quote:Originally posted by Cobalt Kid: Numf, whenever I need to get my morning started, I read some of your Onevision. Then I laugh so hard that it's already a good day.
That is such high praise that I can't think of anything that I would rather hear.
I'm not a morning person myself, so if I can help kickstart someone elses day then my job is done.
Thank you Cobie. I look forward to your next onevision, as well as the continued Cosmic Boy series.
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MLlash and EDE, I know it's not done to reply in your fantastic MELT:TS thread so let me just say here that I it! You two are the Indie Rawk... of space!
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I'm behind too with my 35C reading! I actually can't wait to get a few hours and read it all
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Mllash and Des, whenever you are ready the threads are there for you to read. I'd love to hear your honest opinions on my little story too.
Chuck, I've never read any EE "Doc" Smith but thanks anyway. Dak and Kord space rawk 4 shoor! More developments coming for both of them
Numf, thanks again for your praise, I'll give you the fiver when you give me those Jimmy Choos ok?
Anyway, before this turns into a Harbinger appreciation thread (not that that would necessarily be a bad thing of course ) - everyone else - why you reading this when there's a bloody great forum of unsigned talent waiting for your attention? Go enjoy it before we all get signed up and you have to pay for the priviledge
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Okay, so the long-awaited (?) next chapter of "Turning Point" is finally up. But as I completed that chapter, I realized I would need to rethink the story's structure. The flashback part of the story was going so much longer than I'd anticipated that I decided "Turning Point" would have to be divided into 2 parts: Then and Now.
Part 1 tells the whole backstory, while part 2 will follow up with what happens when Lardy confronts our villain in the present. The story would drag on too long and be too disjointed as one mega-story. Separating them seems like a much better idea. And both sides of the story are equally important, so both will now get equal billing.
So that's why I changed the title and the first two chapter headings. Maybe a minor thing to you all, but I felt I had to clarify.
Thanks!
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Good to hear that you're adding more to it, Lardy! I like the idea of the split too, and look forward to seeing what you have planned!
Also, I realized I have this little bit of irony. I actually have another Onevision I've written saved on my laptop, but can't post it because I don't have an internet connection to the laptop right now. Hopefully I'll get that fixed and post it. It's a quick Onevision entitled "Villians and Victims" and actually stars two minor characters from my other Onevisions, Anne (the girl from Cafe Cramer in "Price of Security") and Tarquin, one of the villians from "Journeys and Destinies".
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Sounds like fun, Des! I've gotta sit down and catch up with "Journies" when I get the chance. I remember it was still in progress when I disappeared.
Meanwhile, I'm posting a little abstract (not really a story, but kind of an introductory "Who's Who" piece) on a new character I've created---hopefully tonight. Is Legion World ready for...Lard Lass?
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Actually, Cobalt, in my origin piece I wrote loooong ago (see entry in the Outpost for reference) Dom Deluise XXVII was first mentioned as Lardy's master! So I didn't JUST make it up...it's been officially in-continuity forever!
That said, this is only the second time I've ever mentioned him. And it's the first time I've ever explored anything of the workings of the Order of the Lard Knights. It's actually pretty fun! It'll also be fun to show the differences between Nakia and Lardy.
Part of my intent in introducing her is to establish that Lardy has left the LMB for an extended period of time (probably for most of our current story year---year five?). And a good way to illustrate this is to have someone take over his role and, hopefully, have her appear in tag teams and ONEVISIONS set in the "present". If continuity has Lardy referred to as missing and Nakia is participating in the adventures, it'll really help tighten that up.
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