense, *there,* right in the thick of the Golden Age, as an industrious and (by his own admission) somewhat cocky 15-year-old who had already broken into the then-booming comic book industry. So it is fitting that he should have been the default cover artist for this series (even if that ultimately lasted for only a year-and-a-half.)

- Phantom Lady entering the fray. I *love* the Golden Age Quality Comics characters, and PL is my favorite of them. On the other hand -- and this is something Roy Thomas admitted in hindsight in "The All-Star Companion Volume 2" -- the use of her and other QC characters in this series was problematic, given that those characters had been established almost a decade earlier as being from Earth-X (where WWII never ended), rather than Earth-Two (where this series takes place, and where history unfolded more-or-less as it did in Real Life.) Roy did try to resolve this in a later storyline, with very mixed results IMO, but we'll get to that one in its proper time.

- The opening scene of a small group of onlookers outside the White House suddenly joining together to sing the National Anthem. According to Roy (again in TASCV2,) this is based on fact. He doesn't elaborate any further, and there is no need to. Now, I'll admit that when I first read that scene as an ignorant, arrogant, too-smart-for-my-own-good youth, I found it ridiculous, even reactionary. Today, my older and wiser self can fully appreciate where Roy was coming from -- because while it could be credibly argued that the United States of America, in its 244 years of existence, has never quite lived up to The American Ideal, I now believe that to outright dismiss The Ideal is just as bad as the periodic distortions of The Ideal by cynical opportunists. Back when this series took place, The Ideal was something to be cherished, to take pride in, and, yes, to fight for. A lesson well taught, IMHO, by Roy...who had, incidentally, been a schoolteacher before he moved to NYC to break into comics.
I have such mixed feelings about the use of the Quality characters. On the one hand, I applaud the goal of trying to find a way to preserve their GA stories, which didn't really fit with the Earth-X history. However, I've always thought that would've been best served by creating yet another Earth (Earth-Q?) in which their actual GA adventures took place rather than shoehorning them into Earth-2. Nonetheless, I do think Plastic Man and Phantom Lady especially worked well in the context of All-Star Squadron, so I don't really have a problem with there being Earth-2 versions of those characters. Especially when you consider that in Plastic Man's case there had already been established versions of him from several other Earths, and postulating multiple Phantom Ladies kind of works with the way she was used by different publishers in the Golden Age.
All valid points, EDE.

And I'll admit I have an Earth-X bias because it's one of my favorite JLA stories.

Phantom Lady I'm fine with multiple versions of, but Plastic Man to me only counts in the Jack Cole stories (and I'm not even a great fan of those -- I think they're wildly imaginative, but often disturbing.)
Just a "I'm enjoying this thread" comment here. Move along...move along....
Thank you, Thoth! Much appreciated! That's exactly what makes all the effort that goes into those reviews worthwhile.
I can't read the ASS issues at the moment but am looking forward to going through this thread when I can. Keep going Ann. Thanks.
I remember picking up A-SS #1 when it came out. I think I liked it okay, but it was a little over my head. I may have stuck with it a few more issues, but maybe I didn't. I came in loving the JSA from various JLA/JSA crossovers I'd already read, but I remember finding the Squadron concept confusing because it both was and wasn't the JSA. I was 11, so I think if it were a pure JSA book, I would've been all-in.

As of now, I've only read those first 1 (or more) few issues, the big JLA/JSA/A-SS crossover and recently, the Crisis crossover issues reprinted in the recent Crisis Companion Vol. 1 HC (collecting the final 11 issues of the book, among other crossovers). I'd certainly be a likely consumer of an A-SS Omnibus or series of HC collections, if they ever get around to it.

I am, however, kind on the fence about Roy Thomas. He's not a writer whose work I pretty much love or like most of the time. Some of his stuff is pretty by-the-numbers and lacks much in the way of characterization. Most of what I like is elevated by him being paired with an exceptional artist. Some examples that come to mine are his X-Men run with Neal Adams, his Dr. Strange run with Jackson Guice, Ordway and MacFarlane on Infinity Inc and, of course, his collaborations with John Buscema. I feel sure that I would enjoy the body of A-SS, though, not just because Ordway was there for a while but also because I love so many of the characters. (And I certainly enjoyed the crossover stories mentioned above.)

Originally Posted by Ann Hebistand
All-Star Squadron #2 (October 1981)
- Phantom Lady entering the fray. I *love* the Golden Age Quality Comics characters, and PL is my favorite of them. On the other hand -- and this is something Roy Thomas admitted in hindsight in "The All-Star Companion Volume 2" -- the use of her and other QC characters in this series was problematic, given that those characters had been established almost a decade earlier as being from Earth-X (where WWII never ended), rather than Earth-Two (where this series takes place, and where history unfolded more-or-less as it did in Real Life.) Roy did try to resolve this in a later storyline, with very mixed results IMO, but we'll get to that one in its proper time.



I think the FF basically decided to leave Earth-2 to join the fight on Earth-X, right?


Originally Posted by Paladin

I think the FF basically decided to leave Earth-2 to join the fight on Earth-X, right?


Yeah, it's revealed that the FF had originally migrated from Earth-2. Which pretty much negated the original reason for using them in A-SS (namely to bring all of their postwar Quality stories into continuity). Plus it creates the question of why the JSA apparently don't know them when they first meet in the JLA/JSA/FF crossover.

Originally Posted by Paladin


I am, however, kind on the fence about Roy Thomas. He's not a writer whose work I pretty much love or like most of the time. Some of his stuff is pretty by-the-numbers and lacks much in the way of characterization. Most of what I like is elevated by him being paired with an exceptional artist. Some examples that come to mine are his X-Men run with Neal Adams, his Dr. Strange run with Jackson Guice, Ordway and MacFarlane on Infinity Inc and, of course, his collaborations with John Buscema. I feel sure that I would enjoy the body of A-SS, though, not just because Ordway was there for a while but also because I love so many of the characters. (And I certainly enjoyed the crossover stories mentioned above.)



Thomas definitely has his flaws as a writer, but I think with A-SS in particular there's a kind of energy and excitement to the series that makes up some of the other weaknesses. It's a series that's just fun to read.

All Star Squadron #3 (Nov. 1981)

In which the various plot threads and the large cast introduced in the 2 previous issues all converge quite gracefully over the Pacific Ocean for a grand final showdown between good and evil. In the end, Degaton and all the other time-travelling villains are returned from whence they came in the space-time continuum, the All-Stars and the JSA get to make proper introductions, and after a pep talk from First Lady Eleanor Roosevelt herself, the heroines and heroes are more fervorous than ever about fighting the good fight. This issue is almost wall-to-wall action, something both Roy and Buckler have always had the talent to deliver in a superior way.

Now, as memory serves me, it takes about a year for the series to get back to the high level of awesomeness of its opening 3-part story-arc, but I'm confident that everything in those 10 or 12 issues will be rarely less than good.

NOTE: I don't have issue 4, but thanks to the trusty old All-Star Companion (Volume 2), I can give you a plot synopsis written by Roy himself:

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17 All-Stars arrive at devastated Pearl Harbor, determined to carry the war to Japan. Danette Reilly is reunited with her wounded brother Rod. The mysterious Dragon King technologically magnifies the power of the Spear of Destiny and the Holy Grail (Grailstone) to give the Axis control of any magic-based beings who encounter their aura -- including Superman (because of an unknown Kryptonite component) -- thereby forcing America's most powerful heroes to keep out of Axis-held territory.


I'll come back here within the next 24 hours to review issue #5.
A quick scene by scene of #4:-

The cover tells us that this is ?a battle you never expected!? and ?a climax you?ll never forget!?

It?s ?The Justice Society of America vs The All Star Squadron!?

And the cover doesn?t hold back showing Thunderbolt vs Hawkman; Spectre vs Atom; Green Lantern vs Doctor Midnite; Superman vs Robotman; Wonder Woman vs Liberty Belle and Doctor Fate vs Johnny Quick.

Chapter One: Day of the Dragon King
The splash page shows the assembled heroes on their way to Pearl Harbour. One of Roy?s writing traits is to answer questions he must have posed while putting together the book, and ones he might have asked as a fan. So, we get a (failed) attempt to explain why The Spectre didn?t just magic everyone there.
Another Thomas trait is to cram the issue with lots of points, based on his Golden Age research. We get four pages of the team en route to Pearl Harbour with the JSA and new All Star Squadron exchanging conversation full of character notes.

