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Legion Worlds Eight (end 19 Dec 22)
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This is part eight of my ongoing Legion Worlds saga. It follows immediatey on from part seven and is set in the Retro-Boot:


The Legion Academy's planetoid is situated 2 light minutes galactic north of Saturn's northern pole and is called HOME BASE. They have an average of 300 students at one time, of which 270 or so are meta-staff from the Science Police or UP militia on three-month long secondments.


Former Legionnaires:

Triplicate Girl - Luornu Durgo of Carggg - able to split into three identical duplicates (part of Duplicate Girl)
Cosmic Boy - Rokk Krinn of Braal - manipulation of magnetic fields
Night Girl - Lydda Jath of Kathoon - incredible strength and durability out of direct sunlight
Colossal Boy - Gim Allon of Earth - increase personal size and mass at will
Wildfire - Drake Burroughs of Earth - composed of sapient anti-energy, extreme strength, speed, durability, space flight, anti-energy blasts
Chameleon Girl - Yera Allon of Durla - shape changer
Shadow Lass - Tasmia Mallor of Talok viii - summon and manipulate total darkness

Science Police training staff:

Jumping Jack - Science Police Senior Training Officer Jaxi Delgrado-Hynd of Morshesh 5 - hyper-awareness, reflexes and agility
Ms Big - Science Police Officer Erikka Chowdrey of Venus - increase her own muscle mass and density at will, combat specialist
Brain Girl - Science Police Officer Ella Drottmi of Titan - telepathy and telekinesis
Dream Boy - Pre-Commando Sergeant Rol Purtha of Naltor - precognition
Tues El - Science Police Officer Vae Loct of Daxam - incredible strength, speed, stamina, senses, laser vision, space flight, invulnerability.

Support Staff on LWHB:

I.Z.O.R. - Gear ii - infrastructure manager - nannite collective being, technomorph
Henry - Anti Lad - Spatial warp controller
Numbers Guy - M'Rissey of Earth - super-efficient business management skills
Dr Boom - senior physician and United Planets Government envoy - Danii Schwartz-Geltt of Myar - physician and alchemist

.........................................


Phantom Girl and her junior deputy leader Thunder have taken half of the team out into the United Planets in the former Tyrazzian battle planet they call FIRST BASE.

Their remit is to actively defend the United Planets, so this part of the team stays very much within the UP's sphere of influence and generally have high profile missions. As the team suffered badly as a result of the negative media manipulation by Psyche from the Dark Circle ruled alternate reality, they often invite journalists to report on missions from this base.

Legion World First Base:

Phantom Girl - Team Leader, Tinya Wazzo of Bgtzl Dimension - intangibility
Thunder - Deputy Leader, Cecelia Becks of 21st Century Earth, immense strength, speed, indestructibility, space flight, wisdom
Chameleon Boy - Espionage Squad leader, Reep Daggle of Durla - shape changer
Lightning Lass - Senior Team member, Ayla Ranzz of Winath - electrical generation and manipulation
Tellus - Ganglios of Hykraius - telepathy and telekinesis
Comet Queen - Grava of Extal colony - spaceflight, comet gas extrusion
Otaki - Bina Nawoti of Earth - mindsense
Kid Quantum - Jazmin Cullen of Xanthu - creation of temporal quantum bubbles, flight
Ferro - Douglas Nolan of Earth - can assume invulnerable iron isotope form
Dragonmage - Xao Jin of Earth - dragon magics
XS - Jenni Ognats of an alternate dimension Aarok - phenomenal speed
Kinetix - Zoe Saugin of Aleph - telekinetic animation
MWindaji - Gahaji of Kiringyaga - super tracker, carries the Ruby of Life allowing tactile transformative magic
Backlash - Mrruaw MNau of Simballi - enhanced strength, speed, senses, absorbs kinetic energy to boost own size and mass
Comet King - Drinchnar Lamment of Extal colony - spaceflight, comet gas extrusion
Atom Girl - Sylva Nrilsan of Imsk - can shrink to microscopic size
Ultra Girl - Li-Fahn Qiong of Xanthu - incredible strength, speed, indestructibility, spaceflight, and projection of force blasts, effectively limited to one at a time
Polar Girl - Mel Lassar of Tharr - cryokinesis
Friction - Janee Whittakka of Xanthu - manipulates the force of friction
Spoiler ii - Gord Eno of Naltor - precognition, specialising in short range visions for combat situations


Newly promoted from Academy student to full membership (Mentor in brackets):

Solar Gorilla - D'Nadka Endarooga of Dmansca - generate and project extreme heat and light (Lightning Lass)
Strobe - Denal Lort of Dryad - assume electro-magnetic energy form (Chameleon Boy)
Triple Nova - Elthur Mundo of Carggg - split into three separate bodies, each with either strength and durability, speed and reflexes, or laser vision (Thunder)


Science Police meta-squad seconded to Legion World First Base:

Replicator - Science Police Officer Tarev Jusool of Talok viii - can mimic meta-abilities of those nearby for limited periods of time
Gravity Kid - Science Police Officer Tel Vole of Earth - manipulation of personal or nearby gravity
Power Boy - Science Police Officer Jedidiah Rikane of Earth - personal density control


Other seconded members currently based on Legion World First Base:

Gazelle - J'izl Dtutuu from the Khundian Battle Brigade, of Khundia Prime - enhanced strength, speed, agility and metabolic control
Cosmic Kid - Po Miman, Justice Legionnaire of alternate dimension Mars - energy manipulation and flight


Support Staff on Legion World First Base:

Dr Richard Kent Shakespeare - Impulse - Chief Medical Officer and Support Team manager - enhanced strength, speed, durability, stamina
I.Z.O.R. - Gear iii - infrastructure manager - nannite collective being, technomorph
Danielle Foccart - Kid Computo - Technical support - technopathic communication and control over advanced technology
Henry - Anti Lad - Spatial warp controller
Ming Sul - Amp Girl - investigative officer - hyper-enhancement of her own sensory capacities
Shardwurd Gandussen of the Ten Peaks from Avalon - Silver Shaman - Medical Officer - biokinetic healing
Science Police Psychiatrist - Doctor Anje Falkner - alpha-level telepath
Flaurianarelle of Zerox - Greensleeves - orchard and farm caregiver - magical manipulation of plant life
Theena Greglenn of Silgor Marregorraus - Network - Communications Officer - hyper-pathic communication through symbiote
Solstin Wang of Earth - Booster - medical support - awareness and manipulation of physical properties of those around him
Gloriana Crestellen of Grighshtall iv - Glory - medical support - awareness and manipulation of bio-auras


Missing in action:

Captain Heavyweight - Senior Team liaison, Science Police Captain Tuk Shir of Daxam, Senior Team liaison - incredible strength, speed, stamina, senses, laser vision, space flight, invulnerability

.............................................


Tyroc has taken the remaining team members with him onto SECOND BASE, another battle planet won from the Tyrazzian warmongers. Their remit is a bit looser than the team on First Base in that they do not necessarily have such high-profile missions and they are not fixed within the United Planets.

They rarely invite journalists onto their missions.

Legion World Second Base team:

Tyroc - Deputy Leader - Troy Stewart of Marzal city pocket dimension - sonic control
Duplicate Girl - Senior Team member, Luornu Durgo of Carggg - creation of multiple identical duplicates
Element Lad - Senior Team member, Jan Arrah of Trom - elemental transmutation
Mon El - Senior Team member, Lar Gand of Daxam - incredible strength, speed, stamina, senses, laser vision, space flight, invulnerability
Dawnstar of Starhaven - Senior Team member - space flight, incredible speed, tracking
Timber Wolf - Brin Londo of Zuun - enhanced strength, speed, agility, reflexes and senses
Dragonwing - Marya Pai of Earth - breathes dragon fire and acid
Glorith of Zerox - manipulation of magical energies
Shield - Laurel Kent of Earth - physical invulnerability, tactile psychometry
Monica Sade of Rimbor - strength, reflexes - line of sight teleportation
Lexikon - Princess Daheenisha of Tamaran iv - enhanced speed, strength, durability, flight, omni-linguist
The Huntress - Ambassador Amynta of Nostos ii - incredible strength, speed, invulnerability, space flight
Karate Kid iii - Mithindrivithis Ngandraffa of Lythyl - strength, reflexes, mimetic motor learning giving incredible combat skills
Thirteen - Dann Hortra of Naltor - line of sight probability manipulation
Babbage- I-45ENG/Nth Series, of the Robotica Confederated Worlds - strength, durability, internalised weapons, hyper awareness and analytical skills.
Starkling - telepathic swarm-being composed of indestructible ball bearing sized components
Retro - Deen Toro of Ventura - limited reversal of personal timeline
Spy (also team counsellor) - Dr Noah Kabbo - heightened awareness and limited telepathy
Bouncing Boy ii - Stoor Chamble of Pasnic - creation of personal spherical force field
Atomsmasher - Ergus Wraithcat of Betelgeuse - spaceflight, durability, hyper senses, limited telepathy, radiation manipulation
Kid Pulsar - Neel Koduah of Earth - incredible strength, invulnerability, projection of explosive blasts


Newly promoted from Academy student to full membership (Mentor in brackets):

Mindbender - Marmud Illic of Titan - alpha-level telepath (Duplicate Girl)
Poltergeist -Jaun Vineo of Titan - alpha-level telekinesis (Element Lad)
Non - negative energy being - spaceflight, speed, alter own dimensions and density, explosive touch, limited telepathy (Mon El)


Science Police meta-squad seconded to Legion World Second Base:

Captain Phantom - Senior Team liaison, Science Police Captain Gryal Vrizza of Bgztl Dimension - intangibility
Power Lass - Science Police Officer Nel Duwi of Daxam - incredible strength, speed, stamina, senses, laser vision, space flight, invulnerability
Magno - Science Police Officer Dyrk Magz of Braal - manipulation of magnetic fields
Changer - Science Police Investigative Officer Urill Yagthal of Durla - shape changer


Other seconded members currently based on Legion World Second Base:

Green Lantern - Dkyun Mu of Xudar - wearer of a Green Lantern power ring


Support Staff on Legion World Second Base:

I.Z.O.R. - Gear iii - infrastructure manager - nannite collective being, technomorph
Henry - Anti Lad - Spatial warp controller
Hethuk Bran Drommsi - Smith from the Green Rift Forge of Talok viii - weapon maker and engineer
Dr Shoodixi Singh - Science Police Medical Officer - bio-empathic

Laipas - hunting dog from Nostos ii - enchanted to never lose a trail, fast and tough, far smarter than she looks!

....................................


HOPE WORLD is the latest planetoid base, specialising solely in disaster relief.

Dream Girl- Team leader - Nura Nal of Naltor - precognition
Star Boy - Senior Team member, Thom Kallor of Xanthu - stellar mass transference
Harmonia - Senior Team member, Professor Harmonia Li of Earth - manipulation of the natural environment
Invisible Kid - Jacques Foccart of Earth - personal and tactile invisibility
Titan - Nasir N'Cube of Titan - alpha-level telepathy
Sister Eclipse - of Rhoohanisett iii - durability, heightened senses, physical possession of any living being
Southern Lights of Starhaven - spaceflight, magic user

Interns:

Dragon Lass - Mari Baertling of Rimbor - enhanced strength, durability, echolocation and flight
Orion -Science Police Cadet Tw'gg of H'lven - tracking skills, agility, enhanced senses and awareness of flaws or weaknesses
Tesseract - Sar Jerash Mor Toark of Mars - access to intra-dimensional space
Army of One - Ashia Servito of Luzonus Prime - self-replication

Support Staff on Hope World:

I.Z.O.R. - Gear iv - infrastructure manager - nannite collective being, technomoh
Drura Sehpt - Infectious Lass - medical officer - containment and control over bacteria and viruses
Henry - Anti Lad - Spatial warp controller
J2351 of the Dominion - Ivy - bio-manipulation of Hope World's chloro-technology
The Bludgers - clone-grown Dominion workforce with enhanced strength and durability but 28 hour lifespan


Science Police Liaison Team:

'Smart Boy' - Senior Team liaison, Strategic Analyst Graq Maurus of Colu - 10th level intelligence specialising in disaster relief scenarios
Groovy - Science Police Officer Droo Vri of Daxam. of Daxam - incredible strength, speed, stamina, senses, laser vision, space flight, invulnerability
Magnetix - Science Police Officer Jooli Esra of Braal - manipulation of magnetic fields
Mama Tank - Science Police Lieutenant Lolla Grayfrau of Badenhoff vi - cybernetics giving incredible strength, invulnerability, AI manipulation

..................................


The most successful students from Home Base are offered an internship that allows them special privileges including joining the Legion on selected missions, with potential to join the team as full Legionnaires once their internship is successfully completed. Currently there are 12 interns:

Imp Master - Dorrolo Capicca Redsail of Zerox - Elven strength, speed and senses, minor mystic specialising in summoning and controlling imps
Tectonik - Hardal of Granite Falls from Mondriak iv - geokinesis
Bloom - Lavender of Schentanhaumma iii - pheromone manipulation, enhanced senses
Shadowsurfer - Walyed Reeaz of D-1457H234 - strength and durability, teleport through shadows or darkness
Impact - Dillon Blackstream of Myar - incredible strength, speed, durability, stamina, motion sense
Little Loki - Magnus Laviksen of Nordhelm - illusion casting
Mosaic - Science Police Officer Rish'ha Nor of Lallor - tactile mimicry of material properties
Thunderbolt - Ness Strakinos of Gardenhome - assumes electrical energy form
Haze - Science Police Cadet Tkemwa Autmi-Hu of Ungara - strength, durability, induce confusion and senselessness
Polestar - Science Police Cadet Nykko Rine of Braal - magnokinesis
Zero - Science Police Cadet Amrendra Mayasinghar of Zuyar - multi-dimensional shifting
Snoop - Science Police Cadet Horol Gyllaspi of the Galentorio Satellites - astral projection

....................


Legionnaire on secondment to the Khund Battle Brigade:

Gates - Ti'Julk Mr'Asz of an alternate dimension Vyrga - creation of spatial warps

Academy Student currently within the Khundian Empire:

Inferno - Sandy Anderson of Earth - fire generation and manipulation


Other affiliated teams:

Weber's World ambassadorial team:

Quislet, . of Teall dimension - able to animate inorganic matter though this causes the matters destruction
I.Z.O.R. - Gear i, Chief Maitre D' - nannite collective being, technomorph
Oodoo Shanair of Lallor - empath
Sentinel of the Khund Battle Brigade - strength, durability, manipulation of magnetic fields
Princess Shooradel of Tamaran iv - enhanced speed, strength, durability, flight, omni-linguist
Proty iii of Antares - shape changer, limited telepathy


The League of Super-Heroes (former Academy Students):

Kid Dynamo - Ja Vlo of Dryad - incredible strength and invulnerability
Ballistix - Crishtrakrek 714 of Zuun - synthezoid with great strength, speed, durability, stamina and spaceflight
Magno Lass - Josi Rista of Braal - Magnokinesis
Kid Nimbus - Kendall Mekensy-Wolff the Fifth of Dryad - assume gaseous form
Flipside - Drannananna Otticolli of Grathvarth V - fast, agile, manipulate personal gravity orientation
Slingshot - Prince Alfon Gundrix Maunheesta of the Grindlaw Colonies of System Mondarsh - hyper-charge kinetic potential of objects by touch

...................


On long term leave:

Brainiac 5 (Personal leave) - Senior Team member, Legion Worlds Operational Manager and chief scientist - Professor Querl Dox of Colu - 12th level intelligence
Sun Boy (resigned) - Senior Team member, Dirk Morgna of Earth - generation of intense light and heat
Matter-Eater Lad (Medical leave) - Senator Tenzil Kem of Bismoll - mega-omnivorous consumption
Chemical Kid (removed from active duty) - Hadru Jamik of Phlon - catalyzes chemical reactions
Polar Boy (removed from active duty)- Brek Banning of Tharr - cryokinesis
Loutrahim Mango (Personal leave) - 'Death Boy' - Professor Li?s laboratory assistant, exemplary biochemist - sweat activated neuro-toxic palm secretions

................................

Gadgets and paraphernalia:

Flight Rings: as well as giving their wearer the power of flight, Brainiac 5 tinkered with the rings over the years so they are choc-full of useful functions. These apps include an eco-protect setting that automatically protects the wearer in hostile environments, the rings create a link to the artificial telepathic grid between fellow Legionnaires and their bases, and include a loud hailer, an alarm function that automatically broadcasts to the Bases if a Legionnaire is injured including sending appropriate medical data, a scanner, access to the Legion's AI database and, can call up hard light holo's to display requested data.

The Legionnaire's belt buckle includes an image distorter that projects a life-like holo around the wearer to disguise them, and can give a 'stealth' effect that, while far from invisibility, helps blend the wearer into their surroundings. The belt buckles also have a spotlight setting that projects a bright beam of light.

Incapacity Cuffs are standard kit for all Legionnaires. These are small tubes that when flicked release a chord that adheres to whomever they touch, analyses their bio-signature before releasing an appropriate anaesthetic to knock them out. Virtually all Legionnaires carry a supply in pouches on their belt.

Last edited by Harbinger; 12/19/22 03:15 AM. Reason: updated the date in title

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Re: Legion Worlds 8 (started 24 August 21)
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Phantom Girl - Team Leader, Tinya Wazzo of Bgtzl Dimension - intangibility
Chameleon Boy - Espionage Squad leader, Reep Daggle of Durla - shape changer


As the meeting concluded Tinya had called the senior staff with mentoring duties to her and asked they spend the next couple of hours getting to know their trainees and give her a quick report the next day.

They had all met them when the new trainees were interns of course, but she felt a more in-depth personal assessment out-with a mission would be handy. After the Senior Team had left Tinya decided to find Tasmia.

As much as she had smiled throughout the meeting, Phantom Girl was definitely feeling as if her nose were out of joint. She smiled as the Senior team had left and phased through the floor rather than leave by the corridors with everyone else.

All Tinya could think of was that Nura had just walked into a meeting and stolen the team's latest planetoid along with a handful of her team! And the more she thought about it the angier she felt...

Tinya really wanted to like Nura but her entitled attitude rubbed Tinya up the wrong way - it was the level of arrogance Nura displayed that her point of view was automatically the correct one which meant no-one else had a right to make a different choice. And it was always only when it suited the pre-cog to act like that that she behaved so badly, the rest of the time Nura would be at best indifferent, time after time... and why hadn't Nura contacted the Senior Team first to let them know what was going on? She must have known that Tinya wouldn't argue with her in front of the assembled team, not after so many had said they'd join her. Was that why she did it like that? Because Tinya wouldn't embarrass her in front of the team and risk creating a schism in the ranks?

Tinya was on her way to the central gymnasium when she ran into Chameleon Boy. As much as the Durlan could be difficult to read sometimes, Tinya had known him long enough to know that he wasn't happy.

"Before you say it Reep, I had no idea Nura was going to do that either. It's a good idea but her presentation left a lot to be desired if you ask me, just waltzing back and taking Sa Lok's planetoid and teammates from us like that."

"I thought that might be the case... and also agree." His face softened, "Nura is right though, it's the perfect use for that base. It'll help a lot of innocents out there... and it'll be a media feel-good coup for us. It's frustrating when Nura is right, isn't it?" He gave her a small smile which she instinctively echoed. "Anyway, I'm away to meet with Denal, I'll let you know if I find anything out later."

Tinya watched Reep as he walked away from her. She was in disbelief that he had been waiting just to check out that she didn't know about Nura's plans when they had met the night before. Somehow, it made her feel sad that Reep, one of her oldest friends needed reassurance that she wasn't playing him.

What, she thought, had being the leader of this team turned her into in the eyes of her teammates that Reep was checking up on her like that?

Phantom Girl really, really wanted to punch something now.


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Re: Legion Worlds 8 (started 24 August 21)
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Gear had been monitoring the Boards while the team had been at the meeting and gladly handed over the responsibility as Legionnaires returned to duty.

The nannite being effectively ran the majority of the day-to-day operations on all of the Legion's planetoid bases. It was a full-time job for a small army but the Linsnarian was certainly up for the task.

At that point, Gear was also running an experiment in the laboratory on Second Base that used a scanning system installed several months before on the border world of Panopoles. This scanner had been designed by Brainiac 5 to give the maximum possible warning against any invasion and had been built with Gears assistance. It was used generally by the United Planets military based on Panopoles but right now its sole purpose was to track certain very rare minerals that the Daxamite High Command had informed the team were included within the serum they used to give a few of their SP Officer and soldiers immunity from heavy metal poisoning and therefore their abilities under yellow stars. The Legion had pointed the long-range sensors towards the Dominion in the hope they would get a clue that may help them find their missing colleague, Captain Tuk Shir.

The task was not as easy as it sounded as the Dominion Empire included over three hundred unique star systems and all of the immense space between them. The number of planets and planetoids where a base could be located that may hold the missing Daxamite was astronomical. To add to the expansive odds of ever finding Captain Shir, the elements and chemicals they were searching for were only present in his system in truly minuscule amounts so the chances of locating them accurately was fairly tiny as well... the Linsnarian smiled at this thought, being composed of microscopic particles Gear felt rather fondly towards the tiny and miniscule.

The serum that the Daxamite used to suppress his natural allergy to heavy metals would fully protect him for five standard days. As Captain Shir had taken it the day before he had vanished team that meant they had only one whole day left before it would stop being efficient. No-one had openly said how worrying this was but they all knew it and was clear by the determination the team had shown in following up every lead they had, that no-one wanted to leave it too late to find him.

The search continued; the missing Science Police Captain was one of the Legion now so they would never give up on him.


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Chameleon Boy - Espionage Squad leader, Reep Daggle of Durla - shape changer
Strobe - Denal Lort of Dryad - assume electro-magnetic energy form


Reep sat on a patch of grass.

After catching up with Tinya to reassure her that he realised Nura had blindsided them all with her Hope World team, he had called Strobe and asked to meet here. As usual Chameleon Boy was early. He had chosen this spot as it was out of the way and wanted to see if the rumours were true - the faery they called Greensleeves that Mysa Nal had sent to assist them had indeed been working magic - quite literally - throughout the team's planetoid bases. There had been twelve reports so far from the three bases and the latest, by Hethuk Bran Drommsi, had led Reep here to investigate for himself.

Here on Level 51 of First Base, which had previously been used as a storage silo for the technology they had inherited from Tyr's people when they took control of this base, was a rather glorious green patch - three fine looking Giant Ballosian ferns, two apple trees and a pear tree shaded a thicket of plump raspberry bushes and a selection of rather delightful Aarokian poppies in a small grassy glade. The air, previously stale and generally unpleasant, now tasted delightful; fresh, with a tease of life. Reep made a mental note to take a bench here so whomever followed would have somewhere to sit and admire this bucolic slice of paradise.

There was a flash of light and the young trainee from the dead world of Dryad appeared before the senior Legionnaire.

"Hi... I'm not late, am I?"

"Not at all Denal, thank you for coming." Chameleon Boy noted how the trainee was taking in the pastoral sight before him, "...Though before you take a seat you should really try some of those raspberries, they're rather delicious."

As Strobe tentatively started picking the plump, soft berries Reep began to talk.

"I'm going to get straight down to it, I think you have one of the most amazing abilities on the team."

"What? ....ummm... thank you." Denal looked at little startled as he sat down on the grass next to the Legionnaire. He held out a cupped hand full of yellow raspberries to offer to his mentor. Reep declined and told him to tuck in. The trainee had obviously never eaten freshly picked berries before but gingerly plopped one in his mouth. Reep watched as his expression changed from trepidation to delight as the tart sweetness of the berries filled his mouth.

"From what I can tell you're at least a match for Phantom Girl, Invisible Kid, and XS and can generate energy blasts that almost rival Sun Boy or Lightning Lass... and I know you took out a Dominion Battle Cruiser single-handedly. It's doubtful many of the team could do that. I certainly couldn't."

The trainee almost choked as he tried to talk back, caught between the excitement of the Durlan giving him such high praise and not wanting to spit out the tasty pulp of the berries. He had always rather admired Chameleon Boy, and since joining the Academy that respect had only grown - he had seen that despite facing appalling xenophobia Reep always kept such incredible integrity, had an understated intelligence, and was always unfailingly professional. Denal thought to himself that if he worked hard and listened to the senior team member that he was lucky to have as a mentor, then one day he might be half the Legionnaire that Chameleon Boy was.

"Keep eating Denal, enjoy. Let me speak for now as you'll get a chance very soon." Reep smiled warmly at the young man as he coughed into his empty hand. As the trainee regained his composure Chameleon Boy plucked a couple of raspberries from his other hand and threw them into his own mouth.

"Actually, maybe I'll have just a couple, thanks... anyway," he said, munching on berries as he spoke, "I'm hoping that between missions I can give you some one-to-one training in the next month on espionage that might help develop the nuances of your abilities, then after that we'll see where we are and look at what options remain. Of course, if there's anything else you'd like to focus on then please let me know. How does that sound to you?"

At this point Denal couldn't contain himself anymore and coughed the yellow juicy pulp from his mouth straight onto the grass at his side and emphatically said "Amazing! Yes, thank you!"

"These really are delicious, aren't they?" Chameleon Boy said as he swiped the last of the yellow raspberries from the trainee's hand.


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Mon El - Senior Team member, Lar Gand of Daxam - incredible strength, speed, stamina, senses, laser vision, space flight, invulnerability
Non - negative energy being - spaceflight, speed, alter own dimensions and density, explosive touch, limited telepathy


Mon El had suggested to Non they meet at a point ten klicks from the northernmost point of second Base.

Currently the planetoid was at the westerly edge of the Northern Arm of the Milky Way, right on the very fringe of their home galaxy. The nearest occupied planet was three light years away and Tyroc had called for the base to call a pause out here as Hethuk the engineer from Talok viii and Thirteen were tinkering with their Q-Drive.

As the Negative Energy being approached the Daxamite, Mon El had a momentary panic that they might not find anything to communicate about, certainly Non had proven itself but it was not renowned for being particularly sociable... Mon El worried that he might have a dreary three months ahead as they worked through the mentorship.

<Non, hi, as I'm going to mentor you for the next three months, I was hoping we could get to know each other a bit better... hmm, so, why don't we ask each other questions and see what we learn, how does that sound to you?>

There was an awkward silence for about five seconds before Non replied <affirmative>

<Okay, thank you. so, if you don't mind, I'll start... can you let me know something about you that you don't believe any senior Legionnaire knows?>

The Negative Energy being nodded its head and replied <follow> and with that it flew away from the base, heading out towards open space. Mon El followed as they continued for several minutes until Non stopped. As the Daxamite drew level the trainee pointed out towards the vastness of universal space. The distant lights of other galaxies and gas clouds so far away as to make the distance unfathomable was all that disturbed the infinite velvet blackness. Underneath them, spread out below their feet was the dazzling, dancing lights of their home galaxy as it spun along its path through creation.

<this>

Mon El glanced at Non before staring out into the immense field of eternal darkness that the trainee had indicated. The Legionnaire knew then that he understood the trainee he had been asked to mentor perfectly!

They stayed there for forty minutes without a word being exchanged between them.


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Re: Legion Worlds 8 (started 24 August 21)
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Duplicate Girl - Senior Team member, Luornu Durgo of Carggg - creation of multiple identical duplicates
Dawnstar of Starhaven - Senior Team member - space flight, incredible speed, tracking
The Huntress - Ambassador Amynta of Nostos ii - incredible strength, speed, invulnerability, space flight
Retro - Deen Toro of Ventura - limited reversal of personal timeline

Newly promoted from Academy student to full membership (Mentor in brackets):
Mindbender - Marmud Illic of Titan - alpha-level telepath (Duplicate Girl)

Support Staff:
Ming Sul - Amp Girl - investigative officer - hyper-enhancement of her own sensory capacities

Trainee:
Zero - Science Police Cadet Amrendra Mayasinghar of Zuyar - multi-dimensional shifting

Laipas - hunting dog from Nostos ii - enchanted to never lose a trail, fast and tough, far smarter than she looks!


Duplicate Girl walked through the warp to Lallor first.

Evolvo and Gas Girl stood in front of her. Both looked serious, there were no friendly 'hellos' as the team leader of the Lallorian mutant team got straight down to business.

"Legionnaires, five young mutants were kidnapped from this training facility yesterday. The AI monitoring security didn't register anything. We were only alerted when a weather satellite registered a lightning bolt in an otherwise clear sky."

"Ah, I think we may know who was behind this... Mekt Ranzz escaped from Takron-Galtos three days ago along with a group of thugs. Though why he'd want to kidnap your people is a mystery. Is this where they were?" Luornu looked around at the immaculate gardens. The building was thirty metres away and it reminded Lu of an old-fashioned schoolhouse - square, with regularly spaced windows; a large building but nothing really out of the ordinary.

Dawnstar flew into the air and spiralled the site before flying higher up into the pale sky above. Duplicate Girl noted that the tracker hadn't alerted them to finding a trail so knew that it was unlikely she would be successful.

The intern called Zero walked across to a rhododendron bush and pointed.

"Ma'am, I believe it happened here, there's some displacement residue on the ether... it feels familiar."

Amp Girl had joined him, sniffing the air.

"Smells like Slasher, Titania and another I don't recognise... sorry, their scent wasn't on the bio-file the SPs sent through."

Amynta's hound Laipas had followed Ming across to the rhododendron bush and sniffed at the ground, stopping every few seconds at particular points as if to precisely note where the villains had stood. The Amazon warrior placed her hand on the dog's back. Laipas raised her head and gave a small throaty yelp.

"Seriously, you Legionnaires are smelling for people now?" Gas Girl said with disgust to Retro. The pair had entered into a fairly easy-going relationship several months before and this was the first time Deen had heard her complain. In a bid to comfort her, he put an arm around her waist but she moved away with a jerk.

"We've got Dawnstar too using her powers to help..." Retro said, more to take attention away from the awkwardness of the situation between them.

"Ord copied Dawnstar's skillset, said it got him nowhere." she replied flatly.

"Where is Duplicate Boy anyway?" Deen asked, trying to change the subject some more. Gas Girl gave him a small smile followed by a shrug.

"We don't know, he flew into space saying Mon El's powers would help him... last I checked he was out past the moons trying telescopic vision."

"Ah... so... um that's helpful, he'll see them if they're close by." Deen said in as hopefully a manner as he could.

"We all know they're not." The Lallorian said quietly. Retro wanted to put an arm around her as it obvious how scared she was feeling but knew this was not the time nor place for such demonstrable support again. They stood in awkward silence watching their teammates.

While Gas Girl and Retro had been talking Duplicate Girl, Evolvo and Zero had been walking around the spot where the trainee had indicated. Mindbender stood at the side looking up into the sky, using his telepathy to scan for any minds that appeared out of place. The trainee doubted it would do much good but as he had Luornu as his mentor he wanted to show her he had the work ethic a full Legionnaire needed. He had a brief conversation with Luornu before this meeting where she had set out what her expectations were for him over the next few months and asked if he had any requirements before they went any further. He had replied 'no' and that had been that, she had called a mission and they had come here. Marmud knew her reputation from the academy was tough but had never really had her for one-to-one training so was a little bit nervous of what might be coming.

Evolvo held out his right hand and Duplicate Girl was happy to see he wore the flight ring that Sun Boy had given him months before.

"We have one security holo with an image, though it was as they left. Whatever they had used to cover themselves from the security AI was no longer working at that point... or more likely they knew it wouldn't matter." A holo spang from the golden ring. Though it was indistinct who was in it, there was the edge of a circular warp that they could make out clearly.

"Of course, I know what that is... it's a Gil'Dishpan Warpsmith teleportation signature." Zero said.

"Our first clue..." Evolvo muttered.


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Re: Legion Worlds 8 (started 24 August 21)
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Yay, more nice stuff Harbi!

I am curious about how you decided which Legionnaires go on First Base vs. Second Base. Home Base and Hope World I get, as most made their choice based on the missions. But First and Second are a bit more similar to each other, with the difference being how high-profile the missions are... and - this may just be me, but my Second Base impression is a bit that they're a little more Black Ops while still being quite within the Legion constitution and rules (i.e. no killing etc.)

but maybe i'm wrong and I apologize if so!

i'm just genuinely curious how you decided who goes where, as I find a writer's thinking process very interesting.

Some things that struck:

Cham is on First Base, but as Espionage Squad leader I always thought a lower profile would suit him.

Element Lad on 2nd Base stood out as well, I don't know, maybe because he's a former Legion leader. But maybe he wants to be out of the limelight a bit more, considering he was ill for a while!

ah the burdens of leadership, but I like Tinya's focus on the newer Legionnaires. It's very important for a leader to consider the people element.

I was really looking forward to seeing Tinya react to Nura's actions at the end of 7. And indeed it was very disrespectful, having her just walk in like that without so much as a pre-call to Tinya... I also agree with what Tiinya did, not arguing in front of the whole assembly. But it was infuriating eh? Nura could certainly have handled it better. the WHAT was a good suggestion, but the HOW was terrible

Ouch, poor Tinya! yeah, Reep's chessmaster side is showing. It's nice that they both hated how Nura did, but it's sad that Reep felt like he had to check on Tinya knowing... after all, he originally wanted the planetoid for himself. Oooph. I felt Reep's little bit of empathy re "Nura can be so annoying" was nice, but small comfort for poor Tinya

I like how the Science Police colleagues, like Captain Heavyweight, are very much considered part of the team now

aww, poor Reep's point of view made me sad. Reep wanted to reassure his friend Tinya, but poor Tinya took it the wrong way. I have to admit, I also thought Reep was going for reassurance - considering how he smiled at Tinya and empathized re Nura being annoying - but I can see how Tinya took it the wrong way. And i can also see how maybe, deep down, Reep was a little angry as he did originally want that planetoid for the Espionage Squad!

Nice bit of mentorship between Cham and Strobe. And indeed Strobe is exceedingly versatile, great at both espionaqe and at sheer power!

Mon and Non (heh they rhyme) are a perfect pair, love how they connected over their love of solitude and beauty

Amp sniffing was cute.

What exactly does Zero do? Sorry, I must have forgotten

Poor Gas Girl's fear and anxiety is showing. But it is scary, 5 super powered students being kidnapped just like that

also poor Mindbender, hee hee. I guess Lu is just extremely business-like.

nice seeing the Heroes of Lallor here. Also, your Duplicate Boy seems smarter than the comics one - at least yours is taking initiative and choosing some good power sets!

looking forward to more more more!

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Hi Harbi! I had heaps to catch up on so a lot of this is gonna be about LW7, but here goes:

- The Kirinyaga adventure was a fun read! Even though it was handled very quickly, I like that we got a good look at how it's a different place culturally to what most of the Legion are used to...Zoe was the standout character here, I love the way she took charge and that one move where she made the floor ripple out to knock people over was an awesome visual! One thing that cracked me up (because I'm so used to writing Mwindaji as being more formal in his speech) is when he said high falutin'...I love seeing how everyone interprets these characters that never really had much exploration in canon smile

- you've done a great job utilising all of the interns who became full members in your writing, none of them were a surprise and they all deserve it. I'm also v happy with Solar Gorilla and Non making it to trainee Legionnaire status, and Non's little scene with Mon-El was a nice interlude.

- Nura's entrance was AMAZING! She's so brassy, I love it laugh Tinya's reaction was very characteristic too I think...not making a scene in public but also recognising that it was actually pretty disrespectful. I do feel bad about how her chat with Cham went because I don't actually think Cham was trying to do anything underhanded but Tinya's obviously pretty stressed and maybe not giving her friends the benefit of the doubt that she normally would.

- re the foreboding mention of Tinya's sacrifice.....I'm not so much worried about her as I am that she's gonna have to choose teammates to send to their deaths. Either way, seems like there's bad times coming! I liked the interplay between Nura and Henry, makes sense that she'd have a different relationship with him than the others do.

- finally, "Groovy the Daxamite Soldier Boy" = laugh laugh laugh laugh

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Phantom Girl - Team Leader, Tinya Wazzo of Bgtzl Dimension - intangibility
Thunder - Deputy Leader, Cecelia Becks of 21st Century Earth - immense strength, speed, indestructibility, space flight, wisdom

The Black Witch - Mysa Nal of Naltor - elemental magic-user


The face in her mirror made Phantom Girl jump!

"Mysa! My god..." Tinya took a deep breath before continuing, "you have a flight ring, why not simply use that if you want to talk?"

Phantom Girl had been standing in her bedroom, picking out an outfit for the next night as she had arranged to meet Soddam Yat... And instead of checking which of her many clothes to wear she stared at the image of the Black Witch of Zerox with a stern expression.

"Tinya Wazzo, I request a favour..." The tone of the witch's voice made it clear she was not used to asking for help, "The Lords of Mis-Rule have made it difficult for me to leave Zerox so you must act in my stead... There has been a massacre on one of the Thousand Sacred Sites and a powerful talisman taken by one we thought would never return. The assassin known as the War-Wolf brought mercenaries..."

"He was broken out of Takron-Galtos recently Mysa. Glorith says it was the Shadowmancer..." Tinya said softly. She felt concerned for her former teammate. Mysa was always serious and studious, but since absorbing Mordru's essence she had become intense... and right now she looked angry, which alarmed the Legion leader. Though what worried Tinya more was the thought that someone on Zerox had the power to stop Mysa from taking action when she was in such a mood.

"Yes, the Shadowmancer would crave the Spear of Light... Tinya, you must retrieve it so the Balance remains intact. It must be used only by those that walk its righteous path."

"Who...? What is the Shadowmancer? Is there anything you can tell us Mysa that will help?"

"It is the dark shade of a cursed king from the Gem World's distant history; a foul vampire that absorbs the essence of unique beings. Be careful who you take with you when you confront it as it will use your unique teammates strengths against you."

"How do we find it? Glorith said the warps it used were ...warded? Blocked somehow..."

Mysa stared intently for a couple of seconds and muttered a few arcane expressions before her hand reached out through the mirror. On her palm was a small blue egg covered in silver runes.

"Xao will lead you. Give him this. It will guide him when you need it to."

Tinya rather tentatively took the pale egg from the witch's hand.

"You have seven days until the Balance shifts again, and it will not help our cause if it does." And with that the image of Mysa Nal faded. Tinya waited until the image had totally gone before taking a deep breath and counting to five. She ran her hands through her hair and called on Dragonmage, requesting the young sorcerer join her in the First Base Senior Staff briefing room in fifteen minutes. After calling Xao she holo-called Cece.

"Cece, sorry to disturb you but I need your advice." The deputy leader gave a smile to her deputy but before she could answer Tinya carried on talking, "Mysa Nal just requested our help against the Shadowmancer. He has an artefact that Mysa says will tip the balance out of our favour and as you understand magical stuff more than me... if I'm honest I feel out of my depth here Cece. Can I give this over to you to lead on?"

"Of course."

"Thank you, I'm meeting Xao in quarter of an hour in the Senior Staff briefing room. Mysa gave me this to give to him, said it would guide us..." Phantom Girl held out her hand to show the small egg the Black Witch had somehow passed through the mirror.

"Wow! That looks like a dragon egg ... probably of the southern winds." Cece's eyes were wide as she peered at the holo of the pristine egg, "They were revered guides to sailors that wished to travel across storming seas."

"Mysa gave it to me, said the War-Wolf had taken the Spear of Light from a Monastery..."

"The Spear of Light? Oh, okay, that is worrying. If I remember correctly, it holds the essences of those that have given their lives for the cause of Light. It is one of the Thousand Sacred Artefacts."

"See, you're definitely the person for this job, I was clueless." Tinya gave an embarrassed smile.

"I'll get to you in five minutes. I've a feeling we'll get to the bottom of this quite quickly now." Cece Becks gave Tinya a warm smile and closed the call.


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Lightning Lass - Senior Team member, Ayla Ranzz of Winath - electrical generation and manipulation
Solar Gorilla - D'Nadka Endarooga of Dmansca - generate and project extreme heat and light


Ayla suggested the two of them should meet in a booth at Shakes for a cocktail.

They both sipped on non-alcoholic concoctions as in a couple of hours they would be on active mission ready status. Still, they enjoyed the unusual and exciting tastes of the drinks that the bar-bot suggested.

Ayla had been telling silly stories from when she had not long joined the team, as D'Nadka laughed and tried to guess which Legionnaires her mentor was talking about. While Ayla wouldn't name her colleagues a couple of the stories were pretty obviously about certain former teammates.

"What I'm saying, in a roundabout way, is that it doesn't much matter if you make a mistake so long as you learn from it and try to make good." Ayla smiled and the trainee smiled back. "So... I guess the obvious question I have for you is why did you attend the academy and want to become a Legionnaire?"

"Ahh, actually I didn't really..." the trainee looked around the empty bar as she continued, obviously finding this conversation uncomfortable. "My big sister applied to the academy but was killed when Black Adam's Daughters attacked it. She always wanted the fame and excitement she thought she'd get being a Legionnaire. I kinda... to be honest I wanted to be a teacher growing up, so when Dmansca Council asked if I would take her place I nearly refused. Now that I'm here though I'm glad I did it."

"I'm glad you said yes as well." Ayla said softly, not wanting to interrupt the trainee's flow, but feeling the need to acknowledge her. D'Nadka smiled before she continued.

"Yeah, I didn't expect to enjoy it so much. It's a crazy ride, isn't it? After K'Lami died, well my thoughts weren't too... it was painful Ayla, but..." She looked away and rubbed a hand quickly across her eyes.

"I know how awful it is to lose a sibling, though I never knew your sister. What was she like?"

"Bossy..." As Solar Gorilla said this, she cracked up laughing, which Ayla joined in with.

"Older siblings are always so-o-o bossy, aren't they?" Ayla said which gave them both another laugh.

The two of them spent the next half an hour sharing stories of their childhoods and the troubles they had and perhaps even caused with their families. It involved many laughs and both admitted that they now felt a huge amount of sympathy for their parents for having to deal with the dramas and in-fighting and mischief that they caused. This led to more laughter... Ayla realised that, as far as she was aware, she had the most positive and well-grounded of the trainees to mentor.

The electric Legionnaire decided there and then that she would do everything possible to support D'Nadka through the training period and prepare her to be the best new Legionnaire of the group!

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Element Lad - Senior Team member, Jan Arrah of Trom - elemental transmutation
Dr Richard Kent Shakespeare - Impulse - Chief Medical Officer and Support Team manager - enhanced strength, speed, durability, stamina


The mentor and trainee had spoken for only twenty minutes before Element Lad excused himself, saying he had a prior appointment.

As he got back to his quarters the Trommite was worried what he would say to Tinya... and Kent. Not that he had long to wait for the latter. Jan walked through the front door of his apartment and could hear Dr Richard Kent Shakespeare in the kitchen humming to himself as he concocted a meal for the couple to enjoy this evening.

"Hey Jan, you're back early, how'd it go?" Kent walked across the dining area to give his partner a hug. Jan happily reciprocated before sitting at the end chair of the dining table nearest the auto-chef and cooking facilities where Kent had been.

"Ah... interesting Kent, the word I would use is interesting."

"Yeah? Jaun's got a tasty powerset and is a real smart kid." Kent had returned to the chopping board where he sliced some peppers and herbs he had plucked on his way here. Greensleeves had magically encouraged a wide range of edible plants to sprout along the corridor that led to the Medi-bay and Kent did not want to miss the opportunity to try eating them. The doctor's attention was on the blade he held as he carefully picked out seeds from the plump red peppers.

"Yeah, he's a smart kid but I worry..."

Kent turned back to Jan, obviously concerned, "Is he okay? Blighted...?"

"No, no, still having his mandated therapy and that wasn't an issue. He made me feel quite uncomfortable actually. I think... no, I know... he's got a major crush on me."

"Oh!" Kent looked startled for two seconds before adding, "...that poor, poor boy! He's going to be so terribly disappointed!" And with this the doctor laughed.

"Hey!" Jan exclaimed before giving a smile and continuing. "He's... yeah, it was really awkward Kent. He as good as said he wanted to join me back here tonight, y'know...?"

"Well, ummm... Trommites were renowned for being openly poly-amorous so, I dunno, perhaps he thought his luck was in? And let's be honest, Legionnaires have been known to ...dally." Dr Shakespeare had moved over and sat on the seat next to the Legionnaire.

"I'm not looking for anyone else and definitely not someone I'm probably old enough to be the father of."

"Really...? Oh, c'mere Papi!" And with that Dr Shakespeare pulled the Legionnaire into a hug.

They were enjoying that embrace moments later when Thunder called Kent to ask for assistance.


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Cece and Xao had developed a plan of sorts.

They knew that the Shadowmancer could feed on any of their colleagues with unique abilities so they drew up a list of fellow Legionnaires that they could call upon if they found a way to wherever the dark mage was hiding out. They also needed those who could also deal with the escaped villains. It would be even better, they agreed, if they could catch the villains in the act somewhere away from the Shadowmancer, thereby splitting the force they'd have to eventually deal with.

They had a broad idea of the parameters they would need to search for the escaped villains - they targeted unique meta beings, so Cece quickly sent an alert through to the other bases and personally holoed Luornu Durgo on Home Base - if the Shadowmancer wanted a smorgasbord of meta-folks to feast upon then the Academy would be its prime target...

Cece also wanted to see the destroyed monastery as they might pick up some more information there. Xao cautioned that a team might draw unwanted attention as any survivors would be wary of strangers. Thunder agreed, though suggested that perhaps if the team was mainly magical and any others offered help... they would just have to risk it!

As deputy leader she knew that she could call up Legionnaires from either base if needed so Thunder checked who was available and five minutes later, they were ready in Henry's warp Control room.

Alongside Thunder and Dragonmage, were Glorith, MWindaji, Shield and the new member that Cece was mentoring, Triple Nova. It was a magic-heavy team, and Laurel Kent's psychometry may well prove useful as well. They all secretly hoped the villains they were looking for would still be there as they walked through the warp...

It was snowing lightly and the sky was darkening in twilight but they could all make out the appalling tableau before them: the monastery was in ruins and, despite dozens of people trying to clean up while processing the obvious horror of what had happened, the Legionnaires saw the remains of some of the Sisterhood that had guarded the magical relic. Strips of cloth stained in gore, blood sprayed across the rubble, torn limbs, carcasses that looked as if they had been savaged by dogs... the horrific detritus of massacre was strewn all around them.

<Okay team, we're here to get information so let's see what we can find out. I'll find whoever is in charge and offer Elthur's and my assistance cleaning up. The rest of you... good luck>

Although the locals were initially wary of the Legionnaires within minutes the team were welcomed. Glorith and Laurel used their skills to identify those responsible while Dragonmage tries to urge the egg to hatch, releasing the dragon spirit to guide them. Deep within his core the Jade Dragon that lived within Xao's being cautioned the young sorcerer to be patient; their guide would come when the moment was right, and it would be soon.

Triple Nova had tears streaming down his face as he helped dig graves for those killed at the monastery. Meanwhile, Thunder called upon Dr Shakespeare to assist and then used her immense power to move rubble, put out fires and offer whatever medical support she could. The team's chief clinician arrived a few minutes later carrying a dozen emergency packs followed by Element Lad and several students that were medically gifted and trained.

The Legionnaires were at the ruins of the monastery for a further hour before Thunder decided it was time to return to First Base with the information they had gathered.


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Saturn Girl - Imra Ardeen of Titan - alpha-level telepathy
Lightning Lad - Garth Ranzz of Winath - electrical generation and manipulation


The security measures built into the Lightning Ring Plantation's Ranch were second to none in the Winath system.

When Garth and Imra had said they were moving here permanently Querl and Reep had taken the time to construct a multi-layered defensive protocol in case any of their former enemies came calling. Garth had mocked them, hiding his gratitude with a macho gruffness that didn't fool anyone even slightly. Over the years several Legionnaires and Science Police Technicians had updated their security system.

It was 0245 standard when the AI-alarm protocol first activated. Garth struggled to wake up though Imra was already stood at a window, her face tight with concentration.

"There's about twelve beings running rampage in the lower mushroom fields... difficult to get a lock on them though, somethings interfering with my telepathy. I think they're a distraction but have sent defence drones to deal with them. The kids are all asleep still, do you want to get them while I monitor this?" She had spoken softly but even before she had finished her husband was at the door of their suite dashing to grab their children and bring them to the suite's relative safety.

He returned less than a minutes later with their daughters, both wrapped in warm blankets and still sound asleep - Imra gazed in wonder at how her husband had managed to not wake one or both of them. Garth gently lay them on the bed and then rushed out to grab their sons.

Imra concentrated - she could sense the beings outside their ranch house flickering in and out of existence like a Cargggite triplicating and then reforming, or some form of personal replication like that. She was also aware that there were others too, though their positions were being masked by a powerful telepath. It seemed to her that someone was trying to drag the two former Legionnaires out into the open. Imra doubted it would be long before a more direct attack happened... and as she thought that a lightning bolt of epic proportions smashed against the front of the house.

<Garth, I think it's your brother outside. Can't quite get a lock on him but we've been struck by lightning from out of a clear sky ...and these hysterics suit his character>

<Blast! Mekt is such a pest! I'll call for help>

<It's done already, the Legion should be here any second. I've sent out more security drones. They'll delay whoever's out there until the team arrive>

<Imra! Garridan is gone! I can't find him... the house AI says he's in his bed but he's not>

<Stay calm Garth, we'll find him> Imra withdrew her psychic senses from their estate and focussed entirely on locating her son. She could sense Garth's panic as he clutched onto Graym. After several intense seconds she came to the conclusion that her husband was right; Garridan was nowhere nearby. The attack on the estate had been a rouse to distract them... but who would want to take their son? And where was he?

Ten seconds later a warp materialised on the front porch and Chameleon Boy charged out, leading a large team of the Ranzz's former colleagues behind him out of a spinning violet and honey disc and into the Winathian night.

By then, the beings Imra had sensed outside were all gone.

As was her son.


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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 26 August 21)
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IB and Raz, thank you for your kind feedback.

IB, the teams kind of chose themselves when I was working out who goes where, and I think your descriptions of their remits is kind of spot on with the caveat that Second Base often works outside of the UPs jurisdiction so they have a little bit more latitude to act when thinggs get really nasty. The way I saw it, Cham would have chosen First Base as he want's the general public to have a visible Durlan hero. Jan was moved onto Second Base to take up Chemical Kid's spot after Hadru was shifted across to First base so Tinya could keep a closer eye on him, give a bit of support to Tyroc as the second Base team are a bit rougher around the edges than First Base team, and as you say he probably enjoys the quieter life there, though thankfully Henry is at hand so he can still keep his relationhip with Kent going strong. And Zero has just been introduced - he's got transdimensional shifting - I'm going to write his abilities like how I imagine Tinya's would work if there wasn't the weight of 50 years of canon history weighing her down.

Raz, Tnya's sacrifice... well, you're not wrong, but not right either. It'll happen soon enough, once the Devil's Dozen are out of the way.

More soon as we deal with the consequences of the last post above, we catch up with one of the new iterns, romance may be in the air, and a student gives the team access to information they would never otherwise know. Oh, and another Legionnaire goes missing!

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Hi Harbi! Great to see more great stuff. Just some random comments after catching up here:

First of all, I continue to be blown away by the sheer number of characters you're juggling. The Legion in most times has 20-some members, which is crazy to deal with plus the villains and background characters. But you have this all rolling out so that it seems easy - and I know it's not! smile Big Kudos there!

What I really enjoyed right off the bat was the idea of friction in the team between Tinya and Nura. A team as large as the Legion will never have EVERYONE getting along, and will likely have specific cliques that are opposed to each other, so its good to see here. It adds a degree of humanistic realism, and the potential for inter-team drama.

I had a nice laugh when Gas Girl complained about the Legion sniffing for people! laugh

I'm a sucker for artifact related quests in stories - maybe its all the gaming I've done, so I'm looking forward to see where this goes.

Really nice bits with Ayla and her trainee, as well as Jan & Kent.

And super-awesome cliffhanger to leave on. I LOVE Mekt as a villain and a threat, so this is really cool. Can't wait for the next part!!


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hi Harbi,

more goodness! I'm so happy!

Nice seeing Thunder's magical background come into play here - and props, as I don't really recall Marvel family members drawing much on magical knowledge before, despite being magically-empowered!

Solar Gorilla is a treat, and I love your Ayla! This was one of my favorite mentor-mentee bonding scenes, though honestly I loved em all

Trommites were known for being openly poly-amorous, that's an interesting tidbit! I love how Kent was kinda like "oh, I wonder where Jan is going with this, let's see before I start reacting" lol

Triple Nova crying while helping was heartbreaking. I think I would cry too, if I were in his position.

Very smart of the Legion, to add security systems to the Lightning Ring Plantation! Of course, makes perfect sense!

Garridan/Validus is gone! Oh dear... lovely suspenseful scene Harbi, and I look forward to seeing Imra and Garth in action I hope

and thanks for walking me through your thinking re the teams!

Cham wanting the public to have a visible Durlan hero makes sense, and is a nice nod to the Reboot! also having Hadru and Jan on separate bases due to similar powersets.

looking forward to more more more!

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Hi Harbinger,

I'm loving the beginning of Vol. 8.

I was happy to see that Tinya did have an issue with Nura's announcement. You kept true to your word for that pay off. But I'm glad to see that she wasn't the only one. I know Lu had issues but as you explained that's because of the student and less about her announcement.

Cham's skepticism makes sense but I understand how Tinya could be hurt by that. But how close are the two of them really? you can be "co-workers" and trust each other without really knowing each other. For maybe if she did know him better she wouldn't be so surprised by his needing reassurance.
I also think Tinya is a bit too hard on herself about being Leader and how they perceive her.

I get how great Hope World is gonna be. But at the same point i still can't help but be annoyed with Nura. She really could have just talked to the team. Yes, there would have been some push back but ultimately i think the team would have gone alone with it.

I enjoyed your moment with Gear and checking in with him. I liked his thought about enjoying looking for the minuscule ingredients in Capt. Heavyweights' blood because he was minuscule.

Wow, i didn't think the Dominon's space was that large. this search could take a while for sure.

The moment with Cham and Strobe was well done. A nice quiet moment and i like that Cham is taking a real interest. Strobe reaction to the berries was cute. its easy to forget to enjoy the small things. Cham's really wanting to step up the Espionage game for the team. I hope he doesn't pull a reverse Nura and covertly take people from the team.
I'm with IB and surprised that he's not on Second Base, which does seem to be more inline with what he wants to do.

Mon-el and Non's meeting:
Haha. you were right. Stoic meets Stoic. But much like the ending it was oddly satisfying. Seeing Non take Mon to his "home" and watch the dazzling lights of the system was well done. So Non is from a "living galaxy" or is it that their galaxy is made of light/energy and travels through the universe intertwining with other galaxies?

the investigation to the Shadowmancer is getting started and I'm here for it.
I can't tell if Gas Girl is playing a little hard to get or if she's just upset because of their students being taken.
I like that Mindbender is trying even if he already knows the answer.
The "Now you got people sniffing for answers" part was funny. i chuckled at that.
Yay they got a clue!!!

Of course every time Tinya gets a moment to relax someone comes along to mess with it. Choosing an outfit and Black Witch appears.
I'm with Tinya, i want to know what kind of force could keep Mysa from completing her own missions.
There are a Thousand Sacred Sites? That's a lot of places that could be hit next.

reading this section makes me wonder, did I mix up the Shadowmancer with someone else? wasn't Shadowmancer the one who held Sister Eclipse captive?
Thanks for the gift and the fright Mysa.

A shade of a cursed king from Gemworld huh? So what is a shade exactly? like a piece of ones soul? Evil doppelganger of some sort? What's left after the cursed one has died?

Seven Days until the balance shifts again? That's not good. That also means there's been other shift. Has so much of what the teams been going through because of the Spear of Light? Has it been shifting hands to often?

I'm glad Tinya called in Thunder to deal with this. Magic is defiantly in her wheelhouse.

Ayla and Solar Gorilla was a really sweet moment. Ayla is so nice and personable. I'm glad Solar Gorilla is able to both mourn and honor her sister's memory.

I couldn't help but laugh throughout this entire exchange. Jan is so nervous about it and Kent's so cool and calm. He's very confident in their relationship. Its sweet to see. I wonder if he'll request a transfer of Mentorees as it seems to unnerve Jan a lot.

And so the mission really starts.
Be careful what you wish for Dragonmage. who knows what hell could break loose once that dragon egg leads you to where you need to go.
that poor Monastery and all those people. Triple Nova crying while digging graves was heartbreaking.

And now were at the home of Legionnaires on Winath...oh boy.
Loved seeing Imra calm and doing her thing while Garth grabbed the kids.
Is Garridan the one who was turned into Validus in cannon? I'm surprised they only wanted one child. But damn I can't believe they got away with Garridan.
I'm super excited for what's to come, especially with Garth and Imra on the warpath to get their son back

Can't wait for more, more, more!


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Chameleon Boy led Imra, Garth and three of their children through the warp onto First Base.

The majority of the team the Durlan had led to Winath had stayed behind in the hope of catching whoever was behind Garridan's kidnapping. Before leaving Reep requested both Dawnstar and M'Windaji join them to aid with the search for the missing boy.

Reep felt conflicted as he also wanted to stay but knew the priority right now was making sure Garth, Imra and their children were safe. He led them to an empty apartment where Gear had arranged for enough furnishings that the family would be comfortable. The twin girls had woken up and were crying and Grayam had begun to question where his brother was with increasing vexation. Imra looked at Garth as he held onto their girls and he nodded.

"You go, I'll look after the little monsters. Let me know if you find anything though, I want to be there when we get Mekt."

"Of course... and we will get him." She kissed the girls on the top of their heads then bent down so she was eye level with her son.

"Grayam, you need to be good for daddy. I'm away to get Garridan, and I just know that until I get back, you'll be on your best behaviour... won't you?" The young boy nodded, his eyes beginning to fill with tears. Imra hugged him tightly and stood up. Garth leant forward and they had a quick kiss.

<Garth, thank you. I couldn't do this without knowing you were here looking after them>

<I couldn't stay here if it was anyone but you looking for him. Remember though, I want to Mekt> He replied.

<I know... I'll keep in touch>

" Bye bye babies," she waved to the girls, sending a light telepathic reassuring pulse across their minds, "and I'll see you soon gorgeous boy," Imra smiled at Grayam, "...and no sugar for any of them, okay Garth?" she said with a teasing smile. Garth laughed and promised they would all eat healthily until she returned.


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Science Police Officer Nel Duwi of Daxam was walking on air - figuratively speaking.

She had been helping out on Hope World, loading supplies from orbiting shuttles into their designated storage areas. Her casual manner as she threw various containers in towards the planetoid and then sped to catch them before they crashed had been commented upon by her fellow officer, Dyrk Magz. He had been teasing her for a solid hour about how she had changed from being a typical pragmatic Daxamite into a love-sick puppy after just one date, Nel had grinned from ear to ear as a response which had prompted the Braalian to put his fingers into his mouth and pretend to retch.

Nel didn't mind.

The night before she had taken over a lower-level storage unit on Second Base and with some help from Gear, had decorated it to look like one of the famous Lunar London Faux-French restaurants. She had started by painting the walls with a rich purple, adding plush dark grey drapes and prints of artwork from throughout the centuries from the area of the European continent called France. Nel had spent time earlier in the evening researching all the top restaurants from Bina's home so she hoped her creation would reference them accurately.

She had then taken a wooden table from one of the Rec Rooms, broke it down and reassembled it so it looked somewhat like one of the small round tables that those restaurants used to seat couples and placed it in the centre of the room, before finding chairs that matched.

Gear had very kindly supplied a pale linen tablecloth, rather fine-looking cutlery and plates, a candle that had been jammed into an empty bottle that he had somehow made to look as if it had years of use as it was covered in layers of old wax, two small vases with dainty flowers in them, and a 100% genuine bottle of rather expensive wine - from France! The Linsnarian used his nannites to move the lighting around, creating a chandelier above the table and offered a soundtrack to play that he believed was ethnically correct, and to Nel's eternal gratitude he announced that he would be their waiting staff that evening once Nel's date arrived. After two hours of super speed decorations Nel was finally happy with the end result. Gear had smiled broadly and complimented her on both her taste and work.

When Bina Nawoti had walked into what she thought was a storage locker she was met be Nel wearing a pale blue summer dress instead of her usual drab standard Daxam SP uniform, and the psychic Legionnaire burst into happy laughter. Nel had cleverly sent the holo invite and not taken Bina there herself - well aware the psychic would pick up on her excitement - and also nerves - and therefore spoil the surprise.

"We can't go off base unless it's in a group so I thought you might appreciate a little taste of home here instead." Bina could see the nerves on Nel's face as the Daxamite said this, and decided to let her actions speak for her rather than words. The lithe psychic walked up to the tall Daxamite Science Police Officer and standing on her tiptoes, pulled Nel's face down towards her for their first kiss.

Nel unconsciously started to float and the two pirouetted on the air for several seconds before breaking apart and laughing.

They had planned on going to see a classic 2D film being shown in Shakes later on with a group of their colleagues that night but the two young women never made it...

And so today, Science Police Officer Nel Duwi of Daxam, usually so pragmatic, orderly, detached even, was walking on air.


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The Gil'Dishpan student called pH Zero was summoned to the Senior Staff meeting room on First Base.

The student levitated into the room surrounded by the methane bubble that its races' technology created around it. Seated at the table was Phantom Girl, Thunder, Chameleon Boy, Duplicate Girl and Mon El. Standing at their side was the former Legionnaire Saturn Girl alongside Cosmic Boy. Shawyryn had a talent called Social Empathy whereby it could assess the temperament of groups and act accordingly. It could feel the anxiety, fear and anger in the room, despite none of the humanoids present signalling that their moods were so bleak.

"Presenting as requested, this one is." its speech modulator said, translating the Gil'Dishpan's natural guttural language.

"Thank you Shawyryn," Luornu said, "We need advice about your people's Warpsmiths as we believe there is at least one involved in ...a case we are investigating."

"Mercenary, they are. To that caste money and status are important." The student began to speak, "Ruled by their own Prime Egg-Giver... Matriarch as you say."

"How do we contact these ...Matriarchs?" Saturn Girl asked.

"Guidance from The Ones Who Thought you must seek."

"Can you arrange that for us? We know you have contact with ...senior Gil-Dishpan, It's vital." The student could sense the desperation in this request from Saturn Girl. It had studied the Legion extensively and intuited that something must have happened to the Titanian as by all accounts she was pragmatic and focussed, yet this was not what it felt emanating from her.

"Difficult, it will be, impossible it is not though. As requested, this one shall endeavour."

"We'd rather not go through formal channels Shawyryn... that would take too long and it is a matter of some urgency." Saturn Girl's voice cracked as she spoke.

The Gil'Dishpan remained still for several long seconds. "Only females may address The Ones Who Thought." the student said before it appeared to release a long reverberating burp, causing the Legionnaires to look surprised, though by the time it was finished the air at the side of the student was beginning to coalesce. Shawyryn curled into a ball as a holo came into focus before the Senior Legionnaires.

Saturn Girl walked to the front of the group. She respectfully lowered her head before the holo.

<Important, this must be> The Senior Team were surprised at how human the telepathic voice seemed.

<Ma'am... I hope I have addressed you correctly... we request your assistance>

<Imra Ardeen, you are known to us. What can we offer one who has moved through distance and moment like a runaway star?> There was mockery in the tone.

<We seek the warpsmith that is assisting the one that kidnapped my child>

<That Prime Egg-Giver values their progeny. Great wealth to their caste, they bring. For this help what would you offer them?>

Both Mon El and Duplicate Girl resisted the urge to interrupt and ask the holo if they didn't believe the Legion had done enough over the years to help the Gil-Dishpan alongside the rest of the galaxy...

<How much do they value their own... progeny? That is what I would offer>

<Come> and with that a warp appeared where the holo had been before Imra. Without a word she stepped through and it closed in a blink before her colleagues and friends could either join or stop her or the student called pH Zero from disappearing.


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more great stuff, Harbi!

it's very practical that Imra, the telepath, goes on the hunt for Garridan, while Garth stays behind. so happy they are in progressive/modern parental roles, none of that "wife should stay home and look after the kids" stuff that has become outdated

what a lovely romantic date between Nel and Bina. Gear helping out so much was cute and a nice expansion of his character! I hope I understand right, but Bina's home then has some French influences? really cool! as someone who lived in Paris for a bit, you definitely captured the Parisian cafe with the little round table and all that

Lovely scene with ph Zero, loved the lead up with Shawyryn assessing the group, commenting on Imra's desperation, and deciding to just suddenly call for help.

"How much do they value their own progeny?" gosh, this is an ominous question! I know Imra will be fine, but I do wonder what sort of bargaining they would have to do...!

as usual, more great entries, and I'm on the edge of my seat for more more more!

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Grava allowed the tears to flow as she flew.

She was currently slamming through a holo-assault course that was being timed against Comet King's previous attempt. He had made two errors that incurred a ten second time penalty, so her target was to clear the holo-burning building, rescue the three holo-children and cross the holo-drone filled holo-sky in under three minutes and nine seconds. Whoever lost would be expected to cook dinner that night.

The feelings had crept up on her all morning and as she was watching Drinchnar race through the course she had started to cry. Grava wouldn't have been able to tell you what prompted the sudden rush of emotion but she knew if she asked Comet King for a break she would be teased for the rest of the day. As he crossed the finish line, she yelled that he was gonna lose and assumed the position of a sprinter on the blocks. She knew that Drinchnar would see her tears and she was determined to get past them and win this race...

Drinchnar understood where her sadness came from; it was the residue of the Blight eating into her system. His military upbringing meant he didn't approve of crying - as much as he hated to admit it to her when she felt this way, he thought it was a sign of weakness. Haltingly, he had come to accept that as much as Grava was the cosmic queen he would dedicate his life to, she had a very different personality to his and as such would express her emotions in ways he would often not understand or even appreciate. The one session of therapy that they had attended together had resulted in Grava truly expressing how she felt and Drinchnar realising that his queen had far more depth and compassion than he had ever guessed. After that he had never criticised her again for crying, instead he allowed her the space to show her emotions... well, when you heart was nebula-sized, he thought, a few freefalling tears were understandable.

"Come on babe, you got this!" He yelled as she spun around a tricky corridor that he had incurred a penalty on after bashing the holo-child he carried against a wall as he spun. Grava gracefully pirouetted around the tight bend, holding tightly onto the holo-children she had rescued, before carrying on at rocket speed.

Grava ground her teeth as the tears fell and she sped through the holo-drone filled holo-sky, her arms tightly wrapped around the holo-children.

"You did it! My Grava-licious! You're glorious red-shift starlight!" Drinchnar shouted as she flew across the line, a full eighteen seconds faster than he had.

As the holo's faded she gently settled her feet back down to the training areas floor. Comet King swooped across and wrapped his arms around her. Grava's eyes still streamed with tears but she laughed and cheered as Drinchnar lifted her up and they spun in the air.


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Rokk stood before Garth in the Winathian's temporary quarters on First Base.

D'Arcy and Dorrit were sound asleep in cots at the side of the room. Grayam was sat to Garth's side absently playing with a toy Agri-sprayer. The Braalian had insisted he be the one to tell his friend that Imra had vanished. Rokk was silently bracing himself for an explosive outburst but instead the man who was once called Lightning Lad nodded his head solemnly.

"Imra will get back with the information we need. We just need to wait, she'll be fine.? And then picked up his young son and hugged the obviously very tired boy.

"Oh... okay. We've traced her flight ring to a world called H64448172 in the Gil'Dishpan's expanse. Tinya was thinking of sending a team if Imra isn't back soon."

"Nah, don't do that. It won't help Imra if an invading force charges in after her. Tell Tinya to have some patience." Garth looked tired but there was no doubt that he fully believed in his wife's capabilities to find out the information they needed and return to them with it.

Rokk smiled, understanding his friend's faith. He would tell Tinya what Garth had said and hoped it would be enough to dissuade the team from taking any direct action and potentially causing a problem for Imra.

"Oh, I'll contact Ayla too, perhaps she can help..." Rokk nodded towards the sleepy Grayam, "she's on a mission right now but we can easily get her back."

"Thanks, Rokk, we'd all appreciate that." Garth looked down at his son and ruffled his hair affectionately, not meeting his old friend's eyes as he did. Rokk knew his friend well enough that he could tell Garth Ranzz's heart was aching.


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Rimbor

Lightning Lass - Senior Team member, Ayla Ranzz of Winath - electrical generation and manipulation
Kid Quantum - Jazmin Cullen of Xanthu - creation of temporal quantum bubbles, flight
Backlash - Mrruaw MNau of Simballi - enhanced strength, speed, senses, absorbs kinetic energy to boost own size and mass
Spoiler ii - Gord Eno of Naltor - precognition, specialising in short range visions for combat situations

Newly promoted from Academy student to full membership (Mentor in brackets):
Solar Gorilla - D'Nadka Endarooga of Dmansca - generate and project extreme heat and light (Lightning Lass)

Science Police meta-squad seconded to Legion World First Base:
Power Boy - Science Police Officer Jedidiah Rikane of Earth - personal density control
Gravity Kid - Science Police Officer Tel Vole of Earth - manipulation of personal or nearby gravity

Intern:
Tectonik - Hardal of Granite Falls from Mondriak iv - geokinesis


With the loss of the gene-mod shops of Rimbor several gangs had started to riot.

Those gangs that were tasked with guarding the gene-mod operations had lost what they perceived as the source of their authority, and several smaller gangs saw this as an opportunity for them to take control of the other groups turf. Tyroc was leading a group from his base while Lightning Lass led a team from First Base. They had an informal bet; who would arrest the most gang members.

Ayla had insisted her team take pouches full of incapacity cuffs with them and they were going through them at an alarming rate. The gangs were obviously feeling brave to take on a group of Legionnaires! Ayla's team had appeared through a warp in the Central Guild Plaza of Rimbor City where a running pitched battle was underway between rival gangs. The local Science Police were overwhelmed and had called for urgent help as there were just too many empowered gang members in the fray.

<target the metas first okay team.. I'm taking point up here. They don't look too organised yet so let's make sure they don't get the chance to be> Ayla sent as she flew above the scene. She directed blasts of electricity towards the larger skirmishes splitting them into more manageable sized groups. She could see a lot of bodies and was unable to tell if they were unconscious or worse. There would be time to help the wounded once they got the mob under control. A few energy blasts fired her way but she easily dodged them. A couple of gene-mod recipients that could fly attempted to get to her but she was too accurate with her electric blasts to let them near to her.

One had nearly got the drop on Ayla. A young woman with a cruel smile used her gene-mod to make the Winathian feel as if her entire existence was worthless and Lightning Lass had slowly dropped from the sky. Before she could reach the ground though Spoiler sprung out from the crowd and whacked the girl responsible for Ayla's dark mood on the head with a pre-commando baton, knocking her unconscious. Ayla could see Backlash was right behind the Naltorian, easily brushing the crowds aside as his size was double that of normal.

"Ayla, snap out of it. This one was messing with your mind." Gord yelled as he slipped cuffs on the unconscious gang member.

The electric Legionnaire felt her mood return to normal with a snap and with it came a blast of anger! She hated having her mind tampered with. Right, she thought, no more miss Nice Legionnaire, and with that thought she released a massive bolt of lightning that tore out of her and up into the sky above with a loud crash of thunder. The crowd stepped back in awe of the display. Spoiler and Backlash took advantage of the crowd's reaction to force them back.

Tel and Jed were proving how effective they were together as they faced an angry crowd that had come roaring out of one of the many side streets onto the plaza where they had arrived. Tel levitated several people at the front of the crowd two feet up into the air and pushing them backwards causing the mob behind them to step back. Even as the crowd retreated, he continued to levitate those that had made their way to the front to push them onto the oncoming mob. Before long there was a groaning mass of bodies piled up. Meanwhile Jed phased through the crowd which led to several people trying to strike him either with fists or energy blasts, all of which passed harmlessly through him and struck other gang members, leading to scuffles and brawls which helped break the crowd up further. If Jed spotted anyone using a gene-mod he targeted them, and would solidify himself just enough to slip incapacity cuffs on them, taking their potential threat out. One was a man that appeared to be made of iron; it took three cuffs to knock him out but Jed easily managed.

Jazmin, D'Nadka and Hadral had fun as the trainee blinded any attackers with a burst of pure light while the intern shook the ground underneath their feet knocking them off-balance and the Legionnaire would encase them in a quantum bubble and slap cuffs on their arms. They had needed to dodge some blaster fire from a building overlooking the plaza but Kid Quantum was able to create a stasis bubble around the area it had come from and the three of them flew up and dealt with the two men with rifle blasters they found. While above the plaza below Hadral noticed a mob moving from a side street towards a solo Science Police Officer. He alerted Jazmin and and D'Nadka, and without a word they knew saving the officer and dealing with this incoming mob would be their next job. The swooped down towards the oncoming mass of gang members.

The Legionnaires were on Rimbor for forty minutes and the plaza had been virtually cleared and medics were arriving on the scene when a holo of Rokk Krinn appeared before Ayla.

"You gotta come back to First Base. Your brother needs you."

She didn't need to know the details as Rokk would never interrupt an active mission unless it was serious so she agreed to be back in minutes.

After quickly speaking to the Science Police Officers on the scene, Ayla called her team to her and asked Henry for a warp.


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Imra Ardeen was reputed to be the most pragmatic of the Legionnaires.

There was good reason for this reputation, as she had shown time and again, the Legion Founder would do everything she could to resolve a mission in the most efficient and practical manner she could find. Currently she was feeling foolish, though grateful that she had worn her flight ring as she found herself in a methane atmosphere on a very different planet. The Ones Who Had Thought had created a bubble of air around her but Imra was relieved that the eco-protect function would ensure there was nothing suspicious in her environment. Around her, in the dingy murk where she found herself, she could sense several massive presences though did not want to push too hard with her telepathy at this point; she had after all willingly stepped through the warp. Still, the mental pressure from these enormous minds was difficult to shut out entirely. Imra had a sense that they watching her with some amusement.

The ground underneath her feet had a spring to it as if it were a carpet on moss on a forest floor, though the air was thick with some sort of smoke that obscured her vision just enough that when she glanced down, she could not clearly see what she was standing on. The air felt heavy and moist and the strange smoke obscured the beings that she knew were around her. The student was at her side but they did not respond to the gentle telepathic message she sent asking if this was where they needed to be to find information about who had taken her son.

There was silence for several minutes and Imra was beginning to feel a gnawing worry. The student known as pH Zero floated at her side and unexpectedly asked her to have patience saying negotiations were taking place around them. The student's calmness helped Imra focus - she was here for Garridan and she would spend an eternity here if it got her him back home.

Even without probing she could sense the conversation taking place around her, a chorus of voices seemed to be in a deep discussion, though she was unable to tell exactly what they were saying to each other. If she had to guess she would say it was an argument.

<Prime Egg-Giver of Warp, here is> the telepathic voice that had spoken to her moments before suddenly sprung into her mind.

<thank you, I am very grateful for giving me this opportunity>

<Imra Ardeen, what do you want?> This voice did not sound as friendly as the other. The warpsmith caste Prime Egg-Giver was clearly protective of their spawn.

<ma'am... my son was stolen earlier today and we have reason to believe that a Gil'Dishpan warpsmith was involved. As I'm sure you understand, my child is important to me and I want him back. I came here to request information on the whereabouts of the warpsmith involved so the Legion can return my son to me. Will you help me?>

There was a long pause and once again she could sense the uninterpretable conversation around her.

<for this help you must give something in return>

<of course, what do you require?>

<at this moment, nothing. But owe us for this favour your Legion will>

<I cannot speak for the Legion, only myself...>

<speak for our progeny then we cannot... yours is the choice>

Imra remained silent for several seconds before she bowed her head and replied, <of course, the Legion will assist you in the future when you need them. I will personally guarantee it>


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Hey IB, sorry, I wasn't finished posting, just wanted to post something incase I didn't have any more time smile I don't see Lunar London - where I've established this Bina is from - as being particularly 'French' but it has been described as kind of olde world-y, and I imagine it's full of decent restaurants, and a good French restaurant is a match for any other so thought I'd use that theme instead of making up a future cuisine.

It'll be about three weeks until I get back here for any length of time as I have a wadge of overtime coming up. Hope you are enjoying this so far.

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hi Harbi, yay more good stuff, thanks for pinging me that you had more!

re Bina from Lunar London, oh I'd forgotten where Bina was from, but indeed I can imagine a place like Lunar London having a good French restaurant!

Best wishes on the overtime! I am very much enjoying your work as usual, and so eager to see what comes next!

have caught up with the rest, so here are my stream of consciousness thoughts -

Grava and Drichnar - major kudos, Harbi, for dealing with relationships with such maturity and realism. Even couples with the best intentions can get things wrong about each other, and I really love your use of couples therapy to help some of them sort things out. Especially realistic that someone from a military background like Drichnar, would look down on crying.

Garth's silent confidence in Imra is also realistic. After all, they are husband and wife - Garth fully knows what Imra is capable of! (also found it slightly amusing that even other close friends, like Rokk and Tinya, don't get Imra the way Garth does!)

Rimbor: Excellent use of powers, as usual! Loved seeing everyone take full advantage of their abilities to be as efficient and effective as possible. Also liked seeing Ayla lead the mission, she's fast becoming a fave of mine.

Also great bit with Ayla just wrapping up and charging home to help Garth

Finally, you describe Imra perfectly with the word: pragmatic. Because that's indeed what she is, she's so practical (and creative), and pretty much every incarnation of Imra sticks to that. Also liked Imra's conflict - that she could not speak for the Legion... then giving in. After all, it is her child we're talking about. Although... I imagine Tinya for one will not be completely happy with this (she will understand, but she might not like it!) and... it leaves something hanging over the Legion, a favor to be called in in the future...

as always, this was excellent!!! looking forward to more, more more, but I will patiently wait as good writing should not be rushed smile

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Dream Girl- Team leader - Nura Nal of Naltor - precognition

support staff:
J2351 of the Dominion - Ivy - bio-manipulation of Hope World's chloro-technology
'Smart Boy' - Senior Team liaison,Strategic Analyst Graq Maurus of Colu - 10th level intelligence specialising in disaster relief scenarios

Intern:
Dragon Lass - Mari Baertling of Rimbor - enhanced strength, durability, echolocation and flight


Nura had spent a considerable amount of dreaming of this meeting with Ivy.

The young Dominator had been meek and was yet to meet Nura's eyes. The Naltoran knew it would be a while before Ivy shook off the conditioning that had made her a slave to Sa Lok. It would take a lot of coaching and trust on both sides to build up her confidence enough that she could be relied upon to act unsupervised.

Alongside the precognitive and the Dominator stood Strategic Analyst Graq Maurus of Colu, the Science Police Liaison Officer for Hope World. Nura had already decide that she liked the young Coluan as he blushed ever so slightly every time she complimented him. Querl had never been that easy to embarrass...

Ivy had been explaining to Nura and Graq about the facility that had gone operational only a day before the Legion had taken the planetoid to clone-grow workers. They would be strong and durable and could follow basic orders though ultimately were not sapient as such, and would disintegrate into their basic amino acid building blocks after a standard Dominion day, roughly 28 hours. Graq had examined the data stream and thanked Ivy, as, he said, these workers would play a vital part in the teams' mission.

Nura knew that Graq and Ivy would help each other in the weeks and months to come so she had instigated this meeting almost immediately after the Coluan had arrived. Nura needed to ensure there was harmony on the command deck before they left for their first mission. It would be vital the team were ready for what was coming.

She also knew that she would be spending a considerable amount of time later in the day going through the technical findings from the Science Police report into Sa Lok's operation on this planetoid. She had to find some information that Tinya would need if Nura's visions were to come to pass.

She also needed to check in on a group of astro-technicians from Brande Tech that would be working on the Docking Bay at around 1325 that afternoon as they would need her advice, that was before helping Titan set up the gymnasium (though she was sure Nasir could manage by himself but she wanted to get to know him a bit better so an hour in the gym with him was needed), while there Sister Eclipse would ask for assistance concerning the chapel she was designing for Hope World, and UP Councilor Freda Stratfaer would contact them at 1600 regarding some legislative red tape concerning the United Planets Disaster Response Unit that Nura needed to cut through that would require some intellectual cartwheels, oh and Groovy the delightful Daxamite Soldier Boy would arrive at 1745 and she wanted to meet - and tease - him right off the shuttle as Nura knew how vital he would prove in the coming weeks, and after that she had foreseen herself in the hydroponics though was not sure what she was doing there, and she must check in with her sister as she was quite sure there was something going on with Mysa right now... And Thom and little Matti...she definitely needed some quality time with them at some point.

There was just so many spinning plates she had to juggle if this mission was to be a success.

And as she thought that her flight ring pinged, alerting her to an incoming message from Dragon Lass. No rest for the wicked, she thought, then laughed as she had a fleeting thought of how wicked she planned on being once her daughter was asleep tonight. The Rimborian intern was someone Nura was really looking forward to working with. She intended to take the young woman under her wing as there was a streak of something truly heroic underneath her shy demeanour.

"Nura, hi, can I ask a favour?"

"Mari, honey, what is it? I'm busy so can you make it quick please."

"Oh..." Dragon Lass sounded momentarily stumped, "Ah, sorry it's just my friend Sheesa from Rimbor is visiting me here and... well, she's training to be a beautician... and... ah... do we need one on Hope World?" The intern rushed her question, her confidence sapped by the unexpected need to be quick.

"Oh yes! Oh my... we definitely need one! If she wants the job, she's got it! Hmmm... I suppose we can train her up on basic clinical duties too so she can help Drura and the medi-team out as well. Good thinking Mari, yes... that's a really good idea. Is there anything else dear? Sorry, but I am awfully busy."

"Ah, no. Thank you Nura, you're the best!"

Before the link broke Nura could hear Mari and Sheesa as they squealed their delight.


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Rimbor:

Tyroc - Deputy Leader - Troy Stewart of Marzal city pocket dimension - sonic control
Element Lad - Senior Team member, Jan Arrah of Trom - elemental transmutation
Monica Sade of Rimbor - strength, reflexes - line of sight teleportation
The Huntress - Ambassador Amynta of Nostos ii - incredible strength, speed, invulnerability, space flight
Starkling - telepathic swarm-being composed of indestructible ball bearing sized components
Retro - Deen Toro of Ventura - limited reversal of personal timeline

Newly promoted from Academy student to full membership (Mentor in brackets):
Poltergeist -Jaun Vineo of Titan - alpha-level telekinesis (Element Lad)


Mopping up meta gangs on Rimbor would usually have qualified as something that Tyroc enjoyed.

The challenge of facing unknown opponents on their home turf with only his wits and a small team of colleagues to rely upon should have made the leader of Second Base happy. Instead, he had watched a show of remarkable unprofessionalism by a new member of the team who thought that in the middle of dealing with rioting gangbangers was the perfect time to throw a strop...

He had led this team at the same time as Ayla had taken one to Rimbor City's Central Plaza. She had playfully offered a bet on which team would catch the most gang members that had undergone a gene-mod. Tyroc's team had warped into a massive brawl that was taking place on a strip of urban parkland that sat at the junction of three large gangs' turf.

The Huntress dived headlong into the crowds that had stood against the Legionnaires, drawing fire from several meta-gang members. She swiftly dealt with them, Tyroc was glad to see. Monica Sade had smiled as she watched Amynta throw a heavily muscled gang member onto the ground and snap a set of incapacity cuffs on their arm, and with a pop! the Rimborian vanished only to reappear at the edge of the crowd. With her agility and strength, alongside teleportation, Sade made short work of the crowd members that tried to stop her from cuffing the metas that were close by.

<Jan you take Poltergeist. Retro, you're with me. Starkling ...help Monica and Amynta please. We need to shut these idiots down!> And with that Tyroc flew into the air and took a deep breath before unleashing a piercing howl at the crowds below that forced a large percentage of them back.

There was an explosion from within the crowd which threw several bodies up in the air.

<Monica! Amynta!> Troy shouted along the telepathic matrix.

<Stupid little thug thought an explosion would stop Atremis' chosen ambassador in the Man's Worlds!> Amynta sent as a reply. <that is one gene-mod we definitely want to incarcerate>

Monica Sade's laughter overlaid the message as the teleporter continued her mission to cuff as many metas as possible, and perhaps also punch quite a few others while she was at it.

<Ah... okay, be gentle there Amynta. Monica, keep an eye on the situation please and check to see if anybody needs urgent medical attention, please> Tyroc replied.

As he sent this message a young woman with dark blue skin jumped out of the crowd towards the team leader. Retro had spotted her and flew up and grabbed the back of her jacket, spun her around and threw her back towards the ferro-concrete strip pavement below. The woman immediately bounced back to her feet and pounced towards Retro with surprising speed, but Tyroc had seen her move and directed a blast of solid sonics towards her throwing her off balance though not stopping her entirely as he expected. Retro swooped in and slapped incapacity cuffs on her arm knocking her unconscious before she could get any further.

<She's tough, think she has the same meta-gene as that student Rebounder> Retro sent as he joined Tyroc to face a group that were approaching from out of an alley to their left.

In the middle of the largest group Starkling was creating havoc! Separating its component parts into fist sized balls it was crashing through the mass of gang members, throwing them around like toys. Monica Sade teleported around the fallen gang members to cuff them as they struggled to their feet. A young man, thin with a pointed chin and spiky hair jumped at Sade. Rather than teleporting out of his way she stood her ground and threw a punch. While it connected on his chin with a bang his arms elongated into octopus like tentacles and wrapped around her face. As they connected with her skin an anaesthetic slime was smeared into her eyes, nose and mouth. Monica started to feel woozy almost immediately and teleported three feet to her left. The gang member looked surprised as his tentacles dropped, though only for a second before the Legionnaire drew one of her guns and shot him, knocking him unconscious.

<Troy, I need to get to the medi-bay> She sent before calling on a warp to Second Bases' medi-bay.

<Okay, be well honey> Tyroc replied as he fought against two rather burly young men with claws.

As the warp opened up next to the Legionnaire two gang members leapt at her and they all fell through it. Twenty feet above the mob another warp opened and the two gang members fell through and landed painfully on top of a group of gang members engaged in a brawl. Henry was not going to allow them to use his warps to get onto one of the team's bases.

Element Lad and Poltergeist made an effective team as Jan transmuted the ground underneath the mob into chloroform. The ground was suddenly full of holes that made the mob trip over each other, while the air they breathed in left them dazed. The intern used the confusion to telekinetically snap incapacity cuffs onto the arms of the most dangerous looking of the crowd. Both had carried a bag full of the cuffs as the report that brought them here had said that the Science Police reported several hundred people were rioting, but even so their stock was getting low. Element Led could see that the crowd was dissipating and the Legionnaires appeared to be on top of the situation so decided to mention the uncomfortable conversation they had the night before. Despite their working well together there had been very little conversation on this mission and the Legionnaire knew that the silence was not typical.

"Jaun, listen, I understand that you are new to the team and as your mentor I need to advise you that relationships are built on mutual respect, not just attraction, and while I'm very flattered by..."

Poltergeist's head had been buzzing for a couple of minutes and he couldn't help himself as he snapped back at his mentor.

"Yeah, I get it, this is work. You seniors boff who you want but us interns need to wait our turn. I was warned..."

The intern turned away from the Legionnaire and focussed on tripping up a few stragglers that were stumbling around close by. Element Lad took a deep breath as he transmuted the clothing of a tall woman that was running towards them with an axe in her hand into unbending steel.

"Jaun, listen, this isn't the time for..."

"Yeah, fine. You got together with Kent when he joined as support staff. Cosmic Boy took Night Girl when she was just a Sub. Timber Wolf..."

"Enough." Jan turned towards the intern as he spoke but Poltergeist kept on his rant.

