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Tempest
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I decided to write a fanfic using some of the wonderful people in the LegionWorld.

I may have altered your powers to fit the storyline (sorry)

I had fun writing, I hope you have fun reading.

[ July 26, 2005, 04:28 PM: Message edited by: Luna ]

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Legion of Super Heroes

Mllash (leader): Mllash the ability to form red energy whips of great strength. He can control the level of power his whips posses, allowing him to bind people in energy or slash through steel, as a result of these powers, Mllash can sense energy fluctuations

Cobalt Kid: Cobalt Kid is able to manipulate the magnetic field to his advantage, a power based solely on his willpower. With it, he can attract and repel objects using magnetic forces, he can fly, he can create a magnetic shield around him, and he can use his magnetic power to increase his strength incredibly, by focusing on the forces he is hitting. His power works on most anything, but especially well around water and metal objects, the best conductors
Info: Cobalt is the ladies man, but that has gotten him into some trouble, he has dated Princess Crujectra and Priestess. He recently was dating Miss Terious. The two had a bad break up and now their friendship is on thin ice. Cobalt has angered Miss Terious even more by flirting with enemies Thora and Pagan Lass.

Loser Lad: Loser Lad harnesses the residual Loser Energy in his system to create self doubt. The Loser Power can be focused on a single opponent, causing extreme uncoordination, lack of confidence, absent mindedness and misfortune. Loser Lad can negate the force of gravity allowing him to gain flight and lift heavy objects. Loser Lad can also dampen energy, allowing him to low the potency of energy attacks
Info: Loser Lad joined the team as the protector of Princess Crujectra. The two have blossomed into a romantic couple.

Princess Crujectra: Princess Crujectra is a low level telepath. She also possesses low level telekinetic powers, which she mainly uses to enhance her physical strength. Her main power is the ability to cast remarkably powerful illusions. Her illusions that can not only fool the eyes, but can affect the other senses, too. They appear to have smell and substance, and can even fool many electronic surveillance devices

Miss Terious: Miss Terious original power was precognition, but after feeling like she wasn’t as useful in the more physical missions, she decided to go through a deadly procedure to allow to gain new powers. She took with her the Hero-Dial and had it grafted into her body. By the act of will, Miss Terious can turn into a super powered for, for at least one hour and no longer than 48 hours

Priestess: Priestess is highly skilled in the mystical arts of magic, being an adept at magic since birth, she was born with the Sight. Priestess can use magic to it's full extent, convert the elements, control and create weather
Info: Priestess had recently seduced Abin Quank so that she could bare his child, she recently gave birth and is on pregnancy leave from the team

Future: Future has enhanced strength, he can fly, and he has the ability to project electricity through his eyes
Info: Future is from the future, he came here by a spell cast by Priestess. He has found the Priestess very attractive, but his opinion of her has changed for what she did with Abin Quank.

Kid Prime: A transformer of great power and strength, he has vast amounts of blasters and technology built in him

Allies

Sketch Lad: Sketch Lad has the ability to create beautiful illusions
Info: Sketch Lad has helped out in a few of the Legion’s missions, but he mostly likes the peace and quiet, that way he can work on his art.

Legion of Super Villains

Abin Quank (Leader): Abin Quank owns a powerful ring, which gives him the abilities of flight, the ability to release a powerful concussive blast, super-strength, and the ability to lift objects
Info: Abin Quank has an extreme hatred for Mllash. Abin does not know where his daughter (Priestess’ child) is and will do anything to find her.

Pagan Lass: Pagan Lass is skilled in the mystical arts, she is fond of using a spell to animate her hair
Info: Pagan Lass is out to kill Priestess, she hates her for what she did with her husband, Abin.

Invisible Brainiac: An incredible intellect, he has the ability to render himself invisible and create a force field

Faraway Lad: Faraway Lad has the power to create slipstreams of great distances only, he also has ability to disperse a powerful energy blast

Thora: Thora posses great possession powers, allowing her to overtake minds
Info: Thora hates men, she follows Abin Quank because she sees him as a means to an end. She has recently found herself attracted to Cobalt Kid.

Glorith: Glorith has the ability to temporarily slow down time
Info: Glorith is a humble servant of Thora.

Hrun the Barbarian: Hrun is a skilled warrior with enhanced strength and senses
Info: Hrun was brought to the present date, from the past, by Pagan Lass. He has found himself growing in attraction for her. Because of his lust for her, he has developed a hatred for Abin. Whenever he gets out of control, Pagan Lass can calm him down.

[ October 15, 2004, 04:56 AM: Message edited by: HighPriestessViviane ]

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Chapter One

It’s been an easy week for the Legion. They haven’t had any disturbances. Miss Terious, Cobalt Kid and Kid Prime have all decided that they should visit their friend Sketch Lad. And so we see them on their way to Sketch Lad’s home.

Kid Prime: It’s been a while since we’ve seen Sketch Lad.

Miss Terious: He doesn’t even know that Priestess is on maternity leave.

Cobalt Kid: Here we are.

~knock, knock~

The door opens.

Sketch Lad: Hi guys, come on in.

The three enter, they see a beautiful illusion in the middle of the room.

Miss Terious: It’s glorious, Sketch.

Sketch: Thanks, it’s my latest creation. So how have things been?

As the friends get to chatting, right outside Sketch Lad’s home, burst out blue energy flares out, when it fades away, it leaves behind it’s creator and his allies. Outside of the Sketch Lad’s home stands, Faraway Lad, Thora, Glorith, and Invisible Brainiac.

