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Not much between despair and ecstacy
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Thanks for the compliments, Grey!
I also appreciate your feedback, re: Eltro. I tried to summarize enough of Action Comics # 384, so that the story made sense without being weighed down, or telling some fans what they already knew. I hope it wasn't a problem for anyone else.
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Your story is thoroughly enjoyable HWW, as Grey said above it's a professional standard job you've accomplished here, wewll done and many thanks for sharing it with us.
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Legionnaire!
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Originally posted by He Who Wanders:
I hope it wasn't a problem for anyone else. I didn't read the original story, but Ive heard enough about it to follow this story just fine.
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Time Trapper
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Time Trapper
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Awesome story, HWW. It fits perfectly into Mon's history, filling all the nooks and crannies. It's superbly written and very effective.
Thanks for telling me a wonderful tale of my favorite Legionnaire!
"Hey Jim! Get Mon out of the Zone!! And...when do we get Condo back?"
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Thanks for the feedback, Sonnie, Arachne, and Varalent. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Mon is one of my favorite characters, too, obviously. 
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This was a phenomenal story, very detailed and well thought out. You really gave us a great insight into a different world, it's politics and it's value system. You also explained volumes about Lar's character and behaviour.
I also liked your portrayal of the Legion election - the open debating over who is best qualified. All the best ideals of the Legion are in the story: standing by a fellow member, upholding the law, but not afraid to go against that law when it contravened the Legion's sense of true justice.
Holy Cats of Egypt!
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Thanks, Fats. I'm glad you liked it.
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Bump for MON MONTH!
(I still need to read this!)
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 BUMP Just now, I unexpectedly discovered this vintage He Who fic. Will read it and comment later.
Still "Fickles" to my friends.
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