We learn that Doctor Fate has recently lost a lot of his power, but can still fly and carry people; Wonder Woman hasn?t yet become a JSA member; Hawkman sets up the next story by saying that he hasn?t heard from Shiera; We?re reminded of Danette?s brother at pearl harbour; we get little flashbacks that show Plastic Man and Phantom Lady leaving the cast for now; Liberty Belle experiences adrenal rushes close to a bell and Superman remembers a time, only three years before, when he was the only cape in town. He refers to it as his ?coming out? having inspired others. Superman also hopes to know Wonder Woman who he hopes to ?get to know a lot better.? ? seeding the way for Byrne and beyond.

As with Spectre not just magically arriving, others such as Supes are holding back so they all arrive together.

Chapter Two: Aftermath of Infamy
A page has panels showing the reaction of many of the cast to the destruction they see in the main central panel. It?s a pretty good page. The heroes are fired upon by their own side, mistakenly thinking it might be another attack. We get a reminder of Supes being a bit more vulnerable than the Earth-1 version; the power of the Spectre and of Thunderbolt.

The group are well received, and meet the general who is pleased that they can stand in for all the damaged planes. The Atom felt a bit inferior in chapter one. That turns out to be a set up. When he expresses something similar here, Supes tells him that in a world war, America needs all of them, not just those with special powers. Of course, he did use super hearing to pick up what the Atom said?

The group are eager to take the war to the Japanese and say ?aye!? to smashing its fleet. Thomas doesn?t miss an continuity or historical beat, reminding us that the President wanted them to stay on the home front, and that congress hasn?t declared war yet.

Elsewhere on the base, Justin and Danette see check in on Rod Reilly. He?s in a coma and Slugger Dunn has been injured. Danette is warm to Justin?s touch. I?ve not reread the earlier issues, but Annfie mentioned a volcano. I guess that was to be part of Wildfire?s more elemental origins in the series.
The heroes struggle to find the fleet which troubles Spectre. Roy?s research informs the cast?s geographical skills and military history telling them that other attacks are being carried out, and they go to aid their forces in those battles.

Elsewhere, a hooded Dragon King mixes science and magic (years before Rasputin in Hellboy), in anticipation of the JSA?s attack (he doesn?t know about the Squadron). The source of his magic is the Holy Grail. Combining its energies with those of the Spear of Destiny (The Germans were busy nipping across the world after artefacts, as mentioned in previous reviews) it sends waves across the skies, turning those heroes susceptible to magic into being allies of the axis powers!

It looks grim, but fortunately Spectre, Supes and Wondy have more resistance, as they?re not ?mortal humans?. Even so, Green Lantern, Doctor Fate and Thunderbolt. Green Lantern is defeated as he blabbed to Midnite at some JSA point about having a weakness against wood. He also has a glass jaw, as Belle knocks him out with the only bit lying around. It frees Quick, Robotman, Atom and Midnite to attack enemy forces. This is also Thomas showing that he can write action scenes for heroes all across the power scales in the same story.

Hawkman flies Fate out from the Grail?s ?alien? influence. He then gets to repeat the trick with the others, just as their will breaks. We don?t get the see the Spectre, Superman or Wondy really work for the enemy.

Robotman destroys the enemy HQ, but the Dragon King has escaped and the grail prevents the heroes going further towards enemy forces. Robotman loses an arm in the process, getting damaged in the way that all repairable heroes do. In the final panel, Hawkman reminds us about his missing wife, and tells us that he has another bombshell to drop on his buddies!

Thomas gives us plenty of heroes in the issue. No one seems left out, even as he emphasises those who will become the central cast. Thomas? in depth historical knowledge blends well with his huge continuity drive and golden age information. You always get your money?s worth just reading a Roy Thomas story. He puts in a lot of written detail, in the days where it was fine to show someone?s internal monologues. He doesn?t miss many opportunities to add in background references, while pushing the plot forward with plenty of action. There are some nice character moments, although a lot of the cast?s dialogue will eventually become a little samey. Thomas is far, far from being the only writer that this happens to, and there are plenty of other distractions here to capture the attention.
Wait... the Spear/Grail affected Superman because of kryptonite (before kryptonite was even discovered!)?

I always assumed it was just Superman's vulnerability to magic.
I think it was his vulnerability to magic that would have made him turn. His non-human heritage, which is what I took "non-human mortal" to mean, meant that his Kryptonian heritage made him a little more resistant than a lot of the others.
That's the way I understood, which is what makes Roy's reference to Kryptonite in Ann's quote above puzzling...
Wasn't the vulnerability to magic played up a lot more in the Post-Crisis DCU than the Pre-Crisis? Or is my memory faulty?
Nah, it was a pretty big deal in the Silver/Bronze Age. It was regularly mentioned when Mxyzptlk would show up, and it was a standard excuse for sidelining him in early JLA stories. I was just reading a story yesterday from about 1980 where Terra-Man enlisted the aid of a magic-wielding alternate Earth counterpart of himself to take out Superman. Plus I'd guess that's why the Wizard was turned into a major Earth-2 Superman foe in the Mr. and Mrs. Superman stories.
Ah, okay. That explains it. I have little familiarity with those eras of Superman. Thanks, EDE.
Peeking back through it...

DC Special's 29 apparently gave us the retconned untold origin of the JSA. A certain military dictator is shown holding the Spear of Destiny in front of a captive Bats and GL.
Thomas tells us that the true grail is "actually a cup carved wholly of stone-- and graven with ancient, mystic runes." - An interesting version.

The force waves from the device, make Hawkman tingle but it's like "shock therapy" to Superman, and affects Fate and Speccy in the same way as Supes.

ah, there it is ?

Doctor Fate, once free, says " Those waves of energy we felt! They worked on those of us most vulnerable typo magic, somehow-- because magic is part and parcel of our very origins."

A little bit of a confusion over Superman's vulnerability to magic and having magic in his origin. It's so completely unlike Thomas, that a retconned Kryptonite reason has been placed into his All Star Companion description. smile
LOL

Thanks, Thoth.

Occam's Razor, I guess? smile
Not much I have to say about the "Kukulkan" 2-parter in issues #5 and #6. I think it's the kind of story that Gardner Fox would've hacked out under a deadline crunch during the Silver Age. Having the phony god turn out to be a Nazi in brownface wasn't much better than if he'd been Mexican, but...either way, it's not much of a story. shrug

Back later with a review of the far better All-Star Squadron issue #7 (which also marks the return of the great Joe Kubert on covers.)
Yeah, that 2-parter was pretty weak, but I recall the next story line being first-rate stuff!
The 2-parter did have Firebrand getting her powers (Rod Reilly kept his ID in a way a Mr Moore might have been reading). It also had Johnny Quick & Robot Man battle on the Statue of Liberty.
A quick skim reminds me that while he's writing Squadron plots, Roy Thomas is also cross referencing everything with the appearances of the JSA in their golden age books, as well as later retcons and history.
This 2-parter has the JSA enlist, and we get the Spectre saying that, as a dead man, this would cause some problems. There's even a feeling of disconnect with the living from him (again, a Mr Moore seems to have been reading)
EDE, yes indeed, the next three consecutive issues are superb!

Thoth, good call on the possible influences on Mr. Moore. And while it is true that the Firebrand sequence and the Statue of Liberty sequence were a pleasant relief from the tedium of the "A-Plot," I wish those scenes had had more room to breathe instead of taking a backseat to the Latin stereotype silliness.
Feeling worn down by the sheer awfulness of modern life, but I really want to keep this re-read going. So here I go...

Issues #7 through #9 of "All-Star Squadron" make clever and productive use of potentially strong discards by re-purposing an unpublished issue of the short-lived 1978 series "Steel" (created by Roy Thomas's friend Gerry Conway.) Since both that series and A-SS were set during WWII, the fit is seamless. Equally seamless is the art, thanks to Jerry Ordway re-inking Don Heck's "Steel" art while also inking the pencil art of Adrian Gonzales (who replaced Rich Buckler as default A-SS artist halfway through the Aztec fiasco.)