"...got with Shield even before she'd actually joined. Tyroc picked Sade when he was her mentor. Yeah, at the Academy word got about that you long-termers take what you want. Doesn't matter if the newbies are keen on someone as we gotta shut up and wait our turn!"

Poltergeist had turned back towards the Legionnaire and was almost yelling as he finished. There were unshed tears in his eyes. Element Lad had remained silent as he looked at him. Jaun Vineo seemed remarkably young as he finished. Element Lad, for all the disappointment he felt at that moment, remembered how confusing being seventeen could be and understood the young man.

"We will discuss this when we get cleared up here." Jan said softly. Before Poltergeist could respond twin bolts of energy blasted out from the retreating mob and struck the Legionnaire between the shoulders throwing him on top of the intern. Poltergeist scrambled out from under his now unconscious mentor. A scrawny looking kid approached, his eyes glowing a malevolent blue. With a thought the ground erupted around the gang member as the intern telekinetically took him and the three other gang members behind him down. As they fell the feelings of anger slipped away from the intern... and he realised that one of the meta gang members must have been affecting his behaviour.

<Wha's going on?> Tyroc yelled across the telepathic grid. The team leader, followed by Retro flew across the damaged park towards them.

<We had an argument and Jan got hurt. I think someone...> The intern was crouched over his mentor.

<Bloody stupid time to g't into one kid. What were you thinking?> Tyroc interrupted, his anger obvious through the telepathic matrix.

Retro landed beside them as Tyroc hovered in the air above, keeping watch for any more attackers.

<My thoughts were... confused> Poltergeist sent lamely.

<He needs urgent medical help. Henry, warp to medi-bay please> Retro sent.

As the warp opened Poltergeist started to follow Retro through as the Legionnaire carried Element Lad to the medi-bay.

<Poltergeist! You're staying here with me son, we're not done yet> The tone of the message made it clear that Tyroc was not amused.

<Won't be long Troy, will get a stock up of cuffs and be right back> Retro sent

<Thanks Deen> Tyroc replied as the warp closed. <Poltergeist, you're with me an' get y'r head in the game, 'kay? We got serious work to do>


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Xao meditated.

He had asked for Glorith's input about the dragon egg but she had shaken her head: that branch of magic was outside her experience. The young sorcerer knew that but was hoping for some advice. It was embarrassing to admit, given his code-name and energy signature, but Xao had never held a dragon egg before and was feeling a little bit anxious. There was a sense at the back of his mind that the Eternal Jade Dragon found this situation amusing but Xao ignored it as he cleared his thoughts.

The dragon egg sat in the palm of his right hand, slightly warm to the touch. And then without warning, it twitched!

Xao almost dropped it as he scrambled to his feet. As he cupped it in both hands a hairline crack appeared in the precious blue shell. The young sorcerer started to yell before he realised there was no-one nearby to hear.

<Cece! Glorith! I think the egg is hatching! What do we do now?> He hurled his thoughts across the telepathic matrix at his two colleagues.

<Xao, that's brilliant news. Can you bring it up to the Senior Team meeting room, I think we need that bit of hope right now> Thunder replied. Xao wondered very briefly why the senior team would be looking for some hope but he was too focussed on the egg in his hands to give it too much thought. Right now, his priority was to get this dragon out of its egg and leading them to the Shadowmancer.

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<Do you think we're attracting too much attention> Esper Lass sent the thought to Lightning Lord.

<Yes, he's getting greedy...> Mekt replied, his face didn't express any emotion that might tip off anyone watching him that he was in a psychic conversation. <I am ...uncomfortable with holding my nephew in one of his cages. Garridan has done nothing against us, he is a child. This is not what I meant by punishing Garth>

<He's asleep Mekt, and not in any pain. I made sure of that for you>

<Thank you, Meta... that is appreciated. It appears that the arrangement that gives us our revenge while we work for that thing is entirely slated in its favour>

<What do you suggest we do Mekt?>

<Bide our time, we bide our time. Our moment will come soon enough>

The two villains were in an underground cavern where there were several dozen cages hanging from the dark ceiling. Almost all of them had beings within their bars. When the villains had first been brought here there had only been seven or eight prisoners, now there were almost five times that.

The dark mage that had gathered the group to serve him sat in a large throne carved out of the bedrock at the far end. It was painful to look at this being for too long as his form appeared to be made from a dark shifting bruised light. At his side was the assassin called Miasma, a being that was entirely loyal to the Shadowmancer and appeared like smoke. Lightning Lord had a particularly strong dislike for Miasma despite the fact that it was the assassin that had released them from the prisoner transporter shuttle.

The War-Wolf was talking to their new master in hushed tones, clearly coveting the enchanted spear that the Shadowmancer held onto. They had stolen it from the monastery that they had recently attacked as part of the War-Wolf's wished-for revenge on. It appeared the mystic had an ulterior motive in attacking the sisterhood that he said once treated him so disrespectfully, but the Shadowmancer had outplayed him and had managed to take the spear for itself instead.

<I believe our Wolven comrade will not be particularly supportive of the dark mage's cause anymore either...> Esper Lass sent across the telepathic link. Out of the corner of her eye she could see a cruel smile creep up Mekt's face.

A warp appeared at the side of the cavern and Titania, the Silver Slasher and Mr Chimes walked through holding two new captives. Both of whom were little more than children, Mekt tutted with disgust.

"Two more for you, boss... so, when you gonna let me kill some Legionnaires?" Titania said in her booming voice as two cages sank to the floor and she threw their captives into them.

"Soon... you will get the chance you desire very, very soon."


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pretty cool having a Coluan Science Police officer, I don't think we've really seen one in the comics!

ah, team building. not an easy thing for a leader to do.

Hah I love it, Sheesa joining as a beautician and to support the medi-team! A nice mix showing Nura just how she is, both practical and frivolous... but I think Nura often disguises her practical, calculated moves as frivolity no?

Henry's warping is so cool. You want to jump into Legion World unauthorized? good luck with that!

Ah, young hormones (not even love). Not an easy thing to deal with, either for Poltergeist or for Jan. although yeah, Jan is taken, Jaun... so... and even if he's not, if he doesn't like you back, you can't do anything about it... those examples you raised aren't comparable...

Huh, Mekt having compassion towards children. HUH. that's a bit of depth to him. though I like how he's not just some violent, sadistic kook like Sun Emperor for example

Mekt and Meta have an interesting (working?) relationship. I like how smart they are playing it.

Mr. Chimes? now I'm interested, what does he do?

more kids frown though at least Mekt (and maybe Meta?) will be looking out for them. I like the depth you are giving even to some of the villains, Harbi! great job!

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Hey IB, thanks for the kind feedback, always appreciated.

Yeah, I always wondered why we didn't see more Coluan strategists or the like in Canon, surely they would be in high demand?

Poltergeist may not have been in full control of himself when he blew up, though I may go back and edit in a bit more so that's clearer for the reader. Still, he is a hormonal 17 year old so the occasional blow up quoting salacious rumours as fact when stressed and embarrassed is par for the course.

And Mekt doesn't strike me as a child killer, more opportunist that will kill if anyone gets in his way. And that is his nephew so perhaps there's a little bit of humanity in there in the right circumstances. Things will definitely get going soon for him and hopefully you'll like what's in store.

Mr Chimes was used on Lallor, he's a mystic illusion caster, you'll get to know him better very soon.

More next week as Imra returns and the team get into action.

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oh yes don't worry, Poltergeist's age makes his reaction more than realistic. goodness, I was also like that when i was 17!


so looking forward to more, and thanks for the insight into Mekt!

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Hey Harbi, some thoughts I scrawled down while reading, my reactions ended up being quite long:

- creepy Mysa is very fun to write, I liked her appearing in Tinya's mirror...I also really dig Tinya's response to it; it amuses me that someone who can routinely travel between dimensions can still be freaked out by someone just being in her face without warning.
- I also really liked Tinya having the humility to hand the egg over to someone who knows more about it than her, and Cece's magical knowledge - it is a good way to show she's more than just a big hitter
- Ayla and D'Nadka bonding over family stuff was nice to see and very much in Ayla's wheelhouse
- I like that Kent wasn't jealous or weird about someone being attracted to Jan; I would like to think that a thousand years from now we should generally be a bit less possessive about relationships smile
- Garridan's been kidnapped!! I hope someone's not trying to turn him into Validus again, but I'm happy it gets us Garth and Imra back in the thick of things again!
- I love Imra and Garth's scene back at the base, it really shows how much trust and respect there is in their relationship <3
- Nel and Bina's date was so cute!
- the Grava and Drinchnar section got me in my feels...I think "wouldn't have been able to tell you what prompted the sudden rush of emotion" is probably a very familar thing to anyone who's had that level of depression before, and Grava is one of my favourites obviously so I'm glad that Drinchnar is trying to understand it even when it's something he doesn't necessarily understand from first-hand experience (and when he's specifically been taught not to indulge in that kind of "emotional indulgence")
- the scene with Rokk and Garth made me love the three founders' relationship even more; I feel like Garth's transition from hothead to family man is something we never really see in comics, even if a lot of t happened off the printed page. I don't know if there's any other superhero team in comics that owes so much to fandom as the Legion does smile
- a man made of iron, eh??? Curious!!
- oof, I don't at all blame Imra for promising the Legion's help but I know that ain't gonna go well....though I must say that feels like it would be a desperate gamble for anyone else, but when Imra says it I think it's just because she has faith in the Legion to deal with whatever gets thrown at them.
- the interlude with Nura was cute - leave it to Dreamy to understand the immportance of having a beautician on call ^_^
- I thought it was a weird time for Jan to be bringing up Poltergeist's feelings for him, but seeing that someone was impacting Poltergeist's emotions it's not that much of a leap to assume they'd be doing the same with Jan.
- Dragonmage's nervousness with the dragon egg is fun, and I think very in character going by SW6 Dragonmage smile
- I actually love that Mekt is uncomfortable with holding Garridan captive...it sort of leans into his 5YL characterisation as someone who cares about his family and is redeeemable despite everything he's done....I am also enjoying the coworker relationship you're building between him and Esper Lass.

Excited to see what comes next!

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Sister Eclipse - of Rhoohanisett iii - durability, heightened senses, physical possession of any living being
Interns:
Orion -Science Police Cadet Tw'gg of H'lven - tracking skills, agility, enhanced senses and awareness of flaws or weaknesses
Tesseract - Sar Jerash Mor Toark of Mars - access to intra-dimensional space


Sister Eclipse had been setting up a chapel on Hope World.

This had been a large room she had taken charge of when she had first come aboard the planetoid. Since then, she had made a lot of changes to the once former rather uninspiring and blank former storage space. The walls had been painted an off white and hanging mobiles of triangular stained-glass had been placed in the corners that threw beams of colourful light around the upper walls. Underneath them, in the corners on the floor stood tall soft leafed plants that wafted a scent similar to fresh pine into the air. In the middle were several dozen plain wooden pews set around the central dais that, overall, helped make the ambience feel very relaxed.

The interns had begun to walk past, unaware of what was happening in this space. Sister Eclipse was out of sight in a corner checking one of the plants as they strolled in to investigate.

"Good afternoon. Welcome to Hope World chapel, where those that want to find peace with their higher beings can come." The Legionnaire said, giving both of them a surprise. She smiled warmly and invited them to join her at the benches nearest the dais.

"Sister, I have no understanding of these deities you wish to appease..." Tesseract said, looking around at the stark beauty of the large room.

"I have no desire to appease any deities," again, the reptilian Legionnaire smiled, "...but we should prepare to give support to those that may want to have space to manage their own faiths. From my own experience I've found that those in the direst of situations often wish to call out to their native belief systems."

"You've been involved in this sort of thing before?" Orion leant forward, his paws rubbing together as he asked.

"Before I was a Legionnaire, yes. I was of the Sisterhood of Ensuing Enlightenment. They teach that the One Who Comes Next wishes for us to support those less fortunate. I spent several cycles out in the Rim giving aid to many sapiens in desperate need. I imagine that once Hope World leaves its dock, we will have a similar mission as the Sisterhood..."

"Without all the pointless preaching, hopefully... anyway, time I did some work." Tesseract said as she stood up and started to leave.

"Hey, that wasn't called for!" Orion said as his fellow intern left the chapel. "I'm so sorry Sister, she's... she's got no filter sometimes."

"That's alright," Sister Eclipse replied, "I'm sure she will learn that actions are what matters when we are out there; individual beliefs are of little importance when there are sapiens to help. Still, I believe she will more than prove her worth. We should have faith in our teammates, don't you think? Even those we don't necessarily always agree with."

"Sister, I really hope you're right."


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As he held onto the egg it shuddered and cracked until a small pale blue snout peeked through the damaged shell and gave a surprisingly loud snort for air.

<You should assist your young Szenlong> The Eternal Jade Dragon whispered into Xao's mind. The young mystic took a deep breath to calm his nerves before carefully peeling the shell away from the nose of the hatching dragon. There was a mewling sound that echoed in the lift shaft as the young dragon nudged at the shell that Xao so carefully peeled away.

Xao understood that the Szenlong were the keepers of the weather; mighty dragons that his ancestors had justly revered as they would bring smooth seas and fair winds to sailors that offered prayers but could easily become storm bringers to those that offended them. They could be capricious if they were not given the respect that they deserved as spirit dragons, but were ferociously loyal to those that treated them well.

And in the grav-lift a new life arrived on the Legion's First Base.

At first the head popped out, with whiskers matted against its thin muzzle, and carefully it uncoiled itself as the egg shell crumbled in the young mage's hands.

The dragon was thinner than Xao's wrist but easily a meter long, with scales that shimmered from palest blue on its face though to glossy deep indigo at its tail and a long soft frill than ran from the back of its head along the length of its sinuous body. It had five claws on each foot that Xao found to be surprisingly sharp as it clung onto him and shook itself for several seconds before taking to the air to float around the young sorcerer.

Its dark intelligent eyes held a question that Xao immediately understood.

"We thank you oh lord of the weather for appearing to us and humbly ask your assistance in finding our comrade's child that has been rudely taken." Xao said rather quickly, his excitement and nerves were bubbling close to the surface.

The young dragon snorted and flew in circles around Xao. Its whiskers, as long as Xao's hands, twitched as it tasted the air around it. As if from out of nowhere it started to lightly rain in the grav-lift shaft and as Xao laughed the dragon spun faster around him. The air felt warm and tasted of new life...

The rain started to sparkle, shimmering with an azure hue, and in an instant Xao and the dragon were gone!


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Kid Pulsar - Neel Koduah of Earth - incredible strength, invulnerability, projection of explosive blasts
Thirteen - Dann Hortra of Naltor - line of sight probability manipulation
Glorith of Zerox - manipulation of magical energies
Henry - Anti Lad - Spatial warp controller


Kid Pulsar and Thirteen had become close friends since the rescue mission on Talok viii.

Although on the surface neither appeared to have much in common with the other they had quickly found that they had a very similar sense of humour, competitive nature and open-minded approach to their time as Legionnaires. Currently the two young men were on monitor duty and enjoying a game of chess. Neel had an old-fashioned wooden board and set of hand-carved pieces that his grandfather had given him almost fifteen years before as a fifth birthday present - it was the young Legionnaires' most prized possession. His grandfather had been in the running to be the Terran Chess Champion when he was younger and insisted that all his grandchildren should learn how to play.

Dann had never played the game before Neel introduced it to him. After some initial confusion the Naltoran proved to be a quick study and was fast becoming an equal to Neel after only a week of playing. He did admit to Neel that he had been researching it in his downtime, which made kid Pulsar feel a little better when he started losing games.

They had taken to call the pieces after teammates - the Knights were Monica Sade and Atom Girl as they tended to pop up in unexpected places, Bishops were Lightning Lass and Lightning Lad for their long-range attacking skills, the Rooks were Lexikon and Backlash as both were pretty direct with their attacks, The Queen was of course Phantom Girl while the King was Tyroc. Dann had made a joke that the pawns were the Science Police, though neither had taken to call those pieces that. The naming of the pieces had led to some confusion when Timber Wolf had been passing a booth in Shakes the other evening just as Dann had shouted out that Ayla and Sade had just trapped Tinya... after explaining it to Brin, who had a surprisingly good grasp on the game, the two young men had been more discrete after that.

And currently, while on monitor duty they had been playing a first-to-ten tournament of speed chess where they only each had five minutes to check-mate their opponent, though whoever ran out of time first would automatically lose. Currently, Kid Pulsar was winning six games to three, though it looked like he was away to be beaten as Thirteen had manoeuvred his queen into a tricky position.

Glorith had just called for a warp to First Base, and before leaving alerted the monitor board that she wanted to meet up with Xao on First Base so would be off-duty for the next few hours. Neel happily swiped at her icon on the board to mark it as off-duty when he noticed Xao's was showing he had just left First Base.

"Wait Glorith, looks like he's not there now. Do you want a warp to wherever he is?"

"Thank you, yes, that would be most kind."

Henry's holo form appeared before Thirteen and Kid Pulsar. "I am unable to open a warp to that location due to mystical interference. I advise you to contact the senior team as a matter of some
urgency."

The young men's chess tournament was forgotten after that, though later on Kid Pulsar was quietly happy when he noticed that he had won as Thirteen's time had run out.


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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 28 September 21)
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Raz, hi, thanks for your review.

The founders are iconic in my mind so when they get together there shouldn't be anything that could stop them, so look out Shadowmancer as they aredefinitely going to face it soon. Totally agree on Imra's motivation and might get into that in the story in a bit. The Comets are becoming favourites of mine so I keep having really sweet ideas for little stories for them but haven't had room yet for them. Also, you're right about Jan's mood being altered, and again that willl be covered soon and will lead to a story about him and Kent going on a bit of a side mission.

More next week as we find out where Xao has been taken and he gets a well overdue spotlight, and the team goes onto on high alert!

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SIster Eclipse is such a dear. And "no filter" describes Tesseract perfectly...

What a vivid description of the dragon being born! and indeed, you describe it just like the ancient Chinese stories do! well done!

Bonding over chess, the piece nicknames are hilarious. Brin having a grasp of the game was interesting. I like Kid Pulsar's competitiveness and Dann being a quick study.

looking forward to seeing where this goes!

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I liked Sister Eclipse's mature reaction to Tesseract's thoughtlessness...and I loved that whole scene with the dragon hatching! I think you captured really perfectly what a special moment it was, I love the description of Xao's joy when it started raining in the lift!

The chess scene was a nice bit of characterisation too...I like the way you write Brin as not being the moron he was in the Baxter days, I always think of him as being not particularly academically gifted or emotionally intelligent, but he's far from stupid. I doubt he would have survived as long as he has if he was actually unintelligent.

I am looking forward to seeing where Xao's ended up and whether the team are gonna be able to help him in time!

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And in a blink Xao found himself on top of a cage, suspended by a rusting chain from the ceiling of a dark cavern.

The Szenlong continued to float above him, mewling happily. Xao clung tightly onto the cage and used his flight ring to help him hover while he took in his surroundings. He instantly realised he was somewhere potentially dangerous and unsupported by his teammates so with a thought the young mystic activated the distorter on his belt onto its stealth mode - hopefully, in the darkness here he wouldn't be spotted before he had the opportunity to do ...well, anything.

His head started to feel a little bit fuzzy and his eyes went out of focus for a few seconds. He wasn't sure if it was the teleportation that made him feel weak, but as he thought this the small dragon nudged at his fingers forcing him to let go of the cage and as he did his thoughts started to come back into focus. The small blue dragon swam happily in the air around the Legionnaire as he took stock of the situation he was in. Something about the cage had affected him! He glanced down and, in the cage below him, was an unconscious young boy: Garridan Ranzz!

Dragonmage took a deep breath. He knew he needed to be careful so quickly glanced around, just to make sure he really was alone. If he was then he might be able to get Garridan free and the Szenlong could take them back to the team.

There was a little bit of noise below; some movement perhaps, but try as he might Xao was relieved that he couldn't see anyone. Across from him Xao counted fifty six cages, all hanging from the ceiling like meat being hung to cure. Almost all of them had someone inside, and if the cages all made the captives weak anything like he had felt just by hanging onto one then there was little chance of them escaping from their captivity. Somewhere in the back of his mind he remembered tales of an evil shade that practised the dark arts who had strung their prisoners up like this... the Shadowmancer! The stealer of life-force and power that many in the magical community believed was merely a myth created to scare children with. The Legion had dealt with that monster a little over a year ago and it appeared it had returned.

Even as he had this thought a voice rose from the cavern below: "We are no longer alone. I can feel another magic user above us. Find it and put it in one of my cages."

Several other voices started asking questions and there was a sudden flurry of movement on the ground twenty metres below. One voice was particularly alarming.

"If it's a Legionnaire I want to kill them!" A womans voice boomed.

"You may claim it as a kill if you want Titania, there will no doubt be others arriving soon that will sate my hunger." The first voice responded.

And with that, Xao knew the chance of his plan to make a quick escape back to First Base with Garridan had gone from fairly unlikely to virtually impossible to happen in an instant.


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Dr Shoodixi Singh - Science Police Medical Officer - bio-empathic
Dr Richard Kent Shakespeare - Impulse ? Chief Medical Officer and Support Team manager - enhanced strength, speed, durability, stamina
Element Lad - Senior Team member, Jan Arrah of Trom - elemental transmutation


Second Base:

Dr Singh looked at the injured Legionnaire's readout and sighed.

Jan Arrah had received serious burns, two broken ribs and a mild concussion while on his latest mission to stop rioting on Rimbor.

It was clear that he had been blasted in the back, which Dr Singh found particularly deplorable. The young doctor had the psychic skill of knowing where physical pain was emanating from within a patient so he quickly set the auto-docs to repair the damaged areas. These though were the least of his worries. The ECG scan results revealed that the Legionnaires limbic system and in particular the amygdala showed signs of being very recently tampered with as well; obviously his attackers had struck both physically and psychically at the Trommite. Given the Legionnaires medical history, in particular the manipulation he had undergone when Psyche from the Dark Circle controlled dimension had damaged his mind, Dr Singh called for assistance.

Kent Shakespeare walked through a warp only minutes later, looking for all the world as if he didn't have a care in the world. His eyes showed something entirely different when he saw Element Lad in the medi-bay.

?You know you shouldn?t be here Kent. You shouldn?t be treating a loved one, conflict of interest...?

?Oh, please...? the muscular doctor said dismissively as he walked over to talk to Element Lad.

"Seems I got hoodwinked again... started talking to Jaun about, well, inappropriate matters for a battle field. He must've been manipulated too as he gave a fair mouthful in return. Do you know if he's okay?"

"Getting checked out now on First Base, I believe." Dr Singh said, "I'll leave you two too it but will be back in five minutes, just need to discharge Sade ...before she shoots someone." The doctor muttered that last part but both Jan and Kent heard and smiled.

"So... the readout says you'll be fine to discharge in two hours for all physical damage but... ah, given the team's recent history and yours in particular there's a flag raised because of the psychic manipulation. Perhaps a session with Dr Falkner or Dr Kabbo...?"

Jan stayed silent after Kent had finished, his expression showed he did not entirely agree.

"Actually... I've been thinking, perhaps I need something else."

"Ah, despite what all those dreadful soaps you watch show, the medi-bay really isn't a place to fool around..." Kent looked at Jan and could feel the blush rise, Jan's expression made it clear that wasn't what the Legionnaire meant.

"No, I never thought it would be." Jan had a slight smile as he spoke, enjoying Kent's embarrassment. He let the silence hang until the doctor spoke.

"Yeah, so what are you suggesting?"

"I'm out of balance Kent and feel I need something that standard medicine can't give me. It's time I went to talk to the Magus."


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In the dark cavern Xao floated above cage that held the sleeping Garridan Ranzz.

"Can you take us back to where we came from Szenlong?" He whispered to the small blue dragon as it danced around him, "Please, we need to take this boy back to his parents. Please..." The young mystic realised he sounded like a child, but was desperate to save the boy in the cage below him as he pleaded. The thin dragon mewled softly as it spun in the air around the Legionnaire, Xao knew it was telling him that the magical energy required would be quite great and it was not certain if it had enough. Xao gave a nervous smile and was just away to offer his support when a mental blast stabbed into the young mystics' head almost knocking him unconscious. He instinctively clung onto the chain that suspended Garridan's cage and moaned in pain.

The Szenlong flew close by and circled him several times before landing in his hair and wrapping itself around his head. It hissed its disapproval as the pain subsided...

"We need to go now, they know where we are!" Xao stated, his eyes were wide with fear. Again, the small dragon hissed and he understood perfectly; it was not yet strong enough to protect him from the psychic attack and also fold space back to where they had come from. Xao Jin knew that while he was relatively secure up here, hidden by his distorter in the darkness of the ceiling of this massive cave he would not be for long as the villains below would be coming for him. He took a deep breath and started to prepare a summoning spell. The villains would not find him an easy mark.

Out of the corner of his eye he thought he saw some movement, and across from him, clinging to the wall were two werewolves! Their malevolent gaze swung around the tops of the cages, eager to find their prey. He could hear the claws of more of their ilk as they scurried up the cavern walls around him. The mystic assassin called the War-Wolf was well known as a ruthless hunter that was wanted for his appalling crimes on every world within the magical community. His murderous exploits had made him a figure of almost legendary status. His creation of these lupine terrors had brought so much misery to so many people and mystic beings over the last couple of decades...

The was no escaping it now, Xao Jin - the Legionnaire called Dragonmage - knew he would need to fight his way out of this situation if he wanted to survive.

And as he had this thought it occurred to Xao that the War-Wolf wasn't the only one able to create magical constructs. Xao closed his eyes and released his spell...

A dozen emerald dragons erupted out from his slim frame and tore through the air towards the werewolves climbing up the walls. The Legionnaire's dragons tore at the Lupine forms, ripping great lumps of bleeding flesh from them though when the werewolves struck back their claws passed harmlessly through the emerald attackers. In seconds the werewolves were on the cave floor and Xao's dragon constructs were causing having amongst those beneath him. He could hear shouts and saw blast of energy erupt against walls and the floor - probably as they had passed through his dragons.

Dragonmage's eyes were closed as he focused all of his magical will and strength into the constructs that were below so did not see the smoky figure as it materialised on top of a cage on the opposite side of the cavern from him.

The Shadowmancer's personal assassin, the mystical ninja called Miasma had arrived to find and stop him.


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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 6 October 21)
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Hey Raz and IB, thanks again for your kind reviews.

Way I see Brin is he's not stupid just not educated, so while there may not be many nuances to his outlook but he's fairly solid. And if memory serves me well (no guarantees!) didn't he play Gim at Chess and kick the board over as he was losing while on a cruiser, just before a Khund warlord attacked them many, many moons ago?

Anyway, here are some more installments and next up we get some action but things aren't always what they seem!

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More nice bits, Harbi!

Loved Jan and Kent flirting, it is so realistic - those two are such cuties. I'm glad poor Jaun was exonerated, in the sense that he was manipulated; poor guy, if he had not been, I think his Legion career would have had quite a setback. Hopefully Tyroc learns of it so he won't judge the poor guy too harshly.

Jan seeking balance, is something everyone could learn from

yikes, way to up the ante with Dragonmage!

And indeed, Brin is not stupid. Don't particularly recall the chess scene, but I can imagine it!

Looking forward to more, more, more!

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I don't really remember that chess scene either, but like IB said I can find it very easy to imagine lol

Dragonmage without backup is interesting to see! Even though his powers are flashy he's generally so introverted he doesn't get a lot of spotlight so I am enjoying this!

I also really like Jan's last line about needing something more than traditional medicine, that seems very in character for him.

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The chess scene (which I may have invented) was around the Dave Cockrum era, I think, and Gim and Brin were playing Star Trek 3D chess. As I remember it (or perhaps invented) Brin, Gim and Shady were in a cruiser but got shot down by a Khund and crash landed on an asteroid. The explosion at the end read "Holy Cow! Dig the Fireworks" or something like that.

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I hope you're not as well because it sounds great laugh

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Xao never saw the attacker coming towards him as the assassin sprang on light feet from hanging cage to cage towards him.

Miasma was virtually invisible in the gloom but not to the senses of the small blue spirit-dragon that was currently wrapped around the Legionnaires head.

The Szenlong unraveled itself and tore towards the assassin, the dragon's sinuous body as straight as an arrow as it flew. The assassin held onto a sword, ready to swipe but never got the chance as in an instant the air in front of Szenlong became full of cloud and rain and wind, momentarily blinding the smoky assassin. Miasma swiped his sword down in an arc that would have sliced the small dragon in two had it remained flying on the course he had last seen it on. Instead, as his sword clanged against the cage under his feet the small blue dragon appeared from above and dived into the assassins' smoky form.

Miasma could discorporate into a gaseous state but against a reincarnated spirit dragon that controlled the air and the wind this proved no defence as the scrawny assassin was literally blown apart in every direction. The Szenlong hovered where Miasma had been, making satisfied mewling sounds before circling the cages where it had encountered the villain, sniffing at the air for any clues to its whereabouts. The dragon understood that the assassin had been taken care of for now, but not permanently.

Unfortunately, as the small dragon had been protecting the Legionnaire from the psychic assault of Esper Lass, Xao shouted out in pain as the villain's attack broke through his mental shields without the dragon to support them and tore into his mind. The magical emerald dragon constructs that he had created and sent into the cavern below vanished as his concentration broke. Victory howls from werewolves echoed off the walls below the Legionnaire as the dragon-forms they had been struggling with simply disappeared.

Without thinking, Xao gripped onto the bars of Garridan's cage to keep his balance as the psychic attack bit into his thoughts and as he did the foul magic of the cages started to erode at his senses and everything began to blur...


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Below the cages, Grachdashg and Narankachg, the twin Khunds both looked up at the dark ceiling above.

With their cybernetic enhancements they could easily see the lone Legionnaire though neither made a move to capture him. They knew that if a Legionnaire could find them then their time here was coming to an end. Their lives had taught them when it was time to cut and run...

Twins were virtually unheard of within the Khundian Empire. Not only was the rate of naturally occurring conception of twins about one in every three million births, but it was something that was seen as a sign of immense bad luck within the Empire. The Twin Gods F'ratshatchakk and K'karaschakk, Lords of Blood Letting and Combat with Blades, were renowned as being jealous gods that did not wish to share this status with mortals. As a result, twin births, if they were to happen within the Empire, usually resulted in the murder of the children and parents and severe reparation paid to the city state where they were born from the extended family as punishment for offending the divine twin gods.

Understandably, there were very, very few twins born within the Khund Empire.

When their mother found she was carrying the two children within her she did not resort to the removal of one of the foetus' as would be expected, instead she fled to a world on the fringe of the Empire and Dominion space where it was said the few Khunds that had already settled there did not follow the old ways. Trechna was not regarded as a particularly safe world under the best of circumstances, and that was especially true for a single woman and her newborn children. As far as their mother was concerned though it was as near to safety as she could afford and at least both of her children would have a chance to survive.

Even out on the edge of so-called civilisation the twin Khunds were shunned. As a result, the two boys grew up with strong anti-social tendencies and a reputation of being savage fighters. At nine years old they were sold to a Baron, under some duress it must be said, to become members of his staff. They did not last long in the kitchens where they were initially placed, but the Chief of Security who captained the Baron's private army saw something in them and took them in. In the next five years the two young Khunds earned a fierce reputation.

As they approached their fifteenth year, the Khund Emperor decided that the rebellious little world on the edge of his Empire needed reminding that it was a vassal state and so sent one of his most feared Warlords to deal with it.

Warlord Dauuchara was renowned for his intelligence as well as owning a successful stable of warriors that fought in the Challenge Courts. His troops captured the twins and the Warlord saw an opportunity that he did not want to squander. The two teenage boys would be killed as soon as they were returned to the Empire so before they returned, he planned on using them as Guinea pigs for prototype cyborg technology he was working on for his current batch of Champions. The boys spent six agonising days under the scalpel of one of the Empire's most eminent surgeons, losing their limbs, part of their brains, spines and eyes as cybernetics were crudely fitted onto them. These were not the full powered additional implants that the Warlord wanted his fighters to use, he was not stupid enough to fully empower his captives, but it was still enough that they made their escape as it turned out that the invisibility circuitry worked better than expected.

Grashashk and Narankacht were not stupid either so they stole the plans for the fully enhanced cybernetics before blowing up the laboratory and a full third of the battle cruiser they had been held captive upon. Warlord Dauuchara only lasted a further twelve days in position after this until he was found hanging in his apartment.

The twins escaped and in the decade that followed they had the full spectrum of enhancements made to the specifications they had stolen and became highly sought-after mercenaries. They operated on the fringes of the United Planets mainly and for over three decades they had been amassing a decent bank balance and reputation until they had taken a job on Ventura protecting a paranoid Lord and went on the run after he threatened to share the technology that had created them. While trying to get the data the Lord had taken off them from a bank vault they had been caught by the Legion. It was the first time they had been caught since the Khund Warlord.

The year or so they had spent on Takron-Galtos had not been pleasant but at least they were treated with some respect from their fellow inmates. And, when Miasma had broken them out from the shuttle craft, they had happily joined the other escaping villains to this place where the Shadowmancer lurked.

Like most Khunds, they had an inherent distrust of magic so found working for the Shadowmancer to be at best uncomfortable. While the dark sorcerer had promised them whatever they desired it had not yet delivered and the twin Khunds were beginning to wonder if it ever would... certainly, when it had helped the War-Wolf, the Shadowmancer had benefited more from that as it had kept the mystical spear that the wolf mage craved for itself, and Lightning Lord was clearly unimpressed that they had taken his nephew and put the young boy into one of the dark mages feeding cages. It appeared that the promises that the one who had freed them from Takron-Galtos made came at a steep price.

And here they were, in the cavern where it appeared that a Legionnaire was above them in the shadows, hidden by several dozen enchanted cages full of captives that the twins had helped to bring here. They exchanged a glance and they both knew they understood the other perfectly. The unreliable promise that maybe, eventually they would get to fulfil their dreams was not enough to keep them here if the Legion were about to attack. They had enough squirreled away in various vaults and banks, and were owed more than enough favours from a wide selection of people in positions of some authority to help them that they didn't need to rely on the words of a dark magic-user to get where they wanted to be. They had helped it capture many of the captives in the cages above so felt that they had repaid any debt they owed it for breaking them out.

Given that several of the Shadowmancers team where away catching more unique beings for their master, if the Legion were to arrive in force the situation would be unlikely to go the twins way. So, at the first hint of an opportunity, the twin Khund cyborgs would be getting as far away from here as they could; they would never allow themselves to be taken as prisoners again.


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First Base:, Senior Team briefing room:

Phantom Girl - Team Leader, Tinya Wazzo of Bgtzl Dimension - intangibility
Thunder - Deputy Leader, Cecelia Becks of 21st Century Earth, immense strength, speed, indestructibility, space flight, wisdom
Chameleon Boy - Espionage Squad leader, Reep Daggle of Durla - shape changer
Lightning Lass - Senior Team member, Ayla Ranzz of Winath - electrical generation and manipulation
Duplicate Girl - Senior Team member, Luornu Durgo of Carggg - creation of multiple identical duplicates
Mon El - Senior Team member, Lar Gand of Daxam - incredible strength, speed, stamina, senses, laser vision, space flight, invulnerability

Newly promoted from Academy student to full membership (Mentor in brackets):

Solar Gorilla - D'Nadka Endarooga of Dmansca - generate and project extreme heat and light (Lightning Lass)
Strobe - Denal Lort of Dryad - assume electro-magnetic energy form (Chameleon Boy)

From Home Base:
Cosmic Boy - Rokk Krinn of Braal - manipulation of magnetic fields

Retired:
Saturn Girl - Imra Ardeen of Titan - Alpha level telepathy
Lightning Lad - Garth Ranzz of Winath - electrical generation and manipulation


Thunder and Mon El stood before the warp as it spun open, ready to face whatever was coming through.

It was clearly a Gil'Dishpan creation as it took several seconds to materialise fully, unlike Henry's instantaneous warps. Saturn Girl walked through with a small tight smile on her face. Her expression didn't give much away, which was a concern for Tinya and Rokk as they knew their friend well enough to know there had been something that happened to trouble her.

Behind her, the student pH Zero floated into the meeting room, slowly uncurling from the ball it had scrunched into as a sign of submission before the rulers of the Gil'dishpan Expanse. Behind the student floated two other Gil'Dishpan, both slightly smaller than the student though with red markings across their bodies.

"See you brought company back with you Imra." Rokk said with obvious relief.

"Yes, though you need to know what I've agreed to to gt them here..." Imra started to reply.

"It'll be alright, we'll get to it later. We're just relieved you're back with us." Tinya said as she phased through Mon El to give her friend a hug.

Imra explained to the gathered senior team that the warpsmiths would alert them to any warp their clansman working for the Shadowmancer opened up and they would open corresponding warps of their own at the co-ordinates, so the team would be able to hopefully capture the mystic shade and his new Devil's Dozen in one swoop.

While the others discussed who should be on their next mission Rokk contacted Garth to let him know Imra had returned. Garth thanked Rokk before giving a knowing smile and saying he was on his way up there at that moment, stating that Gear had volunteered to nanny the children. Rokk realised that Imra must have telepathically told Garth she had returned as she walked through the warp onto First Base.

Thunder, Phantom Girl and Mon El were discussing the teams they would need as a holo of Thirteen from the Second Base Monitor Board interrupted them.

"Tinya... everyone, Xao has vanished from the grav-lift and Henry says he can't open a warp to where he is as it's being blocked by magic. Here are the co-ordinates..." The holo of the Naltoran flicked his hand and the senior team members flight rings breeped as they received the data.

<Can you create warps to these co-ordinates?> Saturn Girl asked the two Gil'Disgpan.

<Unlikely it is, though try we will. No Z-lemma Matrix co-ordinates given>

"Hold on Imra," Tinya said, clearly reading the body language between the telepath and the warpsmiths, "We need to get a team ready before we leave as the Shadowmancer is powerful and he's not alone."

"Neither is she..." Garth Ranzz said as he strode into the meeting room. There was a tightness to his expression that warned Tinya that the former Legion founder meant business, and whoever got in his way would regret it.

"Thunder," Phantom Girl said to her deputy, "What's the estimate on how long until teams are ready to go?"

"I'm in the process of getting teams together and ready in Henry's warp control room on both First and Second Base. Two or three minutes and we'll be ready."

"Excellent! Right, everyone..." Tinya announced through the comms system for all Legionnaires to hear: "We have a bunch of heavyweight nasties who escaped T-G to deal with and if that's not enough the Shadowmancer is involved too. If it's anything like the last time we faced him there's going to be innocents to protect and rescue as well. I'm sending through the information on the escaped villains and the Shadowmancer so take the time to go through it please. As soon as we know where we're going, we'll be going in hard and I expect you to be ready."

Between Imra's telepathy and the student pH Zero's comprehending the spatial co-ordinates as understood to human perceptions they had managed to clarify to the two Gil'Dishpan exactly where they wanted to go to.

While Saturn Girl and the student communicated with the Warpsmiths, Tinya, Cece and Lar had quickly discussed their plan on how they would tackle the escaped villains and the Shadowmancer - each team member would be given their jobs to do, and the team leaders knew they would be needed to release any captives they discovered as well... none of the senior team thought this would be an easy win. After they had finished their conversation, Thunder had quickly gone to Henry's warp room to ensure her team would be ready and Mon El had warped across to Second Base with Duplicate Girl to prepare the team he had chosen - none of whom were unique beings which, the team leaders hoped, would ensure the Shadowmancer couldn't feed on them. Lu was to stay behind on the base, as the team were worried that her unique abilities would prove a massive boon to the Shadowmancer if she was captured, and though she agreed she was not happy with this decision.

Tinya remained with the founders, Ayla and Reep. She also called for Southern Lights, now stationed on Hope World, to join them; she knew that having a mystic on their team would be a definite advantage. While she had been doing that, Ayla and Reep called for the new Legionnaires that they mentored, requesting they join them in the Senior team briefing room. They would be joining Tinya's team when the time came. Rokk and Garth studied the hard light screen in front of them as it showed all the information that the team had gathered about the Shadowmancer after their last encounter. It was not comfortable reading.

"He's a nasty piece this one, isn't he Garth." Rokk muttered to his old friend.

"Yup, though really he's no nastier than Mordru or a dozen others we took down... and he's got my son, so we don't have much of a choice Rokk; we're taking him in along with the rest of the cronies he's got around him, and Mekt... Mekt needs serious help, I can't allow him to run around like this."

"You and Ayla aren't responsible for his instability. I know you know this..."

"Yeah, still, it's really embarrassing watching him cause all this trouble, especially when we should be able to do something about it." Both men had been studying the screen before them, not looking at each other as they spoke. The depth of understanding between them meant they didn't have to say much to know exactly how he other felt.

Henry had warped Southern Lights over to First Base. The winged mystic bowed his head respectfully to Tinya as he stepped through the spinning disc - which drew a side glance and smile from Imra, before plucking hairs from his head. He asked the team leader to hold out her hand and he quickly tied a hair around her right index finger while muttering an enchantment to give her some protection from any magical attack. This was a spell that Glorith had taught him so he was eager to put it to use.

Chameleon Boy stepped up, shook the young mystics hand and asked if he too could be given this magical protection before they went into the shadowmancers lair. Reep knew that Imra and Garth and perhaps even Rokk probably had no idea what Southern Lights was doing so to save any embarrassment Reep had stepped forward and made it clear what the winged mystic was doing.

<Legionnaires!> Imra's voice seemed to echo uncomfortably through the telepathic matrix. Unknown to everyone else, immediately after this message was sent Tinya used a private bandwidth to tell her friend that she shouldn't use her natural telepathy along with the flight ring TP field as it caused that weird echo. The two women shared a glance and Imra gave a nod and grateful smile towards the team leader as she continued - using the flight ring generated telepathic matrix only.

<The Warpsmith's are confident that they now understand and can use the co-ordinates we gave them. I hope you're all ready as we will be leaving momentarily>


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very much looking forward to what happens next!

love t he backstories you give to even the villains - the Khund twins, for example.

Nice bit with Imra and the echo in the flight ring matrix. shows that the Legion has grown and evolved with time.

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The chess scene (which I may have invented) was around the Dave Cockrum era, I think, and Gim and Brin were playing Star Trek 3D chess. As I remember it (or perhaps invented) Brin, Gim and Shady were in a cruiser but got shot down by a Khund and crash landed on an asteroid. The explosion at the end read "Holy Cow! Dig the Fireworks" or something like that.

I really hope I am not imagining it smile

You're not imagining it. The chess game is in Superboy and the LSH 217, Charge of the Doomed Legionnaires. It's Mike Grell art that ends with an explosion from a Legion Cruiser spelling out "Holy cow! Dig the fireworks!"

Brin kicks over the chessboard, but he's playing against Superboy. You can see the panel here: https://comicsarcheology.com/index.php/2021/07/17/superboy-217/ (the exploding Legion Cruiser panel also is uploaded to this page).

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nice, thanks for the link, reckless!

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Reckless, hi, many thanks for that link it's greatly appreciated. I'm glad my memory wasn't failing too badly smile Comics archeology is a great resource too so thanks for introducing me to it.


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I really liked the aside with the Khund twins, that is some nice world-building stuff as well as characterisation!

I am really looking forward to seeing Garth and Imra in action with the rest of the team too! Garth and Rokk's chat was really well done, I like how Rokk knows that Garth and Ayla don't need to be told they're not responsible for Mekt but he's also known them long enough to know how Garth feels. That really showed how close the founders are. smile

There were a couple little scenes which highlighted how different the team has become since Garth and Imra stopped being an active part of it...the telepathic echo with Imra and Southern Lights using Glorith's spell - I like that it wasn't anything really dramatic but it does subtly show that as legendary as Garth and Imra might be they are actually a bit out of the loop when it comes to the current Legion. Hopefully that won't bite them at a bad time!

Looking forward to seeing what happens next!!

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First Base:

Phantom Girl - Team Leader, Tinya Wazzo of Bgtzl Dimension - intangibility
Chameleon Boy - Espionage Squad leader, Reep Daggle of Durla - shape changer
Lightning Lass - Senior Team member, Ayla Ranzz of Winath - electrical generation and manipulation
Southern Lights of Starhaven - spaceflight, magic user

Newly promoted from Academy student to full membership (Mentor in brackets):

Solar Gorilla - D'Nadka Endarooga of Dmansca - generate and project extreme heat and light (Lightning Lass)
Strobe - Denal Lort of Dryad - assume electro-magnetic energy form (Chameleon Boy)

Cosmic Boy - Founder and Headmaster at Home Base Academy, Rokk Krinn of Braal - manipulation of magnetic fields
Saturn Girl - Founder and former member, Imra Ardeen of Titan, alpha-level telepathy
Lightning Lad - Founder and former member, Garth Ranzz of Winath - electrical generation and manipulation


As the warp spun into existence Ayla and Tinya took point.

Close behind, Reep, Rokk, Garth and Imra jumped after them. The three newest Legionnaires followed. They all knew that they had ten or twelve seconds until the next Gil'Dishpan warp would open carrying Thunder and the rest of the team from First Base through so they intended to use this time to disrupt what the Shadowmancer and his team of villains were up to.

Ahead of them was a dark cavern, with a high ceiling that had cages hanging from it - they had expected this after the last time the Legion had encountered the Shadowmancer. It is the ironic law of the universe that sudden heroic appearances often lead to their own defeat, and this was certainly true in this case as the warp that the Gil'Dishpan had opened up had taken the Legionnaires into the centre of the Shadowmancer's cavern. Directly behind where the warp opened up, and so out of sight for the Legionnaires were the mystics called the War-Wolf and Mr Chimes.

As Mr Chimes worked on a spell that would confuse the Legionnaires the War-Wolf released half a dozen of his lycanthrope avatars.

Imra resisted the temptation to focus entirely on Garridan, as they expected he was in one of the cages above, instead she sent out a wide ranging telepathic scan to locate any living beings close by. Too late, she recognised one of the minds present as belonging to Meta Ulnoor, the psychic villain called Esper Lass! Imra felt stupid momentarily as Tinya had shared information on the meta-villains that had escaped from Takron-Galtos, and so she should have been prepared as Meta was an accomplished telepath with an Alpha rating in Pushing - the psychic skill of forcing ones own thoughts onto another mind. Before Imra could fully erect a mental shield the psychic villain struck with a savage attack, tearing into Imra's mind like a tiger.

Garth and Ayla had both taken to the air to throw lightning bolts towards the three beings before them - Esper Lass was the only one they recognised from their run-ins with her before, though the Shadowmancer was recognisable from the description from the hard light files they had read before leaving on this mission. The other was a being in a dark hooded cloak wearing a large mask that appeared to give it a hooked beak that stuck out almost two feet from their face. The Shadowmancer had used the Spear of Light, stolen from the Monastery that had guarded this sacred artifact for a millennia, to create a barrier in front of the Legionnaires which deflected their electric blasts.

The air around the Legionnaires seemed to pulse before everything went dark for a long second. When light returned they found themselves in a very different place - their teammates were gone and everywhere they looked there were snarling werewolves! Garth and Ayla started to blast at the wolves as they pounced. As the werewolves appeared to attack out of nowhere Tinya dived into the floor - she had estimated where their opponents were standing and she planned on giving them a surprise!

Chameleon Boy had changed into a three-headed Gurdanuon Rhino and charged at the lycanthropes before him but they spun out of his way. At his side had been Solar Gorilla but she had vanished though he could still feel the heat she generated. Having worked alongside Princess Projectra for many years Reep was certain that the attacking pack were not what they seemed...

<It's a trick, we're facing illusions. Garth and Ayla, can you keep blasting where you saw the Shadowmancer? Ignore the werewolves they're not there> The Durlan sent across the telepathic matrix.

<You sure bud?> Garth responded.

<Oh shut up and do it already Garth> Ayla replied, her message thick with sibling teasing.

Unfortunately, amongst the illusionary wolves there were some that the War-Wolf had created, and as the Legionnaires ignored what their senses told them was happening around them the creatures crept closer getting ready to pounce.


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Southern Lights had taken to the air alongside Cosmic Boy - they role on their mission was to release the prisoners while their teammates distracted and hopefully overcame their opponents.

The winged mystic from Starhaven had prepared a chant that would ease the nausea of those they released as well as a defensive spell in case they were attacked while they did their job here. The magnetic hero from Braal was focused on snapping the chains and lowering the cages to the ground. He was quite sure that the team below would keep the Shadowmancer and his gang of thugs busy. They were getting close to the cages when Mr Chimes' illusion spell reached them - the air darkened and then all hell broke loose!

Around the two swarmed flying horrors that dived and charged at them.

Southern Lights was momentarily affected but his years of studying the Higher Pathways of the Spirit Guides gave him an immunity of sorts to falsehood, however it manifested itself, and so could see through the illusion. He quickly flew to Cosmic Boy's side and used the telepathic matrix to reassure the Braalian that this attack was not what it seemed.

<You sure? Okay... can you guide me to the chains so I can snap them and lower them to the ground> The Braalian hero flinched several times as they approached the nearest chain, obviously reacting to whatever image had been implanted onto his senses. Southern Lights gently took Rokk's arm and placed his hand on the chain.

As Cosmic Boy reached out with his magnokinesis to snap the chain they heard a hiss approaching them. In the darkness above the cages something moved towards them... Southern Lights prepared the phrase needed to activate his defensive spell as Cosmic Boy focused on lowering the cage he had just released from the ceiling down to the ground. From out of the corner of his eye Southern Lights saw a sudden movement but he was not fast enough to speak the charm before something struck him, sending him spinning. As the winged mystic regained control and flew up to help Cosmic Boy who was suddenly without a guide to get him through the illusions he heard a familiar voice shout across the top of the cages:

"Szenlong! Stop, they're our friends."


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Chameleon Boy had given Strobe the task of getting behind the villains and reporting what he found.

Reep had made it very clear to Denal that he was not to engage unless absolutely necessary - his role was purely reconnaissance. The team needed the information he could get and that would help them win the day. So, in the same second that they stepped through the warp the young man from Dryad assumed the form of microwave radiation and flew across the cavern. His senses were stunned by the Shadowmancer - where Denal would usually have an awareness of mass and the vibrations that denoted texture and colour, where the Shadowmancer stood was a void, an absolute absence of anything at all!

Even deep space wasn't that empty to his altered senses... The young man from the long dead world was shaken. To add to the confusion the spear in the dark mage's hand appeared to be the opposite - it shone with a density of energy that Strobe had only seen before in Q-Drive engines on space faring crafts. Whatever the spear was it was obviously immensely powerful!

And as he watched the spear seemed to pulse and the air around them became something like a solid. His senses informed him of a weave of energy that descended upon them though he had difficulty focusing on exactly what it was. Strobe realised that the Shadowmancer must be using the spear to cast some sort of spell as magic played havoc with his senses when he was in energy form. Knowing that he should report back to Chameleon Boy, Denal tried to fly back to his teammates but the mystic barrier that the dark mage had erected to protect itself from Ayla and Garth's lightning attacks repelled him. The young man in the microwave energy form bounced between opposite sides of the shield until he realised that he couldn't really move away from this immediate area.

<Reep, I'm stuck inside the Shadowmancer's shield... what do you want me to do?> The message echoed in his mind. Denal was fairly certain that meant the message was bouncing off the dark mage's shields.

If he had been in his corporeal form Strobe would have taken a deep breath to calm his nerves... As far as he could see, he was trapped inside a magical dome with one of the deadliest mystics known to the Legion.

Try as he might, at that moment, the young man from Dryad realised they had only been here for seconds and he couldn't remember what his training had taught him. He was so used to the freedom that his abilities gave him that the sudden entrapment badly shook his confidence and he was desperately doing everything he could think off to stop from outright panicking!

As he looked about he saw Phantom Girl phase through the floor, and despite this Denal felt too scared to move as she tackled the villains below.


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Phantom Girl slowly phased the top of her head through the floor.

She could see she was only a feet away from the person in the dark cloak with the beaked mask, and ten feet away from Esper Lass. Thankfully neither noticed her as she surreptitiously spied on them. Esper Lass was one of the few villains that could negatively affect Tinya in her phantom form so the team leader knew she needed to be dealt with quickly and firmly. The other person could be dealt with after Meta Ulnoor was safely cuffed...

Tinya slipped back into the ground beneath the villains and estimated where Esper Lass was standing. Tinya flew up out of the ground. She couldn't have picked a better spot as she phased through the psychic villain, snapping her concentration. As Tinya held cuffs in both hands she swiped them towards Esper Lass, catching the psychic as she fell backwards. And before she could hit the ground Phantom Girl turned on the hooded being that stood close by. As she flew towards him she felt dizzy and her vision started to fade.

"Bgztl Flu can be deadly to your kind Tinya Wazzo." A man's voice spoke out from behind the mask, before he started to laugh. The Legion leader was unable from stopping herself from throwing up as she tried to stand up from her knees. Tears were streaming from her eyes as she struggled, her muscles suddenly weak.

"They call me the Plague Doctor miss Wazzo, and I've been so looking forward to meeting you and your team." He reached out to touch her face and as he did Tinya caught a glance of his alabaster white skin between his black gloves and sleeve. She knew that this had given her some clue about him but at that moment her attention was fully on violently vomiting.

"I'm going to enjoy spending time with you." The Plague Doctor said happily as he stroked her hair.

"Enough!" The Shadowmancer said, its voice echoed around the hall as it stood up from its throne.


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Ooh nice battle Harbi, the best kind - everyone had a role to play based on their unique talents and abilities, some good fight scenes, and upped the ante. really excited to see more.

And a Somahturan villain, about time!

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I'm with IB, this is great so far! I like how Cham was smart enough to figure out there was an illusion but the bad guys in turn were smart enough not to rely on the illusion completely! Also enjoyed Cos flinching; I figure it's like getting a jump scare watching a movie, even though you know it's fake you still instinctively respond like it was a real threat.

Strobe having a bit of a freak out makes sense as well, as I imagine he would probably have come across very little if anything that could affect him in energy form before!

Plague masks are creepy/awesome as hell, and putting a Somahturian in one is such a brilliant idea! I'm jealous I never thought of it first! laugh

I gotta say, Southern Lights grows on me more every time you use him....I really appreciate the effort you have made to have his sorcery feel distinct and not at all generic smile

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Thanks guys, appreciate your kind words.

Yeah, we're well overdue a Somahturian bad guy, so thought it was about time I added one.

Raz, I have some plans for Strobe, bless him for all his power he hasn't had enough on the field experience yet to feel confident against something like the Shadowmancer. And I've sort of kind of worked out the differences in the magical abilities of the various mystics on the team, and will be introducing something else that's entirely new in the next arc when the team go after Sa Lok and the Dominion.

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Even before the Legionnaires stepped through their warp, Grachdashg and Narankachg, the twin Khund cyborgs had activated their invisibility and were making their move.

With the announcement that a Legionnaire was above on the cages then the appearance of those dragons that chased the War-Wolf's lycanthropes around the cavern it was obvious that they would soon have to deal with a single damned hero! The twins were motivated by money, pure and simple, not revenge or psychopathic impulses like the majority of their team appeared to be. And if there was no chance at securing a decent payout then they didn't want to be a part of this. knew it was time to make a hasty exit.

Shwarashawak, the Dishpan that had been transporting them on missions for the Shadowmancer, was at the other side of the hall, floating beside the dark mage. Without a word the two cyborgs were making their way towards the warpsmith. They would try to persuade it to open a warp to somewhere that the twins knew the lay of the land by saying they were on an urgent mission for their dark master. If that didn't work, they had enough weaponry amongst their cybernetics that they could persuade it in other ways, of that they were certain.

The Legion's warp opened in the middle of the cavern and chaos erupted around the twins.

Electricity arced through the cavern and fiery blasts of plasma followed throwing the whole room into stroboscopic relief.

The twins ran as fast as they could towards the warpsmith. They had just made it to the side of the Gil'Dishpan when the Shadowmancer threw a magical barrier between the Legionnaires and itself.


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First Base:

Thunder - Deputy Leader, Cecelia Becks of 21st Century Earth, immense strength, speed, indestructibility, space flight, wisdom
MWindaji - Gahaji of Kiringyaga - super tracker, carries the Ruby of Life allowing tactile transformative magic
Kid Quantum - Jazmin Cullen of Xanthu - creation of temporal quantum bubbles, flight
Polar Girl - Mel Lassar of Tharr - cryokinesis
Spoiler ii - Gord Eno of Naltor - precognition, specialising in short range visions for combat situations

Newly promoted from Academy student to full membership (Mentor in brackets):
Triple Nova - Elthur Mundo of Carggg - split into three separate bodies, each with either enhanced strength and durability, increased speed and reflexes, or laser vision (Thunder)

Support staff:
Henry - Anti Lad - Spatial warp controller


Henry gave a knowing smile.

The holo-man of the 75th century was renowned for being inscrutable, and over the last year and a half there had been calls questioning his loyalty to the team but Tinya had very firmly put an end to those conversations. And still, when he smiled and there was someone present to wonder what he found amusing it often led to rumours and speculation... currently, the holo-avatar stood in both First and Second Bases alongside the teams that Mon El and Thunder had called together. Henry didn't inform the teams present that the Legion's agreement with the Gil'Dishpan Warpsmiths would lead to an increased understanding of the strange technology that these unique methane breathing aliens used over the next century and would ultimately lead to the creation of the warp technology he used.

And Henry certainly didn't mention that he could easily have opened his own warps into the Shadowmancer's lair - history had to be followed after all, even if it did inconvenience the team from time to time. There would be ten or twelve seconds between the warps as the Gil'Dishpan used their abilities to fold space... more than enough time for history to be writ.

Henry's small smile did not go unnoticed.

Triple Nova had heard stories about the holo-man even before joining the Academy on Home Base, and like many of the team he was intrigued. Rumour had it that Henry was here to help lead the fight in some temporal war that the Senior Team knew was coming and that's why they had been building up a bigger team in the last year and a half... Whatever the truth was, Elthur would be telling the other newly promoted teammates when they got together about the expression on the spatial warp controllers face, as any news about Henry, no matter how slight or tenuous, was always a great conversation piece.

"Ethur, you're up front with me." Thunder said to the young man from Carggg, breaking his reverie. The Gil'Dishpan warp began to open up before them, taking a few seconds to completely form.

It felt as if they were being squeezed through the hole in space/time, Triple Nova thought - not nearly as comfortable as Henry's instantaneous transportation's.

As they stepped out they found themselves in a massive poorly lit cavern...


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Thunder tore through the warp ahead of the team and immediately saw that the group that had preceded them were not managing the situation well. Lightning Lass and Lightning Lad were blasting almost randomly in front of them roughly towards where there was a magical barrier - she assumed the Shadowmancer was behind it. Meanwhile, Chameleon Boy was struggling against several werewolves and Solar Gorilla was firing off bursts of energy in every direction. Most worrying of all, Saturn Girl appeared to be semi-conscious on the floor amongst them. Around the group were a dozen or so werewolves that were being held at bay by the ambient electricity and heat though the team seemed oblivious to the threat they possessed.

From Thunder's side Triple Nova unleashed a volley of laser vision blasts at the far walls.

<Elthur! What are you doing?>

<The Wolves! There are so many of them...>

<No, it's an illusion. I'll deal with it, stop blasting and save your energy> and with that Thunder was gone in a blur.

In the next few seconds, as her teammates made their way through the warp, Cece blurred as she flew around grabbing the werewolves she could see and aggressively threw them towards the far wall where they crashed into a heap.


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M'Windaji was next through the warp, with Kid Quantum flying above his head and Spoiler at his side; Polar Girl brought up the rear.

It appeared to them that they had walked into a werewolves den, as dozens of the creatures ran at them. Jazmin threw up a wall of quantum energy before them but the werewolves ran through it unfazed by her barrier. Polar girl stepped forward and slung a sheet of dark ice across the floor but the wolves toenails were sharp enough to dig in and keep them upright.

Spoiler and M'Windaji stepped forward, both with raised fists, ready for their attackers...

Gord Eno spoke softly, "This isn't what it appears..." He put his hands down and stepped forward as a werewolf pounced. it passed through him before it turned towards Polar Girl and growled, showing huge curved teeth as it did.

"It's an illusion... Gahaji can you use your tracking skill to see if there are actually any here?" Spoiler realised that he was technically the most junior Legionnaire present, but knew that M'Windaji was the one member of this team that would be able to work through the illusions around them.

"There's... oh, none nearby, not one. I can sense some over there..." He pointed to a far wall, unaware that Thunder had just slammed a dozen into it as she eliminated the threat.

"Okay, so what do we do now?" Polar Girl asked as she nervously looked around - her senses were telling her that they were surrounded but she knew intellectually that there was nothing there.

"Gahaji, where is the other team? Take us to them. There's strength in numbers, guys..." Jazmin said as she looked around the cavern while floating above the group. To her eyes they were in a pretty desolate cavern with dozens, if not hundreds, of werewolves running around them.

The four Legionnaires tentatively made their way towards the team that had arrived before them - all the while resisting the urge to tackle the werewolves that their senses told them were swarming around them.


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Phantom Girl - Team Leader, Tinya Wazzo of Bgtzl Dimension - intangibility

Newly promoted from Academy student to full membership (Mentor in brackets):
Strobe - Denal Lort of Dryad - assume electro-magnetic energy form (Chameleon Boy)



Titania stomped her feet.

"I demand you let me out there to claim my kills!" She yelled.

The Shadowmancer considered the muscular assassin's words and nodded. The magical barrier that the dark mage had erected around them split and a route out appeared. She started towards it without another word, her concentration now fully on the Legionnaires that had appeared in their cavern and who she was planning on targeting first.

Strobe saw this happen from above and knew it was time to act. The new Legionnaire was terrified but his training kicked in and he zapped down to the struggling Phantom Girl. The Plague Doctor had backed off from her and was standing with his back to the sick team leader as he surveyed the Legionnaires on the other side of the barrier. Denal changed from microwave energy to raw electricity and struck at him, knocking him to the floor, the Somahturian's black robes burst into flames from the strike. Strobe assumed his corporeal form and dashed to Tinya's side.

"Hold on!" Strobe hissed as he put his arms around her torso and willed his flight ring to carry them out of the opening that had appeared in the barrier as fast as it could carry them. He heard a yell behind them but didn't stop to look back. They tore through the crack in the barrier as it closed and landed with a crash on the floor just on the other side of it.

As Denal looked up from the floor the assassin called Titania glared down at the still sick Tinya and him.

"Well, well, well... I don't know who you are boy but am grateful you brought that bitch to me. If the Plague Doctor won't finish the job then I claim her as my kill. And you as well..."

The powerfully built assassin gave a wicked laugh as she reached down towards the Legionnaires.


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More good stuff Harbi! you write some great fight scenes, love seeing Legionnaires being competent, creative and intelligent.

Also good villain characterization, with the twins being out for money and smart...

and nice tidbit re the Gildishpan warps being the future basis for Henry's. Plus his mysteriousness.

Oh, will Strobe accidentally kill the Plague Doctor by setting his robes on fire (not on purpose of course)? I can imagine one of the senior team telling him t be more careful...

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I love the Gil'Dishpan warps being the forerunner of Henry's portals and how he set that up so neatly! I also really dig the aura of mystique around him and the newbies gossiping about why he's there...to be honest he's the one character I always half-expect you to pull out a secret "I was manipulating you the whole time" card myself so it makes sense to me that there would be rumours going round about him laugh

Nice work by Strobe, and I like that he's going up against one of the Super-Assassins! I don't really see Titania being a threat to him but let's see how he reacts!

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The Gil'Dishpan warp opened in front of the twin Khunds.

They knew it took several seconds for the warpsmith to fold space so the two points, many light years apart, connected. Their frustration would have showed clearly on their faces had they been visible.

Lightning Lord and the Silver Slasher had gone on a mission to Rimbor to collect another victim for the Shadowmancer to feed upon. They were expecting the mission to take a while as the person the dark mage had asked for was in hiding after recent Legion activity on that world. Instead, 15 minutes after they had left they had been contacted and told to return to their underground cavern where the Shadowmancer fed.

The telepathic message from Esper Lass included an image of Legionnaires invading the Shadowmancer's lair - including Mekt's damned brother Garth.

Mekt Ranzz crackled with electricity as he strode through the warp, eager to bring his brother down. If he could take care of his damned sister in law as well... behind him, the Slasher had not even left the warp tunnel when she felt something brush past her. She was becoming used to how uncomfortable the Gil'Dishpan's warp were so she did not investigate. She just wanted to kill some Legionnaires. She may not have caught the being the dark mage was after, but that didn't mean today would be a write-off... she clicked her clawed fingers together in anticipation, she knew this was the opportunity she had been waiting for: it was the time to make her name as an assassin of note as she dug her claws into as many Legionnaires as were stupid enough to face her.

As the warp spun around them the Silver Slasher wasn't aware that two of her new teammates had taken the opportunity to run away from a confrontation with the Legion. She would have been disappointed at their cowardice but felt happy that it meant statistically she was now likely to kill more of her hated enemies.

The twins didn't care, as they stepped through the narrowing end of the Gil'Dishpan warp onto Rimborian soil, they knew they had escaped and were now free to build a team that matched their own needs.


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Thunder flew around the cavern smashing any werewolves she could see into the walls, before turning around and taking a few split seconds to gaze across the whole cavern.

"Got you!" she muttered to herself as she flew towards the War Wolf and Mr Chime. The two mystics were stood thirty yards behind the first group of Legionnaires. The War Wolf saw her coming and was in the process of erecting a magical barrier as she punched him on the chest, hurling the rogue magic-user across the cavern. Mr Chime, concentrating on the glamours that had so many Legionnaires at a disadvantage, looked aghast as Cece slipped a set of incapacity cuffs onto his wrist. The illusion caster fell face first onto the floor. Thunder didn't try to catch him, instead she took flight again and headed towards the War Wolf.

The mystic assassin was struggling to get to his feet, clearly dazed but resilient enough that he was still conscious after her blow and with enough awareness to know that if he stood any chance of coming out on top in this situation he needed to get up. Thunder flew straight towards him and at the last second, she swung a hand down, gouging her fingertips into the rocky floor of the cavern to send a spray of small stones and sand into the War Wolf's face. Cece was wise enough to know that magic users needed to concentrate to cast their spells. She wasn't going to allow the mystic assassin the opportunity to create any more of his lycanthrope avatars, or anything else for that matter.

As she expected, War Wolf flinched and took a stumbling step backwards as the small stones stung his face and neck. As he did Thunder snapped cuffs on his arm and left him to fall unconscious onto the floor.

"Right," she said to herself, "...enough with the staff, time to deal with the master of this place."

And with that Thunder turned around and flew as fast as she could towards the Shadowmancer. She rebounded off the barrier the dark mage had erected around himself and the team of villains he had assembled. After striking it for several seconds Cece took a second to consider her options.

"Shazam!" She whispered the word that transformed her from a mere mortal into a god-infused being and dived out of the way of the magical lightning bolt that carried her power. It crashed against the Shadowmancer's protective screen with an enormous flash of light and a deafening boom!

Thunder was violently thrown across the cavern and crashed into the wall at the other side.


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Dragonmage - Xao Jin of Earth - dragon magics
Southern Lights of Starhaven - spaceflight, magic user
Cosmic Boy - Founder and Headmaster at Home Base Academy, Rokk Krinn of Braal - manipulation of magnetic fields

Xao approached Rokk and Southern Lights from across the top of the cages.

The smile on Dragonmage's face was clearly a mixture of genuine happiness and relief. A small blue dragon danced in the air around him, its sinuous body undulated and spun.

"Guys... hi, this is Szenlong, he brought me here. I'm really glad to see you. Watch out for the cages, they drain your strength..." As Xao pointed to the cages that hung below them Cosmic Boy instinctively swatted at an illusionary attacker. The thin blue dragon swan in the air around the Braalian's head, mewling softly as it did.

<Rokk, Szenlong will help, you need to relax though> Xao sent across the telepathic matrix, unsure if the founder could hear them if they spoke.

<Okay... whoah!> The small dragon wrapped itself around Rokk Krinn's head and purred happily as it's long face peered down into his face.

"Ah... oh hello Szenlong, thank you... umm, well this is weird." Cosmic Boy looked around at the cavern as the illusions faded. He reached up with one hand and gently stroked the dragon's head, it purred louder in response.

"He likes you Rokk." Xao said with a smile.

"Nice dragon... Right, let's get these folk's free." Cosmic Boy gave a small smile as he spoke, his face though was serious - he was clearly a man on a mission! "Southern Lights, you said you can help them when we release them, Xao can you assist him while I lower the cages down?"

As the Braalian used his abilities to snap individual chains above the cavern and pry open open the cages as he lowered them to the floor below, the two magic users swooped down to free the captives within. Xao summoned several dragons that prowled around them, keeping them safe from any attackers, while Southern Lights used the charm he had prepared to ease the captives out of the sickness that being confined had induced.

The first captive released was an older man. After Southern Lights had whispered his enchantment the man's eyes started to glow and he stretched his arms out. He thanked the Legionnaires, but before they could respond the second cage reached the floor and they helped an obese woman with long hair and pale green skin out of it. She was wearing rags and her face was tear stained. Again, Southern Light's enchantment helped. The third cage had just landed beside them when there was a blinding flash and a loud boom from the far side of the cavern...


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Chameleon Boy - Espionage Squad leader, Reep Daggle of Durla - shape changerLightning Lass - Senior Team member, Ayla Ranzz of Winath - electrical generation and manipulation
Kid Quantum - Jazmin Cullen of Xanthu - creation of temporal quantum bubbles, flight
Polar Girl - Mel Lassar of Tharr - cryokinesis

Newly promoted from Academy student to full membership (Mentor in brackets):
Triple Nova - Elthur Mundo of Carggg - split into three separate bodies, each with either enhanced strength and durability, increased speed and reflexes, or laser vision (Thunder)
Solar Gorilla - D'Nadka Endarooga of Dmansca - generate and project extreme heat and light (Lightning Lass)

Lightning Lad - Founder and former member, Garth Ranzz of Winath - electrical generation and manipulation



Solar Gorilla was scared... not that stopped her, but she was very aware that she could hear her own pulse, her heart was beating so fast!

The wolves that circled around them felt so real, and yet she had been told to ignore them. While she trusted Chameleon Boy's judgement that they were illusions, it was not as easy as she would hope to focus her plasma bursts towards the shadowmancer. Still, just in case there were a few real ones in the mix, she made sure she was radiating just enough heat to discourage anything - especially if furry - from getting too close without risk of catching fire. D'Nadka reckoned the Legionnaire's flight rings eco-protect function would help keep the team from harm of combusting.

She tried to keep an eye of the wolves at her side while resisting the urge to blast the fanged critters...

And suddenly they were gone! <Everyone okay? The illusions are down, let's get the Shadowmancer and his cut-throats> Ayla sent through the telepathic matrix as she flew towards the dark mage - she lit up the cavern with her electric blasts.

"Imra?" Garth had spotted his wife curled on the floor and broken off his attack to check on her. As he landed next to her there was a loud bang and flash of light from the other side of the cavern. Garth Ranzz cradled his wife in his arm to protect her.

<Watch out!> Chameleon Boy sent across the telepathic matrix. As his alter-form had slightly different senses to humans he had witnessed the two beings emerge from the barrier and knew it meant trouble: The Silver Slasher was tearing across the floor towards the momentarily stunned Legionnaires, while Lightning Lord strode behind her, his hands glowing with thunderbolts he was readying to throw.

Triple Nova took that opportunity to swoop down and try to land a blow on the Slasher, but her preternatural reflexes were too fast. She dodged and started to swipe at his exposed stomach with her deadly claws. Instead of disemboweling the young Legionnaire as she hoped a stasis field bubbled into existence around her. Kid Quantum had reacted quickly enough to save her colleague.

<that's a cocktail you're owe me Elthur!> Jazmin sent with a laugh.

<Thanks Jaz> His relief was clear in his reply. The young Cargggite was aware how close he had just come to a life-altering injury.

As Kid Quantum stepped into the quantum bubble to slap incapacity cuffs on the Slasher above them Lightning Lass had flown towards her brother, Triple Nova flew in formation at her side .

"Mekt, just give up. You know you're going to lose, so why get hurt too?"

"Oh be quiet little sister, you were always so preachy and dreary." As Mekt Ranzz replied an electric arc flashed from his hand and smashed Triple Nova out of the air to crash painfully onto the rough cavern floor.

"You'll regret that..." She said with a cold smile.

<Mel, D'Nadka, Reep, you all ready? On my mark... go!>

As Lightning Lass let loose a blast of blinding electricity towards her older brother the two newer Legionnaires used their abilities as well. Lightning Lord expected Ayla's attack but never saw the spike of extreme cold that struck him from the left or the burning plasma that struck from the right. At that moment, Chameleon Boy, in the form of an Ortarean Crystal Shrike, a many winged beast with an incredibly dense molecular structure and mass, flew over Lightning Lass to slam into Lightning Lord knocking him unconscious.

<So> Ayla sent across the telepathic grid as she flew down to her siblings side to slap cuffs on his arm, <is there anyone else to deal with?> Her tone made it clear she was in no mood for any nonsense.


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Phantom Girl - Team Leader, Tinya Wazzo of Bgtzl Dimension - intangibility
MWindaji - Gahaji of Kiringyaga - super tracker, carries the Ruby of Life allowing tactile transformative magic
Spoiler ii - Gord Eno of Naltor - precognition, specialising in short range visions for combat situations

Newly promoted from Academy student to full membership (Mentor in brackets):

Strobe - Denal Lort of Dryad - assume electro-magnetic energy form (Chameleon Boy)


Titania's powerful hand reached out and lifted Strobe up easily from the floor by the front of his uniform as she smiled ominously. There was a moment of utter terror as the new Legionnaire struggled to push himself free.

At that moment a loud boom and flash of light momentarily distracted them.

"Hands off..." Phantom Girl's voice was weak and ragged, but she had enough strength left to swing her hand around to slap an incapacity cuff on Titania's shin, before the team leader rather unceremoniously vomited down the assassin's legs. Titania let go of Strobe who immediately transformed into microwave energy and blasted the assassin in the chest, sending her spinning to the floor, where she remained as the cuff pumped her full of anaesthetics.

Denal quickly called for support across the telepathic matrix as he resumed his corporeal form next to the obviously struggling Tinya. He had received basic first aid training and a standard kit in a pouch on his belt but knew that there was nothing that could help there as the team leader dripped with sweat and appeared to have barely enough strength to crawl to her knees.

Spoiler flew across to the fallen team leader with M'Windaji just behind.

"Thank you guys... Tinya's real sick and I don't know what to do." Denal sounded his age as he spoke, a teenager expressing his worries. For all of his immense abilities it was clear the young man from Dryad was not used to dealing with people who were this ill. Phantom Girl had curled into a foetal position and was rocking back and forward, muttering incoherently.

"I'll try." M'Windaji touched the Stone of Life on the team leaders cheek. The Stone glowed a warm pink that slowly spread across Tinya's body.

"Ahh... You okay there by yourself there buddy?" Spoiler said, "we need to go help the others..." Gahaji looked up and could see what Gord was referring to.

The Shadowmancer had dropped the magic barrier and was making his way towards their teammates. M'Windaji had fought against the dark mage before and was shocked to see that this time the Shadowmancer was at least thirty feet tall with a glowing spear in its hands that flickered ominously with eldritch energy.

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Hey guys, thanks for your kind words above. Apologies for the delay getting these posts to you but things have been crazy busy - no rest for the wicked, eh?

Anyway, next Thursdsy i definitely have some time so GL I'll catch up on your fic (don't think I'm behind on any other... let me know if I am).

Next time, Mon El to the rescue... or perhaps not.

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More great stuff, Harbi!

I think we will see those Khundian twins again eh?

Love the differing motivations - Slasher wants to be an assassin, while Mekt is driven by hatred of Garth and Imra.

I'm loving Thunder, so wise and crafty. Ah, the old "using the magical lightning as a weapon!" trick!

Nice take-down of Mekt! teamwork wins!

Looking forward to what comes next!

(and don't worry, I think you're all caught up on my and Omni;s fic - though Gaseous Lad has had some new stuff too!)

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Ok, whew! Finally read through the entries from September through today - I had been avoiding so as to not get distracted from my own stuff, so now I'm finally catching up!

I have some notes that I took as I went along for the big bits that stood out to me:

pH Zero is a great character. Excellent job with his speech cadence and style. Maybe it's because I'm a parent, but I'm finding myself very focused on Imra's story and the hunt for Garridan, as well as what the heck Mekt is up to.

I LOVE the idea of a character named Tesseract with those multidimensional powers.

Wow! Xao to the rescue? The bits with him are really intense and well paced. I really like seeing him in a heroic mode.

Southern Lights - He's from Starhaven so I'm automatically a fan. smile

The big fight - I am a big fan of the uncertainty of what exactly the Legionnaires are experiencing due to the illusions. The Shadowmancer is pretty badass.

Poor Strobe! It sucks being in a situation where you freeze. Glad he's able to snap himself out of his funk.

Ah, the Plague Doctor. Very creepy visual image indeed. I love it. It makes sense that Drura isn't the only one to go offworld, and to have a "negative" version of her is great.

I'm really curious about where you're going with the Khund twins.

I'm glad that Szenlong has survived all this craziness. The dragon's journey has been interesting to read.

Nice cliffhanger with Tinya being out of action and the Shadowmancer advancing. He's collected a nice little legion of his own, hasn't he?

This is great stuff! I'm enjoying this a lot, Harbi!


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Thunder was the MVP this time around, I really like the magic thunder trick!

I liked Rokk's reaction to Szenlong as well, and Ayla not having any of her brother's guff!

Those Khund twins are cool, it'll be fun seeing how they pop up again!

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Second Base:

Mon El - Senior Team member, Lar Gand of Daxam - incredible strength, speed, stamina, senses, laser vision, space flight, invulnerability
Glorith of Zerox - manipulation of magical energies
Lexikon - Princess Daheenisha of Tamaran iv - enhanced speed, strength, durability, flight, omni-linguist
Babbage- I-45ENG/Nth Series, of the Robotica Confederated Worlds - strength, durability, internalised weapons, hyper awareness and analytical skills.

Newly promoted from Academy student to full membership:
Non - negative energy being - spaceflight, speed, alter own dimensions and density, explosive touch, limited telepath

Science Police meta-squad seconded to Legion World Second Base:
Magno - Science Police Officer Dyrk Magz of Braal - manipulation of magnetic fields


Mon El took several deep breaths.

His team would be the last to be warped into the Shadowmancer's base and he wondered if there would be much for them to do. Thunder and Phantom Girl were both very competent so it was likely that their teams would quickly deal with any issues they found. Still, he thought to himsilf, anything could happen in the thirty seconds or so between the first team being warped across and his team joining them.

Glorith had wrapped a hair around fingers of each of the team, assuring them that this would help protect them against any direct magical assault. Her facial markings glowed ominously as she waited for their warp to take them to the Shadowmancer. Mon El remembered how she had reacted the last time the team had met the dark mage - she had been particularly upset, calling it an abomination. There was obviously something about the Shadowmancer that triggered the usually meek sorceress, but right now Lar Gand's thoughts were on centring himself before the confrontation and clearing his mind of any extraneous thoughts so he could react with maximum efficiency.
Magno had been tasked with helping Cosmic Boy release any prisoners they found, alongside Non. The young SP had tried to hide his disappointment though nodded when Mon El gave him the order. Mon El and Glorith led the team through the warp, with Babbage and Lexikon close behind. Magno was behind them with Non to his left. The warp was nowhere near as comfortable as Henry's though none of the team complained as they stepped into it... They could sense the cavern ahead of them and heard a loud boom as the warp started to open.

As the veils thinned between the reality within the warp's structure and the place where they wanted to be the team were aware that the Shadowmancer was in a cavern and their teammates were struggling to blast it due to a magical barrier. As they watched the Shadowmancer dropped its protective screen and appeared to grow to colossal proportions, the glowing spear in its hands grew with it, before the dark mage advanced on their teammates.

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Mon El - Senior Team member, Lar Gand of Daxam - incredible strength, speed, stamina, senses, laser vision, space flight, invulnerability
Glorith of Zerox - manipulation of magical energies


As had been agreed before they left, Mon El sped the young sorceress across the warp's event horizon into the cavern.

As the entered the cavern Mon El quickly scanned their surroundings. The cavern was easily half a klick wide and at least the same deep, with a ceiling over hundred feet up from the floor. there were sections that appeared to be sleeping quarters, a large table that could sit thirty, and a large empty expanse of floor. At the far side from the warp was a throne carved into rock and sixty or so cages hanging from above.

Mon El knew what that meant - the dark mage had been feeding again! And not thirty metres away, the Shadowmancer was stood, an enormous blot of darkness that appeared to lurch towards the Legionnaires that had preceded this team.

After dropping Glorith onto the floor close to their fellow Legionnaires, Mon El accelerated and delivered a massive punch to the underside of the dark mages chin. While the Shadowmancer paused and shook its head in reaction to this mighty blow, Lar Gand flew around it releasing blasts of heat vision towards his opponent. Electric arcs crashed against the dark mage alongside plasma blasts as Lightning Lass and Solar Gorilla continued their assault. The Daxamite had fought the Shadowmancer before and knew how deadly the dark mage could be so was not planning to wait and show any clemency. The Daxamite flew in to land another crushing blow but instead of toppling the dark mage as hoped the Shadowmancer lifted the staff in its hand and swatted the Legionnaire right across the cavern with shocking ease.

Mon El crashed into the far wall and slumped unconscious onto the floor.

Glorith cursed uncharacteristically as she drew in mystical manna from the surrounding space to fuel her magics. She knew that while the Shadowmancer held onto the Staff of Light they would be hard pressed to defeat it - the staff held the souls and vitality of the warrior sorcerers that had guarded the ancient artifact throughout the ages.

The young sorceress concentrated on creating a shield that protected herself and her teammates from the eldritch bolts of dark magic that the Shadowmancer was throwing towards them. At the same time it was vital that she summon the correct enchantment to separate the cursed shade from this realm.

The young sorceress knew she would need every ounce of her strength if they were to stand a chance of succeeding.

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Lexikon - Princess Daheenisha of Tamaran iv - enhanced speed, strength, durability, flight, omni-linguist
Babbage- I-45ENG/Nth Series, of the Robotica Confederated Worlds - strength, durability, internalised weapons, hyper awareness and analytical skills.


Lexikon took a deep breath as she followed Mon El through the lip of the Gil-Dishpan warp, readying herself for any confrontation they might need to face.

Ahead of her, Mon El flew at great speed and was already confronting a giant that appeared to be made from a twisting bruise of non-colour. The cavern walls flashed with light as the Legionnaires already on site struck out with their abilities as well but the hideous giant was advancing on them, for all their show of power. She could see Polar Girl creating a field of ice underneath the dark mage in a desperate attempt to cause it to fall but its every step melted through this trap. Kid Quantum was also clearly in some difficulty, straining as she projected a huge stasis bubble to trap the Shadowmancer.

Still, the dark mage advanced on the Legionnaires.

Lexikon momentarily wondered if perhaps Kid Quantum's abilities were working perfectly and the reason that the dark mage was advancing at a walking pace was because of the stasis bubble - which led to the worrying consideration that if, for whatever reason, Jazmin were to falter then the evil sorcerer would be on top of them in a split second.

Princess Daheenisha watched in shock as Mon El was flung across the cavern and knew immediately that she would not be able to physically cause the dreaded sorcerer any real harm, let alone stop him. The Tamaranean was clever enough to realise that if she couldn't physically stop their opponent herself then she needed to find a weapon that could. She glanced around and saw Titania unconscious not far from her colleagues and a little further the Silver Slasher lay sprawled out as well. Lexikon smiled as she swooped across to pick up the two villains.

Flying at rocket speed towards the dark mage the Tamaranean hurled the two assassins at the back to the Shadowmancer's knees in the hope that the force of the blows would be enough to knock it off balance. Titania and Slasher bounced off and fell to the floor with a crunch. The Shadowmancer appeared not to have noticed.

Babbage had analysed the threat they were facing and immediately computed that the Legion would be unable to physically defeat their opponent using their current tactics. That wasn't to say the dark mage couldn't be distracted by physical attacks which could then be used to buy them enough time to formulate a winning plan.

A small compartment on Babage's forearm opened and a dozen mini-missiles flashed out. Half flew into the ground at the dark mage's feet while the others crashed into the ceiling directly above it. The explosions were synchronized perfectly. As the Robotican had calculated large rocks fell down from the crumbling ceiling onto the advancing dark mage as the ground beneath its feet tore open.

The dark mage shrugged and continued towards the Legionnaires.

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Phantom Girl - Team Leader, Tinya Wazzo of Bgtzl Dimension - intangibility
MWindaji - Gahaji of Kiringyaga - super tracker, carries the Ruby of Life allowing tactile transformative magic
Spoiler ii - Gord Eno of Naltor - precognition, specialising in short range visions for combat situations


Phantom Girl lay curled on the floor fifty metres away from the battle her team were having with the dark mage.

The team leader was still very pale, though the Ruby of Life in M'Windaji's hands had restored enough of her health so at least she no longer coughed or sweated uncontrollably, and had thankfully stopped vomiting. She had regained consciousness yet still looked very weak.

Their new teammate Strobe had just vanished in a flash of light as he flew off to join in the battle against the dark mage.

Spoiler turned to M'windaji, "You need to go help Glorith. I'll look after Tinya, get her to Southern Lights over there." The Naltoran pointed to the winged mystic, his face made it clear that he had foreseen this event.

"You sure man?" Gahaji asked as he started to stand up.

"Tinya's on the mend, so, yeah, I got this... go. Good luck!"

M'Windaji let go of Phantom Girl, who gave him a nod in acknowledgement of how much he had just helped her, and the tracker took to the air and flew across to Glorith. Spoiler smiled as he offered the team leader his hand.

"Ah'm.... still weak. That Plague Doctor did a number..." She took the offered hand and started to stand up.

"You'll be fine, we just need to get you across to Southern Lights." Gord Eno said.

"Can I help?" Chameleon Boy flew across to them, "I can't do much in that fight..." he indicated the battle between the Shadowmancer and their energy blasting teammates, "so thought I'd help Rokk get those captives free." The Durlan smiled as he extended an arm that changed into something like a padded sling. The Durlan gently picked up Phantom Girl and the three Legionnaires flew across the two hundred or so metres towards their colleagues busy releasing captives from cages.

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Saturn Girl - Founder and former member, Imra Ardeen of Titan, alpha-level telepathy
Lightning Lad - Founder and former member, Garth Ranzz of Winath - electrical generation and manipulation


As Imra regained consciousness Garth breathed a heavy sigh of relief.

"Hey, you okay honey?" Lightning Lad asked his wife as he took her hand to help her stand up. Imra ran her hands through her hair and looked around.

"Ohh... ah yes," she looked around and said, "Right... let's do this and get Garridan home. You help the team, I'll go get our boy, okay?"

"Yup... be careful, love you." Garth replied as he took to the air and scanned the cavern around them. The scene before him was chaos!

"You too." Saturn Girl said as she quickly scanned the immense space before them. She could feel Rokk straining to release the captives as quickly as possible. The team had arranged that once the prisoners were all freed they would call on the Gil'Dishpan to open another warp to take them to First Base. Dr Shakespeare and a team of medics would be on hand to receive them.

The Shadowmancer was striding towards the rest of the team and as much as they blasted at it, the dark lord didn't seem to be slowing down. The cavern ceiling exploded but even the falling rocks didn't appear to bother it as the dark mage shrugged them off.

When he was a teenager and in his early twenties Garth had loved the thrill of a good battle, the rush of adrenaline and the sure knowledge that his actions could be all that was between success and a potential catastrophic outcome. Now he was in his mid-thirties with children and a thriving business to run he knew that he no longer wanted that lifestyle. Playing with the kids was excitement enough for him...

