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Panel 1
(Tenzil and Lester sit in the waiting room...)
Panel 2
(Doctor walks in, looking very grim)
Doctor: Hi, I'm Doctor Landro. I take it you're Taryn Loy's friends?
Tenz: Yes, doc. How the examination go?
Panel 3
Doctor: *Sigh* I hate to tell you this, but everything went horribly. I had determined that we would have to operate using some highly advanced techniques of 4D-surgery, but by the time I had prepped my instruments, I'm afraid it was just too late.
Panel 4
Tenz: *Gasp*! You mean she's... she's...
Doctor: Yes. She's perfectly okay. Darn super-charged body healed before I could operate!
Panel 5
Doctor: All those years spent inventing techniques of 4D-surgery, and now people start healing themselves! *Sigh*. What's the point?
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Here's an idea: Tenz & the gang use the excuse of a special "vacation" episode of Kem Family & Friends to travel to Tartarus to investigate the assasination attempt.
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Panel 1
(Scene rotates so that we see what is alarming Evillo. Thora has arrived at the spaceport behind the Kems).
Evillo: WHAT is SHE doing here...!?!
Panel 2
(Thora is speaking to a zombie attendant at spaceport)
Thora: YOU... male dog! Carry my bags!
Zombie: (makes grunting noise)
Panel 3
(As Thora walks along, she speaks on her communicator)
Thora: I have arrived, my sisters. If I know my ex-husband, he is probably already aware of my presence...
Panel 4
(Cut to the other two shadowy women from Issue #1)
Woman #3: Just remember... the alliance of our three worlds depends on the success of your mission!
Woman #2: And try to make sure that cute Tenzil comes out of this okay...
Panel 5
Thora: I will do my best, sisters! Thora out!
Panel 6
(Thora looks at Zombie attendant who is following her. His arms are missing, and he doesn't have her luggage...)
Thora: WHAT have you done with my bags!
Zombie: (makes grunting noise)
Panel 7
(shows Thora's luggage, back where they started, with the Zombie's arms still attached to them, having fallen off)
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Tenzil: Great. So Ma, Pa and Renkil are all occupied and I convinced the camera-eyes that I'm here on Senator-type business, so we'll have a little privacy. Now we can get down to the REAL reason we're here...
Panel 2
Lester: OH, Tenzil!! There's a GREAT anti-grav hot-tub here! PLEASE go hot-tubbing with me, PLEASE, please, please!
Panel 3
Taryn: Don't be ridiculous! You know we're here to find out what this whole assassination-plot against Tenzil is all about!
Panel 4
Lester (has hands together as if in prayer, has nuzzled against Tenzil's arm): Pleeeeeeeeeeeeease?
Panel 5
Tenzil: *heh heh!* Awww, shucks, Taryn... there's no reason we can't discuss our plans in the anti-grav hot-tub! The li'l guy wants to go, so why not?
Panel 6
Lester: (running off to fetch bathing suit) HOOOOORAY!!!!!
Panel 7
Taryn: Have you flipped your spatula? WHY are you encouraging him?!?
Tenzil: What are you talking about?
Panel 8
Taryn: He's ATTRACTED to you! And NOT like a little brother!!
Tenzil: Well, that's certainly understandable... what with my hotness and all...
Panel 9
Taryn: DO something about this, and I mean it! And try to let him down easy, he's been very good to you.
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Panel 1
(Lester comes out in bathing suit...)
Lester: I'm all ready!
Panel 2
Tenz: Lester, can I have a word with you... in private...
(Taryn looks on approvingly)
Panel 3
Tenz: You see, Les, sometimes a person has certain feelings for another person, but that person doesn't feel that way in return...
Lester (puzzled look on his face): Yeah...?
Panel 4
Tenz: And it can be quite shocking and disappointing to find out that someone you really like doesn't reciprocate your affection in the same way. Do you understand?
Les: Yeah... I think so...
Panel 5
Tenz: So, what I'm saying is, maybe the anti-grav hot tub would just be a bad idea. I hope that's okay with you...
Les (disappointed): Well, yeah. I mean... if Taryn feels that way about you I guess it's better if we don't make her jealous. After all, I'm sure we'll have plenty of time for hot tubs later!
Panel 6
(Lester scurries off to change back into normal clothes)
Tenz: *sigh*
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[NOTE: At the end of the Evillo arc, we'll have Tenzil successfully explain to Lester that he's not interested, which can set the stage for the special spotlight on Lester, entitled "Sissy Hissy", to follow! I've already got a cool idea involving a scene with an obscure minor character we can incorporate into that issue!]
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[reply to NOTE: Sounds good! I'm looking forward to Lester's futile attempts to make Tenzil jealous-- until he meets Dev-Em, of course...
Hey, have you noticed this is getting easier & easier...?
OH! And I need to know how many members of the Devil's Dozen you wanted to add yourself. As the script currently stands, there's 4 slots as Lotus fruit Lass is one of the 5]
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