Roy also brings in a couple other Conway creations, Baron Blitzkrieg (think Evil Iron Man working for the Nazis) and Kung the animal shapeshifter (I wonder if Kung directly inspired prime-time schlockmeister Glen A. Larson to create the TV series "Manimal.") Both make perfect villains for A-SS, with the Baron arguably becoming the Golden Age heroes' arch-nemesis (in Roy's Golden Age stories at least.) His surprising origin, which gives him a direct connection to Steel, works better than I expected. I tend to be wary of superhero writers using the horrors of the death camps (i.e. Chris Claremont retroactively turning Magneto a Holocaust survivor,) but Roy somehow manages to avoid trivializing or exploiting this all-time-low in human history. Roy also makes a point in the origin sequence about violence always begetting more violence no matter the intent; I'm not so sure at this moment that he succeeded there -- I must think harder.

Overall, Roy at the very least equals the quality of the 3-issue time-travel opener here. And since I am well-versed in his Marvel work, I feel confident declaring that the Steel arc of A-SS was the first time he succeeded even halfway in combining Real Life seriousness with superhero escapism.
The second All-Star Squadron 3-parter in a row, running in issues #10 through #12, is not as good as the preceding Steel showcase story-arc, but it's not bad at all. I'd even venture to muse that it would have been great as a 2-parter.

What I speculate is that, because it is a showcase for Hawkman, Roy Thomas's favorite costumed hero of all time, it suffers from the writer's overindulgence -- the hero's elaborate origin, along with the origin of the first villain he ever fought, and a lot of other expository odds and ends, means that one of Roy's greatest weaknesses is compounded here. The heavy exposition slows down the pace considerably, testing the patience of this particular reader, and, I suspect, many others as well.

Artistically, though, it's a treat -- Gonzales & Ordway are both really hitting their stride, and Kubert *really* seems to have gone all-out on the covers, especially issue 12, foregrounding a magnificent full-height rendering of an angry, defiant Hawkman.

Fun Fact: Kubert is, as far as I know, the only artist to have done substantial work on both the Golden Age Hawkman (when he was only about 18 years old) and the Silver Age Hawkman!
I can imagine Roy and Gerry's joy at seamlessly weaving Commander Steel into the Squadron. I don't mind him as a character, and liked Steel and that arc in the JLD. As Ann mentioned, Blitzkrieg and Kung come along to beef up the villains of the time. But having skimmed these issues, he's just too close to Robotman in a book with a very large cast already. There's a scene where Steel loses the woman he loves, declaring himself dead. It's immediately followed by Robotman putting on a rubber mask, which has his new ID, as part of a ruse to show people who once loved him that he'd died. Even their character arcs are as similar as their powers. There's a throwaway where Steel also positions himself at the start of the Golden Age, and it works about as well as Triumph did years later in the JLA. But mainly, like Ann, I'm very wary of the use of death camps, as part of a character's back story. They don't get much of a mention outside his origin story which isn't a good sign. It's an origin story where he gets hit on the head an awful lot so he can get through all his plot hoops, without success - failed Hitler kidnap, death camp & escape, attacking Hitler. I'm a lot less convinced on that one than I would have been reading it as a kid (even in a book that I have to reread with any sense of political analysis surgically removed from my head).

Something else I enjoy more with a reskim, are the nods to classic sci fi movies used for the Hastor arc. I'd not have seen all of them back then. I'm stunned that there's not a Roy story about how the flying saucer didn't end up on our Earth-Prime as the source for all the Area-51/ UFO flaps here. The end of the issue leaves a war winning, and completely intact bit of kit lying around for the Americans to use. Since I mentioned Mr Moore last time, compare Veidt's plan in Watchmen with the plot here.

It takes an issue or two to get used to the amount of text Thomas uses, to keep us up to speed on every event and all of the continuity nods he gives. No stone shall be left unturned, or left without a detailed origin story on it's part in WWII smile And it's a good thing that he cares so much about Hawkgirl's headgear or endlessly juggles around why some heroes have enlisted and others haven't. Thomas has gone to significantly greater lengths than most other writers who now delve into an X-Tombola or tick a JLA-bingo card to select their team to run for a short-lived, ill-planned tenure.

I wasn't a fan of the Kubert covers. I found them scratchy, with minimal features and iffy colouring. They didn't reach out and grab me. What did I know. Looking at them now, I still think the colouring's a bit iffy. But the grasp of anatomy and dynamics is super, and it's that experience that allows him to use the amount of details he does. It just takes my brain cell that moment to see it, while Ordway's up front detail would win me over immediately.
Thoth, very good point about Steel's excessive similarity to Robotman. I guess I found it easy to ignore mainly because of the awesomeness of the fight between the two. Also because the Golden Age Robotman has never been a favorite of mine. If only he'd had his own Grant Morrison to make him awesome like Grant did with the Silver Age Robotman. Instead, we got "Dark Robotman" courtesy of the notorious James Robinson (in fairness, I think there are still a lot of things about "The Golden Age" mini-series that do still hold up -- but, Gods, it is such a product of its early-mid 90s time!)

Triumph from JLA and Steel? LOL That's a bit harsh, I think, but it sure makes me laugh heartily. lol

I greatly appreciate your honest assessment of Joe Kubert's artistic strengths and weaknesses, and how he compares to a more immediately accessible style like Jerry Ordway's. I think I was able to embrace him more easily partly because his sons Andy & Adam were making a big noise over at Marvel right around the time I first got into superhero comics (with Papa Joe inking Andy on Ghost Rider.) Also, Kubert was a big influence on his contemporary John Buscema, who is my favorite comic book artist of all time. One of my favorite JB works is Avengers #50, a ferocious battle between Hercules and Typhon, which JB inked himself to very Kubert-esque effect.

By any chance, have you ever seen Kubert's Silver Age Hawkman work? He only did six issues, and they received wildly mixed reactions at the time. Probably not a million miles from the reactions to Bill Sienkiewicz's "New Mutants" work 2 decades hence. Personally, though, I find them a real breath of fresh air amidst the visual primness of the other SA features from the Julius Schwartz stable (i.e. Gil Kane before he found his mojo, and Carmine Infantino, and Murphy Anderson, and Mike Sekowsky.)
Originally Posted by Ann Hebistand
Thoth, very good point about Steel's excessive similarity to Robotman. I guess I found it easy to ignore mainly because of the awesomeness of the fight between the two. Also because the Golden Age Robotman has never been a favorite of mine. If only he'd had his own Grant Morrison to make him awesome like Grant did with the Silver Age Robotman. Instead, we got "Dark Robotman" courtesy of the notorious James Robinson (in fairness, I think there are still a lot of things about "The Golden Age" mini-series that do still hold up -- but, Gods, it is such a product of its early-mid 90s time!)


Robotman has just had an issue where his fiance is unconscious on his lab floor. But she's not that now, because she believes he's dead. Instead, he's distanced himself from his love by taking on a second identity. He's done that because he doesn't want her to know about the accident and him being Robotman. We're not far away from Robotman's status as a human will be up for debate. That sense of isolation from his life, those he knew and even his humanity are just the things Morrison would pop into the Doom Patrol run. Moore wasn't the only one reading All Star Squadron, and taking cues from it.

Originally Posted by Ann Hebistand
Triumph from JLA and Steel? LOL That's a bit harsh, I think, but it sure makes me laugh heartily. lol


smile Triumph was there at the start of the JLA and Steel is practically next out the door after Superman. Apparently. Both examples of particularly limelight hogging retcons, although Thomas' one was a bit more subtle and is presumably the work of a massive timeline he had scrawled across his home at the time.

Originally Posted by Ann Hebistand
I greatly appreciate your honest assessment of Joe Kubert's artistic strengths and weaknesses, and how he compares to a more immediately accessible style like Jerry Ordway's. I think I was able to embrace him more easily partly because his sons Andy & Adam were making a big noise over at Marvel right around the time I first got into superhero comics (with Papa Joe inking Andy on Ghost Rider.) Also, Kubert was a big influence on his contemporary John Buscema, who is my favorite comic book artist of all time. One of my favorite JB works is Avengers #50, a ferocious battle between Hercules and Typhon, which JB inked himself to very Kubert-esque effect.