As he flew towards Ayla, in amongst the flashes of energy, Garth spotted Mekt!

The elder Ranzz sibling was crumpled in a heap on the floor close to the Shadowmancer's feet, clearly unconscious. Without a second thought Garth swooped down and grabbed his fallen brother, dragging him to the side of the cavern and relative safety.

"Oh Mekt, what are we going to do with you?" Garth mused to himself as he checked on his older brother's pulse and breathing. The incapacity cuff was still on Mekt's arm where Ayla had put it; even though he had never used one before Garth knew to leave the cuff alone. So long as Mekt was asleep he couldn't hurt anyone else... Shaking his head, Garth turned back to the battle and took a deep breath before flying to join his sister and former colleagues as they tried to halt the Shadowmancer.

Saturn Girl had avoided the battle and flew a circular route towards the hanging cages on the other side of the cavern. En Route he saw Chameleon Boy as he helped Phantom Girl and the new Naltoran teammate Spoiler move towards the small team that were rescuing those that had been trapped in the cages. Imra understood perfectly why Reep would leave the fight to come across here: He would want to prioritise helping the dark mages victims. Reep Daggle had an almost pathological need to help those in poor circumstances which stemmed from his unmet desire to better the lives of his people left behind on the radioactive hell of Durla - it was something that had shone out of him when they had first met all those years ago and that urge was still strong.

Saturn Girl chased after them as they flew across the floor towards the lowered cages where they could see the winged mystic Southern Lights alongside Dragonmage helping the varied group of victims that had just been released.

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Dragonmage - Xao Jin of Earth - dragon magics
Southern Lights of Starhaven - spaceflight, magic user
Cosmic Boy - Founder and Headmaster at Home Base Academy, Rokk Krinn of Braal - manipulation of magnetic fields

Science Police meta-squad seconded to Legion World Second Base:
Magno - Science Police Officer Dyrk Magz of Braal - manipulation of magnetic fields

Newly promoted from Academy student to full membership:
Non - negative energy being - spaceflight, speed, alter own dimensions and density, explosive touch, limited telepathy


Magno and Non had flown across the cavern towards the hanging cages where they knew their colleagues were busy trying to release the prisoners and find the missing Garridan Ranzz.

Ahead of them they could see Cosmic Boy lowering the cages one by one down to the ground where the mystics were freeing the Shadowmancer's victims and offering aid. Behind them Magno could here a loud crunch which he knew, more through feeling than fact, was not good news for the team. It had sounded like someone had been slammed into the cavern's walls...

"Krinn, we're here to help!" Officer Magz shouted as they got close.

"Great, if Non can snap the chains we'll be able to lower these things much quicker... you up for it Non?" While the current headmaster of the Legion Academy asked, the negative energy being that had been his student until very recently flew at a line of six chains exploding them as its negative energy phased through them.

"Whoah there!" Rokk Krinn yelled as he magnetically took hold of the the half dozen cages that were now falling towards the cavern floor a full dozen metres below.

"If you hold 'em, I'll bust the captives out as they go down for the guys to help." Dyrk Magz offered.

"Good plan, thanks." Rokk nodded as he magnetically held onto the base of the cages that Non had just exploded free from their chains. Dyrk magnetically peeled the cages apart so by the time they had been gently placed onto the cavern's floor, those that had been trapped inside could easily walk out of them.

As the two magnokentics and the negative energy being worked together on the cages, Phantom Girl and the three other Legionnaires arrived. Saturn Girl and Chameleon Boy had years of experience and quickly helped the freed captives without needing to ask either of the mystics what was needed. As several of the released captives couldn't understand or speak Interlac Saturn Girl's telepathy helped ease the communication barrier.

Southern Lights turned to Dragonmage.

"Xao, our team needs magical support against that monster. We both know my skills are best suited here, while your... patron is better suited to deal with the dark one." There was a glint in the winged mystic's eyes that told Xao that his teammate from Starhaven knew about the Eternal Jade Dragon that infused the young sorcerer's frame.

"Yes.... yes, you are right my friend." Xao bowed his head solemnly and muttered an enchantment. The dragon forms he had created and released to protect them while they supported the freed captives all flew back towards him. As they reached him, Dragonmage began to glow and shimmer until the crystal green form of the Eternal Jade Dragon unwound itself from the space where Xao Jin had been standing. Szenlong chirped happily and flew to the side of the much larger dragon.

The Eternal Jade Dragon nodded once towards Southern Lights before turning to fly across the cavern directly at the Shadowmancer.

...............................


Glorith of Zerox - manipulation of magical energies
MWindaji - Gahaji of Kiringyaga - super tracker, carries the Ruby of Life allowing tactile transformative magic


The Eternal Jade Dragon roared its challenge.

Its voice was as much psychic as physical and every Legionnaire flinched at the noise.

The Shadowmancer stopped in its tracks and turned to face the flying serpent. In that second the dragon darted across the space between them, a pillar of white flames erupting from its mouth as it got close to the dark mage. The Spear of Right swung into the dragons path but as the point came close the great serpent spun out of its way and took to the air above, delivering another volley of its magical fires.

The dark mage reached out a hand and shadow-like tendril spun out from its fingertips to weave a web above it to catch the dragon. A small blue shape swam through the net and spun a sinuous dance in front of the Shadowmancers face spitting sparks of magic at it. Szenlong distracted the undead sorcerer while the Eternal Jade Dragon took the opportunity to tear the shadow net apart and resume its attack.

Not far away, M'windaji reached Glorith's side.

"The Ruby can shield you if you want to concentrate on blasting it." Gahaji said as he took hold of the sorceresses arm, holding up the enchanted jewel and concentrating on an impregnable barrier forming around them.

"Thank you." Glorith's voice was soft though her expression was one of intense concentration as she took several deep breaths. Her facial marking gave off a burning light as she released an incandescent bolt of magical energy that struck the Shadowmancer on the chest knocking it off balance. The dark mage was clearly shaken by the blast but straightened up and continued towards the Legionnaires.

Glorith drooped and took a deep breath.

"That spell... it should have been enough to release the shade from its dark path but now I fear that with the Spear of Light in its hand I will not be able to free the spirit from its curse. We won't be able to stop it!"

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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 9 December 21)
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Hey Guys, thank you for your kind words above, they are appreciated.

Raz - I'll review you latest two posts on Thursday when I have a bit more time, though loving what I've read so far - Dragonwing doing a Wolverine at the Hellfire Club on Mordru is an inspired choice

Next up, everyone dies! No, actually that's a lie but I enjoyed typing it (It's been a mad week and it's only Tuesday). but seriously coming up soon: Gahaji has a plan, the Shadowmancer will have a very unexpected ending and then it's party time for our gang!

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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 9 December 21)
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awesome, more!

Mon-El's team definitely had a lot to do smile I like this idea of sending teams in waves, with each having a specific task - your Legion is very competent and tactical

Scary thought, that Kid Quantum is already slowing the bad guy down!

good try from Lexikon! nice bit here showing each Legionnaire doing their thing, you do it beautifully - even the sentences "in passing" add to the color of the scene.

Nice bit with Garth and Mekt, mist be tough dealing with such a brother...

Also great insight into Cham's motivations!

always a place for duplicate powers, nice teamwork there. will Cos tell Non to next time, wait a bit/do more slowly what he did re loosening so many cages at once?

I just realized how many magic users the team has here! great stuff, and I also like them acknowledging that each sorcerer has a different specialty

Way to up the ante, Harbi! really looking forward to the resolution!!! I'm sure you will come up with an excellent twist!

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Yay, I have been looking forward to this! Some thoughts as I went along -

- the description of the Shadowmancer as "an enormous blot of darkness that appeared to lurch towards the Legionnaires" is very comic-booky, I can see it on the page in my mind's eye really clearly! Well done!

- Mon-El getting one-punched is scary on its own, but nothing says "we're screwed" like Glorith cussing lol laugh

- oh, I like "twisting bruise of non-colour" and the description of the cavern walls flashing with the light of everyone's powers too...you're on fire with the visuals, Harbi!

- another scary idea which is well executed is the way Lexikon wonders if the Shadowmancer is so overpowered that Kid Q's stasis field is actually working the way it's meant to but still just barely slowing him down...I liked the way you showcased her and Babbage using their wits as soon as they realised they were outgunned as well.

- Garth and Imra's thought processes were very in character...Garth protecting Mekt before entering battle rings true as much as the way Ayla interacted with him earlier, and mentioning that Garth has never used the incapacity cuffs is nice shorthand to show he's retired now; and Imra's thoughts about Cham's motivations seem like the kind of unconscious behaviour analysis that would just come naturally to her.

All in all, a nice mix of different characters and a good fight! Can't wait to see how it all wraps up!

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Thunder - Deputy Leader, Cecelia Becks of 21st Century Earth, immense strength, speed, indestructibility, space flight, wisdom
Glorith of Zerox - manipulation of magical
MWindaji - Gahaji of Kiringyaga - super tracker, carries the Ruby of Life allowing tactile transformative magic


Cece Becks had never experienced real pain while in her Shazam empowered form but, as she dug her way out from the rubble she was under she groaned to herself. The thunderbolt that she had summoned against the Shadowmancer's shield somehow had its power twisted from its pure purpose and reflected with force against her - and it had definitely hurt!

She burst through the fallen rocks from the cavern wall and quickly took stock of the situation. The emerald dragon that she had seen Xao turn into once before, when the Legion were in a desperate battle against her and her sisters while they were under her fathers curse, was wrapped around the Shadowmancer. It seemed to be a stalemate, even with the other Legionnaires flying nearby blasting their various energies at the dark mage as well. Cece was clever enough to know that this was unlikely to end well for her team if this stalemate continued for much longer as the Shadowmancer held an artifact that was rumoured to hold the power of over a thousand warrior sorcerers. If the dark mage were to fully access that level of magic the Legion would be quickly beaten.

In the distance she spotted Mon El unconscious against a far wall. Cece flew over to her Daxamite colleague as fast as she could and scooped him up in her arm before flying over to Southern Lights as the winged mystic helped the Shadowmancer's victims newly released from the dark mages energy sucking cages. The mystic from Starhaven was reputed to be adept at subtle magicks that included healing enchantments so she hoped he would have enough to spare their teammate. In amongst the dozen or so that had already been released Thunder saw that Saturn Girl, Spoiler and Chameleon Boy were there as well, helping out.

"Can you patch Lar up? We need him..." Thunder asked as she dropped Mon El at the winged mystics feet. Southern Lights looked tired but equally determined as he nodded. With that Cece was gone in a blur to tackle the Shadowmancer. Two seconds later the cavern echoed with the blow she struck against the back of the dark mages head.

Less than a hundred feet away from the dark mage M'Windaji clutched onto Glorith's arm.

"Keep trying Glorith, we can do this..." Gahaji said as he concentrated upon the shield around them.

Before them the Eternal Jade Dragon had wrapped itself around the Shadowmancer and was tearing into its shifting form with razor sharp claws. The dark mage struggled as the dragon's long tail had twisted around one arm forcing the hand with the Spear of Light away from the body, making it virtually impossible for the undead sorcerer to use the mystical artifact to strike out. Thunder continued to smash into the dark mage with her immense punches but it barely reacted to these blows. Lightning Lass, Kid Quantum and Solar Gorilla flew around the fight releasing their energies in an attempt to help.

"I fear for us... while that abomination holds the spear I am unsure if we can do this." Glorith said, her voice quiet.

"Is that spear really so powerful Glorith? Maybe we can attack it instead?" M'Windaji asked desperately.

"It is a vessel... it holds the power of the warrior sorcerers that have previously held it. It is a force for the Light. It should be used only in a just cause. The dark one fouls it with his touch..."

"So, can we get the Spear to ... I dunno, rebel against that monster?"

"No... whomever holds it can control it, it will do as it is commanded, though it was not created to work alongside the Dark. It will be corrupted if we do not get the dark mage to let go."

"Or..." M'Windaji mused. "Y'know what, I have an idea Glorith, sorry but I'll have to drop the shield." and with that the tracker from Kiringyaga leapt up into the air and flew away from his magical teammate.

<Legionnaires!> Gahaji sent through the telepathic matrix <We need to get the Shadowmancer to release the spear! That's what's making him so strong. We have to make the bastich let go of the spear!> and with that the tracker aimed himself straight towards the towering dark mage.


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Saturn Girl could see that the team on the other side of the immense cavern confronting the dark mage were doing little more than slowing it down.

Around her were twenty or so of the released prisoners, with another six cages just beginning their descent from the ceiling above. She hadn't seen her son yet but was certain that he would be free soon. Southern Lights had been restoring strength to the newly freed captives as they were helped from their cages while Chameleon Boy was scanning them with his flight ring to capture any medical data that might help the clinical team that were waiting for them. She could sense Southern Light's exhaustion as he continued to pour himself into the healing and rejuvenation spells that helped the former captives recover so quickly. Imra knew that magic always had a cost and she wondered how much the mystic from Starhaven would be paying later for his help here...

Spoiler, the Naltoran that had recently joined the team approached Imra Ardeen. His expression told her that he had something serious to ask.

"You need to read my mind to see my vision." Tbe pre-cog spoke directly.

Imra had always found Naltoran's thoughts to be tricky to read as their perception of the universe were not temporal-linear, unlike most sentients. Imra took a breath and allowed her telepathic senses to enter the young Naltoran's mind. As she saw Spoiler's vision she understood what she needed to do. Imra knew that her husband and the team required assistance... and as much as she hated asking these beings they just released from the torture of being caged to feed the dark mage for that assistance she also understood that there really were no other options immediately available.

<Please listen to me> She sent telepathically to her former teammates and the newly released prisoners, <We can hold the Shadowmancer but... what is that?>

Across from the group a shadowy figure appeared to materialise out from the air. Saturn Girl didn't know what it was but she could sense that this figure was clearly on the side of the dark mage. The figure held out its hands and two long blades appeared in them.

The prisoners were startled, some jumping back as they had previously seen what the small figure was capable of. Miasma was not in front of them for long as the negative energy being called Non swooped down from above and passed through the skeletal ninja's body exploding it in a dramatic burst of greasy looking mist.

<That being is now discorporated> Non sent as it swooped around the cavern floor searching for traces of the assassin.

Imra didn't wait to see if Miasma returned, instead she focused on what was needed to fulfill the prophetic vision that had been shared with her.

<I know you are scared but we need assistance, are any of you able to help us heal our colleague?>

Several of the former captives stepped forward while some shrunk back. Within seconds there were a group of seven or eight of the former captives, with Non floating just above them before Saturn Girl.

"What do you want us to do?" A large green skinned woman asked.

"Our teammate Mon El was knocked out but we need his strength if we're to have a chance winning this fight. Can any of you help Southern Lights heal him?" Saturn Girl pointed at the semi-conscious Daxamite.

"I use healing magic... let me help him." A small ageless rat-faced man said, his skin grey from the dark mage's abuse but he held head up, ready to assist.

"Me too. I can try." A second person said; while they looked to be a young teenager their voice was surprisingly deep and their body covered in tattoos.

"I'll do it as well..." A blue skinned young woman with pointed ears and four small eyes said as she moved towards the unconscious Daxamite.

And with that more stepped towards Imra offering their assistance despite only moments before being released from the Shadowmancer's cages.

"Thank you. It... it is truly appreciated." Imra could read their exhaustion and fear but they were willing, without a Legionnaires training or resources, to step up to this horrific challenge when it was needed. She knew she needed to rally them properly so their talents, whatever they were, could be put to best use.

Within thirty seconds the vision that had been shared with Imra appeared in front of her - Mon El was standing up, thanking the three mystics that had used their abilities to heal him from the blow the Shadowmancer had struck against him earlier. He looked around the cavern, desperately searching for something they may have overlooked that could give them an advantage.

At this moment M'Windaji's message cut across the telepathic matrix - the Legionnaires had to get the spear out of the Shadowmancers hand!

In a blur, the Daxamite flew across the cavern to join his colleagues in their desperate fight with the dark mage.

Imra had started to arrange the former prisoners into groups - those that could heal would help those being released. Those that were willing to help with the fight would follow Non and Spoiler towards the battle - though she insisted that they stayed behind the Legionnaires, looked out for each other and did not get too close to the fight to risk their own safety. Southern Lights flew towards this group and offered to lead them saying the three healers would be quicker than he was at helping anymore prisoners they released. Imra sent a quick telepathic thank you his way, well aware that the mystic from Starhaven was calm and sensible enough to not take this group on a suicide mission.

It was at that point that Imra saw her son Garridan curled up in a cage that was being lowered to the floor. She raced across to him and took the sleeping boy in her arms protectively. Her telepathy let her feel that he was in no pain or discomfort, only deeply asleep. Rokk Krinn gently floated down beside Imra as she placed her face in the young boys hair. His warm head smelled like the cold metal and rust of the cage he had been in but underneath she could still smell the soap she had used on him earlier that day.

"I've called for a warp from the Gil'Dishpan. We'll have him in the medi-bay soon." Rokk said quietly.

"Thank you Rokk..." And, without realising it Imra cried as she held onto her unconscious son.


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The Eternal Jade Dragon had wrapped its coiled body around the Shadowmancer.

Its enormous face was close to the dark mage's head and bursts of white fire erupted from the ancient serpents mouth. Shadow-like tendrils snapped up against the dragon, spinning it around as it desperately avoiding being trapped. In the midst of this, the small blue dragon called Szenlong darted around shooting sparks of magical energy against the dark mage. It was an epic battle that threw flashing lights and thunderous crashes around the cavern.

Thunder and Mon El both focused their attacked on the dark mage's hand that held the Spear of Light. Cece pulled against the thumb - almost half as big as her body, yet it morphed and shifted around her arms proving impossible for her to force away from the enchanted spear. Mon El, meanwhile, was raining down blows at hyper velocities against the undead sorcerer's fingers and wrist, his heat vision blasting repeatedly. The Shadowmancer appeared to be composed of some dark substance that split and crumbled but reformed as quickly as it was destroyed.

Around them, Lightning Lass and her brother threw bolts of sizzling energy, while Kid Quantum strained as she focused on slowing the dark mage with her stasis abilities. Flying close-by, Solar Gorilla's plasma once again erupted from her as she sent fiery bolts against the dark mage's hands. While they had been blasting at the Shadowmancer, Strobe had transformed into a concentrated form of microwave radiation and attempted to damage to Shadowmancer's arm from the inside... The grip on the Spear of Light never slackened. For all of the tremendous energy they unleashed against it, the dark mages skin appeared to simply fold around each blast somehow neutralising the destructive nature of the attacks.

The battle appeared to have reached a stalemate with neither side quite stopping the other.

There were yells from behind the fight and Thunder could see Southern Lights, Non and Spoiler leading a rag-tag group of former prisoners towards them!

The newly-released victims of the dark mage each used abilities to aid the Legionnaires - small sparking bird appeared that swarmed around the undead sorcerer's hand, bolts of green and red light flashed and, coils of a golden rope appeared out of the air and wrapped around the giant's fingers and attempted to pull them away to break the grip of the spear.

As Non flew explosively through the Shadowmancer's wrist there was a calamitous bang!


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When Gahaji had first found the Ruby of Life in a dusty box on Colu he had no idea what it was, only that his tracking sense had brought him to it when he had been searching for help to take down the cursed Daughters of Black Adam.

In the eighteen months since that day the young man from Kiringyaga had researched the magical stone and practiced using it, and as a result he now he felt fully aware of its power and also its limitations. So long as he kept hold of the stone it transformed anything he touched into whatever he willed, including the air around him to create shields. The transformation would only hold for about an hour or so. The only exception he had found was healing, that seemed to remain permanent. The Stone transmutational power seemed to be limited by whatever he could visualise.

Glorith had told him once that it was one of the Twelve Sacred Relics from Earth and was a powerful talisman in the hands of whoever used it, so it had to be under the control of the right person. Well, he had always thought that the Stone had been waiting for him to find it on Colu so had no doubts that he was the right person to use it... as far as he was concerned the Ruby of Life had decided that.

Concentrating hard, M'Windaji willed the mystic jewel to make him invisible to the Shadowmancer's senses and immune to magical attacks. He hoped it would be enough as he flew towards the towering dark mage. The dragon that he had once seen Xao change into was still wrapped around the towering dark mage but the struggle was not going the dragon's way as the dark mage fought back. The spear in its hand glowed and trembled as corkscrewed bursts of energy swept out from its point. Lexikon was quick enough to grab Kid Quantum and Solar Gorilla to fly them out of the way as a dark energy bolt smashed into the cavern floor close to where they had been. Ayla and Garth were both blown across the cavern by the explosion, though neither were knocked unconscious both were left reeling and stunned.

Gahaji cautiously flew low, swerving around the dark mage's feet as it stomped down towards Glorith. The young tracker was focused on the mental image in his mind so the Ruby of Life would keep him invisible and protected as he reached the bottom of the Staff of Light.

The magical weapon had grown as the Shadowmancer had expanded its size. M'Windaji could see it was easily forty feet tall and at least as thick as a full grown tree. Well, he thought, all the more to hold onto! And with that he got in close and wrapped both arms and legs around the shaft of the spear and willed his magic ruby to tell the mystical weapon to listen to the Legionnaire rather than the dark mage.

He then simply asked the spear to resume its natural size.

Later on, Gahaji was heard describing the experience as something like riding a massive roller coaster through an earthquake while being struck by lightning.


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As the Spear of Light shrunk to fit M'windaji's grip, the Shadowmancer lost the additional magical power it had given him.

M'Windaji immediately flew away from the group, putting as much distance between the Spear of Light and the dark mage as he could. All the while he kept thinking that the spear would be given to the Black Witch to hand back to the temple it had been stolen from as quickly he could get it to her. He really didn't want the power it offered, as much as he could feel it tingling alluringly against his fingers.

For a split second it seemed as if time had frozen for the Legionnaires before there was a flash of light and the spear was in Gahaji's hand. The Shadowmancer roared out in pain and fury. As the dark mage shrunk its body appeared to stretch and warp as spikes of its dark shifting skin grew and fell, and all the while the Legionnaires flew around it getting ready to strike if the undead sorcerer tried to attack them again.

Solar Gorilla landed on the cavern floor and took several deep breathes; she made sure to keep facing the dark mage in case it threw a magical zap her way, though she hoped she wouldn't need to either blast anything or run as she felt exhausted! Kid Quantum floated nearby and gave her new teammate a weak smile, there was no denying that Jazmin looked worn out by this battle as well. Ayla and Garth took positions floating above the shrinking dark mage, electricity still sparking along their arms and hands. Both looked angry and unforgiving; they may have been tired but they weren't going to allow that to stop them from blasting Garridan's kidnapper if it didn't surrender.

The Shadowmancer screamed in rage, spitting curses at the Legionnaires.

Glorith stepped towards the Shadowmancer reciting a spell that sounded like guttural cursing interspersed with tongue-clicking and whistling to her colleagues. Her eyes were fierce with determination as she held a glowing hand out. Whatever the young sorceress was away to do obviously terrified the dark mage as it howled and tried to scurry backwards to escape. Thunder and Mon El both landed behind it, blocking its escape. Triple Nova flew just behind them, his eyes glowing with unspent energy. The Shadowmancer looked around, desperate to flee.

It never got the chance.

The Eternal Jade Dragon reached down and with a single terrible chomp swallowed the undead mage whole!

The Legionnaires all gasped and looked on in shock.

The Eternal Jade Dragon stretched its neck upwards and began to glow and from out of this shining shape Dragonmage stepped forward. The glowing shape of the dragon vanished as the Legionnaire appeared. Xao Jin gave a weary smile towards his team and held up a strange small object that appeared to be made of shifting shadows wrapped inside an orb of emerald enchantment.

And before any of them could speak the holo-man called Henry popped into the air before them.

"It seems you have defeated the Shadowmancer and his Devil's Dozen as I can now reach you!" Henry gave a big smile to the Legionnaires. "Do you require me to open warps now?" He asked happily.


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Once again, thank you for your kind words guys, I say it ever time but they are appreciated!

Next up, the mystics visit Zerox, Tinya has a chat with Evolvo and there's an overdue party! Yay! Hpopefully get it to you by the end of the week.

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what an awesome bit, Harbi!

Go Gahaji, taking charge! what a rallying cry!

Go Non, just like Negative Man / Negative Woman of old eh smile nice visual

I loved the asking-the-captives for help bit, esp. as Southern Lights was feeling the strain. Also good point, that they don't have Legion combat training, so this whole thing must be kept terrifying for them indeed

Sweet moment of Imra finally finding Garridan

Awesome cavalry moment with reinforcements, including many of the freed prisoners! poetic justice, as the Shadowmancer gets hit by some of those kidnapped!

brilliant of Gahaji, thinking of using the Ruby of Life to control the Staff!

great ending, and still with teamwork as pretty much everyone had a part to play!

amazingly done, Harbi! looking forward to what;s next!

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Okay, so I finally got around to reading the post from the 11th - I have no idea how I missed this other than I've been doing a lot of food preparation at home when not at work.

Anyway - really great battle sequence, Harbi - I can tell that you took a lot of care to plot this out, giving the same even told from many angles. That Shadowmancer is a beast of an opponent to be able to toss Mon-El across a cavern and knock him out!

I like that people like Tinya are still spent from the prior encounter and can't bounce back. There's enough folks to handle both jobs, fighting off the opponents while also rescuing the prisoners - but it seems like the second group has the easier job!

Moving on to the part after!!


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This was a really good wrap-up, Harbi!

More specific thoughts as I was reading:

- I had stopped reading the Legion comic by the time Thunder came along, but she's one of my favourite characters of yours...I really like how she comes across as an experienced powerhouse who uses her brain!

- Imra getting the captives to help reminded me of that one scene in the Spider-Man movie where everyone in the train protected him...I really love that trope where the regular people stand up for their heroes smile

- aw, Imra and Garridan reuniting was so heartwarming...and I'm glad that it was Cos who helped it happen, it's a really nice way to show how close they are without beating us over the head with it

- Non is turning out to be quite worth watching in these encounters - first with Miasma, and then with this attack on the Shadowmancer!

- Mwindaji to the rescue! Glorith and the Eternal Jade Dragon were the ones who really impressed me though, Glorith and Xao are both usually such quiet achievers it's good to see them be the centre of attention!

Sorcerors going to Zerox should be interesting to see, and I am always up for a good superhero party!

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Half an hour later:

Zerox, the Black Witches throne room:


Dragonmage - Xao Jin of Earth - dragon magicsSouthern Lights of Starhaven - spaceflight, magic user
MWindaji - Gahaji of Kiringyaga - super tracker, carries the Ruby of Life allowing tactile transformative magic

The Black Witch - Mysa Nal of Naltor, ruler of Zerox, immense magical abilities

Szenlong - Spirit-Dragon of the Southern Seas


Dragonmage, Southern Lights and M'Windaji stood before the Black Witch as she sat on her intricately carved throne.

Glorith had joined them through Henry's warp to Zerox but left before they reached the throne room with a dwarven Khund called Kharlak. Before she left she said she had a separate task to complete first and that she would speak to Lady Mysa afterwards.she nodded towards her teammates and walked off along an adjacent corridor.

As the three Legionnaires were led into the Black Witches throne room they all felt a little bit intimidated.

Gahaji handed the Spear of Light to Mysa and bowed his head. He felt a momentary pang of something, almost like a loss but tinged with a sense of gratitude. He knew that somehow the magical Spear he had just given away and the enchanted Ruby he held onto had a bond and they had somehow created that feeling he would never fully understand. Gahaji didn't want to think about it. His tracking abilities came from magic and the stone he carried was magic and some of his good friends were magic-users and, as far as the young man from Kiringyaga was concerned that was about as much as he needed to know about the subject.

Mysa Nal thanked him, her voice sounded as he imagined honey would sound - soft, rich, sweet. She smiled at the tracker and handed him a chain in return.

"Place the Ruby you hold so tight upon this so you never lose it." She said. Gahaji was a little startled but did as asked and held the Ruby of Life up to the chain. The red stone fixed itself to a silver link it brushed against.

"If you ever fear the Ruby of Life is lost to you just call on it and it will appear on this chain around your neck." Gahaji placed the chain around his neck and thanked Mysa for her unexpected gift. Mysa smiled again before turning to Xao.

"Lady Mysa, this should be kept on Zerox..." The slim mystic held out his hands and in them was a small bottle-shaped object that seemed to be made from many layers of smoky swirling shadows surrounded by glowing emerald enchantments.

"Thank you, we will ensure it does not bother anyone again. This shade has caused enough trouble for too long..." Mysa picked up the small vessel between a thumb and index finger, as if handling a precious, or maybe poisonous, object. She snapped her fingers and the shadowy object was gone. Within himself, Xao felt the Eternal Jade Dragon's gratitude towards the Black Witch for removing the cursed shade of the long-dead Gemworld king from this reality. He was also fairly certain that Mysa had felt it as well.

There was a sense that as the object vanished the air in the throne room had brightened incrementally.

"And you... Southern Lights of Starhaven." The Black Witch nodded towards the winged mystic. "You kindly gave of yourself to help the prisoners of that foul shade. That soul-fed magic has a price so I believe in return you deserve this..." Mysa held out a hand and on her palm was something that looked like a small multi-coloured stick of cinnamon bark, no bigger than a matchstick that had been snapped and bent back upon itself.

"Silver top-root of Ambrosia! ...Lady Mysa, you know that this could kill me." Southern Lights looked genuinely shocked and took a step back.

"You gave so much of yourself today to aid strangers that you risk harming yourself. This will ensure your recovery. Do not worry child, it will not poison you. Not if you take it here within my sight. I swear this to you..." Mysa's voice was soft but firm. Her eyes flashed in challenge as the Legionnaire appeared to refuse her gift.

Southern Lights paused and was clearly considering his options for two long seconds before accepting Mysa's rare gift. As he plopped the small stick onto his tongue it immediately dissolved in his mouth and the weariness that had been dragging at his muscles and bones faded, all of the aches he had suffered since leaving the Shadowmancer's cavern, the fog at the edges of his senses and will all vanished. His eyes appeared to glow as he looked up into the Black Witch's face to give his thanks. In return, she gave him a small warm smile and nodded.

Szenlong swam in the air around the Legionnaires mewling quietly, sounding for all the world like a sulking child. Mysa looked towards the small dragon and tilted her head as if listening.

"Of course you can stay with them Szenlong, though only if you respect the Legion's ways... do you agree to that? You will live as the Legionnaires do with their mortal virtues and morals?" The blue dragon gave a sharp happy squawk and flew excited loops in the air leaving a glittering trail behind it.

"I do hope you wanted to take him back with you Xao Jin... it appears you and our friends in the Legion have impressed this young dragon." Mysa's expression made it obvious she was teasing Dragonmage.

"Why... yes! Yes I do," Xao looked excited at the prospect, though quickly regained a more respectful posture as he continued, "...and I promise we shall educate Szenlong in the ways of the United Planets and the Legion." Xao said, rather solemnly.

"It's agreed then. He will be your responsibility to integrate within the wider galaxy Xao Jin. He is a true Southern Sea Spirit-Dragon though so you must let him follow his sometimes capricious nature when necessary and always allow him to fly... and, no matter how much he begs please don't feed him fresh berries or fruit as that upsets a young dragons stomach." Again, the Black Witch smiled, her eyes twinkling in pleasure.

As Szenlong blew an irreverent raspberry towards the Black Witch for saying this, the three Legionnaires and the mystical ruler of Zerox all laughed.


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Four hours later:


Tinya had been given a preliminary all-clear four hours after reaching First Base's medical facilities.

Dr Shakespeare had insisted she resist active duty for at least 72 hours though was free to leave the medi-bay and resume non-strenuous duties. Phantom Girl had known better than to argue so thanked the teams doctor and made her way to her quarters.

Once there, she read the reports that had already been posted from the mission and was happy to see that every one of the Legionnaires that had joined her on that dreadful mission had been cleared from the medi-bay. As she scrolled down the hard-light page she was happy to note that the majority of the released prisoners had been given an acceptable bill of health and had been offered transit back to wherever they had been kidnapped from. She was disappointed though when she saw that Garth and Imra had left First Base and returned to Winath already. There was a note from Imra to contat her as they needed to talk, but Tinya realised that it would probably be bestto give them a day or two to get the kids settled and back nto their routine before initiating contact.

As she made her way through the hard light screens Tinya noted that Evolvo from Lallor was currently on First Base. She had forgotten that several of the Lallorian's mutants had been kidnapped... she decided not to waste the opportunity and sent a holo asking if the leader of the Heroes of Lallor would meet her in the senior team's meeting room in ten minutes.

Fifteen minutes later and they were discussing what had happened that day and how close they had come to not succeeding... Sev Tcheru was in full human form, for which Tinya felt grateful as she always found his hyper-evolved form to be a bit gross.

Evolvo asked Phantom Girl what the team team planed on doing now and she shrugged and said there were bound to be missions to run. He gave her a quizzical look before he spoke again.

"You know, on Lallor the threats we deal with tend to be less ...galactic in scope, but we always celebrate our victories. It's important, no?" The Lallorian mutant said.

"Yeah, you know we have on-going missions 24/7 so if we celebrated every victory we'd be having more parties than a frat house..."

"Your team took down an undead mystic vampire that, from what Glorith said, had been kidnapping and feeding off the life energies of people for centuries today Tinya. You're not telling me that was an everyday mission. You need to celebrate your victories or your team'll become tired and jaded."

"I'll think about it Sev." Tinya said, somewhat unconvincingly.

It was at that moment that a holo-message from Dr Shakespeare interrupted them. The large doctor's image smiled broadly as he reported that his team had finally discharged everyone that had been in the Shadowmancer's cavern that day, with only two former captives being moved onto more advanced care. All the rest, Legionnaires and prisoners alike had been given a clean bill of health. The doctor finished by telling the team leader that he had requested everyone that had been on the mission today have a minimum 36 hour pass so they could fully recuperate and, while he didn't directly name her, Tinya knew he was telling her that she needed to rest before going anywhere on Legion business.

"Thanks Kent..."

"Dr Shakespeare," Evolvo interrupted, "ah, hang on, please. I was telling Tinya that on Lallor we like to throw a party when we have a big win. Do you think it would help...?"

"Oh stars, yes! Without a doubt, yes! Since you asked Sev, my professional opinion is we've a team that are running from one life-or-death situation to the next and a party would be great for both morale and relaxation. That's a really good idea," Kent's holo saluted the Lallorian, "Just remember to invite the support staff too ...and, hopefully we'll see you and your team there too." And with that the holo vanished.

"Well then, that's decided." Tinya laughed, slightly embarrassed that she hadn't thought of the benefits arranging an official night of fun could bring to her team, "You'll bring your team and the kids we freed today, won't you?" Tinya asked Sev.

"Try to stop us." The Lallorian leader replied with a smile.

Tinya held her right hand up to her face and activated the communication function of her flight ring.

"Legionnaires and support staff. Today we stopped a mystical threat that has haunted our galaxy for centuries. As a thank you to you all I would be very grateful if you could clear time from your schedules to join in me in Shakes Bar on First Base at 2000 hours standard tonight for a celebration. Get your dancing shoes on folks, as I'm sure you all agree we deserve a decent party!"

After Evolvo left Tinya went to her bedroom and lay on her bed. She asked her alarm to wake her in 45 minutes and closed her eyes. She had only been laying down for a couple of minutes when another holo interrupted her.

"Phantom Girl, forgive my intrusion," an image of Gear appeared before her, "but I have some news you will want to hear."


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2000 hours, Shakes Bar, First Base:

Usually there would be no problem finding a space to sit in Shakes, but tonight was different.

It seemed the majority of the teams of active Legionnaires from all three Legion Worlds, the support staff, interns and a fair few of the more mature students were all together celebrating the defeat of the Shadowmancer and his Devil's Dozen as well as the rescue of over fifty individuals that had been kidnapped to feed the dark mage's strange hunger. The Heroes of Lallor alongside four of the five mutants that had been kidnapped had also arrived, each bearing bottles of fine Lallorian wine as gifts.

The music was loud enough to enhance the party atmosphere not quite too loud that it stopped people from talking. The lights went from frantic on the dancefloor to subdued in the two dozen or so cubbies and booths. The drinks and stims were flowing freely.

Phantom Girl received a loud cheer and applause as she entered the bar. Tinya smiled to everyone while they clapped and stamped their feet, and gave a low bow with a flourish to them in response.

As Tinya made her way through the crowd, she made a point to talk to Strobe to thank him for saving her and later, M'Windaji for using his magic Ruby to help heal her. Both were quick to say they were only doing what any of their teammates would do. She replied the same to each, "Yes, while that might be true, it was you that saved me. Thank you!" Both played down the praise but felt very proud of themselves for the rest of the evening.

Tinya made it her mission to talk to every student and team member that she could, if only for a minute or two, praising each as she did, before she danced for a short while. She hated to admit it but she was still not fully recovered from the Plague Doctor's attack so retired to her apartment long before she planned to. She was exhausted though knew that these moments of social interaction would carry the team over as they went into their next mission - she hadn't told anyone yet but Gear had reported that they had found a probable trace of their missing colleague Science Police Captain Tuk Shir of Daxam.

So, tomorrow or at the latest the next day, once everyone had recovered from tonight, and despite Dr Shakespeare's advice, Tinya planned to lead an espionage team into Dominion space to rescue their missing colleague.

Let them have their fun tonight, she thought, as things were most likely away to get difficult.


Dream Girl introduced her daughter Mathilda to the Ranzz's twin girls D'arcy and Dorrit, while Garth, Imra and Thom all looked on.

The booth the two families had commandeered was at the very back of the bar with a sound buffer put in place that stopped the music and noises from the crowds intruding on them. The four former teammates had their own bar-bot serving cocktails as they caught up with each other.

Ayla had taken Garridan - cleared by Dr Shakespeare in the medi-bay of having any harmful side effects after being captured - and Graym with her to find the tigerram they called Backlash. The boys had spent the majority of Rokk and Lydda's wedding with the great horned beast and were overly excited at the prospect of spending more time with him again. Ayla concurred with a big smile as she led them through the crowds. She was careful to keep hold of their hands which for once neither boy complained about.

Ayla and the twin boys were unaware that Mrruaw M'Nau knew they were looking for him and so was cautiously avoiding them, trying not to be seen while he stalked them through the crowd. The tigerram was rather hoping to give them a surprise when he eventually pounced out from the crowd. Backlash understood that human children could find being unexpectedly scared like that to be an exhilarating and fun experience...

Several minutes later when Backlash did eventually jump out at them with a roar, the boys screams caused a momentary panic amongst the legionnaires around them. Neither Garridan or Graym appeared to enjoy the experience, much to Mrruaw's confusion.

"Perhaps this wasn't the best time to terrify them, though usually they'd have loved it... good try." Ayla said to Mrruaw as she gave the boys a hug. The tigerram apologies profusely before offering to carry the boys on his back for the rest of the evening as recompense.

Graym and Garridan agreed.


Evolvo and Amp Girl were canoodling on a couch in a small booth near the back of the room not even attempting to socialise. Both were too happy to see the other without it involving some sort of emergency. Since they had been introduced at Rokk and Lydda's wedding they had both thoroughly adored the other, though due to work commitments neither felt they had spent enough time together. They intended to make up for that tonight!


Dragonmage made a quick appearance, though there were a lot of people suddenly paying him a lot more attention than he would usually expect. As a shy and studious young man Xao was uncomfortable with this level of attention. He realised that word had obviously gotten out about his transformation during the battle with the giant dark mage. The young mystic felt increasingly awkward so after about three quarters of an hour he made the excuse that he needed to check on Szenlong and left.


At one end of the bar Ferro and Gazelle had started an arm-wrestling competition.

The Khund was happy to take bets as her partner sat there flexing his impressive biceps. Andrew Nolan had assumed his human form and promised to stay in it while the competition was on. So far, he had won against two students, as well as Mindbender, The Science Police Officer Dyrk Magz and, Comet King. Ferro's body language told the story of how unbeatable he felt. Thunder casually sat down opposite Douglas Nolan and smiled. The crowd that had gathered around them cheered and jeered.

"Umm.... human form?" Andy said, suddenly dry mouthed.

"This is a human form, silly. It doesn't take a genius to see that." Thunder smiled beatifically as she answered.

"Ahhh.... okay." Around them, several people rushed to place bets with Gazelle, whose expression told Andy that the odds were very much not in his favour.

Thunder briefly excused herself and whispered to Gazelle, who looked startled as she nodded in response.

"Right then, shall we start Andy?" Thunder asked her opponent.

"Yeah, if we must..." He muttered.

"So, are all the bets in and we can begin?" she asked Gazelle.

The Khund nodded and announced that all bets were in and the match was away to start.

"Good, so, as you transformed out of your empowered form Andrew, so should I... shazam!" The crowd backed away in surprise as the magical lightning bolt transformed Thunder from her god-infused form to her natural state. There was a moment of silence around them before the crowd quickly tried to change their bets, but Gazelle was adamant that the bets were closed.

Cecelia Becks, the 72 year old human that called upon the magic lightning to assume her Thunder alter-form, laughed heartily as she put her elbow on the bar and reached across to take Andrew Nolan's hand.

"You just bet heavily on me winning, didn't you?" Andy said.

Cecelia Becks shrugged and laughed again.


Dr Joon Bai Mihn, one of the Lallorian mutants that the Shadowmancer had kidnapped, was talking to Drura Sehpt and Jacques Foccart when Kent Shakespeare and Jan Arrah joined them. The Lallorian had been a bit nervous visiting the Legion and had quickly scoffed four glasses of champagne in her excitement - something she would never usually consider doing.

Much to her later embarrassment, Dr Bai Mihn started giggling as Kent asked if she wanted a tour around their medical facilities. Jacques and Jan exchanged a sly glance and knowing smile at the Lallorian's obvious delight as Dr Shakespeare poured on his legendary polished charm.

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2200 hours, Shakes Bar, First Base


Timber Wolf, Shield, Jumping Jack and Wildfire laughed.

Brin and Laurel were talking to the tutors about training mishaps and unintentional comedic moments that they had witnessed, and experienced, while at the Legion academy. When Brin had attended it had been run by the Science Police and was not much more than a police training boot camp that didn't have much equipment that could handle his reflexes and strength, meaning he quickly had a reputation for breaking expensive training apparatus.

Brin was mimicking what he imagined Marla Lantham's booming voice and choice of expressions were when the bills landed on his desk. Drake was laughing so hard that several people from around them started to back away. This in turn made Laurel laugh louder, She didn't look as she stepped back, tripping over a chair and landing squarely on her backside, which set the Legionnaires and tutors into further hysterics.


Imra leaned comfortably against Garth's chest. Ayla had returned the boys to their parents and they were now curled up on the couch fast asleep. Thom and Nura were fussing the girls so the two founders relaxed and enjoyed the moment to themselves.

<I am so proud of the team today, Garth. Can you believe all of this is as a direct result of us meeting on that shuttle all those years ago?> Imra sent to her husband.

<I know, right? We'd have laughed if anyone had told us that one day we'd be happily married with kids while the team had expanded to need three bases. You know you were the real hero today though, if you hadn't got the Gil'Dishpan to agree to help...>

<That was the easiest part, Garth. And, to be honest, after seeing the fight I don't think I really miss the action anymore. Four children and a business I love is excitement enough for me>

<Oh... am I not exciting anymore?> He teased.

<Not tonight darling, I'm exhausted> she laughed out loud as she sent her reply.

<Yeah, me too... ah well. So, it must be time to go home and get these little monsters to their beds>

<Soon... Let's just enjoy being around our old friends for five more minutes darling, I might not crave the excitement like I once did but I do miss the people>


Friction sat between Ultra Girl and Polar Girl at the side of the dance floor.

The three young women had gone through the academy together and been made team members at the same time. While at Home Base there had always been an element of competitiveness between them, since becoming Legionnaires they had put that firmly aside to become good friends. They were having a laugh as Power Boy, yet again, showed the team why he was renowned as the worst dancer on any of the bases.

The big purple skinned man bumped into Retro, knocking him into Gas Girl. The three new Legionnaires laughed at his clumsiness. Gravity Kid sat down beside them, smiling as he casually apologised for his husband's lack of finesse.

"No need to say sorry Tel, we all know that what Jed lacks in skill he makes up for in raw enthusiasm." Friction replied with a wicked grin. Polar Girl and Ultra Girl hooted with laughter.


Triple Nova and Solar Gorilla were with a group of their friends from the academy telling them about the action they had seen that day. They underplayed just how scared they felt while in the Shadowmancer's cavern. When Strobe joined them the young man from Dryad was buzzing as he repeated the high praise Tinya had given him. This took the attention away from his two fellow new Legionnaires.

Elthur felt relieved, while D'Nadka looked around and casually stated she wished she knew how to dance. The Cargggite gave her a mock shocked look and laughed as he said "why didn't you tell me? C'mon, I'll show you."

Before she could reply he took her hand and led her towards the dance floor. Just before they reached it Babbage walked in front of them.

"Please excuse any perceived social error but this unit overheard your conversation and wishes also to learn how to dance. Can you extend your offer..."

"Yeah man, get your ass movin'!" Elthur replied as he pushed the Robotican Legionnaire onto the flashing lights of the dance floor.

For the next hour and forty-five minutes the pair of new Legionnaires laughed like children as they hurled each other and the Robotican round the dance floor. Their fears from earlier that day were well and truly forgotten.


Mon El and Shadow Lass left together after an hour and a half. Neither were really the partying type, and while they had enjoyed socialising with their teammates and catching up with Garth and Imra in particular, both the Daxamite and the Talokean had decided that they would much rather spend this evening with just each other.

Both knew it was long overdue.


Night Girl and Cosmic Boy turned up at the party later than they had hoped.

They arrived just as Garth and Imra were packing up their belongings to leave - all four of their children were fast asleep - Rokk felt guilty at not getting there sooner and he apologised to his friends. Imra telepathically reassured him that it was fine, they would see him soon no doubt, as Garth teased him for being a rubbish friend and god-parent. The two men laughed and hugged before Garth called for a warp to take the Ranzz family home to Winath.

"So... guess that means I get a dance?" Lydda said, her expression as teasing as Garth's had been. She was well aware that her husband was actually a rather decent dancer though he pretended he didn't know what he was doing. Rokk mock rolled his eyes and huffed his breath out dramatically before smiling at his wife and taking her hand to join her to the dance floor.


Dawnstar had not planned on staying at the celebration for too long, but had spotted Southern Lights through the crowd.

She decided it was time to follow some advice Thunder had given her. The tracker from Starhaven approached the mystic from her homeworld and said hello. Southern Lights smiled warmly and asked if she would like to join him. She smiled as she took the stool next to his.

She asked how his mission had gone and after that the conversation went surprisingly easily. They discussed their lives as Legionnaires with the young mystic asking the more experienced tracker for advice at several points in the respectful way of their home culture, before the conversation moved onto other broader topics. Without noticing, the two winged Legionnaires spoke for almost two solid hours, enjoying each others company more than they had both hoped.

As the music grew louder and the crowds became more energised Southern Lights asked Dawnstar if she wanted to join him for a little flight off the base, into the night outside.

"All things are clearest underneath the stars." He said, quoting a saying from their home planet that indicated amongst the natural environment one's thoughts would become clearer.

The left side-by-side and arm-in-arm.


The interns called Imp Master, Mosaic and Tectonik were stood close to the bar. None of them were really 'party people' but like most young adults they didn't want to miss out by missing out on a large social gathering. There were the political reasons, for instance having the Senior Team see them as sociable team-players, but more motivational to them were the social reasons.

None of them wanted to miss out on any gossip or if they were especially lucky, romantic opportunities that might arise.

The three young men had entered into a bit of a drinking competition and for the most part were unaware of what was going on around them. Instead they were discussing the missions they had been on and, overall, how disappointed they felt. None had experienced the thrills and adventure they expected, instead they often felt like fifth wheels. Without meaning to, they had slipped into a negative conversation loop where they all complained rather loudly about how they hadn't been given what they felt they deserved.

Nor far away, Duplicate Girl had just grabbed Mindbender as he made his way to the dance floor to discuss training ideas for the coming week with him. Lu smiled at Marmud and asked to be excused as a sister self stepped out from her body and walked over to the three interns.

"Guys, I'm so sorry to hear you aren't getting enough excitement in your roles but perhaps if you want to go back to the academy as full time students I'm positive we could find three new students to take your places who might show some gratitude for the opportunity, whatcha say? Does that sound fair to you?" Lu smiled brightly at the three interns.

"Ma'am, we're sorry...",
"Ah no... it's not like that...",
"Aaahhh, shit!" The three interns said at the same time.

Luornu laughed and gave a genuine smile before she spoke again, allowing the three young men a moment to compose themselves.

"Let's make an agreement." she said, "I'll speak to the Senior Team about including you more, if... if you stop moping and try to enjoy the experience. Trust me, you really don't know how great you have it!"

The three interns quickly agreed.


As one of the support staff in the medical team, Solstin Wang of Earth - Booster as he was commonly known - had not really spent too much time around the Legionnaires socially.

He was introverted and studious by nature and generally found crowds to be confusing and being in one for too long often left him with a headache. He definitely struggled with small talk so was always found standing on the sidelines when attending any sort of large social gathering. He had been standing quite close to the entrance alongside his colleague Shardwurd Gandussen, when Gord Eno, the pre-cog they called the Spoiler, approached them.

Solstin had known Gord at the academy, but as they were in different classes with very different disciplines, they hadn't really interacted too much. The Naltoran had a reputation while on Home Base of being relatively friendly, though focused on his career and could be aloof towards his peers, disinterested in any inter-personal dramas that were going on. This evening he seemed totally relaxed and genuinely happy to see the two medics. As they chatted Gord lightly put an arm around Solstin's waist, not aggressively but enough that the young medic was aware it was there. Shardwurd seemed oblivious as he noticed someone in the crowd he wanted to talk to and so excused himself.

Gord Eno turned to face Solstin.

"You're going to enjoy helping me celebrate the confrontation today. I know I will..." Gord gave a small knowing smile, "I've foreseen tonight already... you and me, my apartment in five minutes. Grab your things, we're going to have the best time!" Gord's words were softly spoken but his expression was so certain that Solstin saw no point in arguing.

"Um... I, ah, ...okay." Solstin was so taken aback by how up-front the offer was that he didn't know what else to say. Gord smiled and asked Solstin to wait for just a second as he dashed across to the bar, reached over its counter and grabbed a bottle of a smoky looking spirit.

They left together immediately after that.


Hethuk Bran Drommsi, the Talokean weapon-maker that had joined the team as support staff, challenged Ferro to an arm wrestling match.

Marya Pai, cheered her Talokean partner with a loud whoop and rolled her fist in the air. Douglas Nolan had smiled as he motioned the Talokean Smith to sit opposite him. There were still a few people around though Gazelle was disappointed to note that very few were willing to gamble any more. These humans, she thought, and their strange ideas of fun! On Khundia this would have been the centre of everyone's attention here tonight, at least until someone drew a blade...

It had been almost two years since the Dead Brain had sent her here to join this team and Gazelle still didn't fully understand how the human race had managed to spread across so much of the Milky Way; they played too safely and were generally so unsure of themselves!

She shook her head and watched as her partner once again won his match.

............................


Midnight and onward in Shakes Bar, First Base


Bouncing Boy ii knew he wasn't the greatest dancer but he was trying his hardest to impress the student they called Aqua Lass.

The Atlantean student was clearly trying to ignore him. They skirted around each other for a couple of tunes until she spotted her classmate, the latest Invisible Kid, and clung to him until Stoor Chamble took the hint and moved away. The new Bouncing Boy saw Ultra Girl, Friction and Polar Girl sat laughing together at the side of the dance floor and went to join them.

The three young women teased him affectionately before Polar Girl dragged him back up onto the dance floor where they spent the next hour making each other laugh.


Nel Duwi and Bina Nawoti had danced together.

They had both tried to show off a little but unfortunately the dance floor was quite full so after strutting their stuff to the best of their ability for a few bangin' tunes they decided to join Zoe and Gahaji at the bar. Gahaji was cheering on a student that had challenged Ferro in his on-going arm wrestling marathon. Zoe and Gahaji had both smiled broadly at the two young women. They were so obviously newly together, glowing with the happiness that only a fledgling relationship brought as they whispered in each other's ears and held each others hands.

"Do you remember when we looked at each other like that?" Zoe asked, batting her eyelids in mock flirtation at Gahaji. She was sat on a tall bar stool as he stood alongside her.

"Eh? No.... at least I never did." He gave a fleeting half smile as he replied.

"No...? Really? Hmmmm I remember a sandy beach on the Controllers world...." Zoe frantically batted her eyes again before erupted into laughter as Gahaji blew a raspberry at her.

She wrapped her arms around her boyfriend's torso as he gently kissed the top of her head and put an arm over her shoulder. He knew that she had been worried while he was away on the mission earlier today so planned on being especially attentive to her tonight. They may not look at each other with such adoring puppy-eyes any more but Gahaji was fairly certain they had reached a point in their relationship where they understood and respected each other enough that they didn't need to.


Theena spotted the Daxamite Science Police Officer Droo Vri through the crowd.

When they had been at the academy they had once spent a really nice night together, not that it ultimately went anywhere but it was a special memory she had from those days. And after he left to return to Daxam she didn't expect to see him again. If she hadn't remembered that he had told her he wasn't enjoying himself back on his home world, and told Dream Girl at the appropriate time about him, then she imagined he would still be there. Instead, the muscular young man was back amongst the Legionnaires and according to everyone she had spoken to, reveling in the name that Nura had given him as a member of her new team: Groovy!

She knew he wouldn't mind that name, in fact as nicknames went it wasn't too bad really. It wasn't a surprise to her when she heard that the exuberant young man had taken to the name with a flourish and had begun introducing himself as such. This was often much to the bemusement of those who didn't know him who were left wondering if it was his name or a statement of his self image.

The young Daxamite stood at the bar watching an arm wrestling contest between Ferro and Titan that was drawing cheers from the crowd. He had an exotic looking cocktail in one hand, totally focused on the competition before him. Without a word the Communications Officer snuck through the crowd and stood beside him, pretending to watch the arm wrestling match as well. After a few seconds she reached out with a hand and gently poked him in the ribs.

Droo Vri turned and smiled broadly before wrapping her in a big hug and spinning her around. After that the two of them spent the next hour catching up, laughing, gossiping and generally enjoying being in each other's company. Comet Queen flew past at one point, doubled back and hugged them both stating that they shone beautifully like a newly birthed binary system and she loved them for it. Grava kissed them both on the top of their heads before flying off. They shouted their thanks to Grava and laughed as she left.

As the music got louder Groovy asked Theena if she had ever been over to Hope World. When she said she hadn't, he asked if she wanted to have a tour around the teams newest base... her answer was to wrap her arms around his broad neck and plant her lips firmly on his in a solid kiss.

They left together shortly after that. As Theena's apartment was only two floors below that never made it to Hope World.


Mindbender sat down at the bar.

Marmud Illic felt a happy tired - dancing, catching up with friends and trying out a few new cocktails had all given him a warm and pleasant buzz.

He spotted Luornu at the other end of the bar laugh as she watched Ferro win another arm wrestling match, and he sighed. Tonight had felt really special, but overall he really hadn't enjoyed his experience since joining the team under Duplicate Girl's mentorship. He had been told that some of other mentors were taking the time to have a laugh with the new teammates under their care but all Lu wanted to do was talk shop all of the time. Even earlier on this evening she had taken him aside to discuss further training she wanted to give him. The young telepath wondered if it was because she had multiple bodies to do everything she wanted done and she forgot he didn't was the reason why it was work, work and work all the time with her.

He found her exhausting!

As he admitted this thought to himself his fellow new Legionnaire Jaun Vineo - Poltergeiest - sat down next to him. They clinked glasses together and got talking. It didn't take long before Marmud started telling Jaun about how he was feeling. Jaun nodded and quickly said that perhaps they could swap mentors. Marmud was surprised as he had spotted how much Jaun liked Element Lad - it didn't take a telepath to know that the telekinetic youth had a big crush on his mentor.

"Is everything okay?" Mindbender asked.

"Not really... we had a mission to Rimbor and during the gang war one of the gangbangers messed with my head and I said some pretty awful things to Jan, and he's like appearing all cool with it but... but I'm not. Thing is, what I said I do really feel so it's tough being around him so much, y'know?"

"Do you think we'd be allowed to swap mentors?" Marmud asked, a flicker of hope in his tone.

"Well, I looked into it and Atomsmasher and Southern Lights swapped theirs before so... I'll ask if you like? Will say I feel so ashamed... I do actually, though not as bad as I'll make out and maybe the Senior Team will agree."

"Not sure if you'll like Lu being in charge but... well, if you want I'll join you along to speak with them. I'm pretty miserable to be honest, so nothing ventured nothing gained, and all that."

The two psychics clinked their glasses together again in agreement.


The new interns Little Loki and Thunderbolt kissed.

They had first met in the gym only a couple of days before and both had really liked the other. Both Magnus Laviksen of Nordhelm and Ness Strakinos of Gardenhome were confident people yet around each other the usually cheeky and curious young man and the intelligent and compassionate young woman felt oddly nervous. They were experienced enough in social interaction to know what it meant, though were unsure if it was reciprocated.

They had danced together under an illusionary star speckled sky that Magnus had conjured for them before finding two empty seats nearby. Ness decided that enough was enough! There was only one way to definitively find out if Magnus liked her: She reached out and took the young man's head in her hands and pulled him in close for a kiss.

She was very happy that, going by his eager response, it was fairly certain that he felt the same!


Kid Quantum was on the dance floor, not quite cutting loose with her best moves as she was being careful to avoid Power Boy. The purple skinned young man was gyrating in a particularly energetic and some might say potentially dangerous fashion.

The Xanthuan had never really danced a lot. It wasn't really in Xanthu customs so she had never been expected to learn what to do before attending the academy and that meant she usually felt self-conscious around other people. Tonight though, after several brandies, she decided she didn't care. The Shadowmancer had scared her today and she knew that they had been lucky to have gotten out of there with everyone alive and intact.

The tunes being played were well known dance floor classics and Jazmin was enjoying herself when she accidentally bumped into Lightning Lass. As she went to apologise Ayla smiled and put an arm around Jazmin's shoulder to give her a quick hug. Impulsively, Jazmin pecked a kiss on Ayla's cheek before turning away to carry on with her dance. She could hear the Winathian laugh behind her.

As she looked around the dance floor Jazmin could see that a couple of the students from Home Base were watching and obviously talking about her. Students generally loved to gossip about the Legionnaires, and she knew from her own time at the academy that her impulsive and entirely innocent kiss was bound to start all sort of rumours going. Well, let them talk, she thought, as at that moment the Xanthuan was enjoying herself too much to care.

Pre-Commando Sergeant Rol Purtha of Naltor, one of the tutors from Home Base, started dancing alongside Jazmin and twenty minutes later they were sat together at a booth sharing cocktails and flirting with each other. Half an hour after that Jazmin knew that the students from Home Base would definitely be talking about her for quite some time as she led the Pre-Commando out of Shakes towards her apartment.

She blew the gossiping students a flirtatious kiss just before she stepped out of the door.


Dunar Oll, Liv Chorn and Jini St Denys, three members of the LallorGov Mutant Program who had been released from the Shadowmancer earlier that day, were feeling out of their depth. They had made a pact between themselves before arriving to make the most of this situation so were chatting to every Legionnaire, intern and student they could. All three were secretly hoping for an invite to the academy on Home Base, though would not have admitted it if asked.

They spent the majority of the night drinking alongside several of the interns and students, swapping stories of their time in training and gossiping about the Legionnaires and Lallorian Heroes. By the time that they finally left to go back to Lallor, the three mutants had made friends that they would keep in the years to come.


Comet King held onto Grava, his glorious star-spun Queen.

Both ignored the rest of the team as they hugged each other tightly and twirled around and around to the music. They hadn't realised that they were the last two left in Shakes as they enjoyed their evening pressed against each other.


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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 20 January 22)
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Thanks once more for your feedback and kind words above - Raz, I've never read a single comic with Thunder in it so I'm making up her character as I go along, hopefully the re-boot fans don't mind smile

More next time as we deal with the morning after alongside Mon El, Spolier, Dawnstar and Little Loki... oh, and we'll meet some new folks on Hope World too. After that things will get all adventurous again.

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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 20 January 22)
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hi Harbi, I'm impressed, you've never read a comic with Thunder in it, but you have done an amazing job portraying her - in the comics she's really a little girl in base form but yours is an older woman, and that maturity shines through.

lovely scene on Zarrox, nice having Szenlong come along, and the gift-giving/reward-giving was well done

Just like Imra to wrap things up, I bet she wants to tell Tinya in detail about her bargain with the Gildishpans

also nice having Evolvo share some of his leadership wisdom with Tinya wink also shrewd of Evolvo doing it this way, getting Kent on board (and kudos to Tinya for realizing it was a good thing, and not getting annoyed at Sev for potentially overstepping his bounds!)

oooh Captain Heavyweight! yes that's right, he's still missing!

Cute of Backlash and the Ranzz twins! and I like seeing Ayla in auntie mode! makes sense the twins would still be a bit on edge, poor Backlash, but he and Ayla handled it well

nice seeing Andy arm-wrestle in human form, and good to see he's still quite strong. the whole scene with Thunder was A+, lol on Thunder for betting on Andy... hahaha oh, the faces of those in the crowds...

so nice reading the scenes of everyone having fun with good humor, this is the part I love most about the Legion, the camaraderie!

also nice to see Dawnstar putting herself out there!

nice tough love pep talk from Lu to the 3 interns!

man, Gord is smooth, gosh these Naltorians....

Mentor swap! After all, it's also about dynamics, relationship, personality and overall fit... good solution for both unhappy kids

I wonder if any of the Lallor mutants will make it to home base... we have a Lallorian student somewhere I recall. who knows right?

a lovely party Harbi, and nice set up for more - looking forward to the next installment as always!

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That came across like one of those quiet one-shot stories the X-Men used to always do after a big event where you catch up on where everyone's at, it makes for good reading!

The scene with the magic users and Mysa kinda reminded me of the end of Wizard of Oz where the scarecrow, the lion and the tin man get what they've been wishing for (which is a compliment, that's one of my favourite movies!) I particularly like that everyone was a little intimidated by Mysa too.

The whole party flowed really well and I love how just about everyone got a little moment...my favourite bits were probably:

Everything with Garth and Imra really, I like that they actually get a family together and a happy ending smile

Poor Backlash trying to entertain the kids and failing miserably laugh

The whole bit with Thunder and Ferro...that wisdom of Solomon comes through again with the betting! laugh

Jazmin letting herself go and have fun...I especially like her realising everyone was gonna be gossiping about her and deciding to have some fun with it!

And last but not least, ending on the Comets was a really sweet way to wrap it all up smile

I am a bit worried it might come back to bite Tinya not following her doctor's advice, but it's gonna be cool following up on the Captain Heavyweight plot! Also, Hope World is a really unique idea so I'm looking forward to seeing what's coming up there as well!

Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 25 January 22)
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The next day, 0600 hours

Roughly Thirteen klicks galactic west of Second Base:

Dawnstar of Starhaven - Senior Team member - space flight, incredible speed, tracking


Dawnstar floated alone in space.

The winged tracker had been here for over an hour now, just gazing at the distant nebulae and stars around them. Almost twenty minutes before, Non had flown out towards her and made an awkward bow before moving on. The negative energy being was known to be reclusive so she did not attempt any conversation beyond acknowledging it with a wave before it flew off. She doubted that Non would be able to understand her current dilemma to advise her anyway...

And that was what she was hoping for right at that moment, advice...

She had called Cece earlier to ask if she was free. Unfortunately the deputy leader of First Base was on monitor duty for the whole day, having offered to take a 24 hour shift so her teammates could recover from the festivities they had enjoyed the night before. Dawnstar wished her luck and a peaceful day before closing the call.

She knew that while there were probably at least a dozen of her teammates she could talk to right now about what was troubling her that would give genuine, heartfelt advice, right at that present moment she didn't want them, she wanted to speak to Cece... She considered calling Dr Falkner but given the serious nature of the psychiatrist's work of late as she dealt with the after-effects from the Blight the team's counselor may think the Legionnaire was joking when asked advice on the matter that was currently troubling Dawnstar.

It took her a second to acknowledge it to herself but she also really wanted to talk to Kara.

Kara would have laughed at her and made her realise that her worries were no big deal really, not in the grand scheme of things and probably not in any lesser scheme of things as well.

Dawnstar of Starhaven was so confused. Last night she had left the party alongside Southern Lights. The young mystic had been very respectful and thoughtful. They had kissed as she was leaving him at the door to his apartment and that was where her confusion kicked in. Initially, she realised later, Southern Lights had meant to give her a peck on the cheek but she had turned and their lips had touched together. After that they had carried on kissing. It had been so long since Dawnstar had felt someone's arms around her that she had fell into it without thought.

While they had their arms around each other and kissed she had felt his ...excitement rise. Her mind had raced and yet felt vast and empty at the same time, her blood felt like it was champagne fizzing around her system and the longing in the pit of her stomach almost made her cry.

Dawnstar kept kissing him until there seemed to be some unsaid understanding between them that they needed to stop. She had told him she looked forward to seeing him soon, which he quickly reciprocated, and she left. Even after the winged tracker had flown away she could still feel his hands on her back and in her hair, his muscular chest pressed up against her, his lips tight against hers, his ... well, all of him, she could still feel the mystics body pressed against her.

And now her head swam with stars as she thought of those few timeless minutes.

She had wanted to stay, had wanted to spend the night with the young, blue skinned mystic from her home world. She had wanted to share a night of ...and there lay the problem. Dawnstar had spent over a decade of her life as Wildfire's partner, and apart from a strange incident with a cleric called Jhodan many years ago - that had not involved as much physical contact as her encounter with Southern Lights the night before! - she had no real experience to speak of in this area of inter-personal relationships.

Dawnstar knew it was unusual but she had never lain with a man. She was just short of 27 standard years old and she remained untouched. She knew that deep down she was scared that she may do something wrong, maybe something embarrassing or hurtful, and she really needed the advice that would help her get past this. She was desperate for the advice so she could finally, finally have the intimate company that her teammates all appeared to take for granted. She admitted to herself with a sigh that she was scared to take it to the next level.

As much as she usually kept her personal business to herself, Dawnstar really wanted to talk to Cece!

..............................................


0700 hours.

Second Base, Level 1a, personal apartment of Mon El

Mon El - Senior Team member, Lar Gand of Daxam - incredible strength, speed, stamina, senses, laser vision, space flight, invulnerability
Shadow Lass - Tasmia Mallor of Talok viii - summon and manipulate total darkness


Mon El fought against the tendrils of darkness.

They were gripping around his torso and pulling at his face...

<Lar...?>

He used his laser vision to burn through the tendril that tried to wrap itself across his eyes and pulled one arm out from where it had been bound to his body...

<Aaaagh! LAR!>

He could hear Shady scream so knew he had to act quick...

<LAR! WAKE UP! WAKE UP!>

The Daxamite opened his eyes.

He was floating in his bedroom, naked apart from the ragged remains of a sheet wrapped around him. On the ceiling above were two scorch marks burned across the otherwise white surface. He quickly blew some freezing breath over these and looked around. Sat on the floor next to his damaged bed was Tasmia Mallor. She clutched at her left shoulder, obviously in great pain.

"Shady... what?" He flew down to her but she inched away from him, her eyes like daggers.

"Get me some help." She growled. He quickly used his x-ray vision to scan her and saw clearly her shoulder had been smashed and was in urgent need of medical attention. He reached down to pick her up and again she moved away.

"Get me some help!" She yelled this time, her face raw with anger and pain.

In a blur he was gone and seventeen seconds later a warp appeared in his bedroom that the Daxamite walked through accompanied by Dr Shakespeare. The doctor rushed to Shadow Lass' side to examine her while Mon El sped off to get dressed. He was at the doctor's side moments later wearing his red uniform, without the cape.

"What happened here Tasmia?" Kent asked as he sprayed an anaesthetic on the wounded Talokean's shoulder.

"Lar had a nightmare and elbowed me. It... ah that feels better... his blow threw me out of the bed and then he started wrestling with the sheets and lasering the ceiling. I used the telepathic matrix to wake him up before he blew a hole into space."

"Tasmia, I'm so sorry... I... I thought we were fighting those monsters on Talok viii again."

"I know you didn't mean it Lar." she said softly, though didn't look up to meet his eyes.

"Are you seeing a counsellor Lar? The Blight effect... A lot of the team are suffering too, but as you're so powerful we should perhaps prioritise your treatment. I'll get onto Dr Falkner..."

"I'll do it myself Kent, thank you anyway." Lar's tone of voice was neutral though his expression was clear to read.

"Please make sure that you do." The Doctor turned back to Tasmia and held out a hand to help her stand up. Once she was on her feet, he spoke into his flight ring. "Henry, can you warp Tasmia and I to the central medical facility on First Base please."

After the warp closed around them Lar Gand felt his anger build until he wanted to scream.

Last night they had been celebrating the defeat of the Shadowmancer and the Devil's Dozen and it had been the first night he had spent with Tasmia in such a long time. As she had a reputation as a fierce warrior and planetary champion, most would be surprised at how compassionate, tender and caring she was when in more intimate settings. After a thousand years of enforced celibacy in the Phantom Zone, Lar knew how truly special it was that he had found someone who could share such moments.... and last night had gone better than he had imagined, but for it to end like this was so damn frustrating!

He knew that it would be a long while before Tasmia would spend a night with him again... if she ever would.

Lar decided he was going to find an asteroid to pulverize, and then after he had finished with that he would book in another appointment with the team's counselor.

The Daxamite flew to the nearest airlock and let himself out.

.....................................


0800 hours.

First Base, level 11, personal quarters of Spoiler

Spoiler ii - Gord Eno of Naltor - precognition, specialising in short range visions for combat situations
Booster - Solstin Wang of Earth - awareness and manipulation of natural physical properties of those around him


Solstin had left Gord's apartment ten minutes before.

Gord Eno had immediately hit the sonic shower and notified the monitor board that he wanted to extend his no call-out status by another twelve hours. He really needed to recover and get some sleep! He was exhausted...

Solstin had told him early on in the evening as they had undressed each other that he was very surprised that Gord had remembered him, let alone was interested in spending a night as they had never really interacted while at the academy. Gord had smiled as he reminded the medic that when they had joined the academy a couple of years before both were driven to get Legion membership and now that they had ...well, it was time to reap the benefits of all their hard work and just enjoy themselves when the opportunities arose.

He didn't want to say anything to Solstin but when they were at the academy together Gord had been well aware of the nasty judgemental gossip that was traded around the Rec room's so he had kept his fun to off-base activities. Otherwise... well, whatever... he hoped to make up for that wasted time.

Gord's adventurous pansexuality could surprise the more reserved and prudish from the wider United Planets. Certainly, he knew that his people had a reputation for being ...easy, and it was probably well deserved. But, Gord thought, at least they had a culture that was honest about such things and were taught to be non-judgemental over each others choices and actions. The magical mutation that gave all Naltoran seers their white hair and precognition also gave them a raised pheromone count which tended to make them more attractive than an average person, all other things being the same, and also gave them strong libidos so it was truly just them acting on their nature to enjoy the intimate company of others!

Gord had teased Solstin about his 'Cosmic Boy Fan Club' haircut; short at the sides and parted on the left, while quickly following up with several compliments about his impressively defined abs, magnificent smile and overall super-cuteness. The young mutant from Earth admitted that he found the Naltoran to be a bit intimidating with his broad shoulders and hard muscular physique, and the feeling of intensity he projected. Gord laughed at this, saying he only looked intense because he was low-key using his precognition to ensure he didn't make too many mistakes - he wanted to make sure they both enjoyed themselves as much as possible.

Spending the night with a very sexually adventurous precognitive and a man who had the ability to greatly increase a body's natural strength, flexibility, stamina, resistance to injury and, recovery time from exhaustion had ensured that they both took things much further than either had before.

As a result, it had been night of quite a few firsts for both of them.

Before he left Solstin had nervously asked Gord if would like to give him a call in a week or so, as he would be really busy in the next couple of days but the young medic would like to hang out with him again. Gord laughed and agreed, saying right now a call in a week was the perfect solution for them both as they probably needed that to recover! Both had laughed, kissed and then Solstin left the pre-cogs apartment.

Overall, Gord Eno thought, it had been a rather spectacular experience. He was especially happy as he knew that Solstin felt the same. Though, looking around his apartment Gord wished he'd thought to ask Solstin to help tidy the place up before he had left...

.............................................


0900 hours

Hope World:


Star Boy - Senior Team member, Thom Kallor of Xanthu - stellar mass transference
Invisible Kid - Jacques Foccart of Earth - personal and tactile invisibility
Harmonia - Senior Team member, Professor Harmonia Li of Earth - manipulation of the natural environment

'Smart Boy' - Senior Team liaison, Strategic Analyst Graq Maurus of Colu - 10th level intelligence specialising in disaster relief scenarios
Groovy - Science Police Officer Droo Vri of Daxam. of Daxam - incredible strength, speed, stamina, senses, laser vision, space flight, invulnerability
Magnetix - Science Police Officer Jooli Esra of Braal - manipulation of magnetic fields
Mama Tank - Science Police Lieutenant Lolla Grayfrau of Badenhoff vi - cybernetics giving incredible strength, invulnerability, AI manipulation

Support staff: Flaurianarelle of Zerox - Greensleeves - orchard and farm caregiver - magical manipulation of plant life


There was only one Rec Room on Hope World exclusively for the Legionnaires to use.

The vast majority of the space on the planetoid was taken up by stores, accommodation for over three thousand potential refugees, massive hydroponics and seed stores, medical facilities and general equipment that they estimated would be needed on their missions going forward. Thom had gotten lost twice the day before when he had been looking for certain supplies, much to Nura's amusement. When he mentioned it to Imra and Garth at the party the night before both had sympathised as they laughed.

Right now though, he wasn't lost. Thom was enjoying his breakfast in the quiet Rec Room and had just spooned his third mouthful of cereal as Jacques walked through the door.

"Hey good news, the auto-chef's up and running finally." Thom smiled as he said this, obviously relishing the bowl of crunchy Xanthuan cereal before him.

"Looks good mon ami, per'aps later..." Jacques grabbed a caffee pod from the auto chef before he sat down across the table from Thom.

"So, you looking forward to doing some good with Nura and me? She told me our first mission would take us to the Wilderness of the Sassanaboan Nebula."

"I should research it before we go." Jacques replied with a dishearted smile, "zo... 'as she told you much of what we should expect Thom?"

"Not really, a plague out on the edge of the Fringe, then the eruption of a volcano, ah.... Yeah, if I'm being honest, I'd rather deal with any problem when we arrive than overthink it beforehand. Living with a pre-cog would get complicated otherwise."

"Oui, I understand. Why worry before it's necessary?"

"Exactly... and right now, I'm enjoying breakfast way too much to start worrying." And with that Thom spooned a heap of cereal into his mouth.

"Enjoy, mon ami. I'm goin' to speak with Danielle." Before Thom could finish his mouthful to wish his friend good luck, Jacques had walked out of the Rec Room and continued on his way to Henry's latest warp room.

En route Jacques bumped into Harmonia Li. They chatted politely as they walked along the corridor. Jacques had always rather admired the professor as she always maintained a quiet dignity that he found intriguing and also strangely alluring. Danielle loved her too, so that immediately gave Harmonia credit in Jacques' mind. His sister had trouble picking up on social cues so many people found her awkward to be around; Professor Li had treated Danielle no different from anyone else and in fact had treated Jacques sister better than she treated quite a few on the wider team. In return, Danielle was happy to be around Harmonia and would not lose herself in AI chatter to avoid interaction as she did with the majority of the wider team.

They reached the grav lift and the ancient elemental asked Jacques to say hello to Danielle from her as she left him. She was on her way to the upper levels and Home World's massive hydroponic unit.

As Harmonia stepped out of the grav lift she could see Flaurianelle of Zerox floating above seedlings, singing in a small childish voice to them. The ancient elemental smiled as she watched the sprouting plant life happening before her. Harmonia had planted these seeds only two days before and already they were over a foot tall, and increasing as she watched.

The faery fluttered around the plants, touching leaves gently and stroking the stems with an almost maternal love. Harmonia had lived for thousands of years and only met members of the Fae twice before, neither time was as beautiful or peaceful as this though!

"You have the most amazing talent." Professor Li said softly as she walked into the huge room.

The Faery turned and nodded her head towards the elemental, a wide smile on her childlike face as she carried on singing her charms to the plants rather than engaging in a conversation.

Harmonia didn't mind at all as she estimated with Flaurianelle's assistant they would be more than self-sufficient for fresh fruit, grain, fungus and vegetables within a week. That would help the team greatly as well as those they dealt with that were living in the most impoverished of circumstances. An auto-chef might rearrange base molecules into something resembling food but in Harmonia Li's mind nothing beat the taste of fresh food that had grown naturally.

And all this beautiful vegetation really did help make the air smell so much better within the confined space of the planetoid. Despite what anyone would tell her, Harmonia Li did not believe that air scrubbers ever fully removed the stench of so many physically active people, only living vegetation could do that.

the ancient elemental hummed happily to herself as she examined the huge hydroponics unit readouts.

Jacques Foccart reached the warp room and was surprised to find that he was not alone. Strategic Analyst Graq Maurus of Colu stood beside the large mushroom-like console that housed Henry?s totality as he examined a hard light screen. The Science Police Officer was flicking through information too fast for Jacques to catch what it was.

Jacques took a minute to speak with his new colleague before requesting a warp to First Base. Graq Maurus wished the former Legionnaire a pleasant day and continued to monitor his read-out. The Coluan had made it a priority to understand the social signals that non-Coluans took for granted when interacting amongst themselves. As a result, amongst his Science Police colleagues he was often seen as somewhat friendly and approachable - for a Coluan. He was currently waiting to welcome and show the latest recruits from the Science Police around Hope World. His fellow Science Police officers were due soon and as a Coluan he felt he needed to have as much data as possible to fully appreciate the moment and ensure the most favourable outcome.

Officer Droo Vri from Daxam was first to arrive and surprised his Coluan teammate by walking in through the door, not using one of Henry's warps. As they chatted, it was clear that Officer Vri was every bit as enthusiastic as the file Graq had received the previous day suggested. The Daxamite said he'd actually arrived the day before so had given himself and Theena the Communications Officer a tour already, but would appreciate a proper look around as he had been rather distracted...It was quite endearing in a way though the strategic analyst hoped the young man would be able to follow orders and fulfil mission briefs and not get distracted. At least it was immensely clear that the Daxamite was very excited to be here on Hope World. The young soldier kind of reminded the Coluan of a puppy at a party...

The other two were already known to Strategic Analyst Maurus. It was ten minutes later, exactly one minute before they were due to arrive that they warped in together from their briefing on Mons Olympus.

Officer Jooli Esra from Braal had built quite a reputation as she made her way through the two-year training program to become an active Science Police Officer. At 4 feet 8 inches tall she was easy to overlook, though those that did often regretted it. Officer Esra had a quick mind and a high EQ quotient that would be necessary on the missions that this team were expecting to go on, along with her incredibly powerful Braalian abilities. Graq had felt happy when he had learned she had volunteered to join the team as he knew what an asset she would be.

Lieutenant Lolla Grayfrau from Badenhoff vi on the other hand had a physical presence that was difficult to ignore - easily 6 feet tall and muscular, she had made no attempt to hide the cybernetic enhancements she had gained six years prior after the Battle at Starbase Foxtrot Blue. Her pragmatism and strength of character were as legendary amongst SP staff as her distinctive appearance.

They were a very odd-looking group of Science Police officers yet Graq Maurus had no doubts they would be fine additions to the team that Dream Girl was building. With a surprising amount of good humour and thoughtful consideration of their needs, the Coluan spent the next three hours with the recruits from the Science Police ensuring they were all as comfortable as possible as they settled into their assignment on the new Legion base.

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1000 hours.

Home Base academy, Third Level Refectory

Retro - Deen Toro of Ventura - limited reversal of personal timeline
Intern: Little Loki - Magnus Laviksen of Nordhelm - illusion casting


Retro tried to meet up with Little Loki at least once a week.

As the Legionnaire felt responsible for the young man from Nordhelm being on Home Base and attending the Academy, Deen made sure that Magnus knew that he was supported here and not alone. Over the last couple of months, they had become quite friendly, chatting more and more about everyday issues like problems with the food replicators and the poor choices of piped music in the grav-lifts...

This morning though the young man from the Viking World appeared to be a bit more animated than usual. Retro smiled proudly as they spoke about the student becoming an intern. While Magnus could be feisty at times, the majority of the team agreed he was a decent young man with a quick mind, good heart and very useful skill-set.

As they discussed what would be expected over the coming months Deen realised that it wasn't the prospect of getting closer to becoming a Legionnaire that was making Magnus so excited...

"And..." Deen began, his mouth curled up into a mischievous smile, "in other news, Magnus Laviksen finally opens up about what's really got him so excited!"

The intern laughed.

"Yeah, sorry, it's kind of embarrassing..."

"Is everything okay Magnus?" Deen asked lightly, his thoughts racing about the potential problems the young man may have.

"Yeah... so, like... well..."

"Oh, spit it out already. You know I'm over a century old, so believe me I've seen a lot and I seriously doubt you're gonna shock me." Retro smiled encouragingly as he spoke.

"I've... ah, I've met a girl I like and she likes me too." Magnus looked up at the Legionnaire, uncertain how he might respond.

"Well.... That's tremendous news! Who is it? Can you tell me?"

"Yeah, of course, it's Ness... Ness Strakinos, Thunderbolt." Magnus grinned as he said her name.

"She's lovely Magnus." Retro said, genuinely happy, "She's a good girl though she's real smart too so don't mess her around. You don't want to get on the wrong side of someone with her powers, okay?" Retro teased with a chuckle.

"Yeah.... only I need some advice, you see on Nordhelm I could have been married a couple of years ago by now, the age of consent there is fourteen standard, but on Gardenhome where she's from its eighteen..." Magnus' face and neck had risen in a blush that could have been spotted from a great distance.

"But you're not planning on getting married already, right?" Retro said, his face a quizzical expression.

"Well, it wasn't the marriage age of consent I was really talking about..."

"Ah, so you're saying you haven't gotten intimate in a way that... well, you know." Retro could feel his cheeks start to colour with a blush as well.

"So, I was wondering if the academy had any rules in place, like do we follow Earth standard, or is there any specific regulations we need to know about?"

"Yes... there will be. I'll get back to you about that Magnus." Retro said, suddenly wishing to end the conversation.
"Thanks, you see in the common rooms everyone says we can do what we want here as the Legion has ambassador status so we're free to do whatever..."

"Ah! No, that is not right Magnus. Please, tell your friends that they do not have ambassadorial status, only full team members have. It is important that they know that." Retro's expression was serious and for a moment Magnus was worried that he had offended the Legionnaire.

"Look, I'm really sorry Deen..."

"Oh shoosh, it's not you Magnus, don't be silly. Do the new student guidelines you're all given not cover this sort of thing?" Retro gave the intern a smile, though from his expression it was obvious his mind was elsewhere.

"I don't think so... there's a part about respecting each other's culture and that one doesn't trump the other so to treat everyone with kindness and understanding... that's all I remember."

"Okay, well it'll need updating... thanks for letting me know. Anyway, let's meet up in a few days, okay? I need to run."

After they had went their separate ways, Retro used his flight ring locator function to find Luornu Durgo-Taine. They really needed to put some rules in place before there were any major repercussions from this oversight... why had they not realised what could happen as the majority of their students were ...well, horny teenagers. There would be interactions and expectations between folks from very different cultures with their own social norms that could lead to complicated situations arising when they were put into a pressurised environment like Home Base Academy?

From what Deen had picked up, when the Legion was first forming there were several short-term liaisons and a fair bit of experimentation between the new teammates before most of the long-established relationships had been formed... Why hadn't Rokk or Lu anticipated this? Retro was grateful that there hadn't been any legal cases taken out against them already. He could imagine the negative media headlines and public backlash that they would face. Luornu and Rokk would need to address this before someone got hurt.

He was also very happy that he was only the messenger here and ultimately this wasn't his problem to solve...

...................................


1100 hours.

First Base, Level 11, personal apartment of Phantom Girl:


Tinya was sat in her quarters.

The Senior Team were all present in holo-form. Their meeting was, they expected, just a chance to catch up and update each other on what had been going on recently. At least, that's how Tinya had implied it was going to be when she called it - a catch up and housekeeping and arrange the next couple of missions...

"So," Tyroc said, "The SPs reckon those twins made th'r way to Rimbor as it was the last warp opened, ...or so the Gil'Dishpan told them."

"Oh joy, Rimbor!" Ayla said. Several of the Senior Team laughed.

"Anyone want to lead a team there? See if we can pick them up?"

"Yeah, I'll do it." Ayla said, "It'll be good to tie up the loose ends."

"Oay, pick a team and good luck." Tinya smiled as she replied.

"I'll help Ayla, we can use Legionnaires from both bases. Should take half the time. " Luornu Durgo said.

"Yeah, thanks Lu, appreciated. Though it won't take too long if we take M'Windaji'. Other than that we can just open a mission call and see who volunteers..." Ayla could see Tinya's expression change, "what is it Tinya?"

"Ah, it's something I was going to bring up. Gear thinks he might have discovered a clue to Tuk Shir's whereabouts and..."

"Great, let's get going!"
"Where is he Tinya?"
"Anje will be so grateful!"
"When do we leave?"
"What's the catch?"

"Wait up, before you think to go charging in there Gear thinks it's in Dominion space. We have to be careful here."

There was a moments silence before the team started talking over each other, some arguing for force and damn the consequences while others agreeing that Tinya should be careful. She let them speak for ten seconds before she spoke.

"Hey, team, enough! My mind is made up and this isn't a democracy. I'm going to lead a small team on a reconnaissance mission. Once we know for sure we'll discuss our options. This is not a debate!" She noted Mon El blinked at her strength of phrasing and she gave him a small smile.

"Reep," she continued before there were any more arguments, "I want you and Gahaji on the team."

"If I could make a suggestion," Chameleon Boy said, "Otaki has encountered the Dominators before and her abilities have both an enormous range and great subtlety, and Strobe has tremendous versatility..."

"We don't want a large group Reep..." Tinya countered flatly, her eyes flashed with disappointment and the beginnings of anger.

"You shouldn't want any group going there." Mon El interrupted, "Send Gear's nannites if you must spy on the Dominion but risking Legionnaires, especially our junior members... it's madness Tinya. You know where this could lead if they find you, don't you?"

"Gear's nannites won't work on Dominion chloro-tech Lar, you know that..."

At that point the holo-circuit gave an unexpected buzz and Nura Nal's holo joined them.

"Oh hello darlings, how are you?" She said with a bright smile.

"You're not one of the Senior Team so what do you think you're doing?" Tinya snapped, inside she was grateful for Nura's appearance as it gave her someone to get angry with.

"I have something to say..." Nura gave Tinya a level gaze.

"Oh? Want to steal another world and half the team from us Nura?" Tinya countered.

"Oh shoosh, you know it was the right..."

"I think you should leave, Nura. This meeting is for the Senior Team only."

"You'll want this information I found it hidden in Hope World's systems. It covers Dominion security protocols. I'm fully aware you're away to make an illegal incursion into their Empire Tinya so this may help." Nura gave a smile but there was no warmth. "...okay darlings, I've sent the schematics to you all." The Senior Team's flight rings all pinged as Nura's data reached them. Several started to thank her but before they could Tinya rather huffily spoke across them all.

"I'll take it under advisement." She didn't glance at the hard light screen that had popped up, instead she gave Nura's image a hard stare.

