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Oooooh cliffhanger! I  cliffhangers, am a total sucker for them each and every time. My favourite line was Arachne's "I didn't even get to hit him!" One thing I find strange (not in a bad way, just not expected) is how you structure your prose - you use colons as if it's a play, rather than inverted commas. Anyway, this definitely constitutes a cry for more, more, more!!!
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Originally posted by Harbinger: Oooooh cliffhanger! I cliffhangers, am a total sucker for them each and every time.
My favourite line was Arachne's "I didn't even get to hit him!"
One thing I find strange (not in a bad way, just not expected) is how you structure your prose - you use colons as if it's a play, rather than inverted commas.
Anyway, this definitely constitutes a cry for more, more, more!!!When I was in high school, I wrote in expository and creative. Expository was for English, essays and such, creative was for theatre, like scripts and storyboards, so whenever I write creatively, I write in script form. I really like where this is going.
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