Thanks. I think it just says more about my reading style than anything else. Kubert's covers take me that extra moment. Kirby's characters all seemed like pensioners, and Sekowsky also had that issue along with some interesting anatomy. I found Swan's work a bit stiff and dull. They just used to take me a moment. Same still do. Later, Kirby's work would reach out and thump me, Sekowsky's Wonder Woman art was hugely impressive and made me reassess why I'd enjoyed all his JLA work too, and Swan could produce gorgeous art when he had the opportunity to do so. Infantino and Sienkiewicz are other examples too. I can't even say it's a product of my time, as Infantino's work (on Star Wars) is some of the earliest I remember. I'm just a lazy reader smile


Originally Posted by Ann Hebistand
By any chance, have you ever seen Kubert's Silver Age Hawkman work? He only did six issues, and they received wildly mixed reactions at the time. Probably not a million miles from the reactions to Bill Sienkiewicz's "New Mutants" work 2 decades hence. Personally, though, I find them a real breath of fresh air amidst the visual primness of the other SA features from the Julius Schwartz stable (i.e. Gil Kane before he found his mojo, and Carmine Infantino, and Murphy Anderson, and Mike Sekowsky.)


I don't think so. I've some Murphy Anderson ones...although a quick check tells me that I may well have some of the Hawkman/Atom issues he worked on. I've got #44 where he's being trapped in a sarcophagus. I got that *because* of the Kubert cover. That would be a number of years after the Squadron, when I like to pretend I knew better. smile


Interesting. I really should've been paying more attention to the Robotman subplot. I have to admit I sometimes rush through the scenes with characters who are not favorites. Also, I'm missing issues #16 and #17, which, as you noted, move that particular subplot into the spotlight.

RE: Various artists, I agree with you about Swan -- sometimes his work could be breathtaking in its loveliness (to give one example, the first DC Comics Presents issue teaming Superman with the Legion, the one where they fight Mongul.) More often, though, he really seemed to be phoning it in.

Kirby, on the other hand, is simply not my thing...specifically, I like a generous helping of lyricism with my planet-shaking action sequences. For all of Kirby's innovations, I have never gotten that lyrical feeling from his work, not even when it's prettified (somewhat) by good inkers like Joe Sinnott or Wally Wood.

Sekowsky is, to me, just totally out of his depth on team books...very similar to my opinion of Don Heck (who, oddly enough, also had a run on Wonder Woman that is well-regarded by fandom.) I alluded to this a while ago in another thread, but I kinda wish Sekowsky had taken over Flash as artist/writer instead of Wonder Woman. His irreverent writing, his quirky art style, and his legendary speed at drawing would have given Barry and the Rogues a welcome turbo-charge.

Not that Infantino's Flash work ever lacked for energy -- to the very end of his Flash run, he was doing exciting experiments with page design that soared above his weaknesses as a draftsman; but the writing got formulaic long before he left -- there really was nowhere to go after having all the Rogues team up against Flash...tellingly, Infantino's last 1960s issue was *another* wall-to-wall Rogues Gallery showcase, and not nearly as good as the first.

Back to All Star Squadron -- I will not fail to review issue #13 and Annual #1 tomorrow, and in the most expeditious manner...because I want to spend a long, *long* time savoring the goodness that is the truly epic JLA/JSA/A-SS 5-parter. nod
Look forward to your reviews Annfie! I'll try to dig out 16 & 17 for a quick summary when they come round.

Originally Posted by Ann Hebistand
Interesting. I really should've been paying more attention to the Robotman subplot.

One of the fun things with rereads, is giving credit where it's due for writers who developed plots used in later works to greater acclaim.

Originally Posted by Ann Hebistand
Sekowsky is, to me, just totally out of his depth on team books...very similar to my opinion of Don Heck (who, oddly enough, also had a run on Wonder Woman that is well-regarded by fandom.) I alluded to this a while ago in another thread, but I kinda wish Sekowsky had taken over Flash as artist/writer instead of Wonder Woman. His irreverent writing, his quirky art style, and his legendary speed at drawing would have given Barry and the Rogues a welcome turbo-charge.


Don Heck would definitely be another one for this list. The JLA I started reading had Perez and Patton on art chores, and I felt that Heck was a *big* step down. But he had some great panels with Mera in the JLD. I recently saw a couple of Avengers issues with his art, and I appreciated his work a lot more. I could probably go back to those JLA issues and look at them with a better eye, rather than the eye that wants an instant return which probably read them first time round. The last Sekowsky JLA story I read left the poor guy with all of two pages to clear up a three team fight. He not only managed that, but you could read little stories within the poses he gave the characters. And that was his regular gig. His Wondy made me realise how different responsibilities, timescales and payments could impact on an artist. I remember it not being a fan favourite...all the way until they tried it again. I've not read his Wondy for a number of years, but I was really impressed. Impressed enough to hunt down his full run on it.
For what it's worth, the Robotman plots are drawing *heavily* upon the actual GA Robotman stories, from what I remember.
The credit where it's due dept goes all the way back. Considering his knowledge and desire to keep all the continuity together, I wonder how many subplots from all the individual titles Thomas used in Squadron. There's certainly plenty of references.
So All Star Squadron #13 is the infamous "Instant Cure for Racism" issue. This sort of thing is not without precedent in Roy Thomas's canon, especially at Marvel during the "Relevance" era of the early 70s that also gave us DC's "Green Lantern/Green Arrow." I can't fault Roy's sincerity, but the end result is all so very trite and simplistic and unconvincing. Also, Ordway is spelled on this issue (presumably because he was busy working on the Annual) by Mike DeCarlo; now, I have defended DeCarlo's Baxter Era Legion work vociferously, but this is a very early entry in his canon, and as such looks borderline amateurish. The rich shading and texture of Ordway's inks is very much missed, although the story itself would still have been a letdown, just a better-looking letdown.

As for the Annual, it's lovely to look at, and Earth-2 Wonder Woman having a guest-starring role *certainly* doesn't hurt it in any way. But the whole thing about the cosmic boxing coach just seems awfully silly to me, and I consider it a prime example of Roy's tendency to overdo the continuity fixes.

There. Done and dusted. Tomorrow we begin our immersion into the dense, complex wonders of "Crisis on Earth-Prime."
#13
Two panels in and Thomas has to get Hawkman to clarify a chairman position issue, that so few would have noticed. Hawk must have been tempted to call a meeting of the Thomas' Avengers for a minute. smile Then we have to get more clarification on who has, and hasn't enlisted, that month.
Hawkman monthly is interrupted by a rousing, patriotic speech by Belle, while we learn that King Arthur allowed voting and wasn't an absolute monarch as the title suggested. This is also the scene where Conway's Man of Steel positions himself very close to the Superman one, in continuity terms.

I'd forgotten how much like Hawkman Monthly this book was at times. I remember that, as Hawkman had been in all the All-Star issues, Thomas was determined to keep the record going. There is a nice scene with the Hawks though. I'd also not appreciated how Thomas was determined to keep the chronology together, even if that meant keeping the likes of the Atom, Hawkman and Shining Knight prominently displayed, even as they would have to get written out later on. Firebrand seems to have been hit by a race hate ray. I don't recall her having that reaction when she visited her brother the first time, so this might have been a later addition. She's also upset from losing Sir Justin.

This was the issue where Robotman and Steel have very similar life issues a scene apart. Redundant. Mary "Steel" Sue excused himself from the voting. Not because he was a brainwashed enemy agent five minutes before, and that the others don't know anything about him. But because he feels as though he's out of touch. Once that passes, he'll go for that win. Please.

I wonder if Belle getting it is a revisionist way of alleviating the guilt of Wondy being JSA and JLA secretary for so long. There's the fourth wall. Then there's the Thomas Fourth Wall where he gets a character to moralise directly to the readers about events...four decades before.

It's a fill in issue, but one that I find a lot more irritating than breezy.

Originally Posted by thoth lad
TBC



Oh, yes, thanks for the reminder -- I almost forgot...

STAY TUNED

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smile TBC was because I pressed the submit button for my post above, before I'd finished it...
Oops! Sorry. blush

I thought it meant To Be Continued, as in the Roy Thomas re-read continuing.
It works both ways smile
LOL lol

True, true...
As usual, I've got the Annuals in another binder, and not at this house. From what you say about it, I take it this was the one where Thomas realised that lots of his cast had similarities in their golden age origins. Naturally, he went to connect the dots. A look at the cover online tells me that I would have liked the art. But I can't remember *why* they had a similar origin or who the boxing coach turned out to be.