"Do have a simply splendid day everyone, you know I've missed you all." Nura's holo gave a big smile before turning to the team leader. "...And Tinya, honey, while we've never been besties please do take this advice: you're not going to be the leader for much longer so don't get too used to this little power trip you're on. Things are going to change around here. Anyway dearie, good luck not starting an intergalactic war." And with that comment Nura's holo vanished.


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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 25 January 22)
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Glad you enjoyed the party scenes, I'd written them out ages ago so it was great to finally post them.

Next up, we get going on the rescue mission to get Tuk Shir - what could possibly go wrong?


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A new instalment already, yay! My thoughts:

Poor Dawny! There's always so much focus on how bad things are for Wildfire in the comics but I feel like we never get to see it from Dawnstar's point of view....she's really given up so much to be with Drake in the comics, I like seeing this explored. Also, points for remembering Jhodan!!

Poor Mon! He has the power of Superman but very few people have the self-discipline of Superman, and Mon's been through more than most people. This segment really brought home how much Shady actually does for him and puts up with for him.

The idea that all Naltorians are natural hornbags is an interesting one...and kudos on making Gord pansexual! The Legion of Superheroes is the one place we should see a lot more stuff around gender and sexuality that is controversial today being normalised smile

I also really like the idea that Gord uses his precognition to avoid social awkwardness, kinda makes you wonder about Dreamy being unflappable so much of the time...

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when the Legion was first forming there were several short-term liaisons and a fair bit of experimentation between the new teammates before most of the long-established relationships had been formed
haha this reminds me of that old comic panel where their computer decided who'd have more fun kissing one another...it is an interesting thing to face for a Legion that's grown to this size - unlike the old days where the horny teens would have gotten it out of their systems by the time there were more than 15 or 16 of them, there are dozens of horny teens in close proximity now and it really needs to be addressed. I am interested to see what comes out of this tbh!

I am taking a perverse pleasure in Dreamy becoming the Emma Frost of this team - she's insufferable, but she's also right all the time, it must be so difficult to deal with as a leader! Looking forward to see how PG's Dominion mission pans out and I hope she and Cham get a chance to actually talk stuff out at some point, it hurts seeing them at odds!

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Raz, hi, thanks for your very quick review.

Yeah, Dawny... hmmm I've been thinking of her a bit recently as I wanted to write about how awkward she is going into a relationship and it struck me that in canon she was working at 13 then in the acaemy at 15, Legionnaire at 16 and has had no life to speak of other than that. She'll get some very necessary character growth soon.

The idea of Mon El being dangerous to mere mortals when he's asleep actually came to me watching Family Guy when in one scene Peter get's up from bed and can't find Lois as she had been crushed under him into the mattress, haha.

Naltorans aren't horndogs, they are just following their nature... which admittedly means they tend to act like horndogs but, well, okay perhaps by other cultures standards they are. laugh and a group of teenagers living together and going through intense physical training - you know they aren't sleeping alone if they can help it and I needed to address that.

Nura as the white Queen is exactly what I was going for - great minds!

Anyway, thanks again for your kind words.

Oh, meant to say next time we will also find out what Jan is up to, and Zoe and Gahaji have a talk....


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More great stuff, Harbi!

Kudos for representation, you write characters from so many backgrounds, sexual orientations, etc. and they are each unique too!

I smiled a lot at the Spoiler/Booster soon, they are fast becoming a fave couple, esp. as their "experimenting" and trying new things reminds me of me and my man (though we are nowhere near as physically fit as these two lol)

Dawny is scared, and that's normal, and kudos for having her be strong enough to want to face that fear. your friendships are so well-written!

Oh dear, re the Tasmia/Mon scene. I can understand Tasmia's reaction - I would be scared too, what if this happened again? if Mon had been facing Shady when he used his heat vision... also wondering, I mean, people can have nightmares any time, even without the Blight, how does the Legion handle that?

ah gossip, I can relate to why Gord avoided the rec room. Gossip can be a tool for bonding, but can also be quite nasty

nice explanation for why Naltorians are like that - higher pheromone count that affects, well, a lot of things!

I like Graq already, and it makes sense that an intelligent Coluan could learn "politeness" and social behavior if they wished!

Smart of Retro to realize the potential issues that could be raised by, well, horny teens... tee hee! good question, why didn't the more senior teachers anticipate this, considering their own early days?

I do like Tinya standing up to Nura, though it could have been a bit "tempered' shall we say. I do like seeing Tinya stand up and get angry, as she's usually so kind and thoughtful so nice to see another side of her.

oh heavens, that parting shot of Nura. that is so her, frosty and everything. Now, while I do agree Tinya didn't handle it the best way, Nura also hasn't been doing things in the best way, so Nura isn't blameless here either... you write these interpersonal dramas so well!

well, very much eager to see what goes on!

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Once the meeting had finished, Tinya had asked for Henry and Gear to join her in her quarters.

As infuriating as Nura could be, Tinya knew she had been right - the data she had somehow procured showed the basic security set-up for Dominion bases and cruisers. There were schematics and algorithms to generate security passes.... it was an amazing cache of information that Sa Lok or one of his subordinates had clearly forgotten about. At least, Tinya hoped they had forgotten about it, as tricky as the Rimborian ex-Under Secretary to the UP could be she had to consider it was left intentionally to lead them into a trap.

No, Tinya thought, as much as it pained her to admit it, she believed Nura would never have given them this information unless she was absolutely certain the data would help them.

Damn, but Nura Nal could be so annoying!

The Legion Leader had to assume they were going to encounter resistance, particularly since Mon El's mission to the B'Laxor system a couple of months before had alerted them to meta-powered Dominators. The one they had captured had enhanced strength and durability and could open warps in space, so who knew what else they had developed. The Legion had to assume the Dominion would have access to Sa Lok's gene-mod technology. And they had captured Tuk Shir six days ago now, so what else had they found in his Daxamite genetics to enhance themselves with?

"Phantom Girl, how may I help you?" As ever, Gear had immaculate manners as his nannites formed into a body for the Linsnarian before her. The holo-avatar of Henry appeared next to Gear.

"Thanks chaps, I wondered if there was any news from the earlier reconnaissance mission I gave you?"

"Of course, the micro-warp Henry opened allowed some of my nannites to access the approximate vicinity to where we had discovered trace elements equivalent to Captain Shir's anti-lead serum. We had recalled these nannites through a similar warp only an hour ago and their findings are conclusive that there is Daxamite DNA in a nearby holding facility. From the information we gathered it appears to be a medical facility of sorts though there were a large number of Dominators present so we must assume that some at least are there as security. Unfortunately, due to the small number we could safely risk sending, we do not have conclusive proof that it is Captain Shir that is being held within this facility."

"Okay, fair enough. Thank you Izor, I'm very grateful for your help with this."

"If I may..." Henry said, "It will be possible, from the data supplied to extrapolate a point where there are minimal risks of discovery."

"That's a relief... okay, leave it with me chaps and thank you both. Your help has been invaluable.

After Gear and Henry left Tinya put her head in her hands and took three deep breaths. She knew this mission could potentially turn very nasty but she had to do something to return their missing Science Police colleague. She took one final deep breath and called up the mission monitor board. She contemplated the options available to her before deciding; Chameleon Boy, M'Windaji, Strobe and herself - that would be the team and hopefully they would be stealthy enough to get in and out before all hell broke lose!

...............................


Second Base, level nine

Thirteen - Dann Hortra of Naltor - line of sight probability manipulation

Science Police meta-squad seconded to Legion World First Base:
Gravity Kid - Science Police Officer Tel Vole of Earth - manipulation of personal or nearby gravity


Tel had arrived late!

He hated being late but another slot with Dr Griffor had become available so he had joined his husband Jed along to Home Base for the session. Then, of course their marriage guidance session had overran by half an hour. He had been glad they had attended as Jed had opened up and Tel now felt that he understood his husband like never before. Afterwards Jed had said he wanted to talk to his parents and Tel had left him alone to do that - the session had brought up a couple of things that he knew his husband would want to say and it wouldn't be appropriate for have Tel hovering around while their family business was being discussed. Tel had kissed his husband and wished him luck before he left.

Tel had been skeptical of marital counseling before meeting Dr Griffor but now, after only two sessions, he saw firsthand how helpful it could be. Still, it had overran and consequently he arrived at Dann Hortra's apartment an hour late for the meditation class.

In his defence, Tel had tried to call the Naltoran but he hadn't picked up. Tel realised the class was probably finished now but he hoped that it was still going on and he could slip in. The techniques Dann had been sharing with him and their colleagues were really helping in the aftermath of the Blight. It made sense that Naltorans with their innate abilities to scan future probabilities would be the ones to develop successful ways of training oneself on focusing on the immediate here and now... Tel rang the door chime and Dann Hortra answered almost immediately. As usual, when in his own apartment, Dann was wearing very little and Tel couldn't help but steal a glance at his colleagues muscular body.

"Dann, hey... I'm so sorry but an appointment came up with Dr Griffor so..."

"It's fine Tel, you know these are just drop in sessions so there's no obligation to be at every one, don't you?" Dann smiled as he spoke.

"Yeah... but..." Tel settled his feet onto the floor and shrugged.

"Anyway, the class finished like ten minutes ago. I'm in need of a nice cup of green tea, you want one?" Thirteen turned from his colleague and walked across the apartment to his kitchen nook.

"Ah... yeah, thanks." Gravity Kid felt momentarily confused, unsure why he was there, but stayed in the same spot watching as his teammate made them both steaming mugs of green tea.

Thirteen took them to the central space where his large couch and holo-pit were. As he sat down he held one out for Gravity Kid to take. Tel floated across towards him and used his abilities to levitate the mug towards himself. Tel sat at the far edge of the couch from Dann and held the mug up to his face to sniff the fresh scent.

"I'm glad you popped by, been meaning to ask Jed doesn't need these sessions does he?" Dann asked.

"No, he's relatively fine after the Blight to be honest. I used to say he was pathologically positive as if it's an insult... now it's something I've grown to admire."

"You've got a good one there, you know that?" Thirteen gave a smile as he said this.

"Oh yes, he's definitely that." Tel sat forward and smiled back as he looked round at his colleague.

"You have a good relationship, if I'm being honest, I am a little jealous..."

"What?" Tel jerked backward; his expression was clearly unhappy.

"Oh, Cassandra no!" Dann started laughing, "I'm so sorry Tel... no and no again, I'm not after Jed, or you for that matter... nor anyone really. But the idea of having someone you're that close to, it's very alluring y'know. I've never had it." Dann tapped his fingers on Tel's shoulder and smiled again. "I just think it must be a good place to be, hard work sometimes but the payoff would be worth it."

"Ah... okay, that's okay Dann," Tel paused as if he was away to elaborate, though instead he took a deep breath and said "so, anyway, I'd better get going. You must need to ...ah relax after the class." Tel felt suddenly very self-conscious and wanted to leave, in fact he desperately wanted to be anywhere else! He stood up, awkwardly cradling the mug in one hand.

"Tel? You okay there matey? I'm sorry if I wasn't clear but I really didn't mean anything. You know that, right?" Dann stood up and held a hand out towards the gravity manipulator. The Naltoran looked confused but was obviously trying to reach out to Tel.

"You're okay. I guess the therapy rattled me a bit and it's probably best I go..." Tel held out a glowing hand and his mug of green tea floated into the kitchen.

"If you want. I'll be running a class again tomorrow, so if you can make it..." Before Dann could finish his sentence, Tel Vole had flown out of the door.

Thirteen stared at the door for several seconds before sighing and returning to his couch. He had no idea what was really going on inside his colleague's head but whatever it was it was for Tel to sort out. Dann activated his holo and streamed a comedy classic from the vaults - the perfect way to help clear his mind of other people's dramas!

Outside of the apartment, Tel Vole turned the corner and sank down to the ground. Why, he thought, did he just do that? Why was it that Dann Hortra had that effect on him? He knew he loved Jed with all of his heart, but even after a great session with Dr Griffor where they had identified some underlying issues in their marriage and so were potentially closer than ever before, Tel had raced to see Dann. Was it just the meditation class he was after... really? What was he doing? Why was he acting like this and running to another man, was he intentionally sabotaging the relationship he had with Jed, the kindest and funniest and most decent man he had ever met?

Whatever the reason for the irrational feelings Dann brought out in him, Gravity Kid knew it would be best for everyone if he just avoided his teammate as much as possible going forward.

................................


Second Base.

Element Lad - Senior Team member, Jan Arrah of Trom - elemental transmutation
Kid Quantum - Jazmin Cullen of Xanthu - creation of temporal quantum fields, flight
Starkling - telepathic swarm-being composed of indestructible ball bearing sized components
Green Lantern - Dkyun Mu of Xudar - wearer of a Green Lantern power ring

Support staff:
Dr Richard Kent Shakespeare - Impulse - Chief Medical Officer and Support Team manager - enhanced strength, speed, durability, stamina


Troy had insisted that Jan take some of their teammates along if he wanted to go out to the Fringe to visit the Magus.

While Jan had not been ecstatic at this he had asked Troy if it was okay that Poltergeist, the new member he had been mentoring, could stay behind. They still had to figure out their way forward after the awkwardness of the mission on Rimbor. Troy understood and agreed, the Second Base team leader would mentor the young psychic until Jan returned and then they would all sit down and talk to resolve the issue.

As several of his teammates had previously met the Magus, the other survivor of the Trommite massacre, Jan decided to invite Kid Quantum to join them. He had been Jazmin's mentor when she had joined the team and they had built a decent working relationship, so he hoped she would agree to it. He knew that technically Jazmin came under Tinya and Cece's jurisdiction as she was based on First Base but the only other options were Kinetix and M'Windaji whose company he felt would guarantee it would not be a quiet or restful trip, or Brin and Laurel... and he really didn't fancy putting up with them for too long. Jan also knew that Tinya would understand his reasoning without him having to explain so he holo'ed and asked. Of course, she understood his rationale perfectly, and agreed with a knowing smile. She appeared to have calmed down after the senior team meeting they had both attended half an hour before. Nura had wound up Tinya and Jan felt bad for the team leader - he understood perfectly how undermining Dream Girl could be. She wished him luck and said she was just away on a mission herself and they could catch up when she returned.

When Jan got off the holo Kent suggested taking Starkling as their other teammate on this side-mission - the composite being had both telepathy and a versatile physical power set. Jan had queried why, a bit frustrated by the suggestion. Kent reminded him that they were not sure what they were going to get into, and as the Magus reputedly had two telepaths in his harem it made sense if they took a psychic on their team, just in case.

Jan shrugged and made the call despite not necessarily agreeing with his partner.

And so, twenty minutes later the four of them met in the Southern Docking Bay on second Base.

Jan explained that this was not a mission, per se, but they were following protocol so he hoped Jazmin and Starkling didn't mind joining him.

Kid Quantum smiled broadly and thanking her former mentor for inviting her. Starkling remained silent, which Jan took to mean it wasn't upset, though he really wasn't sure as the telepathic swarm being had no body language as such for him to read. Not that it mattered really, they were going and it was joining them.

"Right then... last one on has to pilot us all the way there!" Dr Shakespeare yelled as he dived into the anti-grav lift with a laugh.

As the cruiser floated out from the docking bay, Dkyun Mu the Xudarian Green Lantern flew up to the cruiser and asked if she could join them. She stated that she had never visited the Great White Asteroid Field of the Raptor Nebula despite it being within the sector she had been assigned to. Jan could hardly say no though a part of him was wondering if he was ever going to get the time he wanted to spend with the Magus at this rate. Dkyun used her Oan power ring to phase herself through the cruiser's bulkhead and joined the team on the bridge.

"The more the merrier!" Kent said as he hit the warp control to activate their FTL drive.

................


First Base, level 12, personal apartment of M'Windaji and Kinetix

They had gotten in late so slept through most of the morning.

Zoe woke up to find herself alone in bed. The side where Gahaji had lain was still warm and she pulled the sheet across so she could breathe in his scent. She had still to properly open her eyes though knew he would be in the small galley kitchen preparing breakfast.

"Gaj?" She said aloud, still keeping her eyes open though giggling as she did. "Gaj... I'm thirsty, can you bring me through a caffe pod pleeeease?"

He was so much better at mornings than she was so she would often be served breakfast in bed - he was such a sweetheart!

"Two minutes Zoe, don't move, I'll be through soon."

In the kitchen Gahji smiled to himself. He had hoped to wake up Zoe with breakfast, but didn't mind the surprise not happening now as they had gotten into a bit of a routine so it wouldn't have surprised her too much really. He laughed to himself as he thought one morning he'd stay in bed and insist she made him breakfast - now that would surprise her!

The auto-chef had prepared half a dozen fat and fluffy pancakes that he generously dribbled Kiringyagese syrup over before sprinkling the plate with berries. He had found a new fruit filled grove he the day before on level 38 after he got back from the mission to catch the Shadowmancer. Ever since that faery had joined them there were these amazing spots of fruit and berry producing plants appearing all over the base and he really enjoyed finding them. The grove he found the day before had raspberries, strawberries, blueberries, pears and Rimborian sweetnuts. He had taken a tub full of raspberries and blue berries, leaving the rest for the next person to enjoy.

Gahaji hummed to himself as he took the tray through to the bedroom, making sure to balance the two caffe pods on either side of it.

"You know, you spoil me!" Zoe said as she sat up, clapping her hands together in joy as she smelled the pancakes.

"Someone's got to honey, I'm lucky it's me you let do it."

"Oh, you! What do you want now?" she said with a wicked grin.

He placed the tray carefully on the bed and bent across to kiss her.

"Breakfast, I want breakfast." He replied with a smile before he snatched up a fork and dug into the pile of pancakes.

"Hey, wait for me!" Zoe grabbed the other fork on the tray and dug into the pile at her side of the plate. For the next few minutes neither spoke as they tucked into their breakfast.

After they had finished and Zoe had taken the plate, pods and tray through to the kitchen recycler she joined him back in their bed.

"I was just thinking, y'know how you said you had the idea yesterday to get the spear away from that shadowdoofus... well..."

"Yeah? Go on..." Gahaji was on his side, propped up on an elbow.

"I wonder if it was your talent that gave you the idea, y'see you magically find things ... so did you find the solution to the problem?"

"Eh? Nah! That's not how my powers work Zoe."

"Not normally, maybe, but think about it for a mo. We know you're smart honey, but you figured out what none of the more senior staff could, or Glorith... it was pretty obvious in hindsight but even Thunder didn't suss it out.... and you got the Ruby which is pretty powerful so perhaps it's, I dunno, amping you up?"

"Oh, so I'm not as smart as I think, just acting on some magic impulse.... that's a super creepy thought Zoe, thanks for putting that in my head. You know how I feel about magic. It's... well, it's not a normal thing to my people, I was brought up to believe it's not natural."

"And this is?" She held up her hand and one of their pillows flew up from their bed and transformed into a bird-like shape before them where it hovered around in circles for several seconds as she telekinetically manipulated it.

"No, you know what I mean. I'm not a magic user like Glorith or Xao. My talent is a hereditary thing, it's not like real magic magic."

"Not real magic magic? What does that even mean Gahaji?" Her tone had turned more serious and he knew that the conversation would stop being so much fun quickly if he continued with it.

"Okay, I'll think about it, I promise but that's a biggie to land on me. So... okay, food for thought... but only if we can fool around a little instead of arguing?" He batted his eyes at her and they both laughed as the tension left the conversation.

"You are insatiable!" She said as he reached across to kiss her neck.

It was at that moment a holo of Tinya wazzo appeared before them.

"Sorry to interrupt. Gahaji you're coming on a mission with me. Be ready, ten minutes in Henry's warp room please." And with that the holo-avatar disappeared.

Zoe tutted and said, "Y'see, now that was just rude!"


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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 4 February 22)
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Hey IB, thanks for your feedback, it's very kind.

I'm always trying to think of ways to broaden the team so representation is very important, and if we can't have a decent amount of that in the Legion then where can we?

Spoiler/Booster - I wouldn't go as far as say it's a relationship, but they do enjoy hanging out together when it's convenient.

Dawnstar will get a bit more character growth as it's long overdue. Hopefully she won't ruin her chance with her panicking and control issues!

Naltoran society is so ripe for development so thought I'd slip those bits in, glad you liked it.

And Graq will play an important role with the Hope squad missions so am happy you liked my ideas for him as you will be seeing more of him.

Next up, Tinya and the Espionage Squad against the Dominion! Eek!

Thanks again, more soon,

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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 4 February 22)
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hi Harbi, you deserve all the kind feedback smile

LOL at Tinya's struggle between Nura being annoying and being helpful. How infuriating eh!

I feel like the stakes will be MUCH higher than Tinya expected, as you have foreshadowed it well... ohhh!

very realistic bit about Tel, I like his conflict between his love for Jed and his... er... lust? attraction? for muscular sexy Dann. I could have cut the tension with a knife, you wrote it so well!

glad Jan still feels his responsibility for Poltergeist ... who might not be his mentee for long...

love the nice relationship between Tinya and Jan, and him asking Jazmin along. and also that bit about Nura undermining Jan too... hah! a throwback to the Levitz days

this is exciting, eager to see where it goes re the Magus!

you write the Zoe/Gahaji relationship so well, it's so real. and nice throwback to Zoe in the comics, her thinking about Gahaji having the ability to find/use magic, lol! oh Zoe!

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Nura is probably my favourite Legionnaire, but my god she'd be annoying as hell to know so I feel for Tinya laugh

Poor Tel...it's difficult when you're not used to relationships navigating how to deal with the idea that you can still be attracted to other people on some level or another...or I guess it could also be him convincing himself he should just be happy with Jed when maybe he's not as ready to settle down but I guess we'll see! I am glad you made it really clear that Thirteen wasn't making moves on him though, I was initially wondering if that was gonna go somewhere very different but I think just having a straight up affair would be the less interesting way to go.

Zoe and Gahaji were cute...her rolling over to his side of the bed is a very relatable couple thing, and I like her reaction to Tinya invading their sexytimes lol

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True Mathemagic is the arcane arithmetic of the universe, the cosmic calculus that underwrites the laws of physics. It is to true magic what a sabre-tooth tiger is to a mountain lion on its range - a primitive and ferocious ancestor that very very few living beings could claim to have seen with their own eyes.

Of all the beings across time and space that have learned of it, the race known as the Kruishri, who called themselves the Virtuously Aligned and Numbered were widely held as the most adept. Their skills with this art, the rarest of the Mystical Fields, was said by those far less knowledgeable to know any better to be as if they have access to the 'cheat codes' for reality itself. It was far beyond the petty Arithmancy sometimes practiced on Zerox or the commonplace probability scanning of the Naltorans.

The being that referred to itself as x345(3xY-p) was the only living member of the Kruishri known to have entered the United Planets and was currently what could loosely be called in the employ of the former Under Secretary from Rimbor, Sa Lok. This being appeared something akin to a slightly bloated eleven foot tall frond of a fern with a furry silver belly that had many dozen leaf blades that looked as if they were made of copper alloy and silicon as it sat in a methane bath.

When x345(3xY-p) had arrived in the Milky Way, Sa Lok had been working within the department of the United Planets Government on Weber's World that dealt with processing unknown aliens. They had quickly established it communicated through sound, using tonal variations and notes created when it rubbed its leaf blades together, and depending upon which section of its body these were from denoted the thematic structure or emotional context of its conversation. It took a further two months to break the complicated mathematical codes within its speech structure before true communication occurred between this being and the UP. When x345(3x-Y-p) communicated it sounded somewhat like a symphony played entirely on a multi-sized glockenspiel. By the time full communication was established, Sa Lok was well aware that this most alien of beings had exhibited some fairly exotic abilities so had taken a keen personal interest in its well being...

Sa Lok had learned that this being thought of itself as something of an adventurer-cum-temporal surgeon on a mission that involved ensuring the laws of physics that governed space and time were, for the most part, kept whole and contemporaneous within the Milky Way galaxy according to the needs of the greater universe within this plane of existence. Sa Lok had taken great effort to build a personal relationship, of a sort, with x345(3xY-p) that ensured the being would assist the Rimborian from time to time if he continued to feed it real-time information on spatial anomalies and a supply of fresh methane and UV radiation.

Even though Sa Lok kept the strange being physically apart from wider galaxy, x345(3xY-p) was known to the higher echelons of the magical community and had recently assisted them as they sealed Talok viii away from this prime level of existence. After that it had retreated from their perceptions and continued its alien agenda from the security of this satellite. The Mystics of Zerox left it alone as it did not directly interfere in their business. They understood perfectly that the strange being from a place beyond the nearby galaxies had its own path to follow.

Currently, and for the last nine years, x345(3xY-p) resided in a large methane filled chamber attended to by several Gil-Dishpan staff, on an isolated satellite that spun in the depths of space many light years from the nearest star or inter-stellar shipping lane.

As Sa Lok had requested, x345(3xY-p) had transported Science Police Captain Tuk Shir of Daxam from his compound on Rimbor to a secured location in a large craft within the Dominion's Empire and ensure none would be able to trace his whereabouts. After that the Rimborian had left it alone as it contemplated the structural integrity of the Milky Way. Such tasks as the Rimborian asked for and their minuscule repercussions, as x345(3xY-p) saw them, were a small ask given the support it had been given to continue with its own mission.

The beings of this small galaxy at the current moment of time were so wrapped up in their own petty existence that they rarely looked at the bigger picture...

...............


Somewhere within the Dominion Empire:


Phantom Girl - Team Leader, Tinya Wazzo of Bgtzl Dimension - intangibility
Chameleon Boy - Espionage Squad leader, Reep Daggle of Durla - shape changer
MWindaji - Gahaji of Kiringyaga - super tracker, carries the Ruby of Life allowing tactile transformative magic

Newly promoted from Academy student to full membership (Mentor in brackets):
Strobe - Denal Lort of Dryad - assume electro-magnetic energy form (Chameleon Boy)


Strobe went through the warp first in x-ray form and quickly checked the area was quiet.

The young man from Dryad reappeared before the Legionnaires less than a second after the warp had opened. "All clear!" He said before vanishing into an electromagnetic form and zipping back through Henry's warp.

Phantom Girl followed, with Reep and Gahaji close behind. They appeared in a small alcove; the light was dim and the walls and floor appeared to be made out of living material. There was a thrumming noise of distant machinery though none of them could see any Dominators close-by.

<Gahaji, can you sense Captain Shir?> Reep asked the tracker.

<There's something... hang on> M'windaji took the Ruby of Life in one hand and concentrated on his missing Daxamite colleague. He knew he should be able to find Tuk Shir but something was blocking his senses, like a fog. The Ruby grew hot to his touch and Gahaji knew that the mystical essence of the enchanted stone was somehow angry. <It's definitely magical, whatever's stopping us from tracking him, though I'm sorry I don't know anything else about it. I have an idea though... I can't track him, but maybe if I focus on something from his uniform, not him as such but a bit of his clothing... ah... his belt, I'll track that, I can feel it... that way about one and a half klicks> Gahaji pointed to their left.

<Strobe, can you check it out please? Be careful Denal> Reep sent to the new legionnaire.

<Okay, I'm gone!> The young man from Dryad said as he vanished in an electro-magnetic energy form.

The three remaining legionnaires looked around, aware that despite their flight rings producing telepathic white noise to deter casual psychic scans and their distorters projecting a holo to hide them in the dingy alcove they were not entirely safe from risk. Five seconds passed and Strobe appeared before them with a smile on his face.

<It's him! He's strapped onto some strange apparatus though alive>

<That's excellent news Denal> Tinya sent with a smile. She was careful not to broadcast her awe at the new legionnaires abilities as he had just scouted out a position over a Klick away ands returned in a few heartbeats; Reep was right when he had said to her he thought that Denal had one of the most versatile abilities currently on the team.

<Well done> Reep added.

<That's not all though, there's like forty or so big guys in the rooms around him. I didn't want to hang around as they gave off some weird energy between them, and about half are human too>

<Ah, that'll be Sa Lok's troops probably, that'll explain why we didn't find many remains in the debris left of his compound on Rimbor. What do you bet they've had a selection of gene-mods?> Reep mudsed.

<That will complicate things...> Tinya sent.

<Why don't we just get Henry to warp the whole team in?> Strobe asked.

<We'd start a war Denal. Legionnaires have UP ambassadorial status so it would give the Dominion a reason to start a war> Although Reep replied softly he could see the blush rise on the young mans cheek.

<...so, what do you want to do?> Strobe asked.

<Scout ahead for the next 500 metres and we'll make our way after you. Give us warning if there's anything to look out for>

<On it!> And Strobe was gone again.

Tinya was away to give the order to move out when she made eye contact with Gahaji.

<You okay there?> She asked the tracker, noticing his scowl.

<I was just thinking ...I wonder if I could track whoever blocked me from finding Tuk Shir. Maybe pay them a visit to figure out how they did it and stop them doing it again...>

<yeah, good idea, though let's focus on the mission at hand and we'll consider it after we get our colleague back> And with that Tinya floated out of the alcove into a broad twisting corridor.

.....................


Second Base:


Mon El - Senior Team member, Lar Gand of Daxam - incredible strength, speed, stamina, senses, laser vision, space flight, invulnerability

Intern: Snoop - Science Police Cadet Horol Gyllaspi of the Galentorio Satellites - astral projection


Mon El called for the student they called Snoop - Science Police Cadet Horol Gyllaspi of the Galentorio Satellites.

The young officer was one of less than a hundred of his species that had left their home system, despite having been in contact with their galactic neighbours for over two centuries. Galentorians were for the most part unadventurous by nature, though highly civilised and intelligent.

Mon El that, rather unflattering, the student looked somewhat like an over sized chicken. He had heard others say they looked like wingless swans, but he thought they were too ungainly to be swans...

The students' plump oval shaped body was covered in soft downy looking white fur with a fan shaped tail at one end and a long neck at the other. They had four small arms usually held tight against the chest in a double 'W' shape and their two legs were underneath their body with backwards facing knees and curled up feet - effectively, the student walked on his knuckles. Their feet only uncurled when they were underwater to reveal paddle like flippers. As the Galentorians breathed through their fur - it wasn't actually even technically fur, it was a mass of minuscule breathing tubes - which could extract oxygen equally well from both air or water, they were perfectly adapted to their native swampy world. What was most striking though was the long neck with two large red frills that started at the top and ran down to their bodies. These frills could detect vibrations and the molecular composition in the air or water around them giving them extraordinary senses of both hearing and smell. Where one might expect a head, they had a small ocher coloured ball without eyes with a pointy mouth that at a glance did look remarkably like a beak. It was obvious to see why early explorers from the Terran Colonies called this race the Swans of Space.

The Galentorians had one talent though that made them unique. Every one of their race could astrally project their consciousness over vast distances. While projecting they gained an additional sense that was something similar to having 360-degree sight within a fifty metre or so radius of where they projected into.

The main reason why so few left their world was because they believed it best to avoid risk and instead experience the universe with a thought. While he understood this reasoning, Mon El didn't really agree with it. He did know though that it wasn't his place to comment.

He was very grateful to have one of these rare beings present on Home Base and had quickly supported Lu when she insisted the Senior Team nominate them for internship. None of the Senior Team had challenged the decision, as an intern had legitimate reason through the contract the Team had arranged with the UP Security Forces after the Psyche affair, to stay once their training officially ended if they so desired. Having someone on the team who could spy on virtually anywhere within this side of the Milky way was an asset they really didn't want to lose.

"Cadet Gyllaspi, thank you for joining me. I need your unique talents to assist with a mission."

The intern's body vibrated, which Mon El realised was it communicating in its native language - sub sonics. Within a second the translator and speec simulator built into the interns flight ring kicked in and an artifical voice that sounded something like a teenage girl's said "I would be most honoured to assist. Shall I relay what I perceive as I monitor?"

"Thank you Cadet Gyllaspi, though if it's easier perhaps you could broadcast what you perceive across the telepathic matrix?"

"Your senses do not align to our perception so this may not be fully successful, though I shall try..." The artificial voice picked up the lack of faith in the idea, but Mon El ignored it and said his thanks again. Lar Gand smiled to himself as he called up the co-ordinates of the warp where Henry had just dropped off Tinya.

If the Espionage Team got into any trouble then he would call up Henry to warp the Legion in seconds to assist.

.................................


Somewhere within the Dominion Empire:


Captain Tuk Shir had felt his anti-lead treatment finally wear off two days before.

He had spent the four days prior to that held inside an energy field that had dulled his senses and neutralised his abilities. He had tried using every trick he could think of to escape but the energy field had simply absorbed everything he could throw at it, and when he had attempted to spin at hyper-speed in an attempt to break through the time barrier (something he had never tried before) the energy field had shrunk around him binding him in place.

When he first appeared he had several hours of non-stop aggression against the barrier before he stopped and rested. Every few hours he would resume his attempts to break free but had been wholly unsuccessful ever time. Tuk Shir knew better than to exhaust himself as he no access to yellow star light to refuel his Daxamite abilities.

In the six days he had been here it had been virtually impossible to sleep as the barrier would jolt against him if his eyes closed for longer than a few seconds. Tuk Shir knew that while his Daxamite abilities were still present this was not too much of a problem but as he would only remain immune to heavy metal poisoning and red star radiation for a limited period of time the exhaustion would soon become torturous. It didn't help that he couldn't see or hear anything, just the dull glow of the energy barrier and sound of his blows against it. At one point he had started counting his heart beats, that he could now clearly hear, just to keep his mind active.

The entire time Tuk Shir had been trapped the captain had found it hard not to think about his wife Anje; he knew she would try to remain stoic but doubted she would succeed, she was far more in touch with her emotions than he was. As he thought about her he wondered why there had been no telepathic attacks - it was something a Daxamite was fully vulnerable to. That's not to say there weren't strange things happening within his mind: He had felt his moods twist and turn but never enough to really get the better of him. He knew that a mixture of the training he had received within the Science Police to resist potential psychic attacks and techniques his wife had taught him to remain grounded had helped him when these foreign feelings invaded his mind. Sa Lok's gene-mod shops had offered some limited psychic skills so he assumed that this was what was causing these strange mood swings. It also confirmed to him that it had actually been the Rimborian that had kidnapped him and held him here.

The other thought that he had was that the Legion must be searching for him, they had resources that even the Science Police didn't so he held tightly onto the knowledge that the team would be doing everything it could to rescue him. As the days slowly passed this became a difficult idea to hold, and slowly his thoughts swung between worry that the team had no way to find him or were in similar situations to him where they were somehow trapped, and anger that they weren't moving fast enough.

Roughly sixty hours prior, the energy field had started to glow with a dull red hue and the Science Police Captain from Daxam knew that his captor was introducing radiation that mimicked a red sun's. They were taking their time as he was being slowly weakened and made physically vulnerable. He was still a strong man though with many years of training so even without his enhanced Daxamite strength and speed so he could tell his captors were trying very hard to weaken him while lessening any risk that they might give him any opportunity to get free. With every passing hour he felt his strength ebb away and knew that soon he would not be able to resist whatever it was that was planned for him.

And even as he became weaker, his determination to see his wife again kept his mind active... or at least, it helped stem off the urges to scream in fear and frustration.

Where were the damned Legion? Whatever the reason for them not rescuing him yet, he thought, whoever it was that was holding him here would find out pretty quickly after he escaped how big a mistake it was to piss off a Daxamite with serious military training!


Three hours ago Captain Tuk Shir had finally succumbed to extreme exhaustion and collapsed.

The Dominators that were running this experiment had been careful to ensure that the Daxamite was truly unconscious, though once they were certain they ordered their staff to remove the captain and prepare him for harvesting.


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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 18 February 22)
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I really love how you introduce new concepts, Harbi. the Mathemagic concept is an interesting one, and I laughed a bit at how it's more potent than the (quote) commonplace probability scanning of Naltorians

that's a super interesting description of x345 there....! and a mission to ensure the laws of physics stay constant, huh!

I really like the little bits of tech you've added to explain how Legionnaires can sneak around (or weather weird environments, etc.), it just makes sense that with all the tech at their disposal, they'd have things like telepathic white noise projectors...

nice way to highlight Strobe's speed and usefulness! quite impressive indeed!

I love Snoop's design! like a chicken, I giggled at that. making them highly intelligent also adds a nice juxtaposition there

ah, smart of Mon-El to keep an eye on Tinya's team... though I can imagine Tinya wont be very happy with him doing that. maybe.

whew, that energy field is something, they really thought of everything to stop Tuk Shir from escaping... he's smart though, knowing he has to conserve his strength and stay alert. I would probably have given into despair by that point.

Good explanation for why Tuk is still OK despite being gone for quite some time... that the Dominators were really intending to weaken him.

oooh, excited for the next bit!

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okay I immediately love x345(3xY-p) and Snoop! They are really ALIEN aliens!

I especially like how x345(3xY-p) isn't actually even a villain, but just has a different perspective on the greater good.

And Strobe is starting to become the Legion's own little Monica Rambeau, he's much cooler than a certain other character from Dryad who turns into light wink

Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 4 April 22)
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Somewhere within the Dominion Empire

Phantom Girl – Team Leader, Tinya Wazzo of Bgtzl Dimension - intangibility
Chameleon Boy – Espionage Squad leader, Reep Daggle of Durla - shape changer
MWindaji - Gahaji of Kiringyaga - super tracker, carries the Ruby of Life allowing tactile transformative magic

Newly promoted from Academy student to full membership (Mentor in brackets):
Strobe - Denal Lort of Dryad - assume electro-magnetic energy form (Chameleon Boy)



MWindaji carefully led the way.

It had been over thirty minutes since they had arrived and Gahaji reckoned they had managed to make it most of the way to their missing colleague.

Chameleon Boy had changed a small flying form that was buzzing around the group, sometimes he was in front, sometimes behind as the Durlan used the enhanced sight of the creature who's form he had assumed to look out for any guards or personnel from this base. Strobe was off in an x-ray form searching this base for information while Phantom Girl floated quietly behind the tracker from Kiringyaga.

The tracker could feel they were getting closer to their quarry but the Legionnaires had had to make a few hurried stops as they hid from Dominators.

The Diskheads were thankfully oblivious to the team as they went about their business in this base. There were two humans - presumably from Sa Lok's staff on Rimbor - that accompanied each group of the Dominators. The humans looked dazed, perhaps drugged. as they got clser to where M'Windaji was leading them the team all noticed that lights were getting brighter and the thrumming noise that they had heard when they arrived was louder now as well. The laboratory where he was being held was clearly central to this facility. As Tinya thought about it, it kind of made sense - having access to a Daxamite's DNA that also held the secret to maintaining that races incredible powers under a red star would be an absolute coup for the Dominion.

<we're getting closer, I think he'll be about 250 metres that way, one level down from here> MWindaji pointed ahead of them as he sent his thoughts across the telepathic matrix.

<team, let's think this through before we charge in there> Tinya sent as Gahaji started to fly forward. The tracker turned back towards her and gave a small smile.

<What do you suggest Tinya?> Reep sent his thoughts out.

<Oh... I think perhaps it's time we created a distraction>

..............


Strobe had flown in circles around the team in x-ray form.

He remembered his academy training and scoped out the floors above and below as well as just the level they were on - 3D thinking was a constant part of the training he had been given while at the academy. The adrenaline fuelled urge was to fly around at full speed but he knew that was how he would miss things so he controlled his velocity and moved at a reasonable rate.

Initially a lot of the rooms around them appeared to be storage or empty living quarters but as they got closer to their kidnapped colleague there were an increasing number of laboratories and strange open places that held large tree-like structures with pods holding organic structures. Denal was sure these were Dominion clone vats though he didn't stop in any of them long enough to make certain. Each of these tree-like things had cables... roots perhaps, that all led in the same direction. Strobe decided to quickly check this out and it was while he was flying through a room two levels below that he witnessed something he knew he would need to report to Phantom Girl and the team above.

Strobe had once disarmed a Dominion battle cruiser by disrupting their energy grid while on a mission with Mon El. After that experience he could recognise a power generator of Dominion design when he got close to it. This room opened up into a massive cavern that housed an enormous dome that filled his senses; a Dominator Power Sphere! Though what really grabbed his attention was that it had a queue of what he assumed were humans close by. He carefully lowered his x-ray form to get closer and saw that there were three Dominators stood at the top of a ramp that led to the generator and they called for one of the humans to approach... As Strobe watched the person touched a spot on the generators dome and started the glow. The young man from Dryad could feel the exponential increase in energy within them as if they were sucking in the energy from the power sphere. The now charged-up person stepped back and the next person in the queue stepped up. A group of Dominators would lead these hyper-charged individuals away in pairs.

Strobe realised he had been hovering there for thirty seconds, though maybe more, and needed to keep his teammates updated with what was around them.

In a split second Strobe was back with his teammates to share what he had found. He used the telepathic matrix to share his memories though his senses were very different to his teammates so he needed to explain what he had witnessed.

<they're powering up... you think it's the Rimborians that had gene-mods? That's very worrying, they were tough enough already> Chameleon Boy shared. <Denal you need to....>

<no, don't do anything right now Denal... we're here to rescue Captain Shir, and can return once we have him safely back on First Base. We'll need to distract them... so, Denal, can you try to find one of their power spheres a few klicks from here and do your thing on it, mess it up, see if we can get their attention pointed away from us. Do you think you're up for that?> Phantom Girl sounded concerned but it was clear she was only focused on the mission.

The young man from Dryad nodded and vanished. Reep was silent as they continued on their way to the captured colleague.

.............


Chameleon Boy saw the guards!

After Strobe had left to complete the mission Tinya had given him, Reep had flown ahead of his teammates staying in a tiny form and sticking close to the ceiling where he felt it was less likely he would be seen. The corridor had several tight turns that made it more likely that the team could be caught unawares so Reep had taken it upon himself to act as a look-out, ranging four or five metres ahead of his colleagues.

The two Dominators were tall and skinny, standing outside a large octagonal doorway like guards. They were wearing flowing green robes that blended seamlessly into the walls around them making them harder to spot. Reep did see that both and had red hexagons on their brows - he was fairly sure that meant they had been enhanced. He quietly flew above them to get a better look. Before he could send a telepathic warning to Tinya or Gahaji they both pulled small weapons from their robes and turned towards the direction where the Legionnaires were coming from; something had alerted them to the team's presence and Reep was sure they would get the opportunity fire off an attack before M'Windaji could avoid it...

The Durlan had been silently circling above their heads in the form of a Saundorrean Midge-fly. Without a second thought he quickly changed into a Braalian Ferropotamus and allowed gravity to take its course, squashing the two guards underneath his metallic hide with a 'clank!'

The Legionnaire quickly changed back into his usual form and snapped two incapacity cuffs onto their arms before pulling them to the side of the curved corridor.

<What the hell... Reep!> Tinya was clearly surprised. She hadn't seen the guards as she had been floating behind M'windaji.

<Gahaji, can you find a place where we can stash these two until this is all over?>

The hunter closed his eyes for a second before pointing towards the wall ten feet further down the corridor. They dragged the two unconscious Dominators and once they had reached the spot he had pointed to Gahaji leaned against the wall. There was a small hum and it spiralled open into a darkened room. They flung the guards into the room and stepped back into the corridor, allowing the door to spiral shut behind them.

In the corridor the ambient lighting had changed, suddenly flashing pale blue. An alarm had obviously been tripped.

<Was that Denal or us?> Gahaji asked?

<Not sure... Either way, let's get moving>

<follow me, we're nearly there> M'Windaji rushed through the doors were the two guards had been standing closely followed by Phantom Girl and Chameleon Boy in the shape of a sand-fly.

Inside were sleeping quarters housing over a dozen of Sa Lok's enhanced meta-troops along with several of the tall Dominators. The Legionnaire's unexpected entrance did not go unnoticed and within seconds there were energy bolts being flung at them as they quickly retreated.

...............


Second Base:

Mon El - Senior Team member, Lar Gand of Daxam - incredible strength, speed, stamina, senses, laser vision, space flight, invulnerability

Intern: Snoop - Science Police Cadet Horol Gyllaspi of the Galentorio Satellites - astral projection

Support staff: Henry – Anti Lad – Spatial warp controller


Mon El had watched enough!

Snoop had been sharing their astral visions with him. If needed Mon El could be incredibly patient - it was something he had learned painfully while trapped within the Phantom Zone for almost a thousand years. But that didn't mean he would ever be comfortable being in a situation where he was remaining on the sidelines while being able to act as people desperately needed his assistance.

"Henry can you come here please." The Daxamite said out loud, knowing that the holo-man who controlled the teams spatial warps would hear him through the flight ring comm app and appear in front of him.

It took three seconds before the holo materialised.

"Lar, how may I help you?"

"I need a warp to Tinya's location, now. Her team needs my help."

Henry gave a small sad smile and shook his head.

"I'm so sorry but Phantom Girl expressly forbade me from sending a warp to her team if you requested it. She said, and I quote 'if Lar asks for a warp to help us you need to tell him to give us a chance to complete the mission and not charge in their like a bull. We don't want to start an intergalactic war.' So, my apologies but I shall not be opening that warp for you. Is there anything else I can help you with."

Mon El swore at Henry, who gave an apologetic shrug and half smile in reply.


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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 4 April 22)
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Hey folks, sorry for the delay, things have been busy, though there should be more coming your way very soon - fingers crossed by the end of the week.


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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 4 April 22)
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no apologies needed Harbi, good writing takes time, and it's always a treat seeing something new from you!

As always, I like your look into the thought processes of your characters - see, Strobe applying his Academy training.

Dazed human staff... it does make sense that they would be drugged, I bet the Dominators would take precautions

Hyper-charged individuals.. are those the dazed staff? uh oh...

I like how Gahaji can also track/find things,like a room they needed to stash the guards

ooooh my gosh, Tinya had anticipated Lar looking in! both clever of her, and... well, let's see if it was completely wise!

I do like the tensions you've written in: Cham being forward-thinking and probably wanting to put a stop to the spheres for good, while Tinya focused on the mission and wanting to avoid a larger incident... well, it's hit the fan now, I'm super eager to see what comes next, Harbi!

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I like the realistic tension between Tinya and Cham, it's not over the top and you can't really say that either of them is in the wrong...

Also continuing to enjoy Strobe's little outings! I really dig the way you have him use his powers! smile

I had to laugh at Henry being all "lol sorry not sorry" at Mon....and it makes total sense to me that Tinya of all people would anticipate Mon wanting to come play cavalry - it is one of those things that shows how well they know one another without necessarily making a big deal out of it.

I quite like this small team that Tinya has taken with her, I am looking forward to seeing how they go from here!

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Somewhere within the Dominion Empire

Phantom Girl – Team Leader, Tinya Wazzo of Bgtzl Dimension - intangibility
Chameleon Boy – Espionage Squad leader, Reep Daggle of Durla - shape changer
MWindaji - Gahaji of Kiringyaga - super tracker, carries the Ruby of Life allowing tactile transformative magic

Newly promoted from Academy student to full membership (Mentor in brackets):
Strobe - Denal Lort of Dryad - assume electro-magnetic energy form (Chameleon Boy)


M'Windaji and Chameleon Boy fled along the corridor.

They turned a corner and Reep pushed Gahaji against a wall.

<quiet! and tuck your feet in> As the message was sent the Durlan transformed into a large leaf-like shape and squeezed the tracker up against the wall.

A group of the thugs roared around the corridor and ran past them.

<Tinya? Are you okay? I'm with Gahaji...>

<my ruby can make me totally invisible to them> the tracker sent as he pushed Chameleon Boy off. MWindaji gripped the enchanted stone tightly and visualised becoming undetectable to anyone that wasn't a Legionnaire. Chameleon Boy could tell that something had happened as his colleague appeared to dim ever so slightly, as if suddenly wrapped in a heat haze. Knowing full well that magic was outside of his own understanding Reep trusted that the young tracker knew what he was doing.

<I'm okay guys, you get Captain Shir and I'll be right behind you> Tinya called across the telepathic matrix.

They could hear explosions and yells traveling away from them. There was obviously a group of thugs chasing after Tinya in the opposite direction.

<Strobe!> Chameleon Boy reached out for the new Legionnaire he was mentoring, <can you find and assist Tinya...>

<no! Guys, listen to me. Get Captain Shir out of here and I'll find you> Phantom Girl cut the communication, her focus was clearly on dealing with the thugs that were chasing after her.

<I don't understand, she could easily lose them...> M'Windaji sent to Chameleon Boy. They were carefully retracing their steps.

<yes, and she will as soon as we have our Daxamite colleague away from here. So let's get that done and let Tinya keep those the guards away from us>

As Reep sent this message they both heard a explosion that rocked the complex they were in. It came from behind them and from the way it echoed and rumbled through the buildings, they estimated it was quite far away. Seconds later Strobe appeared beside them and announced that he had damaged the power sphere as asked and wondered if he should hit a few more. Chameleon Boy gave the young man from Dryad some praise and asked him to stay close, their primary mission was to free their colleague and they were getting close.

The three men retraced their steps along to where Gahaji had indicated they could find their Daxamite colleague.

<Guys, I have an idea...> Gahaji sent <Reep, I need you to touch me so the Ruby can make you undetectable too. We should be able to sneak right past any guards they have and grab Tuk Shir. Once I get my hands on him he'll vanish too then we can call a warp out of here>

Gahaji felt his Durlan colleague, in the form of a small fly land on his shoulder.

<Okay.... he's not far away now so let's go get him>

................


Phantom Girl knew what she was doing.

They had been seen and there was nothing any of them could do about that fact but that didn't mean the Legion wouldn't get what they came for. And, she also knew if she was clever about it they would never be officially held responsible for taking Tuk Shir back either.

Her distorter on her belt would make it really difficult for the group giving chase to find her if she set it on the Hide function but instead she willed it to generate an illusion that would slightly modify her outfit and features - she would not be seen as a known Legionnaire in any footage that might come up from this excursion. Instead she would appear as a pale purple skinned woman and the uniform it projected was a standard bounty hunters mish-mash of armour. Also, by feigning to be injured she knew that the thugs chasing after her saw her as an easy target... she found it quite funny how easy it was to get them away from where she needed her teammates to be.

There were bound to be guards left behind where they had just ran from, she knew they wouldn't be lucky enough to have them all chasing after her, but even if she had just split the defending force in half it meant much better odds for Reep and Gahaji and Denal.

The team leader had an idea: locate some infrastructure that looked vital and hide out in it, getting the thugs that were close behind her to rip it apart trying to reach her and so damage their own base in the process. As she looked around for anything that appeared to be important a bolt of electricity zapped close by her head. Instinctively, Tinya ducked, and as she did someone charged into her and fell straight through her immaterial form to crash into a wall. In an attempt to misdirect the thugs that were racing up behind her she punched the fallen man firmly on the back of the head and while doing that slipped an incapacity cuff on his wrist with her other hand. He immediately fell unconscious just as she hoped. Tinya quickly rummaged in his belt and threw away a gun before finding what appeared to be a command key. She only had seconds as the mob got close. She quickly ripped the cuff off his arm, so as to not leave evidence behind, and ran. It would appear to the thugs following her that she had strength enough knock one of their enhanced comrades out, which might make them pause a little. She hoped that this misdirection would give her extra seconds when they finally got close to her.

More energy bolts flew past the Legionnaire, scorching and smashing the walls and floor around her.

Tinya smiled as she flew along the twisting corridors.

..................


MWindaji could hear his heart beating.

He floated through the sleeping quarters they had just ran from, sticking to the sides of the room to avoid the four guards who remained. The team had established that Sa Lok had taken a team of his gene-modified security from Rimbor when he fled so weren't surprised to see them here. Each of the guards looked like they meant serious business! Three of them wore paramilitary armour while the fourth had metallic skin with thorny spikes running across their shoulders and arms.

"Any news?" The guard that stood at the door at the rear of the room said.

"La Chon-Sai says there's only one woman, but she's tricky... wearing some camouflage that scrambles the sensors but they'll get her, there's nowhere she can run to." The woman by the door said, her eyes never leaving the corridor.

"Keep me up-dated." The first guard growled. Even as he spoke the Legionnaires sneaked past and into the corridor behind him.

The corridor led to junction that split into four. Gahaji cautiously led them down the central corridor which reached a small room where three Dominators and two humans were watching a screen. None were facing the door as it opened and before they could turn around Strobe had transformed into a bolt of electricity and blown them off their feet. Chameleon Boy recognised one of the men as Sa Lok, the rogue former UP Under-Secretary from Rimbor who had set up the gene-mod shops on his homeworld. Reep assumed his normal form and quickly turned to the door behind them and ensured it was locked shut - the guards outside hopefully wouldn't disturb them for a while. The Durlan resumed the form of a fly and circled above the control panel desperate to figure out how to release their colleague.

As he flew over the hard light control he saw the Dominators get back on their feet and Sa Lok rubbed his eyes and sat up.

"Oh Legionnaires and your little tricks, I know you're here." He growled. He closed his eyes and started to glow a sickly green colour. A light pulsed out from him across the room and with it Reep found himself back in his natural form and Strobe appeared, suddenly human again.

"You didn't think I'd empower myself? Neutralising abilities is such a handy skill to have..." As the former Under-Secretary spoke the Dominators jumped at the Legionnaires who desperately fought against them. Strobe struggled and was quickly forced face down upon the ground by two of them while Reep did his best within the confined space to use his combat training effectively against a bigger and stronger opponent but even with all his experience, the Durlan was struggling.

MWindaji floated at the side of the room, suddenly aware that he could no longer sense the presence of Tuk Shir... his tracking ability had been neutralised! It took a second to see that the Dominators had not attacked him but he quickly realised that the Ruby of Life must not have been affected by Sa Lok's unexpected ability. Swooping across the room Gahaji slapped an incapacity cuff on Sa Lok's arm as the Rimborian was standing up. The former UP Under-Secretary collapsed. The young tracker then did the same to the Dominators on top of Strobe and Chameleon Boy.

"Thank you Gahaji..." Chameleon Boy said as he took a couple of deep breaths, "right, let's get Captain Shir out of here and skedaddle! that's enough excitement for one day."

"How long will this last?" Strobe said. He was still lying on the floor, blood was trickling from his nose and he had red marks across the side of his face where the Dominators had struck him. He seemed oblivious to that and was looking aghast at his flesh and blood hands.

"C'mon, we need to get Captain Shir and get out of here. We'll get fixed up back on base..." Gahaji said as he helped the young man from Dryad up from the floor.

Reep had been working on the control panel. His fingers flew across the hard light console and a green light started flashing above the Legionnaires. There was a loud whirring noise and the whole wall in front of them folded in on itself revealing a chamber with an ruddy red glow. Captain Tuk Shir, looking exhausted and weak as he hung in mid-air. Two muscular Dominion drones moved aside as the Legionnaires stepped into the small holding cell. Gahaji quickly brushed the Ruby of Life against them and willed them to remain frozen. He had no idea how much individual control the Dominion's clone grown workforce had but he was not away to take any chances... not when they were so close to their objective!

"Henry!" Reep said into his flight ring, "we need a warp to First Base Medi-bay, right now."

Gahaji stepped back towards the room they had just came from and dragged the unconscious Sa Lok towards the group. Even as the honey and violet warp spun into existence before them Reep turned to Gahaji and gave a curious look.

"This bastard needs to face justice too."

<Tinya, we have Captain Shir, it's time to go now> Reep sent across the telepathic matrix as the warp swallowed them up and deposited the group back onto First Base.

..................


Phantom Girl could feel the psychic attack push against her mind.

It wasn't telepathy, it felt more like a clumsy attempt at what Psyche might do. Her emotions were running wild, one second she felt paranoid and dreadfully afraid and then the next she was euphoric... it didn't help that the group of soldiers following her were firing off energy blasts and it was getting increasingly hard to avoid them. they had nearly caught her twice already.

In her years as a Legionnaire Tinya had always felt pretty much untouchable - in a literal sense of course but also as she saw herself as quick thinking and having had a lot of experienced in surviving all sorts of difficult and dangerous situations. She could call on a warp if all else failed and simply step away back to First Base, though she would leave that as the last resort, her team needed her to buy them enough time to free Tuk Shir.

She blinked, or perhaps closed her eyes for several seconds... she wasn't exactly sure which. The corridor seemed to spin around her and she fought the almost over-whelming urge to scream. She could hear yells and cheers behind her from the gang that still chased after her. It sounded like they had been joined by someone... was that the person making her feel so weird? was that why the security forces were cheering? What meta-abilities had they been given, and had they been through the amplification process that Denal had reported? Tinya heard these thoughts as she fought against the implanted emotions.

After turning a blind corner Tinya allowed herself to drop through the floor, away from the attacking group hoping to buy herself a little bit of time. As she floated just below the ceiling she could hear her pursuers race above. The sense of panic and unease faded...

Looking around herself, Tinya saw that she was hovering above what looked like a power sphere and she wondered if this was the room where strobe had seen what looked like the gene-modified troops getting their abilities amped up. For a split second she wished Querl Dox was there to examine the technology... the room was dimly lit and she lowered herself towards the glowing control panel at the side of the large dome set on a Dominion chloro-tech podium.

She knew that she wouldn't be able to avoid the thugs that had chased after her for long, and likely they would arrive soon so wanted to record as much as possible with her flight ring scanner while the room was empty. She reached across the control panel - one section of the screen had an arrow-like shape that she remembered from a basic training session several years before was the Dominion symbol for 'go' or 'start'. She brought out the command key she had taken from the thug earlier and touched it against this symbol and stood back, waiting to see what would happen.

Nothing changed... no sudden energy surge or even blinking light on the control panel. As she watched the podium remained inert. Well, she thought, she had scanned it thoroughly so perhaps the Science Police could figure it out. Whatever it was and however it worked would be a question for another day as she looked around for another exit that she could take which would lead the guards away from her teammates.

It was only a matter of seconds later that a door burst open and almost a dozen of Sa Lok's meta-security force ran in.

.........................


The feeling of abject hopelessness immediately overwhelmed Phantom Girl.

She slumped forward as several energy bolts passed through her intangible form. The group that had been chasing after her were only metres away as she stumbled behind the control console, her thoughts were racing uncontrollably: fear was dominant, alongside a hopelessness that urged her to give up entirely.

"We got her. She'll not give us any more trouble." the young mans voice sounded proud.

"What is she doing here? A merc would never come here, would they?"

"Probably for enough money..." The gruff response.

"We gotta get her outta here, the boss'll kill us if she damages the amplifier!"

They reached for the Legion Leader unaware of who she was as the distorter still kept its holo-image around her. Tinya remained intangible as she stated to curl up into herself, like a child cowering against bullies. Several flashes of energy erupted which led to the security personnel arguing amongst themselves. Several were aware that if they were to damage the technology around them there would be serious questions to answer. The sort of questions that could lead to one being killed if answered incorrectly.

Phantom Girl felt exhausted.

A bone aching weariness that made her eyes hurt as they started to cry. She knew that she had been worn down by previous missions before leading this one - Reep had warned her! - so the psychic attacks were taking their toll much harder than she would have expected. With some difficulty she reminded herself that she was currently the longest serving member of the Legion. She needed to get up and finish her mission!

<Tinya, we have Captain Shir, it's time to go now>

The telepathic message surprised her and for two long seconds she simply did not know what to do, until some gut reaction made her stand up and turn to face the crowd of meta-security that Sa Lok had taken from Rimbor.

...............................


"Henry, you need to warp Tinya out." Chameleon Boy said to the holo-man.

"Of course Chameleon Boy, as soon as she requests it I shall open a warp..."

"No now, please." Reep rarely expressed emptions openly, but his voice was clearly that of an angry man as he spoke to Henry.

"I have express orders to await for Tinya to request a warp herself. From Tinya."

"You will do it now!" Reep repeated, his voice softer this time and somehow more authoritative as a result.

"Ah... of course."

...............................


"You can't touch me... but I can touch you!"

Tinya kicked out, the sole of her right foot connecting with the throat of the soldier directly in front of her.

"Stupid bint!" He said as she hopped back, "mah skin's hard as steel!" He started to laugh, but not for long.

"Bet your kidneys aren't..." And with that Tinya lashed out again, this time phasing her foot inside his thick torso. He grunted and fell back in agony as she withdrew her foot.

"Who's next?" Tinya realised that by showing her powers and obvious skill with them she risked identifying herself but she didn't care, she wanted to show these jack-asses not to mess with her!

The security stepped back and several started to glow with energy, preparing to blast her if she became solid again.

Tinya stepped backwards and quickly looked around. She was stood next to a podium, in the shadow of a huge dome that she knew was a Power Sphere. Out of the corner of her eye she could see that it had started to light up. This would not be an area where the security around her would risk being too brutal - damaging a Power Sphere would cause immeasurable, potentially lethal harm. She knew she needed to get out of sight before she could summon one of Henry's warps so stepped backwards, and phased into the podium next to her.

"Get her away from the amplifier!" A guard shouted as they stretched out their hands, shining a green light from their palms in the Legion leaders direction.

Instinctively Tinya dived downwards into the mess of chloro-tech for the control panel on the podium, phasing inside it. As she did it started to light up and she felt as if she were being pulled in all directions.

There was a momentary feeling of weightlessness and then everything went black.

.......................


"I'm so sorry Chameleon Boy but I am not able to locate Phantom Girl to offer her a warp." Henry looked mystified as he spoke.

"What do you mean? You know where she is..." Reep scratched his chin and squinted his eyes as he replied.

"I believe the planetoid where you went to retrieve Captain Shir... I am unable to reach it as it seems to have vanished."


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Yay, that was fun! A good showing for our little makeshift Espionage Squad, even if Tinya was maybe a little too cocky for her own good in the end!

The four of them all got a nice bit of spotlight though - I really liked Tinya getting to strut her stuff on her own...on a team of powerhouses you don't really get to see how effective she can be in combat a lot of the time. I also like Mwindaji realising the power nullification didn't affect his ruby, and Strobe having a minor freak-out about losing his powers.

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Instead she would appear as a pale purple skinned woman


Did Tinya accidentally dusguise herself as Bendis Phantom Girl?? I love it! laugh

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More great stuff Harbi! and you excel so well in the little nuances, like Cham knowing what Tinya was doing (acting as a distraction) while the newer Gahaji did not.

nice little easter egg re Tinya making herself appear purple, like the Bendisboot version wink

of course Sa Lok would empower himself! nice curve ball though, it still increased the tension well!

always the loopholes though wink Sa Lok neutralizes natural abilities, but not magic... nice touch

oh I wonder if Tinya activated something dangerous unknowingly...

nice grit from Tinya, fighting back against overwhelming odds. also good acknowledgement of the impact of fatigue

also nice bit with Reep ordering Henry to open a warp... and convincing Henry!

oops! oh wow did not expect that, Tinya must indeed have activated something unknowingly... yikes! she got too cocky perhaps? was it the impact of the empathic manipulation?

whoo boy! you have upped the ante very well!

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Science Police Psychiatrist - Doctor Anje Falkner - alpha-level telepath

Newly promoted from Academy student to full membership (Mentor in brackets):
Mindbender - Marmud Illic of Titan - alpha-level telepath (Duplicate Girl)

Home Base, Legion Academy, Sol System:


Dr Anje Falkner taught the class on interpersonal relationships on Home Base as requested.

Lu and Rokk had asked the team's psychiatrist to address a recent issue that had been brought to their attention and of course she had said she would gladly help. As one of her qualifications was as a Sexual Health and Relationship Therapist, she had the experience and know-how to talk to the assembled student body to address the issue of consent and legality in physical relationships.

The majority of the students here were off their home world for the first time. As a result, they were re-establishing themselves within a new social and professional hierarchy and each would be addressing this within their own unique understanding of what a relationship should look like, most likely according to the social norms of the world they had come from. On top of that, they each had unique physiologies that would drive their physical urges and had their own individual moralities and social mores to guide them.

She had given tbe first part of her presentation on the normality and positive benefits of masturbation, before she began the trickier part of how to establish and respect boundaries when entering relationships... something a lot of youths found difficult, especially in the confines of the academy where they were living next to the people they trained and studied alongside day after day.

There had been a lot of embarrassed laughing and blushes. One student from a more conservative culture had stood up and left without a word. Anje put a quick note in her diary to remind her to contact that student afterwards.

After she had finished the presentation Anje had opened the floor up and there had been a few interesting queries before a Naltoran asked a rather bluntly phrased anatomically direct question, much to the amusement of their peers. Anje had smiled and carefully answered, being sure to use the same wording but without any real emotion to de-emphasise their crudity. She had smiled calmly as she treated the question as if it were an everyday matter, something of no great importance. The Naltoran looked a little unhappy that they hadn't gotten the response they wanted but said their thanks and sat down afterwards.

There were several other questions, some she could answer directly while others she had to remind the students that the laws of the United Planets applied here just as much as anywhere else, and in fact they had to set an example of propriety and decency as they were under the Legion's care, so certain things were a definite no-no despite how physically mature or emotionally ready the student thought they were. She tried not to show her disappointment at these questions but the majority of the student body were aware that they had just been given a clear warning that certain behaviours would not be tolerated.

The session ended after a little over two hours and Dr Falkner had twenty minutes before her next session. As expected, there were several alerts pop up on her private flight ring communication bandwidth - these students queries didn't look particularly urgent so they would have to wait as she desperately needed a cup of green tea before she got to work at her next counselling session.

Marmus Illic, the young telepath they called the Mindbender had requested an urgent meeting.


...................................


Anje Faulkner sat opposite Marmud and smiled warmly.

Marmud Illic knew her report could potentially torpedo him becoming a full Legionnaire. He also knew, logically, that he had successfully saved several Legionnaires on his first mission, held the highest ratings for any of the current psychic students on Home Base, and was one hundred percent committed to the Legion's ethos, but his emotions just wouldn't settle down... every thought that came into his head seemed to start with "But what if...?"

And... he couldn't quite stop his heart from racing in anxiety whenever he had a call from his mentor....

And finally, Marmud knew he desperately needed to offload what he was feeling or the situation would never improve so he called Dr Falkner. She understood without it being said that as a telepath from Titan, Marmud could cause some damage if he was to lose control of his emotions. There was a reason why Titanians had a reputation for being unemotional and closed off - their natural ability would easy spread whatever they were feeling amongst unprotected minds - so from their early childhoods they were taught how to manage and control such outpourings..

<you have an alpha graded telepathic ability with a particularly strong emphasis on mind control, you have completed the team's combat training with several distinctions, have a perfect mission record and, I believe, currently have several pages dedicated to you on Hot Zone as the up-and-coming star to watch. So, with all of these factors being taken into account Marmud, why do you have doubts about becoming a full-time Legionnaire?>

<I don't think I'm not worthy, or at least I'm as worthy as anyone else I guess... I just can't stand it and am having serious doubts about my career here. I... I just hate being under Duplicate Girl. I don't get any time to enjoy the experience, like she's this devil on my shoulder that won't let me rest. I was going to ask to swap mentors with Poltergeist after he blew it with Element Lad but he's now got Tyroc and doesn't want to swap anymore>

<aah, so it's a personality clash... if you like I can make a request on your behalf, perhaps transfer you to First Base and swap with one of your peers there?>

<it's more than that! She's like... she's a barracuda, I wouldn't wish her on the bloody LSV. She can literally suck the joy out of a party, like suck the joy right out! I know because I've lived it...>

Anje Falkner sat back in her seat and let the young man get everything off his chest.

<I know she's super focused and determined and has... I dunno, like four hundred years more experience than me, but I just can't stand her. I really can't, she's awful. She's a truly awful person! She... I was so proud of myself getting this far. Y'know I harassed my parents from the age of eight... eight! Just to get martial arts lessons after I saw a docu-holo on the Legionnaires. I stayed late at school to study every flippin' day so my grades would be the best, I've spent over half my life training for this and that ...snot-dragon is sucking the joy out of me>

There was a long pause before he continued.

<I'm considering quitting. I'm surethe science Police would take me> Marmud wiped a hand across his eyes as tears formed. <You know, this morning I met her for a training session at 0600 hours and I was literally one minute late as I ran into Grava and Drinchnar on the way and said 'hi' to them, and she went ballistic. Totally called me out in front of everyone there as if I'd personally offended her grandmother or something. Thing is, okay I was one minute late, but I couldn't help but hear her thoughts on how much pleasure she was taking from telling me off>

<she was testing you?>

<loving humiliating me more like...>

<no, I don't think that's her nature Marmud, I really don't. Luornu is a long-standing member of the team with over a decade of experience at the academy. She must have known you could have heard her... I believe, from what I have observed, that she was pushing for a response, testing your resolve.>

<so, you reckon she wanted to push me for a reaction? It was another training session? Why, for god's sake? That's what the academy was for! I'm supposed to be a junior Legionnaire, not a student. They made such a point of training us that we must show our colleagues respect even if they are very different from our own expectations of the 'norm', it was drilled into us in almost every lesson but she isn't practicing what she's preaching. I've had enough of it Dr Falkner, let me show you...>

Marmud opened up his mind to the psychiatrist and shared the memories from the last week: Lu calling him at 0330 hours for an urgent meeting as a drill so he would realise that Legionnaires could be called at any time then expecting him to meet her in the gym a few hours later at 0600 for a two hour combat lesson, Lu harshly telling him to 'mind his place' in front of other Legionnaires when he had tried to crack a joke when they were waiting to warp to Lallor then quite blatantly ignoring him for the entire mission after that, the dismal of his question when he asked for advice - "Really? You should know that already..." , toxic glances and cold body language were commonplace and then Lu talking shop during the party the other night... as much as he knew it was a minor complaint it had been that conversation which had finally sealed the deal for him that she was just an awful person.

Her constant tough love approach of talking business and making every single little thing be about her perceived idea of what a perfect Legionnaire should do, say, act... All his fellow Mentees were saying how great their mentors were and how constructive and supportive they were. He didn't sense any of that from her. He didn't look forward to going on missions anymore, he was barely sleeping as he expected her to call and now knew that if he wasn't ready exactly as she wanted him to be when she wanted then she would turn on him. He didn't know what to say as he was sure it would be criticised and he was becoming scared to act in case he got it wrong. And he hadn't had a full nights sleep in a week!

It was wearing him down and it had only been just over a week since she had become his mentor!

Anje Falkner did her best to sooth the young man's mind without affecting any of his memories.

<okay, so one question springs to mind Marmud. You are used to being he best, aren't you? I mean you record certainly points towards that...>

<yup, though only through hard work, I don't expect to get first place in everything. I try my best with every challenge and if do end up taking the lead... well it's nice but it's not the be-all and end-all of it. For instance, psionically I know I'm real buff but physically not so much so I work hard at my martial arts and self defence training...>

<I do see that, and I have to say you have a rare focus and drive, it's something you should be proud of...>

<so why amn't I hearing anything like that from my mentor? Why does she have to be such a savage controlling bitch?>

<Okay...> For the first time Dr Falkner's face was something other than neutral in expression, and Marmud realised he had taken this too far, but before he could apologise the psychiatrist continued <you're clearly upset. It will impact negatively on your experience here and mission readiness if you don't deal with it. So... I can't tell you what the right thing is to do Marmud but I am going to sign you off active duty for 48 hours and suggest you use that time to think over what you want to do. If you need to talk to me again then feel free to contact this office at any time. As you said, you have dedicated a lot of time and energy to get this far so this is not a decision to jump into. I recommend meditation and relaxation, allow your mind to transcend the immediate so you can perceive the bigger picture and decide the position you want within in>

<thank you, thank you so much Dr Falkner, that’ll give me some breathing room, some thinking room...>

<it’s not unusual to find that when we get close to the things we’ve worked hard for that they are not what we expected Marmud, and a Legionnaire's life is not nearly as glamorous...>

Unexpectedly, a holo of Henry appeared between them.

“Dr Faulkner, please follow me as your husband needs you.” And with that a honey and violet spinning disc spun into existence next to her.

Both Dr Falkner and Mindbender jumped through the warp.

.......................................


Support Staff:
Dr Shoodixi Singh - Science Police Medical Officer - bio-empathic
Solstin Wang of Earth - Booster - medical support - awareness and manipulation of physical properties of those around him
Gloriana Crestellen of Grighshtall iv - Glory - medical support - awareness and manipulation of bio-auras


The warp opened into the medi-bay on First Base.

Dr Shoodixi Singh from second Base alongside both Booster and Glory were leaning over Captain Tuk Shir's unconscious body as he lay prone on a floating bed. Three drones hovered above them pumping out an intense light obviously trying to recharge the solar radiation that that was missing from his depleted cells to empower him. A force field wall sprang up between the team's counsellor and the new Legionnaire and the medical team.

Dr Falkner understood this was standard procedure with a patient as clearly injured as Tuk Shir, he would be isolated from everyone other than essential staff until it was felt he was well enough to deal with them.

"Anje, glad you're here. They got Tuk but he's not in great shape. we're doing everything we can. Are you able to... y'know, check him inside?" Dr Shoodixi Singh asked as they gave the teams counsellor a quick supportive smile.

"Yes, I'm in his mind already Shood. Poor man... he is there, just so exhausted." There were tears in her eyes as she replied but her voice was steady. The man she had loved for over a decade appeared from her preliminary scan to be in overall acceptable shape, though would clearly need a lot of support in the days and weeks going forward as he recovered from this experience. Anje knew that Tuk had a singular focus that would intimidate most people and at that moment was grateful for this character trait as it would help him get back to his former self.

"Where are the rest of them?" Marmud asked.

Booster turned and gave a tight grin before nodding towards the decontamination suite, "We put them in there, we need to check they're okay and didn't bring anything back accidentally. They brought back Sa Lok as well. I put him in a holding cell until the Senior Team are ready to hand him over to the Science Police."

..........................


Chameleon Boy sat patiently within the decontamination chamber.

The Durlan had been through this experience before so used this time to calmly recount the mission to a log-file. He knew that it would only take an hour or so before Dr Singh would give them the all-clear so wanted to make sure he captured everything he could remember for the teams' records.


In the next chamber MWindaji paced the three metre wide floor.

The young tracker was worried that his abilities might not return. The universe felt so much smaller without them. Zoe had sent a holo - she had been told quite sternly she could not attend in person until the clinical team released him. They chatted as he paced, mostly about small stuff, both understanding without it being said that Gahajhi was really worried about Tinya and the apparent loss of his tracking skill.

Zoe promised she would cook Gahaji his favourite meal for when he got out to celebrate him saving Tuk Shir and catching the former Under-Secretary Sa Lok. Gahaji had asked if she minded simply using the auto-chef as she wasn't the best cook on First Base... or even their apartment, which led to playful bickering between them that quickly had them both laughing. Without even thinking Gahaji said "y'know I do love you, don't you?"

"So you should!" She replied with teasing grin and a shake of her hair.


Strobe cried.

Denal Lort sat in a corner of his decontamination chamber and cried.

Initially, he had been angry and tried to punch the walls, but that had hurt him far more than expected so instead he sat in the corner and thought about everything he might have just lost and the tears had streamed out... He had come here as part of a group from the former world of Dryad that had spent their savings on gaining abilities in a badly thought-out plan to somehow make up for the League of Assassins shaming their heritage. Of the six of them, Denal was the one who had wanted to become a Legionnaire the most. It was everything he had always dreamed of.

When he had been accepted it had been quite literally the single happiest experience of his life. To have that taken away from him because of the Rimborian psychopath Sa Lok was too much for him to contemplate. Sa Lok had been responsible for forming the original League and then framing them (along with a clone of Tharok, to throw the Legion off his scent) so he could to test out the UP's gene-mod treatments. It was part of a Black Flag operation many layers past Top Secret.

Denal had been neutralised before, his cousin Mi Pra had been given abilities that matched the assassin Neutrax, and she had happily zapped him and the rest of their group on a few occasions. This time it felt different, somehow it seemed to seep into his bones and the young man from the long-dead world felt weaker as a result. Denal hoped that it was just a stronger dose of the neutralising radiation, and would therefore last a little longer ...and as much as he tried his hardest not to think about it, he was terrified that he had just lost his powers for good.

And that with that he had lost being a Legionnaire before his career had actually taken off.

...................................


The U-Vabbishte Toktrec Settlements, galactic north of the Great White Asteroid Field, Raptor Nebula

Element Lad - Senior Team member, Jan Arrah of Trom - elemental transmutation
Kid Quantum - Jazmin Cullen of Xanthu - creation of temporal quantum bubbles, flight
Starkling – telepathic swarm-being composed of indestructible ball bearing sized components
Green Lantern - Dkyun Mu of Xudar - wearer of a Green Lantern power ring

Support staff:
Dr Richard Kent Shakespeare - Impulse – Chief Medical Officer and Support Team manager - enhanced strength, speed, durability, stamina



Encyclopedia Galactica: The U-Vabbishte Toktrec Settlements were originally established as a religious refuge for those fleeing persecution during the 27th century. Settlements were created along a string of large asteroids and small planetoids within the galactic north of the Great White Asteroid Field of the Raptor Nebula as the 'Didactic Purge' under Prime Officer Hirohasi of the nascent United Planets took charge. In her three years in command, it is estimated that Hirohasi exterminated close to five billion sentients under increasingly draconian legislation that controlled so much of the everyday citizen's lives. Due to Hirohasi ordering the destruction of all Intellect Hubs on Earth in the final days of her reign there is no definitive way to establish exactly how many citizens were murdered in her name. The aftermath saw a surge in support for pro-freedom politics that still hold great sway into the 31st century. The settlement at U-Vabbishte Toktrec was established to cater for all faiths and outlooks and for a while in the 28th century was referred to as a wild frontier that attracted many, many thousands of visitors looking for an alternative lifestyle. These days the U-Vabbishte Toktrec Settlements is often seen as truly anarchistic with hundreds of thousands of virtually independent small holdings within the greater gestalt coexisting without any cohesive governing body or singular law enforcement body. Somewhat surprisingly, it is rightly renowned as one of the places within the UP where a sentient being would be least likely to be the victim of a criminal act. Of late, the meta-team known as the Wanderers, as well as several members of the Legion have been spotted in the settlement though their reasons for being there are unknown and no crime or meta-event is recorded as having taken place while they were present.


They arrived at the outskirts of the U-Vabbishte Toktrec Settlements four hours after leaving Second Base.

For the majority of the journey Jan and Starkling had meditated while Jazmin and Kent took turns manning the control board. The Grren Lantern had flown alongside the cruiser for the entire journey, having said that her power ring would scan the space they travelled through and would provide her with information regarding what was out there.

Jazmin hadn't really understood why Dkyun Mu would want to do that, but also realised that Green Lanterns probably had their own agendas that she wasn't fully aware of so perhaps that was why... or perhaps Dkyun just wanted to enjoy the journey in her own way. Whatever the reason, it gave Jazmin and Kent the opportunity to talk and as she had never really spent much time with the team's physician the Xanthuan quickly found that he had a dry sense of humour that she really liked.

They had been on two missions together in the past; the first was when she was still at the academy and the Dark Circle Psyche had taken control of a small town in Canada... they both had not really added much to that mission and had been so inexperienced that their nerves had stopped them from relaxing in the quieter moments. The other mission they had both been on had resulted in a city being destroyed - or at least she thought it was a city but it may have been a disguise used by a strange cosmic child-like being playing hide-and-seek... she still didn't fully understand what had gone on there. But what she had learned on that mission was that Dr Shakespeare was absolutely dependable when the chips were down, so it was a nice surprise for her as she realised he could also be a fun colleague to chill out with in less strenuous situations. As Kent spent the majority of his time either in the medi-bays or with Jan she hadn't had much opportunity to really get to know him so was enjoying the few hours they had before they reached the Magus' planetoid.

Kent watched the screens like a kid at the movies as they flew past the exotic and strange array of planetoids and space rocks that made up the outer settlements. These Jazmin knew, were pretty tame compared to some of the sights that were coming up but she held her tongue and let his take in the amazing sights before them: an asteroid carved into a perfect cube with landing pads in the middle of each face, the next came along only a minute later -it had been flattened out into about the size of a city block with a haze of atmosphere above the planted fields and copses of trees that ran along both sides - there was even a flock of birds clearly flying over the underside field, the third had loops and hoops and sort of looked to Jaz as if someone had taken their inspiration from a pile of spaghetti thrown into the air... from it tubes ran out in all directions connecting the disparate rocks and planetoids. Dkyun Mu flew close to their shuttle and they could hear the occasional chitter of laughter from her through the comms as the Xudarian revelled in the sights before them as well.

"Wow! Brin did say it was a unique place in the report he filed but... My god, is that a river?" Kent said quietly.

Jazmin laughed. She remembered being dumb-struck when she had first seen it; an immensely massive flowing current of water that surged between the inner and outer settlements with a wide array of boats and vessels upon and in it. Although she hadn't seen any proof, she was certain there would be fish in it as well.

"I have to wake Jan; this is absolutely amazing." Kent spoke quietly, his eyes never leaving the screen.

"Don't move Kent, I'll get him. You enjoy the view. We'll be coming up to a docking station soon. They have surprisingly tight border control so you better get ready." Kid Quantum left the bridge and made her way to the quarters at the rear where Element Lad was meditating.

As she entered the rear section Jan Arrah walked out of the compartment with Starkling close behind.

"We're there now, aren't we?" He smiled as he asked, knowing what the answer was before she replied.

After Jazmin had smiled back and said "yup, wanna see it?" they wandered back up to the bridge to watch the amazing sights as they entered the U-Vabbishte Toktrec Settlements.


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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 27 April 22)
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Hey Raz and IB, thank you again for your kind reviews, they are appreciated!

Couple of points - Tinya using the distorter to look like her Bendisboot self had to be done smile

IB - It seems Tinya activated the Dominator power amplifier but we'll get into that when she finally returns, and Cham certainly got Henry to open a warp, though it was a pity he was delayed by those vital few seconds eh?... almost as if Henry was delaying him or something.

More soon as we check in with the Magus and Psyche, there's a couple of interpersonal bits and we are overdue a visit from one of our team's fiance.

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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 27 April 22)
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oooh I like it Harbi, nice hint re Henry purposely delaying things a bit... Nura also foresaw something, so perhaps this was the pivotal moment...

nice follow up re the consent topic. nice professionalism by Anje, also making sure to follow up with the student who left. And also being very clear that there are lines that cannot be crossed...

good look into Marmud's situation, and also reminding why Titanians tend to have such self-control.

Hot Zone smile one of those fan sites I suppose?

whew. the Marmud-Lu interactions are interesting. of course there are two sides to this, so I wonder what Lu is thinking... but it does some clear that Lu is being all tough-love, as we've seen some of the other mentor/Legionnaire relationships which are more fun, relaxed. Being ignored during a mission for cracking a joke or being told "why, you should know that already" DO seem a bit severe...

a decontamination chamber... makes sense that everyone would have to be careful...

love the teasing between Zoe and Gahaji

poor Strobe... and Gahaji of course. nice contrast with the two newer ones deathly afraid of losing their powers, while Cham is taking it in stride and being professional (I guess he realizes that he can't do anything except wait, so might as well do something constructive)

The Toktrec Settlements, fascinating, and almost physics-defying. was cool seeing the wonder on Kent's face, Jazmin's enjoyment, and also interesting to see Dkyun scanning outside the ship (maybe collecting data to share with the GL Corps...?) whew, interesting thought that the UP had an authoritarian period, and logical that the aftermath would reverberate until today with more focus on freedom!

more great stuff, Harbi!

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The diverse group of the Legion needing some guidance on consent issues is one of those things that I honestly would never have thought of but actually makes so much sense! I like it because it makes the Legion's world much less homogenised than it usually is depicted as being.

I am also INTENSELY intrigued about the whole deal with Marmud and Lu....she is a hardass, but we have the benefit of having seen her evolve to that point through two of her own deaths along with everything else she's been through with the Legion so it's eye-opening to see how it must feel to another character in context. I also suspect that she'd naturally have become much harsher with Chuck gone, but I'm still wondering how much of this is perception and how much is a legitimate grievance - I will be curious to see where this goes!

Poor Strobe, I was thinking the power loss would be hard for him because his powers make him so invulnerable but it never really occurred to me it would be so tied to his self-esteem as well!

The U-Vabbishte Toktrec Settlements continue to sound amazing, I am glad they're getting a revisit! The bit about Jazmin and Kent getting a chance to interact on a personal level was nice too....on a team the size of even the classic Legion, there must be members who just never got to hang out together much smile

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Okay, I'm up to date on reading Raz's stuff, now you're next, Harbi. smile

I'm just about to go out, so I'll be reading this tomorrow to give my stream of consciousness on three months of your tales.!


Interested in the Post-Zero Hour Reboot Legion? Check out:

The Reboot Legion Timeline

Fan Fiction: The Legion of Super-Heroes v4.1 (continuing the reboot from issue 126!) on LW or here (external)

Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 13 May 22)
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Lightning Lass - Senior Team member, Ayla Ranzz of Winath, electrical generation and manipulation
Backlash - Mrruaw MNau of Simballi - enhanced strength, speed, senses, absorbs kinetic energy to boost own size and mass
Atom Girl - Sylva Nrilsan of Imsk - can shrink to microscopic size

Newly promoted from Academy student to full membership (Mentor in brackets):
Solar Gorilla - D'Nadka Endarooga of Dmansca - generate and project extreme heat and light (Lightning Lass)

Duplicate Girl - Senior Team member, Luornu Durgo of Carggg - creation of multiple identical duplicates
The Huntress - Ambassador Amynta of Nostos ii - incredible strength, speed, invulnerability, space flight
Bouncing Boy ii - Stoor Chamble of Pasnic - creation of personal spherical force field

Intern:
Haze - Science Police Cadet Tkemwa Autmi-Hu of Ungara - strength, durability, induce confusion and senselessness
Impact - Dillon Blackstream of Myar - incredible strength, speed, durability, stamina, motion sense

Laipas - hunting dog from Nostos ii - enchanted to never lose a trail, fast and tough, far smarter than she looks!


Lu and Ayla had met in Henry's warp control room on First Base with their respective teams.

As Amynta's hound, Laipas, had taken the scents of the Shadowmancer's team that had been on Lallor only a day before the Amazon had reassured the Senior Team members that they would be able to track them. Lu had kept her scepticism to herself while Ayla unselfconsciously petted the hunting dog affectionately on the head.

"Seems like you might not be Ayla's fave quadruped anymore Lashy." Atom Girl whispered to Backlash.

"Oh, hardly..." the great horned feline said with a disdainful sniff.

"Okay teams, we're using Strike and Shield formations. My team will take the lead though remember to use your distorters to minimise any interruptions. We don't want a gang chasing after us while we do this." Lu announced. They all understood; the team had recently been on Rimbor to help the Science Police close down Sa Lok's gene-mod operations and several of the larger gangs would have been seriously compromised by their actions so the Legion was unlikely to draw much support if they were seen.

Henry created a warp that transported them to the place where the twin Khund cyborgs had been sent by the Gil'Dishpan Warpsmith the Shadowmancer had used.

The Legionnaires stepped through the spiralling honey and violet disc and found themselves on the roof of a low-rise housing complex in one of the less salubrious neighbourhoods of Rimbor City. The Devil's Dozen had taken someone from here to feed their dark lord's hunger; Ayla hoped whoever they were, they had been returned safely.

Laipas immediately caught a scent and led the team to the edge of the roof.

"Okay, let's find some stairs and get down there without drawing attention."

Duplicate Girl led her team; the Huntress and Laipas, Bouncing Boy and Haze, towards a fire escape that ran up the side of the building and they clambered down. Lightning Lass waited a couple of minutes before she led the rest of the team after them.

The street below had several local stores - all served behind shutters, and an array of parked old aircars. The pavements were cracked and weeds grew in the border between pedestrian and traffic. A flickering holo-ad threw stroboscopic images of half clad young women across a large blank wall. Two elderly men sat on a step muttering between them. The sudden arrival of the Legionnaires didn't appear to have been noticed. The Legionnaires were glad that this was not a busy section of town as they followed the hunting dog.

Laipas' tail wagged as she led the Legionnaires to their quarry.

