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Panel One
caption: The Super-Stalag of Space, the Girl's camp...
*Tiffany and the other female prisoners are sewing*
Tiffany: Thanks ever so much for helping me send that message, Antequated-Forms-of-Communication Lass! I just hope someone finds it!
AFoCL: No problem, Tiff! My expertise in primitive forms of communication doesn't usually come in handy, but it may be just the ticket to get us out of this jam!
Panel Two
Tiffany (pricks herself with sewing needle): Oww! I'm starting to wish we had Antequated-Forms-of-Clothing-Manufacture Lass with us, however!
Negative Nell: I wonder what Nardo wants with all these expando-suits he's having us make?
Panel Three
Itch Witch: Yeah, it seems like the Nardobots are pretty much "one size fits all". What could he possible need with clothing that can expand to fit any size wearer?
Panel Four
*Nardroid enters*
Nardroid: Females! You show remarkable progress on the expando-suits! The master will be pleased!
Panel Five
Nardroid: Here is the master's order for dinner! You will find the ingredients, as usual, in the kitchen. I will return in one hour to collect it!
Panel Six
Hazel: Okay, who's turn is it to cook tonight? Tiffany?
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Tiffany: (to self) *sigh* It's times like these that makes me miss me multi-trillion credit fortune.
Itch Witch: Never you mind, dear... I'll do the cooking for Nardo tonight. I've got a special ingredient I'm just itching to use in the recipe... *tee hee!*
Panel 2
Tiffany: THAT'S a relief! At home I have 21 different chefs, 1 for each meal of each day of the week, so I never learned much about cooking.
Panel 3
*suddenly Took appears on table, the girls are startled*
Multi Maid: TOOK!
Negative Nell: But... HOW...?
Panel 4
Took: I've been with the team all along. I followed disguised as a dust mote. I've been at the boys' camp and discovered Nardo's horrible plans!
Panel 5
Took: The real reason you gals are making these clothes is... Nardo's super-fatass fetish!
Panel 6
Tiffany: Fatass? *gasp!*
Took: Yes, and your brother and his friend are next on Nardo's ass-fattening agenda!
Weight Wizard: Hello! I think YOU guys were captured first.
Panel 2
Tenzil: I wonder whatever happened to Big Toes Boy?
Lester: Who cares.
Panel 3
*a curtain is raised, revealing Nardo and a bound, sickly Dev-Em. Behind them is the fatassed Plant Lad.
Nardo: IT'S SHOWTIME! Ha! Ha! Ha!
Panel 4
Tenzil: Twisted fiend!
Nardo: Twisted? I say thee nay. Is it twisted to desire female companionship?
Panel 5
Tenzil: No.
Lester Yes.
Nardo: SILENCE! Long ago, my calculations revealed that the energy from my third eye, when passed through the super-body of a Kryptonian, causes humans to swell to massive proportions. You see its effect on the once-skinny Plant Lad.
Panel 6
Key Kid: But WHY would you want to make people fat?
Lester: And why does Dev look so bad?
Panel 7
Nardo: The Kryptonian is kept in check with exposure to a substance that weakens him.
Lester: That green glowing stuff!
Panel 8
As for why I want to enfatten you... the women of my home planet are all similarly shaped to Plant Lad's new proportions and have genetalia similar to human males. Once YOU five are bathed in the rays of my third eye, you will join Plant Lad... as my concubines!
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Panel 1
*Several Nardroids are tending a pen in which a number of chicken-like creatures are enclosed. Opposable Big Toes Boy can be seen swinging from vines in the background*
Nardroid 1: These chryka birds are getting nice and plump! The master will enjoy consuming them!
Panel 2
*Big Toes lands on the roof of another nearby building*
Panel 3
*Big Toes swings down to ground*
Panel 4
*Big Toes hears voices around the corner*
Nardroid 2: Did you hear something?
Nardroid 3: I'll go check it out.
Panel 5
*Big Toes ducks inside the building*
Panel 6
*Inside the building, Big Toes hides in a room labeled "Cultural Acclimation Chamber"*
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Nardo: That's right, you will all have the great honor of being my harem! Tending to my every wanton desire! How beautiful you will all be... once you are the proper womanly size, of course. It's time to turn you skinny ugly ducklings into big fat beautiful swans!
Panel 2
Nardo: And I shall begin with the one of you I MOST desire...
Panel 3
*Nardo's third eye glows*
Panel 4
*Nardo's third eye blasts at Dev-Em; Dev-Em looks even more pained*
Panel 5
*the blast reflects from Dev-Em and hits Lester*
Panel 6
Key Kid: NOW! *shows all the manacles opening and falling off the prisoners*
Nardo: Off me, human! *Nardo is scratching his arm while his eye blasts Weight Wizard*
Panel 2
*more Nardobots rush in*
Nardo: Capture these idiots, idiots! *Nardo is scratching his leg*
Panel 3
*Key Kid releases Dev-Em's bonds*
Panel 4
*Tenzil & Blockade Boy fight Nardroids; Key Kid can be seen in the background carrying Dev-Em out*
Panel 5
Nardo: *to Nardroids* The Kryptonian!! He must not get too far away from this building! I'll deal with these fools, you recapture the Kryptonian! *Nardo is scratching his groin*
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Panel 1
*Outside, Key Kid is carrying Dev-Em, the Nardobots are right behind him*
Panel 2
*Key Kid puts Dev-Em down, points at the chryka bird cages, which open*
Panel 3
*The chryka birds fly out amidst the Nardobot, slowing them down*
Panel 4
*Nardobots begin to emerge from the flock of chryka birds, but are now covered in feathers*
Panel 5
Key Kid: *gasp*! That only slowed them down a bit!
Panel 6
*Nardobots start collapsing*
Panel 7
*Kid Heavyfeathers is there, with Negative Nell and Multi-Maid behind him*
Kid Heavyfeathers: You look like you could use some help, my friend! It looks like these lovely ladies here released me from captivity just in time!
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Kid Heavyfeathers: The girls prison started this revolt!
Panel 2:
Negative Nell: Itch Witch got the ball rolling with a little something she added to Nardo's dinner earlier. It should be reaching its full impact any moment!
Panel 3
Multi-Maid: Then our buddy Took showed up and filled us in on Nardo's awful plans!
Nell: Yeah, so we overpowered the few Nardobots at our camp.
Panel 4
Nell: Nardo will be sorry he underestimated us women!
Key Kid: Actually, uh... I think us guys are considered women by Nardo...
Panel 5
Kid Heavyfeathers: Huh?
Key Kid: Never mind. Look, I have to get Dev-Em away from this building so his powers will kick back in-- and Weight Wizard, Blockade Boy and that eating guy are inside fighting Nardo!
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Panels 1, 2, 3, and 4 run across the top of the page, and have captions with Nardo's picture in them, indicating he is doing the narrating.
Panel 1
Caption: Negative Nell represents a serious thread to me! I remember her origin... how her evil scientist father blew up their homeworld with a doomsday device!
Panel 2
Caption: Her father was transformed in the explosion to a being of pure energy... the evil Positive Man!
Panel 3
Caption: Before destroying his world, he shipped baby Nell away in a rocketship, but she was still close enough to be exposed to the weird radiations of the explosion!
Panel 4
Caption: Rather than being transformed into energy, she gained the power to project explosive negative energy blasts!
Panel 5
Nell: So what's it gonna be, Three-Eyes!
Nardo (smiling): Frankly, my dear, I don't give a damn!
Panel 6
*False-Pretense Lad blasts Nell from behind with a stun gun!
Panel 7
*Suddenly, Nardroids surround the gang from every side*
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