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Waiting for the cornbread to cook. Wondering how the cornbread turned out!
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And then there was steak!
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And then there was steak!
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Writing a personal slice-of-life piece called "The Hole".
“You women have the real power,” he informs me, grinning in what I assume is supposed to be a suggestive way. The smile is broad, drawing attention to teeth that are unnaturally white, that stand out in contrast to hair that is unnaturally black. Middle-age has set in, and the lines on his face are like dirty informants he is fighting to the point of absurdity.
There's the first paragraph. I'm rather proud of it. *taps finger to lips*
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Long live the Legion!
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Long live the Legion!
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Middle-age has set in, and the lines on his face are like dirty informants he is fighting to the point of absurdity. That's a great sentence!
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Not much between despair and ecstacy
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Not much between despair and ecstacy
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Great opener! It conveys quite a lot in a few sentences.
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“You women have the real power,” he informs me, grinning in what I assume is supposed to be a suggestive way. The smile is broad, drawing attention to teeth that are unnaturally white, that stand out in contrast to hair that is unnaturally black. Middle-age has set in, and the lines on his face are like dirty informants he is fighting to the point of absurdity.
Well, you can't stop there... 
"Everything about this is going to feel different." (Saturn Girl, Legion of Super-Heroes #1)
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Wow. I am hooked and I want to read more!
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Wanderer
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“You women have the real power,” he informs me, grinning in what I assume is supposed to be a suggestive way. The smile is broad, drawing attention to teeth that are unnaturally white, that stand out in contrast to hair that is unnaturally black. Middle-age has set in, and the lines on his face are like dirty informants he is fighting to the point of absurdity.
Well, you can't stop there... Dang, I can see and understand that guy perfectly in my head (and I don't particularly care for him). It works for him though. Will our heroine be duped? What is it he's after? Can't wait for the next installment.
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... thinking about my future
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And then there was steak!
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And then there was steak!
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“You women have the real power,” he informs me, grinning in what I assume is supposed to be a suggestive way. The smile is broad, drawing attention to teeth that are unnaturally white, that stand out in contrast to hair that is unnaturally black. Middle-age has set in, and the lines on his face are like dirty informants he is fighting to the point of absurdity.
Well, you can't stop there... Dang, I can see and understand that guy perfectly in my head (and I don't particularly care for him). It works for him though. Will our heroine be duped? What is it he's after? Can't wait for the next installment. HAHA! I'm working on it! This is an actual person I know and sort of my...reaction to it? I guess that's about right. It took me a while to digest why the conversation bothered me, so it's taking me a while to write it down.
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Watching paint dry... literally...
Just when you thought it was safe to go back in the water...
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Trying to diagnose myself. I bet I have the flu.
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Wanderer
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Visiting old haunts using Google Maps.
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Itching. Fiberglass insulation. I hate that stuff.
Damn you, you kids! Get off my lawn or I'm callin' tha cops!
Something pithy!
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Waiting for the cornbread to cook. Wondering how the cornbread turned out! Not too shabby, actually! A little unfluffy but tasty!
Still "Lardy" to my friends!
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Writing a personal slice-of-life piece called "The Hole".
“You women have the real power,” he informs me, grinning in what I assume is supposed to be a suggestive way. The smile is broad, drawing attention to teeth that are unnaturally white, that stand out in contrast to hair that is unnaturally black. Middle-age has set in, and the lines on his face are like dirty informants he is fighting to the point of absurdity.
There's the first paragraph. I'm rather proud of it. *taps finger to lips*
Crap! She's writing about ME! 
Still "Lardy" to my friends!
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Legionnaire!
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Legionnaire!
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Whew... having recently met Conjy, I feared it might have been me! (Until, of course, I got to the bit about the "white" teeth and "black" hair. Thank god for nicotine staining and premature greying... oh... wait... )
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Oooo-kay! It's not me either because of the graying!
Still "Lardy" to my friends!
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Putting off taking a dump!
Still "Lardy" to my friends!
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Just failed to take a dump!
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Throwing a stuffed turkey (toy, not real) for the relentless, persistent, untiring dog.
Holy Cats of Egypt!
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Throwing a stuffed turkey (toy, not real) for the relentless, persistent, untiring dog. I'd always imagined you as a cat person, FC!
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Watching the Justice League cartoon.
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