........................


Thunder - Deputy Leader, Cecelia Becks of 21st Century Earth, immense strength, speed, indestructibility, space flight, wisdom
Mon El - Senior Team member, Lar Gand of Daxam - incredible strength, speed, stamina, senses, laser vision, space flight, invulnerability
Dawnstar of Starhaven - Senior Team member - space flight, incredible speed, tracking
Atomsmasher - Ergus Wraithcat of Betelgeuse - spaceflight, durability, hyper senses, limited telepathy, radiation manipulation


Thunder, Mon El and Dawnstar each held onto one of Atomsmasher's whip-like tails as the Wraithcat extended its invisibility field around them.

They had raced here, to the site where the planetoid base in Dominion space that Captain Tuk Shir had been held captive on had once been. Henry warped them to the exact spot that he had sent Tinya and her Espionage Squad, but there was nothing but the vacuum of space. The Dominator's base where they experimented with the gene-modification technology brought by Sa Lok had totally vanished.

They each used their respective senses to try to locate their missing leader but after fifteen minutes of fruitless searching eight Dominion cruisers appeared. Atomsmasher had alerted the team moments before they arrived and Thunder had decided that she would rather keep an eye on them than run from them.

<we should return to First Base and examine the data our flight rings have captured> Mon El sent across the telepathic matrix.

Thunder remained silent for a few seconds, well aware that Mon El probably had an ulterior motive in that the Daxamite would want to check in on Tasmia Mallor after her accident earlier that morning.

<let's wait a bit longer, perhaps the Dominion will be able to find something we missed> Cece eventually replied.

<their commanders are furious about something. I wonder what they were told would happen if they returned empty handed?>

Dawnstar smiled as Mon El sent his message.

In total they remained there for a further three quarters of an hour. The Dominion had as little luck as the Legionnaires finding any trace of the missing base. Thunder eventually called time and they each hoped that the scans they had taken on their flight rings would give some trace that they had overlooked.

.........................


First Base:

Chameleon Boy – Espionage Squad leader, Reep Daggle of Durla - shape changer
MWindaji - Gahaji of Kiringyaga - super tracker, carries the Ruby of Life allowing tactile transformative magic

Newly promoted from Academy student to full membership (Mentor in brackets):Strobe - Denal Lort of Dryad - assume electro-magnetic energy form (Chameleon Boy)

Support staff:
Dr Shoodixi Singh - Science Police Medical Officer - bio-empathic


M'Windaji felt his abilities return first.

Zoe had left him twenty minutes earlier, saying she wanted to get some nice food ready for his return. Gahaji almost called her but instead opted to double-check the tingling in the back of his skull really was his tracking sense returning. He concentrated on finding her and using a hard-light holo from his flight ring that displayed an image of the base and the whereabouts of his teammates he figured out that he was right - with a small smile he closed his eyes and thought about other people who might be close by. He correctly figured where Booster and Glory where, and then concentrated on finding the largest open space within the planetoid. As he hoped, he pointed towards the massive chamber that housed the Q-Drive, which his flight ring database confirmed was right.

Calling up a holo he shared his news with Chameleon Boy and Strobe. Reep thanked him before returning to completing his report. Strobe was a clearly excited by the news and cheered.

Ten minutes later the young man from Dryad materialised in the trackers decontamination cell and gave him a tight hug before vanishing as he re-assumed an energy form and left.

It was only two minutes later that Dr Singh open the cell door and told Gahaji he was free to leave. As he flew out of the door the doctor asked him to tell Strobe if he saw him that they all needed to report for a check-up the next morning or they wouldn't be cleared for active duty.

...........................


The U-Vabbishte Toktrec Settlements, galactic north of the Great White Asteroid Field, Raptor Nebula

Element Lad - Senior Team member, Jan Arrah of Trom - elemental transmutation
Kid Quantum - Jazmin Cullen of Xanthu - creation of temporal quantum bubbles, flight
Starkling – telepathic swarm-being composed of indestructible ball bearing sized components
Green Lantern - Dkyun Mu of Xudar - wearer of a Green Lantern power ring

Support staff:
Dr Richard Kent Shakespeare - Impulse – Chief Medical Officer and Support Team manager - enhanced strength, speed, durability, stamina


A security drone had buzzed them as they approached the docking station.

They sent their details through and waited further instructions. The drone breeped several times before sending a message that one of their party was wanted in relation to the destruction of station property.

It appeared that Jazmin was on a list for people to be queried after two drones were destroyed when she had visited before. Jaz rolled her eyes and let the team know across the telepathic grid that Quantum Queen had destroyed them, but she wouldn't say that instead she pleaded ignorance and sent across the official Legion info-page about her that clearly stated she had non-destructive abilities.

Dkyun Mu intervened, stating that the Green Lantern for this sector had aided the settlers who originally came here and that she would take personal responsibility for Kid Quantum's action on this visit. This appeared to mollify the security service and they were allowed to dock.

At the docking station they disembarked and stood outside on the platform looking around at the sights. The docking bay was a tubular construction with a range of landing pads jutting out from it;s length, arranged in a loose spiral. From where the Legionnaires were standing they could see several dozen tubes leading away towards the nearest settlements, the enormous river that ran between the majority of the populated planetoids undulated below them - they could see small boats riding upon its speckled surface while dark shapes appeared in its depths.

"The engineering involved is breathtaking." Dkyun mu said to no-one in particular as she looked down towards the flowing waters.

"If you want to take Jaz and investigate we'll be fine making our way out to the Magus from here." Element Lad said. his tone was light, unconcerned.

"Jazmin?" Dkyun looked at Kid Quantum.

"Yeah, why not, I didn't get the chance to investigate last time we were here. Come on then." She took to the air and followed the Green Lantern as they dived off the platform.

"Have fun ladies." Kent Shakespeare said with a laugh. "Right, we get shuttles nearby, so... shall we get going?"

<We shall join their endeavours> Starkling sent to the group and the swarm drifted off the edge of the platform behind its teammates.

"Take care ad keep in touch please." Jan said as the three Legionnaires drifted away.

"So, we going then?" Kent asked.

"Oh yes," Jan replied with a grateful smile.

........................


Encyclopedia Galactica - meta-teams throughout the centuries: Universal Justice

Universal Justice were a team of meta-powered adventures in the late 27th Century that helped defend the nascent United Planets during the First Dominion War.

Led by the charismatic Daxamite known as Mr Power, their membership included several planetary heroes that exhibited abilities that were stronger than their average planetary norm - Mentax from Titan, Polestar 1 from Braal, Jinx from Durla, Dreamer of Naltor. They were joined by a range of synthetic beings, mutants and mutates that were proficient in their unique meta-skills - Wormhole from Mars, Tracker of the Terranova ii Colonies, Buzz from Sherman's World, Daramulum who claimed to be the embodiment of an ancient Terran deity, Topaz Storm from Zerox, Phaser from Tropparaiti, and the Hawk-Knights of Thanagar, alongside the twin Green Lanterns of Sector 2104 they made an unstoppable force. In total forty five beings are recorded as being part of the team at one time or another during the decade that they were in operation.

This was the era where the huge corporations that had powered the initial expansions off Earth and out of the Sol system into the wider galaxy were losing their grip on the incredible power they held over the masses. Increasingly planetary Colonies on Worlds further away from Earth and the so-called Inner Worlds were arranging governments that did not share the corporation's ideals, supporting their populations over the profits raised by the star-spanning businesses.

Universal Justice publicly spoke of the rights of the individual and in doing so were rarely fully supported by the nascent UP. It has been rumoured that their final battle against the Grey Army had been set up by certain clandestine departments within the UP Militia to destroy the team. At least six of Universal Justice died during that battle, including their talismanic Daxamite leader Mr Power and his wife, the mystic known as Topaz Storm.

Ultimately, internal and external politics, United Planet regulation and a scandal over several dozen supposed illegitimate children drove the team to officially disband exactly ten years and two days after they had first arrived on Earth. The months that followed their disbanding had intense political upheaval and were the beginning of the 'Didactic Purge' under Prime Officer Hirohasi of the nascent United Planets that led to monumental changes in the fabric of humankind's culture and societal expectations.

It has often been hypothesized that R.J. Brande was influenced by this short-lived group as a model to base his Legion of Super Heroes initiative upon.

What is not generally reported is what happened to the team after they split up.


Legion Worlds NINE - wait, there's even more ongoing amazing adventures? Yup, and you'll only find them in the Bits o' Legionnaire Business Forum.
Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 13 May 22)
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Harbi, another excellent batch of entries.

I have to say, your Marmud/Lu situation is so engaging that I really paid close attention to every word and action from Lu, to try and see how her appearance here links up with Marmud's impressions of her!

Thunder's wisdom in action wink It is nice to see Mon caring about Tasmia... or is it more guilt and fear of Shady leaving him?

Strobe's excitement and relief and sheer joy at regaining his powers was palpable, lol. even him zipping out before the Doctor cleared him!

haha at Kid Quantum and Quantum Queen being confused for each other

hmm, did Jan just intentionally ensure that he and Kent would be going to the Magus alone? smile

Universal Justice is an amazing, interesting concept. and I like your focus on the conflict between the values: profits and the people. Gates would have a lot to say about that!

I can definitely see a link between the values of Universal Justice and the Legion.

Super interested to see where you are going with this!!

Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 23 May 22)
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The U-Vabbishte Toktrec Settlements, galactic north of the Great White Asteroid Field, Raptor Nebula

Kid Quantum - Jazmin Cullen of Xanthu - creation of temporal quantum bubbles, flight
Starkling – telepathic swarm-being composed of indestructible ball bearing sized components
Green Lantern - Dkyun Mu of Xudar - wearer of a Green Lantern power ring


Dkyun spun a bubble of emerald energy around Jazmin and Starkling and the flew across the space towards the awe-inspiring river. as they got closer they could see a slight shimmering from the force field that help it and the atmosphere around it together.

<The power supply must be immense!> Dkyun sounded awe struck as they reached the edge of the protective barrier <I will phase us through the screen so we can examine it closer> The three Legionnaires glowed as the Oan power ring altered their density to allow them to float through the immense force field that surrounded the incredible river that flowed amongst the settlements.

The Green Lantern dropped her energy bubble from around her colleagues and the three Legionnaires soared above the river. There were patches of spray from the waves in the river that caught them as they flew, giving Jazmin a laugh. In the distance they could see a boat, due to the tubular nature of the great river it appeared to be across the horizon from them. As they got close, they could see it was a large rectangular barge carrying large boxy containers. The people on the bridge of the craft waved up to the Legionnaires.

The Legionnaires swooped down towards them. As they did the Green Lantern's ring pinged and she flew up quickly, leaving Kid Quantum and Starkling to talk to the sailors. Jazmin could see the person on the deck, with their hands on a hard light wheel stare as Dkyun Mu shot up away from them.

"Hola!" Jaz shouted, "How are you today?"

"You some noo-group doing a musak holo? Ah heard there's a competition going on t' sell the settlement, git some new blood here abouts..." They responded, ignoring Jazmin's question entirely. Several others, working on the barge stopped what they were doing to listen to the conversation.

"No, though that sounds like fun... We're Legionnaires." Jazmin replied with a smile.

"Ah, okays then, enjoy being that then..." He sounded moderately disappointed, "so's wise... we gotta crack on wi' this here lumber t' deliver. Enjoys yourselves." The boats captain appeared less interested now that they were unlikely to be involved in a promotional holo. Jaz wished them a good journey and flew away.

<Wow, I'm not used to people not recognising us. Oh well, we're really off the beaten path here so we better get used to that. Anyway though... where did Dkyun go?> Jazmin sent.

<I am above you Jazmin, there is something we need to investigate...> The Green Lantern hung in the air next to the protective force shield that kept the physical integrity of the great river together.

<My ring has picked up something unexpected. It believes it has located someone that we believe perished several centuries ago... shall we investigate?>

<Absosprockin'lutely> Jazmin replied with a laugh.

<We do not understand, please offer explanation> Starkling interjected.

<Oh, it just means 'yes' Starkling, sorry, like a really strongly felt 'affermative'> Jazmin replied with a laugh.

Thirty minutes later, as the Green Lantern led them towards a distant sailboat Jazmin could see there was a man with dark grey skin upon it looking towards them. He had one hand shading his eyes from the nebula light. As the Legionnaires approached, he tied off a rope and walked across the deck to wait for them. They could see his left leg had been severed at the knee and he had a basic prosthetic in place underneath.

"Hi there," Kid Quantum said "we're..."

"Not welcome." He interrupted her, "go away. Don't come back." His voice was polyphonic, seeming to echo as it reverberated. Jazmin turned to leave...

"Daramulum, this ring recognises you. It belonged to Oolangan Matsha, one of the Twin Green Lanterns who fought beside you in the first Dominion War. Your hypnosis will not work..."

"Just go away Lantern. Your kind only bring destruction with you, for all your ideals and intentions. I've seen it too many times before and I want no part of it now. Leave me alone."

This time he sounded normal; a deep male voice with a bitter edge to it.

"You're Daramulum?" Kid Quantum recognised the name of the supposed deity that helped the newly formed United Planets against a Dominion invasion three centuries before. The one-legged man looked up at the Legionnaires with an expression of sad resignation.

<we were informed of your adventures with Universal Justice while attending the Academy> Starkling sent.

He remained silent for several seconds before he shrugged and half turned away from them.

"If you won't go then at least stop drawing attention to me and come down to join me. I was thinking of preparing some lunch. I have some nice cheese..."

<We do not consume fuel as the carbon beings do, we are energised by...> Starkling sent an image of a wavelength of energy.

"Like this?" Daramulum said as he held out his left arm. A string of Starkling's components broke away from the main mass and started to swirl around it.

"Hey, get away from Starkie!" Jazmin said as she stretched out her hand.

A quantum bubble sprang around the sailor. It appeared as if he was frozen for a second until he faded into a mist and then this form ricocheted around the stasis field before finally bursting though. Daramulum reformed from the mist and shook his head before bending over to put his hands on his knees and take deep breaths. Jazmin recoiled in shock as she cancelled her quantum field.

"That was immensely unpleasant, do not do that again. And... just so you know, I was generating a little bit of ultra-violet light, your ...interesting colleague there seems to enjoy it." He stood up straight and held his arm out again. Within a few seconds almost a third of Starkling's mass had flown to the former hero's arm and undulated happily as they circled his arm.

"Sorry, I'm so..." Jazmin whispered, before realising how quietly she had just spoken and repeating "I'm so sorry..."

"You're young and human... Believe me, I've seen a lot worse from less provocation from your kind. Now, after that little exhibition of time-bending I definitely need sustenance, that was quite draining. Do you want to join me? Perhaps we can begin again on a more civilised footing... "

"We would be very grateful, thank you for your kind offer." the Green Lantern said as she flew between Kid Quantum and Daramulum.

<Absosprockin'lutely> Starkling added.

The grey-skinned man's face broke into a small smile as he signalled for the Legionnaires to join him at a raised area in the middle of the boats deck.

...........................


An hour or so, and a lot of conversation later:

"This one..."

"Starkling! Their name is Starkling!" Jazmin said. The former 27th century hero had, after producing a rather exceptional meal, started to open up and ask questions about the wider galaxy. For all his assertion that he was no longer interested in humanity it was clear that the many centuries he had spent on Earth had left a deep-rooted affection for her people. Jazmin found him fascinating and quickly dropped her initial wariness as he told stories about his time as an adventurer in the 27th Century.

Dkyun added to these stories, informing the group that her Oan Power Ring had a full record of that era and could share them if they wanted. The two of them squabbled over some minor historical points but it was obvious they enjoyed hearing the others' views and recollections. Daramulum had insisted that the Hawk-Knights of Universal Justice were time travellers that had somehow sent their souls through history to intervene at crunch points in Humanity's development while Dkyun insisted they were just soldiers from Thanagar who needed to make up an excuse to join the fight.

It was at this point that Starkling stated that it still had problems understanding the concept of time as humanity referred to it, instead seeing only the cycles of the universe around them, and how each fit within a greater cycle. Daramulum kaughed heartily.

"Your swarm..."

"Starkling, its name is Starkling!" Jazmin said with a smile.

"It is unlike anything I have met in my life, though they does not call themselves Starkling... do you?" Daramulum asked the composite Legionnaire.

<We believed ourselves unique so had no need of a name. We are ...us> The swarm-being continued to gently float slightly above the legionnaires and the sailor, making rhythmic waves as it swirled in the air.

"You truly are unique." The grey skinned man said with a smile. "My people travelled around the galaxy millennia ago, we saw ourselves as great teachers that would help lesser civilisations... ha, such hubris! Such utter hubris! Anyway, hah, we met a lot of other races and beings but this swarm..."

"Starkling!" Jazmin interjected again with a laugh.

"Yes," Daramulum laughed along with her as he continued, "the fantastic life form you call Starkling... it is truly amazing!" Some of the composite Legionnaire's marble sized components flew down from the main body and spun in a circle around the top of the grey-skinned man's head making it look as if he had a halo made of dark stones.

"Legionnaires, I have lived a rather simple life here for over two centuries and it suits me, I travel the river carrying cargo sometimes or people or like today, I carry nothing and enjoy the wind on my face. My days are filled with calmness and contentedness. After so long teaching your ancestors about the stars and the land and their place in between both, and battling the forces that sought to deny them their birth-right it is so enjoyable..."

"I call bullshit! You are so bored... You've had a break to recharge but you miss adverturing, just admit it!" Kid Quantum interrupted with a laugh.

<Jazmin, please show him a little respect> Dkyun sent across a personal bandwidth.

<Yes Jazmin, show me some respect> Both Legionnaires turned and stared at the ancient man as he slid his thoughts into their telepathic matrix. He gave them a knowing smile.

"Ah... okay, perhaps that was too much but, c'mon, it seems to me that you are only treading water here - excuse the pun - and I just gotta ask, where are your people? You said you went to Earth with your people to teach the primitive humans there, so where are the rest of them? Like, you were all gods but what happened to you?"

"They retreated back to the Dreamtime. It's our ancestral home, like Earth is for your people. I... uh, I had to remain behind to make sure the way would be open for them to come back. The Lightning Men and Wandjina would have it no other way. I remained on Earth and left the great desert continent to travel around that globe. In the continent shaped like a horn that pointed towards the great islands of ice your people called me Tezcatlipoca ...though I left them once they started sacrificing their children in my so-called honour. I was far more cautious revealing my abilities after that."

"Have they not come back? Your people I mean..." Jazmin asked, suddenly realising that this being must have been alone for several thousand years.

"No... not yet. Time is a strange thing. In this reality it follows rather sticky rules, but not where I am from. That's why I've never really aged."

<Perhaps there is a correlation as to why we cannot grasp the human concept of time either> Starkling sent.

"Us immortals rarely do." Daramulum looked a little bit sad as he said this. The grey-skinned man stood up and activated a motion sensitive hard-light console. Two small droids appeared and cleared away the plates and goblets from the decking around the Legionnaires.

"Anyways," He scratched absently at the stubble on his chin as he spoke, as if uncertain, "...speaking of time, perhaps it's time you went on with your adventuring, I've got somewhere to be as well and don't want to hold you up anymore."

"We're sightseeing while our colleagues do their own thing, so haven't any plans... but if you're busy, we'll leave you to it. It's been a real pleasure meeting you." Jazmin realised she had been gushing enthusiastically for most of whole time they had spent with this ancient being, her excitement and awe were probably really embarrassing to watch... and actually she didn't care. Even being a Legionnaire, how often did the opportunity come up to speak to an actual, living deity from Earth's ancient history?

Daramulum smiled a knowing smile.

"I have enjoyed spending these moments with you as well Jazmin Cullen, but now we both have our own paths to follow. It’s always a genuine pleasure seeing how amazing humanity has become." He bent forward and lightly kissed her forehead before turning to Dkyun Mu.

"Green Lantern, thank you for this meeting. I am genuinely please to learn that the Corps are still active. Oolangan and Shenshen Matsha were two of the most extraordinarily kind and brave beings I have ever met. They would be proud to know you are carrying on their legacy." Dkyun bowed her head respectfully as she heard these words.

"And you, nameless swarm that the humans call Starkling... I know we will meet again down the centuries. If I may offer you some advice... Do not get too attached to these beings as their lives may be glorious but they are shockingly brief."

<We will meet again Daramulum of Universal Justice. we ...look forward to it> Starkling responded, uncharacteristically sharing an emotional feeling with the message.

"Fare well Legionnaires. It has been my honour to meet you." The ancient being smiled at them as he fully unfurled the sail.

The three Legionnaires levitated off Daramulum's sailboat and watched as he hoisted the sail around so it could catch the breeze sending the boat bobbing gently along with the great river's current.

"Do you think we'll see him again? We must have reminded him of his old life. I wonder if he misses it and secretly wants the excitement..." Jazmin asked.

"Oh, yes, I am quite certain of it." Dkyun replied with a chittering laugh.

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Lightning Lass - Senior Team member, Ayla Ranzz of Winath, electrical generation and manipulation
Backlash - Mrruaw MNau of Simballi - enhanced strength, speed, senses, absorbs kinetic energy to boost own size and mass
Atom Girl - Sylva Nrilsan of Imsk - can shrink to microscopic size

Newly promoted from Academy student to full membership (Mentor in brackets):
Solar Gorilla - D'Nadka Endarooga of Dmansca - generate and project extreme heat and light (Lightning Lass)

Duplicate Girl - Senior Team member, Luornu Durgo of Carggg - creation of multiple identical duplicates
The Huntress - Ambassador Amynta of Nostos ii - incredible strength, speed, invulnerability, space flight
Bouncing Boy ii - Stoor Chamble of Pasnic - creation of personal spherical force field

Intern:
Haze - Science Police Cadet Tkemwa Autmi-Hu of Ungara - strength, durability, induce confusion and senselessness
Impact - Dillon Blackstream of Myar - incredible strength, speed, durability, stamina, motion sense

Laipas - hunting dog from Nostos ii - enchanted to never lose a trail, fast and tough, far smarter than she looks!


Amynta the Huntress took the lead, walking close behind her hunting dog Laipas.

Behind her, Duplicate Girl walked alongside Haze while Bouncing Boy trailed close by. Lu kept her head up and was grateful for the holo-disguise their Distorters projected as she glanced around. The streets they were on were becoming increasingly run-down with more people hanging about outside large shuttered buildings. She estimated that at least half were low level gang members looking for a mark. Bouncing Boy was hiding it well if he was feeling a little bit rattled as he strutted along the street, Lu was impressed to see.

<pity mindbender isn't with us, would good to know what these guys know. They look like they're keepin' secrets...> Stoor sent to Lu.

<Yeah, though he needed a few days off so we'll have to do it the old-fashioned way and use our own brains to figure it out> Lu replied.

Laipas gave out a small 'yip' and looked up at Amynta. The Amazon gave her hunting dog a casual pat on the head and kept walking.

<we are getting close> Amynta sent.

Ahead of them there appeared to be an industrial estate. The majority of the large buildings seemed deserted, while high fences surrounded them and group of youths added a further deterrent to investigating the warehouses.

<Okay, let's not get too close until we know exactly where the Khunds are. Ayla... we'll stop here and act like we're waiting for someone, can you take a turn off and get a look from another angle. Atom Girl may need to scout ahead>

<on it> Lightning Lass replied, her team had been dawdling a couple of hundred metres or so behind before they turned into a side road and wandered casually around the block. Once Ayla had established that they were behind the same warehouse that Laipas was leading them to she had her team stop, for anyone watching it looked as if they were just taking a breather.

<Sylva, we want to know what's inside each building, don't cause a scene, okay?>

<Yup, espionage mode is on> the Imskian replied with a laugh as she flew out of Backlash's fur and made her way towards the warehouses.

<good luck> Impact sent as she flew off out of sight at her tiny size.

Ayla watched the dot vanish as the tiny Atom Girl flew up the side of the warehouse. The Winathian knew about the Imskian cultural need to prove themselves, something she had seen vi fight with and sylva appeared to be just as stubborn... Lightning Lass hoped she hadn't sent Atom Girl into a situation she wouldn't be able to handle.


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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 23 May 22)
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more great stuff Harbi!

found it funny that the boat captain was wanting to feature in a promo holo lol

cool powerset, hypnotic voice! nice! And also generating light... ooph Jazmin, don't attack (though she didn't hurt him, I think) You right Jaz well, she's competent but clearly young in her habits and speech. ooh Wandjina reference... huh, interesting how Daramulum has played a role in many society's myths...

pleasant meeting, and indeed I am sure we will see him again... smile

again, I gotta say I was closely scrutinizing Lu during this mission, and trying to judge her actions and words... I leaped a bit when she casually mentioned Mindbender needed a few days off too. It is looking like Marmud's recollections may be colored, but... I will keep observing smile

Imskian need to prove themselves smile indeed, we've seen that in Violet a lot.

nice installment, looking forward to more!

Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 23 May 22)
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Thanks IB,

Daramulum is an actual Australian Aboriginal deity, a one legged god that changes shape, controls the weather and lives on the moon, oh and is married to an emu. I've taken a few liberties obviously and will have him pop up again.

Lu and Marmud's relationship will be explored soon enough, and it will have some consequences.

We'll find out how much Atom Girl wants to prove herself next time as she finds herself in a tight spot.

More next week hopefully when we'll find out what Jan and Kent are up to as well as an interpersonal moment or two.

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Hey Harbi! Trying to catch up with a bunch of stuff here, so bear with me. smile

Don't want to repeat a lot of what was said, so a few notes of things that jumped out at me.

I really like your Tinya here. And her belt controls are cool - is this something that you invented? I love it.

Very cool, disorienting scene where she's losing focus and hope, but her recovery is even better executed.

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A sentence I'd never expect to see in the Legion. laugh Hopefully the doctor has talked to Tinya about barging through people's bedroom walls!

I *really* love the concept and need of the team to have a psychological counselor. With all that they have to deal with, it seems like it would be a natural thing, and you write that well.

Daramulum seems like an interesting character. I'm curious to know more.

Have you seen the newest Matrix movie? Starkling seems like how they represent AIs to move around with bodies in the real world. Really cool. At least that's how I pictured Starkling in my head. smile


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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 23 May 22)
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GL, hi, thanks for your review.

The distorters on the team's belts are taken from canon: the arc where Cham takes Vi and Timber Wolf to Khundia they use them to pass as natives - though then they were called Dystorters, but I thought that was changing the spelling for the sake of it so just spelled them correctly. I've added them to the team;s belt buckles so all of them can appear as someone else if needed.

Re That line... well, Anje was presenting to several hundred teenagers so it kind of had to be said, ummm, no it wasn't something you'd normally expect to read but I guess as I've just watched all three series of Sex Education on Netflix it was channeling my inner Jean Milburn smile I introduced a team counselor at the end of the first Legion Worlds as it was something that I thought they would need, so glad you like the idea and thanks for saying I write it well as I am totallly making it up as I go along so just hope there's nothing said that's too wrong smile

Daramulum will return soon and if my long term plans go ahead, again later on. Creating a god character fr the team to interact with is too much fun to ignore for too long,

Still haven't seen the latest Matrix, I totally loved the original though the next two were less successful I thought - in fact I watched the third one in a theatre in Bangkok in Thai without English subtitles. I liked imagining the story much better when I invented it myself compared to when I eventually saw it in English - or perhaps I liked being in the air conditioned cinema compared to the 35+ degree celsius outside laugh

Anyway, thanks again, very grateful for your review, more soon!

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Done some catch up reading!

- Backlash getting a little jealous over Ayla and Laipas was cute...I really like Backlash, he is a fun addition to the team!

- I liked the description of Rimbor; low income areas are pretty much the same everywhere I guess, give or take a thousand years of technological advancement!

- Daramulum, yay! Aboriginal lore doesn't really get much of a look in comics, that was a nice cultural shout out....and I loved finding out more about Starkling! Very intriguing that they're a unique entity, and immortal to boot! Starkling is another one of my favourite OCs, their whole schtick is super unique!

- also as a sidenote - Sex Education is great! I haven't seen the last season yet, but it's such a good show smile

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The Esse Statum Stroid Retreat, home of the Magus, on the outskirts of the U-Vabbishte Toktrec Settlements, galactic north of the Great White Asteroid Field, Raptor Nebula


Element Lad - Senior Team member, Jan Arrah of Trom - elemental transmutation

Support staff:
Dr Richard Kent Shakespeare - Impulse – Chief Medical Officer and Support Team manager - enhanced strength, speed, durability, stamina

Quantum Queen - Queen Helanna Regina-Winzzor of the Eternal Empire of the Nomadic Sunkind, enhanced strength, flight, can assume the form of and manipulate ambient electro-magnetic spectrum energy
Psyche - Meena Estelli of the Firgrove settlements of Homestar 3, empathic emotional reading and manipulation
Blockbuster - Ardren Kent of Earth, super strong and invulnerable


The Magus' retreat was on the very fringe of the settlement.

Neither the transport tubes nor the great river that connected the majority of the planetoids came close: It was a retreat in every sense! As they approached it became clear why Timber wolf had described the planetoid looking as if it were covered in a silvery pelt as row after row of crystals were laid across its surface reflecting the nearby nebulas light.

"Tsarin crystals... we used them as grave markers on Trom." Jan said quietly. Kent nodded and continued to watch the screen. An automated announcement welcomed them and gave their shuttle a flight path to take them into the docking bay on the small world's southern pole.

"This is Jan Arrah of Trom," the Legionnaire announced across the comm link, "I'd very much like to meet the Magus."

Only silence followed as their shuttle followed the flight path and they docked. It took several minutes for the automated systems to fully connect the ship to the bay and fill the area below with air so they could disembark safely. As the two men watched half a dozen monks on saffron coloured robes came towards the shuttle.

"Right, let's meet him." Kent said, determined to get them moving. Jan stood still for another second watching the screen before turning towards the grav-lift that would take them to the bay's floor.

"Thank you, Kent." He said with a small quick smile before stepping into the gravity stream that would take him down.

The two men floated down. Just before the reached the floor an older man in a grey robe, accompanied by two women and a muscular man entered the bay.

<that's Quantum Queen and Psyche from the Wanderers> Jan sent to Kent. Even though the Legion's doctor knew this empath was not the same one that had taken over the Titanian refugees council in Naltor and caused so many problems for the team he stiffened and his eyes widened momentarily.

The reached the floor in five seconds though it felt a lot longer to both.

"Hello, I am Jan Arrah..."

The man in the grey robe pushed his hood back and gave a small smile, "I know who you are."

"Uncle Tarl?" Jan felt his knees go weak as he recognised the man before him. He had been a close friend of his parents, a trader and often seen as a bit odd by Trommite standards as he eagerly left their world to seek out markets where they could trade. It had been rumoured that he was involved in some suspicious activities though no-one had ever proven anything. Jan and his sisters adored him as he always dropped by to visit their family when he was back from an excursion and would share tall tales and often brought small gifts.

The two men hugged each other fiercely.

...................................


Fifteen minutes later and Kent was in a small garden.

After a quick introduction Jan had been led away. He had reassured Kent that it was Trommite custom to be 'cleansed' if one had been off world. Ardren Kent and Quantum Queen were eager hosts to the Legion's doctor, while Psyche had smiled warmly and walked behind them. Kent had initially been wary, not expecting Jan to leave him, but he quickly realised that the three people with him were genuinely interested in spending time with him.

As they reached the garden, Quantum Queen had vanished in a beam of light, promising to return with breakfast.

Kent quickly apologised to Psyche if he was uncomfortable around her, explaining what her counterpart frm the Dark Circle controlled reality had done to the team. She was genuinely shocked and looked tearful.

"I know you are not her, from everything the team has said about you I know you could never act like that." He added and put an arm around her shoulder.

"Thank you for telling me, Kent." She gave him a sad smile.

"How's my daughter and Brin doing?" Ardren asked, breaking the tense atmosphere.

"Wait... of course, you're Laurel's father!" Kent exclaimed, "I don't know if she told you but we're related."

They spoke about how Ardren was only four generations separated from their Kryptonian ancestor, while Kent had worked out that his own family tree was thirty generations distant.

"So how many times removed cousins are we?"

"Oh, no idea but quite a few." Kent replied as Ardren gave the doctor a hug.

"Welcome to the family Kent." He said as he slapped him on the back.

Several women joined them and Kent was introduced to four of the Magus' wives. They could all see his expression had changed as this was said and Psyche laughed. The empath explained that women of child bearing age were asked to become the Magus' wife and any conception they had would have some of his DNA added so the Trommite race could be reborn. They weren't actually intimate with him; it was more to do with Trommite standards and customs. In fact, she added, only two of the wives and one of the monks shared their bed with him, all the others were in relationships with the monks.

Kent nodded as he processed this information. He knew that Jan's people were known to have complex relationships and family set-ups. Their culture was renowned for its stoic openness and belief in personal responsibility and freedom. Still, Kent thought, he was unsure how he would feel if Jan decided to take on another partner or two.

Kent doubted he would be very happy.

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Rimbor

Lightning Lass - Senior Team member, Ayla Ranzz of Winath, electrical generation and manipulation
Backlash - Mrruaw MNau of Simballi - enhanced strength, speed, senses, absorbs kinetic energy to boost own size and mass
Atom Girl - Sylva Nrilsan of Imsk - can shrink to microscopic size

Newly promoted from Academy student to full membership (Mentor in brackets):
Solar Gorilla - D'Nadka Endarooga of Dmansca - generate and project extreme heat and light (Lightning Lass)

Duplicate Girl - Senior Team member, Luornu Durgo of Carggg - creation of multiple identical duplicates
The Huntress - Ambassador Amynta of Nostos ii - incredible strength, speed, invulnerability, space flight
Bouncing Boy ii - Stoor Chamble of Pasnic - creation of personal spherical force field

Intern:
Haze - Science Police Cadet Tkemwa Autmi-Hu of Ungara - strength, durability, induce confusion and senselessness
Impact - Dillon Blackstream of Myar - incredible strength, speed, durability, stamina, motion sense

Laipas - hunting dog from Nostos ii - enchanted to never lose a trail, fast and tough, far smarter than she looks!



Atom girl flew above the warehouse.

The first thing she noticed was that its flat roof had a low wall around it hiding half a dozen auto-security turrets. She let the team know as she flew towards a door. It was clearly securely locked but she crept through a miniscule gap at its side and made her way down the stairwell that was behind it. She could hear a couple of voices on the first floor, though their dialect sounded Rimborian, not Khundian, so she alerted the team to potential trouble on the first floor and carried on going down.

At the bottom of the stairs were two sets of swing doors, one either side. Sylva took a breath and considered her options. She grew to six inces in height and scanned with her flight ring in both directions, hoping it would pick up traces of Khundian DNA. No life signs to the right so she shrunk down again and flew through the gap between the doors on her left.

The room before her was massive, filled with stacked pallets holding large crates. The light was poor so she risked growing up to six inches again and rested on one of the raised pallets, hopeful that between the shadows, her height and the distorter on her belt she would be difficult to spot. The Imskian closed her eyes and concentrated on any sounds she could hear.

In the distance someone laughed and she quickly flew in that direction.

"Who are they? There's another group at the back too... are the Green Hogs movin' in on our territory?" The voice came from a woman with a thick Rimbor accent.

"Eliminate them, whoever they are. Let your gangs know we are not to be targetted." This voice was harsh, with the clipped burr that identified it as Khundian.

<Team, they're goona attack you! watch out!> She sent as she flew above the crates and pallets towards the voices. At the end of the cavernous room there was a space cleared with a table and chairs and a range of hard light screens. There were four people dressed like gang members and the two Khunds that the team were here to capture.

<four gang members and the Khunds...>

<be careful Atom Girl, we're coming in> Duplicate Girl replied.

<of course> Sylva replied unconvincingly. She shrunk down to a tiny size again and flew down towards the Khunds.

There was a loud crash from above then a booming noise from the side wall! The Legion had arrived!

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The Huntress had flown up to the roof of the warehouse, drawing fire from the automated pulse cannons in the security turrets.

The blasts barely phased her as she smashed through the nearest of the security casings that had popped up from behind the wall that ran around the top of the roof. The explosion was unexpected and threw Amynta into the air. Behind her Bouncing Boy had activated his forcefield and was pounding between two of the turrets, smashing them into pieces. The fourth had been blasting at Amynta but changed its focus onto Stoor instead. He was fast enough to avoid its blast and instead he smashed into the extended arm of the blaster destroying it. A cloud of toxic gas blew out from the turret though behind his force field the young Legionnaire only laughed as he continued to pound the last of the security turrets into smithereens.

Duplicate Girl, Haze and Laipas were at the front of the building below them where several security blasters sprung out of the wall. Haze concentrated on these using his ability to confuse electronic systems - both artificial and organic. There were several wild shots as the blasters were unable to aim properly. As they fired above the Legionnaires Haze flew as fast as his flight ring would carry him towards the door. Just before he reached it the intern twisted to shoulder charge his way through, smashing the double doors off their hinges.

<Good job Tkemwa!> Lu sent. As she did Laipas barked and jumped through the door before running down one of the corridors.

<We'd best get after that hound or Amynta will kill us if anything happens to her> Duplicate Girl flew as fast as she could behind the hunting dog, cursing to herself that she should have asked for a leash before sending the Huntress to the rooftop.

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Atom Girl swooped towards the Khunds as they started to fade into invisibility.

All four of the gang members had started to run towards the door as the noises from outside got louder.

As Sylva got close, she quickly expanded to her full height and, using that momentum, kneed the nearest of the Khunds in the solar plexus with as much force as she could muster before snapping a set of incapacity cuffs on their arm. The other had thrown a punch at her back but the Legionnaire had already shrunk out of sight before it came close to connecting.

<caught one, other has vanished. There are four gang members coming your way team> Atom Girl used her flight ring to scan for Khund DNA, aware that at her size the relativistic range of the scanner would be seriously compromised. She had a reading for something very close by and then the world went dark. The invisible Khund had been swinging his muscular arms around and struck the Legionnaire, throwing her against the wall. She regained her full height as she slid unconscious to the floor.

There were sounds of a scuffle, which alerted the Khund to Laipas as the great hunting dog from the Amazon world of Nostos ii ran towards him, her teeth showing as she readied to attack. As the twins had operated within the United Planets as mercenaries for many years before joining the Shadowmancer's foolish quest he knew what a dog was and how they had acute senses of smell and hearing that his invisibility wouldn't fool.

Laipas stopped six feet from the Khund and started barking loudly, drawing attention to where he was.

The Khund had never seen a dog so large, and was wary of approaching it as it snapped at him. Instead he turned and ran towards his brother, hoping to get the cuff off his arm and make their escape. The hunting dog jumped and caught his left arm in her jaws, biting ferociously through his armour and into the flesh. The Khund punched Laipas as hard as he could while shaking his arm and she dropped to the floor, snarling at him.

"Now little dog, I don't like shooting beasts unless I have to... but you deserve this." The Khund muttered as he drew a blaster from the holster on his thigh


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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 7 June 22)
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Raz, thanks for your kind words, always appreciated.

Backlash and starkling are two of my favourite OCs too, so when I do include them it's important to me that they actually contribute something so expect more soon smile

And yes, unfortunately poverty is a baseline that in the future, on Rimbor anyway, hasn't progessed by much unfortunately.

More soon as I introduce a new character (whooh! You're going to love him, I promise), Amynta get her hands dirty, Laipas to the rescue... maybe, and a surprise encounter will rock the team.

Hope you are still enjoying reading this as much as I am writing it smile

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yay! more great stuff, Harbi!

ooh, a personal connection between Jan and the Magus, nice backstory!

I appreciate Kent opening up to Psyche, that was decent of him - and Psyche's reaction made me like her too! I like em both smile

also cool that you worked a Kryptonian line into Kent's lineage. I wonder if those Kryptonian genes give em all their muscle tongue

ah, thanks for clearing up about the "wives" bit. only 2 of the wives and 1 of the monks seems more reasonable... and thanks for showing a realistic bisexual character in the Magus (I assume the monks are male?) and thanks also for adding the cultural differences, and also a look into Kent's view vs. Jan's, again this is very realistic (oh, the couples I know who had issues because one wanted monogamy and the other wanted to be open!) a big thumbs up and a big hand Harbi, for this realistic depiction!

ah, more nice action! great that Haze can also affect electronic systems! lol at Lu cursing about Laipas running free... good of Atom Girl to keep the rest of the team informed like that.

Oy what a cliffhanger!!

looking forward to seeing the next bit!!

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The U-Vabbishte Toktrec Settlements, galactic north of the Great White Asteroid Field, Raptor Nebula

Kid Quantum - Jazmin Cullen of Xanthu - creation of temporal quantum bubbles, flight
Starkling – telepathic swarm-being composed of indestructible ball bearing sized components
Green Lantern - Dkyun Mu of Xudar - wearer of a Green Lantern power ring


The Green Lantern scanned the mighty river that flowed through the depths of space amongst the thousands of satellites and planetoids that made up this settlement on the very edge the United Planets.

As an engineer Dkyun desperately wanted to find out how such an incredible feat could be achieved - there was enough water to cover a moderate sized planet kept from freezing with a breathable atmosphere around it while running through hundreds of thousands of klicks of the hard vacuum in the depths of space. There were small boxes every few hundred klicks within the mighty river that perhaps contained the technology that kept the river running, but the Green Lantern had no idea where it had come from originally as she could find no record of this level of technology existing with humankind in the 27th century. Even now, four centuries later, it would take an incredible level of skill to create and maintain this. When she scanned the boxes she had found neither her Oan ring of her Legion flight ring database could discern what they were made from.

Ultimately, it was her ring that gave her the clue to figuring it out. Oolangan Matsha, one of the twin 27th century Green Lanterns that had helped with the exodus to this previously desolate place had kept meticulous recordings all of their adventures. As Kid Quantum and Starkling had finished talking to the crew of the latest boat they had met and were flying around the white crested waves that ran along the river and enjoying themselves, Dkyun quickly ran through the records her Oan power ring had stored from the earliest days of this settlement.

<It was Daramulum!> she exclaimed.

<What was that Dkyun?> Jazmin asked as she flew up underneath her teammate. Starkling's swarm followed close behind.

<Daramulum created this river... watch...> Dkyun held out her right hand and an emerald hued holo sprung up from her ring.

Several images whizzed past until one showed the Aboriginal deity standing on the command deck of a space craft with technology that neither Dkyun or Jazmin had seen before.

"We need to help them become self-sustainable...they are mining for raw elements in the great asteroid field but don't have the resources yet to properly access everything they need. I believe I can get the basics to them that'll buy them some time so they survive long enough but it'll cost..." The grey skinned being looked away.

"Do what you can, we'll dissuade the Terran fleet from attempting any more attack runs. If you can give them something the colonists will stand a chance."

"Leave it with me, good luck. Don't be too gentle with those thugs now." Daramulum was smiling viciously as the holo faded. The twin Green Lanterns must have left to deter the forces from the Inner Worlds from harassing the colonists any further.

Jazmin remained quiet as another holo came to life.

The view of the asteroid field before the current settlement had been established was astonishing! This was more than a simple standard asteroid field. The edge was within five hundred AU of limits of the Raptor Nebula though it stretched for several thousand AU from there; this area was clearly a birthing ground for planets as much as the nebula was for stars! Jazmin audibly gasped! She had always loved astronomy, being from Xanthu it was almost a cultural expectation, but had never imagined seeing anything as truly awe-inspiring as this. For thousands and thousands of klicks there were planetoids and asteroids and large broken chucks of solid matter that she expected were huge masses of raw elements expelled during the dying gasp of some long dead super nova. This would have been an amazing place to colonise, with everything a properly equipped expedition could use to create their new home.

<this is seventeen days after the last holo> Dkyun sent across the telepathic matrix.

As the twins flew in towards the asteroid field, they could see a long ribbon shimmering with reflected light from the nearby nebula. It meandered and twisted and turned as it moved.

As the Green Lanterns flew closer, they could see that the shimmering ribbon was a truly immense amount of water, with smaller tributaries leaking into it from dozens of icy asteroids along its length. There were small shuttles flying past it scooping up supplies for the settlers.

As they watched, down near the surface of this most incredible sea in the middle of space, Daramulum swung a bullroarer and as it spun over his head he levitated up from the roiling watery mass towards them. The Green Lanterns created an emerald bubble around themselves and the grey skinned being.

"What...?" Shenshen started to ask a question but before she could finish Oolangan, always the more expressive of the two, had wrapped her arms around the Aboriginal deity in a tight hug.

"How did you do this? It's... it's incredible!" She asked.

"They have a good chance now; I'm creating fresh water and useable atmosphere around it from the frozen rocks out there. It took a bit of work but we had to cannibalise a lot of the systems on the Rainbow Serpent to build the structure field to contain it ...but look at the result."

"Daramulum, what have you done? You need your craft to get back to the Dreamtime, don't you? You're stuck here if you do that..." Shenshen sounded horrified.

“I won't be able to leave this plane now, no, but it's worth it... isn’t it? My people will have to build another ship that can make the journey if they want to find me ...but until they do, this reality will have to do." Although he smiled at his Green Lantern comrades there was a bitter resignation in the deity's expression.

They knew that by using the craft that had carried him here from his Dreamtime dimension he had just sacrificed his only way back to his own reality. He had given away his only link to his people to ensure the desperate refugees that had fled from the barbaric regime of the newly formed United Planets had a chance at survival.

The holo faded.

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Rimbor

Lightning Lass - Senior Team member, Ayla Ranzz of Winath, electrical generation and manipulation
Backlash - Mrruaw MNau of Simballi - enhanced strength, speed, senses, absorbs kinetic energy to boost own size and mass
Atom Girl - Sylva Nrilsan of Imsk - can shrink to microscopic size

Newly promoted from Academy student to full membership (Mentor in brackets):
Solar Gorilla - D'Nadka Endarooga of Dmansca - generate and project extreme heat and light (Lightning Lass)

Duplicate Girl - Senior Team member, Luornu Durgo of Carggg - creation of multiple identical duplicates
The Huntress - Ambassador Amynta of Nostos ii - incredible strength, speed, invulnerability, space flight
Bouncing Boy ii - Stoor Chamble of Pasnic - creation of personal spherical force field

Intern:
Haze - Science Police Cadet Tkemwa Autmi-Hu of Ungara - strength, durability, induce confusion and senselessness
Impact - Dillon Blackstream of Myar - incredible strength, speed, durability, stamina, motion sense

Laipas - hunting dog from Nostos ii - enchanted to never lose a trail, fast and tough, far smarter than she looks!


Lightning Lass unleashed a huge bolt of electricity towards the rear of the building.

All of the windows at this side blew out and several chunks of masonry fell loose. Backlash charged ahead, jumping through one of the shattered windows and vanishing into the darkness inside.

<Mrrauw, wait up there!> Ayla sent after the great horned feline. Impact, the intern from Myar led the way into the darkness, her motion sense meant she would be least likely to be surprised by any sudden attack from the gang members and Khunds that the Legionnaires knew were in the warehouse.

Solar gorilla brought up the rear, her body aflame to deter anyone from trying to strike her from behind. The light from her flames created dancing shadows across the large room they found themselves in making it seem as if they were on a moving vessel as streaks of dark and light swung back and fore across the walls and floor.

<I find it most embarrassing but could one of you cuff these two please. The incapacity cuffs design is most inconvenient for one with paws such as mine> Backlash stood with his front paws pinning down two gang members; one was still conscious though didn't struggle against the horned tiger that had caught him.

Impact flew over and quickly cuffed them while Ayla ruffled the fur on Backlash's head and neck affectionately.

"We're a team Mrrauw, so don't be doing that please. Now, you and Dillon take the lead and go lets catch us some Khunds."

Impact smiled at the obvious affection between the Winathian and the great horned tiger as she moved to the door.

While the rest of the team had been dealing with Backlash and his captives, Solar Gorilla had been looking around the room they were in. There were pallets with large secured boxes on them. She carefully extended a finger of plasma towards one the locks on a crate and it pinged open.

"Uhh... Ayla, you gotta see this, we've got ourselves an arms cache here."

"You'd better not slag it D'Nadka, just in case it causes a major explosion..." Lightning Lass said as she came over to examine the contents, "this is some heavy grade shit!"

She thought for a second, aware that the Rimborian Science Police would most likely be called at some point but felt unsure exactly where their loyalties might lie. This sort of weaponry would create a huge profit on the back market...

"Henry..." Lightning Lass spoke into her flight ring, "We've got a weapons horde here I'd like to see deposited somewhere safe, like the surface of Rimbor star, can you oblige?" There was a silence for two seconds before the holo-mam from the far future appeared before them.

"Of course, Ayla, though are you sure this is all of it? Perhaps once you have secured this establishment and ensured everyone has been removed, I can warp the entire place..."

"Great idea Henry, thank you. Oh, can you deposit those two on T-G first please?" She pointed at the two gang members that Backlash had subdued.

"Right, let's get on with it..." Ayla said happily as she flew across the warehouse store room towards where she could here a scuffle taking place along with barking from Amynta's hound Laipas.

..............................


Bouncing Boy and the Huntress flew through a hole in the roof that one of the security blasters had created when it had mis-fired.

Below were four gang members. Three were fully conscious while the last was clearly dazed and stumbling about in the debris from the collapsed ceiling.

"Children, I have no desire to hurt..." Before Amynta could finish she was struck by twin blasts of immense heat that threw her into the far wall and set the surrounds ablaze. Bouncing Boy's spherical force field was already activated so he dived in the way of the energy beams to deflect them. The young man who had projected the energy from his eyes screamed at the Legionnaires as his colleagues started to attack.

"My pa left my ma because o' you do-gooders. You ain't welcome here on Rimbor!"

One of the gang members had taken the opportunity to jump at Bouncing Boy, her hands glowing with a sickly lime green energy. She grabbed hold of the Legionnaire's force field and unleashed two blasts. These ricocheted off and she was thrown to the ground where she landed heavily. Stoor leaned over her and snapped a set of cuffs on her arm, their anaesthetic rendering her unconscious. As he did Amynta flew forward and struck at the young man who had blasted her. He flew against the far wall, smashing through it in a cloud of dust and debris.

The last remaining fully conscious gang member held his hands up in surrender. Amynta approached him with a set of cuffs in her hand but as she got close, he dissipated into a green cloud that engulfed the Amazon Legionnaire.

<you okay there Amynta>

<of course, this idiot thinks I need to breathe like other mortals. Cuff the one that went through the wall Stoor while I teach this impertinent youth some manners>

Bouncing Boy felt a momentary flash of pity for the gaseous gang member. As Amynta took to the air and flew outside, dragging the noxious cloud with her, Stoor went to check that the young gang member the Amazon had just thrown through the warehouse wall was okay. As he got close there was a figure making their way through the dust cloud, the young man appeared slightly dazed but unhurt.

"Hey, come on, you know we're Legionnaires, right? You don't want to get into a fight." Stoor was trying to stall as he had seen the damage this gang member could do and thought there would be a far less destructive outcome if he had some back-up. "I don't know what we did to your father but..."

"My father was a Legionnaire you cretin! That moron Jo Nah was my daddy, not that he ever knew. He ran away to join you freaks and left my ma pregnant and alone to bring me up by hersel' an' after she died the gangs took care o' me, but at least I got one thing from him... his powers!" And in a blur the young man was gone in a split second of hyper-velocity.


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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 10 June 22)
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Hey IB, thanks again for your very kind review above.

It was established that Kent was related to Laurel and Kara in LW2, and I think I covered the reson why he is like he is in his first appearance in the first LW though will be recapping it soon. There will be more about Jan and Kent's relationship soon as I see them holding very different ideas on some fairly basic things so that needs to be addressed.

More soon as we clear up on Rimbor, Jan and Kent's journey continues and coming up - a leadership election!


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thanks for pinging me Harbi, always a treat to read more of your good stuff!

and thank you for the recap re some of the family background.

awesome tidbit re Xanthu and astronomy smile ties into Thom's origins too!

wow, quite a bit of heroism and sacrifice from Daramulum. that's what a deity should be, in my book! (I also like your earlier mention, of how it was only his followers who corrupted their beliefs to allow human sacrifices and the like)

ah, Henry is so convenient and helpful. smart thinking of Solar Gorilla, Ayla and Henry re checking for weapons and making sure they will be disposed of!

"My pa left ma ma because of you", like what?! Now I'm interested in the story behind that! could it be because... and Yes, nice curveball re it being Jo Nah! why am I not super surprised? oooh looking forward to see where you take this one!

as always, another great installment, looking for more more more!

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- Jan knowing the Magus is a nice touch! It could come across as too convenient in other circumstances that the last two survivors of Trom just happen to know each other, but I like it here as it's a subtle way of showing that Trom was a really small community of people to begin with!

- seeing Laurel's dad again was a treat too, especially with figuring out how he's related to Kent - something I am still wondering how I wanna handle in my writing smile

- I am guessing the Khund threatening Laipas has never seen John Wick or they'd know better than to hurt someone's dog... wink

- I really liked the extra background on Daramulum, and the note that it was his sacrifice which allowed this community to flourish! Suitably mythical!

- Backlash's paws being too big and unweildy to use the incapacitator cuffs was a nice touch, I like little elements like that which show how different non-humanoid characters are just in normal day to day scenarios we'd take for granted

- and the big one! Maybe I have been watching too much Ozark but I am hearing Ruth Langmore in Jo's alleged daughter's voice....ooh, I wonder if that makes her mama An Ryd??? Eyes glued for this development!!!

Also: leadership election sounds like it will be a good opportunity to mix things up, hope it's not a bad omen for Tinya though!

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The U-Vabbishte Toktrec Settlements, galactic north of the Great White Asteroid Field, Raptor Nebula


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From the Wanderers:
Blockbuster - Ardren Kent of Earth, super strong and invulnerable


Kent felt tired.

Not really physically tired of course, as that was virtually impossible with his physique, but the vicarious stress he had felt on Jan's behalf while trying to remain strong and positive for his partner had made the last few days quite exhausting. Even after he had been shown to a guest suite and had enjoyed a rather stimulating sonic shower he still didn't feel totally relaxed.

Kent had enjoyed a spicy stew and spoken to several of the Magus' wives and monks before being shown to his quarters. They all told him they were very happy living on this isolated retreat and seemed genuinely overjoyed as the news spread that another survivor from Trom had joined them. Most had heard of the Legion and so knew that Element Lad was from the same home world as the planetoid's owner. Still, none had ever expected him to visit them. One of the wives eyed Kent up quite salacious and smiled flirtatiously with him, which Arden laughed at, telling the doctor not to be embarrassed as no-one minded if he was or wasn't interested in reciprocating her obvious intentions. Kent didn't say anything but he did wonder how, within such a small community of only 60 or so adults they stopped anyone from getting jealous or possessive around their relationships. He also wondered at what age were the children involved in the flirting and apparent fun?

And now, an hour later as he lay down on the massive bed in the centre of the suite the muscular doctor had to admit that for all of his open mindedness and capacity to not judge other's life choices, he felt on edge by the culture and easy relationships that were on clear display within this planetoid, it all just felt off to him somehow...

He wondered if Psyche being here somehow was adding to his discomfort? Despite knowing full well this version of the empath wasn't the person who had done so much harm, his instincts were to avoid her... in spite of every bit of evidence pointing out that she really was as kind and sweet as the Legionnaires who had met her previously said, her being close to him made triggered an instinct to run away.

He was well aware that usually the occupants relationships wouldn't even have registered as anything other than simply what it was - a group of adults deciding what made them happy and living it - but Jan investing in rediscovering his heritage from the Magus, who also happened to be someone Jan already knew and looked up to, had somehow rattled the team's doctors confidence!

Okay, Kent thought to himself, Trom had a population of under two thousand when Roxxas had brutalised it so chances were that Jan would at least recognise anyone else that had managed to survive the massacre there, but still "Uncle Tarl" had worried Kent more than he expected. The genuine expression of warmth and love on Jan's face when he realised who the Magus actually was... Kent couldn't get that out of his mind, that moment frozen in front of him.

Was it that the doctor felt his relationship was under threat if Jan decided to follow the Trommite practice of opening it out to others? He couldn't quite put his finger on this as the source of the discomfort as he knew he didn't want to share his partner, so if Jan wanted to do that then Kent would walk. That was a relatively safe bet as far as Kent thought, so he was kind of fine with that... well, maybe not fine exactly but resolute at least.

Was it that... and Kent paused as he thought this as he knew that while he hated to admit it, there was more than an iota of truth within this thought... he knew with Jan meeting his Uncle Tarl, the Legionnaire would no longer be so dependent on him to be his 'family'? Did he feel that there was a threat to the close bonds they shared perhaps? Were the doctor's own control issues being tested and that was why he felt threatened? Kent ground his teeth as he mulled this over.

He knew that he would need to talk to Jan about this and that also worried him. He usually wasn't one to catastrophise, instead feeling that if there was an issue to deal with then the best thing one could do was to face it head on and get past it, but still... Kent smiled as it dawned on him that ultimately it all boiled down to one simple fact - and that brought a realisation of a point of fact that he knew somewhere inside himself but had never taken the time to acknowledge...

The culture on this planetoid reminded him that people make choices every single day who to spend their time with, and whether it was due to Jan's choice or his, Kent was feeling rattled as he simply didn't want to think of any choice being made that would result in his life not including his Legionnaire partner at his side. For the first time in his adult life, Doctor Richard Kent Shakespeare was in love with someone else and didn't want to contemplate how bad he would feel if he lost them.

There was a knock on the door and Ardren Kent walked in, without waiting for a response. As usual, Laurel Kent's father was wearing a pair of blue board shorts and a simple red cut away vest with sandals on his feet, looking casual and relaxed. He had an easy confidence about him that made him remarkably charismatic. Kent realised that their famous ancestor Kal El must have had the same effect on people.

"If you're up for it, thirty times removed cousin," Ardren grinned as he said this, "Helena and I are going to shuttle across to the Affiemmaton Deep Blue Social 'Stroid as they have the best views and food for a dozen AU around here. You wanna join us?" There was a clear expectation that Kent would say 'yes' writ across his face.

"Ah... Is Jan back yet? I want to speak to him before going anywhere... so, hope you don't mind but I'd rather leave it until after that." Kent sat up on his bed, where he had been laying as he stared at the ceiling, and blinked a couple of times as he gave his distant relative a small smile.

"No sign of them yet. Trommites are funny beggars ... nice, don't get me wrong, but funny. The Magus has been known to meditate for three days at a time. I reckon there must be more exciting things to do than that, eh?" Again, Ardren smiled.

"Yeah... hey, look, I can call Jazmin and Dkyun and ask them to join you if you want, but I'd rather stay here for now, Thanks anyway Ardren, I do appreciate the offer."

"Yeah..." Ardren Kent didn't sound terribly convinced, "So... ah... I hope you don't mind me asking this, but what're you afraid of son? You look like you want to bolt out of here." Ardren's voice was soft as his expression turned serious and, Kent thought his blue eyes seemed to look right into the doctor's heart.

"Really, ah, I'm fine, just tired, I guess. It's been a journey getting here, y'know?" Kent struggled to stop himself from fidgeting.

"Yeah, okay... only, see when I first came here the ...the ambience really surprised me and I was a bit on edge for a while too. What I'm saying is don't let this place spook you too much son, these are good folk here, genuinely golden people. You and Jan will be looked after and no-one will impose anything on either of you that you are not totally comfortable doing yourself. You might be asked but it's fine to say 'no', no-one will mind. I know their free-love and honest community approach is a bit ...ah, non-standard," Ardren smiled and shrugged, "but listen, that doesn't mean you two guys need to join in if you don't want as it isn't that sort of a place. Okay? You and Jan are strong, right? ...in your relationship?" Kent nodded his response to the question, before Ardren continued "...well then, you'll be totally fine. So, stop worrying son, you'll be good. And, if you change your mind and you do fancy a decent meal this evening you know where to find us." With that he smiled and turned to leave.

Kent gave his distant relative a relieved smile and thanked him. After Ardren had left, Kent lay back on his bed feeling much less tired than he had only minutes before.

........................


Rimbor

Lightning Lass - Senior Team member, Ayla Ranzz of Winath, electrical generation and manipulation
Backlash - Mrruaw MNau of Simballi - enhanced strength, speed, senses, absorbs kinetic energy to boost own size and mass
Atom Girl - Sylva Nrilsan of Imsk - can shrink to microscopic size

Newly promoted from Academy student to full membership (Mentor in brackets):
Solar Gorilla - D'Nadka Endarooga of Dmansca - generate and project extreme heat and light (Lightning Lass)

Duplicate Girl - Senior Team member, Luornu Durgo of Carggg - creation of multiple identical duplicates
The Huntress - Ambassador Amynta of Nostos ii - incredible strength, speed, invulnerability, space flight
Bouncing Boy ii - Stoor Chamble of Pasnic - creation of personal spherical force field

Intern:
Haze - Science Police Cadet Tkemwa Autmi-Hu of Ungara - strength, durability, induce confusion and senselessness
Impact - Dillon Blackstream of Myar - incredible strength, speed, durability, stamina, motion sense

Laipas - hunting dog from Nostos ii - enchanted to never lose a trail, fast and tough, far smarter than she looks!


Haze took the lead as he joined Duplicate Girl searching for Laipas.

Lu didn't mind Tkemwa flying in front of her as he was easily ten times stronger and tougher than she and his reactions were at least twice as fast so he was the obvious choice to fly at point position.

Just around the corner they encountered two gang members while a third was on the floor trying to get up - a clear sign they thought that the Amazon hunting dog had been this way. The gang members all stumbled about as Haze confused them giving Lu the opportunity to quickly slap incapacity cuffs onto their arms. As Lu finished doing that they heard Laipas bark from the back of the huge store room they were in.

"Let's go!" Lu said as she flew over the top of the rows of stacked crates towards where the sound was coming from. As she flew the Cargggite triplicated, getting ready for a fight.

Duplicate Girl and Haze flew over the last row. Below they could see Laipas barking at thin air... there was one of the Khunds on the floor with a cuff around his arm, while Atom Girl was slumped against the wall not far away. As the Legionnaires were well aware, these two Khunds could become invisible so neither thought for a second that the dog was mad, they just couldn't see what she was telling them was there.

"Stop there!" Lu shouted as she sent a telepathic message to the intern to use his power to confuse their invisible opponent.

A blaster fired from out of nowhere nearly striking Lu and she scrambled to get out of the way. As the Legionnaires jumped aside of the blaster fire Laipas pounced at the invisible Khund but was struck aside by a powerful blow before she could get her teeth into him.

Haze dived down to the dog to check it was okay as he pushed his psychic attack out towards the general area where the invisible blaster was firing upon Duplicate Girl. The cyborg started to fade into view as he stumbled towards the intern but before Tkemwa could slap incapacity cuffs upon him there was a loud whoosh of air and a hand slapped the intern across the face at tremendous speed knocking him backwards.

...and then the Khunds were gone!

Debris flew out the doors as the wind sucked it behind the escaping speedster and the two cyborg mercenaries they had plucked from out of the Legionnaires grasp.

"Are you okay?" Duplicate Girl settled next to the intern as he picked himself off the floor. Her two other selves were flying along the corridor behind the escaping mercenaries trying to track where they were fleeing to.

<uh... g... guys, there's a kid claiming to be Jo Nah's son. He just got away from me at super speed. He's very fast and tough and has flash vision so be c... c.. safe now> Bouncing Boy's message unexpectedly interrupted them.

<What?> Ayla responded, <We'll look out for him, thanks for letting us know Stoor.... Wow, I'm glad Tinya isn't around right now to hear that...> It was obvious that Ayla had not meant to share that last part of her thoughts and she quickly apologised.

<I think we just met him. He's taken the Khunds and fled> Duplicate Girl replied.

As Laipas got back on her feet the hunting dog shook her head and shoulders before trying to chase after the long-gone mercenaries. Haze grabbed her by the scruff of the neck and picked her up, sweeping her legs from under her and holding her next to his torso firmly. She struggled for a bit, barking loudly, before finally settling down and turned to lick the intern's cheek. As much as Tkemwa found this uncomfortable, especially as Lu laughed at the face he pulled, he didn't put the dog down in case she ran off after the escaped villains trail again.

Within moments Backlash and Impact ran through the warehouse to join them, while Lightning Lass and Solar Gorilla had instead followed the stairwell down to the basement level, in case there were any more gang members lurking there. They came up only two minutes later, both looking disappointed as they hadn't found anyone.

Less than ten minutes later, after the Huntress had returned with an unconscious youth in her hand and the Legionnaires had double-checked there was no-one left inside the building, Henry opened a spinning warp that tore through the warehouse emptying its contents into a very close orbit to Rimbor's home star. Within hours the arms cache was nothing more than super-heated free-floating molecules.

Atom Girl looked annoyed as she stepped through the warp back to First Base.

"Today was a victory Sylva." Lu said as she walked alongside the Imskian.

"Very nearly a victory Lu, we let three of them go."

"We didn't let anything of the sort, three escaped because we didn't know about their power set - we will next time though. And don't forget what we actually achieved; we disposed of a horrific store of weapons making that part of Rimbor that much safer, we caught nine gene-mod gang members and weakened those Khund bastards standing with the gangs. It'll take time before we hear from them again, I bet, they've got wounds to lick right now... speaking of which, you need clearance from the medical team before you can return to active status, okay?"

"Yeah, I know..." Sylva looked a little crest-fallen before she turned to Lu and asked, "So, what about that kid who said he was Ultra Boy's son? Do you believe it?"

"Yeah... that could get tricky. We know Jo had a life before joining the Legion ...if I remember right he had a girlfriend called An Ryd, I think, but Pulsar Stargrave murdered her. From what Stoor said the kid would be around sixteen so he'd be about the right age... ah, who knows, I guess we'll find out next time we meet him. Hopefully, if he is Jo's long lost child, we can persuade him to follow in his father's footsteps."

"Seems he's pretty deep in with the gangs and those two Khunds though..."

"Let's deal with him when we next meet him Sylva, we've got enough on our plates to get on with without going looking for more trouble." From her tone of voice it was clear Lu was ending the discussion.

Atom Girl could see that the Cargggite was obviously upset by the news that Jo Nah may have had a child that the Legion never knew about, but Sylva was sure that now the team knew about him they would be hearing more from him soon.


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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 17 June 22)
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hey guys, thanks again for your kind feedback, as always t is appreciated!

The Rimbor story is over for now though obviously it will be picked up again at some point soon as Jo's son will come looking for answers...

Raz, yup Jan knowing who the Magus is was always going to happen, in a previous story I'd established that the population of Trom was always small as the way I see it is a planet with millions or even billions of transmutators wouldn't have had any trouble repulsing Roxxas.

Next up, a little side story on Earth and we'll find out some more about the Magus and about Daramulum, then it's election time again - who do you think will get the top spots?

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more great stuff Harbi!

I love how insightful Ardren is. Kent's self-reflection was very well-done, and indeed I can say from my and friends' experience, those are the kinds of issues and questions that open relationships (or the discussion thereof!) tend to bring!


heh re Ayla mistakenly sharing her thoughts re Tinya not being around to hear about Jo's son

aw re Haze carrying Laipas

As always, I am keeping a strong eye on Lu, and she does not show much, if any, of the behavior Marmud has been accusing her of. I'm super invested in that plotline!

nice resolution for now, eager to see where you take the hunt for the two Khunds and Jo's son! was a great outing, Sylva's disappointment vs. Lu's determination was great!


and yay elections, always exciting!

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Kent's whole dilemma kind of reminds me in a way of something I went through with my ex, I thought you did a really good job of elaborating on the reason for his insecurity without making one side or the other look morally superior...it will be interesting to see how his talk with Jan goes!

Also, I don't know why I thought Jo's mystery kid was a girl last time but either way I am looking forward to seeing more of him!

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The U-Vabbishte Toktrec Settlements, galactic north of the Great White Asteroid Field, Raptor Nebula


Element Lad - Senior Team member, Jan Arrah of Trom - elemental transmutation
Kid Quantum - Jazmin Cullen of Xanthu - creation of temporal quantum bubbles, flight
Starkling – telepathic swarm-being composed of indestructible ball bearing sized components
Green Lantern - Dkyun Mu of Xudar - wearer of a Green Lantern power ring

Support staff:
Dr Richard Kent Shakespeare - Impulse – Chief Medical Officer and Support Team manager - enhanced strength, speed, durability, stamina

the Wanderers:
Quantum Queen - Queen Helenna Regina-Winzzor of the Eternal Empire of the Nomadic Sunkind, enhanced strength, flight, can assume the form of and manipulate ambient electro-magnetic spectrum energy
Blockbuster - Ardren Kent of Earth, super strong and invulnerable


Just over two hours later, Jan had still not returned so Kent decided to give him a call.

<Jan, sorry to interrupt but I'm...>

<Kent? Hey, we're running through guided meditation and it's been a long time since I've tried this, so I'll contact you once we're finished here... there's nothing important come us, is there?>

<Ah, no, but I wondered...>

<Okay, see you later, bye> Jan's message was rushed and abruptly ended

"Oka-a-ay," Kent said out loud, "that's enough of this waiting game... I'm definitely going out to enjoy myself now." He took a deep breath and smiled, calling up the holo-comm from his flight ring to contact Jazmin Cullen.

"Hey Doc, you guys okay there?" Her holo looked startled, as if he had interrupted the young woman from Xanthu in the middle of some activity.

"Yeah... well kind of. Jan's off meditating and I'm left here waiting and..."

"We'll come pick you up if you like? We've been following the river, it's absolutely amazing! We've met a total legend too, you remember Daramulum from your history lessons? The 27th Century hero? You know who I mean, right? Well, he's alive and crewing a small cargo boat."

"You been sampling the local stims there Jaz?" Dr Shakespeare retorted with a laugh.

"Nope, seriously! Dkyun's ring identified him and we spoke for an hour or so... he was really, really cool." Kent could see the beginnings of some serious hero adoration in Jazmin's tone of voice and body language. Whoever they had met had made an impression on her!

"Oh, well, sounds cool. Anyway, Ardren invited me for supper, and I was wondering if you wanted to join us too? You and Dkyun are probably in need of something to eat by now..."

"Daramulum fed us. Really nice it was too, he's a great cook y'know." Jazmin enthused.

"Wow, whoever he was, he really made an impression on you, eh?" Kent didn't mean his tone to sound so dismissive but he could see immediately by Jazmin's reaction that she had been upset by his comment's implications.

"Yeah, so we don't need supper, thanks anyway. You have fun with Ardren, your new family and you must have a lot to catch up on, right?" Jazmin went to break the communication link but Kent spoke quickly before she could.

"Jazmin, I'm sorry, that came out all wrong. I'm going a bit bonkers here by myself and wanted some pals to hang out with... I'm so sorry I took my frustration out on you there. "

"Sure, that's fair enough, boredom is horrid isn't it, Kent? So... we can be there in... fifteen or twenty minutes, would that do?"

"That'll be great, thanks Jaz, really grateful for this."


.....................................


An hour later and Kent was sharing an emerald bubble with Jasmin while Starkling and the Green Lantern flew outside.

Jasmin asked if they could fly by some of the more exotic planetoids to investigate and perhaps see if they could get permission to have a look around.

"We need a guide." Kent said to no-one in particular as he marvelled at a perfect sphere, three quarters as big as Legion World Home Base, it looked like it had been made from speckled quartz. It was not the most outrageous thing they had seen but the craftsmanship was still mind blowing. They had flown within metres of the sphere and there were no signs of workmanship; no notches or grooves from any tools - the stone appeared to be perfectly smooth and precise.

"Yeah, I agree. Let's go grab that ...whatever relation he is of yours. Ardren was an explorer, right? He's bound to know a few interesting things." Jazmin smiled as she said it, though Kent never saw it as they both were staring out of the green Lantern's protective bubble at the marvels around them.

<my ring has located Ardren and Helenna, shall we go to them?>

<please> Kent replied.

And with that they pulled away from the enormous polished quartz sphere and flew out towards the direction of the Raptor Nebula, where the majority of the settlement was located. They approached a relatively small asymmetrical planetoid much smaller than those around it. As they got closer they could see it had two of the tube network connections attached and a large docking bay that looked something like a flat leafed tree sprouting from the far side. They all noticed that two thirds of the bay spaces were taken. This "Social 'Stroid" as Ardren had called it was obviously popular.

It was Dkyun that recognised the small yacht that floated above one of the landing pads.

<Daramulum is here> she sent through to her teammates as she flew them into an airlock. Jazmin became excited by the prospect of meeting the grey skinned former deity again, and insisted they track him down to introduce Kent to him. Kent said that after they had met up with Ardren and Helenna they might. His tone made it clear he didn't think it was a good idea and he hoped Jazmin would forget. He smiled to himself remembering what he had been like at nineteen, Jazmin Cullen's current age in standard years. He regretted how he acted as a teenager, and was rather impressed when he thought about how mature she was by comparison. Still, that was no excuse to disturb the person who had said he was Daramulum...

A maître-d droid asked them which level and service they required and after Kent had mentioned who they were looking for it activated a luminous streak on the floor to lead them to the appropriate grav-lift to the restaurant level, wishing them a pleasant stay as it turned away to deal with the next guests.

It took ten minutes to reach the two Wanderers, but by the then the Legionnaires had followed the guiding illumination through eighteen different levels, each with their own specialised service. The Green Lantern had drawn the most attention - Dkyun knew it had been two of her Corps that had helped set up this settlement centuries before but didn't realise how much their actions were now the stuff of legend and how highly appreciated they were. At least a dozen of the diverse patrons had approached her to thank her for her predecessor's actions. Two of whom also recognised Starkling and Kid Quantum so the team smiled and shook hands, making sure to give their fans a pleasant story to tell later.

Ardren Kent and Queen Helenna Regina-Winzorr were sat at the only table on a wooden veranda surrounded by lush tropical plants that overlooked the nebula. Even at the immense distance away it filled have of everything they could see with a billow mass glowing in burnt hues of ruddy amber with pops of new-born starlight. It was a truly breath-taking vista.

"Hey, hope you don't mind us joining you." Kent said as he walked out f the main restaurant floor to join them.

"See, I told you he'd come join us." Ardren said with a laugh as he stood up to shake their hands.

As the Legionnaires made their way out onto the decking, they heard a crash behind them.

Dkyun had been the last to arrive so turned quickly, her Oan power ring flashing with energy. Other patrons were quickly moving aside as running towards them was Daramulum, closely followed by a woman in a Daxamite armour that looked like it belonged in a museum.

"Legionnaires! Quickly, we need your help! The Worldmith has found us. He'll destroy everything we've worked so hard to build. Help us get rid of him..."

.......................................


Dragonmage - Xao Jin of Earth - dragon magics
Southern Lights of Starhaven - spaceflight, magic user

Szenlong - newly hatched Spirit-Dragon of the Southern Seas


Southern Lights and Dragonmage had arranged to meet to discuss their training with each other.

They had arranged to meet at a large storage room on Second Base that they had learned from the cargo manifest was currently empty. Inside they found the floor was thick with lush grass and wildflowers and a small grove of fruit trees to one side. Both young men smiled, aware that Flaurianarelle, the Faery that Mysa Nal had sent to assist the Legion, had worked her magic on this otherwise barren space. She was so adept with her chloromancy that there was only the smallest of residual tastes of her magics in the room. To any non-mystically sensitive, it would appear as if this storage locker had always held this bucolic green space.

Szenlong flew over their heads into the room and spun around the tops of the trees making happy purring noises. The young dragon had been familiarising itself with the Legion's bases, obviously happy to be around the people it had chosen.

The two Legionnaires sat on the meadow and discussed their magicks for twenty five minutes, both surprised by how the other accessed their talent as they approached it in such very different ways. After Xao had failed to astrally project, despite Southern Lights positive reassurances and surprisingly up-beat approach, they started to talk about how Xao's connection to the Eternal Jade Dragon influenced which magicks he could actually use. With the mention of the Jade Dragon, Szenlong swam down through the air from the branches of the trees where it had been chasing butterflies to eye level to the two men and started to purr again. Xao held a hand out to let the young dragon rub its flank against.

"You are both in synch with each other, aren't you?"

"No... I don't believe a person can ever truly be in synch with a dragon, but we do ...ah, care for each other I think is the best way to describe it." Xao gave a brief smile as he answered. He could see Southern Lights confusion so started to explain how a dragon's senses were far more attuned to the elemental, timeless and intrinsic cosmic nature of reality so humans and dragons really had little reference points to start a true understanding, let along bond successfully.

"Szenlong is happy to be with you though, they did choose to be here." Southern Lights gave a broad grin.

"That's true. I was thinking of taking it to visit an ocean on Earth, the spirit-dragon is after all a water elemental. Its kind had ruled the Great Southern Sea for millennia. It'd be nice if you could join us, would you like to?" Xao asked the winged mystic. Szenlong gave a joyous yelp and undulated and twisted in a dance around them, obviously understanding what had just been said.

"Yes, yes I would love to join you. That sounds superb. Thank you." Southern Lights gave a broad smile as he replied.

Xao smiled coyly and asked, "You know, you don't seem quite yourself today, it's like you're... bubbly. What's distracting you, my friend? I mean it's great to see you so happy... is there something going on?"

"I... yes, I've recently gotten close to someone..."

"Dawnstar." Dragonmage said with a smile.

"Yes, how did you...?"

"You've been fixated by her since you joined the academy." Xao laughed as he answered.

"Was it that obvious?" he laughed, "She's so ... beyond beautiful!"

"She is very attractive." Xao agreed, smiling at his friend's news.

Southern Lights expression darkened for a second and Dragonmage asked his friend if everything was okay.

"Of course.... well, I hope so. It's just I've spent the last ten years ...since I was chosen by the Sky-Keepers to follow the Higher Pathways... so I haven't... I haven't had the experience... y'know..." Southern Lights dipped his head, his long hair falling over his face.

"Oh... Hey, so what? I'm sure she'll understand."

Above them, Szenlong started blowing loud raspberries and flicking the young men's hair with its tail as it hovered above their heads.

"Perhaps we should look into making our way to Earth's oceans, before he gets too disruptive." Southern Lights said, grateful for the interruption.

"Yes, yes you're right. Let's get going." Dragonmage replied with a smile towards the young dragon.

And with that the two mystics left the cargo hold and made their way to the warp control room.

Less than fifteen minutes later an alarm screeched across First Base monitor board - a typhoon had materialised out of nowhere in the South China Sea and was away to make imminent landfall in one of the densest populations on Earth...


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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 4 July 22)
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Oh my the Worldsmith, haven’t seen that nuisance in a while.. more than a nuisance, a danger

Jan is understandably distracted, poor bored Kent

A typhoon sounds right up the alley of these two smile

Looking forward to more more more as always Harbi!

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The U-Vabbishte Toktrec Settlements, galactic north of the Great White Asteroid Field, Raptor Nebula

Kid Quantum - Jazmin Cullen of Xanthu - creation of temporal quantum bubbles, flight
Starkling – telepathic swarm-being composed of indestructible ball bearing sized components
Green Lantern - Dkyun Mu of Xudar - wearer of a Green Lantern power ring

Support staff:
Dr Richard Kent Shakespeare - Impulse – Chief Medical Officer and Support Team manager - enhanced strength, speed, durability, stamina

the Wanderers:
Quantum Queen - Queen Helanna Regina-Winzzor of the Eternal Empire of the Nomadic Sunkind, enhanced strength, flight, can assume the form of and manipulate ambient electro-magnetic spectrum energy
Psyche - Meena Estelli of the Firgrove settlements of Homestar 3, empathic emotional reading and manipulation
Blockbuster - Ardren Kent of Earth, super strong and invulnerable

Daramulum of the Dreamtime - great strength, durability, speed, shape changing, telepathy, and energy generation and manipulation
Ruby Huru of the U-Vabbishte Toktrec Settlements - half-Daxamite physiology, minor mystical abilities



"You're the Daughter of Mr Power and Topaz Storm from Universal Justice? For real? You're like... superhero royalty!" Jazmin Cullen exclaimed.

Daramulum had made quick introductions before explaining to the Legionnaires and Wanderers why he needed their assistance. Ruby Huru, the older woman in atiquated Daxamite armour that Jazmin had spoken to, gave the Legionnaire a mirthless smile and turned back to Daramulum as he told the team about the threat the settlement faced.

"The Worldsmith will alter the settlement, ruin centuries of work." Ruby said to the group.

"What's the game plan then?" Ardren asked.

"My sister Yhi got him to leave Earth many centuries ago. He was sent there to alter environments to suit an invading force from another reality though he didn't seem aware that his masters had been wiped out... he still gets sent through random space warps every time he completes a task, totally unaware that his 'clients' are long gone." Daramulum looked slightly sad as he spoke.

"Okay, so let's go punch him until he runs away." Ardren said, rubbing a fist into his palm. Kent smiled to himself as he watched his distant relative, reminded of Laurel Kent - like father like daughter!

Quantum Queen put an arm around Ardren's muscular torso and smiled as she announced "I will call Psyche as well. Between us we should be able to deal with this miscreant."

Kent almost laughed; he had never heard anyone use the word 'miscreant' before but coming from the blond Wanderer it somehow sounded appropriate. For all of her positivity and friendliness, it was clear by her bearing that the Quantum Queen really did have a royal background.

The group had made its way to Daramulum's yacht, which he assured them was more than a simple vessel for travelling the river. Kent felt a suspicion that the grey skinned man was keeping rather a lot from them.

"Are there any other meta-powered residents out here that could help?" Kent asked as he stepped up the ladder onto the deck of the small craft. While Quantum Queen, Jazmin and Dkyun had flown straight onto the small craft he resisted using his flight ring.

"Probably dozens... but getting them together would be difficult."

"I can move at light speed if you can tell me where they are." Quantum Queen said.

"Maybe later... I'd need to collate my data sources, and right now we don't have time to sift through three centuries of information. Sorry, if we had time that would be a good idea but right now... not so much."

While they spoke Kid Quantum called up information from her flight ring. A hard light image of the Worldsmith appeared in her hand, alongside a scrolling data stream that gave the limited information the Legion had on the strange being. Ruby Huru stood next to her and read the data as it scrolled down. The Green Lantern approached them and nodded in agreement as she read the data stream.

"The Corps hasn't much more information... only that he always retreats to a pocket reality when bested. How did your sister learn so much about this Worldsmith, Daramulum?" Dkyun asked.

The grey skinned man had called up a holo-wheel and was steering the small craft out from the landing bay and ignored the Green Lantern as he punched at a hard light screen to release the docking clamp field that hung above them.

"His people're all telepathic. From what he told me before Yhi was pretty powerful so..." Ruby started to reply.

"Tsk tsk kiddo, I've told you before not to tell my stories." He growled over the steering wheel at her. There was a glance between them that clearly held a lot of meaning. Ruby Huru turned away and looked out into the depth of space, clearly embarrassed. As this exchange took place, Green Lantern and Starkling took off from the deck of the strange yacht and flew at its side. Jazmin felt embarrassed for Ruby and considered joining Dkyun but instead went over to Ruby's side and stood in silent support. When Ruby turned her face towards the Legionnaire Jazmin gave her a brief smile before staring off into space.

"Hang on now." Daramulum said.

The space around them went blank - totally without colour or form - and they reappeared several hundred AU away at the fringes of the settlement.

Before them, not 250 metres away, hung an obese green skinned being in a black and white pinstriped suit. They were close to an immense satellite that from where they had materialised seemed to go on forever made from layers of stratified rock, separated out into platforms clearly used for farming. Each layer had hundreds of acres of crops growing. Just below them the great river that ran throughout this strange settlement roared past.

Behind the yacht the being they were here to stop hung in space. Energy crackled from the Worldsmith's fingertips as he transformed the huge multi-layered farmstead satellite into a beachhead for the long-dead invading force.

....................................


The Green Lantern and Starkling approached the Worldsmith.

He ignored them as energy crackled around the edges of the immense floating farming platform before him. Dkyun sent a message across a broad telepathic range, channeling the matrix from her flight ring through the Oan power ring but the Worldsmith ignored her. As she did Dramulum steered his craft between the green skinned being and its target.

Ardren Kent dived off the side of the yacht, his hands balled into fists, closely followed by Ruby Huru. Within seconds the two brawlers had reached the Worldsmith. Ardren Kent managed to get one punch onto the large being's shoulder before a tendril of matter spun out from the farming satellite and wrapped around his head, dragging him away.

Quantum Queen materialised in front of the Worldsmith as the Green Lantern swooped off to help the damaged satellite. Queen Helenna put her hands out and a blast of concentrated radiation struck the Worldsmith in the face, blowing him backwards. Ruby Huru flew in at speed and struck at him multiple times before a wave of energy erupted out from his torso throwing her and the Wanderer backwards.

Starkling dived into the fray and surrounded the Worldsmith's bulbous head with its component parts and slowly tightened then until they squeezed tight. The green being reached up with both hands and tried to snatch at Starkling's marble sized parts but instead the composite Legionnaire wrapped itself around the hands as well and held them in place on the Worldsmith's head. They could hear the Worldsmith yelp in pain. As this happened Daramulum steered his yacht in towards the struggling invader. At his side on the deck, Kid Quantum stretched out her hands.

<Starkling, I'm going to stasis his fat ass, get clear now!>

The swarm of diamond hard pieces that made up the composite Legionnaire flew off the Worldsmith's head as a quantum field surrounded him, freezing him in place.

<We must fix this> Dkyun sent to her teammates as she used her power ring to create a barrier at the side of the farming platform that the Worldsmith had disrupted. There was at least a klick of damage that was cracking and beginning to fall off the side into space.

<Any ideas?> Jazmin replied.

<has anyone tried simply talking to him> Kent sent.

<centuries ago, that was how my sister got him to leave Earth. I've met him a couple of times since and he seems angrier each time> Daramulum added his thoughts into the Legion's silent conversation, surprising Kent.

<oh yeah, he's telepathic> Jazmin said with a feeling of humour as she spotted Kent's startled expression at the deity intruding onto the Legion's flight ring generated telepathic matrix.

<we sensed no malice, only purpose> Starkling added, <we do not believe it intentionally means harm, though there is anger and disappointment within it's thoughts>

<perhaps I could try> Daramulum sent, <can you drop your field Jazmin and we will see if I can do what Yhi managed to do> He didn't sound too hopeful, though as he was clearly the one with the most life experience the Legionnaires deferred to the one-legged deity.

<let's get this fixed and everyone in place first> Dkyun suggested as she struggled to contain the tumbling rocks and earth from the farming platform.

As the team had been using the telepathic matrix to communicate, Ardren Kent, the Quantum Queen and Ruby Huru had got close to Jazmin's field and were waiting for further action. Jazmin signalled for them to wait. In the distance they could see a shuttle approaching. It took less than ten seconds before it was close enough for them to see Psyche was piloting it. Quantum Queen vanished in a blur of radiation and reappeared inside.

Dkyun used her flight ring to contact the shuttle and relayed their plan. Jazmin would drop her stasis field and Daramulum would try to persuade the worldsmith to stop its senseless activities. If that didn't work, then they would need to drive it away.

Both of the Wanderers gave a thumbs up in response.

<Okay, shall we do this now?> Kid Quantum asked.

...................................


The Green Lantern approached the yacht and extended a bubble of emerald energy to surround them all.

There was a tube linking it to the platform nearest to them. They could hear the air as it rushed in to fill the bubble from the immense farming platform.

"Perhaps now we can all talk?" She gave a chittering laugh as she said this out loud. Jazmin quickly explained the plan to Ardren, Ruby Huru, Quantum Queen and Psyche, telling them that if they couldn't persuade the Worldsmith to stop with words then they would need to get physical. Ardren smiled at this.

"Okay, you ready there?" Everyone either nodded or said yes in response. With a wave of her hands, Jazmin cancelled her quantum field.

"You are getting in the way of my work, my clients will..." The Worldsmith said with quiet menace.

