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This was a phenomenal story, very detailed and well thought out. You really gave us a great insight into a different world, it's politics and it's value system. You also explained volumes about Lar's character and behaviour.
I also liked your portrayal of the Legion election - the open debating over who is best qualified. All the best ideals of the Legion are in the story: standing by a fellow member, upholding the law, but not afraid to go against that law when it contravened the Legion's sense of true justice.
-------------------- The Semi-Great Gildersleeve - writing, super-heroes, and this 'n' that
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