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Actually, I already have a planet with a monarchy that would serve as a good home base for this story.
From: Turn around... | Registered: Jul 2003
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Reading the twovision...noticed this: “It will work, Beaver. Before they even know what’s happening, the LMB will be no more. And that which is purest of them shall be the first to go.”
Guess that means if they do go on a killing spree, I won't be the first one down.
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quote:Originally posted by Chief Lardy: I've a feeling you two will be reunited before too long, Rocky!
BTW, I just edited the chapter with the E4 discovery a little to further explain the Krakatoa reference more accurately. I had to come up with something to distinguish the two Earths and that just leapt to mind. I researched it further and added a couple lines.
Even though Adelie is not from Earth, it is reasonable to assume that she had studied Earth history and when she moved to Earth-1's universe, she learned about some of the differences.
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Yeah, I figured she spent a lot of time there while with the SMB. She always struck me as inquisitive and the type who would want to know more and more about everything when she would live in a new place. I guess, for some reason, I see there might be a little librarian in each of the members of the Rockhopper family!
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I took care of the references...gonna reread tomorrow to make sure I got them all. Also fixed the fact that I had two names for the King...ah well.
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quote:Originally posted by Tempest: I am trying to catch up today.
Reading the twovision...noticed this: “It will work, Beaver. Before they even know what’s happening, the LMB will be no more. And that which is purest of them shall be the first to go.”
Yes, I can't think of any pure characters on Legionworld. My characters tend to have Cable's "five-fingered fist" approach to war.
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It's awesome. The mother mind thing was unexpected! I'm glad with how the kids ended up because I thought there was going to be a different outcome. Love Kar, he's pretty kick ass.
Great job, guys!
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I like Kar a lot, as well! He was being built up in such a way before he appeared that I expected him to be a creep when we finally met him. He's been a pleasant surprise, and I hope we see more of him!
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At first I thought of him as this hard nose general in a green suit with stick of far up his ass that you could play limbo whenever he bended over. But he was kind of warm and approachable.
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He'll be around...expecially in some flashback stuff that I will do. Plus he'll be around for other things as well.
As far as his build up goes, all of it is perspective from the boys part. We'll learn why the two of them have the image they do of their father. He's done the best he can raising two very different boys on his own. He tried to raise eeach of them to be the best that they could be.
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The next chapter will unveil what the Loser angle is! Workin' on it....
I love writing RhLass!
Interesting reaction to Bat-Fem. I'm definitely writing her with Morrison's Batman (especially during Grant's JLA tenure) in mind. She's definitely controlling and on the cold side. Give her a break, though. She's been through a lot!
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If Timberwolf wasn't with Hot Chick, they (t-Wolf and B=Fem) might make an interesting team...if they survive that is.
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