"They are long gone." Daramulum interrupted the worldsmith's rant, "You know this so why do you continue in your tasks?"

"Great Glmoren will rise and join us when I have prepared the way! They are my clients..."

"They were your creators... and they lost a war many, many centuries ago so won't be joining you." There was no emotion in Daramulum's response, only the relaying of facts.

"No! No, you lie you puny godling. I remember you; you ran like a Shlumfrit on Slaughter Day, you coward."

"Not this time, this time we need to put an end to your ...your mission. So, please stop this. We don't want to hurt you but we can. You know you are outnumbered so..."

"This is a farce!" With that the Worldsmith crackled with energy though before he could direct it Ruby Huru flew up to his face.

"You will stop or I will break you!" She yelled into his large green face. The Worldsmith blinked and looked momentarily stunned.

"We just want to talk Worldsmith." Daramulum said, his tone neutral. He glanced aside at Ruby who caught the look and backed off.

On the shuttle Psyche reached out to calm the Worldsmith's raging mind. She could sense the frustration, fear and anger that the large being felt, though the over-riding feeling she had from him was of loneliness. Psyche did her best to unruffle the raging emotions. She turned to the Quantum Queen and quickly told her what she was feeling and asked her to relay it to Daramulum. Queen Helenna gave a tight smile and vanished in a beam of radiation to reappear at the grey skinned deity's side.

Ardren Kent had been watching the scene before him, getting ready to pounce. He almost jumped when a hand gripped his shoulder. Dr Shakespeare had flown over to his distant relative and could see how eager he was to start fighting.

"We need to give Daramulum a chance here. The Worldsmith may a bit crazy but he can cause a lot of damage if provoked." Kent said quietly.

"So can I." Ardren replied curtly.

"Now's not the time to show that, let's give them a chance." The doctor kept his hand on Ardren's shoulder as the extra-dimensional deity from ancient Earth and the terraforming invader faced each other.

.....................................


The gray skinned god and the green skinned planet-shaper faced each other within the giant emerald bubble.

Below them they could see the great river was filling with a multitude of vessels as the local community of settlers responded to the alarm that the Worldsmith's presence had created. None tried to approach too close though many assisted with shoring up the damaged farming platform.

The Legionnaires and Wanderers watched as the conversation quickly stretched out to include their lived history and its place within the greater galactic lifespan, and both gave smiles. Kid Quantum was initially surprised the Daramulum would allow such a tangent but after twenty minutes it became clear that the grey skinned deity was giving the Worldsmith a reason to show empathy... it was a master class in aggressive diplomacy.

Jazmin noticed that Dr Shakespeare, Ardren Kent and Ruby Huru had retreated to the shuttle where they waited alongside Psyche. There was nothing more for them to do while Daramulum tried to broker for a peaceful solution though none wanted to leave in case the diplomatic approach failed.

Jazmin and Quantum Queen had stayed at Daramulum's side, with Starkling hovering above them. Dkyun had flown off to shore up the crumbling edges of the farming platform. Jazmin felt kind of guilty for not helping the Green Lantern but as her abilities could stop the Worldsmith she felt obliged to stay. She also knew that she was too fascinated by the exchange happening before her to leave. The conversation had shifted onto the history of the U-Vabbishte Toktrec Settlements and how this small corner of space had changed over the last three centuries. Daramulum was describing some of their achievements like a poet might, his voice changing in tone and cadence and emotional emphasis. He told of the Silver Chapel and the Black Ferry, of the Gru'um Collective of Elements and the Perfect Sphere made from hand polished granite, of the Monument to a Dying Princess and the Gardens of Infinite Views...

"Almighty Vrersch! Can you show me this place you speak of?"

"Of course, the settlement has always encouraged individuality and there are many more marvels... though construction is obviously slow as we work only with the technology we have at hand." There was a sly grin on Daramulum's face as he said thus which was echoed by the Worldsmith.

"Ah... if my clients truly are no more do you wish me to assist with this tremendous program of works?" The Worldsmith said. His expression was unreadable.

"I would be honoured to have you help me assist these poor short-lived creatures as they reach out for true beauty." Daramulum beamed back.

And so, the Worldsmith smiled and held out a hand.

"I believe his is how they signal an agreement has been made."

Daramulum looked momentarily surprised before quickly grasping at the hand.

"Ummm... hate to interrupt but if we aren't gong to fight do you mind helping us fix that?" Jazmin spoke before she could think and she pointed to wards the immense farming platform that was still crumbling behind them.

"Oh shoosh, that is a trifling act..." with a wave of his hand the platform that he had altered started to re-form into its previous form.

"So... umm we done here?"

"We are indeed 'done here' Jazmin. Thank you for your assistance." Daramulum smiled warmly.

.........................

Two hours later and they were all on or close to Daramulum's yacht as he gave a guided tour of the settlements to the Worldsmith.

The grey skinned deity had been the perfect tour-guide as he told his guests about the history of each of the amazing satellites and planetoids that they had passed. Ardren Kent and Quantum Queen had spent most of the time talking to Ruby Huru trying to persuade her to join the Wanderers as their team currently only had three members. Ruby laughed and declined, glancing at Daramulum as she did. Her expression was unreadable.

Kent Shakespeare had taken a turn at steering the yacht and laughed heartily as they swerved uncomfortably a few times before he got the hang of it.

Daramulum offered to whip up some refreshments and went below deck. Jazmin followed him.

"Hey, sorry hope you don't mind but I thought I'd give you a hand." She said with a small smile.

"Of course Jazmin. Today was pretty ...outrageous, eh? Though it's probably nothing special to you Legionnaires, I bet you live the most adventurous lives." He had turned away to punch an order into the auto-chef.

"Not so much really, I think this'll be a day I remember for a lo-o-ong time. You were really skillful... the way you spoke back there. It ...you inspired me."

"That's very kind. We all do what we can, and you were skillful too you know. Those stasis bubbles... now, they are truly impressive."

"Yeah..." Jazmin glanced behind her to make sure there was no-one else there before she carried on, "I think I know how you know so much about the Worldsmith. It was your people that wiped out his creators, wasn't it?"

There was a sudden silence as Daramulum turned towards her.

"It would be easy to make you forget that, but you deserve the truth. Yes, we encountered the Vrersch, they were an awful bloodthirsty bunch. They brutalised their home dimension and burned their way through several more." His expression was distant as he remembered the ancient battle. "They didn't give us a choice. It was our biggest regret, that we couldn't solve it without... well, to our eternal shame they are no more now. The Worldsmith though... he was just a being they manipulated and used. His natural abilities were twisted and they sent him out to prepare the way for them. Yhi tried to explain all this to him but it... I think it snapped his conditioning and drove him a bit mad." Jazmin could see the pain in his expression as he told her his story. This ancient history still haunted him and as Jazmin saw this another thought occurred to her.

"So you called him here today didn't you and then used us as a distraction while your telepathy fixed his mind? You fixed the problem your ancient war had left behind?"

"You are astute... yes," he gave her a surprisingly warm smile, as if proud of her, "though the woman you call Psyche was helping me to ease his pain too, though she didn't know that it was for this reason. She is incredibly powerful. I doubt it would have been so easy without her."

"Okay, so what now?" Jazmin began loading plates of food that were coming out of the auto-chef onto a platter as she asked.

"Now? Well, let's see... the settlement will continue to grow and with his help we will flourish beyond any dreams I once held."

"And Ruby? Is she really...?"

"When Gra Huru... Mr Power, and Topaz Storm of Universal Justice were murdered she was only six months old. We knew she would be special, half Daxamite and half Elfen elemental, there's never been anyone like her and we knew the damned United Planets couldn't get their hands on her so I took her here. She's become my daughter Jazmin, I have raised her and supported her and ...and I love her like the family I lost."

"She's lucky to have you Daramulum." Kid Quantum said gently.

They both looked at each other, an understanding that the information shared here couldn't go any further was very clear.

"So... one more question..."

"Of course, one more." Daramulum's expression slipped back into neutral.

"What the hell does the Worldsmith actually eat?" She smiled and nodded towards the pates that the auto-chef had produced.

"To be honest I don't know, though it does look like he eats a lot."

Jazmin and Daramulum both laughed as they carried the platters of food up to the yacht's deck and their waiting friends.


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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 6 July 22)
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Hey IB, thanks for your review.

The Worldsmith was a nuisance wasn't he? Hopefully he'll be a bit more helpful going forward smile The Wanderers, Daramulum and Ruby Huru are drafted to reappear later on down the line, but for now that's about it for them.

More soon as we find out what's causing a typhoon and watch as the team try to stop it from reaching land, Southern Lights asks for help, Thunder is outclassed and, we look into Szenlong's destiny.

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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 6 July 22)
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a wonderful conclusion, Harbi!

Love how Jazmin is so knowledgeable, and geeking-out on all these superheroes. also cool that there were other teams out there besides the Legion, as a sort of inspiration / pre-cursor. After all, 1000 years is a long time for there to be nothing in between the Justice League and the Legion wink

great discussion re getting help now vs. not. Good teamwork displayed too

aw Jaz, so sweet re Ruby. curious as to that exchange between Ruby and Daramulum re the stories...

great teamwork, love how Starkling and Jaz (after everyone else distracted Worldsmith of course) finally stopped him. and also talking to him. but indeed, also curious why he seems angrier now... ah! it was loneliness. poor thing...

great resolution, Harbi, using diplomacy and inclusion as a way to solve a problem!

and another great bit for Jazmin, she really is canny and clever and observant!

I also like the contrast between more level-headed Kent and more gung-ho Ardren! and love how everyone played a key role. loved that last little joke re Worldsmith, and Jaz definitely earned Daramulum's respect today!

Great entry Harbi, and you created and used some very good characters!

Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 6 July 22)
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Hi Harbi, sorry I didn't get a chance to read this sooner! I have really enjoyed the team's time on this settlement, it's such an awesome setting for stories! Very good addition to the mythos, pat yourself on the back smile

Okay, comments as we go:

- I love that you have a little sorcery clique growing in your Legion, and watching Xao and Southern Lights become friends is great to see! I'm glad you're exploring the different ways the magic users of the Legion access their power, it's one of the things I would like to focus on sometimes but I never seem to have my sorcerors in the same place together long enough to really interact lol

- Southern Lights being worried about his lack of experience is relatable, but considering Dawny's main squeeze has been a sack of anti-energy since forever I think he'll find he's worried about nothing wink

- I have a bad feeling Szenlong might have something to do with the typhoon, I hope I'm wrong!

- I am enjoying Kid Q being starstruck by all the old-school hero connections, it's showing a side of her we don't get to always see smile

- re Kent seeing Laurel in her dad's "let's go punch him till he runs away" - I had the same thought haha

- man, I have to admit I feel sorry for anyone having to go up against this crew, with Daramulum, Quantum Queen, Kid Q, Psyche and a Green Lantern they're VERY powerful!

- clever of Jazmin to figure out the connection between Daramulum and the Worldsmith! I like that they solved it with empathy as well, not what I expected given how physically powerful this crew are!

Very much looking forward to seeing what this typhoon situation is all about next!

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Thunder - Deputy Leader, Cecelia Becks of 21st Century Earth, immense strength, speed, indestructibility, space flight, wisdom
Tellus - Ganglios of Hykraius - telepathy and telekinesis
Otaki - Bina Nawoti of Earth - mindsense
XS - Jenni Ognats of an alternate dimension Aarok - phenomenal speed
Spoiler ii - Gord Eno of Naltor - precognition, specialising in short range visions for combat situations
Cosmic Kid - Po Miman, Justice Legionnaire of alternate dimension Mars - energy manipulation and flight

Newly promoted from Academy student to full membership (Mentor in brackets):
Triple Nova - Elthur Mundo of Carggg - split into three separate bodies, each with either enhanced strength and durability, increased speed and reflexes, or laser vision (Thunder)

Science Police meta-squad seconded to Legion World First Base:
Replicator - Science Police Officer Tarev Jusool of Talok viii - can mimic meta-abilities of those nearby for limited periods of time

Interns:
Imp Master - Dorrolo Capicca Redsail of Zerox - Elven strength, speed and senses, minor mystic specialising in summoning and controlling imps
Shadowsurfer - Walyed Reeaz of D-1457H234 - strength and durability, teleport through shadows or darkness
Thunderbolt - Ness Strakinos of Gardenhome - assumes electrical energy form

Already on site:

Dragonmage - Xao Jin of Earth - dragon magics
Southern Lights of Starhaven - spaceflight, magic user

Szenlong - newly hatched Spirit-Dragon of the Southern Seas


Thunder hit the alarm and asked for a team to help her immediately with a problem on Earth.

Within a minute, there were Legionnaires in the warp control room as Henry asked the mission leader for co-ordinates. Thunder had called up three interns as well - this could easily get nasty if they didn't get a handle on it quickly so she called for the interns she thought might give the most appropriate support.

Henry's warp spun into existence before the team. Thunder quickly gave the team their orders before leading them through.

Otaki and Shadowsurfer were to get to high ground and co-ordinate the rest of the team's responses - with Bina's mindsense she was the best placed to locate anyone in a dire situation. Tellus was to get into the water and check for anyone that might be in need of assistance. Cosmic Kid and Thunderbolt were to join Thunder into the air to see what they could do, while the rest were to help everyone they could around the shoreline. As she was giving the team their orders a second alert appeared - Dragonmage was at the scene, injured... Cece asked Henry to send the warp to where their colleague was, they would check he was okay and perhaps they could get an on-site assessment from him before continuing with their mission.

Cece checked that everyone knew what was expected before leading them through the spinning warp.

Fifteen minutes earlier, Henry's previous warp had opened onto a beach of small stones and white sand with a line of trees behind them. A flock of startled bird squawked in the air around them as they took flight. The sun had just risen above the horizon and both the sky and sea had the last traces of the night fading into bands of pale egg-blue.

Szenlong darted out to sea and Southern Lights quickly followed, matching the small dragon's speed. As the small dragon flew the air started to move around it and a gentle shower of rain appeared in the air around the small beast. Southern Lights laughed as he dodged and spun in the air alongside Szenlong. The small dragon gave a tittering giggle as it swooped down into the seas below them, skimming the top of the waves with an obvious childish glee.

Xao Jin had watched from the beach, a big grin on his usually stoic face as he felt the unbridled joy that Szenlong was experiencing. He knew that this was a moment he would remember for a long time as he felt the small spirit-dragon's chi expand and thrum with life. On the periphery of his senses there was something stirring, a small thing but whatever it was it was growing...

<<pay attention little Dragon>>

The voice of the Eternal Jade Dragon rang in his mind, bringing an abrupt end to his moment of shared happiness. Xao looked around and saw that along the horizon dark clouds were building at a rapid rate. There was a major storm approaching and it did not look natural!

<Southern Lights, what's happening ahead of you both? The sky's getting pretty dark out there> Dragonmage took to the sky and flew out towards his teammate and the small dragon.

<we're no longer alone Xao> the winged mystic replied.

Xao could see up ahead that the winged mystic had stopped and was staring out to sea. Szenlong was flying around Southern Lights, clearly excited about something. Southern Lights was concentrating, casting a spell... The sea below them bubbled and pulsed as something huge rose from the depths towards the surface. And with an enormous eruption of seawater and crash of waves, a red and indigo dragon the size of a Legion cruiser tore through the seawater before them with an enormous roar!

.............................


Szenlong tore away obviously terrified, heading back towards the land.

Xao held out his arms and caught the fleeing dragon. Szenlong mewled like a scared cat as it curled around him. Dragonmage looked at the sight before him - an ancient spirit dragon, easily half a klick long was swirling in the air before them, agitating the sea and clouds around it. Lightning flashed and thunder boomed in the distance as the storm Xao had seen on the horizon rushed towards them with alarming speed. Within him, Xao could feel the Eternal Jade Dragon stirring, readying itself in case this situation escalated into a confrontation. The ancient sea dragon that had risen to the sky commanded a powerful force that would take all of its might to counter.

Just above the huge red and indigo dragon, Southern Lights floated, tiny by comparison and virtually invisible to Xao in amongst the squall that had appeared from nowhere. The winged mystic was singing in a low voice as he attempted to cast a communication spell in a bid to create dialogue and hopefully calm the monstrous dragon that was creating the storm around them. The dragon's mind was so complex and full of strange perceptions that Southern Lights found it difficult to bridge the gap between them. Lightning flashed nearby and he thought it might be best to put some distance between them before he was hurt. As the storm clouds raced around him, he gently floated upwards, hoping to get an overview of the situation.

<Southern Lights? Are you alright?> Xao sent, concerned for his friend.

<I am fine, thanks Xao. this beast has an awesome mind, it resists my attempts to communicate with it. What does it want?> Southern Lights asked.

<I think Szenlong disturbed its slumber. Spirit-Dragons are very territorial and I fear it believes our small dragon friend is trying to invade its demesne>

<That is unfortunate. I shall try to calm the storm from above if you can open a dialogue with it... do you think that will be possible>

<We need to try. Good luck!> and with that Xao closed the telepathic channel and concentrated upon the task before him.

"Sihai Longwang! King of all the Seas, Ruler of the Storm and Keeper of the mysteries within the darkest depths, I seek parley. I am Xao Jin, the current mortal host of the aspect of Tian Gong, the Eternal Jade Emperor in his most Divine Dragon form!" The Legionnaire had used the loud hailer app of his flight ring to enhance his voice, unsure if that would be enough to attract the huge dragon's attention.

The clouds twisted and billowed towards the Legionnaire and from out of the gloom the huge face of the dragon appeared.

"Little mortal, tell your Jade Dragon spirit that he is not welcome here." And with that the dragon's mouth pursed into an 'O' and a blast of air blew Dragonmage and Szenlong tumbling away.

...................................


Southern Lights could see the storm clouds were swirling around at an increasingly faster rate.

There seemed to be storm clouds spinning out of clear skies that fed into the dark weather system underneath the winged mystics feet. Even up here on the edges of the mesosphere, eighty clicks above the sea, the winds were howling in turn to the storm raging below. The young mystic knew of two spells that would normally help calm weather systems - neither of which were particularly pleasant for the caster as they drew off physical properties of his body leaving the spell-user weakened and perhaps even unconscious, but with his flight ring on his hand Southern Lights knew that at least he would not plummet to his death.

The edges of the clouds sparkled as the spell touched them but still, they raced across the sky.

Southern Lights grunted as he strained to push the clouds apart, but even as sweat broke upon his forehead with the effort he knew that his gentle magics were no match for the elemental power of the behemoth below him. He took a deep breath and cleared his mind, effectively stopping the weather spell he had attempted to cast... he felt an ache in the small of his back, the cost of the limited time he had been using that particular spell.

<Xao, I can't affect this weather system... Xao?> Southern Lights knew that his telepathic message wasn't reaching his colleague.

With a flap of his great wings the young mystic from Starhaven dived down into the storm below him, intent on finding Dragonmage. As he spun through the dense clouds Southern Lights could feel the immense presence of the dragon as it watched him. Southern Lights knew he shouldn't get too close and so darted off at 90 degrees but the dark presence followed him, circling around the winged mystic with a sinuous agility as he raced out from the storm. Lightning raged in front of him causing him to swerve, thunder boomed all around him.

In an instant, before Southern Lights as he hung in the dark clouds, an enormous dragon's face appeared out of the clouds and opened its mouth swallowing him whole.

.....................................................


Dragonmage was woken by Szenlong licking his eyelids with its raspy tongue.

It took several long seconds before he fully regained consciousness. All the while he could hear a whiney mewling sound that irritated him, above the noise of waves crashing against rocks. It was the annoying noise, and the urge to stop it from disturbing his sleep that eventually forced Xao to open his eyes ad focus them on the presence that was emitting them.

Szenlong gave an excited yelp and yipped happily as the young sorcerer sat up. Xao wiped the water from his hair with a hand though knew it was pointless as heavy rain battered down.

Xao found himself on a rocky buff, his body ached and he realised his shoulder was particularly sore, though his flight ring had obviously pumped him with some pain relief as he had a general numb tingling. As he patted the small dragon on the head, he called up a hard light screen to show his current physical situation. Heavy bruising down his right side and he had broken the neck of his scapula. That explained his aching shoulder... The holo suggested he put his arm in a sling, keeping his hand pointed upwards until he could get clinical assistance. With a grunt he tore off his top and crudely fashioned it into a sling. As he did, he thought to himself that he regretted not carrying a standard medi-kit in his pouches like so many of his collagues...

A warp spun into existence before him and Thunder stepped through, leading a team of his colleagues alongside several interns. XS was at Xao's side in a split second and a sling was properly fixed after she had put his top back on him a superspeed. He grunted in pain but thanked her.

"Xao!Ohmigod!Areyouokay? Whathappenedhere?" she asked as she fussed around him. Szenlong gave a series of yelping barks and turned towards the approaching storm.

"Ah, hi folks." the young mage said as he climbed to his feet. "I think the Dragon King was upset by Szenlong flying over his territory... or maybe it was me, I get the feeling that the Dragon King isn't happy that the Eternal Jade Dragon left Earth so there's some friction there and they kind of don't get on anymore. I think that's the case anyway... "

"Dragon King?" Spoiler said to himself as he gazed around, "like... a real-life Dragon who is a King, of... other dragons? I love this job." The pre-cog gave a small smile as he gazed in to the storm. His glazed expression made it clear he was already scanning the near future to give them clues about how to deal with this situation. He took to the sky and flew inland, towards the city that was close by without another word. None of his teammates minded, they were used to pre-cognitives sometime odd behaviour.

"You okay Xao? If you want to return to the medi-bay on First Base...?" the young mystic shook his head before Thunder could finish asking. "Right then team, you know your roles, so get going please. Xao, you're with me, Cosmic Kid and Thunderbolt. We're going into ...that." Cece pointed towards the dark bank of cloud only a few hundred metres from the shore.

................................


Southern Lights hung in deep space,

...Or a facsimile of it anyway. Around him, amid the eternal velvety darkness stars twinkled in their endlessly glorious patterns.

He was astute enough to know this was the astral plane, though had never seen it so completed altered to mirror one being's will, and he was also sure it must have been created by the Dragon that had erupted out of the clouds that had suspended him here.

The mystic from Starhaven closed his eyes and centred himself, readying himself to cast a spell if needed.

<<this is not reality>>

Southern Lights was momentarily surprised by the voice of the hitchhiking presence he had taken from the Voligaxxian system... it was the voice of the essence of a sapient pocket dimension that wished to experience what this reality had to offer. They had agreed that it could share his experiences but it was not to interfere until asked. The winged mystic hadn't heard from it since that conversation, not long after they had returned from Talok viii months before.

<It is an astral plane, meant to impress ...or perhaps intimidate me, I believe. We're being kept here for a reason, though I am unsure what that is yet>

><Who are you speaking to little blue winged human?><

This time the voice was obviously that of the Dragon, there was no doubting the depth of its power as its mind brushed against Southern Lights'.

<My name is Southern Lights; how should I address you?>

While his mystical training had not included how to address dragons, he was well aware that basic manners were expected from such a being. He did not want to upset any being powerful enough to create an astral construct as sophisticated as the one he found himself within.

><You may call my 'my lord'... did you not hear the Jade Dragon's latest proxy, you are addressing Sihai Longwang, I am the Dragon King><

There was silence for a couple of seconds before it added ><and you did not answer my question, who are you speaking to... little blue winged human?><

Southern Lights stretched his wings out before replying.

<Lord Longwang, I was assessing the situation where I found myself...>

><if you lie to me again it shall be the last thoughts you have>< This time the Dragon King's telepathic voice roared into the winged mystic's mind, sending him spinning.


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Thanks again IB and Raz for your very kind reviews.

IB, I meant to put in a little line about how Jaz had re-learned about historic heroes when she was shunted back into the academy for punching Hadru, back in LW2 but forgot, so that's why she knew who the Universal Justice folks were. But since I forgot let's just say she's a geek smile

Raz, of all the various teammates with similar abilities I reckon the magical kids would hang out with each other. After all, their skills are really odd within the hi-tech universe, they are all studious and a bit shy, and they'd want to compare tricks.

And yeah, diplomacy and little bit of psychic suggestions won the day. As you said Raz, they were a buff selection of heroes so it could easily have gotten messy and probably caused a lot of damage to the settlement - there's no way Daramulum would let that happen though, way I see it he's set himself up as the lo-fi hero for that place and would do whatever he could to protect it.

Next up, Thunder faces something bigger, stronger and smarter than she is, Southern Lights needs help, and there's pandemonium as the typhoon touches land.

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I am glad I was wrong about Szenlong causing the typhoon! (I mean I guess none of this would be happening if he wasn't there but at least he's not to blame for any of it!)

Appreciating the spotlight on Southern Lights and Xao, and it's cool to see a continuation of the theme of how they use magic differently...I liked the bit about SL having to consider how the weather control spell would hurt him and deciding against it because it wouldn't be worth going through with anyway.

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Lightning raged in front of him causing him to swerve, thunder boomed all around him.

In an instant, before Southern Lights as he hung in the dark clouds, an enormous dragon's face appeared out of the clouds and opened its mouth swallowing him whole.

Very exciting!!

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such an epic scene, Harbi, you write so descriptively and vividly! like Raz I was taken by Southern Lights being swallowed up

also, brilliant re having a bigger dragon protect its territory, causing the storm... you've done some research on Chinese dragons, well done!

"I love this job," love how Spoiler is revelling in it. and I love how Nura and others (including Spoiler himself?) paved the way for everyone to just be like, "ok, he's a pre-cog so he must know what he's doing!"


eek! Dragon King is angry, good luck Southern Lights! smart bit, having the entity with SL coming into play...

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Thunder - Deputy Leader, Cecelia Becks of 21st Century Earth, immense strength, speed, indestructibility, space flight, wisdom
Tellus - Ganglios of Hykraius - telepathy and telekinesis
Otaki - Bina Nawoti of Earth - mindsense
XS - Jenni Ognats of an alternate dimension Aarok - phenomenal speed
Spoiler ii - Gord Eno of Naltor - precognition, specialising in short range visions for combat situations
Cosmic Kid - Po Miman, Justice Legionnaire of alternate dimension Mars - energy manipulation and flight

Newly promoted from Academy student to full membership (Mentor in brackets):
Triple Nova - Elthur Mundo of Carggg - split into three separate bodies, each with either enhanced strength and durability, increased speed and reflexes, or laser vision (Thunder)

Science Police meta-squad seconded to Legion World First Base:
Replicator - Science Police Officer Tarev Jusool of Talok viii - can mimic meta-abilities of those nearby for limited periods of time

Interns:
Imp Master - Dorrolo Capicca Redsail of Zerox - Elven strength, speed and senses, minor mystic specialising in summoning and controlling imps
Shadowsurfer - Walyed Reeaz of D-1457H234 - strength and durability, teleport through shadows or darkness
Thunderbolt - Ness Strakinos of Gardenhome - assumes electrical energy form

Already on site:

Dragonmage - Xao Jin of Earth - dragon magics
Southern Lights of Starhaven - spaceflight, magic user


Tellus dived into the raging sea.

The Hykraian disliked Earth's seas, they were so polluted and tasted of strange life that he couldn't identify. Today though the ocean around him tasted of burning metals! There was definitely something wrong as he realised he couldn't telepathically pick up the presence of any sea life. Even this close to the shore there should have been something...

As he concentrated on searching for nearby life a huge rolling wave crashed above him pushing the water down in a sharp punchy current. With natural skill, verging on elegance he twisted his body and swerved his way through the currents that pushed and pulled at him. This was a unnatural, he knew, as even here on Earth with its powerful moon affecting gravity, they should have followed a discernible pattern of give and take between the shore and the depths. Instead, the force of the water was almost entirely pushing towards the shore as if the seas were intent on invading the land.

XS sped into the city where it was obvious the residents nearest the shore were panicked by the sudden storm.

Some were trying to affix shutters over doors and windows while others jammed their belongings into their vehicles, getting ready to flee the imminent destruction that the typhoon would inevitably bring. Science Police Officer Tarev Jusool ran alongside her, mimicking her speed as they took in the panicked scenes around them. They had trained extensively together since he had been assigned to the Legion Science Police Liaison team and so they knew if she went further than three quarters of a klick, for more than three or four seconds he would lose the abilities until she was close by again.

They worked in unison, focussing on helping evacuate those that wanted to flee. They had packed up a dozen vehicles within the first minute or so and were on their way to assist with a large air-truck that was encouraging residents to get in when there was a crashing sound from above.

SPO Jusool ran up the side of the fifty-story building as a young woman fell out of a window. She was only a metre out when he reached her and raced back down with her in his arm. As he put her onto solid ground, she started crying.

"You gotta stop him." She pointed up to where she had fallen from. Officer Jusool nodded, took a breath and raced up the side of the building again and flew through the smashed window.

Inside was a young man, broad and muscular, ripping our drawers from a unit at the side of the plain living room. The Science Police Officer knew he didn't really have time to get to the bottom of what was going on so slipped a set of incapacity cuffs on the young man's arm and ran him down the side of the building, dropping him onto the ground next to the crying woman.

"The bastard!" She cried and started to batter the unconscious man with her fists.

"Hold on ma'am, he's under arrest now so you can't interfere." Jusool said as he stepped between the two of them.

"Yeah, he needs locking up. I just got back to pack up and he was in my apartment... thieving scum, and then I screamed at him to get out and he pushed me out the window!"

"I'll see to it he does time, don't worry. You'd best get on one of the vehicles there..." As the young Talokean SPO turned to point towards the air-trucks that were loading on people she flung her arms tightly around him and kissed him passionately.

<notimetofratenizethere!> XS didn't sound too impressed as she zoomed past carrying an elderly lady on her hover-chair.

<I'm well aware, thanks Jenni> he replied dryly.

"Ma'am..." Officer Jusool said as he pushed her gently off, his tone serious, "you must evacuate now!" He pointed towards an air-truck with as much authority as he could muster, well aware that her red lipstick had smudged across his mouth.

The young woman had been looking around, already drenched from the rains in the minute she had been on street level, and knew that it was time to leave. She gave the SPO a wide smile, wiped the wet hair from her face and replied.

"Uh huh... lock that frecker up and... keep in touch hero. I'm owe you one, okay?"

Officer Jusool didn't respond directly, instead he picked up the unconscious burglar and raced to the air-truck and threw him into it before speeding away to help Jenni with the evacuation.

As he ran, he realised he hadn't gotten the name or contact details from the young woman he had just saved.

............................


Spoiler led Imp Master and Triple Nova as they assisted the residents in putting up what defences they could manage in the very limited time they had available. The intern Imp Master proved to be invaluable as the pale blue creatures he summoned added innumerable extra pairs of hands to the physical tasks. As the three of them assisted everyone they could the rain started to fall even heavier and the wind started to tear at anything not fixed down, throwing debris into spinning columns around them.

Some of the residents were terrified as the imps ran towards them but thankfully enough recognised Spoiler and even Triple Nova that word soon spread that there were Legionnaires helping them. Imp Master hovered in the lotus position, seemingly unaware of the wind or rain, as he concentrated, stretching his abilities to the maximum as he kept contol of over five dozen imps.

Otaki almost threw up.

The muscular intern called Shadowsurfer had carried her through one of his darkness activated teleportation warps and it had been a truly horrible experience for her - terrifying! For an eternally long second, they had existed outside of reality as he carried them through the edges of some dark lifeless alter-dimension. Bina Nawoti had spent the majority of her life being able to sense living beings, near or far she was aware of life on a scale that would probably amaze most of her team. And for that awful moment her mind had drawn a blank! It was like unexpectedly going blind and deaf and as she had not expected it, the young psychic felt violently sick as they appeared on the roof of a tall building overlooking the bay and her mindsense was almost overwhelmed with the sudden presence of so many living beings in this built up metropolitan city.

Bina took a deep breath and focussed. The buildings nearest the shore, and therefore likely to take the brunt of the typhoon's force, were mostly evacuated though Bina sent through the location of those left to Triple Nova. The young Cargggite had a pretty calm nature and a range of abilities so she estimated he would be the best suited to give aid if needed.

On top of the building, Otaki could see the dark storm approach; it stretched darkly across the sky like a predator pouncing on its prey. The sky above them was dark and felt too close with an increasing mass of clouds as the rain fell heavier and heavire around them ,aking the buildings nearby appear as mere blurry shapes. The winds tore at her, trying to throw her into the air but Bina held onto an antenna as she concentrated on the job at hand. Shadowsurfer, the intern from the high-G world squatted in front of her, keen to help with the evacuation yet aware that Bina was vulnerable while using her abilities so he stayed close-by in case she needed assistance.

The wind was blowing increasing large objects up into the air and luckily, the intern was at hand when a large sheet of corrugated metal got caught in a spiralling vortex and tore through the air towards the young psychic as she concentrated on co-ordinating her colleague's actions below. Shadowsurfer's people were bred to work on a planet with a five-times-standard gravity, and so he was a lot stronger than the average human. He spotted the metal sheet as it ripped through the air only a second before it almost tore through Otaki and he leaped at it, swatting it aside so it spun off, narrowly missing the Legionnaire.

<Bina, we need to get inside, there's so much debris out here>

<agreed, let's go> As Otaki used her flight ring to lower herself from the antenna a gust tore at her spinning her around. Shadowsurfer popped out of the air next to her and gently folded his muscular arms around her and lowered them to the roof below.

<thank you> Otaki sounded rattled but she ground her teeth as she pulled her focus back.

The flew through a doorway, where the door itself had vanished - presumably taken by the now ferocious wind - into a dark stairwell. Otaki sat on a step and wiped the rain from her face and hair.

The wind screamed around them but at least the stairwell was dry. Shadowsurfer wiped the water off his arms and legs, and ran his hands through his short hair and across his eyes, shaking water all around him as he did.

<what I don't understand> Walyed sent <is if these flight rings have this super advanced eco-protect system that keep us safe in space and dangerous environments, why Brainiac 5 couldn't have designed them to at least stop the rain from soaking us?>

Otaki gave a smile to the intern and nodded in complete agreement.

..........................................


Southern Lights hung in the astral plane.

<<this plane of existence is quite intriguing. It is artifice, yes?>> the essence of the Voligaxxian Realm announced.

><what are you?>< There was genuine wonderment in the Dragon King's query. In the space before Southern Lights a huge dragon's eye appeared, staring at the winged mystic.

<<the individual called Southern Lights allows me to travel within this frame so I may experience the reality you inhabit. This space is not that reality, this is a ...folly?>>

><you are within my mindscape, where you will remain until I have decided what shall become of you><

With that, as if out of the nothingness of space chains spun into existence before wrapping themselves around the winged Legionnaires wrists, ankles and neck.

.............................................


Thunder flew ahead of Dragonmage, Cosmic Kid and Thunderbolt.

She could see that the storm was very localised so even five clicks either side there wouldn't be a drop of rain. It was clear this was not a natural phenomenon. With her wisdom she knew that the Dragon King was an immensely powerful being and if it was angry... well, she doubted they would be able to persuade it to stop without showing it that they were powerful enough to gve it a good reason to stop. And she doubted even more that the team would be.

<Po, are you able to influence magical energies?> Cece asked Cosmic Kid.

<sadly not, it's random nature makes it incredibly dangerous to even try...> He responded, <I saw Jenni stop a tidal wave by running through it at speed and... would that work here? Knock this back out into the sea?>

"Leave my demesne little mortal, there are higher beings who should be respected!" The voice seemed to emanate from the clouds around them, echoing in the rumbling. A dark twisting shadow, darker than the clouds, twisted and turned with the cloudbank that surrounded the Legionnaires.

"Dragon King, I am Cecelia Becks, also called Thunder, from the Legion..."

"LEAVE!"

A bolt of lightning tore through the air and struck Thunder on the chest blasting her backwards. Her colleagues were horrified to see the lightning had returned Cece back into her human form. Dragonmage reacted quickest, casting a spell that sent three emerald dragons to catch her and return the obviously stunned no-longer empowered woman to the shore. Cosmic Kid dived through the clouds to join her, using his energy manipulating abilities to create a bubble of relative stability around her. The intern Thunderbolt looked terrified as she flew closer to Xao. He could see she wanted to flee but thankfully, he thought, she was clever enough not to assume her electric form as it appeared the Dragon King could control lightning, so dreaded to think what could happen to her.

"This is my demesne mortals. The little upstart mage Shazam's proxies are not welcome."

"Thunderbolt...Ness, we need to get out of here now." Xao grabbed hold of the intern's hand and they dropped through the dark cloudbank.

Around them the clouds rumbled as the Dragon King laughed.


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Hey guys, thanks again for your kind words, they are always appreciated!

Here's a bit more, my son is visiting next week so I probably won't get much free time until the week after so hope this tides you over until then smile

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enjoy your son's visit, Harbi!

another great installment!

we don't see Tellus in his natural element/s much, so this was a treat

great teamwork between XS and Replicator. I am so glad you kept XS on, unlike in canon where they shunted her off and let her disappear


lol at Replicator wanting to keep in touch with the woman... good grief! no wonder Jenni was not too impressed tongue

you're really good at thinking of power implications - like Otaki being carried through a shadow dimension!

LOL at the flight rings not keeping them from the rain. don't they have transuits here?

yikes, Thunder meets her weakness! Smart of Thunderbolt to be cautious too!



whew, that sure ups the ante... Iwonder if Southern Lights and the entity within can do something from inside...

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I had a feeling magic lightning was gonna be Thunder's undoing! All the environmental descriptions are great here, you can really feel the immensity of the storm and how small the Legion are against it!

Otaki and Shadowsurfer's was my favourite segment this time around, as IB said I liked the effect it had on Otaki being taken to a lifeless realm and then having to immediately adjust to being in the centre of a heavily populated city again. Also, Shadowsurfer having an easier time because he's used to a higher gravity world...and complaining about the rain - I am guessing the flight rings' environmental protection function only kicks in when there's an immediate danger rather than it just being uncomfortable?

I am tipping that the Dragon King is gonna regret not giving more respect to Southern Lights and his little friend!

Hope you have a good time with your son!

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First Base, central medical suite:

Cosmic Kid - Po Miman, Justice Legionnaire of alternate dimension Mars - energy manipulation and flight

Support Staff on Legion World First Base:
Gloriana Crestellen of Grighshtall iv - Glory - medical support - awareness and manipulation of bio-auras


Henry's warp opened straight into the medi-bay on First Base.

Cosmic Kid flew through carrying the unconscious Cecelia Becks and gently placed her on one of the floating bay beds. Glory was on hand and rushed over to assess the unconscious deputy leader. Behind them, rain and small pieces of debris flew through the warp before it shut abruptly.

"I need to get back." Po said angrily into his flight ring, expecting Henry would re-open a warp.

<Cosmic Kid, I'm taking another team to help with the evacuation. We're leaving in two minutes. Get yourself to the warp control room> Lightning Lass sent across the telepathic matrix. The monitor board was clearly watching the situation in the South China Sea and had alerted the rest of the Legion on First Base that the team had run into difficulties.

"Go." Glory said as she placed her hands on either side of the unconscious woman's head, "Cece's only asleep, she'll be fine in a bit." The new member of the medical team started to glow faintly as she concentrated on supporting the unconscious Legionnaire's human form.

Cosmic Kid said his thanks as he flew out of the door and raced up two levels to Henry's control room.

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Dragonmage - Xao Jin of Earth - dragon magics
Southern Lights of Starhaven - spaceflight, magic user

Tellus - Ganglios of Hykraius - telepathy and telekinesis
Otaki - Bina Nawoti of Earth - mindsense
XS - Jenni Ognats of an alternate dimension Aarok - phenomenal speed
Spoiler ii - Gord Eno of Naltor - precognition, specialising in short range visions for combat situations

Newly promoted from Academy student to full membership (Mentor in brackets):
Triple Nova - Elthur Mundo of Carggg - split into three separate bodies, each with either enhanced strength and durability, increased speed and reflexes, or laser vision (Thunder)

Science Police meta-squad seconded to Legion World First Base:
Replicator - Science Police Officer Tarev Jusool of Talok viii - can mimic meta-abilities of those nearby for limited periods of time

Interns:
Imp Master - Dorrolo Capicca Redsail of Zerox - Elven strength, speed and senses, minor mystic specialising in summoning and controlling imps
Shadowsurfer - Walyed Reeaz of D-1457H234 - strength and durability, teleport through shadows or darkness
Thunderbolt - Ness Strakinos of Gardenhome - assumes electrical energy form


Dragonmage and Thunderbolt lowered themselves carefully through the dark cloud back towards the coastline.

The beach that they had arrived on had been washed away by the fearsome waves and wind. It was only their flight rings that stopped the Legionnaire and the intern from being blown into a nearby building. They could see broken windows and smashed shutters from the raging winds. The wide raised boulevard between the sea and the city had been swamped and had obvious cracks and pits from the force of the storm.

"You need to find our teammates and give them your support." Dragonmage shouted above the roaring winds to the intern.

"Okay," she replied, her eyes were wide as she took in the scene around them, "...what will you do?"

"I need to find some assistance within the spirit realm and finish this."

"Good luck." She replied, clearly not wanting to know any details about the mystical nature of whatever the young mage had planned before vanishing in an arc of electricity.

<master...?> Xao hoped that the spirit of the Eternal Jade Dragon would give him assistance.

<what you want to ask is impossible. I cannot get directly involved, as any battle between the Dragon King and I would have dire consequences. There is a task you must do... Szenlong needs you. Our young dragon is still unaware of its true nature, its birth right. You need to show it that it has a uniquely grand destiny>

<will that help stop this storm from destroying the city?> Xao, usually so calm and thoughtful, sounded exasperated.

<that is not our path Xao, you must let Szenlong know the truth about their destiny>

Dragonmage muttered to himself though quickly got his emotions under control before casting a spell that would hopefully locate their missing young Spirit-Dragon.

............................


XS and Replicator had packed another airbus with people desperate to get away from the increasingly violent weather.

There was six inches of water on the street and this was being blown around by the strengthening winds. Both had taken to run along the walls of the buildings around them. The water on the ground was mixed with the sand from the beach and shrubs and loose earth from residential gardens being whipped about by the incessant wind. Even at their supersonic speeds it would be dangerous to run upon the surface of it.

Otaki had guided them to apartments where the residents were either asleep or unable to flee. It had been decided that the infirm and elderly would be placed in a near-by gymnasium until the local authorities could arrange an appropriate centre for them. Once the Legion had been told it was ready Henry would warp them to safety. So far, Jenni estimated they had moved over a hundred residents though the wind and rain were making it increasingly difficult. Officer Jusool had slipped and crashed into a wall though thankfully had quickly gotten to his feet, given an ironic bow and embarrassed smile to Jenni, and carried on. Though they had trained extensively together, he simply didn't have the instinctive skills that the natural speedster had. XS doubted they would be able to do much more if the weather got any worse.


Tellus had joined Imp Master in the temporary shelter in the local school's gymnasium where they tried to calm the residents while they waited for transport to take them away. Neither were enjoying the experience. The crowd of about two hundred were mainly the elderly and infirm and their emotional state was frantic. Tellus fought against the urge to flee as the minds around him were filled with great anxiety and fears. The pods across his back rippled in red and violet, cues to his own emotional state as he tried to telekinetically keep the doors to the gymnasium closed against the storm while broadcasting soothing thoughts to the terrified residents all around him. He found it exhausting!

The Imp Master was not generally renowned for his inter-personal skills but at least knew enough to bite his tongue as several of the scared residents crowded around him screaming for help. His imps had set up barriers against the windows in case they were blown in and had found furniture from within the school complex for the more infirm to sit upon. The Zeroxian mystic concentrated on the job at hand and tried hard not to think of the destruction happening outside, though with every loud boom of thunder or crash as the hurricane force winds tore and smashed the buildings around them the crowd would scream.

Henry materialised amongst them, causing another round of screams before he apologised for the delay in getting to them and announcing that he would open a warp to a more secure location approximately thirty klicks to the north. The local government had set up a centre with food and medical assistance for any refugees from this city state. The spinning warp materialised and Tellus informed the crowds that they would be safe if they walked through it.


Spoiler had taken Triple Nova out into the streets.

Gord's precognition had saved them from being struck by flying debris several times while Elthur's laser vision had cut through an uprooted tree that blocked their way into a building.

As they were being guided by Otaki, they quickly found a family huddled in a slowly flooding basement and called for a warp from Henry to take them out of the danger. The warp spun into existence before them and Triple Nova smiled as he picked up the elderly grandmother in her chair and flew through with her whooping as they went. He returned seconds later and asked if anyone else needed a hand. The family were packing up their belongings and rushing through within seconds.

"Good job Elthur." Gord Eno smiled at the new Legionnaire as they asked Otaki where to find the next group that needed assistance.

<three minds are above you; I'd say on the sixth floor. Two are unconscious, the third is a child> She replied.

<Okay doke, let's go save more folks> Spoiler sent as he took to the air and led their way out of the basement into a stairwell that ran up the side of the apartment block.

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On an astral plane:


Southern Lights could feel the chains bite into his skin.

The winged mystic had his eyes closed as he repeated a simple mantra to stop the pain from hurting too much. Despite this being a purely astral event, he could feel each link as it appeared to press and dig into his flesh.

<<Southern Lights, this is not your reality, why do you allow it to proceed?>> The voice of the extra-dimensional essence asked.

<the Dragon Lord's mind is far beyond mine so I have been unable to escape>

<<that is unfortunate as you pain is troubling. Perhaps...>>

Southern Lights could feel the chain around his neck tighten.

<what do you propose?> The Legionnaire asked the inter-dimensional hitch-hiker that resided within him. The chains were biting into him within an increasing force and despite his best efforts he could not stop the pain from jabbing into him like electricity.

<<perhaps this Dragon King will listen to me?>> there was a pause as the mystic considered his options: he wanted this to stop but handing over control felt like a violation.

<I... please do try. I would be grateful for your help. Do what you need to...you have my consent to take control> As Southern Lights sent this thought he felt as if his own sense of self had grown to a gigantic size, encompassing far more than just his physical form.

<<Dragon King!>> The statement echoed through the astral plane. This psychic voice was filled with confidence and strength.

><You have a courage that surprises me. Are you not aware that if the winged mortal's spirit dies here, he will be no more? And if you continue to annoy me...><

<<there are billions of these carbon meat sacks that could share their small existences with me, what do I care?>> there was a cold dismissal in the tone, as if the Dragon King were being stupid for overlooking this simple fact.

The Dragon King roared with laughter.

><perhaps we have more in common than I first believed><

.................................


Lightning Lass led her team through the warp into the storm just behind the coastal apartment blocks..

The heavy rain wasn't so much falling as blasting along a horizontal trajectory; they were all soaked within moments of flying through.

<Ayla? Boy is it great to see you! You and your team could really lend a hand here...> Otaki's message across the telepathic matrix included images that pinpointed where there was a moderately large pocket of the local populace that still needed assistance as they holed up against the relentless elements.

<Okay Bina, we'll get right onto it> And with that Ayla Ranzz led her team through the soaked and battered city streets towards the buildings where the traumatised and terrified residents were sheltering.

<Okay, this is crazy! Polar Girl and Cosmic Kid, I want you to go to the shore and stop the waves if you can. Freeze them in place, neutralise their energy. Do whatever you can. Let's see if we can ease up the pressure here. Actually, Polestar...> she indicated one of the interns, <you join them too, see if you can create a barrier. The rest of you are with me> And with that the electric Legionnaire flew in the direction of the plaza Otaki had suggested

Below them they could see XS and Officer Jusool race across the walls of the city, dodging debris as it swirled around, doing as much damage as the powerful winds. The pavements and walkways were flooded and there were clearly strong waves pushing more water inland into the city. Jenni waved up to Cosmic Kid as she raced by, though as they were on a mission they knew that they would wait to get reunited afterwards.

As Ayla's team flew towards the location Otaki had suggested a bolt of lightning flew overhead before swerving and stopped right before them, transforming into the intern Thunderbolt. She looked scared.

"Am I glad to see you! There's a real-life dragon in the clouds up there... Southern Lights is still there somewhere with it. " She took a breath and gave a small embarrassed smile before adding, "What do you need me to do?"

"We prioritise saving everyone we can." Ayla said, her expression grim. "Once the area is clear we'll find out if the dragon is willing to leave without a fight..."

.............................


As the conversation was happening between the Dragon King and the essence of the other dimension, Southern Lights could feel the presence from the distant reality rummage through his memories.

The young mystic had tears building up in his eyes as the thought struck him how stupid he had been going against his own cultural beliefs and that by allowing it to have control he had probably signed his own death warrant. He had the urge to scream! This was his greatest fear; the loss of control of everything that that made him, well, him...

At the back of his mind was a small voice, quiet and gentle, urging him to remain calm... have faith it whispered, have faith.

<<this astral plane is a figment of imagination, is it not? Held together by force of will. A construct from within your consciousness This is how you perceive your reality, is it not? From this being's memories I understand that you are a living aspect of the magical life force of the globe you inhabit given the form you hold>>

There was a coolness about the voice from the other dimension, almost dismissive in tone.

><and you? What are you that you believe talking to the Dragon King in such a way will bring you any benefits?><

Southern Lights felt the chains dig into his astral self even further and he cried out in agony.

<<I am very different from the individual beings that occupy this realm. I only seek to understand you. Perhaps you would like to experience my reality?>> The question was asked so casually that the experience of the astral plane they were in changing seemed almost nonchalant.

Southern Lights floated in a reality that seemed devoid of sensation other than a sense of proximity; a closeness of a presence that seemed to fill the endless space around him. As he opened his eyes all he could see was a milky orange colour that seemed both immediate and far away. There were no horizons to give a perspective to the depths around him. The chains around his limbs and throat, and the pain of their tightening, were gone.

<<are you comfortable>> The voice emanated from outside of Southern Light's mind and the winged mystic smiled as he replied.

<this is incredible, your ...home is not how I pictured it>

<<your senses would not comprehend it... this is my artifice>> There was a sense that the presence was joking, something that the Legionnaire had never felt from it before.

<where is the Dragon King?> even as he asked Southern Lights became aware of a small buzzing disturbance close to his right ear. He turned to face it and saw a miniscule red dragon, no bigger than a bee, writhing and spinning around as filaments of milky substance held it tightly in place

<<the Dragon King does not appreciate it when it is not in control. It is so overly confident it was easily distracted while I created this plane. It is but an aspect of the life energies of one small globe spinning in the vastness of your reality. I am this reality in its entirety>> There was something quite smug about this assessment that alarmed Southern Lights.

<uh huh... and while it deserves to learn that there are beings of more power than it even amongst the humblest mortal frames there is still the damage it is doing to the people and city on Earth. We should not humiliate it so; the lesson has been learned>

<<I treat it as it treated us>>

<yes, I understand, though there is an ancient saying from Earth that explains why we cannot always act like this, "an eye for an eye leaves the whole world blind", do you understand?> Southern Lights could feel the presence as it gently read his mind to fully comprehend the metaphor.

<<ah, yes, I appreciate there is some wisdom in that. There is so much regarding you individual beings that I find ...unexpected>>

And with that thought they found themselves back in the storm. The Dragon King was again huge amongst the dark skies it had summoned, swimming amongst the currents of the air around them. The dark clouds spun around in a violent circuit, crackling with lightning, yet where Southern Lights floated the air was clear and calm.

><Leave>< the voice of the elemental being known as the Dragon King felt tired.

Around them the storm still spun, yet the ferocity was gone from the winds and the clouds began to dissipate into the skies.

<great Dragon King, Ruler of the Seas and Storm, we thank you for this mercy. We shall tell tales of your might and righteous ferocity and I swear we shall trouble you in your demesne no more> Southern Lights sent respectfully as he slowly floated back down towards the ruined beachfront.

By the time the winged mystic from the distant world of Starhaven had touched down upon the ground the storm had gone.

..................................


Xao had summoned an emerald dragon-form to locate Szenlong.

It flew north out of the city and the young Legionnaire followed it as quickly as his flight ring could carry him. Behind him, he could hear the storm rage as thunder boomed and the winds howled. Ahead of him the sky cleared and sun shone down onto a more suburban setting as estates and farm land spread out towards the distant horizon.

"Szenlong! Where are you?" His voice was starting to crack as he shouted.

The air around the Legionnaire started to sparkle and the little dragon materialised beside him. It yelped and spun in the air, clearly motioning for Xao to flee with it. The young sorcerer took the dragon in his arms and floated down to the ground. Szenlong twisted and pushed against him, still he held on tightly though Xao was happy it did not try to claw him to escape.

"I know why the Dragon King was so upset when you arrived... it is not threatened by you but instead it is jealous. I'm sorry it took so long to figure it out but you shouldn't be here. I don't believe the sea is actually your natural element. Spirit-dragons are the living manifestation of their element... as your egg was patterned as the sea dragon's I assumed... but those are not the currents you are to follow. And that was why the Dragon King was envious and got angry."

Xao let go of Szenlong and allowed it to fly free. The young dragon swam around the Legionnaire, its scales reflecting the sunlight in iridescent waves.

"You should have hatched in the waters where you would remain and grow, assuming your powers as you learned the secrets of the elements around you but... Szenlong, I believe you are something even more magnificent than one of the keepers of Earth's seas, you are the first of a new breed of Spirit-Dragon."

Szenlong gave a curious meowl and tilted its head as it listened to the young sorcerer.

"I realised while searching for you that even the Eternal Jade Dragon that resides within me needs a host to travel out into space away from Earth's biosphere, but you... my magics, and probably those of Mysa Nal, allowed you to hatch while in the depths of space and I believe that is where you belong. You are the first spirit-dragon to leave Earth without assistance from a host to carry you. That is why the ancient Dragon King is angry, you can travel where it cannot. Your destiny is to learn secrets it will never know, even after its long life you will see and experience far more than it could even imagine. The currents you need to follow and learn from are those that exist between the stars themselves. I believe you are a Spirit-Dragon... of Space!"

The young dragon whooped as it danced in the air, before suddenly stopping and giving a startled yelp. It stared at the city behind the Legionnaire. Xao turned around and watched in wonderment as the storm that had so ruthlessly smashed the coastal area dissipated and vanished into the air.

Xao smiled for the first time in what felt like a long while as the sun broke through the last wisps of cloud to shine down upon the battered city on the coast.


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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 1 Aug 22)
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So, that brings this story to a close and the Szenlong little revelation is a tip of the hat to Silver Age silliness - but will have some impact later on.

Next up, it's leadership vote time again and hopefully there'll be a surprise or two for you all.

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More great stuff, Harbi! I really admire your ability to pack so much emotion and characterization into a couple of lines -- from Tellus' exhaustion at dealing with all the negative emotions, to pointing out that Replicator may copy powers but lacks experience and instinct, to Thunderbolt not wanting to know any more about magic than truly needed.

Dragon King to entity, I like it! I also like how this essence essentially pretended to act like the Dragon King, callous and arrogant... only to turn the tables so quickly, teach a lesson, and act fast to help Southern Lights and the innocents on Earth! well done! And wise of Southern Lights to act all humble once the storm stopped too wink

interesting bit re Starhaven and control. maybe that is also why Dawnstar tended to act so aloof, and also to hold herself to a higher standard so to speak?


ooh another nice bit. the Dragon King was ENVIOUS! whooo, what a great destiny for Szenlong...

ah, what a nice and satisfying wrap=up, Harbi!

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Seventy two hours after the return of Captain Tuk Shir, main meeting room, First Base:


Dream Girl, Tyroc and Thunder stood upon the dais.

The entire team from both First and Second Base, the current student interns, all of the support staff as well as the teaching staff from the academy were present in the large tiered horseshoe shaped seats overlooking them. The only exceptions were the team with Element Lad, and each of them were represented by their holo-avatars.

"Legionnaires." Nura said, stepping forward. While the majority turned to give her their attention many remained in conversation with those around them.

"She said LEGIONNAIRES!" Tyroc's voice reverberated around the room, "we'd appreciate y'r attention now." While his mouth showed a smile it was clear from the rest of his expression that he wasn't impressed. Thunder crossed her arms and raised her chin, as if in challenge. The amassed Legionnaires gave their three colleagues on the dais their immediate attention.

"We have a couple of announcements to make and thought it best to do it in person."

There were mutterings from those watching though no-one interrupted Dream Girl as she spoke.

"First off, I've foreseen Tinya returning so don't worry, she will be back. Not for a while... but she is returning home to us."

Several asked when but Nura shook her head.

"The Senior Team spoke with Henry this morning as well. He may not know all of the details but he is certain that Tinya's career will extend for quite some time so we have that reassurance as well. And, thankfully, the Dominators will not be joining her so we don’t need to worry too much about them in the foreseeable future."

This seemed to set off further questions. Thunder stepped forward.

"Before any of you ask, Nura's visions don't always contain a time stamp and Henry's from the 75th century folks, even with their extensive technology in the future they don't have complete historical records, and just think... can any of you give the exact time and date that Superman was killed by Doomsday and say exactly when he was resurrected? No? Well, that was a pretty major historic event and we can't tell you when that happened so we need to accept that his knowledge is just as general as ours... the exact details are unknown though Henry has an overview we can work with."

This seemed to quieten down those that had started asking questions. Thunder gave a smile as she continued:

"We have enough to work with for now so please ...please settle down. We're positive that Phantom Girl will return, though until then we have matters to deal with."

Nura smiled up at the team.

She didn't say that she had actually foreseen the time and place that Tinya would reappear. She also knew it wasn't important right now as they needed to get on with the other more pressing matters. Certain changes were necessary for the team to implement if it were to develop in ways Nura knew they needed to.

........................


Nura gave her hair a small flick.

She knew better than to tell anyone that Henry had told her that Tinya would never again be the leader of the entire team. And with what Nura had proposed at the Senior Team meeting earlier she intended to make sure of that little nugget of information being guaranteed. She wanted to secure the team's future as she had foreseen it by ensuring no one person was ever solely responsible for the Legion going forward - the team was simply too large now and had dealt with enough mind controlling enemies to see how flawed that concept could be.

Nura smiled again as Cece continued to address the group.

"We had a meeting earlier and decided it's time to revamp our management structure." Thunder saw several of her teammates begin to look bored already but she didn't care, they needed to hear and understand what was away to happen so she continued talking, "So with that in mind, today we'll open up the votes for our next team leaders though there will be a difference from how we previously ran things. The three bases that actively take missions will have a team leader and deputy, and there will no longer be a single person in charge of the entire operation of all our bases. The Legion is becoming too big and too spread out and it's ridiculous to think that one person should be kept aware of everything that happens on all our missions. So... we've developed a plan."

There were questions being asked by her assembled teammates but Thunder didn't reply directly.

"Our suggested plan is simple: we will devolve authority out to the team leader of each base. If there is a mission that requires a combined action, like that attack on Talok viii, then the team leader of the base that initiated the mission will take charge. All missions will be logged centrally and evaluated at joint Senior Team meetings to ensure a cohesive approach is kept between the bases."

Several of the team started to speak again, but they were ignored.

"The Senior Team will of course be in regular contact with each other, regardless of which base they are on so will be able to support any strategic decisions. And, from the academy, Rokk and Lu will remain as advisors involved with the Senior Team. We also still have our colleagues from the Science Police to help advise us as well. With that in mind... we want to have someone in place on each base as soon as we can, so we're giving you three hours... from now until 2000 Earth Standard Time to decide and vote. The polls are open for voting immediately after we close this meeting."

Again, there were several questions asked but Cece only smiled before she carried on.

"You are all asked to make three votes; one for the team leader on First Base, one for Second and one for Hope World. Whoever gets the most votes will lead their base as of tomorrow, with the people in second place taking on the deputy roles. Now, before we go any further there's an obvious question; does anyone want to put their name forward for team leader of their respective base?"

The suddenness of this leadership vote, just three days after Tinya had vanished seemedto stun the assembled Legionnaires... Several of the team started talking and many were clearly surprised and, in some cases, upset by this announcement.

Mon El stood up.

"I have something to say." His voice was loud enough to cut through the chatter, "I'd like to announce I will gladly stay on in Senior Team capacity but have no urge to lead the team so please don't vote for me, it'd only be a waste." Several of his teammates scoffed and joked, though a few were clearly disappointed.

"Thanks Lar," Tyroc said with a smile, "an' anyone else wanna add anyt'ing?" There was muttering from the assembled Legionnaires but no-one came forward. Tyroc waited for half a minutes before ending the meeting, reminding the team they only had a few hours to vote, they could only vote for Legionnaires that had been full members for a full year or more, and if they missed the 2000 hours deadline then they would need to wait until the next leadership election to have their say.

The three senior Legionnaires left the dais and the meeting room slowly emptied.

...............................


Three hours and five minutes later, First Base, Shakes Bar:


As had become something of a tradition, a large group of the team met in Shakes Bar on First Base to hear the results.

"I was thinking of voting for you." Zoe said to Gahaji as they sat down at the table. Beside her, Laurel said 'hi' to them both before continuing to talk with Brin, Bina and Nel, and Grava and Drinchnar. Meanwhile, Babbage, Sylva, Denal, Glory and Elthur sat on the other side. Backlash, the Simballian Tigerram lifted his head above the side of that table to smile and nod to Zoe and Gahaji before dropping back down again. Zoe smiled as she realised that the great horned cat was taking one of his legendary naps while waiting for the results to be announced. Gord, Dann and Solstin were on the next table, obviously part of this group though discussing Naltoran politics so had shuffled off to the side.

Triple Nova looked up and said, "Y'know, I wish I'd thought of that, you'd be great Gahaji. Denal told me that you got him off the Dominators base in one piece and brought Sa Lok back to face justice."

"Yeah, Denal would've been fine without me, and I don't want to be a leader so am glad you didn't. Thanks anyway." Gahaji looked a little miffed at the conversation.

"So, what are the odds that Gazelle's giving?" Officer Nel Duwi asked, more to change the topic as she could see the tracker wasn't impressed and didn't want this evening's atmosphere to be disrupted.

"I'm sure she just makes them up so she can make a profit." Laurel said. Brin laughed as he agreed.

Strobe went over to MWindaji's side and put a hand on the trackers shoulder and spoke.

"I should have thought to vote for you Gahaji, but I just went along with what we discussed..."

"Did you all vote like we decided?" Laurel said. Several of her teammates nodded.

"Decided?" Elthur asked, clearly surprised that he didn't know what the team had been speaking about earlier.

Glory nudged her boyfriend in the ribs and laughed, "Were you not listening earlier...?"

"Oh... we were saying that Troy and Cece are doing great and they need someone cool to work with, y’know we don't want our Bases to get too stuffy." Atom Girl said, "So, we all agreed we need deputies who knows how to have fun. So..."

“So not Luornu, have you heard about how rough Mindbender 's having it?" Zoe pulled a face as she said it.

Laurel looked up, "Yeah, poor boy, she can be a tough old bird. Bet she won't make it easy for him. Anyway, Elthur we all agreed on who we would want to get in before we voted, you were there...."

"Is that allowed?" Elthur asked.

"Back in the day everyone would talk with their friends to try to get their favourite in, it's a Legion tradition." Brin replied. Laurel rested her head against his shoulder and he wrapped an arm across her shoulder before turning his head to lightly kiss the top of her head as she nestled against him.

"It makes sense that the pack follow a leader they want to lead them." Backlash's rumbling voice emanated from under the table.

"This unit calculated the teammate with the appropriate level of life experience, intelligence, and charisma to excel in the role... and necessary inter-personal skills so as not to stifle any social element within team dynamics. The advice was as follows..."

"Buckethead suggested Brin for the pinnacle star role but he said 'no!' So instead..." Drinchnar said.

"So this unit calculated the next most likely candidate to fulfil our criteria..." The Robotican Legionnaire sounded almost proud but before it could continue Comet Queen interrupted.

"Sshhh!" Grava hissed as a holo of Cosmic Boy appeared before them.

..............................


"Friends... the results are in. Do you want to hear them?" Rokk smiled coyly as he asked.

Several of the team shouted "Yes!" While many more laughed as they said 'no'.

"Okay, First Base, your new leader is... Thunder. Well done Cece, I know the team's in safe hands with you at the helm. And your deputy will definitely be an asset as she's one of the most supportive and compassionate people I've ever met... Lightning Lass. Well done and way overdue, you're up Ayla."

"Yes! Ayla got it!" Atom Girl said as the group at the table congratulated themselves. Triple Nova smiled as he looked around at his friends; they had clearly got the result they had hoped for.

Cosmic Boy's holo continued: "Second Base... Tyroc you're not off the hook there buddy as the team have spoken and you're staying in charge. You're deputy is ...Retro, so your base is going to be fine with these two gents at the helm."

"Deen's in, we did it!" Laurel hugged Brin tightly, her face wide with an infectious grin.

"Yeah, I wasn't sure if we'd pull it off..." Atom girl said.

"Who else was there really?" Laurel asked.

Rokk Krinn's holo smiled as he completed reading the list to the assembled Legionnaires: "And finally, Hope World... well, no surprise that Dream Girl is taking the leadership spot on our newest base and Nura you now have Titan as your Number Two. Congratulations Nasir, you'll be great as the new deputy."

"Three out of three.... this is great!" Laurel said.

"Told you it would happen." Gord said with a smile, raising his glass towards her.

"Yeah... Sometimes you precogs take the fun out of things, y'know?" She replied as Brin laughed.

"Poppin' Planets, y'know Gazelle gave me stellarific odds so I'm in the money now, haha, drinks are on me!" Comet King exclaimed.

"Ah, Drinchnar, you know it's a free bar, right?" Elthur said wryly.

"Really? Aw well, maybe next time..."


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yay! more great stuff, Harbi! I am also commenting as I read, so I may answer my own Qs sometimes tongue

Nice seeing everyone - including the interns and support staff. I like this inclusivity, and it makes sense that the support staff should have a say as they DO have to follow the leader too!

also LOL at Tyroc and Thunder sternly calling the group to order, hah! even adults can be unruly sometimes tongue

Oooh, is Nura's head-shaking not knowing, or just now wanting to say? I do get it, there are good reasons for not saying more perhaps... "Tinya's career will extend for quite some time," ooh. nice and somewhat reassuring, it IS nice to have someone with future knowledge give some comfort eh?

ah, good of Thunder to answer some Qs tongue I like how she explained things and even gave an analogy, well done (and you sure picked a good one, the (first?) death of Superman!

aha! I knew it, Nura just did not want to say... I wonder if Thunder knew that, and just said what she did to quiet things down...? It might be WISE to do it after all wink

oh, interesting! I like this bit re the team is too large to have just ONE leader. huh! now I am super curious. I also like how you make Nura smart and wise, instead of just seeing the future and going "well I saw it, so that's that." you show Nura actually thinking about WHY something must be so. well done!

ooh, wait, three leaders and three deputies? that IS a great idea considering how big! span of control and all that.

go Mon! I respect him - if I were in his shoes, I also would NOT want to be leader. (also like the "needs to be a member for a year" rule, it makes sense, don't wanna throw anyone into the deep end...)

wow, you do have a lot of Naltorians! but each is quite unique, well done for fleshing each out so well!

ooh I am pleased you referred to the Mindbender/Lu issue! it's really good to see outside perspective on this.... so there IS something to poor Mindbender's greivances!

LOl at Elthur being completely oblivious even though he was there! we all know people like that!

and yes, Legion traditions, it makes sense in a group that large... heck, even in a group as large as the time when Brin joined

oh, Babbage suggested Brin as leader, that's surprising at first glance BUT it does make sense - though he's a lone wolf, he's still a wolf. I like it, and it's a nice harkening back to when Brin became Deputy at the very end of v3, nice reference!

oooh I love how you are unveiling this! Nice that Thunder gets to stay, she deserves it. And Ayla! An inspired choice, and I had a similar reaction to Atom Girl's! well done! you've certainly put her in situations where her potential showed!

Yay, Tyroc and Retro! good choices again! Retro's name didn't cross my mind immediately, but after you said it I was like, yup a good one!

Also, really nice of the gang to get together and spread the word, voting as a bloc. hallmark of democracy, and also shows tons of interest and their own leadership in steering their own team!

and of course, Nura and disciplined Nasir! another good pairing!!


this was extremely well done Harbi, lots to get excited about for sure! I am super looking forward to it - first time for Ayla, and also Deen and Nasir stepping up! (and I gotta say, 3 guys and 3gals too!)

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Starting with the Magus - kind of a neat coincidence that I'm starting the Sandman series, which of course has a Magus character.

So Jan is no longer a sole survivor?

Love that your flight rings have scanners built in. I may have to nick that idea wink

Poor Atom Girl!

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Your scene with the Green Lanterns was really fun - I love cool sci-fi concepts like you're introducing here. And the asteroid belt holo that shows the planetary nursery kind of reminded me of Magrathea in HHGTTG, and I'm here for it. smile

Jo has a kid! And not with Tinya! Awesome! smile

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Kent's soliloquy is a great read that really helps in the exposition department and gets into his head a lot. It's also making me thing that not all is as it seems here.

The fleshing out of Trommian sociology is interesting; I'm not sure I've seen it done this much. Its really great worldbuilding.

These Khunds are pesky buggers, aren't they?!

Atom Girl seems to be in a lousy mood since she got konked out!

Interesting that Luornu is upset about Jo's kid. I was wondering if you were going to go the An Ryd angle.

Also - really enjoying you pulling the Wanderers into this.

Legionnaires can never get any real time off, can they, without something ruining their downtime! smile

This Worldsmith is pretty bad-ass, like a true force of nature. Love how Jazmin just dives in.

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I really like reading your Dragonmage. I didn't like the reboot version on the page and we barely got to know the SW6 one. I very much like the relationship between him and Southern Cross.

Who just got swallowed whole! shocked

But the mystic stuff with the dragons seems like it must be fun to write! smile

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I'm sorry to read the seas of the future are still polluted frown

Man, that Dragon King is FIERCE! I love it!

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This is a nice changeup here - I had expected Dragonmage to be the main character to confront the Dragon King, but it looks like you're going in an unexpected way.

The situation seems desperate with the typhoon. Great use of Tellus!

Looks like Southern Cross to the rescue!

Neat that Szenlong is a "space dragon" - any relation to the Imskian creatures?

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What happened to Tinya?

Nice idea to break up the leadership of the team. With it being as big as it is, it only makes sense.

The last election story is a nice in-between breather. smile

And I'm caught up! Whew! :_


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First Base

Thunder sighed.

When the announcement arrived, she knew what it was about and wasn't looking forward to dealing with it. Soddam Yat had turned up four minutes before asking to speak to Phantom Girl. They had been establishing a relationship over the last few months and Cece was aware that Tinya was trying to keep it discreet. She also knew that unfortunately the ancient Green Lantern had a lot to learn regarding tact so it was doubtful that it would remain a private matter between the two for long... unless she dealt with it immediately.

The Daxamite hovered in space, three hundred metres from the southern docking bay.

Thunder flew out and smiled as she came to a stop two metres from the emerald energy bubble he had created around himself, waiting for him to invite her in. He scowled as the bubble expanded, flowing around the Legionnaire.

"Tinya was supposed to call me two days ago, and she has not answered any of my attempts to contact her; where is she?"

"Soddam, she's not here..."

"So, I ask again Legionnaire, where is she?"

"If you'd allow me to finish, I'll tell you what I know." Cece gave a small smile and waited.

"... go on then." The ancient Daxamite gave a forced smile in return as he spoke, though clearly wasn't impressed.

"Tinya led a mission into Dominion space several days ago and in the escape, it appears she was sent to another dimension. We are..."

"What? Why wasn't I informed?" Soddam puffed out his chest in sudden anger, and fear.

"Let me finish."

"She is your leader, why aren't you..."

"No, and no. Listen to me please Soddam." Though Thunder had replied softly, it was clear she was not impressed with his interruption.

"Tell me what happened." He floated towards Cece, his expression was hard.

"Of course, I will but only if... You... Stop... Interrupting... Me!" Thunder stated emphatically, her posture unchanging despite the obvious intimidation technique on display.

Soddam took a deep breath, not losing eye contact and nodded.

"Tinya will be back..." Soddam let out his breath in relief as Cece said this, "Though we are unable to pinpoint exactly when or where that will happen. Nura Nal and our AI Henry are working on it..."

"I will assist."

"No. No, you won't Soddam. You are one of the most powerful beings alive but this requires a deft touch. Something you ...and also, I don't possess. Let Tinya's friends on the team that do have the necessary skillset locate her. The appropriate Legionnaires are collaborating on finding her. If we need any assistance, I will personally ensure you are contacted."

"I will hold you to that." And with that he turned away. The emerald energy bubble shrunk back until it encased him in its glow and he vanished in a blink.

"Oh, okay, bye then... great chat, do please hurry back." Cece muttered to herself as she turned to fly back towards First Base.

After reaching the docking bay Thunder used her flight ring to call up the intern called Zero. The student from the academy was empowered with trans-dimensional abilities. Cece thought it would be prudent to include them in the search as Nura and Henry were both busy so couldn't give the task their full attention. Perhaps the intern's powers would give them the edge they need to locate Phantom Girl quickly.

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Second Base

The Vegan cruiser materialized as if out of nowhere into a synchronistic orbit 300 klicks from the northern docking bay of Second Base.

The Huntress and Dr Kabbo were on monitor duty, or at least the Amazon was monitoring the many security feeds while the counselor was flipping through an historical holo-novel, when suddenly the alarms went off. The initial scans confirmed that the craft had no defensive screens up and its weapon systems were currently not locked on anything, which Noah breathed a sigh of relief over: it wasn't here to start a fight!

As Amynta called through to the Senior Team and alerted teammates that were on the rota for active duty to be prepared for potential action, she noticed that Dawnstar and Atomsmasher were already approaching the space ship. They had most likely been flying exercises around the base. Behind the winged tracker and the Wraithcat, Mon El was racing to join them. Amynta estimated that between them they had enough experience and power to deal with any potential threat the ship might pose. She felt frustrated that she would be unlikely to join them in this fight.

Dr Kabbo meanwhile had swiped across the control panel and asked the monitor AI what its projected odds were in a confrontation - it ran through scenario calculations and came to the conclusion that there was only an 2.75% chance of the Vegans causing any real damage with this single craft. Both Noah and Amynta were acutely aware that as their sensors had not been able to track the Vegan ship's movements here or capture any trace of a warp signature, there could easily be a whole fleet out there and they would never know until they revealed themselves. The Amazon set a yellow alert warning on the Base that would alert her teammates of potential trouble, as well as inform the other Bases that they currently had a situation that required active monitoring.

Mon El approached the craft and, once he was within a hundred metres of what appeared to be the front of it, he broadcast through his flight ring a message requesting they identify themselves. While he received a response almost immediately, it did not really clarify who they were or why they had approached the base in stealth.

<Princess Daheenisha is requested to attend>

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Retro - Deputy Leader - Deen Toro of Ventura - limited reversal of personal timeline
Duplicate Girl - Senior Team member, Luornu Durgo of Carggg - creation of multiple identical duplicates
Lexikon - Princess Daheenisha of Tamaran iv - enhanced speed, strength, durability, flight, omni-linguist
Thirteen – Dann Hortra of Naltor - line of sight probability manipulation
Kid Pulsar - Neel Koduah of Earth - incredible strength, invulnerability, projection of explosive blasts

Newly promoted from Academy student to full membership (Mentor in brackets):

Mindbender - Marmud Illic of Titan - alpha-level telepath (Duplicate Girl)

Science Police meta-squad seconded to Legion World Second Base:

Power Lass - Science Police Officer Nel Duwi of Daxam - incredible strength, speed, stamina, senses, laser vision, space flight, invulnerability


Twenty five minutes later, after the Vegan craft had docked at the Nothern Docking Bay. Dawnstar, Atomsmasher and Mon El were still close-by in space to monitor the situation while a team went on board.

Lexikon led the way, with Retro close behind. The Tamaranean princess had her Sphere floating alongside her. The cannonball-like creation had been taken from her homeworld when she had applied to join the Legion. While the majority of the team knew that these were created by the Psions in the billions to patrol and protect Nu-Vega Oort cloud, they were unaware that members of the royal families were each given one that acted as their tutor, guide, confidant, protector and keeper of their private journal. The controlling AI was attuned to the princess and would act to further her needs. Lexikon had used it a year ago to spy on a build up of military personal on a Fringe World, which had supplied the team with information alerting the team to the alter-dimension Psyche recruiting members of the UP armed forces to stage a coup.

"Remember, Tamaraneans are sensitive to telepathy so they'll know if you read their minds."

Luornu said to Marmud Illic as they stepped up the steep stairs that led onto the Vegan shuttle. The young telepath resisted snapping back that he knew damn well about a multitude of races sensitivity to his abilities. Instead, he turned away and offered a hand to Power Lass as she stepped up behind him. The Daxamite SP officer had a surprisingly neutral expression that made him think she had overheard Lu's comment and understood his frustration. She said thank you, smiled and hovered up the remaining steps. As she landed she gently put a hand on his shoulder in solidarity.

Ahead of them Retro sent a message across a personal bandwidth of the team's telepathic matrix to Duplicate Girl.

<have a bit more faith in the kid Lu, he's not stupid or we wouldn't have him in the team> Retro's tone was gentle while it was clearly a reprimand.

<he's no Imra> Lu responded flatly.

<that's correct; Marmud's an active Legionnaire and Imra isn't> This time the tone of Deen's message was firm. His message was clear; he was not impressed by her attitude towards their telepathic colleague.

Luornu Durgo took a deep breath as she followed Lexikon into the Vegan ship. Retro, as the new Deputy Leader was leading this mission so she wasn't going to argue with him. Not at this moment anyway, the Cargggite felt a blush rise on her cheeks a she walked into the Vegan craft. She couldn't put her finger on exactly what it was about the young telepath that annoyed her so; he was powerful, determined, reasonably hardworking, well liked amongst his peers... but just too damn smug for her liking. If he was this cocky when a new member getting mentored, what would he be like once he was a full member? She had no doubts that he had rubbished her name across the bases by now but she had enough experience to know that if she just kept on being herself his true colours would begin to show. Her doubts about his credibility would be vindicated...

Thirteen and Kid Pulsar brought up the rear of the group. The two young men had become friends, often playing chess together in their downtime. Both had been asked to keep an eye out for technology that might have cloaked the ship - it was beyond anything the Legion had so of course the Senior Team were interested in acquiring it. Neither Neal nor Dann was particularly happy about this task but both had data vampires ready to use in pouches on their belts.

The Legionnaires found themselves in a small waiting area, unsure what was expected from them next. Deen commented that the air smelled of nutmeg which prompted Neal to say he was hungry.

Mindbender asked Lexikon why they were waiting here.

"In part my people are ...wary of those of the other galactic empires, and there is tradition to follow so we must be patient." The Tamaranean princess said, appearing quite happy to wait.

"Should have brought a chess board." Kid Pulsar said to Thirteen as the two young men sat down on a small couch.

"I assume we're being scanned to make sure we're not carrying weapons ... or viruses aboard, right?" Retro asked.

"Maybe, though it's more to show status as the longer we wait the higher ranking our host is." The golden princess smiled as she replied.

"Oh, so we may be here a while then? How long is expected?"

"A few hours is standard, though if it's the Chief Psion we may be here for several days."


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Thanks IB and GL for your kind reviews above, glad to hear you're still enjoying this.

IB - adults are just as bad as kids for misbehaving usually, though have longer attention spans so it looks like we're more polite smile And glad you like the new management structure, I felt it was time to let the bases go off and do their own thing. There will be one tweak to it before the end of LW8 though nothing major.

GL, I haven't read the Hitchhikers Guide since I was in my twenties but have an urge to look it up now, thank you for that smile Khunds are indeed pesky buggers and we haven't seen the last of them, more planned for LW9. Szenlong s a spirit dragon - a magical mystical beast that embodies a natural element, not a thing to hunt for scales shocked eek

More soon as we meet a friend of our favourite Tamaranean Legionnaire, we learn a bit more about Retro's past and will close off LW8 with an invitation... though to what?

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I really liked the confrontation with Yot and Cece, Harbi. You really captured the push/pull of the attempt to intimidate each other, especially Yot.

I'm very curious as to the Vegan/Tamaranian end goal here. Also liked Luornu's indignation towards Mindbender. It makes sense with her being an OG.


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more good stuff, yay!


good old Cece, and gosh is Yat annoying. I am impressed with Cece for keeping her calm. thank goodness Yat listened to reason in the end.

Amynta has good tactical sense, but I expected nothing less wink

ah, poor Marmud... I am glad he resisted snapping, as this particular comment of Lu's was very neutral.. of course, he is already primed to be frustrated and to interpret any action of hers in the worst possible light, so...

oooh, Retro standing up for Marmud, very nicely done. And yes, finally, hard evidence that Lu is indeed being a tad too much re Marmud. If Retro thinks so... also, "he's no Imra", that is patently unfair! that is an extremely high bar to hold someone to! oh goodness, well Lu is self-aware enough to know that she's doing this on purpose, and what impact it has on her standing with the others... sigh. Well, I am very eager to see where you take this, as it does seem like many are supporting poor Marmud

and yes, waiting as a diplomatic tool, lol. ooph, several days! well, would have been nice of the rest to know that before...! I hope their physical needs at least will be met, though I expect they will! what a cliffhanger!

and I agree... adults do need reining in from time to time wink

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Thanks again GL and IB.

Soddam Yat is such a sulky bully but Cece is the perfect foil so it was fun to write that scene. And who knows what Tinya is going through so he should be careful what he wishes for... just saying.

Yeah, IB, you're right that Lu's comment was fairly neutral and Marmud is now looking for things to pick at, so it'll be interesting to see how he reacts when things do get tough.

We'll get to know what the Tamaraneans are up to quite quickly. This was originally going to be the opening story for LW9, but as the one I have ready to go involves a team taking on a mysterious angry tree it was too much like Raz's current storyline with Ivy and the Green so it'll stay parked for a while and I'll post it later.

After all the action in LW8, I'm planning on covering a lot smaller, more personal stories in LW9, including a focus on newer teammates. The way it's turning out, it'll be a different pace to this so fingers crossed it works out.

More next week, thanks again guys

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I am super curious indeed as to what Tinya is doing!

re Lu and Marmud, I have to praise you again for writing it so balanced - there's enough here that neither of the two is completely right OR wrong. At least, there is enough doubt that I can’t condemn Lu right away. You balanced out Lu's neutral comment with the reactions from not only Marmud, but also Deen - Power Lass' reaction was up to interpretation BUT Deen's reprimand, and Lu's own thoughts, clearly showed that there was something up with Lu as well... and taken with earlier scenes, including Marmud ‘s visit to Anje… And I have to say I am SUPER invested in this subplot as it does bring up personal memories tongue

as always, I'm hooked and looking forward to more more more!

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Retro - Deputy Leader - Deen Toro of Ventura - limited reversal of personal timeline
Duplicate Girl - Senior Team member, Luornu Durgo of Carggg - creation of multiple identical duplicates
Lexikon - Princess Daheenisha of Tamaran iv - enhanced speed, strength, durability, flight, omni-linguist
Thirteen – Dann Hortra of Naltor - line of sight probability manipulation
Kid Pulsar - Neel Koduah of Earth - incredible strength, invulnerability, projection of explosive blasts

Newly promoted from Academy student to full membership (Mentor in brackets):

Mindbender - Marmud Illic of Titan - alpha-level telepath (Duplicate Girl)

Science Police meta-squad seconded to Legion World Second Base:

Power Lass - Science Police Officer Nel Duwi of Daxam - incredible strength, speed, stamina, senses, laser vision, space flight, invulnerability


The team were kept waiting for a little under three and a half hours.

In that time, Retro, Duplicate Girl and Power Lass had all taken the opportunity to gather as much discreet information as they could.

Retro sat alongside Lexikon and gently questioned her about what the team could expect. The Tamaranean princess was polite but evasive, claiming that she was unaware of any formal reason for the Vegan's to summon her. Deen tried to get information about who she expected to see but again the princess was unwilling to give him much in the way of useful data. He then tried telling a story from his own life involving being unexpected called to meet someone in the hope that by opening up she would do so in return. Princess Daheenisha smiled and asked polite questions though did not give anything in return. Deen had met people like that many times before, usually politicians, and he found it frustrating but smiled and tried again to elicit information from her but without a useful result.

"Do the times we are asked to wait mean anything?"

"Of course, every passing sarc... equivilent to approximately a standard hour and eighteen minutes, would represent the status, while prime number multiplications indicate familial bonds and non-prime are for ...working relationships. One sarc would be for immediate family, and so on. It is all very formalised amongst the Great Houses so we understand what the circumstances are of the meeting."

"So... ah, you'll get a heads up of what we can expect by how long we wait? Make sure you let the team know, okay?"

Lu examined the fixtures and furnishings around them, certain that the team would must be monitored. All she found was comfortable seats and glass topped tables with jugs of iced fruit juice that small robotic staff would refill once a Legionnaire poured some into a glass. She was even more certain that they were being scanned by this apparent normality and civility. She didn't take any of the juice herself, though both Thirteen and Kid Pulsar did and said it was delicious.

At first, SPO Nel Duwi had used her microscopic vision to examine the surfaces around them, checking if any devices had been implanted. She also casually checked the furnishing and the juice that Dann and Neel were enjoying. She didn't find anything suspicious so switched to her x-ray vision, making sure to merely skim across surfaces and not intrude too far into the vessel. Again, there was nothing suspicious. She gave Lu a nod, letting her know that her initial scans had not discovered anything suspicious and decided that rather than spy she would sit down and wait for their hosts rather than intrude any further.

When the door finally opened, a Tigorr clone - usually reserved as servants for senior politicians or military staff, politely asked them to join him. The clone then suavely bowed as each Legionnaire walked past. Retro and Lu both noticed that Lexikon had almost pounced at the doorway, eager to meet whoever had summoned her. They knew then that she expected it was someone that she wanted to see and both felt a little relieved though confused why she hadn't said anything to them.

The team followed Lexikon as she hurried along the corridor. There was a small ball of light in front of her, obviously guiding her as she turned corners before walking up a ramp to a large set of golden doors. They opened slowly and in front of the Legionnaires, in a formal room with holos of the solar system spinning in the air, stood a tall Tamaranean male wearing a black chainmail uniform. Lexikon flew at him, wrapped her arms around his broad shoulders and they kissed passionately.

After several long seconds she turned to the team.

"Legionnaires, I'd like you to meet Sky Lieutenant Annach’ha of the Tamaranean Sun-Corps... my fiancé."

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After proper introductions had been made, Sky Lieutenant Annach'ha invited the team to join him for a meal.

<It is a great honour and compliment to be offered a meal so soon after meeting> Lexikon sent, giving her teammates a rare warm smile as she glanced at over at them. The two Tigorr clones entered from behind the Legionnaires and announced that a meal was being served in the galley.

The table was cramped but the Legionnaires were treated to a range of exotic foodstuffs, some of which they found delicious. Kid Pulsar and Thirteen both asked a lot of questions about what they were being served to the waiting staff. As they ate heartily, Retro and Duplicate Girl both had questions for Sky Lieutenant Annach’ha.

"You will have to excuse our surprise," Deen began, "we were unaware that Princess Dahineesha was betrothed." While he had spoken towards their host it was Lexikon that answered, her expression serious.

"It would be unbecoming for a member of the Royal household to discuss their relationship status unless they had interest in..."

"Dallying?" Retro finished with a small smile.

"Ah, yes. that word suffices." She smiled at him before turning back to her fiancé. The Sky Lieutenant had a neutral expression, part quizzical, part smiling. He was clearly intrigued by the colourful characters sat around the table.

"We would be grateful if you could share why you are here?" Lu asked, the Sky Lieutenant gave a small smile though didn't answer. "We have made a lot of enemies over the years so you must understand that your sudden appearance was ...startling."

He remained silent as Duplicate Girl stared at him.