Faraway Lad: I told you I could get us here.

Thora: Do not sass me cretin!

Invisible Brainiac: Put a sock in it. We’ve got work to do, let’s get down to it.

The four of them walk to the door of Sketch Lad’s home. Faraway Lad blasts the door down, before the Heroes have any chance to react, Glorith throws up her arm. It glows an eerie white and everyone in the room is decelerated.

Invisible Brainiac: Good Job, Glorith. Go!

Thora attacks Cobalt Kid, forcing her will upon him.

Thora: Cretin, your coming with us.

Faraway Lad release blue blasts at Kid Prime, knocking him unconscious.

Invisible Brainiac releases his force field on Miss Terious, taking her out of the game.

Invisible Brainiac: Open a portal, Faraway Lad.

Faraway Lad opens a portal, the Super-Villains carry out the three Legionnaires, leaving Sketch Lad behind. Glorith drops her hand, returning time to it’s natural pace. They enter the portal, leaving Sketch Lad. Sketch Lad runs to stop them, attacking Glorith with an illusion.

Glorith: AAAAHHH!!!

Sketch Lad: Stop!!!

Faraway Lad blasts Sketch Lad, throwing him back into his home.

The portal fades away. Sketch Lad begins to stand up. His home begins to tumble, the building collapses on him.

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Feedback is welcomed!

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Viv, love the backstory you've given on all the characters so far. It's interesting to see which side you put some of the LMBers on as well as power changes! Surely Far and IB aren't THAT evil...or are they? [Wink]

By the way, thanks for the mad 'futuristic' power upgrades. The Future of this LMB reality sounds far more competent and interesting than the genuine article!

More, please!

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Thanks, nobody's evil not even Abin. I just thought the way I was going to use their characters was better placed the way they are. Yeah.

[ September 23, 2004, 11:44 PM: Message edited by: HighPriestessViviane ]

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Chapter Two

Sketch Lad’s home is in ruins. Then a woman covered in light blue robes, with deep crimson hair that hangs little bit under the bottom of her rib cage, she has a faded tattoo of a hollow crescent moon, with the points aiming towards the sky on her forehead, it is Priestess.

Priestess: I’m too late.

She raises her hands into the air and lifts the rumble that was once Sketch’s home up from the ground. She hears heavy breathing. She rushes over and finds Sketch Lad.

Priestess: By the Goddess! Your still alive. I have to get you some help.

Priestess puts her hands over the body of Sketch Lad and releases a blue light over him. She starts his healing process, but his wounds are too severe.

Priestess: It’s going to be ok.

[ September 23, 2004, 11:49 PM: Message edited by: HighPriestessViviane ]

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Chapter Three

In the Headquarters of the Legion of Super Heroes sits Loser Lad and Princess Crujectra. Across from them is Mllash and Future talking. The Legionnaires are enjoying their leisure time when in walks Priestess holding up Sketch Lad.

Future: Priestess.

Princess Crujectra: DEAN!!!

Princess Crujectra runs over to Sketch Lad, Loser Lad follows.

Mllash: Get him in a med-unit.

Princess Crujectra and Loser Lad leave to take Sketch Lad to the med-unit. Mllash walks up to Priestess.

Mllash: Are you alright?

Priestess: I’m fine.

Mllash: What the hell happened?

Priestess: I was back home when I received a vision. I was too late to prevent it from happening.

Mllash: Why didn’t you warn us!?!

Priestess: There was no time! I had the vision and I used the Magic of the Stone Circle to teleport me here. I had the vision but only a few moments ago.

Mllash: I need to know what happened, exactly.

Priestess: The Legion of Super Villains ambushed them.

Mllash: Them? The others.

Priestess: The Villains took them.

Future: Why didn’t Miss Terious have a vision like you did?

Priestess: Pagan Lass. It’s why I had my vision so late. She cast a spell to keep the visions from coming. The only reason I was able to see my vision was because I was in Avalon.

Mllash: What are they going to do with them?

Priestess: I don’t know?

Enters Loser Lad and Princess Crujectra.

Princess Crujectra: We’re not going to find out.

Loser Lad: We’re going over there, tonight.

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[Karate Kid] I'm skerred! More please! [Karate Kid]

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Hmmm... So I'm the Leader of the LSVP? And I have Vassals?

I think I'm gonna like this story!

So who do I get to Cluck Over?

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Just an Old, Broke-Down, Drunk, Bum!!

With a Power Ring...

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I'll write the next part tonight.

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[Dragonmage] I bet that swine, Cobalt, will try to seduce Pagan Lass. [Lester Spiffany] [Dragonmage]

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I know what's going to happen, it's very ME!!! That's all I'll say.

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I like it and In-Brainy's* evil??Hmmm well it makes sense.I'd like to see what you would do to me
*In-Brainy is my nickname for Invisible Brainiac

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Chapter Four

Mllash, Loser Lad, Princess Crujectra, Future and Priestess have located the Legion of Super Viilains base after many hours. Mllash devises a plan of action.

Mllash: We have to get in there and come out with our teammates. So here’s the plan, Loser Lad will dampen the force field. We’ll then enter and once in we’ll separate. Priestess and Crujectra will enter from the back. Future will enter from the side, Loser and I will come in the front.

The team lands away from the headquarters of the Villains and take their plan into action. Loser focuses his powers on a portion of the force field surrounding the building. The purple energy spreads and creates a gap in the force field, allowing the team to enter. The team separates going there separate ways.

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