If Thomas had followed this line of thinking, he could have connected up all the dim, but secretly brilliant, playboy heroes for Annual 2. Batman... Starman? smile
I definitely applaud Thomas for wanting to do something more with Joe Morgan, who is a super-cool character from GA Atom stories, but connecting him in to Wildcat and Guadrian's origins seemed completely random, and turning him into a weird generic villain possessed by evil magic or whatever was major disservice to the character, imo.
"CRISIS ON EARTH-PRIME" (October through December 1982)

ROLL CALL: Aquaman, Firestorm, Hawkman (E-1), Superman (E-1), Zatanna (as the JLA) - Dr. Fate, Green Lantern (E-2), Huntress, Power Girl, Starman (as the JSA) - Firebrand, Johnny Quick, Liberty Belle, Robotman, Steel (as the All-Star Squadron)

PART ONE: JLA #207

The twentieth of the JLA/JSA gatherings begins routinely, with the JSA boarding the Transmatter Cube to transport them from Earth-2 to Earth-1. BUT some mysterious force throws the JSA-ers off their intended course, instead substituting...all five members of *The Crime Syndicate,* the evil JLA analogs from Earth-3! A brawl erupts within the JLA Satellite, and the villains score a victory in this battle. They then take a space shuttle loaned by NASA for testing. The villains' destination is the planet Earth...but not before they squabble amongst themselves about someone named *Degaton* (as in the time-travelling villain who was the All Star Squadron's first antagonist? But of course!)

Meanwhile, the JSA members find themselves trapped in a sort of inter-dimensional limbo, but not for long, thanks to the combined powers of Dr. Fate and Starman. But their freedom quickly turns sour when they land on Earth-Prime, the one where super-heroes are fictional characters...and which has been devastated by some form of the apocalypse. At least Alan Scott's ring manages to figure out the party responsible for this evil deed -- you guessed it: Per Degaton!

Back on E-1, aboard the JLA Satellite, the humiliated heroes regain consciousness. They decide to prioritize the well-being of the JSA-ers over the pursuit of the Crime Syndicate. And so the JLA members board the Transmatter Cube, which *does* take them to Earth-2. The bad news is, they are out of time (it's 1942 here) and out of place (history has been changed, and the tyrannical leader of the planet Earth is...yep, *Per Degaton!*)

On the opening chapter of their epic 5-part event, Gerry Conway & Roy Thomas really outdo themselves with the script. And if the art were equally impressive, I would rate this issue a complete and utter triumph.

Unfortunately, the artwork is by Don Heck, which means that the layouts are functional but dull, and that the faces are plain, samey, and sharp-featured. At least Romeo Tanghal is on inks to smooth out Heck's rough-edged linework, but he won't be back for Part Three or Part Five.

It is because of Heck's underwhelming interior art on the JLA tie-ins to this story-line (the JLA covers are by George Perez, not a personal favorite of mine but certainly more fittingly grandiose than Heck) that I had underrated Gerry & Roy's monumental achievement. But make no mistake -- on a pure story-telling level, this is truly amazing stuff!

Back later with Part Two, in All Star Squadron #14, courtesy of Roy, Gerry, Joe Kubert, Adrian Gonzales, and Jerry Ordway!
As I've said before, this is a story that I have absolutely zero ability to be objective about. This was the first JLA/JSA crossover I read, and it was my introduction to the whole concept of multiple earths, the JSA, A-SS, the Crime Syndicate, etc., and I absolutely loved it as a kid.
Originally Posted by Eryk Davis Ester
As I've said before, this is a story that I have absolutely zero ability to be objective about. This was the first JLA/JSA crossover I read, and it was my introduction to the whole concept of multiple earths, the JSA, A-SS, the Crime Syndicate, etc., and I absolutely loved it as a kid.


Cheers, EDE cheers I can certainly relate to the feeling of revisiting an all-time old favorite! And also, like I said before, I've learned to appreciate that story a lot better in this re-read. nod
Gosh! JLA #207 was an excellent read. It even had a time bubble in it! I didn't mind Heck's art in it on this reread. It more than gets the job done. GL's ring might as well have been on his nose, to lead him through the information and plot points he needed to get to. Bit it did free up panel space so that every group of heroes were given plenty of room, and the reader could be taken across worlds and times.
I disagree about Heck's JLA art. I don't think it gets the job done at all. Even if we couldn't have Perez on interiors, surely we could still have had a better yeoman artist than Heck.
He was the JLA regular artist from #201, so it would have been a bit of a kick to oust him from this assignment. Carmine Infantino did #206, so it could have been given to him.
"CRISIS ON EARTH-PRIME" Part Two: "All-Star Squadron" #14

There is *so much stuff* compressed into these 23 story pages that I nearly went crazy trying to sum it up. Therefore, I'll just hit the highest points:

Two well-executed action sequences bookend a lengthy -- yet easy to follow and never boring -- exposition sequence that fills us in on Per Degaton and the Crime Syndicate AND includes a genuinely fascinating history lesson about the Cuban Missile Crisis of 1962.*

I think that A-SS penciler Adrian Gonzales manages to do justice to Roy Thomas & Gerry Conway's script in a way that JLA penciler Don Heck failed -- Gonzales understands perspective, composition, and dynamics far better than Heck. And with the chocolate drizzle of Jerry Ordway's inking, the art in this issue is not merely functional, it's exciting!

Yes, I have been harsh on Heck. Yes, too, I have a personal distaste for the way Heck draws people, especially women -- even on the middle issues of his 1960s Avengers run, where he had superb inking by Frank Giacoia, Wallace Wood, and John Romita, the results were merely tolerable for me. Heck was the kind of artist who did much better at a more down-to-earth style of adventuring than superheroes; for example, westerns! Heck's first two JLA issues, 198-199, had a time-travel plot which allowed him to draw the Wild West for extended sequences (it didn't hurt, either, that the inker was Brett Breeding, who at the time had only recently broken into comics yet already showed artistic chops to spare.) So I don't think Heck was a *bad* artist, rather one who was frequently "miscast."












* Once again, a pleasant reminder that Roy Thomas had been a schoolteacher before he broke into the comics field.
thoth lad:

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Carmine Infantino did #206, so it could have been given to him.


Infantino did # 206 not because he was ever going to be regular on JLA, but because that issue was actually a Space Museum story framing a JLA story, and Infantino drew most if not all of that Silver Age sci-fi series.
Originally Posted by Chaim Mattis Keller
thoth lad:

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Carmine Infantino did #206, so it could have been given to him.


Infantino did # 206 not because he was ever going to be regular on JLA, but because that issue was actually a Space Museum story framing a JLA story, and Infantino drew most if not all of that Silver Age sci-fi series.


Thanks for the Space Museum reminder, Chaim. I was just teasing Fickles, as there was some recent chat about artists that we found a little difficult to get immediately into. Infantino makes that list for me.
All Star Squadron #14

"Funny Professor, last night I dreamed I was writing a comic book review."
Stop mumbling, thoth lad, and put these '90s Image Comics in the bargain bin like a good fellow."

That was a chilling opening scene where the gladiator heroes fight each other to the death. Thomas throws in that there's gender, national and racial equality... under Degaton's complete control of course. The dictator's dream of everyone being so much better off if they were in charge.

Degaton's machine, much like GLs ring, acts as a literal plot device moving him to Earth Prime and then to the Earth-3 characters. Continuity Roy has to play fair and tell us of all the times the Crime Syndicate have escaped their impenetrable prison, even though it adds nothing to the story.

(Leaving my political hat outside, howling to get in the cat flap) Thomas gives us a dark take on little it would take to push the world to nuclear conflict. It's a balance his writing strikes offsetting the optimistic All Star Squadron heroics.

Degaton is a villain who doesn't care if a million Earths die to achieve his goal... a few years before a certain villain would kill near infinite Earths to achieve his goal. Thomas pioneering again. And getting Degaton to steal form various Earths at different times, shows the scope the villain has and the stories he could be in.

I didn't think much of the Magnetic Marauder. It's a good enough action scene though, but it's essentially padding (unless Marauder turns up later to be a key player of course smile ). Robotman and Steel in the same panels again.

It was good to see the JSA HQ meeting scene from multiple perspectives in the story. It's a good use of multiple titles to run the tale.