"You must forgive their lack of manners; they do not understand our culture." Lexikon said to her fiance. The silence that followed was not unexpected as the Legionnaires all turned towards her. It hung in the air for several seconds before she continued, "under Tamaranean tradition, Annacha'ha will not speak until the meal is completed. It is seen as rude to interrupt the refreshing of guests. I can assure you that my beloved is treating us with the utmost respect." After saying this to her teammates she turned and smiled towards him, which he warmly reciprocated.

While the Legionnaire ate the rest of the meal in relative silence, Lexikon and the Sky Lieutenant leant in towards each other and shared many happy glances and warm smiles. None of the team had seen their Tamaranean teammate look so happy before. She had developed a reputation of being focussed while on missions and at training but otherwise she was felt to be relatively stand-offish with inter-personal interactions.

"That's what you and Bina looked like the other night in Shakes, it's great isn't it?" Thirteen said softly to Power Lass. She didn't look round at him or reply but smiled contentedly to herself.

The meal continued for another twenty minutes or so as more dishes were presented to the team. In this time it was obvious that Lexikon was becoming more and more happy. Retro wondered if the length of the meal denoted something to the Tamaranean as well. Or perhaps the order of food being presented... he realised he knew almost nothing about Lexikon or her people and their culture. Deen accepted he would need to research much more. In his century of life, that he could remember, he had only met one other Tamaranean and that had been Lexikon's sister on Weber's World. The vast majority lived within the Nu-Vega cluster where they had no contact with the galactic empires around them. It was only in the last three years that they had opened up to trade arrangements, though still there had only been very restricted contact between these ancient peoples and either the United Plants or the Khunds who controlled the vast reaches odfspace around them.

After the meal finished and the Tigorr clones had cleared the room and left the Legionnaires with the Sky Lieutenant he stood up and smiled broadly.

"Legionnaires, thank you for joining us in our humble meal."

Several of the team smiled; if the twenty odd course they had just enjoyed was humble to the Sky Lieutenant then they realised he was used to an entirely different standard of life.

"I would like you all to bear witness..." He held a hand out towards Lexikon and smiled. She took his hand and gracefully stood up. "Princess Dahineesha of House Tahil, most fierce warrior of Okaaran and X'halkin blood and steadfast companion to the Imperium, I have come to claim the right of marriage as agreed by our most noble parents on our naming days. Will you accept my proposal?"

"Yes!" She replied before they fell into a tight hug.

"Guess I'd better buy a new hat." Nel Duwi muttered with a laugh.

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HOPE WORLD, specialising solely in disaster relief.

Dream Girl- Team leader - Nura Nal of Naltor - precognition


Nura had arranged the team meeting for 1600 hours standard.

As the group who would be joining her on Hope World arrived, she was cuddling her daughter Mathilda, before putting her into a floating crib as they all took their seats. Dream Girl knew it was time to tell her team what she had foreseen... or at least enough of it to encourage them. Southern Lights was still assisting Dragonmage with the little space dragon, but Nura had foreseen that the winged mystic would return in an hour and after that he would be a fully committed member of this team whether or not he knew of her dreams, so she was happy to continue without him.

"Everyone, hello."

Nura beamed her brightest smile as she spoke. Sitting around the table were the group she had foreseen would do so much to help the most vulnerable and needy. She loved them all already!

"Hope World will be leaving in two hours for our first mission." The group around her all smiled as she announced this and SPO Droo Vri cheered which made several of his colleagues laugh. While Nura knew his enthusiasm was a definite asset, she also knew she would need to keep an eye on the Daxamite as he could easily react impulsively or over-extend himself... though, she realised. his tightly bunched muscles were a bonus as she watched him; it wouldn't be the worst task she gave herself over the next few days.

"We're just waiting for the Q-Drive to be signed off by Brande-Tech. I've been told they'll be finalised at 1730, so we'll leave shortly after that. Our first mission will take us to the edge of the Wilderness of the Sassanaboan Nebula where there is considerable resource mining and the like... you've been there before, haven't you Sister?" Nura nodded towards Sister Eclipse.

"Why, yes, several years ago there was a flare from the nebula that tore through several satellites leaving many in difficult circumstance. The Sisterhood visited, sharing medical support and food. It was... it was quite bleak when we arrived, the local population are fiercely independent and live on a group of satellite settlements with only a trade and non-com status agreement with the United Planets so aid was delayed getting to them."

"I'm sure your Sisterhood were a tremendous help." Nura said, "So, while the settlements are just recovering from that disaster, there's been an outbreak of Daluvonnian Red Eye Plague... Drura, have you ever encountered it before?"

Infectious Lass blinked a few times before replying, "...no, it's extinct, isn't it? There's not been a case in over a century. Are you sure Nura?"

"It seems so, and in case you didn't know..." she looked around the table at the assembled team, "it's particularly nasty. The first sign is it attacks the primary sensory organs, driving it's hosts to become incredibly sensitive to light and sound, before affecting the brain, driving its hosts into killing rages. It has resulted in the plague sufferers committing horrible acts of mutilation, cannibalism..."

"So, it's the Zombie Plague?" Thom said, looking particularly unimpressed. Nura nodded before continuing.

"It has been called the Zombie Plague before, you're right Thom. It ravishes the body of the host even as it drives them to spread the infection through physical contact - usually biting or clawing. It's particularly unpleasant though I'm quite certain we will get through this. There is a cure, though it's not too pleasant either. It's best to inoculate folks before the virus gets into them as the cure can also be rather unpleasant, especially in aerosol form which we'll need to use as I don't want any of us getting too close to one of the infected - you got that?" Nura looked around the table, her expression making it clear that this was not a point that she would take any arguments on.

"...And we all need to take a vaccine shot before we go, as it will take an hour or two to go through our systems... and I mean all of us Groovy." she gave her Daxamite SP colleague a smile, "Amazingly, this virus will even affect you and it wouldn't help anyone if there's a Daxamite with this horrid disease out there." Nura's expression was serious and everyone around the table understood that this was not going to be the easy feel-good mission they had hoped to start off with.

"There's one other thing that we need to be aware of..." Nura called up a holo as she said this, "there have been sightings of the Squids of Infinity outside the nebula. No-one knows what they are doing, if they are the cause of the infection or not..."

"I thought they were a myth!" Mama Tank exclaimed. The cybernetic soldier sat forward and stared at the holo before them. It showed a mass of long, slim burning tentacles with a small ball-like head at one end.

The Squids of Infinity were one of the largest life forms ever discovered, growing up to excesses of three thousand clicks long, No-one had ever managed to get a biological sample from them, or form any link in communication. These enormous beings had been spotted within half a dozen of the nebula within the United Planets and no-one knew how they got there as the distance between their colonies was truly, and quite literally astronomical. As the environments they inhabited were some of the most dangerous known there had been little enthusiasm in doing anything other than monitoring these enormous and mysterious creatures safely from outside of the cosmic clouds they appeared to live within.

Nura asked if there were any questions and the few that were asked, she couldn't give direct answers to so she quickly wrapped up the meeting.

"So... I'd like you all to take the next hour to prepare yourselves, get vaccinated and we'll meet again at 1700 hours... okay? The Legion will give us a send-off but I'd like to get us all ready before the other teams arrive at 1730. And don't worry, it may not be a simple mission but I know we will be amazing."

Two hours later, Hope World left on their maiden mission with less fanfare than most of the team expected.

The Senior Team and a dozen or so Legionnaires and interns warped over and wished them luck before Nura announced it was time to turn on their brand-new Q-Drive and fire up their engines. There was a couple of bottles of non-alcoholic champagne opened and shared though within half an hour everyone had been and gone and the team were left to get on with it.

"It'll take us just over three hours to get there so I'd advise getting yourself prepared." Nura still had a glass of bubbly in her hand as she addressed the team. She told them that once they got there, they would need to act quickly on three satellites so she would lead a team to the first satellite of Star Boy, Groovy and Orion. While they were dealing with that situation, Titan would lead a second team of Southern Lights, Magnetix and Dragon Lass,
to the agri-domes and Harmonia would take Sister Eclipse, Mama Tank and Tesseract to the shipyard satellite. Everyone else should remain on Hope World under Invisible Kid, and get ready for a stream of refugees. Nura's expression faltered for a second as she told the team that she had foreseen a thousand or so arriving. The team looked slightly aghast as she said this so Nura gave a bright smile.

Strategic Analyst Graq Maurus of Colu spoke up, announcing that he had informed the UP Disaster Relief and Refugee Aid Departments that they would require assistance, so they could expect help with the refugess. The Coluan smiled as he added that he had made it clear to them that they were not to set foot onto any of the affected satellites until they had the all-clear due to the nature of the virus. He had received responses that drones would be available to assist the team if required while medical support would stand by until it was safe to approach.

"I appreciate that Graq, thank you." Nura gave a smile and nod in his direction before addressing the entire team, "I get that you might feel that we are being thrown into the crucible with this mission but these people need our help before their crisis becomes a full-blown disaster, and believe me when I say that I know you are all going to perform magnificently!"


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yay! more good stuff!!

Power Lass seems really competent - besides Retro and Lu, she was the only one who made it a point to gather intel

Bless Deen, he's so polite and likable and in control. I wonder if there is anything more to Lexikon's reticence...

Lu's experience is showing, she's been in enough traps to be on her guard tongue I found the "not taking juice" bit brilliant: and of course, she would hesitate to warn the others outwardly as it might be perceived as suspicious...


also love Power Lass' careful surface scanning without being too intrusive. these diplomatic games require a tight balance eh!

a Tigorr clone! hah! what a nice throwback to the Omega Men!


her fiance! well! that explains a bit of why Lexikon was so reticent!

ah, Deen is very sharp indeed, I like him more and more. And I love how rich a picture you are painting of Tamaranean culture

also, the lack of speaking is interesting. and ties in a bit to the physicality of Tamaranean culture, if I remember how Starfire was written back in the day...

aw, Bina and Power Lass, nice nod to their budding relationship

a marriage proposal!!! wow!! well, I love Legion weddings, so... smile this is cool, I bet the actual wedding will be quite a feast!

oh Nura, Nura, Nura, lol. Droo Vi sounds like quite the hunk. I love anything Hope World related, I've often thought a real-life Legion would be best used attending to various ecological concerns, disasters, refugee crises, that sort of thing

an extinct plague, oh! I love how Nura is leading the briefing, turning to relevant team members so they can share their expertise and experience. But also making it clear which points are non-negotiable. I always wished Nura had had more chances to show her leadership, so am VERY pleased you have her leading Hope World

A Zombie Plague, whoo!


Giant Squids! And like wow, these are humongous!

a thousand refugees, whoo! team has their work cut out for them!



yes, I'm super eager to see how this mission goes!

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Hi Harbi...I realise I have missed quite a bit so here's some thoughts as I go!

- Dragonmage losing his cool momentarily is a good way to show how outgunned he must feel

- Southern Lights' spooky pal can sure be cold when he wants to be!

- I like again the excellent description of the extreme weather, and how normally incredible superpowers are humbled against debris-filled flood waters and sheets of driving rain

- ooh I like this development for Szenlong! A SPACE dragon!! I didn't even think about the Imskian dragons till GL mentioned it, but by the law of comic book similarities I'm sure there's a story where he went back in time to father the species or something laugh

- Thunder's speech about how future people don't necessarily know specifics of what happened in their past was a nice way to gently explain why these types of characters aren't just fixing every little thing before it happens

- this new leadership structure is very interesting! I'm glad Ayla got in there, she deserves it! And Tyroc as well! I do wonder how Tinya will react when she gets back though, especially considering she was already a little put out by certain people challenging her authority...

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"Poppin' Planets, y'know Gazelle gave me stellarific odds so I'm in the money now, haha, drinks are on me!" Comet King exclaimed.

"Ah, Drinchnar, you know it's a free bar, right?" Elthur said wryly.
Haha Comet Monarchs are good for a laugh in every continuity it seems laugh

- Is it wrong that I kinda wanted Thunder to give Sodam Yat a good knuckle sandwich? That guy is a real dick!

- Interesting to see some of Lu's inner monologue about Mindbender...seems like maybe she really does have a chip on her shoulder about him after all!

- I like all the diplomatic etiquette and such around Lexikon's fiance, it's cool seeing aliens with alien customs

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Sitting around the table were the group she had foreseen would do so much to help the most vulnerable and needy. She loved them all already!
This was an interesting line, and makes me wonder...how would Naltorians go about approaching new relationships with people? Would it be like when you have a dream that someone did something annoying and then you have to remind yourself not to be annoyed at them the next day? (except I guess in Nura's case it would be justified lol)....it makes one re-examine some of her catty remarks to Wildfire and such in the 80s, maybe she was just mad because she knew Wildfire was gonna spill oil on her new outfit in an hour's time or something laugh

- The Squids of Infinity sound awesome!!

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The Tamaranian timespans and cultural aspects are neat - is that documented elsewhere for tamaranians, or did you make that up? Its very cool, but I'm not as versed on that world outside of Starfire in the Titans.

A lot of good foreshadowing here too - I'm assuming we'll be dealing with these plague Zombies before too long, as well as the space squids. Can't wait to see!

Also, is Nura drinking on the job? laugh

Can't wait to see more!

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Second Base

Otaki - Bina Nawoti of Earth - mindsense

Otaki monitored Power Lass on the Vegan craft.

The young psychic had joined Spy and the Huntress at the monitor board while Mon El remained close by, keeping a five click distance to the docking bay where the Vegan craft was now docked. Dr Kabbo and Amynta were both very focussed on monitoring the Vegan craft that had entered their docking bay while sweeping the general area around the team's base for any other potential intruders.

Bina hadn't meant to intrude and felt sort of, almost, kinda guilty about it, but that hadn't stopped her as she focussed her psychic senses on the Daxamite Officer that had literally swept her off her feet the other night. She felt comforted by sensing Nel's mind... the Daxamite was focussed and happy, a nice combination while on a mission Bina thought.

The team had been on board for over four hours. Their flight ring data feeds had shown that after the initial excitement the team's heartbeats had settled to regular rhythms and their other bio-rhythms indicated that the team had just finished a meal. As mission statuses went these were decent results that the three in the Mission Monitor Control Room were all slightly impressed and even jealous of. It appeared that whoever their host was, they were taking good care of the Legionnaires.

Lu had sent a brief message forty minutes before stating that they should shift the base alert down to an Amber alert status as this was, apparently, a friendly visit.

When the second Vegan ship appeared it at least used traditional warp technology so the team were alerted before they materialised 40 clicks from the northern docking bay. Within half a second Mon El was flying beside it.

"Sky Lieutenant Annach'ha, the Prime Auditor demands your presence. You have twelve Alcs to attend."

The announcement cut across all communications and was heard by virtually everyone on Second Base.

"Yeah, so, I'd say it's time to go to Red Alert right about now." Dr Kabbo said dryly as his hand flicked across a hard light screen to activate the alarm.

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Mining Platforms 4Bravo, 4Delta and 4Epsilon, on the edge of the Wilderness of the Sassanaboan Nebula

Hope World

Team One:
Dream Girl- Team leader - Nura Nal of Naltor - precognition
Star Boy - Senior Team member, Thom Kallor of Xanthu - stellar mass transference
Intern:
Orion -Science Police Cadet Tw'gg of H'lven - tracking skills, agility, enhanced senses and awareness of flaws or weaknesses
Science Police Liaison:
Groovy - Science Police Officer Droo Vri of Daxam - incredible strength, speed, stamina, senses, laser vision, space flight, invulnerability

When Hope World arrived, the satellites that made up the bulk of the settlements appeared at first glance to be peaceful.

There were three main satellites: proto-planets that had been mined for necessary elements and then built upon, connected by a spaghetti like mass of tubes. On closer examination there were large areas that had no lights and several of the connecting tubes from the furthest satellite had been disconnected. The central of the three was the largest and the holo-data that Thom had called up stated this was where the majority of the residential areas were.

"This is our mission," Nura said pointing towards it. It had obviously once been an enormous crude lump of space rock that over the decades or even centuries had been carved out and built upon. Nura signalled for the holo to enlarge and focus in on a central area.

"As well as accommodation for the two and a half thousand people that live here, the central satellite is a mega-mall - workspace - general recreational satellite; restaurants and holo suites and the like. We 'll find most of the survivors in there. While the rest of us look after them, Orion, you need to find the central ventilation pump so we can distribute the cure throughout the three satellites. It's not what's showing on this schematic..." The fox-like intern looked confused but before he could ask, Nura added, "ha, the joys of precognition, you're just going to have to take my word for it, sweetie. I'm sure some of the locals will help. We'll give you a couple of canisters with concentrated doses of the cure and you'll need to make your own way there as we deal with the crowds." She gave him a big supportive smile as he gulped. His first adventure with the team would be a solo mission where he'd need to avoid killer zombies and find a pump that could distribute the cure... "Ah, that's not how my tracking skill works but I'm sure I'll think of something... no pressure then!" he said with a cheeky grin.

They could all see the intern's nerves but so as not to add to them the team laughed along with him. Thom gave Nura a harsh side glance which she ignored with her typical aplomb.

"What do you need me to do Miss Nal?" Droo Vri asked as he examined the holo.

"Call me Nura, for one... We'll need barriers and the like, oh, once we get there you'll see, don't worry. So... are we ready? You know what we're doing, yes?" Once again Dream Girl looked around the team though this time her expression was more serious, "I have to warn you that we're going to see some pretty horrid stuff in there, I'm sorry but we will need to push through it to get the job done. So... Groovy, go collect the supplies and we'll go."

In a blur the young Daxamite vanished and returned seconds later, carrying twenty backpacks full of medical supplies.

"Henry, a warp please."

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Team Two:
Harmonia - Senior Team member, Professor Harmonia Li of Earth - manipulation of the natural environment
Sister Eclipse - of Rhoohanisett iii - durability, heightened senses, physical possession of any living being
Intern:
Tesseract - Sar Jerash Mor Toark of Mars - access to intra-dimensional space
Science Police Liaison:
Mama Tank - Science Police Lieutenant Lolla Grayfrau of Badenhoff vi - cybernetics giving incredible strength, invulnerability, AI manipulation

The satellite that Harmonia led her team to held the engineering heart of the settlement.

This was where the majority of the resources that the settlers used and manufactured for sale were taken from the rich dust expelled from the edges of the nebula. There were two power spheres, several large storage facilities and many workshops and engineering bays. In a typical day there would be in the region of a thousand beings expected to be working here at any one time.

The Hope World scan had initially shown almost five hundred beings, though once they had filtered out those with elevated temperatures and high metabolism rates that showed they were infected, there were only one hundred and sixty-seven. Other than about a dozen scattered around, these were all in the main engineering block.

"I'm sure we can find plenty of tools to help keep them safe." Lolla Grayfrau said.

"Indeed, though remember, those infected haven't lost their intellect, only their rational thought processes." Harmonia replied quietly.

"I have twenty-three medi-packs, will that be enough?" Tesseract asked. She looked around the group. The young woman had been at the back of the room where the supplies were stored for this mission. She reached across and put her hand on top of another which promptly vanished as she placed it within her intra-dimensional space. "Twenty-four now..."

"That will be fine, thank you Sar Jerash." Harmonia smiled coolly as she replied. "So, we will warp over there in a minute and I want you to aid Sister Eclipse while Lieutenant Grayfrau and I...."

"Aww, come on..." Tesseract muttered loudly. Her mild antipathy towards her teammates was well known, though in particular she had exhibited a strong dislike for Sister Eclipse.

"If you do not like this assignment I have two options for you: you either leave us and we will have another intern or student take your place on the team, or you can show a level of professionalism that is expected amongst Legionnaires and get on with the task in hand. The choice is entirely yours, though while we wait for you to decide people are being hurt unnecessarily so I'd like an answer now."

"Ah... yeah, of course I wanna help people." The young woman from Mars looked embarrassed at Harmonia's directness.

"Good, this discussion is over. Henry, a warp please."

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Team Three:
Titan - Nasir N’Cube of Titan - alpha-level telepathy
Southern Lights of Starhaven - spaceflight, magic user
Intern:
Dragon Lass - Mari Baertling of Rimbor - enhanced strength, durability, echolocation and flight
Science Police Liaison:
Magnetix - Science Police Officer Jooli Esra of Braal - manipulation of magnetic fields

The satellite they warped into was an inter-connected series of farming domes.

As the infected had a sensitivity to light it appeared that one of those sick had switched all of the illumination in the settlement off meaning it was dark inside, with only the glow of the nearby nebula giving a warm russet sheen through the semi-transparent dome above. Titan quickly telepathically scanned the dome and found sixty people at one end. It confirmed the scans from Hope World. He also picked up enough surface thoughts to realise that they were armed with blasters and desperately attempting to create barriers.

<We are from the Legon, here to help. Are any of you injured?> Titan's telepathic voice was silky smooth. His science police training from before his time in the Legion showed as the message had enough tone of authority to be listened to though carried no sense of threat. At the same time, he activated the searchlight on his belt buckle and pulled it from his outfit and held it above his head to shine down on the team; were they infected they would not be able to tolerate the light.

Dragon Lass and Southern Lights took to the air. The mystic closed his eyes and muttered a spell which gave him enhanced vision that would allow him to spot illness in others; his role would be in helping the locals as his teammates went to collect any others they could find. Meanwhile, the intern had been tasked to protect the settlers as the other Legionnaires got the others they found safely to this spot ready to warp across to Hope World. With the dark forest of crops around the spot where the settlers had congregated it meant Dragon Lasses echo-location abilities would prove essential if she were to discover any of the infected trying to sneak up.

Titan and Magnetix would leave Southern Lights and Dragon Lass with this group of settlers as they searched through the linked domes for other uninfected survivors.

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On Hope World:
Invisible Kid - Jacques Foccart of Earth - personal and tactile invisibility
Intern:
Army of One - Ashia Servito of Luzonus Prime - self-replication
Support Staff on Hope World:
I.Z.O.R. - Gear iv – infrastructure manager - nannite collective being, technomorph
Drura Sehpt - Infectious Lass – medical officer - containment and control over bacteria and viruses
Henry – Anti Lad – Spatial warp controller
J2351 of the Dominion - Ivy - bio-manipulation of Hope World's chloro-technology
The Bludgers - clone-grown Dominion workforce with enhanced strength and durability though with 28 hour lifespan
Science Police Liaison Team:
'Smart Boy' - Senior Team liaison, Strategic Analyst Graq Maurus of Colu - 10th level intelligence specialising in disaster relief scenarios


Jacques looked at the hard light screen before him.

He had found that he had some skill in tactical and strategic planning so was ensuring that the thousand refugees they were going to receive would be adequately provided for. Drura was ready in the warp room - she had said she would tell immediately if any of the settlers were carrying the damned Daluvonnian Red Eye Plague but weren't yet showing symptoms, and had set up several dozen floating auto-docs to assist with any other ailments they might have. Ashia Servito - the Army-of-One, had summoned twenty replicas and tasked them with assisting in medical duties for the refugees alongside the auto-docs, while another twenty were to guide refugees to quarters that they had prepared. Jacques smiled to himself as he thought that Army-of-One could probably handle this all by herself if she were more confident.

In the warp room Graq Maurius was waiting alongside Drura. The Strategic Analysis would be monitoring each team and giving advice as they progressed. Jacques hoped he had enough oversight to keep their teammates safe. Drura had meditated while they had travelled here, stating that she needed to prepare her containment of the virus they expected to encounter. Drura had once told him that viruses had their own personalities so finding compatible neighbours within her to hold any new ones she encountered was always a bit of a task in itself. She had explained that a lot of her mishaps earlier in her career were due to this simple error and therefore more 'angry' or 'excitable' viruses leaked through when she tried to direct a specific one. Jacques didn't understand exactly what she meant but trusted her completely to be as ready as she could possibly be to help.

Gear had ensured his nannites were creating large, clear signage for the settlers so there would be minimal confusion. They also upped the number of monitors within communal spaces as an added security feature. Dream Girl had assured the team that the settlers would not pose any major risk for the team, but the Linsnarian wanted to ensure that any minor inconveniences were known about before they could blow up to anything larger.

Ivy had produced thirty clone grown Dominion staff they had taken to call the Bludgers; these were short, stocky, immensely strong and would follow orders perfectly. Nura had assured the group that these were no more than programmable walking sacks of chemicals with no real life of their own. Jacques found them a bit alarming; they appeared so life-like that he did wonder if even in their pathetically short lives that they did have an inkling of their own existence. After 28 hours - a length of a standard day on the Dominators home world, the Bludgers would break down into the basic amino acid compounds that Ivy had used the Dominion tech to build them from.

As far as Jacques could see they were ready. Resisting the urge to triple-check his work, he sent the message:

<Teams, zis is Hope World, we are ready to receive ze settlers>


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folks, finally here's the next section. Sorry for the delay but I had a family matter to deal with that meant I ws away for the last month or so.

I have time tomorrow and Friday to catch up on the other fics so IB, Raz and GL I will get to you soon smile


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yay more good stuff!!

LOL when I read vegan, I think of the people who eat nothing animal-based... it makes me giggle thinking of Tamaraneans being all "soy milk only please!"

also nice having some of the crew monitoring their teammates for safety

"Prime Auditor" eek! well, this is a curveball!

also good of you to define Orion's tracking skills. Indeed, tracking means following, but if something does not leave a trail...

also LOL at Thom being annoyed at Nura. but I suppose she would not send Orion alone unless she was sure he would be fine wink and I also like Nura turning serious and adding an extra warning. I always loved this duality to Nura, and you do it so well.

yeah, go Harmonia, good job telling Tesseract like it is!

also love: Jacques showing tactical skill (nice nod to his 5YL evolution); and Drura being able to diagnose people. also love the explanation re Drura's viruses having their own personalities!

love it, also like the classic 4-team split up, which will give everyone a chance to shine (whether powers/abilities or personalities!) really looking forward to seeing Hope World in action!

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Thanks for you review, greatly appreciated IB, and for the PM, have edited that mistake now... phew!

A couple of things to pick up from previous reviews:

Raz, Southern Lights little friend isn't cold really, just not used to 'others' so treats these strange things the same way they treat it. Its going to have a long learning curve ahead of it.

GL, Nura was on the non-alcoholic fizz, though with what's ahead it wouldn't be a surprise if she had a swift one prior to the mission.

IB, Tesseract is another that needs to experience a learning curve, it'll be interesting seeing her first steps alo g the way.

More next week, thanks again for your support, I'm very grateful.

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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 16 Sept 22)
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re Tesseract, definitely - it is always nice to see characters grow, and I hope she does... of course, the experience of some others shows that not everyone is ready to grow!

and happy to Harbi, I am a big fan of your writing so always eager to read and review ! and we writers have to support one another re catching small errors smile

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Thunder called Tyroc to check on the current situation on Second Base.

With the appearance of the second Vegan craft she had felt a growing unease at the situation. Troy, of course, was almost dismissive of the thought that this might be the start of something serious. Cece smiled at his easy confidence and was away to cut the call when he asked if he could discuss something else with her. Of course, she replied, suddenly curious.

Tyroc told her that he had spoken with Monica Sade the night before and she had agreed to his idea and that had helped him make his mind up. That said, Monica was not a member of the Senior Team so he decided that perhaps it would be best if he had a chat with another teammate.

After he told Cece his idea there was a moment's silence.

"What's wrong with the Mentor scheme Troy? You must accept we've had great results..."

"Oh, I totally get it Cece, it's just ah feel the latest crop are good enough t' not need nannying anymore. Ah mean, really, d'y'think Non is learning much from followin' Lar aroun'? Poltergeist's a good kid who's only mistake was havin' a mindbuster screw with him while he was with his crush... and we all knew how he felt about Jan an' still put 'em together. Ah think he and the others don't need another month o' being extra-numary to our missions is all ah'm sayin', is that so bad?"

"No, perhaps you're right. You really should speak to the rest of the Senior Team as they'll have their own thoughts on the newest Legionnaires progress."

"Y'know that's a good point... ah'll give the team a call and arrange a meeting for soon as... though there's gonna be push-back but you do agree, right? So, it's jus' a case of letting them know."

"Well... in principle I agree, though if the other Seniors bring up any valid points, we'll take them on board. Okay? Which kind of reminds me, I was thinking of stealing one of your Senior Team as we're short of team leaders. Captain Shir will need a few more days to fully recover and..."

"Ahh... so, hear me out but ah think Lu's your best bet... you mussa heard how she's ruffled a few feathers over here with the 'this is how we do it in the Academy and back in the day' routine. Ah don't want to talk badly of her as she's, like... a legend but if ah'm bein' frank she has been a bit unnecessarily hard with Mindbender and as a result is losing respect from the team by the day as we all see it happenin'. The mentor scheme is to build bridges no' hammer our new teammates into submission. A lot of the more junior team are not... ah, impressed with her attitude towards them generally and, well, ah gotta agree." Troy looked embarrassed as he said this but he knew Cece fully understood.

"Okay, I'll ask for a volunteer from your Seniors and let's hope she agrees. If not, I'll volunteer her myself, okay? But we're not forcing Lu out, she's got more experience than anyone else on the team."

"Oh, totally agree! I've no real problems wit' her but team morale... well, y'know."

"Is it that bad?"

"Well, I'm gonna hafta talk with her pretty seriously if she stays here and don't soften her act... her hardass attitude is not working over here on Two. I wonder if she... ah, Cece this is terrible to say but I was thinkin' o' tellin' her to book in with Anje Falkner for a few sessions. I'm worried that she's got no outlet for whatevah is goin' on in her head tha's pushin' her so hard."

"Okay, Troy whatever you think is best, though if you like I'll talk to her. Perhaps a woman-to-woman chat...?"

"She's my team Cece, I'll do it, though thank you."

"Let me know how it goes. Good luck."

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Retro - Deputy Leader - Deen Toro of Ventura - limited reversal of personal timeline
Duplicate Girl - Senior Team member, Luornu Durgo of Carggg - creation of multiple identical duplicates
Lexikon - Princess Daheenisha of Tamaran iv - enhanced speed, strength, durability, flight, omni-linguist
Thirteen – Dann Hortra of Naltor - line of sight probability manipulation
Kid Pulsar - Neel Koduah of Earth - incredible strength, invulnerability, projection of explosive blasts

Newly promoted from Academy student to full membership (Mentor in brackets):

Mindbender - Marmud Illic of Titan - alpha-level telepath (Duplicate Girl)

Science Police meta-squad seconded to Legion World Second Base:

Power Lass - Science Police Officer Nel Duwi of Daxam - incredible strength, speed, stamina, senses, laser vision, space flight, invulnerability


"It appears I have somewhere else to be. Would you like to join me?" Annach'ha said with a smile to the Legionnaires as the summons unexpected cut through his on-board comms system.

The Tamaranean stood up and offered his hand to Lexikon. She gracefully rose from her seat with a smile and placed her hand affectionately over his. The Legionnaires all scrambled out from their seats and started asking questions. The Sky-Lieutenant ignored them all and turned to walk out from the small galley.

"We have several ship-to-ship transmatter pods. If you are unused to them, they oft-times leave one feeling disorientated."

"That's okay, we've got out own transport." Retro said as he lifted his hand up to his face to speak into his flight ring, "Henry, we need a warp..."

"Of course. To the second Vegan craft, I assume?" The holo-man's voice was calm though the Legionnaires were momentarily startled by the news that there was another craft nearby. "Where on this vessel would you like me to open a warp to?" Henry asked.

"Well...?" Retro asked the Sky-Lieutenant, "is there somewhere we need to be?"

Annach'ha smiled warmly as he responded. "The Prime Auditor will have their office within a sealed vault, there will be a waiting area outside of that."

"Will we need to wait f'r hours again?" Kid Pulsar asked, inwardly sighing at the thought of another few hours twiddling his thumbs.

"We shouldn't be kept waiting for long as this is a purely business transaction." Annach' ha replied.

<Is everything over there under control Deen?> Tyroc's message reached the team.

<We think so, I'll let you know if we need assistance, thanks Troy> Retro replied, ending the conversation.

Henry's warp opened before the team and Sky-Lieutenant Annach'ha and Lexikon coolly led the way through to the Vegan craft, followed by the rest of the team.

Mindbender gave a cursory telepathic scan as he stepped through the warp and immediately regretted it as the psi-screens in this craft were crude and quite oppressive, causing painful feedback. Okay, he thought, person to person telepathy only it is.... As he walked behind Kid Pulsar, who was both taller and broader than he was, Marmud did not see the small being that was waiting for them until the team all came to a stop. They each moved to the side, forming a semi-circle around it.

It was only knee-high with three stalks growing from the thin frame of its torso. On the end of each stalk was a small circular mouth with a ring of pointed teeth. Annach'ha and Lexikon both lowered the heads in respect to it.

"Sky-Lieutenant, why have you brought these..." It used a word that none of the team recognised though Lexikon visibly stiffened. She obviously found it offensive that this creature would call her teammates such a word.

"They are ...." Again, another unknown word,.though a small smile appeared on Lexikon's face.

"We are..." Retro began though as quickly silenced.

"Quiet, guests of a traitor." The being almost spat the words.

"You test my patience. I am no traitor. My tithe is paid and I have sought out my betrothed as royal custom dictates. Custom also dictates you show my guest's appropriate respect. If you were to give honour to your ancestors, you should apologise." The Tamaranean gave a small smile as he said this, his voice calm though there was an edge of anger beginning to show.

"You have taken leave of your senses Sky-Lieutenant!" The three small mouths all spat in return.

Marmud glanced around the room, aware that this was just posturing before Prime Auditor said, or did, whatever it was going to say or do. The room they were in was surprisingly beautiful: the walls appeared to be made from a green quartz that had iridescent streaks, while the floor and ceiling were a creamy white colour. The furnishing was sumptuous looking, more comfortable than that onboard Annach;ha's vessel anyway. The Prime Auditor obviously looked after its guests in normal circumstances.

"Come!" the voice came from an unseen speaker as the wall behind the small three-stalked being appeared to dissolve.

Before the Legionnaires was a dark chamber with a smoky glass wall. Behind it sat a Psion. There were tubes running from points all along the Prime Auditor's neck and shoulders that fed into the immense chair he sat upon. Two glowing balls of what appeared to be a luminous mist were hanging in the air at each side of him.

"Sky Lieutenant Annach'ha, you are not authorised to enter the ..." A word that again the Legionnaires, other than Lexikon, didn't recognise. "You have brought technology that we have not authorised for trade, are carrying cargo of an Ambassadorial level while in these reaches without having said status, and are most-likely in breach of several Articles of Conscription and Protocols of Family Tithe. We seek answers..." The Psion scooped some of the green mist that swirled at his side and took it to his face to breathe in.

"Prime Auditor, with the most humblest of respect, my family tithe has been paid and my conscription has finished, and I am only here to fulfil the vows made on my Eighth Yearday to ask Princess Daheenisha of the noble House Tahin if she would consent to our marriage. The craft used is personal property of my House and any Ambassadorial property taken here was an oversight in my zealousness to meet with my betrothed..."

"Hmmm..." A hard light screen appeared before the Prime Auditor and he scrolled lazily through it.

<what's goin' on?> Kid Pulsar sent out. The feedback the screeched across the telepathic matrix caused all of his teammates to flinch.

"Psi-buffers...hardcore ones. I'll set up mind-to-mind if anyone needs it." Mindbender whispered loud enough for everyone to hear. Duplicate Girl gave him a stern look for speaking, though Thirteen and Kid Pulsar both nodded their thanks for the warning and offer.

"Sky Lieutenant, it appears everything you have said is honest, to a point..." The Psion looked at the Tamaranean soldier as the hard light screen dissolved, "though you have created a treaty violation by bringing staff and your craft. In doing so you are not .."

"If I may Prime Auditor." Retro stepped forward, "my name is Deen Toro, though sometimes I'm called Retro. I am the current deputy leader of the team based on the planetoid you are currently circling. The Sky-Lieutentant has at no time shared anything other than a meal with us. It is clear his intent, as inappropriate as it may seem to expected Vegan conduct, was in no way to breach a treaty or fall foul of your laws, merely, as he said, to ask our colleague to marry him. Young love pushes even the most regimented soul to make mistakes..."

"Retro of the Legion, we know of you and your teammates. It is said that your organisation is a great force for stability within your part of the galaxy. We will overlook your breach of protocol for interrupting and let you know this: The Vegans are not interested in 'young love', only duty and service will suffice. Sky-Lieutenant Annach'ha has no legal reason for approaching you before seeking the necessary permissions..."

"He was fulfilling a Life Vow, We know that where he not to, it would be an indelible stain on his character." Lexikon's voice was surprisingly firm as she spoke up.

"Princess, you cannot..." The Psion started to respond angrily but before he could Lexikon interrupted him.

"You should address us as Your Royal Highness Princess Daheenisha, Prime Auditor, as we are the daughter of the Eternal Light that is our Most Beloved Queen, long may she reign, a true descendant to X'Hal and heir to Family Tahin. We are of most royal birth and will be treated appropriately, especially by functionaries and staff of the court." The was a tense moment of silence before she continued, though this time her tone was far friendlier. "Mistakes do happen though when passions are raised, as I'm sure you now realise. We expect your records will agree..."

"Your Royal Highness, my apologies but we cannot allow the property of Vega..."

"My fiancé and I shall leave now. Take all that does not belong directly to either his House or mine and leave once you are satisfied. Please ensure it is noted in your records that we take personal responsibility for everything you leave behind."

She took Annach'ha's hand and turned to walk away.

"We are done here Legionnaires. We will retire to our operational base now." Lexikon's voice held just a hint of satisfaction as she said this over her shoulder to her fellow Legionnaires.

None of her teammates immediately reacted; all were too stunned!

Lexikon was known as a resourceful teammate on missions though she had not opened up to any of her colleagues in any significantly interpersonal way in the twenty months since she had joined the team. Her reputation socially was of being aloof and distant. This show of political strength and fortitude to support a suitor was both surprising and exhilarating.

"Henry, we need a warp back to Second Base please." Lu said in a quiet voice.


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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 4 Oct 22)
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Sorry, I ran out of time today, so this is all for this week, but it does mean that next we get to drop in on Dreamy and a horde of zombies - admit it, it's the storyline you've all been waiting for smile

GL, I will have time on Friday to review your latest posts.

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Some thoughts on the above!

Tyroc and Thunder's discussion was a good way to touch on the situation with Lu - and we get some more confirmation that Mindbender wasn't just overreacting! I am kinda hoping this leads to Lu getting therapy actually, I think there's a lot to touch on with everything she's been through!

Lexikon giving the Prime Auditor a verbal slapdown was a good fistpump moment, though the thing that stood out more there was finding out she's been with the Legion twenty months...I always try to avoid locking myself into specific timeframes, it's interesting seeing how other people manage the passing of time with their writing!

And yes, I am definitely looking forward to this Zombie Plague! smile

Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 4 Oct 22)
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Harbi, more great stuff, will read in chunks as I am on holiday,

I love how you are taking an idea you introduced and exploring pros and cons. Love Tyroc even more, considering he brought up some great points re building bridges in the team, observations re Lu and Mindbender, and that it is indeed not only all in Mindbender’s head. Nice nod back to Poltergeist too, as I recall Tyroc saw the results of the manipulation firsthand. Really looking forward to seeing where this goes next!

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Also whoo, loved Lexikon stepping in and making the Prime Auditor shut up - after others like Retro tried. Also LOL at Lu glaring at Marmud, she does have problems, as if other more experienced Legionnaires haven’t been a bit indiscreet before (and Marmud’s speaking was not even that bad? Whybdidnt she glare at Kid Pulsar?)

Nice resolution here and am looking forward to the royal wedding!

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Harmonia - Senior Team member, Professor Harmonia Li of Earth - manipulation of the natural environment
Sister Eclipse - of Rhoohanisett iii - durability, heightened senses, physical possession of any living being
Intern:
Tesseract - Sar Jerash Mor Toark of Mars - access to intra-dimensional space
Science Police Liaison:
Mama Tank - Science Police Lieutenant Lolla Grayfrau of Badenhoff vi - cybernetics giving incredible strength, invulnerability, AI manipulation


The warp opened into the centre of a platform surrounded by large dark buildings.

The team could hear noises from within the dark buildings that surrounded them. A few cries and the sound of smashing objects. There were obvious signs of destruction; torn up metal sheeting, blaster scorch marks on buildings, broken glass strewn across the platform.

There was a group of over a hundred uninfected settlers five hundred metres from the team holed up within a large cargo craft with lights blazing from around the edges of it. This was their last refuge and as it appeared the central power had been turned off plunging the satellite into darkness, they had wisely lit up their surrounds as they took shelter.

Sister Eclipse could taste human blood on the air and there were definite notes of pheromonal fear lingering alongside it, but she kept that information to herself.

The team knew they would need to get on board and offer their support, though their scans had shown fourteen other settlers that had no symptoms of the virus also hidden around this satellite that they would need to rescue. All of them were aware that this might not be an easy task.

Harmonia levitated above the team and hovered over towards the cargo vessel. The team followed, though Mama Tank stayed at the rear watching the buildings behind them.

"Hello!" Harmonia had activated her flight ring loudhailer app and her voice echoed around the metal structures, "My name is Harmonia Li, I am with the Legion. We wish to assist you. Will you let two of my colleagues on board your craft while I take another colleague to search for anyone else needing assistance? We have medical supplies and once we are certain you are all uninfected, we can take you to safety."

There were shouts and crashes from behind them. A loud cry, like a beast might howl in the middle of the night that echoed around the space. It was taken up by other voices from within the buildings all around them.

<We will have company in about a minute> Mama Tank sent to her team. Her cybernetics had picked up motion and heat approaching them in the darkness.

A whooshing sound indicated a large panel halfway up the side of the cargo ship had creaked open and voice shouted for them to hurry up.

"Thank you." Harmonia said through the loudhailer while to her teammates she sent <Sister Eclipse, Tesseract, take care. We will be back shortly>

"If we can get to a system interface point, I'll see what I can do to help about the lighting and ensuring the air flow is running for Orion when he delivers his package." Lieutenant Grayfrau said as she walked underneath Harmonia who hovered ten feet in the air. As they stepped outside of the light that the cargo ship was directing at the concourse floor, the Science Police Lieutenant switched on her belt buckle spotlight function giving them a cone of white light. Somehow it made the darkness around them seem even darker.

"Lola, are you able to make a fire? Any size will do." Harmonia asked.

"Easy." Mama Tank took a small blaster from one of her belt pouches and pointed it at a pile of debris. A pencil line thin beam shot out and the debris was ablaze in a second. Harmonia reached out her hand and the fire leapt into the air and spun into a streak that circled several feet above the ancient elemental's head.

"My thanks... I much prefer this more natural lightning." Harmonia said as she floated above her Science Police colleague and led them towards a building where their sensors said there were five uninfected settlers. It was also the building where they had heard the initial howl when they had arrived.

Sister Eclipse flew through the gap the opened panel had made in the upper side of the cargo craft, closely followed by the intern Tesseract. Almost immediately the panel slammed closed behind them. There were a crowd of settlers, several of them heavily armed, stood in a semi-circle around them, weapons pointing towards the Legionnaires. They also held torches that they shone into the two new arrivals faces.

Sister Eclipse stepped forward, raising her arms. "Good people, I..."

"Where are the Legionnaires?"
"This is wrong..."
"Who are you freaks?"
"Is this a trick?"

The group did not back down and kept their lights and weapons trained on the Legionnaire and the intern.

Tesseract touched her hand to her sternum and as she pulled it away it appeared as if a medi-kit appeared in her hand before her.

"Does anyone need medical help? We're here to help you..." The intern said, her tone didn't show just how scared she was feeling at that moment but she was desperate to present something to the armed group that would hopefully make them more friendly.

"I recognise that one..." A woman pushed through the armed group and walked towards Sister Eclipse, "I know you, you save my Tomasz's life after the flare, dincha? You were with that Sistahood..."

"That's right," Sister Eclipse's reptilian face broke into a smile. "And you were part of the engineering team, I remember how brave you all were."

"Right!" The woman turned back to face the armed mob. "...stop yer posturing. This one is good an' if she says she's with the Legion now I believe her. Let 'em do their job and get us outta here."

The weapons were quickly put away and the group came closer asking questions about what the Legion were doing to help. Tesseract summoned half a dozen medi-kits to share with the people as they approached, and she even remembered some of her Academy training and introduced herself as she handed the kits out and asked the names of those that did speak to her. Sister Eclipse meanwhile had asked if there were any within the cargo craft that needed urgent care, and was thankful when she was told that other than a broken limb or two - easily fixed with the provisions they had brought - there was nothing major to deal with though several mentioned they had run out of water.

<Tesseract> Sister Eclipse sent across the telepathic grid <do you have drinking water within your...>

<Of course! I emptied two big water tanks getting ready for this, just in case. Thats a basic!> the snappy response.

<I will ask the settlers to bring containers to you then, thank you for your assistance. You are a true asset to this mission>

<Phh! You only figured that out now?>

Sister Eclipse smiled as she saw the intern walk towards a young couple carrying a wide brimmed basin. Tesseract held out her hand and a stream of fresh water spung from her palm to fill the container. For all of her attitude, Sister Eclipse thought, she was grateful that the intern had chosen to join Hope World as Tesseract really was an asset on their mission. As much as the girl from Mars hid her heart behind her unkind words, Tesseract's actions showed her true and much kinder nature.

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Titan - Nasir N’Cube of Titan - alpha-level telepathy
Southern Lights of Starhaven - spaceflight, magic user
Intern:
Dragon Lass - Mari Baertling of Rimbor - enhanced strength, durability, echolocation and flight
Science Police Liaison:
Magnetix - Science Police Officer Jooli Esra of Braal - manipulation of magnetic fields

The team were aware that there were sixty desperate people hiding behind a makeshift barrier of pallets and agri-equipment so Titan and Magnetix approached cautiously.

While they did Southern Lights led the intern Dragon Lass into the air and both activated their search lights on their belt buckles and swooped through the fields of corn and wheat, small orchards and hydroponic units within this dome searching for any others that may not be within the barriers. Mari closed her eyes and opened her mouth: she had been given extensive training with her echo-location skill and she used that as she swooped across the fields. The high frequency sound bouncing off her surroundings gave her a decent mental map so that she easily avoided trees and tall posts and pillars despite the darkness. Her echo-location also allowed her to differentiate between the hardness of objects the sounds reflected off, meaning she was able to quite quickly find a young girl trying to hide behind a toppled barrow.

<Southern Lights, here!> she excitedly sent as she circled the area using her spotlight to pinpoint the hidden child..

The winged mystic approached the child, his mystic senses giving her the all-clear from being infected by the virus. Southern Lights landed lightly in the dirt three feet from her and bent over towards the terrified child.

"We are Legionnaires here to help you, do you want me to carry you to your friends?" His voice was soft as he held his hand out to her. The girl looked up at him, her face tear streaked, her expression was confused though she nodded mutely. The Legionnaire gently picked her up and flapped his mighty wings to take them into the air. She yelped and her eyes went wide though when she saw the smile on the mystic's face, she grinned back at him and wrapped her arms around his neck in a hug. In seconds he had her back with the settlers, several of whom immediately recognised the child and rushed to help, thanking Southern Lights as they did.

Titan stood with a group to the side, obviously discussing their plans, while the science Police Officer from Braal they had taken to call Magnetix was using her magnetic abilities to strengthen the barrier around the group, much to the relief of many of them.

"Southern Lights..." Nasir called out to the winged mystic, beckoning him to join the group, "Officer Esra and I will search the agri-domes for anyone else that is uninfected if you and Mari can get these folks to Hope World safely while we get the others away."

"Of course." He replied.

Dragon Lass swooped around the dome, her senses were perfect for these conditions, and she was fast and strong enough to deal with most situations so Titan sent her a quick message to reassure the intern that she was doing a great job. He then told her that he was taking Magnetix to find any other settlers that they needed rescuing from within the adjoning hydroponic zones. Mari responded by thanking the deputy leader and wishing him luck. Titan liked Dragon Lass, she was focussed when she needed to be and despite her insecurities could be relied upon to do what she needed to for a job to get done. Several of the settlers were watching the intern's belt spotlight in the darkness as she seemed to glide across the crops they tended, obviously amazed that she seemed so assured in the dim light.

After Titan had shaken the hand of the man in front of him and led the Braalian SPO out into the darkness of the agri-dome to locate any other uninfected settlers, Southern Lights took the time to look around at the huddled and desperate people and one glowed... they were infected.

<Titan, one of these people has the virus>

<Ah... Can you get them away from the others and hit them with a cure ampoule?>

<I will try. There is a spell I can use that may help>

<Okay, good luck> and with that Titan ended the telepathic conversation.

Southern Lights palmed one of the small circular pads that the team had been given with the cure to the virus to use if they had the chance and thought about a couple of spells that he could use on the settler. Dream Girl had told them that the cure was not pleasant for the sufferer so the young mystic was planning on making this as pleasant as possible for the settler - they were suffering enough!

A group of half a dozen settlers were curled up behind two agri-seed dispensers that had been lain on their sides. As he got closer Sothern Lights could see that they were all elderly, and obviously scared. A heavy set man sat in the middle, sweating and clearly in some discomfort.

"Hello. my name is Southern Lights and I need your assistance. Please come with me now." He pointed to the man who groaned as he started to stand up. A few of those around him protested, saying he had been injured, but the compulsion spell ensured that the infected man did as he was asked. This was a very minor enchantment that would usually only last a couple of minutes but that was more than enough time for Southern Lights to do what was needed.

"I will put this on your arm and you will feel better. Please hold your hand out." Southern Lights had shown him the small disc with the cure in it, and as the elderly man was compelled by the magics the Legionnaire had whispered, the infected man held his arm out. It was clear that he had been scratched along the inside of his forearm and had been trying to hide it by holding his arm tightly against his torso. Several of the settlers noticed and quickly backed away. Southern Lights gently whispered a sleep spell as he pushed the disc onto the man's bicep. The older man started to struggle before collapsing with a loud thump onto the ground. Two settlers ran over and pulled guns on the fallen man.

"No, he has been given the cure and in two hours will be clear... let him sleep. And as no-one else is infected that I can see..." Southern Lights glanced around at the scared people huddled behins makeshift barriers, "I believe it is time to get you all to safety."

The winged mystic floated into the air and raised his hand to his face, activating the loud hailer function on his flight ring.

"Please listen, I will call a warp to our base. If you wish refuge while we deal with the infected, please just walk through and my colleagues will assist." With that he switched off the loudhailer and called on Henry to open a warp to take these people to the safety of Hope World.

In the darkness from a connecting tunnel, they heard a howl.

"Let's hurry." Southern Lights added.

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Dream Girl- Team leader - Nura Nal of Naltor - precognition
Star Boy - Senior Team member, Thom Kallor of Xanthu - stellar mass transference
Intern:
Orion -Science Police Cadet Tw'gg of H'lven - tracking skills, agility, enhanced senses and awareness of flaws or weaknesses
Science Police Liaison Team:
Groovy - Science Police Officer Droo Vri of Daxam - incredible strength, speed, stamina, senses, laser vision, space flight, invulnerability

Nura took immediate charge of the situation.

They had warped into the central concourse of the mega-mall at the heart of the satellite. It was in darkness with the only light being an off ruddy glow from the nebula above them leaking through the transparent dome many storeys above and the temperature was only a degree or two above freezing. There were signs of terrible actions having taken place all around them; scattered debris, broken glass, stains that looked like blood in the dim lim. The noises they heard were animalistic, threatening, coming from the groups of dark figures that had obviously seen the Legionnaires arrive and were coming towards them.

The Legionnaires knew from their scans that there were several hundred of the uninfected barricaded inside two stores as well as smaller pockets scattered throughout.

There were also several hundred of their infected neighbours outside each store raging to get in and at least the three times that number throughout this satellite..

<Everyone, activate your belt's spotlight, they won't come close if you shine it at them. Thom, if you could fell that group> She pointed towards the largest group, <Groovy, be a dear and direct that super chilling breath of yours to the others to scatter them please. We need to get into those stores to make sure the people within are okay>

Star Boy stretched both hands out and his tell-tale energy signature streamed out towards the largest group of infected settlers. Within seconds they were all flattened to the floor as the Xanthuan mutant moved a miniscule fraction of the mass from the nearby nebula. As he did, the Daxamite they had taken to call Groovy flew around the space at speed freezing the feet and legs of infected settlers to the ground with his breath. Dream Girl and Orion flew across to the nearest barricade.

"Hello in there, I'm Dream Girl from the Legion. We're here to help. Can we come in?" The loudhailer function on her flight ring meant her voice echoed around the mall. Even as part of the barricade shifted and cautious settlers peered out, they could all hear screams of rage and hunger from infected residents alerted to the Legionnaires presence.

In seconds part of the makeshift barrier was pushed aside and Dream Girl and Orion quickly flew through.

<Thom, Groovy, I need you two gents to stay out here and contain any problems. Orion and I have work to do inside> Nura sent as she vanished into the barricaded store.

Star Boy swung his hips back and forward so the spotlight from his belt buckle would illuminate any of the infected settlers if they tried to cross the concourse. Groovy arrived at his side in a blur of speed and smiled.

"We got this, haven't we?"

"Yeah son, I think we ..."

There was a bang as a blast struck the Daxamite on the shoulder and spun away.

"Blaster fire!" He said before vanishing at hyper-velocity. Thom looked up, aware that if the SPO hadn't arrived when he did then the chances were the Xanthuan would have been shot. Groovy was flying around the mezzanine floors of the mall that towered above them using his freeze breath to create barriers of ice.

"Zombies with guns! Wow, this is the best adventure." Science Police Officer Droo Vri called out cheerfully as he flew upwards to continue creating these frozen barriers.

"Oh, look what I found..." Groovy said as he deposited a young man on the ground in front of Star Boy. " He tried to shoot you." A snapped blaster fell from the Daxamite's hand.

"Don't kill me!" The boy protested, clearly terrified.

"Ah, we're Legionnaires here to help, son, now get up and tell us what's happening here." Thom sounded a lot sterner than he felt. He was actually relieved that is was just a scared kid who had taken the shot as the idea of an infected mob with guns was terrifying. While the young man got to his feet Groovy vanished at speed and crashed a ceiling down about three hundred metres away in a hall that led to this open space.

<there's a mob coming and thought best to delay them> Groovy sent, his emotional subtext was a radiant happiness.

Thom had been a Legionnaire since he was sixteen and had witnessed and participated in an awful lot of truly outrageous events but as he watched how quickly and efficiently the Daxamite dealt with this threat he realised that despite his protestations to the opposite he would never get bored of it! And with that thought he heard a roar of a crowd in the darkness to his left... there was a mob approaching fast from one of the side entrances.

Well, he thought as he turned towards the approaching hoarde and held his hands out towards them, Groovy doesn't deserve all the fun!

One of the first things Nura did when she had entered the store was ask for directions to the main pumps for the satellites ventilation systems. She explained that the schematics they had didn't make sense so she assumed there had been an upgrade. There was a group of engineers present who explained that after the flare had destroyed part of the satellite a couple of years before they had to rebuild many of the primary systems. Orion called up a hard light schematic and the engineers pointed at a route that the intern could take to get where they needed to be to release the cure for the Daluvonnian Red Eye Plague.

Orion scanned the map that the residents had proposed and scratched his chin. The intern blew out a big breath before asking if they knew a route that wouldn't take him through any of the main walkways or intersections. The engineers all looked momentarily surprised before they realised that the intern was not one of the physically powerful Legionnaires that would clear a path through the zombie hordes with a wave of his paw so they spent a further minute working out a route that would switch between small passages and the ventilation system itself. After they had agreed on the route that would most likely get him safely to the ventilation hub the intern loaded it into his flight ring database feeling a lot more confident that he might complete the mission intact.

<Dream Girl, I'm going now, good luck with the evacuation> he sent.

Nura waved to him and sent a quick message wishing him luck before turning back to deal with the scared settlers that had crowded around her.

Orion thanked the engineers again and scurried up a ventilation shaft... he was grateful that in the darkness no-one could see how scared he felt.


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Hey guys, thank you for your kind words above, they are appreciated.

yeah, I think the moral is don't mess with Vegan princesses laugh I'll touch on Lexikon and Annan'ha's future next time as I start to finish off the zombies-in-space story.

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nice stuff, Harbi! as usual, you mix action and characterization so well

re Tesseract, I wonder and apologies if you had already established it, can she use her Tesseract space as a warp gate? or is it strictly for storing objects (i.e., only one entrance and exit point)?

interesting bit re Harmonia, that she would need Mama Tank to create a fire for her to manipulate. it also helps limit her, she's already so dang powerful

ah, thankfully someone in the group had a cool head. It makes sense that newer Legionnaires and interns are not as well known as the more established Legionnaires, I like that you reference this element in your stories

Sister Eclipse is really a saint... I would have been tempted to snap at Tesseract myself, so I admire the Sister for both her patience and her seeing the inner goodness... but whew, I am also glad Harmonia put Tesseract in her place last installment!

also really love how you capture the fear and confusion the uninfected must be feeling!

ooh a compulsion spell, interesting one. I wonder if the team has discussed the ethics of that - perfectly justified in this case of course, and I trust Southern Lights. just brainstorming here smile

thank you for referrencing how Star Boy's powers originally worked; taking mass from stars and giving them to others! his powers have evolved in the Reboot so I just run with the new gravity control bit, but it's also nice to see the original powers!

love how Groovy is just having so much fun. and I agree with Thom, zombies with guns would be terrifying!

love how the engineers worked together to help Orion find a path!

whoo, this is shaping up to be quite an epic mission for Hope World, love it!

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Yay, more! I have been looking forward to the zombie team's little outing!

- I don't know if I've ever mentioned this before but I love Mama Tank's codename laugh

- Good job showing the creepiness of the situation, with the beast-like cries and the surrounding darkness!

- I like the settlers not recognising Sister Eclipse and Tesseract, and Tesseract trying to hide her very reasonable fear at being surrounded by a bunch of people with guns...it was a nice character bit for both of them as well that Sister Eclipse sees past Tesseract's facade to realise there is a good person in there. It showcases Sister Eclipse's empathy nicely and also shows that Tesseract does have a good heart despite being an annoying squaj tongue

- Southern Lights has become a really solid member of your team! It has been really fun watching him develop!

- Dreamy being Dreamy is always fun to see - instantly takes charge of the situation in the smartest way while still coming off as vaguely flighty...I liked the mention of Star Boy drawing mass from the nearby nebula too smile

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"Zombies with guns! Wow, this is the best adventure." Science Police Officer Droo Vri called out cheerfully as he flew upwards to continue creating these frozen barriers.


- I like the Daxamite enjoying himself; when you're not a morose stick in the mud like Mon-El it must be fun having Superman-like powers in a much weaker universe (and I like the juxtaposition with Thom's reaction as well)

- Orion is brave heading off on his own like that! Let's hope it doesn't come back to bite him as it were!

This is good stuff Harbi, looking forward to more zombies in space!

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Thanks guys, really grateful for your very kind words. I think zombie movies are my least favourite genre of film or TV so I'm pushing myself to write this laugh

IB, Tesseract's dimensional pocket is entirely storage and retrieval, I need to keep limits on my team as they are pretty buff already. and, speaking of such, I can't remember Harmoonia ever creating stuff, ony using what was around her so I'm going to stick with that as her limitation. Sister eclipse is a saint, isn't she? I may have to concoct some story where she loses her cool now laugh

Raz, Mama Tank was a nickname of a colleague of mine about ten years ago and I always loved it - she did too btw, she reveled in it at times, using it as a good excuse to push into queues or the like. She was a real character, and my MT is very loosely based on her. Southern Lights has become a bit of a favourite to write, his magics are a lot gentler than Dragonmage or Glorith's so I don't feel he can just wave his fingers and a solution appear, he needs to think about it. Still, he has had quite a bit of screen time lately so I may give him a rest for a story or two after his.

More next week when we'll catch up with Lexikon and her fiancé and I hope you'll like my plans for them, and we'll of course carry on dealing with these perky space zombies... eek!

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Totally agree re limitations, Harbi, else things won’t be fun tongue oooh an angry Sister Eclipse would be a sight to see!

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Tyroc – Team Leader - Troy Stewart of Marzal city pocket dimension - sonic control
Retro - Deputy Leader - Deen Toro of Ventura - limited reversal of personal timeline
Duplicate Girl - Senior Team member, Luornu Durgo of Carggg - creation of multiple identical duplicates
Lexikon - Princess Daheenisha of Tamaran iv - enhanced speed, strength, durability, flight, omni-linguist


Duplicate Girl and Retro sat in the Second Base Senior Team meeting room with Tyroc.

"We don't know anything about him Troy, we can't just have him hang about like a lost puppy..."

"It's what Drinchnar did, an' he turned out fine." Tyroc responded with a small smile. Lu gave a small laugh before shrugging. The three Legionnaires were discussing what they could do about Lexikon's fiancé Sky-Lieutenant Annach'ha now that he was remaining within the United Planets and presumably with the team.

"We know he has military experience and Lexi said he was a 'X'halkin', a descendant of their goddess, so he may have abilities too. I'd suggest a beginner's course at the Academy at the very least." Retro said this softly and the two senior teammates nodded in agreement.

"I feel we're missing a trick here to be honest." Duplicate Girl said, "not that an induction into the Legion via the Academy isn't a good idea, but still... he's literally just left the military. Perhaps, and hear me out here guys, we could encourage him to become a tutor? I mean, after he's gone through a basic training module obviously. He must have combat experience and would bring a level of discipline that our Science Police trainees might respect... what do you think?"

"Okay... I get that, so let's speak with Lexi and Annach'ha to gauge it. If it's a workable plan we'll need to get Rokk on side too." Tyroc said before lifting his hand to his face. He activated his flight ring comm circuit and asked Lexikon and the Sky-Lieutenant join them in the Senior Team meeting room.

Within minutes the two Tamaraneans entered the room. The three Legionnaires present could all immediately see a lightness about Lexikon's body language that she had never exhibited before. The golden princess was clearly very happy that her fiancé had joined her on second Base.

After they had sat down Tyroc explained the discussion the three senior members had just had and asked if it was an acceptable solution - they could continue their relationship while both would have roles to fulfil within the team. Annach'ha smiled broadly and thanked the three Legionnaires sat opposite, saying that he had been involved in the training of new recruits to the Vegan Fleet so this would be a good use of talents he already had. Lu smiled as she insisted that he take a month course at the Academy to get him into the way of how the Legion worked, just in case Tamaranean training wasn't entirely appropriate to the United Planets. She ended by reaffirming that the skillset required to pass the academy training would be similar even if not all the processes were the same.

Tyroc asked the Sky-Lieutenant if he had any abilities beyond the norm that could help with training recruits. Annach'ha smiled as he answered.

"My family are of X'hal lineage and I have been extensively trained in the use of my abilities..."

"So, you're strong and tough like Lexikon?" Retro asked.

"Oh, no, I definitey have other skills though." With that he pointed his finger towards cup on the table and a blast of energy shot out and exploded the ceramic container.

"Whoah!" Tyroc said as he got to his feet.

"Please, my love, let's not destroy things." Lexikon put a hand onto her fiancé's arm, her tone was gentle though it was a small shift in her expression that told Annach'ha that he had over-stepped a line.

"My apologies. I can absorb solar radiation and release it in blasts like that." The Sky-Lieutenant said as he quickly stood up and began cleaning up the mess his exhibition had caused.

"So... you can blast things, anything else?" Lu appeared quite cool as she scrutinised him.

"Ah... well, I believe as a race we're a bit stronger than humans, have our language absorption ability and I can do this..."

He placed a hand upon Lu's shoulder.

<My mind-speech needs physical contact to work>

"You okay Lu?" Tyroc asked, his expression serious as his eyes darted from the sky-Lieutenant and the Cargggite.

"He has tactile telepathy." She said as she turned to the team leader. "So... A good mix of skills. You would be an asset to the team if you decide to take up a post in the Academy." Lu smiled as she said this to the Sky-Lieutenant. The Tamaranean would be a great addition to the tutors over there, she thought; he was disciplined and had a range of abilities too. He might need a bit of moulding to fit into the Legion ethos but she had no doubts that he was keen to create a new life here. Also, she had to admit, like all of his people he was fairly easy on the eye so the students were more likely to turn up to the classes he ran.

"Okay... I'm going to speak to Rokk and see what we can do. Do you have any questions Annach'ha?" Lu stood up as she said this.

"I may have some as the training progresses, though for now I only have one: there is a custom amongst your Legion that I take another name... you call Princess Daheenisha by Lexikon, so what would you call me?"

"Well... as no-one else is usin' it right now I think you could be our new Sun Boy." Tyroc said as he stood up and held his hand out for the Tamaranean to shake.

"That is a good name, I think." Annach'ha said with a broad grin as he stood up.

"Well, it's agreed then. Welcome to the Legion, Sun Boy." Troy said as he shook the athletic Tamaranean's hand.

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Hope World mission - the edge of the Wilderness of the Sassanaboan Nebula

Orion -Science Police Cadet Tw'gg of H'lven - tracking skills, agility, enhanced senses and awareness of flaws or weaknesses


Orion turned off the spotlight from his belt buckle as he reached the ventilation shaft.

The intern from H'lven knew that his natural senses were more than efficient in the dark; his sight touching upon both ultra-violet and infra-red sections of the spectrum, while his hearing and sense of smell were much better than a human's. He also knew that stealth would be his best approach so having a shiny beam of light blasting out from his belt wouldn't help any.

He had memorised the map that the engineers had come up with and ran through the vents as fast as he could. There were quite a lot of old cobwebs and at least half a dozen small rodents that squeaked angrily at him but none of these slowed him down.

He stopped at a junction of four airways and called up a hard light screen from his flight ring to double check he was going the right way. He could see that he was only a third of the way but felt like he had been travelling for at least an hour! Right, he thought, let's show the Legionnaires that he deserved his internship... and with that he scurried along the vent to his left. He could hear rough scrambling underneath him and some guttural noises so activated his flight ring to tear off as quickly as he could - the risk of being trapped in one of these vents scared him! The two pouches he carried with him that had containers with the cure for this awful virus that needed to be placed into the central ventilation pump rattled against him. He sped up so the noise wouldn't attract attention.

As he flew through a ventilation shaft, he could see the section he was approaching was damaged: the thin metal had been crumpled and was bending downwards. Before he flew down the tube the intern stopped - there was a schlurping noise with the odd scuffing sound and his acute sense of smell alerted him to the stick of unwashed humans and blood... there was someone down there! Orion crept downwards in silent paws.

The ventilation shaft had been ripped off the ceiling, snapped so the end of it dangled down to hang about three feet from the ground. Orion knew he would need to get out at the bottom of it and find the other side if he had a chance of getting to the main ventilation pumps.

Just before he reached the bottom Orion willed the distorter on his belt to 'Hide' mode.

As he had crept down the tube the intern could clearly hear four people stumbling about and he knew even before he peeked out that they would be infected. The nearest that he could smell was less than three feet away. Just as he reached the very bottom of the hanging tube something heavy banged against it and a slurred voice grunted something unintelligible.

Orion froze for a split second before instinct took over and he shot out of the pipe into the darkness.

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Titan - Nasir N’Cube of Titan - alpha-level telepathy
Magnetix - Science Police Officer Jooli Esra of Braal - manipulation of magnetic fields


Both the Legionnaire from Titan and the Science Police Officer from Braal had extended their abilities outwards.

While they both had their belt buckle spotlights streaming bright beams pf white light in front of them, they were both fully aware that they really didn't know his environment and it would be easy to hide from them in this darkness.

Usually, SPO Esra didn't mind being shorter than standard, as it meant people would underestimate her, though in this environment where there were fields of tall grasses all around, she knew that if it weren't for her flight ring she would be at a total disadvantage. As she hovered six feet in the air at the side of the Legionnaire, the young Braalian extended a magnetic bubble around them - she was aware of anything metal that came into contact with the edge of the bubble and, she hoped it would alert her if anyone were hiding or attempting to sneak up on them.

The Legionnaire below her walked confidently along a pathway between the crop fields and Jooli knew better than to distract him as his prodigious psychic abilities scanned their surrounds.

"There’re half a dozen of the infected ahead of us... one o'clock about thirty meters, if I draw them out can you get ampules of the cure on them?" Nasir had spoken softly, but in the silent darkness his voice was a surprise. Jooli magnetically levitated six ampules from the pouches on her belt as she answered her affirmative.

"Okay, their minds are a bit hazy what with the virus hi-jacking their motor functions but I think if I give them a poke..."

Two seconds later there were several loud howls and six people stood up from the corn field where they had been hiding from the spot lights. The infected continued to howl and screech though were unable to move out of the spotlights as Titan took hold of their minds.

"Their minds are difficult to manage... I won't be able to hold them for long." Nasir said as he concentrated on the infected group before them. Jooli smiled as she hovered by his side. Her magnetic abilities had sent six of the small ampules that carried the antidote spinning through the darkness towards the group that had just sprung up. As both the Legionnaire and the SPO had their searchlight beams on full and pointed towards the group she could clearly see hem to direct an ampule towards each on of the infected. There were thud! sounds as the antidote ampules smacked into the infected.

"Well, that was satisfyingly easy." the short Braalian said.

"yeah.... though I wonder if it worked in our favour."

As the Titanian Legionnaire spoke they heard several howls from around the huge agri-dome; the infected had called out to their own and now the scattered mob were coming for them.

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Harmonia - Senior Team member, Professor Harmonia Li of Earth - manipulation of the natural environment
Mama Tank - Science Police Lieutenant Lolla Grayfrau of Badenhoff vi - cybernetics giving incredible strength, invulnerability, AI manipulation


There had been a couple of small groups of infected settlers approach them.

Mama Tank had set the brightness of the spotlights on her belt buckle to its brightest setting, and this kept the infected groups backed away.

Their flight ring scanners had alerted the two women that there were eight uninfected settlers holed up in a side room, thirty metres from the main concourse where they currently stood. Lola had scanned the area and found the room where these settlers were hiding was down a side corridor though there were several large barriers in their way - broken furniture and doors, cabinets and chairs, torn down fencing and solid looking posts, and behind that were two automatic blasters rigged up to shoot anything that got too close.

"I can overwrite the blasters control matrix if you keep the mobs away." The Science Police Officer said as she called up a hard-light screen from the cybernetics in her left arm.

"Be careful please, the settlers will be scared."

"Uh huh..." Lola Grayfrau muttered as she walked into the barricaded corridor. There were crunching noises as she tore through the barriers in her way. Several large objects were hurled out of the corridor, landing with a crash. As she approached the settlers, Mama Tank scanned for any signals indicating a communication device she could contact them through.

Harmonia Li had levitated above the entrance to the corridor and stretched her arms out. As she did, the thin ribbon of flame she had hovering above her head stretched out and split into two before streaking off and landing at either side of the entrance to the corridor. Both roared upwards creating a wall of flame that threw light and heat along the concourse. Harmonia concentrated on keeping the flaming walls high, well aware that the virus hijacked the more primitive parts of the infected settler's brains. And fire was something all primitive brains feared, so Harmonia hoped that these flaming walls would deter any of the sick to attack them while they rescued the uninfected. The ancient elemental was also aware that with the sudden light and roar of the flames she had just announced their presence to every infected person on this satellite...

Mama Tank had found an open comms link.

"Hello there, I'm Lola Grayfrau from the Science Police. I'm here with the Legion to get you to safety. Can you tell me if there is anyone needing medical help with you?" After she had sent the message, she used her cybernetics to access the control matrix of the two blasters that had been propped up on the wall twenty-five feet in front of her. She had accessed the schematics as she got close and knew that they were set to fire if she moved any closer.

"Get away from the doors!" A voice shouted through the comm unit, "we don't want you here, find your own place to hide."

"I'm not going to hide, and I'm not going away. We're here to help." As she replied she switched off the auto-shoot order in the blasters. Mama Tank strode forward, casually battering the barricades out of her way. There was one final mass of broken furniture before a tall steel door. Lola pulled this final barricade apart before she knocked on the door.

"Now, you don't think one of those poor souls that have the virus would knock, do you?" There was an obvious edge of humour in her voice as she spoke into the open comm link. There was silence for five long seconds before she heard what she imagined were large tumblers and bolt move within the door. It creaked as it moved open and a bright light shone through the crack.

"Do you need any medical help?" Lola asked. "C'mon, Science Police and the Legion... we're here to help and we can give aid if you need it." Her face broke into a wide grin.

"She's safe!" A voice shouted, and she heard several people cheer.

"Okay, now I've already asked this but... seriously... do any of you need medical assistance? Once you let me know we'll get you to safety." Lola gave a wide grin again as she said this, happy that this small group hadn't been too difficult to persuade that they were here to help.

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Orion -Science Police Cadet Tw'gg of H'lven - tracking skills, agility, enhanced senses and awareness of flaws or weaknesses

There were four infected settlers in the room.

As the young intern slid out of the broken ventilation shaft, he smacked into the leg of one of them, who roared and quickly reached down to grab him.

Orion twisted out of the way and quickly looked around the room. The infected settler he had crashed into was carrying an arm... yes, he thought, it was definitely a torn off arm of another person bleeding onto the floor, and it appeared the other three infected settlers were trying to take it from them. He scurried between the legs of one and scampered under a nearby table. The four infected settlers all turned towards him and two lurched forward, kneeling down as they approached to reach under the table. Orion had a momentary panic, his instincts telling him to flee. For a second he froze until his training kicked in.

Tw'gg knew he was no physical match for the infected settlers, but they needed to get their hands on him first! He turned off the distorter and willed the spotlight function on his belt buckle to flash its brightest beam towards them. As it erupted in light the infected settlers stumbled backwards, colliding with the other two in the room. Orion quickly switched it off and scrambled out from underneath the table and took to the air.

One of the settlers reached out and clawed at the air, desperate to grab the intern. Orion swerved and easily dodged before turning again and barrelling into that settler to slam him into the two behind him. He quickly flew up to the ceiling and took stock again, his breathing was ragged but he was proud that he had managed to control himself to deal with the situation. He looked around and saw where the other side of the ventilation shaft was...

Even as he had this thought a hand grabbed his tail and pulled him down - he hadn't noticed the fourth settler was substantially taller than the others so could easily reach him at the ceiling. Orion twisted and willed the spotlight to shine straight into the face of the infected man. He let go of the intern and stumbled backwards, tripping over the settler that was behind him.

Orion activated the hide function on the distorter and flew to a dark corner of the ceiling to take stock of the situation. As he took several deep breaths, he realised that he had dropped one of the two capsules that contained the concentrated antidote that he needed to get to the main ventilation pump. He desperately looked around the room and finally spotted it under the table where he had first hid. Two of the infected settlers fighting over the bloody arm that he had seen earlier close to the table while the other two were on the floor, scrambling back to their feet nearer the centre of the room. Tw'gg took a deep breath and darted down under the table and grabbed the capsule. It was about half the size of his head so he clutched at it tightly and flew out from under the table.

In front of him were the two fighting infected settlers, directly underneath the ventilation shaft he needed to get into. Orion balled himself up and rammed into the back of the closest of the fighting men, knocking him flying into the one that held onto the bloody arm. They tripped over the two that were on their knees behind them and howled in rage!

Orion flew up into the broken end of the ventilation shaft and quickly glanced down at the room below: The four infected settlers were fighting amongst themselves on the floor, no longer focussed on trying to grab him. The fox-like intern gave a small chuckle to himself as he flew along the ventilation shaft towards the main pump where he could finish his task and release the cure to the damned virus into the satellites ventilation systems.


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yay more good stuff! ooh, Lexikon's fiance is joining the Academy, so cool! and I like Lu's idea to make him a tutor - after all, he does have military experience, joining as a student might be deemed insulting

so nice to see Lexikon in so much love

oooh, starbolts! or at least solar radiation. Heh at Lexikon telling her hubby not to smash things...

ooh, tactile telepathy, cool

heh at all Tamaraneans generally being attractive. will they give the Naltorians a run for their money?

oooh a new Sun Boy... is it a good idea? what will Dirk think?

I'm also hoping that this meeting will soon lead into Troy talking to Lu about Mindbender and her overall behavior, you can tell I am super invested in that plotline tongue

more great scenes re the Hope World mission, I love how you split the team up into pairs to show a lot of characterization. and go Orion, seriously impressive!

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"Please, my love, let's not destroy things." Lexikon put a hand onto her fiancé's arm, her tone was gentle though it was a small shift in her expression that told Annach'ha that he had over-stepped a line.
hahaha this got a laugh out of me, and Annach'ha cleaning up his mess as well...shades of every couple where one of them is a bit more rambunctious than the other one laugh

Considering how Starfire generally uses her language absorption ability, I half-thought Annach'ha's little display of tactile telepathy was gonna end up being much more of a faux pas...Lu acknowledging that he's a hottie was a fun bit too!

Sun Boy! It certainly fits him power-wise, I wonder what kind of reception it's gonna get from some of the old-school Legion?

I have been looking forward to Orion's little trek through the vents!

Harmonia's approach with the flames was clever, but I really love the way Mama Tank introduced herself! I dig her!

Orion did really well, considering he's just an intern and a little guy compared to the zombies! Good for him!

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Hey IB, Raz, thanks again for your reviews.

Yup, Annach'ha has starbolts so he's basically - power wise anyway - Starfire, and using the name Sun Boy will be a talking point when we get onto his arc. As for Dirk... funny you mention him as he is slated to appear in LW9.

IB, funny you mention the talk between Tyroc and Lu as it's written out already and ready to go with the next lot of posts. It won't be comfortable and will have fall-out later on.

Raz, I was definitely thinking of couples where one is more rambunctious as you say than the other when I wrote that scene. The way I see it is Annach'ha is just so overly excited that he's free of the Vegan controls and his princess has agreed to marry him that he'll be an over excited puppy man. For a while anyway. And Mama Tank is based on a person I used to work with who was an absolute hoot to be around, so I hope I'm capturing her tremendous energy even when the situation is pretty dire. Her name Lola comes from my friend's love of the Kinks btw.

Next up, Jaz has news to share with her besties, Troy and Lu have a serious conversation, and there's those blinkin' zombies to deal with and let's hope they are behaving themselves or thinks might get tough!

Thanks again guys,

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ooh nice Harbi, I figured you had things planned for calling Annach'ha "Sun Boy". and yay, Dirk will show up!

re Mama Tank, you definitely capture her awesome energy. I'm loving her

and yay, looking forward to the up next bits... wonder what Haz's news is. and of course the Troy/Lu one, whooo! sparks will fly! and of course the Hope World zombie eradication mission wink

looking forward to the next batch Harbi!

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First Base:

Kid Quantum - Jazmin Cullen of Xanthu - creation of temporal quantum fields, flight
Kinetix - Zoe Saugin of Aleph - telekinetic animation
Shield - Laurel Kent of Earth - physical invulnerability, tactile psychometry


Jazmin sat at a round table with Laurel and Zoe.

The three young women had met ten minutes before in the Romper Room on First Base and currently all leant forward over their table so their heads were close together as they spoke - a sure sign to anyone watching that they were gossiping.

Jazmin was recounting the journey back from the Magus' retreat on board the cruiser the team had taken. In particular she was keen to tell her friends about a conversation she had overheard between Element Lad and Dr Shakespeare. As she had only returned the night before Jazmin had called her friends up to join her for breakfast and a catch up.

"Yeah, Jan was saying that he had been proud to 'give samples of his seed' to the Magus' wives..."

"That's gross!" Laurel said as she leaned back on her chair. She had found out not long after she had joined the team that their resident physician was distantly related to her and consequently, despite their not being particularly close, she felt protective of him.

"Oh, come on, it's not that bad... I'm sure he didn't have to... ah, y'know, actually deliver the samples in the natural way and for all we know Kent might've... well... given him a hand to get the deed done. He is a doctor after all." Zoe smiled broadly as she said this. Laurel and Jazmin both laughed.

After that, their conversation got onto far more personal and juicy topics which had the three friends laughing loudly.

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Hope World, on the edge of the Wilderness of the Sassanaboan Nebula

Sister Eclipse - of Rhoohanisett iii - durability, heightened senses, physical possession of any living being
Tesseract - Sar Jerash Mor Toark of Mars - access to intra-dimensional space

Sister Eclipse had carefully set the medi-pack down next to the patient.

The young man had hurt his ankle as he carried his much younger sister away from a crowd of the infected settlers. They had been lucky to get into the cargo ship before those inside sealed it shut. Sister Eclipse had smiled and chatted amiably while putting the synth-split against his leg; she knew that the treatment here would hurt, and she hoped to spare him some of that. Out of the corner of her eye she could see Tesseract struggle to keep the queue they were getting ready to the warp in order so Sister Eclipse patted the young man on the shoulder and asked him to excuse her for a moment.

"Excuse me," Sister Eclipse held her hand up to her mouth and used the loud-hailer setting on one of its lowest settings. These people were scared enough without her adding to it with an unexpected loud noise. The crowd moved apart and she walked through.

"Please prioritise those that are most vulnerable. Our medical team will be on hand to make sure they are treated quickly." She indicated two elderly women to come with her to the front of the queue. As she confidently moved through the crowd people started shuffling around, allowing the elderly and infirm, and those with young children to move forward. All the while Sister Eclipse kept thanking the crowd as she encouraged them to give up spaces nearer the front of the queue to get away from this desperate situation.

Tesseract fell in line behind her, indicating where people should line up, thanking them as she did. She even summoned some protein bars from her intra-dimensional space to hand out as she moved people back and encouraged those less physically able to move forward.

<thank you, Sister,> The intern sent her message across the telepathic matrix.

<my pleasure. Crowds are tricky, aren't they? I've learned they are more amiable when two people talk to them than one>

Both knew this wasn't true; Sister Eclipse simply had far more experience and it showed, though neither gave any further comment on the matter.

Tesseract smiled to herself, perhaps Sister Holier-Than-Thou Eclipse wasn't such a drag after all... so long as she stopped preaching, she wasn't too bad in small doses really.

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Titan - Deputy Leader - Nasir N’Cube of Titan - alpha-level telepathy
Magnetix - Science Police Officer Jooli Esra of Braal - manipulation of magnetic fields
Dragon Lass - Mari Baertling of Rimbor - enhanced strength, durability, echolocation and flight

"I hate zombies!"

Jooli Esra announced as she used a thin strip of metal fencing to block a group of infected settlers as they lunched out from the darkness towards her. Titan was about ten feet behind her on her right dealing with a woman and her small child who had hidden underneath an upturned seed container.

The echoes in the side agri-dome where the two Legionnaires currently were made it difficult to know exactly which way the infected settlers were coming from. It didn't help that the spotlights from their belts could only illuminate a very small portion of the darkness around them and the plants in this dome were all arranged on tall trellis that gave plenty of hiding places.

The magnetic bubble Jooli had placed around them alerted her to something small and metallic approaching from her 8'o clock. She spun around and shone her spotlight on two infected settlers. They screeched at the light as it burned into their eyes and stumbled forward. Titan was closer than Magnetix but she knew he was dealing with the pressure of keeping the two settlers they had rescued calm as well as the headache that the infected gave him every time he used his psionics on them.

The Science Police Officer reached out with her magnokinesis desperately searching for something metallic she could use to slow them down... there were small staples and nails close by but nothing else large enough that she hadn't already used to trap other infected threats.

She concentrated and pulled the small metal forms she could sense close-by and just as she was away to meld them together into something large enough to use as a weapon, she heard a thwhup! thwhup! thwhup! noise and the two infected settlers were suddenly up in the air! Dragon Lass, using her echo location had been searching for her colleagues and swooped in just in time to protect them. The intern's bat-like wings sounded loud in the ominous silence of this agri-dome.

<Southern Lights is getting the uninfected through the warp, anyone you want me to carry back?> The young intern sent across the telepathic matrix as she dumped the two howling infected settlers into a fenced off area that Jooli had created earlier.

Within moments Dragon Lass was swooping back through the connecting strips between the agri-domes carrying the woman and child that Titan had been tending to with Nasir and Jooli continued searching for other settlers to get to safety.

Mari thought to herself that she had made the right choice volunteering to be part of Hope World; the team were great and their missions were the absolute best!

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Harmonia - Senior Team member, Professor Harmonia Li of Earth - manipulation of the natural environment
Mama Tank - Science Police Lieutenant Lolla Grayfrau of Badenhoff vi - cybernetics giving incredible strength, invulnerability, AI manipulation

Lolla Grayfrau had called on a warp and ensured the settlers were safely through it before returning to Harmonia.

In the corridor there were sounds of an approaching mob, scuffling feet and howls from the shadows. Harmonia levitated twelve feet above the ground, sheets of fire streaked along the platform in front of them.

"I believe I have located a central system interface. According to the schematics..." She held up her hand indicating a hard light data screen from her flight ring, "We need to be up a level and half a klick ahead. There are two more settlers to retrieve en route.."

"Come on then." Mama Tank strode along the platform appearing confident as she went. In the flickering light of the fiery wall Harmonia had created along the centre of the broad space every side corridor and doorway seemed to be an impenetrable darkness. Lolla's hearing was enhanced so she was aware of the three infected settlers well before they jumped out of the doorway, though even as she turned to deal with them the air spun around them and they were engulfed in a mini-whirlwind that threw them back into the door they had just lurched out of. The wall of flames moved to block the doorway. Lolla could hear the howls of frustration from the infected settlers.

<thank you, Harmonia> she sent to the ancient elemental that hovered above her.

<my pleasure, now... are you used to your flight ring? We should pick up the pace>

Lolla felt as if there was a slight hint of admonishment in Harmonia's comment but she smiled and willed her flight ring to take her int the air. The hard light screen that Harmonia had projecting from her flight ring showed that there were two uninfected settlers on the level above them and several hundred metres ahead.

"Let's go get the settlers out of here then I'll make sure the AI have all the systems ready for when Orion releases the antidote." The Science Police Lieutenant said as she sped ahead of the Legionnaire.

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Dream Girl- Team leader - Nura Nal of Naltor - precognition
Star Boy - Senior Team member, Thom Kallor of Xanthu - stellar mass transference
Groovy - Science Police Officer Droo Vri of Daxam. of Daxam - incredible strength, speed, stamina, senses, laser vision, space flight, invulnerability

Dream Girl had the settlers' full attention.

She announced that due to the sheer number of settlers to be rescued she would be opening the warps for limited groups initially - those that needed medical assistance or were infirm or nursing babies were to go through first. Several in the crowd tried to push their way through, clearly not following her instructions but the Naltoran beauty dealt with them.

Nura floated slightly above the crowd and twisted so the spotlight from her belt buckle shown directly on the angry bearded man, pinning him to the spot as the crowd around him all turned to face him.

"If you can join the queue in an orderly fashion, I'm positive we'll get you all off this station safe and sound." She smiled and her positivity and confidence were contagious. Several of those nearer to the man who had been pushing his way forward started encouraging him to step back. Nura knew she needed to quell this quickly so she lowered herself close to him.

"What's your name?"

"Ellis Drugjjid... I need to get off this station ... I need outta here now!" His eyes were wide with fear.

"I promise you we will make sure you get out of here. My partner Thom is out there right now making sure none of the infected get in. You know I see the future, yes?" He nodded, "Well believe me, if I saw anything happening to Thom, I wouldn't be here talking to you," The man's expression softened as he understood what the Legionnaire was telling him, "...so please have some faith, I will personally ensure that every single person here that wants to be evacuated will be."

His eyes dropped to the floor and he nodded before turning back to the crowd.

In a surprisingly loud voice, he announced "C'mon you heard the Legionnaire, get in the queue and let those that need medical help get to the front! Quicker we do this the quicker we'll all get outta here."

Nura smiled as she took to the air again and found someone else trying to push their way to the front.

Outside, Thom hovered in the air, his eyes searching the dimly lit mall for signs that more of the infected were close-by though he had only seen about half a dozen since Groovy had created barriers by tearing off entire sides of some of the stores and placing them in front of major walkways and connecting corridors. The enthusiastic Daxamite was off searching for more uninfected settlers to rescue - so far, he had found over fifty that had been happy to let him bring him to the barricaded store where the Legionnaires were arranging for them to be warped to safety.

