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Here's the next installment of Add the Dialogue! In this scenario, M'On contemplates what's missing in his life. He closes his eyes and waits for the answer to come, and it does! That's the scenario, now you add the dialogue...
M'ONEL (thot): Hmm. I could go for cheeseburger right now. A cheeseburger and a milk shake.
Page 2,Panel 1:
M'ONEL (thot): It's a pity they don't have milk shakes in the 31st century. Pluberry Frosties just aren't the same.
Panel 2:
M'ONEL (thot): Perhaps if I close my eyes, I can pretend I'm drinking a milk shake ...
Panel 3:
(No dialogue.)
Panel 4:
M'ONEL (thot): Now, that's peculiar ...
Panel 5:
M'ONEL (thot): Great suns! I've got it!
Panel 6:
M'ONEL (thot): I'll ask Triad to fix me a Triple Carrggite Mocha instead!
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