It's an issue that's got a lot going on, and leaves you wanting to read on right away. There's aren't too many books like that.
Originally Posted by thoth lad
All Star Squadron #14

"Funny Professor, last night I dreamed I was writing a comic book review."
Stop mumbling, thoth lad, and put these '90s Image Comics in the bargain bin like a good fellow."


lol LOL

Originally Posted by thoth lad
It was good to see the JSA HQ meeting scene from multiple perspectives in the story. It's a good use of multiple titles to run the tale.


Agreed 100 percent.

Originally Posted by thoth lad
It's an issue that's got a lot going on, and leaves you wanting to read on right away. There's aren't too many books like that.


That was true back in 1982, and it holds true more than ever today. Decompression...bah.
They do pick up the Magnetic Marauder story a few issues later!

It's actually one of Thomas's more effective retcons, as he's telling an actual untold story alluded to in a GA Wonder Woman story!
"CRISIS ON EARTH-PRIME" Part Three (JLA #208) and Part Four (A-SS #15)

Really not much to say, because it's almost all great, just as the previous two installments were. I will say that I continue to especially enjoy the little tidbits of real-life world history that Roy Thomas adds to the mix ("General Jimmy Doolittle?" "No, no, I meant Doctor Doolittle.") And that this is one of the few times I have had *no problem whatsoever* with Zatanna being used in a deus-ex-machina fashion, thanks to the gravity of the situation and the intensely engaging nature of the story.
"CRISIS ON EARTH-PRIME" Part Five (Conclusion) (JLA #209)

Although the resolution suffers slightly from being overly tidy and a bit schematic (not to mention the acquired taste of Don Heck inking his own pencils,) this storyline is still, overall, an immensely satisfying read, and it's easy to understand why Roy Thomas considers it one of his proudest achievements.

As I said earlier in this thread, I don't have issues 16 or 17 of A-SS (and IIRC, the main reason I never sought them was because Ordway was absent from those issues and from 18; what finally sold me on 18 was simply wanting to own a Joe Kubert cover with An Iteration of Thor on it.)

I certainly look forward to what Thoth and EDE have to say about 16 and 17, and, in the interim, here are Roy's capsule summaries from my trusty copy of All-Star Companion v.2:

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ALL STAR SQUADRON 16: The five All-Stars enter JSA-HQ, in a sequence that repeats the ending of issue #14 -- but this time they find Wonder Woman there, wounded by Nuclear, the Magnetic Menace. The six track the magnetic villain to his hideout beneath the home of his alter ego, Percy Playboy (nee Plazchek,) where Nuclear appears to perish in a molten pit. The heroes let his sister Joye believe Percy died a hero.


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ALL STAR SQUADRON 17: Robotman is put on trial, in chains, as an inhuman menace to society in a case brought by the lawyer Slattery. At the trial, the hero recounts his origins, even revealing he has the brain of the late Dr. Robert Crane. When the courtroom building starts to collapse, he supports it long enough for his fellow All-Stars to help people escape. The case is dismissed.
I'm just going to mention how much I love the Huntress vs. Owlman page in the last issue.
Originally Posted by Eryk Davis Ester
I'm just going to mention how much I love the Huntress vs. Owlman page in the last issue.


Seconded! nod
So, the original Nuclear the Magentic Marauder story in Wonder Woman #43 is really odd. It is entitled "Nuclear Returns!", and within the story we're reminded of details of a past encounter in which Nuclear had been believed dead after falling into a flaming furnace after being shot by Steve Trevor, and of Wonder Woman's suspicions that he was really "Percy Playboy", whose lab he was using and whom he claimed to have murdered. We also have the character of Percy's sister Joye who is relieved that her brother has recently returned home after apparently only being non-fatally shot by Nuclear. To anyone reading this story, it really feels like it is discussing the events of a previous issue. Only no such issue exists.

All-Star Squadron #16 serves to give us this story. It's pretty by-the-numbers generally, since there's a clear endpoint that Thomas needs to get to. There's a really nice Firebrand "Br'er Rabbit" moment where the villain tries to dispose of her by dumping her in the furnace. The basic villain scheme of Nuclear using his magnetic abilities to crash ships is the same as in his original story, only here he's working for the Nazis rather than simple extortion. It doesn't really fit that great as far as the timeline goes with his later appearance, in that it apparently takes him about eight years to show up convalescing at his sister's house (assuming WW #43 takes place in 1950, when it was published). Honestly, I think they've could've turned Nuclear into an interesting ongoing villain (knowing that eventually there would have to be a story where he seemingly meets his demise after falling into a furnace after Steve Trevor shoots him). The whole relationship with the sister is actually really distinctive. And he's pretty deadly as an A-SS foe with two of the core members being metal based, as we have seen. So, yeah, this a definitely a bit of a filler issue as is, but there's interesting untapped potential here, imo.
JLA #208

Ah, the old misunderstanding fight. As Firestorm hits on Firebrand, I'm reminded that this story also has a Power Girl/ Firestorm reference or two. That was a good little subplot in these meetings.

Aquaman faces off against, and later properly meets Commander Steel in 1942. A missed opportunity for a few JL Detroit references. The old man surviving reminds me of a few Sci Fi stories.

Conway & Thomas do a good job in reminding us of the previous issues, adding lots of historical context and letting the cast see Degaton's threat. It does look as though the entire world knows about the Manhattan Project (and what it's for) though and Earth 2 had just seen off the Flying Eye also looking to take over the world with future technology. As Conway created Steel, he does seem to get more than his fair share of the Squadron text.

The Perez cover is really impressive.
The cover to All-Star Squadron #18 is misleading. While everything to do with the Thor impostor (Impos-Thor?) is dynamic and fun, most of the issue shows the negative side of Roy Thomas's continuity fixes, including the senseless death of Dian Belmont just because of Sandman's costume changes* -- this is a "Women in Refrigerators" moment long before the term was coined.

Luckily, the next 8 issues plus Annual #2 make up what I consider the very best that All-Star Squadron ever got.


















* FTR -- To me, the hat and gas-mask costume will always be the ONLY Sandman costume.
I take it the point of killing off Dian was to explain her sudden disappearance (and replacement by Sandy the Golden Boy) in the GA stories, but I agree that it was a horrible move. In my head, I've decided that she faked her own death and worked as a secret OSS agent for the duration of the war, and the untold story of her return explains Sandman's retirement circa 1945!
That sounds good to me, EDE.

I think you should write that into a full-fledged fan fiction.
I don't know much about Dian's GA adventures, but I sure do LOVE her and Wesley in Vertigo's Sandman Mystery Theatre! nod love
Yeah, Dian's resurrection (of sorts) is one of the very few Post-Crisis developments that's indisputably good.
All-Star Squadron 19 and 20 benefit enormously from Jerry Ordway being promoted from inker to penciler. Even sweeter, this 2-parter is a rare instance of Ordway in his 80s prime doing *both pencils and inks.* Not to diminish the more-than-capable inking by Mike Machlan et al, but Ordway over Ordway is absolutely breathtaking!

Now, having said all that, this is also the very dark and claustrophobic 2-parter where Brainwave induces every JSA-ers worst nightmares. As well-written and beautifully-drawn as it is, I feel it's not ideal reading during the global health crisis at hand. That's why I'm only touching lightly on it.

I hope to nail down a review of the much brighter and more escapist A-SS 21 within the next twenty-four hours.

Stay tuned.
Yeah, I remember finding the scenes of the JSAers being slaughtered in combat more than a little bit disturbing when I read these as a kid.

It's a weird story on several levels, as it also serves to retcon in a previously untold first encounter with Brain Wave some time before they would have actually encountered him, plus give us a much different take on the JSAers time in the service than what we get in ASC #11.
Oh my gods, if I'd read that story as a kid, it would've given me nightmares!

On a more positive note, I want to give EDE a belated thanks for providing such a great deal of cross-referencing about the original Golden Age stories that Roy Thomas refers to in this series and the other ones (Infinity Inc and Young All-Stars) later to come.
Thanks!