Thom heard a buzzing from above and looked up: floating down from the dome many stories above were a dozen circular objects.

<Uh, guys, were we expecting a delivery as I got a dozen drones above me>

<Star Boy> Strategic Analyst Graq Maurus of Colu sent from Hope World where the Coluan had been monitoring the mission <those were sent from the UP Disaster Relief Team to help, so don't destroy them>

Thom Kallor laughed to himself but didn't respond. One of the infected had broken out from the icy trap that Groovy had stuck them in so the Xanthuan extended and arm and project a field of mass around them. Thom didn't want to hurt them, they weren't in full control of their senses and looked to be in a pretty awful state already, but he knew better than to turn a blind eye to them.

As he watched the infected man collapse onto his knees, Thom spotted out of the corner of his eye several of the drones approaching a barrier that Groovy had set up, blocking one of the main arterial routes through the mall. The Legionnaire knew that behind that wall were hundreds of infected settlers eager to storm the barricaded store where Dream Girl was helping with the evacuation.

On the floor another of the infected howled as they snapped through the ice that Groovy had blown across their legs to stick them to the floor. Thom turned and send a stream of his mass inducing power towards them, immediately throwing them to the floor. Thom could see that the icy traps were all melting in the warm mall so more of the infected were almost free. He took a few seconds to direct his power to them, knocking a group of them down.

In those few seconds, the drones had made their way to the barrier and having heard the yelling from behind it followed their primary task and used their robotic arms to pull the barrier back and release the settlers that was stuck. Unfortunately, in their rush to get support to the Legionnaires, the Disaster Relief Team had not programmed the parameters of the plague that was infecting the population.

With a roar, several hundred infected settlers charged out onto the mall's main concourse and ran towards Star Boy and the uninfected within the barricaded store.

Even as he heard their roar and turned to face them, Thom saw the drones were trying to free other groups of infected settlers from behind barricades that Groovy had created.

"Dammit!" Thom swore as he used his ability to smash all the drones onto the mall's tiled floor.

<Groovy, get back here please, and Graq... we don't need any more help right now, those bloody drones are a pest!>

After sending the message Thom released fields of starmass strategically, felling those at the front of the infected mob so they would trip up the roaring mass behind as they surged forward. Even with this tactic, the mob had covered half the ground between the corridor where they had been and Thom and the barricaded store in ten seconds. Star Boy knew he needed to do something more drastic...

A continuous sweeping blast of his power and the floor in front of the mob collapsed. Thom was thankful that, despite the virus affecting the settlers' minds, they still had enough sense not to charge and none fell through the gaping hole into the darkness below. Instead, they bayed and howled at him from the other side.

"Hey Thom!" Groovy said as he appeared in a blur of super speed, "you wanna hand there?"

"Nah, I think I got it now, thanks anyway." Thom Kallor gave the young Daxamite soldier a big smile and pointed towards the huge hole in the floor, "...that should stop them for now."

"Yeah" the young Daxamite replied, "...though I hope we don't have to clean it up. Y'know we've made quite a mess here."

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Second Base:

Tyroc – Team Leader - Troy Stewart of Marzal city pocket dimension - sonic control
Duplicate Girl - Senior Team member, Luornu Durgo of Carggg - creation of multiple identical duplicates


After Lexikon and her fiancé had left the meeting room with Retro, Tyroc asked Duplicate Girl to stay behind.

Troy was not relishing the idea of speaking to Lu but knew that the longer he held off the worse it would be. Lu had reached the door before he had asked her to remain. She turned to Troy and gave him a questioning smile.

"Everything okay?" She asked.

"Can you take a seat; we need to talk."

Troy's tone of voice, while mild was serious enough to alert her that this was not going to be an easy conversation. Lu stayed where she was, standing by the door and raised her chin as she looked at her team leader. Tyroc remained quiet and looked at her, his dark brown eyes conveyed some sympathy though his expression was serious.

"Okay..." Lu said, breaking the tense atmosphere in the room as she took a seat opposite Troy, "what's going on?"

"So... are you okay Lu?" She blinked several times as Troy asked this, as if surprised by his interest in her welfare.

"Absolutely." Her expression took on a slightly bored look.

"Okay... so, I just gotta say it..."

"Go on."

"What's goin' on wit' you an' Marmud? Seriously, you've been too tough on that kid'."

"He needs reminding he's part of a team not a solo star. When he was at the academy..."

"He's not at the academy anymore. He's a full Legionnaire now Lu, the team voted him in ...an' just to remind you in his first mission as an intern he saved six Legionnaires lives. He's no' a wild horse t' be broken in."

"He's too cocky and..."

"Oh, bullshit!" Tyroc rarely swore so Lu raised her eyebrows at this. "He's not the cockiest we've got here by a mile! Have you spoken to Drake or Laurel... or Monica lately?" Troy's voice had become hard and his expression flashed anger momentarily before he took a breath and forced himself to calm down. There was a silence between them for several long seconds.

"Okay... enough Lu, ah'm only askin' you treat the boy with a bit o' respect."

"Oh... okay. Though I'll remind you that I'm currently the most experienced team member you have and have years of experience at the academy as well so I'd appreciate a bit more respect..." Lu's voice was snippy, her own anger was beginning to show but before she could finish Tyroc interrupted her.

"I'm your team leader and he's a full Legionnaire. Respect that or you can leave." As soon as the words left his mouth Troy regretted saying them but he refused to back down. Lu wasn't listening to him so if he had to make a strict edict to enforce his request then he would, as painful as it was.

"You cannot be serious Troy. You're taking the opinion of that arrogant boy over mine?"

"I'm taking the opinion of half o' the team who talk about witnessing you undermining... bullying the kid. You gotta see it'll cause damage to morale if you don't reign it in."

This time the silence was painful for Troy as he could see Lu's hurt expression as his words sunk in.

"Ah have an option for you though..." his voice was soft, conciliatory, "Cece told me she wants to borrow one o' our Senior Team to help 'em out on First Base. When she asks, you could volunteer maybe?"

"Yeah, I think we both agree that First Base looks like the best option going forward." Lu's tone was sharp again as she got up from her seat. She had turned towards the door when Tyroc spoke again.

"I haven't finished yet Lu, sit down please." Troy's voice was calm but his expression was angry again.

Lu stood behind the chair, her back still turned to the team leader and turned her head so she was half-facing him, "ach, what now?" Her tone was cold, dismissive.

"Oh, ah'm calling an end to the mentor scheme effective immediately 'cause of your poor behaviour... So, you'll not need t' work 'side him if it's too much for you to deal with professionally."

Lu's tongue clicked in her mouth and she let a deep breath out.

"Okay, that's fine. Anything else?" She still hadn't turned to face Troy, and her tone was still dismissive. He couldn't help himself as his disappointment and anger pushed him to say more.

"You're going to make an appointment with Dr Falkner and until she gives a clean bill o' health you're off active duty. Ah'm finished now. Now you can go."

Luornu's back was poker straight as she marched out the meeting room without saying another word.

Tyroc knew Duplicate Girl would take a long time to forgive him, but he had to put the team first no matter who it was that was causing the problem and if she didn't understand that then he didn't care if she forgave him or not. For a second he felt the urge to scream, but instead he picked his hand up to his face and activated his fight ring comm circuit. There was only one person Troy could think of that might be able to salvage this situation, and that person was Lu's oldest remaining friend on the team...

"Cosmic Boy, ah really need to talk wit' you."


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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 11 Nov 22)
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oooh I've been looking forward to this Harbi, and it delivered in spades!

Hee hee, oh Jazmin is such a gossip. I like Laurel's protectiveness of Kent, and Zoe's pragmatism re "how" Jan delivered the samples. And of course, to repopulate a dead race/species, it makes sense... Jan can do his duty in a way that keeps his relationship with Kent whole + does not compromise on his own principles! Loving the friendship between these three young women

what a lovely scene between Sister Eclipse and Tesseract. for one, it shows the Sister's continued magnanimousness but also her experience; and for another, it shines a small light on why Tesseract was so, ahem, b*tchy to the Sister. the preaching thing, I think if I connect the dots you also mention before that Tesseract is not particularly religious, and maybe scoffs a bit at organized religion. great scene for both characters!


yes, I would hat zombies too if I were in that situation tongue great teamwork among this group, and I also like Jooli's creativity in melding together smaller pieces of metal.

heh re Harmonia's slight admonishment re Mama Tank (not) using her flight ring...

Dream Girl would have anyone's full attention methinks! She just knows how to capture a crowd! and she dealt with the crowd's panic so elegantly too

ah, Coluans are so useful aren't they? oh poop, now those drones are hindering instead of helping... great use of Thom's power, I think he is often one of the most under-estimated Legionnaires. Collapsing the floor like that was genius!

yes! finally Troy talks to Lu!

go Troy, I cheered when he reminded Lu sternly that several others of their teammates are also quite cocky.

You wrote this difficult convo really well, Harbi. Neither side is completely in the right - or wrong - here. I understand and agree with Troy's regret re "I'm your team leader", while he was correct he should also have acknowledged Lu's long years of experience. On the other hand, Troy was also right pointing out that half the team had been noticing and commenting on and judging Lu negatively for what she's been doing...

Super eager to see the next bits: Lu meeting with Anje, and Cos stepping in. Should be interesting, Cos and Lu go wayy wayy wayyyy back; and Cos has had (in some incarnations) his overbearing moments too (see: Reboot Cos with Superboy/Connor/Kon-El, and animated Cos when Timber Wolf went on the run). also, Troy's acknowledgement that the situation was not completely resolved is a sense/sign of good leadership.

well done Harbi, as usual I am hooked and eager for more more more more!

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Mining platforms 4Bravo, 4Delta and 4Epsilon, on the edge of the Wilderness of the Sassanaboan Nebula

Dream Girl- Team leader - Nura Nal of Naltor - precognition
Harmonia - Senior Team member, Professor Harmonia Li of Earth - manipulation of the natural environment
Titan - Nasir N’Cube of Titan - alpha-level telepathy

Interns:

Dragon Lass - Mari Baertling of Rimbor - enhanced strength, durability, echolocation and flight

Science Police Liaison team:

Magnetix - Science Police Officer Jooli Esra of Braal - manipulation of magnetic fields
Mama Tank - Science Police Lieutenant Lolla Grayfrau of Badenhoff vi - cybernetics giving incredible strength, invulnerability, AI manipulation


Harmonia and Mama Tank had rescued another couple of the residents of the satellites that were hiding from their infected neighbours.

The ancient elemental had successfully used the wall of fire to keep groups of the infected that lurched around in the darkness away from them. There were a few close calls but a blast of air soon dissuaded those infected that were brave enough to risk the flames. They had been on the satellite for a little over twenty minutes when Lolla finally reached an interface panel that would allow her to contact the central AI's that ran the infrastructure around them.

"I'll need to concentrate here Harmonia." She said as she touched both hands to the hard light screen, her eyes closing as she did. As Lolla had suspected, the AI and command codes within the central mainframe that kept the interconnected satellites running were a hodge-podge of technologies from the last century. While her cybernetics allowed her to directly interface with advanced technologies, she knew her skills were nowhere near as strong as Danielle Foccart's, and consequently this might take her some time.

Harmonia hovered above her Science Polce colleague and with a wave of her arms the wall of fire that had followed them extended and encircled them. She could hear several grunts and groans from the darkness around them as the infected settlers were pushed by the virus' primal urges. Harmonia prayed that Lolla would get the ventilation systems up to speed quickly enough for the cure to be dispersed once Orion delivered it to the central pump. Until then, she concentrated on keeping her colleague safe.

The satellites air flow and filtration system was massive and intricately laid out. Lolla sunk her consciousness into the mainframe, eventually finding the command codes and pushed them to speed up the flow of air throughout each area. This would ensure that the air that included the cure Orion added would be pushed into every nook and cranny. She estimated that within thirty minutes their work should be done, and their airborne cure would have been dispersed throughout these people's homes and workplaces... With a smile on her face, Mama Tank took her hands off the control and looked around her.

"All done, Lolla?" Harmonia asked from above.

"Yup, right let's go rescue some more folks." She replied with a wicked grin.


Titan had a sharp headache.

He found that the minds of the infected were disgusting and treacherous places, with multiple bitterly sharp impressions overlapping within each creating a chaotic cacophony. While he could use his telepathy to stun them, any form of communication or control sent a dagger of pain through his head. The low-level buzzing from the infected minds was too distracting. Nasir had quickly explained this to SPO Esra and allowed her to float in front of him, effectively taking the lead.

The satellite they were in was a geodesic dome used for growing crops the settlers would need. Both were aware that they should try to preserve as much of this as possible so had been carefully keeping to pathways between the flowering plants and fungus vats. They had both seen bodies lying in amongst the plants, dismembered and bloody. In amongst the smells of damp earth and flowering plants was the tang of blood, and worse.

Their searchlights shone out into the acres of agriculture around them. There were at least another two uninfected settlers a hundred meters ahead according to their scans. From out of the darkness there was a roar and twenty infected settlers charged towards them. Titan stepped in front of Magnetix and assumed a fighting stance while he tried to subdue as many of them as he could psionically.

<above their heads Legionnaire, get out of reach> Jooli sent as she floated upwards <One thing being short has taught me is to pick the fights carefully, and we may be immunised but do you really want to be bitten?> There was a clear sense of mocking in her tone.

Nasir N'Cube smiled to himself as he took to the air. Of course, the SPO was correct, they should avoid physical interaction if at all possible. He usually would have been more careful, but the headache was interfering with his training. He calmly set a reminder on his flight ring calendar to book a session with Dr Falkner after this mission was over, just to check that he hadn't been adversely affected by the minds of the infected settlers. And as he had this thought he heard Dragon Lass's wings beat as she flew past and there was a series of loud thumps!

<got 'em!> Mari sent as she flew into the cones of light being produced by Nasir's and Jooli's belt buckles. The bat-winged intern was carrying a long wooden fence post, and she grinned triumphantly. Below them they could hear the groans of the infected that were still conscious as they lay on the rough ground.

"C'mon, Southern Lights says the last two are close by and once they're out of here we can get a warp to help the refugees over on Home Base." And with a graceful swoop she turned and flew ahead.

"I miss having that much energy... youth really is wasted on the young." Jooli muttered as she flew behind the intern.

Nasir laughed.


Dream Girl had no doubts that between Thom's skills and experience, and Groovy's raw power and exuberance, the two men had the situation under control outside.

Inside the barricaded store she was impressed by how orderly the settlers had become. They had arranged themselves into queues, prioritising the sick and elderly, and families with small children. She smiled to herself as she realised it was exactly how spaceports arranged boarders onto flights.

There were about two dozen of the settlers that had refused to go through the warp, saying they wanted to remain on the satellite. Nura calmly explained that the antidote that the team were going to pump through the ventilation system included an anaesthetic so the infected, and anyone else who breathed it, would fall asleep for a few hours. She had hoped that the UP Disaster Relief team and drones along with a few from her team would use this time to clean up some of the more disgusting mess that those infected by this plague had left behind. Perhaps even remove and prepare the dead in a morgue so when their families returned, they would be spared the worst of sights.

She gently explained this though it only reinforced the determination to remain among the group. Eventually Nura acquiesced and asked them to get breathing apparatus as they would be fast asleep pretty quickly if they weren't prepared. Perhaps, she realised, their knowledge of the satellites would come in handy... and seeing their reactions would help keep the experience real for the more junior members as they got through the heartbreak of the next few hours.

It would be tough but ultimately, they would all know by the end of it that their struggles had been worthwhile as the Legion had saved a lot of lives today.

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On Hope World:
Invisible Kid - Jacques Foccart of Earth - personal and tactile invisibility
Intern:
Army of One - Ashia Servito of Luzonus Prime - self-replication
Support Staff on Hope World:
I.Z.O.R. - Gear iv – infrastructure manager - nannite collective being, technomorph
Drura Sehpt - Infectious Lass – medical officer - containment and control over bacteria and viruses
Henry – Anti Lad – Spatial warp controller
J2351 of the Dominion - Ivy - bio-manipulation of Hope World's chloro-technology
The Bludgers - clone-grown Dominion workforce with enhanced strength and durability though with 28 hour lifespan
Science Police Liaison Team:
'Smart Boy' - Senior Team liaison, Strategic Analyst Graq Maurus of Colu - 10th level intelligence specialising in disaster relief scenarios
Sheesa Frimld of Rimbor - trainee nurse's assistant (and beautician).


Even with Invisible Kid personally welcoming each group through the warp and dozens of Arny-of-One's duplicates acting as guides, the refugees were clearly confused and scared.

Henry opened each warp precisely in the centre of the huge room. Once a group of settlers came through, they were scanned for any illness or injury and treated accordingly. A basic medical triage unit was at hand, along with dozen of Army-of-One's replicants who offered food and water as they guided the scared settlers to either the medi-bay or temporary quarters.

The medi-bays had been quickly over-run and Gear had altered the structures of three adjacent rooms so they too could be used as clinical facilities. In total, Drura was looking after sixty one patients. She was thankful that none had life threatening injuries, but even with the assistance of two dozen auto-docs - small hovering boxes with rudimentary diagnostic skills. and a corresponding number of Army-of -One's duplicates, the young woman from Somahur felt very aware of her limited clinical skills. In the back of her mind, she knew that with one call to First Base Kent would bring a team through that could sort this out in half an hour... and as tempting as it was to ask for help Drura wanted to prove to herself that she was ready for this, so she focussed on the job at hand and got on with it. She knew that if anyone presented with serious injuries she would call for help, but until then she would carry on and prove Kent's faith in her was justified.

On the control deck, Graq Maury's directed Ivy to produce several organic substances from the Dominion bio-tech that could be used as an anaesthetic salve which would help Drura in the medi-bay. The Coluan had spent quite a few hours researching the Dominion technology and he had come to some startling conclusion, primary amongst these was an understanding that the bio-tech was far more adaptive than almost anything available from within the United Planets. And, with Ivy on their side to telempathically manipulate the Dominion technology they could have a lot of options at hand that would greatly assist the team in their mission. The Coluan had arranged for all information the team had gathered to be shared with the UP Disaster Relief team, so there wouldn't be any mis-haps once the team left. The commanding officer for the UP was a testy Imskian that didn't understand why her team were being told to hang back until Graq shared footage from Star Boy's flight ring that showed the hundreds of zombified settlers that were trying to get to him. She had backed down immediately after that, agreeing that the Legionnaires needed to ensure the satellites were safe before she would allow any of her crew onto it. Graq also sent through samples of the antidote, insisting that she offer it to anyone that was planning on going in, and she gave him a very relieved thank you.

Dragon Lass had brought her friend Sheesa from Rimbor to help the team. The young girl had seen violence and some horrific events while growing up under the Gray Sisterhood as a street orphan, but the scale of what was unfolding on Hope World was beyond what she expected. Initially she had followed Drura's order with total concentration but after an hour she had spent her time wandering amongst the injured asking if they needed anything; a drink or food, or just someone to hold their hand. She had hugged several people and brushed the hair of one elderly woman who was speaking about her missing children and grand-children. Drura kept an eye on her and afterwards asked Nura to praise her as the empathy Sheesa had shown in the face of such horrors and the compassionate assistance she gave to the hurt and scared refugees had been exemplary.

Jacques felt a warm glow of pride with the team as they settled each group into their temporary quarters. Those that needed medical assistance had been prioritised by the teams that were on the other side of the warps and if the injured were with immediate family they had been quartered close to the medi-bay. For the most part, the settlers that had come through the warps were very grateful for the Legion's help. A few had wanted to go back, but Jacques had persuaded them to stay for a short while until Orion had delivered the virus' antidote through the ventilation system.

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Orion -Science Police Cadet Tw'gg of H'lven - tracking skills, agility, enhanced senses and awareness of flaws or weaknesses

The small fox-like intern crept through the last stretch of corridor before he reached the main ventilation pump housing room.

The room was cavernous! There were several large machines in the centre of the room that went from the floor all the way up to the top of the room, almost sixty feet above. There were several walkways above him with link bridges to the towering machines. What struck Orion most strongly though was that the floor stunk of blood and viscera - there had obviously been some terrible event that had happened here recently. He could hear scuffling movement from ahead so quickly flew up to the ceiling and squeezed himself in-between pipes that ran along the underside of a mezzanine and peaked out to see who, or what, was there.

From out of the shadows a small cleaning bot appeared, running small circles as it polished the granite floor. The intern let out a deep breath and slowly slid out from between the pipes where he had hidden. The bot had obviously been damaged as it scratched the floor with a piece of its metal casing that hung off. As Tw'gg reached across to pull the loose piece of metal off he heard something move behind in the shadows and he quickly took to the air.

"Come back here you wee monster!" He heard as he flew away, followed by the loose bit of metal flying past him, obviously ripped off and thrown.

Once he was thirty feet above Orion turned and looked back. There was a man, clearly injured, standing beside the cleaning bot, holding onto a wound on his side breathing raggedly.

"You're not one of them, are you? I never saw your like before..." The injured man said.

Orion switched on his belt light and stared, he could see the blood streaming down the left had side of the injured man beneath him and had not heard the infected settlers speak before, so instinct kicked in and he lowered himself down towards the floor.

"I'm from the Legion. I'll throw you down some first aid..."

He coughed painfully before replying, "Damned zombified came through here, managed to fight them off but I've been bitten and I know what's coming next, so maybe don't waste your meds as I'll gone soon...."

"We have an antidote..." Orion flicked open a pouch on his belt and withdrew a small ampule with a circular disc on one side. "Press this against your skin. I promise I'll get you to a medi-bay as soon as I finish here."

The injured man reached up and grabbed at the antidote and quickly pressed it against his neck, saying his thanks to the intern as he did.

"Don't suppose you can help me in return?" Orion asked wistfully, "I've got these two pods to put into the air pump..."

"You need the second level up there... a panel marked 'Filtration'... in there." Again, the injured man coughed before he lowered himself to the floor.

"You sure you're okay there? Here's some torniquet paste and a synth-wrap bandage..." Orion took the two medical supplies from his belt-pouch and dropped them onto the sitting man's lap.

"Forget me, get that antidote out there..."

Orion knew the man was right, he had to get the antidote into the ventilation pumps as fast as he could. As he flew up the young intern remembered something from his days at the academy regarding dealing with seriously ill humans - they shouldn't be allowed to fall asleep while waiting for help to arrive, so he started asking questions.

"Sir, what's your name? Mine is Tw'gg." The intern shouted down just as he reached the panel that the injured man had indicated.

"Hey Tw'gg.., pleased to meet you, I'm Alnn Stiabls, Second Engineer to the Big Pump there... This tourniquet paste sure is cold."

"You just rub it on your wound there Mr Stiabls, it'll help you heal up." Orion replied as he worked at the edges of the panel to pull it off. It was tightly jammed into the metal facing before him but the intern pulled with all his might, willing his flight ring to fly him away as fast as it could. There was a loud squeal and he shot backwards, clutching at the panel. He managed to stop only inches from the far wall and took a deep breath. "Did you see that Mr Stiabls? That was fun." And, after dropping the panel onto the mezzanine below, Orion flew back to the filtration pump.

The intern quickly called up a schematic on a hard light screen from his flight ring database, double checking that he had planned to remove and replace the right parts. He took a deep breath before he grabbed at a pod on the inside of the machinery before him and teased it out. Several red lights started blinking in front of him. Orion quickly replaced it with one of the pods attached to his belt. The lights stopped and he repeated the process with the pod from the other side of the grid that had been behind the panel he had removed.

<Dream Girl, everyone, the antidote is in the ventilation system now> The intern hoped they couldn't hear the relief he felt as he sent the message across the telepathic matrix.

"Hey, we've done it, Mr Stiabls, the pump blowing the cure through the satellites." As he said this Orion could see that the injured settler was laying on the floor, "Hang on there, I'm going to get you to safety right now."

The intern landed beside the now unconscious man and considered his options. He checked for a pulse then held his flight ring up his mouth and yelled: "HENRY'! I need a warp to the medi-bay right now!"

A spinning honey and violet warp opened up in front of the intern and spun across the floor, scooping both Orion and injured man through it to the medi-bay on Hope World.

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It was seven hours later that Jacques and Drura met up in one of the small rec rooms; both were exhausted.

"Did you hear, they found out how the virus got all the way out here. Supposedly, one of the local salvage hunters found an escape pod just floating out there on the edge of the nebula. The resident was obviously dead inside it as it had been drifting for so long, at least a century they estimated, but the scavenger took it back here about three days ago to open it up and investigate." Drura gave a small sad smile as she said this.

"And the virus got out.. 'ow sad. Zo many dead..." Jacques shook his head as he replied. He had been part of the team that had went in to clean up the satelites once the gas Orion had placed within the ventilation system had done its work and knocked out all the residents. It had been a horrific experience; there had been many dead and mutilated bodies and so much destruction of the satellites that the residents had only just rebuilt.

Once the anaesthetic gas was released along with the cure through the ventilation system, Thom had taken Groovy, Dragon Lass, Tesseract, Orion and a dozen of the clone grown Bludgers with him as they ensured structural integrity of the satellite. Even before the Legionnaires had arrived there had been a lot of damage done to the satellites. Groovy, of course, had announced that if he knew he would have to clean it up he wouldn't made such a mess. The rest of the small team had laughed but gotten on with the work at hand without much further conversation.

Nura and Harmonia took the rest of the team, with the exceptions of Army-of-One, Gear and Drura with them to aid the UP Disaster Relief crew. There were a lot of wounded and dead residents, and sometimes it wasn't very clear which they were... In total two hundred and seventy four dead bodies were recovered. The UP team set up make-shift morgues in the hospital unit in the main satellite. As much dignity as possible was given to each body as they were cleaned and made ready for their family to claim. The two dozen or so residents that had opted to remain helped identify the majority of these.

Four hours after Orion had released the cure into the ventilation pump and they were certain that the virus had been killed off, Graq Maurus put two new pods in that would introduce a small short-life nannite into the atmosphere that would reverse the anaesthetic in the air. Within half an hour the residents that were still on board the satellites awoke. The majority were clearly very upset as they remembered what they had gone through. The UP team and Legionnaires were on hand to support them. Sister Eclipse proved to be especially adept at assisting those that had lost loved ones.

Drura and Jacques shared their stories, comforting each other as they did. They knew that Nura had estimated they would remain for another seven or eight hours as they evacuated the refugees off Hope World back to their homes or into the near-by UP hospital cruiser that was on hand to support those with serious injuries. Outside of the room they could hear laughter. Jacques shrugged as Drura gave him a quizzical look. They went to the door just as it irised open. Outside was Nura, Thom, Nasir and Graq Mauras. Nura was laughing and Thom grinned from ear to ear.

"What's goin' on?" Jacques asked.

"Oh, I just told them..." Nasir began to answer.

"It's the Squids of Infinity.." Thom said with a snorting laugh.

"Most intriguing." Graq added.

Both Jacques and Drura had forgotten all about the strange sightings that had been made recently of the immense and mysterious creatures that lived within dense nebulas throughout recorded space.

"It's odd but I think I've been aware of them since we arrived, like a small buzz at the back of my mind, and I put it down to the virus affecting the people here. Once the cure had been given, I realised it was still there so I meditated and followed the thought patterns back to its source. It was the Squids... it's like laughter... or teasing, it's I suppose an analogue of playful chatter." He gave a small smile as he continued. "When I probed a bit deeper, I realised the ones that are outside the nebula are all very young... I checked and the largest sighted was only a thousand klicks long, a third of what's been seen before."

"Yeah, only a thousand klicks long!" Thom laughed as he repeated what Nasir had said.

"It seems they're playing a game with each other. It's like they're seeing which one can survive the longest outside the nebula and they're egging each other on."

"Like kids challenging each other to see who can hold their breath the longest at the pool." Thom interrupted with another laugh.

Drura and Jacques exchanged a glance as they took it in. The Squids of Infinity were one of the most elusive and mysterious creatures ever discovered and here they were playing games with each other.

"Isn't it marvellous?" Nura asked Jacques and Drura. Her smile was infectious and both smiled back.

After the abject horrors they had all witnessed that day, this news of the spectacular display of innocent fun being had by the magnificent creatures that lived within the nebula was like a breath of fresh air, reminding them of the simple positives that were around them if they only looked.


Legion Worlds NINE - wait, there's even more ongoing amazing adventures? Yup, and you'll only find them in the Bits o' Legionnaire Business Forum.
Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 7 Dec 22)
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Hey IB, thanks for your kind words above, they're appreciated.

There will only be a couple more posts here before I bring LW8 to a close.

The way it's looking, Legion Worlds 9 will focus more on the personnel on the various planetoids as there are a few that haven't had the character moments they deserve yet. It will start with Lu's therapy session then after that we'll see what some of the newbies get up t on a night off, we'll check out a few of the students as they get into trouble, Tel and Jed have a heart to heart, Tyroc has still to take his team up against an angry tree - I promise it'll be more fun than it sounds, there will be another planetoid for the taking, we may pop by the League of Super Heroes and find out what they've been up to since not graduating from the Academy, and we are overdue a visit from the Justice Legionnaires which will bring a few changes in the ranks. That's what I've started plotting and writing out so far so wait and see if it goes to plan laugh

As next year will be the tenth anniversary of me starting writing this I may end this series after that and start on something very different, wait and see how I feel...

Thanks again,

C


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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 7 Dec 22)
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hi Harbi, what a treat to read more! and thanks for sharing a bit of "what is to come!"

1) On the new entry

nice to see Mama Tank's cybernetic interfacing in action!

being a hero is tough isn't it? good on Titan for soldiering through the headaches. And I like the attention being paid to minimizing collateral damage / keeping the infrastructure and resources whole. Ah, Titan is such a good guy, and so disciplined - the "setting a reminder" thing is also something I do all the time (if I don't, I will forget) - I feel a kinship with Titan already!

there are always some who don't want to leave, eh? I like how Nura did her best, but saw the wisdom in letting them stay

go Drura, go! I like her quiet determination, coupled with her good sense to call for help if truly needed

heh at Graq dealing with the testy commanding officer, and I like the Legion putting the Dominion tech to very good use!

Go Sheesa, I like her already; and I really love the idea of the Legion welcoming even non-powered folk to join their staff!

what a touching scene between Orion and Mr. Stiabis!

And excellent work showing the after-math and after-care... of course, there would be a lot of upset and trauma after all that the settlers had gone through...

and what a nice bookend re the Squids! Some beauty in the midst of the darkness!

2) On "what is to come"

super eager to see what you come up with re many characters who will get a spotlight! ooh, yet another planetoid... and I have every confidence you will make the angry tree super fun!


goodness, it has been a decade eh! good job for bringing the Legion to life, and growing it so well... and after a decade, I totally understand wanting to take a break and do something new!

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First Base:
XS - Jenni Ognats of an alternate dimension Aarok - phenomenal speed
Cosmic Kid - Po Miman, Justice Legionnaire of alternate dimension Mars - energy manipulation and flight


XS and Cosmic Kid packed up some of their non-essential belongings.

The day before, they had visited several planets as tourists. Their belt distorters had ensured no-one recognised them as they travelled around natural beauty spots, museums, shopping malls and markets.

Po was becoming increasingly home-sick and Jenni wanted to ensure that whatever time they had left in this reality would be as enjoyable as possible, and would leave them with happy memories, so they had drawn up a wish list of places they wanted to visit. Jenni had refused to call it their bucket list... they would return at some point in the future, even if it was just for brief visits, they had both made strong friendshipsthat she didnt want to lose.

By Jenni and Po's reckoning they had four weeks left until the team from this reality were due to have an annual meeting with the Justice Legion from Po's home reality.

Jenni had lost her home reality several years before and still wondered about the friends from that reality's Legion who she had left behind when she had opted to remain here. She found it difficult sometimes to reconcile that she would likely never see them again, and she didn't want Po to ever feel like that. So, they would return to his home reality where he could spend some quality time with his family and friends and they would figure out their next adventure together from there. Whether it was continuing as Justice Legionnaires or not was still undecided. Po, being Po, was comfortable with this indecision but Jenni really wanted to at least have something planned...

She had spent the majority of her teens desperate to find a partner, as she genuinely believed that they would complement her character in ways that would only make things better for her. And while that was usually true with her relationship with Po, it hadn't been nearly as seamless as she had hoped - her initial attraction to his calm and laid-back approach was proving to sometimes be the character trait that irritated her the most. She had spoken to Jazmin, Laurel and Grava about it and they had all said the same thing - it's growing pains and you need to set your boundaries but show a bit of flexibility... exactly what Jenni had been thinking to herself.

It was often said that men and women operated differently on the emotional level, but Jenni had never really believed that until recently... Po could shut himself off without warning and retreat into his own thoughts even while in the middle of the most innocent of conversations. While he was never rude when he did, it was so blinkin' frustrating! At times she had to go out and have a run around the planetoid. She remembered how her mother would sometimes go and manually clean their kitchenware rather than let the auto-bots deal with it and Jenni now understood exactly how she had felt in those moments.

Po Miman knew that Jenni loved him as much as he loved her. They were compatible in ways he had never experienced before. Her energy and enthusiasm were what attracting him to her initially and they still made him praise the Eternal every day when he woke up beside her. He was looking forward to returning to his home reality as he wanted to set a date to get married to her, the love of his life. His people's traditions meant that he needed to request a family elder to research their Star Charts for the most fortuitous date for their union to be blessed and it would be up to him to arrange the wedding ceremony. He had mentally mapped out where he wanted to ask her to marry him, where they could hold the ceremony and who he really wanted to invite. He knew Jenni would have her own thoughts, and he would accommodate them of course, but he needed to make sure he had enough planned so that they could get married as quickly as possible.

There had been a couple of conversations lately when he thought Jenni was getting close to this topic so he had shut up and let her talk, avoiding giving away his thought. He knew it frustrated her but he always made it up to her later in other ways.

He only hoped Jenni hadn't guessed what he was planning...

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Home Base Academy:
Senior Tutor: Night Girl - Lydda Jath of Kathoon - incredible strength and durability out of direct sunlight

Legionnaires from First Base:
Lightning Lass - Deputy Team Leader, Ayla Ranzz of Winath - electrical generation and manipulation
Strobe - Denal Lort of Dryad - assume electro-magnetic energy form


Lightning Lass and Strobe walked through Henry's warp together, onto Home Base.

As full Legionnaires they were tasked with giving one full day a month minimum to the Academy. Ayla rather enjoyed it, though Denal was nervous as this was his first visit as a full Legionnaire having just gone through the internship with Chameleon Boy as his mentor. The young man from the dead world Dryad was expecting a lot of questions today, and when he mentioned his concerns to Ayla she just laughed and patted him on the shoulder.

"Lydda, hola!" Ayla called out to Night Girl as she stepped out of her office.

"Hey folks," the Academy tutor gave the Legionnaires a wide smile as she waited for them to reach her.

"What you got for us today?" Ayla said as she gave Lydda a quick hug.

"Well... I know Gim is giving his class a test mission, so if one of you wants to add an extra pair of eyes to that...?" Denal took a second to realise that he was included in the offer, before volunteering. Lydda smiled and gave him directions to the test environment that Colossal Boy was using.

After he had gone, Lydda turned to Ayla and gave a small smile. "I'm supposed to be setting up an induction for Lexikon's fiance... Annach'ha, he's joining us in two days for a month of compressed learning before, hopefully, joining the staff here."

"I heard he's utterly gorgeous..." Ayla said with a cheeky smile.

"Tamaraneans... yup, definitely no complaints in that department, though he's going to be called Sun boy and I'm not convinced if that's going to work out really."

"He's ex-military, isn't he? Are you getting one of the SP's to show him around when he gets here? Those military types need a certain sort of handling, don't you think?" Ayla asked, intentionally side-stepping the conversation about the potential new tutor's use of codename.

"No, not straight away anyway, see I have an idea..." Lydda replied before the two women walked down the corridor towards the lecture theatre. They discussed in detail who they needed to help and how they could arrange for the best of outcomes.

Strobe had transformed into x-rays and made his way to the lower training space. It had been retro-fitted with several industrial scale hard-light projectors and a Gear-infused nanobot that could create and dissolve objects at speed. This was relatively new and Denal had never had the opportunity to train in this area.

As he reached the cavernous room, twice if not three times bigger that the Meeting Hall that the Dryad Survivors used when they held their town meetings, he realised he hadn't called ahead so Colossal Boy may not be expecting him. Still, Reep had taught him to use every opportunity to gain information so Denal remained in his invisible energy form and scanned round the room. There were four students with the tutor, and he recognised a few of them.

On the other side of the room where two more. Granite Girl had been at the academy for over six months and so was seen as fairly reliable student. Still, she could argue with the best of them, and right now she had a finger pointed in the face of one of her teammates. Colossal Boy was at the opposite end of the room with the rest of his student team, apparently oblivious to what was happening.

Strobe zapped down to the side of the two arguing students and spent a couple of seconds watching as they hissed at each other.

"... not your property!" The young woman wearing green that stood opposite Granite Girl was saying. Denal recognised her as the Atlantean that had recently joined the Academy, though he couldn't remember her name.

"Yeah, and if you go near him again, you'll be having your meals through a straw!"

"Hey ladies..." Denal materialised beside them, careful to appear out of arms reach in case they struck out in surprise. That was a lesson he had learned the hard way when he first received his abilities.

Both students jumped!

"Don't do that, please... Keep your fights for outside of training time." Denal said this as sternly as he could in a quiet voice, as both tried to argue their points over the top of him.

"Hey strobe! Lydda said you might pop by, glad to have you. How're you finding life in the big team?" Colossal Boy shouted across at him. <and thank you for sorting those two out, I was just away to reprimand them. They really need to keep their arguments about boys to outside of my class> Gim sent across the telepathic matrix in a private bandwidth between them.

"Hey Gim, great to be back, wotcha got planned for us? ... I mean, planned for the students?" Strobe felt the blush rise on his cheeks.

Gim laughed as he explained how the team were going to be timed as they attempted to rescue a kidnap victim. Pretty basic training, though they both knew that it would not be set up to be so simple. Denal smiled, grateful for the chance to see this new training environment in use, and to help out as a full Legionnaire!

As far as the young man from Dryad was concerned, he really was living his best life!

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Second Base:
Duplicate Girl - Senior Team member, Luornu Durgo of Carggg - creation of multiple identical duplicates

She took a deep breath and despite not wanting to, Luornu contacted Thunder.

The team leader of First Base was currently on a mission so the Cargggite's holo-message was stored, waiting for Cece's return.

"I believe you have an opening on First Base for a Senior Team member... I've arranged for a therapy session tomorrow with Dr Falkner. I know Tyroc will have told you about our meeting earlier so you know that he wants her to agree to my... ah, worth to the team. If she agrees that I'm fit for duty, and of course if you'll have me when can I move over to your team?"

Luornu knew better than to add any sentiment to the message; she was quite sure that Cece would be fully aware of how she felt at having been ousted from Second Base. Nevertheless, hopefully Cece would realise what an asset her experience and abilities would be to the First Base team and they could arrange the transfer quickly.

Duplicate Girl hoped she could transfer across as soon as her bloody therapy session finished tomorrow afternoon.

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Hope World:
Dream Girl- Team leader - Nura Nal of Naltor - precognition

Support Staff: Henry – Anti Lad – Spatial warp controller

Nura was alone in her apartment, lying on a Seer's Daybed with her eyes closed.

Thom had taken Matti out in her stroller-globe to see the nebula that Hope World was currently close to. The lights that shone within its ruddy clouds were newly born stars, something that very few people would get to see with their own eyes. Their daughter's stroller had been adapted to easily survive the rigours of space so Thom's plan was to slave its functions to his flight ring and take her out sight-seeing. Having been raised by two eminent astronomers, it was no surprise that Star Boy had a life-long love of star gazing and he wanted to share his pasion with his daughter.

"Hello Henry."

Nura sat up from her day bed as she spoke. The holo-man from the 75th century who controlled the teams' spatial warps, appeared at the foot of her bed and smiled as he nodded his head towards her.

"Your mission was a success." He said with another smile.

"We both knew it would be. Our next one will be more high profile, but this was a good way to get the team together. Nothing like a little blood and guts to cement strong friendships..." She gave a cheeky smile and stood up, stretching her arms over her head as she did.

"Yes, the team from Hope World will inspire so many more than you ever did as Legionnaires fighting meta-villains." As Henry spoke, Nura bent down to touch her toes, then stood up and stretched her arms out to the side.

"I know that already... what is it, Henry? What do you want to speak about really?" She flicked her hair from off her face and looked directly at the holo-man.

"We will need to ensure the recent separation of teams runs smoothly: there is a risk..."

"The right people are in charge, aren't they?"

"Of course, you saw to that when you nudged Timber Wolf to encourage the junior members to block vote..."

"As you ...encouraged Babbage's systems to pick those candidates to suggest to the group." Nura smiled as she said this.

"Of course. There is one that can alter this though and unfortunately her abilities make it difficult to always predict..."

"Luornu will be fine Henry, don't worry. After the recent trouble she had on Second Base she'll keep her head down and won't rock the boat."

"Thank you, I hope you are right Nura. Unfortunately, Luornu has enormous potential to damage the foundations of the Legion at this critical time in your history. There are certain current junior members who must become established as they have important..."

"Oh Henry, you must know that Cece is a smart girl, she'll keep her on a short leash, and anyway Lu has far too much pride to sabotage her own career intentionally. She won't want the rumours of her being a bully to stick as she knows full well she'll be out and then both hers and Chuck's legacies will be worth nothing."

"Of course... yes, thank you for your time again, Nura. I'm always grateful for your insights."

"Any time sweetie. Toodle-ooh." Nura said as the holo-man faded away.

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So, as things stand, Legion World's Nine will open with this as the team set-up:

Legion World Home Base - the Academy:

Former Legionnaires:

Triplicate Girl - Luornu Durgo of Carggg - able to split into three identical duplicates (part of Duplicate Girl)
Cosmic Boy – Rokk Krinn of Braal - manipulation of magnetic fields
Night Girl - Lydda Jath of Kathoon - incredible strength and durability out of direct sunlight
Colossal Boy - Gim Allon of Earth - increase personal size and mass at will
Wildfire - Drake Burroughs of Earth - composed of sapient anti-energy, extreme strength, speed, durability, space flight, anti-energy blasts
Chameleon Girl - Yera Allon of Durla - shape changer
Shadow Lass - Tasmia Mallor of Talok viii - summon and manipulate total darkness

Science Police training staff:

Jumping Jack - Science Police Senior Training Officer Jaxi Delgrado-Hynd of Morshesh 5 - hyper-awareness, reflexes and agility
Ms Big - Science Police Officer Erikka Chowdrey of Venus - increase her own muscle mass and density at will, combat specialist
Brain Girl - Science Police Officer Ella Drottmi of Titan - telepathy and telekinesis
Dream Boy - Pre-Commando Sergeant Rol Purtha of Naltor - precognition
Tues El - Science Police Officer Vae Loct of Daxam - incredible strength, speed, stamina, senses, laser vision, space flight, invulnerability.

Probational tutor:

Sun Boy ii - Sky-Lieutenant Annach’ha of the Tamaranean Sun-Corps - combat specialist - flight, strength, solar energy absorption and projection, tactile telepathy.

Support Staff on LWHB:

I.Z.O.R. - Gear ii – infrastructure manager - nannite collective being, technomorph
Henry – Anti Lad – Spatial warp controller
Numbers Guy - M’Rissey of Earth - super-efficient business management skills
Dr Boom - senior physician and United Planets Government envoy - Danii Schwartz-Geltt of Myar - physician and alchemist


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Legion World First Base:

Thunder - Team Leader, Cecelia Becks of 21st Century Earth, immense strength, speed, indestructibility, space flight, wisdom
Lightning Lass - Deputy Team Leader, Ayla Ranzz of Winath - electrical generation and manipulation
Duplicate Girl - Senior Team member, Luornu Durgo of Carggg - creation of multiple identical duplicates
Chameleon Boy – Espionage Squad leader, Reep Daggle of Durla - shape changer
Tellus - Ganglios of Hykraius - telepathy and telekinesis
Comet Queen - Grava of Extal colony - spaceflight, comet gas extrusion
Otaki - Bina Nawoti of Earth - mind-sense
Kid Quantum - Jazmin Cullen of Xanthu - creation of temporal quantum fields, flight
Ferro - Douglas Nolan of Earth - can assume invulnerable iron isotope form
Dragonmage - Xao Jin of Earth - dragon magics
XS - Jenni Ognats of an alternate dimension Aarok - phenomenal speed
Kinetix - Zoe Saugin of Aleph - telekinetic animation
MWindaji - Gahaji of Kiringyaga - super tracker, carries the Ruby of Life allowing tactile transformative magic
Backlash - Mrruaw MNau of Simballi - enhanced strength, speed, senses, absorbs kinetic energy to boost own size and mass
Comet King - Drinchnar Lamment of Extal colony - spaceflight, comet gas extrusion
Atom Girl - Sylva Nrilsan of Imsk - can shrink to microscopic size
Ultra Girl - Li-Fahn Qiong of Xanthu - incredible strength, speed, indestructibility, spaceflight, and projection of force blasts, effectively limited to one at a time
Polar Girl - Mel Lassar of Tharr - cryokinesis
Friction - Janee Whittakka of Xanthu - manipulates the force of friction
Spoiler ii - Gord Eno of Naltor - precognition, specialising in short range visions for combat situations
Solar Gorilla - D'Nadka Endarooga of Dmansca - generate and project extreme heat and light
Strobe - Denal Lort of Dryad - assume electro-magnetic energy form
Triple Nova - Elthur Mundo of Carggg - split into three separate bodies, each with either strength and durability, speed and reflexes, or laser vision

Science Police meta-squad seconded to Legion World First Base:

Captain Heavyweight - Senior Team liaison, Science Police Captain Tuk Shir of Daxam, Senior Team liaison - incredible strength, speed, stamina, senses, laser vision, space flight, invulnerability
Replicator - Science Police Officer Tarev Jusool of Talok viii - can mimic meta-abilities of those nearby for limited periods of time
Gravity Kid - Science Police Officer Tel Vole of Earth - manipulation of personal or nearby gravity
Power Boy - Science Police Officer Jedidiah Rikane of Earth - personal density control

Other seconded members currently based on Legion World First Base:

Gazelle - J'izl Dtutuu from the Khundian Battle Brigade, of Khundia Prime - enhanced strength, speed, agility and metabolic control
Cosmic Kid - Po Miman, Justice Legionnaire of alternate dimension Mars - energy manipulation and flight

Support Staff on Legion World First Base:

Dr Richard Kent Shakespeare - Impulse - Chief Medical Officer and Support Team manager - enhanced strength, speed, durability, stamina
I.Z.O.R. - Gear iii - infrastructure manager - nannite collective being, technomorph
Danielle Foccart - Kid Computo - Technical support - technopathic communication and control over advanced technology
Henry - Anti Lad - Spatial warp controller
Ming Sul - Amp Girl - investigative officer - hyper-enhancement of her own sensory capacities
Shardwurd Gandussen of the Ten Peaks from Avalon - Silver Shaman - Medical Officer - biokinetic healing
Science Police Psychiatrist - Doctor Anje Falkner - alpha-level telepath
Flaurianarelle of Zerox - Greensleeves - orchard and farm caregiver - magical manipulation of plant life
Theena Greglenn of Silgor Marregorraus - Network - Communications Officer - hyper-pathic communication through symbiote
Solstin Wang of Earth - Booster - medical support - awareness and manipulation of physical properties of those around him
Gloriana Crestellen of Grighshtall iv - Glory - medical support - awareness and manipulation of bio-auras

Szenlong - newly hatched Spirit-Dragon... of Space!

Currently missing in action:

Phantom Girl – Tinya Wazzo of Bgtzl Dimension - intangibility

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Legion World Second Base team:

Tyroc – Team Leader - Troy Stewart of Marzal city pocket dimension - sonic control
Retro - Deputy Team Leader - Deen Toro of Ventura - limited reversal of personal timeline
Element Lad - Senior Team member, Jan Arrah of Trom - elemental transmutation
Mon El - Senior Team member, Lar Gand of Daxam - incredible strength, speed, stamina, senses, laser vision, space flight, invulnerability
Dawnstar of Starhaven - Senior Team member - space flight, incredible speed, tracking
Timber Wolf - Brin Londo of Zuun - enhanced strength, speed, agility, reflexes and senses
Dragonwing - Marya Pai of Earth - breathes dragon fire and acid
Glorith of Zerox - manipulation of magical energies
Shield - Laurel Kent of Earth - physical invulnerability, tactile psychometry
Monica Sade of Rimbor - strength, reflexes - line of sight teleportation
Lexikon - Princess Daheenisha of Tamaran iv - enhanced speed, strength, durability, flight, omni-linguist
The Huntress - Ambassador Amynta of Nostos ii - incredible strength, speed, invulnerability, space flight
Karate Kid iii – Mithindrivithis Ngandraffa of Lythyl - strength, reflexes, mimetic motor learning giving incredible combat skills
Thirteen – Dann Hortra of Naltor - line of sight probability manipulation
Babbage- I-45ENG/Nth Series, of the Robotica Confederated Worlds - strength, durability, internalised weapons, hyper awareness and analytical skills.
Starkling – telepathic swarm-being composed of indestructible ball bearing sized components
Spy (also team counsellor) - Dr Noah Kabbo - heightened awareness and limited telepathy
Bouncing Boy ii - Stoor Chamble of Pasnic - creation of personal spherical force field
Atomsmasher - Ergus Wraithcat of Betelgeuse - spaceflight, durability, hyper senses, limited telepathy, radiation manipulation
Kid Pulsar - Neel Koduah of Earth - incredible strength, invulnerability, projection of explosive blasts
Mindbender - Marmud Illic of Titan - alpha-level telepath
Poltergeist -Jaun Vineo of Titan - alpha-level telekinesis
Non - negative energy being - spaceflight, speed, alter own dimensions and density, explosive touch, limited telepathy

Science Police meta-squad seconded to Legion World Second Base:

Captain Phantom - Senior Team liaison, Science Police Captain Gryal Vrizza of Bgztl Dimension - intangibility
Power Lass - Science Police Officer Nel Duwi of Daxam - incredible strength, speed, stamina, senses, laser vision, space flight, invulnerability
Magno - Science Police Officer Dyrk Magz of Braal - manipulation of magnetic fields
Changer - Science Police Investigative Officer Urill Yagthal of Durla - shape changer

Other seconded members currently based on Legion World Second Base:

Green Lantern - Dkyun Mu of Xudar - wearer of a Green Lantern power ring

Support Staff on Legion World Second Base:

I.Z.O.R. - Gear iii – infrastructure manager - nannite collective being, technomorph
Henry – Anti Lad – Spatial warp controller
Hethuk Bran Drommsi - Smith from the Green Rift Forge of Talok viii - weapon maker and engineer
Dr Shoodixi Singh - Science Police Medical Officer - bio-empathic

Laipas - hunting dog from Nostos ii - enchanted to never lose a trail, fast and tough, far smarter than she looks!

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HOPE WORLD is the latest planetoid base, specialising solely in disaster relief.

Dream Girl- Team leader - Nura Nal of Naltor - precognition
Titan - Deputy Leader -Nasir N’Cube of Titan - alpha-level telepathy
Star Boy - Senior Team member, Thom Kallor of Xanthu - stellar mass transference
Harmonia - Senior Team member, Professor Harmonia Li of Earth - manipulation of the natural environment
Invisible Kid - Jacques Foccart of Earth - personal and tactile invisibility
Sister Eclipse - of Rhoohanisett iii - durability, heightened senses, physical possession of any living being
Southern Lights of Starhaven - spaceflight, magic user

Interns:

Dragon Lass - Mari Baertling of Rimbor - enhanced strength, durability, echolocation and flight
Orion -Science Police Cadet Tw'gg of H'lven - tracking skills, agility, enhanced senses and awareness of flaws or weaknesses
Tesseract - Sar Jerash Mor Toark of Mars - access to intra-dimensional space
Army of One - Ashia Servito of Luzonus Prime - self-replication

Support Staff on Hope World:

I.Z.O.R. - Gear iv – infrastructure manager - nannite collective being, technomorph
Drura Sehpt - Infectious Lass – medical officer - containment and control over bacteria and viruses
Henry – Anti Lad – Spatial warp controller
J2351 of the Dominion - Ivy - bio-manipulation of Hope World's chloro-technology
The Bludgers - clone-grown Dominion workforce with enhanced strength and durability but 28 hour lifespan

Science Police Liaison Team:

'Smart Boy' - Senior Team liaison, Strategic Analyst Graq Maurus of Colu - 10th level intelligence specialising in disaster relief scenarios
Groovy - Science Police Officer Droo Vri of Daxam - incredible strength, speed, stamina, senses, laser vision, space flight, invulnerability
Magnetix - Science Police Officer Jooli Esra of Braal - manipulation of magnetic fields
Mama Tank - Science Police Lieutenant Lolla Grayfrau of Badenhoff vi - cybernetics giving incredible strength, invulnerability, AI manipulation

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Current interns from the Home Base training program included on missions in a probationary status:

Imp Master - Dorrolo Capicca Redsail of Zerox - Elven strength, speed and senses, minor mystic specialising in summoning and controlling imps
Tectonik - Hardal of Granite Falls from Mondriak iv - geokinesis
Bloom - Lavender of Schentanhaumma iii - pheromone manipulation, enhanced senses
Shadowsurfer - Walyed Reeaz of D-1457H234 - strength and durability, teleport through shadows or darkness
Impact - Dillon Blackstream of Myar - incredible strength, speed, durability, stamina, motion sense
Little Loki - Magnus Laviksen of Nordhelm - illusion casting
Mosaic - Science Police Officer Rish'ha Nor of Lallor - tactile mimicry of material properties
Thunderbolt - Ness Strakinos of Gardenhome - assumes electrical energy form
Haze - Science Police Cadet Tkemwa Autmi-Hu of Ungara - strength, durability, induce confusion and senselessness
Polestar - Science Police Cadet Nykko Rine of Braal - magnokinesis
Zero - Science Police Cadet Amrendra Mayasinghar of Zuyar - multi-dimensional shifting
Snoop - Science Police Cadet Horol Gyllaspi of the Galentorio Satellites - astral projection


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yay, more stuff!

I really like the belt distorters. it makes sense that the Legionnaires would want the privacy!

Crossing realities is so tough isn't it? Requires a lot of advanced planning - and Jenni's reaction is realistic, of course she'd want to come back and say HI from time to time./ what a nice couple she and Po make, supporting and understanding each other re keeping ties and being homesick. (also nice bit about Po being happy with indecision while Jenni was not). and a nice nod to Jenni's origins too

hah, and a big hah seeing Po's point of view about why he acted that way! oh, Jenni is in for a pleasant surprise. and the Star Charts and fortuitous date, sounds like it is taken from Eastern (like Chinese) practice wink very nice

lol, oh the Sun Boy code name IS gonna be controversial... also LOL at that whole "Tamaraneans are super attracitve" bit

Denal is already showing a lot of promise, good for him stepping up as a full Legionnaire! He handled the fight very well - Cham would be proud of his data gathering too

love that convo between Nura and Henry, whew. Cryptic and nice, I love how they are working together to nudge things into place, and wow Lu's behavior has deeper ramifications than I thought. well done, this whole scene was a nice surprise treat (it's logical and makes sense in hindsight of course!)

very much eager to see what happens next!

and LW8 was very lovely and enjoyable, please do take a well0-deserved bow!

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Hi Harbi, I have been doing some catching up! It's wild that we've all been writing these fics for so long, and you've expanded your Legion's remit way beyond being just a big team of superheroes so it's understandable you might be ready for a change of pace soon...I have thoroughly enjoyed reading your team's adventures and growth though and am looking forward to seeing where they go from here!

On with random thoughts!

- the girls gossiping about Jan was cute, they come across like any other teenage girls dishing dirt smile

- Sister Eclipse comes off really good here as usual...her compassion really comes through in everything she does, it makes a nice contrast to some of the more bombastic Legionnaires.

- I liked seeing Thom take care of the drones and the zombie mob so easily....he is not really a showboat character so it's always cool seeing him get a bit of spotlight!

- Tyroc confronting Lu was tough to read, but also it needed to be done. I really like that he immediately called Cos to try and salvage the situation too...I honestly can barely think of an occasion where Cos and Lu have really interacted in any meaningful way so I am looking forward to seeing what kind of relationship they have!

- I always like when characters with similar powers are shown to not be generically identical so I appreciate how you pointed out that Mama Tank's cybernetics aren't the same as Danielle's power.

- Orion has been great on this mission! I love the little guy!

- finishing with the Squids of Infinity was a nice little palette cleanser after all the horror movie shenanigans smile

- It makes sense that Jenni would think about what it must be like for Cosmic Kid living in a universe that isn't his own, and "her initial attraction to his calm and laid-back approach was proving to sometimes be the character trait that irritated her the most" is a VERY relatable sentiment!

- Strobe kind of forgetting that he's a full Legionnaire now was cute wink

- Nura and Henry working together....cryptic! I hope them being subtly manipulative doesn't come back to bite Nura in the butt!

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Hi Harbinger,
it has been a very long time since i have gotten a chance to come back to your stories and i'm looking forward to reading the rest of vol. 8. please note all my comments are as i read. so i'm sure a lot of my questions will be answered. smile

Gath and Imra's chat was well done and i enjoyed seeing the family dynamic they have. i'm also glad that Imra is on the team to look for her son. i know i wouldn't be able to sit by either if it was my child.

Nel a love sick puppy? its a nice change of pace for a Daxamite. lol
i love seeing your Gear getting to do fun things like Nel and Bina's date. So often this aspect gets over looked because of how functional he is and how integral to the Legion Worlds he on an engineering level.
This was such a cute scene. i loved that Nel didn't take her to the storage room because she knew Bina's powers would give it away.
I agree with IB you didn't a great job and recreating a small French cafe.

I never noticed that the Gil'dishpan sounded like yoda.
Damn Saturn Girl is gone? like i thought at least Thunder would have been able to move fast enough to go through with her. i do not like this...but i do love her threat. 'How much do they value their progeny.! damn!

Grava and Comet King are adorable and i love how you are growing their relationship. its great that he can support her and is realizing the way they deal with trauma is different from one another was really well done. i really do love how you show them growing together.

i'm enjoying the calmness from Garth and his faith in Imra and he makes a good point. the team rushing in could be make things worse.
Rokk really knows Garth and i'm glad he's able to see behind the façade.

Rimbor mission: Ayla's team
Great job Nord (spoiler II)! i like how quick he was to jump and help Ayla and seeing her go off like that was fun. i like when she lets loose and took out a large section of the mob.
Jed and Tel do make a good pairing on the field. i love how you described the rolling of the mob and then Jed flying through in tangible and letting the gene-mods just take each other out was well done.
This whole squad works really well together to be honest.

Gil'dishpan's world:
i really enjoy the description you've put into this world. the moss carpeting was a really neat touch. i liked the uneasiness that you created in this scene. Imra feeling the conversations happening around her. but not being able to partake was well done. ok the deal she just struck is something i do not think will go over well with the Legion and i sure do hope whatever assistance they need won't hurt the Legion...

Hope world:
I still kind of hate Nura though out this post. i can't put my finger on it. But i think you've also written her visions with more clarity than i ever have. writing a precog is a hard balancing act and she just comes off so smug about what she's doing. i could still just have a bad taste in my mouth from the meeting about Hope World. But i do enjoy that she's trying to encourage her teammates in various ways and trying to get to know her team. The legion can be so faceless and impersonal sometimes and you're showing the difference they plan to make well.
The supporting cast for this world is rather interesting and i'm looking forward to seeing more of them.
I agree with IB that its odd we've never seen a Coluian in any other roles within the Science Police. But i wonder if that's because they all don't usually leave world unless its for research purposes. Wasn't it established that they all would rather work in theoretical science instead of practical science.

Rimbor: Tyroc's team:
This mission seemed like it was going really well. i liked Sade's work and her short range teleporting was well done.
What's a strop? is that like a tantrum? based on the rest of the post i'm going to have to say yes.
Huntress - love her fiery spirt.
I'm sorry but tyroc's getting made at Poltergist but it was Jan who started the conversation and i wish that he could have gotten that across to Tyroc. i get they are all heroes but sometimes it feels like the senior team doesn't remember what it was like to be teens and on this team. Not that Tyroc ever had that and joined as an adult. But man he was way too harsh, imo.
Ok, this is the second time a team has been affected by someone who can change moods, maybe each team needs a telepath and or empath to help negate this particular gene-mod.

First Base:
a Dragon is born!!!
i have to agree that its odd how out of his depth Dragonmage feels with a dragon egg. it was a cute moment.

Unknown Location:
the Shadowmancer rears its head again! Not surprised he double crossed those working for him already. But i am pleasantly surprised by how Mekt feels about kidnapping his nephew and as it seems children in general.
But Esper Lass, War Wolf and Mekt could make a rather powerful team. but could they take the Shadowmancer?

hope base # 2: sister Eclipse's chapel
I always enjoy seeing Sister Eclipse pop up. She's a very calming character. But i wonder how she will deal with the Shadowmancer coming back...
Tesserect - oh boy. is that one going to have some issues with communicating with her teammates. But i kind of agree with her and that the preaching tends to be needless and gets in the way of helping a lot of times.

first base: dragonmage/dragon egg:
this was a really cute moment and loved the playfulness of the baby dragon and thank you for the explanation of what a Szenlong. But i do wish he had waited until he was with the senior team to ask where Imra and Garth's son is.
i really enjoy these small moments between your team. it really helps to make them feel like real people.
i chuckled a little bit at the naming of the chess pieces. Backlash and Lexicon were my favorites because its soo true!
Glad Henry gave the warning. i was scared Xao would be missing for sometime before anyone noticed.

unknown location:
Damn that little dragon sure helped and took him far far away. or is he. it be interesting if the Shadowmancer was in plain sight.
Damn it of course someone had to sense him... i hope he makes it through this. i hope the baby dragon's got some tricks.
How far back does the Shadowmancer story go that their a myth within the Mystical community?

Second base: Kent and Jan:
loved their playful banter.
i agree Kent shouldn't be treating Jan and it is a conflict. But he seems calm about it. So we will see if its something that comes back around.
i hope tyroc gets that report and apologizes to Poltergeist. But also that Jan tells him he started the convo.
Magus...ooo i do enjoy exploring the worlds and cultures of the Legionnaires. Especially Jan's since we really only know what he knows. So much was lost to him.


unknown location:
oh boy. yeah i'm super worried about Xao.
Loved the explanation for War-Wolf and that he creates the werewolves. i just thought he controlled them.
Dang it little dragon. too bad him and Xao couldn't combine their power in time to get them out of there.
i also wish he didn't have his eyes closed!!
Go little dragon go! loved how the baby took care of the assassins. using its own elemental powers to disrupt the assassin's body was a cool move.
this was a nice small battle that leaves me wanting more.

Sadly i'm out of time to read and comment. But i'm really enjoying what you have coming. The character moments are really great. you put so much character into these tiny moments. Hopefully i'll be back again soon to finish reading!


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Hey Harbinger,
I'm back for another round of reviews. Remember this is as i read!

The idea of twins being a sign of bad luck was interesting. its a stark contrast to Winath for sure.
i also like how even the Khudian culture has "human-like" gods who are vengeful and jealous.
i have to wonder why the Khudian Empire is so weary of magic. like what happened in their distant past that made them all so uncomfortable.
I'm glad the twins are seeing the Shadowmancer for what he is and that the "help" he could provide comes with a huge cost.
I wish the twins would have decided to help Dragonmage escape.

I'm glad Saturn Girl was returned unharmed. not that i thought she wouldn't be. But idk the Gil'dann are a tricky species it seems. I do worry about what help they are gonna ask the Legion for...

Rokk calling Garth was nice. But i wish the doors just opened and there Garth was. because of course Imra telepathically called him the nano second she was back.

I really do enjoy how you write the leaders and how they plan ahead. making sure no unique beings are present is a great way to help take down the Shadowmancer.
Lu staying behind is wise. but something tells me they may need her...
Love Rokk and Garth's relationship and how supportive they are. Especially Rokk telling Garth he doesn't need to be responsible for Mekt.

its interesting to see how the team has changed and grown even in their technology. i like how you use the founders to show case it. the echo with Imra's telepathy or Reep stepping up to showcase what newer teammates bring to the table was well done.

Dang it Imra! you should always have mental shields up always!
This battle escalated quickly.
I like how Reep dealt with it and used he knowledge of working with Projectra. But he should know that he has to adjust his tactics.
War-Wolf is pretty scary with his wolf illusions.
So Mr. Chimes is an illusion caster...interesting. His reach seems super far though. is the Shadowmancer helping to upgrade him at all?
Poor Strobe, i wonder if he has a form of claustraphobea. Maybe more like corporial-phoba?

Great job with Tinya! i loved her taking out Esper Lass. But then Dr. Plague! damn you really do write some great villains.
ooo i might be getting my wish! the Twins might have to take on Shadowmancer to escape his mystical barrier!

Damn it! i knew Henry still had so many tricks up his sleeves! and it makes me feel a little bit better about the deal Saturn Girl struck with him. But I'm glad i'm not the only one who gets weirded out by Henry's all knowing smiles. but that they are also intrigued by him and that his very presence creates rumors...although is the Temporal war thing a rumor? i can't remember.

Loved Thunder coming in and taking care of the wolves. does her Wisdom allow her to see through magic/illusion?
Spoiler II stepping up to the wolves was brave and i love that he thought to use M'Windaji to help get them to their teammates.
/i think the team needs more practice with illusion casters though

YAY! goo Strobe go!
Even though the twins left i definitely feel like this isn't the last time we will ever see them.
Thunder did a great job as always but i think she needed more help on that last one. She shouldn't have used the Shazam power to try to bring down the Shadowmancers barrier.

Rokk and the dragon was super cute. i really enjoyed that moment. Especially when he started petting him and the dragon purred.
Triple nova was saved good by Kid Q. love Jasmin in any reality lol.

Ayla was not having Metk's nonsense. i liked the action and no nonsense of it all.

I'm glad M'Windaji was able to get to Tinya with the ruby of life. but i loved how even sick Tinya punched Titania.

Shadowmancer is 30 ft tall? that surely changes things.
damn he smashed Mon-el? that staff must be pretty powerful. i do wish he hadn't left Glorith completely unprotected.
So...Lexicon's plan ended with a crunch...are both of the assassins she threw at him dead now?

The return of the Jade Dragon! so happy that Dragonmage has moved to helping in the battle. loved the little dragon helping out.
Saturn Girl's assessment of Cham was really great to hear and makes him even more endearing.
Even though Garth has issues with Mekt i'm glad he still saved him and its weird how things change as you age. its hard to imagine the Live Wire that i write to every want to be the Garth you have him as. its a nice change to his hotheadedness but in a logical way.

wait Glorith's spell isn't working and neither are the physical attacks...
I'm glad thunder is ok and that she's back in the battle. but this isn't looking good.

I'm glad Saturn Girl is worried about the toll this is taking on Southern lights. Because i know i am. just the thought that he ties his hair around people fingers makes me think he's going to be bald soon. i hope he can survive this...

i'm glad the prisoners' were willing to help out and that there were more healers. i was worried that Southern lights was going to not be able to help out much longer.

LOVING the battle and how they are all trying to attack the Shadowmancer's hand to take the Spear of light from him.
M'Windaji's plan was great! i love using the ruby to help him reach the Spear of Light and getting it to follow him instead of the Shadowmancer. i was worried that he wasn't going ot make it through the experience. until i read how he talked about it later.

i'm with everyone else! WTH? the Jade Dragon ate the Shadowmancer???? Also until this point i did not realize the Shadowmancer was undead... man its been a while since i've read about him. but great and epic battle! oh ok. didn't "eat him" but trapped him.

Even though she's the Black Witch here, hearing her be super sweet was really nice. i hate having her be so detached. Love the practical gift for the ruby. no there's no losing it in battle. parts of me wish it would somehow bond to him permanently somehow. This whole scene was really well done.

Szenlong wanting to stay with the Legion was a really cute moment.

Evolvo suggesting a party and using Kent to help make his point was super cute. i loved this little moment.
Now we need a legion world for celebrations!

loved everything about the party. from Tinya's moments trying to give her thanks to Backlash trying to play with the Garth and Imra''s sons, only to have it backfire. it was a cute moment. Thunder transforming into her non-magical form was fun. of course Gazelle is taking bets.
Poor Dragonmage. i hope he gets used to the attention. i think more is coming his way.

loved Garth and Imra's exchange and its true. a lot of times you don't miss the action but the people.
Dawnstar and Souther Lights was a really cute moment.
Power Boy's dancing and the others Laughing. great party.

i liked how Lu helped to get the interns to turn around a bit. its hard when your the new kids on the block. i hope they do see the opportunity they have.

i don't know how i'd feel about a precog telling me i'm going to enjoy a night with them without ever having really interacted before....but it was a funny moment for sure.
its so easy to forget how many couples exist within your team. But it was great seeing all of them. The different stages from young love all the way to the battle hardened romances.

i hope mindbender and poltergist will be happier with new mentors.

the whole moment with Jazmin was super cute and funny.

just so many great character moments from this party that i can't wait to see the fallout from.

That's all the time i have for tonight. But i really really enjoyed the party. Can't wait to read more!


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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 2 September 21)
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Hey Harbinger,

more thoughts as i read.

This is probably the most personable i think we've ever seen her. i know she was with Wildfire for along time but i guess i always figured she had a more intimate life before joining the Legion. But its nice to see a different point of view on that.

Experiences isn't everything. its about chemistry and her and Southern Lights defiantly have it. But i have to wonder if its another aspect of her to keep people at arms length by choosing someone whose more physical attraction than intimate one....

Poor Mon-el. the blight sure did a number on him and the team. I hope he gets the help he needs.
I think its in IB's story, that in order for him to be intimate he has to be under a red sun lamp to make sure he doesn't hurt someone. Maybe that could be an idea to help him while he recovers from the Blight ordeal.

So all Naltorians have some kind of pheromonal "power"? interesting. never would have thought of it that way. only really knowing Nura and more specifically Nura from the reboot era, she never came across as overtly sexual to me. So its interesting to always see how you write her and include that overt sexuality/sensuality.
it would make sense that a society of precogs would be more fluid in their relationships due to seeing that things/people change.

The garden sense was nice and sweet. Seeing Harmionia relax a bit is always nice.
I liked how Garqu is "different" from other Coluians. it be interesting to see how him and Brainy would get along, i'm sure he could teach Querl a few things about social graces. But i can see a bit of a control freak rising in him. is that something all Coluians posses to a degree?


Retro and Magnus' friendship is really cute. i liked how excited Magnus was about being on the team and his new potential for love. it was cute.
man, i guess i need more of a reread. i totally forgot that Retro was over a century old.
I like how Retro is being proactive and wanting to talk to Lu about getting those guidelines updated. i have to agree its an odd oversight, knowing that their students are mostly teenagers. But at the same point i can see it, that it wasn't thought of in the senior teams day, so they wouldn't think about it now.

i'm not fully understanding Why Tinya is getting angry during this meeting. But I actually agree with Mon-el, i'd send something that's super subtle before sending any team members in.

DAAAMMMMM! i'm not Nura's biggest fan at the moment or what she did with hope world but she's making some great points. But i don't know if its a power trip per say, like i said i don't understand tinya's anger...unless it has to come from her grief over Jo and seeing Captain Heavyweight as like a seraget(sp?) for that pain...not sure if i'm explaining that well...

Ok, i'm glad that Tinya saw this could be a trap. that information was just too convenient.

I'm kind of saddened by the plot with Thirteen/Power Boy and Gravity lad. idk why...own personal baggage i guess but i would have liked to see them just have a good friendship instead of this weird whatever is going on. But hopefully Tel can figure it out. maybe just needs to learn the difference between a close friend and something more...

Jan kind of annoys me now. lol like why wouldn't you take a psychic. But also it wasn't that long ago that your teammates were getting attacked and everyone was stuck on the Legion Worlds. So maybe having precautions is a good thing and not an intrusion.

I have a feeling Ghanji's issues with magic are coming to the forefront and its not going to be pretty. But i do like how Zoe and him talk about these things now.

i hate upper level beings sometimes. always makes me think of how beings like Dr. Fate won't interfere if it doesn't affect "the bigger picture". But damn that Sa Lok is crafty.

Love the descriptions for some of the species you introduce us to and i agree this one is a asset for sure. But i fear Mon-el is being to over protective on this one and might cause more of a problem.

poor Cap. Tuk Shir that sounds awful but also i'm glad he's still holding out hope.

The Dominion ship is super original. but the powering up thing was not what i expected. i figured they were stealing energy for their own gen--matrixs.
Chamelon seems to have a lot of issues with Tinya's rulings....on no its all about to hit the fan isn't it?

i'm curious as to what caused the alarm too...i'm hoping it was from strobe and not something else.
Ok i said Mon-el might be over doing it...but now i'm not so sure.
I'm liking tinya's thinking about how to disguise herself. But still worried...

wait he powered himself with a neutralizer? what? Sa lok thinks of everything!
Great Job Tinya, you kept them distracted. But i'm not enjoying her taking this much risk. its too much risk. but still great tactics in a lot of ways.
Damn it Henry open the warp!

The whole planet has vanished? what the hell did that power amplifier do!?

Sex/relationship class with Dr. Faulkner was really well done and how i would imagine a class like that going. a good funny moment. i needed that after what i just read but so anxious to see what happened to Tinya!

i feel for Mindbender and Lu is a total hard-nass. But i have to agree i think he went a little too far. But maybe Lu has too and needs to be talked to as well. sometimes we let those with "more experience" off the hook for things when they need to be called out just as much as the new person.

damn, so both Ghanji and Strobe might be without their powers permanently? what?!!! wait what about Cham then?

loved seeing Kent and Gl's reactions to the Asteroid and thank you for including the encyclopedia galactica info again.

I loved Atom Girl's little aside to Backlash and how he scoffed it. smile

wait no trace what so ever? really? not even Dawnstar could track it? i hope they didn't dematerialize or maybe they ended up in Tinya's home dimension....

Yay! they didn't lose their abilities! so happy we aren't losing them from the team!

Universal Justice? hmm a new team that's about to make their way back i take it. it would make sense that there are other teams that might have come before the Legion. But you've peeked my curiosity and i want to know where they are since disbanding. Love that they weren't bought by the powers that be at the time and supported the people.
Corporations are ruining everything!
Daramulum seems really nice and i enjoyed his presence. You wrote him in a very calming way.

The rimbor mission is going nicely so far... and with that i call it anight until next time i can't wait for more!


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Re: Legion Worlds Eight (more 2 September 21)
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Hi Harbinger,

I'm back for another review and maybe this time i'll finally get to finish vol. 8 laugh

I had forgotten that this reality's Psyche was here with the Magus. I feel for Kent and having to constantly remined himself that she isn't the same. I like how you addressed it.
I'm torn on the Magus being his uncle especially if i recall correctly he wasn't too fond of Jan or what he's done within the universe in Trom's name...please correct me if i'm wrong. I'm getting the sense that Jan is going to fall victim to traditions that ultimately won't be good things for him but will throw himself into them feel a connection to his people, since he was so young when they all died, he doesn't know or i think really understand the implications of it all.


Kent's moment with Laurel's dad was super sweet and thank you for the refresher of how that can be. its an easy thing to overlook.
I'm with Kent i wouldn't be too happy with having an open relationship of sorts. i hope that's not something that's coming.
I've enjoyed how you're tackling different cultural norms in regards to relationships and i know this is something that is very much on the minds of many people these days and how to facilitate a better understanding.

Rimbor mission:
Atom Girl as recon went well. but i wish the rings scanner's could be adjusted so that it would scan the area like normal without her having to grow in size and reveal herself.
I always enjoy Huntress smashing things and when they think she's down for the count and proves them otherwise.
Your battle scenes are always a pretty good time.
Bouncing Boy II's field is pretty tough. i like how he's having fun taking out the weapons. idk i just like when the Legionnaires enjoy what they're doing. it always makes me happy. idk why. lol.
The size changing tactic! a tried and true classic... damn i was not expecting the Khudian to slam Atom Girl like that! i hope she's ok.
Go Laipas!
A Khudian being afraid, even just slightly of a dog is kind of funny.


The expectation that Jazmin is to love astronomy is very interesting cultural tidbit.
Aww poor Daramulum, he sacrificed his way home to help these people? That is the kindest thing i think i've ever read a deity doing.
But now i wonder why his people never sent another ship from the Dreamtime? Did something happen to them.

Rimbor mission:
The discription of Solar Gorilla's powers and the shadows dancing was cool and i just love the imagery it paints.
Ok, i'm so with Backlash on this. the cuffs need to be redesigned for those without standard humanoid hands.
i do really enjoy Backlash and Ayla's friendhship. But i hate how he sometimes feels more like a pet then a member of the team. Maybe we need more Backlash, but without her...or just more Backlash! lol.
Damn that's a lot of weapons. i'm really glad they didn't just slag everything.
Henry's pauses always make me second guess him and whether he's course correcting something. i think we need a story from his perspective.

I'm sorry what? Jo has an unknown love child? wait like seriously? mind blown!

Kent is in my head i swear. i've felt that way since the moment the Magus and the asteroid were introduced.
it sounds like Kent is definitely experiencing some PTSD that i don't think he realized he had...
Glad that Kent is working through this and that its about his connection with Jan that he's worried about. But i wonder why this hasn't come up with anyone in the Legion. surely there are those within the Legion who could present the same type of challenge.
Idk what it is about a place that says don't worry about something, that makes me worry about it more.

Rimbor:
Damn Jo's kid is fast...But it seems he can use more than one power at a time if he's able to speed away and pick up two Khudian's...
loved Haze holding Laipas to stop her from going after them. it was a cute moment.
Poor Atom Girl, but i'm glad Lu is there to remind her of what they did accomplish. its often hard to see what has been done when it didn't go exactly as planned.

Kent has become very wary of this place it seems now with not really wanting to meet Daraulum.
loved the description of the nebula near Adren's table at the restaurant.
The Worldmith? is there a "s" missing and its supposed to be "Worldsmith?"
*Note: ahhh ok it is Worldsmith...have we seen him before/is this an OC or something from within DC's history/ or part of Aboriginal folklore?

I enjoyed Southern Lights and Dragonmage's moment. its easy to forget that not all magic works the same or even the same magic doesn't work the same for the barer of said magic.
seeing Szenlong fly around and commune wit Dragonmage was super cute. i like alot of these cute moments that are sprinkled throughout this story for the various characters. it give a sense of hope that is much needed i think.
Ooo a trip to Earth...but who else will be going with them?
Hahah. Dragonmage calling Southern Lights bubbly was funny.
Sounds like Southern Lights and Dawnstar have more in common that they thought on the experience level. They need to talk to each other and open up.
wait what? you end with a Typhoon on Earth? what happened!

Jazmin geeking out over Ruby Huru was both cute and annoying. But i totally understand it. She's with living legends.
Daraulum and Ruby's exchange was kind of intense...
"Has anyone tried talking to him..." lol Kent. :slaps forhead:
Arden being like Laurel and wanting to punch first made me chuckle.
Starkling to the rescue!
I'm glad they are still going to try and talk to the Worldsmith, which sounds more and more like a machine with a program than a living being...
Something feels off about Arden being so prone to violence instead of diplomacy. but i'm glad Kent stopped him.
and diplomacy wins out! i'm glad that the Worldsmith was able to be convinced to help make the U-Vabbishte Toktrec Settlements even better than what they are now.
and the plot thickens... i'm glad Daraulum is being honest with Jazmin about the encounter and how his people were forced to destroy the Worldsmiths's clients. I really enjoyed the ending to this "battle". it adds so much history to this already incredible place. And i'm glad Daraulum was able to fix the mistake of his people.

Earth:
aww Xao and Szenlong exchanging that momentary joy was well done. But why couldn't they just have a good time. No you have to have a giant red dragon show up...Thank you for the warning Jade Dragon!
I get so nervous every time Souther Lights does these big spells and how much they take from him....and i was right to worry a dragon just swallowed him! WTH!
haha! omg! i love Spollier II. that moment of him being excited about a King of Dragons just put a smile across my face.
i had totally forgotten about the Pocket dimension entity attached to Southern Lights...just tell the nice Dragon lord who you're talking too! :on edge here lol :X:
Agree with Raz, super glad that Szenlong didn't cause the Typhoon.
i really like the when you spell it out for us about how the powers of the different groups work and to know that XS needs to be close for Officer Jursool to use her speed makes sense.
loved the moment of "romance" it made me laugh especially the end where he realized he hadn't gotten her digits.
wait so when Spoiler II flew away he went where? or did i miss something cause now he's leading Imp Master to help others but Imp master wasn't with him when he flew away. where did he go??
I wonder if its just Psychics who would have trouble with Shadowsurfer's dimensional travel or if all life would have an issue...a place we may need to explore down the line. hint hint. lol
I'm glad he stayed with Bina though to protect her just in case.
Shadowsurfer makes a great point! the eco-protect should keep them from getting wet. time for an upgrade!

Damn the Dragon King took out Thunder? ok, not cool.
Man so thankful for Henry's warps no matter how much i distrust him.
Ok, really Jade Dragon? you can't get involved? WTH!
loved all the side missions. Poor Tellus and Imp Master, but its hard to be made at people stuck in that situation. Is there an actual empath on the team that could have helped in that situation?
I'm not sure that was a good idea Southern Lights...but i understand, its last ditch efforts....him interesting turn of events. i did not see that coming from the entity within Souther lights. using the Dragon King's own tactics to subdue him was well done.
A spirt-dragon of Space! that makes sense and love how you explain it and why the Dragon King attacked. i guess even enteral beings can be jealous.

Ok, big meeting time!
Tinya's not dead but still gone for a while...ok i can deal with that. sort of. But something tells me its going to be a long long time before we see her again...
Thunder makes a great point about history.
And here we go...Nura pissing me off again. lol

i may be in the minority on this but this feels a lot more like the Legion splitting apart and that its going to have huge ramifications that aren't going to be great for the team no matter how much/or what Nura or Henry say. i get the point and that its too big but i also thought that was what the senior team was for...
also not thrilled with the leader choices. I'm glad Mon-el took himself out of the running. but idk what it is but Tyroc pisses me off and just how he was in that meeting idk why.
Him and Nura are kind of in the same boat for me i guess.
Agreed the at least 1 year rule is nice...although i'd say it might be better if it was 2 years of active duty. a lot can happen in the first year that might not showcase who a true leader could be.
i think the only one i genuinely like is Lightning Lass.
Ok, i know Lu can be a hard headed person but i'm getting a little annoyed with the dumping on her when a lot of these people kind of owe their strengths to her. Also seeing Lu's thinking about Mindbender kind of makes sense. cockyness can get you killed.

a spot like on Lexicon...ok i'm down. she was an early fav of mine of your OCs. it is rather interesting just how little we truly know about Lexicon and her people at this point.
Retro trying to gain information was cute. But he should have known it wouldn't work. lol.
her fiancé?? did not see that coming. But i'm with the team and don't trust the pomp and circumstance of that wait.
Awww that was a nice moment and i'm with Retro, i want to know more about their culture and what the different timings/foods might mean.

Hope world:
i hate zombies. nuff said. lol.
Giant infinity squids? you are not making this easy for the team are you.
But i'm glad that this team is taking precautions to not be infected.
Hope world is full of really competent and smart characters. So i'm sure they will do a great job.

So...Lexicon's people visit isn't all it seems??
loved Bina checking in on her new beau.

Hope world:
why not send Orin with at least a little back up. this sounds like a disaster just waiting to happen...
Glad Thom had reservations. But wish he had said something.
Gld Harmonia got that out of the way with Tesseract. But now i'm starting to wonder if Tesseract should have been placed on hope world...
great explaination of how Drura's powers work. I never would have thought of it like that. but now i'm nervous with an "extinct" virus coming into her system...

Yeah and again there's Tyroc making me not like him. just because someone has impressive powers doesn't mean they don't need help in working in all aspects of their work with the legion and the mentor program does that. But they should get better at vetting who gets placed with whom as the Jan and Poltergists issue could have been avoided since they all knew about the crush.
Yeah Lu might still be experincing some grief over Chuck but idk..its more and more like its new school vs old school but the kids not really listening when someone older has something to say.
Also is it me or anyone who is considered a "power house" compared to her in regards to power sets are the ones who seem to have issues with her?

loved seeing Lexicon put the Auditor in his place and remind him she is royalty. But knowing how strict the Vegan's customs are, i do find it odd that Annach'ha wouldn't double check to make sure he was cleared to leave or than any tech of the empire wasn't with him.

Tesseract better stop disrespecting Sister Eclipse like now!
I'm glad this wasn't a battle to get these people help though and that someone was there to vouch for her. its times like this that i think the team uniforms that really designate them as Legion are needed. it seems like sometimes the belts are just not enough for some people. Glad Sister Eclipse can see the good in Tesseract, cause i just want to smack her around.
Dragon-Lass' echo location is pretty cool power and useful.

really hate zombies...but Groovy and Thom seem to have this handled. Agreed zombies with gun not a pleasant thought.

i can't help but laugh and smile at the Lexicon parts..."Please love don't destroy things." But i'm glad they've found a place for Annach'ha within the Legion so that he and Lexicon can stay together and she doesn't have to leave the team.
Tactile-telepathy...thats an interesting one we don't see a lot of...Sun Boy? idk how i feel about it. But i guess it will do. lol.

You are really giving my nerves a work out here Harbi! I hope Orion makes it through to the vents!
Thank goodness for those spotlights. They are the only thing keeping me from being a wreck with this zombie storyline...
I'm glad that Lola is realizing she needs to smile to get this done with those hiding.

Wait when did Jazmin come back from the asteroid belt? i thought Jan and the rest were still out there...ahh ok. sorry should finish reading the post lol. i was just shocked to see her back with Laurel and Zoe.
I love that Laurel is protective of Kent, i want more scenes with them!
As much as i hate Nura she is doing well with this mission and getting these people to behave.
Ok, how? How did this happen? the drones should have been preprogrammed! damn it i hate zombies!

Yeah, and i still don't agree and kind of think Tyroc was a bit harsh.

I feel like flight should have been the standard for this mission until uninfected settlers were found. too many close calls for my liking.
Of course we've got those that want to stay. But i'm with Nura, they should at least go through and leave until after the cure is administered.
I'm glad Orion was able to save the settler and was able to get the pods in. i was worried that moment was going to take a turn for the worst.

i'm glad this went well and the Hope World really is doing a great job. everyone handled it pretty well. (even Tesseract, eventually. lol)

The infinity squids moment was cute. there kids egging each other on was funny and glad that what Titan was feeling was that and not a left over from the virus. this was a great way to end this mission and agreed after the horror that was the satellite, it was really refreshing. small wonders can make it all feel a bit better sometimes.

Thank you for the reminder that this XS is the same from U247 and i'm totally with her. i don't like the uncertainty. But with that said i think it helps Jenni even if she doesn't realize it. the most frustrating part of any relationship when someone's trying to plan a surprise. But that's super cute what Po is trying to do.

Strobe's moment of finally being on the teachers side of things was cute. i liked his nervousness about it and how he handled the cadets.

Poor Lu.. i honestly don't know if she's gonna stay...i can feel the want to just quit coming from her...maybe i'm reading into it...

yeah and more and more i hate Nura and Henry and all this secrecy. especially when its the secrecy that tends to kill things more than anything.

And i'm done i have finally finished vol 8.
What a ride this has been and i'm so glad to come back to it and catch up after all this time.
Thank you so much for a great story of ups and downs, of characters i love and characters i love to hate. can't wait to get started on vol. 9!


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