quote:Originally posted by Fat Cramer: This is WONDERUFL! (I'm so far behind on all things Bits, I just read issue #3 so far). What a nasty bunch of villains, they're absolutely spine-tickling. They'd certainly give me nightmares. Really good diversity of appearance, power and character.
Thanks FC!!! Those villains are all Lash! My son and I maybe tweak the look a bit.
This sounds bad, but I didn't actually SEE Mharva's upper body until just now when you named her. Her brownish body just blended into the background for me. (I DID wonder what the purple thing was, though.) I thought Vamp had Mharva's wings but they must be a vampiric type of transformation.
Thanks for being patient and, literally, clearing that up for me.
I knew my eyes didn't see clearly anymore, but that was pretty bad. Sorry for the mix-up. sigh
I'm sorry your eyes are troubling you. I wish the best for you on that. It must be frustrating.
Thank you SO much for regularly posting about Starsearchers! It is VERY much appreciated.
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Cramey, thanks for reading and commenting. Issue 1 & 2 introduces the cast, slaps 'em all together and tells a bit of backstory on the Starseachers' universe. Check 'em out when you have a chance.
Dean, those stats seem pretty good, right? No new comments there yet but I am sure there will be some.
FFLass, Horray! Glad it worked this time. THANK you for the high compliment about the L.E.G.I.O.N. LSV, those guys were reaLLy scary!
Seems like the opening for # 3 was everything I intended.
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Shady, with 12 years in the ophthalmology field, I hate nothing more than visual problems! Please have your vision checked, I am very concerned about your eyesight!
***JUST finished the script for # 6. I'm going to give it one final re-read before I mail to Dean. I always look forward to reading what he has to say; his suggestion awhile back saved me from including a scene I wasn't really happy with and working that scene into issue 6 in a MUCH better way!
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I'm glad you like it, Lash. I'm really looking forward to presenting page 9. I think the emphasis I went with will be mildly surprising to you - in a delightful way.
For everyone else, thanks for your patience as these pages come along. A LOT of exciting stuff is in store. Lash is WAY ahead of me, so I might have to augment my story pages with other eye-candy!
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Pace yourself so it's fun. And maybe you can find time to play on some of the other threads, too.
If LASH can stand it!
My poor K'zle! I hope HE squishes Dr. Battle! He can come out covered in red the way she came out covered in blue. That's what tentacles are for, after all, SQUISHING!
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