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Sketch Lad
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Man, I totally would have gone to karaoke if Space Model wasn't on!

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Oh grife! It's not a Space Model marathon is it? Teeds! What should we snack on?

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Cobalt Kid
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Well, I finished my latest onevision. I must warn though, about midway through I felt tremendous writers block and only was able to finish with some private encouragement. While I'm satisfied with it, I think the middle kind of lags, so I don't love it as much as 'Spear'.

Now onwards to check out this thread Lash has started...

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...and its hysterical already! More Lash! We need more! [Big Grin]
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quote:
Originally posted by Sketch Lad:
Oh grife! It's not a Space Model marathon is it? Teeds! What should we snack on?

Given the subject of the story, I really hope the answer isn't "brains".
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Cobie, I'm reading you backwards, with the Horn of Undoing before Psionic Spear. I particularly liked the scene with Cobalt and Princess Tarnia on Grrgg - a nice reflective bit amid all the frantic action. It was also interesting to justify the LMB as home defenders rather than participants in the war. So far, at least.... [Smile]

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Thanks FC! Hope you enjoy them! Like I said, I think Psionic Spear is up there as possibly being my finest work yet, but I do think there are some nice moments in 'Horn'. I definately wanted to make it have more action, probably because subconsciously I feel there is such a lack of it in comics today.
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Great stuff so far Lash!!!
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Thanks for the comments gang! I'll try to keep it fun, then really gross. Then fun again!

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I really enjoyed Cobie's two recent stories. Of course I always like it when another writer uses Rockhopper Lad, but I especially like how Cobie writes him, showing the strong sense of duty I try to show when I write him.

I especially liked the part when Actor Lad mumbles about the "old guard" and Rocky smiling at the comment.

Great stuff!

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Thanks for the kind comments Rocky!

You know, Rockhopper Lad and Kid Marvel have been two of my favorite LMBers to write. Both featured somewhat prominently in both of my recent onevisions, and as leader and deputy leader were kind of like the 'must have' members of the roster to use. I think I've really kind of found the rhythm of both characters. I definately see Rockhopper Lad as a natural leader that is able to garner some important insight when things get 'murky'. I see Kid Marvel as brash and courageous but controlled by wisdom of Solomon. Ever since I started writing Kid Marvel in Omnia and now both prominently in these last two, I've enjoyed the characters, which is important to me, since I feel that if I focus too much on Cobalt Kid and the characters I invented that the stories lose a little bit of credibility (despite the catch 22 being that those are characters I can truly do some large changes to). It definately makes it a more enjoyable writing experience.

Similarly, I enjoy writing Actor Lad and Kent for the same reason, though I admit putting more of an effort into staying true to the characters. I particulurly like the notion that Actor Lad and Reboot don't always agree with Cobalt Kid when they're all 'in character', because I generally like to show that Cobalt Kid does things 'his' way, whether others feel its right or wrong.

Again, I'm thrilled you read and enjoyed the stories!

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More rockin' J-Boy designs on the LMBP stuff thread... check 'em out.

What are you waiting for?

Shoo!

[Smile]

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Kid Marvel
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quote:
Originally posted by Crujectra of Psyonia:
More rockin' J-Boy designs on the LMBP stuff thread... check 'em out.

What are you waiting for?

Shoo!

[Smile]

Lol...thanks [Smile] soon as Photobucket decides to cooperate with me again Ill upload more

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Very clever designs, Joeboy! Do you have to think about a character or does the costume just pop into your mind?

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Kid Marvel
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quote:
Originally posted by Fat Cramer:
Very clever designs, Joeboy! Do you have to think about a character or does the costume just pop into your mind?

Uhm...they USUALLY just pop into my head but some take a bit of work...such as "Boaz Yakkin", who I had no idea of before I did a google search and found out that he's some hollywood producer guy, which I could find no costume ideas for. So I went with the Yazz, possibly the crappiest Justice League member next to Vibe.

Ill add notes at some point when Im bored [Smile]

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