I'm still planning on eventually getting around to saying something about A-SS #17, as soon as I getting around to re-reading it and the GA story on which it is based!
I didn't get the All-Star issues in any particular order. I didn't get this crossover in the right order either. So the plot recaps and (early on) character intros were welcome in books. The Fox plot of splitting up the teams is a welcome treat. The double threat of not only having to deal with the missiles, but also one of the Crime Syndicate gives these issues some real tension. FDR facing resignation and reconsidering the Manhattan Project added some impact. That clock keeps ticking as each group discovers the missiles closer and closer to that launch. That's why we get Kara, Ronnie and Mary Sue (sorry, Hank) dealing with that last one. They have the raw power to put a stop to it. Steel deals with the missile in way that reminds me of Cap America's opening in The Ultimates. It a really well worked ending, tying up all the plots and alternate Earths and giving us repeated scenes but in the new timeline. A Kara/Ronnie romance ends the tale. Too much to comment on, but a round of applause for the writers on this one (even if certain powers were used to solve a bit much)

All-Star #16: I might have got this one a bit later. It's Kubert cover doesn't do much for me. It opened with a repeat of the JLA crossover. Libby even think she sees shapes for a moment, before realising it's a very Golden Age looking Wonder Woman in trouble. Half the book is really a flashback on Wondy tackling Nuclear. The All Stars chase him down easily enough and there's a Republic finale. I probably enjoy it more now than at the time, as Thomas was clearly sticking close to some GA origins (Thanks EDE). I'd have thought a villain calling himself "Nuclear" would have got a lot more government attention, considering what they working on. We'd just seen Firestorm guest, making Nuclear look a bit more pedestrian. Just imagine, Percy Playboy falls into the fiery pit beneath his mansion, only to fuse with the Fire elemental matrix of Earth-2... Thomas goes to some lengths to explain why Wondy turns up at JSA HQ before she's a member of that team. There's also the obligatory Hawkman scene and Thomas getting Robotman to explain why Steel couldn't have done something that he managed all by himself. Wondy being such a patriotic Amazon that the US flag takes her out of delirium gave me a smile.

All-Star 17: There's a bit of the later Robotman/ Ben Grimm about the Squadron's version telling his origin. I was fondly reminded of a number of Universal/ sci-fi films as He's brought to trail in chains, to determine if he's human. The issue was interesting in seeing the All-Stars bluntly disagree with each other, and form some personality as they did so Robotman's secret ID is out though. Well, the one he died with anyway. 17 issues in and Steel still just gets in the way, as a second Robotman. For the plot to continue, Robotman didn't get any support from FDR or other government sources I don't think that lack of support is mentioned again.

All-Star 18: Like Nuclear, Thomas gets to play with a GA villain up against the Squadron. This time it's Thor. He's without Mjolnar in this story, having replaced it with a maraca instead. The hammer isn;t he only thing missing. In his original story he, and his cronies, had bulletproof, light weight armour made of Lucite. Just the sort of thing he could have made a fortune from, for the war effort.

Thomas must have loved the connections in this one. He uses DC's own Thor in a story with the guy called Spider Man by an announcer in his first story. Thomas even adds "Hobgoblin" into the text as an extra bit of fun (DC had a Dr Doom I think too, so a sham Thor wasn't working for him). Added to that Thomas gets to deal with why Tarantula and Sandman wear the same costume. To give the purple and gold costume a bit of gravitas, Dodds wears it because Dian Belmont is killed. That also explains why Dodds would be seen with Sandy Hawkins as a sidekick. It's only looking back, you realise what a good character Belmont was. Even in this story she's a stand out. She gets killed in a crash, following a lucky bullet strike.

The purple and gold guys don't get a scratch running at fully armed people who should have easily shot them at point blank. This was the time of sidekicks. Hourman went through a couple at this time: Martin the Minute Man and Thorndyke the Minuteman. Thomas makes Tarantula feel right at home. This issue adds Tarantula taking a fancy to Liberty Belle (something that would appear in Robinson's Golden Age. The team brush off Brainwave at the end of the issue in a very unheroic way. I'm reminded that the All Star Squadron spend a lot of time in this volume running up and down streets as a group.
Posted By: Ann Hebistand Re: Re-Reads - 12/25/20 11:19 PM
Originally Posted by Fanfic Lady in 2015
Incredible Hulk #361-368 (October 1989-April 1990)

PAD spends the first three issues of this block wrapping up loose ends from the Las Vegas era, while setting up the 4-part arc "Countdown", in which a lot of good stuff happens: Doc Samson and the Abomination return, as does the Leader with his Riot Squad, and PAD makes a new addition to the Hulk's rogues gallery: the Leader's brother, Madman, who deliberately exposed himself to Gamma radiation (shades of the Hulk TV show), giving himself super-powers while also worsening his fragile sense of self. There's also a fight between the gray Hulk and She-Thing, with hilariously un-PC quips from the Hulk that only PAD could pull off, and a barroom conversation between the Hulk and a temporarily de-powered Ben Grimm. The only bad thing about Countdown is that Jeff Purves draws the first three installments, and difference between Purves and the young and hungry Dale Keown on the final installment is night and day. Keown's style evokes Alan Davis, as well as his biggest conscious influences, John Byrne and Berni Wrightson, but it is uniquely Keown -- unlike other Gen-X superhero artists, his over-muscled musclemen have a real believability and suppleness to them. And, unlike previous artists PAD had worked with, Keown was a longtime, hardcore Hulk fan, and it showed from the start. Issue 368 has an interesting story -- the Hulk stows away on a freight train and encounters the erudite Mr. Hyde, who points out some uncomfortable truths before attacking the Hulk -- but is let down by the art; Sam Kieth & Kelley Jones do a murky, confusing job that only hints and what impressive stylists both would become a few years later. Next issue marks the official beginning of the PAD/Keown era of the Hulk, possibly the best the book has ever been. Stay tuned.

Just recently, Lardy did a question about PAD's Hulk: Countdown storyline in one of the Spaceopoly trivia threads:

https://legionworld.net/forums/ubbthreads.php?ubb=showflat&Number=995793#Post995793

So I thought I'd bump up my thoughts on it. Six years or so after that review, I still feel pretty much the same about it -- great story that rises above three issues of bad art, and then rallies for a great fourth and final issue with a different artist, possibly the best Hulk artist of all time, Dale Keown.

Thanks, Lardy.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 12/26/20 12:04 AM
The inspiration for that question was the fact that I'd just completed the PAD/Hulk Omnibus Vol. 1. I meant to post some about it as I read it but just got swept away in the experience.
Posted By: Ann Hebistand Re: Re-Reads - 12/26/20 12:35 AM
Originally Posted by Paladin
The inspiration for that question was the fact that I'd just completed the PAD/Hulk Omnibus Vol. 1. I meant to post some about it as I read it but just got swept away in the experience.

It's never too late. Especially since your reviews are always so enjoyable.
Posted By: Ann Hebistand Re: Re-Reads - 02/24/21 07:57 PM
To celebrate the release this week of the late Martin Pasko's Swamp Thing run, collected as Swamp Thing: The Bronze Age Volume 3, I have decided to do a substantial (but not comprehensive) Swamp Thing re-read.

I plan to start this weekend with reviews of House of Secrets #92 and Swamp Thing v.1 issue #1.

This re-read will begin with the indisputable classics from Bronze Age v.1 (Len Wein/Bernie Wrightson/Nestor Redondo,) then bravely plow through Bronze Age v.2 (an insane amount of creators, none of them sticking around for long,) then the entire Pasko run, and finally, the early (and in my opinion, best) installments of the Alan Moore/Steve Bissette/John Totleben run, most likely ending with the done-in-one masterpiece "Rite of Spring" from Saga of the Swamp Thing issue #34.

A caveat: I may change my mind and continue to the end of the Moore run. If I don't, anyone participating in this re-read is free to pick up where I leave off.

I think a good title for this re-read would be "Swamp Thing: 1971 through 1985."

Lardy, if you'd please update the title of this thread? Thanks in advance.
Posted By: Lard Lad Re: Re-Reads - 02/25/21 02:08 AM
Originally Posted by Ann Hebistand
Lardy, if you'd please update the title of this thread? Thanks in advance.

Done! Sounds neato-mosquito!
Posted By: Ann Hebistand Re: Re-Reads - 02/25/21 01:31 PM
Originally Posted by Paladin
Originally Posted by Ann Hebistand
Lardy, if you'd please update the title of this thread? Thanks in advance.

Done! Sounds neato-mosquito!

