Legion World Forums LEGION OUTPOST Bits o' Legionnaire Business "Mon-El's Greatest Secret"

Thanks for the compliments, Grey!

I also appreciate your feedback, re: Eltro. I tried to summarize enough of Action Comics # 384, so that the story made sense without being weighed down, or telling some fans what they already knew. I hope it wasn't a problem for anyone else.

Your story is thoroughly enjoyable HWW, as Grey said above it's a professional standard job you've accomplished here, wewll done and many thanks for sharing it with us.

I didn't read the original story, but Ive heard enough about it to follow this story just fine.

Awesome story, HWW. It fits perfectly into Mon's history, filling all the nooks and crannies. It's superbly written and very effective.

Thanks for telling me a wonderful tale of my favorite Legionnaire!

Thanks for the feedback, Sonnie, Arachne, and Varalent. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Mon is one of my favorite characters, too, obviously.

This was a phenomenal story, very detailed and well thought out. You really gave us a great insight into a different world, it's politics and it's value system. You also explained volumes about Lar's character and behaviour.

I also liked your portrayal of the Legion election - the open debating over who is best qualified. All the best ideals of the Legion are in the story: standing by a fellow member, upholding the law, but not afraid to go against that law when it contravened the Legion's sense of true justice.

Thanks, Fats. I'm glad you liked it.

Bump for MON MONTH!

(I still need to read this!)

BUMP

Just now, I unexpectedly discovered this vintage He Who fic.

Will read it and comment later.