Awww...

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"SWAMP THING" (8 pgs. from "House of Secrets #92") and "DARK GENESIS" (24 pgs. from Swamp Thing v.1 #1,) both stories by Len Wein & Berni Wrightson

It's incredible what a difference one year can make.

When "Swamp Thing," the stand-alone short story was first published in early-mid 1971, it caused such an unexpected sensation among comics fandom (simply for being far superior to the average anthology horror tales of that era) that neither DC editorial nor the creative team were quite sure how to handle it. Wein & Wrightson, being young and (by their own admission,) foolishly impractical, actually *refused* to use their gem of a story as a jumping-off point for a bimonthly series! Eventually, reason prevailed on both sides, and a little over a year later, Swamp Thing the series was launched. Rejecting the option of a direct continuation of the short story's Victorian Era setting, the creators set the ongoing series in the present day, the common link being the unwilling transformation, through the bad deeds of bad people, of a good man into a monstrous-looking plant creature who repels everyone he encounters...including the love of his life.

Looking back on the short story, it is undeniably poignant and heartfelt (Wrightson had just gone through a painful breakup with his girlfriend and Wein could empathize,) but it's hampered somewhat by the art. Although Wrightson had been in the comics biz for a while, and although one of his greatest inspirations had been the EC Comics anthology horror stories of the early 1950s, his work here is a bit too cartoonish, and with an over-reliance on close-up shots which keeps the layouts from flowing.

Perhaps Wrightson had made a quantum leap in technique within those 12 or 13 months, perhaps it helped a lot for him to have three times as many pages to work his magic on. Whatever the reason, "Dark Genesis" is absolutely awe-inspiring to look at. Because in addition to the EC artists of his childhood (especially Graham Ingels, Jack Davis, Frank Frazetta, and Al Williamson,) Wrightson's muse reached back decades in the past to the late 1800s and early 1900s, the Golden Age of book and magazine illustration. Such a richly eclectic palette, combined with a hard-won confidence in the basics of composition and storytelling, virtually preordained that Wrightson would turn in a superlative job.

But let's not give Wein short shrift, either. Although the series' attitudes and themes are very much of their early 1970s time (the catalyst of the tragedy is the refusal of young, idealistic, equally-partnered scientists Alec & Linda Holland to sell out to the hopelessly corrupt and self-serving military/industrial complex,) they are not handled in a strident or insincere way (most likely because the creators were as young as their protagonists,) and so they still ring true today.

The key difference between the script to the short story and the script to this first issue of the series is that, whereas in the original tale the Swamp Thing's lover lives to reject him, in the series Linda dies, killed by the industrial spies, leaving Alec all alone to deal with his transformation -- even the hard-boiled government agent with a heart of gold, Matt Cable, turns against him assuming that Alec is responsible for the all the death and destruction.

And, in a brilliantly executed cliffhanger, a mysterious outside party is observing the horrific events in their scrying mirror, which is flanked by all manner of ghoulish creatures.

NEXT: Enter the series' arch-villain.
Hope to see more of these reviews with your return, Fick! nod

I remember reading the original short-story as a reprint and being confused with its setting and situation. I realized quickly that this was an unintended "proto-type" story. How many Swampy stories did Wein and Wrightson produce together?
Thanks, Lardy.

I think next month is a good bet for the reviews to resume.

Wein and Wrightson did a total of 11 stories, the short and the first 10 issues of Swamp Thing v.1 -- Mike Kaluta fans should check out issue 9, he helped Wrightson with the inking there.

After Wrightson left, Wein only hung around for three more issues, with Nestor Redondo on art -- his style was prettier than Wrightson's but not as dynamic. Fun fact: John Totleben has always considered Redondo's Swamp Thing work (which continued for several more issues) underrated, and I can definitely see Redondo's influence in Totleben's style.
Originally Posted by Ann Hebistand
I think next month is a good bet for the reviews to resume.

The volume collecting the first 13 issues of Swamp Thing v.1 should be arriving at my branch library within the week, so the reviews will be resuming right on schedule.
I recently purchased the Swamp Thing Bronze Age Omnibus Vol. 1, which goes all the way until just before Alan Moore!
Excellent! This is just getting better and better.
Review of Swamp Thing v.1 #2, the first Alec vs. Arcane story, to come this weekend.
Swamp Thing v.1 Issue 2: "The Man Who Wanted Forever" (24 pgs.) by Len Wein & Berni Wrightson

As good as the first issue was, the follow-up is even better! And I have to wonder if this exhilarating popcorn-horror funhouse ride was Wein's reward to Wrightson for being such a good sport about having to draw so much mundane stuff in Issue 1. Because virtually the whole of Issue 2 takes place inside a sinister Balkan castle full of twisting stairways and gothic accoutrements. And there are so many wonderfully misshapen monsters (the Un-Men,) that the panels practically burst in trying to contain them all. So, yeah, this story seems to be mostly a chance for Wrightson to draw all kinds of stuff that he loves -- he's obviously having fun, and the result is a fun read. That this story also introduces Swamp Thing's arch-nemesis, Dr. Anton Arcane, is the poison icing on a venom cake. At this stage, Arcane is merely an above-average but fairly generic horror villain (whether the places that Alan Moore & Steve Bissette & John Totleben, among others, took Arcane enriched the character or made him too repulsive to bear is something that is still debated among fans.)
This weekend, I plan to post a full review of Swamp Thing v.1 #3, which is great, and also brief reviews of #4, #5, and #6, which are all solid but not spectacular.

Ah, but then, the next weekend...a full review of Swamp Thing v.1 #7 -- Swamp Thing meets Batman!

Stay tuned.
I'm afraid the big Swamp Thing re-read is yet another Fickles project that is on indefinite hiatus. Apologies to Lardy and everyone else who was getting into it.

Right now, I wanted to share a few thoughts on a relatively small-scale DCU event which I just re-read for the first time in many years, and enjoyed far more than I had expected: 1986's Legends, which now stands revealed (in my view, at least) as the "Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan" to CoIE's "Star Trek: The Motion PIcture."

The creative team here had at its helm a couple of then-newcomers to DC: Mike Gold as editor/co-plotter and John Ostrander as main plotter. Both had done estimable work for the 80s indie publisher First, which specialized in the upgrading and turbo-charging of genres outside the superhero idiom. Their greatest achievement had been the psychedelic-noir series "GrimJack" (with artist and co-plotter Timothy Truman, who would later work with Gold at DC on the excellent Hawkworld mini-series.) Here, Gold and Ostrander had their first chance to show what they could do with superheroes. As backup, they recruited two seasoned practitioners of that genre, John Byrne as pencil artist and Len Wein as dialoguer. It proved to be a winning combination, with a perfect balance between the indie-guys real-world "relevant" insights perfectly balanced by the fanboys-turned-pros sense of bright-colored larger-than-life escapism.

There is something eerily (and poignantly) prescient about this story, whose main thrust is the mass-media manipulations of Darkseid's demagogic underling Glorious Godfrey upon the citizens of Earth, turning them against superheroes in fanatical ways which are wholly irrational yet feel utterly true-to-life (if superheroes existed in the real world, that is.) The Justice League disbands, Billy Batson swears to never again become Captain Marvel, and Robin (Jason Todd) is nearly killed by an angry mob. Into the breach step the newly formed government-employed anti-heroes of the Suicide Squad, along with a motley assortment of defiant super-holdouts (but with a reasonable amount of fan-favorite icons.) By the end, there is a new Justice League aborning (including Captain Marvel,) while Wally West has finally begun to grow into his role as the new Flash. Legends is brisk and accessible, with wonderful pencil art by Byrne (who seems to be having the time of his life drawing a variety of DCU characters for the first time) nicely embellished by Karl Kesel. Wein's dialogue is on-point throughout, and the plotters never sink to cheap shock nor sensationalism to get their points across.

Unlike CoIE, whose sheer sprawl proved to be its very undoing, Legends succeeds as a narrative thanks to its far smaller scale, and its tight focus on a large, yet still reasonable, number of characters. I am left only to wonder how the Post-Crisis DCU might have evolved if only everything had been as well-planned and well-executed as Legends. Despite the superhero trappings and the prominent roles for Jack Kirby's Fourth World creations, Legeds is no cosmic epic -- and that's a good thing.
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